[GRAMMAR] - Fixed incorrect capitalization after a comma

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 2':
 			FedorLuv -= 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/turnaway.jpg"></center>'
-			'As Fedor leans in for a kiss, You turn away, pretending not to notice and continue watching the movie. After a few seconds you glance over to Fedor to see a really disappointed look on his face as he continues watching the movie in silence.'
+			'As Fedor leans in for a kiss, you turn away, pretending not to notice and continue watching the movie. After a few seconds you glance over to Fedor to see a really disappointed look on his face as he continues watching the movie in silence.'
 
 			act 'Finish watching movie': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movie 3'
 		end
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/endbye.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, You give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
+				'You tell Fedor that you need to go and he wraps his arms around you, giving you a warm hug as he replies, "I understand, maybe next time." and he walks you home. Fedor fetches your coat and walks you out the door. When you arrive at your apartment, you give Fedor a soft kiss on the cheek. "Until next time." as you give him a wink and close the door.'
 								
 				act 'Go home': gt 'korrPar'
 			end

locations/FedorEv3.qsrc

@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 			gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Guy in restroom', rand(19,45)
 			gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/scene5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up behind him and wait for him to finish peeing then you reach out and grab his penis. The man jumps up obviously surprised, He quickly turns to face you with a shocked look on his face but after looking you up and down he smiles and lays against the wall and enjoys your touch gently stroking your hair as you continue to slowly stroke his penis.'
+			'You walk up behind him and wait for him to finish peeing then you reach out and grab his penis. The man jumps up obviously surprised, he quickly turns to face you with a shocked look on his face but after looking you up and down he smiles and lays against the wall and enjoys your touch gently stroking your hair as you continue to slowly stroke his penis.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'					
 			gs 'stat'
 			
@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/cumface1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You quickly pull off him and get on your knees in front of him as he groans then paints your face with his seed. He continues to spray his load in your face until he has nothing left, he then takes a few seconds to catch his breath while admiring the view. You begin wiping the cum off of your eyelids as the man says, "Whoa, I must be the luckiest guy in the world right now, You were amazing girl. I hope we meet again." he then pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'You quickly pull off him and get on your knees in front of him as he groans then paints your face with his seed. He continues to spray his load in your face until he has nothing left, he then takes a few seconds to catch his breath while admiring the view. You begin wiping the cum off of your eyelids as the man says, "Whoa, I must be the luckiest guy in the world right now, you were amazing girl. I hope we meet again." he then pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face'						
 						gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Man':
 						*clr & cla				
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. You can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, You are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
+						'Instead of pulling off him you start pushing against his crotch and he grabs your hips firmly as he groans and fills your ass with his seed. You can feel him pumping his seed into your ass almost filling you up completely, he then suddenly pulls out of you sending a stream of semen to leak out of your ass and drip on the floor. The man watches you for a few seconds then says, "Damn girl, I don''t know what I did to deserve this but thank you, you are a real angel." He kisses you on the forehead as he pulls up his pants then leaves the restroom.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus'							
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'dom'					
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Rape':
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/mensrape3.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'He then grabs you by the hair and pulls you up to his dick. You try your best to break free but he is too strong, Just as he lifts his hand to slap you, You raise your hand in submission and then wrap your lips around his cock doing your best to satisfy him, so that this can end as quickly as possible. He then says, "You''re starting to understand your place. Good! Now get up bitch!"'
+			'He then grabs you by the hair and pulls you up to his dick. You try your best to break free but he is too strong, Just as he lifts his hand to slap you, you raise your hand in submission and then wrap your lips around his cock doing your best to satisfy him, so that this can end as quickly as possible. He then says, "You''re starting to understand your place. Good! Now get up bitch!"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough'	
 			gs 'stat'				
 			
@@ -1064,7 +1064,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Restroom Gang':
 						minut -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/movies/restroom/men/gang/gang4.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you are sucking, The guy behind you shoves his dick into your vagina causing a rush of pain and pleasure. The pain quickly subsides and you start to actually feel less afraid as you enjoy the pleasure build up. You can hear one of the guys say, "Hey look at her. I think she''s starting to like it." and another responds, "I knew she was a dirty whore when I saw her." the words offend you at first but begin to excite you as you continue getting fucked.'
+						'As you are sucking, the guy behind you shoves his dick into your vagina causing a rush of pain and pleasure. The pain quickly subsides and you start to actually feel less afraid as you enjoy the pleasure build up. You can hear one of the guys say, "Hey look at her. I think she''s starting to like it." and another responds, "I knew she was a dirty whore when I saw her." the words offend you at first but begin to excite you as you continue getting fucked.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'rough', 'gangbang'
 						gs 'stat'							
@@ -1341,7 +1341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movies 3':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big5.jpg"></center>'
 	end		
-	'Fedor walks you home and you both spend the whole time talking about the movie and some future films you both want to see. After a few minutes you are right in front of your building and Fedor gives your ass a grab as he says, to you "<<$pcs_firstname>> I hope you had as much fun as I had. I can''t wait to see you again." You respond, "Don''t worry Fedor, You won''t have to wait long." as you kiss him and then walk away with a confident smile.'
+	'Fedor walks you home and you both spend the whole time talking about the movie and some future films you both want to see. After a few minutes you are right in front of your building and Fedor gives your ass a grab as he says, to you "<<$pcs_firstname>> I hope you had as much fun as I had. I can''t wait to see you again." You respond, "Don''t worry Fedor, you won''t have to wait long." as you kiss him and then walk away with a confident smile.'
 	*nl	
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/kiss.mp4"></video></center>'
 

