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[text edit] clean up shopdacha

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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1 changed files with 23 additions and 23 deletions
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      locations/shopdacha.qsrc

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locations/shopdacha.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Ilyich and Biryukov construction</font></b></center>'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Ilyich and Biryukov construction</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/store/shopdacha.jpg"></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/store/shopdacha.jpg"></center>'
-'In this storefront office you can upgrade your existing properties, or start a new construction project upon any land you may own.'
+'In this storefront office, you can upgrade your existing properties or start a new construction project upon any land you may own.'
 'All payments must be made from you bank account. Current balance - <<karta>> <b>₽</b>.'
 'All payments must be made from you bank account. Current balance - <<karta>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
 
 act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					rembedr = 1
 					rembedr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment bedroom'
+					'You upgrade your apartment bedroom.'
 				else
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
 				end
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remsitr = 1
 					remsitr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment living room'
+					'You upgrade your apartment living room.'
 				else
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
 				end
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remkorr = 1
 					remkorr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment hallway'
+					'You upgrade your apartment hallway.'
 				else
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
 				end
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remvanr = 1
 					remvanr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment bathroom'
+					'You upgrade your apartment bathroom.'
 				else
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
 				end
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ else
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 				if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 50000:
 					remkuhr = 1
 					remkuhr = 1
 					karta -= 50000
 					karta -= 50000
-					'You have upgraded your apartment kitchen'
+					'You upgrade your apartment kitchen.'
 				else
 				else
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 					'Unfortunately, you do not have enough money in your bank account.'
 				end
 				end
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ else
 			home_owned[3] = 2
 			home_owned[3] = 2
 			minut += 15
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You upgraded you dacha in the cooperative.'
+			'You upgrade you dacha in the cooperative.'
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
 		end
 	end
 	end
@@ -108,20 +108,20 @@ else
 			home_owned[5] = 2
 			home_owned[5] = 2
 			minut += 5
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for a connection of services to the site.'
+			'You pay for a connection of services to the site.'
 
 
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
 		end
 	end
 	end
 
 
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1500000 and home_owned[5] = 2:
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1500000 and home_owned[5] = 2:
-		act 'Build Mansion''s shell for (1,500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Build mansion''s shell for (1,500,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
 			cls
 			karta -= 1500000
 			karta -= 1500000
 			home_owned[5] = 3
 			home_owned[5] = 3
 			minut += 5
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the construction of the Mansion''s shell.'
+			'You pay for the construction of the mansion''s shell.'
 
 
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
 		end
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ else
 			ymanrem[3] = 1
 			ymanrem[3] = 1
 			minut += 5
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You paid for the construction of the Mansion''s internal walls.'
+			'You pay for the construction of the mansion''s internal walls.'
 
 
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 		end
 		end
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ else
 				banaMansion = 1
 				banaMansion = 1
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You paid for the electrics and plumbing to be installed.'
+				'You pay for the electrics and plumbing to be installed.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ else
 				bassMansion = 1
 				bassMansion = 1
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You paid for the construction of the Mansion''s pool.'
+				'You pay for the construction of the mansion''s pool.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[3] = 3
 				ymanrem[3] = 3
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought lounge furniture.'
+				'You buy lounge furniture.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[4] = 2
 				ymanrem[4] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought bedroom furniture.'
+				'You buy bedroom furniture.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[8] = 1
 				ymanrem[8] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay for your lounge'
+				'You pay for your lounge.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[9] = 1
 				ymanrem[9] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay for a children''s room'
+				'You pay for a children''s room.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[9] = 2
 				ymanrem[9] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You paid furniture for the nursery.'
+				'You pay furniture for the nursery.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[10] = 1
 				ymanrem[10] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay for a library'
+				'You pay for a library.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[10] = 2
 				ymanrem[10] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought furniture for the library.'
+				'You buy furniture for the library.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[11] = 1
 				ymanrem[11] = 1
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought a gym.'
+				'You buy a gym.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[11] = 2
 				ymanrem[11] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought gym equipment.'
+				'You buy gym equipment.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ else
 				ymanrem[12] = 2
 				ymanrem[12] = 2
 				minut += 5
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You bought office furniture.'
+				'You buy office furniture.'
 
 
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 				act 'Return': gt 'shopdacha'
 			end
 			end