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Some proofreading for Katja

Vengeance_11 4 months ago
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      locations/katja_city.qsrc
  2. 222 223
      locations/katja_city_sex.qsrc
  3. 212 209
      locations/katja_nightclub.qsrc
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      locations/katja_nightclub_sex.qsrc

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locations/katja_city.qsrc

@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 # katja_city
 !2022/03/08
 
-!! This file governs Katja''s actian in the city center and park. For the variable controlling her content see the documentation in katja_procedural.
+!! This file governs Katja''s actions in the city center and park. For the variables controlling her content, see the documentation in katja_procedural.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'metro':
 	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/waiting_metro.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'katja_meynold_schedule'
-	'You walk to the Metro station and '+iif(money >= 16, 'pay the fare.', ' since you don''t have any money Katja pays the fare for you.')+' You then go down to the platform and chat while you wait for the train.'
+	'You walk to the Metro station '+iif(money >= 16, 'and pay the fare.', 'but don''t have any money, so Katja pays the fare for you.')+' You then go down to the platform and chat while you wait for the train.'
 	if money >= 16: money -= 16
 	act 'Wait for the train':
 		!! Here will be a check for random events as soon as some are written.
@@ -19,16 +19,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'metro_ride':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/riding_metro.jpg"></center>'
-	'The train arrives and you board before finding a place to sit as the train leaves the station.' 
+	'The train arrives and you board before finding a place to sit as it leaves the station.' 
 	act 'Chat with Katja':
 		!! Here will be a check for random events as soon as some are written.
 		if katjaQW['drinks'] > rand(10,14):
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/city/metro_drunk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Katja is so drunk that she doesn''t manage to get to a seat, and just lies down on the floor just inside the train.'
-			'You try to get her up, but she is really persistent that she lies perfectly well on the floor and just needs a small nap.'
+			'Katja is so drunk that she doesn''t make it to a seat and just lies on the floor.'
+			'You try to get her up, but she insists that she''s fine and just needs a nap.'
 			'You manage to get her to stand up just as you arrive at your station.'
-			act 'Get off the train and leave the metro': gt 'katja_city', 'metro_destination'
+			act 'Leave the metro': gt 'katja_city', 'metro_destination'
 		else
 			gt 'katja_city', 'metro_get_off'
 		end
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'metro_get_off':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/riding_metro.jpg"></center>'	
 	'You chat with Katja as the train heads through the tunnel. After a short time, you arrive at your destination.'  
-	act 'Get off the train and leave the metro':
+	act 'Leave the metro':
 		!! Here will be a check for random events as soon as some are written.
 		gt 'katja_city', 'metro_destination'
 	end
@@ -68,30 +68,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'metro_destination':
 		katjaQW['disco_arrival'] = totminut
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-		'You exit the metro station walk to the nightclub, and get in line.'
+		'You exit the metro station and walk to the nightclub, where you get in line.'
 		if hotcat = 10:
-			'The bouncer almost immediately spots the two of you and lets you in, jumping to the front of the long line and you can hear several complaints, but also some whitling and more lewd comments.'
+			'The bouncer almost immediately spots the two of you and lets you in, allowing you to skip the long line. You can hear several complaints, but also some whistling and lewd comments.'
 		elseif hotcat > 7:
 			minut += 5
-			'The two of you stand in line for a short while, before the bouncer singles you out, and you get to jump ahead of several people much to their complaints.'
+			'The two of you stand in line for a short while before the bouncer singles you out and you get to jump ahead of several people, much to their annoyance.'
 		elseif hotcat > 5:
 			minut += 10
-			'You wait in line for some time, but finally, it is your turn to be let in.'
+			'You wait in line for some time, but finally make it to the door.'
 		else
 			minut += rand(15,20)
-			'You wait in line for a long time, while several girls are allowed to jump ahead of you. But finally, you are allowed in.'
+			'You wait in line for a long time as several more attractive girls are allowed to jump ahead of you, but are eventually allowed in.'
 		end
 		if money >= 250:
 			money -= 250
-			'You pay the fee of 250<b>₽</b>, and go into the club.'
+			'You pay the 250<b>₽</b> entrance fee and head into the club.'
 		else
-			'Turns out you don''t have enough to pay for the entrance fee, so Katja pays for you telling you that next time you will have to pay.'
+			'You don''t have enough to pay the entrance fee, so Katja pays for you.'
+			'"You''re paying for us next time," she says with a slight hint of annoyance.'
 		end
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
-			'"Let''s start with a dance," Katja says when you are finally inside the club and starts to drag you to the dance floor.'
+			'"Let''s start with a dance," she says when you''re finally inside the club and drags you to the dance floor.'
 			act 'Go to the dance floor': gt 'katja_nightclub', 'dance'
 		else
-			'"Let''s start by having a drink," Katja says when you are finally inside the club and start to drag you to the bar.'
