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[text edit] clean up shop_fashionista

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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1 changed files with 8 additions and 8 deletions
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      locations/shop_fashionista.qsrc

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locations/shop_fashionista.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 	
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/changingroom.jpg"</center>'
-	'As you walk through the store you notice that there''s nobody in the changing rooms. Feeling a bit bored you go look at some clothes and grab several items to try on before heading into one of the changing rooms.'
+	'As you walk through the store you notice that there''s nobody in the changing rooms. Feeling a bit bored, you go look at some clothes and grab several items to try on before heading into one of the changing rooms.'
 	
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 		act 'Try on clothes': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'dressingclothes'
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			if NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 0 and NatbelQW['QWstage'] > 5 and NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 0:
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
-				'As you try on a particularly spicy set of seethrough underwear you notice that it doesn''t quite fit you.'
+				'As you try on a particularly spicy set of see-through underwear, you notice that it doesn''t quite fit you.'
 				'"This should fit Natasha perfectly though. And it only costs 750 <b>₽</b>." You think to yourself, imagining the look on her face if you make her wear it.'
 				act 'Buy it':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 					'You put the underwear aside for now so that you can take it to the register with you.'
 					money -= 750
 					NatbelQW['seethrough'] = 1
-					act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+					act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 				end			
 				act 'Don''t buy it':
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 					'Deciding against it, you look through the rest of the underwear for something that would fit you better.'
 					NatbelQW['underwearShop'] = 1
-					act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+					act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 					act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 				end
 			else
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/dressed.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/underwear.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'changingroom':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/nude.jpg"</center>'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-			act 'Stay in the changingroom': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
+			act 'Stay in the changing room': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingroom'
 			act 'Get dressed and go back to the store': gt 'shop_fashionista', 'changingend'
 		end
 	end