Merge remote-tracking branch 'Violet_Kitten/master'

# Conflicts:
#	glife.qproj
#	locations/foto_models2.qsrc

locations/preSYS.qsrc

@@ -687,7 +687,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computergeek':
 		pcs_skin = 30
 		salo = 132
 		pcs_inhib = 20
-		grupvalue[3] = 60
+		grupvalue[3] = 600
 		npc_rel['A152'] += 10
 		npc_rel['A153'] += 10
 		npc_rel['A142'] += 15
@@ -1411,7 +1411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slut':
 		npc_rel['A34'] -= 10
 		motherKnowSpravka = 1
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'socialgroup_setting', 0, 0, 0, 10, 0, 0
-		grupvalue[4] = 10
+		grupvalue[4] = 100
 		if player_avatar = 0:
 			pcs_hairlng = 120
 			pcs_eyesize = 2

locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/peter.jpg"></center>'
-				'I''m Peter, I''ve been watching you for a long time. I often see you here. I think it will be interesting...'
+				'I''m Peter, I''ve been watching you for a long time. I often see you here. I find you rather interesting...'
 
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord', 'redlight'
 				act 'Go with Peter': gt 'Peterroom', 'start'
@@ -49,65 +49,65 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Go to the basement':gt 'sexshop', 'podval'
 
 	if gloryhole >= 20 and pornstudio = 0:
-		'You notice out of the corner your eye, that the seller is trying to get your attention.'
+		'You notice, out of the corner of your eye, that the seller is trying to get your attention.'
 
-		act 'Approach to learn what we wants':
+		act 'Approach to learn what he wants':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			menu_off = 1
-			'In general, you give a great blowjob, everyone knows that. Do you want to earn extra money in the porn business as an actress? The pay there is certainly better than here, and cocks, maybe even more. Well? Other options will not be as good!'
+			'In general, you give a great blowjob. Everyone knows that. Do you want to earn extra money in the porn business as an actress? The pay there is certainly better than here. And the cocks. Well? Other offers won''t be as good!'
 
 			act 'Agree':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You came to the studio, looking for someone to look, who to approach to the issue.'
-				'To you approached by a young man who introduced Peter, you are greeted and met.'
+				'You head to the studio with Peter, looking around at the others there.'
+				'You are approached by a young man, who Peter introduces to you. You are greeted by him.'
 
-				act 'Set out the purpose of your visit':
+				act 'Explain the purpose of your visit':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut = minut + 60
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Peter smiled and said that the new actresses are always welcome, just terrible, of course, in the business do not take. On the first couple of auditions will take place, if you like the public - you can not take them.'
-					'I''ll tell you that here and how, but under one condition - you have to undress.'
+					'Peter smiles, and says "New actresses are always welcome. However, in this business, many women do not take well to the work. You will have to do an audition, and if you do well, you can have the job."'
+					'"I''ll tell you about the work here and now, but under one condition - you have to undress".'
 
 					act 'Undress':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/casting_3.jpg"></center>'
-						'First there is a casting actresses - as I said, if you are terrible - you can not hope only comes when you have a beautiful appearance.'
+						'"Good, good. Well, first there is a casting call for actresses. As I said, if you don''t take well to the work, your only hope will be a beautiful appearance."'
 
-						act '......':
+						act '...':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/model_0.jpg"></center>'
-							'Then she selected for the lead role.'
-							'Here you have to be the most beautiful.'
+							'"Then, we select the lead role."'
+							'"For the lead role, you must be the most beautiful girl."'
 
-							act '......':
+							act '...':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/film_0.jpg"></center>'
-								'Well then filming itself - an interesting and exciting process'
-								'And the output we get ....'
+								'"And then comes the filming itself, which is the most exciting and fun part."'
+								'"And after the filming, we create a video to sell it for profit!"'
 
-								act '......':
+								act '...':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/dvd-disx.jpg"></center>'
-									'Then on what I make money.'
+									'"This is what makes us the money."'
 
