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Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife

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locations/KatjaHomeTalk.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'"Let''s go to the disco!" Katja suggests with a smile.'
 		if money >= 25:act 'Go to the disco':money -= 25 & minut += 10 & gt 'pav_disco'
 	elseif locat['katja'] = 9:
-		'Katja says it to late and you should leave.'
+		'Katja notices how late it is and politely asks you to leave.'
 	else
 		if pcs_sweat >= 20:
 			!katja doesn''t like stinky people so if the player is sveaty she will ask the player to take a bath. The player can leave instead.
@@ -878,16 +878,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 		end
 
 		if stat['bj'] > 0:
-			act 'Talk about blowjobs':
-				cls
-				katjaQW['horny'] += 5
-				katjaQW['knows_BJ'] = 1
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tell Katja how you''ve sucked dick and what it feels like. She blushes and bites her lip.'
-
-				act 'Further':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
-			end
+			gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk1'
 		else
 			act 'You''ve never given a blowjob':
 				cls
@@ -1075,6 +1066,88 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_talk1':
+	if KatjaKnowBJ > 0:
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" she says, a sparkle in her eye. "Tell me what it''s like to suckiong dick again."'
+	elseif KatjaKnowBJ = 0:
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever given a guy a blowjob?"'
+	end
+
+	if stat['bj'] > 0:
+		if KatjaKnowBJ = 0:
+			act 'No (lie)':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
+				'"No," you shake your head before shamelessly lying through your teeth. "I''ve never given a blowjob before."'
+				'"Oh." She sits back, looking disappointed for some reason.'
+				act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+			end
+			act'Yes':
+				cla & *clr
+				KatjaLust += 5
+				KatjaHorny += 10
+				KatjaKnowBJ = 1
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Yeah. I''ve given a few," you admit.'
+				'"What''s it like?" Katja asks, eyes wide with excitement.'
+				gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk2'
+			end
+		elseif stat['bj'] > 0:
+			gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk2'
+		end
+	else
+		act 'No':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
+			'"No," you shake your head. "I''ve never given a blowjob before."'
+			'"Oh." She sits back, looking disappointed for some reason. "Guess we''re both clueless then, huh?"'
+			act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+		end
+		!!act'I''ve given a few (lie)':
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_talk2':
+	act'It tastes funny':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"It tastes funny," you wrinkle your nose. "It''s like, kinda salty? But also sort of... musty? I don''t think I mind the act itself that much, but dick has a weird flavor."'
+		'Katja seems taken aback, almost disappointed. You guess this isn''t the answer she was hoping for.'
+		act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	end
+	
+	act'It''s fun':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"It''s fun!" you grin. "I''m not really sure what it is, but something about having a dick in your mouth is really entertaining. It''s like, totally alive! And you can feel it making all these tiny movements when it''s on your tongue. I really like giving head."'
+		'Katja hangs on your every word, nodding excitedly for you to keep describing your experiences with oral sex to her.'
+		act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	end
+	
+	act'It''s whatever':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"I don''t mind doing it but I don''t love it either," you say. "Dick doesn''t really taste like anything if it''s clean. Kinda salty if it isn''t. I don''t know. It''s whatever I guess."'
+		'You shrug.'
+		'Katja seems taken aback, almost disappointed. You guess this isn''t the answer she was hoping for.'
+		act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	end
+	
+	act'It''s boring':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"It''s boring," you roll your eyes. "You have to keep sucking the whole time and after a while my jaw just starts to ache with the motion. It''s a dick in your mouth, I don''t know what to tell you.'
+		'Katja seems taken aback, looking almost worried. You guess you just shattered some impressions she had about giving head.'
+		act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	end
+	
+	act'It turns me on':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"It turns me on so much," you admit, biting your lip in a lusty smile. "When someone''s in your mouth, you can make them feel <i>really</i> good. And they''ll respond to what you do. If you take their whole length, they''ll squirm. If you lick the head, it''ll twitch under your touch. Just knowing you can make someone else feel that way... Ugh, just <i>thinking</i> about it gets me wet!"'
+		'Katja hangs on your every word, nodding along with wide eyes as you describe what it is you love so much about giving head. A faint blush also comes to her cheeks and you notice her unconsciously rubbing her thighs together.'
+		act 'Continue':minut += 15 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	end	
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hornykiss':
 	'Katja brings her face so close to yours that you can feel her hot breath on your skin.'
 

+ 2 - 1
locations/_attributes_scandalicious_outfits.qsrc

@@ -210,7 +210,8 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloStyle = 4
 	
-elseCloQuality = 4
+else
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_gopnik_chats.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek':
 			npc_rel[$static_num] = 0
 			kotovLoveQW = -1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You start yelling at Vitek that he has fucked other girls. Vitek starts yelling at you and suddenly, there is a ringing in your head and your vision goes blurry. You find you''re on the floor with Vitek standing over you. Your cheek burns with pain and it takes you a few moments to understand what happened. It seems he slapped you so hard it knocked you off your feet. "Stay away from me you fucking whore! It''s over between us!"'
+			'You start yelling at Vitek about him fucking other girls. Vitek starts yelling at you in return before there is a sudden ringing in your head and your vision goes blurry. You find you''re on the floor with Vitek standing over you. Your cheek burns with pain and it takes you a few seconds to understand what happened. It seems he slapped you so hard it knocked you off your feet. "Stay away from me, you fucking whore! It''s over between us!"'
 
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitek':
 				if fame['pav_sex'] > 75: gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', -75
 				if fame['pav_prostitute'] > 75: gs 'fame', 'pav', 'prostitute', -75
 				gs 'stat'
-				'It takes a bit, but you convince him that all this was just gossip and none of it was true. He frowns. "I''ll knock their teeth out if they whisper one more word about you then. Don''t worry baby. I will shut their yapping mouths."'
+				'It takes a while, but you convince him that all this was just gossip and none of it was true. He frowns. "I''ll knock their teeth out if they whisper one more word about you then. Don''t worry baby. I will shut their yapping mouths."'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end

