[text edit] clean up text in zaprF and zaprFWash

locations/zaprF.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	'The local gas station, the cheap pumps are limited in functionality and will always fill the tank up completely.'
 	*nl
-	'When the weather is nice sometimes girls will offer a car washing service for some tips, there''s no structure to it so you could always try it.'
+	'When the weather is nice, sometimes girls will offer a car washing service for some tips. There''s no structure to it, so you could always try it.'
 	'The petrol price is 30 <b>₽</b> per liter.'
 	*nl
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				cla
 				kanistra += 1
 				money -= 150
-				'You bought a canister of gasoline. (It will automatically be put in the trunk of your car)'
+				'You buy a canister of gasoline. (It will automatically be put in the trunk of your car)'
 
 				act 'Disengage from the pump':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
 			end
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/gas/zapr1.jpg"></center>'
 
-					'You filled the tank and paid <<zprpay>> <b>₽</b>.'
+					'You fill the tank and pay <<zprpay>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
 					act 'Disengage from the pump':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
 				end

locations/zaprFWash.qsrc

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wash':
 		
 		if pcs_apprnc >= 60:
 			! slightly more money for wearing bimbo or prostitute clothing and looking good too
-			'You washed the windows of several cars and earned 100 <b>₽</b>.'
+			'You wash the windows of several cars and earn 100 <b>₽</b>.'
 			money += 100
 			
 			! min chance of 20 percent; max chance of 80 percent; percent chance scales with city_slut or pav_slut
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wash':
 			end
 		else
 			! slightly more money for wearing bimbo or prostitute clothing but not looking too great
-			'You washed the windows of several cars and earned 80 <b>₽</b>.'
+			'You wash the windows of several cars and earn 80 <b>₽</b>.'
 			money += 80
 			
 			gs 'zaprFWash', 'flash_passing'
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wash':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/carwash/regular' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
 		
 		! normal money just for the car washing
-		'You washed the windows of several cars and earned 60 <b>₽</b>.'
+		'You wash the windows of several cars and earn 60 <b>₽</b>.'
 		
 		gs 'zaprFWash', 'flash_passing'
 	end
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'refuse':
 	
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/no.mp4"></video></center>'
 	
-	'You begin to consider his offer but decide turn him down and walk away.'
+	'You begin to consider his offer but decide to turn him down and walk away.'
 	
 	act 'Go back to washing cars':gt 'zaprF', 'start'
 end
@@ -212,14 +212,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'titsFlash':
 	
 	! text differences depending on whether you were paid, whether you are flashing for a customer or for the cars on the road, and what type of clothing you are wearing
 	if $ARGS[1] = 'Paid':
-		if PCloPants > 0:'You lift up your top up and show him your breasts for a few seconds. Then you quickly cover up and take your money.'
+		if PCloPants > 0:'You lift up your top and show him your breasts for a few seconds. Then you quickly cover up and take your money.'
 		if PCloSkirt > 0:'You pull down your top and show him your breasts for a few seconds. Then you quickly cover up and take your money.'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'Free':
 		if $ARGS[2] = 'Question':
-			if PCloPants > 0:'You lift up your top up and show him your breasts for a few seconds. You give your breasts a little shake for him before you cover up.'
+			if PCloPants > 0:'You lift up your top and show him your breasts for a few seconds. You give your breasts a little shake for him before you cover up.'
 			if PCloSkirt > 0:'You pull down your top and show him your breasts for a few seconds. You give your breasts a little shake for him before you cover up.'
 		elseif $ARGS[2] = 'Flash':
-			if PCloPants > 0:'You lift up your top up and expose your breasts to the road for a few seconds. A couple cars pass by and honk in appreciation. You give your breasts a little shake before you cover up.'
+			if PCloPants > 0:'You lift up your top and expose your breasts to the road for a few seconds. A couple cars pass by and honk in appreciation. You give your breasts a little shake before you cover up.'
 			if PCloSkirt > 0:'You pull down your top and expose your breasts to the road for a few seconds. A couple cars pass by and honk in appreciation. You give your breasts a little shake before you cover up.'
 		end
 	end
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rapePussy':
 	i = rand(1, 5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/carwash/sex/hardanal<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	
-	'The man fucks your ass furiously, taking no heed to your painful moans. As you try to move away a bit to limit the depth he can reach in your ass, he slaps your buttcheeks hard and shouts:'
+	'The man fucks your ass furiously, taking no heed of your painful moans. As you try to move away a bit to limit the depth he can reach in your ass, he slaps your buttcheeks hard and shouts:'
 	'"Stop moving bitch! Who do you think you are, that you can tell me what to do?"'
 	
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginaCum':
 		'You let him cum deep inside your vagina. A pleasant warmth fills your insides as he shoots his load deep inside you. When he pulls out, a bit of sperm leaks out of your hole.'
 	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'rape':
 		pcs_mood -= 20
-		'The pounding suddenly stops as he cums deep inside your vagina. You can feel his cum inside of you as he continues to shoot his load inside your vagina. When he pulls out, a bit of sperm leaks out of your hole.'
+		'The pounding suddenly stops as he cums deep inside your vagina. You can feel his cum inside of you as he continues to shoot his load inside you. When he pulls out, a bit of sperm leaks out of your hole.'
 	end
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -773,7 +773,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjobEndMouthSwallow':
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/carwash/sex/swallow' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
 	
-	'You gulp down the mouthful of sperm and then present your tongue as a proof that all of his seed is now in your belly.'
+	'You gulp down the mouthful of sperm and then present your tongue as proof that all of his seed is now in your belly.'
 	'The man smiles, slaps you mildly on your face and says: "What a nice young slut you are. Next time I need a refill, I''ll be sure to stop by."'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'runback':
 	if runSuccess <= min(max(25,pcs_stren,pcs_agil),75):
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/turn_back.jpg"></center>'
 		
-		'You managed to escape his grasp! You take a quick look behind you to make sure he''s not following you before heading back to the gas station.'
+		'You manage to escape his grasp! You take a quick look behind you to make sure he''s not following you before heading back to the gas station.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'runback':
 		
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/carwash/sex/punishbeatface.mp4"></video></center>'
 		
-		'You weren''t quick enough and he caught you. He pushes you down and starts to slap your face!'
+		'You aren''t quick enough and he catches you. He pushes you down and starts to slap your face!'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -878,7 +878,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punishSpank':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/carwash/sex/punishspank.mp4"></video></center>'
 	
 	'The angry man drags you to a more secluded area, bends you over and starts to spank your ass very hard.'
-	'After twenty minutes of ruthless punishment, you can finally crawl away with your burning ass.'
+	'After twenty minutes of ruthless punishment, he finally stops, and you crawl away with your ass burning.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 15, 'sub', 'rough', 'unknown'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punishAnal':
 	
 	'The angry man drags you to a more secluded area, bends you over, and sticks a finger in your ass.'
 	'Your anus fully exposed, he starts fucking it ruthlessly.'
-	'After half an hour of rough assfucking he releases his grip on you so you can finally crawl away; your aching ass sore from the brutal penetration.'
+	'After half an hour of rough assfucking he releases his grip on you so you can finally crawl away, your aching ass sore from the brutal penetration.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'rape', 'unknown'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -939,7 +939,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punishPussyQ':
 	'The angry man drags you to a more secluded area. He bends you over and starts to rub your pussy.'
 	
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'Suddenly he remarks: "What? You''re a virgin? Such slutty tease and still a virgin?'
+		'Suddenly he remarks: "What? You''re a virgin? Such a slutty tease and still a virgin?'
 		
 		penetrate = rand (1, 100)
 		if penetrate <= min(max(50,slut_compare),75) and penetrate >= 50:	
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'punishPussy':
 		'Your pussy fully exposed, he starts fucking it ruthlessly.'
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 	end
-	'After half an hour of destroying your cunt he releases his grip on you so you can finally crawl away; your aching pussy sore from the brutal penetration.'
+	'After half an hour of destroying your cunt, he releases his grip on you so you can finally crawl away, your aching pussy sore from the brutal penetration.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'rape', 'unknown'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'