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Proofreading and Albina help with Niko

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  1. 138 100
      locations/NikoPayback.qsrc
  2. 178 182
      locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

+ 138 - 100
locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/scene.jpg"></center>'
 		if NikoVolkovQW = -1:
-			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up as someone whispers in your ear, "You think that you can just dump me after all I''ve done for you? Well you are so fucking wrong! You will be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice as he continues stripping you.'	
+			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up as someone leans in and whispers in your ear. "You think that you can just dump me after all I''ve done for you? Well you''re so fucking wrong! You''re now my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice as he continues stripping you.'	
 		else
-			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up as someone whispers in your ear, "You have been running your fucking mouth, for far too long and now I have a few other uses for it. You will now be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice as he continues stripping you.'
+			'As soon as you reach the bathroom, you feel your shirt being pulled up as someone leans in and whispers in your ear. "You''ve been running your fucking mouth for far too long and now I have a few other uses for it. You''re now be my bitch, whether you like it or not." You recognize Niko''s voice as he continues stripping you.'
 		end		
 
 		act 'Plead':	
@@ -29,18 +29,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if NikoVolkovQW = -1:
-				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for breaking up with you. I was just really upset and didn''t give you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you don''t give a shit about me but you will pay me back. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
+				'"Please, stop! I''m so sorry for breaking up with you. I was just really upset and didn''t give you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko just scoffs "Don''t give me that bullshit! You don''t give a shit about me, but you will pay me back. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> every day or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			else	
-				'"Please stop Niko, I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. And never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko scuffs then replies, "Don''t give me that bullshit! you''re not fucking sorry but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> everyday or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
+				'"Please, stop! I''m so sorry for insulting you. I don''t know what came over me. I''m sorry I never gave you a chance. Please forgive me." Niko just scoffs. "Don''t give me that bullshit! You''re not fucking sorry, but you will be. From now on you will either pay me 200 <b>₽</b> every day or I will be using your body as payment. Do you understand bitch?"'
 			end	
 
-			act 'I understand':	
+			act 'Yes':	
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Niko nods, "Good, that''s what I like to hear so what''s it gonna be today? Money or that pretty mouth of yours?"'
+				'You silently nod and Niko smiles. "Good, that''s what I like to hear. So what''s it gonna be today? Money or that pretty mouth of yours?"'
 				
 				if money >= 200:
 					act 'Money (200 <b>₽</b>)':	
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b> and Niko counts it before giving you an approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>> and don''t try to avoid me or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
+						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b> and he counts it before giving you an approving nod. "Excellent. See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>>. Don''t try to avoid me or things will end badly for you." He puts the money in his pocket and walks away. You take a minute to get dressed and try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
 
 						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 					end
@@ -62,14 +62,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You lower your head as you slowly drop to your knees in front of Niko, he gives you a confident grin as he begins unbuttoning his pants. You soon feel Niko''s penis rubbing against your lips so you take a deep breath then wrap your lips around it, sucking it intently trying to make Niko cum as quicly as possible. Niko leans back while griping your head with one hand.'
+					'You lower your head as you slowly drop to your knees in front of Niko. He gives you a confident grin as he begins unbuttoning his pants. You soon feel Niko''s penis rubbing against your lips so you take a deep breath before wrapping your lips around it, sucking it intently as you try to make him cum as quicly as possible. Niko leans back while holding your head with one hand.'
 
 					act 'Make Niko cum':	
 						*clr & cla
 						NikoPayed = daystart
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/facial1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You increase your pace as you look up at Niko, noticing how much he is enjoying your performance. You stare him in the eyes as you hear him begin groaning. You suddenly feel Niko''s warm seed filling your mouth, one squirt at a time. You look up to Niko with his cum slowly leaking out of your mouth, Niko then looks down to you and says, "What are you waiting for? Swallow my cum bitch!" You give Niko a meek nod then begin swallowing his cum and after you finish, Niko pulls your head to the ground and says, "You missed a few drops, Lick it off the floor!" not wanting to anger Niko further, you obediently begin licking the last drops of cum off the floor. "Now that''s better, I''ll see you tomorrow. Remember what I said and don''t ever try to avoid me."'	
+						'You increase your pace as you look up at Niko, noticing how much he is enjoying your performance. You stare him in the eyes as you hear him begin groaning and suddenly feel his warm cum filling your mouth. You look up at Niko with his cum slowly leaking out of your mouth and he looks down at you. "What are you waiting for? Swallow my cum bitch!" You give him a meek nod and swallow his cum. After you finish, Niko pushes your head to the ground. "You missed a bit! Lick it up bitch!" Not wanting to anger him further, you obediently begin licking the last drops of cum off the floor. "That''s better. I''ll see you tomorrow, bitch. Remember what I said and don''t ever try to avoid me."'	
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A189', 1
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -92,13 +92,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walk out of the cafeteria and see Niko standing in the hallway on his phone.'
 	
-	act 'Approach Niko':	
+	act 'Approach him':	
 		*clr & cla
 		npc_rel['A189'] += rand(1,5)
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?"'		
+		'You approach Niko and a confident grin creeps onto his face. "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?"'		
 
 		if money >= 200:
 			act 'Money (200 <b>₽</b>)':	
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'"I have your money right here." You extend your hand, giving Niko (200 <b>₽</b>). Niko quickly counts it then gives you an approving nod, "it''s all here. Good, you''re all payed up for today, you can get going now."'
+				'"I have your money right here." You extend your hand, giving Niko (200 <b>₽</b>). He quickly counts it and gives you an approving nod. "It''s all here. Good, you''re all paid up for today, so you can get going now."'
 
 				act 'Walk away':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 			end
@@ -122,20 +122,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes as you reply, "You can use my body as payment." Niko''s eyes light up, "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." Niko grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the less used restroom.'
+			'You look down at the floor, avoiding eye contact with him. "You can use my body as payment." His eyes light up. "I was hoping you''d say that. Let''s not waste time." He grabs your ass firmly while leading you to the lesser used restroom.'
 			
-			act 'Head to the restroom with Niko':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
+			act 'Go with him':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 3'
 		end
 	end	
 	
-	act 'Try to avoid Niko':
+	act 'Try to avoid him':
 		VK = rand(1,3)
 		if VK = 1:
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/gschool_hall01.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your head then quickly walk past Niko, hoping that he won''t notice you and to your relief, he doesn''t seem to notice. You let out a sigh of relief before heading to the hallway,'
+			'You lower your head and quickly dash past him, hoping that he won''t notice you. To your relief, he doesn''t seem to notice. You let out a sigh of relief before heading to the hallway.'
 
 			act 'Continue':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 		else
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 2':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/grab.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your head then quickly walk past Niko, hoping that he won''t notice you. After a few steps, you suddenly feel Niko''s hand on your throat, choking you firmly as he whispers in your ear, "You wouldn''t be trying to avoid me, would you?" You meekly shake your head, trying to speak but unable breath freely within Niko''s steel grip, Niko then pulls you into the restroom.'
+			'You lower your head and quickly dash past him, hoping that he won''t notice you. After a few steps, you suddenly feel a hand on your throat, choking you firmly as he whispers in your ear. "You aren''t trying to avoid me, are you?" You meekly shake your head, trying to speak but unable breathe due to his firm grip on your neck. He pulls you into the restroom.'
 
 			act 'Continue':gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 4'			
 		end	
@@ -159,21 +159,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'After you enter the restroom, Niko smacks your ass then says, "Since you came here without any fuzz, I will let you choose how I fuck you today so what will it be?"'
-			
+	'After you enter the restroom, Niko smacks your ass. "Since you came here without any fuss, I''ll let you choose how I fuck you today. So what will it be?"'
+	
 	act 'Blowjob':	
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/bj1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You drop down to your knees then begin unbuttoning Niko''s pants. Niko looks down at you with a confident grin as you finish pulling down his pants. Niko rubs his dick against your lips, signaling you to suck on it. You wrap your lips around Niko''s dick then begin licking and sucking it firmly, not wanting to anger him. Niko then looks down at you and says, "Good girl. Keep it up." You continue sucking Niko''s dick at a moderate pace, not wanting to overdo it.'
+		'You drop to your knees and begin unbuttoning his pants. He looks down at you with a confident grin as you finish pulling down his pants and starts rubbing his dick against your lips, signaling for you to suck on it. You wrap your lips around his dick and begin licking and sucking it firmly, not wanting to anger him. After a few seconds, Niko looks down at you. "Good girl. Keep it up." You continue sucking his dick at a moderate pace, not wanting to overdo it.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'					
 		gs 'stat'	
-									
+		
 		act 'Continue sucking':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/bj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After a few more seconds, Niko begins moaning as he runs his fingers through your hair before grabbing your head with both hands and pushes his penis down your throat as he begin spraying his warm seed down your throat. You try your best not to gag as Niko continues to pump his warm cum down your throat while you swallow every drop of it. After Niko finishes, he looks down to you then says, "You are really good at that. I will see you again soon. Niko buttons his pants then walks out of the restroom."'
+			'After a few more seconds, Niko begins moaning as he runs his fingers through your hair before grabbing your head with both hands and pushing his dick down your throat as his warm cum squirts down your throat. You try your best not to gag as you swallow every drop of it. After he finishes, he looks down to you. "You''re really good at that. I''ll see you again soon." He buttons his pants then walks out of the restroom.'
 			*nl
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow8.mp4"></video></center>'	
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/virgin.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You downcast your eyes as you tell Niko. "I''m a virgin but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding, "Wow you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." Niko then gently guides you toward the sink then undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against your vagina. Niko whispers in your ear, "I will take this slow for you ok?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his penis inside of your vagina, causing your hymen to stretch for his dick and after a few seconds, you feel your hymen give. You can feel a slight pain in your vagina as your hymen breaks and is soon increase slightly when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his penis deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
+			'You look at the floor as you reply. "I''m a virgin, but I don''t want to be one anymore." Niko recoils in shock before responding. "Wow, you are? I guess I can help you with that. Thanks for offering." He gently guides you toward the sink and undresses you from the waist down before unbuttoning his pants and pressing his dick against your pussy and whispering in your ear. "I''ll take this slow for you, okay?" You gratefully nod as Niko slowly pushes his dick inside your pussy and you feel your hymen break. The pain increases when Niko thrusts his hips, pushing his dick deeper inside you and fucking you at a moderate rate.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'	
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'After a minute, all the pain fades and is replaced by pleasure. You try you best to give in to the pleasure. Niko begins fucking you harder before quickly pulling out of you then groaning as he begin milking his penis over your ass. Squirt by squirt, Niko''s cum covers your asscheeks. Niko takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>, I can''t wait to fuck you again." Niko then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'			
+				'After a minute, the pain fades and is replaced by pleasure. You try your best to give in to the pleasure as Niko begins fucking you harder before quickly pulling out of you and groaning as he cums over your ass. He takes a few seconds to catch his breath before saying "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>! I can''t wait to fuck you again." He buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'			
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -221,15 +221,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You grab onto Niko''s hand then place it between your legs as you say, "I want you to fuck my pussy." Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "Good girl. That was just what I wanted to hear." Niko then begin undressing you before spinning you around then pulling you toward him. You can feel Niko penis pressed against your vagina then suddenly feel it enter you, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill your vagina. Niko lightly grips your neck as he pushes you down on his rock hard cock, filling your vagina almost completely with his dick. You close your eyes and give in to the pleasure filling you as Niko continues to fuck your pussy.'
+			'You grab Niko''s hand and place it between your legs. "I want you to fuck my pussy." His eyes light up. "Good girl. That''s just what I wanted to hear." He begins undressing you before spinning you around and pulling you toward him. You can feel his dick pressing against your pussy before you suddenly feel it enter you, causing a wave of pleasure to fill you. Niko lightly grips your neck and close your eyes, giving in to the pleasure as he continues to fuck your pussy.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
-				
+		
 			act 'Continue':	
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko suddenly grabs onto your stomach and leg, lifting you up in the air as he continues pushing you onto his hard penis. You start moaning out loud as Niko whispers in your ear. "You are really liking it, aren''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>." You turn to Niko then nod and that seems to excite Niko, resulting in him greatly increasing his pace. Niko continues fucking you until he suddenly pulls out of you then begin rubbing his penis in between your thighs, milking his dick on the ground in front of you. After Niko catches his breath, he turns to you and says, "You are a great fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you again soon." Niko buttons his pants before walking out of the restroom.'		
+				'Niko suddenly grabs onto your stomach and leg, lifting you as he continues fucking you. You start moaning out loud as he whispers in your ear. "You''re really liking this, aren''t you <<$pcs_firstname>>?" You turn to him and nod, which seems to excite him, resulting in him greatly increasing his pace. He continues fucking you until he suddenly pulls out and begins rubbing his dick inbetween your thighs as his cum splatters on the ground in front of you. After he catches his breath, he turns to you and says "You''re a great fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you again soon." He buttons his pants before walking out of the restroom.'		
 				gs 'cum_call', 'legs', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -248,20 +248,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/ride.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You approach Niko then place your hand on his crotch as you say, "I want to ride your cock so why don''t you make yourself comfortable?" Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "You really are a naughty little minx, aren''t you?" Niko then unbuttons his pants then sits on top of a nearby toilet. You quickly undress, before approaching Niko''s hard penis before aliening it with your vagina then pushing Niko''s dick inside you. Niko begins lightly moaning as you begin riding his hard cock. You begin moaning with NIko, feeling only his hard penis, pushing its way deeper inside you.'
+		'You approach Niko and place your hand on his crotch. "I want to ride your cock, so why don''t you make yourself comfortable?" His eyes light up. "You really are a naughty little minx, aren''t you?" He unbuttons his pants and sits on top of a nearby toilet. You quickly undress before approaching Niko and straddling him before sliding down onto his dick, moaning as it penetrates you. Niko begins moaning as you start riding his cock and you moan with him as you feel his dick pushing its way deeper inside you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
-				
+	
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/sex/bimbo.boy1,7.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You begin riding his hard cock while closing your eyes and focusing on the pleasure building up inside of you. Niko begins spanking your ass while saying to you, "You really seem to be getting the hang of this <<$pcs_nickname>>. Good girl." Niko begins breathing heavier for a few seconds before his breath stops as Niko pushes you forward then pulls out of you, covering your ass with his seed. You let out a needed moan as Niko seed covers your lower back. Niko finishes milking himself on your ass when he says, "You are getting better. Well you are all payed up for today. See you next time." Niko then smacks your ass before buttoning his pants then leaving the restroom.'		
+			'You ride him harder while closing your eyes and focusing on the pleasure building up inside of you as Niko spanks your ass. "You seem to be getting the hang of this <<$pcs_nickname>>. Good girl." He then suddenly groans before he pushes you forward off of his dick. You let out a satisfied moan as cum splatters across your ass. "You''re getting better at this, <<$pcs_nickname>>. That''s you paid up for today. See you next time." He smacks your ass before buttoning his pants and leaving the restroom.'		
 			gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-				
+		
 			if NikoDiscoPay = 1:
 				act 'Finish':NikoDiscoPay = 0 & gt 'pav_disco'
 			else				
@@ -274,17 +274,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 3':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You lean forward then whisper in Niko''s ear, "I want you to fuck my ass." Niko''s eyes light up as he replies, "I always knew that you were a wild girl. Let''s do this." He then gives your ass a firm smack as he begins wetting his hand in the sink then lubing up his dick. You pulls down your pants then bend over, getting yourself ready for Niko. You close your eyes and focus on Niko''s dick firmly pushing its way inside of your ass, evoking moans from you and Niko both.'
+		'You lean forward and whisper in his ear. "I want you to fuck my ass." His eyes light up. "I always knew that you were a wild girl. Let''s do this." He gives your ass a firm smack as he begins wetting his hand in the sink and lubing up his dick. You pull down your pants and bend over, closing your eyes and focusing on his dick firmly pushing its way inside your ass, evoking moans from both you and Niko.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
-			
+	
 		act 'Continue':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Niko begins thrusting his dick deeper in your ass as you lift your leg up, placing it on the nearby toilet seat, giving Niko better access. You continue staring into Niko''s eyes when they suddenly squint. Niko groans as he begins pumping your ass with his warm seed.' 
-			*nl
-			'You can feel his penis throbbing inside of you, filling you with a pleasant warmth. Niko catches his breath before saying, "You did good today. Keep it up." Niko smacks your ass before buttoning his pants then leaving the restroom.'	
+			'Niko begins thrusting his dick deeper into your ass as you lift your leg up to give him better access. You continue staring into Niko''s eyes when they suddenly squint and he groans as he begins filling your ass with his warm cum.' 
+			'You can feel his dick throbbing inside you, filling you with a pleasant warmth as he finishes unloading in your ass. Niko catches his breath before saying "You did good today. Keep it up." He smacks your ass before buttoning his pants and leaving the restroom.'	
 			gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -309,21 +308,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko roughly pushes you into the restroom then says, "Where were you heading off to, in such a hurry?" You take a second to think of an excuse when Niko quickly approaches you then says, "You were trying to fucking avoid me, you stupid bitch!" Niko slaps you then begins removing your clothes.'
+	'Niko roughly pushes you into the restroom. "Where were you heading off to in such a hurry?" You take a second to think of an excuse when he quickly storms up to you. "You were trying to fucking avoid me, you stupid bitch!" he snarls before slapping you. He then begins ripping your clothes off.'
 	if VK = 1:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "It''s time for you to put that mouth of yours to good use. Suck my fucking dick bitch!" Niko pulls down his pants then presses the tip of his penis against your lips.'
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "It''s time for you to put that mouth of yours to good use. Suck my fucking dick bitch!" He pushes you onto your knees and pulls down his pants before pressing the tip of his dick against your lips.'
 	elseif VK = 2:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "Today you will be my little pee slut, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants then says, "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "You''ll be my little pee slut today, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants. "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
 	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0 or VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!" You quickly reply, "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." Niko''s eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin and take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you want take that from me?" Niko replies, "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink then spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!" You fearfully shake your head. "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." His eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin <i>and</i> take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you do that to me?!" He just smiles. "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink and spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
 	elseif VK = 3:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today so spread those legs!"'		
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!"'		
+	elseif VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
+	    'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "You''ll be riding my dick today, so get over here." You fearfully shake your head. "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." His eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin <i>and</i> take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you do that to me?!" He just smiles. "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over here and sit on my dick. I won''t ask again!"'
 	elseif VK = 4:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "You will be riding my dick today so get over here." You meekly nod as you approach him. Niko unbuttons his pants then grabs you then turns you around before wrapping his hand around your neck, pulling you onto his dick.'
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "You''ll be riding my dick today, so get over here." You meekly nod as you approach him. He unbuttons his pants and grabs you before turning you around and wrapping his hand around your neck, pulling you onto his dick.'
 	elseif VK = 5:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I want to fuck your ass so spread those cheeks of yours." You meekly nod before bending over and spreading your cheeks as NIko approaches you while unbuttoning his pants.'
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "I want to fuck your ass, so spread those cheeks of yours." You meekly nod before bending over and spreading your cheeks as Niko approaches you while unbuttoning his pants.'
 	elseif VK = 6:
-		'After you are fully undressed, Niko says, "I''m fucking your ass, now get over here bitch!" Niko grabs you by your hair then pulls you toward the urinal then shoves your head in it as he unbuttons his pants.'	
+		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "I gonna fuck that tight ass. Now get over here bitch!" Niko grabs you by the hair and pulls you toward the urinal, shoving your head into it as he unbuttons his pants.'	
 	end	
 