+ 382 - 381
locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -10,84 +10,88 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(1,4) = 1 and npc_sex['A149'] > 0:
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'tiny'
-		'Seeing you, Lazar smirks. "Back for more? I know, it was amazing."'
+		'Lazar smirks when he sees you. "Back for more? I know, it was amazing."'
 		'You only let out a short "Mmhmm" as you roll your eyes.'
-		'Lazar breaks out in a smile. "No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m sure we''ll hook up again." You notice several others pay attention to what he says, you are not real happy he is pretty much bragging publicly about banging you. You try and change the topic, you talk for a bit but mostly it is sexual banter from him.'
+		'Lazar breaks out in a smile. "No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m sure we''ll hook up again." You notice several others paying attention to what he says and aren''t happy about him bragging publicly about banging you. You try and change the topic, but all you get from him is sexual banter.'
+	elseif AlbinaQW['Lazar_Threesome'] = 1:
+		'Lazar smirks when he sees you. "Back for more? Albina is a little busy right now, but I''m sure we can work something out next time she''s in the mood."'
+		'You blush at his comment and he smiles. "I''m sure you enjoy our... sessions as much as she does." He has a wide grin on his face and winks at you.'
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 225:
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A149', 'dislike'
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Taking a break from sucking dicks?" Lazar snickers.'
 			'You sigh. "I just wanted to talk to you."'
-			'"I''m sure you do, but I am pretty busy, so get lost." he says several of the other jocks and cool kids start to mock you, you walk off with the laughter from the others echoing behind you.'
+			'"I''m sure you do, but I''m pretty busy, so get lost." Several of the other jocks and cool kids start mocking you, forcing you to flee as their laughter echoes behind you.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'When you walk up to him he turns to look at you. "Get the fuck away from me you skank." Soon several of the jocks and cool kids are mocking you, so you just walk off.'
+			'He turns to look at you as you approach. "Get the fuck away from me you skank." Several of the jocks and cool kids start mocking you, forcing you to flee.'
 		else
 			'"You here to suck me off, slut?" Lazar snickers.'
 			'You sigh. "I just wanted to talk to you."'
-			'"Come on, everyone knows that you''re the school''s biggest slut! Your mouth is good for only one thing sucking dicks." he says with a laugh and several of the other jocks and cool kids join in. "If your not going to get on your knees and suck my off get lost." You walk away with the laughter echoing behind you.'
+			'"Come on, everyone knows that you''re the school''s biggest slut! Your mouth is good for only one thing. Sucking dick!" he says with a laugh and several of the other jocks and cool kids join in. "If you''re not going to get on your knees and suck me off, then get lost." You walk away with the laughter echoing behind you.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you eyeballing me." Lazar winks.'
 			'You laugh. "Nice line Lazar... Is that how you get the ladies interested in you?"'
-			'He confidently continues. "You know it. And it works like a charm every time. You just wait, you''ll fall for me too." From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'He confidently continues. "You know it. And it works like a charm every time. You just wait, you''ll fall for me too." You talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'"Are you the one that''s been going around and telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
-			'"No... like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
+			'"Are you the one that''s been going around telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
+			'"No? Like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
 			'"Good. Keep it that way or else we might have a problem..." he says as he brushes past you.'
 		else
 			'"I didn''t take you for one of them girls <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar smiles.'
 			'"What?" you ask surprised.'
-			'"Didn''t take you for one of my fan girls, that''s all." he winks. You roll your eyes and shake your head, you know he is full of himself even if he is the most gifted athlete in school and cute to boot, but sadly he knows it. The two of you talk about a variety of things, which mostly he twists into you just liking him.'
+			'"Didn''t take you for one of my fan girls, that''s all." he winks. You roll your eyes and shake your head. You know he''s full of himself, even if he is the most gifted athlete in school and cute to boot. You talk about a variety of things, which he twists into you just liking him.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Did you see that move I made at the last game <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar boasts.'
-			'"I heard about it." you inform him.'
-			'The two of you start talking about his last game but soon are talking about a variety of topics.'
+			'"I heard about it..." you inform him.'
+			'You start talking about his last game, but soon move on to a variety of other topics.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Lazar is standing with his arms crossed.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Lazar smirks as he stands with his arms crossed.'
 			'You sigh. "What now Lazar? I don''t have time for your games today..."'
-			'He huffs. "Somebody has been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'He huffs. "Somebody''s been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'"Okay..." you say as you roll your eyes. "What does that have to do with me?"'
 		else
 			'"Did you hear my own little cheer squad at the last game <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar boasts.'
-			'"I heard many boys are out to get at your level <i>Mister Superstar</i>. Watch out so you don''t lose that cheer squad of yours." you jokingly reply.'
-			'Lazar bursts out in a laughter. "No no, I''m not worried. That only makes me want to improve even more..."'
+			'"I heard many boys are out to get at your level <i>Mister Superstar</i>. Watch out, you might lose that cheer squad of yours!" you jokingly reply.'
+			'Lazar bursts out in laughter. "No no, I''m not worried. That only makes me want to improve even more..."'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
-			'You blush a bit. "No... no I havn''t."'
-			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and then he laughs showing he is just messing with you. From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'You blush. "No... no I havn''t."'
+			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignore you as you walk off.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar says as it brings everyones attention to you.'
-			'You glance around waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it, makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
-			'"Okay..." you say not sure how to respond to this. He does start talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough even if he and the rest don''t pay much attention to you, at least no one is picking on you.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar smirks, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
+			'You glance around, waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
+			'"Okay..." you reply, not sure how to respond. He starts talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough, even if he and the others don''t pay much attention to you. At least no one is picking on you.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
 			'You laugh. "You wish... Are any of the girls dumb enough to fall for that?"'
-			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it is simple a fact, you don''t got to hide it, I got a rocking bod." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit if you are into guys he has a great body. From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it''s a simple fact. You don''t have to hide it." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit that he has a great body. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignore you as you walk off.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe to drunk to find the stair well." Lazar says with a laugh as it brings everyones attention to you. Sure the gopniks are well known for drinking and drugs but it gets old, that everyones seems to think that is all you guys do.'
-			'You just sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it, makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
-			'"Okay..." you say not sure how to respond to this. He does start talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough even if he and the rest don''t pay much attention to you, at least no one is picking on you.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe you''re too drunk to find the stairwell?" Lazar asks with a laugh, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
+			'"Okay..." you reply, not sure how to respond. He starts talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough, even if he and the others don''t pay much attention to you.'
 		end
 	else
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up several of the other jocks and cool kids start giving you a hard time. Before you can even say a word he does. "Get lost, this isn''t for you." Then he starts talk to the rest as you walk away, at least he wasn''t mean about it.'
+			'As you approach, several of the other jocks and cool kids start giving you a hard time. Before you can even say a word, he scoffs at you. "Get lost! This isn''t for you." He starts talking to the others as you walk away. At least he wasn''t mean about it.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk over someone says. "Looks like the loser is lost." Lazar replies. "Nah I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and who can blame them." Which gets a lot of them laughing so much you know it is pointless to even try and talk to him.'
+			'"Looks like the loser is lost." someone comments as you approach.' 
+			'"Nah, I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and, honestly, who can blame them?" Lazar replies, which gets the group laughing so hard you know it''s pointless to even try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignore you as you walk off.'
+			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -105,64 +109,64 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
 			'"So when am I going to get the complementary blowjob?" Svyatoslav asks.'
 			'"Never..." you sourly reply.'
-			'"Come on, don''t play hard to get. I know you loving sucking cock, you little slut." he starts approaching you, turning you just walk away.'
+			'"Come on, don''t play hard to get. I know you loving sucking cock, you little slut." He starts approaching you, so you turn and walk away.'
 		else
-			'As you approach Svyatoslav says. "Look who it is the school bicycle, what run out of cocks in the bathroom? Had to come out off your stall to find more?"'
+			'"Look who it is, the school bicycle! Run out of cocks in the bathroom? Had to come out of your stall to find more?" Svyatoslav says as you approach.'
 			'Most of the other jocks and cool kids laugh at his comments. "No..." you sourly reply.'
-			'"Well unless you get down on your knees and start sucking me off, get the fuck out of here, only time anyone wants anything to do with you, is when they wanted to fuck a lose wet hole." Several others start adding comments and you know it is about to turn ugly so you quickly leave, before someone drags you off to the bathroom or worse.'
+			'"Well, unless you get down on your knees and start sucking me off, get the fuck out of here! Only time anyone wants anything to do with you is when they want to fuck one of your holes." Several others start adding comments and you know it''s about to turn ugly, so you quickly leave before someone drags you off to the bathroom or worse.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'"Well isn''t this a surprise. Are you here to wish me good luck in the next race?" Svyatoslav curiously asks.'
+			'"Well, isn''t this a surprise? Are you here to wish me good luck in the next race?" Svyatoslav curiously asks.'
 			'Seeing him excited and not wanting to hurt his feelings, you just nod. "Yeah... that''s exactly what I wanted to say..."'
-			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be sure to win this time!" he boastfully replies. Then the two of you talk about the many times he fails to either beat Ivan or Lazar in one of the varies sports at school.'
+			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be sure to win this time!" he boastfully replies. The two of you then talk about the many times he fails to beat Ivan or Lazar in one of the various sports at school.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he gives you a dirty look. "I got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
+			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, he starts talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. He starts talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, the two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You approach him and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he gives you a dirty look. "I got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
+			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, the two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He snorts. "What ever, hey make sure you don''t lean to far forward in class so I can copy off you." Then he mostly ignores you but doesn''t pick on you at least.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He snorts. "Whatever. Make sure you don''t lean too far forward in class so I can copy off you." He then ignores you, but doesn''t pick on you.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He steps towards you and places his hand on your shoulder and shoves you hard, hard enough you stumble a couple of steps away catching your balance. "Get the fuck out of here." You notice the looks on the face of some of the others and decided it is best to leave before things get worse.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He steps towards you, places his hand on your shoulder and shoves you hard enough that you stumble back. "Get the fuck out of here!" You notice the stares of the others and decide it''s best to leave before things get worse.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He laughs. "Yeah well you said, so why don''t you just go back to your fellow losers and pretend to be a elf or what ever it is you loser do." Then he partially ignores you and when he isn''t he mocks and makes fun of you.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He laughs. "Why don''t you just go back to your fellow losers and pretend to be an elf or whatever it is you losers do." He continues mocking you when he isn''t talking to someone else.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You come to see what real men are like?"'
-			'You shake your head no and roll your eyes at his comment. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He snorts. "Sure you didn''t well take a good look." He does a little flexing and he has a pretty nice body, finally you are able to engage him in a bit of a conversation.'
+			'"You come to see what real men are like?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head and roll your eyes at his comment. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He snorts. "Sure you didn''t. Well, take a good look." He does a little flexing before you''re able to engage him in something resembling a conversation.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You come to beg for some money, so you can buy drugs?" He says with a laugh and several others join in.'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'"Yeah well no one wants to talk to your skank ass, so go back to your own kind." You notice the looks on the face of some of the others and decided it is best to leave before things get worse.'
+			'"You come to beg for some money to buy drugs?" he asks with a laugh, causing several others to join in.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'"Yeah? Well no one wants to talk to your skank ass, so go back to your own kind." You notice the stares of the others and decide it''s best to leave before things get worse.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost drugy?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He laughs. "Yeah well you said, so why don''t you just go back to your fellow wannabe gangsters and pretend like you matter." Then he partially ignores you and when he isn''t he mocks and makes fun of you.'
+			'"You get lost, junkie?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He laughs. "Why don''t you just go back to your fellow wannabe gangsters and pretend like you matter?" He continues mocking you when he isn''t talking to someone else.'
 		end
 	else
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A8', 'dislike'
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up to him he walks towards you and grabs you by the arm tightly enough it hurts a little and drags you far enough away no one can over hear when he whispers. "Just what the fuck do you think you are doing? Don''t ever come up to me in public." Then he shoves you away and says loudly enough everyone can hear. "And stay the fuck away from us you loser!" Several of the others laugh and commend him for getting ride of you as he walks back to them, while you just sigh and walk off, knowing it is pointless to try and talk to him.'
+			'As you approach, he walks towards you and grabs you by the arm before dragging you away so no one can hear his whispers. "What the fuck do you think you''re doing? Don''t ever come up to me in public." He then shoves you away. "And stay the fuck away from us, loser!" he says loud enough for the others to hear and several of them laugh and commend him for getting rid of you as he walks back to them. You just sigh and walk away, knowing it''s pointless to try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he shakes his head. "Fuck know, stay the fuck away from me, you worthless fuck. No one likes you, no one wants you around. So just turn your fucking ass around and walk the fuck away from here." He glares at you and you notice a lot of the others giving you unkind looks, sighing you turn around and walk away.'
+			'He shakes his head as you approach. "Fuck no! Stay the fuck away from me, you worthless fuck. No one likes you, so just turn your fucking ass around and walk the fuck away from here." He glares at you and you notice a lot of the others giving you unkind looks. You sigh before turning and walking away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -227,159 +231,158 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'erast':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big150.jpg"></center>'
 	if fame['pav_slut'] > 225:
 		if npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-			'You approach Erast and tap his shoulders. When he turns around, he notices it is you. "Oh...hello <<$pcs_nickname>>.'
-			'You can tell he wasn''t expecting you. "Hi Erast. I just came to talk to you a little." you say with a smile on your face.'
-			'You start to talk about different things but soon you see him glancing at the others as if he was worried about being seen with you.'
-			'"Am I not worthy to look at?" you ask jokingly but you exactly know what is going on.'
+			'You approach Erast and tap his shoulder. "Oh... Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'"Hi Erast. I just wanted to talk to you," you reply with a smile.'
+			'You start talking about different things, but see him glancing at the others, as if he was worried about being seen with you.'
+			'"Am I not worthy to look at?" you ask jokingly, but you exactly know what''s going on.'
 			*nl
-			'"What? No. I mean, yes. You look..." and with that, he starts to check you out. You can tell he likes you but unlike the others, he isn''t undressing you with his eyes and stays a gentleman, despite your reputation.'
-			'"Look, I get it, don''t worry." you say. Then you grab your things and leave because you don''t want to make him feel more uncomfortable than he does now.'
-			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I..." he starts saying something but you can''t hear the end of it.'
+			'"What? No. I mean, yes. You look..." He starts to check you out. You can tell he likes you, but unlike the others, he isn''t undressing you with his eyes and remains a gentleman, despite your reputation.'
+			'"Look, I get it. Don''t worry," you reply before grabbing your things and leaving, not wanting to make him feel more uncomfortable than he does now.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I..." He starts saying something, but you can''t hear the end of it.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-			'You approach Erast and tap his shoulders. When he turns around, he notices it is you. You can easily tell he''s not happy to see you at all.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, sorry but I was about to leave and do some important things." he mutters.'
-			'"I just wanted to..." you would continue your sentence but he''s already gone. It is obvious he wouldn''t like to be seen with you, furthermore, there isn''t too much for you to talk about.'
-			'There are a few minutes until the end of the break so you decide to spend some time on your phone before going on your way.'
+			'You approach Erast and tap his shoulder. When he turns, you can easily tell he''s not happy to see you at all.'
+			'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Sorry, but I was about to leave and do some important things..." he mutters.'
+			'"I just wanted to..." You would continue your sentence, but he''s already gone. It''s obvious he didn''t want to be seen with you.'
+			'There are a few minutes until the end of the break, so you decide to spend some time on your phone before going on your way.'
 		else
-			'You approach Erast and tap his shoulders. When he turns around, he notices it is you.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, am I in your way?"'
+			'You approach Erast and tap his shoulder. "Oh hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Am I in your way?"'
 			'"What do you mean?" you ask confusedly.'
 			'"I don''t know. Maybe you were looking for the toilets to retouch your makeup or something and I was in your way."'
 			*nl
-			'He doesn''t want to be rude but you understand he was referring to your bad reputation and the rumours what you do in the toilets.'
-			'"Was it a hint that I should leave you alone or maybe you want me to go there?" you wink.'
-			'"What? No. I mean... never mind, see you later." he says then he turns around and goes on his own business without finishing his sentence. You don''t know if you should feel offended or rejected.'
-			'You don''t have too much time to think about it, because the break is almost over. So you grab your things and go on your way.'
+			'He doesn''t want to be rude, but you understand he was referring to your reputation and the rumours about what you do in the toilets.'
+			'"Was that a hint that I should leave you alone or maybe you want me to go there?" you wink.'
+			'"What? No. I mean... never mind, see you later." He turns around and goes on his own business without finishing his sentence. You don''t know if you should feel offended or rejected.'
+			'You don''t have too much time to think about it since the break is almost over, so you grab your things and go on your way.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-			'"Here''s the resident big guy of our school!" you say jokingly when you approach Erast who is watching something on his phone.'
-			'You can see him blushing a little when he looks up and notices you. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, how''re you doing today?"'
+			'"Here''s the resident big guy of our school!" you say jokingly when you approach Erast, who is watching something on his phone.'
+			'You can see him blushing when he looks up and notices you. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, how are you doing today?"'
 			'"I''m fine, thanks for asking. You know, I came here to get some pointers as I''ve been struggling with my training recently. I have to pay attention to my shape and some good tips are always useful."'
 			*nl
-			'"You already look good <<$pcs_nickname>>." he says politely but his face turns red a little. Before you could react, he starts talking about aerobic and anaerobic techniques which he thinks would help you with your goal.'
-			'You listen to him very carefully and try to remember as much as you can. Which is not easy, because he is so passionate talking about this topic that he often uses technical terms you don''t even know what they mean.'
+			'"You already look good <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says politely, but his face turns red. Before you can react, he starts talking about aerobic and anaerobic techniques which he thinks would help you with your goal.'
+			'You listen to him very carefully and try to remember as much as you can, which isn''t easy since he''s so passionate about this topic that he often uses technical terms you don''t understand.'
 			'When you realize the bell is about to ring, you thank him for his useful tips and you both head to the classroom for the next lesson.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-			'"Hey Erast!" you great him but he''s so focused on watching something on his mobile that he doesn''t even notice you. You poke him and great him again.'
-			'"Oh.. hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, sorry I didn''t notice you were talking to me." he glances at you and he immediately stares at the screen again.'
-			'"Okay, no problem. What are you watching anyway? You seem to be lost in it." you say as you have a look at the video he''s watching.'
+			'"Hey Erast!" you greet him, but he''s so focused on watching something on his mobile that he doesn''t even notice you. You poke him and greet him again.'
+			'"Oh.. Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Sorry, I didn''t notice you were talking to me." He glances at you before immediately stares at the screen again.'
+			'"Okay, no problem. What are you watching anyway? You seem to be lost in it," you say as you have a look at the video he''s watching.'
 			*nl
-			'"Oh, he is my favorite bodybuilder. He has just uploaded this new motivational video on his Youtube channel. It''s really worth to watch, so inspirational."'
-			'You join and sit next to him. You occasionally exchange some words while you are watching the video but he''s more into that than chatting. Soon, you hear the bell which means your break is over.'
-			'"See you later, <$pcs_nickname>>." he says, then he puts his phone back to his pocket and leaves.'
+			'"Oh, he''s my favorite bodybuilder. He just uploaded this new motivational video on his channel. It''s really worth watching. So inspirational."'
+			'You sit next to him and exchange the occasional word while watching the video, but he''s not interested in chatting. Soon, you hear the bell signalling the end of the break.'
+			'"See you later, <$pcs_nickname>>," he says before putting his phone in his pocket and leaving.'
 		else
-			'"I can''t believe it!" you say when you approach Erast who is watching something on his phone.'
-			'"Whoa, what''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>?" he asks. You can see by his face expression that he doesn''t know what your problem is and what this ranting is about.'
-			'"You know, I''ve been trying to pay more attention to my shape lately and I feel I''m not getting the results I should, according to my training plan." you explain as you get your plan out of your pocket and show it to him.'
-			'"It''s not a horse race." he quickly replies and then continues: "People usually think they get the required result within weeks when it actually needs months, even years sometimes."'
+			'"I can''t believe it!" you say when you approach Erast, who is watching something on his phone.'
+			'"Whoa, what''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>?" he asks. You can see by his expression that he doesn''t understand what your problem is.'
+			'"You know, I''ve been trying to pay more attention to my shape lately and I feel like I''m not getting the results I should, according to my training plan," you explain as you get your plan out of your pocket and show it to him.'
+			'"It''s not a horse race." he quickly replies. "People usually think they get the required result within weeks when it actually needs months, even years sometimes."'
 			*nl
-			'"Years?" you ask in despair and then you ask him if he could explain you some things.' 
-			'He looks around as if he was looking for someone to talk to instead. Then he sighs and starts to talk about nutrition, metabolism, resting, bulking, calisthenics, and everything that can affect your progress.'
-			'You don''t understand everything he says but you are happy he is willing to share some of his knowledge. After talking about it for a few minutes you feel you might have learnt something.'
-			'"Good talk, thank you Erast." you say when you hear the bell ringing and you head to the classroom for the next lesson.'
+			'"Years?" you ask in despair before asking if he could explain some things to you.' 
+			'He looks around, as if looking for someone to talk to instead, before he sighs and starts to talk about nutrition, metabolism, resting, bulking, calisthenics, and everything that can affect your progress.'
+			'You don''t understand everything he says, but are happy that he''s willing to share some of his knowledge. After talking about it for a few minutes, you feel you might have learned something.'
+			'"Good talk. Thanks Erast!" you say when you hear the bell ringing and head to the classroom for the next lesson.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Erast greats you with a smile when you approach him.'
-			'"Hey Erast! I''ve been looking for you all day. Could you give me some more tips on strength and conditioning? I think I might be doing something wrong, not gaining as much as I think I should."'
-			'"Gladly." says Erast and you can tell he is more than happy to help a fellow jock. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should try to increase your training volume and decrease between-set rest intervals."'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Erast greets you with a smile when you approach him.'
+			'"Hey Erast! I''ve been looking for you all day. Could you give me some more tips on strength and conditioning? I think I might be doing something wrong since I''m not gaining as much as I think I should."'
+			'"Gladly," he replies. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, you should try to increase your training volume and decrease between-set rest intervals."'
 			*nl
-			'"Also, get enough sleep. Your muscle needs enough recovery time." he adds. He clearly knows a lot about strength and conditioning and could continue talking about it for ages but the bell rings, after only about ten minutes of talking.'
+			'"Also, get enough sleep. Your muscle needs enough recovery time." he adds. He clearly knows a lot about strength and conditioning and could continue talking about it for hours, but the bell rings after only a few minutes.'
 			'"Thanks Erast, that''s really helpful. See you later."'
-			'"Don''t sweat it. Come and find me if you have more questions." With that, you both grab your things and go to the next lesson together.'
+			'"Don''t sweat it. Come and find me if you have more questions." With that, you both grab your things and head to the next lesson together.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>... what''s up?" Erast asks you when you approach him.'
-			'"Hey Erast! I was wondering if you could give me some new tips on boxing. You might have learnt something new while boxing with Ivan which would be useful for me, too." you say.'
-			'"Oh, boxing is not my greatest asset, to be honest. Ivan or Vitek can give you better advice, I guess. You could watch their next match at the community center if you are so much into boxing lately."'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Erast asks as you approach him.'
+			'"Hey Erast! I was wondering if you could give me some new tips on boxing. You might have learned something new while boxing with Ivan which would be useful for me too."'
+			'"Oh, boxing''s not my greatest asset, to be honest. Ivan or Vitek can give you better advice, I guess. You should watch their next match at the community center if you''re so interested."'
 			*nl
-			'"Well, I''m not, but it helps me to improve my balance and posture." you reply.'
-			'By the skin of his teeth he shares his knowledge but doesn''t let you interrupt him with your questions. You get the feeling that he only helps you because he is polite and you are a fellow jock.'
-			'When the bell rings, he seems a little bit relieved.'
-			'"Thanks Erast" you say grabbing your things and you both go on your own ways.'			
+			'"Well, I''m not, but it helps me to improve my balance and posture," you reply.'
+			'By the skin of his teeth, he shares his knowledge but doesn''t let you interrupt him with your questions. You get the feeling that he only helps you because he is polite and you are a fellow jock.'
+			'When the bell rings, he seems a bit relieved.'
+			'"Thanks Erast," you say while grabbing your things and you both go your own ways.'			
 		else
-			'"Hi Erast, what''s that?" you ask him when you see he is completely immersed in his notes.'
-			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, sorry I didn''t notice you" he replies. "I''m trying to improve my training plan and make it more varied." he says and shows you the notes he was looking at before.'
-			'"Wow, this is... this is really interesting." you reply. You have always known that he is very committed to sport but this new plan is very detailed, even for him.'
+			'"Hi Erast, what''s that?" you ask when you see he is completely immersed in his notes.'
+			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Sorry I didn''t notice you," he replies. "I''m trying to improve my training plan and make it more varied," he says and shows you his notes.'
+			'"Wow, this is... this is really interesting," you reply. You''ve always known that he''s very committed to sport, but this new plan is very detailed, even for him.'
 			*nl
-			'You start having a chit-chat, mostly about training and occasionally you exchange some tips on working out, stretching and different warm-up techniques.'
-			'"Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I still have to do some things before the next lesson. Talk to you later." he says and gives you a little wave while he''s leaving.'
-			'"Sure, later then." When he leaves, you look at the clock and you see you don''t have much time to left before the next lesson starts so you head to your classroom.'
+			'You start chatting, mostly about training and exchanging some tips on working out, stretching and different warm-up techniques.'
+			'"Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I still have to do some things before the next lesson. Talk to you later," he says and gives you a little wave while he''s leaving.'
+			'"Sure, later then." When he leaves, you look at the clock and see that you don''t have much time to left before the next lesson starts, so you head to your classroom.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>." says Erast when he notices you. "How''ve you been doing?"'
-			'"Fine, thanks for asking. Lately, I''ve been reading a lot. Luckily there are more and more new books out and I can borrow some old ones, too which I haven''t even heard of."'
-			'The last part makes Erast smile and he says: "It''s still hard to imagine there are books you haven''t even heard of. There should be a book about how to manage your time between working out and studying. I''m still falling more and more behind."'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>," Erast politely greets when he notices you. "How''ve you been doing?"'
+			'"Fine, thanks for asking. Lately, I''ve been reading a lot. Luckily there are more and more new books out and I can borrow some old ones too, some of which I haven''t even heard of."'
+			'The last part makes Erast smile. "It''s still hard to imagine there are books you haven''t heard of. There should be a book about how to manage your time between working out and studying. I''m still falling more and more behind."'
 			*nl
-			'"Yes, studying is important..." you reply and suddenly you don''t know what to say. You know he''s not the sharpest knife in the drawer but despite of being in a different clique, he''s always been kind and polite to you and you don''t want him to feel bad about it.'
-			'After a short pause you start to talk about studying and doing exercises. By this time, it''s clear for both of you that they have something in common: both require dedication and a lot of discipline in some way.'
-			'Some minutes later you hear the bell. "I should go, Erast. There is something I would like to ask from the teacher before the lesson. See you later." you say as you hurry to catch your teacher in the corridor.'
+			'"Yes, studying is important..." you reply and suddenly don''t know what to say. You know he''s not the brightest, but despite being in a different clique, he''s always been kind and polite to you and you don''t want him to feel bad about it.'
+			'After a short pause, you start to talk about studying and doing exercises. By this time, it''s clear to both of you that they have something in common: both require dedication and a lot of discipline in some way.'
+			'You hear the bell a few minutes later. "I should go, Erast. There''s something I would like to ask the teacher before the lesson. See you later." You then hurry to catch your teacher in the corridor.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>... Is there anything I can help with?" says Erast when he notices you approaching him.'
-			'He seems a bit confused because you don''t know each other that well. You hesitate a bit and then you spit it out: "Hey... So, I wanted to ask..."'
-			'You cannot even finish your sentence when he interrupts you. "Uhm, look, the thing is that I am very busy now. Yeah, I am busy, sooo maybe another time?"'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>... Is there anything I can help with?" Erast asks when he notices you approaching him.'
+			'He seems a bit confused because you don''t know each other that well. You hesitate before spitting it out: "Hey... So, I wanted to ask..."'
+			'You don''t finish your sentence before he interrupts you. "Uhm, look, the thing is that I''m very busy now. Yeah, I''m busy, sooo maybe another time?"'
 			*nl
-			'You get the hint and you don''t want to be pushy so you just say you''ll try to find him in a more suitable time.'
-			'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, yeah, do that... Now if you excuse me..." he says politely but firmly and with that he goes on his own business.'
-			'"It didn''t go well." you think to yourself. You realize there is still much time so you check your schedule to see what your next lesson is and then you go to your classroom.'
+			'You get the hint and don''t want to be pushy, so you just say you''ll try to find him at a more suitable time.'
+			'"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, yeah, do that... Now if you''ll excuse me..." he says politely but firmly and goes about his own business.'
+			'You realize there''s still time, so you check your schedule to see what your next lesson is before heading to your classroom.'
 		else
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>... What''s up?" says Erast when he notices you approaching him.'
-			'"Hi Erast." you reply. "I just thought to come here and exchange some words with you."'
-			'He looks surprised but then he starts to talk about his training routines. "You know, <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is very important to do something for your body every single day." he adds.'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>... What''s up?" Erast asks when he notices you approaching him.'
+			'"Hi Erast," you reply. "I just thought I would come and chat was all."'
+			'He looks surprised, but eventually starts to talk about his training routines. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, it''s very important to do something for your body every single day."'
 			*nl
-			'"I know, I know." you sigh. It is clear you don''t have a lot in common but you can have a quick and nice chat now and then. You also can learn some new things and so can he.'
-			'Before the break is over, he grabs his things and says: "Alright <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have a few things to be done before the lesson. Thanks for the chat.'
-			'"Of course. See you later then." You quickly check your notes from the previous lesson and revise it before going to the classroom.'
+			'"I know, I know..." you sigh. It''s clear you don''t have a lot in common, but you''re able to have a nice chat with each other.'
+			'Before the break is over, he grabs his things. "Alright <<$pcs_nickname>>, I have a few things I need to do before the lesson. Thanks for the chat.'
+			'"Of course. See you later." You quickly check your notes from the previous lesson and revise them before going to the classroom.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>." says Erast when he notices you. "How''ve you been doing?"'
-			'"You know me Erast, same old, same old. Another day, the same shit." you reply while you sit down on the floor next to him.'
-			'He''s not the person who completely understands your lifestyle, but he''s polite and kind enough to fully accept your choice and would have a nice chat with you now and then.'
-			'"How''s your training going lately?" you ask and he starts to talk about his training schedule and plan he''s been doing for a while. He enjoys talking to you about it, although you''re not sure whether it is because of you or because he is obsessed with this topic.'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>." Erast politely greets when he notices you. "How''ve you been doing?"'
+			'"You know me Erast. Same old, same old. Another day, the same shit." you reply while you sit on the floor next to him.'
+			'He''s not the person who completely understands your lifestyle, but he''s polite and kind enough to fully accept your choice and you enjoy chatting with him.'
+			'"How''s your training going lately?" you ask and he starts talking about his training schedule and plan he''s been doing for a while. He enjoys talking to you about it, although you''re not sure whether it''s because of you or because he''s so obsessed with this topic.'
 			*nl
-			'"That''s cool." you reply. Then you tell him some new stories that have happened to you lately and also talk about boxing a little which seems to be the only topic you both are familiar with.'
-			'You have a nice chat and you don''t even notice how fast time flies. You only realize your break is over when you hear the bell.'
-			'"See you later big boy." you say as you gather your things and stand up.'
+			'"That''s cool," you reply and start telling him some new stories that have happened to you lately. You also talk about boxing, which seems to be the only topic you''re both familiar with.'
+			'You have a nice chat and don''t even notice how fast time flies. You only realize your break is over when you hear the bell.'
+			'"See you later big boy," you say as you gather your things and stand up.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-			'"Here''s our big boy, the one and only Erast" you say a bit mockingly when you approach him.'
-			'"What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?" he doesn''t seem amused, maybe because he thinks you make fun of him as he''s not as good at boxing as Ivan, Vitek or some other gopniks, no matter how hard he tries.'
-			'"Agghh, don''t be a pussy, come on, you''re no fun. How''s that you''re bigger than Mother Russia and sometimes you''re as soft as a teddy bear?"'
+			'"Here''s our big boy, the one and only Erast!" you say mockingly as you approach him.'
+			'"What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?" He doesn''t seem amused.'
+			'"Agghh, don''t be a pussy! Come on, you''re no fun. How can you be bigger than Mother Russia, but as soft as a teddy bear?"'
 			*nl
-			'You see his face turning red and you can''t decide whether it is because of the shame or the anger he feels. Even worse, the mixture of them. You realize you might have gone too far again and you clearly don''t want to put up a fight with him.'
-			'"Relax, I''m just joking. Don''t take everything so seriously" you try to ease the tension.'
-			'"Whatever <<$pcs_nickname>>. Have your fun." he says then he turns around and leaves. You giggle a little bit over your victory before you leave and do something else until the bell rings.'
+			'You see his face turning red and can''t decide whether it''s because of the shame or the anger he feels. You realize you might have gone too far again and clearly don''t want to put up a fight with him.'
+			'"Relax, I''m just joking. Don''t take everything so seriously!" you say, trying to ease the tension.'
+			'"Whatever <<$pcs_nickname>>. Have your fun," He says before turning and leaving. You giggle at your victory before leaving to do something else until the bell rings.'
 		else
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" asks Erast when he notices you.'
-			'"Where do I begin? You know how it is, party here, a bit of mischief and mayhem there." you say. You can see by his face expression he actually doesn''t know how it is.'
-			'"If you say so." he replies. He pauses for a short time as he doesn''t really know what to say. Then he opens his mouth as if he is to speak but he''s just trying to find the words.'
-			'"How about you?" you ask before this whole conversation turns into a boredom for both of you.'
-			'"I''ve been working out hard as always." he says. He''s noticeably somewhere else in his mind so you try not to interrogate him.'
-			'You wonder whether he''s disorganised because he''s just exhausted and bored or the rumours are true and it''s a side effect of the steroids he takes.'
-			'After a very short conversation, you both go on your own ways and try to do something useful before the next lesson starts.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Erast asks when he notices you.'
+			'"Where do I begin? You know how it is, party here, a bit of mischief and mayhem there." You can see by his expression that he actually doesn''t understand what you mean.'
+			'"If you say so," he shrugs before pausing, unsure of what to say. He opens his mouth to speak, but he''s just trying to find the words.'
+			'"How about you?" you ask before the conversation turns awkward for both of you.'
+			'"I''ve been working out hard as always." He''s noticeably somewhere else in his mind, so you try not to interrogate him.'
+			'You wonder whether he''s disorganised because he''s just exhausted, or if the rumours are true and it''s a side effect of the steroids he takes.'
+			'After a very short conversation, you both go your own ways and try to do something useful before the next lesson starts.'
 		end
 	else
 		if npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?" Erast greats you.'
-			'"I''m bored and I thought we could chat a little. I feel like this day is never going to end." you reply with some sorrow in your voice.'
-			'Knowing you don''t really have any friends and you aren''t on speaking terms with many of your classmates, he says: "Sure, I can check this video later" he says then he puts his phone back in his pocket.'
+			'Erast politely greets you. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?"'
+			'"I''m bored and I thought we could chat? I feel like this day is never going to end!" you reply with some sorrow in your voice.'
+			'Knowing you don''t really have any friends and you aren''t on speaking terms with many of your classmates, he smiles. "Sure, I can check this video later."'
 			*nl
-			'You have a nice but casual chit-chat for a while, occasionally changing subjects. Which you don''t really mind, you are happy you don''t need to spend the break alone at least.'
