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Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife

hornguy6 2 years ago
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locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
 		'"I''m not only not wearing panties!" you say while smiling enigmatically. You turn and lift your skirt before parting your ass cheeks, showing Katja the butt plug in your ass.'
 	else
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'You look around, making sure that nobody is nearby before turning your ass towards Katja and bending over, showing off your bare ass and pussy and proving that you''re not wearing any panties.'
 	end

+ 20 - 20
locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -1791,16 +1791,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckornot':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/fuckornot/fuckable_list.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'gschool_groups', 'fuckornot'
 	
-	'10: Perfection. - Would let her do whatever she wants to me'
-	'9: Smoking Hot. - Would eat her ass'
-	'8: Hot. - Would fuck that ass'
-	'7: Damn girl. - Bragging rights for fucking.'
-	'6: Mos def smashable. - Totally fuckable, fuck buddy material'
-	'5: Merely fuckable. - wouldn''t mind smashing it, blowjob buddy material.'
-	'4: Almost fuckable. - Doable, in the dark or to get a blowjob from.'
-	'3: Unattractive. - Doable, if I get myself drunk first, good match for Petria'
-	'2: Fugly. - Has potential compared to a trash bin, even Lesco could do better'
-	'1: Hideous. - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick'
+	'10: Perfection - Would let her do whatever she wants to me.'
+	'9: Smoking Hot - Would eat her ass.'
+	'8: Hot - Would fuck that ass.'
+	'7: Damn girl - Bragging rights for fucking.'
+	'6: Smashable - Totally fuckable. Fuck buddy material'
+	'5: Merely fuckable - Wouldn''t mind smashing it. Blowjob buddy material.'
+	'4: Almost fuckable - Doable in the dark or to get a blowjob from.'
+	'3: Unattractive - Doable if I get myself drunk first. Good match for Petia.'
+	'2: Fugly - Has potential compared to a trash bin. Even Lesco could do better.'
+	'1: Hideous - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the site':
 		if $view_location = 'school':
@@ -1817,16 +1817,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotornot':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
 	gs 'gschool_groups', 'hotornot'
 	
-	'10: Perfection. - Would let him do whatever he wants to me'
-	'9: Smoking Hot. - Arm Candy'
-	'8: Hot. - Would ride him'
-	'7: Damn man. - Bragging rights for fucking.'
-	'6: Ridable. - Totally fuckable, fuck buddy material'
-	'5: Merely fuckable. - maybe doggy style so I don''t have to look at him.'
-	'4: Almost fuckable. - might sit on his face.'
-	'3: Unattractive. - Not even Zinaida would be seen with him.'
-	'2: Fugly. - Horribly ugly, just being seen with him would lose you social standing.'
-	'1: Hideous. - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick, not even Sonia would take his money.'
+	'10: Perfection - Would let him do whatever he wants to me.'
+	'9: Smoking Hot - Arm candy.'
+	'8: Hot - Would ride him.'
+	'7: Damn son - Bragging rights for fucking.'
+	'6: Rideable - Totally fuckable. Fuck buddy material'
+	'5: Merely fuckable. - Doggy style so I don''t have to look at him.'
+	'4: Almost fuckable - Might sit on his face.'
+	'3: Unattractive - Not even Zinaida would be seen with him.'
+	'2: Fugly - Horribly ugly. Just being seen with him would lose you social standing.'
+	'1: Hideous - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick. Not even a whore would take his money.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the site':
 		if $view_location = 'school':

+ 139 - 133
locations/albina_wine_event.qsrc

@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 	else
 		'"Hey, wanna drink some wine with me again?"'
 	end
-	act'No thanks':
+	act 'No thanks':
 	
 	end
 	
-	act'Sure':
+	act 'Sure':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
 		if albina['wine'] = 0:
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 			'You head over to the kitchen with her, sitting down on the couch while she procures the alcohol. A short time later, she places a glass in your hand and clinks hers against it.'
 			'"Cheers!" Albina grins at you, and you both enjoy your wine together.'
 		end
-		act'Drink':
+		act 'Drink':
 			minut += rand(10,20)
 			gs'stat'
 			cla & *clr
@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 				*nl
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina whines. "I''m fucking talking to you!"'
 				'You blink, confused.'
-				act'"What did you say?"':albina['wine_start'] = 1 & gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+				act '"What did you say?"':albina['wine_start'] = 1 & gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 			else
 				'You''re not sure if you expected something else, but a short while later you find yourself drunk on the couch with Albina. Again.'
-				act'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -54,105 +54,105 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 	if albina['wine'] = 0: albina['wine'] = 1 & '"Huh? What did you say?"'
 	if albina['wine_convo'] = 1:
 		'"I love the taste of my own pussy," Albina says loudly. "Iz that weird?"'
-		act'Super weird':
+		act 'Super weird':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Thad''s super fucking weird," you slur back.'
-			'"Bullshit!" she shouts even louder than before. "You cant tell me you dont like the taste of ''ur own brand. I know you do, you filthy slut."'
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			'"Bullshit!" she shouts even louder than before. "You can''t tell me you don''t like the taste of ''ur own brand. I know you do, you filthy slut."'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'I like mine too':
+		act 'I like mine too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back.'
 			'"I fuhcking knew it!" Albina shouts triumphantly. "Every girl loves her own juice!"'
 			'"If you knew, then why are you asking if it''s weird?" you ask, puzzled.'
-			'"I jus'' wanted to see if <i>you</i> were the weird one!" Albina mumbles into her glass as she takes another sip, voice echoing off the inside.'
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			'"I jus'' wanted to see if <i>you</i> were the weird one!" Albina mumbles into her glass as she takes another sip, her voice echoing off the inside.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 
 		if stat['mast'] > 0:
-			act'I lick my fingers after masturbating':
+			act 'I lick my fingers after masturbating':
 				cla & *nl
-					'"I like the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "Sometimes I stick my fingers in my mouf after I masturbate, lick it all off."'
-					'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I come. It always makes me want to rub another one out. <i>Fuuuuck</i>, I wanna rub one out right now," Albina moans, unconsciously squeezing her thighs together.'
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				'"I like the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "Sometimes I stick my fingers in my mouf after I masturbate, lick it all off."'
+				'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I cum. It always makes me want to rub another one out. <i>Fuuuuck</i>, I wanna rub one out right now," she moans while unconsciously squeezing her thighs together.'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		end
 		
 		if pcs_vag > 0:
-			act'I like tasting it on a guy''s dick':
+			act 'I like tasting it on a guy''s dick':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I like the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "It tastes even better when it''s on a dick."'
-				'"You''re a fuckin'' slut <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says immediately and you nearly choke on your wine, as both of you burst into laughter.'
-
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				'"You''re a fuckin'' slut <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says immediately and you nearly choke on your wine as both of you burst into laughter.'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		end
-				
+		
 		if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
 			act'I like your taste too':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I like the taste of your pussy too," you slur back, giving her a filthy grin.'
 				'"Nnnngh~!" Albina rolls her hips, rubbing her thighs together hard. "<i>Fuuuck!</i> Don''t say that! You make me want to shove your head between my legs right now!"'
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 2:
 		!! Shaving convo
 		if pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
 			!! clean shaven
-			'"I can''t believe how many girls at our school don''t shave their pussy," Albina says, a disgusted look on her face. "How can they stand having all that hair down there?"'
+			'"I can''t believe how many girls at our school don''t shave their pussy," Albina says with a disgusted look on her face. "How can they stand having all that itchy hair down there?"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer1'
 		elseif pcs_pubes <= 10:
 			!! stubbly
-			'"You need a shave," Albina says, a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap. " I can practically feel your stubble velcroing to my hair right now."'
+			'"You need a shave," Albina says with a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap. "I can practically feel your stubble velcroing to my hair right now."'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer2'
-!!{		elseif pcs_pubes <= 15:
+		elseif pcs_pubes <= 15:
 			!! small patch
-			'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina rants. "Why don''t you just shave it off? I can practically feel it velcroing to my hair."'
+			'"Ugh, how can you stand having even a small patch of hair down there?" Albina rants. "Why don''t you just shave it off? I can practically feel it velcroing to my hair."'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer3'
 		elseif pcs_pubes <= 25:
 			!! trimmed/styled bush
 			if (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 8) or pubestyle >= 12):
 				!! styled section
-				
+				'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina rants. "Making it look all fancy doesn''t change the fact that it''s velcroing to my hair."'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event', 'shave_answer5'
 			else
 				!! trimmed section
-				
-			end}
+				'"You''ve already trimmed down there, so why don''t you just go ahead and shave it all off?" Albina asks while moving her head uncomfortably on your lap. "I can feel it velcroing to my hair."'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event', 'shave_answer5'
+			end
 		elseif pcs_pubes <= 30:
 			!! full bush
-			'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina says, a disgusted look on her face, turning to glance down at the pubic hair covering your pussy. "It''s putting my head on a hamster!"'
+			'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina says with a disgusted look on her face before turning to glance down at the pubic hair covering your pussy. "It feels like I''m putting my head on a fucking hamster!"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer5'
 		else
 			!! untamed jungle
-			'"Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you <i>never</i> shave?" Albina says, a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap, turning to glance down at the wild bush between your legs. "How can you stand having practically an entire sheep down there?!"'
+			'"Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you <i>ever</i> shave?" Albina says with a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap before turning to glance down at the wild bush between your legs. "How can you stand having practically an entire sheep down there?!"'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer6'
 		end
 		
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 3:
-		!!'"Honest question Sveta. How would dominate me in bed?"'
 		'"Serious question, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says, looking up at you with a mirthless expression on her face. "If you wanted to dominate me in bed, what would you do?"'
-		act'Why would I do that? (friends)':
+		act 'Why would I do that?':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Why would I do that?" you say, puzzled. "You''re my friend, I wouldn''t want to do that to you."'
-			'"It was just a hypothetical," Albina responds stiffly, buring her face in her wine glass.'
-			'"I thought you said it was serious?" you say with a nervous chuckle. You try to talk to her some more after that but she seems a bit pouty for some reason, so you leave it alone.'
+			'"It was just a hypothetical," Albina responds stiffly while burying her face in her wine glass.'
+			'"I thought you said it was serious?" you say with a nervous chuckle. You try to talk to her some more after that, but she seems a bit pouty for some reason, so you leave it alone.'
 			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Why would I do that? (not a pervert)':
+		act 'Am I some kind of pervert?':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Why would I do that?" you ask. "What am I? Some kind of pervert?"'
-			'"It was just a hypothetical," Albina responds stiffly, buring her face in her wine glass.'
+			'"It was just a hypothetical," Albina responds stiffly while burying her face in her wine glass.'
 			'"I thought you said it was serious?" you say with a nervous chuckle. You try to talk to her some more after that, but for some reason she gives you the silent treatment for the next few minutes.'
 			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Bend you over and spank you':
+		act 'Bend you over and spank you':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently, running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide. She glance to the side as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
-			'"Then, I''d sit you up so your ass is nice and high," you continue. "And then I''d <i>spank you within an inch of your life.</i>" You keep your easy tone, but give Albina a hard stare and her breath hitches. "I''d keep going until your ass is red and swollen. Let my fingers trail over your pussy, edging you until you <i>beg</i> me to let you come. And then, <i>I won''t.</i>"'
+			'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently while softly running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide and she glances to the side, as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
+			'"Then, I''d sit you up so your ass is nice and high," you continue. "And then I''d <i>spank you within an inch of your life.</i>" You keep your easy tone, but give Albina a hard stare and her breath hitches. "I''d keep going until your ass is red and swollen. Let my fingers trail over your pussy, edging you until you <i>beg</i> me to let you cum. And then, <i>I won''t.</i>"'
 			*nl
 			'Albina''s face flushes red and she swallows reflexively. Looking down her body, you see her nipples have gone stiff and her thighs are practically soaked with juice.'
 			'"That..." she gulps. "Would be a pretty good way of doing it..."'
@@ -161,45 +161,51 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'I''d sit on your face':
+		act 'I''d sit on your face':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I''d sit on your face," you grin. "Bury your face in my pussy. Force you to lick your way out or drown."'
 			'"Well..." she smiles back. "My head is already here... You could... you know... Just throw one leg over and see what happens..."'
-			act'Is that an invitation?':
+			act 'Is that an invitation?':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Is that an invitation?" you ask.'
 				'"Come and find out," she whispers.'
 				
 			end
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Force you between my legs':
+		act 'Force you between my legs':
 			cla & *nl
-			
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			'"I''d shove your face into my crotch before wrapping my legs around your head and holding you as tight as a vice." You softly stroke her hair before leaning in and whispering in her ear. "I''d keep squeezing until you make me cum all over your pretty face..."'
+			'"Well..." she smiles back. "My head is already here... You could... you know... Grab me by the hair and see what happens..."'
+			act 'Is that an invitation?':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Is that an invitation?" you ask.'
+				'"Come and find out," she whispers.'
+				
+			end
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Grab you by the hair and fuck your ass':
+		act 'Grab you by the hair and fuck your ass':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Well, first thing I would get a nice, <i>big</i>, strapon," you smirk. Albina bites her lip, unconsciously rubbing her thighs together while she waits for your next words. "And then I''d grab you by the hair, nice and tight, and then I''d shove it right up your ass!"'
-			'"<i>Fuck!</i> That''s good!" Albina moans, her hand snaking between her legs and shamelessly rubbing her pussy. "Have you been watching me and Lazar or something? That''s <i>just</i> how I like it," she says, a twinkle in her eye, her fingers coming back up wet and sticky. She maintains eye contact as she runs her tongue across them, licking up her own juices.'
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			'"<i>Fuck!</i> That''s good!" Albina moans, her hand snaking between her legs and shamelessly rubbing her pussy. "Have you been watching me and Lazar or something? That''s <i>just</i> how I like it," she says, a twinkle in her eye as her fingers come back up wet and sticky. She maintains eye contact as she runs her tongue across them, licking up her own juices.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Tie you down':
+		act 'Tie you down':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I''d get some rope and tie you to your own bed," you grin. "And then... I think I''d do whatever I want to you."'
-			'You let imagination take over for you and it seems to work. Albina''s cheeks immediately flush and her breath grows heavy. Her nipples harden and down below, her thighs rub together, moisture glistening between them.'
+			'You let her imagination take over for you and it seems to work. Albina''s cheeks immediately flush and her breath grows heavy. Her nipples harden and down below, her thighs rub together, moisture glistening between them.'
 			'"That," she gulps. "Sounds like a pretty good way of doing it..."'
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
 		
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 4:
-		!!'"How often do you masturbate Sveta? Do you have any dildos? Ever double penetrated yourself with them? Ever wanted to try it?"'
 		'"How often do you masturbate <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Albina asks loudly and without even a shred of shame or decency.'
-		act'Embarassed':
+		act 'Embarrassed':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Albina! That''s..."'
 			'Suddenly you can''t look at her anymore and your face grows hot for reasons you try to rationalize is just the wine.'
@@ -207,23 +213,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			'You continue to try and elude her responses, though she grows increasingly bold and entertained in her teasing questions about you.'
 		end
 		if stat['mast'] = 0:
-			act'Never done it':
+			act 'Never done it':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"I don''t," you say taking another sip of wine.'
-				'"<i>What?!</i>" Albina sits up suddenly, causing you to curse as it makes some wine slosh out of the glass onto your chest. "Bull<i>shit</i>. Everyone masturbates."'
+				'"I don''t," you reply before taking another sip of wine.'
+				'"<i>What?!</i>" Albina sits up suddenly, causing you to curse as it makes some wine slosh out of the glass onto your chest. "Bull<i>shit</i>. Everyone masturbates!"'
 				if stat['sex'] > 0:
-					act'I fuck boys instead':
+					act 'I fuck boys instead':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"I prefer to let cock take care of my needs," you say, taking another sip with a smirk. Albina returns it immediately with a sly grin.'
 						'"Oh. Well, I guess if you''re just gonna slut it up instead..."'
-						gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 					end
 					
-					act'I fuck girls instead':
+					act 'I fuck girls instead':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"I don''t need to masturbate because I let other girls take care of that for me instead," you say, taking another sip with a mischievous twinkle in your eye. Albina returns it immediately with a sly grin.'
 						'"Oh. Well, I guess if you''re just gonna slut it up instead..."'
-						gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -238,142 +244,142 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 		if albina['commando_know'] = 0:gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 		'"So, you really don''t wear panties?" Albina slurs, turning her head toward your pussy. "Like, ever?"'
 		if trait['commando_lvl'] = 3:
-			act'Only when I have to':
+			act 'Only when I have to':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Only when I have to," you say, wrinkling your nose in annoyance. "Sometimes you just can''t get away with it."'
 				'"Like when?" she asks curiously.'
-				act'School':
+				act 'School':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At school," you sigh tiredly. "If I don''t, all the teachers will look up my skirt during class."'
-					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs. The women too? Whad about Ms. Braakman??"'
+					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs, but the women too? Whad about Ms. Braakman??"'
 					'"Especially her!" you say, sending you both into fits of laughter.'
-					gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
 				
-				act'Disco':
+				act 'Disco':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At the disco," you sigh tiredly. "Everyone will think I''m a slut if they see me flash puss on the dance floor."'
 					'"That''s why I wear thongs," Albina smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
-					act'Maybe I should switch':
+					act 'Maybe I should switch':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"Maybe I should buy some thongs," you mumble. "I''d rather not wear anything at all, but''s better than full shorts I guess."'
 						'"Yeah... Lemme see dat ass..."'
-						'"Albina. I already don''t wear panties. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
-						'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "... fuck, what were we talking about?"'
-						gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+						'"Albina! I already don''t wear panties. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
+						'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "... Fuck, what were we talking about?"'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 					end
 					
-					act'That''s why I wear pants':
+					act 'That''s why I wear pants':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"That''s why I wear <i>pants</i>," you retort. "No one can tell you''re going commando when you''re wearing pants."'
 						'"But don''t all commandos wear pants?"'
 						'Albina narrows her eyes and looks up at you, while you stare down at her.'
 						'"I... shuddup!"'
-						gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 			
-			act'Nope, never':
+			act 'Nope, never':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Nope!" you say, popping the P with your lips. "Neverrrrrr."'
 				'"Doesn''t your pussy get cold?"'
 				'"Nyeh," you shrug. "You get used to it. After a while it''s weirder <i>not</i> to feel the breeze."'
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
-						
-			act'I hate them':
+			
+			act 'I hate them':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Neverrr!" you say, wrinkling your nose. "I <i>hate</i> wearing them!"'
 				'"Doesn''t your pussy get itchy when you wear pants?" she asks back.'
 				'"My pussy is tough as nails!" you proclaim proudly. "My pussy doesn''t need no pussy soft panties to protect it!"'
 				'"What?" Albina looks confused. "That doesn''t make any sense at all..."'
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		elseif trait['commando_lvl'] > 0:
-			act'I just forget sometimes':
+			act 'I just forget sometimes':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Not <i>never</i>," you slur. "I just...  forget to put them on sometimes..."'
-				'"Ha! Slut!" she shouts, taking another slurp of her wine.'
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				'"Ha! Slut!" she shouts before taking another slurp of her wine.'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
 			
-			act'Rarely':
+			act 'Rarely':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Rarely," you mumble.'
 				'"Like when?" she asks curiously.'
-				act'School':
+				act 'School':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At school," you sigh tiredly. "If I don''t, all the teachers will look up my skirt during class."'
-					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs. The women too? Whad about Ms. Braakman??"'
+					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs, but the women too? Whad about Ms. Braakman??"'
 					'"Especially her!" you say, sending you both into fits of laughter.'
-					gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
 				
-				act'Disco':
+				act 'Disco':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At the disco," you sigh tiredly. "Everyone will think I''m a slut if they see me flash puss on the dance floor."'
 					'"That''s why I wear thongs," Albina smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
-					act'Maybe I should switch':
+					act 'Maybe I should switch':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"Maybe I should switch," you mumble. "That sounds like a good in between."'
 						'"Yeah... Lemme see dat ass..."'
-						'"Albina. I''m already commando most days. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
-						'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "... fuck, what were we talking about?"'
-						gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+						'"Albina! I''m already commando most days. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
+						'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "... Fuck, what were we talking about?"'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 					end
 					
