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Last minutes changes and fixes to stuff I noticed.

Vengeance11 vor 3 Jahren
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  1. 2 2
      locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc
  2. 47 42
      locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -153,11 +153,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				end
 			elseif hour = 7:
 				if NikoEv = 10:
-					gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame'
+					gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk of Shame'
 				elseif minut <= 45:
 					act '<b>Go to class</b>': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 				else
-					'You are late for school, you could rush to class or just skip until the second period.'
+					'You are late for school! You could rush to class or just skip until the second period.'
 					act '<b>Rush to class</b>':
 						demerit += 5
 						gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'

+ 47 - 42
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 1 and zverSlutQW >= 2:
-				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, can I please take this buttplug out? It''s really uncomfortable, it makes it hard to focus on class." "Tough shit, bitch," you reply. "You''re a buttslut now, get used to it." You send a smirk in her direction, before you go back to playing with your phone.'
+				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, can I please take this buttplug out? It''s really uncomfortable and it makes it hard to focus in class." "Tough shit, bitch," you reply. "You''re a buttslut now, get used to it." You send a smirk in her direction, before you go back to playing with your phone.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 2 and NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
 				'You are browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your name and her''s inside of a heart together. You turn to Natalia to see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before replying with "You are so precious to me, Natalia." Natalia quickly replies "I am so happy that I have you in my life." You reply to Natalia. "Ohhh you are just so cute. Muah." Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						grupvalue[3] -=1
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
-						'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Annushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
+						'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 						'Ms Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 						act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -723,7 +723,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 						act 'Look':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nushtopless.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn your head and look over to see Annushka running next you, but she has her top off and is carrying it in her hand. You can''t help but notice her small breasts bouncing with every step she takes. She notices where your eyes drift and grins at you. She runs alongside you for most of the run and a few of the boys pass the two of you, who all slow down for a bit to take a good long look. Some of the girls look as well, but most just give dirty or disgusted looks to Annushka.'
+							'You turn your head and look over to see Anushka running next to you, but she has her top off and is carrying it in her hand. You can''t help but notice her small breasts bouncing with every step she takes. She notices where your eyes drift and grins at you. She runs alongside you for most of the run and a few of the boys pass the two of you, who all slow down for a bit to take a good long look. Some of the girls look as well, but most just give dirty or disgusted looks to Anushka.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 					runinside = rand(1,5)
 					if runinside = 1:
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/butt.jpg"></center>'
-						'While running laps around the inside of the gym, Annushka passes behind Mr Nikolaevich and pulls down the back of her shorts to show off her panty clad ass. It doesn''t take too long before many of the boys catch up to Annushka, but not pass her. They wait until she passes behind the teacher and flashes them her panty clad ass again.'
+						'While running laps around the inside of the gym, Anushka passes behind Mr Nikolaevich and pulls down the back of her shorts to show off her panty clad ass. It doesn''t take too long before many of the boys catch up to Anushka, but not pass her. They wait until she passes behind the teacher and flashes them her panty clad ass again.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -951,7 +951,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pe':
 			jumpingjacks = rand (1,5)
 			if jumpingjacks = 1:
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nipslip.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Alyona apparently doesn''t believe in wearing sports bras. During the pushup part of the class, the top of her boob pops out of her tank top, showing her nipple off for everyone to see. Annushka quickly points it out to her, making her blush a deep red as she quickly covers her nipple up and tries to ignore the laughter and all the staring boys around her.'
+				'Alyona apparently doesn''t believe in wearing sports bras. During the pushup part of the class, the top of her boob pops out of her tank top, showing her nipple off for everyone to see. Anushka quickly points it out to her, making her blush a deep red as she quickly covers her nipple up and tries to ignore the laughter and all the staring boys around her.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1214,16 +1214,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/picture.jpg"></center>'
 		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few moments basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower.'
 	    if zverSlutQW => 2:
-			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see one of the girls pointing at Christina. She says something to a couple of girls near her and they all burst out laughing. Christina''s face turns bright red and she takes a step forward, before stopping and looking in your direction. Seeing you looking she cringes and tries to pretend like nothing was happening. Not falling for it, you walk over to her and ask what they were laughing at. "My buttplug," she replies, embarrassed and afraid.'
+			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see one of the girls pointing at Christina. She says something to a couple of girls near her and they all burst out laughing. Christina''s face turns bright red and she takes a step forward, before stopping and looking in your direction. Seeing you looking she cringes and tries to pretend like nothing was happening. Not falling for it, you walk over to her and ask what they were laughing at. "My buttplug." she replies, embarrassed and afraid.'