-			'"Okay Erast, I should just let you do your things before the next lesson starts." you tell him with a smile on your face.'
-			'"See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, he says then he heads to the men''s toilet. You grab your things and go to your classroom to wait for the bell.'
+			'He puts his phone away and you chat for a while, occasionally changing subjects to things you don''t completely understand. You don''t mind; You''re just happy you don''t have to spend the break alone.'
+			'"Okay Erast, I should let you do your things before the next lesson starts," you tell him with a smile.'
+			'"See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>," he replies before heading to the toilet. You grab your things and go to your classroom to wait for the bell.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
 			'"Hello Erast, how''re you doing today?" you ask as you approach him.'
-			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>... Sorry I don''t want to be rude but I was about to go to the toilet." he says. You get the feeling he''s just using this as an excuse and is trying to avoid talking to you.'
-			'"Okay, I just..." you start to say but he''s already left. He clearly isn''t interested in having you as a company but at least he''s not rude to you as many others.'
-			'You spend the rest of the break alone and you are wondering if anything interesting would happen today or it''ll be just another, grey day for you at school.'
+			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>... Sorry I don''t want to be rude, but I was just about to go to the toilet." You get the feeling he''s just using this as an excuse and is trying to avoid talking to you.'
+			'"Okay, I just..." you start, but he''s already left. He clearly isn''t interested in having you as company, but at least he''s not as rude to you as the others.'
+			'You spend the rest of the break alone wondering if anything interesting will happen today or it''ll be just another hellish day for you.'
 		else
 			'"Hello Erast, how''re you doing today?" you ask as you approach him.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..., what''s up?"'
-			'"As you''re really good at skating, I was wondering if you could help and give me a piece of advice about keeping your balance and posture?" you ask him nicely.'
-			'He looks at his watch and glances at the others. Then he sighs and says: "Okay, I can give you some tips." he says reluctantly and you realize in no time he would prefer spending the break with someone else.'
-			'Anyway, he explains some things and after a short time he says: "Well, I have to go now if you don''t mind. Another time maybe?" and with that he leaves.'
-			'You have a few minutes before the next lesson so you head to your classroom and try to kill the time.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?"'
+			'"As you''re really good at skating, I was wondering if you could give me some advice about keeping my balance and posture?" you ask him nicely.'
+			'He looks at his watch and glances at the others before he sighs. "Okay, I can give you some tips..." he says reluctantly and you realize that he would prefer spending the break with someone else.'
+			'He quickly explains some things before stopping. "Well, I have to go now if you don''t mind. Another time maybe?" He doesn''t wait for your answer before leaving.'
+			'You have a few minutes before the next lesson, so you head to your classroom and try to kill the time.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -393,9 +396,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 	if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2 or christinaQW['dompath'] >= 2:
 		if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 3:
 			'As you pass by Christina, she looks at you triumphantly. "Don''t forget my little slave! Showers after the gym class..."'
-			'Before you''re able to respond, she turns around and walks away...'
+			'Before you''re able to respond, she turns around and walks away.'
 		elseif christinaQW['subpath'] = 2:
-			'"Looking forward to after P.E. class," Christina says with a wicked smile.'
+			'"Looking forward to after P.E. class?" Christina asks with a wicked smile.'
 			'"W-Why? What happens after class?"'
 			'"Oh, I don''t want to ruin the suprise, pet." Throwing one last smirk in your direction, she heads off to her next class.'
 		elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 2:
@@ -408,33 +411,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 				'Taking a deep breath, you say "Lariska. I want Lariska."'
 				'Suprised, she finally looks at you. "No, <<$pcs_nickname>>. She''s mine, and I don''t want you filling her head with nonsense."'
 				'"Well, the thing is you don''t really have a choice. Not a good one anyway." Pulling out your phone and checking to make sure nobody is looking, you show her a picture of her blowing the coach.'
-				'Her face turns bright red with anger, and she hisses at you, "You fucking bitch. How did you get that?! If you show anybody..."'
-				'"I wont...if you tell Lariska it''s ok to hang out with me outside of school. I mean, I would hate to see these pictures fall into Lizaveta''s hands..."'
-				'Her face turns even more red, if that were possible. "Fine," she spits out. "But I swear, if I ever even hear about these pictures again, I will fucking break you into tiny pieces!"'
-				'"Oh, you wont, as long as you keep your word," you say with a fake smile that doesn''t quite reach your eyes. "Now do be a dear and let her know she is free to do whatever she wants outside of school, will you?"'
+				'Her face turns bright red with anger and she hisses at you. "You fucking bitch. How did you get that?! If you show anybody..."'
+				'"I won''t...if you tell Lariska it''s okay to hang out with me outside of school! I mean, I would hate to see these pictures fall into Lizaveta''s hands..."'
+				'Her face turns even more red, if that were possible. "Fine," she spits out. "But I swear, if I even hear about these pictures again, I will fucking break you into tiny pieces!"'
+				'"Oh, you won''t. So long as you keep your word..." you say with a fake smile that doesn''t quite reach your eyes. "Now do be a dear and let her know she''s free to do whatever she wants outside of school, will you?"'
 				'"Oh, and if you try and punish her for this, I will know," the threat clear on your face. Turning on your heels, you head off to your next class, smiling.'
 			else
 				christinaQW['dompath'] = 3
 				'Going up to Christina, you quietly say "I need to talk to you about something, Christina."'
 				'"What do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m busy," she says, not even looking at you.'
 				'"Oh, I just wanted you to know I have something you should see." Pulling out your phone and checking to make sure nobody is looking, you show her a picture of her blowing the coach.'
-				'Her face turns bright red with anger, and she hisses at you, "You fucking bitch. How did you get that?! If you show anybody..."'
+				'Her face turns bright red with anger and she hisses at you. "You fucking bitch! How did you get that?! If you show anybody..."'
 				'"It would be a real shame if Lisaveta got her hands on these..." you say menacingly.'
 				'Glaring at you, her hands balled into fists, she says quietly "What the fuck do you want from me, bitch?"'
 				'"Oh, I haven''t decided yet. When I do, I''ll let you know. I''m sure whatever I decide I want, you''ll give it to me without a fuss."'
-				'Her face turns even more red, if that were possible. "Fine," she spits out. "But I swear, if I ever even hear about these pictures again, I will fucking break you into tiny pieces!"'
-				'"Oh, you wont, as long as you keep your word," you say with a fake smile that doesn''t quite reach your eyes. Turning on your heels, you head off to your next class, smiling.'
+				'Her face turns even more red, if that were possible. "Fine," she spits out. "But I swear, if I even hear about these pictures again, I will fucking break you into tiny pieces!"'
+				'"Oh, you won''t. So long as you keep your word..." you say with a fake smile that doesn''t quite reach your eyes. Turning on your heels, you head off to your next class, smiling.'
 			end
 		elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 3:
-			'Christina takes one look at you coming over to talk with her and says, "What now?"'
+			'Christina takes one look at you coming over to talk with her. "What now?"'
 			'"Nothing," you say cheerfully. "Just came over to say hi."'
-			'"Well don''t. We''re not friends, you got what you wanted, now leave me alone unless it''s important."'
-			'Giving her your best obvious fake smile you say, "Now don''t be like that. I thought we were great friends!"'
+			'"Well don''t. We''re not friends. You got what you wanted, now leave me alone unless it''s important."'
+			'Giving her your best obvious fake smile you say "Now don''t be like that. I thought we were great friends!"'
 			'"Whatever." Giving you a dirty look, she heads off to her next class, and you do the same, chuckling to yourself.'
 		elseif christinaQW['dompath'] = 4:
 			'Christina takes one look at you and her face turns crimson. "Bitch, I warned you. First chance I get, I''m gonna fuck you up!"'
-			'You give her your best patronizing look and say, "I''m not sure what you''re talking about. You''re welcome to give it your best shot though. Only one way to find out who''s Top Bitch around here!"'
-			'Her hands ball into fists, but then she takes a deep breath, looks around, and mutters to herself, "Not here..."'
+			'You give her your best patronizing look. "I''m not sure what you''re talking about. You''re welcome to give it your best shot though. Only one way to find out who''s Top Bitch around here!"'
+			'Her hands ball into fists, but then she takes a deep breath, looks around, and mutters to herself "Not here..."'
 			'Smiling at her menacingly, you say "Later then..." before heading off to your next class.'
 		else
 			'As you walk up to Christina, you smirk and say "Better have your plug in and no panties, buttslut, or things won''t go well for you."'
@@ -452,8 +455,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 				'"Hmmrph!!" Christina looks angrily at you. "You know what? I don''t have time for this right now!" She crosses her arms and refuses to say another word to you.'
 			else
 				'"Why are you trying to talk to me? I don''t speak to people like you."'
-				'"Well excuse me, your highness." You sarcastically take a bow in front of her. You hear some snickering behind you.'
-				'Christina turns a bit red as she pushes you away and storms off with Lina trying to keep up behind her.'
+				'"Well excuse me, your highness." You sarcastically take a bow in front of her and hear some snickering behind you.'
+				'Christina turns red as she pushes you away and storms off with Lina trying to keep up behind her.'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -486,7 +489,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			if rand(1,2) = 1:
 				'You approach Albina and she gives you a small smile. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, how are you enjoying the Starlets?" You open your mouth to answer, but she cuts you off before you can speak. "Just keep coming to dance practice, okay?" She gives you another small smile before walking away.'
 			else
-				'You approach Albina, who is lost in her thoughts. "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she says glumly when she notices you. "Is everything okay? Something on your mind?" you ask concerned. She sighs in response. "Yeah, it''s... it''s nothing. Just keep coming to dance practice, okay?" She gives you a weak smile before walking away, lost in her thoughts again.'
+				'You approach Albina, who is lost in her thoughts. "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she says glumly when she notices you.' 
+				'"Is everything okay? Something on your mind?" you ask concerned.' 
+				'She sighs in response. "Yeah, it''s... it''s nothing. Just keep coming to dance practice, okay?" She gives you a weak smile before walking away, lost in her thoughts again.'
 			end
 		elseif AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 1:
 			AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2
@@ -548,132 +553,128 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'veronika':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big141.jpg"></center>'
 	if fame['pav_slut'] > 225:
 		if npc_rel['A141'] >= 50:
-			'You sit down next to Veronika as you walk through the hallway. "What''s up?" you ask.'
-			'Soon, the two of you start talking about things that have happened recently. She also shows you some photos of her latest skating routine, which makes you wonder if you could ever be that flexible as she is.'
-			'"I wish I could be as flexible as you are. You know, it would save me a lot of muscle pain." you say.'
-			'She opens her mouth and is about to ask what you mean but then she realizes why you are in pain, again. Knowing your reputation, she can figure it out. She pinches her nose but she doesn''t say a word about it.'
-			'After some minutes, she gets up and says: "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, I got to go now. Hopefully you will return to reason one day." she says as she walks away.'
+			'You sit next to Veronika. "What''s up?" you ask and the two of you start talking about things that have happened recently. She also shows you some photos of her latest skating routine, which makes you wonder if you could ever be as flexible as she is.'
+			'"I wish I could be as flexible as you are. It would save me a lot of muscle pain," you say. She opens her mouth and is about to ask what you mean, but then realizes why you''re in pain. She pinches her nose, but she doesn''t say a word about it.'
+			'After a few awkward seconds, she gets up. "Okay... I''ve got to go now. Hopefully you''ll return to reason one day."'
 		elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk past Veronika during your break, you say her mumbling something. You go up to her and ask what she said.'
-			'"Were you talking to me? Sorry, I didn''t hear what you said."'
-			'She stares at you with an empty look but doesn''t say anything. She looks you up and down, then as she walks away, she mumbles again: "Slut..."'
-			'"Frigid virgin." you reply. Then you get your mirror out of your bag, and check your look again before you head to your next lesson.'
+			'As you walk past Veronika during your break, you her her mumbling something and approach her. "Were you talking to me? Sorry, I didn''t hear what you said."'
+			'She stares at you with an empty glare, but doesn''t say anything. She looks you up and down, then as she walks away, she mumbles again: "Slut..."'
+			'"Frigid virgin..." you reply before getting your mirror out of your bag and checking your looks again before you head to your next lesson.'
 		else
-			'"Hello Veronika, how''re you doing?" you ask as you sit down next to her.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>", she greets you indifferently. "As a matter of fact, I''m busy now so if you''ll excuse me..." With that, she takes her backpack and goes to the other jocks. She doesn''t take part in the conversation as she never does really, but it seems it''s still a better option than being seen with you.'
-			+$OpenInnerThought+'"What a cold heart, no wonder why everyone calls her Ice Queen." '+$CloseInnerThought+'As you still have a lot of time before the next lesson starts, you retouch your makeup and refresh yourself.'
+			'"Hey Veronika, how are you doing?" you ask as you sit next to her.'
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she greets you indifferently. "As a matter of fact, I''m busy now so if you''ll excuse me..." With that, she takes her backpack and walks over to the other jocks. She doesn''t take part in the conversation, but it seems it''s still a better option than being seen with you.'
+			'As you still have a lot of time before the next lesson starts, you retouch your makeup and refresh yourself.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A141'] >= 50:
-			'As you see Veronika among her fellow jocks, you decide to go and talk to her. "Hey Veronika." you say as you sit down next to her in the hallway. "What''s up? you ask.'
-			'She looks up and greets you with a small smile on her face. The two of you start to talk about things that have happened to you lately, addressing various topics. She seems a bit indifferent to some of them but she''s always happy to talk about sport, especially skating.'
-			'"You know Veronika, the other day I got some ideas about your clothing." you say. She seems confused, as she''s not really into fashion, especially not as much as you.'
-			'"If you want to enter the Winter Olympic Games, we have to find you a really good one which would fit your nickname, the Ice Queen." you say jokingly. "You can''t skate in an average skating costume. Look is important, too, not just the pure skill."'
-			'She smiles, which surprises you a little. You exchange some ideas about her costume, then you hear the bell ring. You both pick up your things and head to the classroom.'
+			'You see Veronika among her fellow jocks and decide to talk to her. "Hey Veronika!" you say as you sit next to her. "What''s up?"'
+			'She looks up and greets you with a small smile. The two of you start talking about things that have happened to you lately, addressing various topics. She seems indifferent to some of them, but she''s always happy to talk about sports, especially skating.'
+			'"You know Veronika, I got some ideas about your clothing the other day," you say. She seems confused, as she''s not really into fashion, especially not as much as you.'
+			'"If you want to enter the Winter Olympic Games, we have to find you a really good one which would fit your nickname. The <i>Ice Queen</i>..." you say jokingly. "You can''t skate in an average skating costume. Looks are important too, not just the pure skill."'
+			'She smiles, which surprises you a little. You exchange some ideas about her costume before you hear the bell ring. You both pick up your things and head to the classroom.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20:
-			'"Hi Veronika." you great her with a wave as you see her in the hallway.'
-			'She''s just standing there and pretending she didn''t hear you. After a while, when she realizes it is getting awkward, she says: "Oh, sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I was lost in my thoughts and I didn''t notice you" she says rigidly.'
-			'You sigh and as soon as you start to talk to her, she looks at you and puckers her brows as if she didn''t understand why you started to talk to her in the first place.'
-			'"I have other things to do." she say without any hesitation and leaves you to go on her business."'
+			'"Hi Veronika." you greet her with a wave as you see her in the hallway.'
+			'She pretends she didn''t hear you. After a while, when she realizes it''s getting awkward, she finally replies. "Oh, sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I was lost in my thoughts and I didn''t notice you..." she says rigidly.'
+			'You sigh and as soon as you start to talk to her, she looks at you and puckers her brows, as if she doesn''t understand why you started to talk to her in the first place.'
+			'"I have other things to do..." she says without any hesitation and leaves you to go on her business."'
 		else
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want something?" she asks you on her cold voice when she sees you approaching her.'
-			'"Hi Veronika. I just thought we could chat a little and catch up." you reply as you touch her shoulder as a sign of a friendly welcome. She immediately pulls back from you since she doesn''t like the idea of having physical contact. Especially with someone that she is not close to.'
-			'The two of you start talking about things that have happened lately in Pavlovsk, she occasionally touches ice skating and school PE lessons, too. While she talks to you without interest or concern, at least she tolerates you enough to have a word or two.'
-			'Talking to her for 10 minutes can feel like an hour sometimes, as time goes slowly when she doesn''t put too much effort into the conversation. When you realize the break is almost over, you say bye to her and head to your classroom.'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want something?" she asks in her cold voice when she sees you approaching.'
+			'"Hi Veronika. I just thought we could chat and catch up?" you reply as you touch her shoulder as a sign of a friendly welcome. She immediately pulls back from you since she doesn''t like the idea of physical contact, especially with someone she''s not close to.'
+			'The two of you start talking about things that have happened lately in Pavlovsk, occasionally discussing ice skating and school PE lessons  too. She talks to you without interest or concern, but at least she tolerates you enough to have a word or two.'
+			'Talking to her for 10 minutes can feel like an hour as time goes slowly when she doesn''t put much effort into the conversation. When you realize the break is almost over, you bid her farewell and head to your classroom.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A141'] >= 50:
 			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was hoping we would talk today." Veronika says when she sees you.'
 			'"Hey Veronika. As a matter of fact, so was I." you reply.'
 			'"I wanted to ask if you could come and see my skating routine. I''ve been practicing some new moves lately." she says with hope in her eyes, as there aren''t a lot of people who''d be interested in it.'
-			'"Yes, of course. Who wouldn''t like to steal some of your moves or pick up new skills." you wink. She is an exceptional skater and some say she might qualify for the next Winter Olympic Games, so you could learn a lot from her.'
+			'"Yes, of course! Who wouldn''t like to steal some of your moves or pick up new skills!" you wink. She is an exceptional skater and some say she might qualify for the next Winter Olympic Games, so you could learn a lot from her.'
 			'"Oh, really? You''ll come? Wonderful! I can show you many moves which would be helpful to you, too". She seems like a little kid as she replies.'
-			'"I wouldn''t miss the chance to see another practice of the Ice Queen." you smile as you refer to her infamous nickname she earnt for being a talented skater and for having a cold personality.'
-			'"Now, you too, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" She rolls her eyes but smiles. She knows you were just kidding not like many of the other students who regularly mock her with it.'
-			'"Come on, now you are really acting like your nickname" you say jokingly as you poke her shoulder.'
-			'Both of you burst into laugh and start to talk about different topics. Then you hear the ring which means your break is over. You pack your things and go to the classroom together.'
+			'"I wouldn''t miss the chance to see another practice of the Ice Queen." you smile as you refer to her infamous nickname.'
+			'"You too, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" She rolls her eyes, but smiles. She knows you''re just joking, unlike many of the other students who regularly mock her with it.'
+			'"Come on now, you''re really acting like your nickname now..." you reply jokingly as you poke her shoulder.'
+			'Both of you burst into laughter and start talking about different topics before you hear the ring. You pack your things and go to the classroom together.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20:
-			'"Hello Veronika, how are things going?" you ask as you approach her.'
-			'"Fine, just fine." she replies with a huge amount of indifference in her words.'
-			'You know she can be very cold and indifferent to people she doesn''t like and you aren''t friends, in fact, you are barely on speaking terms despite being in the same social group.'
-			'"And... is there anything that''s happened to you lately?" you ask as you still try to strike up a conversation.'
-			'She reluctantly tells you about her practices and competitions she''s entered lately but you get the feeling she''s not willing to get into details but trying to keep it as simple and short as possible.'