-									act 'Everything is clear, but how and where everything is for sale? Maybe I want to see for yourself ..':
+									act 'You understand, but how and where do they sell the videos? Maybe you want to see one for yourself...':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-										'The sauna is in a residential area we have one man .. And in a sex shop, how could you understand there garters. Now here are thinking about selling in the university. If we have this who helped - increased profits used well, with dividend entitlements assistant, of course.'
+										'"Well, we have the sauna which is in the residential area. We have one man there. And also the sex shop, of course. We''re thinking about selling them at the university as well. If we had some help to get connections there, profits would be increased. And whoever helps would get a bonus for being an assistant, of course."'
 
-										act 'And any problems with the law?':
+										act '"Are there any problems with the law?"':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/ment_0.jpg"></center>'
-											'Specifically for you - yet. We''ve got their contracts with the cops, maybe in the future you will be able to help us to keep them in power, but for now - I told you all have to try on the weekend.'
+											'"We''ve got contracts with the police to leave us alone. Maybe in the future you will be able to help us to keep those in place, or improve them. But for now, you would only be able to work on the weekend."'
 
-											act 'Well like all realized':
+											act 'You understand.':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-												'Boy, girl, enjoy yourself and do not take away I have more time'
+												'"Alright, girl. Enjoy yourself."'
 												pornstudio = 3
 												act 'Continue': gt 'pornstudio', 'start'
 											end
@@ -864,31 +864,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 			cla
 			money -= 50
 			minut += 15
-			pcs_horny += 5
-			pcs_mood += 5
-			'Once you have paid the money the TV on the wall showing porn.'
-			'You sat in a chair and watched porn, you began to get a little excited.'
+			'Once you have paid the money, the TV on the wall begins showing porn movies.'
+			'You sit in a chair and watch the porn. You began to get a little excited.'
 
 			act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 
-			if pcs_horny >= 50:
-				act 'Masturbate':
-					cla
-					pcs_horny += 10
-					pcs_mood += 10
-					'You caress your pussy with your fingers and enjoy the pleasant sensation between your legs.'
-
-					if pcs_horny >= 100:
-						orgasm += 1
-						pcs_horny = 0
-						pcs_mood += 15
-						stat['mast'] += 1
-						if pcs_inhib < 30:inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
-						'Gradually the pleasurable sensations spread throughout the body and you orgasm.'
-					end
+			act 'Masturbate':
+				cla
+				'You caress your pussy with your fingers and enjoy the pleasant sensation between your legs.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5,
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'	
 
-					act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
-				end
+				act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 			end
 
 			
@@ -907,33 +895,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 					fingerRand = rand(1, 5)
 					! WD: Rename missing Image ~  'ghFinger.jpg' to 'ghFinger5.jpg'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/ghfinger<<fingerRand>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You poke your finger in the hole showing that you are ready to serve the stranger.'
+					'You poke your finger in the hole, letting them know that you are ready to serve the stranger.'
 					'The stranger slips ' + iif(ghnow < 5, '300', '150') +	'<b>₽</b> into the hole, and then his erect cock pokes out of the hole.'
 