 	if VK = 1:
@@ -331,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/kuh/help/event/gif/bj3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You wrap your lips around Niko'' penis then begin sucking it firmly. Niko looks down to you then spits on your face before saying, "You are my fucking bitch! Don''t you ever forget that." You continue sucking his dick while trying to ignore Niko as he occasionally spits in your face.'		
+			'You wrap your lips around his dick and begin sucking it firmly. Niko looks down at you and spits on your face. "You''re my fucking bitch! Don''t you ever forget that!" You continue sucking his dick while trying to ignore him as he occasionally spits in your face.'		
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -339,7 +340,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/cum/throat6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko grabs the back of your head then begins fucking your throat. You try to relax your throut as NIko continues fucking it. Niko says to you, "Remember <<$pcs_firstname>> this is your place. You are my fucking bitch and nothing more." You are too focused on not gagging to respond. After a few more seconds, Niko groans, filling your throat with his warm seed which you swallow as much of it as you can, knowing that you have no choice. Niko then buttons his pants and walks out of the restroom, without saying another word.'
+				'Niko grabs the back of your head and begins fucking your throat. You gag heavily as you try to relax your throat. "This is your place and you better remember that. You''re my fucking bitch and nothing more." You''re too focused on not gagging to respond. After a few more seconds, Niko groans as he fills your throat with his cum. You swallow as much of it as you can, knowing that you have no choice. Niko then buttons his pants and walks out of the restroom without saying another word.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -354,14 +355,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/piss1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You open your mouth and close your eyes, waiting for Niko to start. A few seconds later you feel warm liquid spraying in your face, filling your mouth and getting in your nose. Niko shouts, "SWALLOW IT ALL BITCH!" You try your best not to gag as you attempt to swallow all of him bitter tasting urine. You can''t keep your self from gagging as Niko continues shooting his urine down your throat. Niko suddenly rubs his penis against your lips before shoving it into your mouth.'			
+			'You open your mouth and close your eyes, waiting for Niko to start. A few seconds later, you feel a warm liquid splashing across your face, filling your mouth and getting in your nose as Niko shouts "SWALLOW IT ALL BITCH!" You try your best not to gag as you attempt to swallow all of his bitter tasting urine. You can''t keep yourself from gagging as Niko continues shooting his urine down your throat. He then suddenly rubs his dick against your lips before shoving it into your mouth.'			
 			gs 'arousal', 'pee', -5, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 			
-			act 'Suck Niko''s dick':	
+			act 'Suck his dick':	
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You know exactly what he want and begin sucking Niko''s dick, trying your best to get him off as quickly as possible, knowing that the sooner he finishes, the sooner you can wash up and leave. You lick and suck Niko''s dick while trying your best to ignore the rotten taste in your mouth and the mildly burning of Niko''s urine on your face. Niko looks down to you then says, "There you go <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep behaving like this and we will get along just fine." He then tilts his head back and begins moaning. Niko suddenly grabs the back of your head and begin filling your throat with his warm cum as you try your best to swallow every drop of it. After Niko finishes, he turn to you and says, "You are learning, Good keep it up." Niko then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+				'You know exactly what he wants and begin sucking his dick, trying your best to get him off as quickly as possible, knowing that the sooner he finishes, the sooner you can wash up and leave. You lick and suck his dick, trying your best to ignore the rotten taste in your mouth as Niko looks down at you. "There you go <<$pcs_firstname>>. Keep behaving like this and we''ll get along just fine." He then tilts his head back and begins moaning before suddenly grabbing the back of your head as his warm cum starts spurting into your mouth. You try your best to swallow every drop of it and after he finishes, he turns to you and says "You''re learning. Good. Keep it up." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -371,12 +372,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			end
 		end	
 		
-	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0 or VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:
-		act 'Do as Niko says':	
+	elseif VK = 3 and pcs_vag = 0:
+		act 'Do as he says':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You slowly approach the sink then spread your legs as Niko approaches behind you. You can feel tears streaming down your face as Niko drops his pants then rubs his penis against your vagina before forcing it inside, causing a powerful jolt of pain to fill your vagina. Niko waste no time and begin thrusting his penis inside you very roughly as he whispers in your ear, "Oops there goes your virginity. How does it feel to be a real woman?" You lower your head in silence while trying to focus on anything but the pain.'		
+			'You slowly approach the sink and spread your legs as Niko approaches you from behind. You feel tears streaming down your face as he drops his pants and rubs his dick against your pussy before forcing it inside you, causing a powerful jolt of pain to shoot through you. He wastes no time and begins thrusting his dick inside you very roughly as he whispers in your ear. "Oops. There goes your virginity. How does it feel to be a real woman?" You lower your head in shamed silence while trying to focus on anything but the pain.'		
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -385,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				if pcs_vag = 0:pcs_vag += 1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/virgin.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko quickly increases the pace of his thrusts, fucking you harder as you close your eyes, waiting for it to be over. Niko''s breathing hastens before stopping as he pulls out of you then begins spraying his warm seed over your ass. You wait for Niko to finish milking his penis on your ass before asking, "May I please go now?" Niko catches his breath before replying, "Yeah sure. You''re all payed up for today." You quickly grab a few paper towels then clean the blood off of your legs before grabbing your clothes and getting dressed. After you are fully dressed, you quickly run out of the boys restroom.'
+				'Niko quickly increases the pace of his thrusts, fucking you harder as you close your eyes, waiting for it to be over. His breathing hastens before stopping as he pulls out and begins squirting his cum over your ass. You wait for him to finish before asking "May I please go now?" Niko catches his breath before replying. "Yeah sure. You''re all paid up for today." You quickly grab a few paper towels and clean the blood off your legs before grabbing your clothes and getting dressed. Once you''re fully dressed, you quickly run out of the restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -400,7 +401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You slowly approach the sink then spread your legs as Niko approaches behind you. You can feel Niko''s penis pressing against your vagina before he shoves it inside, evoking a moan from you, feeling his dick rapidly entering you. Niko whispers in your ear, "You like it when I shove my dick inside you, don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+			'You slowly approach the sink and spread your legs as Niko approaches you from behind. You feel Niko''s dick pressing against your pussy before he shoves it inside, evoking a moan from you as Niko whispers in your ear. "You like it when I shove my dick inside you, don''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -408,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/vaginal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You turn to Niko as he points toward the mirror and says, "Look in that mirror. Do you know what you see? A filthy whore, getting what she deserves. Get used to that sight." You do as he says as you feel and see tears running down your cheeks. Watching you in tears must have pushed Niko to the edge as he pulls out of you then begins covering your back with his warm seed. After Niko milks his penis on your back, he says, "Remember your place <<$pcs_firstname>> and never try to avoid me again." He then buttons his pants before leaving the restroom.'
+				'You turn to Niko as he points toward the mirror and says "Look. Do you know what I see? A filthy whore, getting what she deserves. Get used to that sight." You do as he says as tears run down your cheeks. Seeing this must have pushed Niko to the edge as he suddenly pulls out and his cum starts splattering over your back. "Remember your place bitch and never try to avoid me again." he snarls before buttoning his pants and leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -418,20 +419,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			end
 		end
 		
-	elseif VK = 4:		
+	elseif VK = 4 and pcs_vag = 0:		
 		act 'Vaginal':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You can feel Niko penis pushing its way inside of your vagina, causing a jolt of pleasure to fill you. Niko continues fucking you as he leans forward and whispers in your ear. "Who do you belong to bitch?" Knowing better than to anger Niko, you reluctantly reply, "I belong to you Niko." Niko chuckles as he responds, "Yes you do and never forget it." Niko wraps one of his arms around your stomach and the other on your leg then lifts you up.'
+			'You squirm as Niko turns you around and lifts you up by the legs. Tears well up in your eyes as you feel his dick pushing its way inside your virgin pussy, causing you to cry out as a wave of pain shoots through you. He wastes no time and begins thrusting his dick inside you very roughly as he whispers in your ear. "Oops. There goes your virginity. How does it feel to be a real woman?" You lower your head in shamed silence while trying to focus on anything but the pain.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
 			act 'Continue':	
 				*clr & cla
+				if pcs_vag = 0:pcs_vag += 1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/thighs.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on, as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
+				'Niko continues fucking you as he whispers in your ear. "How are you liking it?" You look back at him and reluctantly nod, which seems to turn him on as he quickly pulls out and cums on the floor in front of you. You turn to him once he''s finished. "Are you satisfied? Can I leave now?" He gives your ass a firm smack. "You can go now, but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly clean yourself up before getting dressed and leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -439,13 +441,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				act 'Finish':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'FedorMisc', 'Restroom'
 			end
 		end
-		
+	
+	elseif VK = 4:
+	    act 'Vaginal':
+		*clr & cla
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/vaginal1.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'Niko quickly turns you around and lifts you up by the legs. You feel his dick pushing its way inside your pussy, causing a wave of pleasure to fill you. Niko starts fucking you as he leans forward and whispers in your ear. "Who do you belong to bitch?" Knowing better than to anger him, you reluctantly reply "I belong to you Niko." He chuckles as he responds "Yes you do. Never forget that."'
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
+			gs 'stat'
+			
+			act 'Continue':	
+				*clr & cla
+				gs'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/thighs.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'Niko continues fucking you as he whispers in your ear. "How are you liking it?" You look back at him and nod, which seems to turn him on as he quickly pulls out and cums on the floor in front of you. You turn to him once he''s finished. "Are you satisfied? Can I leave now?" He gives your ass a firm smack. "You can go now, but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes and get dressed before leaving the restroom.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
+			
+				act 'Finish':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'FedorMisc', 'Restroom'
+			end
+		end
+	
 	elseif VK = 5:		
 		act 'Anal':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You feel Niko''s penis pressing against your anus then feel him suddenly force it inside you, evoking a groan of pain to escape you. Niko wastes no time as he begins fucking your ass roughly. You let out a few groans of pain as Niko continues fucking your ass before leaning forward then whispering in your ear. "How does it feel to know that you belong to me?" You look back at him in silence, not knowing what he wants you to say. Niko grins as he smacks your ass firmly.'
+			'You feel Niko''s dick pressing against your anus before he suddenly forces it inside you, evoking a groan of pain from you. He wastes no time and begins roughly fucking your ass. You let out a few groans of pain as he continues fucking you before leaning forward and whispering in your ear. "How does it feel knowing that you belong to me?" You look back at him in silence, not knowing what he wants you to say, and he grins as he firmly smacks your ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -453,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Knowing that the faster Niko cums, the quicker this torment will be over, turn to face Niko then stare into his eyes. Niko begins struggling to hold back from cumming then begins groaning, filling up your ass with his warm seed. You focus on the throbbing of his hard penis in your ass, filling you with his warm cum. After Niko finishes, he pulls out of you, causing a stream of cum to leak out of your ass and onto the floor. Niko then says, "You did good <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you tomorrow." You then gather your clothes and get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
+				'Knowing that the faster he cums, the quicker this torment will be over, you turn to stare into his eyes. He struggles to hold back and begins groaning as he blows his load in your ass. He pulls out once he''s finished, causing a stream of cum to leak out of your ass and onto the floor. "You did good <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see you tomorrow." You gather your clothes and get dressed before leaving the restroom.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -468,7 +492,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You look back at Niko as he pushes his penis inside you, causing a sharp pain to fill your ass, evoking a groan from you as you hold onto the bottom of the urinal. You can only feel the pain building up in your ass as Niko continues roughly fucking you. Niko leans forward and grabs onto your hair as he says, "You really shouldn''t have tried to avoid me bitch. This could have been quick and painless but you had to piss me off."'
+			'You look back at Niko as he pushes his dick inside your ass, evoking a groan from you as a sharp pain shoots through you. You grasp onto the bottom of the urinal as Niko starts roughly fucking your ass and grabs onto your hair. "You really shouldn''t have tried to avoid me bitch. This could have been quick and painless, but you had to piss me off."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -476,9 +500,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/payback/rough/anal3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko suddenly lifts you up by your hair then pulls you toward one of the stalls before shoving your head into the toilet. You hold your breath as the water covers your face, hoping that Niko lets you out to breath soon. Niko pulls you out of the toilet for a few seconds to catch your breath before shoving you back in. All you can think about is not drowning, even as your anus is growing sore from Niko hard penis ramming inside. After a few more seconds, Niko suddenly pulls you out of the toilet as he begins groaning, filling your ass with his warm seed.' 
-				*nl
-				'Niko continues thrusting his penis inside you, milking it completely. After Niko finishes, he says, "Now hopefully you''ve learned your lesson and won''t try to avoid me again." You turn to him then meekly nod as he buttons his pants then leaves the restroom while you remain to catch your breath.'
+				'You squeal as he suddenly lifts you by your hair and drags you into one of the stalls before shoving your head into the toilet. You hold your breath as the water covers your face, hoping that he lets you out to breathe soon. Thankfully, he pulls you out of the toilet for a few seconds to catch your breath before shoving you back in. After a few more seconds, he suddenly pulls you out of the toilet as he begins groaning; you feel a warmth filling your ass.' 
+				'He gives your ass a hard slap once he''s finished. "Now hopefully you''ve learned your lesson and won''t try to avoid me again." You turn to him and meekly nod as he buttons his pants and leaves the restroom while you try to catch your breath.'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -500,14 +523,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You move toward Fedor then wrap your arms around him as you say, "Fyodor I... I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back as he responds, "Please <<$pcs_firstname>>, tell me what''s wrong." You can feel tears streaming down your face as you reply, "Nikolai Volkov has been bullying me at lunch everyday. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist, "That little gopnik shit! I will make him pay. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>> the next time he tries I will bash his face in!"'
+	'You move toward Fedor and wrap your arms around him. "Fedor I... I need your help." Fedor gently rubs your back. "Please <<$pcs_nickname>>, tell me what''s wrong." Tears stream down your face as you reply. "Niko has been bullying me at lunch every day. Please make him stop." Fedor clenches his fist. "That little gopnik shit! I''ll make him pay. Don''t worry, the next time he tries, I''ll bash his face in!"'
 	
-	act 'Thank Fedor':
+	act 'Thank him':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'		
-		'You quickly look up to Fedor then give him a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Fyodor, I always feel so safe with you." Fedor wipes your tears as he responds, "You will always be safe with me and I will make sure that gopnik punk finds out the hard way what happens when someone fucks with you." You then reply, "Thank you Fyodor." before hearing the school bell. Fedor says, "Well it''s time for class. Don''t forget that i will always keep you safe." You give Fedor a loving smile before walking toward your next class.'
+		'You quickly look up to Fedor and give him a passionate kiss. "Thanks Fedor, I always feel so safe with you." Fedor wipes your tears as he responds. "You''ll always be safe with me. I''ll make sure that gopnik punk finds out the hard way what happens when someone fucks with you." You thank him again before hearing the school bell ring. "Well it''s time for class. Don''t forget that I''ll always keep you safe." You give Fedor a loving smile before walking toward your next class.'
 	
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -521,7 +544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I... I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face. "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You hesitate before looking him in the eye. "I... I want you to leave me alone." He just chuckles. "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you''ll pay me in both money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand and begins pulling you into the restroom.'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -529,7 +552,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big5.jpg"></center>'
-		'After turning the corner, Niko suddenly recoils back as Fedor''s fist makes contact, causing Niko to drop to the ground, holding his face. Fedor shouts, "HOW DARE YOU TOUCH <<$pcs_firstname>>! I WILL SHOW YOU WHAT HAPPENS WITH SHITHEADS LIKE YOU." Fedor begins punching Niko as he tries to block the blows. Suddenly Fedor gets tackled.'		
+		'After turning the corner, Niko suddenly recoils as Fedor''s fist makes contact, causing Niko to drop to the ground holding his face. "HOW DARE YOU TOUCH <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''LL SHOW YOU WHAT HAPPENS WITH SHITHEADS LIKE YOU!" Fedor screams as he begins punching Niko, who tries to block the blows before Fedor is suddenly tackled.'		
 
 		act 'Turn to Fedor':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -537,7 +560,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Roman Yakovlev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big157.jpg"></center>'
-			'You turn to see Roman Yakovlev trying to hold Fedor down while Niko holds his face in pain, still unable to recover. Roman punches Fedor before Fedor returns the blow, knocking Roman off of him before Niko finally recovers then kicks Fedor in the face, knocking him to the ground then Roman grabs onto Fedor''s arms then holds him down while Niko begins kicking him in the ribs. You grab Niko by his shirt then pull him away before he slaps you across the face. Niko winds up to kick Fedor again when someone''s fist rams into his face.'
+			'You turn to see Roman trying to hold Fedor down while Niko holds his face in pain, still unable to recover. Roman punches Fedor before Fedor returns the blow, knocking Roman off him before Niko finally recovers and kicks Fedor in the face, knocking him to the ground before Roman grabs onto Fedor''s arms and holds him down while Niko begins kicking him in the ribs. You grab Niko by his shirt and pull him away before he slaps you across the face. Niko winds up to kick Fedor again when someone''s fist rams into his face.'
 
 			act 'See who it was':	
 				*clr & cla
@@ -545,14 +568,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fedor Help 2':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You turn to see Ivan Prokhorov standing over Niko. Ivan immediately rushes toward Roman, grabbing him by his arms then lifting him up before slamming him onto the ground. "Teaming up on my friend and his girl? Not on my watch." Ivan then helps Fedor up before lifting up his foot then driving it into Roman''s face. Fedor takes a second to recover before immediately climbing on Niko then repeatedly punching him. After a few punches, Ivan pulls Fedor off then says, "Come on man, it''s done."'
+				'You turn to see Ivan standing over Niko. Ivan immediately rushes toward Roman, grabbing him by his arms and lifting him up before slamming him onto the ground. "Teaming up on my friend and his girl? Not on my watch." Ivan helps Fedor up before kicking Roman''s face. Fedor takes a second to recover before immediately climbing on Niko and repeatedly punching him. After a few punches, Ivan pulls Fedor off. "Come on man, it''s done."'
 				
 				act 'Place your hand on Fedor''s shoulder':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 1
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath before asking you, "Are you alright <<$pcs_firstname>>? You took quite a hit there." You quickly hug Fedor as you reply, "I''m great, thanks to you two." Ivan replies, "It was nothing special. I just won''t let punks like them, hurt my friends." Fedor wraps his arms around you then says, "This is the last time that punk will ever hurt you. You are safe." You return the hug then hear the class bell, signaling the beginning of class. Fedor takes your hand then leads you toward you next class. While Ivan stays behind to "Chat" with Niko and Roman.'
+					'Fedor takes a few seconds to catch his breath before turning to you. "Are you okay <<$pcs_nickname>>? You took quite a hit there." You quickly hug him. "I''m great, thanks to you two." Ivan smiles at you. "It was nothing special. I won''t let some punks like them hurt my friends." Fedor wraps his arms around you. "This is the last time that punk will ever hurt you. You''re safe now." You return the hug and hear the class bell, signaling the beginning of class. Fedor takes your hand and leads you toward your next class while Ivan stays behind to "chat" with Niko and Roman.'
 
 					act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -569,7 +592,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You reply, "I... I want you to leave me alone." Niko chuckles as he replies, "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you will be paying me in both, money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand then begins pulling you into the restroom...'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face. "You showed up? Good. How will you be paying today?" You hesitate before looking him in the eye. "I... I want you to leave me alone." He just chuckles. "Well that''s not up to you now is it? For wasting my time, you''ll pay me in both money and pleasure. Now let''s get moving." Niko grabs your hand and begins pulling you into the restroom.'
 	
 	act 'Continue':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -577,14 +600,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Fyodor Help':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/down.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you reach the restroom, Niko tosses you to the ground then approaches you when suddenly, Fedor quickly walks into the room and punches Niko in his face, knocking him to the ground before climbing on him and punching him repeatedly. After a few punches Niko says, "Whoa chill out man, <<$pcs_firstname>> and I were just playing a game. Do you see? She is laughing right now." Fedor turns to you just as Niko winds up his fist, ramming it into Fedor''s face before quickly pushing Fedor off of him then running to the door. You quickly grab Niko''s shirt turning him to you before scratching him in his face then pushing him onto the ground, giving Fedor enough time to recover then climb on top of Niko again, punching him in the face.'	
+		'As you reach the restroom, Niko tosses you to the ground and approaches you when Fedor quickly walks into the room and punches Niko in the face, knocking him to the ground before climbing on him and punching him repeatedly. After a few punches, Niko holds his hands up. "Whoa, chill out man! <<$pcs_nickname>> and I were just playing! See? She''s laughing right now." Fedor turns to you just as Niko winds up his fist, ramming it into Fedor''s face before quickly pushing Fedor off him and running to the door. You quickly grab Niko''s shirt, turning him to you before scratching his face and pushing him on the ground, giving Fedor enough time to recover and climb on top of Niko and start punching him again.'	
 
 		act 'Enjoy the show':	
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/console2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You watch in satisfaction at Niko getting what he deserves, for a few seconds before Fedor finally calms down then climbs off of Niko then walks up to you and wraps his arms around you before asking, "Are you alright? He didn''t hurt you did he?" You reply, "No but I did enjoy you hurting him." Fedor chuckles, "Anyone who messes with you, wil share the same treatment..." You lean forward then give Fedor a passionate kiss which lasts for almost a full minute. After the kiss, Fedor says, "You should get back to recess before you miss it. I will have a chat with NIko. Go on, enjoy your recess." You give Fedor a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the restroom.'
+			'You watch in satisfaction as Niko gets what he deserves before Fedor finally calms down and climbs off Niko. He walks up and wraps his arms around you. "Are you okay? He didn''t hurt you did he?" You hug him tighter. "No, but I did enjoy you hurting him." Fedor chuckles. "Anyone who messes with you will share the same fate." You lean forward and give him a passionate kiss which lasts for almost a full minute. "You should get back before someone notices. I''ll have a chat with Niko. Go on, enjoy your break." You give Fedor a kiss on the cheek before walking out of the restroom.'
 			
 			act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 		end	
@@ -598,14 +621,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/sad1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Ivan then downcast your eyes before saying, "Ivan I need your help... I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_firstname>>? You can tell me."'	
+	'You walk up to Ivan and downcast your eyes. "Ivan I need your help... I..." Ivan''s face saddens as he wraps his arms around you. "What''s wrong <<$pcs_nickname>>? You can tell me."'	
 	
