[fixed] Incorrect uses of a before a word begining with a vowel and duplicate a's

locations/BDSM_Club.qsrc

@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 				!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/bdsm_club/<<$BDSMrole>><<BDSMmeet>>_2.jpg"></center>'
 				'The woman sighs disappointedly.'
 				'"Pity, we are short on subs."'
-				'"There is a registration fee of 10,000 <b>₽</b>. You should wear a expensive or formal clothing."'
+				'"There is a registration fee of 10,000 <b>₽</b>. You should wear an expensive or formal clothing."'
 				'"That seems reasonable" You reply.'
 				'"If you find a submissive and come together, then they can earn you tips."'
 				'"Before you can get started, you will have some orientation under the guidance of an experienced mistress." She points at herself, "The cost of this is covered by your registation fee. If you are satisfied, sign this document."'

locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Rescue':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/5.jpg"></center>'
 			end		
-			'You wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest and lightly pull him off the guy as you tell him "Hey Fedor, It''s over now. I''m safe, thanks to you." as you give him a innocent smile. Fedor closes his eyes as he tilts his head back trying to collect his thoughts and then responds, "You''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t know what came over me." You hug him as you tell him "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor kisses you then stays with you as you wash up. After you finish Fedor walks you out of the restroom.'
+			'You wrap your arms around Fedor''s chest and lightly pull him off the guy as you tell him "Hey Fedor, It''s over now. I''m safe, thanks to you." as you give him an innocent smile. Fedor closes his eyes as he tilts his head back trying to collect his thoughts and then responds, "You''re right <<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t know what came over me." You hug him as you tell him "I''m so lucky to have you." Fedor kisses you then stays with you as you wash up. After you finish Fedor walks you out of the restroom.'
 				
 			if EndMovie = 1:
 				act 'Leave restroom':gt 'FedorEv3', 'Movies 3'

locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  '3way1':
 		minut -= 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You feel Ivan''s hands clench your waist as he lifts you up and pushes you down on Fedor dick causing a instant rush of arousal and excitement to flow through you. You reach over to continue jerking Ivan as you Ride Fedor''s dick so that Ivan won''t feel left out and you can see a very pleased smile on his face as he stares into your eyes while you jerk him off. Ivan then lays back, making himself comfortable. After a few seconds Ivan leans forward and smacks your ass. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> why don''t you put that pretty mouth of yours to work?"'
+		'You feel Ivan''s hands clench your waist as he lifts you up and pushes you down on Fedor dick causing an instant rush of arousal and excitement to flow through you. You reach over to continue jerking Ivan as you Ride Fedor''s dick so that Ivan won''t feel left out and you can see a very pleased smile on his face as he stares into your eyes while you jerk him off. Ivan then lays back, making himself comfortable. After a few seconds Ivan leans forward and smacks your ass. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> why don''t you put that pretty mouth of yours to work?"'
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'boyStat', 'A3'

locations/Gadsarai.qsrc

@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				'On your right is a <a href="exec: gt ''Gadsarai'',''cow'' ">cattle</a> barn.'
 			end
 			if hour > 9 and hour < 20 and week < 6 or horse_river = 2:
-				'On your left is a a horse stable.'
+				'On your left is a horse stable.'
 			else
 				'On your left is a <a href="exec: gt ''Gadsarai'',''horse'' ">horse</a> stable.'
 			end

locations/Gnpc.qsrc

@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ if GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 1:
 			sub += 5
 			GboyBalabol[numnpc] = 2
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You think a about what he said. Because of the rumours, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
+			'You think about what he said. Because of the rumours, a lot of people have already a bad opinion about you and you don''t want to lose your <<$bfTitle[numnpc]>>, too. So you reluctantly decide to forgive him.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 		end

locations/IgorEv.qsrc

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 menu_off = 1
 !!Igor = A4
 
-!!It starts off by talking to Igor at school and there will be a option where he is aceing history and Sveta is not as good as she wants to be. No mention of grades just she is doing worse class than he is. She can then ask if they can study together. This leads to them going to Igor's house to study and talk. From there two things can happen, each is it's own story that links back up later on.
+!!It starts off by talking to Igor at school and there will be an option where he is aceing history and Sveta is not as good as she wants to be. No mention of grades just she is doing worse class than he is. She can then ask if they can study together. This leads to them going to Igor's house to study and talk. From there two things can happen, each is it's own story that links back up later on.
 
 !!1) Friendship gets high enough and Igor asks Sveta out on a date.
 !!2) Friend Sveta catches him cross dressing.
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught':
 			'You give him a reassuring hug. "I would never do that to you, I promise I won''t tell a soul."'
 			'He lets out the breath he was holding and relaxes a bit as he hugs you back. "Thank you, I am so relieved to hear you say that."'
 			'You smile to him a bit. "Actually it is kinda sexy, but I am curious. Why do you do it? I mean if you are so worried about anyone knowing, why do it at all?"'
-			'He is silent for a moment and then shrugs. "I don''t really know, one day I was home alone and bored. I went into my sisters room and seen all those clothes and I suddenly had a urge to try them on. So I did and it felt great. I guess I have always been curious what it would be like to be a girl."'
+			'He is silent for a moment and then shrugs. "I don''t really know, one day I was home alone and bored. I went into my sisters room and seen all those clothes and I suddenly had an urge to try them on. So I did and it felt great. I guess I have always been curious what it would be like to be a girl."'
 			'Nodding a bit you reply to him. "I can see that, we are all trying to figure out who we are going to be.'
 			'He offers a faint smile. "Yeah, I guess I just wish I was a girl instead."'
 			act 'Let''s study':

locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretroom':
 						gs'stat'
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tanga4_9.jpg"></center>'
-						'Katja, begins moaning louder and bucking her hips against your fingers. You pull the dildo out of her mouth and your fingers out of her twat. You roll her over onto her stomach, as you slide down till your face is over her ass as you slip the wet dildo into her soaking wet pussy and begin to stroke the dildo deeply in her pussy. With your other hand you pull her ass cheeks apart and being to lick her asshole. Stroking the dildo as deep into her as it will go, she moans with pleasure getting ever louder. She beings to arch her hips up trying to take even more of the dildo into herself, but there is no more to give her. Instead you stick your tongue in her ass and begin to tongue fuck her ass. This brings even louder moans and before long she starts bucking her hips as her body spasms in a intense orgasm, as she cums.'
+						'Katja, begins moaning louder and bucking her hips against your fingers. You pull the dildo out of her mouth and your fingers out of her twat. You roll her over onto her stomach, as you slide down till your face is over her ass as you slip the wet dildo into her soaking wet pussy and begin to stroke the dildo deeply in her pussy. With your other hand you pull her ass cheeks apart and being to lick her asshole. Stroking the dildo as deep into her as it will go, she moans with pleasure getting ever louder. She beings to arch her hips up trying to take even more of the dildo into herself, but there is no more to give her. Instead you stick your tongue in her ass and begin to tongue fuck her ass. This brings even louder moans and before long she starts bucking her hips as her body spasms in an intense orgasm, as she cums.'
 						act'Use dildo':
 							*clr & cla
 							pcs_horny = 0

locations/LCwork.qsrc

@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/sex/couple.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you walk up to the couple, you remember them from before. The guy grins at you and the girl smiles. "Told you we would be back, are you ready to go?"'
 		'They live in the residential area of the city, and it''s a short drive there. You remember it form last time, they inform you, she is ready to try anal, but wants you to coach her through it and get her ready.'
-		'Once inside he watches the two of you have fun. He waits until you bring his girlfriend to a orgasm.'
+		'Once inside he watches the two of you have fun. He waits until you bring his girlfriend to an orgasm.'
 	
 		gs 'arousal', 'give_cuni', 60, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start5':
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 90, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'lesbian'
 	minut -= 90 
 	
-	if horand <= pcs_horny:Set pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 2 & 'Even though the girl had no prior experience with women, she touches you in all the right places and you reach a orgasm more than once during your session.'
+	if horand <= pcs_horny:Set pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 2 & 'Even though the girl had no prior experience with women, she touches you in all the right places and you reach an orgasm more than once during your session.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	if horand > pcs_horny:Set pcs_horny += 10 & 'You mostly focus on making this a pleasurable experience for her, and don''t orgasm yourself. That''s fine, though... the ecstatic look in her eyes when you gave her the third orgasm of the evening more than makes up for it!'
 

locations/MDining.qsrc

@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ elseif rand (0,100) < 3:
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/tablepussy1.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	'A naked woman sits on the end of the table with her feet on it and her legs spread wide. A middle aged couple stand in front of her, the woman pointing at varies parts of the naked womans pussy, apparently giving her husband a anatomy lesson on pussies and the proper way to pleasure them.'
+	'A naked woman sits on the end of the table with her feet on it and her legs spread wide. A middle aged couple stand in front of her, the woman pointing at varies parts of the naked womans pussy, apparently giving her husband an anatomy lesson on pussies and the proper way to pleasure them.'
 	act 'Return':gt 'MDining'
 elseif rand (0,100) < 3:
 	menu_off = 1

locations/MartinSex2.qsrc

@@ -505,7 +505,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexDyn':
 					'"Shit, I think the condom broke," Martin curses under his breath.' 
 					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill."'
 				elseif sexcontra = 5 and preziktype = 0 and tabletkishot < 1 and pillcon2 < 30000: 
-					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath. A shiver runs through you as you realize that you have a used condom stuck inside you and could just have been impregnated after all.'
+					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath. A shiver runs through you as you realize that you have an used condom stuck inside you and could just have been impregnated after all.'
 				elseif sexcontra = 5 and preziktype = 0: 
 					'"Shit, I think the condom slipped off," Martin curses under his breath.' 
 					'"Don''t worry," you say with a comforting smile, "I''m on the pill." <<$OpenInnerThought>>Still need to get that condom out of my vagina though,<<$CloseInnerThought>> you think to yourself.'

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You both end up behind a out of order ride. Niko brings his face close to yours. "You promised to do me a favor, now may I please gaze upon your nude body?" You reply, "You want me to strip, here?" Niko holds your arms as he replies, "Yes I would and don''t worry no one will see us here."'
+			'You both end up behind an out of order ride. Niko brings his face close to yours. "You promised to do me a favor, now may I please gaze upon your nude body?" You reply, "You want me to strip, here?" Niko holds your arms as he replies, "Yes I would and don''t worry no one will see us here."'
 
 			act 'Strip':
 				cls
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 							minut += 5
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/pose3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You catch the bear then hold it to your chest as you give Niko a innocent smile. You can feel your heart beat slowing down as you begin feeling more comfortable, and less nervous. Niko begins fidgeting, as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze, as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens you mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
+							'You catch the bear then hold it to your chest as you give Niko an innocent smile. You can feel your heart beat slowing down as you begin feeling more comfortable, and less nervous. Niko begins fidgeting, as you drop to your knees in multiple poses. The stuffed bear slips out of your hand, causing you to lean over to pick it up. You pick up the bear then look up to see Niko standing directly in front of you with a lustful gaze, as he unbuttons his pants, causing you to gasp which opens you mouth just enough for his dick to slide in.'
 							*nl
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/1/nude/pose4.jpg"></center>'
 							gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5, 'sub'
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 1_2':
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/sad2.jpg"></center>'
-						'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you a exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body, and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand, and walks you toward the train station.'
+						'"I trust you but I...I just can''t." Niko gives you an exaggerated frown as re responds, "You have such a beautiful body, and I just want you to feel more confident with your body." You lower your head as you respond, "I don''t quite have that confidence...yet." Niko smiles as he says, "We could work on that if you like." You reply, "Maybe but not today." Niko responds, "Fair enough. Let''s get you home." Niko helps you get dressed then takes your hand, and walks you toward the train station.'
 
 						act 'Follow Niko':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Home 1'
 					end
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-					'You gve Niko a innocent smile as you nod your head. Niko rubs on your cheek as he says, "That''s my girl. I knew that I made the right choice with you." You reach into Niko''s pants then wrap your fingers around his penis, gripping it firmly before pulling it out of his pants then gently licking the tip. Niko continues rubbing on your cheek while giving you an adoring smile.'
+					'You gve Niko an innocent smile as you nod your head. Niko rubs on your cheek as he says, "That''s my girl. I knew that I made the right choice with you." You reach into Niko''s pants then wrap your fingers around his penis, gripping it firmly before pulling it out of his pants then gently licking the tip. Niko continues rubbing on your cheek while giving you an adoring smile.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat3.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat4.jpg"></center>'
 						'You wrap your lips around Niko''s dick, taking as much of it inside your mouth, as you can before licking and sucking the shaft. Niko begins lightly moaning while keeping his eyes on you, making you feel very sexy. You begin thinking to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>Those eyes of his. He makes me feel so sexy. I must not disappoint him. I will please you Niko, and you will know that I am the right one for you.</font> Niko''s eyes suddenly begin squinting as he groans, filling your mouth with his warm seed. You try your best to swallow it, but with the rocking boat, and your poor position on the seat, some of it leaks out of your mouth, and onto the floor of the boat.'
 						*nl
-						'Niko pats your head gently before saying, "You were outstanding <<$pcs_firstname>>. Thank you. You are one sexy girl." You give Niko a innocent smile, as he lays back then wraps his arms around you. You both spend the next two hours chatting about your past experiences.'
+						'Niko pats your head gently before saying, "You were outstanding <<$pcs_firstname>>. Thank you. You are one sexy girl." You give Niko an innocent smile, as he lays back then wraps his arms around you. You both spend the next two hours chatting about your past experiences.'
 						*nl
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/2/boat/boat5.jpg"></center>'
 
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 										if pcs_apprnc >= 20:
 											'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> is much hotter than Sonia anyway. Let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
 										else
-											'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> looks like a overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
+											'Vitek: That sounds like a great idea. <<$pcs_firstname>> looks like an overgrown pig, but we can always fuck her from behind. Alright let''s do it. Hey <<$pcs_firstname>>, you''re coming with us.'
 										end
 									end
 									*nl
@@ -1578,7 +1578,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 					cls
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/hall3.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see then use your hands to jerk off the other jocks. The jock that you are sucking begins rubbing your hair off of your face as he says, "That''s a good girl. Just like that." You look up to see Ivan Prokhorov, giving you a approving smile. You can hear some of the other jocks talking about you.'
+					'You wrap your lips around the first dick you see then use your hands to jerk off the other jocks. The jock that you are sucking begins rubbing your hair off of your face as he says, "That''s a good girl. Just like that." You look up to see Ivan Prokhorov, giving you an approving smile. You can hear some of the other jocks talking about you.'
 					*nl
 					'Lazar: I never thought that <<$pcs_nickname>> would end up being a whore, did you?'
 					'Fedor: No I always thought of her as a sweet girl, you know, one of the good ones.'
@@ -1804,7 +1804,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
 									'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me, and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. <font color=#FF00FF>I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.</font> You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss.'
 									*nl
-									'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head, as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
+									'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such an incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head, as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
 
 									act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 								end
@@ -1880,7 +1880,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me, and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. <font color=#FF00FF>I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.</font> You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss.'
 			*nl
-			'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod, as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
+			'After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such an incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod, as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
 
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end

locations/NikoDreams.qsrc

@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Woods Home':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Happy Home">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/happyhome/mansion/happyhome.jpg"></center>'
 	if VKTeeHee = 0:
-		'You finally approach the end of the forest when you see a old derelict mansion. As you walk toward the mansion, you can see; what appears to be a woman standing in the middle of the path, leading to the house. She appears to be crying with some kind of dark essence surrounding her. <font color=#FF00FF>She must be stranded here like me. Maybe I can help her.</font> you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine before seeing a strange looking <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">cat</a> on a tree stump, licking its paw.'
+		'You finally approach the end of the forest when you see an old derelict mansion. As you walk toward the mansion, you can see; what appears to be a woman standing in the middle of the path, leading to the house. She appears to be crying with some kind of dark essence surrounding her. <font color=#FF00FF>She must be stranded here like me. Maybe I can help her.</font> you suddenly feel a cold chill down your spine before seeing a strange looking <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">cat</a> on a tree stump, licking its paw.'
 	else
 		'There is an old derelict mansion in the distance, but the path to the mansion is blocked by a crying woman with a dark essence surrounding her. <a href="exec:gt ''NikoDreams'', ''TeeHee''">TeeHee</a> continuously rubs against your leg while purring softly, obviously wanting your attention.'
 	end

locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -735,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Fyodor':
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/5.jpg"></center>'
 		'You turn to see Fedor with a concerned look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>> what are doing over here with him? You should be careful hanging around guys like him. He is no good for you." Niko just stares on in silence with an annoyed look on his face. You turn to Fedor and say, "Don''t worry Fedor it''s not what it looks like. Niko was just..." Niko quickly continues your sentence. "<<$pcs_firstname>>''s father is planing on buying one of my brothers old bikes, so she came to me to discuss the details. That''s all." Fedor gives Niko a blank stare. "I''ve seen your brother before and I don''t think that <<$pcs_firstname>> should be dealing with him or you." Niko shrugs as he replies, "Well that''s <<$pcs_firstname>>''s call, not yours." Fedor walks right up to Niko then clenches his fists. "Well no one asked for your input."' 
-		'Niko doesn''t seem worried as he casually leans against the wall. "No need to get violent. I''m sure <<$pcs_firstname>> doesn''t want us fighting in front of her for no reason. That would be really rude of us, wouldn''t it?" Fedor looks back to you with a embarrassed look on his face. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> I hope I''m not making you uncomfortable. Just be careful with this one okay?" You give Fedor a nod and a smile as he turns around then walks away.'		
+		'Niko doesn''t seem worried as he casually leans against the wall. "No need to get violent. I''m sure <<$pcs_firstname>> doesn''t want us fighting in front of her for no reason. That would be really rude of us, wouldn''t it?" Fedor looks back to you with an embarrassed look on his face. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>> I hope I''m not making you uncomfortable. Just be careful with this one okay?" You give Fedor a nod and a smile as he turns around then walks away.'		
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko4.jpg"></center>'		
 

locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Payback':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile'+rand(2,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b>, and Niko counts it before giving you a approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>>, and don''t try to avoid me, or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
+						'You hand Niko 200 <b>₽</b>, and Niko counts it before giving you an approving nod, "Excellent, See you tomorrow <<$pcs_nickname>>, and don''t try to avoid me, or things will end badly, for you." Niko puts the money in his pocket then walks away. You take a minute to get dressed then try to regain your composure before leaving the restroom.'
 