-			'"Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>... I must do something important so if you don''t mind..." she doesn''t even finish the sentence and she starts walking away.'
-			'"Yeah, no wonder why everyone calls you Ice Queen behind your back." you say, and you don''t even care if she hears it or not.'
-			'When she''s left, you head to the classroom to your next lesson.'
+			'"Hey Veronika, how are things going?" you ask as you approach her.'
+			'"Fine, just fine..." she replies with a huge amount of indifference in her words.'
+			'You know she can be very cold and indifferent to people she doesn''t like and you aren''t friends. In fact, you''re barely on speaking terms despite being in the same social group.'
+			'"And... is there anything that''s happened to you lately?" you ask, still trying to strike up a conversation.'
+			'She reluctantly tells you about her practice sessions and competitions she''s entered lately, but you get the feeling she''s not willing to go into details. She''s trying to keep it as simple and short as possible.'
+			'"Look, <<$pcs_nickname>>... I have to do something important, so if you don''t mind..." She doesn''t even finish the sentence before she starts walking away.'
+			'"Yeah, no wonder everyone calls you Ice Queen behind your back..." you reply, not caring if she hears you or not. Once she''s left, you head to the classroom for your next lesson.'
 		else
-			'"Hello Veronika, what''s up?" you ask as you approach her.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m trying to find out some new moves and figures I could do on the ice." she says as she''s drawing a skating figure in her notepad.'
-			'"Care to share? I can always use some help when it comes to balance and agility. You apparently know one or two things about these."'
-			'She glances at you with her blank, indifferent look. Then you start to talk about different techniques and moves. You try to pay attention to what she says since she''s more experienced than anyone else. In fact, she has every chance to be a professional skater.'
-			'"Thanks Veronika. I''m sure many of these will be useful and your advice can come in handy anytime." You feel you have learnt something and it was good to talk to her. Despite her nickname, the Ice Queen, she can be talkative, too.'
-			'"And most importantly, never forget to warm up and stretch correctly." she adds a final advice before she goes on her business.'
-			'You look at the clock in the hallway and see you don''t have too much time to left. You grab your things and go to your next lesson.'
+			'"Hey Veronika, what''s up?" you ask as you approach her.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m trying to find some new moves and figures I could do on the ice," she says as she draws a skating figure in her notepad.'
+			'"Care to share? I can always use some help when it comes to balance and agility. You apparently know one or two things about those."'
+			'She glances at you with her blank, indifferent stare before you start talking about different techniques and moves. You try to pay attention to what she says since she''s more experienced than anyone else. In fact, she has every chance to be a professional skater.'
+			'"Thanks Veronika. I''m sure many of these will be useful and your advice can come in handy anytime." You feel you''ve learned something and it was good to talk to her. Despite her nickname, she can be talkative too.'
+			'"And most importantly, never forget to warm up and stretch correctly," she adds before she goes on her business.'
+			'You look at the clock in the hallway and see you don''t have too much time left. You grab your things and go to your next lesson.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A141'] >= 50:
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>." Veronika greats you with a slight wave when she sees you going towards her.'
-			'"Hi, I just wanted to have some words with you." you say.'
-			'As you are sitting down next to her, she starts talking about different topics but mainly about her practicing and some of her previous competitions. A little bit extraordinary but she does almost all the talking. Which you don''t mind, you gladly listen to her stories.'
-			'She is talking about some of her moves on the ice when you interrupt her: "Look, it is very interesting. Not many knows, but physics actually plays a huge part in skating."'
-			'In the rest of the break time, you start to explain her some things, how surface friction, different angles and dragging can help her with getting better results.'
-			'The time flies for both of you and you could talk about it for many hours, but after 10 minutes of talk, you have to finish chatting as you hear the bell ringing.'
-			'"Alright, Veronika, we will get back to this later" you say and you go to the classroom together, hoping you won''t be late.'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>." Veronika greets you with a slight wave when she sees you approaching.'
+			'"Hey Veronika, I just wanted to chat," you reply.'
+			'As you sit next to her, she starts talking mainly about her practicing and some of her previous competitions. She does almost all the talking, but you don''t mind. It''s hard to get a conversation like this out of her.'
+			'She''s talking about some of her moves on the ice when you interrupt her. "Look, this is all very interesting. Not many know this, but physics actually plays a huge part in skating."'
+			'For the rest of the break time, you explain some things to her. How surface friction, different angles and dragging can help her with getting better results.'
+			'The time flies and you could talk about it for many hours, but you soon hear the bell ringing.'
+			'"Alright, Veronika, we''ll get back to this later," you say and head to the classroom together, hoping you won''t be late.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20:
-			'You see Veronika sitting in the hallway alone so you decide to go and talk to her.'
-			'"Hello Veronika, how are you doing today? you ask with a friendly smile.'
-			'She looks up and when she notices it is you, she only says not even looking at you: "No, don''t bother me now."'
-			'"Uh, okay... I''m sorry for bothering you then." you apologize. The atmosphere suddenly becomes very chilling, calling her the Ice Queen is not a flaw, it seems.'
+			'You see Veronika sitting alone in the hallway, so you decide to go and talk to her.'
+			'"Hello Veronika, how are you doing today?" you ask with a friendly smile.'
+			'She looks up and coldly glares at you. "No, don''t bother me now."'
+			'"Uh, okay... I''m sorry for bothering you then." The atmosphere suddenly becomes very chilling. Calling her the Ice Queen is not a flaw, it seems.'
 			'As you still have a lot of time before the next lesson, you double-check your homework before you go to the classroom.'
 		else
-			'When you go past the jocks in the hallway, you notice Veronika looking for something in her backpack.'
+			'As you walk past the jocks in the hallway, you notice Veronika looking for something in her backpack.'
 			'"Hello Veronika, is there anything I can help with?" you ask as you try to figure out what the problem is.'
-			'She doesn''t even look up as she replies: "No." When you are about to leave, as there is nothing you could do, she realizes it was you asking her.'
-			'"Wait! Maybe you can help me, yes." she says, hoping you still hear her. You turn back, smile at her and ask her again what the matter is. She explains that she didn''t have time to do her homework, again, because she was practicing for her next competition until late night.'
-			'You sit down next to her and help her writing it. Not only do you help her, but also explain some things. You''re not sure how much she understands about it but you''re happy that she''s listening to you at all.'
-			'"You see? It wasn''t that complicated and it is not that hard to understand." you say when you finish.'
-			'"I see." she keeps her reply short. She thanks you for the help then you both hurry to the classroom as your break is already over.'
+			'She doesn''t even look up as she replies. "No." Just as you''re about to leave, she glances up and stops you.'
+			'"Wait! Maybe you can help me, yes." she says, hoping you still hear her. You turn back, smile at her and ask her again. She explains that she didn''t have time to do her homework because she was practicing for her next competition until late.'
+			'You sit next to her and help her with it. Not only do you help her, but also explain some things. You''re not sure how much she understands, but you''re happy that she''s listening to you at all.'
+			'"You see? It wasn''t that complicated and it''s not that hard to understand," you say as you finish.'
+			'"I see." She keeps her reply short. She thanks you for the help before you both hurry to the classroom as your break is already over.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A141'] >= 50:
-			'As you are wondering in the hallway, you see Veronika leaning against the wall and decide to go and have short chat with her.'
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, I see you have nothing better to do so you came to talk to me?" she says with a little smile.'
-			'"Don''t be silly. Anyway, I talk to the Queen of the Ice whenever I feel like to." You squat next to her and say jokingly: "Don''t even think for a second that just because you stand and I squat, I''d ever look up to you."'
-			'Both of you smile and then you start to talk. She mostly speaks about her recent results and how much she has been improved lately. She complains about your PE lessons as she doesn''t think the level of the PE education is good enough.'
-			'You listen to her and occasionally ask her about the upcoming competitions. After a while you share some of your latest stories with her and you also complain a lot about school but because of different reasons.'
-			'"Alright Veronika, I guess it''s time to finish the interview." you say as you wouldn''t miss a chance to mock her a little.'
-			'When the bell rings, you go on your own business as she joins the other jocks to go to the classroom.'
+			'As you are wondering in the hallway, you see Veronika leaning against the wall and decide to chat with her.'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, I see you have nothing better to do so you came to talk to me?" she asks with a little smile.'
+			'"Don''t be silly. Anyway, I talk to the Queen of the Ice whenever I feel like it." You squat next to her. "Don''t even think for a second that just because you stand and I squat, I''d ever look up to you!" you jokingly add.'
+			'You both smile and start chatting. She mostly talks about her recent results and how much she has been improved lately, but complains about your PE lessons as she doesn''t think the level of the PE education is good enough.'
+			'You listen to her and occasionally ask her about the upcoming competitions. After a while, you share some of your latest stories with her and also complain a lot about school, but for different reasons.'
+			'"Alright Veronika, I guess it''s time to finish the interview," you say as you wouldn''t miss a chance to mock her a little.'
+			'When the bell rings, you go about your own business as she joins the other jocks to go to the classroom.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20:
-			'"Well, well, look who''s here." you say as you approach Veronika.'
-			'She looks up and notices it is you. "What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she asks with a cold, almost freezing tone in her voice. "By the way, shouldn''t you be somewhere else? Drinking in a stairway, smoking in the park or whatever you gopniks do these days?" she adds.'
-			'"Brrrr... Am I the only one who feels this icy intonation?" you say mockingly. You lean against the wall, cross your arms and continue: "You see, your only problem is that there is no one in the world who''d ever want to heat you up a little, if you know what I mean..."'
-			'She rolls her eyes but one must admit, she can take your attempt to roast and mock her. However, she isn''t amused at all so she decides to close this bickering: "You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, I could insult you, too. But that''s what mirrors are for..." she says as she turns around and joins the other jocks.'
-			'"Come back bitch...!" you say clenching your fist but then you realize it wouldn''t be worth it. You go back to your own social group for the rest of the break and you try to calm down.'
+			'"Well, well, look who''s here..." you say as you approach Veronika.'
+			'She looks up and notices you. "What do you want <<$pcs_firstname>>?" she asks with a cold, almost freezing tone in her voice. "By the way, shouldn''t you be somewhere else? Drinking in a stairway, smoking in the park or whatever you gopniks do these days?" she adds.'
+			'"Brrrr... Am I the only one who feels this icy intonation?" you say mockingly. You lean against the wall, cross your arms and continue. "You see, your only problem is that there''s no one in the world who''d ever want to heat you up a little, if you know what I mean..."'
+			'She rolls her eyes, but you must admit that she can take your mockery quite well. However, she isn''t amused at all. "You know <<$pcs_nickname>>, I could insult you too. But that''s what mirrors are for..." she says as she turns around and joins the other jocks.'
+			'"Get back here, bitch!" you snarl while clenching your fist, but realize it wouldn''t be worth it. You return to the other gopniks and try to calm down.'
 		else
-			'As you are wondering in the hallway, you see Veronika sitting on the floor and checking her phone. You go up to her and without greating her you sit down, too and start to talk.'
-			'"Ugh, where do I begin? What does one need to suffer?" you say. Then you start to complain about anything that comes into your mind. You complain about school, of course, about some of your fellow gopniks, about your parents...'
-			'She listens to you for some minutes then looks at you and finally speaks up: "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, why do you tell me these things? We are barely on speaking terms anyway and what you are talking about is something I''m not interested in at all." she says with a cold tone.'
-			'"Suuuure, whatever, jog on, even better, skate on. Queen of the Ice, huh, rather Queen of boredom..." you mutter as you stand up and go back to your fellow gopniks to wait for the bell.'
+			'As you''re wandering through the hallway, you see Veronika sitting on the floor checking her phone. You walk up to her and, without greeting her, sit down and start chatting.'
+			'"Ugh, where do I begin? What does one need to suffer?" you say before complaining about anything that comes to mind. You complain about school, your fellow gopniks and your parents.'
+			'She listens to you for some time before finally speaking up. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, why do you tell me these things? We''re barely on speaking terms anyway and what you''re talking about is something I''m not interested in at all..." she says with a cold tone.'
+			'"Suuuure, whatever. Jog on, even better, skate on. Queen of the Ice, huh? More like Queen of Boredom..." you mutter as you stand up and go back to your fellow gopniks to wait for the bell.'
 		end
 	else
 		if npc_rel['A141'] >= 50:
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Veronika greats you as you walk towards her. "Are you looking for me?"'
-			'"Hi Veronika, yes, yes, I was looking for you. It''s always good to see you and talk to you a bit." you reply happily.'
-			'Shortly, she starts to talk about her skating routines, techniques and dreams of entering the Winter Olympic Games. Even though you are not an expert of this topic, she''s happy to talk about it as she knows you always listen to her.'
-			'"You are so energetic when you mention these things." you say. "I envy you a lot, you know. It must be super cool. I can''t even imagine how it would be to participate in the Olympic Games. I''m sure there are some good-looking boys among the athletes..." you blush as you say.'
-			'"Ah, you know I''m not interested in this. Anyway, not everything is black or white. You know how much they mock me and call me on my nickname. Even the jocks make fun of me sometimes." she says with sadness in her voice.'
-			'You exactly know how it feels like, so you pat her shoulder, which surprisingly, she doesn''t mind. When you hear the bell ringing, you grab your things and head to the next lesson together.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Veronika greets you as you walk towards her. "Are you looking for me?"'
+			'"Hi Veronika, yes, yes, I was looking for you. It''s always good to see you and talk," you happily reply.'
+			'She starts talking about her skating routines, techniques and dreams of entering the Winter Olympic Games. Even though you''re not an expert of this topic, she''s happy to talk about it as she knows you always listen to her.'
+			'"You''re so energetic when you mention these things. I envy you a lot, you know. It must be super cool. I can''t even imagine what it would be like to participate in the Olympic Games! I''m sure there are some good-looking boys among the athletes..." you blush.'
+			'"Ah, you know I''m not interested in that. Anyway, not everything is black or white. You know how much they mock me and call me that nickname. Even the jocks make fun of me sometimes..." she says with sadness in her voice.'
+			'You exactly know what it feels like, so you pat her shoulder which, surprisingly, she doesn''t mind. When you hear the bell ringing, you grab your things and head to the next lesson together.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A141'] <= 20:
 			'Veronika is leaning against the wall and checking something on her phone when you decide to approach her.'
-			'"He..." you start to great her when she looks up and notices it is you standing in front of her.'
-			'"Don''t even start it." she replies quickly to your attempt. As she looks up and her sight meets yours, you see her piercing, cold look which could freeze the sun.'
-			'You understand you are not welcome at all, so you go back to your classroom and try to kill the time until the next lesson starts.'
+			'"He..." you start to greet her when she looks up and notices you standing in front of her.'
+			'"Don''t even start..." she coldly replies. As she looks up and her sight meets yours, you see her piercing, cold glare that could freeze the sun.'
+			'Understand you''re not welcome, you go back to your classroom and try to kill the time until the next lesson starts.'
 		else
-			'"Hello Veronika" you great her as you approach.'
-			'"Oh... Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>" she replies indifferently.'
-			'You sit next to her and try to strike up a conversation but it is you who does the talking. She gives you a one-word answer every now and then but mostly just nods or grunt something. She doesn''t seem to enjoy the conversation and doesn''t even try to hide the fact.'
-			'In spite of that, she spends some minutes with you, listening to you talking about the daily life of Pavlosk, problems at school and how the others pick you on almost every time.'
-			'In a short time, she starts packing her things and says: "Ok, I''m leaving now." she keeps it short and with that she goes on her business. You stay there for a while, as you don''t want to go back to your classroom yet and just try to eavesdrop others talking.'
+			'"Hey Veronika!" you greet her as you approach.'
+			'"Oh... Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>..." she replies indifferently.'
+			'You sit next to her and try to strike up a conversation, but you end up doing most of the talking. She gives you a one-word answer every now and then, but mostly just nods or grunts. She doesn''t seem to enjoy the conversation and doesn''t try to hide that fact.'
+			'In spite of that, she spends some time with you, listening to you talk about your problems at school and how the others pick you on almost every time.'
+			'After a few minutes, she starts packing her things. "Okay, I''m leaving now." She keeps it short, and with that she goes on her business. You stay for a while and try to eavesdrop on others talking.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -686,9 +687,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big19.jpg"></center>'
 	if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 4:
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] = 4:
-			'As soon as Lina sees you, she comes right up and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, how could you say those awful things about Christina?"'
+			'As soon as Lina sees you, she comes right up and says "<<$pcs_nickname>>, how could you say those awful things about Christina?"'
 			'"Because they''re true," you say with a shrug. Raising an eyebrow, you add, "You didn''t know?"'
-			'"I...um...she never..." she stammers in response. Obviously she didn''t know.'
+			'"I...um...she never..." she stammers in response, obviously not knowing.'
 			'"It''s okay, sweetie. She made her own choices and they''ve finally caught up to her." You smile at her, before heading off to the next class.'
 		else
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A19', 'like'
@@ -1030,13 +1031,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 	if npc_rel['A3'] >= 80 and NikoPayback > 1 and IvanVsNiko = 0:act 'Ask for help with Niko': gt 'NikoPayback', 'Ivan Help'
 	if fame['pav_slut'] < 225 and IvanShowerQW = 1:
 		IvanShowerQW = 11
-		'Ivan thinks for a moment before he says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I would like to talk to you about what happened in the shower. You''re a great girl, and I had a great time, but I''m not ready for a relationship. I need to put all my energy into my athletics. I think I have a good shot at getting to the Russian National Championships this year. I really cannot afford to be distracted by girls, even girls as attractive as you. So how about we just stick to fooling around a little?"'
+		'Ivan thinks for a moment before he speaks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I would like to talk to you about what happened in the shower. You''re a great girl, and I had a great time, but I''m not ready for a relationship. I need to put all my energy into my athletics. I think I have a good shot at getting to the Russian National Championships this year. I really can''t afford to be distracted by girls, even girls as attractive as you. So how about we just stick to fooling around a little?"'
 		act 'Discuss':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You nod at what Ivan says. "Sure Ivan I understand, I am OK with just being friends, really close friends who sometimes fool around in the shower." you say in your best sexy voice with a wink.'
-			'He gives you a one armed hug. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re the best! Not only are you smoking hot, but you are a super cool chick too! If you want to hang out some time, you can stop by my place." He pauses a moment and then looks around and leans in close. "Or if you get a little bored during lunch break, you can let me know too." he says with a suggestive tone and waggled eyebrows.'
-			'You laugh at his silly antics. It is nice to have found a fun guy to hang out with. Perhaps you will stop by his place, or maybe even take him up on his offer to make lunch break less boring. "Sure Ivan, I''ll think about it."'
+			'You nod at what he says. "Sure Ivan, I understand. I''m okay with just being friends, really close friends who sometimes fool around in the shower..." you say in your best sexy voice with a wink.'
+			'He gives you a one armed hug. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best! Not only are you smoking hot, but you''re a super cool chick too! If you want to hang out some time, you can stop by my place." He pauses and looks around before leaning in close. "Or if you get a little bored during lunch break, you can let me know too..." he says with a suggestive tone and waggled eyebrows.'
+			'You laugh at his silly antics. It''s nice to have found a fun guy to hang out with. Perhaps you will stop by his place, or maybe even take him up on his offer to make lunch break less boring. "Sure Ivan, I''ll think about it."'
 
