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Last minute edits before feature lock, along with grammar fixing.

Vengeance11 3 years ago
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+ 2 - 2
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -659,8 +659,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_finish':
 	lesbian += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/aftermath.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina embraces you and you collapse onto the bed, entwined. You spend the next few minutes passionately making out while fondling each other. Eventually, you both get dressed and she takes the strapon and cleans it before putting it away. Not long after, her phone buzzes. She looks at it, obviously reading a text message and frowns. "Sorry, but I need to go <<$pcs_nickname>>. I did have fun though. I''ll see later?"'
-	'You nod in understanding. "Sure, not a problem. I had fun too." you smirk. "I''ll see you later." You share a final kiss with each other before you leave.'
+	'Albina pushes you down onto the bed and climbs in on top of you. You spend the next few minutes passionately making out while fondling each other before Albina gives you a sly smile and moves into position to start scissoring you. Before she can, her phone buzzes and she looks at it, obviously reading a text message and frowns in disappointment. "Sorry, but I need to go <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ll see later?"'
+	'You nod in understanding. "Sure, not a problem. I had fun." you smirk. "I''ll see you later." You share a final kiss with each other before you both quickly get dressed. Albina then wipes the dildo clean and shoves it back in the drawer before ushering you out of her room.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'

+ 10 - 10
locations/gschool_cheerleading.qsrc

@@ -735,8 +735,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 						act 'Tongue fuck her ass':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You decide to go further and plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
-							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits right on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tongue fuck her asshole. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+							'You decide to go further, plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
+							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits right on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tongue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Finish':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-								'Albina then climbs off of you, turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
+								'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out, a look of admiration on her face. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really cleaned me out. Come here." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
 								Albina just gives out a playful giggle. "Maybe we will, maybe we won''t." she teases him and you all laugh before getting dressed. You then all leave the room and go your seperate ways.'
 								minut += 5
 
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'You already tasted her ass when you sucked Lazar''s dick and you don''t really want to taste it again, but Albina is spreading her cheeks and Lazar is waiting in anticipation, so you reluctantly give her asshole a few half hearted licks. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can do better than that!" Albina quips before forcing your head between her cheeks and making you eat her ass. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her pussy.' 
-							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you again reluctantly lick her asshole. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+							'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you again reluctantly lick her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Finish':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-								'Albina then climbs off of you, turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
+								'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out, a look of admiration on her face. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really cleaned me out. Come here." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "You two were amazing! We need to do this again sometime, no?" he asks.
 								Albina just gives out a playful giggle. "Maybe we will, maybe we won''t." she teases him and you all laugh before getting dressed. You then all leave the room and go your seperate ways.'
 								minut += 5
 
@@ -825,8 +825,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 							act 'Tongue fuck her ass':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You decide to go further and plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
-								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tobgue fuck her asshole. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+								'You decide to go further, plunge your tongue straight into her stretched asshole and start to tongue fuck her back door. Albina moans and giggles in delight while Lazar just watches the show while jerking himself. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her now soaking wet pussy.' 
+								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you obediently lick and tobgue fuck her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -835,7 +835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								act 'Finish':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Albina then climbs off of you, turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
+									'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out, a look of admiration on her face. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really cleaned me out. Come here." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
 									Albina teases him by bending over and wiggling her naked ass at him, showing off her still slightly gaping anus. You all laugh and get dressed before leaving the room and going your seperate ways.'
 									minut += 5
 
@@ -847,7 +847,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome3.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You already tasted her ass when you sucked Lazar''s dick and you don''t really want to taste it again, but Albina is spreading her cheeks and Lazar is waiting in anticipation, so you reluctantly give her asshole a few half hearted licks. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can do better than that!" Albina quips before forcing your head between her cheeks and making you eat her ass. After a few seconds, you withdraw and Lazar penetrates her again. "Uuuuhhh, <<$pcs_nickname>>... Eat... my... pussy! Oh fuck yes!" Albina blurts out between moans as Lazar fucks her hard. You obidiently slide under Albina and start pleasuring her by licking her clit and fingering her pussy.' 
-								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you again reluctantly lick her asshole. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
+								'She eventually orgasms from the pleasure, her twitching pussy expelling your fingers and spraying juices everywhere as she screams in pleasure. Lazar is also close and Albina senses this through his ragged thrusts. "Yes, yes. Cum inside me! Fill my little asshole up!" she moans in encouragment. Lazar picks up the pace and soon lets out a loud grunt as you see his balls twitching above you. Once he''s finished unloading into her, he pulls out. "Stay right fucking there and open wide <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina orders. You open your mouth as Albina turns around and squats above you, her ass letting out a loud squelch as she squeezes the load of cum from her ravaged hole into your mouth. She then sits on your face and starts grinding against you, so you again reluctantly lick her asshole as cum continues to trickle into your mouth. "Yeah, that''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>. Lick my asshole clean." Albina keeps grinding against you for the next few seconds while she gives Lazar a final blowjob.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 								act 'Finish':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/cheerleading/events/sex/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Albina then climbs off of you, pulls you up and turns around to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
+									'Albina then climbs off of you and fingers her ass before pulling her digits out, a look of admiration on her face. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you really cleaned me out. Come here." She pulls you up to her and starts to make out with you, her tongue lapping away at the cum in your mouth. After a few seconds, she breaks the kiss and swallows the cum she has in her mouth, encouraging you to do the same. You gulp down the sticky fluid and Lazar grins. "Until next time girls." he says.