 						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lunch', 'break'
 					end

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 				cls
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You begin sucking his dick at a increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to swallow every drop of. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then reaches into his pocket, pulling out his wallet then placing some money in your pocket. "Here is a little tip for you. Buy yourself something nice." You give him a smile as you respond, "Thank you so much." He gives you a wink before escorting you out of the back room.'
+				'You begin sucking his dick at an increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to swallow every drop of. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then reaches into his pocket, pulling out his wallet then placing some money in your pocket. "Here is a little tip for you. Buy yourself something nice." You give him a smile as you respond, "Thank you so much." He gives you a wink before escorting you out of the back room.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/swallow3.mp4"></video></center>'				
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'Trucker'
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 7':
 				cls
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/7/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You begin sucking his dick at a increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to block from sliding down then spit into the garbage. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then says, "You must really hate the taste huh? You did a good job, Thank you <<$NikoSlutName>>. Now let''s get you back to your pimp." He then escorts you out of the back room.'
+				'You begin sucking his dick at an increased pace, causing the man to let out occasional grunts. After a few more seconds, the man groans, as his hard cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his warm seed which you do your best to block from sliding down then spit into the garbage. After the man finishes, he buttons his pants then says, "You must really hate the taste huh? You did a good job, Thank you <<$NikoSlutName>>. Now let''s get you back to your pimp." He then escorts you out of the back room.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'				
 				gs 'stat'		

locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ if numnpc = 14:
 	end
 
 	if (npc_rel[$static_num] > 60) and (KatjaOTN > 0) and (KatjaLust > 15) :
-		!!new Katja stuff not sure where you want to put it. It should be a option when you talk to her at school or the dance where it says Chat, but add this as a option.
+		!!new Katja stuff not sure where you want to put it. It should be an option when you talk to her at school or the dance where it says Chat, but add this as an option.
 		act 'Kiss Katja':
 			*clr & cla
 			if $loc = 'gdkin':

locations/Vika.qsrc

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ if hour < 20:
 		elseif talkrand = 4:
 			'Vika says that one of her friends who''s guy did not pull out in time and came inside of her. But Vika is smarter than that, she buys birth control pills at the pharmacy control. Then it doesn''t matter if the guy pulls out or wears a condom.'
 		elseif talkrand = 5:
-			'Vika says in the park, she accidentally went to a area and was offered money for sex.'
+			'Vika says in the park, she accidentally went to an area and was offered money for sex.'
 		elseif talkrand = 6:
 			'Vika tells did a nude photo shoot at the photography studio, but it is bad for your reputation to do.'
 		elseif talkrand = 7:

locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to the coaches office just as you open the door a arm reaches out and grabs you by the hand and pulls you inside.'
+	'You go to the coaches office just as you open the door an arm reaches out and grabs you by the hand and pulls you inside.'
 
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A69'
 	silavag = 2
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 	if Voltrenersee = 1:
-		'With a puzzled look on face you look at your coach, he looks at you then let''s go of your hand, and mumbles something: "You have a good technique <<$pcs_lastname>>", with each word his voice becomes more confident "You need to train more. At some point later, I will show you some more techniques, to improve your game." With a even more puzzled look on your face, you turned around and walked out'
+		'With a puzzled look on face you look at your coach, he looks at you then let''s go of your hand, and mumbles something: "You have a good technique <<$pcs_lastname>>", with each word his voice becomes more confident "You need to train more. At some point later, I will show you some more techniques, to improve your game." With an even more puzzled look on your face, you turned around and walked out'
 	end
 	if Voltrenersee = 2:
 		'Pulling you in and closing the door the coach whispered angrily: "<<$pcs_lastname>> is this what you asking for?", blushing you ran out of the coaches office away from Mikhail Nikolaevich. Although you desire to play on the first team. You''re not ready for something more.'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Defl':
 					act 'Recover':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex27.jpg"></center>'
-						'With a grunt you feel his hot sperm shooting into you, filling you up, pulling out of you his cock is covered in blood and sperm, the coach began to talk about something, something about you not be a girl anymore but you really didn''t hear what he said the pain of losing your virginity and the ecxtasy of nearly having your first orgasm distracted you. You finally notice your coach giving you a attentive and caring look, as he helps you gather up your stuff. Once you are redressed you leave his office, ready to see the world in a new way.'
+						'With a grunt you feel his hot sperm shooting into you, filling you up, pulling out of you his cock is covered in blood and sperm, the coach began to talk about something, something about you not be a girl anymore but you really didn''t hear what he said the pain of losing your virginity and the ecstasy of nearly having your first orgasm distracted you. You finally notice your coach giving you an attentive and caring look, as he helps you gather up your stuff. Once you are redressed you leave his office, ready to see the world in a new way.'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 					end
 				end
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 						gs 'stat'
 						cls
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex16.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Unable to withstand this double pressure, your body convulses as you have a orgasm. Once the feeling passes you look up at your coach as he says "Yes <<$pcs_lastname>>, you look so hot"'
+						'Unable to withstand this double pressure, your body convulses as you have an orgasm. Once the feeling passes you look up at your coach as he says "Yes <<$pcs_lastname>>, you look so hot"'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gdksport', 'start'
 					end
 					i = rand(1,4)

locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 			*nl
 			'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a bulge is noticeable on the lower part of your belly.'
 			'The customer looks at it with joy and punches at the bulge with his fist.'
-			'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from a uncorked champagne bottle.'
+			'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
 		end
 		pain['tummy'] += 20
 		gs 'stat'

locations/anushapt.qsrc

@@ -916,7 +916,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'getpleasured':
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les6.jpg"></center>'
 				'With both of you spent, Anushka rolls herself off you and the two of you lay side by side for several minutes while you catch your breath. Then you suggest, "Maybe we should get dressed before someone walks in, like your brothers."'
 				*nl
-				'She nods "Yeah you''re right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you in close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks deeply into your eyes. The shared look is only broken by occasional quick but soft kisses from her and soon from you as well. Then she gives you a one more long and soft kiss, with a hint of passion that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
+				'She nods "Yeah you''re right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you in close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks deeply into your eyes. The shared look is only broken by occasional quick but soft kisses from her and soon from you as well. Then she gives you one more long and soft kiss, with a hint of passion that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
 				*nl
 				'On that little high note, she gets out of bed and starts getting dressed. You soon do the same and within a couple of minutes you are both fully dressed again.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'lesbian'
@@ -1538,7 +1538,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'album':
 	*clr & cla
 	nush_album = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'There is a open photo album on the nightstand next to the bed, you walk up and glance at it. "Is that your family?"'
+	'There is an open photo album on the nightstand next to the bed, you walk up and glance at it. "Is that your family?"'
 	'In a rare occurrence Valeria almost seems to smile as she picks up the old album and starts to look through the photos of her and her family.'
 	'"We all looked so happy then..." she says. "It was a whole different world back then. Come have a look."'
 	'You sit next to her as she flips through the photo album, all of a sudden you notice something...'

locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A158'] -= 3
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have an orgy with the two of you."'
 					'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
 					'Valentin gives his head a little jerk, indicating that you should move away. "If you don''t want to party, then get lost."'
 					'After that the two of them completely ignores you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone and trying very hard to ignore the sounds of the two of them having sex on the couch.'
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'plan':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A158'] -= 2
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/det3sum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have a orgy with the two of you."'
+					'Before your face gets too close to his cock you pull away, Anushka doesn''t really try to stop you when she feels you resist. "Sorry guys, but I just wanted out of detention, I don''t want to have an orgy with the two of you."'
 					'Anushka seems completely unfazed and before you even finish speaking she lowers her head and starts sucking Valentin''s cock.'
 					'Valentin shakes his head a little. "Then be quiet and watch, maybe you''ll learn something today."'
 					'After that the two of them completely ignores you from that point on. Feeling a bit uncomfortable, you get up and move away a bit farther. You spend the rest of your time keeping yourself busy by playing on your phone or watching the two of them fuck on the couch, wondering if you made the right decision.'
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcownal.jpg"></center>'
-				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast, bucking and grinding against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have a orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, taking his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. Then she takes a loud shuddering breath, shaking all over with her eyes rolling up as she slowly comes to a stop, with his dick still buried up her ass.'
+				'You watch as she rides him hard and fast, bucking and grinding against him with his cock deep up her ass. Many minutes later she really picks up the pace, moaning loudly, she is obviously about to have an orgasm. She hammers herself down on his cock, impaling herself, taking his cock as deep in her asshole as it can go. Then she takes a loud shuddering breath, shaking all over with her eyes rolling up as she slowly comes to a stop, with his dick still buried up her ass.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'dom'
 				act 'Finish':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie fight':
 				act 'Standing':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+					'You and Anushka stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything Anushka''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps an eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
 					act 'Rebel':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank4.jpg"></center>'
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'temptation':
 				'"Sorry I just can''t." Then you turn and head back to your table in detention. You just can''t. The rest of detention passes very slowly, you don''t see her for the rest of it.'
 				act 'Go home':minut += 15 & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
-!!This is a option if exhibition is 20 but less than 30. I figure with someone else already naked and encouraging Sveta she could do it due to peer pressure even if her exhibition is not normally high enough.
+!!This is an option if exhibition is 20 but less than 30. I figure with someone else already naked and encouraging Sveta she could do it due to peer pressure even if her exhibition is not normally high enough.
 			if pcs_inhib >= 20 and pcs_inhib < 30:
 				act 'I would like to but...':
 					*clr
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 	'You''re waiting for the janitor to pass.'	
 	if anushLimitedQuestions > 0 and anushTalkedofDolls = 0:
-!!this will only be a option until it is asked, once you ask about her clothes once it doesn''t come back up. Maybe some code Anushka told location of Dolls and once activated this never shows up again.	
+!!this will only be an option until it is asked, once you ask about her clothes once it doesn''t come back up. Maybe some code Anushka told location of Dolls and once activated this never shows up again.	
 		act 'Make small talk':
 			*clr
 			cla
@@ -625,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/weed.jpg"></center>'
 				'You know this might be a bad call but you want to know. "Is it really that bad?"'
-				'She arches her brows at you as if to say are you serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself but she would like blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is a abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad, so yeah. It''s really that bad. So just drop it."'
+				'She arches her brows at you as if to say are you serious. "I should tell you to ask her yourself but she would like blow you off or knock out your teeth. Let''s just say her father is an abusive drunk and her mother, when conscious is as meek as a mouse and lets him do what ever he wants. Her older brother is just as bad, so yeah. It''s really that bad. So just drop it."'
 				'Knowing you have pushed things as far as you dare, you change the subject.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'anushka', 'chatWhileWaiting'
 			end
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 			else
 				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/hiding.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-!!This happens only the first time Sveta asks about it. Then it is no longer a option.
+!!This happens only the first time Sveta asks about it. Then it is no longer an option.
 			'Curious about her plans for the future, you decide to ask what she plans to do once school is over. "Once we graduate what do you plan to do? Focus on the band more?"'
 			'"Sorta, I mean I plan to keep playing with the band and hopefully we can make it. But I am not going to depend on that, I plan to also go to the University in the city as well. So I have a back-up plan, in case the band never takes off."'
 			'You are a bit surprised, you always heard she was doing bad like all the gopniks. "Oh... I didn''t know you were doing that good in school."'

locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 													killvar '$orgasm_txt'
 													'Finally, she crawls up to lay beside you, leaning over to give you a kiss. You can taste your own pussy juices on her lips. After a brief kiss, the two of you lay side by side for a few moments. Then she finally gets up and starts to get cleaned up and dressed. As she does you notice she is moving a little gingerly. Then looks at you and says. "Fuck my ass is already sore, it''s going to really hurt, later on, bitch!"'
 													'Laughing a bit, since you can tell she is mostly kidding, you get up and start to get dressed. "Oh please, you are such an anal whore, I damn near fell in."'
-													'She snorts and flips you off as the two of you get dressed. "Fuck you, Bitch!" She says in a obviously amussed tone.'
+													'She snorts and flips you off as the two of you get dressed. "Fuck you, Bitch!" She says in an obviously amussed tone.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian'
 													minut += 5
 													gs 'stat'

locations/bedr.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if husbandrink = 11 and husbanstrapon > 0 and husbandrinkday ! daystart:
 		cla
 		menu_off = 1
 
-		if husbanstrapon = 1:'"Honey, you were so drunk last night, that I decided to teach you a lesson and put a anal plug up your ass. I''ll never do it again, forgive me please", you say.'
+		if husbanstrapon = 1:'"Honey, you were so drunk last night, that I decided to teach you a lesson and put an anal plug up your ass. I''ll never do it again, forgive me please", you say.'
 		if husbanstrapon = 2:'"Dear, I wanted to make you happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole, but you still didn''t cum, then I took a small dildo and some lube and put in your ass, I''ve never seen you cum like that before. I even gave you a secong blowjob. Forgive me, but you seemed to enjoy it so much, that I could''t stop. I just wanted to make you happy.", you lie to him.'
 		if husbanstrapon = 3:'"Dear, I wanted to make you a happy, so I started to give you a blowjob, but you didn''t cum, so I inserted a finger into your asshole, but you still didn''t cum. When I put in a second finger you began to move your ass towards my fingers moaning heavily, I thought that you like it, so I put on a strapon. You enjoyed it so much that you finished over and over again, and I continued until I was tired. I then licked all the cum off your body and went to sleep. I just wanted to make you happy and you were enjoying it. Forgive me please", you lie him.'
 

locations/bedr2x.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ end
 if komp = 1:'On the other bedside table is your <a href="exec:gt ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a>.'
 *nl
 if husbandrinkday = daystart:
-	if husbanstrapon = 1:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you used a anal plug on him.'
+	if husbanstrapon = 1:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you used an anal plug on him.'
 	if husbanstrapon = 2:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you stuck a dildo in his ass.'
 	if husbanstrapon = 3:'Your husband is still passed out drunk, after you fucked him in the ass with a strap-on.'
 end
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if husbandrink = 10 and hour > 20 and hour < 23 and husbanstrapon = 0:
 	'"That pig!" You swore, and then started thinking of ways to teach him a lesson.'
 
 	if analplug = 1:
-		act 'Insert a anal plug':
+		act 'Insert an anal plug':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			menu_off = 1

locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -1440,7 +1440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:nailsandneedlestits':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/nailtits.mp4"></video></center>'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"</font>'
-		'The nails are put on your tits and nailed like a one plank to another.'
+		'The nails are put on your tits and nailed like one plank to another.'
 		step = 6
 		act 'Endure': gt 'brothel', $this
 	elseif step = 6:
@@ -1784,7 +1784,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:shockAnus':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/shockanus.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You have obviously annoyed the Client by what you did.'
 	'He takes a long rod: <font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Now where''s the fucking button!"</font>'
-	'A shiver runs through your spine and soon you know why! He sticks the rod in your anus, giving you a electrocuting your sensitive hole!"'
+	'A shiver runs through your spine and soon you know why! He sticks the rod in your anus, giving you an electrocuting your sensitive hole!"'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!"</font> Tears run out of your eyes in pain and terror..'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Don''t do it again slut! Or this will be halfway in your anus!"</font>'
 

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/f (2).jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_QW['A34'] = 4:
 		if analplugIN = 1:
-			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has a anal plug inserted into it:'
+			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has an anal plug inserted into it:'
 			gs 'brother', 'anus_check'
 		else
 			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus:'
@@ -1211,7 +1211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev5':
 		act'Further':gt 'brother','brother_voyeur_ev6'
 	elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 4:
 		if analplugIN = 1:
-			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has a anal plug inserted into it:'
+			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus, which has an anal plug inserted into it:'
 			gs 'brother', 'anus_check'
 		else
 			'You turn your booty towards your brother and lean forwards, resting your elbows on the chair, revealing your <<$vaginatipe2>> pussy and <<$anustipe>> anus:'

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
 								'"I-I''m, uhh, helping Kolka with his homework right now!" you stammer, trying to force down the adrenaline in your body and keep your voice from shaking.'
 								'"Oh, that''s alright then. You can help me later. Make sure your brother gets his grades up!"'
 								*nl
-								'Sighing with relief, you and your brother share a a panicked look before turning back to the table with his homework on it. For the rest of the hour, the two of you don''t make eye contact, let alone even <i>think</i> about doing something that might get you caught again.'
+								'Sighing with relief, you and your brother share a panicked look before turning back to the table with his homework on it. For the rest of the hour, the two of you don''t make eye contact, let alone even <i>think</i> about doing something that might get you caught again.'
 								act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
 							end
 						else

locations/clothing_descriptions.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ elseif CloQuality = 5:
 elseif CloQuality = 6:
 	$description = 'This good quality outfit'
 elseif CloQuality = 7:
-	$description = 'This is a outstanding quality outfit'
+	$description = 'This is an outstanding quality outfit'
 end
 
 if CloThinness = 1:

locations/dateF.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You give her a once over and then give her a amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
+			'You give her a once over and then give her an amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
 			'Not fazed by your brashness she continues on, "I know it''s just a front with girls like you. All of you just act hard but I''ve got you all figured out. Tell me this instead, what is your name?"'
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'You think <<$boydesc>> is cute-looking and even though you''re not sure about this you decide grasping her hand.'
 			'"Aren''t you going to tell me your name?" she asks.'
-	!!I would suggest a option for Sveta to be happy about it.
+	!!I would suggest an option for Sveta to be happy about it.
 			act 'Decline':gt 'dateF', 'decline'
 			act 'Happily tell her your name':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -271,12 +271,12 @@ end
 				
 if $args[0] = 'date_choice':
 	if sunWeather = 1:
-		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is a option
+		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is an option
 		act '"Let''s go to the park."':gt 'dateF', 'datepark'
 	end
 	!!not implemented yet
 	!!act '"Let''s go to a cafe"':gt 'dateF', 'datecafe'
-	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be a option.
+	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be an option.
 	act '"Let''s go to a bar."':gt 'dateF', 'datebar'
 end
 

locations/dateM.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You give him a once over and then give him a amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
+			'You give him a once over and then give him an amused look, "What did you say? I hope you know what you''re getting yourself into."'
 			'Not fazed by your brashness he continues on, "I know it''s just a front with girls like you. All of you just act hard but I''ve got you all figured out. Tell me this instead, what is your name?"'
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/'+lover_picrand+'.jpg"></center>'
 			'Even though you know it''s impolite to shake hands with the opposite sex, you think <<$boydesc>> is cute-looking and even though you''re not sure about this you decide grasping his hand.'
 			'"Aren''t you going to tell me your name?" he asks.'
-	!!I would suggest a option for Sveta to be happy about it.
+	!!I would suggest an option for Sveta to be happy about it.
 			act 'Decline':gt 'dateM', 'decline'
 			act 'Happily tell him your name':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -268,16 +268,16 @@ end
 				
 if $args[0] = 'date_choice':
 	if sunWeather = 1:
-		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is a option
+		!!if good weather, day/night, go to park is an option
 		act '"Let''s go to the park."':gt 'dateM', 'datepark'
 	end
 	if $loc = 'pavResidential' or $loc = 'pavCommercial' or $loc = 'down':
-		!!if in pav or city center this is a option
+		!!if in pav or city center this is an option
 		act '"Let''s go to the movie theater."':gt 'dateM', 'datecinema'
 	end
-	!!is also a option, I am sure there is a cafe in every location.
+	!!is also an option, I am sure there is a cafe in every location.
 	act '"Let''s go to a cafe"':gt 'dateM', 'datecafe'
-	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be a option.
+	!!once we add a bar to every town/city location this will always be an option.
 	act '"Let''s go to a bar."':gt 'dateM', 'datebar'
 end
 

locations/dibodi.qsrc

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodiart':
 	bodimodel = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/artstudio/downud1.jpg"></center>'
     '"I''m so glad, you agreed. Moses Kruzhinsky is the artist, everyone just calls him Masya." She pointed at a man painting a girl. "My name is Galina."'
-    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl here that would be perfect for your work." The artist looked up and then stared at you with a appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his current work.'
+    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl here that would be perfect for your work." The artist looked up and then stared at you with an appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his current work.'
     if lesbian > 0:'She chatted about a variety of things, using her hands to gesture often, which caused her breasts to move in pleasant ways, you barely pay attention to what she says as you find yourself staring at her chest.'
     'After a few minutes, perhaps noticing you paying more attention to her body than to what she is saying she falls silent.'
     'Several minutes of silence pass before she speaks again. "Our place is in the old town, you can come anytime, it was nice meeting you, but I need to get back to work."'
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bodiart1':
     '"I understand your reluctance, but you shouldn''t be worried. Moses Kruzhinsky is a great artist, everyone just calls him Masya." She pointed at a man painting a girl. "My name is Galina."'
     'You listen to her and tell her. "I have done photo shoots before, but this." Indicating the other models. "This is a bit different being naked in public in a crowd of people."'
     '"Don''t worry about it." said Galina "Even if we are completely naked, you don''t have to worry about rape or anything like that happening to you. We all watch out for one another and we will make sure no one bothers you, we all make sure no one bothers anyone, we are we almost like one big family."'
-    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl for your work, who in my opinion would be perfect." The artist looked up and then stared at you with a appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his work.'
+    'Then she turned back to the artist waving her arms and cried. "Masya, there is a new girl for your work, who in my opinion would be perfect." The artist looked up and then stared at you with an appraising look, after a moment he nodded and went back to his work.'
     if lesbian > 0:
         'She chatted about a variety of things, using her hands to gesture often, which caused her breasts to move in pleasant ways, you barely pay attention to her as you find yourself starting at her chest.'
         'After a bit, perhaps noticing you watching her body more than paying attention to her she falls silent.'

