Merge remote-tracking branch 'julzor/master'

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -928,14 +928,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 			 if pregchem > 120 and bimbolevel < 3 and knowpreg = 0 and huband = 0 and pregTalkPC = 0:
 				knowpreg = 1
 				thinkpreg = 1
-				'As you look at the test in your hand, you are?'
+				*nl
+				'The test shows two strips. You are pregnant. As you look at the test in your hand, you are?'
 				act 'Horrified':gt 'din_van', 'HorrifiedReact1'
 				act 'Concerned':gt 'din_van', 'ConcernedReact1'
 				act 'Excited':gt 'din_van', 'ExcitedReact1'
 			elseif pregchem > 120 and bimbolevel = 3 and knowpreg = 0 and huband = 0 and pregTalkPC = 0:
 				knowpreg = 1
 				thinkpreg = 1
-				'As you look at the test in your hand, you are?'
+				*nl
+				'The test shows two strips. You are pregnant. As you look at the test in your hand, you are?'
 				act 'Excited':gt 'din_van', 'ExcitedReact1'
 				act 'Aroused':gt 'din_van', 'ArousedReact1'
 			elseif pregchem > 120 and knowpreg = 0 and huband = 1 and kid = 0 and pregTalkPC = 0:
@@ -947,10 +949,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 				thinkpreg = 1
 				gt 'din_van', 'WifeReact2'
 			elseif pregTalkPC = 1:
-				'The test showed two strips. You are pregnant.'
+				*nl
+				'The test shows two strips. You are pregnant.'
 			else
 				knowpreg = 0
-				'The test showed one band. Not pregnant.'
+				*nl
+				'The test shows one band. You are not pregnant.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka

locations/mirror.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	*nl
 	if daystart  < 10 and StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:'In the mirror, you see a strange woman''s face looking back at you that exactly copies all your actions. You can hardly accept the idea that this is now you.'
 	if daystart >= 10 and daystart < 30 and StoryLine = 0:'In the mirror you see a woman''s face to which you have become accustomed to. But sometimes, you get the feel that this is not your face.'
-	'<<$hair>>. '
+	'<<$hair>>'
 	'<<$pcs_makeup>>. Your<<$pcdesc_eyesizeinsertive>> eyes are <<$pcdesc_eyecolour>> <<$pcs_lashes>>, and you have <<$pcdesc_fulllipswordy>>.'
 	'<<$skin>>'
 	'<<$pcs_apprnc>>'

locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -436,20 +436,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke_misha':
 				'"No problem <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''ll hold you to that!" he says as he gives you a lewd grin. "In that case, I better get going. I''ll talk to you later."'
 				act 'Say goodbye': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 			end
-		end
-		if misha_smoke_rnd = 2:
+		elseif misha_smoke_rnd = 2:
 			pcs_mood +=5
 			'You have a chat with uncle Misha, as he smokes his cigarette. Once he finishes it, he apologizes and says he has things to do now.'
 			act 'Say goodbye': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
-		end
-		if misha_smoke_rnd = 3:
+		elseif misha_smoke_rnd = 3:
 			pcs_mood +=5
 			'You have a chat with uncle Misha, as he smokes his cigarette. He talks about how his life has been much easier, ever since he retired.'
 			act 'Say goodbye': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 		end
 		killvar 'misha_smoke_rnd'
-	end
-	if pav_slut < 75:
+	else
 		pcs_mood +=5
 		'While uncle Misha smokes his cigarette, you engage with him in some small talk. When he finishes the cigarette, he apologizes and says he has to go.'
 		act 'Say goodbye': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'