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@@ -129,17 +129,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 			else
 				'"This is all so exciting!" she squeals. "Is it weird that it''s kind of turning me on? I almost feel like dragging you to an empty room right now."'
 				'Her breath is hot on your skin. The fondling of your breasts suddenly takes on a much more sensual feel and her lips brush against the back of your neck.'
-				'"But that would mean we would miss our first class," she says, abruptly pulling away, a mischievous smirk on her face. "So it''ll have to wait for later."'
+				'"But that would mean we would miss our first class," she says before abruptly pulling away, a mischievous smirk on her face. "So it''ll have to wait for later."'
 				'"Can''t wait..." you say, smiling back. Katja walks away, straight backed but with a bit of swing in her step. She seems much bolder than she was before. Maybe getting away from her childhood home has made her less self conscious and more confident?'
 			end
 		elseif katjaQW['slut'] > 50:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/hug.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you''re walling into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your belly. They pull you back and you feel two soft things pressing against your back.'
+			'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your belly. They pull you back and you feel two soft things pressing against your back.'
 			if katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0:
 				if katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0:
 					katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
-					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>", Katja whispers in your ear. "Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" She sounds vaguely disappointed.'
+					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," Katja whispers in your ear. "Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" She sounds vaguely disappointed.'
 					'"Sorry, I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either!"' 
 				else
 					katjaQW['annoyed'] = 2
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 				if katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0:
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
 					'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around you. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an expression on her face that seems caught between a smile and a glare.'
-					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" Her lips twist a little more towards a frown than a smile.'
+					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" Her lips twist a little more towards a frown than a smile.'
 					'"Sorry, I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either!"' 
 				else
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'loathe'
@@ -260,65 +260,65 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'	
 		if $start_type = 'city_tg' or $start_type = 'uni_tg':
-			'As you walk into the lecture hall, a pretty redhead comes up to you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t know you also decided to study to become a teacher," she says.'
-			'"I thought it would make for an interesting education and a fun career," you say while you try to remember who this girl is.'
+			'As you walk into the lecture hall, a pretty redhead walks up to you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t know you also wanted to become a teacher," she says.'
+			'"I thought it would make for an interesting education and a fun career," you reply while trying to remember who this girl is.'
 			'"If you want, then we can meet and talk about the lectures and maybe do some studying together," she says.'
-			'"That sounds nice," you reply. She turns around and waves goodbye.'
-			'You quickly take a seat and start flipping through the pages of the journal that Tatiana had given to you. You find out that the redhead is named Katja and is a former classmate of the original <<$pcs_firstname>>.'
+			'"That sounds nice," you reply and she turns around and waves goodbye.'
+			'You quickly take a seat and start flipping through the pages of the journal that Tatiana gave you. You find that the redhead is named Katja and she is a former classmate of the original <<$pcs_firstname>>.'
 		else
 			if fame['pav_slut'] > 200:
 				if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-					'As you enter the lecture hall, you hear a voice from behind you. "So are you actually going to study this time around, or are you just here for the sex?" You turn around and see your old classmate, Katja Meynold, with a smile on her face.'
+					'As you enter the lecture hall, you hear a voice behind you. "So are you actually going to study this time around, or are you just here for the sex?" You turn round and see your old classmate, Katja Meynold, with a smile on her face.'
 					'"You could learn a thing or two from me," you say. "It''s going to get awfully boring around here if all you do is study for five years."'
 					'Katja shrugs. "I don''t think it''s going to be boring, and '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I don''t really think you do either since you are here.', 'that wasn''t what you told me earlier when you said you were going to study to become a teacher.')+'"'
-					'"Well, there''s plenty of good looking boys here," you say while glancing around and grinning. "I think I''ll have plenty of ways to have fun here."'
+					'"Well, there''s plenty of good looking boys here," you say while glancing around and grinning. "I think I''ll have plenty of ways to have fun."'
 					'"You''re incorrigible," Katja says with a smile. "But we could chat about the classes and —if you''re serious about becoming a teacher— do some studying together." She then turns around to find a place to sit.'
 				elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
-					iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, '"Oh, I didn''t know that my school''s biggest slut would actually choose to study something where you have to be a role model for kids,"', '"See that is the girl I told you about: the biggest slut in my school choosing to study something where you have to be a role model for kids,"')+' you hear somebody say nearby when you walk into the lecture hall.'
-					'As you look around, you see former classmate Katja talking to a girl you don''t recognize. When she sees that you have noticed her, she promptly drags the other girl away from you. Seems you have some work to do if you want to repair your relationship with her.'