 			'Looking at her sternly you tell her to bend over and show it to them. When she hesitates you grab her arm and pull her down, turn her ass in their direction, and say loud enough for everybody nearby to hear, "This is for trying to hide it." Smack! You spank her hard, causing her to squeal out in suprise. The girls watching start laughing so hard one of them snorts, prompting them to laugh even louder. Christina''s face turns even redder, if that was possible, but she stays put, knowing better than to cross you again.'
 			'You spank her one more time for good measure, and remind her in a low tone, "This is your life now, bitch." You walk back to your shower head and finish rinsing yourself off. Seeing that the fun was everybody went back to their showers.'
 		else
-			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see Christina holding up her phone and taking pictures. All the girls quickly notice. Some laugh and others quickly finish and leave but everyone, well everyone except Annushka, cover up. After a few laughs and some yelling seeming to all be in good natured fun, Christina stops and everyone goes back to showering.'
+			'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see Christina holding up her phone and taking pictures. All the girls quickly notice. Some laugh and others quickly finish and leave but everyone, well everyone except Anushka, covers up. After a few laughs and some yelling seeming to all be in good natured fun, Christina stops and everyone goes back to showering.'
 		end
 	elseif gymshower = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/aylnushkiss.jpg"></center>'
 		'You pick one of the empty shower heads at random and turn the water on, letting it pour over you and run down your body, caressing you in the relaxing way that is unique to hot showers - after PE, this feels simply great. After spending a few minutes basking in the water, you lather up your body with soap. You barely pay any attention to the other girls showering with you, their conversations mostly drowned out by the sound of the shower.'
-		'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see see Annushka and Aylona sharing a kiss under one of the shower heads. Several other girls notice and a few whistle, make cat calls or yell encouragements. A few others look disgusted at the two of them kissing. One girl even says "Stop that you fucking dykes! That''s so disgusting." A hard look from Aylona sends the girl fleeing from the showers and she and Annushka laugh about it before they go back to just showering.'
+		'As you wash off the soap, you turn just in time to see see Anushka and Aylona sharing a kiss under one of the shower heads. Several other girls notice and a few whistle, make cat calls or yell encouragements. A few others look disgusted at the two of them kissing. One girl even says "Stop that you fucking dykes! That''s so disgusting." A hard look from Aylona sends the girl fleeing from the showers and she and Anushka laugh about it before they go back to just showering.'
 	elseif gymshower = 4 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_1.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you shower, you catch of a glimpse of Lena and Lera up to their usual tricks. Lera is on her knees with her face buried in Lena''s crotch, who is clearly enjoying herself. As it''s something you''ve seen dozens of times before, you ignore them and go back to cleaning yourself, but are interrupted by Lena calling someone out. You turn to see her getting up in Sonia''s face, who has her fingers buried deep inside her pussy. "What a horny little slut you are! You suck my brother''s dick every fucking day, so why don''t you let me have a turn?" Lena says before forcefully dragging Sonia out into the middle of the room and pushing her onto her knees.'
@@ -1231,38 +1231,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 		gs 'stat'
 		if pav_slut >= 150 and grupTipe = 5:
-			act 'Try to Flee Unnoticed':
+			act 'Try to leave unnoticed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
-				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" the girl who grabbed you says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue. "Get to it you fucking whore!" another girl says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking the girl''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as the girl orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place. The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair. By the time you enter the locker room, only a small group of girls remain, who laugh at and mock you further while showing you a video of the moment a girl lets out a huge squirt on your face.'
+				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" the girl who grabbed you says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.' 
+				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it you fucking whore!" another girl says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking the girl''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as the girl orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place.' 
+				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Flee to the Locker Room':
+				act 'Return to the locker room':
 					*clr & cla
 					!!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/bullied_sveta.jpg"></center>'
+					'By the time you enter the locker room, only a small group of girls remain, who laugh at and mock you further while showing you a video of the moment a girl lets out a huge squirt on your face.'
 					'Not knowing how to feel, you quietly get dressed in the corner before running out of the locker room as fast as you can.'
-					'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
-					act 'Finish Dressing':
+					'If you want to change clothes or do your make-up, you''ll need to go home or wait until the bullies have left and you can come back.'
+					act 'Flee the locker room':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
-						gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+						gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		elseif zverRageQW = 10 or christinaphotos = 1 or christinaphotos = 3:
-			act 'Try to Flee Unnoticed':
+			act 'Try to leave unnoticed':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
-				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place. The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
+				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue.' 
+				'With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place.' 
+				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and quickly run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Flee to the Locker Room':
+				act 'Return to the locker room':
 					*clr & cla
 					!!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/bullied_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 					'By the time you enter the locker room, only a small group of girls remain, who laugh at and mock you further while showing you a video of the moment a girl lets out a huge squirt on your face. Feeling humiliated, you quickly get dressed before fleeing from the locker room, tears welling up in your eyes.'
-					'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
-					act 'Finish Dressing':
+					'If you want to change clothes or do your make-up, you''ll need to go home or wait until the bullies have left and you can come back.'
+					act 'Flee in shame':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
-						gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+						gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1287,7 +1292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -8, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
-				act 'Finish Dressing':
+				act 'Finish dressing':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 				end
@@ -1298,7 +1303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				'You quickly join them and hurry out of the showers to your locker.'
 				'"Such a dirty, desperate bitch! Not only hungry for dick, but pussy too?" Bella says mockingly, with Albina just scoffing in response. "I took pity on her at first and tried helping her out. I offered to get Vitek and his perverted lapdogs off her back, but she wouldn''t even stop to listen to me. Too eager to run and suck them all off like the pathetic slut that she''s become. Let the fucking whore get on with it I say." she replies. The rest of the girls offer their opinions as you all get dressed and leave, the sounds of the girls having their way with Sonia echoing from the showers.'
 				'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
-				act 'Finish Dressing':
+				act 'Finish dressing':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 				end
@@ -1306,28 +1311,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surronding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing near the exit, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Christina prepares to take her place as she finishes and walks aside.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Anushka, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surronding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Christina prepares to take her place as she finishes and steps aside.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Stop Watching':
+				act 'Stop watching':
 					cla
-					'You''ve seen enough and quietly slip out of the showers into the locker room. You pass by Lariska on your way, who doesn''t seem to know what to do. The girls who walked out have already gone, so you get dressed and leave as the sounds of Christina loudly orgasming and the other girls laughing and expressing amazement echo into the room.' 
+					'You''ve seen enough and quietly slip out of the showers into the locker room. You pass by Lariska on your way, who doesn''t seem to know what to do and looks everywhere except for at the action. The girls who walked out have already gone, so you get dressed and leave as the sounds of Christina loudly orgasming and the other girls laughing and expressing amazement echo into the room.' 
 					
-					act 'Finish Dressing':
+					act 'Finish dressing':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 					end
 				end
 				act 'Wait your turn':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You''re getting incredibly aroused watching this show and know where it''s going. You follow the other girls in masturbating as you watch and wait your turn. Christina soon reaches her explosive orgasm and drenches Sonia in a shower of pussy juice as she moans loudly. The other girls express their amazement while Sonia looks to be greatly enjoying herself. Lina and a few other girls take their turns squirting over Sonia as you continue to rub your clit and finger yourself. Eventually, you feel your orgasm building and step up to Sonia as another girl finishes. You are surprised when Sonia suddenly starts licking your pussy as you stand above her. She is <i>really</i> good at this and you quickly feel yourself about to cum, so you pull her face out of your crotch and rub your engorged clit to bring yourself to orgasm.'
-					$orgasm_txt = 'You moan loudly as your pussy explodes and you squirt your juice all over Sonia''s already drenched face and into your mouth, Sonia happily taking it all and swallowing it.'
+					'You''re getting incredibly aroused watching this show and know where it''s going. You follow the other girls in masturbating as you watch and wait your turn. Christina soon reaches her explosive orgasm and drenches Sonia in a shower of pussy juice as she moans loudly. The other girls express their amazement while Sonia looks to be greatly enjoying herself. Anushka, Lina and a few other girls take their turns squirting over Sonia as you continue to rub your clit and finger yourself. Eventually, you feel your orgasm building and step up to Sonia as another girl finishes. You are surprised when Sonia suddenly starts licking your pussy as you stand above her. She is <i>really</i> good at this and you quickly feel yourself about to cum, so you pull her face out of your crotch and rub your engorged clit to bring yourself to orgasm.'
+					$orgasm_txt = 'You moan loudly as your pussy explodes and you squirt your juice all over Sonia''s already drenched face and into her mouth, Sonia happily taking it all and swallowing it.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 					'When you finish cumming, Sonia buries herself back in your pussy and starts licking you again. The pleasure is too good to stop her and for a few seconds you weakly stand there, having had one of the best orgasms in your life. You then somewhat reluctantly step off of her and let another girl have a go with her. Once the last few girls have had their turn, you all look down on Sonia, who is covered from head to breasts in girl cum, her cheeks bright red from all the slaps she recieved. She ignores the crude insults being thrown down at her and instead focuses all her attention on vigoursly fingering herself. The group insults her even more upon seeing this and a few even spit in her mouth, but she doesn''t seem to care and makes no effort to resist. You then all leave her sitting there and head to the lockers to get chnaged, where the girls all continue to laugh at and mock Sonia while showing videos to each other. You finish getting dressed and head out.'    