-	act 'Tell Ivan':	
+	act 'Tell him':	
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Ivan Prokhorov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/angry1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You try to collect your thoughts before saying, "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he has been raping me at lunchtime and I..." Ivan angrily slams one of the lockers as he says, "That slimy little shit! This will not continue <<$pcs_firstname>>, I will put an end to it. You don''t need to worry. I will end this." You wrap your arms around Ivan then say, "Thank you so much. I didn''t know what to do." Ivan replies, "That kind of shit is unacceptable. You will be safe again, I promise you that." You give Ivan a soft kiss on the cheek then walk away while he angrily begins cracking his knuckles.'			
+		'You collect your thoughts before speaking. "Ever since I broke up with Niko, he''s been raping me at lunchtime and I..." Ivan angrily slams his fist on one of the lockers. "That slimy little shit! This won''t continue <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll put an end to it. You don''t need to worry." You wrap your arms around him. "Thank you so much. I didn''t know what to do." Ivan smiles at you. "That kind of shit is unacceptable. You''ll be safe again, I promise you that." You give Ivan a soft kiss on the cheek and walk away while he angrily begins cracking his knuckles.'			
 	
 		act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -618,14 +641,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Goo..." Niko quickly pauses when he notices Ivan approaching. Ivan drives his fist into Niko''s stomach then says, "I hear that you have been giving <<$pcs_firstname>> a hard time. Allow me to return the favor." Ivan then begins chocking Niko as Niko tries to squirm out of Ivan steel grasp. After a few seconds, Ivan releases Niko, causing Niko to drop to the ground. Ivan stands over Niko and says, "That was a warning. Give <<$pcs_firstname>> a hard time again and I won''t hold back."'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face. "You showed up? Goo..." He quickly pauses when he notices Ivan approaching. Ivan drives his fist into Niko''s stomach.  "I hear that you''ve been giving <<$pcs_nickname>> a hard time. Allow me to return the favor." He then begins chocking Niko, who tries to squirm out of Ivan''s grasp. After a few seconds, Ivan releases Niko, causing Niko to drop to the ground. "That was a warning. Give <<$pcs_nickname>> a hard time again and I won''t hold back."'
 	
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/hug1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko quickly nods, obviously frightened of Ivan. Ivan then gives you a hug as he says, "You''ll be fine now. If he bothers you again then let me know and I will set him straight." You gratefully nod as Ivan turns around then walks away. You turn around to leave when you notice Vitek walking up to Niko then lightly places his foot on his back as he says, "I always told you that your big mouth would get you into trouble." Vitek then steps off of Niko then laughs as he walks away.'		
+		'Niko quickly nods, obviously frightened of Ivan. Ivan then gives you a hug. "You''ll be fine now. If he bothers you again, then let me know and I''ll set him straight." You gratefully nod as Ivan turns around and walks away. You turn around to leave when you notice Vitek walking up to Niko and place his foot on his back. "I always told you that your big mouth would get you into trouble." he laughs before he steps off Niko and walks away.'		
 
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
@@ -638,23 +661,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Nush Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face as he says, "You showed up? Goo..." Niko never finishes the sentence as Anushka rushes up behind him, with a baseball bat and hits him with it, he recoils and turns only to get hit by Alyona wielding a bat as well. He tries to fight back, but the surprise of the sudden attack and there being two of them makes it hard. When he manages to get his hands on one of the bats the other one just smacks him in the legs and he goes down holding his knee. Finally he just curls up as best he can to protect himself, as the two girls wail on him with the bats.'
+	'You approach Niko and a confident grin covers his face. "You showed up? Goo..." He never finishes the sentence as Anushka rushes up behind him with a baseball bat and hits him with it. He recoils and turns, only to get hit by Alyona wielding another bat. He tries to fight back, but the surprise of the sudden attack and being outnumbered makes it hard. When he manages to get his hands on one of the bats, the other one smacks him in the legs and he goes down holding his knee. He curls up on the floor as the girls beat him with the bats.'
 	
 	act 'Just watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/down.jpg"></center>'		
-		'They finally stop hitting him. "Roll over pig!" Anushka says to Nikolai.'		
-		'He rolls over gingerly and says angrily, as he starts to get up but when Alyona pulls the bat back like she is about to swing again he stays laying on his back. "What the fuck Nush, what did I ever do to you?"'
-		'Anushka glares at him. "<<$pcs_firstname>> told us what you have been doing to her, it ends now."'
+		'After a few minutes, they stop. "Roll over pig!" Anushka snarls at him.'		
+		'He gingerly rolls over and starts to get up, but stays on the ground when Alyona threatens him with her bat. "What the fuck Nush?! What did I ever do to you?"'
+		'Anushka glares at him. "<<$pcs_nickname>> told us what you''ve been doing to her. It ends now."'
 		*nl
-		'He tries his charming smile you have seen so many times before. "Look I don''t know... "'
-		'He never gets to finish it, before Anushka interrupts him. "Save it pig, I don''t believe a single fucking word you say. So it ends now, if we have to come back we won''t be stopping until you are a bloody mess got it?"'
-		'Alyona pulls out her knife to help make her point. "And I will cut your balls off next time and feed them to you."'
+		'He tries using his charming smile that you''ve seen so many times before. "Look, I don''t know... "'
+		'Anushka interrupts him. "Save it pig! I don''t believe a single fucking word you say. It ends now. If we have to come back, we won''t stop until you''re a bloody mess! Got it?"'
+		'Alyona pulls out her knife to help make her point. "And I''ll cut your balls off and feed them to you."'
 		*nl
-		'Nikolai looks back and forth between them, then gives you a angry glare before looking back to them and sighs. "Fine, the bitch isn''t worth it anyways."'
-		'Anushka spits on him. "Fuck you!" Then she turns to you. "Why don''t you head back to class, we will keep him here a bit longer and make sure he understands." You see Nikolai''s smile falter a bit at that. You just nod and start walking off, you glance back to see Niko sitting up while still on the ground looking truly defeated, you can''t help but smile as you go to finish the rest of your break.'
+		'Niko looks back and forth between them, then gives you an angry glare before looking back at them and sighing. "Fine, the bitch isn''t worth it anyways."'
+		'Anushka spits on him. "Fuck you!" She then turns to you. "Why don''t you head back to class? We''ll keep him here a bit longer and make sure he understands." You see Niko''s smile fade as you nod and start walking away. You glance back to see him still on the ground looking truly defeated; you can''t help but smile as you leave.'
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	end
 end	
@@ -668,7 +691,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You say to Vitek, "Um Viktor I need..." Dan unintentionally cuts you off, "Oh yeah, have you guys seen that big breasted bitch handing out freebies by..." Vitek says, "Hold that thought. <<$pcs_nickname>> we''re having guy talk right now, you and I can chat later." You try to add, "But I really need..." Vasily suddenly intentionally falls to the ground then says, "You need to cheer up, you look so glum. Here, I will tell you a joke rated everyone..." Dan adds, "You mean rated immature, right?" The guys begin laughing as you get more agitated at them ignoring you.'
+	'"Um Vitek, I need..." you start, but Dan unintentionally cuts you off. "Have you guys seen that big breasted bitch handing out freebies by..." Vitek interrupts him. "Hold that thought. <<$pcs_nickname>> we''re having guy talk right now. We can chat later." You try to speak up, but Vasily intentionally interrupts you. "You need to cheer up <<$pcs_nickname>>, you look so glum. Here, I''ll tell you a joke." The guys start laughing amongst themselves as you get more and more agitated at them ignoring you.'
 	
 	act 'Shout out':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -676,7 +699,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You suddenly scream, "NIKO RAPED ME!!!" The guys freeze in place before Vitek says, "He did what?" Niko suddenly stands up then begins sprinting toward the door when Vasily shoulder tackles him into the wall, slamming him against it. Roman tries to help Niko when Dan stands in front of him, blocking him from interfering. Roman punches Dan in the face, sending him recoiling back before Vasily returns the punch, staggering Roman as Dan tackle him to the ground.' 
+		'"NIKO RAPED ME!!!" you scream and the guys freeze. "He did WHAT?!" Niko suddenly stands up and begins sprinting toward the door when Vasily shoulder tackles him into the wall. Roman tries to help Niko but Dan stands in front of him, blocking him from interfering. Roman punches Dan in the face, but Vasily returns the punch, staggering Roman before Dan tackles him to the ground.' 
 		
 		act 'Turn to Vitek':	
 			*clr & cla
@@ -684,7 +707,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 			gs'stat'		
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/down.jpg"></center>'		
-			'As Dan and Vasily deal with Roman, Vitek lunges forward then drives his foot into Niko''s face, slamming his head against the wall before shouting, "YOU FUCKING WORTHLESS SACK OF SHIT!!! HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MY GIRL!!!"'	
+			'As Dan and Vasily deal with Roman, Vitek lunges forward and drives his foot into Niko''s face, slamming his head against the wall. "YOU FUCKING WORTHLESS SACK OF SHIT!!! HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MY GIRL!!!"'	
 			
 			act 'Continue watching':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -692,7 +715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="maroon"><<"Vasily [Shulga] Shulgin">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big11.jpg"></center>'
-				'Vitek continuously kicks Niko in the ribs as Vasily joins him while saying, "We''ll show you what happens to those who fuck with <<$pcs_firstname>>." Dan grabs onto Roman''s head then holds him against the wall as Vitek says, "Enough, you two. This shit is getting old." Roman nods and Dan releases him before Roman leaves the room.'
+				'Vitek continuously kicks Niko in the ribs as Vasily joins him. "We''ll show you what happens to those who fuck with <<$pcs_nickname>>!!" Dan grabs onto Roman''s head and holds him against the wall before Vitek speaks up. "Enough, you two. This shit is getting old." Roman nods and Dan releases him before Roman leaves the room.'
 
 				act 'Continue watching':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -700,11 +723,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help':
 					gs'stat'	
 					'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'					
-					'Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching you, wrapping his arms around you and saying, "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I will make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, and I''ll see you later." You lean forward, and give Vitek a passionate kiss before saying, "Thank you Viktor. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives your ass a light smack before responding, "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
+					'Vitek takes a few seconds to catch his breath before approaching and wrapping his arms around you. "I''m sorry that I didn''t listen to you, but don''t worry, I''ll make this sack of shit pay for touching you. You shouldn''t stick around for this. Go on, I''ll see you later." You lean forward and give Vitek a passionate kiss. "Thanks. I always feel so safe with you." Vitek gives your ass a light smack. "You know it <<$pcs_nickname>>. Now get going, I have some business to finish here." You happily nod before leaving the restroom.'	
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss3.mp4"></video></center>'
 					
-					act 'Continue toward the hallway':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end	
 			end	
 		end
@@ -720,29 +743,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vitek Help 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Vitek and he says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, want a drink?" You reply, "I need to ask for your help. Niko has been raping me at lunch and..." Vitek''s eyes widen as he says, "He did what?" You remain quite as you feel tears dripping down your cheeks. Vitek tosses his bottle to the ground, causing a loud shatter which draws everyone in the disco''s attention. Vitek angrily walks over the broken glass as he approaches Niko. Niko suddenly asks, "Whoa what''s going on?" Vitek replies, "YOU LAID YOUR HANDS ON MY GIRL!?"'
+	'You approach Vitek and he smiles. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, want a drink?" You shake your head. "I need your help. Niko has been raping me at lunch and..." Vitek''s eyes widen in rage. "He did WHAT?!" You remain quiet as tears stream down your cheeks. Vitek tosses his bottle to the ground, causing a loud shatter which draws everyone''s attention. Vitek angrily walks over the broken glass as he approaches Niko. "Whoa, what''s going on?" he asks as Vitek continues walking towards him. "YOU LAID YOUR HANDS ON MY GIRL!?"'
 	
 	act 'See what happens next':	
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/Strela/fvsv.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko immediately tries to run away when Vasily drives his fist into Niko''s face before saying, "You don''t fuck with <<$pcs_nickname>> without dealing with us." You can feel your heart warming up as you realize how safe you are with Vitek and Vasily around. Niko continuously tries to crawl away but is grabbed by Vitek, who lifts him up then slams him onto the ground before climbing on top of him then repeatedly punching him in the face.' 
+		'Niko immediately tries to run away, but Vasily drives his fist into Niko''s face. "You don''t fuck with <<$pcs_nickname>> without dealing with us." You can feel your heart warming as you realize how safe you are with Vitek and Vasily around. Niko continuously tries to crawl away, but is grabbed by Vitek, who lifts him up and slams him onto the ground before climbing on top of him and repeatedly punching him in the face.' 
 	
 		act 'Turn to Vasily':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'	
 			'<center><b><h4><font color="maroon"><<"Vasily [Shulga] Shulgin">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big11.jpg"></center>'		
-			'Vasily approaches you then says, "You are safe now <<$pcs_firstname>>. We will make sure that Niko never touches you again." You give Vasily a hug as you respond, "Thank you all so much for your help. You''re the best." Vasily gives you a pat on the back before saying, "You don''t need to thank us. It''s a mans job to keep girls safe. Here have a drink, on me." Vasily hands you a bottle of beer then turns back around to join Vitek and Dan in beating up Niko.'				
+			'Vasily approaches you. "You''re safe now <<$pcs_firstname>>. We''ll make sure that Niko never touches you again." You give Vasily a hug. "Thank you all so much for your help. You''re the best." Vasily gives you a pat on the back. "You don''t need to thank us. It''s a man''s job to keep girls safe. Here, have a drink on me." Vasily hands you a bottle of beer and turns back to join Vitek and Dan in beating up Niko.'				
 		
 			act 'Walk away':gt 'pav_disco'
 			
-			act 'Have a drink then walk away': gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer' & gt 'pav_disco'
+			act 'Have a drink and walk away': gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer' & gt 'pav_disco'
 		end
 	end	
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Albina Help'
+    *clr & cla
+	AlbVsNiko = 2 
+	NikoPayback = 3
+	minut += 5
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/4.jpg"></center>'
+	'You approach Niko and he glares at you, causing you to freeze. "What do you want, bitch?" he snarls and you look at him fearfully, but he just scoffs. "Don''t act stupid. You asked that bitchy buttslut whore of a friend to help you out. Well guess what? Wish granted, so you''re off the hook. Now piss off!"'
+    'Not wanting to anger him further, you quickly walk away as he mutters under his breath about Albina screwing him over. Whatever she done, Albina has saved you from Niko''s torment. You smile happily as you continue on your way.'
+	
+	act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
+	end
+end
 
 
+	
 --- NikoPayback ---------------------------------
 

+ 178 - 182
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. When you enter the locker room, Niko closes the door then takes a quick look around to see if anyone is there. Niko walks up behind you then whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_firstname>> take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks, removing all your clothes. Niko collects your clothes then puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous when you see Niko packing up your clothes. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I won''t be able to get dressed. I''m sure Niko knows what he is doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck and leads you to the locker room. When you enter, he closes the door and takes a quick look around to see if anyone is present. He then walks up behind you and whispers in your ear. "Take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks and he collects your clothes and puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Why is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I won''t be able to get dressed! I''m sure he knows what he''s doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 
 	act 'Take a deep breath':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/jewelry/cuffs.jpg"></center>'
-		'You reassure yourself as you see Niko take out the collar that you wore the other day then places it around your neck, followed by a pair of matching leather cuffs which Niko begins placing around your wrists. You can feel your heart racing even faster.'
+		'You reassure yourself as you see Niko take out the collar that you wore the other day and place it around your neck, followed by a pair of matching leather cuffs which he begins placing around your wrists. You can feel your heart racing even faster.'
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -22,23 +22,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 			NikoDate_Day = daystart
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Niko attaches the leash to your cuffs then walks you toward a nearby pipe before pushing you down, on your knees. Niko begins unbuttoning his pants then takes off his pants before pressing his penis against your lips, "Open your mouth." You obediently do as he commends, opening your mouth as his dick slides into your mouth then brushes against your throat. You can feel your gag reflex kicking in, but do your best to suppress it, not want to disappoint Niko. After a few thrusts, Niko pauses then gives you a confident wink while pointing down to his penis.' 
+			'Niko attaches the leash to your cuffs and walks you towards a nearby pipe before pushing you down on your knees. He begins unbuttoning his pants before taking them off and pressing his dick against your lips. You obediently do as he commands, opening your mouth and letting his dick slide into your mouth. You feel your gag reflex kicking in as it brushes against your throat, but do your best to suppress it, not wanting to disappoint Niko. After a few thrusts, Niko pauses and gives you a confident wink while pointing down to his dick.' 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			
-			act 'Suck Niko''s penis':
+			act 'Suck his dick':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'			
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You immediately understand what he wants and begin sucking his dick thoroughly, trying your best to please him. Niko looks down to you and says, "You''re doing great <<$pcs_nickname>>, keep it up." Niko''s approval gives you a warm feeling in your heart. '+$OpenInnerThought+' I''m doing good. Niko likes what I''m doing for him. I only want to please you Niko. Please cum for me. I want your seed inside me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+				'You immediately understand what he wants and begin sucking his dick, trying your best to please him as he looks down at you. "You''re doing great <<$pcs_nickname>>, keep it up." Niko''s approval gives you a warm feeling in your heart.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
-								
-				act 'Make Niko cum':
+			
+				act 'Make him cum':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Niko begins lightly moaning before grabbing onto your hair then pushing his cock down your throat, filling your throat with his warm cum. You enjoy the warm feeling of his cum entering your throat and the rapid throbbing of his penis as it pumps your throat with his seed.' 
+					'Niko begins lightly moaning before grabbing your hair and pushing his cock down your throat, filling your throat with his warm cum. You enjoy the feeling of his dick pumping his cum down your throat.' 
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A189', 1
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker3.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'After Niko is fully spent, he puts his pants back on before kneeling forward to attach the leash to your collar, which he then ties to the nearby pipe. Niko gives you an approving pat on the head before leaving the locker room.'
+						'Once he''s fully spent, he puts his pants back on before kneeling forward to attach the leash to your collar, which he then ties to the nearby pipe. He gives you an approving pat on the head before leaving the locker room.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 						gs 'stat'
 						