 					act 'Suck dick':
 						cla
 						*clr
-						pcs_horny += 5
-						guy += 1
-						stat['bj'] += 1
 						gloryhole += 1
 						swallow += 1
-						spafinloc = 12
-						gs 'cum_manage'
 						gs 'dinSex', 'std_trigger_oral'
 						ghprand = rand(1, 38)
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/gloryhole<<ghprand>>.jpg"></center>'
 						'You take the cock in your mouth and start to suck it, blowing him enthusiastically.'
-
-						if pcs_horny >= 100:
-							orgasm += 1
-							pcs_horny = 0
-							pcs_mood += 15
-							'<b>Suddenly as you are sucking dick you orgasm yourself. Between your legs blazing fire and waves of pleasure fill your body, you moan but continue to suck.</b>'
-						end
-
-						'Finally the stranger cums in your mouth filling it with a huge amount of sperm. Once you''ve licked all the sperm from a his cock, it disappears back into the hole and you hear the man leaves his booth.'
-
+						'The stranger''s cock begins to throb, and finally, the stranger cums in your mouth - filling it with a huge amount of thick sperm. You swallow it, and once you''ve licked all the sperm from a his cock, it disappears back into the hole and you hear the man leaves his booth.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5,
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'	
 						if mistressqwest > 0:
 							mistressqwest += 1
 							'You have sucked <<mistressqwest - 1>> cocks for Mistress.'
@@ -953,10 +930,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
-	if kendra > 0:
+	if meet_kendra = 1:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend0.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you browse the store, you see Kendra again. She is browsing through some of the sex toys, then she notices you at about the same time.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, she walks over and boldly caresses your hair. "Hello again. You change your mind about serving me?" she asks.'
+		act 'No':
+			*clr & cla
+			kendrano = 1
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
+			'You smile to her. "Sorry, no. I still don''t belong to anyone."'
+			'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that you both say your goodbyes and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord', 'redlight'
+			act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
+		end
+		act 'Yes':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
+			'You look down a little to show your submission to her. "Yes, Mistress Kendra."'
+			'She smiles at that. "I think you are going to make a great little slave. We are going to have a lot of fun together. Now, follow me to the basement, slave, so you can service me."'
+			act 'Serve Kendra':
+				*clr & cla
+				kendraslave += 1
+				kendratoy = rand(1,2)
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
+				'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now, strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave. Now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. As continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, while Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+				'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure." She informs you.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
+				gs 'stat'
+				if kendratoy = 1:
+					act 'She pulls out a dildo':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra1'
+				else
+					act 'She pulls out a strap-on':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	elseif kendraslave += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you browse the store, you see Kendra, trying on latex clothes, then she notices you at about the same time.'
-		'"Who do we have here, my favorite bitch, come to me and service me. I just bought a new toy and I am very excited to try it out." Kendra laughs, as she motions for you to follow her into the basement.'
+		'As you browse the store, you see Kendra trying on latex clothes. Then she notices you, at about the same time.'
+		'"Who do we have here? My favorite bitch. Come to me, and service me. I just bought a new toy and I am very excited to try it out." Kendra laughs, as she motions for you to follow her into the basement.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Leave the shop (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -969,14 +980,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		else
 			act 'Leave the shop (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
-
 		act 'Serve Kendra':
 			*clr & cla
-			lesbian += 1
 			kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. As long as you carefully suck Kendra as squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-			'"Look at me." commands Kendra, when you look up at her while still eating her out. She pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure." She informs you.'
+			'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+			'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure" she informs you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -985,39 +994,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				act 'She pulls out a strap-on':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
 			end
 		end
-	else
+	elseif hotcat >= 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend0.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you browse the store, you see young black woman about your age, trying on latex clothes, then she notices you at about the same time.'
-		'After a couple of minutes she walks over and boldly caresses your hair. "You''re a pretty little thing, whats your name?" She asks.'
+		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman about your age trying on latex clothes. She notices you at about the same time.'
+		'After a couple of minutes, she walks over and boldly caresses your hair. "You''re a pretty little thing, what''s your name?" she asks.'
 		'You decide to tell her. "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>, but most people call me <<$pcs_nickname>>. What''s your name?"'
-		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. My name is Kendra but you can call me Mistress Kendra." She says in confidence.'
+		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. My name is Kendra, but you can call me Mistress Kendra." She says in confidence.'
 		'"Oh" You reply, so she is one of those.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord', 'redlight'
+		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 		act 'Talk to her':
 			*clr & cla