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -8, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
-					act 'Finish Dressing':
+					act 'Finish dressing':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 					end
@@ -1528,7 +1533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you are in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs, "Whatever." She starts getting dressed and you do the same. Soon you are both dressed and she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed and you do the same. Soon you are both dressed and she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1639,12 +1644,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
-		act 'Check out Annushka':
+		act 'Check out Anushka':
 			*clr & cla
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nushpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You notice Annushka drying herself off with a towel. She is very pretty, some would even call her beautiful. You know most of the boys follow her around with their tongues hanging out. Even those not into alternative looks and tattoos find her pretty, making her one of the pretties girls in school. She has a petite build. Not too skinny, but just about right. She has average sized perky breasts, while her pussy is clean shaven. You can''t help but watch her, there is just something attractive about her to you. You tear your gaze away before someone notices you watching her and go back to the lockers.'
+			'You notice Anushka drying herself off with a towel. She is very pretty, some would even call her beautiful. You know most of the boys follow her around with their tongues hanging out. Even those not into alternative looks and tattoos find her pretty, making her one of the pretties girls in school. She has a petite build. Not too skinny, but just about right. She has average sized perky breasts, while her pussy is clean shaven. You can''t help but watch her, there is just something attractive about her to you. You tear your gaze away before someone notices you watching her and go back to the lockers.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1722,12 +1727,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
-	act 'Check out Annushka':
+	act 'Check out Anushka':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 5
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nushwatch.jpg"></center>'
-		'You notice Annushka drying herself off with a towel. She is very pretty, some would even call her beautiful, but you know most of the boys follow her around with their tongues hanging out, especially if they are into alternative looks and tattoos. She has a petite build. Not too skinny, but just about right. She has average sized perky breasts while her pussy is clean shaven. You can''t help but watch her, there is just something attractive about her to you. You tear your gaze away before someone notices you watching her and go back to the lockers.'
+		'You notice Anushka drying herself off with a towel. She is very pretty, some would even call her beautiful, but you know most of the boys follow her around with their tongues hanging out, especially if they are into alternative looks and tattoos. She has a petite build. Not too skinny, but just about right. She has average sized perky breasts while her pussy is clean shaven. You can''t help but watch her, there is just something attractive about her to you. You tear your gaze away before someone notices you watching her and go back to the lockers.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1802,7 +1807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		pcs_mood += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/lockerflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Annushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Annushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call. All in all, everyone has a good laugh at the moment.'
+		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call. All in all, everyone has a good laugh at the moment.'
 		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you are finished, most of the other girls have already left the locker room.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
@@ -1850,8 +1855,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nudepic<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		if zverSlutQW = 2:
-			'Still naked, you hear a couple of girls giggling, so you turn to look at them, but they are not looking at you. Confused, you follow their collective gaze and see Christina trying to work her buttplug into a comfortable position. Smirking, you go over to her, slap her hand away, and yank the plug out, making her yelp in suprise. "Open," you say in a menacing tone. She cringes, before closing her eyes and opening her mouth.'
-			'Shoving the plug into her mouth you spin it around a few times, letting her slobber on it a bit. Despite the taste, she does lube it up as best she can, mindful of where it was going back to. "Bend," you bark at her. She sighs but but bends over and spreads her buttcheeks, trying to ignore the laughing the other girls were doing. Without being gentle in the slightest, you jam it back it, getting another gasp out of her.'
+			'Still naked, you hear a couple of girls giggling, so you turn to look at them, but they are not looking at you. Confused, you follow their collective gaze and see Christina trying to work her buttplug into a comfortable position. Smirking, you go over to her, slap her hand away, and yank the plug out, making her yelp in suprise. "Open." you say in a menacing tone. She cringes before closing her eyes and opening her mouth.'
+			'Shoving the plug into her mouth you spin it around a few times, letting her slobber on it a bit. Despite the taste, she does lube it up as best she can, mindful of where it is going. "Bend over." you bark at her. She sighs, but bends over and spreads her buttcheeks, trying to ignore the laughing of the other girls. Without being gentle in the slightest, you jam it back in, getting another gasp out of her.'
 		else
 			'Still naked, you hear a couple of girls giggling, so you turn to look at them, but they are not looking at you. Confused, you follow their collective gaze and see Christina standing there with her phone out. Glancing back at them, you see them looking at you and giggling again - obviously, something happened that you missed; something that they thought was funny. You wonder what it was.'
 		end
@@ -1874,7 +1879,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 			'As you get dressed you overhear one of the girls say to another, "Come take a picture with me. I want to send something to my boyfriend." Giggling, two of her friends came over and posed with her.'
 		else
 			'As you get dressed you overhear Christina say "Damn we look good, I look really amazing." You turn and see her checking out her naked body in the mirror, along with Lariska and Lina.'