 									Albina teases him by bending over and wiggling her naked ass at him, showing off her still slightly gaping anus. You all laugh and get dressed before leaving the room and going your seperate ways.'
 									minut += 5
 

+ 6 - 3
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -644,6 +644,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 	elseif break_rand = 12 and hotcat > 5 and PCloSkirt > 0:
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/skirtpulledup.jpg"></center>'
+		if grupTipe = 2:
+		'As you walk down the hallway, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel a hand firmly squeezing your ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. You can tell from his admiring expression that Lazar was the one groping your ass. All the workouts you''ve been doing have made your ass big and firm enough to impress him.'
+		else
 		'As you walk down the hallway, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. You can tell from his disappointed expression that Lazar was the one groping your ass. Perhaps he was expecting something firmer after hanging out with the athletic girls so much? Maybe you should work out more...'
 
 		act 'Ignore him':
@@ -1231,7 +1234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follow_petka':
 				'You look at him, a bit surprised he would turn you down, but you have a solution for this. "No? Well OK then." For a moment he looks relieved, but as you step closer to him he panics. You grab him by his ear and start pulling him into one of the stalls. Just as you start to pull him into the stall, he grabs your hand and starts to pry your fingers off his ear.'
 				*nl
 				'You release his ear, but as you do you knee him hard in the balls, causing him to crumple to the floor with a gasp, holding his crotch. "Get up pussy." Grabbing him, you haul him up onto his hands and knees while he is still recovering from the hit. You shove him forward until his face is over the toilet bowl. "Ready to give me your homework yet?" you ask him.'
-				'He pleads with you and resists by placing his hands on the toilet bowl. "No! Let me go! Please!."'
+				'He pleads with you and resists by placing his hands on the toilet bowl. "No! Let me go! Please!"'
 				*nl
 				'Maneuvering a bit, you get into a position where you can push down on his head and deliver another kick to his balls. He crumples as he cries out and you easily push his head down. You place one of your knees on his upper back while using one hand to force his head into the toilet. After a couple of dunks and him still refusing, you use your other hand to reach down the back of his pants. Clutching his underwear, you yank on them until you hear cloth tearing. Finally, he relents. "OK...OK! You...You can have...my homework! Just...please...stop!" he pleads through what sounds like sobs.'
 				act 'Let him up':
@@ -1885,13 +1888,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_classroom_events':
 			gs'stat'
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonia.teach0,'+rand(0,1)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You carefully look around the corner, trying to see inside the classroom. You see Sonia and Mr. Ivanov, both half naked. Sonia did her best to look the part, even wearing glasses to complete her look as a desperate schoolgirl in need of help. Suddenly her good grades in school make perfect sense; Mr. Ivanov doesn''t miss his chance to take advantage of the school slut in exchange for a decent grade. Sonia is currently giving Mr. Ivanov a very skillful blowjob, really giving it her all; you can see Mr. Ivanov''s cock glistening with saliva all the way from where you''re standing.'
+			'You carefully look around the corner, trying to see inside the classroom. You see Sonia and Mr Ivanov, both half naked. Sonia did her best to look the part, even wearing glasses to complete her look as a desperate schoolgirl in need of help. Suddenly her good grades in school make perfect sense; Mr. Ivanov doesn''t miss his chance to take advantage of the school slut in exchange for a decent grade. Sonia is currently giving Mr. Ivanov a very skillful blowjob, really giving it her all; you can see Mr. Ivanov''s cock glistening with saliva all the way from where you''re standing.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonia.teach1,0.jpg"></center>'
-				'When Mr. Ivanov has had enough of her mouth, he pulls her up by her hair and turns her around, having her put her hands on his desk before he slides his slick cock into her pussy, fucking her from behind. He''s quite rough about it, but Sonia doesn''t seem to mind at all and moans like a wanton whore. Realizing the loud moans might attract more attention from outside the class, you leave before anyone else finds you staring.'