+			'"Let''s start with a drink," she says when you''re finally inside the club and drags you to the bar.'
 			act 'Go to the bar': gt 'katja_nightclub', 'bar_arrive'
 		end
 	else
@@ -100,14 +101,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'metro_destination':
 			if katjaQW['drinks'] > rand(8,12):
 				minut += 30
 				gs 'stat'
-				'Katja is so drunk that she can barely walk. So you decide to help her home. It takes quite a while since she tries to sit down several times refusing to walk further.'
-				'But you finally manage to get her to her room and in her bed. She goes out immediately and you lever her to sleep.'
-				act 'Go to the hallway': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
+				'Katja is so drunk that she can barely walk, so you decide to help her home. It takes quite a while since she tries to sit down several times and refuses to walk further, but you eventually manage to get her back to her dorm room and into her bed, where she immediately falls asleep. You leave her to sleep and quietly leave the room.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 			else
 				if katjaQW['horny'] > rand(40,80) and katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] < 2:
-					'You get out at the Metro Station near the university and Katja suggests that you go with her to her room'
-					act 'Go with her to her room': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'comming_home_from_date'
-					act 'Say you don''t want to and leave her': gt 'city_island'
+					'You exit the metro station near the university and Katja suggests that you come with her to her room.'
+					act 'Go with her': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'comming_home_from_date'
+					act 'Leave her': gt 'city_island'
 				else
 					'You exit the metro station near the university and say goodbye to each other.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'city_island'
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clothes_start2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	'Before you leave, Katja stops you. "Do you want to try on some clothes with me?" she asks.'
-	act 'Say yes':
+	act 'Yes':
 		*clr & cla
 		katjaQW['shopping_day'] = daystart
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
@@ -186,9 +186,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pussy-Cats':
 	killvar 'store_choice'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/KWS1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into Pussy-Cats, the trendy store for cool kids like you, but still affordable enough that you might be able to buy what you try on if you really like it.'
-	'You start browsing the stands looking at all the new fashion trends for the young and hip. After a while, you decide that you should each pick a set that you think would look great on the other.' 
-	'Spending some time looking, you find something that you really would like to see Katja in. You return to her and she also has some clothes for you to try on. You head to the changing rooms and find one big enough for the two of you.'
+	'You walk into Pussy-Cats, the trendy store for cool kids, but still affordable enough that you might be able to buy what you try on if you really like it.'
+	'You start browsing the stands, looking at all the new fashion trends. After a while, you decide that you should each pick a set that you think would look great on the other.' 
+	'You soon find something that you''d like to see Katja in. You return to her and find that she also has some clothes for you to try on, so you head to the changing rooms and find one big enough for the two of you.'
 	act 'Try on clothes':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -197,12 +197,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pussy-Cats':
 		loop_counter += 1
 		if loop_counter = 600:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-			'You try to put on what Katja brought you, but it''s ' + iif(pcs_bmi < 25, 'way too loose and will fall off', 'so tight you can''t get into it') + ' so you give up. "I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve miscalculated your size. Let me get something else," Katja says.'
+			'You try to put on what Katja brought you, but it''s ' + iif(pcs_bmi < 25, 'way too loose and will fall off', 'so tight you can''t get into it') + ' so you give up. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, seems I''ve miscalculated your size. Let me get something else," she says.'
 			'You stop her before she runs out. "Hey don''t be sorry, it''s not your fault. Try what I picked out first."'
 			act 'Katja tries the clothes you picked': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(0,3)>>'
 		else
 			if rand(0,1) = 1:
-				numrand = rand(1, 220)
+				numrand = rand(1,220)
 
 				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cats_dress', numrand
 				if CloBimbo = 1: jump 'tryclotheswithkatja_pussy_cats'
@@ -228,12 +228,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pussy-Cats':
 					act 'Tell her that you like it':
 						cla
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'love'
-						'"This is really nice. As always, your fashion sense is impeccable," you say and Katja''s face lights up like a Christmas tree.'
+						'"This is really nice. As always, your fashion sense is impeccable," you say and her face lights up like a Christmas tree.'
 						'You look at the price tag and see that it costs <<price>>.'
 						if money > price: 
 							act 'Buy the dress (cash)':
 								cla
-								'"I''m going to buy this dress after you try on what I picked for you."'
+								'"I''ll buy it, but only after you try on what I picked for you."'
 								'"That''s so great!" she says, looking really happy.'
 								gs 'clothing', 'quick_buy', 'cats_dress', numrand, 3000, 'money'							
 								act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
@@ -242,30 +242,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pussy-Cats':
 						if karta > price:
 							act 'Buy the dress (card)':
 								cla
-								'"I''m going to buy this dress after you try on what I picked for you."'
+								'"I''ll buy it, but only after you try on what I picked for you."'
 								'"That''s so great!" she says, looking really happy.'
 								gs 'clothing', 'quick_buy', 'cats_dress', numrand, 3000, 'karta'							
 								act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
 							end
 						end
-						act 'Say it is too expensive for you':
+						act 'It''s too expensive for you':
 							cla
-							'"I wish I could afford to buy it, but I don''t have the money right now," you say.'