-					act'That''s why I wear pants':
+					act 'That''s why I wear pants':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"That''s why I wear <i>pants</i>," you retort. "No one can tell you''re going commando when you''re wearing pants."'
 						'"But don''t all commandos wear pants?"'
 						'Albina narrows her eyes and looks up at you, while you stare down at her.'
 						'"I... shuddup!"'
-						gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 			
 			if trait['commando_lvl'] = 1:
-				act'Only with skirts':
+				act 'Only with skirts':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"Only when I''m wearing skirts," you say. "My pussy gets itchy when it rubs against my pants."'
 					'"So you''re saying you just like potentially getting caught."'
 					'"No! That''s not what I sai-"'
-					'"Yeah yeah, whaever you shay," Albina says, slurping up another gulp of wine. "Skirts only? Someone wants to show off the goods."'
+					'"Yeah yeah, whaever you shay," Albina says while slurping up another gulp of wine. "Skirts only? Someone wants to show off the goods."'
 					'"Bitch," you glare.'
 					'"Slut," she grins back.'
-					gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 				end
 			end
 		else
 			albina['commando_know'] = 0
-			act'Nope, never':
+			act 'Nope, never':
 				cla & *nl
 				
 				
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			end
 			
-			act'I hate them':
+			act 'I hate them':
 				cla & *nl
 				
 				
-				gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 			
 			end
 			
 		end
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 8:
 		'"Do you think I would make a good stripper?" Albina asks.'
-		act'Probably':
+		act 'Probably':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Probably," you mumble back. "You can dance and love shoving your ash in peopl''sh faces. Primo stripper qualities. Why do you ask?"'
 			'"Was thinking about how to pay for uni. Mama could probably do it for me, but what if I want some extra cash on the side?"'
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'Too bitchy':
+		act 'Too bitchy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Nah." You wave your glass dismissively. "Too bitchy."'
 			'"Bitchy?!" she sputters.'
@@ -383,18 +389,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			'"... fuck, you''re right."'
 			'"See? Bitchy," you smile, smuggly sipping your wine.'
 			'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back, taking a much bigger gulp.'
-			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
-	act'Call her a butt slut':
+	act 'Call her a butt slut':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"You''re such a butt slut Albina," you remark, taking another sip from your glass.'
 		'"Fuck yeah, I am. And I <i>love</i> being one," she grins back, almost spilling her wine all over her face when you both cackle with uncontrollable laughter.'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
 	
 	act'Spit or swallow?':
@@ -402,61 +408,61 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"So, spit or swallow?" you ask, looking down at Albina.'
 		'"Swallow, duh."'
-		act'Ew, gross':
+		act 'Ew, gross':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Ewww!" You wrinkle your nose in disgust. "Thad''s fucking gross! I can''t believe you do that!"'
 			'"Waht the fuck else am I suppozed do?" she asks, sounding confused.'
 			'"Just spit it out!"'
 			'"The fuck are you talking about?" The incredulous look Albina gives you is like you just said one plus one equals five. "If he cums in your mouth, you swallow."'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 		end
 		
-		act'Me too':
+		act 'Me too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Me too," you mumble. "Spitting is quitting."'
 			'"Damn straight," Albina says, throwing up her hand and high fiving you.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 		end
 		if trt_cumeater > 0:
-			act'I love the taste':
+			act 'I love the taste':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"Me too," you smile. "I love the way it feels, going down my throat. Taste is pretty good too."'
-				'"What the fuck?" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?"'
+				'"Me too," you smile. "I love the way it feels going down my throat. Taste is pretty good too."'
+				'"What the fuck?" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?!"'
 				'"Yeah, it''s why I swallow. You don''t like it?"'
 				'"No! It fuckin'' tastes like shit!"'
 				'"Then why do you do it?"'
 				'"Cuz you''re supposed to? If he cums in my mouth, I can''t spit it out," she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
-				act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Your mom is is very pretty':
+	act 'Your mom is very pretty':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'With Albina right on your lap, you find your thoughts drifting to her mother. Her hair, her facial structure, she really is her mother''s daughter. It''s easy to tell where she got her good looks from.'
 		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you suddenly blurt out, your mouth autocompleting your thought before it actually passes through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
 		'"Fucking shit, I <i>knowwwwwwww</i>," Albina whines beneath you. "I gots ass for days, but she''s gots tits to match. Big fucking bootyful bounshy tits that give her cleavage even in a motherfucking t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair..."'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
 	
 	act'':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
 	
 	act'':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
-	act'It''s so itchy':
+	act 'It''s so itchy':
 		cla & *nl
 		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
 		'"I''s sho itchy," you mumble around the glass.'
@@ -468,20 +474,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
 		'"I''s sho ugly," you mumble around the glass. "Don''t they know how unfashionable bush is?"'
-		'"I don''t care about shit like that," Albina shakes her head. She gets quiet for a bit, stares down into her glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		'"I don''t care about shit like that," Albina shakes her head. She gets quiet for a bit and stares down into her glass while swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act'Easy maintanence':
+	act 'Easy maintanence':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Mmmm," you hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
 		'"I''s defini''ly eashier tha ''ay," you mumble around the glass. "I have no patience for styling down there. Easier to shuck it all off. Don''t know why they all don''t do the same."'
 		'"Shaving is a pretty annoying chore," she agrees. "But that''s not what I mean. It''s just so <i>fucking itchy!</i>"'
-		'Albina scowls, looking between her legs, seemingly disgusted at the mere thought of hair growing between them.'
+		'Albina scowls while looking between her legs, seemingly disgusted at the mere thought of hair growing between them.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act'Shrug':
+	act 'Shrug':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Eh," you shrug, taking another sip of wine.'
 		'"''ey can ''o wha''e''er ''ey ''ant down ''ere," you mumble around the glass. "It''s their pussy. I just shave cause I like it that way."'
@@ -491,25 +497,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer2':
-	act'I''m lazy':
+	act 'I''m lazy':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Bleh," you shrug. "I''m lazy. I''ll take care of it... eventually..." You look down at Albina, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		'"Bleh," you shrug. "I''m lazy. I''ll take care of it... eventually..." You look down at Albina, taking another sip of your wine. She just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act'Didn''t feel like it':
+	act 'Didn''t feel like it':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Bleh," you shrug. "Just didn''t feel like it today. I''l shave it off tomorrow," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		'"Bleh," you shrug. "Just didn''t feel like it today. I''l shave it off tomorrow," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. She just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act'I was in a rush':
+	act 'I was in a rush':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I was running late for something," you say, shrugging. "I''ll take care of it later." you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		'"I was running late for something," you say, shrugging. "I''ll take care of it later..." you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act'I''m growing it out':
+	act 'I''m growing it out':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Actually I''ve been growing it out," you say, taking another sip of your wine. "I thought I might try having some bush for a change." Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
@@ -518,7 +524,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer5':
 	if pubestyle = 0 or pubestyle = 10:
-		act'I''m lazy':
+		act 'I''m lazy':
 			cla & *nl
 			if pubestyle = 10:
 				'"Bleh," you shrug. "I''m just lazy. Shaving is so much work. Best I can do is trim it now and then when it starts to get out of control," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
@@ -528,20 +534,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer5':
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 		end
 		
-		act'I like it this way':
+		act 'I like it this way':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I like it this way," you say, shrugging. "Easy to maintain, plus I think I look pretty good with a rug. Don''t you?" you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 		end
 	elseif (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 8) or pubestyle >= 12:
-		act'I like it this way':
+		act 'I like it this way':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I like it this way," you protest. "I got it styled just the way I like it. Don''t you think it''s cute?" you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Maybe I should try shaving':
+	act 'Maybe I should try shaving':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Hmmm, you might have a point," you muse. "You look pretty sexy all clean shaven down there. Maybe I should try it some time," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
@@ -549,13 +555,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer5':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer6':
-	act'I''m lazy':
+	act 'I''m lazy':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Bleh," you say, shrugging. "I''m just lazy. Yeah, sometimes it itches but whenever I think of all the work I''d have to do to shave it I''m just like <i>ughhhhhhhh</i>," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
 	end
 	
-	act'Doesn''t bother me':
+	act 'Doesn''t bother me':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Doesn''t really bother me," you say, shrugging. "Why should I care? Fashion?" you chuckle, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'

+ 4 - 0
locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -301,6 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							money -= 4500
 							minut += 60
 							glass = 2
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You buy a new, more stylish pair of glasses.'
 
@@ -313,6 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							karta -= 4500
 							minut += 60
 							glass = 2
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You buy a new, more stylish pair of glasses.'
 
@@ -334,6 +336,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							minut += 60
 							blizoruk = 0
 							glass = 0
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You undergo laser eye surgery. Your eyesight is much better now.'
 							act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
@@ -346,6 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							minut += 60
 							blizoruk = 0
 							glass = 0
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You undergo laser eye surgery. Your eyesight is much better now.'
 							act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -337,7 +337,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 	menu_off = 0
 	killvar '$locclass'
 	*clr & cla
-	gs 'family'
 	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if month > 3 and month < 11:
@@ -406,6 +405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 		'As you pass by the sports field, you notice that most of the jocks have gathered around the <a href="exec: gt ''bbgameout'', ''start''">basketball court</a>.'
 	end
 
+	gs 'family'
 	if chrisloc = 16: 'Christina and Lina are here, stretching for the race coming up.'
 end
 

+ 17 - 16
locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -61,10 +61,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
-			'You blush. "No... no I havn''t."'
-			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
+			'You blush. "No... no I haven''t."'
+			'He confidently continues. "Are you saying I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
 			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar smirks, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
 			'You glance around, waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'You laugh. "You wish... Are any of the girls dumb enough to fall for that?"'
 			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it''s a simple fact. You don''t have to hide it." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit that he has a great body. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
 			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe you''re too drunk to find the stairwell?" Lazar asks with a laugh, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
 			'You sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'"Looks like the loser is lost." someone comments as you approach.' 
 			'"Nah, I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and, honestly, who can blame them?" Lazar replies, which gets the group laughing so hard you know it''s pointless to even try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -123,15 +123,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
 			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. He starts talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'You approach him and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
 			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
@@ -560,25 +560,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 2:
 			if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
-				'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
+				'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about the sports you enjoy and which of the jocks have caught your attention lately, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 			elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 				'Albina scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
 			else
 				'Albina sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 3:
-			if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
+			if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
+				'"You know you remind me of a character from LOL?" you tell her and she looks at you in confusion.'
+				'"League of Legends? The online strategy game?" you continue and she looks even more confused.'
+				'Before you can explain, she puts a finger against your lips and shushes you. "I don''t play any of that dumb geeky shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I only play fighting games like Tekken and Mortal Kombat. It helps me relax when people are... annoying me."'
+				'Catching her drift, you change the subject to something you think she''ll be more interested in.'
+			elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 				'Albina rolls her eyes and crosses her arms. "This isn''t your stop, <<$pcs_firstname>>. The train to Geeksville terminates over there." She motions towards the door to the classroom that the nerds hang out in. "So get back on board and piss off!"'
 			else
 				'Albina sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 4:
-			if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-				'Albina recoils back from you with a look of utter contempt on her face. "What the hell do <i>you</i> want? Go find the other knuckle brained morons. The zoo is over there." She motions towards the stairway that the gopniks usually hang out in before returning to her phone and ignoring you.'
-			else
-				'Albina stares at you, seemingly in confusion. "Uhh, can I help you?"
-				"I just wanted to talk is all," you reply and she sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. It''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with a conversation she doesn''t actually care about.'
-			end
+			'Albina glares at you with a look of utter contempt on her face. "What the hell do you want? Go find the other knuckle brained morons. The zoo is over there." She motions towards the stairway that the gopniks usually hang out in before returning to her phone and ignoring you.'
+			'"Fucking stuck up rich bitch..." you mutter as you walk away, but she doesn''t hear you.'
 		else
 			'Albina is on her phone as you approach. She looks up at you before returning her attention to her phone and ignoring you. After a few seconds, she looks up at you again and stares in confusion. "What do you want loser?" She then laughs. "Wait, you want to talk to <i>me</i>? As if that will ever happen! Fuck off and go hang out with the other losers where you belong." She shoos you away with a motion of her hand before going back to her phone.'
 		end

+ 104 - 110
locations/gschool_lessons1.qsrc

@@ -7,9 +7,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Yenotin enters the classroom, and just as he is about to close the door, one of your classmates grabs the door from outside the room. Mr. Yenotin turns to the tardy student and informs them that they are late and that next time he will have to report them. This instruction is followed by an awkward wink and the student is allowed in to find a seat.  All the students know that he never reports the tardy students. As everyone settles in, Mr. Yenotin does a roll call and then opens a grammar book, telling you to open your textbooks to where you left off last lesson.'
-	*nl
-	'After a while, he tells the class to do the assignments on the last page of the chapter. He starts walking up and down the classroom, mostly talking to the students about off topic things like how their time off was often disrupting them from thier focus. He''s always trying to impress the students with his endeavors, but no one really believes what he says because most of it sounds exaggerated or simply not possible. When someone has a real question he''s quick to answer as fair as possible without being arrogant, no matter what kind of question it is.'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Yenotin enters the classroom. Just as he''s about to close the door, one of your classmates grabs the door from outside the room. Mr. Yenotin turns to the tardy student and informs them that they are late and that next time he will have to report them. This instruction is followed by an awkward wink and the student is allowed in to find a seat. Everyone knows that he never reports the tardy students. As everyone settles in, Mr. Yenotin does a roll call before opening a grammar book, telling you to open your textbooks to where you left off last lesson.'
+	'After a while, he tells the class to do the assignments on the last page of the chapter as he starts walking up and down the classroom, mostly talking to the students about off topic things like how their time off was often disrupting them from their focus. He''s always trying to impress the students with his endeavors, but no one really believes what he says because most of it sounds exaggerated or simply not possible. When someone has a real question he''s quick to answer as fair as possible without being arrogant, no matter what kind of question it is.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -42,10 +41,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mr. Yenotin''s lecture has brought the whole class to inattention, most of your classmates are paying more attention to the clock than to the lesson.'
-		'All of a sudden you hear a loud bang, making the whole class jump up from their chairs.'
-		'Like a well trained unit, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Lesco on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Lesco struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
-		'Mr. Yenotin approaches Lesco, you''re certain he''ll get a scolding, but to your dismay Mr. Yenotin starts joking with Lesco instead. He shares an embarrassing story about how the same thing happened to him once, except there were no phones in his time. No one is buying his story and instead are focusing their attention on the gopniks. They''re laughing loudly, wondering what Lesco was doing when he fell.'
+		'Mr. Yenotin''s lecture has brought the whole class to inattention. Most of your classmates are paying more attention to the clock than to the lesson when you suddenly hear a loud bang, making the whole class jump up from their chairs.'
+		'Like a well trained unit, everyone in the room turns to see Lesco on the floor, his desk overturned as his cellphone slides across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Lesco struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+		'Mr. Yenotin approaches Lesco and you''re certain he''ll get a scolding, but to your dismay Mr. Yenotin starts joking with Lesco instead. He shares an embarrassing story about how the same thing happened to him once, except there were no phones in his time. No one is buying his story and are instead focusing their attention on the gopniks. They''re laughing loudly, wondering what Lesco was doing when he fell.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 		
 		act 'Draw dick in margin':
@@ -57,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Svyatoslav(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Svyatoslav(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -66,11 +64,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Svyatoslav glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you when Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Svyatoslav glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you when Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Svyatoslav (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Svyatoslav (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -84,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to the class. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to the class. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -103,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk.  You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to the class. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk.  You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to the class. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -120,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while still sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of the rest either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'While Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while still sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -137,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you turn to face the class like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you turn to face the class like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -182,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -207,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -231,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -243,14 +241,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		act 'Tease Svyatoslav':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits, threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Svyatoslav glances around, then leans over a bit to say. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Sonia, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits, threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Svyatoslav glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Sonia, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Sonia''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -258,24 +256,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Sonia had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Sonia had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden sharply from the excitement. Svyatoslav stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden sharply from the excitement as Svyatoslav stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for the lesson to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				end
@@ -285,14 +283,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties to Svyatoslav, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little to show off a glimpse of your panties to Svyatoslav, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 							end
 						else
@@ -303,18 +301,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 							npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up so your panties are exposed and Svyatoslav grins wide. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up so your panties are exposed and Svyatoslav grins wide. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just as you are about to cover up, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, give me a peek at that pussy." Svyatoslav whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just as you''re about to cover up, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, give me a peek at that pussy..." he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few moments, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few moments, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 									end
 								else
@@ -327,11 +325,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Then let go and I will show you." you say with a sly smile. He pauses for a moment, but then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
+									'"Then let go and I''ll show you..." you say with a sly smile. He pauses for a second, but then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. You find the remainder of class to be a little less boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. You find the remainder of the class to be a little less boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 									end
 								end
@@ -347,11 +345,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are mostly facing him as you sit in your seat sideways and quickly pull up your skirt, flashing your pan'
+						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re facing him as you sit in your seat sideways and quickly pull up your skirt, exposing your pussy.'
 						act 'Put your pussy away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-							'After a couple of moments you pull your panties back in place, close your legs, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crest fallen obviously hoping for it to last longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your top. This of course keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+							'After a few seconds, you pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of the class from being boring.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					end
@@ -370,9 +368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so you decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
-					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending down to pick them up, you realize some of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -387,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lesson is dragging on and you find yourself drifting off constantly. All of a sudden you hear Mr. Yenotin clapping and without any hesitation, you also begin clapping. It doesn''t take long time before you realize that you''re the only one clapping. You feel your cheeks getting warm as you start blushing.'
+			'Today''s lesson is dragging on and you find yourself drifting off constantly. You suddenly hear Mr. Yenotin clapping and without any hesitation, you also begin clapping. It doesn''t take long for you to realize that you''re the only one clapping and you feel your cheeks getting warm as you start blushing.'
 			'"Welcome back Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Now, please pay attention. You don''t want to miss today''s topic since it''s going to be on the exam."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -419,7 +417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 							grupvalue[3] -=1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 							'"It''s not like I''m the one interrupting the lesson. That would be you." you answer brashly, feeling pretty confident.'
-							'Mr. Yenotin walks back to the front of the class, but your smug smile drops when he opens the door. "OK <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''ve had your fun. Now get to the principal''s office!"'
+							'Mr. Yenotin walks back to the front of the class, but your smug smile drops when he opens the door. "Okay <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''ve had your fun. Now get to the principal''s office!"'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -447,8 +445,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		elseif daydream = 3:
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr. Yenotin is talking about the history of the Russian language and it''s dragging on. You nod off from time to time and you''re having a hard time keeping awake.'
-			'All of a sudden, you find yourself in the Middle Ages walking around in a castle. You''re look around and see soldiers, clergymen and farmers going about their lives. In one corner, you see a girl your age waving you over to her. You happily run over, but just as you''re about to reach her, a clergyman stops you and speaks to you in a language you can''t seem to understand.'
+			'Mr. Yenotin is talking about the history of the Russian language and it''s dragging on. You nod off from time to time and you''re having a hard time staying awake.'
+			'All of a sudden, you find yourself in the Middle Ages walking around in a castle. You look around and see soldiers, clergymen and farmers going about their lives. In one corner, you see a girl your age waving you over to her. You happily run over, but just as you''re about to reach her, a clergyman stops you and speaks to you in a language you can''t seem to understand.'
 			'You''re panicking and try to answer back, but he doesn''t seem to understand you and is getting more and more agitated as time goes on. By now, there''s quite a crowd gathered that are listening to what the clergyman is saying. He''s pointing at you and talking angrily. Two soldiers appear through the crowd of people and the man starts explaining something. They turn to you, once again speaking in the strange language.'
 			*nl
 			'You look at them with a pleading look, trying to tell them that you don''t belong here, but they grab you by the arms and forcefully drag you away while you scream. They carry you over to a pillory and strip you of all your clothes before they lock you in.'
@@ -463,11 +461,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			'"I''m sorry Mr. Yenotin, I''ll be quiet." you reply, but it''s too late. Mr. Yenotin is insisting that you walk up to the chalkboard and carry on with the lesson instead. You''re now standing in front of the class, blushing as he sits down in your seat.'
 			*nl
 			'"Well? We''re waiting. Tell us all about grammar." he pushes on. You take a deep breath, but as you''re about to speak, your voice cracks and the whole class starts laughing.'
-			'You are wondering what to do when the bell suddenly rings, startling you awake from your nightmare.'
+			'You''re wondering what to do when the bell suddenly rings, startling you awake from your nightmare.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
@@ -502,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						grupvalue[3] += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takephone.jpg"></center>'
 						'You decide it''s not worth it and silently hand your phone over to him.'
-						'He walks back to the front of the class and tosses your phone in a drawer in his desk. "You can have it back after class <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
+						'He walks back to the front of the class and tosses your phone in a drawer in his desk. "You can have it back after class, <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -565,7 +563,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/geography.jpg"></center>'
 	openpage = rand(1,250)
 	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Sokoloff sitting by her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one under her watchful eye. Some of them get a friendly smile while others get a stern look.'
-	*nl
 	'Without wasting any time, she sternly tells the class to open their textbooks. "I hope you have all done your homework." Mrs. Sokoloff is a no nonsense teacher. She expects discipline and hard work and the ones able to abide by her rules are treated very kindly.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
@@ -599,8 +596,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of class.'
-		'That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of class. That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
 		'Without any hesitation, Mrs. Sokoloff starts shouting at Vitek, who is fast asleep. Her eyes sharpen as she approaches his desk. She slams her hand on his desk while Vitek struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return to his senses.'
 		'Mrs. Sokoloff scowls at him, and is about to offer a few stern words when the bell rings. He''ll likely get a talking to, but as class is over, you won''t get to listen in. One of the girls whispers that Vitek is in deep trouble now.'
 		
