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Text edit: typos and grammar in Katja.

HotMike 1 year ago
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      locations/katja_procedural.qsrc

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locations/katja_chat.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # katja_chat
 !2022/03/08
 
-!! This file governs Katja''s chat that can be accessed many places after she moves to the dorm. For the variable controlling her content see the documentation in katja_procedural.
+!! This file governs Katja''s chat that can be accessed from many places after she moves to the dorm. For the variables controlling her content see the documentation in katja_procedural.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sofia1':
 	'"Hopefully she can make some more friends soon," you laughingly.'
 	'"I doubt it," Katja says. "She''s constantly hanging out with her boyfriend, and I don''t think he wants him to meet other girls. She also returns to her hometown on Thursday nights and stays until Sunday, so she doesn''t have much time to meet anyone."'
 	'"You''re not too fond of her boyfriend?" you ask.'
-	'"I don''t know," she says. "There''s something about him that feels a little bit off, but I shouldn''t speak ill of people you don''t even know, so let''s wait until after you meet him."'
+	'"I don''t know," she says. "There''s something about him that feels a little bit off, but I shouldn''t speak ill of people I don''t even know, so let''s wait until after you meet him."'
 	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'katja_chat', 'chat1'
 end
 

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locations/katja_procedural.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # katja_procedural
 !2022/08/02
 
-!!This files governs Katja''s procedural actions that are called form many places. 
+!!This files governs Katja''s procedural actions that are called from many places. 
 
 !! The model used for Katja''s porn scene was originally the porn actress Faye Reagan, lately Red Fox/Michelle H have also been used for a lot of content. But several other have also been used.
 
@@ -10,20 +10,20 @@
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 1 You have agreed to hang out with Katja afer school. (meynoldQW = 1)
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 2 You have been to Katja''s house and you can go there to hang out with her. (meynoldQW = 2)
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 3 You have kissed Katja and she might be interested in more. (katjaFirstKiss = 1 and KatjaOTN)
-!! npc_sex['A14'] = 1 You have had at least one sexual experince with Katja.
-!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 4 Katja have asked you to helpe have sex with a boy.
+!! npc_sex['A14'] = 1 You have had at least one sexual experience with Katja.
+!! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 4 Katja have asked you to help have sex with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 5 You have agreed to help Katja have sex with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 6 You have talked with Katja about her first experience with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 7 You have told Katja about the boys in the park.
 
-!! katjaQW['boy_block'] is set to 1 if you tell Katja that you have no interest in boys when she ask about you sex experience whit boy.
+!! katjaQW['boy_block'] is set to 1 if you tell Katja that you have no interest in boys when she ask about you sex experience with a boy.
 
-!! katjaQW['relationship_count_start'] is set to daystart when you have had sex with Katja and the yearstart is more than on (that is in the second year). It starts a countdown of 6 to 12 months before Katja will ask you about your relationship.
+!! katjaQW['relationship_count_start'] is set to daystart when you have had sex with Katja and the yearstart is more than one (that is in the second year). It starts a countdown of 6 to 12 months before Katja will ask you about your relationship.
 !! katjaQW['relationship_talk'] = 1 you have had a discussion about your relationship.
 
 !! katjaQW['couple'] is set to 1 when you agree to be a couple.
-!! katjaQW['faithful'] is sent to 1 if you are a couple and agree not to have sex with others (unless you both participate)
-!! katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] 0 mean no restriction on sex scenes with Katja, 1 mean only scenes with Katja and the player character are available, 2 mean that the player character wont have sex with Katja
+!! katjaQW['faithful'] is set to 1 if you are a couple and agree not to have sex with others (unless you both participate)
+!! katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] 0 means no restriction on sex scenes with Katja, 1 mean only scenes with Katja and the player character are available, 2 means that the player character won't have sex with Katja
 
 
 !! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =1 Katja has asked you to help her have anal sex with a boy.
@@ -37,16 +37,16 @@
 !! katjaQW['school_kiss'] Increases the first two times you kiss at school. Used to trigger the kissing competition in the park. (flag_start_parc)
 
 !! katjaQW['slut'] a number that increases as Katja becomes more and more sexually liberated, and allows her to be willing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
-!! katjaQW['horny'] a measure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she have an orgasm and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
+!! katjaQW['horny'] a measure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she has an orgasm and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
 !! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutral, a negative means she is submissive and a positive means she is dominant. In general the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
-!! katjaQW['simultanous_boys'] the number of boys Katja have been with at the same time, Is not really set before the number is 2.
-!! katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] the number of girls Katja have been with at the same time including the player character, so it is not really set before the number is 2.
+!! katjaQW['simultanous_boys'] the number of boys Katja has been with at the same time. Is not really set before the number is 2.
+!! katjaQW['simultanous_girls'] the number of girls Katja has been with at the same time including the player character, so it is not really set before the number is 2.
 