+			meet_kendra = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend01.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ask her about her clothes and soon the two of you are talking. You tell her that you leave in Pavlovsk and are your final year of your school. She tells you she is attending the University to get a degree, you find out she is from the Republic of the Congo on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of things for awhile. "You are very pretty, I love making pretty little Russian bitches into my slave. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>> and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
+			'You ask her about her clothes, and soon the two of you are talking. You tell her that you live in Pavlovsk, and are in your final year of school. She tells you she is attending the University to get a degree. You find out she is from the Republic of Congo, on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of things for a while. Eventually she says "You are very pretty. I love making pretty little Russian bitches into my slaves. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
 			act 'Call her Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
 				kendrano = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile to her. "Sorry but I don''t belong to anyone."'
-				'She sighs slightly. "Such a waste, oh well there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind." With that you both bid your goodbyes and she returns to shopping as do you.'
+				'You smile to her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
+				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that you both say your goodbyes and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
 				act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'Call her Mistress Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-				'You look down a little to show your submission to her. "Yes Mistress Kendra."'
-				'She smiles at that. "I think you are going to make a great little slave, we are going to have a lot of fun together. Now follow me to the basement slave so you can service me."'
+				'You look down a little to show your submission to her. "Yes, Mistress Kendra."'
+				'She smiles at that. "I think you are going to make a great little slave. We are going to have a lot of fun together. Now, follow me to the basement slave so you can service me."'
 				act 'Serve Kendra':
 					*clr & cla
-					kendra = 1
-					lesbian += 1
+					kendraslave += 1
 					kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. As long as you carefully suck Kendra as squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-					'"Look at me." commands Kendra, when you look up at her while still eating her out. She pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure." She informs you.'
+					'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+					'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure" she informs you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -1028,6 +1038,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				end
 			end
 		end
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend0.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman about your age trying on latex clothes. She notices you at about the same time.'
+		'She gives you a quick once over, and then stops paying attention to you. After a few moments she moves to another section of the store.'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord', 'redlight'
+		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1038,30 +1054,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra1':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take the dildo from her and insert the dildo into Kendra''s pussy. While you use one hand to fuck her with the dildo, your other hand caress her clit trying to bring her to orgasm. Kendra moans and writhes sitting on the table under your efforts.'
+	'You take the dildo from her, and insert it into Kendra''s pussy. While you use one hand to fuck her with the dildo, your other hand caresses her clit, trying to bring her to orgasm. Kendra moans and writhes, sitting on the table, enjoying your efforts.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You dutifully continue to thrust the dildo, still stroking her clit, but the excitement is already gone. Her wetness dripping from the dildo onto your hand. "That''s right slave, that''s it, just keep doing that." She commands you.'
+		'You dutifully continue to thrust the dildo, still stroking her clit. Her juices begin dripping from the dildo onto your hand. "That''s right, slave, that''s it. Just keep doing that!" she commands you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Then Kendra starts spasming as her whole body orgasms. Her pussy begins to squirt as she orgasms, covering your hand, her thighs and even some of it ends up on your breasts and stomach before her orgasm subsides. Kendra looks at you: "You are my beautiful little white slave bitch, tottaly committed to serving me. Now lick me clean." She commands.'
+			'Then Kendra starts spasming, as her whole body orgasms. Her pussy begins to squirt as she orgasms, covering your hand, her thighs and even some of it ends up on your breasts and stomach before her orgasm subsides. Kendra looks at you: "You are my beautiful little white slave bitch, totaly committed to serving me. Now lick me clean" she orders.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Lick':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pull the dildo out of her soaking wet pussy and dutifully move closer to her pussy and began to slowly lick the juices from her thighs and pussy.'
-				'"Keep going you slut," Kendra orders you. You began to lick faster, licking her thighs and pussy completely clean of her juices.'
-				'"Now it''s time for your reward." She says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag next.'
+				'You pull the dildo out of her soaking wet pussy, and dutifully move your head between her legs to begin slowly licking the juices from her thighs and pussy.'
+				'"Keep going, you slut" Kendra orders you. You began to lick faster, licking her thighs and pussy completely clean of her juices.'
+				'"Now, it''s time for your reward" she says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag next.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Yes mistress':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