@@ -615,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -624,11 +620,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 			
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -642,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -661,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -678,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up. '
+					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -695,7 +691,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -707,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -739,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -764,7 +760,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				else
@@ -801,13 +797,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get Vitek''s attention by smiling at him when he looks your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Vitek glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Stasya, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'Vitek glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Stasya, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Stasya''s suggestion.':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Stasya leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Stasya leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -815,24 +811,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Vitek frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Stasya had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Vitek frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Stasya had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden from the excitement. Vitek stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden from the excitement as Vitek stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Stasya to giggle and Vitek to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they missed something. You ignore their looks, Vitek''s stare and Stasya''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Stasya to giggle and Vitek to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they missed something. You ignore their looks, Vitek''s stare and Stasya''s giggles and wait for the lesson to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				end
@@ -843,14 +839,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Vitek so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little to Vitek, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Vitek so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Vitek, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 							end
 						else
@@ -861,18 +857,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 							npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. Vitek grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. Vitek grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Vitek whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 									end
 								else
@@ -885,11 +881,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vitek and anyone else who happens to look your way. You can see the bulge growing in Vitek''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses for second, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vitek and anyone else who happens to look your way. You can see the bulge growing in Vitek''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Vitek looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class.  The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal.  The evidence is currently soaking your panties and poking through your top. The remainder of class is a little less boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Vitek looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. The remainder of class is a little less boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 									end
 								end
@@ -911,9 +907,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending down to pick them up, you realize some of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1092,7 +1088,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 	openpage = rand(1,250)
 	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Sokoloff sitting by her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one under her watchful eye. Some of the students get a friendly smile while others get a stern look.'
-	*nl
 	'Without wasting time, she sternly tells the class to open their textbooks. "I hope you all have done your homework." Mrs. Sokoloff is a no nonsense teacher. She expects discipline and hard work and the ones able to abide by her rules are treated very kindly.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
@@ -1126,8 +1121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of the class.'
-		'That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of the class. That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
 		'Without any hesitation, Mrs. Sokoloff starts shouting at Radomir, who''s fast asleep. Her eyes sharpen as she approaches his desk. She slams her hand on his desk while Radomir struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return to his senses.'
 		'Mrs. Sokoloff scowls at him, and is about to offer a few stern words when the bell rings. He''ll likely get a talking to, but as class is over, you won''t get to listen in. One of the girls whipsers that Radomir is in deep trouble now.'
 		
@@ -1142,7 +1136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1151,11 +1145,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1169,7 +1163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1188,7 +1182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1205,7 +1199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the students either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the students either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1222,19 +1216,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but instead you pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Get up and flash panties (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		end
-			
+		
 		act 'Take selfie':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -1327,14 +1321,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		act 'Tease Roman':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Roman''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Roman glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Lera, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Roman''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Roman glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Lera, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Lera''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Lera leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Lera leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1342,24 +1336,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Roman frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Lera had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Roman frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Lera had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Roman stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Roman stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Lera to giggle and Roman to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they just missed something. You ignore their looks, Roman''s stare and Lera''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Lera to giggle and Roman to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they just missed something. You ignore their looks, Roman''s stare and Lera''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1370,14 +1364,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Roman so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Roman so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1388,18 +1382,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 							npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Roman, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Roman, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Roman whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 									end
 								else
@@ -1412,11 +1406,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Roman looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal.  The evidence is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Roman looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1439,8 +1433,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1495,7 +1489,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about since you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mrs. Sokoloff call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mrs. Sokoloff scolds you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mrs. Sokoloff scolds you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
@@ -1505,7 +1499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. Mrs. Sokoloff is droning on about the Tsar''s family and their life.'
 			'You close your eyes as you fantasize about living at that time as a noble. You''re in a large room in your underwear while an entourage of women and girls run around presenting a number of dresses for you to wear to the party.'
 			'You''re having a hard time picking out a specific dress as you really want to impress a certain duke. You turn to your head maiden with a dejected sigh. "So many choices, what should I wear?"'
-			'"The lady will look fabulous in whatever she chooses." the head maiden answers.'
+			'"The lady will look fabulous in whatever she chooses," the head maiden answers.'
 			'As you''re about to pick out a dress, you suddenly jolt awake while blurting out your choice. The person sitting closest to you looks at you confused, but luckily no one else hears what you said.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
@@ -1513,12 +1507,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. Mrs. Sokoloff is talking about a grand female leader from the Middle Ages. You''re finding her story pretty boring and keep dozing off.'
 			'All of a sudden, you find yourself on a battlefield riding a horse. You seem to be wearing a heavy suit of armor and you''re riding up and down a flank as you''re trying to amass the troops for an attack.'
-			'You are just about to give a grandiose speech when everything goes quiet as you hear church bells ringing loudly in the distance.'
+			'You''re just about to give a grandiose speech when everything goes quiet as you hear church bells ringing loudly in the distance.'
 			'You twitch in your seat upon hearing the class bell ringing.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'

+ 116 - 117
locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,1)
 				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
-				if grupTipe=3:
+				if grupTipe= 3:
 					'Mr. Ivanov nods approvingly. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again to you, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel like you learned a lot, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'
 				else
 					'Mr. Ivanov audibly sighs. "Why are you unable to grasp this? I know you''re not the smartest student, but this is really very simple. Even a small child should be able to grasp it." He goes on to explain the part you asked about again, but he does so in a completely belittling manner.'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -70,12 +70,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-				'Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+				'Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone in looking. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone in looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the others students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem just stares with his mouth wide open, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the others students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem just stares with his mouth wide open, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -251,14 +251,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Tease Vasily':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Vasily''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have for breasts. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Vasily glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Sonia who watched it all gets your attention.'
+			'You get Vasily''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Vasily glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Sonia, who watched it all gets your attention.'
 			act 'Sonia''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -272,17 +272,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Vasily stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Vasily stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Vasily to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Vasily''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Vasily to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Vasily''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 					end
 				end
@@ -292,14 +292,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Vasily so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties to Vasily, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Vasily so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Vasily, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 							end
 						else
@@ -310,18 +310,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Vasily whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 									end
 								else
@@ -334,11 +334,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell himw ith a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Vasily looks crest fallen obviously hoping for it to last longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class but the thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of class again. Vasily looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class but the thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 									end
 								end
@@ -359,9 +359,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.  At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.'  
-					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.'  
+					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -370,13 +370,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'Today''s lessons doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice Mr. Ivanov has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. This is apparently the third time he has asked; you missed the first two while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you.'
-			if grupTipe=3:
+			if grupTipe= 3:
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam."'
 			else
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, if you don''t want to listen and learn, then I suggest you stop coming to class. Now stop wasting my time and pay attention!"'
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				'You roll your eyes at him when he turns his back and sit through the rest of the lesson in silence. Despite your best efforts, you struggle to pay attention and don''t learn anything.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
-			act'Try to focus on the lesson':
+			act 'Try to focus on the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'comp', pcs_intel
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,2)
 				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-				'You don''t want to get in trouble so you straighten up in your chair. "Sorry." Mr. Ivanov gives you one final look and then goes back to teaching the class, you do your best to pay attention for the rest of class.'
+				'You don''t want to get in trouble so you straighten up in your chair and apologize. Mr. Ivanov gives you one final look before he goes back to teaching the class as you do your best to pay attention.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] += 1
 					grupvalue[3] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Oh please do continue your super fascinating lesson. I don''t think there''s enough condescending arrogance in your voice though." you answer boldly.'
+					'"Oh please do continue your super fascinating lesson. I don''t think there''s enough condescending arrogance in your voice though," you answer boldly.'
 					'Some of your classmates burst into loud laughter while others are stunned into silence. Mr. Ivanov turns and gives the rest of class a hard look. "SILENCE!" he loudly booms before turning back to you.'
 					'"You think you''re being funny Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Well you''re taking your smart mouth to the principal right now."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			    'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 			    'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Ivanov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 			    *nl
-		        'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Ivanov tells you the correct answer. "Pathetic. I honestly wonder why you even bother coming to school at all if you can''t answer such a simple question. You''ll be flipping burgers after you graduate." he says in disgust.'
+		        'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Ivanov tells you the correct answer. "Pathetic. I honestly wonder why you even bother coming to school at all if you can''t answer such a simple question. You''ll be flipping burgers after you graduate." he says in disgust.'
 			    'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
@@ -537,11 +537,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'When Mr. Ivanov arrives at your desk, he sternly asks "I''m not going to ask twice <<$pcs_lastname>>. Hand it over!"'
 							'You give him a sly smile as you hand over your phone with the last picture you took still on the screen.'
 							if grupTipe = 3:
-								'He looks at the screen and shakes his head before stuffing your phone in his pocket. "You are better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." he says before returning to the front of the class and continuing his lesson.'
+								'He looks at the screen and shakes his head before stuffing your phone in his pocket. "You''re better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." he says before returning to the front of the class and continuing his lesson.'
 							else
-								'He looks at the screen and doesn''t react at first. He walks back to the front of the class, looks at the image a final time then puts the phone in his desk while shaking his head.'+iif(npc_rel['A69'] >+50, ' "You are better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." He then continues his lesson.', ' "I expected nothing less from you <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." He then continues his lesson.')
-!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I am commenting it out for now because I need to write the after school scene first.
-!!'He adds to you "Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
+								'He looks at the screen and doesn''t react at first. He walks back to the front of the class, looks at the image a final time then puts the phone in his desk while shaking his head.'+iif(npc_rel['A69'] >+50, ' "You''re better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." He then continues his lesson.', ' "I expected nothing less from you <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." He then continues his lesson.')
+								!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I''m commenting it out for now because I need to write the after school scene first.
+								!! if grupTipe ! 3:
+								!!'"Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
 							end
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 						end
@@ -560,8 +561,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'You deftly shove the phone in your bra, and smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on your teacher''s face.'
 							'You pretend it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, and use your cute voice as you tell him, "Is there a problem, Mr. Ivanov? Go ahead, take my phone if it''s not allowed." You thrust your chest forward and the outline of your phone is visible through the fabric.'
 							'Realizing he can''t retrieve your phone without causing any awkward situations, he returns to the front of the class in defeat. "I expected nothing less from you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." You pull your phone back out as he resumes his lesson, looking somewhat annoyed.'
-!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I am commenting it out for now because I need to write the afterschool scene first.
-!!'He adds to you "Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					elseif $braworntype ! 'none' and will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
@@ -632,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A5'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -641,11 +640,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -659,7 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -678,7 +677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -695,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -712,7 +711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -724,7 +723,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you  decided now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -756,7 +755,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -781,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 					end
 				else
@@ -804,7 +803,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -824,9 +823,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.  At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.'  
-					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.'  
+					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -835,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,6)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -874,8 +873,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone.'
-							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she is going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
+							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone."'
+							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she''s going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					else
@@ -899,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
@@ -1011,7 +1010,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 	chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classmusic.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great music is while you wait for class to start. You do have to commend the fact that he is always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
+	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great music is while you wait for class to start. He''s always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -1028,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/attention.jpg"></center>'
-			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artist.'
+			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artists.'
 			act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				instrmusic_exp += rand(0,1)
@@ -1061,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A6'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1070,11 +1069,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1088,7 +1087,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1107,7 +1106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1124,7 +1123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1141,7 +1140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1153,7 +1152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -1185,7 +1184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1210,7 +1209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1234,7 +1233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1246,14 +1245,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		act 'Tease Lavrenti':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Lavrenti''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have for breasts. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Lavrenti glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Katja, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Lavrenti''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Lavrenti glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Katja, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Katja''s suggestion.':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Katja leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Katja leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1261,24 +1260,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Katja had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Katja had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Lavrenti stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Lavrenti stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Katja to giggle and Lavrenti to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Lavrenti''s stare and Katja''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Katja to giggle and Lavrenti to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Lavrenti''s stare and Katja''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1289,14 +1288,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Lavrenti so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little to Lavrenti, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Lavrenti so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Lavrenti, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1307,18 +1306,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 							npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Lavrenti. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Lavrenti. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me your pussy." Lavrenti whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me your pussy," he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 									end
 								else
@@ -1331,11 +1330,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
+									'Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Lavrenti looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Lavrenti looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1358,8 +1357,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1368,7 +1367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -1410,8 +1409,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone." you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
-							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands, pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
+							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone!" you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
+							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands while pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1434,7 +1433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Vasilyev call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
@@ -1445,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1585,7 +1584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Lesco (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Lesco (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A5'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1594,11 +1593,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Lesco glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who continues to stare at you with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Lesco glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who continues to stare at you with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Lesco (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Lesco (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1612,7 +1611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your naked ass while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your naked ass while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1631,7 +1630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at you while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at you while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1648,7 +1647,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1665,7 +1664,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1676,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		act 'Take selfie':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				i = rand(1,classroom_clotot)
@@ -1698,7 +1697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					i = rand(1,classroom_titflash)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1718,7 +1717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 						i = rand(1,classroom_pussyflash)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1742,7 +1741,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1763,8 +1762,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1773,7 +1772,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -1811,8 +1810,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone.'
-							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she is going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
+							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone!"'
+							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she''s going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1836,7 +1835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
@@ -1853,7 +1852,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1949,7 +1948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arina_dream':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/arina/sex/dream/dream1.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk up to her desk, you notice the lighting is reddish and there is a Saint Andrew''s cross in front of the chalkboard, with a variety of sex toys scattered across her desk. She takes a seat on the edge of her desk. "Get down on your knees and lick my shoes clean."'
 	'"What?" You ask, shocked at her request.'
-	'"Lick my shoes clean or your punishment will be even worse." she sternly tells you. You can''t help yourself and so pick up her foot and start licking her shoes.'
+	'"Lick my shoes clean or your punishment will be even worse!" she sternly tells you. You can''t help yourself and so pick up her foot and start licking her shoes.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'BDSM', 3, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Further punishment':