+							'"I wish I could afford it, but I don''t have the money right now," you say.'
 							'"That''s totally fine. We didn''t do this to buy stuff, just to have fun trying on new things," she replies.' 
 							act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
 						end
 					end
 					act 'It''s not really you':
 						cla
-						'"It''s nice, but I don''t think that this dress is really me," you tell her, trying to let her down gently.'
-						'"Well, I had to try," she says somberly. "You know you should try new things once in a while or else you will miss out on so many great things."'
+						'"It''s nice, but I don''t think that it''s really me," you tell her, trying to let her down gently.'
+						'"Well, I had to try," she says somberly. "You know you should try new things once in a while or you''ll miss out on so many great things."'
 						act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
 					end
 				else
 					jump 'tryclotheswithkatja_pussy_cats'
 				end
 			else
-				numrand = rand(1, 200)
+				numrand = rand(1,200)
 
 				gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cats_dress', numrand
 				if CloBimbo = 1: jump 'tryclotheswithkatja_pussy_cats'
@@ -291,12 +291,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pussy-Cats':
 					act 'Tell her that you like it':
 						cla
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'love'
-						'"This is really nice. As always, your fashion sense is impeccable," you say and Katja''s face lights up like a Christmas tree.'
+						'"This is really nice. As always, your fashion sense is impeccable," you say and her face lights up like a Christmas tree.'
 						'You look at the price tag and see that it costs <<price>>.'
 						if money >= price: 
 							act 'Buy the clothes (cash)':
 								cla
-								'"I''m going to buy this dress after you try on what I picked for you."'
+								'"I''ll buy it, but only after you try on what I picked for you."'
 								'"That''s so great!" she says, looking really happy.'
 								gs 'clothing', 'quick_buy', 'cats_outfits', numrand, 3000, 'money'							
 								act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
@@ -305,23 +305,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Pussy-Cats':
 						if karta >= price:
 							act 'Buy the clothes (card)':
 								cla
-								'"I''m going to buy this dress after you try on what I picked for you."'
+								'"I''ll buy it, but only after you try on what I picked for you."'
 								'"That''s so great!" she says, looking really happy.'
 								gs 'clothing', 'quick_buy', 'cats_outfits', numrand, 3000, 'karta'							
 								act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
 							end
 						end
-						act 'Say it is too expensive for you':
+						act 'It''s too expensive for you':
 							cla
-							'"I wish I could afford to buy it, but I don''t have the money right now," you say.'
+							'"I wish I could afford it, but I don''t have the money right now," you say.'
 							'"That''s totally fine. We didn''t do this to buy stuff, just to have fun trying on new things," she replies.'  
 							act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
 						end
 					end
 					act 'It''s not really you':
 						cla
-						'"It''s nice, but I don''t think that this dress is really me," you tell her, trying to let her down gently.'
-						'"Well, I had to try," she says somberly. "You know you should try new things once in a while or else you will miss out on so many great things."'
+						'"It''s nice, but I don''t think that it''s really me," you tell her, trying to let her down gently.'
+						'"Well, I had to try," she says somberly. "You know you should try new things once in a while or you''ll miss out on so many great things."'
 						act 'Katja''s turn': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit<<rand(1,2)>>'
 					end
 				else
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'While you change back to your original clothes, Katja puts on the sleeveless shirt and very short pants you''ve chosen for her. Once she''s finished dressing, she turns around so you can get a good look at her.'
 	if katjaQW['slut'] >= 100:
-		'"Wow, these are so great," she says when she sees herself in the mirror. "I''m definitely going to be the sexiest girl on campus wearing these. Though I should probably be weary of Lizaveta seeing me wearing this; she might start spreading rumors that I''ve become a whore," she says with a wink.'
+		'"Wow, these are great!" she says when she sees herself in the mirror. "I''m definitely going to be the sexiest girl on campus wearing these. Though I should probably be weary of Lizaveta seeing me wearing this; she might start spreading rumors that I''ve become a whore," she says with a wink.'
 	elseif katjaQW['slut'] >= 80:
 		'"Damn, I look sexy in these!" she says. "Maybe too sexy. I think this should only be used for special occasions and not for going to class."'
 	elseif katjaQW['slut'] >= 60:
@@ -345,15 +345,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1':
 	elseif katjaQW['slut'] >= 40:
 		'"This is too much," she says. "This isn''t something I can wear anywhere."' 
 		'"But you have to agree that that you look sexy?" you reply.'
-		'"Well yeah, but I can''t see myself wearing it outside here," she answers.' 
+		'"Well yeah, but I can''t see myself wearing it outside of here," she answers.' 
 	elseif katjaQW['slut'] >= 20:
-		'"What were you thinking, <<$pcs_nickname>>?!" Katja says. "These are clothes for sluts!"'
-		'"Come on, Katja. You look so sexy in it!" you reply.'
-		'"Maybe, but you''re not going to see me in it outside this changing room," she answers.'
+		'"What were you thinking, <<$pcs_nickname>>?!" she says. "These are clothes for sluts!"'
+		'"Come on, you look so sexy in them!" you reply.'
+		'"Maybe, but you''re not going to see me in them outside this changing room!"'
 	else
 		'"What the heck? Are you trying to turn me into a prostitute?!" she almost yells.'
-		'"Come on, Katja! You look so sexy in these," you reply.'
-		'"We are not having this conversation! This is coming off right now!" she replies.'  
+		'"Come on, you look so sexy in them!" you reply.'
+		'"We are not having this conversation! This is coming off right now!"'  
 	end
 	act 'Ask her to turn around':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -362,17 +362,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1':
 		if katjaQW['slut'] < 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Come on, turn around and let me see you from behind," you say.'
-			'"No," Katja answers as she starts taking the clothes off. "I still don''t know what you were thinking choosing these shorts!"'
+			'"No," she answers as she starts taking the clothes off. "I still don''t know what you were thinking choosing these shorts!"'
 			'You let her change clothes in silence. "Well, thanks for this anyway. You should choose some proper clothes for me next time though," she says once she''s finished.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_2.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Come on, turn around and let me see you from behind," you say.'
-			iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 80, '"Of course," Katja says. "I''m sure you''ll enjoy the view!"', '"Really, <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"')
+			iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 80, '"Of course," she says. "I''m sure you''ll enjoy the view!"', '"Really, <<$pcs_nickname>>?!"')
 			'"Come on, it''s just me," you answer.'
 			'After a moment''s hesitation, she answers, "Okay."'
 			'She turns around and shows you a sight that barely leaves anything to the imagination as the shorts have crept up her butt crack. "Damn that looks good on you," you say. "Great ass!"'
-			iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 80, '"Thanks!" Katja says. "These will really make me the center of attention at a party."', '"Don''t say that!" Katja says. "It''s really annoying how they creep on my butt!"')+' She then turns around to face you again.'
+			iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 80, '"Thanks!" she says. "These will really make me the center of attention at a party."', '"Don''t say that! It''s really annoying how they creep on my butt!"')+' She then turns around to face you again.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 1
@@ -385,26 +385,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1':
 				else
 					if katjaQW['QWstage'] > 2 and katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] < 2:
 						if katjaQW['slut'] > 60:
-							act 'Ask Katja to put on a show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip'
+							act 'Ask her to put on a show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip'
 						else
 							gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-								act 'Ask Katja to put on a show (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								act 'Ask her to put on a show (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 									gs 'stat'
 									gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip'					
 								end
 							else
-								act 'Ask Katja to put on a show (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+								act 'Ask her to put on a show (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 							end
 						end
 					end
-					act 'Let Katja change clothes in peace':
+					act 'Let her change clothes in peace':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 3
 						gs 'stat'	
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_3.jpg"></center>'
-						'Katja finishes changing back to her original clothes and you leave the shop. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+						'Katja finishes changing back to her original clothes and you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 						act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					end
 				end
@@ -418,25 +418,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip':
 	katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Katja starts by moving more sensually while she slowly unbuttons the shirt before letting it fall to the side, revealing her bare breast. She then unbuttons the pants and puts her hands on her sides.'
+	'Katja starts by moving more sensually while slowly unbuttoning the shirt before letting it fall to the side, revealing her bare breast. She then unbuttons the pants and puts her hands on her sides.'
 	if npc_sex['A14'] > 0:
 		if max(katjaQW['horny'],100) > rand(50,150) and katjaQW['slut'] >= 80:
 			act 'Katja makes things more interesting': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play'
 		else
 			gs 'willpower', 'mast', 'force'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Ask Katja to touch herself (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Ask her to touch herself (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 					gs 'stat'
 					gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play'					
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Ask Katja to touch herself (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Ask her to touch herself (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
-			act 'Let Katja finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip2' 
+			act 'Let her finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip2' 
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Let Katja finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip2'
+		act 'Let her finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -448,9 +448,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_strip2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_5a.jpg"></center>'
 	'Katja slowly pulls her pants halfway down her thighs, then lets go of them and puts her arms in front of her in a way that pushes her breasts forward. "See something you like?" she asks in a seductive tone.'
-	'"Very impressive," you say.'
+	'"Very impressive..." you say.'
 	'"Enough of this," she says with a laugh, and starts to change her clothes normally.'
-	'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+	'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 	act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -459,8 +459,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play':
 	katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_5b.jpg"></center>'
-	'Katja stops pulling the pants down and puts one hand on her breast and the other down the pants and starts playing with herself. She seems to be really getting into it.'
-	act 'Watch Katja enjoy herself':
+	'Katja stops pulling the pants down and places one hand on her breast and the other down the pants before she starts playing with herself. She seems to be really getting into it.'
+	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3
 		katjaQW['horny'] += 10
@@ -468,12 +468,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_6.jpg"></center>'
 		'As she gets closer to cumming, she removes her hand from her breast and pulls down the pants so that her other hand has better access.'
 		if katjaQW['know_butt_plug'] = 0:
-			'Out of your eye, you notice that Katja''s bag is open and see something that surprises you. You open the bag and pull out a butt plug and a vibrator. Seems Katja is more naughty than you knew.'
+			'Out of your eye, you notice that her bag is open and see something that surprises you. You open the bag and pull out a butt plug and vibrator.'
 			'"Well, well, what do we have here?" you say as you show your findings to Katja, who immediately stops what she''s doing and blushes bright red.' 
-			'"I... Vicky gave them to me when I moved to the dorm. They aren''t something I would use," she stammers.'
+			'"I... Vicky gave them to me when I moved to the dorm. They aren''t something I would use!" she stammers.'
 			'"Then why are they in your bag if you don''t use them?" you ask.'
-			'"Because I don''t want Sofia to find them. That girl gets into all my stuff and if she finds them, she won''t stop asking me about it," she answers.'
-			'"So you have never used them?" you ask.'
+			'"Because I don''t want Sofia to find them! That girl gets into all my stuff and if she finds them, she won''t stop asking me about it," she answers.'
+			'"So you''ve never used them?" you ask.'
 			if katjaQW['masturbates'] + npc_ass['A14'] = 0:
 				'"I''ve never used any of them," she says.'
 				'"Well, then you''re going to try several new things today," you say and hand her the butt plug.'
@@ -481,12 +481,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play':
 				'"I''ve never used the '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1, 'butt plug', 'vibrator')+'." she says.'
 				'"So you''ve used the '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1, 'vibrator', 'butt plug')+'? You''re going to try something new today," you say and hand her the butt plug.'
 			else
-				'Katja doesn''t say anything, but her face is becoming even more red than before. "So you have been using them, you dirty girl!" you say with a smile. "Show me how you use them," you say as you hand her the butt plug.'
+				'She doesn''t say anything, but her face is becoming even more red than before. "So you <i>have</i> been using them, you dirty girl!" you say with a smile. "Show me how you use them," you say as you hand her the butt plug.'
 			end
 		else
 			'You look into Katja''s bag and find her butt plug and vibrator. "Use these to make the show even better," you say as you hand her the butt plug.'
 		end
-		act 'Watch Katja insert the butt plug':
+		act 'Watch her insert the butt plug':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 			katjaQW['horny'] += 10
@@ -494,33 +494,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play':
 			if npc_ass['A14'] = 0:
 				npc_ass['A14'] = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_7a.jpg"></center>'		
-				'"I''ve never put anything in my butt before!" Katja protests.'
+				'"I''ve never put anything in my butt before!" she protests.'
 				'"There''s a first time for everything," you reply. "Lick it first to lubricate it."'
-				'Katja does as you say and starts to lick the butt plug. After a minute, you say, "I think it''s wet enough for you to put it in now. Lie down in the chair; it will be easier to put it in from that position."'
-				'She moves to the chair and then guides the butt plug to the opening of her ass. She starts pushing it in, but clearly meets some resistance. "Take your time," you say, but Katja seems determined and after a short while she pushes the butt plug completely into her ass with a slight groan of pain.'
+				'She does as you say and starts licking the butt plug. "I think it''s wet enough for you to put it in now," you say after a minute. "Lie down in the chair; it''ll be easier to put it in from that position."'
+				'She moves to the chair and guides the butt plug to her ass. She starts pushing it in, but clearly meets some resistance. "Take your time," you say, but she seems determined and after a short while she pushes the butt plug completely into her ass with a slight groan of pain.'
 			else
 				if npc_ass['A14'] < 5: npc_ass['A14'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_7b.jpg"></center>'		
-				'Katja takes the butt plug and starts licking it. After a minute or so, she lies down in the chair and starts pushing the butt plug into her ass.'+iif(npc_ass['A14'] <= 5, ' You can see that there is some resistance and Katja holds back some near inaudible groans of pain.', 'The butt plug goes in without any resistance, and she pulls it back and forth a little while moaning slightly.')
+				'Katja takes the butt plug and starts licking it. After a minute or so, she lies down in the chair and starts pushing the butt plug into her ass.'+iif(npc_ass['A14'] <= 5, ' You can see that there is some resistance and she holds back some near inaudible groans of pain.', 'The butt plug goes in without any resistance, and she pulls it back and forth a little while moaning slightly.')
 			end
-			act 'Watch Katja''s reaction':
+			act 'Watch her reaction':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_8.jpg"></center>'		
-				'Katja breathes in and out heavily and opens her eyes to look at you. She then puts the fingers of her right hand around her pussy lips, and starts to gently play with her pussy.'