locations/FedorEv4.qsrc

@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way1':
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/3way/bed4.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'"Cum inside me!" you say before wrapping your lips back around Ivan''s dick and Fedor responds, "Sure thing." Ivan then turns to Fedor. "You''re gonna get <<$pcs_nickname>> pregnant...Well If that''s what you want but don''t go asking me to babysit for you." Ivan and Fedor begin pumping you faster. After a few seconds Fedor groans and you feel his seed filling your womb causing a muffled moan from you which seems to push Ivan over the edge as he begins shooting his load directly down your throat while you do your best to swallow every drop of. When they are finished Fedor slowly pulls out of you, causing the cum in your womb to almost gush out of your vagina and onto the bed.'
 					*nl
-					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, You have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
+					'You lay back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan talking. "Dude I can''t believe you''re already knocking up a girl. Do your parents know?" Fedor shakes his head. "Nah man, you have to keep quiet about this or my mother will freak out." Ivan responds, "No problem man but I''d be more worried about <<$pcs_firstname>>''s parents finding out, if I were you" Fedor remains silent as Ivan pats him on the back. "Don''t let it get it you down. I''m sure It will all work out in the end." and then he gets dressed and walks out of the room. Fedor sits still for a second before turning to you. "Let''s get you washed up <<$pcs_nickname>>." then carries you to the bathroom.'
 					*nl
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum5.mp4"></video></center>'
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way2':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/analcreampie/cumanal2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You turn to Ivan, letting Fedors dick slide out of your mouth but then extend your hand to jerk him off as you respond, "I want you both to fill me up." Ivan grins. "Hell yeah <<$pcs_firstname>> I''ll fill you up real good." he then rapidly increases his pace and soon Ivan grabs your hips tightly as he pumps his load into your ass, doing his best to fill your ass to the brim with his seed. Soon after Fedor groans as he shoots his load down your throat which you swallow obediently, savoring every drop. When they both finish with you, they begin chatting with each other. "<<$pcs_nickname>> is a great catch. You need to hold onto this one Fey."'
 				*nl
-				'Fedor responds, "Don''t worry, I don''t plan on letting her go, She is my number one girl." as he gently rubs your ass. Ivan gets dressed then leaves the room and Fedor turns to you "You''re a great girl. I hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did." You reply, "I had a wonderful time getting fucked by 2 strong men." Fedor smiles as he kisses you on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
+				'Fedor responds, "Don''t worry, I don''t plan on letting her go, she is my number one girl." as he gently rubs your ass. Ivan gets dressed then leaves the room and Fedor turns to you "You''re a great girl. I hope you enjoyed yourself as much as we did." You reply, "I had a wonderful time getting fucked by 2 strong men." Fedor smiles as he kisses you on your forhead before lifting you up and carrying you to the bathroom to get cleaned up.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A3'
@@ -1297,7 +1297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bathroom 2':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/toilet/sex3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Fedor nods as he thrusts inside you a few more times then pulls out, covering your chest with his cum as you reach out and start jerking his dick, milking him as best you can while moaning as you feel his warm seed covering your chest. After Fedor finishes spraying you with his load, He looks down at you and says, "You''re really good at milking. Were you raised on a farm or something?" You give him a smirk as you reply, "No, I''ve never milked cows, only men." He breaks out in laughter and then responds, "Not too many men I hope." You turn away from Fedor as you say, "Well a girl doesn''t kiss and tell." he smirks and gives you a playful stare before getting dressed and walking out of the bathroom.'
+				'Fedor nods as he thrusts inside you a few more times then pulls out, covering your chest with his cum as you reach out and start jerking his dick, milking him as best you can while moaning as you feel his warm seed covering your chest. After Fedor finishes spraying you with his load, he looks down at you and says, "You''re really good at milking. Were you raised on a farm or something?" You give him a smirk as you reply, "No, I''ve never milked cows, only men." He breaks out in laughter and then responds, "Not too many men I hope." You turn away from Fedor as you say, "Well a girl doesn''t kiss and tell." he smirks and gives you a playful stare before getting dressed and walking out of the bathroom.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1
@@ -1810,7 +1810,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/cum/cum1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You let out a smile as you greatly increase the pace almost fucking his dick with your throat while trying to hold back from gagging. Fedor''s head quickly jerks back as his cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his cum. You can feel Fedor''s warm cum squirting down your throat and leaking from your lips as you do your best to swallow every single drop, not wanting to waste a drop of Fedor''s sweet necter. When Fedor finishes, He looks down to you and says, "You really are amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s time for your reward."'
+				'You let out a smile as you greatly increase the pace almost fucking his dick with your throat while trying to hold back from gagging. Fedor''s head quickly jerks back as his cock begins throbbing in your mouth, filling your throat with his cum. You can feel Fedor''s warm cum squirting down your throat and leaking from your lips as you do your best to swallow every single drop, not wanting to waste a drop of Fedor''s sweet necter. When Fedor finishes, he looks down to you and says, "You really are amazing <<$pcs_firstname>>. It''s time for your reward."'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $boy, 1
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -2051,7 +2051,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 2':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/ride2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'As you continue riding Fedor, He wraps his arms around your legs and pulls you toward him, so that he is basically carrying you. Feeling Fedor''s strong arms holding you up, increases your excitement, knowing that he is in control of the pace despite you being on top. Fedor gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you fuck like an energized bunny." You respond, "Well this bunny is yours to fuck anytime you want, babe." His eyes light up as he responds "You always know just what to say." Fedor then gives you a few more thrusts before saying "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m ready to cum for you, so tell me how you want it."'
+			'As you continue riding Fedor, he wraps his arms around your legs and pulls you toward him, so that he is basically carrying you. Feeling Fedor''s strong arms holding you up, increases your excitement, knowing that he is in control of the pace despite you being on top. Fedor gives your ass a firm smack as he says, "<<$pcs_firstname>> you fuck like an energized bunny." You respond, "Well this bunny is yours to fuck anytime you want, babe." His eyes light up as he responds "You always know just what to say." Fedor then gives you a few more thrusts before saying "<<$pcs_nickname>> I''m ready to cum for you, so tell me how you want it."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2231,7 +2231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Shower 2':
 	act 'Leave shower and jerk him off':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bathroom/shower/shower.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You climb out of the shower without ever breaking eye contact then walk up to Fedor until you are both face to face, You then kneel in front of him and begin massaging his penis with your hand and his balls with the other which causes Fedor to moan as he leans forward, bringing his face to yours then kisses your lips as you continue gently stroking his penis.'
+		'You climb out of the shower without ever breaking eye contact then walk up to Fedor until you are both face to face, you then kneel in front of him and begin massaging his penis with your hand and his balls with the other which causes Fedor to moan as he leans forward, bringing his face to yours then kisses your lips as you continue gently stroking his penis.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -2569,7 +2569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/fedorhome/bedroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'Fedor''s bedroom is very neat, It has a bed, a computer desk with a chair and a <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>, where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
+	'Fedor''s bedroom is very neat, it has a bed, a computer desk with a chair and a <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">wardrobe</a>, where you can choose outfits and organize your clothing.'
 	if FedorLove = 1:
 		'Fedor has a <a href="exec:gt ''FedorEv4'', ''Picture''">framed picture</a> by his bed.'
 	end

locations/FedorMisc.qsrc

@@ -829,7 +829,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast Intro':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"Fyodor [Masha] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/outcast1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you approach Fedor, he turns to you with a distraught look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>>... What are you doing here. I bet Viktor will be upset with us both if he sees you with me." You reply, "Viktor doesn''t own me. I came here to check on you." Fedor responds, "How did you know to find me here." You give Fedor a sweet smile as you reply, "On our first date since hooking up, You told me that this is where you go when you are feeling down." Fedor returns the smile. "You remembered? I always knew you were one of the good ones."'
+			'As you approach Fedor, he turns to you with a distraught look on his face. "<<$pcs_firstname>>... What are you doing here. I bet Viktor will be upset with us both if he sees you with me." You reply, "Viktor doesn''t own me. I came here to check on you." Fedor responds, "How did you know to find me here." You give Fedor a sweet smile as you reply, "On our first date since hooking up, you told me that this is where you go when you are feeling down." Fedor returns the smile. "You remembered? I always knew you were one of the good ones."'
 
 			act 'Cheer him up':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Outcast':
 	if VK = 1:
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/parkalone'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walk toward the train tracks to see Fedor, He seems to be lost in thought.'
+		'You walk toward the train tracks to see Fedor, he seems to be lost in thought.'
 	else
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedormisc/outcast/parkalone'+rand(4,5)+'.jpg"></center>'

locations/LariskaHome.qsrc

@@ -1085,7 +1085,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dog_1':
 		'You spread your legs and take the vibrator out of your pussy, letting out a slight moan as you do so. You feel somewhat empty now.'
 	end
 	if vaginal_slip < 4: gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'vag'
-	'Going down onto your hands and knees, You look over your shoulder at Lariska and wag your ass seductively. Smiling at you, Lariska starts by rubbing the tip along your slit, making you moan in anticipation. Done teasing, she lines herself up and starts pushing it in.'
+	'Going down onto your hands and knees, you look over your shoulder at Lariska and wag your ass seductively. Smiling at you, Lariska starts by rubbing the tip along your slit, making you moan in anticipation. Done teasing, she lines herself up and starts pushing it in.'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
 		'She pushes the strap-on back inside, and you feel something inside of you rip. You know it was your hymen, you are no longer a virgin.'
 	end

locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 																	*clr & cla
 																	gs'stat'															
 																	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d9.jpg"></center>'
-																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, You ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
+																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
 
 																	act 'Wait for ice cream':
 																		*clr & cla
@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Burly Bearded Man">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/Niko/yurikev/avatars/yurik.jpg"></center>'
-		'You turn around to see a man standing across the room from you; covered in tattoos. You take a closer look and recognize him as the burly bearded man that attacked you before. You gasp, "You''re the one that attacked me." The bearded man chuckles as he replies, "Oh yeah. You''re the girl that Nikolai is dating, He got you here a lot quicker than I thought. That boy works fast, I see." The man approaches you as you let out a scream, causing Niko to storm into the room.'
+		'You turn around to see a man standing across the room from you; covered in tattoos. You take a closer look and recognize him as the burly bearded man that attacked you before. You gasp, "You''re the one that attacked me." The bearded man chuckles as he replies, "Oh yeah. You''re the girl that Nikolai is dating, he got you here a lot quicker than I thought. That boy works fast, I see." The man approaches you as you let out a scream, causing Niko to storm into the room.'
 
 		act 'See what Niko does':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -929,7 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Yurik Intro':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-					'After Yurik angrily storms out of the room, Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder and says, "Oh that brother of mine, he is such a wild card. Are you alright?" You pull away from him, "What did he mean by <font color=#FF00FF>gift</font>? You didn''t send him after me, did you?" Niko chuckles for a few seconds before replying, "Of course not, He was just talking... about a bet we had a few days ago which I promised him 50 ruble if he won an arm wrestling contest. That''s all, really." You stare him in the eyes for a few seconds.'
+					'After Yurik angrily storms out of the room, Niko wraps his arm around your shoulder and says, "Oh that brother of mine, he is such a wild card. Are you alright?" You pull away from him, "What did he mean by <font color=#FF00FF>gift</font>? You didn''t send him after me, did you?" Niko chuckles for a few seconds before replying, "Of course not, he was just talking... about a bet we had a few days ago which I promised him 50 ruble if he won an arm wrestling contest. That''s all, really." You stare him in the eyes for a few seconds.'
 
 					act 'Listen to Niko':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 		gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/party_rex_party_gost_2_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You happily take the bottle then give Niko a wink. You both take a seat and begin chatting about various topics as Niko continues pouring you more beer. After a few minutes, You begin feeling the alcohol kicking in, causing you to feel groggy. Niko grabs on your ass and asks, "Are you up for a dance?"'
+		'You happily take the bottle then give Niko a wink. You both take a seat and begin chatting about various topics as Niko continues pouring you more beer. After a few minutes, you begin feeling the alcohol kicking in, causing you to feel groggy. Niko grabs on your ass and asks, "Are you up for a dance?"'
 
 		act 'Dance':
 			*clr & cla

locations/NikoEv.qsrc

@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/niko3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have a surprise activity for today, We could be out all afternoon. Are you up for it?"'
+	'You walk up to Niko and his eyes light up as he sees you. "Greetings <<$pcs_firstname>>, I have a surprise activity for today, we could be out all afternoon. Are you up for it?"'
 
 	act 'I''m ready':	
 		*clr & cla
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Breakup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, You disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
+	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, you disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
 
 	act 'Walk away':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Disco Breakup':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'	
-	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, You disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
+	'You approach Niko with a stern look on your face. Niko notices you then says. "Ah there you are, you disappeared on me yesterday." You quickly reply, "I DISAPPEARED!? YOU RAN OFF AND LEFT ME TIED UP!" Niko recoils before responding, "Did I? I''m sorry I just had to..." You cut Niko off. "I DON''T WANT TO HEAR IT! I never should have trusted you. How could I have been so stupid?" Niko responds, "Hey let''s not be hasty here." You quickly reply, "NO! I want nothing to do with you. Stay away from me." '
 
 	act 'Walk away':
 		*clr & cla

locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters\pavlovsk\school\boy\fedor\fedorev2\home\3way/foreplay2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, You obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
+					'You drop down to your knees in front of them. One of the men shoves his cock into your mouth as the other pulls out then begins stroking his. You close your eyes and pretend that you are sucking Niko''s dick. Enjoying the warmth of it on your tongue, the occasional throbs as it leaks pre-cum into your mouth. The other man begins pulling at your hair which tells you that he wants his dick sucked too, you obediently switch dicks and begin sucking the second man vigorously. After a few seconds, one of the men begins groaning as he fills your mouth with his cum which you quickly spit out, not knowing if this guy has any STD''s or not.' 
 
 					act 'Continue':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Niko Wake':
 		minut += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/bedroom/relaxing1.jpg"></center>'
-		'After relaxing for a few minutes, You get up then stretch your body before saying, "I should head home. It is getting late." Niko places his hand on your shoulder. "Will you be alright on your own?" You reply, "Of course. I''ll see you tomorrow." You lean forward and kiss Niko on the cheek before getting up, getting dressed then leaving Niko''s house.'			
+		'After relaxing for a few minutes, you get up then stretch your body before saying, "I should head home. It is getting late." Niko places his hand on your shoulder. "Will you be alright on your own?" You reply, "Of course. I''ll see you tomorrow." You lean forward and kiss Niko on the cheek before getting up, getting dressed then leaving Niko''s house.'			
 