+				'When Mr Ivanov has had enough of her mouth, he pulls her up by her hair and turns her around, having her put her hands on his desk before he slides his slick cock into her pussy, fucking her from behind. He''s quite rough about it, but Sonia doesn''t seem to mind at all and moans like a wanton whore. Realizing the loud moans might attract more attention from outside the class, you leave before anyone else finds you staring.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
 		end

+ 51 - 50
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 			if zverRageQW = 0:zverRageQW = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You spread rumors about how Christina Zvereva has sex with Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher. The rumor spreads like wildfire: within the hour, everyone knows how she stays ahead.'
+			'You spread rumors about how Christina has sex with Mr Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher. The rumor spreads like wildfire: within the hour, everyone knows how she stays ahead.'
 			xgt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break','nopict'
 		end
 	end
@@ -232,10 +232,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/marcusflirt.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you stop at your locker before lunch, Marcus walks over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> you are looking fine today, damn but you look good in that little plaid skirt."'
-	'You can''t help but smile and shake your head a little, you can tell by the way his eyes roam all over your body that despite his compliments there is only one thing on his mind right now right now. If the way he''s flirting wasn''t obvious enough, the bulge straining against his pants is a dead give away. "Well you''re not looking too bad yourself Marcus and by the look of things, you sure are VERY happy to see me." You say with a giggle and deliberately staring at his crotch.'
+	'As you stop at your locker before lunch, Marcus walks over. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are looking fine today. Damn, you look good in that little plaid skirt!"'
+	'You can''t help but smile and shake your head a little. You can tell by the way his eyes roam all over your body that despite his compliments, there is only one thing on his mind right now. If the way he''s flirting wasn''t obvious enough, the bulge straining against his pants is a dead give away. "Well you''re not looking too bad yourself Marcus. And by the look of things, you sure are VERY happy to see me." you say with a giggle while deliberately staring at his crotch.'
 	*nl
-	'He blushes slightly and pulls out his shirt so it hangs over his crotch, trying to hide his erection a little. "Oh fuck, sorry about that. I just had two girls in my last class who took turns flashing me. I swear those girls get a huge kick out of teasing me." He looks around a bit and then leans in a little close to you and says softly. "Hey, think you might be able to you know... help me out with this?" He says indicating the evident bulge in his pants.'
+	'He blushes slightly and pulls out his shirt so it hangs over his crotch, trying to hide his erection a little. "Oh fuck, sorry about that. I just had two girls in my last class who took turns flashing me. I swear those girls get a huge kick out of teasing me." He looks around a bit and then leans in a little close to you and softly says "Hey, think you might be able to you know... help me out with this?", indicating the evident bulge in his pants.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Make an excuse and go (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -244,9 +244,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big146.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Sorry Marcus but I got some stuff I got to do, maybe some other time?" You can see he is fairly disappointed but he nods in agreement.'
-			'"Sure not a problem, talk to you later then?"'
-			'"Yeah, talk to you later." With that you walk off.'
+			'"Sorry Marcus, but I''ve got stuff to do. Maybe some other time?" You can see he is fairly disappointed, but he nods in agreement.'
+			'"Sure, not a problem. Talk to you later then?"'
+			'"Yeah, talk to you later." With that, you walk off.'
 			act 'Go to lunch': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'lunch'
 		end
 	else
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big146.jpg"></center>'
-			'You shake your head no. "Sorry not today Marcus."'
+			'You shake your head. "Sorry not today Marcus."'
 			'He nods his head in understanding. "Yeah ok, not a problem. I figured, you know it wouldn''t hurt to ask, but don''t worry about it. But hey you want to sit with me at lunch and talk?"'
 			act 'Yeah that would be nice':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 				act 'No':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/lunch.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m not hungry thank you anyway Marcus, but I would love to sit with you." With that he buys his lunch, you find a table and sit together. While he eats his lunch, the two of you talk for the whole lunch period.'
+					'"I''m not hungry. Thanks anyway, but I would love to sit with you." He buys his lunch and you find a table to sit together. While he eats his lunch, the two of you talk for the rest of lunchtime.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				act 'Yes':
@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 					pcs_breath = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/lunch.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Yes thank you Marcus, that is sweet." With that he buys both your lunches, you find a table and sit while you eat and talk for the whole lunch period.'
+					'"Thank you Marcus, that is sweet." With that, he buys both your lunches and you find a table to sit at while you eat and talk for the rest of lunchtime.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
@@ -299,28 +299,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 		npc_sex['A146'] += 1
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A146'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marcl.jpg"></center>'
-		'You purse your lips a moment in thought and then figure, what the hell! You grab him by the hand and when no one is looking you lead him into one of the empty class rooms. You squat down in front of him as he frees his rock hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock from his pants, putting it right in your face. You take it in your hand, giving it several lengthy strokes while you listen to many of your classmates out in the hall, just on the other side of the door. You briefly wonder how many of them do similar things on different days or how many might even be doing something similar right this minute.'