+ 113 - 116
locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/classlit.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I want everyone quiet and in a seat!" Ms. Braakman demands as she finishes writing today''s lesson plan on the chalkboard. The room lets out a collective groan as they see the mountain of work they have to do today.'
-	'"She''s always piling on the work and expects everyone to have it finished by the end of class." you overhear a girl complain with a heavy sigh.'
-	'Clearing her throat, Ms. Braakman raises her voice to speak over the noise "The sooner everyone takes out their textbooks, the quicker we can get started. Who knows, maybe we''ll finish early and you''ll have some free time." Hearing this, the room settles down and soon the lesson begins.'
+	'"She''s always piling on the work and expects everyone to have it finished by the end of class!" you overhear a girl complain with a heavy sigh.'
+	'Clearing her throat, Ms. Braakman raises her voice to speak over the noise. "The sooner everyone takes out their textbooks, the quicker we can get started. Who knows, maybe we''ll finish early and you''ll have some free time." Hearing this, the room settles down and the lesson begins.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				elseif $boy = 'A140':
 					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms. Braakman glares at her. "Uh... what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms. Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A156':
-					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms. Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation with the gopnik since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms. Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, the gopnik closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
+					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms. Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms. Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, Arkadi closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A157':
-					'Roman scoffs. "Fuck that." he says nonchalantly. You can feel the tension growing as Ms. Braakman narrows her eyes and tells him again to read, only to be met with a taunting smile and silent defiance from the gopnik. After what feels like an eternity, Ms. Braakman chooses a different student and continues on with the lesson like nothing ever happened.'
+					'Roman scoffs. "Fuck that," he says nonchalantly. You can feel the tension growing as Ms. Braakman narrows her eyes and tells him again to read, only to be met with a taunting smile and silent defiance from the gopnik. After what feels like an eternity, Ms. Braakman chooses a different student and continues with the lesson like nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A144':
-					'Anushka throws her head back and sighs dramatically. "The quicker you read, the sooner this will be over." Ms. Braakman insists. Hearing this, Anushka straightens up and starts to read, taking Ms. Braakman''s comment literally and speaking so fast that you can barely understand her.'
+					'Anushka throws her head back and sighs dramatically. "The quicker you read, the sooner this will be over," Ms. Braakman insists. Hearing this, Anushka straightens up and starts to read, taking Ms. Braakman''s comment literally and speaking so fast that you can barely understand her.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A6':
-					'Pekta obediently reads the passage and does so without any mistakes. "It''s always a pleasure to hear you read. If only your fellow students took their studies as seriously as you." Ms. Braakman compliments. Petka smiles slightly, but you can tell that he doesn''t like being openly complimented by the teacher, especially when students start to groan and call him a teacher''s pet.'
+					'Pekta obediently reads the passage and does so without any mistakes. "It''s always a pleasure to hear you read. If only your fellow students took their studies as seriously as you." Ms. Braakman compliments. Petka smiles slightly, but you can tell that he doesn''t like being openly complimented by the teacher, especially when the others giggle and call him a teacher''s pet.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A152':
-					'You watch Feofan frantically hide the comic book he was secretly reading before trying to find the right passage to read. "Save the cartoons for after class." Ms. Braakman warns him. Feofan starts to correct her, but the laughter from the other students silences him.'
+					'You watch Feofan frantically hide the comic book he was secretly reading before trying to find the right passage. "Save the cartoons for after class, Mr. Krupin," Ms. Braakman warns him. Feofan starts to correct her, but the laughter from the other students silences him.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A159':
-					'"Can''t you pick someone else?" Petia asks, slumping back into his seat. "I don''t even know what page we''re on." He garners a few laughs, but Ms. Braakman is quick to reprimand him, reminding him that if he keeps this up he''ll end up in detention and fail her class.'
+					'"Can''t you pick someone else?" Petia asks, slumping back into his seat. "I don''t even know what page we''re on!" He garners a few laughs, but Ms. Braakman is quick to reprimand him, reminding him that if he keeps this up he''ll end up in detention and fail her class.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A145':
-					'You look over to see Ekaterina has her head down, presumably asleep. Ms. Braakman asks her again, but the gopnik doesn''t respond. "We can always continue the lesson during detention." she threatens. After a moment, Ekaterina slowly sits up and lazily stretches before asking a nearby student for the page number and reading as instructed.'
+					'You look over and notice that Ekaterina has her head down, presumably asleep. Ms. Braakman asks her again, but the gopnik doesn''t respond. "We can always continue the lesson during detention..." she threatens. After a few seconds, Ekaterina slowly sits up and lazily stretches before asking a nearby student for the page number and reading as instructed.'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -68,15 +68,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 			*nl
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>!!"'
 			*nl
-			'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality just in time to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
-			'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention." she warns while pointing to the door.'
+			'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
+			'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention," she warns while pointing to the door.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[1] -=1
 				grupvalue[4] -=1
 				grupvalue[3] +=1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big137.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
+				'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman..." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -90,15 +90,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 					grupvalue[4] +=1
 					grupvalue[3] -=1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily, "I can''t help it. You just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
+					'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it. You just keep talking and talking..." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
 					'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 					'Ms. Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out of my class and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 					act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 						*clr & cla
 						demerit +=5
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/smirk.mp4"></video></center>'
-						*nl
-						'"Fine by me." you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class, where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
+						'"Fine by me," you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class, where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
 						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 					end
 				end
@@ -117,16 +116,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'As Ms. Braakman continues talking, you find yourself unable to stay awake. You''re just on the edge of falling completely asleep when you''re snapped back to reality by the teacher calling your name. "Well? What''s the answer?" she asks with a smug smile.'
 				'You didn''t catch what the question was, so you take a quick look around the room and piece together an answer you hope is right. Unfortunately, you answer incorrectly, which Ms. Braakman is happy to point out to the entire class.'
-				'"A perfect example of how to fail my class." she smirks as the others begin to laugh at you.'
+				'"A perfect example of how to fail my class," she smirks as the others begin to laugh at you.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'literature'
 		elseif daydream = 3 and npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 15 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eye for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -143,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
-								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
+								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'literature'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -165,11 +164,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fell asleep and the end of class bell wakes you up. You slowly get up and stretch before heading to your next class.'
+			'You fell asleep and the bell wakes you up. You slowly get up and stretch before heading to your next class.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
@@ -223,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'With a mischievous smile, you deftly slide your phone under your skirt and spread your legs to take a picture of your bare pussy. Ms. Braakman stops in front of your desk, her hands on her hips as she stares daggers at you.'
 								'"Hand it over." she orders, one of her hands now held out in front of you. You obediently hand over your phone to her without argument. When she sees the screen is still on, she smiles smugly. "You were texting, weren''t you? Of course you were, that''s all you kids do these days. Well, I''m sure you wouldn''t mind if I shared with the class what you were--"'
-								'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen for a long moment. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
+								'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
 								'"I don''t want to see you doing such things in my class again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! You can have this back after class." She says sharply, but the way she licks her lips afterwards speaks of something else. Without another word, she turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class to resume the lesson.'
 							end
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
@@ -245,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 							'"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Your teacher''s eyes darken dangerously, and you start to think you''ve won this fight, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							'"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							*nl
-							'"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
+							'"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl!" Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she fishes your phone out and removes her hand from your shirt. "You can get this back after class."'
 							'Flustered and aroused, you regain your senses and remember that you''re sitting in class right now. You look around the room, but it seems like her groping went unnoticed and was seen as her fishing out your phone like you challenged her to do.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 						end
@@ -273,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
 		if lit_late_counter > 15:
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you with a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Obviously, you''re not listening to me, so maybe the principal can help you understand good timekeeping. Get to her office now young lady!" she says as she points to the door behind you.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you with a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Obviously, you''re not listening to me, so maybe the principal can help you understand good timekeeping. Get to her office now young lady!" she says as she points to the door behind you.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -290,12 +289,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 			end
 			act 'Do as she says':
 				*clr & cla
-				 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
-				 'Knowing she will force you to go anyway, you choose to avoid embarrassing yourself again and avert her fiery gaze as you begrudingly turn and leave the room. The door slams behind you once you step out.' 
-				 gs 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Knowing she''ll force you to go anyway, you choose to avoid embarrassing yourself again and avert her fiery gaze as you begrudingly turn and leave the room. The door slams behind you once you step out.' 
+				gs 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 		elseif lit_late_counter > 10:
-			'When you open the door and walk in Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You obviously haven''t learned your lesson. Come here now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You obviously haven''t learned your lesson. Come here now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -304,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 					demerit += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/sleeppun2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head and then take your seat at your desk instead. Her eyes flicker with fury when you disobey her and she walks over and twists your ear. "You will learn your place in my classrom <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now get out and go to the principal!" she yells while pointing at the door.'
+					'You shake your head and take your seat at your desk instead. Her eyes flicker with fury when you disobey her and she walks over and twists your ear. "You will learn your place in my classroom <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now get out and go to the principal!" she yells while pointing at the door.'
 					act 'Go to principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
@@ -312,13 +311,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 			end
 			act 'Do as she says':
 				*clr & cla
-				 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
-				 'You walk up and she drags a desk and chair to her desk so they are facing the class. "Sit." she orders while tapping the desk. You sheepishly sit down and your classmates start snickering at you. "Since you can never be on time and keep rudely interrupting my class, you will now experience the full power of my wrath."'
-				 '"From now on, every time you are even one minute late to my class, you will sit right here in front of your classmates. Maybe their stares will convince you to be here on the double." she says smugly before resuming her lesson. You are forced to sit through the lesson while your classmates look at you with their mocking gazes.'
-				 act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You walk up and she drags a desk and chair to her desk so they are facing the class. "Sit!" she orders while tapping the desk. You sheepishly sit down and your classmates start snickering at you. "Since you can never be on time and keep rudely interrupting my class, you will now experience the full power of my wrath."'
+				'"From now on, every time you are even one minute late to my class, you will sit right here in front of your classmates. Maybe their stares will convince you to be here on the double," she says smugly before resuming her lesson. You are forced to sit through the lesson while your classmates look at you with their mocking gazes.'
+				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 				end
 		elseif lit_late_counter > 5:
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? I warned you I would not tolerate this. Now come up here right now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? I warned you I would not tolerate this. Now come up here right now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'pay'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -337,18 +336,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you walk up, she grabs a chair and puts it in front of her desk, right in front of the whole class. She motions for you to sit. "Take a seat, young <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can sit here until you apologize to the class for disrupting the lesson."'
-				'"What? This is outrageous! It''s unfair!" you protest, but Ms. Braakman isn''t interested. She again points to the seat and so you begrudingly sit down and face the stares and snickers of your classmates for several seconds. "What do you have to say?" Ms. Braakman asks. "Sorry for being late and interrupting you." you reply.'
-				'"Goood. Now get to your desk and pay attention!" she snarls. You sheepishly stand and walk to your desk as your classmates continue to snicker at you. Ms. Braakman then resumes her lesson.'
+				'"What? This is outrageous! It''s unfair!" you protest, but Ms. Braakman isn''t interested. She again points to the seat and you begrudingly sit down and face the stares and snickers of your classmates for several seconds. "What do you have to say?" Ms. Braakman asks.' 
+				'"Sorry for being late and interrupting you..." you begrudingly reply.'
+				'"Good. Now get to your desk and pay attention!" she snarls. You sheepishly stand and walk to your desk as your classmates continue to snicker at you. Ms. Braakman then resumes her lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
 		else
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will not tolerate students being late to my class." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted class.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will not tolerate students being late to my class." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted class.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				demerit += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You look down a bit. "Sorry, I was running late and time just got away from me."'
+				'You look down. "Sorry, I was running late and time just got away from me."'
 				'She shakes her head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now take your seat."'
 				act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 				demerit += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You roll your eyes a bit, but say nothing in response. She narrows her eyes at you a little and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, now take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
+				'You roll your eyes, but say nothing in response. She narrows her eyes at you and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, now take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
 				act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
 		end
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 	agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classart.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great art is. You will give him one thing. He is always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
+	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great art is. He''s always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -408,12 +408,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		bored = rand(1,4)
 		if bored=1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history.'
-			*nl
-			'That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
-			'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
-			*nl
-			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it up off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but you have to give it to her. She doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone as long as she can.'
+			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history. That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+			'Everyone in the room turns to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned as his cellphone slides across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but she doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone for as long as she can.'
 			temp = rand(0,5)
 			if temp=0:
 				'"White cotton panties by the look of it. Must be Julia''s." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Julia blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
@@ -422,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			elseif temp = 2:
 				'"Oooooh. It looks like Albina''s leopard print g-string." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Albina closing her knees together as she scratches her desk and glares at Svyatoslav with fiery eyes. He starts frantically apologizing to her as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 3:
-				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Svyatoslav, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask." she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
+				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Svyatoslav, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask," she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
 			elseif temp = 4:
 				'"Natasha''s rather stylish red cotton panties by the looks of it." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Natasha blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 5:
@@ -430,15 +427,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 			killvar 'temp'
 			*nl
-			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them. He is obviously reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
+			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them, reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
-		elseif bored=2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
+		elseif bored= 2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 			''
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+				'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eye for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -488,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash boobs at Feofan (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Feofan (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -496,11 +493,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You notice Feofan glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+					'You notice Feofan glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Flash boobs at Feofan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Feofan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end	
 			
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -513,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'butt', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -531,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -547,7 +544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+						'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -563,7 +560,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -607,7 +604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You think that taking a selfie of your bare bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You think that taking a selfie of your bare bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -632,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You feel the excitement growing inside you at the idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You feel the excitement growing inside you at the idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					else
@@ -656,7 +653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					else
@@ -668,14 +665,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Tease Svyatoslav':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your boobs to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+				'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your breasts to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
 				'Svyatoslav glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-				'Before you can decide what to do Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+				'Before you can decide what to do, Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 				act 'Anushka''s suggestion':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-					'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+					'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 					'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -683,24 +680,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+							'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
-					act 'Flash your boobs':
+					act 'Flash your breasts':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 						gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-						'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Svyatoslav stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+						'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Svyatoslav stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 						act 'Put them away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					end
@@ -711,14 +708,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+							'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+									'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 								end
 							else
@@ -731,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Svyatoslav, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Svyatoslav, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -742,7 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 										end
 									else
@@ -755,11 +752,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 										gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+											'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 										end
 									end
@@ -780,7 +777,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles. You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize that a few people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
+						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles. You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize that a few people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -831,8 +828,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone." you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
-							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands, pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
+							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone!" you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
+							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands while pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -853,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Vasilyev call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
@@ -1001,7 +998,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1018,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
-								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
+								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1052,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash boobs at Fedor(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1061,12 +1058,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed breasts.' 
-					'A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+					'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts.' 
+					'A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 			
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1080,8 +1077,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1100,8 +1097,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1119,7 +1116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 						'While Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1136,8 +1133,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but your drop you skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but your drop you skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1181,7 +1178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1206,7 +1203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1230,7 +1227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1242,14 +1239,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Tease Dan':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get Dan''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your boobs to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-				'Dan glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-				'Before you can decide what to do Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+				'You get Dan''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your breasts to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+				'Dan glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+				'Before you can decide what to do, Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 				act 'Anushka''s suggestion.':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
 					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-					'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+					'You''re ataken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 					'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1257,23 +1254,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and Dan frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+							'You shake your head and Dan frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
-					act 'Flash your boobs':
+					act 'Flash your breasts':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 						gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-						'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Dan stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+						'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Dan stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 						act 'Put them away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Dan to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they have realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Dan''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Dan to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they have realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Dan''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1283,14 +1280,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 2, 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn towards Dan so you are sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+							'You turn towards Dan so you''re sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+									'You shake your head and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 								end
 							else
@@ -1301,18 +1298,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Dan, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Dan, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-									'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+									'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 									gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 									if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 										act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 										end
 									else
@@ -1324,11 +1321,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 										gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 										gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Dan looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+											'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Dan looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 										end
 									end
@@ -1350,7 +1347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-						'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize that people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
+						'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize that people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1393,12 +1390,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Do I really have to sit here and listen to you drone on and on about tools?" you answer boldly.'
 					'The whole class bursts into loud laughter and Mr. Kuznetsov has a rough time getting everyone to quieten down.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will see me after class." he says in a stern voice. Maybe you shouldn''t have mouthed off to him. He is the assistant Headmaster after all.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will see me after class!" he says in a stern voice. Maybe you shouldn''t have mouthed off to him. He is the assistant Headmaster after all.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of class':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop1.jpg"></center>'
 						'At the end of class, you walk up to Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. "You wanted to see me?"'
-						'He looks up at you for a moment before saying. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I will be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
+						'He glares up at you. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I''ll be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
 						Kuznetsov_punishment = 1
 						act 'Go to next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -1419,14 +1416,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Kuznetsov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Kuznetsov chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Kuznetsov chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fell asleep and the end of class bell wakes you up.'
+			'You fell asleep and the bell wakes you up.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1483,7 +1480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 							end
 							'You decide to have some fun. You quickly slide the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt.'
-							'Mr. Vasilyev arrives at your desk. "Unless you''re listening to some music, then what is more important than paying attention in my class? Hand it over."'
+							'Mr. Kuznetsov arrives at your desk. "What is more important than paying attention in my class? Hand it over."'
 							'"Wouldn''t you like to know!" you tease. You hand over your phone with the last picture you took still on the screen.'
 							'You hold in a laugh when you see the wide eyed and shocked look on his face when he sees what''s on the screen. He blushes a bright red as he hastily turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class.'
 							'He composes himself and gets ready to continue the lesson.'
@@ -1509,7 +1506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 									Kuznetsov_punishment = 1
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop1.jpg"></center>'
 									'At the end of class, you walk up to Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. "You wanted to see me?"'
-									'He looks up at you for a moment before saying "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I will be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
+									'He glares up at you. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I''ll be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
 									act 'Go to next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 								end
 							end