+					iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, '"Oh, I didn''t know that my school''s biggest slut would actually choose to study something where you have to be a role model for kids,"', '"This is the girl I told you about: the biggest slut in my school choosing to study something where you have to be a role model for kids,"')+' you hear someone say when you walk into the lecture hall.'
+					'As you look around, you see former classmate Katja talking to a girl you don''t recognize. When she sees that you''ve noticed her, she promptly drags the other girl away from you. Seems you have some work to do if you want to repair your relationship with her.'
 				else
-					'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, you suddenly come head to head with your old classmate, Katja. "Oh, hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says a little hesitantly. "'+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know that you''d be starting in the teaching program.' , 'I wasn''t sure if you were joking when you said that you would be studying to become a teacher.')+' You do know that a teacher has to be a role model for the kids, so maybe you should try to act like an adult," she says, coming off a little more stern that she looks.'
+					'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, you suddenly come face to face with your old classmate, Katja. "Oh, hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says a little hesitantly. "'+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know that you''d be starting in the teaching program.' , 'I wasn''t sure if you were joking when you said that you would be studying to become a teacher.')+' You do know that a teacher has to be a role model for the kids, so maybe you should try to act like an adult," she says, coming off a little more stern that she looks.'
 					'"I am acting like an adult," you reply. "Sex is a very adult thing to partake in. I''m sure your life would also be much better if you tried being more like me."'
 					'Katja''s face turns very red, and she just says "bye" before turning around to find a seat furthest away from you. You can''t help but get the feeling that she might be more interested in the things you do than she lets on.'
 				end
 			else
 				if grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 					if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
+						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you''ve made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it''s important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
 						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have friends in the class. We can talk about classes later and maybe study together," she says before saying goodbye and going off to find a place to sit.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
-						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi, Katja!" you say.'
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she replies, not looking particularly happy. "You know, you could try to be nicer and not just look down on others since you think you are'+iif(grupTipe = 1, ' so cool', ' good at sports')+', that way others might like you more," Katja says before turning around and finding a place to sit.'
+						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi Katja!"'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she replies, not looking particularly happy. "You know, you could try to be nicer and not just look down on others since you think you''re'+iif(grupTipe = 1, ' so cool', ' good at sports')+', that way others might like you more," she says before turning around and finding a place to sit.'
 					else
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made you way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there.'
-						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you''ve made you way to our first class,')+'" you hear someone say behind you. When you turn round, you see your former classmate Katja standing there.'
+						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it''s important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
 						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have somebody you already know in the class. Maybe we can talk about classes later," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					end
 				elseif grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 4:
 					if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
-						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to already have somebody you know in the class. I always envied that you '+iif(grupTipe = 3, 'and your group could actually talk about classes and such during breaks, not just empty gossip like with mine.', 'were so free to not just follow social norms. But what a complete waste it was that most you just used it to bully everyone else and be the biggest jerks around.')+' At least now, nobody will look down on us talking together. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear someone say behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
+						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it''s important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to already have somebody you know in the class. I always envied that you '+iif(grupTipe = 3, 'and your group could actually talk about classes and such during breaks, not just empty gossip like with mine.', 'were so free to not just follow social norms. What a complete waste it was that you just used it to bully everyone else and be the biggest jerks around.')+' At least now, nobody will look down on us talking together. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
 						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi Katja," you say.'
 						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she replies, not looking particularly happy. "You know, you could try to be nicer and'+iif(grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 3, ' not just look down on others since you think you''re so much smarter than the rest of us,', ' not be such a bully,')+' that way others might like you more," she says before turning around and finding a place to sit.'
 					else
-						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher.', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former class mate Katja standing there.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher.', 'I see that you''ve made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear someone say behind you. When you turn round, you see your former class mate Katja standing there.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
 						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have somebody you already know in the class, especially now that nobody''s going to judge us for talking simply because we belonged to some stupid cliques in school. Maybe we can talk about classes later?" she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					end
 				else
 					if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
-						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear someone say behind you. When you turn round, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
+						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it''s important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
 						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have somebody you know in the class. Now hopefully nobody will shun you just because some of the worst people in our old school decided that you were toxic. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
-						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi, Katja," you say.'
-						'"Don''t talk to me; you are disgusting!" Katja says before turning around and finding a place to sit far away from you.'
+						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hey Katja," you say.'
+						'"Don''t talk to me; you are disgusting!" she says before turning around and finding a place to sit far away from you.'
 					else
 						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have also made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there.'