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-							'You squirm for a few seconds, attempting to free yourself from the cuffs. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Where did Niko go? Did he forget to uncuff me? Maybe he just left to wash his hands before untying me. He wouldn''t forget about me. I just need to wait patiently, for him to return.'+$CloseInnerThought+' You spend the next few minutes trying to get comfortable until you hear the locker room door open. You quickly look up in excitement. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I knew that Niko wouldn''t forget me.'+$CloseInnerThought+' but as you look up...'
+							'You squirm for a few seconds, attempting to free yourself from the cuffs. You spend the next few minutes trying to get comfortable until you hear the locker room door open and quickly look up in excitement.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 							gs 'stat'
 							
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><b><font color="green"><<"Denis [Dan] Ryzhov">></font></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big10.jpg"></center>'
-								'You see Dan Ryzhov standing in front of you with a wolfish grin on his face, "Well well, I never thought that you were into this kind of stuff." He begins pinching your nipples. You then exclaim, "Dan stop! What are you doing here?" He replies, "Ever since I saw Niko walking you around then I''ve been keeping an eye on you and saw you doing some pretty naughty things and I like naughty things." He then lifts you to your feet.' 
+								'You''re shocked and disappointed when you see Dan standing in front of you with a wolfish grin on his face. "Well well, I never thought that you were into this kind of stuff." He begins pinching your nipples, making you squeal. "Dan, stop! What are you doing here?" He grins before replying. "Ever since I saw Niko walking you around, I''ve been keeping an eye on you and saw you doing some pretty naughty things. I like naughty things." He then lifts you to your feet.' 
 								gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 								gs 'stat'
 								
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 									minut += 2
 									gs'stat'							
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker4.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shout at Dan, "Let go of me, or I''ll scream!" Dan''s grin grows even wider and who would hear you? Everyone is in the cafeteria, laughing and shouting over each other. Even if someone heard you, would you like them to see you chained up naked, like this? Maybe I should just walk you into the cafeteria where you can scream all you want." '+$OpenInnerThought+'I''m completely naked. If he walks me into the cafeteria then I will be completely humiliated.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+									'"Let go of me or I''ll scream!" you exclaim, but Dan''s grin just grows wider. "Who would hear you, you dumb bitch? Everyone is in the cafeteria and even if someone heard you, would you want them to see you chained up naked like a dog? Maybe I should just walk you into the cafeteria where you can scream all you want?"'
 									gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 									gs 'stat'
 									
@@ -83,9 +83,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker5.mp4"></video></center>'	
-										'You lower your head in submission, "Please don''t do that. I''ll stay quiet." Dan quickly turns you around then unbuttons his pants before sliding his dick inside of your ass, causing a surge of pressure and pain to fill your ass. Dan wastes no time and begins fucking your ass, slowly at first then continues picking up the pace. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I can''t believe this is happening. Niko where are you? Please help me!'+$CloseInnerThought+' Dan continues fucking your ass when his phone begins ringing.'
-										*nl
-										'Dan doesn''t even stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end of the phone says something to Dan, to which he responds, "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_firstname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues, "Yeah, I''m in the locker room... sure you can come." '+$OpenInnerThought+'Did he just tell someone about this? Who was he talking too? I can''t do anything. Please tell me I''m dreaming.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+										'You lower your head in submission. "Please don''t do that. I''ll stay quiet." Dan quickly turns you around and unbuttons his pants before sliding his dick inside your ass, causing a sharp pain to fill your ass. Dan wastes no time and begins fucking your ass, slowly at first then continues picking up the pace. He continues fucking your ass when his phone starts ringing.'
+										'Dan doesn''t stop fucking you as he answers his phone. The person on the other end says something to Dan. "I can''t right now. I''m too busy fucking <<$pcs_nickname>>''s ass." Your eyes widen as Dan continues. "Yeah, I''m in the locker room. Sure, you can come."'
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'stat'
@@ -94,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/locker6.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Dan hangs up as he replies, "It was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try ask, "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open again then turn to see who it is...'
+											'Dan hangs up. "That was just Vitek, don''t worry about it." He begins fucking you harder as you try to speak. "Why... mmmmm... Why''d you... mmmm... tell him abo..." Dan wraps his hand around your neck, bringing your head to his face. "He is my friend and I believe in sharing, don''t you?" You suddenly hear the locker room door open and turn to see who it is.'
 											$orgasm_txt = ''
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -109,13 +108,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
 												if kotovloveQW > 0:
 													kotovloveQW = -1
-													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then Vitek begins shouting at Dan, "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat, "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a... whore and I can... grr... prove it. Check this out," Dan reaches into his pocket then pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. After a few more taps, he lift the phone up to Vitek''s face. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds followed by a groan then shortly after hear yourself saying,'
-													*nl
-													'"I love you Nikolai. I love you with all my heart." You suddenly realize what that Dan must have recorded you as you sucked Niko''s dick in the hallway, after school. '+$OpenInnerThought+'There is no way I can talk my way out of this. What will Viktor do to me?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Vitek watches the video for a few more seconds before releasing Dan''s throat then turning to you with his face; seething with rage. "You fucking worthless whore!" He then lifts his hand and smacks you hard, knocking you to the ground. Vitek begins smashing a nearby garbage can in rage then Dan places his hand on Vitek''s shoulder, "It''s alright Vitek, you don''t need her, you never did." Vitek takes a few seconds to calm himself then brushes Dan''s hand off his shoulder as he unbuttons his pants then pushes his dick against your lips. "What are you waiting for, whore? Start sucking." You meekly nod before wrapping your lips around his dick.'
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room and Vitek begins shouting. "What the fuck do you think you''re doing Dan? <<$pcs_firstname>> is mine!" Dan suddenly rams his dick far into your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. Vitek suddenly wraps his hand around Dan''s throat. "Answer my fucking question! What are you doing, fucking my girl?" Dan chokes on his words as he tries to explain. "<<$pcs_firstname>> is a... whore and I can... grr... prove it. Check this out..." Dan reaches into his pocket, pulls out his phone and taps the screen a few times. He holds his phone up so Vitek can see. A video plays where you hear sucking sounds, followed by a groan. You then hear yourself...'
+													'"I love you Nikolai! I love you with all my heart!" You realize that Dan must have recorded you sucking Niko''s dick in the hallway after school. Vitek watches the video for a few more seconds before releasing Dan''s throat and turning to you, his face seething with rage. "You fucking worthless whore!" He then lifts his hand and smacks you hard, knocking you to the ground before he begins smashing a nearby garbage can in rage before Dan places his hand on his shoulder. "It''s alright Vitek, you don''t need her. You never did." Vitek takes a few seconds to calm himself before brushing Dan''s hand off his shoulder as he unbuttons his pants. He walks up to you and pushes his dick against your lips. "What are you waiting for, whore? Start sucking." You meekly nod before wrapping your lips around his dick.'
 												else
-													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room then quickly begin whistling at you before Vitek says, "I thought that Dan was fucking with me when he told me about this." Dan suddenly rams his dick far in your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You feel his dick throbbing inside you as his warm cum fills your ass. "You take a second to catch your breath when you look up to see Vitek''s dick in your face. "What are you waiting for slut? Start sucking."'
-													*nl
-													'You plead, "Please don''t. I need to get back to..." Vitek wraps his hand around your throat. "That can wait, now get sucking." Dan pulls out of you, causing you to feel a rush of pressure as it evokes a moan to escape your mouth. Vitek immediately takes advantage of this and shoves his dick into your mouth.'
+													'Vitek and Vasily enter the room and quickly begin whistling at you before Vitek says "I thought Dan was fucking with me when he told me about this." Dan suddenly rams his dick far into your ass, causing you to scream as he fills your ass with his cum. You take a second to catch your breath and look up to see Vitek''s dick in your face. "What are you waiting for slut? Start sucking."'
+													'You plead with them. "Please don''t. I need to get back to..." Vitek wraps his hand around your throat. "That can wait, now get sucking." Dan pulls out of you, causing a moan to escape your mouth. Vitek immediately takes advantage of this and shoves his dick into your mouth.'
 												end
 												$orgasm_txt = ''
 												gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A10', 1
@@ -129,9 +126,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/sex/rand_scoolboy6.mp4"></video></center>'
 													if kotovloveQw = -1:
-														'You begin obediently sucking Vitek''s dick, knowing better than to anger him further. Vasily has his dick out too and begins poking your cheek with it. You quickly pull away from Vitek''s dick then suck on Vasily''s hard cock. You spend the next few minutes alternating between their cocks while Vitek roughly squeezes your breasts.' 
+														'You begin obediently sucking Vitek''s dick, knowing better than to anger him further. Vasily has his dick out too and begins poking your cheek with it. You quickly pull away from Vitek''s dick and suck on Vasily''s. You spend the next few minutes alternating between their cocks while Vitek roughly squeezes your breasts.' 
 													else
-														'You begin obediently sucking Vitek''s dick, knowing better than to anger him. Vasily has his dick out too and begins poking your cheek with it. You quickly pull away from Vitek''s dick then suck on Vasily''s hard cock. You spend the next few minutes alternating between their cocks while Vitek squeezes your breasts.' 
+														'You begin obediently sucking Vitek''s dick, knowing better than to anger him. Vasily has his dick out too and begins poking your cheek with it. You quickly pull away from Vitek''s dick and suck on Vasily''s. You spend the next few minutes alternating between their cocks while Vitek squeezes your breasts.' 
 													end
 													gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 													gs 'stat'											
@@ -142,22 +139,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 														gs'stat'
 														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow9.mp4"></video></center>'
 														if kotovloveQw = -1:
-															'Eventually Vitek grabs your hair, forcing his dick down your throat as he fills you throat with his cum. You swallow as much as you can before Vasily pulls your head to his dick then begins cumming on your face, covering your face in his warm cum. You take a few seconds catching your breath as you listen to them talk.'
+															'Eventually Vitek grabs your hair, forcing his dick down your throat as he fills your mouth with his cum. You swallow as much as you can before Vasily pulls your head up to his dick and cums on your face. You take a few seconds to catch your breath as you listen to them talk.'
 															*nl
-															'Dan: I told you that she was a freak. She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass.'
-															'Vasily: Come on guys we already have Sonia, we don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too.'
-															'Dan: She might me like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. I saw the teachers, leaving the cafeteria while I was on my way here.'
-															'Vitek: Sounds good to me. You hear that <<$pcs_firstname>>? You gonna get, what a whore like you, deserves. Now get up! You''re coming with us!'
+															'"I told you she was a freak! She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass!" Dan laughs.'
+															'"Come on guys, we already have Sonia. We don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too." Vasily responds.'
+															'"She might be Sonia 2.0! It would be wrong for us <i>not</i> to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. I saw the teachers leaving the cafeteria while I was on my way here." Dan adds.'
+															'"Sounds good to me. You hear that <<$pcs_nickname>>? You''re gonna get what a whore like you deserves. Now get up! You''re coming with us!" Vitek says while roughly pulling you to your feet.'
 														else
 															'Eventually Vitek grabs your hair, forcing his dick down your throat as he fills you throat with his cum. You swallow as much as you can before Vasily pulls your head to his dick then begins cumming on your face, covering your face in his warm cum. You take a few seconds catching your breath as you listen to them talk.'
 															*nl
-															'Dan: I told you that she was a freak. She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass.'
-															'Vasily: Come on guys, we already have Sonia, we don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too.'
-															'Dan: She might be like Sonia 2.0, It would be wrong, for us to NOT to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. The boys are still on the stairwell.'
+															'"I told you she was a freak! She loves getting fucked. She was basically begging me to fuck her ass!" Dan laughs.'
+															'"Come on guys, we already have Sonia. We don''t need <<$pcs_nickname>> too." Vasily responds.'
+															'"She might be Sonia 2.0! It would be wrong for us <i>not</i> to show her off. Now is the perfect time too. The boys are still on the stairwell." Dan adds.'
 															if hotcat >= 7 and salocatnow < 5:
-																'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
+																'"That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_nickname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it." Vitek responds before pulling you to your feet. "You''re coming with us."'
 															else
-																'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> looks like a overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
+																'"That sounds like a great idea. She looks like an overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it." Vitek responds before pulling you to your feet. "You''re coming with us."'
 															end
 														end	
 														gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A9', 1
@@ -172,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 															inhib_exp += 2
 															gs'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/wos.jpg"></center>'
-															''+$OpenInnerThought+'No this can''t be! Why is this happening? This will ruin my reputation forever. I will be an outcast like Sonia. The boys will abuse me. This can''t be happening.'+$CloseInnerThought+'"Please don''t do this. I will do anything! Please just let me go." Vitek pulls on your collar. "Less talking, more walking." Vitek walks you out of the locker room as Dan tells you, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, you will get used to it. Imagine it, every boy in school will be giving you a lot of attention. You will be popular among all the boys." You look back to Vasily and he whispers in your ear, "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I can''t help you. It''s too late." As he follows closely behind you.'
+															'"Please don''t do this! I''ll do anything! Just let me go!" Vitek roughly pulls on your collar. "Less talking, more walking." Vitek walks you out of the locker room as Dan laughs. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ll get used to it. Imagine it, every boy in school will be giving you a lot of attention. You''ll be <i>very</i> popular!" You look back at Vasily and he whispers in your ear. "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I can''t help you. It''s too late." He follows closely behind in silence.'
 															gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 															gs 'stat'
 															
@@ -182,10 +179,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																gs'stat'
 																'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'										
-																'Your heart is pounding and you can feel tears streaming down your eyes. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I''m going to lose everything. My life will never be the same again. Please let this be a bad dream. PLEEEEEEASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes, trying to wake up when you hear the sounds of chatting and laughter, informing you that you are passing the cafeteria.'
+																'Your heart is pounding and tears stream down your eyes. You close your eyes, trying to wake up from this nightmare when you hear the sounds of chatting and laughter, informing you that you are passing the cafeteria.'
 																*nl
 																if fedorkozlovQW > 1 or fedorKozlovQW < -10:
-																	'You suddenly hear Fedor Kozlov shouting, "What are you guys doing with <<$pcs_firstname>>?" Dan begins laughing as he replies, "Didn''t <<$pcs_firstname>> tell you? She wants to join Sonia as our fuck puppet." Fedor looks to you with concerning eyes, "They are lying, aren''t they?"'
+																	'You suddenly hear Fedor shouting. "What are you guys doing with <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Dan laughs as he replies. "Didn''t <<$pcs_nickname>> tell you? She wants to join Sonia as our fuck puppet." Fedor looks at you with concerning eyes. "They''re lying, aren''t they?"'
 																	if fedorKozlovQW < -10:
 																		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -202,9 +199,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																		*clr & cla
 																		gs'stat'
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say, punk?" Dan approaches them and says, "Hey, I''m sure that Fedor is just misunderstanding what''s going on. Let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl, who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
+																		'You run to Fedor and jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll keep you safe." Vitek shouts out. "Hey, she''s ours now! Give her back." Fedor stands his ground. "No, she''s mine!" Vitek walks up to him. "What did you say, punk?" Dan approaches them. "Hey, I''m sure that Fedor is just misunderstanding what''s going on. Let me explain. <<$pcs_nickname>> has been a very naughty girl, fucking other students." Fedor is taken aback. "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_nickname>> and she''s better than that." Dan snorts. "Oh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
 																		*nl
-																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_firstname>>?... why?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
+																		'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko and confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows pale. "Why <<$pcs_nickname>>?... why?" You lower your head. "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor clenches his fist. "<<$pcs_nickname>> promise me right here and now, that you will never see Niko ever again!"'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation','exhibitionism'
 																		gs 'stat'
 																		
@@ -220,15 +217,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			if fedorkozlovQW < -10:
 																				'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Viktor [Vitek] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-																				'Fedor leans over then whispers in your ear, "Run." You quickly begin running as Fedor runs to the nearby trash can then tosses it at Vitek. Vitek blocks it as Fedor charges him, tackling him to the ground. You continue running as Vitek and Dan, beat up on Fedor. You look back to see Dan climb off of Fedor then start to run to you before Vasily pretends to trip and falls on Dan, causing them both to fall to the ground, long enough for you to make you way to the locker room where you find the bag with your clothes in it. You spent a minute getting dressed before walking to the hallway, just outside of your classroom.'
+																				'Fedor leans over and whispers in your ear. "Run." You quickly begin running as Fedor tosses a nearby trash can at Vitek. Vitek blocks it as Fedor charges him, tackling him to the ground. You continue running as Vitek and Dan beat up Fedor. You look back to see Dan climb off Fedor and start running at you before Vasily pretends to trip and falls on Dan, causing them both to fall to the ground long enough for you to make you way to the locker room where you find the bag with your clothes in it. You spent a minute getting dressed before walking to the hallway just outside your classroom.'
 																			else
 																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/ivan/school/jocks.jpg"></center>'
-																				'Fedor suddenly pulls you behind him as he exclaims, "<<$pcs_firstname>> is not going with you and that''s final!" Vitek rams his fist into Fedor''s stomach, knocking him back and bringing him to his knees. You quickly sneak away as the gopniks surround Fedor, Shortly after, you hear someone shout, "What the fuck is going on here?" You see Ivan Prokhorov and a few of the other jocks, walking out of the cafeteria. Vitek shouts, "Get lost! This doesn''t concern you." Ivan walks right up to Vitek''s face then replies, "When you attack my friend then it does concern me." The jocks begin surrounding the gopniks.'
+																				'Fedor suddenly pulls you behind him. "<<$pcs_nickname>> is not going with you and that''s final!" Vitek rams his fist into Fedor''s stomach, knocking him back and bringing him to his knees. You quickly sneak away as the gopniks surround Fedor. Shortly after, you hear someone shouting. "What the fuck is going on here?" You see Ivan and a few of the other jocks walking out of the cafeteria as Vitek shouts at them. "Get lost! This doesn''t concern you." Ivan gets up in Vitek''s face. "When you attack my friend, then it does concern me." The jocks begin surrounding the gopniks.'
 																				*nl
-																				'Vitek looks around him as he spends a few seconds in silence before finally saying, "Oh well, I have better things to do anyway. Let''s get going boys." Vitek turns around then walks away as the jocks move out of their way, letting them go. Fedor turns to you then gives you a wink before being helped up by Ivan. You quickly run back to the locker room and find the bag with your clothes which you put on before returning to the hallway.'
+																				'Vitek looks around in silence before speaking. "Oh well, I have better things to do anyway. Let''s get going boys." Vitek turns around and walks away as the jocks move out of their way, letting them go. Fedor turns to you and gives you a wink before being helped up by Ivan. You quickly run back to the locker room and find the bag with your clothes, which you put on before returning to the hallway.'
 																			end
 