 			if npc_rel['A3'] >= 80 and NikoPayback > 1 and IvanVsNiko = 0:act 'Ask for help with Niko': gt 'NikoPayback', 'Ivan Help'
 
@@ -1050,7 +1051,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 		if rand(0,4) = 0:
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/school/ivan2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You begin chatting with Ivan when he leans toward you then whispers in your ear. "Tell me you''re bored <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You begin chatting with Ivan when he leans toward you and whispers in your ear. "Tell me you''re bored <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			act 'Go with him':gt 'gdksport', 'Ivan_bored'
 		else
 			act 'Tell Ivan you''re bored':gt 'gdksport', 'Ivan_bored'
@@ -1058,186 +1059,186 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan':
 !! Since Ivan is only asking about the current day, not indefinitely, might be good to use a daystart
 !! variable here and in the scene in gdksport IvanShowerYes guards (IvanShowerDayStart or something)
 	elseif IvanShowerYes = 0 and IvanShowerQW = 11 and ShowerIvan < 3:
-		'When you''re about to head for your next class, Ivan suddenly stops you and asks: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, want to meet up with me in the showers after school?"'
+		'As you''re about to head for your next class, Ivan suddenly stops you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, want to meet up with me in the showers after school?"'
 		act 'Decline':
 			cla
-			'You give it some thought, but have to decline. You shake your head apologetically and say "Sorry Ivan, I can''t make it today."'
+			'You give it some thought, but have to decline. You shake your head apologetically. "Sorry Ivan, I can''t make it today."'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Agree':
 			IvanShowerYes = 1
 			cla
-			'You give him a cute wink and say "Sounds like fun. I''ll see you there!"'
+			'You give him a cute wink. "Sounds like fun. I''ll see you there!"'
 			act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 !!end of his story arc stuff
 	elseif fame['pav_slut'] >= 225:
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
-			'You see Ivan standing by the school lockers and go to him. You cover his eyes from behind with your hands and whisper in his ear: "Guess who I am."'
-			'Ivan grabs your hands, pulls free and as he turns around he says jokingly: "Judging by the mixture of your perfume and the shame I can smell in the air, who else could it be but the school''s resident minx."'
-			'"Come on, since when are you interested in gossip." you reply, twirling a lock of hair with your finger and then running your eyes over Ivan''s body. "Besides, a little flirting never hurts, right?" you ask playfully.'
+			'You see Ivan standing by the lockers and approach him. You cover his eyes from behind with your hands and whisper in his ear. "Guess who?"'
+			'Ivan grabs your hands, pulls free and and turns around. "Judging by the mixture of your perfume and the shame I can smell in the air, who else could it be but the school''s resident minx?" he jokingly replies.'
+			'"Come on, since when are you interested in gossip?" you reply, twirling a lock of hair with your finger and then running your eyes over Ivan''s body. "Besides, a little flirting never hurts, right?" you ask playfully.'
 			*nl
-			'"You sure know how to play this game, I''ll give you that." Ivan replies. You flirt back and forth with each other for the next few minutes. The air between you two is almost glowing. "By the way, if you ever decide you want to train your butt, let me know. I can help you with that." Ivan winks.'
-			'"I have a feeling you''re talking about a very tiring and deeeeep workout plan." you reply. "Is there ever a time when your mind isn''t on butts?"'
-			'"Hardly ever." he replies. Following his gaze with your eyes, you see him looking at your butt. He''s about to continue his sentence, but the bell rings, so you both start walking towards the classroom.'
+			'"You sure know how to play this game, I''ll give you that," he replies. You flirt back and forth with each other for the next few minutes. The air between you is almost glowing. "By the way, if you ever decide you want to train your ass, let me know. I can help you with that." Ivan winks.'
+			'"I have a feeling you''re talking about a very tiring and deeeeep workout plan..." you reply. "Is there ever a time when your mind isn''t on butts?"'
+			'"Hardly ever..." he replies. Following his gaze with your eyes, you see him looking at your ass. He''s about to continue his sentence, but the bell rings, so you both start walking towards the classroom.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-			'"Hello handsome." you greet Ivan as you approach him in the corridor.'
+			'"Hello handsome!" you greet Ivan as you approach him in the corridor.'
 			'"What do you want <<$pcs_nickname>>?" he asks, barely looking at you. "Whatever it is, I''m not interested." he adds in a cold tone.'
-			'"Well, I thought we could spend some time together." you reply as you bite your lip. "We could sneak out of school for a bit using the back door, if you know what I mean." you wink and slap your ass playfully.'
-			'"Don''t even dream about it. I have no desire to catch something from a slut like you." he replies, then leaves you and heads off towards the other jocks.'
+			'"Well, I thought we could spend some time together?" you reply as you bite your lip. "We could sneak out of school using the back door, if you know what I mean..." you wink and slap your ass playfully.'
+			'"Don''t even dream about it. I have no desire to catch something from a slut like you!" he replies before heading off towards the other jocks.'
 			'Hurt by the rejection, you don''t feel like doing anything during the break, so you head to the classroom.'
 		else
-			'"So hold up Ivan. I need to talk to you..." You step in front of him.'
+			'"Hold up Ivan. I need to talk to you..." You step in front of him.'
 			'Ivan stops and gives you a confused look. "Why are you talking to me? I don''t really have anything to say to you."'
 			'"Come on, don''t be like that... I thought we could have some fun..." You give him a wink.'
-			'Ivan looks apathetically at you without any response, making the whole situation a bit awkward and after what feels like an eternity, he just walks off.'
+			'Ivan looks apathetically at you without any response, making the whole situation awkward. After what feels like an eternity, he just walks away.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
 			'As you come out into the corridor, you see Ivan, a little further away from the others. You decide to approach him and talk.'
-			'"Hi Ivan. I see you''re spending your break alone. Wouldn''t it be much nicer in the company of a pretty girl?" you wink at him and you don''t even realize but you also blush a little.'
+			'"Hi Ivan. I see you''re spending your break alone. Wouldn''t it be much nicer in the company of a pretty girl?" you wink at him, not noticing that you also blush a little.'
 			'"Oh, hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Are you volunteering?" he replies with a friendly smile on his face. "Maybe I should, but I don''t have that luxury." he continues.'
-			'For the next few minutes you talk mainly about why he doesn''t have time for a serious relationship. With all the training and helping at home, he doesn''t really have time to get to date anyone.'
+			'For the next few minutes, you talk mainly about why he doesn''t have time for a serious relationship. With all the training and helping at home, he doesn''t have time to get to date anyone.'
 			*nl
-			'"I can''t let anything hold me back. It''s the only thing that can help me achieve my goals and give my family everything they deserve." he says. You can tell he''s very determined and that he doesn''t take things lightly.'
-			'"Still, sometimes you have to let go a little. You know, make friends. I don''t even see you with anyone else but Fedor. Go out and have fun, enjoy life, especially while you''re young." you try to convince him. "Or even ask a girl out on a date...." you add quietly, trying to avoid her gaze.'
-			'As you wait for his response, the bell rings. "I''ll try to take your advice. But no dating, I certainly can''t get anyone pregnant by accident." he replies, then starts walking towards the classroom. You do the same, thinking that the rumours about him might be true.'
+			'"I can''t let anything hold me back. It''s the only thing that can help me achieve my goals and give my family everything they deserve," he says. You can tell he''s very determined and that he doesn''t take things lightly.'
+			'"Still, sometimes you have to let go a little. You know, make friends. I don''t even see you with anyone else but Fedor. Go out and have fun. Enjoy life, especially while you''re young." you try to convince him. "Or even ask a girl out on a date...." you add quietly, trying to avoid his gaze.'
+			'As you wait for his response, the bell rings. "I''ll try to take your advice. But no dating, I certainly can''t get anyone pregnant by accident." he replies before walking towards the classroom. You do the same, thinking that the rumours about him might be true.'
 			act 'Teach me to box':
 				*clr & cla
 				!!ivanQW['ivan_boxing_invite'] = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stop as you start to walk away. "Hey do you think you could show me some boxing moves, for real?"'
-				'He stops and seems to think about it. "Sure stop by the gym at the community center just before it closes. I train after it closes some nights and I can show you some stuff then."'
-				'You smile to him. "Thanks." Then you wave and head to class.'
+				'You stop as you start to walk away. "Hey, do you think you could show me some boxing moves, for real?"'
+				'He stops and seems to think about it. "Sure, stop by the gym at the community center just before it closes. I train after it closes some nights and I can show you some stuff then."'
+				'You smile at him. "Thanks." You wave goodbye before heading to class.'
 				act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-			'You see Ivan talking to Fedor and decide to go to him. "Hi Ivan, do you have a minute?" you ask.'
-			'As he turns around, he notices it''s you talking to him. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Is it important? As you can see, I''m talking to Fedor and we''re discussing an important thing." he says, then turns back to Fedor.'
-			'"Not that important, I just thought we could have a little chat. You''re always talking to Fedor anyway, you need a change, don''t you?" you ask in a playful, flirtatious tone.'
+			'You see Ivan talking to Fedor and decide to approach them. "Hi Ivan, do you have a minute?" you ask.'
+			'As he turns around, he notices it''s you talking to him. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Is it important? As you can see, I''m talking to Fedor and we''re discussing an important thing." he says before turning back to Fedor.'
+			'"Not that important, I just thought we could have a little chat? You''re always talking to Fedor anyway. You need a change, don''t you?" you ask in a playful, flirtatious tone.'
 			*nl
-			'He''s clearly not impressed by your desperate attempt. He turns back to you, looks you in the eye and says: "I told you I''m busy now, maybe some other time." and with that, he starts talking to Fedor again.'
-			'You feel very awkward as he wasn''t interested in your flirting at all. You stand there, you don''t know what to do. You decide not to push it any further, so you leave them there and take out your phone. You check some things until you hear the bell, signaling that the break is over.'
+			'He''s clearly not impressed by your desperate attempt. He turns back to you and looks you in the eye. "I told you I''m busy now, maybe some other time..." With that, he starts talking to Fedor again.'
+			'You feel very awkward and stand there, unsure of what to do. You decide not to push it any further, so you leave them and take out your phone. You check some things until you hear the bell, signaling that the break is over.'
 		else
-			'"Hello Ivan, are you busy?" you ask as you approach him in the hallway.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, I am looking for Fedor..." he says, then looks around the hallway with a searching eye, but doesn''t see him anywhere. He sits down and continues: "... but I can''t find him anywhere. I guess that makes me yours." he says with a friendly smile.'
-			'You sit down next to him, facing him, and then start talking. He''s just mostly listening to you as you tell him what''s been happening to you lately. You talk about the last party you had, the school, you share some gossip, and take the opportunity to complain that there''s not much to do here.'
+			'"Hey Ivan, are you busy?" you ask as you approach him in the hallway.'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, I am looking for Fedor..." he says, then looks around the hallway with a searching eye, but doesn''t see him anywhere. He sits down and continues: "... but I can''t find him anywhere. I guess that makes me yours," he says with a friendly smile.'
+			'You sit next to him and start chatting. He''s mostly listens to you as you tell him what''s been happening to you lately. You talk about the last party you had, the school, share some gossip, and take the opportunity to complain about how there''s not much to do around town.'
 			*nl
-			'"I don''t have much free time anyway." he says in a slightly tired voice. You wait for him to continue, but he doesn''t seem to be in much of a talking mood. Although he listens to what you have to say, he doesn''t add much to it.'
+			'"I don''t have much free time anyway..." he says in a slightly tired voice. You wait for him to continue, but he doesn''t seem to be in much of a talking mood. Although he listens to what you have to say, he doesn''t add much to it.'
 			'You continue talking for the next few minutes, touching on many topics and trying to get him to speak, but he still prefers to listen.'
-			'Suddenly the bell rings. Ivan gets up and starts walking towards the classroom. Halfway there, he turns around and says: "If you really don''t know what to do, you can always come watch my next match."'
+			'The bell then rings and Ivan gets up and starts walking towards the classroom. Halfway there, he turns around. "If you really don''t know what to do, you can always come and watch my next match."'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
-			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, I hope you''re looking for me" says Ivan, when he sees you in the hallway, approaching him.'
-			'As you get there, you lean against the wall, put your bag on the floor and start talking. "How are things going?" you ask curiously, hoping that he has something interesting to share.'
-			'"Just the usual." Ivan replies, and for the next few minutes you discuss the events of the past few days. Suddenly something occurs to Ivan. "Oh, look at this!" he says excitedly as he pulls out his phone and starts a video on it.'
+			'"Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, I hope you''re looking for me?" Ivan asks when he sees you approaching.'
+			'You lean against the wall and start talking. "How are things going?" you ask curiously, hoping that he has something interesting to share.'
+			'"Just the usual," he replies, and for the next few minutes, you discuss the events of the past few days before something occurs to Ivan. "Oh, look at this!" he says excitedly before pulling out his phone and starting a video.'
 			'"Let me guess, your last sparring with Vitek?" you ask as you put your hand on his shoulder and lean closer to him to get a better look at the phone screen. "Let''s see if I can steal a trick or two."'
 			*nl
-			'While you''re watching the video, Ivan shares a few useful techniques he thinks you can benefit from. Useful tips on agility, stamina and endurance. He also shares some squatting techniques. "If you do this exercise, you''ll have the hardest butt in school..." he says, as his gaze shifts from your eyes to your bottom.'
-			'You gently, playfully touch your bottom and giggle. "Then you''ll have to share more of your secret information with me next time. I can''t settle for the second place." you say.'
-			'Time almost flies, and you almost don''t even notice the bell ringing. "We''ll continue this next time, champ." you say, and then you head for the classroom. As you walk away, you can almost feel Ivan''s eyes on your butt and wonder why he is so obsessed with it.'
+			'While you''re watching the video, Ivan shares a few useful techniques he thinks you can benefit from. Useful tips on agility, stamina and endurance, as well as some squatting techniques. "If you do this exercise, you''ll have the hardest butt in school..." he says as his gaze shifts from your eyes to your ass.'
+			'You playfully slap your ass and giggle. "Then you''ll have to share more of your secret information with me next time. I can''t settle for the second place."'
+			'Time almost flies, and you almost don''t even notice the bell ringing. "We''ll continue this next time, champ!" you say and head for the classroom. As you walk away, you can almost feel Ivan''s eyes on your ass and wonder why he''s so obsessed with it.'
 			act 'Teach me to box':
 				*clr & cla
 				!!ivanQW['ivan_boxing_invite'] = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stop as you start to walk away. "Hey do you think you could show me some boxing moves, for real?"'
-				'He stops and seems to think about it. "Sure stop by the gym at the community center just before it closes. I train after it closes some nights and I can show you some stuff then."'
-				'You smile to him. "Thanks." Then you wave and head to class.'
+				'You stop as you start to walk away. "Hey, do you think you could show me some boxing moves, for real?"'
+				'He stops and seems to think about it. "Sure, stop by the gym at the community center just before it closes. I train after it closes some nights and I can show you some stuff then."'
+				'You smile at him. "Thanks." You wave goodbye before heading to class.'
 				act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-			'As you step out into the corridor, you spot Ivan at the school lockers and go to him.'
-			'"Hi Ivan." you greet him with a friendly smile. "I hope you can spare a minute. Since you''re pretty good at boxing, I''d like to ask you for some advice on how to improve my endurance and speed. Besides agility, these are the ones I should improve a lot." you say.'
-			'Ivan closes the locker door, then turns to you and says in a bored, indifferent tone: "Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m sorry, but I don''t have time right now. Maybe you should ask someone else." and then he turns and walks towards the others.'
-			'As he leaves, you wonder if he really doesn''t have time or he just didn''t feel like talking to you. Since you have a lot of time until your next class, you organize your locker and throw out some old notices you don''t need anymore.'
+			'As you step out into the corridor, you spot Ivan and approach him.'
+			'"Hey Ivan," you greet him with a friendly smile. "I hope you can spare a minute. Since you''re pretty good at boxing, I''d like to ask you for some advice on how to improve my endurance and speed. Besides agility, these are the ones I should improve a lot."'
+			'Ivan closes the locker door and turns to you. "Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m sorry, but I don''t have time right now. Maybe you should ask someone else." he replies indifferently before turning and walking towards the others.'
+			'As he leaves, you wonder if he really doesn''t have time or if he just didn''t feel like talking to you. Since you have a lot of time until your next class, you organize your locker and throw out some old things you don''t need anymore.'
 		else
-			'"Hi Ivan, what''s up?" you ask him as you go to the school lockers.'
-			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Nothing special. I was just putting away my boxing gear and wondering if I should practice my fist pumping today or go for a run." he says, then turns to you as he closes the school locker door.'
-			'"Someone''s very dedicated today." you say jokingly as you playfully touch his shoulders. "Sometimes it doesn''t hurt to take a break. You know it''s not good for your body to exercise all the time." you continue, taking the words a little more seriously.'
+			'"Hey Ivan, what''s up?" you ask him as you approach.'
+			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>. Nothing special. I was just putting away my boxing gear and wondering if I should practice my fist pumping today or go for a run." He turns to you as he closes the locker door.'
+			'"Someone''s very dedicated today!" you say jokingly as you playfully touch his shoulders. "Sometimes it doesn''t hurt to take a break. You know it''s not good for your body to exercise all the time," you continue, taking the words a little more seriously.'
