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[text Edit] Proof read by Lurk

Kevin_Smarts 1 year ago
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locations/hookup_female.qsrc

@@ -4,61 +4,60 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'quickie':
 	$location_type = 'indoors'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/romance/lovers/hookups/gf/gf1.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> opens the door to their apartment and you both immediately start caressing each and kissing passionately.'
-	nl
-	'Slowly '+iif(PCloSkirt = 0, 'you inch her dress upwards as she pulls you pants down', 'both your dresses are inched upwards')+' exposing '+iif($pantyworntype = 'none','her already soaking panties and your pussy.','both of your already soaking panties.')
+	'<<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> opens the door to her apartment and you both immediately begin caressing each other and kissing passionately.'
+	*nl
+	'Slowly '+iif(PCloSkirt = 0, 'you inch her dress upwards as she pulls your pants down', 'both your dresses are inched upwards')+' exposing '+iif($pantyworntype = 'none','her already soaking panties and your pussy.','both of your already soaking panties.')
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', -2
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'You can’’t resist that ass!':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/romance/lovers/hookups/gf/gf2.jpg"></center>'
-		'As she turns to head towards the bedroom you stop her and dropping to your knees start to slowly massage and kiss her buttocks and pulling her panties to one side you start to kiss and lick around her most private entrance before flicking your tongue in and out of it as her excitement builds and she starts to moan softly at first but slowly getting louder and louder.'
+		'As she turns to head towards the bedroom, you stop her, drop to your knees and begin to slowly massage and kiss her buttocks. Pulling her panties to one side, you start to kiss and lick around her most private entrance before flicking your tongue in and out of it. As her excitement builds, she starts to moan softly at first before slowly getting louder and louder.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5
-		act 'You slowly rise':
+		act 'Stand back up':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/romance/lovers/hookups/gf/gf3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You continue to caress her as you slowly rise. She turns towards you with lust in her eyes and pushing you back against the door frame immediately starts kissing you whilst playing with your clit '+iif($pantyworntype = 'none', '', 'through your now dripping panties')+'. At this point you are starting to utter guttural sounds from within your core as your excitement and lust builds.'
+			'You continue to caress her as you slowly rise. She turns to you with lust in her eyes and pushes you back against the door frame. She immediately starts kissing you while playing with your clit' +iif($pantyworntype = 'none', '.', 'through your panties.')
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', -5
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
 			gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 5
-			act 'Your legs are staring to resemble jelly!':
+			act 'Your legs are getting weak':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 				gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/romance/lovers/hookups/gf/gf4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You both really need to lie down as your legs start to shake so holding your hand she walks through the living room towards the bedroom.'
-				nl
-				'Unable to contain your lust any more you don''t even make it to the bedroom but collapse on the couch where you lay on your back and holding your legs open for <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>. She wastes no time and starts kissing and licking your clit while gently fingering you.'
+				'Growing a bit tired, she starts to pull you by the hand through the living room towards her bedroom.'
+				*nl
+				'Unable to contain your lust anymore, you don''t even make it to the bedroom but collapse on the couch. You lay on your back and hold your legs open for <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>. She wastes no time and starts kissing and licking your clit, while gently fingering you.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'no'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -10
 				$orgasm_txt = 'Your orgasm slowly builds to a crescendo and you explode into her mouth.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10
-				nl
-				'Not that you could care but if the neighbours are home you''re sure that they''d hear you as you can''t hold back.'
-				act 'Time to take a breath...':
+				*nl
+				'Not that you care, but if the neighbours are home, they''ve surely heard you by now as you can''t hold back your moans and shouts.'
+				act 'Her turn':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/romance/lovers/hookups/gf/gf5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Taking a pause <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> smiles at you and lays back on the couch as you move to her and happily work her private parts until she cums for you, squirting her juices into your mouth as you lap them up.'
+					'<<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> smiles at you and lays back on the couch. You move between her legs and happily work her private parts until she cums for you, squirting her juices into your mouth as you lap them up.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10
-					nl
-					'"Yumm... You taste nice," you mutter smiling at her.'
-					nl
-					'Just as well the neighbours can''t see although, it they''re home she might get some funny looks from them from all the noise as it''s obvious what''s going on!...'
+					*nl
+					'"Yum! You taste good," you mutter, smiling at her.'
 					act 'Afterglow':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/romance/lovers/hookups/gf/gf6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Both exhausted and in a state of bliss she slowly closes her eyes while remaining on the couch.'
-						nl
-						'You climb on top of her and cuddling up to her you both fall into a blissful sleep in each other''s arms.'
-						nl
-						'A short while later you both start to wake up whilst still in your passionate embrace. <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> turns towards you and as she raises her head you both have a long passionate kiss following which <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> looks into your eyes and says "You know Sveta, that was so unexpected! Just spending this short time with you made me happy. Do you want to swap phone numbers? Maybe we can go on a date and see where this goes?"'
+						'Both exhausted and in a state of bliss, she slowly closes her eyes while remaining on the couch.'
+						*nl
+						'You climb on top of her and cuddle up to her, and you both fall asleep in each other''s arms.'
+						*nl
+						'A short while later, you both wake up, still embracing one another. <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> turns and gives you a long passionate kiss.'
+						'"You know, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "That was so unexpected! Just spending this short time with you made me happy. Do you want to swap phone numbers? Maybe we can go on a date and see where this goes?"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 2
 						act 'Yes':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_generic/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Umm, very unexpected but wow! Yeah that would be great, I''ll look forward to our date. Don''t leave it too long before you call now!'
+							'"Umm, very unexpected but wow! Yeah, that would be great, I''ll look forward to our date. Don''t make me wait too long!'
 							act 'Leave':
 								gs 'lover', 'add'
 								gt 'hookup_after', 'exit'
@@ -67,7 +66,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'quickie':
 						act 'No':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_generic/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I really enjoyed it too but it''s probably best to leave it here. You never know we might bump into each other again."'
+							'"I really enjoyed it too, but it''s probably best to leave it here. You never know, we might bump into each other again."'
 							act 'Leave':
 								gt 'hookup_after', 'exit'
 							end