-																			act 'Hallway':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+																			act 'Go to the hallway':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 																		end
 
 																		act 'Remain silent [<font color=#FF00FF>Lose Fedor</font>]':
@@ -243,12 +240,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			gs'stat'
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorsad.jpg"></center>'
-																			'You lower you head in silence. Fedor sighs as he responds, "I guess that you care for him more... Fine have fun with your new boyfriend. I just don''t care anymore." Fedor walks away without saying another word.'
+																			'You lower you head in silence and Fedor sighs. "I guess that you care more for him than me... Fine. Have fun with your new boyfriend. I just don''t care anymore." He walks away without saying another word.'
 																			
 																			act 'Run to Fedor':
 																				*clr & cla
 																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/wos.jpg"></center>'
-																				'Vitek grabs you by your hair. "You''ve wasted enough of our time. Let''s get moving." Dan adds, "It''s time to show you off <<$pcs_firstname>>, Aren''t you excited?" The gopniks then walk you toward the stairwell.'
+																				'Vitek grabs you by the hair. "You''ve wasted enough of our time. Let''s get moving." Dan adds, "It''s time to show you off <<$pcs_nickname>>. Aren''t you excited?" The gopniks walk you toward the stairwell.'
 																				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																				gs 'stat'
 																				
@@ -266,7 +263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																		npc_rel['A5'] = 25
 																		gs'stat'
 																		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/fedor.jpg"></center>'
-																		'You run to Fedor then jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I will keep you safe." Vitek shouts, "Hey, she is ours, give her back." Fedor stands his ground, "No, she is mine!" Vitek walks up to his face, "What did you say punk?" Dan adds, "Hey, I''m sure Fedor misunderstands what''s going on, let me explain. <<$pcs_firstname>> has been a very naughty girl who has been fucking many other students." Fedor responds, "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_firstname>> and she''s better than that." Dan responds, "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
+																		'You run to Fedor and jump into his arms as he stares into your eyes. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll keep you safe." Vitek shouts out. "Hey, she''s ours now! Give her back!" Fedor stands his ground. "No, she''s mine!" Vitek walks up to him. "What did you say punk?" Dan interrupts. "Hey, I''m sure Fedor misunderstands what''s going on, let me explain. <<$pcs_nickname>> has been a very naughty girl who has been fucking other students." Fedor is taken aback. "Bullshit! I know <<$pcs_nickname>> and she''s better than that." Dan snorts. "Ohh really? Watch this and decide for yourself."'
 																		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																		gs 'stat'
 																		act 'See what happens':
@@ -274,7 +271,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			gs'stat'															
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
-																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You... you bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
+																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko and confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You... you bitch! How could you just use me like that?!" You lower your head. "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck and pushes you toward Vitek. "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back as he responds. "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor shakes his head and walks away as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
 																			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																			gs 'stat'
 																			act 'Enter the stairwell':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
@@ -308,17 +305,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 	inhib_exp += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/wos.jpg"></center>'
-	'You close your eyes as you are led down the hallway. You can hear students in the hallway talking about you.' 
+	'You close your eyes as you are led down the hallway. You can hear other students talking about you.' 
 	*nl
-	'Lariska Gruzdeva: "What the fuck was <<$pcs_firstname>> thinking? Why would she do this to herself? Is she that desperate for dick?"'
-	'Lina: "I always thought she was a nice girl, but I guess she was just a whore all along. She hid it well."'
-	'Christina laughs. "You are both so stupid, I knew she was a fucking whore all along, you just have to look at how she acts. So weak and pathetic and eager to please any boy, that payed any attention to her." You hear several of the other girls agree with her.'
+	'"What the fuck was she thinking? Why would she do this to herself? Is she that desperate for dick?" Lariska asks.'
+	'"I always thought she was a nice girl, but I guess she was just a whore all along. She hid it well." Lina responds.'
+	'Christina laughs. "You''re both so stupid! I knew she was a fucking whore all along, you just have to look at how she acts. So weak and pathetic and eager to please any boy that paid any attention to her." You hear several of the other girls agree with her.'
 	if hotcat >= 6 and salocatnow < 5:
-		'Roman: "Fuck yeah! I''ve been wanting to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> since I first saw her drop that chalk, in Anatoly''s class."'
+		'"Fuck yeah! I''ve been wanting to fuck <<$pcs_nickname>> since I first saw her drop that chalk in math class." Roman laughs.'
 	else
-		'Roman: "I always thought about what it would be like to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> since I first saw her drop that chalk, in Anatoly''s class. If only she wasn''t so ugly."'
+		'"I always thought about what it would be like to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> since I first saw her drop that chalk in math class. If only she wasn''t so ugly..." Roman laughs.'
 	end
-	'Lizaveta: "So another girl turning into a slut," She shakes her head. "Why do so many girls have no self respect? Well at least the boys are gonna love this." She then takes out her phone and begins recording you.'
+	'"So another girl turning into a slut..." Lizaveta says as she shakes her head. "Why do so many girls have no self respect? Well at least the boys are gonna love this." She takes out her phone and begins recording you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 	gs 'stat'
 	
@@ -329,26 +326,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
-			'You reach the stairwell and Vitek shouts out, "Hey boys! Look who has decided to join Sonia as the school whore! <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>!" The gopniks get noticeably excited as they begin talking to each other.'
+		if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5
+			'You reach the stairwell and Vitek shouts out. "Hey boys! Look who''s decided to join Sonia as the school whore! <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>!" The gopniks get noticeably excited as they begin talking to each other.'
 			if hotcat >= 6:
-				'Radomir Popov: "So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party. She looks good enough. Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> ever been with a real man before?'
-				'Valentin: "She is better looking than Sonia. I will give her that."'
+				'"So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party? She looks good enough. Ever been with a real man before?" Radomir asks with a grin.'
+				'"She''s better looking than Sonia, I''ll give her that." Valentin adds.'
 			else
-				'Radomir Popov: "So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party. She''s always looked trashy though, Like one of those trailer park girls.'
-				'Valentin: "Yeah I have seen better looking bitches in the chess club lineups."'
+				'"So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party? She''s always looked so trashy though. Like one of those trailer park girls." Radomir says insultingly.'
+				'"Yeah, I''ve seen better looking bitches in the chess club." Valentin adds.'
 			end
 		else
-			'You reach the stairwell and Vitek shouts out, "Hey boys! Look who has decided to become the school whore! <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>!" The gopniks get noticeably excited as they begin talking to each other.'
+			'You reach the stairwell and Vitek shouts out. "Hey boys! Look who''s decided to become the school whore! <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>!" The gopniks get noticeably excited as they begin talking to each other.'
 			if hotcat >= 6:
-				'Radomir Popov: "So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party. She looks good enough. Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> ever been with a real man before?'
+				'"So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party? She looks good enough. Ever been with a real man before?" Radomir asks with a grin.'
 			else
-				'Radomir Popov: "So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party. She''s ugly enough I imagine the only way she can get any attention is to give it away to anyone willing to have a go."'
-				'Valentin: "Yeah I have seen better looking bitches skulking in the ally''s in the city."'
+				'"So <<$pcs_nickname>> decided to join the party? She''s so fucking ugly I imagine the only way she can get any attention is to give it away to anyone willing to have a go." Radomir says insultingly.'
+				'"Yeah, I''ve seen better looking bitches skulking around in the city allyways." Valentin adds.'
 			end
-		end
-		'Arkadi: "Enough gawking. I''m gonna fuck this bitch!"'
-		'Roman: "Now that is what I like to hear."'
+		'"Enough gawking. I''m gonna fuck this bitch!" Arkadi syas while approaching you.'
+		'"Now that''s what I like to hear." Roman adds.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -357,14 +353,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 			gs'stat'		
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#927742><<"Katyusha Maksimov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big145.jpg"></center>'		
-			'The boys immediately take on aggressive postures, with wolfish grins on their faces. Katyusha Maksimov suddenly says loudly enough to be heard over everyone. "You guys have to drag this fucking skank here? I trying to eat my lunch." She says while holding a sandwich in her hand. You have a moment of hope that someone might save you, but when your eyes meet her''s she gives you a look of utter disgust and your heart sinks. Dan smirks and turns towards Katyusha Maksimov. "Hey if you don''t like it Katyusha, you can always go eat somewhere else."'
+			'The boys immediately take on aggressive postures, wolfish grins on their faces, when Katyusha suddenly speaks loudly enough to be heard over everyone. "You guys have to drag this fucking skank here? I''m trying to eat my lunch." You have a moment of hope that someone might save you, but when your eyes meet her''s, she gives you a look of utter disgust and your heart sinks. Dan smirks and turns towards Katyusha. "Hey, if you don''t like it, you can always eat somewhere else."'
 
 			act 'See what happens next':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'			
 				'<center><b><h4><font color=#be0457><<"Pauline Sebagotulina">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big24.jpg"></center>'				
-				'Katyusha stands up and gives Dan a shove. "Watch it or I will make you eat something of your own." Dan puts his hands up, then she walks up the stairs to apparently go eat in peace. Dan snickers once she walks away as Pauline pulls out her phone then begins recording you before saying, in a patronizing voice, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ll make you a star... Now smile for the camera."'
+				'Katyusha stands up and roughly shoves Dan. "Watch it or I''ll make you eat something of your own." Dan puts his hands up and she walks up the stairs, seemingly to eat in peace. Dan snickers once she walks away as Pauline pulls out her phone and begins recording you. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ll make you a star... Now smile for the camera." she says in a patronizing tone.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'	
 				
@@ -372,15 +368,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lena.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lower your head in embarrassment. Not wanting to be recorded but not being in any position to stop her. Lena quickly approaches you then grabs you by your hair and holds your face up to the camera, "She said smile bitch! Do you have cum in your ears?" Lera then sarcastically adds, "Maybe she''s just shy." to which Lena replies, "Shy? Does she look shy to you?" Lena then runs her hand up your thigh to your pussy, pinching your clitoris. You can see the boys are getting very excited. Most of them are rubbing their crotches.'
+					'You lower your head in embarrassment. You don''t want to be recorded, but you''re not in any position to stop her. Lena quickly approaches and grabs you by the hair before holding your face up to the camera. "She said smile bitch! Do you have cum in your ears?"' 
+					'"Maybe she''s just shy?" Lera sarcastically adds and Lena laughs. "Shy? Does she look shy to you?" Lena runs her hand up your thigh to your pussy before pinching your clitoris. You can see the boys are getting very excited. Most of them are rubbing their crotches.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'flash', 3, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'stat'
 					
-					act 'See what the Lena does':
+					act 'See what Lena does':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'	
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/exposed1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Lena then says, "Alright let''s not keep everyone waiting. If <<$pcs_nickname>> wants some dick then lets get her some dick." She then pushes you to the boys, who quickly begin fondling your body. You can feel your body trembling as some of the boys begin running their hands across your body. Dan spanks your ass as he shouts out, "Alright, Who want''s to fuck this slut?" Your jaw opens in shock, your entire body trembling, knowing that everything you had in this school, your friends, your dignity and your reputation are completely lost now.'
+						'"Alright, let''s not keep everyone waiting. If <<$pcs_nickname>> wants some dick, then let''s get her some dick." she says before pushing you to the boys, who quickly begin fondling your body. You can feel yourself trembling as some of the boys begin running their hands across your body and Dan spanks your ass. "Alright, who wants to fuck this slut?" Your jaw opens in shock and your entire body trembles. Everything you had; your friends, your dignity and your reputation are now gone.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'stat'
 						
@@ -390,15 +387,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Anushka [Nush] Konstantinov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
 							if npc_rel['A144'] >= 60:
-								'Anushka gets up and walks down the steps to you as she says. "Okay that''s fucking enough! Show''s over, now everyone get lost!" Roman steps up to her. "Fuck you bitch! Why do you care? Are you jealous of <<$pcs_nickname>>? Wish that you were in her place? I always knew you was a slut." Anushka slaps him across his face, causing him to recoil back before immediately winding his hand back to slap her. Valentin quickly grabs Roman by the wrist, stopping him while Arkadi says. "Come on, back off man, there is no need for that." While Radomir says. "Watch it, your talking about our girl there."'
+								'Anushka gets up and walks down the stairs. "Okay, that''s enough! Show''s over, get lost!" Roman steps up to her. "Fuck you bitch! Why do you care? Are you jealous of <<$pcs_nickname>>? Wish that you were in her place? I always knew you were a slut!" Anushka slaps him across the face, causing him to recoil back before immediately winding his hand back to slap her. Valentin quickly grabs Roman by the wrist, stopping him while Arkadi speaks up. "Come on, back off man. There''s no need for that." Radomir responds. "Watch it. You''re talking about our girl there."'
 								*nl
-								'Roman shoves Valentin, but doesn''t break Valentin''s hold on his wrist. "The bitch slapped me, I am going to fuck her up."'
-								'Things start to get real tense for a moment. Valentin then releases Roman''s wrist and says, "If you ever lay a hand on her then I will fuck you up and if somehow I can''t, you know what her dad would do to you." He says in a low tone full of menace.'
+								'Roman shoves Valentin, but doesn''t break Valentin''s hold on his wrist. "The bitch slapped me! I''m going to fuck her up!"'
+								'Things start to get tense for a moment before Valentin releases Roman. "If you ever lay a hand on her, then I will fuck you up. If I somehow can''t, you know what her dad would do to you." he says in a low tone full of menace.'
 								*nl
-								'Mention of Anushka''s dad causes Roman to stiffen just a bit, before he turns to Anushka. "That''s your one free pass bitch, hit me again and I will drag your face through the dirt!" As he finally backs down, which you have never seen him do before. Valentin turns to Roman again. "Back off!" Just as Arkadi pulls Roman away while Roman gives Valentin a cold stare the whole time.'
-!!will this if above this line lead to the act below under the else at line 438 act 'See what happens next': just want to make sure I did this correctly and it will and not lead to a blank page
+								'The mention of Anushka''s father causes Roman to stiffen before he turns to Anushka. "That''s your one free pass bitch! Hit me again and I''ll drag your face through the dirt!" As he finally backs down, which you have never seen him do before, Valentin turns to Roman again. "Back off!"  Arkadi pulls Roman away while Roman gives Valentin a cold glare.'
 							elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
-								'Anushka gets up and comes down the stairs, stopping to look at you. "I tried to warn you about Niko, now look at what he''s done to you." You look down, unable to meet her gaze. "But I love him..." You hear her sigh and Alyona say. "Have some backbone and self respect." While Anushka says. "He doesn''t love you, no one that does would let this happen. Come with us." Roman steps between you and them. "This slut isn''t going anywhere. You''d best leave before you end up joining her."'
+								'Anushka gets up and comes down the stairs. "I tried to warn you about Niko, now look at what he''s done to you." You look down, unable to meet her gaze. "But I love him..." You hear her sigh and Alyona speaks up. "Have some fucking backbone and self respect!"'
+								'"He doesn''t love you! If he did, then he wouldn''t let this happen. Come with us." Roman steps between you and them. "This slut isn''t going anywhere. You''d best leave before you end up joining her."'
 								gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Go with them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -407,15 +404,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Alyona Zima">></font></h4></b></center>'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big143.jpg"></center>'
-										'Alyona pulls out a switch blade as a response to the threat. "Just try it asshole and I will cut your dick off!" Roman replies in a menacing tone. "Do you even know how to use that thing little girl?" Valentin quickly grabs the girls then pulls them away. Arkadi pulls Roman back, clearly trying to calm him down. While Valentin pulls Anushka by the arm to where the stairs lead out into the hallway. Then you finally realize if you don''t act now you won''t be able to. You burst into tears and rush over to them. "I don''t want to stay."'
-										*nl
-										'Dan grabs the end of the dangling leash attached to your collar and jerks you back. "Just where the fuck do you think your going?" Anushka exclaims "Let her go now!" Dan snorts and yanks on the leash again. "Make me bitch." Then Valentin steps up and gets in Dans face. "Back off." Anushka uses the time to just take the collar off your neck. When the rest notice Roman steps forward and Valentin steps in his way. "Out of my way Val." Roman says to him, Valentin shakes his head. "No!"'
+										'Alyona pulls out a switch blade as a response to the threat. "Try it and I''ll cut your dick off, asshole!" Roman replies in a menacing tone. "Do you even know how to use that thing little girl?" Valentin quickly grabs the girls and pulls them away as Arkadi pulls Roman back, clearly trying to calm him down. You realize that if you don''t act now, then you won''t be able to, so you burst into tears and rush over to them. "I don''t want to stay!"'
+										'Dan grabs the leash attached to your collar and jerks you back. "Just where the fuck do you think you''re going?" Anushka exclaims "Let her go now!" Dan snorts and yanks on the leash again. "Make me bitch!" Valentin steps up and gets in Dan''s face. "Back off." Anushka uses the time to take the collar off your neck and when the rest notice, Roman steps forward and Valentin steps in his way. "Out of my way Val." Valentin shakes his head in repsonse.'
 										act 'See what happens next':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Vitek Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-											'Before things spiral even more out of control among the gopniks, Vitek finally stands up and loudly says. "Enough!" Then everyone stops, though Anushka moves you behind her so she is between you and the rest. Vitek walks towards you, where you stand behind Anushka and Alyona. He looks at you for only a moment and then to Anushka. "You sure about this, you sure you want to choose her over us?" You understand she is putting her own rep with her fellow gopniks on the line now by standing up for you. She is quiet a moment then nods. "Yeah... I''m sure." Vitek gives her a disgusted look. Then looks over her shoulder right into your eyes. "You''re lucky bitch, that someone is willing to stand up for you." Then he looks back at Anushka. "Take her and go."'
+											'Before things spiral even further out of control, Vitek finally stands up. "Enough!" he loudly shouts and everyone stops, although Anushka moves you behind her so she is between you and the rest. Vitek approaches and looks at you, then to Anushka. "You sure about this? You sure you want to choose her over us?" She''s putting her reputation with the gopniks on the line by standing up for you. She is quiet for only a second before nodding. "Yeah, I''m sure." Vitek gives her a disgusted look, then looks over her shoulder right into your eyes. "You''re lucky that someone is willing to stand up for you, bitch." He looks back at Anushka. "Take her and go."'
 											act 'Leave with them': gt 'NikoWhore', 'leave_with_nush'
 										end
 									end
@@ -427,13 +423,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Alyona Zima">></font></h4></b></center>'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big143.jpg"></center>'
-									'Alyona pulls out a switch blade as a response to the threat. "Just try it asshole and I will cut your dick off!" Roman replies in a menacing tone. "Do you even know how to use that thing little girl?" Valentin quickly grabs the girls then pulls them away. Arkadi pulls Roman back, clearly trying to calm him down. While Valentin pulls Anushka by the arm to where the stairs lead out into the hallway. They seem to be arguing but you can''t hear what they are saying. Finally Anushka jerks her arm free and Alyona makes a threatening motion with the knife again.'
-									*nl
-									'Valentin puts up his hands and takes a step back. "Fucking assholes! All of you!" Anushka exclaims before giving you one final glance, her eyes begging you to come to her, but when you don''t, she just looks at you with pity then walks off, flipping Valentin off. While he shoots after her. "Don''t be that way Nush, come on!" Valentin then turns and walks back to the group as Lena says to you. "No one is coming to save you slut."'
+									'Alyona pulls out a switch blade as a response to the threat. "Try it and I''ll cut your dick off, asshole!" Roman replies in a menacing tone. "Do you even know how to use that thing little girl?" Valentin quickly grabs the girls and pulls them away as Arkadi pulls Roman back, clearly trying to calm him down. They seem to be arguing but you can''t hear what they''re saying. Anushka eventually jerks her arm free and Alyona makes a threatening motion with the knife again.'
+									'Valentin puts up his hands and takes a step back. "Fucking assholes! All of you!" Anushka exclaims before giving you one final glance, her eyes begging you to come to her, but when you don''t, she just looks at you with pity and walks away, flipping Valentin off as he chases after her. "Don''t be like that Nush, come on!" He eventually turns and walks back to the group as Lena laughs. "Nobody''s coming to save you now, slut."'
 									act 'Watch them leave': gt 'NikoWhore', 'no_escape'
 								end
 							else
-								'You can see Anushka and Alyona watching what is going on, when Anushka comments, "This is like watching a really bad porno, but still kinda turns me on." Dan turns towards them when he hears that. "Just speak up, we can give you a turn too." He says with a laugh. Alyona and Anushka both flip him off while Anushka says. "As if... I like to fuck but I am not going to be some slut who lets everyone fuck her whenever and where ever. If I ever wanted to fuck you, it would be on my terms not yours."'
+								'You can see Anushka and Alyona watching. "This is like watching a really bad porno, but it still turns me on." Anushka comments and Dan turns towards them. "Just speak up, we can give you a turn too." he says with a laugh. Alyona and Anushka both flip him off. "As if... I like to fuck, but I''m not going to be some slut who lets everyone fuck her whenever and where ever. If I ever wanted to fuck you, it would be on <i>my</i> terms, not yours."'
 							end	
 		