-						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
+						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it''s important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
 						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It was really terrible the way the others treated you in school, just because some people at school decided that you were toxic. I, for one, am glad to put all that behind us and think it''s nice to have somebody you already know in the class. Maybe we can talk about classes later?" she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					end
 				end
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 			end
 			act 'Follow Katja to the toilets':
 				katjaQW['dom'] += 2
-				gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
+				gt 'katja_uni', 'bathroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
 			end
 		else
 			if katjaQW['slut'] >= 100:
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 					end
 					act 'Follow Katja to the toilet':
 						katjaQW['dom'] += 2
-						gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
+						gt 'katja_uni', 'bathroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				end
 			elseif katjaQW['slut'] >= 50:
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 					end
 					act 'Follow Katja to the toilet':
 						katjaQW['dom'] += 2
-						gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
+						gt 'katja_uni', 'bathroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				end		
 			else
@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 					end
 					act 'Follow Katja to the toilet':
 						katjaQW['dom'] += 2
-						gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
+						gt 'katja_uni', 'bathroom_panty_check', $ARGS[1]
 					end				
 				end
 			end
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						'"We''re going to do something about this. Come with me," you tell her before grabbing her arm.'
 						'"No, class is starting!" she answers meekly.'
 						'"We have time. Come on," you say, and she gives up resisting and starts following you to the toilet.' 
-						act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_katja_panty_remove', $ARGS[1]
+						act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'katja_uni', 'bathroom_katja_panty_remove', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Drag her to the toilet (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						'"I think we both need to do something about this. Come with me," you tell her and grab her arm.'
 						'"No, class is starting!" she answers meekly.'
 						'"We have time. Come on," you say, and she gives up resisting and starts following you to the toilet.' 
-						act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_katja_panty_remove', $ARGS[1]
+						act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'katja_uni', 'bathroom_katja_panty_remove', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Drag her to the toilet (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_panty_check':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 3
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 	end
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_katja_panty_remove':
+if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom_katja_panty_remove':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 1
@@ -815,7 +815,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_katja_panty_remove':
 		'Confirming you''re alone, you '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'pull up your skirt', 'pull down your pants')+', showing Katja your bare pussy. "Now it''s your turn."'
 		'Katja looks around a little hesitantly, but then reaches under her skirt and quickly pulls down her panties. "Satisfied?" she says with a grin, holding up her skirt to show her bare pussy.' 
 		'"Very satisfied!" you answer. "Now remember to not wear panties to class from now on."'
-		iif(CloSkirtShortness > 3, '"Yes, ma''am," Katja says mockingly. ', '"Only if you also wear short skirts," Katja says. ')+'She then stuffs her panties in her purse and says, "Let''s get back to class." You agree and find your way back to the classroom.'
+		iif(CloSkirtShortness > 3, '"Yes ma''am," Katja says mockingly. ', '"Only if you also wear short skirts," Katja says. ')+'She then stuffs her panties in her purse and says, "Let''s get back to class." You agree and find your way back to the classroom.'
 		act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 	else
 		
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 	end
 	if alko >= 6:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are so drunk that Katja can''t understand most of what you are saying and after a short while she tells you to go home and sleep it off.'
+		'You''re so drunk that Katja can''t understand most of what you''re saying and after a short while she tells you to go home and sleep it off.'
 	elseif alko >= 4:
 		study_mod -= 40
 		'You''re drunk and have trouble concentrating on what you''re reading or what Katja is saying. You mostly just nod and agree with her.'
@@ -1035,7 +1035,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 	if amphHigh > 0: study_mod += 20
 	if pcs_energy < 5:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You''re extremely hungry and it''s hard to think about anything else other than food.'
+		'You''re extremely hungry and it''s hard to think about anything other than food.'
 	elseif pcs_energy < 10:
 		study_mod -= 10
 		'You''re very hungry and it affects your ability to concentrate.'
@@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
  	study_mod = max(0,(rand(30 + study_mod,modifier + study_mod) + 10)/33)
 	if no_study = 1:
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
-		'You follow Katja''s advice, and pack your stuff. You''re in no condition to study right now.'
+		'You follow Katja''s advice and pack your stuff. You''re in no condition to study right now.'
 	else
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		if study_mod = 0:
@@ -1176,7 +1176,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room_invite':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you''re leaving the last class for today, an excited Katja grabs your arm.'
+	'As you''re leaving the last class of the day, an excited Katja grabs your arm.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I bought a new dress and I want to hear your opinion on it. Do you have time to come to my dorm room to see it?"' 
 	act 'Go with Katja': gt 'katja_uni', 'dorm_room_walk'
 	act 'You don''t have time':
@@ -1370,7 +1370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'try_clothes':
 	'Katja keeps changing through outfits, showing you what she bought —which is a lot— while you make comments on each one. It''s hard not to be impressed with her sense of fashion. She finally get the last item she laid out.'
 	*nl
 	'"This is the dress I told you about!"'
-	act 'Se the dress':
+	act 'See the dress':
 		cla & *clr
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'