locations/dimaEv.qsrc

@@ -751,7 +751,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkawarns':
 		pee +=1
 		face_write = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/dom/blowbang4.jpg"></center>'
-		'The brutal rape seems to go on forever before Dimka finally achieves release. He stands panting over you then grabs hold of his mostly limp cock, points it at you, and then with a grunt, begins to empty his bladder. He directs the stream of hot piss all over your body, soaking your face and hair. You close your eyes, but the stinging liquid seeps in. Eventually, he runs out of piss and staggers away from you. Opening your eyes, you can see him rummaging through the desk. He comes back with a eyeliner pencil and uses it to write something on your forehead.'
+		'The brutal rape seems to go on forever before Dimka finally achieves release. He stands panting over you then grabs hold of his mostly limp cock, points it at you, and then with a grunt, begins to empty his bladder. He directs the stream of hot piss all over your body, soaking your face and hair. You close your eyes, but the stinging liquid seeps in. Eventually, he runs out of piss and staggers away from you. Opening your eyes, you can see him rummaging through the desk. He comes back with an eyeliner pencil and uses it to write something on your forehead.'
 		'"There. He says with satisfaction. All is forgiven. I will see you soon, dearest." Dimka unties you and leaves the room to take a shower. You waste no time gathering your clothes and escaping from him. You manage to make your way home and into your bathroom unseen. Criying you read between tears "Whore"'
 		gs 'arousal', 15, 'vaginal', 'rough'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -121,14 +121,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study':
 	!!make it so there is only a 50% chance he is here even if the hours are correct
 	if ((hour >= 18 and week <= 5) or (hour >= 9 and week => 6)) and rand(0,1) = 0:
 		if met_DimkaDad = 0:
-			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for a older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
+			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for an older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
 			if hotcat > 6:
 				gt 'dimaHome', 'study1'
 			else
 				gt 'dimaHome', 'study2'
 			end
 		elseif met_DimkaDad = 1:
-			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for a older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
+			'You see Dimka''s father Leonid sitting behind a beautiful polished large wooden desk. He is well dressed and not bad looking, for an older guy. He seems to be working on something, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
 			if hotcat > 6:
 				gt 'dimaHome', 'study3'
 			else

locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 3:
 				You need stop him somehow. But what can you do?'
 				if grupvalue[3] > 50:
 					dimaRevChoice = 3
-					!!if Nerd social group 50 or higher this is a option
+					!!if Nerd social group 50 or higher this is an option
 					act 'Review the situation':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Classroom</font></b></center>'

locations/dinParty.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_toilet_event':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_7_6.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'From the gentle caresses of girls you feel incredible pleasure, completely trusting them you feel totally relaxed. Then Ira takes Lena''s place licking your pussy, while Lena slides her tongue to your asshole as she begins to lick it.'
-							'From this dual tongue lashing you don''t last long. You start moaning loudly and your body spasms hard with a orgasm, coating Ira''s face from the wetness of your pussy. Once you orgasm passes both girls stand up and Lena starts licking Ira''s face, licking your wetness off her. You quickly join in licking Lena''s face licking Ira''s juices off her face. While Ira''s kisses you both in turns.'
+							'From this dual tongue lashing you don''t last long. You start moaning loudly and your body spasms hard with an orgasm, coating Ira''s face from the wetness of your pussy. Once you orgasm passes both girls stand up and Lena starts licking Ira''s face, licking your wetness off her. You quickly join in licking Lena''s face licking Ira''s juices off her face. While Ira''s kisses you both in turns.'
 							
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'group'
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'toilet_mast':
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	if i < 3:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_1_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
 	if i = 3:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_toilet_1_<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'With your arousal over powering your senses you couldn''t take it anymore, you pull your panties down and rigorously begin rubbing your clit. Once you are good and soaked you slide your fingers inside of yourself and finger fuck yourself, switching back and forth between rubbing your clit and fucking your fingers until you bring yourself to a orgasm.'
+	'With your arousal over powering your senses you couldn''t take it anymore, you pull your panties down and rigorously begin rubbing your clit. Once you are good and soaked you slide your fingers inside of yourself and finger fuck yourself, switching back and forth between rubbing your clit and fucking your fingers until you bring yourself to an orgasm.'
 	
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_thank':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_boy_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are happy to take this opportunity, putting your fingers on the records you move them around, making god awful noises. The guys stop you before to long. "Ok I think that''s enough, I think you made my ears bleed." He says with a laugh.'
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc,$metka
-!why not add in a option here to start the series below?
+!why not add in an option here to start the series below?
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dj_boobs':
@@ -362,9 +362,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	if pcs_inhib < 40:inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_gost_1_' + rand(1,7) + '.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in a unrestrained dance.'
+	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in an unrestrained dance.'
 	'You jump, sway your body, and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
-	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in a erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
+	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
 	if pcs_danc < 50:'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care.'
 	act 'Have a rest':gt $loc,$metka
 	act 'Dance more':gt 'dinParty', 'dance' 

locations/dk.qsrc

@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'holl':
 							minut += 20
 							gs 'stat'
 							'Alexei lives in a studio apartment. The decoration leaves no doubt in your mind that he lives alone - it would seem that Alexei is a bachelor, a musician and... and sometimes a drunk: Lying on the floor are bottles of beer and wine, huge speakers - as big as those you''d find on a concert - take up two entire corners of the living room and most of the floor near them is cluttered up by musical equipment that looks really expensive.' 
-							'He has you sit down on the sofa and brings a bottle of spirit and a snack, then sits down in an armchair opposite you and you two start drinking and talking. Alexei turns out to be a helpful, simple, cheerful guy with a rich biography and a interesting outlook on life and he somehow manages to make you thoughtful at one moment only to make you break out in laughter the next.' 
+							'He has you sit down on the sofa and brings a bottle of spirit and a snack, then sits down in an armchair opposite you and you two start drinking and talking. Alexei turns out to be a helpful, simple, cheerful guy with a rich biography and an interesting outlook on life and he somehow manages to make you thoughtful at one moment only to make you break out in laughter the next.' 
 							'Time passes and even though you drink quite a bit, you are handling the alcohol quite well; Alex, however, quickly goes from tipsy to drunk.'
 							'After a relatively long silence, he speaks up again. His speech is slurred but his look is sharp and there''s a glint in his eyes: "Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we''ve been having fun so far... but you didn''t just agree to come with me for a little chat, did you? I think it''s time we go to the main event. Come here."'
 							'You are completely taken aback by his arrogance for a moment and part of you is angry and wants to walk out. A much stronger, hornier part makes you rise to your feet and wobbly walk to Alexei''s chair.'

locations/dolls.qsrc

@@ -178,10 +178,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'savva':
 		npc_rel['A204'] += 2
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Patch Work Dolls</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/savva/savva.jpg"></center>'
-		'You ask him about the shop. He tells you it opened a few years ago and they mostly cater to the college kids. Occasionally they get hassled by the local gopniks or police, but he likes the job. Then asks if you need help finding a outfit.'
+		'You ask him about the shop. He tells you it opened a few years ago and they mostly cater to the college kids. Occasionally they get hassled by the local gopniks or police, but he likes the job. Then asks if you need help finding an outfit.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dolls', 'savva'
 	end
-!!this only shows up as a option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
+!!this only shows up as an option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
 	if Anush_dolls = 2:
 		act 'Anushka sent me':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viola':
 		'You ask her about the shop. She tells you the place is only a few years old and is about the only place to buy a decent outfit in the whole city; unless you are willing to shop online, that is, which leads her to talking about the woes of online shopping where clothes don''t fit and never seem to have anywhere near as good a quality as they seem to on the pictures. You get the impression that the topic really bothers her and she could go on for some time if you let her.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dolls', 'viola'
 	end
-!!this only shows up as a option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
+!!this only shows up as an option if Anushka sent Sveta to the store from one of her chat options in anushka file or anushapt file.
 	if Anush_dolls = 2:
 		act 'Anushka sent me':
 			*clr & cla

locations/down.qsrc

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if shantpopala > 0:
 	'"Don''t lie to use you stupid bitch.", as he said that, he hits you on your head and you pass out.'
 	'You wake up somewhere out of town, you''re tied up and naked. You look down on yourself and notice traces of cum on your body, it also seems like that cum is flowing from your ass and your pussy.'
 	'You notice that the blokes, who captured you sit next to you and seem to have a break, some of them are smoking.'
-	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get a evil grin on their face.'
+	'"Oh, she is finally awake, then the next fuck-cycle will be far more fun.", one of the men said, as he noticed you moving. Some of them are starting to get an evil grin on their face.'
 	'They got up and came back at you, barely a minute later you wished your were still knocked out, as these jackasses had their ways with. You tried to resist, but the tape hindered you from moving. Not long after, everything faded to black and you lost you consciousness again.'
 	'You feel groggy as you wake up, but it feels like someone is grapping you by the hair and shouts at you. "Let this be a lesson for you, bitch.", he shouts, then kicks you into the stomach and leaves. As you collapse on the ground holding your stomach in pain, you take a glimpse at the street and see the assholes driving away in their black jeep. The mainroad is about 200m away, you crawl most of the way there, but soon you can walk again and eventually you find your way back to one of the mainstreets.'
 

locations/experiment.qsrc

@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'testarea:lockeroom:gown':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images\locations\shared\clinic\experiment\gown.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'You wear nothing but the long, plain white gown. It is secured behind your back by a strap, leaving your back and ass cheeks barely covered.'
-	'You feel as if you were naked, and a insecurity comes over you...'
+	'You feel as if you were naked, and an insecurity comes over you...'
 
 	if expVolunteer = 0:act 'Leave the room and go back to nurse':gt 'experiment', 'testarea:start:treatment:ask1'
 	if expVolunteer = 1:act 'Leave the room and go back to nurse':gt 'experiment', 'deskTalk:volunteer:start'
@@ -2389,7 +2389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'testarea:treatment:room:event:nurse:talk:Q7':
 	'"And?" the excitement is killing you...'
 	'"They don''t survive it. Better said, their ''devices'' don''t survive it, and they slowly follow afterwards." she explains.'
 	'You gasp, "They died because why, their cocks... fell off?"'
-	'The nurse nods, "Crudely said, yes. It can cause a incurable gangrene that in the end causes the victim to die. That is another reason why doctors use these africans, people without documents, without connection to reality. People who are missed by nobody... Until they finally fix this side effect, that is."'
+	'The nurse nods, "Crudely said, yes. It can cause an incurable gangrene that in the end causes the victim to die. That is another reason why doctors use these africans, people without documents, without connection to reality. People who are missed by nobody... Until they finally fix this side effect, that is."'
 	nurseTalk = 0
 	act 'Continue':gt 'experiment', 'testarea:treatment:room:event:nurse:check'
 end

locations/femcyc.qsrc

@@ -756,7 +756,7 @@ end
 
 
 !{Luteal to Menstration or Pregnancy. First it verifies this is the Luteal phase. Then it adds an hour to the age of the eggs. Then if there is a fertized egg, it rolls a random chance. if the egg age is low, it checks for risk of an entopic pregnancy. This is increased with older age and if you have a tubal ligation sterilization.}
-!{If there is a ectopic pregnancy, it sets the first unborn baby in the array to this. Ectopic pregnancies occur when the fertilized egg implants "too early" after fertlization (and therefore in the fallopian tube). The risk is higher with age, but this is also a common complication with certain forms of birth control, notably tubal ligation. Each egg could be different. It then removes the fertilized egg, adds an embryo, Then it adds some pregnancy hormone if you arent already pregnant, and calls you officially pregnant.}
+!{If there is an ectopic pregnancy, it sets the first unborn baby in the array to this. Ectopic pregnancies occur when the fertilized egg implants "too early" after fertlization (and therefore in the fallopian tube). The risk is higher with age, but this is also a common complication with certain forms of birth control, notably tubal ligation. Each egg could be different. It then removes the fertilized egg, adds an embryo, Then it adds some pregnancy hormone if you arent already pregnant, and calls you officially pregnant.}
 !{Otherwise, it adds your womb sterility factor to the imp_rand. Then it checks if your imp_rand crosses a threshold for implantation. Younger women implant easier. It then sets the next baby to the next unimplanted baby in your kid array. It registers the kid as a normal pregnancy, removes a fertilized egg and adds an embryo. Then it adds some pregnancy hormone if you arent already pregnant, and calls you officially pregnant.}
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cyc3':

locations/gameover.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 if over = 1:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/deadgirl.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are dragged out by the morgue attendants, the pathologist noted that you died from a unknown cause. Soon your body was handed over to your parents...'
+	'You are dragged out by the morgue attendants, the pathologist noted that you died from an unknown cause. Soon your body was handed over to your parents...'
 elseif over = 2:
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/gameover/over.jpg"></center>'
 	if StoryLine = 0 and ntstart = 0:

locations/gdksport.qsrc

@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Ivan_bored':
 			'He rubs the tip of his dick against your asshole for a couple of moments and then you feel a sharp pain as he pushes it in. With only your saliva as lubrication, it doesn''t slide in as easily. You bite your lip and cry out a little in pain. He relaxes a little and rubs your back as he takes it slow, giving you time to stretch and adjust to his cock invading your ass.'
 			'He slowly strokes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, with each stroke pushing it just a little deeper in your ass. Once he is about half way in your moans turn from pain to pleasure, while one of your hands starts rubbing your clit. You start moaning louder and panting, your pussy is now soaking wet. After a couple of minutes the pleasure is building up inside of your body so much you no longer even need to stimulate your clitorous any longer. "Fuck <<$pcs_nickname>>, you not only have the hottest ass of any girls in school, but the tightest one I have ever fucked." Ivan says as he can tell your getting into it, grabbing your hips with both hands. He drives himself balls deep into your ass, eliciting a squeak of pain from you, but sensation of pain is quickly overwhelmed by pleasure.'
 			'Holding onto your hips with both hands, he holds you steady and keeps you from pulling away, as he jack hammers his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock balls deep in your ass. You moan in pain and pleasure, mostly pleasure, the sounds of your moans, almost drowned out the sounds of his skin slapping against yours, his balls slapping against your wet pussy. You place your hands against the stall wall to keep him from driving your head into it, from his powerful and violent thrusts. As he abuses your poor little asshole, you find yourself loving every second of it.'
-			'You have a intense orgasm that leaves your legs shaking and barely able to keep standing. You are almost to the point where you are unable to take it anymore, either from the intense pleasure or the growing burning sensation in your ass. Either way the matter is moot, as Ivan drives himself once more balls deep into your ass, but this time holds himself there. You feel his cock twitching as he shoots hot sperm deep in your ass, spurt after spurt filling you up with his seamen in what seems a almost unending stream. Finally he takes a shuddering breath and pulls out of you, leaving you to almost collapse with out his support.'
+			'You have an intense orgasm that leaves your legs shaking and barely able to keep standing. You are almost to the point where you are unable to take it anymore, either from the intense pleasure or the growing burning sensation in your ass. Either way the matter is moot, as Ivan drives himself once more balls deep into your ass, but this time holds himself there. You feel his cock twitching as he shoots hot sperm deep in your ass, spurt after spurt filling you up with his seamen in what seems an almost unending stream. Finally he takes a shuddering breath and pulls out of you, leaving you to almost collapse with out his support.'
 			'You both start to get dressed, him faster than you, as your still unsteady on your feet, from your shaky legs. Once he is done getting dressed he helps you gather the rest of your clothes from where he tossed them aside. As you are seeing to the final adjustments of your clothes he goes to the bathroom door and looks out both ways down the hall, motioning you over just as the class bell rings. Oh well, at least you have a good excuse to be a little late, you think to yourself with a smile.'
 			'As you start to go out the door, he stops you and squeezes your ass with his strong hand and says. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are coolest chick in school, not to mention the hottest. Maybe we can do this again sometime soon, or maybe I will come see you in the shower at the community center some night, maybe even tonight." He grins and winks at you, giving your ass a hard slap, as he rushes off to class. You only have time to nod in agreement to his idea of doing this again, you bite your lip as you watch him go. You have mixed feelings about this, Ivan is a great guy and a lot of fun, but you know he doesn''t want a girlfriend. He just wants to be friends with benefits, but is that enough for you? You don''t have time to think on it more as you hurry to class.'
 

locations/gdktoilet.qsrc

@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mensmast':
 					gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'guy from the men''s bathroom', rand(19,45)
 					npc_dick[$npclastgenerated] = RAND(10,24)
 					gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-					'You look up and notice the stall door opens. Right then a man in a orange jumpsuit walks in. He tells you, "Do you know where you are?" Unable to respond after your intense orgasm the man unzips his jumpsuit and takes out his <<npc_dick[$npclastgenerated]>>cm dick and places it near your mouth.'
+					'You look up and notice the stall door opens. Right then a man in an orange jumpsuit walks in. He tells you, "Do you know where you are?" Unable to respond after your intense orgasm the man unzips his jumpsuit and takes out his <<npc_dick[$npclastgenerated]>>cm dick and places it near your mouth.'
 					if pcs_dom >= 20:
 						act 'Run away':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mensglory':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/4standmiss.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'He suddenly pulls out of you and roughly turns you back around, and picks you up. You spread your legs and he lowers you back down, till you feel his <<$dick_girth>> dick slide back inside of your pussy. He carries you, fucking you the whole time, you are impressed by his strength, as he manages to not only carry you, but fuck you at the same time. He slams your back roughly but not painfully onto a open stall door and presses your body against it, then he starts fucking you in harder. It seems he is nowhere near ready to cum.'
+				'He suddenly pulls out of you and roughly turns you back around, and picks you up. You spread your legs and he lowers you back down, till you feel his <<$dick_girth>> dick slide back inside of your pussy. He carries you, fucking you the whole time, you are impressed by his strength, as he manages to not only carry you, but fuck you at the same time. He slams your back roughly but not painfully onto an open stall door and presses your body against it, then he starts fucking you in harder. It seems he is nowhere near ready to cum.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'

locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -1684,7 +1684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hide':
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'text_sex_cumface':
 		txt_sex_cumface = RAND(0,3)
 		if txt_sex_cumface = 0:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> covers all your face with his hot sticky semen.'
-		if txt_sex_cumface = 1:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> pulls out his cock and aims it at your face. You see its purple head from which spurts his cum. You feel as warm sticky blobs are landing on your face and a after a while his hot cum runs down over your chin and drips on the ground.'
+		if txt_sex_cumface = 1:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> pulls out his cock and aims it at your face. You see its purple head from which spurts his cum. You feel as warm sticky blobs are landing on your face and after a while his hot cum runs down over your chin and drips on the ground.'
 		if txt_sex_cumface = 2:$txt_sex_cumface = '"Oh fuck!" <<$boydesc>> shouts out and pulls his cock out of your sweet captivity and takes it in his hand. A first long stream appears, you screw up your eyes and feel as a trickle of semen hits your chin and made a rope over your cheek. The second shot he aims deliberately straight at your cheek so you have barely a chance to close your eyes. This eruption is rich enough to cover your face with sticky cream.'
 		if txt_sex_cumface = 3:$txt_sex_cumface = '<<$boydesc>> shifts his cock up to front of your face. At that moment a sticky stream strikes straight into your <<$liptalk3>>. Trickles of semen is flowing down along your chin and drips on the ground. Ropes of sticky cum hangs down from your chin now. <<$boydesc>> spots it after a while when he finally complacently releases last drops of his semen.'
 		'<<$txt_sex_cumface>>'

locations/gpoli.qsrc

@@ -1752,7 +1752,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maternity_ward_donation':
 			nipple_cream = 0
 			if lactatemv > lactatemm/2:
 				'The nurse looks at your breasts'
-				'Nurse: Looks like you could go for a another pumping...shall we?'
+				'Nurse: Looks like you could go for another pumping...shall we?'
 				act 'have your breasts pumped again': gt 'gpoli', 'maternity_ward_donation'
 				act 'enough for today':
 					*clr & cla

locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat < 5:
 		'After a couple of minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says, "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers, "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors of stalls slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You was right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
 		*nl
-		'When they see it is you they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say, "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door. When you hear another one say, "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" Then Vitek speaks up, "Shut up, I got a idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
+		'When they see it is you they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say, "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door. When you hear another one say, "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" Then Vitek speaks up, "Shut up, I got an idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -1001,7 +1001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb1':
 	act 'Wait them out':
 		cla
 		*nl
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb2':
 	act 'Wait':
 		cla
 		*nl
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -1092,7 +1092,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb3':
 		act 'Wait':
 			cla
 			*nl
-			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -1190,7 +1190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having a orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
+			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having an orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		act 'Just watch':
@@ -1201,7 +1201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/coupleturn.jpg"></center>'
 			'He lifts one of her legs off the ground and turns her sideways. Her leg is barely up in the air when his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock penetrates her pussy. You would be impressed with his stamina if you weren''t so occupied with enjoying this.'
 			*nl
-			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having a orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
+			'Anushka starts to scream as her body rocks by muscle spasms, obviously having an orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks, before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards as he gets dressed she uses her fingers to clean up her face of cum, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed she looks over at you and winks, "Hope you enjoyed the show." Then the two of them leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -1238,7 +1238,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb4':
 		cla & *clr
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her harder. A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else

locations/gschool_detention.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 end
 
 !!new detention events
-!!If Sveta is a outcast, nerd or popular girl it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, Alyona, Lina, Lariska, Christina, or Stasya
+!!If Sveta is an outcast, nerd or popular girl it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, Alyona, Lina, Lariska, Christina, or Stasya
 !!If Sveta is a jock it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, Alyona, or Christina
 !!If Sveta is a Gopnik it can be the following girls - Paulina, Lena, Lera, or Alyona
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie':
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anushka_wedgie':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/atomicwed.jpg"></center>'
 				'When you let go and put your hands up to show you have stopped she, yanks you forward and trips you. Once you are on the ground, you try to turn over but she holds onto your panties and starts dragging you across the floor by your panties. You struggle to get up but she keeps pulling you before you can get your balance and you can''t pry her hands off your panties. Just then the teacher walks in. "What''s the meaning of this? Miss Konstantinov let go of her at once." Anushka lets go, but not with out a final yank.'
 				*nl
-				'The teacher speaks again. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> take your seat. The rest of you take your seats and study. Miss Konstantinov come with me." He grabs Anushka roughly by the arm and drags her out of the library. You go and take your seat and try and pick your underwear out of your twat and crack of your ass. It is all stretched out of shape, it might even be ruined. About fifteen minutes later the teacher returns alone and takes a seat, he keeps a eye on everyone the rest of detention.'
+				'The teacher speaks again. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> take your seat. The rest of you take your seats and study. Miss Konstantinov come with me." He grabs Anushka roughly by the arm and drags her out of the library. You go and take your seat and try and pick your underwear out of your twat and crack of your ass. It is all stretched out of shape, it might even be ruined. About fifteen minutes later the teacher returns alone and takes a seat, he keeps an eye on everyone the rest of detention.'
 				gs 'gschool_detention', 'sitting_events'
 			end
 			act 'Refuse to let go first': gt 'anushka', 'wedgie fight'
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'upskirt1':
 	if $rand_girl = 'Veronika' or $rand_girl = 'Ekaterina' or $rand_girl = 'Anushka': jump'newupskirtgirl1'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/spreadg.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are sitting at a table bored out of your mind waiting for detention to end. You start looking around and you notice <<$rand_girl>> sitting at a table across from you, after a few minutes she leans back in her chair and relaxes. Spreading her legs slightly as she does, the movement draws your eyes and you are given a eye full. Apparently she forgot her panties today because her pussy is now on full display for any to see, well any from the right vantage point, like yourself.'
+	'As you are sitting at a table bored out of your mind waiting for detention to end. You start looking around and you notice <<$rand_girl>> sitting at a table across from you, after a few minutes she leans back in her chair and relaxes. Spreading her legs slightly as she does, the movement draws your eyes and you are given an eye full. Apparently she forgot her panties today because her pussy is now on full display for any to see, well any from the right vantage point, like yourself.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'upskirt1':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/spreadg.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided it is none of your business and do your best to ignore it. After several minutes one of the boys takes notice and walks over to the table and puts his phone under it and starts taking pictures. She quickly realizes what''s going on and closes her legs together and blushes, soon the two of them are in a heated whisper argument which soon draws the teachers attention. When both feign nothing is wrong and go back to their seats, the teacher keeps a eye on them for a bit before losing interest.'
+		'You decided it is none of your business and do your best to ignore it. After several minutes one of the boys takes notice and walks over to the table and puts his phone under it and starts taking pictures. She quickly realizes what''s going on and closes her legs together and blushes, soon the two of them are in a heated whisper argument which soon draws the teachers attention. When both feign nothing is wrong and go back to their seats, the teacher keeps an eye on them for a bit before losing interest.'
 		'The rest of detention passes much more quietly with nothing else interesting happening.'
 		act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 	end
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strange':
 			npc_rel['A152'] -= 5
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/feofan/sex/school/det1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You call the teacher over and all color leaves Feofan''s face. He pleads with you not to tell on him but when the teacher arrives, you let him know what he was doing. After a bit of arguing, the teacher grabs the magazine from him, looks it over and let''s him know that what got him into detention is nothing compared to the trouble he''s in now. The teacher has Feofan move to a seat near his desk so he can keep a eye on him, then thanks you and leads Feofan to the front of the library.'
+			'You call the teacher over and all color leaves Feofan''s face. He pleads with you not to tell on him but when the teacher arrives, you let him know what he was doing. After a bit of arguing, the teacher grabs the magazine from him, looks it over and let''s him know that what got him into detention is nothing compared to the trouble he''s in now. The teacher has Feofan move to a seat near his desk so he can keep an eye on him, then thanks you and leads Feofan to the front of the library.'
 			'As they walk away, Feofan gives you a really dirty look. You spend the rest of the time playing on your phone occasionally getting dirty looks from him, whenever the teacher is not looking.'
 			act 'Go home': gt 'gschool_detention', 'end'
 		end
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strange':
 				$orgasm_or = 'no'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
-!!want to change this to needing dom/will what ever we use in place of dom in the future or being a gopnik, a gopnik bullying a nerd should always be a option.
+!!want to change this to needing dom/will what ever we use in place of dom in the future or being a gopnik, a gopnik bullying a nerd should always be an option.
 				if pcs_dom >= 10:
 					act 'Glaze his face':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ass_fuck':
 	*nl
 	'He pauses and it takes a moment for him to process what you just said but when it dawns on him that he can realize his porn magazine fantasy, he wastes no time, perhaps afraid you might change your mind: He climbs up on the table next to you, spooning you, then starts rubbing the tip of his dick against your anus. He rubs it against your pussy again, gathering more juices from there, and repeats the process; you almost didn''t expect him to be this considerate when you stated your desire. When he has your puckered hole lubed up a little with your own fluids, he gently eases his dick into your ass. Eliciting a moan of pleasure and pain from you, he slowly slides his way deeper into your ass, only stopping when he feels you tense up. Then, he start fucking your ass, gingerly at first, savoring the feeling of being inside your other hole.'
 	*nl
-	'He even reaches over and starts rubbing your clit as he moves in and out, and as your moans get louder, you feel yourself building up towards a orgasm, but his slow pace is driving you mad and you can''t take it anymore. You reach back, grab his ass and pull him closer so his dick slides deeper up your ass. Perceptive as ever, he takes the hint and works his way deeper into you butt until he is balls deep. Once there, he starts fucking you faster too, slowly building up speed until he is hammering your ass, giving you exactly what you wanted, what you needed.'
+	'He even reaches over and starts rubbing your clit as he moves in and out, and as your moans get louder, you feel yourself building up towards an orgasm, but his slow pace is driving you mad and you can''t take it anymore. You reach back, grab his ass and pull him closer so his dick slides deeper up your ass. Perceptive as ever, he takes the hint and works his way deeper into you butt until he is balls deep. Once there, he starts fucking you faster too, slowly building up speed until he is hammering your ass, giving you exactly what you wanted, what you needed.'
 	$orgasm_txt = 'Another, even more intense orgasm crashes through your body and to your luck, the hand of his that isn''t rubbing your clit clamps tightly over your mouth, muffling your cries.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'dom'
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eatout':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/eatout.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She stands up and pulls up her panties, while he starts to unbutton his pants. She says something that leads to a bit of a heated discussion that you can''t quite hear but you think you know what it is about. Finally he gives up and buttons his pants back and they both head back for the front of the library. As she gives him a kiss on the cheek.'
+		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She stands up and pulls up her panties, while he starts to unbutton his pants. She says something that leads to a bit of a heated discussion that you can''t quite hear but you think you know what it is about. Finally he gives up and buttons his pants back and they both head back for the front of the library. As she gives him a kiss on the cheek.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -979,7 +979,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'finger':
 		cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/blowjob.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. She pulls her shirt and bra off half way through. After a bit more finger banging from him, she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She drops down to her knee''s as he pulls his dick out of his pants, she immediately starts sucking his cock. She bobs her head up and down along the shaft of his cock, sucking it for all she is worth. Finally he grunts, she slows down a bit and uses her hand to help milk his cock. Only once he has finished does she stop sucking his dick. Having obviously swallowed his whole load, they both get dressed and then head back to the front of the library.'
+		'You watch them, he seems to really know what he is doing, she is fighting to keep from screaming out, many minutes go by. She pulls her shirt and bra off half way through. After a bit more finger banging from him, she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. She drops down to her knee''s as he pulls his dick out of his pants, she immediately starts sucking his cock. She bobs her head up and down along the shaft of his cock, sucking it for all she is worth. Finally he grunts, she slows down a bit and uses her hand to help milk his cock. Only once he has finished does she stop sucking his dick. Having obviously swallowed his whole load, they both get dressed and then head back to the front of the library.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -1024,7 +1024,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy':
 		cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/doggy'+rand(1,2)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, for a bit and they go at it for some time. She especially seems to really be having the time of her life. She is fighting to keep from screaming out, for several minutes as she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. He hammers away at her for a few more minutes before pulling out and shooting his load all over her ass. Afterwards they get cleaned up and dressed, exchanging a few quiet words, before heading back to the front of the library.'
+		'You watch them, for a bit and they go at it for some time. She especially seems to really be having the time of her life. She is fighting to keep from screaming out, for several minutes as she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. He hammers away at her for a few more minutes before pulling out and shooting his load all over her ass. Afterwards they get cleaned up and dressed, exchanging a few quiet words, before heading back to the front of the library.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -1067,7 +1067,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couple':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/couple.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, they are very passionate and surprisingly tender in their love making and that is what this is. They are making love instead of fucking, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having a orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. They quickly get dressed and straighten up their clothes, they have one more final passionate kiss before heading back to the front of the library.'
+		'You watch them, they are very passionate and surprisingly tender in their love making and that is what this is. They are making love instead of fucking, many minutes go by. Then she starts to spasm, obviously having an orgasm. He keeps it up through her whole orgasm, once it is finally over. They quickly get dressed and straighten up their clothes, they have one more final passionate kiss before heading back to the front of the library.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':
@@ -1109,7 +1109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesbian':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/udesklick.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You watch them, Lera seems to really know how to lick pussy. Most likely she has a lot of practice at it, after awhile Lena finally has a orgasm. Once she does she pushes Lera''s face away form her pussy and gets dressed, as Lera continues to masturbate herself for some time before she finally has a orgasm as well. Once she does she moves up and takes a seat next to Lena, all smiles and the two of them start to talk. The seem intent on staying their for the rest of detention.'
+		'You watch them, Lera seems to really know how to lick pussy. Most likely she has a lot of practice at it, after awhile Lena finally has an orgasm. Once she does she pushes Lera''s face away form her pussy and gets dressed, as Lera continues to masturbate herself for some time before she finally has an orgasm as well. Once she does she moves up and takes a seat next to Lena, all smiles and the two of them start to talk. The seem intent on staying their for the rest of detention.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Masturbate':

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_scoolboy':
 !!instead of random lets make it Vitek, Dan, or Vasily which uses group 1 in this pav_sex act. Or Roman, Lavrenti, Radomir or Arkadi then it is group two for the pav_sex act
 			'The brazen look on his face betrays <<$rand_boy>>, it must have been him touching your ass. Knowing him, he probably would''ve gone further if there weren''t so many people here.'
 		elseif scoolboy = 5:
-!!Random is fine since we only have two of them currently and Fedor if he becomes a outcast but again block Fedor if Sveta is still seeing him.
+!!Random is fine since we only have two of them currently and Fedor if he becomes an outcast but again block Fedor if Sveta is still seeing him.
 			'<<$rand_boy>> is trembling slightly, his eyes shifting back and forth as he awkwardly tries to not be noticed by you. It must''ve been him.'
 			'"<<$rand_boy>>, are you out of your mind!?" you cry out, as the other boys burst out into laughter. You can see the panic in his face as he raises his hands in defense, rapidly apologizing:'
 			'"Please, I didn''t want to! They made me, I promise! I''m sorry!"'
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rand_scoolboy':
 			'Wait a minute... you don''t recognize any of these people! You must be in the wrong classroom!'
 		end
 		if npc_rel[$school_static_num] <= 50 and scoolboy ! 3:
-!!this option doesn''t show up if it is a outcast since the text above says you believe him.
+!!this option doesn''t show up if it is an outcast since the text above says you believe him.
 			act 'Slap him across the face as hard as you can':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel[$school_static_num] -= 5

locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company1':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company2':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company3':
 		act 'Wait':
 			cla
 			*nl
-			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
+			'You banish these thoughts from your mind - with great effort - and decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her ass "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close and all is quiet once more.'
 			if school_bunk = 0:
 				act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 			else
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'company4':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having a orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
+		'You decide to keep quiet and wait until they are done fucking. She gets very loud after a while, obviously having an orgasm, and moans obscenities, encouraging him to fuck her "harder!". A few minutes later, he grunts as well. They talk in low voices again after they have both cum; the water is running for a couple of seconds as they clean up, then you hear the door open and close, and all is quiet once more.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue playing on phone':gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
 		else

locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc

@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			elseif VK = 1 and npc_rel['A18'] >= 80 and zverRageQW = 0 or VK = 1 and grupTipe = 2 and zverRageQW = 0:
 				VKrand = rand(1,3)
 				if salocatnow >= 5:
-					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can''t help but notice that you have been putting on some weight. Would you like to run with Lina and I, after school to maybe burn some of those calories?" Feeling embarrassed, you reply, "Um maybe another time." Christina replies, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, the other girls are starting to talk about you. You don''t want to be known as the fat girl of the school, do you?" You look toward Christina and see a mildly concerned look on her face before she texts one last message; "A few workouts a day and a proper diet can do wonders for your future. Think about it <<$pcs_firstname>>." She gives you a assuring nod before turning back, toward the teacher.'
+					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I can''t help but notice that you have been putting on some weight. Would you like to run with Lina and I, after school to maybe burn some of those calories?" Feeling embarrassed, you reply, "Um maybe another time." Christina replies, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, the other girls are starting to talk about you. You don''t want to be known as the fat girl of the school, do you?" You look toward Christina and see a mildly concerned look on her face before she texts one last message; "A few workouts a day and a proper diet can do wonders for your future. Think about it <<$pcs_firstname>>." She gives you an assuring nod before turning back, toward the teacher.'
 				elseif VKrand = 1:
 					'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina Zvereva, reading; "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, when are you getting those track shoes that I told you about? I still see you wearing those raggedy ones at PE." You giggle then reply, "I keep forgetting to check them out when stop by the shop." Christina replies, "I know what you mean. I always get side distracted by the other clothes then forget why I went in their in the first place lol."'
 					*nl
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						demerit += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/nophone.jpg"></center>'
-						'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly, as you see the indecisiveness on Anatoly''s face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you say in a innocent tone, "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it, if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
+						'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly, as you see the indecisiveness on Anatoly''s face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you say in an innocent tone, "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it, if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
 						*nl
 						'Mr. Tsarev seems flabbergasted by your actions, he remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head then turning around and walking back to the front of the class. It seems that Anatoly realized that it''s not worth the effort to take your phone away from you, without causing all sorts of awkward situations, You pull your phone back out of your bra then continue browsing the web, as the lesson goes on.'
 						'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
@@ -2122,7 +2122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		'Mr. Vasilyev has go on one of his epically long indepth explanations about one of the music styles and how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this was about music not history.'
 		*nl
 		'That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
-		'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Radomir and Petia sitting by a over turned rack of music instruments. Radomir looks at Petia and says "Fuck I told you not to touch them, now look what you did, you loser." Petia starts to open his mouth and say something but apparently thinks better of it and closes his mouth instead. Mr. Vasilyev makes his way over and says to Radomir. "Language young man!" Radomir just rolls his eyes, Mr. Vasilyev gets them to help him pick up all the instruments and then gets the whole class to check them to see if any was damaged. Which gets finished just in time for the bell for school to be over.'
+		'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Radomir and Petia sitting by an over turned rack of music instruments. Radomir looks at Petia and says "Fuck I told you not to touch them, now look what you did, you loser." Petia starts to open his mouth and say something but apparently thinks better of it and closes his mouth instead. Mr. Vasilyev makes his way over and says to Radomir. "Language young man!" Radomir just rolls his eyes, Mr. Vasilyev gets them to help him pick up all the instruments and then gets the whole class to check them to see if any was damaged. Which gets finished just in time for the bell for school to be over.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 	end
 	act'Daydream':

locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_boy_arg', 1, 1, 0, 1, 0, 0
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_boy_arg1', 0, 0, 1, 0, 1, 0
 			'During gym class you hear a commotion from one side and you look over to see two boys shoving at each other. <<$rand_boy>> shoves <<$rand_boy2>> again and it quickly starts escalating, a few punches are thrown and soon the two of them are down on the ground fighting. The coach rushes over and quickly pulls them apart, before sending them straight to the principal.'
-!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of a unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
+!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of an unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
 		elseif fizperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/tinydick.jpg"></center>'
 			'During a break in gym class, you and several other girls are talking when Igor wanders over and tries to chat you all up. You find his efforts amusing at best and you can tell his efforts are not working on the other girls either, yet he seems to think he is just oozing cool and he keeps chatting up the lot of you. Suddenly, Vitek rushes over behind him, grabs his shorts and yanks them down to his ankles.'
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 				'He is a bit stunned by this sudden attack and at first he just covers up to try and block some of your punches, before he finally starts to fight back. For him, the coach arrives just in time. The coach grabs you by the back of the neck and with one powerful yank, pulls you off <<$rand_boy>> and nearly tosses you on your back. He steps between the two of you, stopping <<$rand_boy>> and you from going at it again. He turns to you and says, "Go to the principal''s office, NOW!" You try and protest but he doesn''t want to hear it and points at the door.'
 				act 'Go to the principals offices': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 			end
-!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of a unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
+!!add code to use a random name of a gopnik, cool guy, or jock, with a chance of an unknown <<$rand_boy>>.
 		elseif fizperand = 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/hanging.jpg"></center>'
 			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_girl_arg', 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 0
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fiz_rand':
 			act 'Tease him':
 				cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/fizperand6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something, while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. Then you pick up the item and quickly stand up, before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of a extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
+				'You decide to have a little fun of your own. You ''accidentally'' drop something, while he is keeping you steady. You bend over at the waist, pushing your ass back against his crotch. You grind yourself against him and you can feel him getting hard. Then you pick up the item and quickly stand up, before heading out of the room. You glance back and flash him a sweet smile, noticing he''s trying to hide the erection in his shorts. You add a bit of an extra sway to your hips as you walk away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
 				act 'End of lesson':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'postphys'
 			end
@@ -1055,7 +1055,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 19:
 			*clr & cla
-			'For today''s lesson Mr. Yenotin decides to have the class to read out a passage from a old literature book out loud, one that even native Russian speakers sometimes finds difficult with the slightly different pronunciations. You and your classmates open the book and Mr. Yenotin tells Stasya to begin from the top of the page, she sighs and starts reading loudly. After a couple of pages Mr. Yenotin stops and thanks Stasya. He looks around for someone to take over spotting Marcus, "Why don''t we have our exchange student read some pages, you need the practice anyway."'
+			'For today''s lesson Mr. Yenotin decides to have the class to read out a passage from an old literature book out loud, one that even native Russian speakers sometimes finds difficult with the slightly different pronunciations. You and your classmates open the book and Mr. Yenotin tells Stasya to begin from the top of the page, she sighs and starts reading loudly. After a couple of pages Mr. Yenotin stops and thanks Stasya. He looks around for someone to take over spotting Marcus, "Why don''t we have our exchange student read some pages, you need the practice anyway."'
 			'Marcus looks worryingly around hesitating if he really should do this, "Can I skip it this time?" he asks. Mr. Yenotin is shaking his head, "Don''t worry Marcus, go on, it''ll be fine."'
 			*nl
 			'Marcus clears his throat and begins reading. He''s painfully slow at times and his American accent doesn''t help but he does his best. As he comes to a difficult part he starts stammering and gets stuck trying to pronounce a word correctly.'

locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			'You hear your teacher. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lazar behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lazar, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lazar, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Lazar':
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 7:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
@@ -476,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help':
 		pcs_dom += 1
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashteach.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You edge closer and closer to Anatoly as he continues to explain some solutions, you step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. Anatoly stares at your chest for a ew seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile, and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear, "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
+		'You edge closer and closer to Anatoly as he continues to explain some solutions, you step back and pull open your shirt, exposing your cleavage. Anatoly stares at your chest for a few seconds, but from the look on his face, it is clear that he knows this is wrong. You lean forward then whisper in his ear, "You can touch them if you want. I won''t tell anyone." You give him an innocent smile, and you can tell he is thoroughly confused now. You know he''s definitely on board with the idea, but at the same time, has his doubts. You decide to help him decide, and pull your skirt up slightly before whispering seductively into his ear, "You can touch me here too, Anatoly. I''m soaking wet right now. Don''t you want to feel it?"'
 		*nl
 		'Even though he''s clearly uncomfortable doing this, you feel his fingers rubbing over your wet pussy lips now. You encourage him some more, "That feels so good, Anatoly can you feel how wet I am?" Making sure that no one else is watching what he is doing, his actions grow more and more bold, as he begins to rub your pussy more firmly. He then plunges in two fingers and begins to fuck you with them. You let out light moans as your heart is pounding faster. Obviously worried that someone might notice Mr. Tsarev slowly pulls his fingers out then says, "You should let you get back to work." Anatoly gets up then walks back to his desk. He takes a quick look around to make sure that no one notices before placing his two finger in his mouth swallowing your juices.'
 		*nl
@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'You hear your teacher. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Roman':
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'Then you hear your teacher. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Roman behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Roman, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Roman':
@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
@@ -779,7 +779,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'You hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Dan behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to Mr. Kuznetsov and desperately want to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to Mr. Kuznetsov and desperately want to turn around and strangle Dan, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Dan':
@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			'Then you hear Mr. Kuznetsov. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Vasily behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Vasily, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Vasily, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap <<$rand_boy>>':
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 8:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:

locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reading':
 		act 'Say nothing':
 			cla
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-!!any spot with out a image Akossi does not want it cleared but to have the text just add to the existing text and image from the previous acts
+!!any spot with out an image Akossi does not want it cleared but to have the text just add to the existing text and image from the previous acts
 			*nl
 			'Unable to respond, you turn around without confronting him. You hear him chuckle and mutter something incoherent under his breath, but he doesn''t say anything else for the remaining class period. Replaying the encounter in your head, a part of you wonders if saying nothing was the right thing to do.'
 			cla
@@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'You hear you Mr. Vasilyev. "Is there a problem Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Radomir behind you is snickering. Mr. Vasilyev looks at you curiously.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to Mr. Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to Mr. Vasilyev and desperately want to turn around and strangle Radomir, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act 'Slap Radomir':
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			'Then you hear your teacher. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Lavrenti behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Lavrenti, but you don''t dare with the teacher now keeping an eye on you.'
 				if n_tanga = 3:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga5_6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 11:
@@ -1019,7 +1019,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'Then you hear Mr. Vasilyev. "Is there a problem miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?" You glance around and notice everyone is staring at you for making the noise, Anuska behind you is snickering. The teacher looks at you accusingly.'
 			act 'Nothing is wrong':
 				cla
-				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Anushka, but you don''t dare with Mr. Vasilyev now keeping a eye on you.'
+				'You shake your head no to the teacher and desperately want to turn around and strangle Anushka, but you don''t dare with Mr. Vasilyev now keeping an eye on you.'
 				if n_tanga = 3:
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga5_6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1047,7 +1047,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 9:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/dickpic.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get a alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
+			'You get an alert on your phone, you pull it out of your purse and put it in your lap. You glance down and see someone has sent you an image, opening the image you see a picture of someones dick. You hear some snickering and look up to see who it was, but you can''t tell where it came from. Unsure what to do, you don''t want to be caught looking at it, so you delete the image.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'unknown'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 10:

locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 		end
 		act 'Go somewhere private':gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private2'
 
-	!!This part I moved because it was in the middle of parts I felt was connected and I wanted this one to no longer be connected to that group of scenes. Instead I wanted it to be a unlock lunch scene because it can only trigger if Sveta has enough rep with the gopnik to be considered a hanger on or higher.
+	!!This part I moved because it was in the middle of parts I felt was connected and I wanted this one to no longer be connected to that group of scenes. Instead I wanted it to be an unlock lunch scene because it can only trigger if Sveta has enough rep with the gopnik to be considered a hanger on or higher.
 	!!chance this happens is 1 in 4, if the other unlock scenes don''t trigger first of course.
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and rand(0, 3) = 0:
 		cla

locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'detPunishment1':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/ffspank3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You and <<$rand_girl>> stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything <<$rand_girl>>''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps a eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
+			'You and <<$rand_girl>> stand facing the corner together, your ass is seriously stinging and if anything <<$rand_girl>>''s butt is must be much redder than yours. Apparently expecting one of you to disobey her, Miss Volkov keeps an eye on you for a while, but neither of you do. The two of you stay standing facing the corner, naked with your butts on fire.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr
 				cla

locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/69doggy.jpg"></center>'
 				'Ivan pulls out of Katja and gets up. You lean forward and begin to lick Katja''s soaking wet pussy. Your tongue easily sliding inside of her in place of Ivan''s dick, while Ivan walks around the two of you and kneels down behind you, near Katja''s head.'
 				*nl
-				'Within seconds you feel Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slide inside of your wet pussy, he starts pounding himself balls deep into you immediately. A few moments later Katja starts sucking his balls while he pounds your pussy. For several more minutes Ivan fucks you while you eat Katja, then her body begins to convulse as she starts having a orgasm.'
+				'Within seconds you feel Ivan''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock slide inside of your wet pussy, he starts pounding himself balls deep into you immediately. A few moments later Katja starts sucking his balls while he pounds your pussy. For several more minutes Ivan fucks you while you eat Katja, then her body begins to convulse as she starts having an orgasm.'
 				*nl
 				'Hearing her cum, Ivan beings to grunt and pick up the pace.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'group'
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/afterschool/sex/anal.jpg"></center>'
 					'After her orgasm Katja, slides around under you, till you are face to face and your laying on her stomach, your breasts smashed together, as she begins to kiss you.'
 					*nl
-					'Meanwhile Ivan starts to pant, it sounds like he is starting to get close to a orgasm himself. Katja reaches up with both her hands and grabs your ass, pulling your butt cheeks as far apart as she can. Grunting as he fucks you, Ivan understands the invitation.'
+					'Meanwhile Ivan starts to pant, it sounds like he is starting to get close to an orgasm himself. Katja reaches up with both her hands and grabs your ass, pulling your butt cheeks as far apart as she can. Grunting as he fucks you, Ivan understands the invitation.'
 					*nl
 					'Pulling out of your pussy and slipping his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock in your ass, he hardly misses a beat. In a single stroke he plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick balls deep in your ass. You gasp and moan in a mixture of surprise, pain, and pleasure.'
 					*nl
 					'Looking down at Katja, your eyes lock and you realize now this is what she and Ivan had been talking about when you approached them earlier. You begin to pant, your hand rubbing your own clit.'
 					*nl
-					'Katja slides out from under you and kneels down next to your ass, as she watches Ivan roughly plough your ass. You begin to cry out as your body spasms in a intense orgasm.'
+					'Katja slides out from under you and kneels down next to your ass, as she watches Ivan roughly plough your ass. You begin to cry out as your body spasms in an intense orgasm.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'group'
 					minut -= 10
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anush_private':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/anules5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Again just before you are ready to hit that special moment she stops. Now she crawls up to lay beside you on her back, she spreads her legs wide as she reaches over and grabs you by the hair. She pulls your head by your hair down to her crotch and rubs your face against her pussy, you go to work at once, licking and sucking on her clit, lapping up her growing juices and tongue banging her pussy.'
-					'Several minutes later she starts moaning loudly and grinding her crotch against your face, completely glazing your face in her pussy juices. Her crys of ecstasy reach a crescendo, just as her body tenses up and she nearly crushes your head, by squeezing her legs together as she has a orgasm. After several shuddering moments her orgasm passes. "Fuck you eat pussy, good."'
+					'Several minutes later she starts moaning loudly and grinding her crotch against your face, completely glazing your face in her pussy juices. Her crys of ecstasy reach a crescendo, just as her body tenses up and she nearly crushes your head, by squeezing her legs together as she has an orgasm. After several shuddering moments her orgasm passes. "Fuck you eat pussy, good."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anush_private2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/adrink.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take a swig of the vodka from the bottle and you feel it burn your throat, it is the cheap stuff. The others offer encouragement and Anushka even tips the bottle back up once you start to lower it for a moment to make you drink a little more. Afterwards you pass the bottle to Anushka who takes the bottle and takes a much bigger swig before passing it back to the boys. "Hell yeah, this beats lunch or anything else about school any day." She adds.'
 		*nl
-		'Valentin holds up the bottle. "I''ll drink to that, especially when we get to hang out with some fine ass bitches like the two of you." Which is followed by him taking a even bigger swig than Anushka took, so much so Arkadi elbows him in the side. "Hey stop trying to hog it all and pass it over."'
+		'Valentin holds up the bottle. "I''ll drink to that, especially when we get to hang out with some fine ass bitches like the two of you." Which is followed by him taking an even bigger swig than Anushka took, so much so Arkadi elbows him in the side. "Hey stop trying to hog it all and pass it over."'
 		*nl
 		'Valentin coughs from the elbow and passes it to Arkadi, who promptly takes a big swig, while Valentin berate him. "Fucking asshole you almost made me choke on that." After his drink Arkadi passes the bottle back to you.'
 		act 'Don''t drink again':

locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'coolkid':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/joincool.jpg"></center>'
 		'You nod your head, "Yes I would love it, I love hanging out with you guys."'
-		'Albina gives you a hug, once she lets go Andrey wraps a arm around your shoulder and starts leading you to your next class. "From now on you are one of us." Stasya gives you a friendly smile, as the four of you walk to your next class.'
+		'Albina gives you a hug, once she lets go Andrey wraps an arm around your shoulder and starts leading you to your next class. "From now on you are one of us." Stasya gives you a friendly smile, as the four of you walk to your next class.'
 		grupvalue[2] -= 20
 		grupvalue[3] -= 20
 		grupvalue[4] -= 20
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerd':
 
 		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
-!!need a code so after school a new option pops up go to game night is a option.
+!!need a code so after school a new option pops up go to game night is an option.
 	act 'No':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nerdslut.jpg"></center>'
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik':
 		gopnik_initiation = 1
 		gopnik_initiation_day = daystart
 		gs 'stat'
-!!need so it triggers a event so their is a new option if Sveta goes to the apartment garages at that time tonight.
+!!need so it triggers an event so their is a new option if Sveta goes to the apartment garages at that time tonight.
 
 		act 'Go to morning class': school_period = 0 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'schedule'
 	end
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 			act 'Wait for distraction':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/distraction.mp4"></center>'
-				'You make your way towards the back, keeping a eye on Lena and Lera who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses having her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
+				'You make your way towards the back, keeping an eye on Lena and Lera who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses having her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/liqstoreout.jpg"></center>'
 					'Your heart is pounding so hard it feels like it is going to come out of your chest. You look around and decide that you can''t do this. So you turn and walk outside. A few minutes later Lena and Lera join you, they are looking at you. Obviously trying to see where you got the bottles hidden. You blush slightly and look down. "Sorry I couldn''t do it."'
-					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you a epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
+					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you an epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
 					act 'Stay silent':
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/liqstoreout.jpg"></center>'
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 				act 'Wait for distraction':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/distraction.mp4"></center>'
-					'You make your way towards the back, keeping a eye on Lena and Lera. Who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses while her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
+					'You make your way towards the back, keeping an eye on Lena and Lera. Who are standing near the checkout and then they start making out. Lera seems to be really into it, pulling Lena back in for further kisses while her hands roam all over Lena''s body. Well it seems to have worked as the only other customer and the man behind the counter are both staring at them.'
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik initiation':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/events/gopnikinvite/liqstoreout.jpg"></center>'
 					'Your heart is pounding so hard it feels like it is going to come out of your chest. You look around and decide that you can''t do this. So you turn and walk outside. A few minutes later Lena and Lera join you, they are looking at you. Obviously trying to see where you got the bottles hidden. You blush slightly and look down. "Sorry I couldn''t do it."'
-					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you a epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
+					'Lena goes red with rage and crowds you, pushing you up against the side of the building. "Are you fucking kidding me? You fucking useless bitch, why are you even here if all you''re going to do is waste our time. I should beat your fucking ass!" She looks around and notices some people are watching what''s going on with her yelling. She then looks back at you. "You''re fucking lucky bitch, stay the fuck away from us from now on or I will give you an epic ass beating." With that she turns and leaves, with Lera smirking at you, obviously looking forward to pick on you from now on.'
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					act 'Stay silent':
@@ -1068,7 +1068,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tLena':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/20.jpg"></center>'
 				'"In what way?" you worringly ask her.'
-				'"Well, they can be pretty hands on when it comes to sex. Luckily or rather unluckily I have Vitek that ''protects'' me for the rest of them. So yeah, don''t be surprised if someone makes a move on you and won''t take no for a answer." she says.'
+				'"Well, they can be pretty hands on when it comes to sex. Luckily or rather unluckily I have Vitek that ''protects'' me for the rest of them. So yeah, don''t be surprised if someone makes a move on you and won''t take no for an answer." she says.'
 				'You begin getting cold feet, "Maybe this group isn''t for me..."'
 				'Lena begins shaking her head, "No, no, no. I am saying, you might have to force them to back down. Do what you got to, even if it makes kicking them in the balls. Eventually they will learn how far they can push you, just don''t let them push you further than you want to go."'
 				'You thank for the advice and give her a hug before moving away from her.'
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik slut':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/oldschool/main.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you get closer, you can already hear music playing and people talking loudly. Once inside you see all the gopniks from school, along with a few you don''t know. Some are from the other years class and others you think have already graduated or dropped out. Many of them cast hungery eyes on you, as the new girl. You are far less sure about this, but also you know it was way to late to change your mind. You are pretty sure you choices are go along with it willingly or unwillingly. If you go along with it, maybe it won''t be to bad.'
 		*nl
-		'Lena walks over to her brother Vitek, while Lera motions for you to stop. You do and look around the room. It seems the gopniks have been busy, several of the windows have been busted out and covered with boards, graffiti covers the walls, though much of it is pretty good. A large potbellied stove is near one of the boarded up windows with a pipe going out between two boards. Several tables in varies styles and condition litter the room, along with a motley crew of chairs and even a couple of old couches. Candles seem to be all over as the main source of light, while a old boombox plays music. A couple of doors lead off the main room, you suspect to the teachers lounge and principals office, or what they use to be.'
+		'Lena walks over to her brother Vitek, while Lera motions for you to stop. You do and look around the room. It seems the gopniks have been busy, several of the windows have been busted out and covered with boards, graffiti covers the walls, though much of it is pretty good. A large potbellied stove is near one of the boarded up windows with a pipe going out between two boards. Several tables in varies styles and condition litter the room, along with a motley crew of chairs and even a couple of old couches. Candles seem to be all over as the main source of light, while an old boombox plays music. A couple of doors lead off the main room, you suspect to the teachers lounge and principals office, or what they use to be.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Party favor':

locations/housecall.qsrc

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										'"So?"'
 										'Since you have not asked her to stop she keeps caressing your clitoris. "That is, if we have sex,  I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 										'"And what do you get in return?"'
-										'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I having a orgasm."'
+										'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I having an orgasm."'
 										'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'
 
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 15, 'lesbian'
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										lekar += 3
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/nadom4.jpg"></center>'
-										'Once you roll back over the doctor gives you a injection in the butt, you wince slightly in pain.'
-										'She gives you a slight reassuring pat."We are just about done with everything. I prescribing you lots of bed rest, hot drinks, antibiotics, nose drops and a balanced diet. When the temperature drops, make a appointment at the clinic for a followup."'
+										'Once you roll back over the doctor gives you an injection in the butt, you wince slightly in pain.'
+										'She gives you a slight reassuring pat."We are just about done with everything. I prescribing you lots of bed rest, hot drinks, antibiotics, nose drops and a balanced diet. When the temperature drops, make an appointment at the clinic for a followup."'
 										'You nod."Thank you Doctor."'
 										'The Doctor gets up. "Goodbye <<$pcs_nickname>>, get lots of rest." Then she leaves.'
 
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 										cla
 										*clr
 										'You start crying and coughing. "Oh, Doctor, I do not want to go to the hospital."'
-										'She frowns slightly then looks thoughtful. "Well, I guess we could try a out patient treatment. In that case I will need to give you a couple of shots, to start with."'
+										'She frowns slightly then looks thoughtful. "Well, I guess we could try an out patient treatment. In that case I will need to give you a couple of shots, to start with."'
 										'You stop crying and smile to her. "Oh, thank you, doctor!"'
 
 										act 'Lie on your stomach and bare ass':
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel0':
 											'"So?"'
 											'"That is, if we have sex, so I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 											'"And what do you get in return?"'
-											'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I''m having a orgasm."'
+											'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I''m having an orgasm."'
 											'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'
 
 											act 'Agree':gt 'housecall', 'ninel2'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel1':
 							'"So?"'
 							'"That is, if we have sex, I can heal you, if you agree of course. Do you agree?"'
 							'"And what do you get in return?"'
-							'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I have a orgasm."'
+							'"Nothing, I''m doing this solely for my own satisfaction. You see I can only cast if I have an orgasm."'
 							'Feeling your arousal mounting you find yourself nodding your head. "Then I agree."'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 10, 'lesbian'
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel1':
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel19.jpg"></center>'
 													'You lay there panting, sweating and exhausted on your bed. Ninel snuggles as the two of you share a gentle kiss.'
 													'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
-													'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh, Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed and you feel perfectly healthy, not to mention in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex drifts in the air and the exhaustion makes this a even more pleasant sensations.'
+													'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh, Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed and you feel perfectly healthy, not to mention in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex drifts in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 													'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
 													'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you was sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 			act 'Change position':
 				cls
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel16.jpg"></center>'
-				'As a orgasm wracks your body, Ninel crawls forward and straddles your stomach, she leans forward. Her hand going back to your crotch as her fingers plunge back into your wet depths. You can feel her pussy juices flowing down her thighs onto your stomach. You groan, as your hands ecstatically squeeze her butt checks, holding onto her tightly.'
+				'As an orgasm wracks your body, Ninel crawls forward and straddles your stomach, she leans forward. Her hand going back to your crotch as her fingers plunge back into your wet depths. You can feel her pussy juices flowing down her thighs onto your stomach. You groan, as your hands ecstatically squeeze her butt checks, holding onto her tightly.'
 				'Ninel fingers plunge in and out of your pussy frantically, her own breath coming in short gasps now.'
 				'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"She exhales. "I want to feel your fingers in me!'
 
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/sex/ninel19.jpg"></center>'
 							'You lay there panting, sweating and exhausted on your bed. Ninel snuggles as the two of you share gentle kiss.'
 							'She looks at you. "Well, how do you feel?"'
-							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh ... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this a even more pleasant sensations.'
+							'Unable to resist grinning. "Ooh ... Just perfect" You answer and only then do you realize just how well you do feel. The sickness seems to have passed, leaving you feeling perfectly healthy and in a wonderful mood. The sweet bouquet of sex hangs in the air and the exhaustion makes this an even more pleasant sensations.'
 							'She smiles at you. "Well, It''s magic, baby. Mm-m, you''re just a miracle. For a long time I have not gotten so much pleasure from my magic. If you get sick again, just call me or if you just want to spend time with me. You can also look for me in the clinic.'
 							'You promised to be sure to find her, closing your eyes falling asleep. While you was sleeping, Ninel quietly dressed and left.'
 
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel3':
 			'You start to roll over to let her take your temperature. "The usual?"'
 			'She shakes her head as she smiles at you. "Well, no. You''re far to excited for a rectal reading. We will have to do it orally this time."'
 			'You lay back on your back. "Do you have a different one?"'
-			'She holds up a oral thermometer. "You mean like this one?" She places it in your mouth.'
+			'She holds up an oral thermometer. "You mean like this one?" She places it in your mouth.'
 
 			act 'Taking your temperature':
 				cla

locations/hunters.qsrc

@@ -2722,7 +2722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hunters_talk':
 		'"Who hasn''t heard of it?"'
 		'"So I..."'
 	elseif temp = 10:
-		'"As I''m getting out of the house I see something resembling a eagle standing on the telephone pole."'
+		'"As I''m getting out of the house I see something resembling an eagle standing on the telephone pole."'
 		'"I run into the house and get my rifle, aim. Bang, Bang, Bang."'
 		'"I hit the eagle and it falls down to the ground. As I look at the telephone pole I see pole spurs on both sides..."'
 	elseif temp = 11:

locations/igorhome.qsrc

@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/igorhome/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'The room is very clean and neat. Everything is perfectly in place, the furniture is all very nice. There is several very large windows giving a great view at the lawn. In the corner is a very nice flat screen tv.'
-	!!this is a elseif, if it is 18:00 to 23:00 Igor''s father is here during the week. On weekends he is here from 09:00 to 23:00
+	!!this is an elseif, if it is 18:00 to 23:00 Igor''s father is here during the week. On weekends he is here from 09:00 to 23:00
 	if met_IgorDad = 0 and ((hour >= 18 and hour <= 22 and week => 1 and week <= 5) or (hour >= 9 and hour <= 22 and week => 6 and week <= 7)):
 		'You see Igor''s father Gemorgen is in the living room watching tv. He is well dressed and not bad looking, you don''t think he has noticed you yet.'
 		if Igor_with = 0:
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	'The room is very clean and neat. Everything is perfectly in place, the counters are polished to a near mirror like quality. The wood floor is also highly polished.'
 
 	act 'Leave the kitchen': gt 'igorhome','hallway'
-	!!this is a elseif, if it is 06:00 to 07:00 igors mother is here, or if it is 18:00 to 23:00 she is here during the week. On weekends she is here from 08:00 to 23:00
+	!!this is an elseif, if it is 06:00 to 07:00 igors mother is here, or if it is 18:00 to 23:00 she is here during the week. On weekends she is here from 08:00 to 23:00
 	if (week <=5 and (hour = 6 or (hour >= 18 and hour < 23))) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour < 23):
 		'You see Igor''s mother Inga is in the kitchen drinking tea. She is very neatly dressed, you don''t think she has noticed you yet.'
 		if met_IgorMother = 0:

locations/ira.qsrc

@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Ira and Lena</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_gost_1_' + rand(1,7) + '.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in a unrestrained dance with Lena and Ira.'
+	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in an unrestrained dance with Lena and Ira.'
 	'You jump, sway your body, and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
-	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in a erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
+	if pcs_danc >= 50:'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
 	if pcs_danc < 50:'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care.'
 	act 'Have a rest':gt $loc,$metka
 	act 'Kiss':
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color = maroon>Ira and Lena</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_iralena_7_10.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Laying side by side with you in the middle, your hands on each others clits, rubbing and caressing them until a incredibly strong orgasm overtakes you all, and the three of you wither in sweet release. "Uhh, who says we need men anyways?" All of your answers with satisfied giggles.'
+						'Laying side by side with you in the middle, your hands on each others clits, rubbing and caressing them until an incredibly strong orgasm overtakes you all, and the three of you wither in sweet release. "Uhh, who says we need men anyways?" All of your answers with satisfied giggles.'
 						'Continuing to be in ecstasy, you slowly come down on your sexual high, as you do you slowly fall asleep.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian', 'group'

locations/katalkin.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ elseif hour >= 22:
 				act 'Do not move':gt 'katalkinSex','sex'
 			end
 		elseif schtraf > 0:
-			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with a uninterested look in his eyes. Even though he''s drunk, he won''t let you off the hook: "You have to pay a fine of <<schtraf>> <b>₽</b>. Once you pay, you can go."'
+			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with an uninterested look in his eyes. Even though he''s drunk, he won''t let you off the hook: "You have to pay a fine of <<schtraf>> <b>₽</b>. Once you pay, you can go."'
 
 			if money >= schtraf:
 				act 'Pay the fine':

locations/klofdomhouse.qsrc

@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev14':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/jora/sex/klof14.jpg"></center>'
-		'Jora discharges in your ass, then using a a small toy he plays with your ass. It''s quite pleasant so you don''t think to question his actions.'
+		'Jora discharges in your ass, then using a small toy he plays with your ass. It''s quite pleasant so you don''t think to question his actions.'
 		'You get dressed and get ready to go home.'
 		'Jora hands you money, "Earned yourself a crumb."'
 		guy += 1

locations/korr.qsrc

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ else
 	'Modern hall with stylish furniture, a wall-mounted <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a>.'
 end
 
-if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs a umbrella.'
+if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs an umbrella.'
 if sobaka = 1:'Your dog, <a href="exec:gt ''soba'', ''start''"><<$namesob>></a>, is lying on the floor near the entrance.'
 if krolik = 1:'Resting on the floor your rabbit <a href="exec:gt ''krol'', ''start''"><<$namekrol>></a>.'
 if popugai = 1:'In the cage sits your parrot <a href="exec:gt ''popu'', ''start''"><<$namepopu>></a>.'
@@ -256,11 +256,11 @@ $ninel0 = {
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/ninel00.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the door. Stands on the threshold of a pretty young girl with meitsinskim suitcase in hand.'
-	'(You) - Hello, doctor'
-	'(Doctor) - Hello. My name is Ninel P. - I replaces your local therapist. Where the patient?'
-	'(You) - This is me ... kha-kha-kha.'
-	'(Doctor) - Clear. Then come - you need to go back to bed.'
+	'You open the door. Standing on the threshold is a pretty young girl with a doctors bag in her hand.'
+	'You greet her.'
+	'"Hello. My name is Ninel P. - I do the home visits for the clinic. Where is the patient?"'
+	'"That would be me ... kha-kha-kha."'
+	'"Understood. First we need to get you back into bed."'
 
 	act 'Pursue a doctorate in the bedroom and lay down':
 		cla
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ $ninel0 = {
 		'(Doctor) - On that complain of <<$pcs_nickname>>? Can I call you that?'
 		'(You) - Of course ... Ahem, ahem, ahem ... Oh, Doctor, perhaps I have the flu - cough just kills and very sore throat. And the temperature is high.'
 		'(Doctor) - Runny nose is? Headaches? Aching bones?'
-		'(You) - Yes. A Aptchee and!'
+		'(You) - Yes. Aachoo and!'
 		'(Doctor) - Now I will examine you. Undress.'
 
 		act 'Undress':
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ $drPP = {
 		'(Doctor) - Well, the patient, to complain that?'
 		'(You) - Ahem, ahem, ahem ... Oh, Doctor, perhaps, I have a sore throat - very sore throat and high temperature.'
 		'(Doctor) - And cough, as I see it. And judging by your voice, you have a nose, sick, laid.'
-		'(You) - Yes. A Aptchee and!'
+		'(You) - Yes. Aachoo!'
 		'(Doctor) - Well, the sick, you hear Dwight. Undress.'
 
 		act 'Undress':

locations/korr2x.qsrc

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ end
 '<center><b><font color = maroon>Corridor</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/apartment/korr2x.jpg"></center>'
 
-if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs a umbrella'
+if umbrella > 0:'On a hook hangs an umbrella'
 if sobaka = 1:'Near the entrance to the bedroom is your <a href="exec:gt ''soba'',''start''"><<$namesob>></a>'
 if krolik = 1:'On the floor, resting is <a href="exec:gt ''krol'',''start''"><<$namekrol>></a>'
 if popugai = 1:'In the cell, sitting is <a href="exec:gt ''popu'',''start''"><<$namepopu>></a>'

locations/kotovSex.qsrc

@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum81':
 		'Suddenly Vitek''s thrusts stop, and you grin when you realize he''s trying to postpone his orgasm. You squeeze your vaginal walls around his cock as tightly as you can and sure enough, within moments you feel hot jets of his sperm being squirted into your body.'
 		gs 'cum_call','',$boy,1
 		'"You horny little minx, you knew!" he gasps. You look over your shoulder and wink at him: "Of course I knew, baby. Did I make you feel good?"'
-		'Unable to produce a coherent reply, he just moans while he rests on the mattress in a euphoric haze. Feeling pleased with yourself for exhausting your boyfriend so thoroughly, you give him a kiss on the cheek and get up from the bed.'
+		'Unable to produce a coherent reply, he just moans while he rests on the mattress in an euphoric haze. Feeling pleased with yourself for exhausting your boyfriend so thoroughly, you give him a kiss on the cheek and get up from the bed.'
 		gs 'cuminsidereact'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum8':
 	elseif protect ! 1:
 		gs 'npc_intro',$boy,'images/shared/sex/cum/cum8.mp4','',' ','',1
 		'Suddenly Vitek''s thrusts become shorter and more intense, and while he groans you feel hot jets of his sperm being squirted into your body. His cock remains erect for a while longer and you happily keep riding him while you can, not wanting to give up on this great feeling just yet.'
-		'Eventually you get up, and give him a kiss on the cheek while he just relaxes on the bed in a euphoric haze.'
+		'Eventually you get up, and give him a kiss on the cheek while he just relaxes on the bed in an euphoric haze.'
 		gs 'cum_call','',$boy,1
 		gs 'cuminsidereact'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/love.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s "friend"', rand(18,32)
 			act 'Further':xgt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif pcs_intel > 30:
 			proverka1 = 1
-			'You defend yourself for a a few minutes trying to tell him, that you didn''t do anything wrong and that his friends are just jealous. In the end, you manage to convince him, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> agrees with you.'
+			'You defend yourself for a few minutes trying to tell him, that you didn''t do anything wrong and that his friends are just jealous. In the end, you manage to convince him, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> agrees with you.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end

locations/lover_change.qsrc

@@ -1054,7 +1054,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Tits':
 	end
 end
 
-!!This is a interesting one as it will take in a couple of things, not just clothes preferences. I need to find clothing pictures for most of the types of clothes. Think of these as quest clothes.
+!!This is an interesting one as it will take in a couple of things, not just clothes preferences. I need to find clothing pictures for most of the types of clothes. Think of these as quest clothes.
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Clothes':
 !! void code - need future work
 !!	act 'Enter Clothing Shop':

locations/lover_meet.qsrc

@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'lover_likes', 'makePrefTmp'
 
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 0:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like a timid and not very confident young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
-	if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like a average young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
+	if haraklover[lover_number] = 1:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like an average young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
 	if haraklover[lover_number] = 2:'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks like a cocky and brash young <<$loverGenderName>> <<$clom>>'
 		
 	!!This is to reset the like part later

locations/masharoom.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		minut += 15
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You see a row of sexual fetish outfits and latex outfits, three of them are about your size. Since no one is around it wouldn''t hurt to try a one of them on.'
+		'You see a row of sexual fetish outfits and latex outfits, three of them are about your size. Since no one is around it wouldn''t hurt to try one of them on.'
 		act 'Wear the latex mini skirt and hose.': gt 'masharoom', 'masha'
 		act 'Wear the leather corset and panties.': gt 'masharoom', '1'
 		act 'Wear the latex corset, stockings, leather collar and bondage cuffs.': gt 'masharoom', '2'
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 		*clr
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r34.jpg"></center>'
-		'You order Masha to start licking your pussy, she immediately drops to her knees in front of you. Her tongue slides into your pussy and she expertly begins lapping at your clit, very quickly she nearly brings you to a orgasm. You pull her up by her leash and order her to insert a candle in place of the strapon dildo on your harness. Masha fiddles a little with the candle a before she finally gets it seated in place well for you.'
+		'You order Masha to start licking your pussy, she immediately drops to her knees in front of you. Her tongue slides into your pussy and she expertly begins lapping at your clit, very quickly she nearly brings you to an orgasm. You pull her up by her leash and order her to insert a candle in place of the strapon dildo on your harness. Masha fiddles a little with the candle a before she finally gets it seated in place well for you.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r38.jpg"></center>'
-					'You took off the makeshift strapon, you moved so you was straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. It didn''t take her long, you was so excited and with in a few seconds a orgasm rocked your body and you covered her face in your pussy juices.'
+					'You took off the makeshift strapon, you moved so you was straddling her face in a 69 position. Masha immediately went into motion with her tongue on your pussy. It didn''t take her long, you was so excited and with in a few seconds an orgasm rocked your body and you covered her face in your pussy juices.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 		*clr
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r27.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lie on the couch and beckon Masha to you as you spread your legs. Commanding her you say "Lick" Masha immediately crouches lips against your crotch, you pull on her leash, pulling her face even more into your pussy. Her tongue laps at your pussy, caressing the clitoris, and penetrating your vagina with her tongue, you''ll soon feel like your about to have a orgasm.'
+		'You lie on the couch and beckon Masha to you as you spread your legs. Commanding her you say "Lick" Masha immediately crouches lips against your crotch, you pull on her leash, pulling her face even more into your pussy. Her tongue laps at your pussy, caressing the clitoris, and penetrating your vagina with her tongue, you''ll soon feel like your about to have an orgasm.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 				*clr
 				picrand = rand(49, 51)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You grab the whip from the table and plunge the handle into her pussy and start fucking her hard with it, She starts screaming and moaning, she quickly has a orgasm.'
+				'You grab the whip from the table and plunge the handle into her pussy and start fucking her hard with it, She starts screaming and moaning, she quickly has an orgasm.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo_give', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 
 				act 'Let continues':
 					cla
-					'You did not stop her and a few seconds a orgasm rocks your body, leaving you quivering.'
+					'You did not stop her and a few seconds an orgasm rocks your body, leaving you quivering.'
 
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 
 			act 'Let continues':
 				cla
-				'You did not stop it, and a few seconds later your body shudders from a orgasm.'
+				'You did not stop it, and a few seconds later your body shudders from an orgasm.'
 