 		act 'Walk onto the street':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'		
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'					
-					'You are quickly repulsed by the smell of it. Clearly Petia doesn''t bathe well, but you look up to Niko and see him slowly nodding at you to start, You take a deep breaths ask Petia says, "Don''t be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>. I know that you always wanted to be with me. Well now is your chance." Niko then says, "Shut the fuck up loser before I come over there and smack the shit out of you." Petia quickly silences as he rubs his dick against your lips, obviously very excited to have it sucked.' 
+					'You are quickly repulsed by the smell of it. Clearly Petia doesn''t bathe well, but you look up to Niko and see him slowly nodding at you to start, you take a deep breaths ask Petia says, "Don''t be shy <<$pcs_nickname>>. I know that you always wanted to be with me. Well now is your chance." Niko then says, "Shut the fuck up loser before I come over there and smack the shit out of you." Petia quickly silences as he rubs his dick against your lips, obviously very excited to have it sucked.' 
 					
 					act 'Suck Petia''s dick':	
 						*clr & cla
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/petia2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering your vagina, You feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+						'You climb on top of Petia and feel is rock hard penis entering your vagina, you feel a jolt of pleasure, causing you to moan loudly, Petia moans with you, almost in perfect harmony. You start riding Petia''s cock as he breath heavily in your ear before his breath suddenly stops and he lets out a loud moan as he fills his condom, cumming almost immediately after you begin riding him. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Oh wow, he couldn''t hold himself back from cumming for even a minute. He must have really wanted me. He may be a smelly loser but he deserves to receive pleasure too and I gave it to him.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 						gs'stat'	
 						

locations/NikoSlut.qsrc

@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 2':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/Home/bedroom/cum/cum10.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'The man''s breathing suddenly stops as he begins pumping your vagina with his warm seed. You close your eyes and focus on the warmth of the man''s cum filling you. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that I''m letting this man, who I don''t even know cum inside me. Am I insane?</font> The man pulls out of you, causing his cum to leak out as he says, "That was amazing, You are one sexy girl <<$NikoSlutName>>. I can''t wait to use your services again." The man watches his cum leaking out of you as he pulls up his pants then walks back to the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
+						'The man''s breathing suddenly stops as he begins pumping your vagina with his warm seed. You close your eyes and focus on the warmth of the man''s cum filling you. <font color=#FF00FF>I can''t believe that I''m letting this man, who I don''t even know cum inside me. Am I insane?</font> The man pulls out of you, causing his cum to leak out as he says, "That was amazing, you are one sexy girl <<$NikoSlutName>>. I can''t wait to use your services again." The man watches his cum leaking out of you as he pulls up his pants then walks back to the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready for another customer, or would you like to clean up first?"'
 						gs 'cum_call', '', 'Trucker'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You start rapidly licking and sucking his dick when you hear him moan as he begins filling your mouth with his warm seed which you spit out into the nearby trashcan, causing the man to frown as he looks down to you and says, "Does it really taste that bad? Oh well, You were great. I look forward to doing this again." The man then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready, for another customer, or would you like to wash up first?"'
+				'You start rapidly licking and sucking his dick when you hear him moan as he begins filling your mouth with his warm seed which you spit out into the nearby trashcan, causing the man to frown as he looks down to you and says, "Does it really taste that bad? Oh well, you were great. I look forward to doing this again." The man then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you then says, "Are you ready, for another customer, or would you like to wash up first?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/vag1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as he fills the condom with his warm seed, You continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you and says, "You did a great job. Now let''s get back to the diner. We don''t want to keep your customers waiting." You and Niko head back inside the diner.'
+					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as he fills the condom with his warm seed, you continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko approaches you and says, "You did a great job. Now let''s get back to the diner. We don''t want to keep your customers waiting." You and Niko head back inside the diner.'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', 'Biker'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Customer 4':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/diner/4/vag1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as it begins filling your womb with his warm seed, You continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko then approaches you and says, "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. You should probably get washed up for the next customer."'
+					'You begin rocking your hips up and down to help stimulate him when he starts groaning. You can feel his penis throbbing inside you as it begins filling your womb with his warm seed, you continue to stare into his eyes and admire the blissful look in his eyes as he reaches his climax. The man catches his breath before saying, "That was the best fuck, I had in a long time. Your pussy is fine, girl." He then pulls his pants up then walks back into the diner. Niko then approaches you and says, "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. You should probably get washed up for the next customer."'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', 'Biker'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room 2':
 																*clr & cla
 																gs'stat'
 																'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/locker/lock7.mp4"></video></center>'
-																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, You lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
+																'Petka begins fondling your breasts as Artem spreads your legs, pulls out his penis then lines it up with your pussy. You then feel his penis entering your sore vagina, you lay still as Artem begins fucking you. Barely able to feel anything anymore. You look around the room and only see Artem, Petka, Petia, Lena, Lera and Pauline still in the room. Pauline continues filming you as the others watch you get fucked. Artem''s pace increases as he gets more excited. You can hear his balls slamming against your ass.'
 																$orgasm_txt = ''
 																gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'humiliation', 'gangbang', 'prostitution'
 																gs 'stat'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you...Ehh...take it slow...Ehhh...Please." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, It seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
+									'You suddenly feel Roman''s hard cock ram it''s way into your anus, causing a sudden jolt of pain. You scream out loud before Roman covers your mouth with his hand for a few seconds before the pain reduces to a manageable level. As Roman begin rapidly fucking your ass, you ask him "Can you...Ehh...take it slow...Ehhh...Please." Roman continues fucking you at the same pace, it seems that he is either ignoring you, or didn''t hear you speak. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Owww It hurts, he is fucking me so hard. Please slow down. It hurts, please stop. OOOwwwwww!'+$CloseInnerThought+' You close your eyes and just wait for it to be over. Roman suddenly wraps his arms around yours then drops back causing you to be on top of him with his dick still in your ass. Roman then says, "Ride me."'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub'
 									gs 'arousal', 'end'
 									gs 'stat'
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		*pl '<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, He is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+		'You let out your tears, submitting to your own sorrow while answering your own question in your head. '+$OpenInnerThought+'No matter what happens, Nikolai will be here for me, he is the only one who cares for me. I need you Niko. Please don''t leave me...Please!'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 
 		act 'Embrace Niko':
 			*clr & cla

locations/ParChurch.qsrc

@@ -114,17 +114,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sermon':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/church/church'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK >= 0:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> listen intently to the priest as he teaches you the word of god. You study his teachings, feeling enlightened, until you reach the end of the sermon. You turn to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she gives you an approving smile before you both stand up.'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> listen intently to the priest as he teaches you the word of god. You study his teachings, feeling enlightened, until you reach the end of the sermon. You turn to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she gives you an approving smile before you both stand up.'
 	elseif VKChurch = 0 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 1:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 1 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 2:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 2 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 3:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	elseif VKChurch = 3 or VKChurch = 4 and VK = 4:
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	else
-		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, You and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
+		'The candles dim as the sermon begins, you and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>'
 	end
 