+				'Katja breathes in and out heavily and opens her eyes to look at you as she starts to gently play with her pussy.'
 				act 'Give her the vibrator':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_9.jpg"></center>'		
-					'"Here. Use this," you say as you turn on the vibrator and give it to her. '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 or katjaQW['know_butt_plug'] = 1, 'Katja clearly knows what she''s doing and puts it to her clit and starts to moan.', 'Katja looks at it a little nervously, and then starts putting it around her pussy. You''re just about to give her some pointers when she finally puts it to her clit and lets out a loud moan.')
-					act 'Masturbate while you watch Katja':
+					'"Here. Use this," you say as you turn on the vibrator and give it to her. '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 or katjaQW['know_butt_plug'] = 1, 'She clearly knows what she''s doing and puts it to her clit and starts to moan.', 'She looks at it a little nervously. You''re just about to give her some pointers when she puts it to her clit and lets out a loud moan.')
+					act 'Masturbate while you watch':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_10.jpg"></center>'		
-						'You put you hand down your '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'skirt', 'pants')+' and start to rub your clit while you watch Katja. She starts really getting into it, and seems to have a hard time keeping her voice down. After a few minutes, she starts convulsing and has a powerful orgasm. Afterwards, she just lies in the chair, catching her breath.'
+						'You put you hand down your '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'skirt', 'pants')+' and start rubbing your clit as you watch Katja. She starts really getting into it, and seems to have a hard time keeping her voice down. After a few minutes, she starts convulsing and has a powerful orgasm. Afterwards, she just lies in the chair, catching her breath.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3
 						gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -3, 'masturbate'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -533,10 +533,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play':
 						'"It was a great show," you tell her.'
 						'"Thanks. I think," she says while blushing. "Let me get changed," she says and starts taking off the rest of the shirt.'
 						'She starts to take out the butt plug, but you stop her. "Keep it in until you get home. It will be a good experience for you," you say. She blushes, but keeps it in as she puts on her clothes.'
-						'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+						'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 						act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg		
 					end
-					act 'Just watch Katja':
+					act 'Just watch her':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_1_10.jpg"></center>'		
 						'You intensively watch Katja. She starts really getting into it and seems to have a hard time keeping her voice down. After a few minutes, she starts convulsing and has a tremendous orgasm. After that, she simply lies on the chair, recovering her breath.'
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit1_play':
 						'"It was a fantastic show," you tell her.' 
 						'"Thanks. I guess," she adds while blushing. "Let me get changed," she adds and begins to remove the rest of the shirt.' 
 						'She tries to take out the buttplug, but you stop her. "Keep it in until you get home. It will be a great experience for you," you say. She blushes, but keeps it in and starts putting on her clothes.' 
-						'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+						'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 						act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg		
 					end
 				end
@@ -563,13 +563,13 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2':
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'While you change back to your original clothes, Katja puts on the white shirt and short skirt you have chosen for her. Once she''s finished dressing, she turns around so you can get a good look at her.'
+	'While you change back to your original clothes, Katja puts on the white shirt and short skirt you''ve chosen for her. Once she''s finished dressing, she turns around so you can get a good look at her.'
 	if katjaQW['slut'] >= 40:
 		'"This looks good," she says when she sees herself in the mirror. "It''s a nice dress for a warm summer night," she continues. "I might buy this."'
 	else
 		'"This looks good," she says when she sees herself in the mirror. "But it''s a bit short, and kind of see-through. I''m not sure if I''m brave enough to wear this in public," she continues.'
 	end
-	act 'Katja starts to change':
+	act 'She starts to change':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'	
@@ -584,22 +584,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2':
 				'"So do your panties match the bra?" you ask.'
 				'"What?!" she gasps. "Why would you ask me that?!"'
 				'"No reason," you reply when it''s clear she''s not comfortable with the question, and you let her change in peace.'
-				'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+				'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 				act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_3.jpg"></center>'
 				'"So do your panties match the bra?" you ask.'
 				iif(katjaQW['slut'] >= 80, '"Are you assuming I''m wearing panties?" she asks slyly.', '"Really, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! You don''t ask a good girl such a question!" she says with a wink.')
-				'"Come on, be a really good girl and show me it''s just me," you answer.'
+				'"Come on, be a really good girl and show me," you answer.'
 				'After a moment''s hesitation, she relents. "Okay."'
 				'She slowly pulls up the skirt to reveal her smoothly shaved pussy.'
 				if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5:
 					'"See? My panties always match my bra," she says. "No need for them to match when you don''t wear any."' 
 				else 
 					if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] < 4: katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] += 1
-					'It''s clear from Katja''s reddening face that she is embarrassed by you seeing her without panties.'
+					'It''s clear from her reddening face that she''s embarrassed by you seeing her without panties.'
 					'"Don''t say anything," she says. "It''s just that all my panties are in the laundry," she says, not sounding very truthful. "I normally never go without panties."'
-					iif($panties_worn = 'nude', '"You should. It is very liberating," you tell her as you flash her your naked pussy', '"Why am I not completely convinced that is the case?" you say')+'  and her face turns even redder.'