-			'"You look amazing as always Christina," Lina says.'
+			'"You look amazing as always Christina!" Lina says.'
 			'Christina grabs her phone and says "Let''s take a selfie."'
 			'The three of them pose several times as Christina takes several selfies of the three of them naked. Lariska even takes a couple herself, which Christina doesn''t seem to mind. They go on for several minutes about how great they look, although it is mostly Lina and Lariska stroking Christina''s ego.'
 		end
@@ -1883,7 +1888,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/alynushwedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Aylona sneak up behind Annushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and then yank them up, giving Annushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Annushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Annushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing, while Annushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
+		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Aylona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and then yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing, while Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 8:
@@ -1892,10 +1897,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if zverSlutQW = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you get dressed you decide to have some fun with Christina, who is trying to hide in a corner so she isn''t noticed. Calling her to the center of the room, you tell her to raise her skirt and bend over. When she hesitates, you warn her if she has panties on and no buttplug you are going to spank her ass so hard she wont be able to sit for a week. Grimacing, she bends over and flips up her skirt. Seeing she is following your rules, you tell her to turn and give everybody a good look, before letting her continue to get dressed. Several girls laugh at her while she hurries to finish dressing and flees the locker room before you mess with her some more.'
+			'As you get dressed you decide to have some fun with Christina, who is trying to hide in a corner so she isn''t noticed. Calling her to the center of the room, you tell her to raise her skirt and bend over. When she hesitates, you warn her if she has panties on and no buttplug inserted, you are going to spank her ass so hard she won''t be able to sit for a week. Grimacing, she bends over and flips up her skirt. Seeing she is following your rules, you tell her to turn and give everybody a good look, before letting her continue to get dressed. Several girls laugh at her while she hurries to finish dressing and flees the locker room before you mess with her some more.'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/applegirl.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t know why but Christina says something to Lina, which causes Lina to lay down on her stomach on one of the benches. Christina then sticks an apple in her mouth and proceeds to ignore her. A few minutes pass and once Christina is fully clothed, she walks back over and then uses her belt to smack Lina hard on the ass, making her wince in pain. "Have you learned your lesson?" Chrisina asks Lina, who enthusiastically nods her head.'
+			'You don''t know why but Christina says something to Lina, which causes Lina to lie down on her stomach on one of the benches. Christina then sticks an apple in her mouth and proceeds to ignore her. A few minutes pass and once Christina is fully clothed, she walks back over and then uses her belt to smack Lina hard on the ass, making her wince in pain. "Have you learned your lesson?" Chrisina asks Lina, who enthusiastically nods her head.'
 			'Lariska just stands there watching, from a safe distance, as Christina yanks hard on Lina''s hair. "Are you sure?" Lina nods even more enthusiastically.'
 			'Christina gives her a final look and then puts her belt on. "OK fine, but don''t do it again."'
 			'Lina gets up and takes the apple out of her mouth while taking a bite. "I won''t Christina." The three of them walk out together, with Lina and Lariska sharing the apple.'
@@ -1909,7 +1914,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 			'You see a couple of the girls teasing each other while getting dressed. One manages to get behind the other, grabs her panties, and pulls up. They both start laughing, obviously just messing around with each other. Things settle back down as the girl who got wedgied adjusts her panties and they leave the room, still teasing each other.'
 		else
 			'As Lariska finishes getting dressed, Christina walks up behind her, grabs the back of her panties and yanks up on them hard, making Lariska squeal a bit as she stands on her toes to try and relieve the pressure. Most of the other girls laugh at this. "Oh please, we all know you like things up your ass, so don''t act like you''re not enjoying this." Christina tells her.'
-			'"Ow! Let go Christina, it hurts! Please!" Lariska pleads in a slightly whinny, submissive tone.'
+			'"Ow! Let go Christina, it hurts! Please!" Lariska pleads in a slightly whiny, submissive tone.'
 			'Christina laughs. "Is that what you tell Ivan when you let him fuck your ass?" Lariska goes bright red at the comment and Christina gives another hard yank and Lariska winces even more.'
 			'"Whatever butt slut, let''s go." Christina says as she waves to Lina and the three of them walk out, Lariska trying to dig her panties out of her ass.'
 		end