 							act 'See what happens next':
@@ -442,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 								'<center><b><font color="green"><<"Denis [Dan] Ryzhov">></font></b></center>'
 								'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big10.jpg"></center>'
 								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 60:
-									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?"'
+									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, let''s get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it. She wants to stay." He turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?"'
 									gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 									if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 										act 'Go with them (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -451,19 +446,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Anushka [Nush] Konstantinov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-											'You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body won''t let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity as Dan says. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks." While Valentin pulls Anushka by the arm to where the stairs lead out into the hallway. Then you finally realize if you don''t act now you won''t be able to. You burst into tears and rush over to them. "I don''t want to stay."'
-											*nl
-											'Dan grabs the end of the dangling leash attached to your collar and jerks you back. "Just where the fuck do you think your going?" Anushka exclaims "Let her go now!" Dan snorts and yanks on the leash again. "Make me bitch." Then Valentin steps up and gets in Dans face. "Back off." Anushka uses the time to just take the collar off your neck. When the rest notice Roman steps forward and Valentin steps in his way. "Out of my way Val." Roman says to him, Valentin shakes his head. "No!"'
+											'You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to speak, but your body won''t let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone and gives you a look of pity as Dan laughs. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in or piss off!"'
+											'"Fuck your asshole!" she replies and Dan grins. "Anywhere, anytime sweet cheeks." Valentin grabs Anushka by the arm and pulls her aside. You realize that if you don''t act now, you won''t be able to, so you burst into tears and rush over to them. "I don''t want to stay!"'
+											'Dan grabs the leash attached to your collar and jerks you back. "Just where the fuck do you think you''re going?" Anushka exclaims "Let her go now!" Dan snorts and yanks on the leash again. "Make me bitch!" Valentin steps up and gets in Dan''s face. "Back off." Anushka uses the time to take the collar off your neck and when the rest notice, Roman steps forward and Valentin steps in his way. "Out of my way Val." Valentin shakes his head in response.'
 											act 'See what happens next':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'
 												'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Vitek Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-												'Before things spiral even more out of control among the gopniks, Vitek finally stands up and loudly says. "Enough!" Then everyone stops, though Anushka moves you behind her so she is between you and the rest. Vitek walks towards you, where you stand behind Anushka and Alyona. He looks at you for only a moment and then to Anushka. "You sure about this, you sure you want to choose her over us?" You understand she is putting her own rep with her fellow gopniks on the line now by standing up for you.'
-												*nl
-												'She glances back over her shoulder at you and your eyes meet and she smiles to you, then turns back to Vitek. "Fuck yea... I''m choosing her over some wannabe rapist." Vitek eyes narrow and he looks pissed, but you can tell the word rapist has made several of them uncomfortable. Lena and Lera suddenly seem a lot unsure, Valentin stiffens at the comment while Lavrenti stands up. "Ok this has gone on far enough, just let them go if they want to go."'
-												*nl
-												'Valentin speaks up next. "Funs fun but this is starting to go to far." "Yeah this is getting fucked up." Lera adds in. Vitek looks around and see''s the room is turning against the idea. Then looks over Anushka''s shoulder right into your eyes. "You''re lucky bitch, that someone is willing to stand up for you." Then he looks back at Anushka. "Take her and go."'
+												'Before things spiral even more out of control among the gopniks, Vitek finally stands up." Enough!" he loudly shouts and everyone stops, although Anushka moves you behind her so she is between you and the rest. Vitek approaches and looks at you, then to Anushka. "You sure about this? You sure you want to choose her over us?" She''s putting her reputation with the gopniks on the line by standing up for you.'
+												'She glances back over her shoulder at you. Your eyes meet and she smiles at you, then turns back to Vitek. "Fuck yeah, I''m choosing her over some wannabe rapist." Vitek eyes narrow, but you can tell she''s made several of them uncomfortable. Lena and Lera suddenly seem a lot quieter, Valentin stiffens and Lavrenti stands up. "Okay, this has gone on long enough. Just let them go if they want to go."'
+												'Valentin speaks up. "Fun''s fun, but this is starting to go too far." Vitek looks around and sees that everyone is turning against the idea. He looks over Anushka''s shoulder right into your eyes. "You''re lucky that someone is willing to stand up for you, bitch." He looks back at Anushka. "Take her and go."'
 												act 'Leave with them': gt 'NikoWhore', 'leave_with_nush'
 											end
 										end
@@ -476,13 +469,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Valentin [Val] Bogdanov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big158.jpg"></center>'
-										'You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body won''t let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity as Dan says. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
-										*nl
-										'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, he pulls her to where the stairs exit out into the hallway. Anushka jerks her arm away from him. Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here... So just go." She shakes her head in disgust at him. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks off while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Then he starts walking back to the group. "Fuck... She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She will get over it, she always does."'
+										'You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to speak, but your body won''t let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone and gives you a look of pity as Dan laughs. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in or piss off!"'
+										'"Fuck your asshole!" she replies and Dan grins. "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
+										'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, but Anushka jerks her arm away and Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here." She shakes her head in disgust. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks away while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Once Anushka''a gone, he starts walking back towards the group. "Fuck. She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She''ll get over it. She always does."'
 										act 'Watch them leave': gt 'NikoWhore', 'no_escape'
 									end
 								else
-									'Dan takes a step closer to them. "Yeah? I''m cool with that, just let me know. We can do that now if you want." Anushka and Alyona look at him a moment then each other, then back to him before laughing. "As if." Then they get up and walk away together laughing, while a annoyed Dan turns back to you.'
+									'Dan takes a step closer to them. "Yeah? I''m cool with that, just let me know. We can do that now if you want." Anushka and Alyona look at him, then to each other and back to him before laughing. "As if." They get up and walk away together laughing while an annoyed Dan turns back to you.'
 									act 'Watch them leave': gt 'NikoWhore', 'no_escape'
 								end	
 							end
@@ -518,7 +511,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_escape':
 	gs 'stat'
 	if hotcat >= 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/exposed2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once Anushka and Alyona leave, Radomir Popov steps up to you then begins fingering your vagina, "I want to fuck her first." Dan laughs as he replies, "You mean second, right?" He then turns you around and spreads your ass cheeks, causing his cum to leak out of your ass. Radomir replies, "Ohh shit, she really is a filthy whore. I''m still fucking her though." He grabs you by the hair then unbuttons his pants and lays down as he pulls you on top of him.'
+		'Once Anushka and Alyona leave, Radomir steps up to you and begins fingering your pussy. "I want to fuck her first." Dan laughs. "You mean second, right?" He turns you around and spreads your ass cheeks, causing his cum to leak out of your ass. Radomir laughs. "Shit, she really is a filthy whore! I''m still fucking her though." He grabs you by the hair and unbuttons his pants before lying down and pulling you on top of him.'
 		$orgasm_txt = ''
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 		gs 'stat'		
@@ -527,15 +520,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_escape':
 			inhib_exp += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You can feel Radomir''s penis enter your vagina causing a jolt of pressure as your weight pushes his cock completely inside of you. Knowing that it is too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the other girls cheering with malicious smirks on their faces.'
+			'You feel your pussy stretching as your weight pushes his cock completely inside you. Knowing that it''s too late to go back, you begin riding Radomir. You can hear the boys cheering as they enjoy the show. You can still see Pauline recording you and the malicious smirks on the other girls'' faces.'
 			$orgasm_txt = ''
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Milk his cock':
+			act 'Make him cum':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum7.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Radomir pulls out of you then begins cumming on your feet as you milk him. Feeling his cock throbbing in your hand, His warm cum landing on your feet. You use the comfort of his warm cum to distract you from your racing thoughts.'
+				'Radomir pulls out of you and begins cumming on your feet as you milk him. You use the comfort of his warm cum to distract you from your racing thoughts.'
 				$orgasm_txt = ''
 				gs 'cum_call', 'feet', 'A158', 1
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
@@ -544,14 +537,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_escape':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/stair1.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Radomir crawls out from under you just as the other boys quickly approach you with their dicks in their hands. They immediately shove it in your face. You obediently begin sucking them one by one as you hear Lena sarcastically asks, "Are those enough dicks for you <<$pcs_nickname>>, or do you need more?" You try to ignore her as you continue sucking the boy''s dicks, doing your best not to leave anyone left out. After a few more seconds, Roman leans down to look you in the eyes before saying, "You ready to ride my dick bitch?"'
+					'Radomir crawls out from under you and the other boys quickly approach you with their dicks in their hands. You obediently begin sucking them one by one as you hear Lena sarcastically ask "Is that enough dick for you <<$pcs_nickname>>? Or do you need more?" You try to ignore her as you continue sucking dick, doing your best not to leave anyone out. After a few seconds, Roman leans down to look you in the eyes. "You ready to ride my dick bitch?"'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Meekly nod':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/stair2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You meekly nod and Roman grabs you by the hair then pulls you in front of the stairs as he sits down, pulling you on top of his dick. You moan loudly as you feel his dick forcefully thrust into your pussy. You hold still for few seconds before Roman shouts, "Hurry up slut! Ride my dick." You quickly nod before thrusting on top of his dick as the other boys grab and fondle your breasts as Lera hollers, "Oh boy, look at her go to work!" Lena then says, "I wonder how many she can fit in there?" Pauline adds, "I''m sure we will soon find out." The girls laugh before you suddenly hear someone shout, "Eww what the fuck is this!?"'							
+						'You meekly nod and Roman grabs you by the hair before dragging you in front of the stairs as he sits down and pulls you on top of his dick. You moan loudly as you feel his dick forcefully thrusting into your pussy. You hold still for a few seconds before Roman shouts out. "Hurry up slut! Ride my dick!" You quickly nod before thrusting on top of his dick as the other boys grab and fondle your breasts and Lera hollers "Oh boy, look at her go!"'
+						'"I wonder how many she can fit in there?" Lena adds. "I''m sure we''ll soon find out." Pauline laughs. The girls laugh before you suddenly hear someone shouting. "Eww, what the fuck is this!?"'							
 						$orgasm_txt = ''
 						gs 'arousal', 'massage', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
@@ -562,7 +556,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_escape':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Elžbieta [Bella] Artamonov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
-							'Bella Artamonov, who seems to have just walked down the stairs, continues shouting at the boys, "I don''t want to see this shit! Why can''t you fucking perverts just do this shit somewhere else?" She tries making her way past everyone with out letting anyone touch her. Dan replies, "You heard the girl. Let''s take <<$pcs_firstname>> back to the locker room. Everyone who wants to join can tag along." Dan and Roman grab your arms then lead you toward the locker room as many of the boys and a few girls follow along.'
+							'Bella, who seems to have just walked down the stairs, continues shouting at the boys. "I don''t want to see this disgusting shit! Why can''t you fucking perverts do this somewhere else?" She tries making her way past everyone without letting anyone touch her and Dan speaks up. "You heard her. Let''s take this bitch back to the locker room. Everyone who wants to join can tag along." Dan and Roman grab your arms and start leading you towards the locker room as many of the boys and a few girls follow along.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Locker room': gt 'NikoWhore', 'Locker Room 2'
@@ -573,16 +567,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_escape':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/stair1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Once Anushka and Alyona leave, Radomir says. "Well you guys have fun, but I am out of here."'
-		'Dan looks at him. "What you passing up free pussy?"'
-		'Radomir laughs. "I got standards man, I only fuck prime A pussy, not some ugly slut like this." He shakes his head. "If I got to look at her much longer I think I am going to lose my lunch." Several of the others laugh at that, as Radomir walks off. Then Roman forces you to your knees just as the other boys quickly approach you with their dicks in their hands. They immediately shove it in your face. You obediently begin sucking them one by one as you hear Lena sarcastically asks, "Are those enough dicks for you <<$pcs_nickname>>, or do you need more?" You try to ignore her as you continue sucking the boy''s dicks, doing your best not to leave anyone left out. After a few more seconds, Roman leans down to look you in the eyes before saying, "You ready to ride my dick bitch?"'
+		'Once Anushka and Alyona leave, Radomir stands up. "You guys have fun, but I''m out of here."'
+		'Dan looks at him. "What? You passing up free pussy?"'
+		'Radomir laughs. "I''ve got standards man. I only fuck prime pussy, not some ugly slut like this." He shakes his head. "If I look at her much longer, I think I''m going to lose my lunch." Several of the others laugh as Radomir walks off and Roman forces you to your knees. The other boys quickly approach you with their dicks in their hands and you obediently begin sucking them one by one as you hear Lena sarcastically ask "Is that enough dick for you <<$pcs_nickname>>? Or do you need more?" You try to ignore her as you continue sucking dick, doing your best not to leave anyone out. After a few more seconds, Roman leans down to look you in the eyes. "You ready to ride my dick bitch?"'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Meekly nod':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/stair2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You meekly nod and Roman grabs you by the hair then pulls you in front of the stairs as he sits down, pulling you on top of his dick. You moan loudly as you feel his dick forcefully thrust into your pussy. You hold still for few seconds before Roman shouts, "Hurry up slut! Ride my dick." You quickly nod before thrusting on top of his dick as the other boys grab and fondle your breasts as Lera hollers, "Oh boy, look at her go to work!" Lena then says, "I wonder how many she can fit in there?" Pauline adds, "I''m sure we will soon find out." The girls laugh before you suddenly hear someone shout, "Eww what the fuck is this!?"'							
+			'You meekly nod and Roman grabs you by the hair before dragging you in front of the stairs as he sits down and pulls you on top of his dick. You moan loudly as you feel his dick forcefully thrusting into your pussy. You hold still for few seconds before Roman shouts out. "Hurry up slut! Ride my dick!" You quickly nod before thrusting on top of his dick as the other boys grab and fondle your breasts and Lera hollers "Oh boy, look at her go!"'
+            '"I wonder how many she can fit in there?" Lena adds. "I''m sure we''ll soon find out." Pauline laughs. The girls laugh before you suddenly hear someone shouting. "Eww, what the fuck is this!?"'							
 			$orgasm_txt = ''
 			gs 'arousal', 'massage', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', -5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
@@ -593,7 +588,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_escape':
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Elžbieta [Bella] Artamonov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big22.jpg"></center>'
-				'Bella Artamonov, who seems to have just walked down the stairs, continues shouting at the boys, "I don''t want to see this shit! Why can''t you fucking perverts just do this shit somewhere else?" She tries making her way past everyone with out letting anyone touch her. Dan replies, "You heard the girl. Let''s take <<$pcs_firstname>> back to the locker room. Everyone who wants to join can tag along." Dan and Roman grab your arms then lead you toward the locker room as many of the boys and a few girls follow along.'
+				'Bella, who seems to have just walked down the stairs, continues shouting at the boys. "I don''t want to see this disgusting shit! Why can''t you fucking perverts do this somewhere else?" She tries making her way past everyone without letting anyone touch her and Dan speaks up. "You heard her. Let''s take this bitch back to the locker room. Everyone who wants to join can tag along." Dan and Roman grab your arms and start leading you toward the locker room as many of the boys and a few girls follow along.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Locker room': gt 'NikoWhore', 'Locker Room 2'
@@ -607,7 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 	inhib_exp += 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'As soon as you reach the locker room, Dan shoves you into the crowd and Roman Yakovlev catches you then turns you around. You feel Roman''s penis entering your vagina then his pace begins increasing as he holds onto your waist, pushing you against his crotch. '+$OpenInnerThought+'This is it. This is my life now. How did I let this happen?'+$CloseInnerThought+' Roman leans forward and whispers in your ear, "How does my dick feel <<$pcs_nickname>>? Isn''t it the biggest dick you ever had?"'
+	'As soon as you reach the locker room, Dan shoves you into the crowd. Roman catches you and turns you around. You feel his dick entering your pussy and his pace begins increasing as he holds onto your waist, pushing you against his crotch. Roman leans forward and whispers in your ear. "How does my dick feel <<$pcs_nickname>>? Isn''t it the biggest dick you''ve ever had?"'
 	$orgasm_txt = ''
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -617,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 		minut -= 5
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You meekly nod, not wanting to upset him. After a few more seconds, Roman pulls out of you and groans, covering your back in his cum. Roman gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "Damn <<$pcs_firstname>>, you have a tight pussy. We have to do this again sometime." Arkadi suddenly shouts, "Hey Roman don''t hog her, all for yourself." Roman laughs as he pulls up his pants then pushes you toward the other boys, causing you to fall on your knees in front of the Gopniks, who are holding their dicks in their hand.'
+		'You meekly nod, not wanting to upset him. After a few more seconds, Roman pulls out of you and groans, covering your back in his cum. He finishes by giving your ass a firm smack. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, you have a tight pussy. We have to do this again sometime." Arkadi suddenly shouts out. "Don''t hog her to yourself!" Roman laughs as he pulls up his pants and pushes you toward the other boys, causing you to fall on your knees in front of them.'
 		$orgasm_txt = ''
 		gs 'cum_call', 'back', 'A157', 1
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
@@ -627,14 +622,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 			inhib_exp += 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see then use your hands to jerk off the other boys. Valentin begins rubbing your hair off of your face as he says, "That''s a good girl. Just like that." as he gives you an approving smile. You can hear some of the other gopniks talking about you.'
+			'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see and use your hands to jerk off the others. Valentin brushes your hair out of your face. "That''s a good girl. Just like that." You look up and he gives you an approving smile. You can hear some of the other gopniks talking about you.'
 			*nl
-			'Arkadi: "I never thought that <<$pcs_nickname>> would end up being a whore, did you?"'
-			'Radomir: "Well all girls are sluts. Some are just better at hiding it."'
-			'Lavrenti: "Come on guys, let''s not talk about <<$pcs_firstname>> like she isn''t here."'
-			'Lena: "Oh, are you her boyfriend now? Well if you want to ask her out, she is right there."'
-			'Lera: "Yeah you can go and give her a kiss but you might want to use this to wipe off the cum first... Unless you''re into that kind of thing." She holds a tissue in front of him which he swats away.'
-			'Lavrenti: "Shut it! That''s not what I meant."'
+			'"I never thought that <<$pcs_nickname>> would end up being a whore. Did you?" Arkadi asks.'
+			'"Well all girls are sluts. Some are just better at hiding it." Radomir responds.'
+			'"Come on guys, let''s not talk about <<$pcs_nickname>> like she isn''t here." Lavrenti adds.'
+			'"Are you her boyfriend now? If you want to ask her out, she''s right down there." Lena laughs.'
+			'"You can give her a kiss, but you might want to use this to wipe off the cum first... Unless you''re into that kind of thing." Lera adds and holds a tissue in front of him, which he swats away.'
+			'"Shut it! That''s not what I meant."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Suck their dicks':
@@ -643,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 				minut -= 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/sex/rand_scoolboy6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Arkadi gently rubs your head while giving you a warm welcoming smile. You pull away of Valentin''s dick then start sucking Arkadi''s dick. You spend the next few minutes, alternating between the cocks of the gopniks.'
+				'Arkadi gently rubs your head while giving you a warm welcoming smile. You pull away from Valentin''s dick and start sucking on his. You spend the next few minutes alternating between cocks.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -651,7 +646,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock4.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'After a few seconds, Vitek lifts you up by your shoulders then says, "Enough warm up, who is ready to fuck this bitch?" Dan waves his hand then says, "I could go for seconds." Vitek gives him an approving nod as he lifts you up then lowers you on top of Dan''s hard cock. You let out a loud moan as Dan''s cock enters you. You begin riding Dan''s dick, felling him pushing deeper inside you and enjoying the boys cheering you on. You look around and see a few of the nerdy boys peeking in from the doorway. They are rubbing their crotches, but then looking around to make sure that no one notices them. The fact that you are turning them on, causes you to feel even more aroused then you already are. Dan suddenly states, "Get ready for another facial, slut!"'
+					'After a few seconds, Vitek lifts you up by your shoulders. "Enough warm up. Who''s ready to fuck this bitch?" Dan waves his hand. "I could go for seconds." Vitek gives him an approving nod as he lowers you on top of Dan''s cock. You let out a loud moan as Dan''s cock enters you. You begin riding Dan, feeling him pushing deeper inside you before you look around and see a few of the nerds peeking in from the doorway. They''re rubbing their crotches while looking around to make sure no one notices them. "Get ready for another facial, slut!" Dan suddenly shouts out.'
 					$orgasm_txt = ''
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -660,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/facial5.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You quickly pull off of Dan then drop to your knees as he covers your face in his warm seed. You rub your face against Dan''s penis, enjoying how your face sticks to his dick as you rub against it. Dan pulls up his pants then says, "You''re a nasty little slut, aren''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Dan then casually walks toward the door leading out of the Locker room as he turns to Vasily and says, "Hey Shulga, you just gonna stand there? Go on, help yourself." Vasily lowers his head, obviously lost in thought before Lena approaches him and says, "Go on Shulga. What are you waiting for?" Lera stands right beside him then says, "Maybe he is in love with our little whore. Is that true Shulga? Do you loooovvve <<$pcs_firstname>>? Do you want her to have your babies?" Vasily shakes his head before responding, "No, of course not. I could never love a whore!" as he quickly approaches to you.'
+						'You quickly pull off Dan and drop to your knees as he covers your face in his cum. Once he''s finished, Dan pulls his pants up and smiles. "You''re a nasty little slut, aren''t you <<$pcs_nickname>>?" He then casually walks toward the door, turning to Vasily on the way. "You just gonna stand there? Go on, help yourself." Vasily lowers his head, obviously lost in thought before Lena approaches him. "Go on Shulga. What are you waiting for?" Lera stands right beside him. "Maybe he''s in love with our little whore? Is that true Shulga? Do you loooovvve <<$pcs_nickname>>? Do you want her to have your babies?" Vasily shakes his head before responding. "No, of course not. I could never love a whore!" He then quickly approaches you.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A10', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -668,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock5.mp4"></video></center>'	
-							'Vasily spreads your legs then pushes his penis inside of you, causing a jolt of pleasure. Shulga''s hard cock enters you and starts rubbing against your g spot. Vasily stares you in the eyes with a very sad look on his face as he whispers, "I wish things ended up differently <<$pcs_firstname>> but there is no turning back now." as he continues fucking you, his frown disappears and he starts getting into fucking you. Increasing his pace.'
+							'Vasily spreads your legs and pushes his dick inside you, causing a wave of pleasure to shoot through you. He stares you in the eyes with a very sad look on his face as he softly whispers "I wish things ended up differently <<$pcs_nickname>>, but there''s no turning back now." He continues fucking you, his frown disappearing as he starts getting into it.'
 							$orgasm_txt = ''
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -678,7 +673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 								minut -= 5
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum110.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You continue staring Vasily in his eyes as you hear him groan. He pulls out of you and sprays his warm seed all over your chest as you instinctively stroke his cock, milking his penis. Vasily then takes a few seconds to catch his breath before whispering in your ear, "You are so beautiful <<$pcs_firstname>>. Too bad it had to come to this but you''ll get used to it." He then climbs off of you then pulls his pants up and gives Vitek a high five before leaving the locker room. Vitek then lifts you up and says, "You better be ready bitch because I''m ready for seconds." Vitek then pushes you onto your knees then has you spend the next 10 seconds lubing his dick before he shoves it into your ass.'
+								'You continue staring into Vasily''s eyes as you hear him groan. He pulls out of you and shoots his cum over your chest as you instinctively stroke his cock. He takes a few seconds to catch his breath before whispering in your ear. "You''re so beautiful <<$pcs_nickname>>. Too bad it had to come to this, but you''ll get used to it." He climbs off you and pulls his pants up, giving Vitek a high five before leaving the locker room. Vitek then lifts you up. "You better be ready bitch, because I''m ready for seconds." He pushes you onto your knees and has you lube his dick before he shoves it into your ass.'
 								$orgasm_txt = ''
 								gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'A11', 1
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
@@ -688,7 +683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog9.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel Vitek''s penis rubbing against your inner ass. His big hard cock, pushing its way deeper inside you as his strong hands firmly grips you hair. You feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram is cock in your sore asshole.' 
+									'Vitek fucks your ass slowly at first, but then picks up the pace. You let out high pitch squeals as you feel his cock pushing its way deeper inside you as he firmly grips your hair. You feel completely at his mercy as he continues to ram his cock into your sore asshole.' 
 									$orgasm_txt = ''
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -698,7 +693,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 										minut -= 5
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumAnal2.mp4"></video></center>'
-										''+$OpenInnerThought+'Vitek is so strong and aggressive. He is always so rough. Why is he always so angry?'+$CloseInnerThought+' After a few more seconds, Vitek says, "This is what a whore like you deserves." Vitek then fills your ass with his warm seed. You can feel Vitek''s hot cum filling your ass and then leaking out as he pulls out of you. "You better get used to this <<$pcs_firstname>> Because this is your new life now." Vitek pulls up his pants then leaves the locker room.'
+										'After a few more seconds, Vitek laughs at you. "This is what a whore like you deserves." You feel a sudden warmth fill your ass as he cums deep inside you before pulling out, causing his cum to drip out of your ass. "You better get used to this, bitch. This is your life now." Vitek he firmly states before he pulls up his pants and leaves the locker room.'
 										$orgasm_txt = ''
 										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A9', 1
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
@@ -711,7 +706,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 											minut -= 5
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock6.mp4"></video></center>'
-											'Valentin walks up to you then says, "I guess I''m up. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll make this quick." As he pushes his hard cock inside of your vagina causing a jolt of pain as your sore vagina is once again used. Valentin continuously rams his cock into your pussy, slamming the head of his penis against your g-spot. You don''t have enough breath to moan but with Valentin''s rough thrusts. You can feel Vitek''s cum leaking out of your ass as you hear Lera say, "Damn, look at <<$pcs_nickname>>, leaking like an overfilled water balloon." causing the girls to giggle. Valentin then pulls out of you and says, "Open your moth slut!"'
+											'Valentin walks up to you. "I guess I''m up. Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll make this quick." He pushes his cock inside your pussy, causing a jolt of pain as your sore pussy is once again used. Valentin continuously rams his cock into your pussy, slamming the head of his dick against your g-spot. You don''t have enough breath to moan, but with Valentin''s rough thrusts, you can feel Vitek''s cum leaking out of your ass as you hear Lera say "Damn, look at this dirty bitch leaking like an overfilled water balloon!" The girls giggle as Valentin pulls out of you. "Open your mouth slut!"'
 											$orgasm_txt = ''
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -720,7 +715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'					
 												'<center><video autoplay loop src="images\shared\sex\cum\mouth\cum1,3.mp4"></video></center>'
-												'You obediently  open your mouth as Valentin grabs you head then holds it to his dick before jerking off then shooting his load onto your tongue. You keep your mouth open accepting his cum inside as you swallow it as quickly as you can to make room for more. The taste is horrible but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin fully drains his cock into your mouth he then brushes your cheek and says, "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
+												'You obediently open your mouth and Valentin grabs your head and holds it to his dick before jerking off. He shoots his load onto your tongue; the taste is horrible, but you know that you have no choice. After Valentin finishes, he gently brushes your cheek. "That''s how you do it <<$pcs_nickname>>." He then zips up his pants and walks out of the locker room, leaving you on the floor.'
 												gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A158', 1
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 												gs 'stat'	
@@ -731,17 +726,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><b><h4><font color=#e600fb><<"Yalena [Lena] Kotov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big20.jpg"></center>'
-													'You lay still, trying to catch your breath when Lena & Lera walk over you and say, "Enjoyed yourself? Well you better because I am going to make sure that you remember your place." Lera adds, "And I will be sure that the whole school remembers that you are nothing more than a filthy whore." Pauline also adds, "Don''t worry girls, I''ll make sure that no one forgets." As she continues to record you. She even pushes your ass cheeks apart to record the cum leaking out of it. Lena looks at you for a few seconds before saying, "Would you boys like to fuck <<$pcs_firstname>> too?" She then turns to the door where three underclass boys are peeking through.'
+													'You lay still, trying to catch your breath when Lena & Lera walk over to you. "Enjoy yourself? Well you better, because I''m going to make sure that you remember your place."'
+													'"And I''ll be sure that the whole school remembers that you''re nothing more than a filthy whore." Lera adds. "Don''t worry girls, I''ll make sure that no one forgets." Pauline says as she continues to record you. She even pushes your ass cheeks apart to record the cum leaking out of it. Lena looks at you for a few seconds. "Would you boys like to fuck <<$pcs_nickname>> too?" She turns to the door where three underclass boys are peeking.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang'
 													gs 'stat'	
 													