+ 106 - 104
locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -14,14 +14,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK = 1:
 		VKrand = rand(1,2)
-		'You sit down in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today we will be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you are looking for, especially with word problems. You will need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
+		'You sit in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today we will be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you are looking for, especially with word problems. You will need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Arkadi, who answers "They have six of course because four plus two equals six." Mr. Tsarev chuckles as he replies "Of course four plus two is six, but are those the number of BOTTLE CAPS they have? The correct answer is no. Anna has four bottle caps and Dina has two PEBBLES, not bottle caps. You need to pay better attention to the actual question." Some of the other boys begin laughing at Arkadi while some of the girls giggle.'
-		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers then begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
+		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers and begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
 		else
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Natalia, who answers "The answer is four because Anna is the only one with bottle caps. Dina only has pebbles, which might as well not be mentioned as it does not pertain to the answer needed." Mr. Tsarev tilts his head in surprise at Natalia''s answer while Christina whispers to one of the other girls. "Wow, she is really smart. Is she studying to be a teacher or something?"'
-		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head then responds. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
+		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head then responds. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		VK = rand(1,3)
@@ -34,42 +34,55 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			else
 				$mathNikoimg = 'images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg'
 			end
-			'Mr. Tsarev pauses, then turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms then says "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts then says'
+			'Mr. Tsarev pauses and turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts.'
 			killvar '$mathNikoimg'
 			*nl
 			if VK = 1:
-				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what is wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I arrived late." Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
-				'Niko shrugs then continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts up her fist then punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
-				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
+				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what was wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I''m late." Mr. Tsarev sighs and shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress, which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
+				'Niko shrugs and continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, but try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts her fist and punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
+				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm and opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks at Niko, who shakes his head, and the class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
 			elseif VK = 2:
-				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
-				'Christina then replies. "That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you." She then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
+				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform, so I had to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee, right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?"'
+				'"Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time," Niko replies.'
+				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway."'
+				*nl
+				'Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask."' 
+				'"I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." she whispers in a seductive tone. "Oh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply.'
+				'"That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you!" she laughs in his face and he clenches his fist before walking to his seat.'
+				*nl
+				'"Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Mr. Tsarev interrupts and Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
-				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working." Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
-				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out." Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry." Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working.'
-				'Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms. Niko then chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
+				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working."'
+				'Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning."' 
+				'Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something."' 
+				*nl
+				'Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?"' 
+				'Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
+				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me, faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out!" Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry."' 
+				*nl
+				'Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working. Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms as Niko chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
 			end
 		else
-			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me." Mr. Tsarev responds "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
-			*nl
-			'<a href="exec:gs ''shortgs'',''img msg'',''images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big1.jpg''">Dimka</a> responds "If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk then begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
-			*nl
-			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
+			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me."' 
+			'Mr. Tsarev chuckles. "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
+			'"If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk and begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
+			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer."' 
+			'"Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies and Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
-		'You walk into the classroom and sit down at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what is the smallest number in existence?"'
-		*nl
+		'You walk into the classroom and sit at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what the smallest number in existence? is"'
 		if VKrand = 1:
-			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
+			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva."' 
+			'"Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" she answers and Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
 		elseif VKrand = 2:
-			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible." Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
+			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible."' 
+			'Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
 		else
-			'No one raises their hand, so Mr. Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr. Tsarev shakes his head before responding. "Is infinity a number?"' 
-			'"Um I guess so... right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
+			'No one raises their hand, so Mr. Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr. Tsarev shakes his head. "Is infinity a number?"' 
+			'"Um I guess so... Right?" Igor asks sheepishly.' 
+			'"No, it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
 		end
-		*nl
 		'The smallest number in existence is... nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
 	end
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
@@ -95,7 +108,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					intel_exp += rand(1,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You take a second to ask a question about a part of the lesson that you don''t fully understand. Mr. Tsarev nods approvingly then says "Sure thing, we can go over the solution again and I will show you the many ways that you can find the solution to these problems." He happily spends some time explaining the topic in greater detail and answers any questions you might have, teaching you some new ways of solving many problems in the process.'
-					*nl
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
@@ -117,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/rest.jpg"></center>'
-				'You can feel the day dragging on so slowly, so you rest your head on the desk, trying your best to focus on anything but today''s lesson. The light occasionally creeps in between your arms, so you keep re-adjusting until it stops, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
+				'You can feel the day dragging on slowly, so you rest your head on the desk, trying your best to focus on anything but today''s lesson. The light occasionally creeps in between your arms, so you keep re-adjusting until it stops, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
 				act 'Wake up':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
@@ -130,16 +142,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few seconds, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you as you nervously ask "What?" Mr. Tsarev replies "I asked you for the answer to my question."'
+				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few seconds, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you. "I asked you for the answer to my question," Mr. Tsarev tells you.'
 				*nl
 				if (VKrand = 1 and npc_rel['A2'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 1 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear "Psst!" You look toward Artem to see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Tsarev before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says "Hmm. Very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear "Psst!" You look at Artem and see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Tsarev before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says "Hmm. Very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
 				elseif (VKrand = 2 and npc_rel['A12'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 2 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia and says "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y?" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia and says "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
 					'Natalia nods with a smile as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson, completely forgetting about you. Natalia turns to you with a warm smile then turns back toward Mr. Tsarev for the rest of the class.'
 				elseif VKrand = 3 and NikoLuv >= 2 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly as Mr. Tsarev shouts out "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag then heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly as Mr. Tsarev shouts out "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag and heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
 				elseif class['school_math_grade'] >= 80:
 					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was. You pretend to clear your throat while you quickly study the equation on the board, then quickly solve the problem in your head before answering the question correctly. Mr. Tsarev gives you a satisfied nod before responding "Very good, but try and keep your head up during class, if you don''t mind."'
 				else
@@ -147,9 +159,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'					
-					'You are feeling far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few minutes, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-					'You take your best guess at what Mr. Tsarev asking. Some of your classmates snicker at your obviously wrong answer as Mr. Tsarev says "Sleeping in class huh? You are never going to get anywhere in life that way, unless you end up working as a politician."'
-					'He then cluckles to himself before saying "Just try to stay awake this time." Before continuing his lesson, he asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer. You still feel embarrassed, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the lesson.'
+					'You''re feeling far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few minutes, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
+					'You take your best guess at what Mr. Tsarev was asking and some of your classmates snicker at your obviously wrong answer as Mr. Tsarev says "Sleeping in class, huh? You''re never going to get anywhere in life that way, unless you end up working as a politician."'
+					'He then chuckles to himself before saying "Just try to stay awake this time." Before continuing his lesson, he asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer. You still feel embarrassed, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the lesson.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
@@ -157,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
-				'Today''s lesson doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice that Mr. Tsarev has paused his lesson and is giving you a stern look. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you would like to explain what I have just went over?" You give him a puzzled look while trying to figure out what to say; feeling embarrassed, not knowing what to say and having the class stare at you.'
+				'Today''s lesson doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice that Mr. Tsarev has paused his lesson and is giving you a stern look. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you would like to explain what I have just went over?" You give him a puzzled look while trying to figure out what to say. You feel embarrassed having the class stare at you.'
 			    act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'math', pcs_intel
@@ -178,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						grupvalue[3] -= 1
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/kickedout.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Of course. Please continue your super-fascinating lesson. Just keep it a bit upbeat please. If you talk any slower, I might fall asleep!" You answer boldly.'
+						'"Of course. Please continue your super-fascinating lesson. Just keep it a bit upbeat please. If you talk any slower, I might fall asleep!" you answer boldly.'
 						'The whole class bursts into laughter and Mr. Tsarev has a rough time getting everyone to quiet down. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, do you find this kind of behavior amusing? Or are you just seeking attention? Try to answer this question for yourself while you head to the principal''s office." He then points to the door.'
                         gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -191,8 +203,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 								grupvalue[3] -= 2
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-								'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your classes, so just leave me alone. I''m having some... girl problems." You answer brashly, not having any intentions of getting up. Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "If you are having some personal issues, then I won''t punish you for that, but do try to pay attention if you can. I am only trying to prepare you all for the future."'
-								'You remain silent as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson. You obviously have no interest in learning anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter "It must be that time of the month." then giggle as you turn around to flip him off.'
+								'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class, so just leave me alone. I''m having some... girl problems," you answer brashly, not having any intentions of getting up. Mr. Tsarev sighs and shakes his head. "If you''re having some personal issues, then I won''t punish you for that, but do try to pay attention if you can. I''m only trying to prepare you all for the future."'
+								'You remain silent as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson. You obviously have no interest in learning anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter "It must be that time of the month..." You turn around to flip him off.'
 							    act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						else
@@ -213,23 +225,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'The day seems to be dragging in and you find yourself constantly staring at the clock, waiting for the class to finally be over. You decide to play on your phone to pass the time.'
 		    if VK = 1 and (christinaQW['fight'] = -1 or christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2) and salocatnow >= 5:
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A18', 'loathe'
-				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
+				'As you''re browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 2 and NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-				'You are browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your name and her''s inside of a heart together. You turn to Natalia to see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before replying with "You are so precious to me, Natalia." Natalia quickly replies "I am so happy that I have you in my life." You reply to Natalia. "Ohhh you are just so cute. Muah." Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
+				'You''re browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your names inside a heart together. You turn to Natalia and see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before exchanging some flirty messages with her. Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 3 and NikoVolkovQW >= 5 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
-				'While you are browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko to see him with a loving smile. You then type back. "You are so sweet Niko." Niko gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
+				'While you''re browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko, who has a loving smile on his face. You then type back "You''re so sweet, Niko." and he gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 4 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 80:
-				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very... you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
-			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile as she returns it. Sonia then turns back toward the teacher while continuing to cruise the internet.'
+				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive.' 
+				'"Those heels look very... you." you text back.' 
+				'"I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?"'
+				'"They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." you reply.'
+			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile before she turns back towards the teacher while continuing to browse the internet.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you are browsing the web, you notice Mr. Tsarev giving you a stern look. He seems to have noticed that you''re not paying attention to his lesson.'
+				'As you''re browsing the web, you notice Mr. Tsarev giving you a stern look. He seems to have noticed that you''re not paying attention to his lesson.'
 				act 'Put your phone away':
 					*clr & cla
 					grupvalue[3] += 1
@@ -249,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						demerit += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtonphone.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decide to try your luck and continue using your phone. Mr. Tsarev pauses the lesson then begin walking toward your desk.'
+						'You decide to try your luck and continue using your phone. Mr. Tsarev pauses the lesson and begins walking toward your desk.'
 						act 'Hand over the phone':
 							*clr & cla
 							grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -291,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 								gs'stat'
 								demerit += 5
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/nophone.jpg"></center>'
-								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on his face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you tease him in an innocent tone. "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
+								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra and smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on his face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you tease him in an innocent tone. "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, the outline of your phone visible through the fabric.'
 								'Mr. Tsarev seems flabbergasted by your actions. He remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head, turning around and walking back to the front of the class. It seems that he realized that it''s not worth the effort to take your phone away from you without causing all sorts of awkward situations. You pull your phone back out of your bra and continue browsing the web as the lesson goes on.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
@@ -312,16 +327,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math_late':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/late.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the halls of the school, they are completely empty. You pass by several classes already underway as you make your way down to math class. You finally arrive at the door to your class and you can hear Mr. Tsarev already starting today''s lesson inside.'
+	'As you walk down the halls of the school, they are completely empty. You pass by several classes already underway as you make your way down to math class. You finally arrive at the door to your class and can hear Mr. Tsarev already starting today''s lesson inside.'
 	act 'Go into class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem1.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you open the door and walk in, Mr. Tsarev stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. "So good of you to join us Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>." Several of the kids smirk while a few look annoyed that you have interrupted the class or that you are getting away with being late.'
-		act 'Say you''re sorry':
+		'When you open the door and walk in, Mr. Tsarev stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. "So good of you to join us Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted the class or that you''re getting away with being late.'
+		act 'Apologize':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look down a bit. "Sorry I was running late. Time just got away from me."'
-			'He shakes his head slightly and sighs a bit. "Very well Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please take your seat and try not to let it happen again."'
+			'You look down. "Sorry I was running late. Time just got away from me."'
+			'He shakes his head slightly and sighs. "Very well Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please take your seat and try not to let it happen again."'
 			act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'math'
 		end
 		act 'Say nothing':
@@ -329,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math_late':
 			demerit += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You roll your eyes a bit, but say nothing in response. He shakes his head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now please take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
+			'You roll your eyes, but say nothing in response. He shakes his head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now please take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
 			act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'math'
 		end
 	end
@@ -341,8 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/classlit.jpg"></center>'
-	*nl
-	'"Everyone sit down, class is starting." Ms. Braakman says in English, her voice thick with a Russian accent. A few students take their seat, but most of the class continues socializing as if they didn''t hear her. "Class is starting, now take a seat!" she repeats loudly in Russian. The groups reluctantly scatter and everyone settles into their seats.'
+	'"Everyone sit down, class is starting." Ms. Braakman says in English, her voice thick with a Russian accent. A few students take their seat, but most of the class continues socializing as if they didn''t hear her. "Class is starting, now take a seat!" she repeats loudly in Russian and the groups reluctantly scatter as everyone settles into their seats.'
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaRevenge', 1
 	else
@@ -359,7 +373,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'				
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/work2.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
 				'You actively take part in the lesson, raising your hand to answer questions, following along in your textbook and working quietly on the worksheets when given them.'
 				act 'Keep working':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -381,7 +394,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A15', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
 						'"I saw this video of an American girl dancing all sexy and stuff, and I''m thinking of learning the dance. Next time I go to the community center, I''ll show up all the girls and steal their boyfriends!" she jokes with a playful smile, but you notice a wicked twinkle in her eyes.'
-						*nl
 						'Vicky''s bubbly personality makes her easy and fun to talk to, and you end up spending the rest of class smiling and laughing with her.'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -390,11 +402,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A20', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Lena sighs heavily, "Fuck, what''s taking her so long?"'
-						*nl
+						'Lena sighs heavily. "Fuck, what''s taking her so long?"'
 						'"Who are you waiting for?" you ask.'
-						*nl
-						'"Lera! She had to go take a piss but she''s taking forever." she snaps back. "Her tongue probably needed a break anyways..." she mumbles quietly after a moment, a small smile spreading across her face.'
+						'"Lera! She had to go take a piss, but she''s taking forever!" she snaps back. "Her tongue probably needed a break anyways..." she mumbles quietly as a small smile spreads across her face.'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 					act 'Lera':
@@ -418,10 +428,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A3', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkboy' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'With a confident smile, Ivan starts to tell you about a recent match he had at the community center. "This kid I''ve never seen before comes up to me and starts talking shit, saying my form is bad and that I couldn''t hit someone even if they were standing still right in front of me!" he says with a scoff. "I told him to put his money where his mouth is and get in the ring, and guess what happened?"'
-						*nl
+						'With a confident smile, Ivan starts telling you about a recent match he had at the community center. "This kid I''ve never seen before comes up to me and starts talking shit, saying my form is bad and that I couldn''t hit someone even if they were standing still right in front of me!" he says with a scoff. "I told him to put his money where his mouth is and get in the ring, and guess what happened?"'
 						'"You beat the crap out of him?" you say with a smile.'
-						*nl
 						'Ivan laughs and you can see his chest puff out slightly. "Of course! The best part is that his girlfriend was there to see it happen, and while he was lying on the mat knocked out, she gave me her number."'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -430,7 +438,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A22', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'"God, this place is more like a daycare than a high school." Bella says, scoffing in disgust. A moment later, a group of students start talking and laughing loud enough to disrupt the class. "See what I mean?" she adds as she rolls her eyes. "They''re practically adults, but they act so childish. I hate it. They need to act their age, like I do."'
+						'"God, this place is more like a daycare than a high school!" Bella says, scoffing in disgust. A few seconds later, a group of students start talking and laughing loud enough to disrupt the class. "See what I mean?" she adds as she rolls her eyes. "They''re practically adults, but they act so childish. I hate it. They need to act their age, like I do."'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 					act 'Veronika':
@@ -449,15 +457,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							if NikoPayback > 0:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he sneers at you before saying "What do you want?" You carefully reply with "Hey I just want to talk." He scoffs then says "Fine, why not?" You and Niko spend the next few minutes having a strained conversation until the end of the class.'
+								'Niko sneers at you as you approach. "What do you want?"'
+								'"I just want to talk," you reply and he scoffs before nodding. You spend the next few minutes having a strained conversation until the end of the class.'
 							elseif NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile before saying "My princess graces with me with her presence. How can be of assistance?" You giggle before replying "I have spare time and I can''t think of a better use of my time then spending it with you." Niko chuckles then grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both spend the next few minutes chatting while exchanging loving glares until the end of the class.'
+								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile. "My princess graces with me with her presence. How can be of assistance?"' 
+								'You giggle. "I have spare time and I can''t think of a better use of it than spending it with you." Niko chuckles and grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both spend the next few minutes chatting while exchanging loving glares until the end of the class.'
 							else
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile before saying "Ahh a lovely princess decides to grace me with her presence. How can I be of assistance?" You giggle before replying "You''re so weird, I just want to chat for a bit okay?" Niko chuckles then grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both begin chatting until the end of the class.'
+								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile. "Ahh a lovely princess decides to grace me with her presence. How can I be of assistance?"' 
+								'You giggle. "You''re so weird! I just want to chat for a bit, okay?" Niko chuckles and grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both begin chatting until the end of the class.'
 							end
 							act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
@@ -465,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			 act 'Listen attentively (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Listen attentively (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		act'Daydream':
@@ -477,17 +488,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				*nl
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>!"'
 				*nl
-				'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality just in time to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
-				*nl
-				'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention." she warns as she points to the door.'
+				'Hearing your name being called, you snap back to reality to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
+				'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention!" she warns as she points to the door.'
 				act 'Apologize':
 					*clr & cla
 					grupvalue[1] -= 1
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					grupvalue[3] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big137.jpg"></center>'
-					*nl
-					'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
+					'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman..." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -501,14 +510,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						grupvalue[4] += 1
 						grupvalue[3] -= 1
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
+						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking..." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
 						'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 						'Ms. Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 						act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 							*clr & cla
 							demerit += 5
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/smirk.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"Fine by me." you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
+							'"Fine by me," you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					end
@@ -572,7 +581,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							grupvalue[4] -= 1
 							grupvalue[3] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-							'Realizing it isn''t worth it, you hand over your phone without argument. "You can have this back after class." Ms. Braakman says as she walks back to the blackboard.'
+							'Realizing it isn''t worth it, you hand over your phone without argument. "You can have this back after class," Ms. Braakman says as she walks back to the blackboard.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 						end
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -594,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 									'With a mischievous smile, you deftly slide your phone under your skirt and spread your legs to take a picture of your bare pussy. Ms. Braakman stops in front of your desk, her hands on her hips as she stares daggers at you.'
 								    '"Hand it over." she orders, one of her hands now held out in front of you. You obediently hand over your phone to her without argument. When she sees the screen is still on, she smiles smugly. "You were texting, weren''t you? Of course you were, that''s all you kids do these days. Well, I''m sure you wouldn''t mind if I shared with the class what you were--"'
-								    'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen for a long moment. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
+								    'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
 								    '"I don''t want to see you doing such things in my class again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! You can have this back after class." She says sharply, but the way she licks her lips afterwards speaks of something else. Without another word, she turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class to resume the lesson.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 								end
@@ -616,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							    '"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Her eyes darken dangerously as you think you''ve won, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							    '"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							    *nl
-							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
+							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl!" Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she grabs your phone and removes her hand from your shirt. "You can get this back after class."'
 							    'Flustered and aroused, you regain your senses and remember that you''re sitting in class right now. You look around the room, but it seems like her groping went unnoticed and was seen as her fishing out your phone like you challenged her to do.'
 								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 							end
@@ -1066,7 +1075,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cocksuck3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent, as gagging sounds fill the room.'
+				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent as gagging sounds fill the room.'
 				'The sounds and sight start making you wet, but you aren''t here to masturbate, so you keep taking as many pictures as you can.'
 				'Pavlovich seems to reach his limit and pulls out, ordering her to keep her mouth open before he shoots thick ropes of cum into her mouth.'
 				'Deciding you have enough evidence, and not wanting to play your hand just yet, you quietly close the door and sneak off, extremely pleased with yourself.'
@@ -1145,9 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" Lera says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.'
-				*nl
 				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it you fucking whore!" Lera says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Lera''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as Lera orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before Pauline takes her place.'
-				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1169,9 +1176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue.'
-				*nl
 				'With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place.'
-				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and quickly run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1200,7 +1205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop watching':
@@ -1244,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/nudepic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You try to ignore their insults, but it really gets under your skin and it shows. Seeing their effectiveness, they re-double their abuse, taunting you more and more.'
 			'"If I''ve got a landing strip, what does she have? A farmer''s field?!" Bella says.'
-			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there." Stasya says.'
+			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there," Stasya says.'
 			'"Ha! Are you kidding? What boy would want to fuck a furball like that? They probably see it and run away!" Irina says.'
 			'They cackle to themselves while you miserably douse your head under the shower, trying to drown out their hurtful words.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
@@ -1253,20 +1258,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/postphyssho1.jpg"></center>'
 			if grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5:
-				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'Bella steps up and gets in your face. "What did you say to me? Watch your mouth, unless you want us to ruin your life bitch."'
-				'You won''t meet her gaze, you know the popular girls could destroy your reputation in a heart beat, so you just start taking your shower and ignore them as best you can.'
+				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+				'Bella steps up and gets in your face. "What did you say to me? Watch your mouth, unless you want us to ruin your life, bitch."'
+				'You don''t meet her gaze. You know the popular girls could destroy your reputation in a heartbeat, so you just start taking your shower and ignore them as best you can.'
 				*nl
-				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina says.'
+				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina taunts.'
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
-				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
+				'"And a machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya adds.'
 				'They cackle in sadistic glee and you spend the rest of your shower blushing, your face somehow feeling hotter than the water streaming down it.'
 			elseif grupTipe = 4 or grupTipe = 2:
-				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina says.'
+				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina taunts.'
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
 				*nl
-				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
+				'"And a machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya adds.'
 				'You stop and take a few steps closer to them, with your hands balled up into fists. They stop their cackling when you get close. "I said fuck off!"'
 				'They all take a step back before Bella smirks. "What, can''t take a joke? Fine fine, don''t get your panties in a twist." They leave you in peace for the rest of the shower and instead spend the time gossiping about a variety of stuff..'
 			else
@@ -1283,7 +1288,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You roll your eyes and ignore them completely, turning on the faucet and rinsing your hair. They continue to sling insults at you, but you pay them no mind, picking up the soap and beginning to scrub your body.'
-			*nl
 			'After a few more tries, they realize that they aren''t going to get any reaction out of you and turn back to conversing amongst themselves, finally letting you shower in peace.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
 		end
@@ -1461,8 +1465,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1506,7 +1510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
-								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind," she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 								gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1531,8 +1535,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1648,7 +1652,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/lockerflash.jpg"></center>'
 		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call.'
-		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you''re finished, most of the other girls have already left.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 2:
@@ -1657,7 +1660,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locselfiedan.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Bella is at the mirror, taking a selfie of herself trying to look sexy. As she does, Albina walks up beside her and then starts to dance next to her, bending over and grinding her ass against her. She can''t help but laugh and grind back, and soon both of them are teasing each other and laughing, along with many of the other girls in the locker room that saw the whole thing.'
-		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you are finished, most of the other girls have already left the locker room.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 3:
@@ -1697,10 +1699,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 5:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/boysraid.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
+		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway leering at everyone. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only her g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here!" she says in a low, menacing tone.'
 		'Dan snorts. "Or what?"'
 		'Albina, not backing down, says "Do you really want to find out?" Everyone can hear the implied threat and considering her fearsome temper and willingness to get violently physical, Dan backs off.'
-		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your panties in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
+		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your cute little thong in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
 		'You see Albina''s fist clench before she grabs his hand and painfully twists it. "How''s this for a workout?" she shouts before swiftly swinging her leg up and kicking Vitek straight in the balls. He yelps in pain and almost collapses before hobbling out of the doorway, clutching his crotch. Dan backs out behind him and Albina slams the door. "Fucking perverted assholes." With that taken care of, the girls go back to getting dressed. You notice most of them do it quicker than normal, seemingly afraid of a repeat visit.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 6:
@@ -1718,7 +1720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/alynushwedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Aylona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing as Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
+		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Alyona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing as Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 8:
 		*clr & cla

+ 1 - 0
locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -537,6 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cum dump for all the boys in school."'
 					'Lera and Lena seem surprised with how much you say, but you reassure them it''s a really good insult; the worst of the worst. With a smile, they repeat the sentence, completely unaware of what they''re actually saying.'
+					'You glance over and see Albina smirking. To most people''s surprise, she is rather fluent in English and seems impressed with you.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else