 !! katjaQW['park_sex'] 	a measure of what experience Katja has had with random guys in the park. 0 means she has not had sex with anybody in the park,
 !!					1 means that she has had sex with one guy at a time (either alone, in a threesome with the player character or while the player had sex with another guy next to them)
 !!					2 means she has had a threesome with 2 guys you met in the park, and 3 means she has paticipated in an orgy with guys from the park. (katjaSex)
 
-!! katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja has started masturbating at night if she get too horny. (KatjaMastr)
+!! katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja has started masturbating at night if she got too horny. (KatjaMastr)
 !! The following 3 variables functions as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja has sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
 !! npc_throat['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) down her throat. (KatjaThroat)
 !! npc_vag['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in the vagina.
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 !! katjaQW['lazar_pussy_talk'] = 1 Katja and the player character have talked about having sex with Lazar.
 !! katjaQW['lazar_anal_talk'] = 1 Katja and the player character have talked about having anal sex with Lazar.
 
-!! katjaQW['Lazar_Ivan_4some'] 1 means the had a foursome but no double penetration, 2 means that the player character recieved a double penetration during the first foursome and have not talked about it yet, and 3 is if the player character have recieved a double penetration and they have talked about the first foursome.
+!! katjaQW['Lazar_Ivan_4some'] 1 means they had a foursome but no double penetration, 2 means that the player character recieved a double penetration during the first foursome and have not talked about it yet, and 3 is if the player character have recieved a double penetration and they have talked about the first foursome.
 
 !! katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Marcus. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
 !! katjaQW['Lazar_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Lazar. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
@@ -92,12 +92,12 @@
 !! katjaQW['knows_cuni'] = 1 You have told Katja that have gone down on another girl (KatjaKnowKuni =1)
 !! katjaQW['know_Pirced_tongue'] = 1 katja have noticed your tongue piercing (KatjaKnowPirsA =1)
 
-!! katjaQW['school_sex'] = 1 Katja have taken you to a storage room at school to have sex. (katschoolsex)
-!! katjaQW['disco_Foto'] =1 somebody have takien a picture of Katja''s exposed breast at the disco. Right now to only use of this variable is so that another foto wont be taken. (katja_disco_Foto)
+!! katjaQW['school_sex'] = 1 Katja has taken you to a storage room at school to have sex. (katschoolsex)
+!! katjaQW['disco_Foto'] =1 somebody has taken a photo of Katja''s exposed breast at the disco. Right now the only use of this variable is so that another photo won't be taken. (katja_disco_Foto)
 
 !! katjaQW['drunk_help'] is set to 1 when Katja walks you home from the disco because you are to drunk. Will be reset to 0 after you talk to her about it at school. (meynoldQW = 3)
 !! katjaQW['no_panties_at_disco'] is set if Katja shows you at the disco that she is not vearing panties. Will be reset to 0 at night. (katja_disco_end)
-!! KatjaQW['sex_in_the_park_comment'] temposry varibale which is set during sex with guys in the park to make sure she give the right comment before she says goodbuy. Will be rest to 0 when going home after sex. (KatjaOhrenet)
+!! KatjaQW['sex_in_the_park_comment'] temposry varibale which is set during sex with guys in the park to make sure she will give the right comment before she says goodbuy. Will be reset to 0 when going home after sex. (KatjaOhrenet)
 
 !! katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 1 Katja has told you she is going to uni to study teaching.
 !! katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] =1 you have told Katja that you are going to the university to study in the teaching program.
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cikl':
 
 	if yearstart > 1 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['relationship_count_start'] = 0: katjaQW['relationship_count_start'] = daystart 
 
-	!!Reseting if Katja have shown you that she is not wearing panties at the disco. The reason to not use a daystart variable, is the if you show it very late Friday it might prevent you from seeing it Saturday (daystart can change during the event)
+	!!Reseting if Katja has shown you that she is not wearing panties at the disco. The reason to not use a daystart variable, is that if you show it very late Friday it might prevent you from seeing it Saturday (daystart can change during the event)
 	if katjaQW['no_panties_at_disco'] > 0: katjaQW['no_panties_at_disco'] = 0
 
 	!!Out commented Katja becoming pregnant until more content for a pregnant Katja is done