I need help, I know.

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Doggystyle':
 	act'Easy spankings':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I love getting spanked," you grin.'
-		'"Fuck yeah!" Albina shouts, high fiving you so hard it hurts. "There''s nothing I love more than a cock balls deep up my ass and being spanked until it''s red and tender. If I can still sit down without wincing after, then you didn''t really fuck me."'
+		'"Fuck yeah!" Albina shouts, high fiving you so hard it hurts. "There''s nothing I love more than having a cock balls deep up my ass and being spanked until it''s red and tender. If I can still sit down without wincing after, then you didn''t really fuck me."'
 		gs'albina_chat','Doggystyle2'
 	end
 end
@@ -399,14 +399,14 @@ end
 !!	'You blush as you answer. "Uhhh...You."'
 !!	'She raises her brow. "Really? Me?" she replies and you nod.'
 !!	'"Yeah, you. You really know what you''re doing and I always cum so hard when I''m with you..."'
-!!	'She seems surprised by your answer, but accepts your compliment anyway. "You''re pretty good yourself." she says with a wink and a slight hint of arousal.'
+!!	'She seems surprised by your answer, but accepts your compliment anyway. "You''re pretty good yourself," she says with a wink and a slight hint of arousal.'
 !!	act 'Her best':
 !!		*clr & cla
 !!		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 !!		'So what was your best?" you ask in turn.'
 !!		'She smiles. "It was this girl I met at a nightclub in the city. Long story short, I have a fake ID and you already know the police don''t question me. Anyway, I saw this cute girl at the bar. I can''t remember her name, but she said she worked in some BBQ place in the city. We had a few drinks together and ended up back at her place. I was expecting some good pussy on pussy action, but I can''t help but notice the bulge under her little dress..."'
-!!		'You raise a brow and she smiles. "Yeah, it''s what you think it was. She pulls up her dress and out springs this massive, rock hard fucking cock! I''m just standing there staring at it, so she pushes me down to my knees in front of her and I just start jerking and sucking it before she makes me deepthroat her as deep as I can go. After that, she threw me onto the bed, pulled my thong off and rammed it right into my pussy. My <i>god</i>, the sex we had was <i>amazing</i>, especially when she fucked me from behind and was pulling my hair and slapping my ass. I don''t know how many times she made me cum, but she made me <i>cum</i>.'
-!!		'She fucked me silly and next thing I know I feel her cum shooting into my pussy. I was too exhausted to say anything, but I''m on the pill anyway so I didn''t mind. We snuggled in bed afterwards and I fell asleep right there in her arms as she stroked my hair. She had already left by the time I woke up and I never seen her again. It''s the best sex I''ve ever fucking had and I still get horny just thinking about it." she says and softly bites her lip. "Don''t tell Mama though. She wouldn''t like me going all the way to the city that late at night and coming home in the morning hungover having clearly hooked up with a stranger." she adds.'
+!!		'You raise a brow and she smiles. "Yeah, it''s what you think it was. She pulls up her dress and out springs this rock hard fucking cock! I''m just standing there staring at it, so she pushes me down to my knees in front of her and I just start jerking and sucking it before she makes me deepthroat her. After that, she threw me onto the bed, pulled my thong off and rammed it right into my pussy. My <i>god</i>, the sex we had was <i>amazing</i>, especially when she fucked me from behind and was pulling my hair and slapping my ass. I don''t know how many times she made me cum, but she made me <i>cum</i>.'
+!!		'She fucked me silly and next thing I know I feel her cum shooting into my pussy. I was too exhausted to say anything, but I''m on the pill anyway so I didn''t mind. We snuggled in bed afterwards and I fell asleep right there in her arms as she stroked my hair. She had already left by the time I woke up and I never seen her again. It''s the best sex I''ve ever fucking had and I still get horny just thinking about it." she says and softly bites her lip. "Don''t tell Mama though. She wouldn''t like me going all the way to the city that late at night and coming home in the morning hungover," she adds.'
 !!		'You feel yourself getting turned on by her story and picture it in your head as you imagine yourself in her position. She snaps you out of it and you decide to do something else.'
 !!		act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 !!		act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
@@ -430,17 +430,17 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'As the two of you head back inside the house, Albina turns towards you, grabbing your attention.'
+	'As the two of you head back inside the house, Albina turns towards you and grabs your attention.'
 	if albina['wine'] = 0:
 		'"Hey, wanna break open a bottle of wine with me? Really warms you up after a quick dip."'
 	else
 		'"Hey, wanna drink some wine with me again?"'
 	end
-	act'No thanks':
+	act 'No thanks':
 	
 	end
 	
-	act'Sure':
+	act 'Sure':
 		cla & *clr
 		!! IMAGE HERE
 		if albina['wine'] = 0:
@@ -464,10 +464,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 				*nl
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina whines. "I''m fuckin'' talkin'' to you!"'
 				'You blink, confused.'
-				act'"What did you say?"':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+				act '"What did you say?"':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 			else
 				'You''re not sure if you expected something else, but a short while later you find yourself drunk on the couch with Albina again.'
-				act'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -479,35 +479,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 	if albina['wine_convo'] = 1:
 		'"I loave the taste of my own pusshy," she says loudly. "Iz that weird?"'
-		act'Super weird':
+		act 'Super weird':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Thad''s suhper fucking weird," you slur back.'
 			'"Bullshit!" she complains even louder. "You cahn''t tell me you dohn''t like the taste of ''ur own brand now and again."'
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'I like mine too':
+		act 'I like mine too':
 			cla & *nl
 			if stat['virgin'] = 0 and stat['bj'] > 0:
 				'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "It tastdes even better when it''s on a dick."'
 				'"You''re a fuhcking slut <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina blurts out, sending both of you into giggles.'
 			elseif stat['mast'] > 0:
 				'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "Sometimes I stdick my fingers in my mouf after I masdurbate, lick it all off."'
-				'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I come. It mahkes me wahnt to rub another one out after!" Albina giggles, rubbing her thighs together.'
+				'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I cum. It mahkes me wahnt to rub another one out after!" Albina giggles while rubbing her thighs together.'
 			else
 				'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back.'
 				'"I fuhcking knew it!" Albina exclaims. "Every girl loves her own juice!"'
 				'"If you knew, then why are you asking if it''s weird?" you ask, puzzled.'
 				'"I jus'' wanted to see if <i>you</i> were the weird one!" Albina mumbles, her voice echoing off the inside of the glass as she takes another sip.'
 			end
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
-			act'I like your taste too':
+			act 'I like your taste too':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"I like the taste of your pussy too," you slur back, giving her a filthy grin.'
-				'"Nnnngh~!" Albina rolls her hips, squeezing her thighs together hard. "Fuhck! You make me want to shove your head between my legs right now!"'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				'"I like the taste of your pussy too," you slur back while giving her a filthy grin.'
+				'"Nnnngh~!" Albina rolls her hips while squeezing her thighs together hard. "Fuhck! You make me want to shove your head between my legs right now!"'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 2:
@@ -530,18 +530,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 		if albina['commando_know'] = 0:gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 		'"So, you really don''t wear panties?" Albina slurs, turning her head toward your pussy. "Like, ev''r?"'
 		if trait['commando_lvl'] = 3:
-			act'Only when I have to':
+			act 'Only when I have to':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Only when I have to," you say, wrinkling your nose in annoyance. "Sometimes you just can''t get away with it."'
 				'"Like when?" she asks curiously.'
-				act'School':
+				act 'School':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At school," you sigh tiredly. "If I don''t, all the teachers will look up my skirt during class."'
 					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs. The women too? Whad ''bout Ms. Braakman??"'
 					'"Especially her!" you say, sending you both into fits of laughter.'
-					gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				act'Disco':
+				act 'Disco':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At the disco," you sigh tiredly. "Everyone will think I''m a slut if they see me flash puss on the dance floor."'
 					'"That''s why I wear thongs," Albina smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
@@ -549,69 +549,69 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 					'"But don''t all commandos wear pants?"'
 					'Albina narrows her eyes and looks up at you, while you stare down at her.'
 					'"I... shuddup!"'
-					gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act'Nope, never':
+			act 'Nope, never':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Nope!" you say, popping the P with your lips. "Neverrrrrr."'
 				'"Doesn''t your pussy get cold?"'
 				'"Nneh," you shrug. "You ged used to it."'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 
-			act'I hate them':
+			act 'I hate them':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Neverrr!" you say, wrinkling your nose. "I <i>hate</i> wearing them!"'
 				'"Doesn''t your pussy get itchy when you wear pants?" she asks back.'
 				'"My pussy is tough as nails!" you proclaim proudly. "My pussy doesn''t need no pussy soft panties to protect it!"'
 				'"What?" Albina looks confused. "That doesn''t make any sense at all..."'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		elseif trait['commando_lvl'] < 0:
-			act'Not never':
+			act 'Not never':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Not <i>never</i>," you slur. "Sometimes I just... skip the part where I put them on..."'
-				'"Hah! Slut!" she shouts, taking another slurp of her wine.'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				'"Hah! Slut!" she shouts and takes another slurp of her wine.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 
 			act'Rarely':
 				cla & *nl
 
 
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 
 			end
 		else
 			albina['commando_know'] = 0
-			act'Nope, never':
+			act 'Nope, never':
 				cla & *nl
 
 
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 
-			act'I hate them':
+			act 'I hate them':
 				cla & *nl
 
 
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 
 			end
 
 		end
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 8:
 		'"Do you think I would make a good stripper?" Albina asks.'
-		act'Probably':
+		act 'Probably':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Probably," you mumble back. "You can dance and love shoving your ash in peopl''sh faces. Primo stripper qualities. Why do you ask?"'
 			'"Was thinking about how to pay for uni. Mama could probably do it for me, but what if I want some extra cash on the side?"'
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 
-		act'Too bitchy':
+		act 'Too bitchy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Nah." You wave your glass dismissively. "You''re too bitchy."'
 			'"Bitchy?!" she gasps, mouth agape in indignation.'
@@ -620,76 +620,76 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			'"You''d rip someone''s balls off first time you get called a slut or a whore. You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
 			'"... fuck, you''re right."'
 			'"See? Bitchy," you smile, smuggly sipping your wine.'
-			'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back, taking a much bigger gulp.'
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back before taking a much bigger gulp.'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
-	act'Call her a butt slut':
+	act 'Call her a butt slut':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"You''re such a butt slut Albina," you remark, taking another sip from your glass.'
 		'"Fuck yeah, I am. And I <i>love</i> being one," she grins back, almost spilling her wine all over her face when you both cackle with uncontrollable laughter.'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 
-	act'Spit or swallow?':
+	act 'Spit or swallow?':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"So, spit or swallow?" you ask, looking down at Albina.'
 		'"Swallow, duh."'
-		act'Ew, gross':
+		act 'Ew, gross':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Ewww," you wrinkle your nose in disgust. "Thad''s fucking gross! I can''t believe you do that!"'
 			'"Waht else am I suppozed do?"'
 			'"Just spit it out!"'
 			'"But if he cums in your mouth, that means he wants you to swallow, right?" she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 		end
 