 	act 'Stand up':gt 'ParChurch', 'Narthex'

locations/Terminal.qsrc

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ $askfather = {
 						minut += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_17.jpg"></center>'
-						'Sitting at the table, You order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
+						'Sitting at the table, you order food and drinks, and dad started asking you about everything.'
 						'You started with enthusiasm and a lot of talk about yourself, what you do, where go to school. Talk about Anya, that she was not admitted to the university, and worked as a salesgirl in the supermarket.'
 						'You tell him about your mother, she remarried, and you now have a stepfather and half brother Kolka..'
 						'After talking for awhile your father says. "<<$pcs_nickname>> I have to go, schedule to keep, I am here on weekends 12 00 to 14 00, I would be happy if you would visit me sometimes." With that he got up, paid for lunch and kissed you on the cheek goodbye.'
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if trfatherQW = 2:
 			'You go up to the managers office. "Good afternoon! What I can help you?" he says.'
 			'"Hello, I wanted to know, if you know a Mikhail Kuznetsov or if he works here?"'
 			'He turns to his computer and pulls something up. "I''ll check in our database, yes, we have a driver by that name. He is on the road right now and only comes in on Saturday at 12:00."'
-			'"Thank you very much, You helped me a lot."  With that you leaved but now you know when and where to find him.'
+			'"Thank you very much, you helped me a lot."  With that you leaved but now you know when and where to find him.'
 			act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $curloc
 		end
 		act 'Approach the men':
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ elseif (trfatherQW >= 3 or trfatherQW < 0) and week = 6 and hour = 12:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/mikhail/terminal/trfatherqw_9.jpg"></center>'
 		'You go to a group of men, drinking, laughing and talking loudly.'
 		'Approaching them, their eyes immediately turned to you.'
-		'"Hello, beauty, You want to have a drink with us?'
+		'"Hello, beauty, you want to have a drink with us?'
 		act 'Drink':
 			cls
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'beer'

locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever seen, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Reinhold, It''s seems that your protege''s words sound truer than you seem to imagine, as our presence here attest."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'hard'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'And then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"With our help as our presence here attest."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 			else
 				npc_rel['A241'] -=2
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 				'Reinhold facepalm, groan, and look at you in disbelief, your little quip has worked, but now Alexandria is gritting her teeth and seems concentrated on you, as purple sparks fly between her gloves, and then, he stops, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 				'"Stop Councilor Alexandria, don''t make us intervene, because you have been testing our wrath."'
 				'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus her anger on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-				'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+				'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 				'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappears, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality, a tense moment later, Alexandria dispel away her powers.'
 			end
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview1':
 			'You don''t know what to do, to stop the magical battle that seems at the brink to begin, so you begin back away slowly from the powerful sorcerers, and then, you stop, as around you, magic begins to rain, silencing the sounds and concealing your surroundings, there is a flicker of light and the partial image of the most beautiful and alien woman that you has ever see, bloom in the air between you three.'
 			'"We are very disappointed with this act Reinhonecessaryeems that our intervention is necessary"'
 			'The clear and lyric voice sends shivers down your spine, make Reinhold hid his weapon in embarrassment and... make Alexandria focus angrily on the eerie woman, that holds her gaze whit an elegant smile, before talking again.'
-			'"Councilor Alexandria, We have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
+			'"Councilor Alexandria, we have taken a special interest on this case and with an act of largesse, propitiated thanks to your great expedience with Rikudo''s legacy, decided to let you collaborate as an observed with Us."'
 			'An with that, and before a pissed Alexandria can retort, the unearthly image disappear, snuffing away the magic and returning the scene to a relative normality.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 3, 'sub'
 			pcs_mood -= 10

locations/artemEv.qsrc

@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'learn':
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
+							'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, you want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 							'He blushes but then he nods. "Yes I do, I think it is the least you can do for me."'
 							'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, it isn''t like a boy has never seen you naked before. "Ok fine." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'
 							act 'Start stripping': gt 'artemEv', 'striptease'

locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -1702,7 +1702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripagree':
 	if ARGS[1] = 0:
 		'You give him a serious look when you say. "You want me to get naked for you?"'
 	else
-		'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, You want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
+		'You give him a serious look when you say. "Ok ok, you want me to get naked for you that badly?"'
 	end
 	'You see him visible swallow, as he blushes but then he nods. "Yes I do, I would really love it if you did."'
 	'You think it over for a moment and then figure why not, you like Artem and it sounds thrilling, plus it will make him happy. "Ok fine, sit back and enjoy the show." With those words he grins hugely. You start stripping out of your clothes slowly teasing him as you do, you might as well have some fun with this.'

locations/arturQW.qsrc

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arturQW_2':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/arthur/artur.jpg"></center>'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you are my treasure! Because of you our profits have doubled. I always said what we need is a sexy girl behind the counter, and I was right!" Arthur declares proudly.'
 	'"Thanks Arturik, but I''m tired of working behind the counter. I think I need to find something else. I''m sorry." You say regretfully, hoping he won''t be upset with you.'
-	'"What? Damn it! I thought you liked it. It is fine, It is fine, a girl like you should have a decent place to work."'
+	'"What? Damn it! I thought you liked it. It is fine, it is fine, a girl like you should have a decent place to work."'
 	'He appears to be thinking to himself before his eyes light up and he quickly adds. "Look, I fired my bookkeeper, the old hag. Now you can take over her job! You will enjoy it much more, I promise. You will receive twice the money and won''t have to deal with asshole customers. Just come every day by 16.00, otherwise I will have to fire you, despite your fine ass." Arthur says.'
 	'You see a look of desperation in his eyes as he finishes the job offer. He clearly doesn''t want to lose having you around every day. You consider your options...'
 

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -958,7 +958,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_end':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/b (end<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 !--- Need to expand
 !	if npc_QW['A34'] < 5
-		'Confused, surreptitiously looking at your brother, You take a towel and wrap it around your flushed, steamed body.'
+		'Confused, surreptitiously looking at your brother, you take a towel and wrap it around your flushed, steamed body.'
 		'You shudder at the realization this is wrong. Kolka quietly closes the door and tiptoes out.'
 		'You feel uncomfortable and ashamed, but smile at recalling his wide open eyes, his flushed face and red ears and how they increased the more you decided to tease him.'
 !	else

locations/city_kavkazkafe.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'podgivi':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You rebel "What do you take me for?"'
-							'Givi gives you his best puppy dog eyes and clasps his hands like he is begging. "Come my bold goddess. Hey, You want money? I''ll give you five thousand? And a bonus."'
+							'Givi gives you his best puppy dog eyes and clasps his hands like he is begging. "Come my bold goddess. Hey, you want money? I''ll give you five thousand? And a bonus."'
 
 							act 'Kneel':
 								money += 5000

locations/city_trashplaceevents.qsrc

@@ -251,8 +251,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 						bomjshet += 1
 						gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 'hobo'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/old1,'+rand(0,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-						'It is not your first time dealing with such people. You have already learned to overcome any aversion. So you decide to give the homeless man something a little better to just a blow job.
-						You take off your panties and threw them to the homeless. He is, of course, shocked by this. But the shock does not last long. After throwing off his pants full of holes, The old man moves to you.'
+						'It is not your first time dealing with such people. You have already learned to overcome any aversion. So you decide to give the homeless man something a little better to just a blowjob.
+						You take off your panties and throw them to the homeless. He is, of course, shocked by this. But the shock does not last long. After throwing off his pants full of holes, the old man moves to you.'
 						