+					iif($panties_worn = 'nude', '"You should. It''s very liberating," you tell her as you flash her your naked pussy', '"Why am I not completely convinced that you''re telling the truth?" you say')+'  and her face turns even redder.'
 				end
 				'"Well, this was fun but I should change back," she says.'
 				if npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['slut'] > 60 and rand(0,3) = 0 and katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] < 2:
@@ -608,26 +608,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2':
 				else
 					if katjaQW['QWstage'] > 2 and katjaQW['sex_clossedness'] < 2:
 						if katjaQW['slut'] > 60:
-							act 'Ask Katja to put on a show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip'
+							act 'Ask her to put on a show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip'
 						else
 							gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'easy'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-								act 'Ask Katja to put on a show (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								act 'Ask her to put on a show (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay'
 									gs 'stat'
 									gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip'					
 								end
 							else
-								act 'Ask Katja to put on a show (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+								act 'Ask her to put on a show (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 							end
 						end
 					end
-					act 'Let Katja change clothes in peace':
+					act 'Let her change clothes in peace':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 3
 						gs 'stat'	
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Katja finishes changing and you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+						'Katja finishes changing and you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 						act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 					end
 				end
@@ -648,18 +648,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip':
 		else
 			gs 'willpower', 'mast', 'force'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Ask Katja to touch herself (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Ask her to touch herself (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 					gs 'stat'
 					gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play'					
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Ask Katja to touch herself (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Ask her to touch herself (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
-			act 'Let Katja finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip2' 
+			act 'Let her finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip2' 
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Let Katja finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip2'
+		act 'Let her finish the show': gt 'katja_city', 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -670,10 +670,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_strip2':
 	katjaQW['slut'] += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_5a.jpg"></center>'
-	'Katja finally takes the shirt off and throws it over her shoulder, holding it in one hand while she lifts the skirt with the other while looking directly at you . "See something you like?" she asks in a seductive tone.'
+	'Katja finally takes the shirt off and throws it over her shoulder, holding it in one hand while she lifts the skirt with the other while looking directly at you. "See something you like?" she asks in a seductive tone.'
 	'"Very nice," you reply.'
 	'"Enough of this," she says with a laugh, and starts to change her clothes normally.'
-	'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+	'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 	act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg
 end
 
@@ -684,11 +684,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_5b.jpg"></center>'
 	'Katja stops taking off the shirt and moves her hand to her pussy, slowly starting to play with it. She seems to getting really into it.'
 	if katjaQW['know_butt_plug'] = 0:
-		'Out of your eye, you notice that Katja''s bag is open and see something that surprises you. You open the bag and pull out a butt plug and a vibrator. Seems Katja is more naughty than you knew.'
+		'Out of your eye, you notice that Katja''s bag is open and see something that surprises you. You open the bag and pull out a butt plug and a vibrator.'
 		'"Well, well, what do we have here?" you say as you show your findings to Katja, who immediately stops what she''s doing and blushes bright red.' 
-		'"I... Vicky gave them to me when I moved to the dorm. They aren''t something I would use," Katja stammers.'
+		'"I... Vicky gave them to me when I moved to the dorm. They aren''t something I would use!" she stammers.'
 		'"Then why are they in your bag if you don''t use them?" you ask.'
-		'"Because I don''t want Sofia to find them. That girl gets into all my stuff and if she finds them, she won''t stop asking me about it," she answers.'
+		'"Because I don''t want Sofia to find them! That girl gets into all my stuff and if she finds them, she won''t stop asking me about it," she answers.'
 		'"So you''ve never used them?" you ask.'
 		if katjaQW['masturbates'] + npc_ass['A14'] = 0:
 			'"I''ve never used any of them," she replies.'
@@ -697,12 +697,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play':
 			'"I''ve never used the '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1, 'butt plug', 'vibrator')+'." she says.'
 			'"So you''ve used the '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1, 'vibrator', 'butt plug')+'? You''re going to try something new today," you say and hand her the butt plug.'
 		else
-			'Katja doesn''t say anything, but her face is becoming even more red than before. "So you have been using them, you dirty girl!" you say with a smile. "Show me how you use them," you say as you hand her the butt plug.'
+			'She doesn''t say anything, but her face is becoming even more red than before. "So you <i>have</i> been using them, you dirty girl!" you say with a smile. "Show me how you use them," you say as you hand her the butt plug.'
 		end
 	else
 		'You look into Katja''s bag and find her butt plug and vibrator. "Use these to make the show even better," you say as you hand her the butt plug.'
 	end
-	act 'Watch Katja insert the butt plug':
+	act 'Watch her insert the butt plug':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 		katjaQW['horny'] += 10
@@ -710,21 +710,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_6.jpg"></center>'		
 		if npc_ass['A14'] = 0:
 			npc_ass['A14'] = 1
-			'"I''ve never put anything in my butt before!" Katja protests.'
+			'"I''ve never put anything in my butt before!" she protests.'