-		act'Me too':
+		act 'Me too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Me too," you mumble. "Spitting is quitting."'
 			'"Amen sizter," Albina says, throwing up her hand and high fiving you.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 		end
 		if trt_cumeater > 0:
-			act'I love the taste':
+			act 'I love the taste':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Me too," you smile. "I love the way it feels, going down my throat. Taste is pretty good too."'
-				'"What the fuck?" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?"'
+				'"What the fuck?!" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?!"'
 				'"Yeah, it''s why I swallow. You don''t like it?"'
-				'"No! It fuckin'' tastes like shit!"'
+				'"No! It tastes like slimey shit!"'
 				'"Then why do you do it?"'
 				'"Cuz you''re supposed to? If he cums in my mouth, I can''t spit it out," she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
-				act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	act'Your mom is is very pretty':
+	act 'Your mom is is very pretty':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'With Albina right on your lap, you find your thoughts drifting to her mother. Her hair, her facial structure, she really is her mother''s daughter. It''s easy to tell where she got her good looks from.'
 		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you suddenly blurt out, your mouth autocompleting your thought before it actually passes through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
 		'"Fucking hell, I <i>knowwwwwwww</i>," Albina whines beneath you. "I gots ass fer dayz, but she''s gots tits to match. Big fucking bootyful bounshy tits that give ''er cleavage in a t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair..."'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 
 	act'':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 
 	act'':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -771,7 +771,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 	'Eventually Albina''s body stops shuddering and she pulls back. Her eyes are bloodshot and the fierce sobs that coursed through her have been reduced to small hiccuping gasps.'
-	'"My mama is coming home you know," she whispers with a small smile. She glances up at you with eyes that look like they could burst in to tears again at any moment, but this time with joy. "All these years after he chased her away... She''s going to come home. She''s going to come back to me! <i>For</i> me!" She is practically beaming.'
+	'"My mama is coming home you know," she whispers with a small smile. She glances up at you with eyes that look like they could burst into tears again at any moment, but this time with joy. "All these years after he chased her away... She''s going to come home. She''s going to come back to me! <i>For</i> me!" She is practically beaming.'
 	'"You really miss her, don''t you?"'
 	'Instead of answering you, she lunges forward and presses her lips against yours, forcing her tongue between them.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', -5
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
-						'Instead of answering with words, you lean in and press your lips against Albina''s. She practically melts into it, opening her mouth to brush her tongue across your lips. You oblige and open your mouth to press back against her with your own tongue. You feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+						'Instead of answering with words, you lean in and press your lips against Albina''s. She practically melts into it, opening her mouth to brush her tongue across your lips. You oblige and open your mouth to press back against her with your own tongue. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 						'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 						'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
 						act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 				'Unwilling to leave Albina like this, you lean in and press your lips against hers. She stiffens.'
 				'"No, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says around your lips. "I don''t want to make you-"'
 				'"I was just surprised," you whisper back. "I don''t mind. I want this."'
-				'You press your tongue against her lips and Albina melts into it, opening her mouth to allow you in. Her tongue swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+				'You press your tongue against her lips and Albina melts into it, opening her mouth to allow you in. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 				'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 				'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
 				act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 		npc_rel['A23'] += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. It swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 		'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 		'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs into her room.'
 		act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
@@ -878,7 +878,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 		gs 'stat'
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/uanuli22.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina breaks the kiss and flips you around, shoving two fingers into your pussy and her tongue up your ass. The second one causes you to gasp and she capitalizes on it, sending undulating motions through her tongue to drive you into a frenzy.'
+		'Albina breaks the kiss and flips you around, shoving two fingers into your pussy and her tongue up your ass. The sensation of her piercing pushing into your ass causes you to gasp and she capitalizes on it, sending undulating motions through her tongue to drive you into a frenzy.'
 		'"Oh Albina!" you moan. "I want to make you feel good too!"'
 		act '69':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/69_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You turn, forcing her tongue away from your ass and towards your other hole instead, wrapping your thighs around her torso. In the same motion, you dive between her legs and run your tongue across her pussy. It''s absolutely <i>soaked</i>. The two of you eat each other out with mutually reckless abandon as you relentlessly tease each other''s clits. Albina''s tongue occasionally slides up and rims your ass before moving back down to your pussy, which grows wetter and wetter.'
+			'You turn, forcing her tongue away from your ass and towards your other hole instead, wrapping your thighs around her torso. In the same motion, you dive between her legs and run your tongue across her pussy. It''s absolutely <i>soaked</i>. The two of you eat each other out with mutually reckless abandon as you relentlessly tease each other''s clits. Albina''s pierced tongue feels amazing as it swirls around your clit and occasionally slides up and rims your ass before moving back down to your pussy, which grows wetter and wetter.'
 			*nl
 			'Albina''s body begins to tense up and her legs pull you tight against her pussy, practically burying you in it. She''s close, and you feel exactly the same way, mimicking her actions as you feel her lips against your labia. She shrieks into your pussy, her cry of orgasm vibrating through you as a burst of fluid suddenly sprays into your face and the shock sends you over the edge. Your eyes roll back in your head as you too release a wordless groan into her dripping wet pussy. You can feel her spasming underneath your tongue and her juices spray directly into your mouth. It''s unbelievably hot, sustaining your orgasm for longer and longer.'
 			*nl

locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		act'Join her in the tub':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Sure I guess (hesitant)':
+	act 'Hesitantly join her':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I... I guess..." you say.'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		'"Hurry up!"'
 		'"Okay okay!" You finish taking off the last of your clothing and quickly skip towards the pool with Albina.'
 		'<i>Brrrr! It really is cold out here!</i>'
-		act'Hesitate':
+		act 'Hesitate':
 			cla & *clr
 			!! temporary image
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 			'"Come on!" she says with chattering teeth. "Get out before you get frostbite and jump in the hot tub with me!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
 			act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 		end
-		act'Jump in with her':
+		act 'Jump in with her':
 			cla & *clr
 			!! temporary image
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
@@ -85,16 +85,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act'Sure (enthusiastic)':
+	act 'Enthusiastically join her':
 		cla & *clr
 		!! IMAGE HERE
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Sound fun!" You quickly start stripping out of your clothing while Albina keep standing by the door, jumping up and down and shivering in the cold breeze.'
+		'"Sounds fun!" You quickly start stripping out of your clothing while Albina keep standing by the door, jumping up and down and shivering in the cold breeze.'
 		'"Hurry up!" The moment you take off your last piece of fabric, you sprint straight out the door past her.'
 		*nl
-		'"Waiting on you now!" you call over your shoulder before leaping into the pool. The immediate shock of ice cold sends shivers through your whole body and you gasp as your head breaches the surface, just in time to see Albina jump over you and into the water behind. "<i>Ohmygod!</i>" you manage to chatter out, shivering tremendously but unable to stop yourself from smiling at Albina when she comes up for air.'
+		'"Waiting on you now!" you call over your shoulder before leaping into the pool. The immediate shock of the icy cold sends shivers through your whole body and you gasp as your head breaches the surface, just in time to see Albina jump over you and into the water behind. "<i>Ohmygod!</i>" you manage to chatter out, shivering tremendously but unable to stop yourself from smiling at Albina when she comes up for air.'
 		*nl
-		'"Now into the hot tub! Hurry!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
+		'"Now into the hot tub! Hurry!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and pull yourselves over the side.'
 		act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 	end
 end
@@ -197,9 +197,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 		act'Agree':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Sure," you say, returning her smile. "Why not?" Her smile turns into a grin and she grabs your hand, pulling you through her bedroom into the bathroom.'
+			'"Sure," you say, returning her smile. "Why not?" Her smile turns into a grin and she grabs your hand, pulling you through her bedroom and into the bathroom.'
 			*nl
-			'Once inside, she releases you, bending over to turn on the water. She seems to be a little far away, needing to stretch to reach it. You can see all of the muscles in her legs go taut and her posture gives you a great view of both her holes. She hesitates just before turning the tap, glancing back at you, and you realize she''s doing this on purpose. Shit. What are you getting yourself into here?'
+			'Once inside, she releases you, bending over to turn on the water. She seems to be a little far away, needing to stretch to reach it. You can see all of the muscles in her toned legs go taut and her posture gives you a great view of both her holes. She hesitates just before turning the tap, glancing back at you, and you realize she''s doing this on purpose. Shit. What are you getting yourself into here?'
 