 													act 'See what happens next':
 														*clr & cla
 														gs'stat'
-														!!we don''t have to worry about it right now, but next release we need to revisit this and add in a alternative version if Sveta was dating Artem.
+														!!we don''t have to worry about it now, but next release we need to revisit this and add in an alternative version if Sveta was dating Artem.
 														'<center><b><h4><font color=#fb00b7><<"Valeria [Lera] Tsarev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big21.jpg"></center>'
-														'The boys have surprised looks on their face as Lera adds, "If you''d like to fuck her then how about chipping in and paying... hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding then pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
+														'The boys have surprised looks on their faces. "If you''d like to fuck her, then how about chipping in and paying... hmmm... 1000 <b>₽</b>?" The boys begin whispering to each other before nodding and pooling their money together to pay Lera. They then approach you as Lena and Lera stare at each other with a shocked look, obviously surprised that worked.' 
 														gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 														gs 'stat'	
 														
@@ -751,12 +747,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 															gs'stat'
 															'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 															*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-															'You can feel all of your energy sapped, your will... Broken as you lay there in silence with the boys moving closer. You take this moment of silence to think to yourself, '+$OpenInnerThought+'So this is my life now. What did I do to deserve this? Why is this happening to me? This can''t be real.'+$CloseInnerThought+' Tears begin streaming down your cheeks as you hear footsteps. You look up to see the three boys standing over you.'
+															'Your energy sapped, your will broken, you lie in silence as the boys move closer. Tears begin streaming down your cheeks as you look up to see the three boys standing over you.'
 															act 'See what they do':
 																*clr & cla
 																gs'stat'
 																'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock7.mp4"></video></center>'
-																'One begins fondling your breasts as another spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, you lay still as he begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see the three boys, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. His pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
+																'One begins fondling your breasts as another spreads your legs, pulls out his dick and lines it up with your pussy. You groan as you feel his dick entering your sore pussy, lying in silence as he begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore, you look around the room and only see the three boys, Lena, Lera and Pauline. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. His pace increases as he gets more excited and you can hear his balls slapping against your ass.'
 																$orgasm_txt = ''
 																gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 																gs 'stat'
@@ -766,7 +762,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																	minut -= 5
 																	gs'stat'
 																	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/facial7.mp4"></video></center>'
-																	'He suddenly pulls out of you then begins painting your stomach with his cum before buttoning his pants then giving you a light kiss on the cheek before leaving the room. You suddenly hear heavy breathing over you. You look up to see another standing over you with his penis in his hand, stroking it over your face. He then suddenly groans as he begins cumming all over your face. As he storms out of the room shortly after the last one begins pushing his penis inside you.'
+																	'He suddenly pulls out of you and his cum splatters over your stomach. Satisfied, he buttons his pants and gives you a light kiss on the cheek before leaving the room. You suddenly hear heavy breathing over you and look up to see another boy standing over you with his dick in his hand, stroking it over your face. He then suddenly groans as he begins cumming over your face. Once he''s finished, he storms out of the room as the last boy begins pushing his dick inside you.'
 																	$orgasm_txt = ''
 																	gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A2', 1
 																	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
@@ -777,7 +773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																		*clr & cla
 																		gs'stat'
 																		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock8.mp4"></video></center>'
-																		'He begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open, giving himself easier access. You have no fight left, your strength is gone, your entire body is numb, you feel nothing as he continues using your body. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Wha... what''s going... feel... so hot... head... can''t think... why...'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+																		'He begins fucking you, thrusting at an increased pace as he holds your legs open to give himself easier access. You have no fight left; your strength is gone, your entire body is numb and you feel nothing as he continues using your body.'
 																		$orgasm_txt = ''
 																		gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A6', 1
 																		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
@@ -789,8 +785,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																			gs'stat'
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 																			*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time...?" "I think we broke our new toy."... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
-																			'Then you hear footsteps as they leave the room and everything starts to fade until you hear... "How could they do this to her?"..."Aww wow, she looks... Sticky."..."It''s not the time for jokes Vicky! We need to do something! We can''t just leave her like this!"...'
+																			'You can feel your consciousness fading in and out. You can hear some words, but they too seem to fade in and out... "You''ll be a star <<$pcs_nickname>>. An even bigger whore than Sonia."... "Well you look all tuckered out. Had a good time...?" "I think we broke our new toy already..." ... "It looks like she passed out... Too much fun maybe."...'
+																			'You hear footsteps as they leave the room and everything starts to fade until you hear... "How could they do this to her?"..."Aww wow, she looks... Sticky."..." This isn''t the time for jokes Vicky! We need to do something! We can''t just leave her like this!" ...'
 																		
 																			act '...':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDreams', 'Family'
 																		end
@@ -824,13 +820,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the school building and hear many of the students whispering to each other. One of the girls, calls out, "Look who it is, It''s <<$pcs_firstname>> the filthy whore!" You immediately lower your head in shame, pretending not to hear her.' 
+	'You walk into the school building and hear many of the students whispering to each other. One of the girls you calls out. "Look who it is! The filthy whore!" You immediately lower your head in shame, pretending not to hear her.' 
 	
 	act 'Try to ignore them':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'	
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos2.jpg"></center>'
-		'One of the boys walks alongside you and says, "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I saw the pictures. You have such a gorgeous body, can I fuck it?" Roman pushes him aside and says, "Don''t listen to him. He doesn''t know how to treat a babe as fine as yourself, so why don''t you join me in the restroom, where we can get to know each other better?"'
+		'One of the boys walks alongside you. "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, I saw the pictures. You have such a gorgeous body. Can I fuck it?" Roman suddenly pushes him aside. "Don''t listen to him. He doesn''t know how to treat a babe as fine as yourself. Why don''t you join me in the restroom where we can get to know each other better?"'
 
 		act 'Accept his offer':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -838,14 +834,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-			''+$OpenInnerThought+'Maybe Roman can help me out, he is being nice to me when he doesn''t have to.'+$CloseInnerThought+' You meekly nod to the boy and his eyes light up as he replies, "Great! let''s get going." He then grabs your arm and guides you to the restroom.'
+			'You meekly nod and his eyes light up. "Great! let''s get going." He grabs your arm and guides you to the restroom.'
 
-			act 'Follow him to the Restroom':
+			act 'Follow him to the restroom':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><b><h4><font color="green"><<"Roman Yakovlev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big157.jpg"></center>'
-				'You both arrive at the restroom and Roman pulls you to a mirror then stands behind you then whispers in your ear, "Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>. You were amazing yesterday and I can''t stop thinking about your rockin'' bod and cute face. I want another round and don''t worry, I''ll be gentle."' 
+				'You arrive at the restroom and Roman pulls you up to a mirror and stands behind you. "You were amazing yesterday and I can''t stop thinking about your hot body and cute face. I want another round! Don''t worry, I''ll be gentle."' 
 
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -853,7 +849,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 					gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 					gs'stat'				
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel you shirt being removed, followed by your pants. Roman finishes undressing you then begins sliding his hand up your leg arriving at your vagina which he begins fingering as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, Roman begins taking off his shirt then pulling down his pants. Roman whispers in your ear, "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He then lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
+					'He begins undressing you as he runs his hands down your body. You can feel your shirt being removed, followed by your pants. He finishes undressing you and begins sliding his hand up your leg before he begins fingering you as you close your eyes, letting him do as he wants to your body. After a few seconds, he begins taking off his shirt and pulling down his pants. "I''ve never had a girl suck my balls before. I want you to be the first." He lightly pushes down on your shoulders.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -863,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 						minut -= 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You obediently begin licking Roman''s balls gently before wrapping your lips around them and sucking firmly. After a few seconds, Roman scoffs then says, "Easy <<$pcs_nickname>>, not so hard." You quickly stop before sucking again, but more gently this time.' 
+						'You obediently begin licking Roman''s balls gently before wrapping your lips around them and sucking firmly. After a few seconds, he scoffs. "Easy <<$pcs_nickname>>, not so hard." You quickly stop before sucking again, but more gently this time.' 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -872,7 +868,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'						
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You continue sucking while enjoying the warmth of Roman''s balls and how they occasionally bounce in your mouth. Roman looks down at you and says, "That a girl, keep doing that." You continue gently sucking on his balls, feeling excited, knowing that you are pleasing him. After a few more moments, Roman grabs onto your shoulders then lifts you up before kissing you passionately. You can feel your heart warming up. '+$OpenInnerThought+'He is kissing me so passionately. Maybe he cares for me. Please care for me. I need someone to care for me. Please care for me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+							'You continue sucking while Roman looks down at you. "That''s it girl, keep doing that." You continue gently sucking on his balls and after a few more seconds, Roman grabs onto your shoulders and lifts you up before kissing you passionately.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -881,22 +877,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/4.jpg"></center>'
-								'Roman lifts you to your feet then turns you around before pressing his penis against your anus. You lean your breasts against the wall, knowing that Roman will soon fuck your ass.' 
+								'Roman lifts you to your feet and turns you around before pressing his dick against your anus.' 
 								
