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Merge branch 'master' into 'master'

Spelling and wording fixes

See merge request KevinSmarts/girllife-ecv!216
Kevin Smarts 6 年之前
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共有 2 个文件被更改,包括 13 次插入13 次删除
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      locations/brothel
  2. 1 1
      locations/orgasm

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locations/brothel

@@ -1197,11 +1197,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackTease':
 	*nl
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedOnBackTease.mp4"></video></center>'
 	*nl
-	'The Client circles around you, touching every part of your body as if he was looking for something.'
-	'He stops by exploring both of your holes, stretching the lips and probing the insedes.'
-	'Nipples he twist around, waiting for you to make an uncomfortable sound.'
-	'After while he seems to be done, likely looking content with his explorations.'
-	'You notice large bulge rising from his (still worn) pants.'
+	'The client circles around you, touching every part of your body as if he were looking for something.'
+	'He starts by exploring both of your holes, stretching the lips and probing the insides.'
+	'Then he twists your nipples around, waiting for you to make an uncomfortable sound.'
+	'After a while he seems to be done, likely looking content with his explorations.'
+	'You notice a large bulge rising from his (still worn) pants.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', '', 10, 'bound', 'sub', 'prostitution', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBackVibroPussy':
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"Is your pussy a sensitive one, girl?"</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"I..I would say regularly sensitive, master."</font>'
 	'<font color=#<<$mas_font>>>"After this, it will be nothing like regular, haha!"</font>'
-	'With those words his face turn grim - and you get unpleasenat shiver on your back.'
+	'With those words his face turns grim - and you feel an unpleasant shiver down your back.'
 	'Your fears come true in few seconds - he takes out a giant vibration device!'
 	'He puts the top of the device right on your exposed pussy lips, also spreading them to get right onto your clitoris.'
 	'Then he slowly reaches for the button with big red ON.'
@@ -1301,8 +1301,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:tiedOnBack':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/tiedOnBackKneesHigh.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'He brings some ropes and wooden sticks. <font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>(What does he need those for?)</font>'
-	'Soon you get to know what for - your tities! Not that he ties you, that would be expected, but he secures your tender tits with the wooden sticks, forcing them to get fuller and fuller..'
-	'You end up bound so secure, that all you can do is stare at him in expectation what is coming next..'
+	'Soon you get to know what for - your titties! Not that he ties you, that would be expected, but he secures your tender tits with the wooden sticks, forcing them to get fuller and fuller..'
+	'You end up bound so securely, that all you can do is stare at him in expectation of what is coming next..'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', $sessionB
 end
 
@@ -1743,8 +1743,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:ragefinish':
 	'<b color=#'+$red_font+'>Rage meter: <<rageMeter>> / 100</b>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/brothel/masturbateinface.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'The client is now too excited by the violence unleashed upon you. He takes his own dick in his hands and starts masturbating right in front of your face.'
-	'Being bound you have no choice but witness his slimy dick turning dark red as he furiously masturbates..'
-	'Finally in a few minutes a large amount of slimy cum lands all over your face.. Getting in your mouth and even sticking your eyelids together..'
+	'Being bound you have no choice but witness his slimy dick turning dark red as he furiously masturbates.'
+	'Finally in a few minutes a large amount of slimy cum lands all over your face. It gets in your mouth and even sticks your eyelids together.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'brothel', '<<$base>>:end'
 end
 
@@ -1775,7 +1775,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:end':
 		end
 	elseif step = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/receptionistSlaveRelease.jpg"></center>'
-		'Finally he reaches to you and starts with the untying, letting you go..'
+		'Finally he reaches to you and starts with the untying, letting you go.'
 		if analplugIN = 1:
 			step = 3
 			act 'Get up': gt 'brothel', $this
@@ -1794,7 +1794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothel:section1:session:play:end':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/brothel/sessionend.jpg"></center>'
 		'It seems you have served your purpose. The client is satisfied, his needs are taken care of.'
-		'He starts to pack the few things he brought to the room, entirely ignoring your uncomfortable moans and pleads. As if you weren''t there anymore..'
+		'He starts to pack the few things he brought to the room, entirely ignoring your uncomfortable moans and pleads. As if you weren''t there anymore.'
 		'The last little indication that he is even aware of you is a rough loud slap on your ass. Afterwards he leaves the room, closing the door behind you, leaving you in the pitiful state and awkward position you were the whole session tied in.'
 		*nl
 		'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"Oh my please someone get me out of here!"</font>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/orgasm

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ elseif pcs_horny <= 60:
 	if i = 0:
 		'The feelings nearly overwhelm you, as you violently orgasm.'
 	elseif i = 1:
-		'You managed to have a strong orgasm, Your whole body shook for a couple of minutes.'
+		'You managed to have a strong orgasm and your whole body shakes for a couple of minutes.'
 	elseif i = 2:
 		'Gradually a pleasant warmth and pulsation increases in the lower abdomen, that descends to your entire body as you orgasm'
 	elseif i = 3: