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[changed] Julia's post-gym shower description to match her model and added some embelishments

hornguy6 1 year ago
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1 changed files with 17 additions and 15 deletions
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      locations/gschool_post_shower.qsrc

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locations/gschool_post_shower.qsrc

@@ -250,22 +250,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 			end
 		end
 		act 'Check out Julia':
+			shower_checkout['julia_m'] = 1
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/julpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You peek at Julia, who is standing by her locker, still drying herself off. She has a curvy build, with fairly large and perky breasts and a jiggly bubble butt. Her pussy has a neatly trimmed landing strip above it, while her long brown hair reaches just past her shoulders. She is the prettiest of the nerds, being comparable to most of the jocks and cool girls.'
 			if tits < 4:
-				'Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are fairly large, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours and most of your classmates.'
+				'You peek at Julia while she stands at her locker, still naked and still toweling her long brown hair off. Although her arms and legs are barely more than boney twigs, her breasts are quite large. Certainly bigger than your own, possibly one of the biggest in the whole class, and <i>very</i> soft looking.'
 			elseif tits = 4:
-				'Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are the same size as your own and are fairly large and firm. They are above average compared to other girls.'
+				'You peek at Julia while she stands at her locker, still naked and still toweling her long brown hair off. Although her arms and legs are barely more than boney twigs, her breasts are quite large. Probably about as big as yours, which makes them one of the biggest pairs in the whole class, and <i>very</i> soft looking.'
 			else
-				'Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are firm, but still not as large as yours. However, her breasts are above average compared to the rest of the class.'
+				'You peek at Julia while she stands at her locker, still naked and still toweling her long brown hair off. Although her arms and legs are barely more than boney twigs, her breasts are quite large. Not quite as big as yours, but certainly one of the biggest in the whole class, and <i>very</i> soft looking.'
 			end
 			*nl
+			'Unlike the other nerds, her pussy is smooth and clean shaven, clearly displaying her lovely innie lips between her thighs.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
 			act 'Keep checking her out':
-				cla
+				cla & *nl
 				if rand (1,4) = 1:
 					if npc_rel['A12'] >= 60:
 						'After watching her for a few minutes, she turns and looks at you. She blushes and smiles at you for a few seconds before she turns back and finishes getting dressed. You turn back to your own locker, blushing as you finish getting dressed.'
@@ -1132,27 +1133,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	act 'Check out Julia':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/watchjul.jpg"></center>'
-		'You peek at Julia soaping herself up. She has a curvy build, with large and perky breasts and a jiggly bubble butt, her pussy has a neatly trimmed landing strip above it and her long brown hair reaches just past her shoulders. She is the pretties of the nerds, being comparable to most of the jocks and cool girls.'
+		
 		if tits < 4:
-			'Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are fairly large, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours and most of your classmates.'
+			'You peek at Julia soaping herself up. Although her arms and legs are barely more than boney twigs, her breasts are quite large. Certainly bigger than your own, possibly one of the biggest in the whole class, and <i>very</i> soft looking.'
 		elseif tits = 4:
-			'Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are the same size as your own and are fairly large and firm. Compared to the other girls, her breasts are above average.'
+			'You peek at Julia soaping herself up. Although her arms and legs are barely more than boney twigs, her breasts are quite large. Probably about as big as yours, which makes them one of the biggest pairs in the whole class, and <i>very</i> soft looking.'
 		else
-			'Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are fairly large and firm, but still not as large as yours. Compared to your classmates, her breasts are above average.'
+			'You peek at Julia soaping herself up. Although her arms and legs are barely more than boney twigs, her breasts are quite large. Not quite as big as yours, but certainly one of the biggest in the whole class, and <i>very</i> soft looking.'
 		end
 		*nl
+		'Unlike the other nerds, her pussy is smooth and clean shaven, clearly displaying her lovely innie lips between her thighs.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Stop peeping':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gs 'gschool_lessons4','shower_watch_end'
 		act 'Keep checking her out':
-			cla
-			if rand (1,4) = 1:
+			cla & *nl
+			if juliaQW['date'] = 1:
+				'As Julia notices you stealing glances at her and freezes in place. She swallows nervously and slowly folds her arms behind her back, giving you a full view of her body as the water runs down it. She chews on her bottom lip, seemingly both anxious and excited by the attention as her face begins to turn red. After less than half a minute, she turns back to the shower but you keep seeing her glance back your way until both of you are finished.'
+			elseif rand (1,4) = 1:
 				if npc_rel['A12'] >= 60:
-					'After watching her for a few minutes, she turns and looks at you. She blushes and smiles at you before she turns back to finish showering. You turn back around, blushing as you finish your own shower.'
-				elseif npc_rel['A12'] <= 20:
-					'After watching her for a few minutes, she turns and looks at you. She blushes and looks fearful before she quickly turns away, turns off the shower and leaves. You turn back, blushing as you finish your own shower.'
+					'A few minutes go by as you keep stealing glances at her until suddenly you try to sneak a peek and see her looking your way. Her eyes slowly trail up your body until they make contact with yours, widening in surprise. Her face turns bright red and she quickly turns back to her shower but you can''t help notice a slight smile at the corner of her mouth as she does.'
 				else
-					'After watching her for a few minutes, she turns and looks at you. She blushes and turns away from you before quickly turning off the shower and leaving. You turn back, blushing as you finish your own shower.'
+					'A few minutes go by as you keep stealing glances at her until suddenly you try to sneak a peek and see her looking your way. Her eyes slowly trail up your body until they make contact with yours, widening in surprise. She blushes, looking panicked as she quickly turns away, turns off the shower and leaves.'
 				end
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 				gs 'stat'