 			*nl
-			'"I can''t slack off, I have to do my best every day." he says. Then he tells you how important boxing is to him. It''s a good chance for him to break out so he could help his mom financially and provide his family a better life.'
-			'You put your hand on his shoulder understandingly and try to say a few words, but he cuts you off: "I''m sorry, but I have to go now. I must discuss a few things with Fedor."'
-			'It seems that although he''s glad you listen to him and you are supportive, you can sense that he''s not so keen to hear about your affairs. With not much time left of the break, you head for the classroom and wait for the lesson to start.'
+			'"I can''t slack off, I have to do my best every day." he says before telling you how important boxing is to him. It''s a good chance for him to break out so he can help his mom financially and provide his family a better life.'
+			'You put your hand on his shoulder understandingly and try to say a few words, but he cuts you off. "I''m sorry, but I have to go now. I have to discuss a few things with Fedor."'
+			'It seems that, although he''s glad you listen to him and are supportive, he''s not so keen to hear about your affairs. With not much time left of the break, you head for the classroom and wait for the lesson to start.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>." Ivan greets you as he sees you approaching.'
-			'"Hello Ivan, what''s up? How was your last training match?" you ask curiously.'
-			'He puts his bag on the floor, sits down on it, then pulls out his phone and beckons you to lean closer. "Wait, I''ll show you, because I recorded the whole thing. I''ll analyze it with the coach and see the mistakes I made." he says.'
-			'For the next few minutes you watch the video together. Sometimes you pause and then analyze a punch. "You see, when you hit at that angle, you can put a lot more power into it." you say as you show him, imitating the punch.'
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>." Ivan greets you as he sees you approaching.'
+			'"Hey Ivan, what''s up? How was your last training match?" you ask curiously.'
+			'He puts his bag on the floor and sits on it before pulling out his phone and beckoning you to lean closer. "I''ll show you. I''ll analyze it with the coach and see what mistakes I made."'
+			'For the next few minutes, you watch the video together, sometimes pausing to analyze a punch. "You see, when you hit at that angle, you can put a lot more power into it." you comment while imitating the punch.'
 			*nl
-			'"Look at that, little <<$pcs_nickname>> is starting to box?" he laughs. Then he looks at you and continues: "Relax, you know I''m just kidding. Who would think that physics and maths would make someone a boxing coach." he continues, and punches you in the shoulder jokingly.'
-			'You talk for the rest of the break, although it''s mainly Ivan who does the talking. He explains the training plans he''s been working with Fedor to improve his pace and agility. When he hears the bell ring, he turns to you and says: "Don''t forget to give the girls tips on how to improve their squats. You know, to get achieve the perfect shape." he winks.'
-			'"Ah, you never change." you reply, rolling your eyes. Then you grab your stuff, get up and head to the classroom to wait for your next lesson.'
+			'"Look at that! Little <<$pcs_nickname>> is starting to box?" he laughs. "Relax, you know I''m just kidding. Who would think that physics and maths would make someone a boxing coach?" he continues, and punches you in the shoulder jokingly.'
+			'You talk for the rest of the break, although it''s mainly Ivan who does the talking. He explains the training plans he''s been working with Fedor to improve his pace and agility. When he hears the bell ring, he turns to you. "Don''t forget to give the girls tips on how to improve their squats. You know, to get achieve the perfect shape." he winks.'
+			'"Ah, you never change," you reply while rolling your eyes before grabbing your stuff and heading to the classroom to wait for your next lesson.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-			'When you reach the hallway, you see Ivan standing by his locker, looking for something. You go up to him and try to talk to him. "Hi Ivan, are you looking for something?" you ask.'
-			'He closes the locker''s door and looks at you. "Hello, I didn''t notice you. As a matter of fact yes, I''m looking for something, so if you don''t mind I''ll be going now." he says as he grabs his backpack.'
-			'"I could help you look for it if you like. We could talk in the meantime." you reply with hope in your voice as you stand there, a little confused and shy.'
-			'Ivan looks back over his shoulders and says: "I don''t think you can help me. And as for talking, I don''t want to be rude, but there isn''t much we can talk about. And now if you excuse me..." and with that, he walks off.'
-			'Not wanting to stand by the lockers all alone, you decide to go into the classroom and wait for the next lesson there.'
+			'When you reach the hallway, you see Ivan standing by his locker, looking for something. You approach him and try to talk to him. "Hi Ivan, are you looking for something?"'
+			'He closes the locker door and looks at you. "Hey, I didn''t notice you. As a matter of fact yes, I''m looking for something, so if you don''t mind I''ll be going now." he says as he grabs his backpack.'
+			'"I could help you look for it if you like? We could talk in the mean time?" you reply with hope in your voice as you stand a little confused and shy.'
+			'Ivan looks back over his shoulders. "I don''t think you can help me. And as for talking, I don''t want to be rude, but there isn''t much we can talk about. And now if you''ll excuse me..." With that, he walks away.'
+			'Not wanting to stand by the lockers alone, you decide to head into the classroom and wait for the next lesson there.'
 		else
-			'As you walk in the hallway and see Ivan, you decide to go up to him and try to strike up a conversation. "Hi Ivan, how are you today?" you ask.'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, fine..." Ivan replies as he looks around. When he sees that everyone is busy with doing something or talking to someone, he sits down on the floor and gestures for you to sit down next to him.'
-			'You start chatting about everything from school to sports to reading. After a while, Ivan starts talking about how he tried to help his younger siblings learn. "It''s important that they get a good education. I want them to achieve something in life." she says with a serious look in her eyes.'
-			'"That''s very thoughtful of you. If you want, I can share some tips." you reply. In the next few minutes, you share a few tips on how he can help them as much as possible and how he could make learning enjoyable for them.'
-			'After a while, you stand up. "I''m going now, I want to revise my homework one more time before class." you say, and then head off to the classroom.'
+			'As you walk through the hallway, you spot Ivan and decide to approach him and try to strike up a conversation. "Hi Ivan, how are you today?"'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, fine..." he replies as he looks around. When he sees that everyone is busy or talking to someone, he sits on the floor and gestures for you to sit next to him.'
+			'You start chatting about everything from school, to sports and reading. After a while, Ivan starts talking about how he tried to help his younger siblings learn. "It''s important that they get a good education. I want them to achieve something in life." he says with a serious look in his eyes.'
+			'"That''s very thoughtful of you. If you want, I can share some tips." you reply. For the next few minutes, you share a few tips on how he can help them as much as possible and how he could make learning enjoyable for them.'
+			'After a while, you stand up. "I''ll be going now. I want to revise my homework one more time before class." you say before heading off to the classroom.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
 			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>." Ivan greets you as you walk towards him.'
 			'"What''s up, Prince of Boxers? Do you still have time to chat despite all the training and the crowds of cheerleaders?" you ask jokingly as you do shadowboxing next to him.'
-			'"I always have time for you." Ivan replies as he winks at you. He starts to talk about everything that comes to his mind, but mostly about boxing, running, and the workouts he and Fedor have been doing together lately.'
-			'"You''ll end up joining us if you become such a pro at fighting. Think about it." you say, with a wistful sigh. Then you start talking about how many adventures he could have with you and your fellow gopniks. "I''d challenge you to a fight sometime, tho." you say, filled with self-confidence. "I bet I could kick your ass." you continue as you playfully smack him on the ass.'
+			'"I always have time for you." he replies as he winks at you. He starts to talk about everything that comes to his mind, but mostly about boxing, running, and the workouts he and Fedor have been doing together lately.'
+			'"You''ll end up joining us if you become such a pro at fighting. Think about it," you say with a wistful sigh before you start talking about how many adventures he could have with you and your fellow gopniks. "I''d challenge you to a fight sometime, though." you say, filled with self-confidence. "I bet I could kick your ass." you continue as you playfully smack him on the ass.'
 			*nl
-			'"You can always find me in the community center if you''d like to bet your ass." he says and you can see his eyes running down your butt.'
-			'"Oh, shut up." you reply as you slap her cheek playfully. "I''d rather you be quiet and just listen to me." you say, and then you start to talk about what''s been going on with you lately.'
-			'Time passes quickly, and before you''ve only said half of what you wanted to say, you hear the bell ring. "Well, I guess that means no more fun." you sigh, and together you start walking towards the classroom.'
+			'"You can always find me in the community center if you''d like to bet your ass," he says and you can see his eyes running down your ass.'
+			'"Oh, shut up!" you reply as you slap his cheek playfully. "I''d rather you be quiet and just listen to me." you say before you start talking about what''s been going on with you lately.'
+			'Time passes quickly, and you soon hear the bell ring. "Well, I guess that means no more fun." you sigh, and you start walking towards the classroom together.'
 			act 'Teach me to box':
 				*clr & cla
 				!!ivanQW['ivan_boxing_invite'] = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stop as you start to walk away. "Hey do you think you could show me some boxing moves, for real?"'
-				'He stops and seems to think about it. "Sure stop by the gym at the community center just before it closes. I train after it closes some nights and I can show you some stuff then."'
-				'You smile to him. "Thanks." Then you wave and head to class.'
+				'You stop as you start to walk away. "Hey, do you think you could show me some boxing moves, for real?"'
+				'He stops and seems to think about it. "Sure, stop by the gym at the community center just before it closes. I train after it closes some nights and I can show you some stuff then."'
+				'You smile at him. "Thanks." You wave goodbye before heading to class.'
 				act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-			'You see Ivan talking to his fellow jocks and you decide to go over and try to talk to him.'
+			'You see Ivan talking to his fellow jocks and decide to try and talk to him.'
 			'As you get closer, Ivan looks at you, then without another word he walks towards the men''s toilet.'
-			'"Hey, Ivan. I just thought we could have a little chat." you call after him as you stand there, confused and a little bit embarrassed.'
-			'"You thought wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>. We have nothing to talk about anyway. We don''t really have much in common, in case you haven''t noticed yet." he replies, without even looking back.'
-			'You stand there alone while the other jocks look at you. You feel yourself humiliated a bit. You look at them and say loudly, almost shouting: "Mind your own business." and with that you leave to spend the rest of your break somewhere else.'
+			'"Hey, Ivan. I just thought we could have a little chat?" you call after him as you stand there, confused and a little bit embarrassed.'
+			'"You thought wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>. We have nothing to talk about anyway. We don''t really have much in common, in case you haven''t noticed yet." he replies without even looking back.'
+			'You stand there alone while the other jocks look at you. You feel a little humiliated as ou look at them. "Mind your own business!" you snarl before storming off to spend the rest of your break somewhere else.'
 		else
-			'"Hi, Ivan." you greet him as he stands by the school lockers. "Tell me something exciting, I''m bored." you say, then sit down on the floor, grab his hand and pull him to sit down, next to you.'
-			'"The truth is, I was just about to..." he starts to say, and when he looks at you and sees that he has no chance of getting away, he continues: "...but anyway, we can talk."'
-			'He''s not in a great mood, and keeps looking in the direction of the others, as if expecting one of them to go there because of an important reason. Then he sighs and he realizes he has no other choice than to share a thing or two about what''s been going on with him lately.'
+			'"Hi, Ivan." you greet him as he stands by the lockers. "Tell me something exciting, I''m bored." you say as you sit on the floor, grab his hand and pull him down next to you.'
+			'"The truth is, I was just about to..." he starts to say, and when he looks at you and sees that he has no chance of getting away, he continues. "...but anyway, we can talk."'
+			'He''s not in a great mood, and keeps looking in the direction of the others, as if expecting one of them to do something. He sighs and realizes he has no other choice than to share a thing or two about what''s been going on with him lately.'
 			*nl
-			'"Booooring." you say, as you roll your yes. "You should do more things, get some free time or you''ll miss the best time of your life." you add.'
-			'"You know, I don''t really have time for anything other than training and doing some important things at home." he says, then complains a bit about how although he''d like to be a bit more social, he can''t afford to be distracted by anything.'
-			'"I was hoping you''d tell me something more interesting, though. I''m probably more bored now than I was before." you say jokingly. "Maybe next time." and with that, you stand up, dust yourself off and walk away, waving at him.'
+			'"Booooring." you say as you roll your eyes. "You should do more things, get some free time or you''ll miss the best time of your life." you add.'
+			'"You know, I don''t really have time for anything other than training and doing some important things at home." he says, then complains about how although he''d like to be a bit more social, he can''t afford to be distracted by anything.'
+			'"I was hoping you''d tell me something more interesting, though. I''m probably more bored now than I was before!" you say jokingly before standing up, dusting yourself off and walking away while waving at him.'
 		end
 	else
 		if npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
 			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>." Ivan greets you as you approach him.'
-			'"Hi Ivan. I don''t really have much to do and I saw you were standing here all alone so I thought we could talk. What''s been going on with you lately?" you ask, then lean against the wall, you give him a friendly smile and listen to him talking.'
-			'He leans against the wall, too, and then spends the next few minutes talking about the boxing techniques he''s trying to master, the training sessions he''s had with Fedor, and of course a couple of fights with Vitek.'
+			'"Hi Ivan. I don''t really have much to do and I saw you were standing here all alone, so I thought we could talk? What''s been going on with you lately?" you ask as you lean against the wall. You give him a friendly smile and listen to him.'
+			'He leans against the wall and spends the next few minutes talking about the boxing techniques he''s trying to master, the training sessions he''s had with Fedor, and of course a few fights with Vitek.'
 			'"And do you have any exciting plans? Like, are you going to meet someone and hang out, or are you going to go to the disco for a change?" you ask curiously. "If you''re not careful, you might end up a friendless outcast."'
 			*nl
-			'As you say this, you both start laughing out loud. "Look who''s talking." he says jokingly. "Besides, that would never happen. I''m too popular with the girls for that." He winks, then laughs again.'
-			'You open your mouth as if you''re about to say something, but then you realize that it is a valid point. After a short pause, you say quietly: "True, you''re too good-looking for that..."'
+			'As you say this, you both start laughing out loud. "Look who''s talking!" he says jokingly. "Besides, that would never happen. I''m too popular with the girls for that." He winks, then laughs again.'
+			'You open your mouth as if you''re about to say something, but realize that it''s a valid point. After a short pause, you quietly reply. "True, you''re too good-looking for that..."'
 			'"What was that?" he asks, and from the look on his face, you can''t tell whether he really didn''t hear you or if he''s just teasing you.'
-			'"Nothing...I just remembered...I have to do something...I promised somone...yeah..." you stutter and then clumsily drop everything you have in your hand. You quickly pick them up and walk off as fast as you can.'
+			'"Nothing...I just remembered...I have to do something...I promised somone...yeah..." you stutter and then clumsily drop everything you have in your hand. You quickly pick everything up and walk away as fast as you can.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-			'You see Ivan standing in the hallway and you decide to strike up a conversation with him.'
-			'As soon as he notices you approaching him, he looks at you, almost with a piercing look, and starts walking in the other direction. It''s clear that he''s not looking for your company and has no intention of talking to you.'
-			'You don''t want to make things any more awkward, so when he starts walking away, you turn the other way as if you weren''t looking for him. You keep walking, then you go back to the classroom instead and wait there for the next lesson to start.'
+			'You see Ivan standing in the hallway and decide to strike up a conversation with him.'
+			'As soon as he notices you approaching, he looks at you, almost with a piercing look, and starts walking in the other direction. It''s clear that he''s not looking for your company and has no intention of talking to you.'
+			'You don''t want to make things any more awkward, so when he starts walking away, you turn the other way as if you weren''t looking for him. You keep walking, heading back to the classroom instead and waiting there for the next lesson to start.'
 		else
-			'You see Ivan looking at something on his phone and you decide to go over to him. "Hi Ivan, what are you looking at?" you ask as you lean over and look at the phone.'
-			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing important. I''m looking at some new boxing gear, and boxing shoes and bindings. You know, it''s very important to have the right grip so you don''t get hurt." he says.'
-			'For the next few minutes you spend together looking at the range of products in an online shop. He sometimes comments on what different products are good for.'
-			'Although you don''t really talk, he tolerates you enough not to send you away. A few minutes go by when he says: "I''m going to show Fedor these." and with that, he leaves.'
-			'There''s still a few minutes left of the break, so you decide to walk around a bit, then head back to the classroom.'
+			'You see Ivan looking at something on his phone and decide to approach him. "Hi Ivan, what are you looking at?" you ask as you lean over and look at the screen.'
+			'"Oh, hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, nothing important. I''m looking at some new boxing gear, and boxing shoes and bindings. You know, it''s very important to have the right grip so you don''t get hurt."'
+			'For the next few minutes, you look at the range of products in an online shop together. He sometimes comments on what different products are good for.'
+			'Although you don''t really talk, he tolerates you enough not to send you away. A few minutes go by when he says "I''m going to show these to Fedor." With that, he leaves.'
+			'There''s still a few minutes left of the break, so you decide to walk around a bit before heading back to the classroom.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'

