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Merge remote-tracking branch 'LadyAlexa/master'

Kevin_Smarts 1 year ago
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3 changed files with 23 additions and 17 deletions
  1. 12 13
      locations/albina_starlets.qsrc
  2. 8 1
      locations/bank.qsrc
  3. 3 3
      locations/lover_likes.qsrc

+ 12 - 13
locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina3':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big23.jpg"></center>'
 		'You approach and greet Albina, who turns to you and smiles, but stops short of hugging you.'
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!! Please tell me you don''t practice with those bow-legged cows who call themselves dancers?" she asks with a smirk.'
-		'"I''m pretty good, but I don''t know if I''m quite on your level just yet." you reply.'
+		'"I''m pretty good, but I don''t know if I''m quite on your level just yet," you reply.'
 		'"Hey, don''t sell yourself short <<$pcs_nickname>>." Albina responds with a smile. "Have you seen the people that take lessons here? Please. No amount of teaching will help them reach your skill level. You''ve got talent, which brings me to my next question."'
 
 		act 'Ask what she means':
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"Your turn now <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me that you''re as passionate as I am and we might come to an agreement." she says as she sits down to catch her breath.'
+			'"Your turn now <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me that you''re as passionate as I am and we might come to an agreement..." she says as she sits down to catch her breath.'
 			act 'Dance':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
-						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
+						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all..." she says with hesitation.'
 					end
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 				end
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/stage.jpg"></center>'
 			'Albina calls for a car. Once the car arrives, you all bundle in. You arrive at the performance hall and are ushered into a small dressing room, where you all change into your outfits and group up at the edge of the stage.'
-			act'Dance':
+			act 'Dance':
 				gs 'exercise', 'tier2', 120, 'agil_exp', 'danc_exp'
 				money += albpayrand * 1000
 				killvar 'albpayrand'
@@ -307,11 +307,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/dance.jpg"></center>'
 				'The MC announces the Starlets and you all dance your way out onto the stage, beginning the show with cheers from the crowd. During the performance, you can''t help but notice a number of older men in the audience leering at you as you dance.'
-				act'Finish the show':
+				act 'Finish the show':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/backstage.jpg"></center>'
 					'The performance goes smoothly and you and the other Starlets leave the stage, where Albina distributes the money while everyone takes turns using the single shower in the dressing room.'
-					act'Shower':
+					act 'Shower':
 						cla & *clr
 						noShampoo = 1
 						dynamic $showerdin
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_show':
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You get in the car along with Albina and the rest of the girls. Everyone notices the empty seat and questions soon start arising about the missing girl and whether she is with "one of those kind of guys."'
-		'Albina quietly replies "Just be thankful that you''re not her right now." and spends the rest of the journey lost in thought while staring out the window. You see her wiping tears from her eyes a few times.'
+		'"Just be thankful that you''re not her right now," Albina quietly replies and spends the rest of the journey lost in thought while staring out the window. You see her wiping tears from her eyes a few times.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 end
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'Laughing, the two Armenians shove you into their hotel room and you fall to the floor. "Get up, it''s time to show us what you''ve got little lamb!" one says.'
-	'"I want see what those <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lipss of yours can do. They look like they were made to suck cock! The other man replies.'
+	'"I want see what those <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips of yours can do. They look like they were made to suck cock!" the other man replies.'
 	act 'Please them':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
@@ -742,8 +742,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore3':
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust1'], 'a'
 
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Shyly, the young men lead you into their hotel room.'
-	'You think they might be virgins who don''t know what to do, so you take action.'
+	'Shyly, the young men lead you into their hotel room. You think they might be virgins who don''t know what to do, so you take action.'
 	act 'Get their pants off':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
@@ -1011,8 +1010,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 		cls
 		guy += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackbjd.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and the men undress before you kneel in front of them and they present their cocks to you. "Oh wow!" you exclaim.'
-		'"Go on, you know you want to." one of the guys says to you.'
+		'You and the men undress before you kneel in front of them and they present their cocks to you.'
+		'"Go on, you know you want to," one of the guys says.'
 		'You spend the next ten minutes licking, jerking and sucking the two massive cocks.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', -1, 'dick1', 'sub', 'group'
@@ -1049,7 +1048,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackfacial.jpg"></center>'
 						'You let out a strangled gurgle and frantically start swallowing it all down until he finally finishes. He slides his cock out of your mouth and you swallow the last of the cum in your mouth.'
-						'You look up at him, seeking approval. He pats you on the head. "I guess you little white girls really do crave it.'
+						'You look up at him, seeking approval. He pats you on the head. "I guess you little white girls really do crave it."'
 						'You take their cocks in your hands and finish them off with a final blowjob each, to their immense satisfaction.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick1', 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough', 'humiliation'
 						gs 'pain', 1, 'throat', 'choke'

+ 8 - 1
locations/bank.qsrc

@@ -9,7 +9,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	menu_off = 0
 	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
 	minut += 2
-	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bank</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/bank/bank.jpg"></center>'
@@ -25,6 +24,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				bankDebtLimit = 5000
 				'You are led to on open office and a member of the bank staff goes through your details and ID, then takes 50 <b>₽</b> from you before setting up your account'
 				'"Your account is now open with your 50 <b>₽</b> and an overdraft protection of 5,000 <b>₽</b>"'
+				gs 'stat'
+
 				act 'Continue': gt 'bank', 'start'
 			end
 		else
@@ -46,6 +47,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<br>You deposited <<kartaIN>> <b>₽</b>, your account balance is now ' + iif(karta >= 0,'<<karta>>','<font color="red"><<karta>></font>') + ' <b>₽</b>.'
 				end
 				killvar 'kartaIN'
+				gs 'stat'
+
 				act 'Walk away':gt 'bank', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -70,6 +73,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					end
 				end
 				killvar 'kartaOUT'
+				gs 'stat'
+
 				act 'Walk away':gt 'bank', 'start'
 			end
 
@@ -123,6 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			end
 		end
 	end
+	gs 'stat'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'loan_officer':
@@ -149,6 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loan_officer':
 			'He reads what appears on his monitor, a ghost of a frown appearing on his face. Suddenly you feel rather foolish for asking for so much money when you''re a young girl not even established in the world yet!'
 			*nl
 			'You shift in your chair, and the next couple of minutes seem very long indeed before Karpenko finally looks up from his screen and says, "I''m sorry, but you seem to have very little in the way of assets or collateral, and you''re very young to be taking out such a significant loan. I''m afraid the bank can''t take a risk on this proposition at this time."'
+			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'Isn''t there some way you could reconsider, Mr. Karpenko?':
 				*clr & cla

+ 3 - 3
locations/lover_likes.qsrc

@@ -67,13 +67,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clotQualPrefTmp':
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:
 
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2
-				$meetQualPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear <<clotQualPrefTmp>> clothing, and anything else just doesn''t look good."'
+				$meetQualPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear <<$clotQualPrefTmp>> clothing, and anything else just doesn''t look good."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 1:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 1
-				$meetQualPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear <<clotQualPrefTmp>> clothing, and anything else is trash."'
+				$meetQualPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear <<$clotQualPrefTmp>> clothing, and anything else is trash."'
 			elseif haraklover[lover_number] = 2:
 				loverrelation[lover_number] -= 2 
-				$meetQualPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear <<clotQualPrefTmp>> clothing, and anything else is crap."'
+				$meetQualPref = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says <<$tXe>> likes girls that wear <<$clotQualPrefTmp>> clothing, and anything else is crap."'
 			end	
 		elseif PCloQuality > 4:
 			if haraklover[lover_number] = 0: