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locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -434,22 +434,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesco':
 		if grupTipe = 5:
 			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual, except when you sit with him. As you approach him with a friendly smile, he looks up and gives you a friendly smile in return. "How''s it going <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			*nl
-			'You tell him well enough and ask if he wants to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he Lena makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncle''s family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You tell him well enough and ask if he wants to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncle''s family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		else
 			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he stiffens and shyly looks up towards you, "C-Can I help you with something?"'
 			*nl
-			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he Lena makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		end
 	elseif npc_rel['A7'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 125:
 		npc_rel['A7'] += 1
 		if grupTipe = 5:
 			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he relaxes slightly and shyly looks up towards you, "What do you want?"'
 			*nl
-			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he Lena makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. You end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		else
 			'You see Lesco sitting by himself just like usual. Feeling sad about him sitting alone all the time you approach him with a friendly smile. When he sees you, he stiffens and looks up towards you with a apprehensive expression. "Please leave me alone."'
 			*nl
-			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. He seems unsure a bit but as you talk, he relaxes a little and you end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he Lena makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
+			'You shrug your shoulders saying you just wanted to hang out for a bit. He seems unsure a bit but as you talk, he relaxes a little and you end up talking with him about living at the Tsarev residence and as you suspected he makes his life a living hell at home, since he moved in with his uncles family. He still has a few funny stories to tell you about her, like how when they were younger and things where better for both families. He tells you how Lena found a dead bird and started poking it but it turned out to still be alive and ended up attacking her. Even after the bird had flew away, she continued to run and scream all the way back home.'
 		end
 	elseif pav_slut >= 125:
 		'When he see''s you walking over he gives you a disgusted look. "Get away from me you disgusting slut, I have enough problems with out being seen with the likes of you." With that he moves away from you.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -135,13 +135,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 		'While Ivan is watching Lina moves up behind Lariska and pushes her forward at the shoulders making her bend over. Then proceeds to pretend hump Lariska, obviously trying to mimic Ivan''s voice and speech. "Oh Lariska I want to fuck your ass!" Which gets several of the other students to laugh even Ivan joins in. It is quickly broken up by Mr Nikolaevich.'
 	elseif fizperand = 14:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/bouncebhand.jpg"></center>'
-		'A girl from your bothers grades is doing jumping jacks and her breasts are really bouncing, she obviously isn''t wearing a bra. The bouncing of her breasts start to draw the attention of a lot of the boys, just as her friend walks up behind her, reaching around, and grabbing her boobs. The first girl lets out a startled squeak then laughs. Followed by a blush when her friend whispers in her ear and she see''s all the boys staring.'
+		'A girl from your brothers grades is doing jumping jacks and her breasts are really bouncing, she obviously isn''t wearing a bra. The bouncing of her breasts start to draw the attention of a lot of the boys, just as her friend walks up behind her, reaching around, and grabbing her boobs. The first girl lets out a startled squeak then laughs. Followed by a blush when her friend whispers in her ear and she see''s all the boys staring.'
 	elseif fizperand = 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/butt.jpg"></center>'
 		'While running laps around the inside of the gym, when Anushka passes behind Mr Nikolaevich, she pulls down the back of her shorts to show off her panty clad ass. It doesn''t take to long before many of the boys catch up to Anushka but not pass her, as they wait till she passes behind the teachers back and flashes them her panty clad ass again.'
 	elseif fizperand = 16:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/doublebutt.jpg"></center>'
-		'During class Lina and Lariska are whisper and giggling about something. After some time they pull down their back of their shorts to flash ther panty clad asses at several of the more popular jock boys.'
+		'During class Lina and Lariska are whispering and giggling about something. After some time they pull down their back of their shorts to flash ther panty clad asses at several of the more popular jock boys.'
 	elseif fizperand = 17:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/dry3some.jpg"></center>'
 		'Near the end of class, three of the underclass girls are talking and giggling, when the notice some of the more popular boys looking their way they start horsing around. With ones face buried in her friends breasts and the third one behind her pretending to hump her. After a few moments, once several guys are starting they stop, laughing as they move away.'