+				act 'Yes, Mistress':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1075,20 +1091,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend8.jpg"></center>'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips, as she does she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place she pulls you close and kissed you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it a moment and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying. "I see you are still a virgin, well I won''t pop your cherry, luckily you still have other holes I can fuck. Now on your knees and suck my cock."'
+		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying "I see you are still a virgin, well, I won''t pop your cherry. Luckily, you still have other holes I can fuck. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
 	else
-		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips, as she does she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place she pulls you close and kissed you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it a moment and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying. "I see you are already nice and wet slave, eager for my cock are you? Don''t worry you will feel it soon enough. Now on your knees and suck my cock." She commands.'
+		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying "I see you are already nice and wet, slave. Eager for my cock, are you? Don''t worry, you will feel it soon enough. Now, on your knees and suck my cock" she commands.'
 	end
 	act 'Suck her strap-on':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend7.jpg"></center>'
-		'You kneel down and take ahold of the dildo with one hand while wrapping your lips around it. You stroke the dildo while you suck on it at the same time. For several minutes you suck the dildo getting it nice and wet with your saliva.'
+		'You kneel down and take ahold of the strap-on dildo with one hand, while wrapping your lips around it. You stroke the dildo while you suck on it at the same time. For several minutes you suck the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your saliva.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Deep throat':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend7.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you suck on the dildo, you feel her grab you by the hair. Next thing you know she forces your head forward, forcing the dildo down your throat, as you lips comes to rest against the fake balls. After a few moments of gagging she lets you pull back to get a breath through your nose, only for her to force it down your throat again, over and over, as she fucks your throat.'
+			'As you suck on the dildo, you feel her grab you by the hair. Next thing you know, she forces your head forward, forcing the dildo down your throat. Your lips comes to rest against the fake balls. After a few moments of gagging, she lets you pull back to get a breath through your nose - only for her to force it down your throat again, over and over, as she fucks your throat.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
@@ -1104,18 +1120,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendravag':
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	stat['vaginal'] += 1
-	pcs_vag += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kendra takes a seat and commands you. "Impale your pussy on my cock and fucks yourself until I tell you to stop." Once Kendra sits in a chair you straddle her strap-on, lowering yourself and sliding it into your pussy. You ride the strap-on, and Kendra drives up from the bottom you trying to shove it as far into your pussy as possible. Several minutes pass and each thrust increases your arousal, you decided to rub your clit and increase the pleasure.'
+	'Kendra commands you. "Impale your pussy on my cock, and fuck yourself until I tell you to stop." Once Kendra sits in a chair, you straddle her strap-on, lowering yourself and sliding it into your pussy. You ride the strap-on, and Kendra drives up from under you - trying to shove it as deep into your pussy as possible. Several minutes pass, and each thrust increases your arousal. You decide to rub your clit to increase the amount of pleasure you are recieving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Rub clit':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start rubbing your clit as you ride her strap-on, making it feel even better. Just as you feel like you are getting close to a orgasm, Kendra pushes you off her, you feel the dildo slide out of your pussy. "Now I am going to wreck your little ass!" She tells you.'
+		'You start rubbing your clit as you ride her strap-on, making it feel even better. Just as you feel like you are getting close to an orgasm, Kendra pushes you off her. You feel the dildo slide out of your pussy. "Now I am going to wreck your little ass!" she tells you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'mast', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -1128,23 +1142,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
-	stat['anal'] += 1
-	pcs_ass += 1
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D4'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand up, as does she. "Lay on the table." She commands you. You jump up on the table and spreads your legs, Kendra steps up between your legs and gently slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on, slick with your pussy juices into your asshole, stopping a moment to give your ass time to adjust to the size. Then she begins to thrust the strap-on up butt, causing you to moan. Seeing that you are enjoying the process, Kendra begins to slowly accelerate. "Tell me your ass belongs to me slave!" She commands you. You know it likely means she will just fuck you harder if you refuse to submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want'
+	'You stand up, as does she. "Lay on the table" she commands you. You jump up onto the table, and spreads your legs. Kendra steps up between your legs and gently slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on, slick with your pussy juices, into your asshole. She stops a moment to give your ass time to adjust to the size. Then, she begins to thrust the strap-on up your butt, causing you to moan. Seeing that you are enjoying the process, Kendra begins to slowly accelerate. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. You know it likely means she will just fuck you harder if you refuse to submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Submit':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend13.jpg"></center>'
-		'You submit to her command, as you tell her. "It''s your ass Mistress Kendra."'
-		'She smiles to you as she keeps fucking your ass. "That''s right slave and what can I do with it?" She asks.'
-		'You reply to her. "Anything you want Mistress Kendra."'
-		'She smiles even bigger. "That''s right bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" She commands'
-		'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "It''s your ass and you can fuck it anytime you want Mistress Kendra." She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple of more minutes as if to make her point before she finally pulls it out of you, as she does she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+		'You submit to her command, telling her "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
+		'She smiles at you as she continues fucking your ass. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
+		'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
+		'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
+		'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1156,19 +1168,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend13.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decided not to tell her what she wants to hear. "It''s my butt Mistress Kendra, I just let you fuck it sometimes." You tell her.'
-			'Just as you expected she starts fucking you a bit harder and faster. "You will learn your place slave. You will submit to me or I will fuck your ass raw." She explains and for several minutes she just fucks your butt before asking again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me slave!" She commands you. You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want'
+			'You decided not to tell her what she wants to hear. "It''s my butt, Mistress Kendra, I just let you fuck it sometimes!" you tell her.'
+			'Just as you expected, she starts fucking you harder and faster. "You will learn your place, Slave! You will submit to me, or I will fuck your ass raw." She explains and for several minutes she just fucks your butt, before ordering you once again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Submit':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear, before she fucks your asshole raw. "It''s your ass Mistress Kendra."'
-				'She smiles as she pushes your legs closed and fucking your ass. "That''s right slave and what can I do with it?" She asks.'
-				'You reply to her. "Anything you want Mistress Kendra."'
-				'She smiles even bigger. "That''s right bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" She commands'
-				'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "It''s your ass and you can fuck it anytime you want Mistress Kendra." She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple of more minutes as if to make her point before she finally pulls it out of you, as she does she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+				'You submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear before she fucks your asshole raw. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
+				'She smiles at you, pushing your legs together as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
+				'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
+				'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
+				'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1180,19 +1192,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend6.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decided to still not do as she asks. "No! Mistress Kendra, this is my ass and I decided who fucks it." You tell her.'
-					'She starts fucking you harder and faster then before, she pushes your legs close so she can get a better grip on your hip. "You will learn your place slave. You will submit to me or I will fuck your ass raw." She explains and for several minutes she just fucks your butt before asking again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me slave!" She commands you. You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, you doubt you can last until she gets tired. Eventually your asshole will start to get sore and it will start really hurting and not in the good way it is now.'
+					'You decide to resist again. "No, Mistress Kendra! This is my ass, and I decided who fucks it!" You tell her.'
+					'She starts fucking you even harder and even faster than before. She pushes your legs close, so she can get a better grip on your hips. "Learn your damn place, Slave! You belong to me! You will submit to me now, or else no matter what you say, I will fuck your ass raw right now!" she shouts, and for several minutes she pounds into your asshole, commanding you once again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave! Now!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, you doubt you can last until she gets tired. Eventually, your asshole will start to get sore and it will start really hurting. And not in the good way it is now.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Submit':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend14.jpg"></center>'
-						'You finally submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear. "It''s your ass Mistress Kendra."'
-						'She smiles as she keeps fucking your ass. "That''s right slave and what can I do with it?" She asks.'
-						'You reply to her. "Anything you want Mistress Kendra."'
-						'She smiles even bigger. "That''s right bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" She commands'
-						'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "It''s your ass and you can fuck it anytime you want Mistress Kendra." She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple of more minutes as if to make her point before she finally pulls it out of you, as she does she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+						'You finally submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear before she fucks your asshole raw. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
+						'She smiles at you, pushing your legs together as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
+						'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
+						'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
+						'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1204,8 +1216,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend14.jpg"></center>'
-							'Still you refuse and resist her. "No!" Not able to tell her more as it is starting to hurt now.'
-							'She slams it balls deep into your butt and starts hammering your ass as hard and fast as she can. "You will learn your place slave. You will submit to me or I can stay her all day and fuck your ass until you weep and beg me to stop." She explains and for several minutes she just fucks your butt before asking again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me slave!" She commands you. Your ass is starting to hurt, feeling like it is starting to burn, you just can''t take it anymore and you have to give in.'