+		'You purse your lips a moment in thought before grabbing him by the hand. When no one is looking, you lead him into one of the empty classrooms. You squat down in front of him as he frees his rock hard <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock from his pants, putting it right in your face. You take it in your hand, giving it several lengthy strokes while you listen to many of your classmates out in the hall, just on the other side of the door. You briefly wonder how many of them do similar things on different days or how many might even be doing something similar right this minute.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Blow him':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marclbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'After giving his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock a few strokes, you can already feel it pulsing in your hand. You can tell he''s been struggling with this hard on for some time now. Leaning forward, you open your mouth nice and wide, before slowly wrapping your lips around the shaft of his cock, sucking him down deep. You use one of your hands to massage his balls while the other strokes up and down his shaft at the same pace of your lips. He starts moaning louder and louder, you briefly remove your hands so you can pull down your shirt and give him a nice view of your perky titties, before reaching back for his cock and balls.'
+			'After giving his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock a few strokes, you can already feel it pulsing in your hand. You can tell he''s been struggling with this hard on for some time now. Leaning forward, you open your mouth nice and wide, before slowly wrapping your lips around the shaft of his cock, sucking him down deep. You use one of your hands to massage his balls while the other strokes up and down his shaft at the same pace of your lips. As he starts moaning louder and louder, you briefly remove your hands so you can pull down your shirt and give him a nice view of your breasts before reaching back for his cock and balls.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Finish him':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marclcum.jpg"></center>'
-				'He doesn''t last very long, just a few minutes of sucking is all it takes for his cum to blast the back of your throat. He shudders and pulls back, his dick popping out from between your lips even as you keep stroking his shaft with one hand. Spurt after spurt of his sticky semen splashes across your face, into your hair, upon your exposed boobs in what seems like a never ending stream of cum. You are seriously starting to wonder whether it''s going stop, it just keeps going for as long as you''re stroking until finally, the last tiny spurt shoots out and lands on the floor. You take his now softening dick back in your mouth and suck on it softly, cleaning him off and milking out the last few warm drops.'
+				'He doesn''t last very long. Just a few minutes of sucking is all it takes for his cum to blast the back of your throat. He shudders and pulls back, his dick popping out from between your lips even as you keep stroking his shaft with one hand. Spurt after spurt of his sticky semen splashes across your face, into your hair and onto your breasts in what seems like a never ending stream of cum. You are seriously starting to wonder whether it''s going stop as it just keeps going for as long as you''re stroking until finally, the last tiny spurt shoots out and lands on the floor. You take his now softening dick back in your mouth and suck on it softly, cleaning him off and milking out the last few warm drops.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'With a loud sigh, he leans back against the teacher''s desk. "Fuck yeah, thanks <<$pcs_nickname>> I really needed that. Hey, why don''t you come sit with me at lunch? I will even buy you some lunch, if you are not already full." He adds with a smirk.'
-				'You can''t help but rolling your eyes at that as you do the best you can to clean yourself up, <i>Jesus, your whole face is nearly coated in his cum</i>. You can''t believe it all came from just one guy. Sitting with him at lunch sounds nice, but he does kinda have a point. Do you really want anything to eat, well anything else to eat that is?'
+				'With a loud sigh, he leans back against the teacher''s desk. "Fuck yeah <<$pcs_nickname>>, I really needed that. Hey, why don''t you come sit with me at lunch? I will even buy you some lunch, if you are not already full." he adds with a smirk.'
+				'You can''t help but roll your eyes at that as you do the best you can to clean yourself up. <i>Jesus, your whole face is nearly coated in his cum</i>. You can''t believe it all came from just one guy. Sitting with him at lunch sounds nice, but he does kind of have a point. Do you really want anything to eat, well anything else to eat that is?'
 				act 'No':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/lunch.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m not really hungry Marcus, but thank you anyway, I would love to sit with you." With that, the two of you walk to the cafeteria together. He buys his lunch, you find a table and sit together while he eats, you talk for the rest lunch time.'
+					'"I''m not really hungry Marcus, but thank you anyway. I would love to sit with you." With that, the two of you walk to the cafeteria together. He buys his lunch and you find a table and sit together while he eats. You talk for the rest of lunchtime.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				act 'Yes':
@@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'marcus_event':
 					pcs_breath = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/lunch.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Sure, I would love to have lunch with you! After all you wasted most of it on my face and tits!" With that, the two of you burst in laughter and you walk into the cafeteria together. He buys lunch for both, you find a table and sit together while you eat and talk for the rest lunch time.'
+					'"Sure, I would love to have lunch with you." With that, you walk into the cafeteria together. He buys lunch for both and you find a table to sit together while you eat and talk for the rest of lunchtime.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
@@ -346,14 +346,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 	menu_off = 1
 	if npc_sex['A14'] = 1 and KatjaLust >= 50 and Katjahorny + KatjaSlut >= 100 and KatjaHorny > 50:
 		cla
-		'During the break Katja Meynold approaches you, her face flushed in a mixture of shame and what seems to be arousal. After a few seconds, she gathers enough courage to ask if you want go somewhere quiet with her.'
+		'During the break, Katja approaches you, her face flushed in a mixture of shame and what seems to be arousal. After a few seconds, she gathers enough courage to ask if you want go somewhere quiet with her.'
 		act 'Refuse': KatjaDom -= 1 & gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 		act 'Go with Katja':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 60
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/petting.jpg"></center>'
-			'You nod at Katja and she quickly takes you by the hand, leading you to a small storage closet. The door has barely closed behind you when she pulls you tightly against her, kissing your lips aggressively. She leans in and softly whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you."'
+			'You nod at Katja and she quickly takes you by the hand, leading you to a small storage closet. The door has barely closed behind you when she pulls you tightly against her, kissing your lips aggressively. She leans in and softly whispers in your ear. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want you."'
 			if rand(1,2) = 1 and katschoolsex >= 1:
 				act 'Go somewhere private': gt 'Katja_Tanga', 'secretroom'
 			else
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 					KatjaHorny = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/lesbian.jpg"></center>'
-					'Katja lightly presses down on your shoulders, letting you know to get down on your knees in front of her, as she lifts up her skirt and pulls her panties to the side. You waste no time, nuzzling at her groin as your tongue deftly starts licking her tiny clitoris. You can feel her pussy getting wetter and wetter from your thorough licking, and you enjoy the taste of her pussy a lot.'
+					'Katja lightly presses down on your shoulders, letting you know to get down on your knees in front of her as she lifts up her skirt and pulls her panties to the side. You waste no time, nuzzling at her groin as your tongue deftly starts licking her tiny clitoris. You can feel her pussy getting wetter and wetter from your thorough licking, and you enjoy the taste of her pussy a lot.'
 					*nl
 					'As Katja gets closer to her orgasm, she firmly clutches your hair and roughly pulls your face even harder into her crotch, encouraging you to work harder. A short while later, you can feel her pussy convulsing against your mouth, a few drops of girl cum squirting out and landing on your mouth. You slowly keep lapping at her twitching pussy, bringing her down carefully while she recovers from her orgasm. When you look up into her eyes, you see her staring down at you lovingly for a second, before pushing your face away and quickly straightening her clothes.'
 					'"Damn, next period is about to start! I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I owe you one!" she apologizes, as she quickly gathers her things and leaves the closet. You''re hornier than ever, but you need to get going too.'
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 	elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 10 and hotcat >= 6 and rand(0,5) = 0:
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/want.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you are leaving the canteen, Annushka grabs you and pushes you up against the wall. She starts kissing you passionately, while one of her hands slides up your skirt and starts rubbing your clit. You can hear several of your fellow classmates whistling, hooting and hollering, but right now you don''t really care. She breaks the kiss just long enough to moan into your ear. "I want to fuck you, come with me," her fingers sliding up into your pussy as she says it.'
+		'As you are leaving the canteen, Annushka grabs you and pushes you up against the wall. She starts kissing you passionately while one of her hands slides up your skirt and starts rubbing your clit. You can hear several of your fellow classmates whistling, hooting and hollering, but right now you don''t really care. She breaks the kiss just long enough to moan into your ear. "I want to fuck you, come with me." she whispers as her fingers slide up into your pussy.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are barely able to tear yourself away, mostly because you don''t really want to, but after struggling with yourself for a bit you finally manage to break away and shake your head at Annushka. "I''m sorry but I can''t right now... sorry." With that you hurry away.'
+				'You are barely able to tear yourself away, mostly because you don''t really want to, but after struggling with yourself for a bit you finally manage to break away and shake your head at Annushka. "I''m sorry but I can''t right now... sorry." With that, you hurry away.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -403,12 +403,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 2
 			pcs_horny += 20
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'As her fingers invade your already dripping pussy, you spread your legs a bit wider to give her easier access, barely even aware of your fellow students in the hall and you softly moan back at her. "Mmm yes, I want you to fuck me." She smiles and grabs you by the hand and leads you away so you can find somewhere private.'
+			'As her fingers invade your already dripping pussy, you spread your legs a bit wider to give her easier access, barely even aware of your fellow students in the hall and you softly moan back at her. "Mmm yes, I want you to fuck me." She smiles, grabs you by the hand and leads you away so you can find somewhere private.'
 			act 'Go somewhere private': gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 15 and hotcat >= 6 and rand(0, 5) = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/hall.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you stop by your locker after lunch, Annushka comes over and rests against the locker next to yours. She leans in close to you "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanna come have some fun? The boys brought something special and they are waiting for us in one of the unused classrooms." By the look in her eyes and the way she is acting, you know exactly what she means by having fun with the boys.'