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'prostitution'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/club.qsrc

@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		act 'Hear him out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club11.jpg"></center>'
-			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, It includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
+			'"The club opens at 6pm you can work for an hour at a time up to 1am. The jobs vary according to time and demand, it includes finding customers to bring to the club, promoting drinks and some dancing."'
 			'"The pay depends on results, get more people in, get people buying up the promotional drinks or if you dance well and you get 200 <b>₽</b>. Do worse, you get less, do very well, you get a bonus. When you finish you can stay in the club, so you get free entry as well."'
 			'"So, are you interested?"'
 			act 'No':clubno = 1 & gt 'club', 'inside'

locations/dimaHome.qsrc

@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_chat':
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decided to press on anyways, as you want to know more about her. "She seems, well I don''t mean to be rude but, overly subservient I guess." You say, trying not to sound rude.'
-				'He snorts a bit. "Yeah, like my dad says, She has been well trained." He seems to find that amusing and, apparently, all the answer you need. Something about the way he says it makes you think there is more to it.'
+				'He snorts a bit. "Yeah, like my dad says, she has been well trained." He seems to find that amusing and, apparently, all the answer you need. Something about the way he says it makes you think there is more to it.'
 				act 'Talk about something else': gt 'dimaHome', 'dimka_chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'dimaHome', 'dimkaroom'
 			end
@@ -1100,7 +1100,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_makeout':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/stop.jpg"></center>'
-					'With that he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, You push him away with all your strength and you barely manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
+					'With that he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, you push him away with all your strength and you barely manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
 					'He suddenly gets furious. "Oh, you fucking tease! Get the hell out of my house, then!" With that he gets up and practically drags you out of his house, pushing you out the front door, before slamming it behind you.'
 					act 'Leave Dimka''s home': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end
@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimka_makeout2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Dimka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/sex/home/stop.jpg"></center>'
-					'With that, he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, You push him away with all your strength and finally manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
+					'With that, he reaches back in and tries to pull your top off again, you push him away with all your strength and finally manage to force him to back up. "I said no."'
 					'He suddenly gets furious. "Oh, you fucking tease! Get the hell out of my house, then!" With that he gets up and practically drags you out of his house, pushing you out the front door, before slamming it behind you.'
 					act 'Leave Dimka''s home': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end

locations/dimalina.qsrc

@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watch3':
 		act 'Dream of Lina':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/linased/F3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You can hear Lina''s cries of pleasure and a sudden image of her comes to mind. She is on all fours moaning as you massage lube into her tight little ass. She looks at you with concern, but you know what to do, You are going to fill that cute hole with the beads. Your fingers were only the beginning. You lick the beads and spread her cheeks. When you begin to push, she gasps, cries and clenches her teeth as she adjusts to the toy and slowly starts to enjoy the feeling. You smile knowing that by the end of this, she''ll be the perfect anal slut for you.' 
+			'You can hear Lina''s cries of pleasure and a sudden image of her comes to mind. She is on all fours moaning as you massage lube into her tight little ass. She looks at you with concern, but you know what to do, you are going to fill that cute hole with the beads. Your fingers were only the beginning. You lick the beads and spread her cheeks. When you begin to push, she gasps, cries and clenches her teeth as she adjusts to the toy and slowly starts to enjoy the feeling. You smile knowing that by the end of this, she''ll be the perfect anal slut for you.' 
 			'Just as you begin to thrust the beads in and out of her ass a bit, you''re pulled back to reality by the sound of grunting from Dimka'
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -576,9 +576,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina5':
 		'Lina winces at his words and avoids Dimka''s gaze, reddens and look out of the corner of her eye towards you'
 		'"I don''t fucking hear you Little Slut!"'
 		'"That... If I don''t come, and do whatever you like, you will show the... The video to everyone."'
-		'"Good Little Slut! As a clarification, You are going to come here once a week, and remember, I''ve made copies of everything and stored them somewhere safe. I''m sure right now you''re thinking of doing something, maybe telling the police? If you think that the police will help you, forget it. I''m a minor and my father has money and a great lawyer. So... you understand?"'
+		'"Good Little Slut! As a clarification, you are going to come here once a week, and remember, I''ve made copies of everything and stored them somewhere safe. I''m sure right now you''re thinking of doing something, maybe telling the police? If you think that the police will help you, forget it. I''m a minor and my father has money and a great lawyer. So... you understand?"'
 		'Quivering and on the verge of tears, the only thing that she can do is agree.'
-		'"Ok...Good...Now get naked!"'
+		'"Ok... Good... Now get naked!"'
 		act 'Watch Lina obey her new master': gt 'dimalina', 'linaundress'
 	end
 end
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina6':
 			'"Uhm... thank you." Why is he suddenly being so... nice? Is this just a trick to get your guard down? '
 			'"So tell me... how is your mother? I mean, the gossip is that she is quite a slut."'
 			'Your expression hardens into a grimace. So this is what he was up to. "She''s a happily married woman, so that rumor... well it''s just that; a rumor."'
-			'Dimka snickers, "Yeah right! Alright, You don''t want to talk about that... so lets talk about what I should do next with my new Little Slut, hm?"'
+			'Dimka snickers, "Yeah right! Alright, you don''t want to talk about that... so lets talk about what I should do next with my new Little Slut, hm?"'
 			'"New...? You mean Lina?"'
 			'His eyes light up with delight as he watches you make the horrific realization of Lina''s fate with him. "Just like how I had to train you to be a good obedient girl, her performance as my girlfriend leaves a lot to be desired, so I''ve been thinking I should train her to be something much better instead..."'
 			'"I... I mean... I don''t really know..."'
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dimkalina8':
 	if dimlinaQW = 7: dimlinaQW = 8
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/dimkahome/dimkaroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Slut, You didn''t have enough, Hm? Coming so you can be with me? but, what can be expected from the women in your family?"'
+	'"Slut, you didn''t have enough, Hm? Coming so you can be with me? but, what can be expected from the women in your family?"'
 	'Cringing, you suppress the urge to hit his head against the wall and make humanity''s a favor. Dimka feels your incommodity and just give you an evil smile.'
 	'"Come on! Recognize it! You are a total Slut! I am trying to pass some quality time with my girlfriend and you come over to be fucked!"'
 	'"Well, you told me that I should come to visit, so..."'

locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ $pavser4 = {
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/bathroom/sittingtoilet.jpg" ></center>'
     'You went into the corridor and headed to the bathroom, waiting, he will move after, but by the sound of steps realized, that he stayed in the kitchen. Scattered look you ran about the bathroom, listening to, he wanders in the other end of the apartment. The room was bathed in light, which fell through the glass window with glass.'
     'Finishing the old shell in harmony with frame oval mirror. You stayed in front of him to check his hair, Do not gone cosmetics.'
-    'Then, instantly deciding, She lifted her skirt, He pulled down her panties and sat on the toilet. Do you understand, resultinge herself slo, not only locked, but not even closing the bathroom door, and that he may at any time enter, but this-then you and excited. You become terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
+    'Then, instantly deciding, she lifted her skirt, he pulled down her panties and sat on the toilet. Do you understand, resultinge herself slo, not only locked, but not even closing the bathroom door, and that he may at any time enter, but this-then you and excited. You become terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
     'You were terribly, that it can catch in this position, you, However, I, to make it happen.'
 	
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ $pavser4 = {
             gs'stat'
             '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/11684312.mp4"></video></center>'
             'You koknulis his wet with excitement and urine pisichki.'
-            'From that sensation, that you''re caught for such indecent occupation, You further podstёguet. And you barely contained, not to publish and sound.'
+            'From that sensation, that you''re caught for such indecent occupation, you further podstёguet. And you barely contained, not to publish and sound.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ $pavser5 = {
 		*clr & cla
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You enter the kitchen; it, in accordance with the requirements of politeness, You missed a little ahead and behind. Against the wall were piled bundles of yellowed newspapers.'
+        'You enter the kitchen; it, in accordance with the requirements of politeness, you missed a little ahead and behind. Against the wall were piled bundles of yellowed newspapers.'
         'You have a thought in my head slipped, that he always waits, How will you. You are immersed in their own emotional throwing,'
         'you are attracted to him and at the same time you are afraid of it, and he decided, that will not help you or customized : He decides to let itself. And what will happen next - he does not care whether or not?'
         'For he and you were two beings in ridiculous situation, devoid of purpose or meaning in life.'
@@ -273,9 +273,9 @@ $pavser7 = {
         pcs_horny += 10
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/phone.jpg" ></center>'
-        'You raised the phone in the bedroom, He along with you - in the corridor. An unfamiliar voice came to nothing, The connection was lost, but you both continued to press the receiver to his ear, listening to each other''s breath.'
+        'You raised the phone in the bedroom, he along with you - in the corridor. An unfamiliar voice came to nothing, the connection was lost, but you both continued to press the receiver to his ear, listening to each other''s breath.'
         'You want, that he spoke with you, I went to some-a trifling concession - showed what-weakness, - And then you can just get up and leave. You were not able to lower the tube, although you desperately tempted to slap her blunder on the lever of the old machine.'
-        'This keeps you from his inflexible arrogance. May be, He knew about it, and proud of their power over you.'
+        'This keeps you from his inflexible arrogance. Maybe, he knew about it, and proud of their power over you.'
         *nl
         act 'Listen tube':dynamic $pavser8
     end
@@ -289,8 +289,8 @@ $pavser8 = {
     pcs_mana = pcs_mana - 50
     gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/oldtown/pavser/pavserjil.jpg" ></center>'
-    'And then he appeared,You involuntarily held his tongue over the lip.'
-    '– Well, We choose? - I asked you to inadvertently break into the voice irritation. - Removes this apartment?'
+    'And then he appeared, you involuntarily held his tongue over the lip.'
+    '– Well, we choose? - I asked you to inadvertently break into the voice irritation. - Removes this apartment?'
     '– Yes. It was decided from the outset.'
     '- But now I hesitate, - He continued. - Do you like her?'
     'He helped you get up and again asked,, - Do you like her?'
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ $pavser9 = {
         *clr & cla
         gs'stat'
         '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/sex/01.jpg" ></center>'
-        'He put you in the chair, but do not let go of the hands of the mighty, He ran your hand under her blouse and began to stroke your breasts.'
+        'He put you in the chair, but do not let go of the hands of the mighty, he ran your hand under her blouse and began to stroke your breasts.'
         ''
         ''
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ $pavser9 = {
             *clr & cla
             gs'stat'
             '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/oldtown/vacanthouse/sex/02.jpg" ></center>'
-            'Picked up the chest, palms and thumbs had nipples. The rough skin on the balls of his fingers made her rush of desire, You clung to him.'
+            'Picked up the chest, palms and thumbs had nipples. The rough skin on the balls of his fingers made her rush of desire, you clung to him.'
             'At the end-all he bared your breasts and hot lips touched your nipples and wild heat sladotnogo madness began to rise from the bottom to the top of your body.'
 			
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'sub'

locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'surrender':
 
 
 		'Kisame swims around you and laughs. "I''m having a great time baby." He grabs and drags your feet to the bottom of the pool, where he thrusts his cock in your pussy.'
-		'You try not to drown in the water while you are fucked by Kisame, You feel him pounding your insides with his member like a hammer. You can no longer hold your breath as you begin to drown.'
+		'You try not to drown in the water while you are fucked by Kisame, you feel him pounding your insides with his member like a hammer. You can no longer hold your breath as you begin to drown.'
 		'Kisame smiles and leans over you. "Kiss me." You stick your lips to his mouth, as his breath fills your lungs with air before keeping on pounding your pussy. Finally he finishes, pouring his shark seed into the surrounding water.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'rough', 'sub'

locations/etoexhib.qsrc

@@ -1029,7 +1029,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos25':
 		'You:"Zhenya, you have something written on your nose." You point to the mirror.'
 		'Eugene looks in the mirror and immediately becomes red as a lobster'
 		'Zhenya:"This is what I get for playing with the boys, excuse me and thank you..." He begins to rub his nose hard'
-		'It seems some students make fun of this guy, You feel like you should cheer him up.'
+		'It seems some students make fun of this guy, you feel like you should cheer him up.'
 		'You:"Do not worry, so tell me, how are you doing? Do you have a girlfriend? Almost every young man your age has a girl.'
 		'Zhenya:"Unfortunately, I do not. I am not acquainted with many girls, they always make fun of me... it hurts my feelings.'
 		'You:"Well, what do you like to do? Do you have a hobby? Going to the movies, games maybe?'