+							'Still, you refuse and resist her. "No!" Unable to tell her more than a simple no, as it is starting to hurt now.'
+							'She slams it balls deep into your ass, and starts hammering you as hard and fast as she can. "You will learn your place, right this instant, Slave. You will submit to me, now, or I will stay her all day and fuck your ass until you weep and beg me to stop." For several minutes, she pounds into your sore asshole over and over - it is beginning to hurt a lot. "Tell me, right now, your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. Your ass is starting to hurt, feeling like it is starting to burn. You just can''t take it anymore and you have to give in.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'tear'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1213,11 +1225,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend15.jpg"></center>'
-								'You finally submit to her command as your ass starts to have a burning sensation, telling her what she wants to hear. "It''s your ass Mistress Kendra."'
-								'She smiles as she keeps fucking your butt. "That''s right slave and what can I do with it?" She asks.'
-								'You grimace as you reply to her. "Anything you want Mistress Kendra."'
-								'She smiles even bigger. "That''s right bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" She commands'
-								'You grunt and squeeze your eyes shut as she continues fucking your ass. "It''s your ass and you can fuck it anytime you want Mistress Kendra." She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple of more minutes as if to make her point before she finally pulls it out of you, as she does she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+								'You finally submit to her command as your ass starts to have a burning sensation, telling her what she wants to hear. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
+								'She smiles at you as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
+								'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
+								'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
+								'Despite the burning pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 								gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'tear'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1244,11 +1256,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendrafinish':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend16.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you stand up, she grabs you by the throat and pulls you close. "Stick out your tongue."'
-	'You do as she says and stick out your tongue. She licks your tongue with hers and the two of you lick each others tongue for a few moments. Finally she stops and grabs your butt cheek roughly and digs her nails into your backside. Hard enough it hurts a little, then she lets go and steps away and the pain quickly fades. She starts taking off her harness, she cleans the dildo and then puts it away, before getting dressed. Once she is fully dressed she finally turns to you again. "You may not get dressed slave."'
+	'You do as she says and stick out your tongue. She licks your tongue with hers, and the two of you lick each others'' tongues for a few moments. Finally, she stops and grabs your butt cheek roughly - digging her nails into your backside. Hard enough it hurts a little. Then she lets go and steps away, and the pain quickly fades. She begins taking off her harness. She cleans the dildo, and then puts it away, before getting dressed. Once she is fully dressed, she finally turns to you again. "You may get dressed, Slave."'
 	*nl
-	'"Thank you Mistress." You tell her as you get dressed.'
-	'Once you are both fully dressed she says. "Visit again and if I feel the need to use my little white slave, I might even let you." She gives you a little shooing motion. "You may go now."'
-	'"Yes Mistress Kendra." You reply, with that you leave the basement and go back up to the shop above.'
+	'"Thank you, Mistress" you tell her, as you get dressed.'
+	'Once you are both fully dressed she says "You should come visit me, I live in the dorms at the University on the island." She gives you directions to which of the dorm buildings is hers, and the floor and room number of her dorm room. "I expect my little white slave to come visit me. Often."'
+	'"Yes, Mistress Kendra" you reply. With that, you leave the basement and go back up to the shop above.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1261,7 +1273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod.jpg"></center>'
-	'The cashier is right in front of you offering to help and holding a miniskirt "Girl this is very you, will you try it on"'
+	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help, and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. will you try it on?"'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 
@@ -1269,8 +1281,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 		*clr & cla
 		picrand = 47
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wear the skirt out of the booth and pose in the mirror, you do not have panties on and the skirt is so short that looks more like a belt and does not cover anything.	All your charms are visible from all directions.'
-		'Approaching the mirror you are considering this so-called skirt, and the cashier kneels behind you and starts praising your ass in that skirt, his hands already wander around your hips and he get his lips as close to your butt as he can, he says that he wants to kiss on your skin.	Words soon cease and just the touch of his lips to your skin remains, closer and closer to your pussy.'
+		'You wear the skirt out of the booth, and pose in the mirror. You do not have panties on, and the skirt is so short that it looks more like a belt. It does not cover anything.	All your charms are visible, from all directions.'
+		'Approaching the mirror, you are considering this so-called skirt. The cashier kneels behind you and starts praising your ass in that skirt. His hands already wandering around your hips as he get his lips as close to your butt as he can. He says that he wants to "kiss your skin". Words soon cease, and just the feeling of his lips against your skin remain. Closer and closer to your pussy.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Push him away(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':