+ 98 - 71
locations/pav_beach_chat.qsrc

@@ -79,63 +79,89 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/beach_chat.jpg"></center>'
 	if rand(1,4) = 1 and npc_sex['A149'] > 0:
 		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'small'
-		'Seeing you, Lazar smirks. "Back for more? I know, it was amazing."'
-		'You only let out a short "Mhm" as you roll your eyes.'
-		'Lazar breaks out in a smile. "No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m sure we''ll hook up again." You notice several others pay attention to what he says, you are not real happy he is pretty much bragging publicly about banging you. You try and change the topic, you talk for a bit but mostly it is sexual banter from him.'
+		'Lazar smirks when he sees you. "Back for more? I know, it was amazing."'
+		'You only let out a short "Mmhmm" as you roll your eyes.'
+		'Lazar breaks out in a smile. "No worries <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m sure we''ll hook up again." You notice several others paying attention to what he says and aren''t happy about him bragging publicly about banging you. You try and change the topic, but all you get from him is sexual banter.'
+	elseif AlbinaQW['Lazar_Threesome'] = 1:
+		'Lazar smirks when he sees you. "Back for more? Albina is a little busy right now, but I''m sure we can work something out next time she''s in the mood."'
+		'You blush at his comment and he smiles. "I''m sure you enjoy our... sessions as much as she does." He has a wide grin on his face and winks at you.'
+	elseif fame['pav_slut'] > 225:
+		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A149', 'dislike'
+		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
+			'"Taking a break from sucking dicks?" Lazar snickers.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to talk to you."'
+			'"I''m sure you do, but I''m pretty busy, so get lost." Several of the other jocks and cool kids start mocking you, forcing you to flee as their laughter echoes behind you.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
+			'He turns to look at you as you approach. "Get the fuck away from me you skank." Several of the jocks and cool kids start mocking you, forcing you to flee.'
+		else
+			'"You here to suck me off, slut?" Lazar snickers.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to talk to you."'
+			'"Come on, everyone knows that you''re the school''s biggest slut! Your mouth is good for only one thing. Sucking dick!" he says with a laugh and several of the other jocks and cool kids join in. "If you''re not going to get on your knees and suck me off, then get lost." You walk away with the laughter echoing behind you.'
+		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 1:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
-			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
+			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you eyeballing me." Lazar winks.'
 			'You laugh. "Nice line Lazar... Is that how you get the ladies interested in you?"'
-			'He confidently continues. "You know it. And it works like a charm every time. You just wait, you''ll fall for me too." From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'He confidently continues. "You know it. And it works like a charm every time. You just wait, you''ll fall for me too." You talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'"Are you the one that''s been going around and telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
-			'"No... Like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
-			'"Good. Keep it that way or else we might have a problem..." he says as he brushes pass you.'
+			'"Are you the one that''s been going around telling the other girls that I''m no good for them?!" Lazar angrily asks.'
+			'"No? Like I give a shit about you! You''re not the center of the world, Lazar!" you yell back.'
+			'"Good. Keep it that way or else we might have a problem..." he says as he brushes past you.'
 		else
 			'"I didn''t take you for one of them girls <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar smiles.'
 			'"What?" you ask surprised.'
-			'"Didn''t take you for one of my fan girls, that''s all." he winks. You roll your eyes and shake your head, you know he is full of himself even if he is the most gifted athlete in school and cute to boot, but sadly he knows it. The two of you talk about a variety of things, which mostly he twists into you just liking him.'
+			'"Didn''t take you for one of my fan girls, that''s all." he winks. You roll your eyes and shake your head. You know he''s full of himself, even if he is the most gifted athlete in school and cute to boot. You talk about a variety of things, which he twists into you just liking him.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Did you see that move I made at the last game <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar boasts.'
-			'"I heard about it." you inform him.'
-			'The two of you start talking about his last game but soon are talking about a variety of topics.'
+			'"I heard about it..." you inform him.'
+			'You start talking about his last game, but soon move on to a variety of other topics.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Lazar is standing with his arms crossed.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>..." Lazar smirks as he stands with his arms crossed.'
 			'You sigh. "What now Lazar? I don''t have time for your games today..."'
-			'He huffs. "Somebody has been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'He huffs. "Somebody''s been talking shit behind my back to some girls, but I haven''t figured out who it is yet. I wanted you to know that I''m keeping my eyes on you <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'"Okay..." you say as you roll your eyes. "What does that have to do with me?"'
 		else
 			'"Did you hear my own little cheer squad at the last game <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Lazar boasts.'
-			'"I heard many boys are out to get at your level <i>Mister Superstar</i>. Watch out so you don''t lose that cheer squad of yours." you jokingly reply.'
-			'Lazar bursts out in a laughter. "No no, I''m not worried. That only makes me want to improve even more..."'
+			'"I heard many boys are out to get at your level <i>Mister Superstar</i>. Watch out, you might lose that cheer squad of yours!" you jokingly reply.'
+			'Lazar bursts out in laughter. "No no, I''m not worried. That only makes me want to improve even more..."'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
-			'You blush a bit. "No... no I havn''t."'
-			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and then he laughs showing he is just messing with you. From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'You blush. "No... no I haven''t."'
+			'He confidently continues. "Are you saying I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignoring you as you walk off.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar says as it brings everyones attention to you.'
-			'You glance around waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it, makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
-			'"Okay..." you say not sure how to respond to this. He does start talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough even if he and the rest don''t pay much attention to you, at least no one is picking on you.'
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar smirks, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
+			'You glance around, waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
+			'"Okay..." you reply, not sure how to respond. He starts talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough, even if he and the others don''t pay much attention to you. At least no one is picking on you.'
 		end
-	else
+	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
 			'You laugh. "You wish... Are any of the girls dumb enough to fall for that?"'
-			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it is simple a fact, you don''t got to hide it, I got a rocking bod." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit if you are into guys he has a great body. From there the two of you talk about a variety of topics, though mostly sports.'
+			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it''s a simple fact. You don''t have to hide it." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit that he has a great body. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+		else
+			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe you''re too drunk to find your way to the dump where you lot hang out?" Lazar asks with a laugh, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
+			'You sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
+			'"Okay..." you reply, not sure how to respond. He starts talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough, even if he and the others don''t pay much attention to you.'
+		end
+	else
+		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A8', 'dislike'
+		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
+			'As you approach, several of the other jocks and cool kids start giving you a hard time. Before you can even say a word, he scoffs at you. "Get lost! This isn''t for you." He starts talking to the others as you walk away. At least he wasn''t mean about it.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up and try and talk to him he just flat ignores you and pretends like you are not there. After several minutes of this he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you taking a fucking hint? No one wants you around." Then he goes back to ignore you as you walk off.'
+			'"Looks like the loser is lost." someone comments as you approach.' 
+			'"Nah, I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and, honestly, who can blame them?" Lazar replies, which gets the group laughing so hard you know it''s pointless to even try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe to drunk to find some alleyway to squat in." Lazar says with a laugh as it brings everyones attention to you. Sure the gopniks are well known for drinking and drugs but it gets old, that everyones seems to think that is all you guys do.'
-			'You just sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He smirks. "Of course you do." Just the way he says it, makes it sound like a forgone conclusion you would want to talk to him.'
-			'"Okay..." you say not sure how to respond to this. He does start talking to some of the others and seems friendly enough even if he and the rest don''t pay much attention to you, at least no one is picking on you.'
+			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Talk to someone else': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'
@@ -153,19 +179,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
 			'"Well isn''t this a surprise. Are you here to wish me good luck in the next race?" Svyatoslav curiously asks.'
 			'Seeing him excited and not wanting to hurt his feelings, you just nod. "Yeah... that''s exactly what I wanted to say..."'
-			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be sure to win this time!" he boastfully replies. Then the two of you talk about the many times he fails to either beat Ivan or Lazar in one of the varies sports at school.'
+			'"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ll be sure to win this time!" he boastfully replies. The two of you then talk about the many times he fails to beat Ivan or Lazar in one of the various sports at school.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he gives you a dirty look. "I got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
+			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
 		else
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, he starts talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, the two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he gives you a dirty look. "I got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
+			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just seems to get more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and just leave.'
 		else
-			'You walk up to him and start talking, the two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, before long he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school, hard to tell with him.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
@@ -173,29 +199,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
 			'He snorts. "What ever, hey make sure you don''t lean to far forward in class so I can copy off you." Then he mostly ignores you but doesn''t pick on you at least.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He steps towards you and places his hand on your shoulder and shoves you hard, hard enough you stumble a couple of steps away catching your balance. "Get the fuck out of here." You notice the looks on the face of some of the others and decided it is best to leave before things get worse.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He steps towards you, places his hand on your shoulder and shoves you hard enough that you stumble back. "Get the fuck out of here!" You notice the stares of some of the others and decide it''s best to leave before things get worse.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost nerd?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He laughs. "Yeah well you said, so why don''t you just go back to your fellow losers and pretend to be a elf or what ever it is you loser do." Then he partially ignores you and when he isn''t he mocks and makes fun of you.'
+			'"You get lost, nerd?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He laughs. "Why don''t you just go back to your fellow losers and pretend to be an elf or whatever it is you losers do." He continues mocking you when he isn''t talking to someone else.'
 		end
-	else
+	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You come to see what real men are like?"'
-			'You shake your head no and roll your eyes at his comment. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He snorts. "Sure you didn''t well take a good look." He does a little flexing and he has a pretty nice body, finally you are able to engage him in a bit of a conversation.'
+			'"You come to see what real men are like?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head and roll your eyes at his comment. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He snorts. "Sure you didn''t. Well, take a good look." He does a little flexing before you''re able to engage him in something resembling a conversation.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You come to beg for some money, so you can buy drugs?" He says with a laugh and several others join in.'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'"Yeah well no one wants to talk to your skank ass, so go back to your own kind." You notice the looks on the face of some of the others and decided it is best to leave before things get worse.'
+			'"You come to beg for some money to buy drugs?" he asks with a laugh, causing several others to join in.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'"Yeah? Well no one wants to talk to your skank ass, so go back to your own kind." You notice the stares of the others and decide it''s best to leave before things get worse.'
 		else
-			'As you walk up to him he says. "You get lost drugy?"'
-			'You shake your head no. "No I just wanted to say hi."'
-			'He laughs. "Yeah well you said, so why don''t you just go back to your fellow wannabe gangsters and pretend like you matter." Then he partially ignores you and when he isn''t he mocks and makes fun of you.'
+			'"You get lost, junkie?" he asks as you approach.'
+			'You shake your head. "No, I just wanted to say hi."'
+			'He laughs. "Why don''t you just go back to your fellow wannabe gangsters and pretend like you matter?" He continues mocking you when he isn''t talking to someone else.'
 		end
-	end
+	else
+		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
+			'As you approach, he walks towards you and grabs you by the arm before dragging you away so no one can hear his whispers. "What the fuck do you think you''re doing? Don''t ever come up to me in public." He then shoves you away. "And stay the fuck away from us, loser!" he says loud enough for the others to hear and several of them laugh and commend him for getting rid of you as he walks back to them. You just sigh and walk away, knowing it''s pointless to try and talk to him.'
+		else
+			'He shakes his head as you approach. "Fuck no! Stay the fuck away from me, you worthless fuck. No one likes you, so just turn your fucking ass around and walk the fuck away from here." He glares at you and you notice a lot of the others giving you unkind looks. You sigh before turning and walking away.'
+		end
+	end	
 	act 'Talk to someone else': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'
 end
 
@@ -288,8 +320,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light.'
-			'She engages you in a friendly, yet awkward conversation where you both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off to swim in the lake. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
+			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before smiling.'
+			'She engages you in a friendly, yet awkward conversation where you both talk about the sports you enjoy and which of the jock have caught your eye, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off to swim in the lake. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light.'
 			'She scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
@@ -298,7 +330,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'She sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
+		if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
+			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before laughing.'
+			'"I didn''t think I''d see you here. Getting some sunlight in before you go back to hiding indoors?" she asks.'
+			'You smile. "Something like that," you reply and have a short conversation before she asks to be left alone to work on her tan.'
+		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light and rolls her eyes.'
 			'"What the fuck do you want? I thought you losers were allergic to the sun and do all that geeky shit indoors where it can''t hurt you? Can you fuck off now and stop blocking my light?"'
 			'Realizing you''re not going to get anywhere with her, you back away.'
@@ -307,23 +343,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'She sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light. "Oh god, it''s you. What the fuck do you want?"'
-			'"What''s your problem, bitch? I just want to talk," you scornfully reply.'
-			'Albina looks at you unimpressed. "My problem is that some knuckle brained moron is blocking my sunlight. Can you fuck off now?"'
-	    else
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light.'
-			'She sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
-		end	
+		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light. "Oh god, it''s you. What the fuck do you want?"'
+		'"What''s your problem, bitch? I just want to talk," you scornfully reply.'
+		'Albina looks at you unimpressed. "My problem is that some knuckle brained moron is blocking my sunlight. Can you fuck off now?"'
+		'"Fucking stuck up rich bitch..." you mutter as you walk away, but she doesn''t hear you.'
 	else
-		if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before closing her eyes again.'
-			'When you don''t move and continue blocking her light, she looks up at you with an annoyed glare. "What the fuck do you want, you social reject? Can''t you see I''m working on my tan?"'
-			'You open your mouth to reply, but she shoos you away. "I don''t care, loser. Now piss off and stop blocking my light!"'
-		else
-			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light. She stares at you, seemingly in confusion. "Uhh, can I help you?"'
-			'"I just wanted to talk is all," you reply and she sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you, but makes no effort to hide her boredom. It''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with a conversation she doesn''t actually care about.'
-		end
+		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She glares up at you when you block her light before closing her eyes again.'
+		'When you don''t move and continue blocking her light, she looks up at you with an annoyed glare. "What the fuck do you want, you social reject? Can''t you see I''m working on my tan?"'
+		'You open your mouth to reply, but she shoos you away. "I don''t care, loser. Now piss off and stop blocking my light!"'
 	end
 	act 'Talk to someone else': gt 'pav_beach_chat', 'beach_hangout'
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_disco.qsrc

@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						gt 'pav_disco', 'sonia_too_drunk' 
 					elseif mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and rand(1,5) = 1: 
 						gt 'pav_disco', 'anushka_too_drunk'
-					elseif mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and (AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2 or (npc_rel['A23'] >= 70 and (grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2 or grupTipe = 3))) and rand(1,10) = 1:
+					elseif mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and (AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2 or (npc_rel['A23'] >= 70 and (grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2 or grupTipe = 3))) and rand(1,5) = 1:
 						gt 'pav_disco', 'albina_too_drunk'
 					end
 				end

+ 2 - 2
locations/pornhist.qsrc

@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ $pornfilmdesc = {
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, vaginal, facial'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and he fucked before giving you a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and he fucked you before giving you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 4:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 60
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ $pornfilmdesc = {
 		pfactor = 2
 		actbonus = rand(1,3)
 		$tags = 'facial, vaginal, anal, blowjob, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass and came in your ass while you sucked off an another guy who gave you a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass and came in your ass while you sucked off another guy who gave you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 6:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 90

+ 6 - 6
locations/stol.qsrc

@@ -108,10 +108,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			:study_loop
 			if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>':
 				if dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_grade_gain'']') < dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_max'']'):
-					dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class (30 minuts)'': gt ''stol'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''start'' '
+					dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class'': gt ''stol'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''start'' '
 				else
 					*nl
-					'You don''t need to study more this week for you <<$class_list_name[i]>> class'
+					'You don''t need to study more this week for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class.'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			i = 0
 			:exam_loop
 			if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>' and func('uni_programs', 'exam', 'is_over', $class_list_name[i]) = 0:
-				dynamic '	act ''Study intensely for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> exam (30 minuts)'': gt ''stol'', ''studying_exam'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''start'' '
+				dynamic '	act ''Study intensely for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> exam'': gt ''stol'', ''studying_exam'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''start'' '
 			end
 
 			i += 1
@@ -209,10 +209,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stolPar':
 			:study_loop
 			if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>':
 				if dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_grade_gain'']') < dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_max'']'):
-					dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class (30 minuts)'': gt ''stol'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''stolPar'' '
+					dynamic '	act ''Study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class'': gt ''stol'', ''studying'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''stolPar'' '
 				else
 					*nl
-					'You don''t need to study more this week for you <<$class_list_name[i]>> class'
+					'You don''t need to study more this week for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class.'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stolPar':
 			i = 0
 			:exam_loop
 			if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>' and func('uni_programs', 'exam', 'is_over', $class_list_name[i]) = 0:
-				dynamic '	act ''Study intensely for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> exam (30 minuts)'': gt ''stol'', ''studying_exam'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''stolPar'' '
+				dynamic '	act ''Study intensely for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> exam'': gt ''stol'', ''studying_exam'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'', ''stolPar'' '
 			end
 
 			i += 1

+ 24 - 24
locations/uni_events.qsrc

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 	temp = rand(1,7)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/4girls_makeout.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hall, you spot a small group of boys watching four girls, making out. Well really to sets of two girls making out, while the boys watch. The girls either don''t care or are loving the attention, at a guess you imagine they are doing it for the attention.'
+		'As you walk down the hall, you spot a small group of boys watching two groups of girls making out. The girls either don''t care or are loving the attention.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -18,12 +18,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/balloons.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you enter the Lecture Hall hallway, you stop as you see it is completely full of balloons. Most of the students are laughing and just wading through he balloons. You smile a bit and wonder just how many balloons there are and how long it took to blow them all up, as you wade through them.'
+		'As you enter the lecture hall''s hallway, you stop as it''s completely full of balloons. Most of the students are laughing and wading through the balloons. You smile and wonder just how many balloons there are and how long it took to blow them all up as you wade through them yourself.'
 		gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/bra_flash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hall, you spot a girl leaning against the wall. She seems to be watching a boy that is...well staring at her. You can''t really blame him she is pretty, just then she lifts up her shirt flashing her bra at him. He only stares for a moment then he blushes and looks away, which just seems to amuse her. Once he walks off she lowers her shirt and then walks off herself as you move down the hallway.'
+		'As you walk down the hall, you spot a girl leaning against the wall. She seems to be watching a boy that''s staring at her before she lifts up her shirt and flashes her bra at him. He only stares for a second before he blushes and looks away, which seems to amuse her. Once he walks away, she lowers her shirt and walks away herself.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/lecture_hall.jpg"></center>'
-		'The hall is almost completely empty, as you walk along the hall you hear noise coming from one of the doors. It almost sounds like someone is moaning, no one could possible be having sex could they? Maybe you should just be on your way, but what could it hurt to take a peek?'
+		'The hall is almost completely empty as you walk along. You then hear noise coming from one of the doors. It almost sounds like someone is moaning...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 		act 'Peek':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/sex/spy/female_pro' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You crack the door slightly and peek inside, within you see one of the female professors on her desk getting railed by one of the male students. She is fairly pretty considering her age and he doesn''t seem to mind at all that she is nearly old enough to be his mother. After a few moments you close the door and move away, afraid of getting caught.'
+			'You crack the door slightly and peek inside. You see one of the female professors on her desk getting railed by one of the male students. She is fairly pretty for her age. After a few seconds, you close the door and move away, afraid of getting caught.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		end
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/pull_up_skirt.jpg"></center>'
-		'Just ahead of you as you walk down the hallway you see a guy reach over and pull up a girls skirt, showing off her panty clad backside. She jerks away from him, pulling her skirt back down. He and his friends just laugh as she and her friends give them dirty looks. Looks like boys never grow up, you thought the University would be different than Secondary School but it seems boys will be boys no matter how old they are.'
+		'As you walk down the hallway, you see a guy just ahead of you reach over and pull up a girl''s skirt, showing off her panty clad ass. She jerks away from him and pulls her skirt back down as he and his friends laugh. She and her friends give them dirty looks in return. You thought the university would be more mature than school, but it seems boys will be boys no matter how old they are.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/nakedrun' + rand(1,7) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your walk through the Lecture Hall is interrupted, at first you hear laughing and amused yelling. Moment later a group of guys and girl come running down the hall, all of them completely naked other than a pair of shoes. You stand against the wall to let them all past like everyone else does then continue on your way once they are gone.'
+		'Your walk through the lecture hall is interrupted when you hear laughing and amused yelling. Moments later, a group come running down the hall, all of them completely naked. You stand against the wall to let them all past before continuing on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -64,21 +64,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/peek1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you round a corner you can''t help but notice a guy peeking through one of the doors, he seems very intent on what ever it is he is looking at. You are mildly curious yourself. You could just mind your own business and continue on your way, or walk up to him and see what he is looking at, or you could just watch him and see what he does next.'
+		'As you round a corner, you notice a guy peeking through one of the doors, who seems very intent on whatever it is he''s looking at. You could mind your own business and continue on your way, walk up to him and see what he''s looking at or just watch him and see what he does next.'
 		gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 		act 'Walk up to him':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/peek1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up behind him and say. "What are you looking at?"'
-			'He jumps a bit and spins around quickly, now that you can see his face you can see he is flushed and you notice the bulge in his pants of a hardon. "Shit you scared my to half to death."'
-			'You smirk a bit and repeat your question. "So what was you looking at?"'
-			'He grins. "Professor cougar has claimed her next victim, want to see?"'
-			'You had heard some of the professors get... extra friendly with some of the students, but do you really want to see this?'
+			'You walk up behind him. "Hey, what are you looking at?"'
+			'He jumps and spins around. His face is flushed and you notice the bulge in his pants. "Shit, you scared me half to death!"'
+			'You smirk and repeat your question. "So? What were you looking at?"'
+			'He grins. "Professor Cougar has claimed her next victim. Want to see?"'
+			'You heard some of the professors get... extra friendly with some of the students, but do you really want to see this?'
 			gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
 			act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 			act 'Peek':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/sex/spy/female_pro' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You peek inside, within you see one of the female professors on her desk getting railed by one of the male students. She is fairly pretty considering her age and he doesn''t seem to mind at all that she is likely old enough to be his mother. After a few moments you step away and notice the guy staring at you, with a lustful look on his face, you know he is hoping you will let him fuck you now. You roll your eyes slightly and walk away shaking your head.'
+				'You peek inside and see one of the female professors on her desk getting railed by one of the male students. She''s fairly pretty for her age. After a few seconds, you step away and notice the guy staring at you with a lustful look in his eyes. You roll your eyes and walk away while shaking your head.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 		end
 		act 'Spy on him':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/peek2.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you keep watching him, you notice he looks around a bit, but you are able to duck back around the corner before he see''s you. After a few moment you peek back around the corner and now he has his pants pulled down and by the way his arm is moving you are sure he is jerking himself off, while he keeps peeking in the room.'
+			'As you keep watching him, he looks around, but you''re able to duck back around the corner before he sees you. After a few seconds, you peek back around the corner and see that he has his pants pulled down and is jerking himself off as he keeps peeking in the room.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 			act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 			act 'Keep spying':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/peek2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are shocked and a little turned on at this guy jerking off in the hallway, you keep watching him. You know you should stop and move on but you can''t help but watch. A few minutes later he groans and his whole body jerks, then he pulls up his pants and hurries off. Looking at where he was you can see the cum splattered on the door and running down it. You shake your head wonder what exactly is wrong with boys and continue on your way.'
+				'You''re shocked and a little turned on at this guy jerking off in the hallway as you keep watching him. You know you should stop and move on, but you can''t help but watch. A few minutes later, he groans and his whole body jerks before he pulls up his pants and hurries off. Looking at where he was, you can see the cum splattered on the door and running down it. You shake your head and wonder what''s wrong with boys as you continue on your way.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 3
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -106,18 +106,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 			end
 			act 'Walk up to him':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/peek3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk right up behind him, so close you can hear the flapping of flesh as he jerks himself off furiously. You are amazed he hasn''t noticed you, but he seems completely consumed in... well jerking off while peeking through a door. Now that you are closer you can hear moans coming from inside the room, it doesn''t take a genius to guess what he is spying on.'
+				'You walk up behind him and get so close that you can hear the slapping of flesh as he jerks himself off furiously. You''re amazed he hasn''t noticed you, but he seems completely consumed in whatever he''s watching. Now that you''re closer, you can hear moans coming from inside the room.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'uni_lessons', 'schedule'
-				act 'Just walk away': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Walk away': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 				act 'Surprise him':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/events/peek3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Finally after a couple of minutes of him not noticing you, you say. "What are you looking at?"'
-					'He jumps a bit and spins around quickly, now that you can see his face you can see he is flushed and you hard cock is now pointing right at you, the tip is glistening wet with precum. "Christ! You scared the shit out of me."'
-					'You smirk a bit and repeat your question. "So what was you looking at?"'
-					'He pulls up his pants quickly but doesn''t button them back up, he just holds them up. "Professor cougar has claimed her next victim, want to see?"'
-					'You had heard some of the professors get... extra friendly with some of the students, but do you really want to see this?'
+					'After a few more minutes of him not noticing you, you clear your throat. "What are you looking at?"'
+					'He jumps and spins around. His face is flushed and his hard cock is pointing right at you, the tip glistening with precum. "Christ, you scared the shit out of me!"'
+					'You smirk and repeat your question. "So? What were you looking at?"'
+					'He pulls up his pants but doesn''t button them. "Professor Cougar has claimed her next victim. Want to see?"'
+					'You heard some of the professors get... extra friendly with some of the students, but do you really want to see this?'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lecture_hall_events':
 					act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 					act 'Peek':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/lecture_hall/sex/spy/female_pro' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'You peek inside, within you see one of the female professors on her desk getting railed by one of the male students. She is fairly pretty considering her age and he doesn''t seem to mind at all that she is likely old enough to be his mother. After a few moments you step away and notice the guy staring at you, with a lustful look on his face, you know he is hoping you will let him fuck you now. You roll your eyes slightly and walk away shaking your head.'
+						'You peek inside and see one of the female professors on her desk getting railed by one of the male students. She''s fairly pretty for her age. After a few seconds, you step away and notice the guy staring at you with a lustful look in his eyes. You roll your eyes and walk away while shaking your head.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'

+ 52 - 52
locations/uni_grounds.qsrc

@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_warm':
 