+		'As you stop by your locker after lunch, Annushka comes over, rests against the locker next to yours and leans in close to you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanna come have some fun? The boys brought something special and they are waiting for us in one of the unused classrooms." By the look in her eyes and the way she is acting, you know exactly what she means by "having fun" with the boys.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -418,8 +418,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 				gs 'stat'
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big144.jpg"></center>'
-				'You think a moment about it but decide that you have other things you need to do. So you shake your head. "Sorry Nush not today, maybe some other time, I got some stuff I need to do."'
-				'She gives a little shrug "Whatever." Then she turns and walks off. Leaving you behind wondering if you made the right decision.'
+				'You think about it for a moment, but decide that you have other things you need to do, so you shake your head. "Sorry Nush, but I''ve got some stuff I need to do. Maybe some other time?"'
+				'She just gives a little shrug. "Whatever." she quips before turning and walking off, leaving you wondering if you made the right decision.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 			end
 		else
@@ -428,9 +428,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 		act 'Go somewhere private':gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private2'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and rand(0,3) = 0:
 		cla
-		'During the break, you are approached by some of the local Gopniks in your school, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, come to the bathroom with us so we can have a little fun. You look like you could use a protein snack anyways." A couple of them snicker at that, as they put their hands around your arms and try to guide you towards the restrooms.'
+		'During the break, you are approached by some of the gopniks. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, come to the bathroom with us so we can have a little fun. You look like you could use a protein snack anyways." A couple of them snicker as they put their hands around your arms and try to guide you towards the restrooms.'
 		*nl
-		'You pull back, slapping their hands away playfully, "Give a girl a chance to consider her options." You already know what you plan to do, but you like to tease them when you get the chance. Give them all a quick suck or just leave them high and dry? Hmm... choices choices.'
+		'You pull back, slapping their hands away playfully. "Give a girl a chance to consider her options." You already know what you plan to do, but you like to tease them when you get the chance. Should you give them all a quick suck or just leave them high and dry?'
 		act 'Nah I don''t think so':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
@@ -446,9 +446,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your heart is pounding as you let them guide you along. You know perfectly well that they won''t let you go now, no matter what you say. When you arrive at the men''s restroom, one of the Gopniks stays by the door to keep watch while the others shove you in. The walls are covered in all sorts of crude text. A lot of it involves you. Across the entire wall, a large text reads "<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>".'
+			'Your heart is pounding as you let them guide you along. You know perfectly well that they won''t let you go now, no matter what you say. When you arrive at the men''s restroom, one of the gopniks stays by the door to keep watch while the others shove you in. The walls are covered in all sorts of crude text. A lot of it involves you. Across the entire wall, a large text reads "<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>".'
 			*nl
-			'Vitek quickly grabs you by your hair, snarling in your your face, "You know why you''re here, slut. Now get down and get to work."'
+			'Vitek quickly grabs you by your hair, snarling in your your face. "You know why you''re here, slut. Now get down and get to work."'
 			act 'Suck Vitek''s dick':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A9'
@@ -458,44 +458,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/toiletbj.jpg"></center>'
-				'You obediently kneel before him, rubbing your hand over the bulge in Vitek''s sweatpants before pulling out his dick. Clasping your <<$liptalk3>> around the head, you run your tongue around it a few times before starting to suck it in a bit deeper. You don''t want him to get angry, so you put some effort into it, sometimes licking his balls and taking his cock down your throat without really straining yourself. He mistakes your obedience for enthusiasm though and laughin, he turns to his friends and says, "Guys just look at this slut going at it, she''s loving it!"'
+				'You obediently kneel before him, rubbing your hand over the bulge in Vitek''s sweatpants before pulling out his dick. Clasping your <<$liptalk3>> around the head, you run your tongue around it a few times before starting to suck it in a bit deeper. You don''t want him to get angry, so you put some effort into it, sometimes licking his balls and taking his cock down your throat without really straining yourself. He mistakes your obedience for enthusiasm, and laughing, he turns to his friends and says "Guys just look at this slut going at it! She''s loving it!"'
 				*nl
-				'A few minutes later, Vitek is about to cum and tells you, "Good job, cocksucker. I''m going to drop my load in your mouth now and when I do, you ''re going to swallow it all and lick me clean. If you spill anything, you''re going to lick it up from the floor. Got that?" You nod up at him and as soon as his cum hits your tongue, you diligently swallow his load, making sure not to let a single drop escape. When you''re sure he''s finished, you lick and suck his slowly softening dick clean, before tucking it back into his pants for him.'
+				'A few minutes later, Vitek is about to cum and tells you "Good job, cocksucker. I''m going to drop my load in your mouth now and when I do, you ''re going to swallow it all and lick me clean. If you spill anything, you''re going to lick it up from the floor. Got that?" You nod up at him and as soon as his cum hits your tongue, you diligently swallow his load, making sure not to let a single drop escape. When you''re sure he''s finished, you lick and suck his slowly softening dick clean, before tucking it back into his pants for him.'