 			act'Continue':
 				cla & *clr
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 				act'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Albina doesn''t waste anytime and immediately soaps up her tits before getting up on her knees and using a loofah to squeeze soapy water over her shapely ass. She then stands, bends over and spanks herself before wiggling her ass at you, giving you a clear invitation. She spreads her legs to let you slide underneath her and start gently tracing your tongue along her labia before you reach her clit. You start vigoursly eating her pussy, causing her to moan loudly in pleasure as she pushes a few of her fingers into her asshole and starts fingering herself, adding to her pleasure.' 
+					'Albina doesn''t waste anytime and immediately soaps up her breasts before getting up on her knees and using a loofah to squeeze soapy water over her shapely ass. She then stands, bends over and spanks herself before wiggling her ass at you, giving you a clear invitation. She spreads her legs to let you slide underneath her and start gently tracing your tongue along her labia before you reach her clit. You start vigoursly eating her pussy, causing her to moan loudly in pleasure as she pushes a few of her fingers into her asshole and starts fingering herself, adding to her pleasure.' 
 					*nl
 					'The minutes go by and Albina starts grinding against you, smearing you with her wetness as she loudly states "Yes, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m going to fucking cum!" A few seconds later, she reaches her orgasm and screams loudly as her juices squirt down onto you. She keeps grinding against you as she rides through her orgasm before she climbs off and looks down at you through her legs, a satisfied smile on her face. She silently motions for you to sit on the edge of the tub.'
 					minut +=6
@@ -228,14 +228,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/2.jpg"></center>'
 						'You sit on the edge and lean back. Albina spreads your legs and slides in front of you. She slowly starts rubbing your clit, eliciting a soft moan from you before she slides her finger into your pussy. She slowly fingers you before inserting a second finger, making you moan even louder. She then starts fingerbanging you, causing you to shriek loudly in pleasure. After a few minutes of this, she pulls her fingers out and holds them up to your mouth. You take them into your mouth and suck them, getting a good taste of yourself as she grins widely at you.' 
 						*nl
-						'Her face disappears into your crotch, causing you to gasp loudly in pleasured surprise when you suddenly feel her tongue swirling over your clit. You place your hand on the back of her head and hold her down as you sit back and let her pleasure you, her tongue expertly running all over your labia and clit as she passionately eats your pussy. She''s <i>really</i> good at this and you don''t want her to stop. You can feel your orgasm building when she slides her fingers back inside you and starts vigoursly fingerbanging you as she sucks on your clit. A few minutes of this is enough to send you over the edge and you scream loudly in pleasure as you have an explosive orgasm, smearing Albina''s face with your wetness.'
+						'Her face disappears into your crotch, causing you to gasp loudly in pleasured surprise when you suddenly feel her tongue piercing swirling over your clit. You place your hand on the back of her head and hold her down as you sit back and let her pleasure you, her tongue expertly running all over your labia and clit as she passionately eats your pussy. She''s <i>really</i> good at this and her piercing only adds to your pleasure. You don''t want her to stop and feel your orgasm building when she suddenly shoves her fingers back inside you and starts vigoursly fingerbanging you as she sucks on your clit. A few minutes of this is enough to send you over the edge and you scream loudly in pleasure as you have an explosive orgasm, smearing Albina''s face with your wetness.'
 						act 'Continue':
 							gs'arousal','kiss', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 							gs'arousal','end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/3.jpg"></center>'
-							'When you finally stop cumming, she climbs up and sits next to you on the edge of the tub. You both start passiontely making out and groping each other''s bodies as you sit in your post-climax bliss. After a few minutes of this, you both climb out of the tub and she pulls the plug before grabbing a towel and walking out to her room, leaving you to get dressed.'
+							'When you finally stop cumming, she climbs up and sits next to you on the edge of the tub. You both start passionately making out and groping each other''s bodies as you sit in your post-climax bliss. After a few minutes of this, you both climb out of the tub and she pulls the plug before grabbing a towel and walking out to her room, leaving you to get dressed.'
 							*nl
 							'You grab yourself a towel and dry off before getting dressed. When you walk into Albina''s room, you are greeted by the sight of her wearing only a lacy white thong as she dries her hair. "Just give me a few seconds to get dressed and we can do something, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 							*nl
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub1':
 	act 'Follow her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'When you reach the pool out back, you see a large hot tub attached. Albina turns the jets on and slips off her robe to reveal she''s only wearing a little black thong. She climbs in and takes a seat, sighing as she does. She looks at you and beckons you to join her.'
-		'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
+		'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
 		minut +=2
 		gs 'stat'
 		xgt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub3'
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub2':
 	!! need image? (Alaratt)
 	'The two of you start heading towards the pool and Albina strips the whole way there, tossing her clothes randomly aside without a care. By the time you reach the back door, she''s down to just her thong. She opens the door and struts over to the hot tub and climbs in, sighing as she does. She looks at you and beckons you to join her.'
-	'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
+	'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
 	minut +=6
 	gs 'stat'
 	xgt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub3'
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 			act 'Take your panties off':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/hottub.jpg"></center>'
-				'You rather brazenly decide to take your panties off and throw them into your pile of clothes before climbing into the hot tub naked. Albina, normally rather daring, is taken aback by your decison, but decides to join you. She wriggles around and pulls her thong off, tossing it aside and smiling.'
+				'You rather brazenly decide to take your panties off and throw them into your pile of clothes before climbing into the hot tub naked. Albina, normally rather daring around you, is taken aback by your decison, but decides to join you. She wriggles around and pulls her thong off before tossing it aside and smiling.'
 				'"Oh <i>fuck</i>..." she moans softly. "Good choice <<$pcs_nickname>>. This is <i>much</i> better..."'
 				*nl
 				'You soon realise what she means when you sit down and instantly feel the jets of warm water softly tickling your clit. It''s slowly turning you on and you can feel your juices flowing in response to the stimulation. It seems to have the same effect on Albina, who reaches over and turns up the bubbles even more. You lose track of time, but it''s a very pleasurable experience.'
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoya.jpg"></center>'
 						'Albina has a look in her eye - she''s horny. You clearly see her hand slither down between her legs. She locks eyes with you, biting her lip in obvious pleasure before her eyes go wide and she sits up straight.'
 						*nl
-						'"You''ll take any opportunity to be as naked as possible, won''t you?" You turn in shock and see Zoya standing behind you, shaking her head as she throws some towels at you'
+						'"You''ll take any opportunity to be as naked as possible, won''t you?" You turn in shock and see Zoya standing behind you, shaking her head as she throws some towels at you.'
 						*nl
 						'"Well I think you two have had enough. Time to get out." She walks back into the house and Albina rolls her eyes, but obeys, climbing out of the tub and walking over to the side where a stack of folded towels sit. You climb out after her and she tosses you one of the towels and the two of you dry off together.'
 						*nl
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub_no_panties':
 		*nl
 		'"What on earth are you two doing?!"'
 		*nl
-		'You jump back from each other and turn, seeing Albina''s mother behind you. "Are you <i>naked</i>??" she scowls, eyeing Albina''s thong on the deck. "This is very unhygenic young lady! And who knows who could have seen you?! Don''t move young lady!" she barks before she disappears into the house. She returns a few minutes later with some towels and throws them at you before walking back into the house. Albina just rolls her eyes, but climbs out anyways, drying herself with one of the towels.'
+		'You jump back from each other and turn, seeing Albina''s mother behind you. "Are you <i>naked</i>??" she scowls, eyeing Albina''s thong on the deck. "This is very unhygenic young lady! And who knows who could have seen you?! Don''t move young lady!" she barks before she disappears into the house. She returns a few minutes later with some towels and throws them at you before walking back into the house. Albina just rolls her eyes, but climbs out and dries herself with one of the towels.'
 		'"Mama will have a fit if you went in there naked, so you better get dressed," she warns as she passes you the other one.'
 		act'Get dressed':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -664,8 +664,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes, a large butt plug and a strap-on harness all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye.' 
-		'You glance around, but it looks like Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer.'
+		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek. You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes and a large butt plug all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye.' 
+		'You glance around, but it looks like Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer just before Albina returns and smiles at you.'
 		act 'Close the drawer':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 	end
 end
@@ -711,7 +711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				act 'Masturbate':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/kompmas.jpg"></center>'
-					'While browsing, you find a title you like the sound of and sit back on the bed to start watching it. It turns you on and you instinctively start rubbing your clit through your clothes.'
+					'While browsing, you find a title you like the sound of and sit back on the bed to start watching it. It turns you on and your hand finds its way down to your clit before you start instinctively rubbing it.'
 					'The video is very arousing and you find yourself getting wet after just a few seconds. Just as you''re about to cum, your heart leaps into your mouth when you hear someone approaching. You quickly rip your hand from between your legs and slam the laptop screen down before Albina walks into the room.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 10, 'masturbate'
@@ -737,7 +737,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_yoga_1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src=locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albyoga.jpg"></center>'
-	'The maid answers the door and lets you enter. "Miss Albina is in the gym." she says before leading you there. You find Albina doing yoga by herself. She smiles when she sees you before raising a finger, telling you to wait. The maid bows and leaves as you sit and watch Albina finish her routine. You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... I invited Lazar over one time to work out together and he loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns. "Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by sucking and fucking his dick in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
+	'The maid answers the door and lets you enter. "Miss Albina is in the gym," she says before leading you there. You find Albina doing yoga by herself. She smiles when she sees you before raising a finger, telling you to wait. The maid bows and leaves as you sit and watch Albina finish her routine.' 
+	'You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... I invited Lazar over one time to work out together and he loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns.' 
+	'"Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by sucking and fucking his dick in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
 
 	act 'Go with her':
 		cla & *clr

locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/laz3some1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You strip naked as Albina sucks Lazar''s dick. Once you come over to join them, she pops his dick out of her mouth and offers it to you. You take it into your mouth and start sucking it while she licks and sucks his balls.' 
-		'You swap his cock back and forth between each other before she stops and pushes you onto the bed. She bends over and buries her head into your crotch as Lazar moves in behind her and slides his dick back into her pussy. He starts fucking her as she licks and sucks on your clit, her moans adding to the pleasure.'
+		'You swap his cock back and forth between each other before she stops and pushes you onto the bed. She bends over and buries her head into your crotch as Lazar moves in behind her and slides his dick back into her pussy. He starts fucking her as she licks and sucks on your clit, her moans and piercing adding to your pleasure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get eaten out':
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/laz3some3.jpg"></center>'
 				vaginal_slip = 8
-				'Albina climbs onto the bed as you spread your legs and Lazar slowly penetrates your pussy and starts fucking you. Albina watches him fuck you for a few minutes before she straddles you and sits right on your face, her soaking wet pussy dripping into your mouth. You start licking and sucking her pussy and clit and occassionaly tongue fuck her while she plays with your tits, kneading them in her hands and squeezing your nipples. She soon starts rocking her hips over your face, smearing you with her sticky wetness as Lazar starts fucking you even harder, his balls deep thrusts bottoming out inside you.'  
+				'Albina climbs onto the bed as you spread your legs and Lazar slowly penetrates your pussy and starts fucking you. Albina watches him fuck you for a few minutes before she straddles you and sits right on your face, her soaking wet pussy dripping into your mouth. You start licking and sucking her pussy and clit and occassionaly tongue fuck her while she plays with your breasts, kneading them in her hands and squeezing your nipples. She soon starts rocking her hips over your face, smearing you with her sticky wetness as Lazar starts fucking you even harder, his balls deep thrusts bottoming out inside you.'  
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Join in sucking his dick':
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><video autoplay loop  src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff4.mp4"></center>'
 									'He starts really going at it before he grunts and moans in pleasure as you feel his warm cum coating your insides. You moan at the sensation as he continues pumping into your back door. When he finishes, he spreads your ass and pulls out. You squeeze and feel a stream of thick cum pour out of your ass and start running down the inside of your leg. Albina, having recovered from her orgasm, suddenly crawls in behind you and runs her tongue up the length of your thigh, licking up the sticky liquid on your leg before she stops underneath your ass and lets the rest of the cum flow into her mouth.' 
-									'When the stream finally stops, you turn around and watch Albina swallow before sticking her tongue out and showing you both that she''s gulped down all of the load. Lazar then collapses back on the bed, satisfied, and you and Albina crawl over and join him. You all bask in the afterglow of your threesome.' 
+									'When the stream finally stops, you turn around and watch Albina grimace as she swallows before sticking her tongue out and showing you both that she''s gulped down all of the load. Lazar then collapses back on the bed, satisfied, and you and Albina crawl over and join him. You all bask in the afterglow of your threesome.' 
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'group'
 									gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 									gs 'stat'

locations/albina_school_sex.qsrc

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You moan softly as she traces her tongue along your folds and over your clit. She does this for a few seconds before concentrating solely on your clit, expertly licking and sucking on it. She teases you like this for only a few seconds before you feel your orgasm building, your breathing becoming more ragged.' 
+			'You moan softly as she traces her tongue along your folds and over your clit. She does this for a few seconds before concentrating solely on your clit, expertly licking and sucking on it, her tongue piercing only adding to your pleasure. She teases you like this for only a few seconds before you feel your orgasm building, your breathing becoming more ragged.' 
 			$orgasm_txt = 'Albina notices this and starts swirling her tongue over your engorged bean even faster, quickly bringing you to an explosive climax. She keeps teasing your clit throughout your orgasm, increasing your pleasure even further.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'lesbian'
@@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1_2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
 				'The two of you are soon naked and that''s when Albina stops Julia and pulls her off the table. You help Albina undress her before you and Albina climb onto the table and she leans back against you with her legs spread, presenting her wet pussy to Julia, who stares wide eyed at her. "I know you want a taste Julia, so why don''t you help me out?" Albina says teasingly.'
-				'You see another small smile on Julia''s face as she gets on her knees between Albina''s legs and, without hesitation, starts licking Albina''s pussy. "Shit, your tongue feels fucking great! Keep going!" Julia complies and soon reduces Albina to a quivering mess of loud, pleasured moans. Albina grabs Julia''s hair and holds her tightly against her crotch. Julia doesn''t seem to care and appears to double her efforts, which causes Albina to moan even louder.' 
+				'You see another small smile on Julia''s face as she gets on her knees between Albina''s legs and, without hesitation, starts licking Albina''s pussy. "Shit, your tongue feels fucking great! Keep going!" Julia complies and soon reduces Albina to a quivering mess of loud, pleasured moans. She grabs Julia''s hair and holds her tightly against her crotch. Julia doesn''t seem to care and appears to double her efforts, which causes Albina to moan even louder.' 
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -8, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You feel a little left out, so you slide out from behind Albina and lay her flat before straddling her and sitting on her face. You moan loudly as she immediately starts eating your pussy. Albina gives out as much as she''s recieving and you soon find yourself growing weak from the pleasure as her tongue expertly swirls around your clit.'
+					'You feel a little left out, so you slide out from behind Albina and lay her flat before straddling her and sitting on her face. You moan loudly as she immediately starts eating your pussy. Albina gives out as much as she''s recieving and you soon find yourself growing weak from the pleasure as her pierced tongue expertly swirls around your clit.'
 					$orgasm_txt = 'A few minutes of this is enough to bring you to an explosive orgasm and you muffle your screams as you cum over Albina''s face.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'lesbian'
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh...oh. Wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and smiles as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
+			'"Oh...oh. Wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
 			'Seeing this, she stops licking your pussy and stands up; you barely have time to ask what''s happening before she jams her fingers deep inside you and starts fingerbanging you. "That''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>, cum for me." she whispers teasingly in your ear before making out with you. You moan loudly into her mouth as she brings you to orgasm. You lie panting on the desk as she pulls her fingers out and sucks on them. "Mhmm. You taste really fucking good, you know that?" she says teasingly with a wink.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 6, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/djibril.qsrc

@@ -16,16 +16,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibril_room':
 	djibrilflag = 0
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A82'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/djibrilroom/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'His room is bigger than you expected. There is just one bed over by the windows, and next to that is a desk and a laptop. Closer to the door is a couch and a recliner, with a small TV and PlayStation across from them. It is clean and tastefully decorated.'
+	'His room is bigger than you expected. There is a bed over by the windows, with a laptop sitting on the desk next to it. Closer to the door is a couch and a recliner, with a small TV and PlayStation across from them. It is clean and tastefully decorated.'
 	if DjibrilQW['african_gangbang'] >= 1 and rand(0,3) = 0 and DjibrilQW['gangbang'] ! daystart:
 		DjibrilQW['gangbang'] = daystart
-		'As you enter, he looks hungrily you over. "Would you like me to invite my friends over?" You know he''s talking about inviting his friends over to gangbang you again.'
+		'As you enter, he looks you over hungrily. "Would you like me to invite my friends over?" You know he''s talking about inviting his friends over to gangbang you again.'
 		act 'No, let''s just talk': gt 'djibril', 'djibril_chat'
 		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big82.jpg"></center>'
-			'He grins and grabs his phone before sending out text messages. Once he finishes, he sits down in the reclining chair. "They should be here shortly." They arrive within a few minutes and take a seat on the couch with you.'
+			'He grins and grabs his phone before sending a few text messages. Once he finishes, he sits in the reclining chair. "They should be here shortly." They arrive within a few minutes and take a seat on the couch with you.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'djibrilev1', 'djibrilgb'
 		end
 		if DjibrilQW['anya_inv'] + DjibrilQW['nush_inv'] + DjibrilQW['nat_inv'] > 0:

locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy1':
 	killvar 'boyrand'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see <<$rand_boy>>. Smiling, you exit the stall and call his name. He whirls around, visibly startled, but then breaks into a smile when he sees you. "You scared the shit out of me!"'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see <<$rand_boy>>. Smiling, you exit the stall and call his name. He whirls around, visibly startled, but then breaks into a smile when he sees you. "You scared the shit out of me!"'
 	*nl
 	'Within moments, the two of you are chatting away about school, movies, sports, music and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop, laugh and gather your things. You then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -144,12 +144,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/stall.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You move slightly to make sure you are hidden, but that causes the toilet seat under you to creak noticeably.'
-	*nl
 	'"Who''s in here?" you hear a gruff voice ask. You don''t answer and hope he, whoever it is, will just let it go. Unfortunately, he doesn''t. "Hey, don''t fuck with me! I know you''re here." The next thing you hear is a stall door at the far end of the bathroom slam, audibly opened with a hard push. The sound repeats, again and again, and is slowly working its way towards you. Having little choice, you sit and wait until it''s your stall''s turn. The boy turns out to be Radomir, looking angry at first but his expression changes into a half-grin when he sees who it is. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?"'
-	*nl
 	'You look up at him and smile. "Hey Radomir, just cutting class. Needed a break, you know?"'
 	if hotcat >= 6:
-		'He nods his head a bit. "Sure, sure. Glad to find you here, I was afraid I might get bored." he says as he moves into the stall with you, grabs your wrist tightly and pulls you up. You haven''t even processed what he''s doing when you feel his lips on yours as he drags you out of the stall with him.'
+		'He nods his head. "Sure, sure. Glad to find you here, I was afraid I might get bored." he says as he moves into the stall with you, grabs your wrist tightly and pulls you up. You haven''t even processed what he''s doing when you feel his lips on yours as he drags you out of the stall with him.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Stop him (<<will_cost>> willpower)':
@@ -226,7 +224,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2':
 			act 'Suck his cock':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy2_sub'
 		end
 	else
-		'He nods his head a bit. "Sure, sure. Hey, do you have a smoke?" he asks as he seems to search his pockets for a pack of cigarettes.'
+		'He nods his head. "Sure, sure. Hey, do you have a smoke?" he asks as he seems to search his pockets for a pack of cigarettes.'
 		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A154'] -= 1
@@ -288,9 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2_sub':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/radomir/sex/school/boy1anal.jpg"></center>'
 			'He seems to slow down, taking shallower strokes in your cunt, then pulls his dick out all the way and pushes it back in, balls deep; he pulls it out again, only to push it all the way in again, causing you to moan - as much as his hand at your throat allows - every time.'
-			*nl
 			'After five or six repeats, he pulls out again but this time, he shoves it up your ass instead, without warning or preparation. You groan in pain and instinctively want to pull away, but there''s still that hand at your throat. He doesn''t wait for you to adjust to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock being shoved up your ass either; he just drives it all the way in, ignoring your pained noises, until his balls are touching your cheeks and then starts hammering your puckered hole with a vengeance.'
-			*nl
 			'You do what you can to relax and it eventually starts hurting less, it even starts feeling good. After a bit of pounding though, he repeats his earlier movement scheme: He pulls his cock out of your ass and then shoves it all the way in again, in and out, all the way. You have to hold on tight to the counter, but you moan lustfully and after a while, Radomir starts panting, quietly at first but getting louder, and you can tell he is getting close to finishing.'
 			anal_slip += 4
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 6, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -320,7 +316,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy3':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Lazar using the toilet as a chair, with a folder in his lap. "Hey Lazar, what''s up?" you ask.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Lazar using the toilet as a chair, with a folder in his lap. "Hey Lazar, what''s up?" you ask.'
 	*nl
 	'He looks up in surprise. "Oh hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, you cutting class?" he asks in reply.'
 	'"Yeah, I couldn''t take another boring class." you tell him with a smile. "I needed a little fun. You?"'
@@ -447,7 +443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big146.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but you don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Marcus standing there. His pants and underwear are pulled down to his knees and his large, black cock is standing at attention. "Uh... Hey Marcus, did I catch you at a bad time?" you ask carefully.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but you don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Marcus standing there. His pants and underwear are pulled down to his knees and his large, black cock is standing at attention. "Uh... Hey Marcus, did I catch you at a bad time?" you ask carefully.'
 	*nl
 	'He looks up in startled surprise. He quickly tries to cover up but stops, apparently thinking it''s moot since you already saw his erection. Still, his reply is a bit awkward. "Oh, uh... Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Is there something I can help you with or have you just come to tease me too?"'
 	*nl
@@ -460,9 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I''m so sorry, Marcus. The other girls can be pretty mean sometimes." You shrug apologetically and turn to give him some privacy. "But if you would like to talk, I have some free time on my hands right now. But how about you pull up your pants first?"'
-		*nl
 		'"Oh, right. Sorry." You''re not sure if he blushed or not - his complexion makes it a little difficult to tell. A few moments later, he steps out of the stall with his pants back on. You can still clearly see the bulge in his pants, but you choose to ignore it.'
-		*nl
 		'The two of you talk about Russia and its culture, about America, what he thinks about living here, about movies, music and anything else that strikes your fancy. Before you know it, the class bell rings. You both stop, laugh and gather your things. You then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -474,7 +468,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc0.jpg"></center>'
 		'You look down at the large bulge in his pants, biting your lower lip in a touch of excitement and, being the selfless girl you are, decide to help him relieve his tension and frustration. You wordlessly step up close to him and start rubbing his cock through his pants. He only hesitates a moment, then he starts to nuzzle your neck as he pushes your shirt up, exposing your perky tits.'
-		*nl
 		'He switches to sucking on your nipples as one of his hands slides up your skirt to rub your pussy. Feeling his cock strain against his pants, you unbuckle his belt, unbutton his pants and pull his cock free. You start stroking it with your hand and feel it practically pulsing.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -484,7 +477,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc1.jpg"></center>'
 			'Looking down at his large black dick, you bite your lower lip in excitment and wordlessly drop to your knees in front of him. You grab his dick with one of your hands and start stroking it, wrapping your lips around the shaft of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock only a second later. Marcus looks down at you incredulously, but judging by the moan that escapes him as you take his cock into your mouth, he has no objections.'
-			*nl
 			'He just lets you do the work, leaning back against the stall wall and closing his eyes to enjoy you sucking him off. "God damn, you Russian girls know how to suck dick." You take that as a compliment and redouble your efforts, bobbing your head up and down his length. His impressive size doesn''t make his manhood easy to handle, but it certainly makes it more exciting to you. For a few minutes, he just lets you do your thing as he observes and savors your blowjob, but eventually he breaks the silence. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>? How about you take off your clothes and let me give you the fuck of your life?"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -504,7 +496,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc4.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You take him as deep as you can, and hold him there for a moment. Whatever thought he had a moment ago, you are sure it is all but wiped from memory, ejected along with the groan you hear. You come up for air but go right back down again, deepthroating him and holding him there as if your life depended on it, as if pleasuring him was the only thing that mattered. He starts moaning loudly now and suddenly that hand at the back of your head comes to life; it tilts your head back as he murmurs: "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue."'
-						*nl
 						'As you do, he starts jerking off, holding the tip directly over your tongue and soon, spurts of cum fly onto your tongue and into your mouth. Jet after jet shoots out, more than you''ve ever seen before, and you wonder if he is going to stop at all. He must have had a serious amount saved up; not only is the amount exceptional, but it seems thicker than any sperm you''re familiar with. He completely coats your tongue in white liquid and more of it runs into your mouth, filling it. Letting out one last loud sigh, he steps back and leans against the stall wall, taking a long look at you sitting there on your knees with his cum on your tongue. You are strangely proud of yourself and let him take one last look at you before you pull your tongue back into your mouth and swallow, feeling it go down your throat like glue, then open wide again to show him you gulped it all down.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -531,7 +522,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once he has your pussy good and wet with your juices and his saliva, he stands back up and rubs the tip of his penis against your slit. Getting the head of his dick nice and lubed up, he finally slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy, filling you entirely. You would have expected this fullness in your vagina to be painful, except it''s everything but. He starts pumping into you, slowly working his way deeper into your pussy with each stroke, and each time you expect it to hurt; to reach your limit.'
-					*nl
 					'However, it doesn''t. He seems to fit you perfectly, even though his size is well above average. All you can feel is intense, mind-dissolving pleasure that shoots up your spine like lightning and grows stronger with every inch of depth he gains. You would have bet that he couldn''t fit his entire cock inside you and yet, eventually, you feel his scrotum touch your nether lips and feel so wonderfully, desperately full. That''s when you hear him whisper "I want to fuck your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -552,7 +542,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 								'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc4.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You pull away slightly and he takes the hint and pulls out of you. You turn around, drop to your knees and immediately go down on him, as if your mouth was drawn to his black cock, and you give it a couple of strokes, enjoying the taste of yourself on him. He starts moaning loudly now and suddenly that hand at the back of your head comes to life; it tilts your head back as he murmurs: "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue."'
-								*nl
 								'As you do, he starts jerking off, holding the tip directly over your tongue and soon, spurts of cum fly onto your tongue and into your mouth. Jet after jet shoots out, more than you''ve ever seen before, and you wonder if he is going to stop at all. He must have had a serious amount saved up; not only is the amount exceptional, but it seems thicker than any sperm you''re familiar with. He completely coats your tongue in white liquid and more of it runs into your mouth, filling it. Letting out one last loud sigh, he steps back and leans against the stall wall, taking a long look at you sitting there on your knees with his cum on your tongue. You are strangely proud of yourself and let him take one last look at you before you pull your tongue back into your mouth and swallow, feeling it go down your throat like glue, then open wide again to show him you gulped it all down.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -583,9 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc3.jpg"></center>'
 						'You can''t even answer. All you do is give him an almost incoherent ''yes'' - you would let him do anything to you right now, as long he just fucks you some more. He pulls out of you and several of his fingers rub your wet pussy; not only does he tease you, but he''s also getting his fingers nice and soaking wet. He then rubs them against your rosebud, getting it slick and lubing it up with your own fluids. He does this several times, even sliding a couple of fingers into your ass to prepare it as best he can.'
-						*nl
 						'By the time he pulls his fingers out, you are more than ready for him and feeling the head of his cock pushing against your asshole is anything but unexpected. He gently eases the tip into your ass, causing you to gasp a little in pain - you were ready, but that doesn''t change the fact that he is big. He stops moving at once and waits a moment before pushing his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside a little more, slowly sinking about halfway into your ass. If you thought you were feeling full before, it is nothing compared to now.'
-						*nl
 						'He starts slowly moving back and forth inside your ass, working his way deeper into your bowels as carefully as possible, slowing down whenever he hears a groan of pain or sees you flinch. Thing is, you are mostly moaning in pleasure now and what little discomfort his size still causes you is easily drowned out by it. Having his big, black cock ploughing your tight little ass is so incredibly arousing. Marcus may be considerate, but the twitching and screaming tells him everything he needs to know.'
 						anal_slip += 4
 						$orgasm_txt = 'He picks up the pace, fucking you fast and hard through your orgasm and prolonging it to the point where it almost turns into pain. You can barely see anything, blinded by the sensory overload, but you can hear him pant and grunt louder than before.'
@@ -597,7 +584,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 							'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc4.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Then, all of a sudden, he pulls out of your ass and pulls you around and down to your knees - or maybe your legs just gave away - he tilts your head back as he murmurs: "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue."'
-							*nl
 							'As you do, he starts jerking off, holding the tip directly over your tongue and soon, spurts of cum fly onto your tongue and into your mouth. Jet after jet shoots out, more than you''ve ever seen before, and you wonder if he is going to stop at all. He must have had a serious amount saved up; not only is the amount exceptional, but it seems thicker than any sperm you''re familiar with. He completely coats your tongue in white liquid and more of it runs into your mouth, filling it. Letting out one last loud sigh, he steps back and leans against the stall wall, taking a long look at you sitting there on your knees with his cum on your tongue. You are strangely proud of yourself and let him take one last look at you before you pull your tongue back into your mouth and swallow, feeling it go down your throat like glue, then open wide again to show him you gulped it all down.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -619,8 +605,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4_end':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big146.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I hope you don''t think we are all teases anymore. Even if we do tease, there is normally a big pay off in the end." you tell him as you finish getting the last of your clothes back in place and suggestively wiggle your tongue at him.'
-	*nl
-	'He laughs. "Well, if that''s the case, feel free to tease me any time you want <<$pcs_nickname>>. I should get back to class, they are going to wonder where I went. Talk to you later, okay?" Marcus gives you a final smile and wave as he heads out of the bathroom. It takes you a few more seconds before you realize that this wasn''t some encounter in a club or something, but that you were doing all this in the school bathroom while skipping class. The reality check sucks and you are back to killing time until the bell rings, but the time you spent with the cute black guy was definitely a better use of the period.'
+	'He laughs. "Well, if that''s the case, feel free to tease me any time you want <<$pcs_nickname>>. I should get back to class before they start wondering where I went. Talk to you later, okay?" Marcus gives you a final smile and wave as he heads out of the bathroom. It takes you a few more seconds before you realize that this wasn''t some encounter in a club or something, but that you were doing all this in the school bathroom while skipping class. The reality check sucks and you are back to killing time until the bell rings, but the time you spent with the cute black guy was definitely a better use of the period.'
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
@@ -646,7 +631,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 			'"We could, you know, just talk. I mean, how have you guys been?" you say, playing dumb with regards to the innuendo and making no move to leave your stall.'
 			'"Talk? Really?" They both audibly sigh in disappointment. "You sure you don''t want to have some fun?" Fedor asks, but after seeing your expression at his insistence, Ivan thumps him lightly in the chest and whispers "Let it go, man." before he smiles reassuringly at you. "Yeah sure. We can talk."'
-			*nl
 			'You give Ivan a grateful smile in return and engage the two boys in conversation. Soon, the three of you are talking about their sparring, fights, and training, but also about recently released movies, your favorite music and anything else that strikes your fancy. Before you know it, the bell rings. All of you stop and look up reflexively at the sound. You bid each other farewell, your eyes locking with Ivan''s for a moment as you share another smile, and then head to your next class.'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -658,9 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/boysbj.jpg"></center>'
 			'You grin at them - although this was unexpected, you wouldn''t mind passing the time with them. "What did you boys have in mind?" you ask them in a sultry tone, almost purring out the words.'
-			*nl
 			'Seeing your reaction to Fedor''s suggestion of fun, they both waste no time in pulling their dicks out of their pants. As if it wasn''t obvious enough, Fedor feels the need to suggest "Why don''t you come over here and suck our dicks? That''ll be fun." Ivan might have punched him for his stupid remark if his gaze wasn''t completely focused on you.'
-			*nl
 			'You slide off the toilet, down onto all fours, and crawl over to them on your hands and knees, sitting up once you are between the two. You take Fedor''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth first and start sucking on it while you use your hand to stroke Ivan''s dick so he doesn''t feel left out.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'group'
@@ -678,7 +660,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/boysfuck.jpg"></center>'
 				'Fedor places one hand on your hip and the other grabs your thigh. He then lifts your leg off the ground while Ivan places his hand on the back of your head, both of them helping you to keep your balance as you stand on one leg - having sex with two jocks definitely has its perks. Just then, Fedor slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy and starts fucking you hard almost at once, but his handiwork more than prepared you for it. You moan as he fucks you, but your moans are muffled by Ivan''s cock and Fedor''s thrusts push you forward time and time again, pushing the dick in your mouth deep into your throat over and over.'
-				*nl
 				'After several minutes, they turn you around so they can switch, and some time later, they switch again. About the time you expect them to switch once more, Ivan suggests "Hey, Fedor, how about you lie down on the floor so we can both fuck her?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
@@ -716,7 +697,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 						dynamic $showerdin
 						gs 'stat'
 						'Shortly after this moment, Fedor tenses up and holds your head still, his dick buried deep in your mouth. He shoots his cum deep inside, most of it hitting the back of your throat and getting swallowed instantly, and pumps his manhood even deeper into your mouth a few more times before pulling out and standing up to watch Ivan, who is still pounding your ass. A few seconds later, Ivan groans loudly and buries his dick deep in your ass. You feel a warmth flood inside you as he starts cumming. He keeps going for a few more strokes but then pulls out of your ass, just as he stops shooting spurts of sperm in your ass. As his dick leaves your ass, which gapes a bit after his enthusiastic fuck, you feel some of the cum running out. Ivan stands up and smiles. "Fuck, that was great. You''re the best <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						*nl
 						'Fedor is already washing up at the sink. "Yeah, you are one amazing bitch. Uh... I mean that in a good way." You get up as well and go to the sink to get cleaned up as best you can. You look over to them as you use paper towels to wipe the sperm off and out of your ass and grin when you find them watching you. "You guys were right: That was fun." The guys laugh and you keep chatting while you all get dressed and talk about a variety of things in the little bit of time you have left before the bell rings.'
 						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -744,7 +724,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/stall.jpg"></center>'
 	if gruptipe ! 4 and hotcat >= 5:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'The other boys quickly move over. Within moments, you find yourself in the middle of five of your gopnik classmates, all leering at you lustfully. You know exactly what they are thinking and what they want. You doubt you can reason with them, but perhaps you could scream? Maybe someone would hear you; or maybe it would only piss them off. You could also try and make a run for it.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -776,7 +755,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy6_sub'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat >= 5:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers. "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'The other boys quickly move over. Within moments, you find yourself in the middle of five of your gopnik classmates, all leering at you lustfully. Vitek roughly grabs and squeezes one of your tits. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s have some fun. You know you want to... and so do we. Isn''t that right?" he asks the others, who nod their heads and start pawing at you as well. You could still get out of this and make them stop - the gopniks are a rowdy bunch, but they''re not complete assholes or rapists - but if you make them stop, they''ll become angry. That makes giving in and seeing where this goes an option you seriously consider; it could genuinely be fun and would certainly make them like you more if you submitted to their desires. That''s how it works, right?'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -790,7 +768,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy6_sub'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat < 5:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers. "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'When they see it is you, they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door, when you hear another one say "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" and Vitek speaks up. "Shut up, I''ve got an idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
@@ -801,7 +778,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers. "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, staring at you, "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you by the arm, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'Once they see who it is, they look visibly disappointed and somewhat angry. "What the fuck is your ugly ass doing in the guys'' bathroom?" Vitek asks, but before you can even respond Dan speaks up. "Maybe she forgot she was a girl; with a body like that, who could blame her?" The rest all bust out laughing.'
 		'Blushing as the boys laugh at you, you don''t know what to say before Vitek roughly grabs your arm and shoves you towards the door. "Get your ugly face out of here before you make us sick." The others laugh some more, and not sure what else to do, you leave. You spend the rest of the period roaming the hall, trying not to be seen while wishing you were better looking.'
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -814,10 +790,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_not':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'You decide to shake your head and try to fend them off. "Not today boys." They don''t relent and keep pawing at you, one or two even try to push their luck and see if all it takes to sway you is one good squeeze. Vitek and Dan aren''t as handsy as the others, but aren''t coming to your aid either. You''re trying to push through the others, towards the door, and you know that if they really don''t want to let you leave, there is no way you could force your way past them. You push a couple of them away and they stay backed off for a moment, but by the time you push another off, another moves back in. They seem to be enjoying the game.'
-	*nl
 	'Once near the door, you finally manage break out of the circle, your clothes half pulled off, but you are getting a little annoyed with them now and they can clearly hear that when you cry out "I said enough! Back the fuck up, all of you, now!" With that, all of them stop, but Vitek, who has been silently watching you struggle for the last minute or two, shoves you towards the door, his eyes hard. "Then get the fuck out of here, and don''t come trying to hang out with us." You are looking at him incredulity - he seriously would ''cast you out'', just because you wouldn''t have sex with all of them? He couldn''t possibly be serious... right?'
-	*nl
-	'It''s not too late; you could still submit to their desires, if you wanted to... or you could stand your ground and leave. After all, Vitek might not mean that. It is always hard to tell with gopniks.'
+	'It''s not too late; you could still submit to their desires, if you wanted to... or you could stand your ground and leave. After all, Vitek might not mean that. It''s always hard to tell with gopniks.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Leave (<<will_cost>> willpower)':
@@ -860,7 +834,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/gangvag.jpg"></center>'
 		'Once your clothes are removed, or at least moved out of the way, one of them bends you over with a shove. Another grabs your hair and twists it painfully, then drags your head over to his crotch where he''s already stroking his dick. You feel a cock getting shoved into your dry pussy and whoever it is drives it in as deep as it will go, trying to go for balls deep on the first stroke and, failing that, hammering into you with a vengeance. It''s so painful that you cannot stay silent, but just as you cry out over the rough treatment, the guy holding you by the hair shoves his dick into your mouth, tightening his grip around your head so much hurts, but he doesn''t care - all he cares about is fucking your throat.'
-		*nl
 		'They take turns, mostly switching out who is getting to fuck your pussy, but eventually exchanging who gets to fuck your mouth as well. The ones not currently fucking you often smack your ass hard, roughly squeeze one of your tits or painfully pinch one of your nipples while they wait for their turn.'
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'vaginal', 'stretch'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 4, 'group'
@@ -881,7 +854,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/ganganal1.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your uncomfortable spit roasting is interrupted by Roman saying "Lift the bitch up, I want to fuck her ass." Before you even know what''s going on, one of them on each side of you grabs you, lifting you off the ground. Holding you in a sitting position mid air, they spread your legs and you instinctively wrap your arm around one of their necks. Just as it dawns on you why they lifted you, you feel a cock painfully entering your ass.'
-			*nl
 			'The sudden surge of agony causes you to cry out, the threat about keeping quiet momentarily forgotten, but it gets even worse: As soon as Roman has forced himself all the way in, he starts hammering away at your ass. You do your best to make as little noise as you can while tears run down your face, but it is difficult - the pain only seems to get worse. Before long, the dick is pulled out of your ass and you sigh in relief, but too soon: Another takes its place a few moments later, and so it continues - the guys take turns fucking your ass or holding you up.'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'group'
@@ -897,8 +869,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/ganganal2.jpg"></center>'
 				'Eventually, one of them complains about holding you up and they let you down, bending you over the instant your feet touch the floor. One cock is shoved back into your ass again while another is shoved into your mouth. They both fall into a jackhammer rhythm, both guys trying to shove their cocks as deep into your holes as they physically can. Someone, either the one fucking your throat or one of the others who''s feeling sadistic, grabs your hair and twists it painfully, holding your head in place so you can''t pull away when your gag reflex acts up.'
-				*nl
-				'You are so dazed by your suffering that you''re barely even aware that they''re talking, let alone that they''re talking and joking about you. As they switch places, they start arguing about who''s turn it is to fuck you where or who is taking too long on his turn.'
+				'You''re so dazed by your suffering that you''re barely even aware that they''re talking, let alone that they''re talking and joking about you. As they switch places, they start arguing about who''s turn it is to fuck you where or who is taking too long on his turn.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -913,9 +884,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/gangdp.jpg"></center>'
 					'It''s up to Vitek to interrupt them and mediate. "Hey, no need to fight guys. Our whore knows her place: She''s a totally obedient little slut, with three holes and two hands. Watch." He drags you by your hair into one of the stalls and dunks your hair into the toilet bowl several times, laughing when you don''t protest, scared of how he might react if you did. Then he drags you back out and shoves you back to the others. "What are you waiting for? Fill her up, boys!"'
-					*nl
 					'They laugh, and you soon find yourself pulled down on top of one of them, straddling him as he enters your pussy. Another shoves his dick into your ass while a third shoves his cock down your throat. All three of them start roughly fucking you while the last two grab your arms and put your hands on their dicks. With the toilet water dripping down your back and your pussy, ass and throat burning and hurting from getting violated, you know that it will be over faster if you play along, so you start jerking both of them off, almost grateful for the dick you have to suck because it muffles the cries you wouldn''t be able to contain.'
-					*nl
 					'At the very least, the guys seem to be much happier now that they are all getting some at the same time. They''re not quite considerate of you but at least they have less frustrations to take out on you, making what could be utter torture almost tolerable. You lose track of time, and they trade positions so often you aren''t even sure who is fucking you where.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
@@ -933,7 +902,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/gangcum.jpg"></center>'
 						'The bell hasn''t rang yet, even though it feels like they have been doing this for hours. All three of your holes are raw from the dry insertions and all the rough fucking they had to withstand. Plain and simple: You are reaching your breaking point where even the pain you thought was tolerable is getting so overbearing you might pass out. Luckily, by the sounds of it, the guys are finally getting close to finishing.'
-						*nl
 						'They withdraw from your holes, one by one, and roughly drag you off the guy you were straddling. You are forced to sit on the floor as all of them gather around you, jerking themselves off like there''s no tomorrow. One by one, they shower you in spurts and drops of cum; it coats your face, lips, hair, breasts, arms, runs down to your stomach, your ass, your pussy, your legs... By the time they are done, it feels like all of you is covered in cum.'
 						'Once they are done, Dan says "Now THAT is one well-trained slut." He laughs at you, still sitting on the ground, and the boys gather up their things and leave.'
 
@@ -1006,7 +974,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb1':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
 	'The couple has their backs turned to you, but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants are pulled down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher, but both seem possible. He has <<$rand_girl>> up against the sinks, partially bent over them, and he is fucking her from behind. Her face is nearly touching the mirror as he pounds her pussy doggystyle and she seems to be loving it. Afraid you might get caught, you close the door and move back to sit on the toilet.'
 	act 'Wait them out':
 		*clr & cla & *nl
@@ -1050,7 +1017,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
 	'The couple has their backs turned to you, but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants are pulled down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher but both seem possible. He has <<$rand_girl>> bent over near the bathroom window and she is looking back at him and in your direction - or at least she would be, if she didn''t have her eyes closed. You can tell that he is fucking her ass and she seems to be loving it, getting her tight little ass pounded right here in a school bathroom! Her soft moans of pleasure echo in the room and the sight is entrancing... but if she opened her eyes right now, you are pretty sure she''d see you! Afraid you might get caught, you close the door and move back to sit on the toilet.'
 	act 'Wait':
 		*clr & cla & *nl
@@ -1094,7 +1060,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb3':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/couplesuck.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
 	'You see Arkadi with his pants around his ankles with Anushka squatting in front of him and sucking his dick. You watch for a moment and you''d like to watch even longer, but Arkadi keeps looking around, and in your direction! You duck back into the stall before you get spotted... and feel yourself getting very aroused from watching them, listening to them, even just knowing what they are doing. The sucking sounds stop and are quickly replaced by soft female moans of pleasure. Before your inner eye, you can see him fucking her over the sink, or perhaps against the wall? And is he fucking her pussy or ass?'
 	if pcs_horny < 70:
 		act 'Wait':
@@ -1151,7 +1116,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/coupleturn.jpg"></center>'
 			'He lifts one of your legs off the ground and turns you sideways from him. Your leg is barely up in the air when you feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock penetrate your pussy. His dick is already wet and lubed up from Anushka''s pussy, but your own slit is absolutely soaked by now and it slides right in, all the way until you feel his balls come to rest against your lower lips. Your moans and the pleasure you''re feeling increase tenfold when he starts fucking you as hard and fast as he can, just like he was doing to Anushka, and you would be impressed with his stamina if you weren''t so occupied with enjoying this.'
-			*nl
 			'Anushka recovers in the meantime and steps up to you, kissing you, her tongue darting into your mouth while her hands squeezes your breast or slides down to rub your clit. Her passion is infectious - she seems to be still just as turned on as she was before her orgasm.'
 			$orgasm_txt = 'Between the two of them, your own climax builds up fast, and only a few seconds later, you are moaning into Anushka''s mouth and gripping Arkadi''s cock like a vice, twitching and shaking like crazy.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
@@ -1169,9 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/couplecum.jpg"></center>'
 				'He keeps going through your orgasm for some time longer; then, he suddenly reaches out, grabs Anushka by the hair and pulls her down. She drops to her knees and he instantly pulls his cock out of your pussy and shoves it straight into her mouth. She doesn''t seem to mind - on the contrary, she is blowing him like nothing makes her happier. Arkadi places a hand on your shoulder, pushing you down, and Anushka seems to concur, grabbing your arm and encouraging you to join her. You sink down to your knees beside her, and as soon as they touch the ground, he pulls out of her mouth and shoves his cock straight into yours. You do your best to follow Anushka''s example and give him the best blowjob you can while she sucks his balls, and after a minute or so, you switch roles.'
-				*nl
 				'Just when he pulls his dick out of her mouth again and you''ve already half-opened yours to take his cock back into it, he grunts and starts jerking himself rapidly. Only a few strokes later, spurts of hot cum land on both you and Anushka, covering your lips, face and even splattering over your breasts. Once he''s finished cumming, he sticks his dick between Anushka''s lips and she enthusiastically cleans him up. "Fuck, that was great. You two are some fine grade-A sluts." When his dick is sufficiently cleaned, Anushka starts licking the sperm off your face and body, and you return the favor to her. Once you have both lapped it all up, she starts kissing you again, as deep as before, swapping his sperm back and forth between your mouths.'
-				*nl
 				'He lights up a cigarette as he watches the two of you and gives his mostly limp cock a few rubs. "Shit, if you two keep that up, I will need another round!" he laughs, and the two of you smile as you continue making out. Finally, Anushka breaks the kiss and gets up, swallowing most of his sperm herself. You swallow the bit that is left in your mouth, then get up as well and, along with the others, start cleaning up and getting dressed. Just about the time you finish dressing, the bell rings. As Arkadi walks out without another word, Anushka grabs you roughly by the chin. "We''re going to have to do this again sometime, bitch. That was just too much fun." Before you can even respond to her comment, she French kisses you deeply before she walks out as well, shooting you a smoldering look over her shoulder while licking her lips. Her words and actions leave you breathless; that girl is a maelstrom of lust and passion and it''s hard not to get caught in it. You then remember the bell, hurry to straighten out your clothes and head to class, still feeling her lips on you.'
 				act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1207,7 +1169,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/coupleturn.jpg"></center>'
 			'He lifts one of her legs off the ground and turns her sideways. Her leg is barely up in the air when his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock penetrates her pussy. You would be impressed with his stamina if you weren''t so occupied with enjoying this.'
-			*nl
 			'Anushka starts to scream as her body is rocked by muscle spasms, obviously having an orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards, as he gets dressed, she uses her fingers to clean her face, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed, she looks over at you and winks. "Hope you enjoyed the show." The two of them then leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1222,9 +1183,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb4':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/teachers1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
-	'You see Mr. Kuznetsov standing near the sinks with his pants around his ankles while Miss Orlov down on her knees with her top pulled down. She has his cock in her mouth, sucking it for all she is worth. They both seem to be greatly enjoying themselves. You know you should really stop watching incase you get caught but how often do you get to see two of your teachers go at it?'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
+	'You see Mr. Kuznetsov standing near the sinks with his pants around his ankles while Miss Orlov is down on her knees with her top pulled down. She has his cock in her mouth, sucking it for all she is worth. They both seem to be greatly enjoying themselves. You know you should really stop watching incase you get caught but how often do you get to see two of your teachers go at it?'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
@@ -1234,7 +1194,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb4':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/teachers2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You decide to keep watching them. She sucks his cock for a while and neither seem to be aware of your presence as they are too engrossed in each other. Then he pulls her up, turns her around and pushes her forward. Bending her over the sinks, she pulls up her skirt while he pulls down her panties. He moves up and starts fucking her, slow but passionate at first but as she begins to moan louder, he picks up his pace and before long, he is pounding her like crazy.'
-		*nl
 		'It doesn''t take much longer until Miss Orlov is having a screaming orgasm. Mr. Kuznetsov is forced to put his hand over her mouth as she orgasms to muffle her cries of ecstasy. Some time after she finishes, he pulls out of her. She turns around and gets back on her knees and starts sucking his cock again. Moments later he starts grunting, obviously cumming in her mouth. Not a single drop escapes her mouth, she milks his cock of every last drop before removing it from her mouth.'
 		act 'Masturbate': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'masturbateb4'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
@@ -1295,7 +1254,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caught.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see one of your teachers, Mr. Vasilyev, standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping he didn''t notice you. You hear his footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.'
-	*nl
 	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady." he says sternly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing in the boy''s room anyway? Skipping class?"'
 	if school_bunk = 1:'His eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground. His eyes narrow, "Smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	'Mr. Vasilyev shakes his head. He looks more disappointed than angry. "Well come on, young lady. Get down to the principal''s office." He points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
@@ -1364,9 +1322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 					'You pick up the pace even more since you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
-					*nl
 					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a few times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-					*nl
 					'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
 					'You go to the mirror yourself, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 					if school_bunk = 0:
@@ -1404,7 +1360,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A128'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
 					'You stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head, your eyes locked with his all the while before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
-					*nl
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1414,7 +1369,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 							'You suck him for a little longer until he starts to moan and he pulls his dick out of your mouth. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-							*nl
 							'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 							'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face.'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A128', 1
@@ -1440,7 +1394,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag1.jpg"></center>'
 							    'Once the condom is in place, he rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, making sure it is well lubricated, then gently pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, causing you to gasp. His movements are slow and he is taking all the time in the world to work his way deeper into you, one of his hands rubbing your clit all the while. You moan in pleasure.'
-							    *nl
 							    'He might have been slow at first, but he''s steadily picking up the pace now that he is balls deep inside you; he stays gentle with you the whole time though and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!"'
 								'He then stops and pulls out of you. "Get up and bend over."'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
@@ -1463,7 +1416,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 											'Your teacher pulls out of you and drags you off the toilet, gently pushing you down to your knees while he gets rid of the condom. He holding his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-											*nl
 											'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 											'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face.'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A128', 1
@@ -1509,7 +1461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You shake your head. "No! I''m not your whore."'
-					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
+					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that, he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1534,7 +1486,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You shake your head. "No! I''m not your whore."'
 					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
-					act 'Go to Principal''s Office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s Office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1603,7 +1555,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You have no control over what is happening and so, in the hopes of speeding this up, caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while he fucks your head. "That''s right, you dirty little slut, take my cock! Gag on it!" He continues to say demeaning things like that as he jams his cock down your throat over and over again. Making you gag seems to be what he enjoys the most.'
-					*nl
 					'He picks up the pace even more, barely even giving you a moment to catch your breath anymore. Drool leaks out of your mouth, dripping down your chin, and tears are running down your cheeks. Without warning, he starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth before he suddenly jerks your head away, pulling your hair painfully in the process and twisting your neck slightly.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1611,9 +1562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/teachercum.jpg"></center>'
 						'As soon his dick is out of your mouth, he jerks it a few times while pointing it at you. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. Once the last spurt of sperm is out, he shoves his cock back into your mouth and you dutifully lick him clean, feeling him go limp in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-						*nl
 						'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. He gives you a cold smile. "Don''t think this will get me to cut you any slack in my class, <<$pcs_lastname>>. And don''t you <i>dare</i> skip my lessons. I''ll be seeing you soon." With that, he walks out of the bathroom.'
-						*nl
 						'Your throat is burning and you like Mr. Ivanov even less than ever before, you think to yourself as you watch him walk out with droplets of his cum run down your fave. At least you are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal. You also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A129', 1
@@ -1654,7 +1603,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
 					'You do as you''re told and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head while looking up at him to gauge his nonexistent reaction, before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you control the action.'
-					*nl
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging. He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes of this, he grabs you by the hair and roughly pulls you up and bends you over.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1663,7 +1611,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 						Ivanov_toilet = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal.jpg"></center>'
 						'Once you are bent over in the stall, Mr. Ivanov rubs his fingers against your pussy. When he notices that you''re relatively wet, he slips them inside, finger fucking you to lubricate his fingers with your juices. When he pulls his fingers out of you, he rubs them against your asshole and slips one of them inside your puckered hole. You moan in pleasure, with a little bit of pain mixed in, then louder when he adds a second finger and have to bite your lip and flinch a little when he shoves the third one. Mr. Ivanov gets your asshole lubed up and stretches it out a bit, and you doubt he''s doing it for the fun of it.'
-						*nl
 						'When he feels you are sufficiently prepared, he rubs the tip of his dick against your backdoor and uses one of his hands to spread your ass cheeks wide. Once he has your ass cheeks spread wide and his cock lined up, he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. You groan loudly in pleasure and pain. In a few uncomfortable strokes, he shoves his cock all the way into your bowels until he is balls deep inside. You cry out at the last stroke, the pain too intense to keep quiet, and he doesn''t pauses to give your ass a little time to adjust, he just begins to give you a proper hard fucking.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 4
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 1,'lube'
@@ -1681,9 +1628,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 								'Next thing you know, you feel spurts of hot cum filling your ass. With a loud groan, he buries his cock balls deep up your ass. You feel his dick twitching as he blows his load deep inside of you. He pulls out of your gapping ass, you can feel his cum leaking out of you, as tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-								*nl
 								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you back after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." he laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
-								*nl
 								'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1737,9 +1682,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 						'After what feels like forever he finally gives one more thrust burying himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gaping asshole.'
-						*nl
 						'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." he laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
-						*nl
 						'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1784,9 +1727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 								'After what feels like an eternity, he finally gives one more thrust and buries himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gapping asshole.'
-								*nl
 								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you back after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." He laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
-								*nl
 								'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1865,7 +1806,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy7':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/sex/school/boysroom4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Once he is down on his knees, you push him forward so he is on all fours before you kneel behind him and slip the dildo back into his ass. It easily slides in and you start fucking him again. He moans in pleasure and starts to buck back against you, encouraging you to fuck him harder and deeper as he starts jerking himself off.'
+						'Once he''s down on his knees, you push him forward so he''s on all fours before you kneel behind him and slip the dildo back into his ass. It easily slides in and you start fucking him again. He moans in pleasure and starts to buck back against you, encouraging you to fuck him harder and deeper as he starts jerking himself off.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':