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/2girl_butt_flash1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see two girls waving as they walk towards one another. When they go to give each other a hug, one of them grabs the others'' skirt and yanks it up, showing her naked ass off from behind. You don''t think the girl notices at first, but once she does, she pulls away and straightens out her skirt while calling her friend all kinds of names - though it doesn''t sound heated as the other girl just laughs. Soon, the two of them are chatting and walking off together arm in arm.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see two girls waving as they walk towards one another. When they go to give each other a hug, one of them grabs the others'' skirt and yanks it up, showing her naked ass off from behind. You don''t think the girl notices at first, but once she does, she pulls away and straightens out her skirt while calling her friend all kinds of names, though it doesn''t sound heated as the other girl just laughs. The two of them are soon chatting and walking away together arm in arm.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -132,36 +132,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_warm':
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/2guy_ir_pickup' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see two African guys sitting on a low wall, trying to chat up the girls as they walk by. When a girl stops to talk with them, they immediately start rubbing her legs. She seems to enjoy the attention and quickly sits with them. They chat for a bit, all the while the guys still pawing at her, before getting up and leaving together. It was obvious what the guys were looking for, and she seems happy to provide it.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see two African guys sitting on a low wall, trying to chat up the girls as they walk by. When a girl stops to talk with them, they immediately start rubbing her legs. She seems to enjoy the attention and quickly sits with them. They chat while the guys continue pawing at her before they get up and leave together. It''s obvious what the guys were looking for, and she seems happy to provide it.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/3girl_dryhump1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see three girls hanging out and passing a drink between themselves. Based on how they''re acting, you''re fairly sure they are drunk or close to it. When they start getting touchy-feely with each other, they get the attention of some nearby boys, which only encourages the girls further. Two of the girls start to make out with each other, while the third lines up behind one of them and pretends to hump her. The boys are enraptured by the display, and the girls are smiling and having a grand time.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see three girls hanging out and passing a drink between themselves. Based on how they''re acting, you''re fairly sure they''re drunk or are at least close to it. When they start feeling each other up, they get the attention of some nearby boys, which only encourages the girls further. Two of the girls start making out with each other while the third lines up behind one of them and pretends to hump her. The boys are enraptured by the display, and the girls are smiling and having a grand time.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/bench_balls1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see a guy laying on a beach and a few girls passing him by. One of them whispers to the others, then they all look at the boy and start grinning and giggling. You''re unsure what they found so funny until you walk past the sleeping guy. Up close, you can see that his dick and balls are dangling out of his loose shorts. You wonder if he''s aware of this, since as far as you can tell, he''s sleeping.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. You see a guy laying on a bench as a few girls pass by him. One of them whispers to the others, then they all look at the boy and start grinning and giggling. You''re unsure what they found so funny until you walk past yourself and can see that his dick and balls are dangling out of his loose shorts. You wonder if he''s aware of this, since as far as you can tell, he''s sleeping.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/topless_sunbathing' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. There''s a number of people out on the quad right now. Some are sitting around talking, others walking around. There''s even a few people playing frisbee. But what has most people''s attention, especially the guys passing by, are the group of topless girls sunbathing in the grass.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. There''s a number of people out on the quad right now. Some are sitting around talking while others walk around. There''s even a few people playing frisbee, but what has most people''s attention, especially the guys passing by, are the group of topless girls sunbathing on the grass.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/ir_kissing1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. A black guy and white girl are walking, hand in hand, while talking and laughing. They stop to share a kiss, when they are interrupted by a group of boys who are yelling racial slurs at the black guy, upset that he''s with a white girl. They get into an argument that quickly escalates into a shoving match. The girl steps in to pull her boyfriend away before a fight can break out. As the couple walk away, the boys yell out that this isn''t over.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the warm weather. A black guy and white girl are walking hand in hand while talking and laughing. They stop to share a kiss when they are interrupted by a group of boys yelling racial slurs at the black guy, upset that he''s with a white girl. They get into an argument that quickly escalates into a shoving match. The girl steps in to pull her boyfriend away before a fight can break out. As the couple walk away, the boys yell out that this isn''t over.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/1nakedg_coed_group' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Near the edge of the campus you can''t help but notice a group of students, or at least you think they are students, hanging around one of the benches. But what drew your attention to them was the naked girl, only wearing a pair of high heels, hanging out with them. You have no clue why she is naked, but her group doesn''t seem to pay her too much attention. Others, however, have taken note of her and she seems to be enjoying herself. You shake your head slightly curious what is going on but continue on your way.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Near the edge of the campus, you can''t help but notice a group of students, at least you think they''re students, hanging around one of the benches. Your attention is drawn to the naked girl who''s wearing only a pair of high heels hanging out with them. You have no clue why she''s naked, but her group doesn''t seem to pay her too much attention. Others, however, have taken note of her and she seems to be enjoying herself. You shake your head slightly, curious what''s going on but continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -169,18 +169,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_warm':
 	elseif temp = 8:
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/2girl_wedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. A girl runs up behind another before knocking her to the ground. The victim, who looks a little nerdy to you, starts to get up but the other girl grabs her panties and gives her a massive wedgie and even starts dragging her on the ground. Some students stop to watch or just walk by but nearly all of them are laughing. After a couple of minutes, the girl finally lets go and says something to her victim before walking off in a good mood. The nerdy girl slowly gets up, she looks around shyly and you can tell she is unhappy as she hurries off. It seems all schools, even University, have bullies.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. A girl runs up behind another before knocking her to the ground. The victim, who looks a little nerdy to you, starts to get up but the other girl grabs her panties and gives her a massive wedgie and even starts dragging her on the ground. Some students stop to watch or just walk by, but nearly all of them are laughing. After a few minutes, the girl finally lets go and says something to her victim before walking away in a good mood as the nerdy girl slowly gets up and looks around shyly. You can tell she''s unhappy as she hurries off. It seems even the university has bullies.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 9:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/4girl_titflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You spot a group of four girls with a few guys hanging around them. They guys shout something at the girls, though you''re too far away to hear what it was. The girls suddenly pull up their tops, flashing their tits at the guys while also flipping them off. The boys seem encouraged by the display and try to approach, but the girls shove them back and jog away while laughing. The guys look frustrated and start calling out after them.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You spot a group of four girls with a few guys hanging around them. The guys shout something at the girls, though you''re too far away to hear what it was. The girls suddenly pull up their tops, flashing their tits at the guys while also flipping them off. The boys seem encouraged by the display and try to approach, but the girls shove them back and jog away while laughing. The guys look frustrated and start calling out after them.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 10:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/assgrab_girls.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Two girls are trying to find their way around campus, when one of them notices some boys checking them out. She gets her friend''s attention by saying something to her. The second girl giggles before sticking her butt up while the first girl starts to rub and squeeze it. They laugh at the boys'' reaction before holding hands and hurrying off.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Two girls are trying to find their way around campus when one of them notices some boys checking them out. She gets her friend''s attention by saying something to her. The second girl giggles before sticking her ass up and the first girl starts squeezing it. They laugh at the boys'' reaction before holding hands and hurrying off.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/bench_girl1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -188,37 +188,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_warm':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/bench_panties1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. A girl is sitting on a bench, relaxing. You cannot help but notice that she has her legs spread wide, causing her skirt to slide almost all the way up to her waist. This in turn is showing up her red panties, which matches her red top. The girl notices you looking and smiles, seemingly amused and loving the attention she''s attracted. She reminds you of Anushka from back in Pavlovsk.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. A girl is sitting on a bench relaxing and you can''t help but notice that she has her legs spread wide, causing her skirt to slide almost all the way up to her waist. This in turn is showing up her red panties, which match her red top. The girl notices you staring and smiles, seemingly amused and loving the attention she''s attracted. She reminds you of Anushka.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 13:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/bend_over1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Ahead of you, a girl stops and bends over to retie her shoe. In the process, she gives everyone a decent view of the slim thong she''s wearing, which hardly conceals her cheeks and covers up her pussy lips. Several guys cat call and whistle at the girl, who seems blissfully unaware or unfazed by the attention she''s drawn. Once she''s done, she straightens up and starts walking again, though a few guys jog up beside her and start chatting her up.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Ahead of you, a girl stops and bends over to retie her shoe. In the process, she gives everyone a decent view of the skimpy thong she''s wearing, which barely conceals her pussy lips. Several guys cat call and whistle at the girl, who seems blissfully unaware or unfazed by the attention she''s drawn. Once she''s done, she straightens up and starts walking again, though a few guys jog up beside her and start chatting her up.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 14:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/big_things.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There''s a couple of girls walking just ahead of you. As they pass by a group of guys, one of the girls lifts her skirt to show off her panties while her friend points at her to get the guys'' attention. You can''t help but notice what is written on the panties. "I may be small, but I LOVE big things" with a little smiley face at the end. You smile as the guys stop dead in their tracks, causing you to have to walk around them.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There''s a couple of girls walking just ahead of you. As they pass by a group of guys, one of the girls lifts her skirt to show off her panties while her friend points at her to get the guys'' attention. You can''t help but notice what''s written on the panties. "I may be small, but I LOVE big things" with a little smiley face at the end. You smile as the guys stop dead in their tracks, causing you to have to walk around them.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/change_panties.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There is a group of guys and girls sitting around and talking to one another. You see a girl in this group removing her panties. From the position she is sitting in, it gives anyone looking at her a clear view of her shaven pussy. Given the look on her face, you''re sure that she is well aware of this fact. She hands her panties to one of the guys in the group, who all seemed surprised at first before they start laughing. You guess this was some kind of bet or dare.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There is a group of guys and girls sitting around talking to one another. You see a girl in the group removing her panties. From the position she''s sitting in, it gives anyone looking at her a clear view of her shaven pussy. Given the look on her face, you''re sure that she''s well aware of this fact. She hands her panties to one of the guys in the group, who all seemed surprised at first before they start laughing. You guess this was some kind of bet or dare.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 16:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/drunk_plants.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Ahead of you, you see a girl standing near some hedges. She looks to be on her phone and is peering into the bushes. When you get closer, you notice a second girl laying face down in the bushes, surrounded by numerous bottles. Obviously, this girl passed out here while drinking. You overhear the girl on her phone talking with campus security. You decide to continue on your way.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Ahead of you, you see a girl standing near some hedges. She looks to be on her phone and is peering into the bushes. When you get closer, you notice a second girl laying face down in the bushes, surrounded by numerous bottles. You overhear the girl on her phone talking with campus security and decide to continue on your way.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 17:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/ebony_ivory.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. A Russian girl and an African girl are sitting side by side in the grass talking to one another. You suspect the two might be more than friends, though they are quite subtle about it. While it may be slightly more tolerated here on campus and on the island compared to the rest of the city, homosexuals are still looked down upon - as are interracial couples in general.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. A Russian girl and an African girl are sitting side by side in the grass talking to one another. You suspect the two might be more than friends, though they''re quite subtle about it. While it may be slightly more tolerated here on campus and on the island compared to the rest of the city, homosexuals are still looked down upon - as are interracial couples in general.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 18:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/femdom_smother.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You spot a boy and girl on the grass, just off the pathway. The boy is spreading a blanket on the ground, while the girl is bossing him around. She seems to be really frustrated with him, and when she lays on the blanket, she barks for him to put his face against her butt. She wraps her ankles behind his head and begins forcing his face to smash against her ass. The girl locks eyes with you and smirks as she dominates the boy.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You spot a boy and girl on the grass, just off the pathway. The boy is spreading a blanket on the ground, while the girl is bossing him around. She seems to be really frustrated with him, and when she lays on the blanket, she barks for him to put his face against her ass. She wraps her ankles behind his head and begins forcing his face against her ass. The girl locks eyes with you and smirks as she dominates the boy.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 19:
 		minut += 2
@@ -232,50 +232,50 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_warm':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 21:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/girl_weed.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather, one girl in particular seems to be enjoying herself, she is hanging from her legs upside on one of the railings, as people pass her she flashes her tits at them with a huge grin. Sure enough as you pass her she flashes you as well.'
+		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. One girl in particular seems to be enjoying herself as she hangs upside down from one of the railings, flashing her breasts at passers-by with a huge grin, including you.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 22:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/lesbian_makeout1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather, you spot a small group of boys watching two girls. One girl has her arms wrapped around the other girls neck, while her legs are wrapped around her waist. The standing girl has one arm around the other girl and the other has her hand holding the other girls butt, both passionately kissing each other. They seem to be completely unaware of your presence or anyone else, perhaps they just don''t care.'
+		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You spot a small group of boys watching two girls passionately kissing each other. They seem to be completely unaware of your or anyone else''s presence.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 23:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/makeup1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather, you notice a girl sitting on a bench alone. She seems intent on touching up her makeup, she is putting a lot of time in effort in making sure it looks just perfect, you figure she is waiting for someone special.'
+		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You notice a girl sitting on a bench alone, who seems intent on touching up her makeup so it looks perfect. You figure she''s waiting for someone special.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 24:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/naked_run_start' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are just standing around, like they''re waiting for something. You start to ask one of them, but you soon have your answer. A dozen or so of them in the middle of the circle start quickly stripping down, most only to their shoes. Those watching film and shout words of encouragement to them. Once most of them are naked, they start breaking out of the circle and start running across the quad. You can''t help but smile in amusement, something like this would have never happened back in Pavlovsk or likely elsewhere in the city. It is nice seeing a more relaxed attitude at the University. Once the last of the streakers is finally out of site, you continue on your way.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are just standing around as if they''re waiting for something. You start to ask one of them what''s happening, but you soon have your answer. A dozen or so of them in the middle of the circle start quickly stripping down, most only to their shoes as those watching film and shout words of encouragement to them. Once most of them are naked, they start breaking out of the circle and start running across the quad. You can''t help but smile in amusement; something like this would have never happened back in Pavlovsk. It''s nice seeing a more relaxed attitude at the university. Once the last of the streakers is out of sight, you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 25:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/naked_run' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are just standing around like their are waiting for something. You start to ask one of them what they are waiting for, but you soon have your answer. A group of naked students of both genders go streaking by, most are only wearing shoes. You watch the 20 to 30 students go by, while others laugh at, film or shout encouragement at them. You can''t help but smile in amusement, something like this would have never happened back in Pavlovsk or likely elsewhere in the city. It is nice seeing a more relaxed attitude at the University. Once the last of the streakers is finally out of site, you continue on your way.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are just standing around like they''re waiting for something. You start to ask one of them what''s happening, but you soon have your answer. A group of naked students of both genders go streaking by. You watch while others laugh at, film or shout encouragement at them. You can''t help but smile in amusement; something like this would have never happened back in Pavlovsk. It''s nice seeing a more relaxed attitude at the university. Once the last of the streakers is out of sight, you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 26:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/sunbathing_girls1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Groups of people can be seen sitting and talking, playing frisbee, and others just walking around. What draws most people''s attention, espcially the guys, are the group of girls in bikinis sunbathing on the quad''s grass.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. Groups of people can be seen sitting and talking, playing frisbee or just walking around. What draws most people''s attention, espcially the guys, are the group of girls in bikinis sunbathing on the grass.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 27:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/titflash' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. One girl in particular is amusing herself by flashing her tits to everyone she passes, grinning the whole time. Sure enough, she exposes her boobs to you when you pass her by.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. One girl in particular is amusing herself by flashing her breasts at everyone she passes, grinning the whole time. She soon exposes her breasts at you when you pass her by.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 28:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/upsidedown_titflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There is a girl hanging upside down from the railings, and she is flashing her tits to everyone who walks by her. Sure enough, as you pass her by, she flashes you as well.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There is a girl hanging upside down from the railings flashing her breasts at everyone who walks by, including you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -288,11 +288,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_warm':
 	elseif temp = 30:
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/bench_chess1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You notice two guys sitting on a bench, with a chess board between them. They seem very intent on the game they are playing, taking a lot of time between moves. Occasionally, someone stops to look but as soon as they start to say anything the two guys interrupt them and ask them not to offer advice. As you pass by you can only assume these two are very serious about chess.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. You notice two guys sitting on a bench with a chess board between them. They seem very intent on the game they are playing, taking a lot of time between moves. Someone occasionally stops to look, but as soon as they start to say anything the two guys interrupt them and ask them not to offer advice. As you pass by, you can only assume these two are very serious about chess.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/warm/bench_study1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There is a girl sitting on a bench with a textbook in her lap. It looks like she''s decided to study outside on this nice day. Not a bad idea, you think to yourself. Perhaps you should do the same sometime?'
+		'As you cross the campus, you notice a lot of people are out taking advantage of the good weather. There is a girl sitting on a bench with a textbook in her lap. It looks like she''s decided to study outside on this nice day. Perhaps you should do the same sometime?'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 end
@@ -315,21 +315,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_cold':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/cold/naked_runw' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are just standing around like their are waiting for something, you start to ask one of them what they are waiting for but you soon have your answer. A group of naked students of both genders go streaking by, most are only wearing shoes, though a few also wear clothes and caps or scarves. As you watch at least two or three dozen students go streaking by, while those watching, laugh, film it and shout encouragements. You can''t help but smile in amusement, something like this would have never happened back in Pavlovsk or likely elsewhere in the city, it is nice seeing a more relaxed attitude at the University. Once the last of the streakers is finally out of site you continue on your way.'
+		'As you cross the campus you notice a lot of people are just standing around like they''re waiting for something. You start to ask one of them what''s happening, but you soon have your answer. A group of naked students of both genders go streaking by, with a few of them wearing caps or scarves. As you watch, others laugh, film it and shout encouragements. You can''t help but smile in amusement; something like this would have never happened back in Pavlovsk. It''s nice seeing a more relaxed attitude at the university. Once the last of the streakers is out of sight, you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/cold/1nakedg_groupg1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you spot a group of girls together giggling and it sounds like there is some friendly arguing as well. Finally, one of the girls throws up her hands in defeat and starts stripping out of her clothes, despite the cold weather. it doesn''t take her long until she is completely naked. When she notices all of the attention she''s attracted, she starts swearing at her friends. Her friends counter that she shouldn''t have taken the bet if she couldn''t pay up. The girl takes off running across the campus, as her friends follow while laughing.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you spot a group of girls giggling, along with what sounds like some friendly arguing as well. Finally, one of the girls throws up her hands in defeat and starts stripping out of her clothes, despite the cold weather. When she notices all of the attention she''s attracted, she starts swearing at her friends, who counter that she shouldn''t have taken the bet if she couldn''t pay up. The girl takes off running across the campus and her friends follow while laughing.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/cold/bff_titflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you''re walking along, you see some girls passing by some guys. One of the girls is eyeing the boys and her friend whipsers something to her. The blonde girl turns to the guys and opens her coat. When she does, her friend suddenly pulls up her shirt, exposing the girl''s tits. The guys stop and stare while the blonde blushes, though she seems kind of excited as well. As you walk by them, the girls start talking to the guys.'
+		'As you''re walking along, you see some girls passing by some guys. One of the girls is eyeing the boys and her friend whipsers something to her. The blonde girl turns to the guys and opens her coat and her friend helps pull up her shirt, exposing the girl''s breasts. The guys stop and stare while the blonde blushes, though she seems kind of excited as well. As you walk by them, the girls start talking to the guys.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'day_cold':
 	else
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/day/cold/bully_girls.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you cross the campus, you spot three girls tailing another. When they catch up to her, two of the girls grab her by the arms. The third girl snatches her backpack and begins dumping its contents on the ground. Next, she takes her purse and does the same. Then, she grabs the girl by her shirt and says something to her before pushing her to the ground. You had to put up with Christina in High School, so you know what this girl is going through. You had hoped that bullying wouldn''t be in an issue in University, but sadly you see that it still is. A few boys stop and help the girl back to her feet and start gathering her things as you continue on your way.'
+		'As you cross the campus, you spot three girls tailing another. When they catch up to her, two of the girls grab her by the arms while the third girl snatches her backpack and begins dumping its contents on the ground before taking her purse and doing the same. She then grabs the girl by her shirt and says something to her before pushing her to the ground. Having put up with Christina, you know what this girl is going through. You had hoped that bullying wouldn''t be in an issue in university. A few boys stop and help the girl back to her feet and start gathering her things as you continue on your way.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 end
@@ -348,13 +348,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 	temp = rand(1,21)
 	if temp = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/1nakedg_coed_group1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk by a group of guys and a couple of girls, you hear the guys trying to talk the girl wearing a dress into taking off her panties. Even the other girl tries encouraging her. After a moment, the girl glances around, and not seeing too many people, starts to pull her panties down.'
+		'As you walk by a group of guys, you hear them trying to talk a girl wearing a dress into taking off her panties. Even her friend tries encouraging her. After a moment, the girl glances around, and not seeing too many people, starts to pull her panties down.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep going': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 		act 'Stop and watch':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/1nakedg_coed_group2.jpg"></center>'
-			'The guys hoot and holler, drawing a little more attention that makes the blonde in the dress blush. One of the guys tells her to show her tits and then they are all chanting for her to do it. She bites her lower lip looking around, meeting your eyes briefly, then looks back at her friend who nods to her. She then pulls down the top of her dress, showing off her tits.'
+			'The guys hoot and holler, drawing a little more attention that makes the girl in the dress blush. One of the guys tells her to show her tits and they''re soon all chanting for her to do it. She bites her lower lip and looks around, meeting your eyes briefly before she looks back at her friend, who nods at her. She then pulls down the top of her dress, showing off her tits.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Stop watching': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 				act 'Stop watching': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 				act 'Keep watching':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/1nakedg_coed_group4.jpg"></center>'
-					'Once she is out of the dress and fully naked, she looks like she''s starting to enjoy the attention she''s getting. She even goes as far as to start posing for selfies with the group of guys and her friend. Having watched this unfold, you decide it''s time to head on your way.'
+					'Once she''s out of the dress and fully naked, she looks like she''s starting to enjoy the attention she''s getting. She even goes as far as to start posing for selfies with the group of guys and her friend. Having watched this unfold, you decide it''s time to head on your way.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -376,21 +376,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 		end
 	elseif temp = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/2girl_dryhump1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see a two cute girls being followed by a couple of guys as they walk across the quad. The guys are obviously trying to flirt with the girls, but they don''t take the hint that the girls are not interested. Suddenly, one of the girls grabs the other and bends her over before she starts slamming her hips against her ass, like she is fucking her ass. The other girl moans out loud. The first girl looks straight at the guys. "We''re going back to our dorm room and I''m going to fuck her brains out, because we don''t need you," she announces. "But you can go back to your room and jerk off thinking about us." Then they both laugh and run off holding hands, leaving the guys obviously turned on, confused and, most of all, frustrated.'
+		'You see two cute girls being followed by a couple of guys as they walk across the quad. The guys are obviously trying to flirt with the girls, but they don''t take the hint that the girls aren''t interested. Suddenly, one of the girls grabs the other and bends her over before she starts slamming her hips against her ass like she''s fucking her ass. The other girl moans out loud as the first girl looks straight at the guys. "We''re going back to our dorm room and I''m going to fuck her brains out because we don''t need you," she announces. "But you can go back to your room and jerk off thinking about us." They both laugh and run off holding hands, leaving the guys turned on, confused and, most of all, frustrated.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/2girls_makeout_on_bench1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you pass by one of the many benches scattered around the University grounds, you see two girls making out. By the time you walk past them, they are hot and heavy; one of the girls is laying on her back, with her legs wrapped around the other, both passionately kissing. They seem to be completely unaware or your presence or maybe they just don''t care.'
+		'As you pass by one of the many benches scattered around the grounds, you see two girls making out. By the time you walk past them, they are hot and heavy; one of the girls is laying on her back, with her legs wrapped around the other as they passionately kiss. They seem to be completely unaware of your presence or simply don''t care.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 4:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/3girls_horseplay.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you''re walking along campus, you hear some pretty loud music. Shortly, you find the source: three girls are hanging out in the middle of the quad listening to a radio. When a new song begins, the girls squeal and jump to their feet and start dancing with each other. A group of guys are walking by and start watching the trio. The girls notice this and begin grinding on each other, which the guys take an immediate liking to. They walk over to the girls and start flirting.'
+		'As you''re walking along campus, you hear some pretty loud music and soon find the source: Three girls are hanging out in the middle of the quad listening to a radio. When a new song begins, the girls squeal and jump to their feet and start dancing with each other. A group of guys are walking by and start watching the trio. The girls notice this and begin grinding on each other, which the guys take an immediate liking to. They walk over to the girls and start flirting.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 5:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/bench_girl1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -398,55 +398,55 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 6:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/bottomless_girl.jpg"></center>'
-		'In one of the darker areas of the quad, you notice someone laying on the ground. At first you think they might be hurt but as you step closer. you can see the girl looks completely drunk and she is also bottomless. She gives you a drunk smile and the peace sign, you can''t help but look at her bare pussy and wonder why she is out here like this. Not having an answer and doubting you will get one from the drunk girl, you continue on your way.'
+		'In one of the darker areas of the quad, you notice someone laying on the ground. At first you think they might be hurt, but as you step closer you can see the girl looks completely drunk and has lost her panties. She gives you a drunk smile and the peace sign, and you can''t help but look at her bare pussy and wonder why she''s out here like this. Not having an answer and doubting you''ll get one, you continue on your way.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 7:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/femdom_footkiss' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you approach one of the buildings where the grass gives way to concrete, you spot a boy kneeling in front of a girl. You''re not close enough to them to hear what they''re saying, and they''re not being very loud. As you near them, you overhear her telling the boy to kiss her shoe. He timidly looks and notices you and blushes. He lifts up her ankle and begins kissing her shoe. After a few pecks, she pulls her foot back and tells him to "kiss it where it is". He crawls closer to her and starts kissing her shoe again. The girl looks up at you and smiles proudly as you walk by. You then overhear her telling him to lick her shoe clean. It seems she''s found a boy to dominate.'
+		'As you approach one of the buildings where the grass gives way to concrete, you spot a boy kneeling in front of a girl. You''re not close enough to them to hear what they''re saying, and they''re not being very loud. As you near them, you overhear her telling the boy to kiss her shoe. He timidly notices you and blushes as he lifts her ankle and begins kissing her shoe. After a few pecks, she pulls her foot back and tells him to "kiss it where it is". He crawls closer to her and starts kissing her shoe again. The girl looks up at you and smiles proudly as you walk by. You then overhear her telling him to lick her shoe clean. It seems she''s found a boy to dominate.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 8:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/ggwedgie1.jpg"></center>'
-		'A group of students are walking along one of the paths together, talking and laughing. The girl furthest in the back walks up behind another girl, grabs the back of her panties and pulls them up, giving her a wedgie. The victim is struggling to free herself while their friends laugh at the two of them. Once she finally frees herself from the wedgie, she starts chasing the first girl but it is fairly obvious they are friends. The rest of the group take off after the two shortly after.'
+		'A group of students are walking along one of the paths together, talking and laughing. The girl furthest in the back walks up behind another girl, grabs the back of her panties and pulls them up, giving her a wedgie. The victim is struggling to free herself while their friends laugh at the two of them. Once she finally frees herself from the wedgie, she starts chasing the first girl as the rest of the group take off after them.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 9:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/girl_fight1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You come across a group of girls and see two of them arguing over a guy. One of the girls is accusing the other of having slept with her boyfriend. After some more yelling, the first girl jumps on the other and they crash to the ground and start fighting. Their friends don''t try to break them up, instead they opt to watch them go at it.'
+		'You come across a group of girls and see two of them arguing over a guy. One of the girls is accusing the other of having slept with her boyfriend. After some more yelling, the first girl jumps on the other and they crash to the ground and start fighting. Their friends don''t try to break them up, instead choosing to watch them go at it.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 10:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/girl_laying_on_bench.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk along one of the paths, you see a girl laying on one of the benches, when you walk by she smiles to you but doesn''t say anything. Seems she is just out enjoying the night air.'
+		'As you walk along one of the paths, you see a girl laying on one of the benches. When you walk by, she smiles at you but doesn''t say anything. Seems she''s just out enjoying the night air.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/girl_pants_girl1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Out on the grass, there is a small group of students laughing and talking. Just then, one of the girls grabs another girl''s shorts and yanks them down to her ankles. Most of the rest hoot and holler, with some whistling. Both girls laugh, while the one being pantsed is slow to pull her shorts back up, seeming to enjoying all the cat calls she is getting.'
+		'Out on the grass, there is a small group of students laughing and talking. One of the girls suddenly grabs another girl''s shorts and yanks them down to her ankles. The others hoot and holler, with some whistling as both girls laugh. The girl is slow to pull her shorts back up, seeming to enjoying all the cat calls she''s getting.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/girl_running_naked1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see a naked girl sprinting in your direction, her face beet red in embarrassment. She has one arm crossed across her breasts and her other hand trying to cover her pussy. Another girl, fully dressed, is behind her but it doesn''t appear that she''s chasing the naked girl. Several people have also taken notice of the girl and have started recording her with their phones, which only further embarrasses the poor girl. You''re not sure what you just witnessed, but you remember people telling you that college life would be wild.'
+		'You see a naked girl sprinting in your direction, her face bright red in embarrassment. She has one arm across her breasts as her other hand tries to cover her pussy. Another girl, fully dressed, is behind her but it doesn''t appear that she''s chasing the naked girl. Several people have also taken notice of the girl and have started recording her with their phones, which only further embarrasses the poor girl. You''re not sure what you just witnessed, but you remember people telling you that college life would be wild.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 13:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/girl_vomit1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You across a group of students, all dressed nicely, stumbling along - clearly drunk, though some are worse than others. A few of them are leaning against each other to keep their balance. A girl in the group suddenly lunges over to the wall and begins puking her guts out. One of the less drunken guys sighs and reluctantly walks over to try and help her out.'
+		'You across a group of students, all dressed nicely while stumbling along clearly drunk, though some are worse than others. A few of them are leaning against each other to keep their balance. A girl in the group suddenly lunges over to the wall and begins puking her guts out as one of the less drunk guys sighs and reluctantly walks over to try and help her out.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 14:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/help_pee.jpg"></center>'
-		'There is a movie festival happening out on the quad, tonight. A lot of students are hanging out near a wall temporarily constructed to project the films on to, but there are others milling around the edges in the dark. A few of these latter students have taken the opportunity to start drinking, and quite a few of them are already drunk. One of them, a guy with two cups in his hands, is stumbling over close to you with a girl beside him. He loudly tells the girl that he needs to pee and makes a show of holding up the two full cups of beer. The girl shakes her head before unzipping his shorts and pulling out his dick. She holds his dick and aims it as he starts to urinate. As you walk by him, trying to ignore what he''s doing, he turns to you and gives you a wide, drunken grin.'
+		'There''s a movie festival happening out on the quad tonight. A lot of students are hanging out near a wall temporarily constructed to project the films on, but there are others milling around the edges in the dark. A few of these latter students have taken the opportunity to start drinking, and quite a few of them are already drunk. One of them, a guy with two cups in his hands, is stumbling over to you with a girl beside him. He loudly tells the girl that he needs to pee and makes a show of holding up the two full cups of beer. The girl shakes her head before unzipping his shorts and pulling out his dick. She holds his dick and aims it as he starts to urinate. As you walk by him, trying to ignore what he''s doing, he turns to you and gives you a wide, drunken grin.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 15:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/ir_pickup1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see an African boy with two white girls, they are hanging out near one of the buildings. He has his arm around one in a tight dress, while he drops his other hand to squeeze the butt of the one in jeans roughly. They all seem to be fairly drunk, carrying a bottle of vodka with them. The girl in the dress starts rubbing on the boy''s chest as he continues playing her friend''s butt, then reaches down and grabs his crotch, which only makes him grin. When he sees you, he winks and then starts leading the two girls off towards the dorm building nearby.'
+		'You see an African boy with two white girls hanging out near one of the buildings. He has his arm around one in a tight dress, while he drops his other hand to squeeze the ass of the other. They''re carrying a bottle of vodka with them and they all seem to be fairly drunk. The girl in the dress starts rubbing on the boy''s chest as he continues playing with her friend''s ass, then reaches down and grabs his crotch, which only makes him grin. When he sees you, he winks and then starts leading the two girls off towards the dorm building nearby.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -460,31 +460,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_warm':
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 17:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/passedout_girlb1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you pass one of the buildings, you see a girl passed out on the steps with her phone in her hand. Just as you are considering going over to help her, another couple of girls come rushing up and start helping the girl up. It looks like before she passed out, she managed to call her friends.'
+		'As you pass one of the buildings, you see a girl passed out on the steps with her phone in her hand. Just as you''re considering going over to help her, a group of girls come rushing up and start helping the girl up. It looks like she managed to call her friends before she passed out.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 18:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/2girl_dryhump2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see two cute girls being followed by a group of guys walking across the quad. They guys are calling out to the girls, trying to pick them up, but it''s clearly not working. When they reach one of the buildings, one of the girls grabs the other, turns her around and starts grinding against her ass. The second girl laughs and starts moaning along. "Is that what you boys are hoping for tonight?" the first girl shouts. The guys grin and shake their heads enthusiastically. "Well, too bad," she laughs. "The only action you assholes are getting tonight is from your own hands!" The two girls laugh and run off, leaving the group of guys, and you, bewildered.'
+		'You see two cute girls being followed by a group of guys walking across the quad. They guys are calling out to the girls, trying to pick them up, but it''s clearly not working. When they reach one of the buildings, one of the girls grabs the other, turns her around and starts grinding against her ass. The second girl laughs and starts moaning along. "Is that what you boys are hoping for tonight?" the first girl shouts. The guys grin and nod their heads enthusiastically. "Well, too bad," she laughs. "The only action you assholes are getting tonight is from your own hands!" The two girls laugh and run off, leaving the group of guys, and you, bewildered.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	elseif temp = 19:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/2girls_makeout_on_bench2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spot two girls on one of the many benches scattered around the University grounds. They are smoking and drinking, when one of them leans in and starts kissing the other girl, they quickly start making out. They either don''t care about anyone seeing them, or are unaware that anyone else is nearby; you don''t know which.'
+		'You spot two girls on one of the many benches scattered around the grounds. They''re smoking and drinking when one of them suddenly leans in and starts kissing the other girl as they quickly start making out. They either don''t care about anyone seeing them, or are unaware that anyone else is nearby.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif temp = 20:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/handjob.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you pass by one of the buildings, you notice a guy and girl side by side. Her arm is moving up and down and his shirt is pulled up. When you get closer, you can see that his pants are unbuttoned, and his dick is out and the girl is giving him a handjob. She gives you a huge smile as you walk by them.'
+		'As you pass by one of the buildings, you notice a guy and girl side by side. Her arm is moving up and down and his shirt is pulled up. When you get closer, you can see that his pants are unbuttoned and the girl is giving him a handjob. She gives you a huge smile as you walk past them.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/campus/events/night/warm/passedout_girlq1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk along one of the paths of the quad, you see a girl passed out on the grass with her phone in her hand. Just as you are considering going over to help her, another couple of girls come rushing up and start helping the girl up. It seems before she passed out she managed to call her friends.'
+		'As you walk along one of the paths of the quad, you see a girl passed out on the grass with her phone in her hand. Just as you''re considering going over to help her, a group of girls come rushing up and start helping the girl up. It seems she managed to call her friends before she passed out.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 end