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'

locations/motherQW.qsrc

@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oluHome':
 					'Finally he pulls his fingers away, and you feel the head of his huge cock resting against your sphincter. Taking a deep breath, you try to relax as much as you can.'
 					'You squeal as the head passes your sphincter, which still hurt, hopefully you will eventually get use to it. You beg him to go slow for a second and Olu freezes, giving your ass time to adapt to the size of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. After a few more deep breaths you feel the worst of the pain subside and you nod at him, gesturing to continue slowly.'
 					'It still hurts a bit, but at the same time you feel a pleasant fullness every time he shoves his dick inside you. You still can''t take much more than half of it inside your asshole, but it feels a lot less painful and you masturbate yourself from the start, which helps. Thanks to his precautions and being mentally ready for it, it actually feels kind of good despite the pain.'
-					'After a awhile it starts hurting again, this time he notices and seems unsure what to do at first. Then he strokes a little deeper than you are happy with and a whole lot faster. You bite your lower lip as the pain gets worse but before you can protest you feel the hot spurts of his sperm filling up your ass.'
+					'After awhile it starts hurting again, this time he notices and seems unsure what to do at first. Then he strokes a little deeper than you are happy with and a whole lot faster. You bite your lower lip as the pain gets worse but before you can protest you feel the hot spurts of his sperm filling up your ass.'
 
 					if oluD = 0 and RAND(1,10) = 10:
 						oluD = 1

locations/motherkafeboss.qsrc

@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex1':
 				'He grunts in satisfaction and reaches down to slap your breast. Your eyes widen at the impact and you go back to thinking about biting down before his other hand joins the first and begins to massage your breasts skillfully. You decide to fuck around with him and put in a token effort, lightly sucking on the head of his cock instead of trying to go for depth.'
 				'<i>No balls like blue balls...</i> you think to yourself.'
 				'"Ahh..." he sighs. "I have to say, Natasha is still better at giving head but a younger and more supple pair of breasts..." he says, emphasizing his words with hard squeezes, "is always better than an older pair."'
-				'With his comments about your mother while he''s abusing your body, you''re ready to snap. You try to get a little deeper so when you bite you can take off as much of his dick as possible when he suddenly yanks you upward by your breasts. You feel genuinely disappointed you couldn''t have blown him for a couple more seconds or he''d have become a eunuch.'
+				'With his comments about your mother while he''s abusing your body, you''re ready to snap. You try to get a little deeper so when you bite you can take off as much of his dick as possible when he suddenly yanks you upward by your breasts. You feel genuinely disappointed you couldn''t have blown him for a couple more seconds or he''d have become an eunuch.'
 				'Now standing in front of Borislav, he pushes you backwards onto the desk and says, "Time for the main course."'
 				act'Continue':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex2'
 			end

locations/npcgeneratec.qsrc

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # npcgeneratec
 
 ! {This file expects npctempgsex which is the desired sex of the NPC to be generated, $npctempgn[0], which is the used name of the generated NPC. Rapist or Red Headed Stranger, for example. And npctempgage, which is the approximate age of the NPC in years. Everything is then randomly generated, and you are expected to fix the generated NPC yourself with any special items you need from it after it completes running. So sex, what you call them until they introduce themselves, and age.}
-!! {A example to use this would be gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(18,45) which would generate a male with a use name of stranger between 18 and 45.}
+!! {A example to use this would be gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(18,45) which would generate a male with a used name of stranger between 18 and 45.}
 
 npctempgsex = ARGS[0]
 $npctempgn[0] = $ARGS[1]

locations/npcgenext.qsrc

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'pers':
 	end
 end
 
-! {Venerial Disease Generator. requires a index.}
+! {Venerial Disease Generator. requires an index.}
 if $args[0] = 'rstd':
 	if $ARGS[1] = '': $ARGS[1] = 0
 	if mid($ARGS[1],1,1) < 10: 

locations/npcpreservec.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # npcpreservec
-!! {It expects a Args containing a C array index}
+!! {It expects an Args containing a C array index}
 !! {This initializes the array and acts as a gate to deny bad calls.}
 $npctemp = $ARGS[0]
 

locations/npcstatic1.qsrc

@@ -2058,7 +2058,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Artamonov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella Artamonov is a beautiful girl that is really arrogant. You don''t know her very well as she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself a adult already and the rest of her classmates are beneath her, as being to young and childish. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around older people.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Bella Artamonov is a beautiful girl that is really arrogant. You don''t know her very well as she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates are beneath her, as being to young and childish. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around older people.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 19990422
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)

locations/npcstatic3.qsrc

@@ -4053,7 +4053,7 @@ $npc_firstname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka'
 $npc_nickname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka'
 $npc_lastname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Konstantinov'
 $npc_usedname['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka'
-$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist in Radomir''s band. She has very strong political views, which she shares in her anarchist lyrics that she writes for the band. She has strong if untrained vocal ability as well, doing some of the singing. She is pretty dominant and can be cruel but not sadistic like some of the other Gopniks. She is very adventurous and not shy about her bisexuality, she is also a bit of a exhibitionist.'
+$npc_notes['A<<npctemp>>'] = 'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist in Radomir''s band. She has very strong political views, which she shares in her anarchist lyrics that she writes for the band. She has strong if untrained vocal ability as well, doing some of the singing. She is pretty dominant and can be cruel but not sadistic like some of the other Gopniks. She is very adventurous and not shy about her bisexuality, she is also a bit of an exhibitionist.'
 npc_dob['A<<npctemp>>'] = 0
 npc_vital['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)
 npc_stren['A<<npctemp>>'] = rand(10,30)

locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Drink some more':pcs_hydra += 10 & gt 'nyp_school', 'drink more'
 					if grupTipe = 5:
-						!!If Sveta is a outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is a outcast. If Sveta is not a outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
+						!!If Sveta is an outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is an outcast. If Sveta is not an outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
 						act 'Go stand against the wall alone':gt 'nyp_school', 'outcast'
 					else
 						act 'Hangout with the cool kids and jocks':gt 'nyp_school', 'cool jocks'
@@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'outcast':
 					'"That''s it the show is over!" Vitek yells, "Until next time, <<$pcs_nickname>>." he winks.'
 					act 'Leave the party':
 						cla
-						'Once the gopniks hurry off you glance around, you notice the exchange got a lot of attention and attention for a outcast is bad. With final look at the decorations you sadly leave the party before things get worse.'
+						'Once the gopniks hurry off you glance around, you notice the exchange got a lot of attention and attention for an outcast is bad. With final look at the decorations you sadly leave the party before things get worse.'
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1071,7 +1071,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drink more':
 	alko += 5 
 	gs 'stat'
 	if grupTipe = 5:
-		!!If Sveta is a outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is a outcast. If Sveta is not a outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
+		!!If Sveta is an outcast this should be the only option and the above options should not show up, if Sveta is an outcast. If Sveta is not an outcast then the go stand against the wall alone should not show up.
 		act 'Go stand against the wall alone':gt 'nyp_school', 'outcast'
 	else
 		act 'Drink some more':gt 'nyp_school', 'drink more'

locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -1322,7 +1322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'reputation':
 			*nl
 			'Regional renown as an intellectual = <<global_int>>'
 			if global_int = 0:
-				'You are not famous enough as a intellectual to be known outside of any local areas.'
+				'You are not famous enough as an intellectual to be known outside of any local areas.'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'Regional renown through social media = <<global_social>>'

locations/orgasm.qsrc

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ elseif pcs_horny <= 20:
 	if i = 0:
 		'The combination of sensations is enough to take you past your peak and you orgasm.'
 	elseif i = 1:
-		'Your breath catches several times as you feel the waves of a orgasm wash over you.'
+		'Your breath catches several times as you feel the waves of an orgasm wash over you.'
 	elseif i = 2:
 		'Your breath shudders as your body tingles.'
 	elseif i = 3:
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ elseif pcs_horny <= 40:
 	elseif i = 2:
 		'Long drawn out moans escape your lips as a long pleasant orgasm hits you.'
 	elseif i = 3:
-		'You have an orgasm, leaving you with a incredible pleasurable sensation.'
+		'You have an orgasm, leaving you with an incredible pleasurable sensation.'
 	end
 elseif pcs_horny <= 50:
 	orgasm_buildup -= 30
@@ -126,9 +126,9 @@ elseif pcs_horny <= 80:
 	elseif i = 1:
 		'Muscles of the vagina began to clinch sharply, your entire abdomen feels as if covered in hot waves of pleasure, you scream from a powerful orgasm.'
 	elseif i = 2:
-		'The passion rolls, like the waves on the shore, raising you to a all new level of bliss.'
+		'The passion rolls, like the waves on the shore, raising you to an all new level of bliss.'
 	elseif i = 3:
-		'Suddenly as if hit by a electric shock and abdomen began pleasant spasms, you squirm biting your lip, to keep from screaming with pleasure.'
+		'Suddenly as if hit by an electric shock and abdomen began pleasant spasms, you squirm biting your lip, to keep from screaming with pleasure.'
 	end
 elseif pcs_horny <= 90:
 	orgasm_buildup -= 30

locations/parkBimbo.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/parkbimbo1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You notice a old guy, who has to be in his sixties watching you. Then you notice he has his rather large dick out and he has a raging hard on.'
+	'You notice an old guy, who has to be in his sixties watching you. Then you notice he has his rather large dick out and he has a raging hard on.'
 	if pcs_horny > 50:act 'Help the old guy out':gt 'parkBimbo', 'pos2'
 	act 'Flip him the bird':gt 'gskver', 'start'
 end

locations/pavShared_nd.qsrc

@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndSexVaginal':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/sex/vagsidefuck1.jpg"></center>'
 			''
 			'You lie on the bed, raising the upper leg in the air, exposing your tender pussy.'
-			'He takes this as a invitation, lying behind you.'
+			'He takes this as an invitation, lying behind you.'
 			'He rubs your ass, slowly making his way to your hole, playing with it for a while.'
 			'Finally <<$nd_name>> takes his rod, pointing the tip right to the entry of your vagina.'
 			'He starts pushing it inside, and as it is lubed, it goes in quite easily.'
@@ -1222,7 +1222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndSexAnal':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/sex/analsidefuck1.jpg"></center>'
 			''
 			'You lie on the bed, raising the upper leg in the air, exposing your lustful anus.'
-			'He takes this as a invitation, lying behind you.'
+			'He takes this as an invitation, lying behind you.'
 			'He rubs your ass, slowly making his way to your hole, playing with it for a while.'
 			! normal/or-better mood OR likes Sveta
 			if nd_mood <= 3 or nd_rel > 80:

locations/pavShared_sp.qsrc

@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spSexVaginal':
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/sex/vagsidefuck1.jpg"></video></center>'
 			''
 			'You lie on the bed, raising the upper leg in the air, exposing your tender pussy.'
-			'He takes this as a invitation, lying behind you.'
+			'He takes this as an invitation, lying behind you.'
 			'He rubs your ass, slowly making his way to your hole, playing with it for a while.'
 			'Finally <<$sp_name>> takes his rod, pointing the tip right to the entry of your vagina.'
 			'He starts pushing it inside, and as it is lubed, it goes in quite easily.'
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spSexAnal':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/sex/analsidefuck1.jpg"></center>'
 			''
 			'You lie on the bed, raising the upper leg in the air, exposing your lustful anus.'
-			'He takes this as a invitation, lying behind you.'
+			'He takes this as an invitation, lying behind you.'
 			'He rubs your ass, slowly making his way to your hole, playing with it for a while.'
 			'He takes some more lube on his fingers and one by one he sretches your anus with them. Making it easier for you to be penetrated later.'
 			'He starts pushing his dick inside, and as it is lubed, it goes in quite easily.'

locations/pavaptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -589,10 +589,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'male_gopnik_beer':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/events/beer' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 				if pav_slut < 50 and grupTipe ! 4:
-					'After you drink that beer, you are starting to feel the effects of the beers, but Vasily keeps you from grabbing another beer. "It''s time for you to go <<$pcs_nickname>>, good girls don''t get wasted like this." He won''t take no for a answer and escorts you away from them, before turning and going back to join Vitek and Dan himself.'
+					'After you drink that beer, you are starting to feel the effects of the beers, but Vasily keeps you from grabbing another beer. "It''s time for you to go <<$pcs_nickname>>, good girls don''t get wasted like this." He won''t take no for an answer and escorts you away from them, before turning and going back to join Vitek and Dan himself.'
 					act 'Stop drinking and leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 				elseif kotovLoveQW > 0:
-					'After you drink that beer, you are starting to feel the effects of the beers, but Vitek gets up and pulls you up as well. "It''s time for you to go <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are getting to drunk. So go home and I will see you later." He won''t take no for a answer and escorts you away from them, before turning and going back to join Vasily and Dan himself.'
+					'After you drink that beer, you are starting to feel the effects of the beers, but Vitek gets up and pulls you up as well. "It''s time for you to go <<$pcs_nickname>>, you are getting to drunk. So go home and I will see you later." He won''t take no for an answer and escorts you away from them, before turning and going back to join Vasily and Dan himself.'
 					act 'Stop drinking and leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 				else
 					'You are starting to feel the effects of the beers but you are having to much fun. So you grab another beer from the collection the boys have, they don''t seem to mind. You keep drinking as you continue to listen to them.'
@@ -984,8 +984,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'follownush':
 									$orgasm_txt = 'You are overwhelmed by the wild excitement of the dildo plunging into your pussy, knowing that at any moment someone could catch the two of you having sex in the stairs. You can''t take any more, as waves of pleasure come crashing over you, as you wither in ecstasy, she keeps dildoing you until your shuddering stop.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 5,  'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 									killvar '$orgasm_txt'
-									'Suddenly you hear a old womans voice, it sounds like she is near the top of the flight of stairs you are on. "Oh my god is someone being attacked? Are you alright dear? What''s going on?"'
-									'Anushka and you both stop and quickly get dressed, you are just pulling on the last of your clothes when a old woman comes around the landing looking at the two of you. At first she looks surprised and confused then she hrmph''s and looks away in disgust before heading back up stairs.'
+									'Suddenly you hear an old womans voice, it sounds like she is near the top of the flight of stairs you are on. "Oh my god is someone being attacked? Are you alright dear? What''s going on?"'
+									'Anushka and you both stop and quickly get dressed, you are just pulling on the last of your clothes when an old woman comes around the landing looking at the two of you. At first she looks surprised and confused then she hrmph''s and looks away in disgust before heading back up stairs.'
 									*nl
 									'You both bust out laughing at that, then head up yourself. Just as you reach the next landing Anushka says. "Look I need to go do something. Talk later?" With out waiting for a reply she takes the steps a couple at a time as she hurries up them still giggling at what happened.'
 									'Never a dull moment you suppose, but you have other things you can do to. With that you head back out to the courtyard.'
@@ -1061,7 +1061,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'suck3stooges':
 						act 'Leave':gt 'pavComplex', 'start'
 					else
 						'Vitek grabs the second to last beer and sits back down, Vasily grabs the last one but before you can say anything he hands it to you. You take it but he won''t let go. "You can have it but you have to sit here with our cum on your face while you drink it."'
-						'You give him a exasperated look and sigh. "Why?"'
+						'You give him an exasperated look and sigh. "Why?"'
 						'He laughs, "It''s like marking our territory." You roll your eyes at that but nod, you already sucked their dicks so why not.'
 						act 'Drink with them':
 							*clr & cla 
@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eatlera':
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lera/sex/complex/eatlera2.jpg"></center>'
-		'She reaches a out her hand and clasps the back of your head and pulls your face against her twat, as she grinds against your face as you keep eating her.'
+		'She reaches an out her hand and clasps the back of your head and pulls your face against her twat, as she grinds against your face as you keep eating her.'
 		'"Look at that bitch go, she must really want a fucking beer." Lena says.'
 		'"I think she just likes eating pussy" Alyona adds.'
 		'Anushka snorts "Oh please everyone here has been on her knees eating snatch before, so don''t act like you have never done this."'

locations/pavtrain_market.qsrc

@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ end
 if ARGS[0] = 12:
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/market/cheburek.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the market, you came across a old woman selling pies.'
+	'Walking through the market, you came across an old woman selling pies.'
 	if pcs_energy <= 80:
 		act 'Buy a pie for 20 <b>₽</b>':
 			cla

locations/preALT.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'One':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/alt/altstart.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are <<$pcs_firstname>> "<<$pcs_nickname>>" <<$pcs_lastname>>'
-	'You were born in <<birthyear>>. You have a older sister, <<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>>, who is 2 years older than you.'
+	'You were born in <<birthyear>>. You have an older sister, <<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>>, who is 2 years older than you.'
 	'Your mother is <<$npc_firstname[''A29'']>> <<$pcs_lastname>>. You don''t know much about your biological father... your mother never wants to talk about him, or why he left you and <<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> with her.'
 	'Your mother met another man not too long after her and your biological father got divorced, <<$npc_firstname[''A28'']>> <<$pcs_lastname>>. Together they had your little brother <<$npc_firstname[''A34'']>>. Even though he''s not your real father, <<$npc_firstname[''A28'']>> has always treated you and <<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> as if you were his own children.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'preALT', 'Two'

locations/preSYS.qsrc

@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'charselect':
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'I am a avid Chess player':
+		act 'I am an avid Chess player':
 			cls
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/sys/altstart11.jpg"></center>'
 			'You were always into chess as a child, and you have studied all the great chess masters. You can even name them all as well as their favorite strategies! You find nothing more interesting than matching your wits against someone else’’s in a game of chess. It has left you with the ability to often see the consequences of your actions better than most as you are used to looking several moves ahead. All of this has left you with little time to make many friends, and you rarely spend any time outdoors.'
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'charselect':
 	end
 
 	act 'Popular, Cool, Beautiful':
-!!if we can do school uniforms gets a appropriate or borderline uniform.
+!!if we can do school uniforms gets an appropriate or borderline uniform.
 		*clr
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/sys/altstart5.jpg"></center>'
@@ -940,7 +940,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'charselect':
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'I am a Ugly duckling':
+		act 'I am an ugly duckling':
 			cls
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/sys/altstart23.jpg"></center>'
 			'Some girls blossom early, and some have natural good looks… you got neither. In fact, you seem to have been cursed with an androgynous face and body. You have been mistaken for a boy more times than you would care to admit.'

locations/qwBarPoletToilet.qsrc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ elseif temp = 8:
 elseif temp = 9:
 	if pcs_horny < 90: pcs_horny += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bathroom/eventb3.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You go into the restroom and as soon as you open the door, you are greeted to the sight of a almost naked woman sitting on the sink, with her back against the mirror, while a man kneels in front of her, his face buried between her legs. She moans loudly in pleasure as he orally pleasures her.' 
+	'You go into the restroom and as soon as you open the door, you are greeted to the sight of an almost naked woman sitting on the sink, with her back against the mirror, while a man kneels in front of her, his face buried between her legs. She moans loudly in pleasure as he orally pleasures her.' 
 	'You do your best to ignore and not disturb them while you take care of your business, but since the only other sink is right next to the one that are at, you have little choice but to use it. The man briefly glances up at you, but the woman never once opens her eyes - you don''t even think she is aware you are there. Once done, you return to the bar, the image of the two of them occupying you for quite some time after.'
 	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 elseif temp = 10:

locations/salon.qsrc

@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ozdormas':
 		*clr
 		picrand = rand(25, 28)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/mass.jpg"></center>'
-		'During your massage, you moan with pleasure as the guy really knows how to get your muscles to relax, it even makes you a little turned on. You feel his had slide down to your ass and before you can even protest he slips a oiled up finger into your pussy and his thumb in your ass.'
+		'During your massage, you moan with pleasure as the guy really knows how to get your muscles to relax, it even makes you a little turned on. You feel his had slide down to your ass and before you can even protest he slips an oiled up finger into your pussy and his thumb in your ass.'
 		act 'Indignant':gt 'salon', 'start'
 		act 'Enjoy':
 			gt 'sex', 'minet'
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 								telmasha = 1
 								masha += 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/sex/pri7.jpg"></center>'
-								$orgasm_txt = 'You begin to pant and moan and finally you have a intense orgasm, coating the girls face in your pussy juices. Seeing this the guy grunts and starts pounding harder, obviously getting near to blowing his load as well.'
+								$orgasm_txt = 'You begin to pant and moan and finally you have an intense orgasm, coating the girls face in your pussy juices. Seeing this the guy grunts and starts pounding harder, obviously getting near to blowing his load as well.'
 								$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/shoe_description2.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if ShoQuality = 1:
 elseif ShoQuality = 2:
    $description = 'This is a low quality '
 elseif ShoQuality = 3:
-   $description = 'This is a average quality '
+   $description = 'This is an average quality '
 elseif ShoQuality = 4:
    $description = 'This is a reasonable quality '
 elseif ShoQuality = 5:

locations/shulga_room.qsrc

@@ -488,7 +488,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_sex_room_ev1_2':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/bigroom/sex/1_9.jpg"></center>'
 					gs 'arousal','vaginal',10,'dick[2]','group','gangbang'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Vitek and Dan stop spit roasting you as Vasily stay down beside you as he waited for his turn, and now you dutifully show him that he was not forgotten. Short sharp breaths are all that escape you mouth as you lower yourself onto <<dick[2]>>cm <<$dick_girth[2]>> cock and ride him with a urgent need.'
+					'Vitek and Dan stop spit roasting you as Vasily stay down beside you as he waited for his turn, and now you dutifully show him that he was not forgotten. Short sharp breaths are all that escape you mouth as you lower yourself onto <<dick[2]>>cm <<$dick_girth[2]>> cock and ride him with an urgent need.'
 