+ 25 - 4
locations/intro_sg_select_custom.qsrc

@@ -100,33 +100,54 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modgrup':
 	act 'Nerd':
 		killvar 'grupvalue'
 		$soc_grup = 'Nerd'
-		grupvalue[3] = 600
+		grupvalue[1] = 200
+		grupvalue[2] = 100
+		grupvalue[3] = 800
+		grupvalue[4] = 100
+		grupvalue[6] = 600
 		grupTipe = 3
 		gt 'intro_sg_select_custom','modgrup'
 	end
 	act 'Jock':
 		killvar 'grupvalue'
 		$soc_grup = 'Jock'
-		grupvalue[2] = 600
+		grupvalue[1] = 400
+		grupvalue[2] = 800
+		grupvalue[3] = 100
+		grupvalue[4] = 200
+		grupvalue[6] = 400
 		grupTipe = 2
 		gt 'intro_sg_select_custom','modgrup'
 	end
 	act 'Popular':
 		killvar 'grupvalue'
 		$soc_grup = 'Cool'
-		grupvalue[1] = 600
+		grupvalue[1] = 800
+		grupvalue[2] = 400
+		grupvalue[3] = 200
+		grupvalue[4] = 100
+		grupvalue[6] = 400
 		grupTipe = 1
 		gt 'intro_sg_select_custom','modgrup'
 	end
 	act 'Gopnik':
 		killvar 'grupvalue'
 		$soc_grup = 'Gopnik'
-		grupvalue[4] = 600
+		grupvalue[1] = 200
+		grupvalue[2] = 300
+		grupvalue[3] = 100
+		grupvalue[4] = 800
+		grupvalue[6] = 100
 		grupTipe = 4
 		gt 'intro_sg_select_custom','modgrup'
 	end
 	act 'Outcast':
 		killvar 'grupvalue'
+		grupvalue[1] = 200
+		grupvalue[2] = 200
+		grupvalue[3] = 200
+		grupvalue[4] = 200
+		grupvalue[6] = 200
 		$soc_grup = 'Outcast'
 		grupTipe = 5
 		gt 'intro_sg_select_custom','modgrup'

+ 3 - 4
locations/intro_sg_tg.qsrc

@@ -302,15 +302,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_6_looks':
 
 	
 	act 'Meet her': gt 'intro_sg_tg', 'intro_7'
-	act 'Customise <<$pcs_firstname>>': $loc_arg = 'intro_7' & gt 'intro_customization', 'start'
+	act 'Customise <<$pcs_firstname>>': gt 'intro_customization', 'start'
 end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'intro_7':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-	'She''s shorter than you, but rather tall for a girl, with a body that is neither too fat nor especially skinny. On her chest rest a pair of decently-sized breasts. Her <<$curly>><<$pcdesc_hairlength>> hair is <<$pcs_haircol>>.'
-	'She has <<$pcs_eyecol>> eyes with <<$pcs_lashes>>'+iif(glass > 0, ' hidden behind a pair of cheap glasses.', '.')
+	'You couldn''t tell from her photo, but although shorter than you, she is rather tall for a girl.' 
 	'She looks like she''s spent some time in front of the mirror trying to pretty herself up, and her clothes are very clean. Despite that, she still looks rather average. Like she is the type of girl that would be a background character in another person''s life.'
 
 	act 'Go for a walk':
@@ -650,7 +649,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gad_start':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Gadukino</h2></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/site_pavlovsk.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/site_gadukino.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'<center>A small farming village with just as many rickety wooden houses dot the landscape as ruins. The village has seen better days.</center>'
 

+ 13 - 12
locations/pav_lake.qsrc

@@ -63,10 +63,10 @@ end
 
 if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and temper >= 20 and sunWeather = 1 and month >= 5 and month <= 9 and hour >= 12 and hour <= 14 and ((kanikuli = 0 and week = 7) or week mod 2 = 0):
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
-		'As you walk down to the beach area of the lake you see a group of kids from your school hanging out on the beach. It looks like it is the jocks and cool kids. You hope none of them have seen you naked, it would be such a scandal if they seen you like this. You should put on a bikini before approaching them if you want to hang out, or just avoid them and do your own thing today.'
+		'As you walk down to the beach area of the lake, you see the jocks and cool kids hanging out and hope none of them have seen you naked. You should put on a bikini before approaching them if you want to hang out, or just avoid them and do your own thing today.'
 	else
-		'As you walk down to the beach area of the lake you see a group of kids from your school hanging out on the beach. It looks like it is the jocks and cool kids.'
-		act 'Head towards your class mates': gt 'pav_lake', 'school_mates'
+		'As you walk down to the beach area of the lake, you see the jocks and cool kids hanging out.'
+		act 'Approach them': gt 'pav_lake', 'school_mates'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -589,18 +589,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school_mates':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/beach_hangout/school_mates.jpg"></center>'
 	if fame['pav_slut'] >= 225:
-		'You start walking over to them and you start getting disgusted stares from several of them. Soon several are making rude comments, finally Dimka comes over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost slut, we don''t want you here." You sigh as it is obvious if you try and push this, nothing good will come of it. So you turn and walk away.'
+		'You start approaching them, but are immediately greeted with disgusted stares and rude comments before Dimka walks over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost slut! We don''t want you here." You sigh before turning and walking away.'
 		act 'Leave': gt'pav_lake'
 	elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
-		'You start walking over to them and most give you friendly smiles or waves, several wave you to come over and join them.'
+		'You start approaching them and are greeted with friendly smiles as several wave at you to come over and join them.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_lake'
 		act 'Join them': gt 'pav_lake', 'beach_hangout'
 	elseif grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 4:
-		'You start walking over to them and most just ignore you until you start to get close then several of them give you annoyed looks, making it clear you are not really welcome here, but none of them seem like they are going to stop you from joining them at least.'
+		'You start approaching them, but the group largely ignore you until you get close and several of them give you annoyed looks, making it clear you''re not welcome here, but make no effort to stop you from joining them at least.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_lake'
 		act 'Join them': gt 'pav_lake', 'beach_hangout'
 	else
-		'You start walking over to them and you start getting annoyed stares from several of them. Soon several are making rude comments, finally Dimka comes over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost loser, we don''t want you here." You sigh as it is obvious if you try and push this, nothing good will come of it. So you turn and walk away.'
+		'You start approaching them and are greeted with annoyed stares and rude comments before Dimka walks over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost loser! We don''t want you here." You sigh before turning and walking away.'
 		act 'Leave': gt'pav_lake'
 	end
 end
@@ -608,13 +608,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'beach_hangout':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
-	!!Cool kids aprove of high quality bikini or outfit and disaprove of low quality
+	!!Cool kids approve of high quality bikini or outfit and disapprove of low quality
 	if PCloQuality >= 4: 	
 		grupvalue[1] += 1
 	elseif PCloQuality  < 3: 	
 		grupvalue[1] -= 1
 	end
-	!!Cool kids and jocks aprove of somewhat revealing clothes or a little skimpy bikini and disaprove of conseravite clothes or bikinis and very revealing clothes or very skimpy bikini
+	!!Cool kids and jocks approve of somewhat revealing clothes or a little skimpy bikini and disapprove of conservative clothes or bikinis and very revealing clothes or very skimpy bikini
 	if PCloInhibit >= 35:
 		grupvalue[1] -= 1
 		grupvalue[2] -= 1
@@ -625,16 +625,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beach_hangout':
 		grupvalue[1] -= 1
 		grupvalue[2] -= 1
 	end
-	!!Jocks disaprove of a one piece swimsuite
+	!!Jocks disapprove of a one piece swimsuit
 	if PCloswimwear = 1 and PCloOnePiece = 1:
 		grupvalue[2] -= 1
 	end
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/beach_hangout/beach_hangout.jpg"></center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
-		'You smile to your friends and take a seat with them and soon are joining in on the variety of conversations going on. Some of them are tanning, others sitting around talking, while a few are just horsing around. You spend some time just talking to a few of them catching up. You could use this chance to get to know one of them better if you wanted to.'
+		'You smile at your friends and take a seat with them before joining in on the variety of conversations going on. Some are tanning, others sit around talking, and some horse around. You can use this opportunity to get to know one of them better if you want.'
 	else
-		'You smile and take a seat with them, you get a mix of responses. The ones you know better seem at least somewhat friendly, most of the rest range from looking annoyed that you are here to indifference, many just ignore you. Some of them are tanning, others sitting around talking, while a few are just horsing around. You spend some time trying to get involved in the varies conversations going on and meet limited success. You could use this chance to get to know one of them better if you wanted to.'
+		'You smile and take a seat with them, but get mixed responses. The ones you know better seem somewhat friendly, but the others range from indifference to annoyance. Many choose just to ignore you.' 
+		'Some are tanning, others sit around talking, and some horse around. You spend some time trying to get involved in the conversations going on, but meet limited success. You can use this opportunity to get to know one of them better if you want.'
 	end
 	act 'Leave': gt'pav_lake'
 	act 'Talk to one of them': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'

+ 2 - 2
locations/rex_party_sexEvents.qsrc

@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_boobs':
 	'"Like this boys?" you ask as you put your breasts on the turntable and move it a bit with your breasts.'
 	'Not much sound comes out from your attempt, but the guys seem to love it all the same.'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-	act 'Take off your top': gt 'rex_party_smallEvents', 'dj_cock'
+	act 'Take off your top': gt 'rex_party_sexEvents', 'dj_cock'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_cock':
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_cock':
 	'Seeing the interest from the smiling guys watching you, you get rid of your top and bra and then place your naked breasts on the turntable, trying to play it topless. "I think I did better that time. What do you think?"'
 	'The guy pulls out his erection and says "Not bad. Maybe try this instead."'
 	act 'Move away': gt $loc, $loc_arg
-	act 'Give his dick a try': gt 'rex_party_smallEvents', 'dj_suck'
+	act 'Give his dick a try': gt 'rex_party_sexEvents', 'dj_suck'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_suck':

+ 11 - 5
locations/talent_agency.qsrc

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/front.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Hello, welcome to the Aurora Female Talent Agency! How may I help you?"'
 	if casting = 3 and hour <= 11 and SMTV_commercial = daystart:
-		room = 3
+		audition['room'] = 3
 		'"Oh? Are you here for the SMTV commercial? Please go to interview room <<room>>, they''re waiting for you inside.'
 	elseif casting = 3 and ((hour > 11 and SMTV_commercial = daystart) or SMTV_commercial < daystart):
 		'"You''re here for the SMTV commercial? Sorry, you''re late, and you''ve just cost the production tons of money. You''ve been fired. First rule of showbiz honey: show up on time.'
@@ -79,12 +79,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/aurora/auditions/hallway.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'talent_agency','start'
+	if casting = 3:
+		act 'Room 3':gt 'talent_agency','room3'
+	end
+
+!!Block to stop rooms being accessible as they are not ready
+!{
 	act 'Room 1':gt 'talent_agency','room1'
 	act 'Room 2':gt 'talent_agency','room2'
-	act 'Room 3':gt 'talent_agency','room3'
 	act 'Room 4':gt 'talent_agency','room4'
 	act 'Room 5':gt 'talent_agency','room5'
 	act 'General Audition Room':gt 'talent_agency','room6'
+}
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'room1':
@@ -136,7 +142,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'room6':
 	*clr & cla
-	if room > 0 and room =< 5:
+	if audition['room'] > 0 and audition['room'] =< 5:
 		gt'talent_agency','wrong_room2'
 	elseif $audition['role'] = '':
 		gt'talent_agency','wrongday'
@@ -279,7 +285,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SMTV_shy':
 									'<i>Holy crap! Acting is some serious money!</i>'
 									inhib_exp += 20
 									casting = 1
-									room = 0
+									audition['room'] = 0
 									act'Leave':gt'talent_agency','end'
 								end
 							end
@@ -363,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SMTV_confident':
 									'Looking over at the desk, you see a wad of cash lying there. You rush over, and when you finish counting, you realize that it''s <<actpayfin>> <b>₽</b>!'
 									'<i>Holy crap! Acting is some serious money!</i>'
 									casting = 1
-									room = 0
+									audition['room'] = 0
 									act'Leave':gt'talent_agency','end'
 								end
 							end