locations/gschool_coolkid_chats.qsrc

@@ -761,11 +761,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 80:
 			'"Are you going to do something with your life or are you planning on being a sex toy for boys to use forever?" Bella asks.'
 			'"God, you sound like my mother..." you reply unimpressed.'
-			'"You need Jesus. Literally." Bella rolls her eyes and shakes her head before walking away.'                 
+			'"You need Jesus. Literally." She rolls her eyes and shakes her head before walking away.'                 
 		elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
 			'"Hey Bella, got a minute?" you ask.'
 			'"Me? A minute? For you? Do I look like I want an STD, you slut?" she scoffs.'
-			'"It''s not that bad. It only hurts when I pee." you try to snap back at her.' 
+			'"It''s not that bad. It only hurts when I pee," you try to snap back at her.' 
 			'She sighs while giving you a look of disgust. She then rolls her eyes and walks away, murmuring something about you that don''t quite hear.'
 		else
 			'"Oh, it''s you again." Bella sighs. "Shoo, slut!" she gestures you to leave.'
@@ -774,16 +774,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 	elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 60:
 			'"Come here, you won''t believe what happened!" Bella says while waving you over.'
-			'"What? Tell me." you reply, intrigued.'
+			'"What? Tell me!" you reply, intrigued.'
 			'"You know that cafe at the train station, right?" she asks in a brisk manner.'
 			'"Uhmh..." you nod back, knowing your mother works there.'
-			'"The old fart that works suggested that Irina should blow him!? Can you believe it! Just because her card got rejected. What a creep!"'
+			'"The old fart that works there suggested that Irina should blow him! Can you believe that?! Just because her card got rejected. What a creep!"'
 			'"We vowed never to go back there, like ever! Besides, there''s a nice cafe in Pushkin where we sometimes hang out. You should join us sometime." she adds as the two of you talk. Well she talks, mostly about other problems she''s had with people more than anything.'   
 		elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
 			'"What do you want?" Bella arrogantly asks as you approach her.'
 			'"I just wanted to ask you about this store in the city. I heard..."'
-			'Before you''re able to continue she cuts you off and looks at her pedicure with a sigh. "Listen..." Before she can answer, Irina whispers something in her ear and both of their eyes evil up.'
-			'"You know, actually, why you don''t come with us?" Bella quickly suggests. "Saturday midday at the city station. That''s good for you, right Irina?" Irina just smiles.'
+			'Before you''re able to continue, she cuts you off and looks at her pedicure with a sigh. "Listen..." Before she can answer, Irina whispers something in her ear and both of their eyes evil up.'
+			'"Actually, why you don''t come with us?" Bella quickly suggests. "Saturday midday at the city station. That''s good for you, right Irina?" Irina just smiles.'
 			'"See? Settled." Bella smiles and gives you a hug before going on her way.'
 		else
 			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, there''s something I''ve wanted to ask you for a long time now." Bella says in an intrigued tone.'
@@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 70:
 			'You see Bella waving at you to get your attention. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, can I take a quick look at your notes for the next class, thanks." She takes your notebook before you can even answer.'
 			'"Hello to you too. Of course, what are friends for?" you reply.'
-			'"Yeah, I got home really late. Hey, you''ll be going to Uni after graduation, right?" she keeps the conversation going while taking photos with her phone.'  
+			'"Yeah, I got home really late. Hey, you''ll be going to uni after graduation, right?" She keeps the conversation going while taking photos with her phone.'  
 			'"I''m thinking of it. Of course, it would be interesting but which one? There''s so many different things to consider studying as well, you know."' 
 			'"Yeah, getting out of this shithouse would be nice," Bella chuckles while pointing over her shoulder at some gopniks leaving the bathroom followed by Petia, whose his hair is visibly wet. You talk for a bit as she snaps photos of your notes. Once she''s done, she smiles at you and walks away.'   
 		elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
@@ -851,7 +851,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cherleading_notice':
 	'As you walk into the cafeteria, Bella and Stasya gesture towards you to get your attention.'
 	if gruptipe = 1:
 		'"Hey sweetie, we were just by Albina''s table and..."'
-		'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table. Bella flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my God, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
+		'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table and flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my god, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
 		'Natasha isn''t sure how to react. "I-It was my mom''s... From the ''90s." she awkwardly mumbles.'
 		'Bella smiles sweetly. "Vintage, how adorable."'
 		act 'Nod in agreement':
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cherleading_notice':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/bella/notice/bella_stasya1.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Hey, we were just by Albina''s table and..."'
-			'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table. Bella flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my God, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
+			'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table and flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my god, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
 			'Natasha isn''t sure how to react. "I-It was my mom''s... From the ''90s." she awkwardly mumbles.'
 			'Bella smiles sweetly. "Vintage, how adorable."'
 			act 'Nod in agreement':
@@ -1400,7 +1400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 			'"I''m sure Feofan or Petka would be more than happy to help you out," you gently remind her.'
 			'A sly smile spreads across Irina''s face. "You''re totally right <<$pcs_nickname>>! You know me so well."'
 		elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20:
-			'You see Irina sweet talking Artem for some reason, probably to do her homework. How can someone so charming be so manipulative?!'
+			'You see Irina sweet talking Artem for some reason, probably to do her homework. How can someone so charming be so manipulative?'
 			'"Grow a pair, Artem! She''s just using you!" you shout at them.'
 			'"What a rude girl <<$pcs_nickname>> is! I think you have a wonderful pair..." Irina doesn''t let your attempt at intervention bother her, even taking it further and letting her hand slide over Artem''s crotch. "Oops, I''m so clumsy! You''ll help me, right?" You can see the growing bulge in his pants as his face turns bright red.'
 			'Once he agrees, she smiles and walks over to you. "You''re out of your league, bitch! Never interrupt me again or you''ll regret it!" she hisses while walking past you in an intimidating manner.' 
@@ -1434,7 +1434,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 		elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20:
 			'"Hey Irina, about the next class.." you try to inquire.'	
 			'If you ever try talking to me again, I''ll make sure the second hand blow up doll Lesco and Petia use in their threesome is more popular than you! God, I can''t have even five minutes to myself without some loser trying to talk to me!" she mumbles in an angry tone as she walks away.'
-			'Then she turns and walks away from you.'
 		else	
 			'"You don’t have any friends, do you?" Irina asks with a stern, unimpressed look. "And you won''t ever find any either." She then turns around and ignores you.'
 		end

locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/smoke'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull out a cigarette and light it, take a long drag and hold it in for a while. You immediately feel yourself relaxing, the smoke''s familiar tingling in your lungs taking the edge off. This feels much better than going to class.'
+			'You pull out a cigarette and light it before taking a long drag and holding it for a while. You immediately feel yourself relaxing, the smoke''s familiar tingling in your lungs taking the edge off. This feels much better than going to class.'
 			i = rand(1,100)
 			if i <= 25:
 				gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'girls'
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	if school_bunk = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/usephone'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'For the rest of the period, you play on your phone. Despite several instances of boredom and indecision that leave you wishing you could just go out, you find it very relaxing to be your own master and by the time the bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'	
+		'You play on your phone for the rest of the period. Despite several instances of boredom and indecision that leave you wishing you could just go out, you find it very relaxing to be your own master and by the time the bell rings, you''re in a far better mood than before.'	
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/smoke'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend the rest of the period playing on your phone while you smoke. The games on your phone are boring, and once or twice you hear somebody walking around out in the corridor, causing your heart to skip a beat when you realize they might smell the smoke, but despite all that, you find this use of the period very relaxing and by the time the bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'
+		'You spend the rest of the period playing on your phone while you smoke. The games on your phone are boring, and once or twice you hear somebody walking around out in the corridor, causing your heart to skip a beat when you realize they might smell the smoke, but despite all that, you find this use of the period very relaxing and by the time the bell rings, you''re in a far better mood than before.'
 	end
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl1':
 	jump_counter = 0
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door open - someone else is in the bathroom with you! You carefully peek out, half-expecting to see a teacher, but see <<$rand_girl>>. Relieved and smiling, you exit the stall and greet her. She turns around, slightly startled at first but then breaking into a smile when she see you. Within seconds, the two of you are chatting away about school, boys, clothes, makeup and anything else that strikes your fancy, having all but forgotten about the fact that you are sitting in the school bathroom and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop and look up out of reflex, then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'		
+	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door open - someone else is in the bathroom with you! You carefully peek out, half-expecting to see a teacher, but see <<$rand_girl>>. Relieved and smiling, you exit the stall and greet her. She turns around, slightly startled at first but then breaking into a smile when she sees you. Within seconds, the two of you are chatting away about school, boys, clothes, makeup and anything else that strikes your fancy, having all but forgotten about the fact that you''re sitting in the school bathroom and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop and look up out of reflex, then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'		
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear the bathroom door quietly open and close. Soft footsteps echo back and forth and you know someone else is in the bathroom with you. You peek out of your stall and see Sonia standing at the mirror, applying makeup. Relieved, bored and starved for company, you open the stall door. "Hey Sonia, what''s up?"'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door quietly open and close. Soft footsteps echo back and forth and you know someone else is in the bathroom with you. You peek out of your stall and see Sonia standing at the mirror, applying makeup. Relieved, bored and starved for company, you open the stall door. "Hey Sonia, what''s up?"'
 	*nl
 	'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, you cutting class?" she asks while looking at you from the mirror.'
 	'"Yeah, I couldn''t take another boring class, I needed a little fun." you tell her with a smile.'
@@ -144,7 +144,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonialick.jpg"></center>'
 			'The treatment she gives your clit and nipples turns your panties into a soaked mess and your entire body is tense now, still a ways away from release but too far gone to even think about stopping now. She pushes you back into the stall and briefly covers your mouth with hers, her sweet perfume tickling your nose with the promise of sexual bliss, your tongues wrestling with each other as you practically tear eachother''s clothes off. Sonia sits you down on the edge of the toilet and spreads your legs wide; the smoldering look she gives you as she kneels down between them sends waves of excitement through your body. The girl takes her time as she kisses her way down from your breasts to your navel, to your pubic mound... then past your sex, down your inner thigh. Just as you open your mouth to protest, her tongue takes a lingering lap at your lips.'
-			*nl
 			'For all the cock she is rumored to have sucked, she is mind-numbingly good at licking pussy, turning the sound you meant to utter into a sigh of pleasure. You briefly wonder if the two skills are related before her magic mouth and fingers put you in a state beyond coherence. You can feel the tension in your body taking palpable form, concentrating more and more in your lower stomach, building up. As you get closer and closer to climax, she slips two of her small fingers into your pussy, finger-fucking you while she licks, sucks and flicks your clit with her tongue. The sensation is overwhelming, the timing impeccable, hitting the right spot and rhythm in a way no man could. She somehow even holds you on the edge for a few more seconds before your body starts shaking in orgasm and you scream out in unbridled lust.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -5, 'lesbian'
@@ -182,15 +181,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 	*nl
 	if grupTipe ! 4:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. Most of the other girls in school avoid them, as they like to bully them and even some of the boys. Trying to be quiet, you pull your feet up - you really don''t want to draw their attention and catch you here, alone in the bathroom. Unfortunately, you''ve forgotten about your phone sitting in your lap: As you raise your legs so they can''t see your feet under the stall, it slides off your lap and clatters onto the floor.'
-		*nl
 		'The room turns eerily silent as you hold your breath, your heartbeat so loud in your ears that it drowns out the sound of them approaching. The stall door then suddenly slams open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well well, look what we have here, Lena. A scared little bunny hiding in a stall." Lera says with a smirk.'
-		*nl
 		'Lena leans in, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "Maybe she thinks she''s a bad girl, trying to cut class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She laughs gleefully and Lera joins in. You have a really bad feeling about what they might want to do to you.'
 	else
 		'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. You consider going out to talk to them. All and all, they treat you pretty well, but sometimes they can be pretty mean and demeaning. You know you are the low girl on the totem pole in the gopniks, but it would be nice if they treated you better. Still, they do make sure no one else messes with you, and when they''re in a good mood, it''s a blast hanging out with them, so it''s not all bad.'
-		*nl
 		'Before you can make up your mind though, you hear their footsteps heading your way and you realize you forgot to lift your feet up. Suddenly, the door is pushed open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well well, look what we have here, Lena. Our favorite little bunny hiding in a stall." Lera says with a smirk.'
-		*nl
 		'Lena leans in, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "I bet she thinks she''s a bad girl for cutting class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She starts laughing and Lera joins in. You''re not sure how you feel about this; they are a lot of fun, but their idea of fun can also be pretty damn mean. Part of you is strangely excited, but you''re also worried about what comes next.'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
@@ -328,9 +323,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 	  !!Lead to an event during break where Sveta is confronted by Vitek, but is defended by the other jocks?
 	    act 'Fuck off':
 		  *clr & cla
-		  npc_rel['A20'] -= 5
-		  npc_rel['A21'] -= 5
-		  grupvalue[4] -= 3
+		  npc_rel['A20'] -= 10
+		  npc_rel['A21'] -= 10
+		  grupvalue[4] -= 5
 		  '<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		  '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
 		  'You step out of the stall and look the two girls up and down. You know the game they''re playing, and you want nothing to do with it. You grab the cigarette from Lera and throw it into the toilet. "You need to get out of my face and fuck off... bitch." you snarl as you get up in Lera''s face and forcefully shove her against the stall, causing her to fall to the floor. Lena''s enraged snarl gives her away and you turn to dodge her incoming right hook before kicking her hard in the stomach, causing her to crumple to the floor next to Lera.'