 				*nl
-				'"That was great, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I see you''ve certainly earned your reputation. We''ll definitely be doing this more often, maybe next time I''ll make sure the other boys can have a turn as well. We''ll come find you when we want you. Understood?"'
+				'"That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>! I see you''ve certainly earned your reputation. We''ll definitely be doing this more often, maybe next time I''ll make sure the other boys can have a turn as well. We''ll come find you when we want you. Understood?"'
 				*nl
-				'You''re not looking forward to the perspective, but not knowing what else to do you just nod. After the guys leave the bathroom you quickly have a drink, trying to wash the nasty taste of his cum out of your mouth.'
+				'You''re not looking forward to the perspective, but not knowing what else to do, you just nod. After the guys leave the bathroom you quickly have a drink, trying to wash the nasty taste of his cum out of your mouth.'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif rand(1,100) < 3:
 		cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/foodfight.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'As you are in the cafeteria you see a girl flirting with a boy, another girl comes up behind her and pours her drink over her head. Which quickly turns into a chase and fight that has to be broken up between the two girls.'
+		'As you are in the cafeteria, you see a girl flirting with a boy as another girl comes up behind her and pours her drink over her head. This quickly turns into a chase and fight that has to be broken up.'
 		act 'Continue your break': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	elseif rand(1,100) < 3:
 		cla
 		gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_girl_arg', 1, 1, 0, 1, 0, 0
 		gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_girl_arg1', 1, 1, 0, 1, 0, 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/hallbutt.jpg"></center>'
-		'Two girls are dancing around in the hall, at one point they turn to face the lockers. As they do <<$rand_girl>> grabs the back of <<$rand_girl1>> gym pants and pulls them part way down, exposing her naked butt to everyone in the hall. <<$rand_girl1>> quickly pulls up her pants while swearing at <<$rand_girl>>, with her friend joining in. Before it can go any further a teacher breaks things up. It is hard to tell if it was friendly messing around or if there is now bad blood.'
+		'Two girls are dancing around in the hall and at one point they turn to face the lockers. As they do, <<$rand_girl>> grabs the back of <<$rand_girl1>> gym pants and pulls them part way down, exposing her naked ass to everyone in the hall. <<$rand_girl1>> quickly pulls up her pants while swearing at <<$rand_girl>>, with her friend joining in. Before it can go any further, a teacher breaks things up. It is hard to tell if it was friendly messing around or if there is now bad blood.'
 		act 'Continue your break': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	elseif rand(1,100) < 3:
 		cla
 		gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_girl_arg', 1, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/lunchsleep.jpg"></center>'
-		'While in the cafeteria you notice <<$rand_girl>> is laying down on her back on one of the benches. Her eyes are closed, her chest raises up slowly as she breathes. You think she has fallen asleep, despite all the noise around her. She must really be tired.'
+		'While in the cafeteria, you notice <<$rand_girl>> is laying down on her back on one of the benches. Her eyes are closed, her chest raises up slowly as she breathes. You think she has fallen asleep, despite all the noise around her. She must really be tired.'
 		act 'Continue your break': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	elseif rand(1,100) < 3:
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/lunchdhump.jpg"></center>'
-		'While in the cafeteria you see a couple of the gopnik girls hanging out by one of the tables. One of them is slightly bent over with her skirt hiked almost all the way up to her breasts, her panties and tight ass exposed to anyone who cares to look. The second girl stands behind her with her hands on her hips. She thrusts her hips forward hard, bouncing off the panty clad ass of the first girl, pretending like she is giving her a pounding fuck. Both girls let out loud fake moans with each slap of their bodies. The quite public fake fucking gets laughs from all the other gopniks, while most of the other boys and more than one teacher watch with a gleam of lust in their eyes at their antics. The raunchy display has an obvious effect and many of the boys in the audience do their best to inconspicuously cover their groins with whatever happens to be available. Even a couple of the girls seem to be lightly rubbing their legs together, faces slightly flushed, possibly even unaware of how they are affected. But knowing many of the girls of this school, they are probably quite aware.'
+		'While in the cafeteria, you see a couple of the gopnik girls hanging out by one of the tables. One of them is slightly bent over with her skirt hiked almost all the way up to her breasts, her panties and tight ass exposed to anyone who cares to look. The second girl stands behind her with her hands on her hips. She thrusts her hips forward hard, bouncing off the panty clad ass of the first girl, pretending like she is giving her a pounding fuck. Both girls let out loud fake moans with each slap of their bodies. The quite public fake fucking gets laughs from all the other gopniks, while most of the other boys and more than one teacher watch with a gleam of lust in their eyes at their antics. The raunchy display has an obvious effect and many of the boys in the audience do their best to inconspicuously cover their groins with whatever happens to be available. Even a couple of the girls seem to be lightly rubbing their legs together, their faces slightly flushed.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 10
 		act 'Continue your break': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	elseif rand(1,100) < 3:
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/bust.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walk into the bathroom and find two other girls in there. One of them has her shirt half unbuttoned with her hands on either side of her breasts, looking at them in the mirror. "Do my tits look bigger? I don''t think they''re bigger," she says as she turns from side to side, then leans forward a bit, her lips slightly pursed as she evaluates her melons from every angle. She has a fairly impressive bust already, you don''t know why she is so worried about it. Her friend replies as you wash your hands. "They look bigger to me, I think they are still growing, unlike mine." True, her breasts are a lot smaller than her friend''s, you think as you walk out.'
+		'You walk into the bathroom and find two other girls in there. One of them has her shirt half unbuttoned with her hands on either side of her breasts, looking at them in the mirror. "Do my tits look bigger? I don''t think they''re bigger." she says as she turns from side to side, then leans forward a bit, her lips slightly pursed as she evaluates her melons from every angle. She has a fairly impressive bust already, so you don''t know why she is so worried about it. Her friend replies as you wash your hands. "They look bigger to me. I think they''re still growing, unlike mine." You finish washing your hands and leave the girls to their discussion.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 		act 'Continue your break': gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 	else
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 		gs 'stat'
 		rolanmeet += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/rolan/school/rolanmeet0.jpg"></center>'
-		'He looks like he''s sleeping. You try waking him, "Hey mister, you shouldn''t sleep here!"'
+		'He looks like he''s sleeping, so you try waking him. "Hey mister, you shouldn''t sleep here!"'
 		'He''s snoring pretty loudly. It''s a wonder no one else has tried to wake him.'
 		'"Hey... Hey... Wake up!"'
 		'"...I don''t know anything... no, Miss Volkov, I wasn''t working that day..."'
@@ -524,10 +524,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/rolan/school/rolanmeet1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You poke him in the shoulder, "Hey... Hey... Mister!" He doesn''t stir.'
+			'You poke him in the shoulder. "Hey... Hey... Mister!" He doesn''t stir.'
 			'"...please, Miss Volkov... leave me alone..."'
-			'You grow frustrated, "What th-?" You try shaking his char, "Wake up!"'
-			'He continues to snore, "...the staircases are clean... leave me alone..."'
+			'You grow frustrated. "What th-?" You try shaking his chair. "Wake up!"'
+			'He continues to snore. "...the staircases are clean... leave me alone..."'
 			'Finally, you give up. "He must be drunk."'
 			act 'Leave ': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -537,18 +537,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 		gs 'stat'
 		rolanmeet += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/rolan/school/rolanmeet2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once again, you approach the man but he doesn''t seem to be asleep this time, he''s eyeing a glass that you''re sure is filled with something alcoholic. "Hey! You can''t drink here at school!"'
-		'The man doesn''t look at you, "Leave me alone, I''m enjoying my break..."'
-		'You scold him, "I''m telling you that you can''t drink here!"'
-		'He starts swirling his glass around, "Miss Volkov, I''m not doing anything, and besides, I''ve finished my work. Shouldn''t you be worrying about yours?"'
-		'You raise your voice, "I''m <b>NOT</b> Miss Volkov and <b>YOU</b> are giving us a bad example!"'
-		'He suddenly looks up at you, "Wha-?"'
+		'Once again, you approach the man but he doesn''t seem to be asleep this time. He''s eyeing a glass that you''re sure is filled with something alcoholic. "Hey! You can''t drink here at school!"'
+		'The man doesn''t look at you. "Leave me alone, I''m enjoying my break..."'
+		'You scold him. "I''m telling you that you can''t drink here!"'
+		'He starts swirling his glass around. "Miss Volkov, I''m not doing anything, and besides, I''ve finished my work. Shouldn''t you be worrying about yours?"'
+		'You raise your voice. "I''m <b>NOT</b> Miss Volkov and <b>YOU</b> are giving us a bad example!"'
+		'He suddenly looks up at you. "Wha-?"'
 		act 'Pull his chair out':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
+			!! NO NO NO! Can someone split these eyesores up? - The Emperor
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/rolan/school/rolanmeet3.jpg"></center>'
-			'He comically falls on the floor, "Hey! What are you doing!?"'
+			'He comically falls on the floor. "Hey! What are you doing!?"'
 			'"You are in no position to question me! Why are you drunk? You''re in a school, do you know that? I should call the police!"'
 			'He starts to reach for the chair you pulled out from under him, "Hey! I''m not drunk and I''m on break!"'
 			'"Right, like I believe that. What are you doing here? Are you... homeless?" You start feeling a little bit of remorse.'