 					act 'Take a breather':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1407,7 +1407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_lern_sex_yes':
 			else
 				gs 'arousal','anal',5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/vasya/sex/shuglinhome/lern/ev<<lern_imgset>>_4.jpg"></center>'
-				'He lifts you up and man handles you into a new position. Just as you are getting settled in your new position he plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick in your ass and begins to furiously fuck you. "I call this one, how to be a anal whore."'
+				'He lifts you up and man handles you into a new position. Just as you are getting settled in your new position he plunges his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick in your ass and begins to furiously fuck you. "I call this one, how to be an anal whore."'
 				'The slow and gentle sex is now replaced by hard brutal fucking, he pounds into you seemingly uncaring if you are still enjoying yourself or not. A part of you still is, a part of you is loving being used like his personal fuck slut.'
 				'Despite the pain of the ferocious anal fucking you are getting, it still doesn''t take to long until your body spasms as you orgasm hard. Your breath coming in short gasps, you think you might even have been screaming at one point as you come down off your orgasmic high.'
 				'He starts grunting hard himself now and you can tell he won''t last much longer either.'
@@ -1499,7 +1499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shulga_bazar_day':
 		act 'Suggest sex':
 			if shgopsex_vasya_count = 0:
 				cla
-				'Vasily says: "Maybe next time <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve had a enough for day."'
+				'Vasily says: "Maybe next time <<$pcs_nickname>>. I''ve had an enough for day."'
 				act 'Sigh': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 			else
 				$gopsex_n_npc = 1

locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -1058,7 +1058,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sit':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_12.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'After drinking you start to feel a little dizzy, and you chose to sit for awhile. As your sitting Anya and her friends approached you. "<<$pcs_nickname>> why are you sitting here? Come dance with us." Not taking no for a answer Anya drags you out to dance with her and her friends.'
+	'After drinking you start to feel a little dizzy, and you chose to sit for awhile. As your sitting Anya and her friends approached you. "<<$pcs_nickname>> why are you sitting here? Come dance with us." Not taking no for an answer Anya drags you out to dance with her and her friends.'
 	act 'Go dance': gt 'sisterQW', 'dance'
 end
 

locations/sister_party.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 			'"Well <<$pcs_nickname>>, best to have a bird in the hand, especially now that we don''t have such a simple relationship anymore.'
 		elseif sister_party_talkQW = 5:
 			'"What do you mean you don''t have a simple relationship, I need more details."'
-			'"Yes I know, so pay attention, I''m not going to repeat this. In a sense we now have a open relationship."'
+			'"Yes I know, so pay attention, I''m not going to repeat this. In a sense we now have an open relationship."'
 		elseif sister_party_talkQW = 6:
 			'"Open relationship? You mean where you can both fuck anyone you want and you keep dating Roma?"'
 			'"Eh <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is something like that."'

locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 				if spellbefshild = 1:defence = 500
 				'<<$streetev_title>>'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/street/pursechase.jpg"></center>'
-				'You chase after him, screaming at him to stop or anyone to stop him. All that working out is paying off, you are gaining on him. He keeps glancing back as you get closer, he turns and ducks down a alley when you are nearly on top of him. He leaps over an overturned trash can, obviously still hoping to get away from you. You easily leap over it as well and a few steps later you tackle him, sending both of you rolling on the ground. You both get back to your feet at the same time, realising he can''t escape he lunges at you.'
+				'You chase after him, screaming at him to stop or anyone to stop him. All that working out is paying off, you are gaining on him. He keeps glancing back as you get closer, he turns and ducks down an alley when you are nearly on top of him. He leaps over an overturned trash can, obviously still hoping to get away from you. You easily leap over it as well and a few steps later you tackle him, sending both of you rolling on the ground. You both get back to your feet at the same time, realising he can''t escape he lunges at you.'
 				act 'Fight':gt 'fight', 'start'
 			end
 		end
@@ -970,7 +970,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 					if exhibitionist_lvl = 1:
 						gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 						pcs_mood += 10
-						'You look around and notice several people staring at you, you are sure they''ve seen seen. You can''t help but smile, loving the attention even if it wasn''t your idea, you casually continue on your way, but with a extra bit of sway in your hips.'
+						'You look around and notice several people staring at you, you are sure they''ve seen seen. You can''t help but smile, loving the attention even if it wasn''t your idea, you casually continue on your way, but with an extra bit of sway in your hips.'
 					elseif exhibitionist_lvl > 1:
 						'You look around and notice several people staring at you, you are sure they''ve seen everything. You swear loudly, worrying less about how you were just exposed in the street and more about whether the prankster might have damaged your clothing. Satisfied that it appears to be unharmed, you continue on your way, albeit a little more annoyed than you were before.'
 					else

locations/street_walker.qsrc

@@ -191,8 +191,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 				ruslan_pimp = 1
 				'You walk over and introduce yourself to the other girls, one of them asks "You one of Ruslan''s new girls?"'
 				'You shake your head no. "No I work only for myself"'
-				'The other girls exchange a unease look, then one of them tells you. "You should really change your mind, if you work for Ruslan most of the guys know to pay up and the gopniks know to leave you alone, otherwise you can find yourself in a bad spot."'
-				'You smile to her. "Thanks for the advice, I will think about it." With that they make a excuse that then need to get back to work, you can tell they really don''t want to be seen hanging out with you.'
+				'The other girls exchange an uneasy look, then one of them tells you. "You should really change your mind, if you work for Ruslan most of the guys know to pay up and the gopniks know to leave you alone, otherwise you can find yourself in a bad spot."'
+				'You smile to her. "Thanks for the advice, I will think about it." With that they make an excuse that then need to get back to work, you can tell they really don''t want to be seen hanging out with you.'
 				act 'Stop working for the night': gt 'street_walker', 'end'
 				act 'Keep working the street': gt 'street_walker', 'event1'
 			end
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event5':
 		end
 		act 'Decline': gt 'street_walker', 'work'
 	else
-		'He decides he wants a anal.'
+		'He decides he wants an anal.'
 		act 'Accept':
 			cla
 			*nl

locations/taxi.qsrc

@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 		'He glares at you for a few minutes. "Fine, you might not have any money but your still paying for this ride." He pulls back onto the road and drives for a bit into one of the seedier parts of the city, finally he seems to find what he is looking for as he pulls into a back alley and comes to a stop.'
 		'He turns the taxi off and gets out. "Get out bitch!" You look around a bit afraid but seeing the look on his face makes you more afraid so you do as he says and get out. Once your out of his taxi, he roughly grabs you by the arm and pulls you around to the front of his taxi and shoves you against the front of it.'
 		'"Now take off all your clothes bitch!" When you don''t do as he says at once he threatens you. "It''s either that or the police." Nodding in understanding you take off all your clothes as he instructed. Once your completely naked he turns you around and bends you over the front of his car. He is obviously planning on fucking you.'
-		if lube > 1:'Realizing he is likely to fuck you, you turn your head to look back at him and offer your lube. "Wait I have some lube in my purse it will make it better for both of us." He laughs and slaps your ass hard enough to leave a outline of his hand on your ass. "Maybe better for you, but I like to dry fuck bitches and listen to their sobs. Maybe this will teach you a lesson." He says with a cruel look in his eyes and you realize he is going to enjoy hurting you, as he gives your ass another hard smack.'
+		if lube > 1:'Realizing he is likely to fuck you, you turn your head to look back at him and offer your lube. "Wait I have some lube in my purse it will make it better for both of us." He laughs and slaps your ass hard enough to leave an outline of his hand on your ass. "Maybe better for you, but I like to dry fuck bitches and listen to their sobs. Maybe this will teach you a lesson." He says with a cruel look in his eyes and you realize he is going to enjoy hurting you, as he gives your ass another hard smack.'
 		if stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 			act 'Tell him your a virgin':
 				cla
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 						'You hear him spit and you look back over your shoulder at him, you see him rubbing his spit on the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. He comes up behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips for a moment to make sure he is lined up. Then he thrusts his unlubricated <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy.'
 						'He struggles a bit to work his dick into you, but with your hips firmly against the side of his car you have no where to go and he finally shoves himself balls deep in you, you cry out in pain, you bite your lower lip and look back at him with a pleading look gentler. The hard cruel look in his eyes, tells you any pleas to be gentle will fall on deaf ears, but that he enjoys hurting you.'
 						'As he starts pounding your pussy hard, his stomach slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car, you begin to furiously rub your clit, hoping to make yourself at least a little wet. To your surprise despite the painful pounding of your pussy, you feel yourself getting wet and starting to moan in pleasure, apparently you like being used like a whore.'
-						'He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently forward, painfully banging your hips against the cold hard metal of the taxi. You''re certain he is making this as unpleasant for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you endure his furious pounding, with a mixture of pain and pleasure soaring through you body. With what seems like a eternity he fucks you hard, your moans getting louder.'
+						'He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently forward, painfully banging your hips against the cold hard metal of the taxi. You''re certain he is making this as unpleasant for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you endure his furious pounding, with a mixture of pain and pleasure soaring through you body. With what seems like an eternity he fucks you hard, your moans getting louder.'
 						'"You like getting used like a whore, don''t you slut?" You nod your head. Suddenly he stops with his dick buried balls deep in you as he grunts, you realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your pussy. He grinds himself against you as if he is trying to get even deeper, then he suddenly pulls away, making you almost stumble backwards. He puts his dick back in his pants and you start to get dressed.'
 						'Before you are fully dressed you hear the taxi start and look up just in time to see him rapidly backing away and out of the alley, you yell at him but he doesn''t even slow down "Hey wait, stop!". Leaving you alone half naked in this dirty disgusting alley full of his sperm. You hope he at least dropped you off near where you needed to go.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'rough'
@@ -278,8 +278,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 						'He struggles a bit to work his dick into you, but with your hips firmly against the side of his car you have no where to go and he finally shoves himself balls deep in you. You cry out in pain, you turn to look at him to ask him to be gentler but the hard cruel look in his eyes stop you before you even ask. You realize he would never be gentle with you, he is enjoying hurting you.'
 						'He starts pounding your ass hard without mercy, his hips slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car. You close your eyes against the pain and try to rub your clit as a distraction, but the pain is to much and you feel hot tears running down your cheeks, smearing your makeup. He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently back in, slamming your hips against the metal of the car, each time leaving you to whimper in pain.'
 						'You''re certain he is making this as painful for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you do your best to endure his furious pounding.'
-						'Once he notices your tears, he grabs you roughly by your hair and painfully twists your head to look at him as he continues to pound you in the ass. You can see a evil grin on his face, you can tell he is really enjoying hurting you. "Go ahead and cry bitch, I like it when bitches cry. Maybe this will teach you not to try and treat a mans job like a game."'
-						'In what seems like a eternity as he fucks your ass raw, even though your asshole feels looser now and rubbing your clit is helping, it still feels like your asshole is on fire. But a part of you is also loving it despite the pain, a part of you is loving being used as a whore in some dirty back alleyway. Suddenly he stops, with is dick buried balls deep in your ass as he grunts. You realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your ass.'
+						'Once he notices your tears, he grabs you roughly by your hair and painfully twists your head to look at him as he continues to pound you in the ass. You can see an evil grin on his face, you can tell he is really enjoying hurting you. "Go ahead and cry bitch, I like it when bitches cry. Maybe this will teach you not to try and treat a mans job like a game."'
+						'In what seems like an eternity as he fucks your ass raw, even though your asshole feels looser now and rubbing your clit is helping, it still feels like your asshole is on fire. But a part of you is also loving it despite the pain, a part of you is loving being used as a whore in some dirty back alleyway. Suddenly he stops, with is dick buried balls deep in your ass as he grunts. You realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your ass.'
 						'He grinds himself against you as if he is trying to get even deeper, then he suddenly pulls away, making you almost stumble backwards. The merciful relief of his cock out of your ass is short lived, the sharp stinging sensation like your ass was on fire, is quickly replaced by a deep throbbing and burning sensation. He puts his dick back in his pants and you start to get dressed.'
 						'Before you are fully dressed you hear the taxi start and look up just in time to see him rapidly backing away and out of the alley, you yell at him but he doesn''t even slow down "Hey wait, stop!". Leaving you alone half naked in this dirty disgusting alley full of his sperm. You hope he at least dropped you off near where you needed to go.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'rough'
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 				'You hear him spit and you look back over your shoulder at him, you see him rubbing his spit on the tip of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock. He comes up behind you and rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips for a moment to make sure he is lined up. Then he thrusts his unlubricated <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy.'
 				'He struggles a bit to work his dick into you, but with your hips firmly against the side of his car you have no where to go and he finally shoves himself balls deep in you, you cry out in pain, you bite your lower lip and look back at him with a pleading look gentler. The hard cruel look in his eyes, tells you any pleas to be gentle will fall on deaf ears, but that he enjoys hurting you.'
 				'As he starts pounding your pussy hard, his stomach slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car, you begin to furiously rub your clit, hoping to make yourself at least a little wet. To your surprise despite the painful pounding of your pussy, you feel yourself getting wet and starting to moan in pleasure, apparently you like being used like a whore.'
-				'He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently forward, painfully banging your hips against the cold hard metal of the taxi. You''re certain he is making this as unpleasant for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you endure his furious pounding, with a mixture of pain and pleasure soaring through you body. With what seems like a eternity he fucks you hard, your moans getting louder.'
+				'He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently forward, painfully banging your hips against the cold hard metal of the taxi. You''re certain he is making this as unpleasant for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you endure his furious pounding, with a mixture of pain and pleasure soaring through you body. With what seems like an eternity he fucks you hard, your moans getting louder.'
 				'"You like getting used like a whore, don''t you slut?" You nod your head. Suddenly he stops with his dick buried balls deep in you as he grunts, you realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your pussy. He grinds himself against you as if he is trying to get even deeper, then he suddenly pulls away, making you almost stumble backwards. He puts his dick back in his pants and you start to get dressed.'
 				'Before you are fully dressed you hear the taxi start and look up just in time to see him rapidly backing away and out of the alley, you yell at him but he doesn''t even slow down "Hey wait, stop!". Leaving you alone half naked in this dirty disgusting alley full of his sperm. You hope he at least dropped you off near where you needed to go.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'rough'
@@ -315,8 +315,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'trip':
 				'He struggles a bit to work his dick into you, but with your hips firmly against the side of his car you have no where to go and he finally shoves himself balls deep in you. You cry out in pain, you turn to look at him to ask him to be gentler but the hard cruel look in his eyes stop you before you even ask. You realize he would never be gentle with you, he is enjoying hurting you.'
 				'He starts pounding your ass hard without mercy, his hips slamming against your ass driving your hips painfully against the metal of his car. You close your eyes against the pain and try to rub your clit as a distraction, but the pain is to much and you feel hot tears running down your cheeks, smearing your makeup. He repeatedly pulls nearly all the way out and then slams violently back in, slamming your hips against the metal of the car, each time leaving you to whimper in pain.'
 				'You''re certain he is making this as painful for you as he can. Biting your lower lip as you do your best to endure his furious pounding.'
-				'Once he notices your tears, he grabs you roughly by your hair and painfully twists your head to look at him as he continues to pound you in the ass. You can see a evil grin on his face, you can tell he is really enjoying hurting you. "Go ahead and cry bitch, I like it when bitches cry. Maybe this will teach you not to try and treat a mans job like a game."'
-				'In what seems like a eternity as he fucks your ass raw, even though your asshole feels looser now and rubbing your clit is helping, it still feels like your asshole is on fire. But a part of you is also loving it despite the pain, a part of you is loving being used as a whore in some dirty back alleyway. Suddenly he stops, with is dick buried balls deep in your ass as he grunts. You realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your ass.'
+				'Once he notices your tears, he grabs you roughly by your hair and painfully twists your head to look at him as he continues to pound you in the ass. You can see an evil grin on his face, you can tell he is really enjoying hurting you. "Go ahead and cry bitch, I like it when bitches cry. Maybe this will teach you not to try and treat a mans job like a game."'
+				'In what seems like an eternity as he fucks your ass raw, even though your asshole feels looser now and rubbing your clit is helping, it still feels like your asshole is on fire. But a part of you is also loving it despite the pain, a part of you is loving being used as a whore in some dirty back alleyway. Suddenly he stops, with is dick buried balls deep in your ass as he grunts. You realizing he is cumming inside of you, you feel his spurts of cum filling up your ass.'
 				'He grinds himself against you as if he is trying to get even deeper, then he suddenly pulls away, making you almost stumble backwards. The merciful relief of his cock out of your ass is short lived, the sharp stinging sensation like your ass was on fire, is quickly replaced by a deep throbbing and burning sensation. He puts his dick back in his pants and you start to get dressed.'
 				'Before you are fully dressed you hear the taxi start and look up just in time to see him rapidly backing away and out of the alley, you yell at him but he doesn''t even slow down "Hey wait, stop!". Leaving you alone half naked in this dirty disgusting alley full of his sperm. You hope he at least dropped you off near where you needed to go.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'rough'

locations/train.qsrc

@@ -1113,7 +1113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 						*nl
 						'Without waiting for a response from you, the boy pulls his cock out once more and slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass. You gasp in pain, but it turns into a moan of pleasure along the way. You don''t have to consciously relax your asshole to enjoy this at this point; you are so turned on at the moment that you don''t really care where he sticks his cock as long as he just keeps fucking you.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unknown', 'rough'
-!!if Sveta has a orgasm then add below.
+!!if Sveta has an orgasm then add below.
 						$orgasm_txt = 'Your ass is getting pounded almost as hard as your pussy; he is just rough enough to make it hurt a little, but in this strange state you''re in, it seems to hurt in a <i>good</i> way, adding more fuel to the mounting climax inside of you. And then, just like that, the pressure is released explosively, shaking you like a leaf in the wind as you have an anal orgasm, maybe five meters away from a skywalk. You cannot contain your moans at this point, and it doesn''t help that your lover redoubles his efforts and fucks your tight little asshole even harder when he realizes that you''re cumming.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unkown', 'rough'

locations/trainBimbo.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif bimbo_temp < 3:
-		'The restroom door opens and a older man in his fifties comes in. He is taken aback by surprise, when he see''s you in the men''s room.'
+		'The restroom door opens and an older man in his fifties comes in. He is taken aback by surprise, when he see''s you in the men''s room.'
 		act 'Pretend to straighten your hair.':gt 'trainbimbo', 'pos4'
 		if pcs_horny > 50:
 			act 'You look at him and smile.':

locations/ugol1.qsrc

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ act 'Masturbate':
 	
 	gs 'exhibitionism', 1
 	gs'stat'
-	'Then you begin to rub your clit, at first in slow soft circles but you quickly feel yourself building up to a orgasm, you bite your lip to keep from crying out as you start rubbing your clit with urgency. A massive shudder runs through your body as you orgasm, your soft cries muffled by your own hand over your mouth. Getting dressed and blushing slightly you check once more to make sure you are alone. You hope no one heard you, as you quickly leave.'
+	'Then you begin to rub your clit, at first in slow soft circles but you quickly feel yourself building up to an orgasm, you bite your lip to keep from crying out as you start rubbing your clit with urgency. A massive shudder runs through your body as you orgasm, your soft cries muffled by your own hand over your mouth. Getting dressed and blushing slightly you check once more to make sure you are alone. You hope no one heard you, as you quickly leave.'
 
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10

locations/univer.qsrc

@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dekanat':
 					*clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/krupin.jpg"></center>'
-					'The professor patiently explains some of the material he went through in the class, in a effort to help you better understand, so you don''t fall too far behind.'
+					'The professor patiently explains some of the material he went through in the class, in an effort to help you better understand, so you don''t fall too far behind.'
 					
 					act 'Leave':gt 'univer', 'dekanat'
 					
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dekanat':
 					*clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/krupin.jpg"></center>'
-					'The professor patiently explains some of the material they went through in the class, in a effort to help you better understand, so you don''t fall too far behind. While he tells the other girl that it''s not polite to do that in class and she needs to properly behave.'
+					'The professor patiently explains some of the material they went through in the class, in an effort to help you better understand, so you don''t fall too far behind. While he tells the other girl that it''s not polite to do that in class and she needs to properly behave.'
 					
 					act 'Leave':gt 'univer', 'dekanat'
 !!expanding scene two. check code.