-								act 'Let Roman Fuck your ass':
+								act 'Let him fuck your ass':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram its way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s cock ram its way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As he begins rapidly fucking your ass, you try to speak between grunts. "Can you... ehh... take it slow... please..." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace. He''s either ignoring you or didn''t hear you.' 
+									'You close your eyes and wait for it to be over before he suddenly wraps his arms around yours and drops back, causing you to fall on top of him with his dick still in your ass. "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
 
-									act 'Ride Roman':
+									act 'Ride him':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/6.jpg"></center>'
-										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick roughly scraping against your inner ass. You close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Please cum soon. Please. I can''t take much more of this. Please just cum. PLEEEEAASE!'+$CloseInnerThought+' to your relief you hear Roman groan then feel his warm seed filling your ass. You focus on the warm as he continues pumping you with his cum. After Roman is spent, he pushes you off of him then says, "You were great <<$pcs_firstname>>. We should do this again sometime." You reply, "Does that mean that we can out together maybe?" Roman laughs as he replies, "Hell no! I fuck whores, not date them, but you have my permission to keep dreaming about me though." Roman chuckles and gives you a wink as he gets dressed then leaves you alone in the restroom. '+$OpenInnerThought+'So... he didn''t care for me. Does no one care for me? I need someone. Why won''t anyone care for me anymore?'+$CloseInnerThought+' you suddenly hear, "Ah there you are. I''ve been looking all over for you."'
+										'Even though the pain is quite severe, you do as he says, not wanting to disappoint him. Feeling his dry dick grinding against your inner ass, you close your eyes and try to think of anything other than the pain. To your relief, you hear Roman groan and feel his warm cum filling your ass. You focus on it as he continues pumping you with his cum. Once he''s finished, he pushes you off of him. "You were great <<$pcs_nickname>>. We should do this again sometime." He gives you a wink as he gets dressed before leaving you alone in the restroom. You suddenly hear someone speaking. "There you are! I''ve been looking all over for you."'
 										gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A189', 1
 										gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -908,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 											gs'stat'
 											'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-											'You turn to see Niko standing over you. "I''ve been so worried about you <<$pcs_firstname>>, I heard what happened yesterday and I am so sorry about what happened. What shitty luck, but don''t worry, your safe with me <<$pcs_firstname>>." He then hugs you.'
+											'You turn to see Niko standing over you. "I''ve been so worried about you! I heard what happened yesterday and I''m so sorry about what happened. Don''t worry, you''re safe with me <<$pcs_firstname>>." He then hugs you.'
 
 											act 'Return the hug':
 												*clr & cla
@@ -916,28 +913,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 												gs'stat'
 												'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-												'You return the hug as you think to yourself, '+$OpenInnerThought+'I know Katja told me that he is no good for me, but I need him. Niko takes care of me and I just want to make him happy. I know that he wouldn''t lie to me. I''m sure that he will even find a way to clear my reputation. I just need to do what he says. Ohh Nikolai, I love you so much.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+												'You tightly return the hug and he gently pats your back while comforting you.' 
 	
 												act 'Continue':
 													*clr & cla
 													gs'stat'	
 													'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer2.jpg"></center>'												
-													'Niko kisses your forehead then says, "You know that you can always trust me right?" You eagerly nod with a big smile on your face, "Of course I do. I love you Nikolai." Niko returns the smile as he leans forward and gives you a very passionate kiss. After you both finish your kiss, Niko rubs your cheek then says, "I know that you''ve been through a lot, but you look so beautiful and your body is so perfect. Could you please suck my dick? I would be so grateful." He continues to rub your cheek gently.'
+													'He kisses your forehead. "You know that you can always trust me right?" You eagerly nod with a big smile on your face. "Of course I do. I love you Nikolai." Niko returns the smile as he leans forward and gives you a very passionate kiss, he gently strokes your cheek. "I know that you''ve been through a lot, but you look so beautiful and your body is so perfect. Could you please suck my dick? I would be so grateful." He continues to stroke your cheek.'
 
-													act 'Suck Niko''s dick':
+													act 'Suck his dick':
 														*clr & cla
 														NikoEv = 11
 														minut += 5
 														gs'stat'
 														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/kotovbj23.mp4"></video></center>'
-														'You reply, "Of course I will Niko. You need only ask." You eagerly unbutton his pants then pull out his dick before quickly wrapping your lips around it, hearing Niko moan as you do it. '+$OpenInnerThought+'It feels so good to be sucking Niko''s dick again. My man. Oh How I missed you. I don''t even care if I''m a whore, but I want to be your whore Niko. I only want to please you. Only you.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+														'"Of course I will! You need only ask." You eagerly unbutton his pants and pull out his dick before quickly wrapping your lips around it, hearing Niko moan as you start passionately sucking his dick.' 
 
 														act 'Continue':
 															*clr & cla
 															gs'stat'
 															'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum1.11.mp4"></video></center>'
-															'You continue sucking Niko''s dick firmly while staring into his eyes, enjoying the pleased look that he is giving you which shows you that you are doing a good job. Suddenly Niko''s eyes squint as he groans, filling your mouth with his warm seed which you swallow eagerly, enjoying the warmth of it sliding down your throat and even the sting as it goes down. Niko places his hand on your cheek, gently stroking it with his thumb as he says, "You are so perfect <<$pcs_firstname>>. I am so lucky to have you and don''t worry, I will find a way to fix what happened yesterday. Meet me after school and we will go out on a nice walk. We''ll discuss what to do next then." Niko kisses you on your forehead before zipping his pants then leaving the restroom.'
+															'You continue firmly sucking Niko''s dick while staring into his eyes, enjoying the pleased look that he''s giving you. His eyes suddenly squint as he groans, filling your mouth with his warm cum. Once he''s finished, you eagerly swallow it all, enjoying the warmth of it sliding down your throat. Niko places his hand on your cheek, gently stroking it with his thumb. "You''re so perfect <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m so lucky to have you and don''t worry, I''ll find a way to fix what happened yesterday. Meet me after school and we''ll go out on a nice walk. We''ll discuss what to do next then." He then kisses you on your forehead before zipping his pants up and leaving the restroom.'
 															gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A189', 1
 															gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -949,12 +946,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 												end	
 											end
 
-											act 'Pull away from Niko':
+											act 'Pull away':
 												*clr & cla
 												gs'stat'
 												'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-												'You suddenly pull away from Niko while shouting, "Where the fuck were you yesterday? You left me cuffed on the floor then I got raped and humiliated!" Niko sighs as he replies, "I totally forgot <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m sorry. I know that is no excuse, but we can make things better." You quickly shout back, "Make things better? How the fuck can you make things better? I am nothing but a whore to everyone now! I have lost everything!" Niko smirks as he replies, "I know someone that can restore your reputation for you." You recoil in shock, "Really? How?" Niko says, "Let''s talk about this at my place tonight."'
+												'You suddenly pull away from Niko while shouting. "Where the fuck were you yesterday? You left me cuffed on the floor and I was raped and humiliated!" Niko sighs as he replies. "I totally forgot <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m sorry. I know that is no excuse, but we can make things better." You quickly shout back. "Make things better? How the fuck can you make things better? Everyone thinks I''m just a cheap whore now! I''ve lost everything!" Niko smirks as he replies. "I know someone that can restore your reputation for you." You recoil in shock and he grins. "Let''s talk about this at my place tonight."'
 
 												act 'Agree':
 													*clr & cla
@@ -963,14 +960,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-													'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+													'You lower your posture as you reply. "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt things can get any worse." Niko wraps his arms around you and brings his face to yours before responding. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school and we''ll work on fixing your reputation. Trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving him a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 													
-													act 'Kiss Niko':
+													act 'Kiss him':
 														*clr & cla
 														minut += 5
 														gs'stat'
 														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-														'You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
+														'You lean forward and give him a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko smiles. "You''re such an incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you. Now don''t forget to meet me after school. I''ll be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head as he turns around and walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed and follow him out.'
 
 														act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 													end
@@ -986,7 +983,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 													minut += 5
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/ouch.jpg"></center>'
-													'You quickly push Niko away. "Fuck you! You are just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry, "You ungrateful bitch! I have done so much for you and spent so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward then ram your knee into Niko''s balls then spit on him before grabbing your clothes and walking out of the restroom.'
+													'You quickly push him away. "Fuck you! You''re just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry. "You ungrateful bitch! I''ve done so much for you and spent so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward and ram your knee into his balls before spitting on him. You quickly grab your clothes and walk out of the restroom.'
 
 													act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 												end
@@ -1006,14 +1003,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You keep your head lowered as you quicken your pace. One of the boys smacks your ass hard, causing you to jump up, but you try to ignore it while you feel tears streaming down your face. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Is this what my life will be like for now on? Will things ever go back to the way they were before? Why is this happening? What did I do wrong? Can''t they just leave me alone?'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You keep your head lowered as you quicken your pace. One of the boys smacks your ass hard, causing you to jump, but you try to ignore it as tears stream down your face.' 
 		
 		act 'Continue walking':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'		
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/hallway/wos4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You continue quickly walking through the hall as you hear the students whispering about you, when you suddenly hear, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> are you alright? I''ve been so worried about you."'
+			'You continue quickly walking through the hall as the students continue whispering about you when you suddenly hear someone calling you out. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, are you alright? I''ve been so worried about you!"'
 
 			act 'Look up':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame 2'
 		end
@@ -1027,7 +1024,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face, "<<$pcs_firstname>> please tell me you''re ok." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts then respond, "I... I''m scared Nikolai. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms, "I''m sorry about what happened to you, I wish I was there to prevent it, but I will always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
+	'You look up to see Niko with a very distressed look on his face. "Please tell me you''re okay." You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts before responding. "I... I''m scared Niko. I don''t think things will ever be normal for me again. I''m just a whore to everyone. What do I do Niko? What do I do?" Tears are streaming down your face as Niko holds you in his arms. "I''m sorry about what happened to you. I wish I was there to prevent it, but I''ll always be here for you when you need me. Remember that. I will always be here for you." You begin weeping in his arms as he holds you tighter.'
 
 	act 'Weep in his arms':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1036,14 +1033,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me... Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me. He''s the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me... Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 
 		act 'Embrace Niko':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'		
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'		
-			'You tighten your arms around Niko as he kisses your neck firmly. "Everything will be alright. I will find a way to fix this, just follow my lead and everything will be alright, ok?" You reply, "I will do whatever you say Nikolai, just please stay with me. I need you now more than ever." Niko responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m not going anywhere, now let''s get you to class." Niko guides you to your first class.'
+			'You tighten your arms around Niko as he firmly kisses your neck. "Everything will be alright. I''ll find a way to fix this, just follow my lead and everything will be alright, okay?"'
+			'"I''ll do whatever you say Nikolai, just please stay with me. I need you now more than ever." He smiles softly. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m not going anywhere. Now let''s get you to class."'
 
 			act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 		end
@@ -1055,7 +1053,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You suddenly pull away from Niko while shouting, "Where the fuck were you yesterday? You left me cuffed on the floor then I got raped and humiliated!" Niko sighs as he replies, "I totally forgot <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m sorry. I know that is no excuse, but we can make things better." You quickly shout back, "Make things better? How the fuck can you make things better? I am nothing but a whore to everyone now! I have lost everything!" Niko smirks as he replies, "I know someone that can restore your reputation for you." You recoil in shock, "Really? How?" Niko says, "Let''s talk about this at my place tonight."'
+		'You pull away from him while shouting. "Where the fuck were you yesterday? You left me cuffed on the floor and I was raped and humiliated!" Niko sighs as he replies. "I totally forgot <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m sorry. I know that is no excuse, but we can make things better." You quickly shout back. "Make things better? How the fuck can you make things better? Everyone thinks I''m just a cheap whore now! I''ve lost everything!" Niko smirks as he replies. "I know someone that can restore your reputation for you." You recoil in shock and he grins. "Let''s talk about this at my place tonight."'
 
 		act 'Stay with Niko':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1063,13 +1061,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+			'You lower your posture as you reply. "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt things can get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you and brings his face to yours before responding. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school and we''ll work on fixing your reputation. Trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving him a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 
-			act 'Push him away':
+			act 'Kiss him':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'			
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
+				'You lean forward and give him a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko smiles. "You''re such an incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you. Now don''t forget to meet me after school. I''ll be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head as he turns around and walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed and follow him out.'
 
 				act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 			end
@@ -1084,7 +1082,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			NikoPayback = 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/ouch.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly push Niko away. "Fuck you! You are just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry, "You ungrateful bitch! I have done so much for you and spent, so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward then ram your knee into Niko''s balls then spit on him before grabbing your clothes and walking away.'
+			'You quickly push him away. "Fuck you! You''re just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry. "You ungrateful bitch! I''ve done so much for you and spent so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward and ram your knee into his balls before spitting on him. You quickly grab your clothes and walk out of the restroom.'
 
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 		end
@@ -1099,20 +1097,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'leave_with_nush':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00ff6c><<"Anushka [Nush] Konstantinov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big144.jpg"></center>'
-	'With that the turn and walk away with you between them. Anushka takes off her school jacket, slipping it over your shoulders while Alyona takes her off to tie hers by the sleaves around your waist. Wearing two jackets looks weird but at least you are no longer exposed, as you walk down the hall you pass by Petka who looks at the three of you with huge eyes, obviously wondering why you are dresses this way. You turn your head blushing, Anushka wraps a around around your shoulders, Alyona meanwhile steps away and walks up to Petka. "What the fuck you looking at?" You hear him stuttering a bit and obviously scared of her. "Noth... Nothing." "Then look that way and keep walking or I will cut those eyes out, got it?" She says to him. He replies in a high toned squeaky voice. "Yes!" Then you hear him running off.'
-	*nl
-	'"Where''s your clothes?" Anushka asks you, you tell her it was in the locker room and they lead you there. You find your clothes still there in a bag, you give them back their jackets as you get redressed. Once you are finally dressed you don''t want to leave and go back to class, not now, maybe not ever. "I don''t want to face anyone, I can''t." You tell them through sobs. You hear one of them sigh, but then Anushka says. "Alright, fuck school anyways. Lets take you home." Alyona chimes in. "Sorry can''t, they said if I miss anymore classes this month they are going to expel me and my dad would fucking kill me." She sounds genuinely worried. "It''s cool, I got her. You get to class, I''ll call you later." They exchange goodbyes and then Alyona starts to leave and stops with the door open. "It''s clear." And with that she leaves. "Come on lets go." Anushka says.'
-	act 'Go with her.':
+	'With you between them, Anushka and Alyona turn and lead you away. Anushka takes off her school jacket and slips it over your shoulders while Alyona tie hers around your waist. As you walk down the hall, you pass by Petka, who clearly wonders why you are dressed this way. You blush and turn your head as Anushka wraps an arm around your shoulders and Alyona walks up to Petka. "What the fuck you looking at?" You hear him stuttering. "Keep walking or I''ll cut those eyes out. Got it?" He doesn''t answer, instead choosing to simply run away in fear.'
+    '"Where are your clothes?" Anushka asks and you tell her that they''re in the locker room. They lead you there and you find your clothes still there in a bag. You return their jackets as you get redressed. Once you''re dressed, you don''t want to leave and go back to class. Not now, maybe not ever. "I don''t want to face anyone, I can''t." you tell them through sobs. You hear one of them sigh before Anushka replies. "Alright, fuck school anyways. Let''s take you home." Alyona chimes in. "Sorry, I can''t. They said if I miss anymore classes this month, they''re going to expel me. My dad would fucking kill me if that happened." She sounds genuinely worried. "It''s cool, I got her. You get to class and I''ll call you later." They exchange goodbyes and Alyona starts to leave. "Come on, let''s go." Anushka says and places a hand on your shoulder.'
+	act 'Go with her.'
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/walk_homeg1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lean on her and she leads you out of the locker room into the gym and from there out the side door to the sports field. You lean on her as you walk, ashamed of what happened today and not knowing what to say. Anushka on the other hand mostly talks about how much of a complete piece of shit Niko is, you have mixed feelings about that, he left you to be found like he did but you still love him... don''t you?'
+		'You lean on her and she leads you out of the locker room. You lean on her as you walk, ashamed of what happened and not knowing what to say. Anushka on the other hand mostly talks about how much of a piece of shit Niko is. You have mixed feelings; he left you to be found like that, but you still love him... At least you think you do...'
 		*nl
 		if npc_rel['A144'] >= 60:
-			'When you arrive at the door to your apartment she waits for you to unlock your door. You walk inside and invite her in. "You want to come in?" She shakes her head no. "I should really get back to school, I can still catch my last two classes." You nod at that, just as she starts to walk off you tell her. "Thank you for helping me, I know what it cost you." She stops and smiles at you. "Fuck them, you''re my friend. I will always have your back." Then she frowns. "Just break the fuck up with Niko next time you see him, he doesn''t love you, not like I do, so do it for me... I''ll see you later." With that she turns and starts down the starts. You close the door now safe inside of your own apartment, her words ring in your head '+$OpenInnerThought+'he doesn''t love you, not like I do, so do it for me... But I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. Doesn''t he? You feel confused and afraid, you don''t know what to do.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+			'When you arrive at the door to your apartment, she waits for you to unlock your door. You walk inside and invite her in, but she shakes her head. "I should really get back to school. I can still catch my last two classes." You nod and call out to her as she walks away. "Thanks for helping me. I know what it cost you." She stops and smiles at you. "Fuck them, you''re my friend. I''ll always have your back." Then she frowns. "Just break the fuck up with Niko next time you see him. He doesn''t love you, not like I do, so do it for me... I''ll see you later." With that she turns and starts walking down the stairs. You close the door as her words ring in your head. You feel confused and afraid. You don''t know what to do...'
 		else
-			'When you arrive at the door to your apartment she waits for you to unlock your door. You walk inside and invite her in. "You want to come in?" She shakes her head no. "I should really get back to school, I can still catch my last two classes." You nod at that, just as she starts to walk off you tell her. "Thank you for helping me, I know what it cost you." She stops and smiles at you. "I like you, and fuck them." Then she frowns. "But you need to break up with Niko next time you see him, I won''t be there to save you every time." With that she turns and starts down the starts. You close the door now safe inside of your own apartment, her words ring in your head '+$OpenInnerThought+'I won''t be there to save you every time. but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. Doesn''t he? You feel confused and afraid, you don''t know what to do.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
-		end
-		act 'In your apartment safe and sound': gt 'korrPar'
+			'When you arrive at the door to your apartment, she waits for you to unlock your door. You walk inside and invite her in, but she shakes her head. "I should really get back to school. I can still catch my last two classes." You nod and call out to her as she walks away. "Thanks for helping me. I know what it cost you." She stops and smiles at you. "I like you, and fuck them." Then she frowns. "But you need to break up with Niko next time you see him. I won''t be there to save you every time." With that she turns and starts walking down the stairs. You close the door as her words ring in your head. You feel confused and afraid. You don''t know what to do...'
+		act 'Your apartment': gt 'korrPar'
 	end
 end