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Fix typos

Vengeance11 1 year ago
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1 changed files with 12 additions and 13 deletions
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      locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

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locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina3':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
 		'You approach and greet Albina, who turns to you and smiles, but stops short of hugging you.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!! Please tell me you don''t practice with those bow-legged cows who call themselves dancers?" she asks with a smirk.'
-		'"I''m pretty good, but I don''t know if I''m quite on your level just yet." you reply.'
+		'"I''m pretty good, but I don''t know if I''m quite on your level just yet," you reply.'
 		'"Hey, don''t sell yourself short <<$pcs_nickname>>." Albina responds with a smile. "Have you seen the people that take lessons here? Please. No amount of teaching will help them reach your skill level. You''ve got talent, which brings me to my next question."'
 
 		act 'Ask what she means':
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"Your turn now <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me that you''re as passionate as I am and we might come to an agreement." she says as she sits down to catch her breath.'
+			'"Your turn now <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me that you''re as passionate as I am and we might come to an agreement..." she says as she sits down to catch her breath.'
 			act 'Dance':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
-						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
+						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all..." she says with hesitation.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/stage.jpg"></center>'
 			'Albina calls for a car. Once the car arrives, you all bundle in. You arrive at the performance hall and are ushered into a small dressing room, where you all change into your outfits and group up at the edge of the stage.'
-			act'Dance':
+			act 'Dance':
 				gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 120, 'agil_exp', 'danc_exp'
 				money += albpayrand * 1000
 				killvar 'albpayrand'
@@ -307,11 +307,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/dance.jpg"></center>'
 				'The MC announces the Starlets and you all dance your way out onto the stage, beginning the show with cheers from the crowd. During the performance, you can''t help but notice a number of older men in the audience leering at you as you dance.'
-				act'Finish the show':
+				act 'Finish the show':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/backstage.jpg"></center>'
 					'The performance goes smoothly and you and the other Starlets leave the stage, where Albina distributes the money while everyone takes turns using the single shower in the dressing room.'
-					act'Shower':
+					act 'Shower':
 						cla & *clr
 						noShampoo = 1
 						dynamic $showerdin
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_show':
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You get in the car along with Albina and the rest of the girls. Everyone notices the empty seat and questions soon start arising about the missing girl and whether she is with "one of those kind of guys."'
-		'Albina quietly replies "Just be thankful that you''re not her right now." and spends the rest of the journey lost in thought while staring out the window. You see her wiping tears from her eyes a few times.'
+		'"Just be thankful that you''re not her right now," Albina quietly replies and spends the rest of the journey lost in thought while staring out the window. You see her wiping tears from her eyes a few times.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 end
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Laughing, the two Armenians shove you into their hotel room and you fall to the floor. "Get up, it''s time to show us what you''ve got little lamb!" one says.'
-	'"I want see what those <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lipss of yours can do. They look like they were made to suck cock! The other man replies.'
+	'"I want see what those <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips of yours can do. They look like they were made to suck cock!" the other man replies.'
 	act 'Please them':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
@@ -742,8 +742,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore3':
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust1'], 'a'
 
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Shyly, the young men lead you into their hotel room.'
-	'You think they might be virgins who don''t know what to do, so you take action.'
+	'Shyly, the young men lead you into their hotel room. You think they might be virgins who don''t know what to do, so you take action.'
 	act 'Get their pants off':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
@@ -1011,8 +1010,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackbjd.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and the men undress before you kneel in front of them and they present their cocks to you. "Oh wow!" you exclaim.'
-		'"Go on, you know you want to." one of the guys says to you.'
+		'You and the men undress before you kneel in front of them and they present their cocks to you.'
+		'"Go on, you know you want to," one of the guys says.'
 		'You spend the next ten minutes licking, jerking and sucking the two massive cocks.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', -1, 'dick1', 'sub', 'group'
@@ -1049,7 +1048,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackfacial.jpg"></center>'
 						'You let out a strangled gurgle and frantically start swallowing it all down until he finally finishes. He slides his cock out of your mouth and you swallow the last of the cum in your mouth.'
-						'You look up at him, seeking approval. He pats you on the head. "I guess you little white girls really do crave it.'
+						'You look up at him, seeking approval. He pats you on the head. "I guess you little white girls really do crave it."'
 						'You take their cocks in your hands and finish them off with a final blowjob each, to their immense satisfaction.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick1', 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough', 'humiliation'
 						gs 'pain', 1, 'throat', 'choke'