 			'"There''s a first time for everything," you reply. "Lick it first to lubricate it."'
-			'Katja does as you say and starts licking the butt plug. After a minute, you say "I think it''s wet enough for you to put it in. Lie down in the chair. It''ll make it easier to put it in."'
-			'She takes off the rest of the clothes except her bra and moves to the chair before guiding the butt plug to the opening of her ass. She starts pushing it in, but clearly meets some resistance. "Take your time," you say, but Katja seems determined and after a short while she pushes the butt plug completely into her ass with a slight groan of pain.'
+			'Katja does as you say and starts licking the butt plug. "I think it''s wet enough for you to put it in," you say after a minute. "Lie down in the chair. It''ll make it easier to put it in."'
+			'She takes off the rest of the clothes except her bra and moves to the chair before guiding the butt plug to her ass. She starts pushing it in, but clearly meets some resistance. "Take your time," you say, but she seems determined and after a short while she pushes the butt plug completely into her ass with a slight groan of pain.'
 		else
 			if npc_ass['A14'] < 5: npc_ass['A14'] += 1
-			'Katja takes the butt plug and starts licking it. After a minute or so, she takes off the rest of the clothes except her bra and lies down in the chair before pushing the butt plug into her ass.'+iif(npc_ass['A14'] <= 5, ' You can see that there is some resistance and Katja holds back some near inaudible groans of pain.', 'The butt plug goes in without any resistance, and she pulls it back and forth a little while moaning slightly.')
+			'Katja takes the butt plug and starts licking it. After a minute or so, she takes off the rest of the clothes except her bra and lies down in the chair before pushing the butt plug into her ass.'+iif(npc_ass['A14'] <= 5, ' You can see that there''s some resistance and she holds back some near inaudible groans of pain.', 'The butt plug goes in without any resistance, and she pulls it back and forth a little while moaning slightly.')
 		end
-		act 'Watch Katja''s reaction':
+		act 'Watch her reaction':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 			katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_7.jpg"></center>'		
-			'Katja breathes in and out heavily and opens her eyes to look at you. She then puts the fingers of her right hand to her pussy lips, and starts to gently play with her pussy.'
+			'She breathes in and out heavily and opens her eyes to look at you as she starts to gently play with her pussy.'
 			act 'Give her the vibrator':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
@@ -732,10 +732,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_8.jpg"></center>'		
 				'"Here. Use this," you say as you turn on the vibrator and give it to her. '+iif(katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 or katjaQW['know_butt_plug'] = 1, 'Katja clearly knows what she''s doing and uses one hand to spread her pussy lips, puts the vibrator to her clit with the other and starts to moan.', 'Katja looks at it a little nervously, and then starts putting it around her pussy. You''re just about to give her some pointers when she finally uses one hand to spread her pussy lips and puts the vibrator to her clit with the other, letting out a loud moan.')
-				act 'Masturbate while you watch Katja':
+				act 'Masturbate while you watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_9.jpg"></center>'		
-					'You put your hand down your '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'skirt', 'pants')+' and start to rub your clit while you watch Katja. She starts really getting into it and seems to have a hard time keeping her voice down. After a few minutes, she starts convulsing and has a powerful orgasm. Afterwards, she just lies in the chair, catching her breath.'
+					'You put your hand down your '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'skirt', 'pants')+' and start rubbing your clit while you watch Katja. She starts really getting into it and seems to have a hard time keeping her voice down. After a few minutes, she starts convulsing and has a powerful orgasm. Afterwards, she just lies in the chair, catching her breath.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3
 					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -3, 'masturbate'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -748,10 +748,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play':
 					'"It was a fantastic show," you tell her.' 
 					'"Thanks. I guess," she adds while blushing. "Let me get changed," she adds and begins to remove the rest of the shirt.' 
 					'She tries to take out the buttplug, but you stop her. "Keep it in until you get home. It will be a great experience for you," you say. She blushes, but keeps it in and starts putting on her clothes.' 
-					'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+					'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 					act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg		
 				end
-				act 'Just watch Katja':
+				act 'Just watch':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/mall/cats_2_9.jpg"></center>'		
 					'You intensely watch Katja as she starts really getting into it. She seems to have a hard time keeping her voice down and after a few minutes, she starts convulsing and has a powerful orgasm. Afterwards, she just lies in the chair, catching her breath.'
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy_cat_outfit2_play':
 					'"It was a fantastic show," you tell her.' 
 					'"Thanks. I guess," she adds while blushing. "Let me get changed," she adds and begins to remove the rest of the shirt.' 
 					'She tries to take out the buttplug, but you stop her. "Keep it in until you get home. It will be a great experience for you," you say. She blushes, but keeps it in and starts putting on her clothes.' 
-					'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
+					'A few minutes later, you leave the store. "That was fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "We should do this again!" She then waves goodbye and leaves you alone in the mall.'
 					act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt $loc, $loc_arg		
 				end
 			end

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