locations/event.qsrc

@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima32':
 	'"Oh, you''re awake! Just in time for your lessons!" Says Alex.'
 	'You look around. While you were unconscious, you were dressed and taken to the street. In your mouth, a metallic taste. Your hands are tied behind your back.'
 	'"And now, bitch, I''ll teach you safe sex".'
-	'With these words, Alex puts you on your knees in front of him, He pulls out his penis and puts it in your mouth.'
+	'With these words, Alex puts you on your knees in front of him, he pulls out his penis and puts it in your mouth.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Resist':gt 'event', 'dima33'
@@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 	'Alex enters you from behind. He grabs your but with both hands and squeezes it tightly, while thrusting vigorously. After a while, you orgasm from the sensation.'
 	'"Much like this morning, only this time no bitting!" Says Alex, further increasing the tempo.'
 	'Suddenly he stops, you are turned around and pushed to your knees. You hit the marble floor hard, and feel something warm hit and then run down your face.'
-	'"Your Stuff is in that box. Hope, You enjoyed the lesson." With these words Alex loosens the straps on your hands, and you hear him walking away.'
+	'"Your Stuff is in that box. Hope, you enjoyed the lesson." With these words Alex loosens the straps on your hands, and you hear him walking away.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima36':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/10028_tommypistoljacquelineblacklady_352.jpg"></center>'
-	'After sitting in this position for a few minutes, you start to free your hands. Once they''re loose, You tear off the blindfold, and wipe as much of the sperm of your face as is possible.'
+	'After sitting in this position for a few minutes, you start to free your hands. Once they''re loose, you tear off the blindfold, and wipe as much of the sperm of your face as is possible.'
 	'Looking around, you find the box Alex had put your stuff it. You get dressed and find a passage that leads to the street above.'
 	
 	act 'Leave':gt 'city_residential'
@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima47':
 	'The realization that you are not alone in the room hits you just as he forcefully rams his cock into your pussy.'
 	'You have decide to try not to be distracted, and continue to suck, despite the pounding you are receiving.'
 	'When the man you are serving finishes, you, as before, swallow and are ready to accept the next, but the hole remains empty. It seems you have work off the money Alex had gotten.'
-	'Alex efforts have not gone unnoticed, and soon you shake in orgasm. Almost immediately, He pulls out his penis, and turns your head so that it is jabbing you in the face.'
+	'Alex efforts have not gone unnoticed, and soon you shake in orgasm. Almost immediately, he pulls out his penis, and turns your head so that it is jabbing you in the face.'
 	'It is now a reflex action for you to help him to finish. After you cleaned his cock, he leaves the booth.'
 	'After a few minutes the girl you met at the door comes in, removes your gag and takes you to the lavatory, where you wash your face and rinse your mouth.'
 	'When you are done, she hands you your things, and some cash, adding, "From your friend, for a job well done." You dress.'
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima48':
 	'It looks like you misunderstood the girl.'
 	'"You want to do this the hard way? Fine, I can do that."'
 	'With these words, she forces your head back to the hole.'
-	'Another cock appears from the hole, She puts it in your mouth, and begins to drive your head. It feels like she''s fucking the stranger behind the wall with your head.'
+	'Another cock appears from the hole, she puts it in your mouth, and begins to drive your head. It feels like she''s fucking the stranger behind the wall with your head.'
 	'It takes more time, but he finishes in your mouth. She holds your head against the wall, not giving you room to spit anything out. This was repeated several times.'
 	'When the last "customer" disappeared from the hole, she lets go of your head, and leaves the room. Soon she comes back with your stuff. You dress, and she leads you out.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 50, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
@@ -850,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima51':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/10022_paristommy_088.jpg"></center>'
-	'You immediately understand the hint. Kneeling, you unzip his fly, and get down to business. Barely a couple of minutes later the guy begins to cum. Finished, He says goodbye to you, and quickly leaves.'
+	'You immediately understand the hint. Kneeling, you unzip his fly, and get down to business. Barely a couple of minutes later the guy begins to cum. Finished, he says goodbye to you, and quickly leaves.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'unknown'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'

locations/gopnik_initiation.qsrc

@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Niko':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/brother/upset.jpg"></center>'
-		'Niko seems to be resting while having a smoke, You take a look at him then think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>It''s probably best not to disturb him</font>.'
+		'Niko seems to be resting while having a smoke, you take a look at him then think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>It''s probably best not to disturb him</font>.'
 	end
 	if NikoGOPParty = 0:
 		act 'Wave and walk away':gt 'gopnik_initiation', 'explore'

locations/grigory.qsrc

@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 					'For several minutes he fucks you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
 					'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 					'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum, mingled with your virgin blood, drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
-					'With his clothes in hand, he stops to look at you, "I want nothing more than to stay here with you, but I need to get back to work," Grigory says, You can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later Kishka."'
+					'With his clothes in hand, he stops to look at you, "I want nothing more than to stay here with you, but I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later Kishka."'
 					'Without another word, he exits the barn. After he is gone, you can''t help but think about how happy he looked before leaving.'
 					gs 'cum_call', '', $boy
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 			'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. Without so much as a pause, he begins to fuck you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
 			'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 			'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
-			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, You can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
+			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
 			'Without another word, he exits the barn.'
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barn_closer':
 			'He almost immediately removes his hand and takes hold of both of your hips. You can feel the tip of his cock brush the inside of your thigh, finding your slit he thrusts forward, sinking his entire length into you in one rough shove. Without so much as a pause, he begins to fuck you with rapid thrusts that fill the air with the sounds of your bodies meeting.'
 			'Its not long before you can feel his pace become irregular, then with one sudden lunge and a grunt, he presses deep before unloading his seed deep inside of you.'
 			'Withdrawing, you can feel some of his cum drip from your freshly used pussy. He gives your ass a playful slap, then reaches for his clothes.'
-			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, You can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
+			'"I need to get back to work," Grigory says, you can still hear that he''s still short of breath, "See you later little lady."'
 			'Without another word, he exits the barn.'
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $boy
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10

locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka':
 				'Dimka runs over to the store and returns with a couple of beers and you find a secluded place where you could drink in peace. Dimka pours the beer in plastic cups. You all have a drink and chat about little things.'
 				'Dimka entertains the both of you, but its so obvious he''s just interested in Diana. He''s truly intrigued by Diana and asks her many questions about her personal life, coming up with different questions all the time.'
 				'Diana looked a little frazzled as she answered his onslaught of questions. You are amazed that Diana was able to keep it together and answer as many of the questions as she did.'
-				'With the beer gone, You hastily says "Thank you for the beers, Dimka. It was nice of you to treat us, but we have to go, right Diana, so bye." and with that started Diana pulling you away from Dimka.'
+				'With the beer gone, you hastily say "Thank you for the beers, Dimka. It was nice of you to treat us, but we have to go, right Diana, so bye." and with that started Diana pulling you away from Dimka.'
 				act 'Well, now what?':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/dimanos/obnimaet.jpg"></center>'

locations/ivanRoom.qsrc

@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 															cumface = 0
 															gs 'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tatiana meanwhile handed him a glass of water, thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tatiana asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what I wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tatiana grinned, "It''s done Ivan you go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tatiana turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tatiana, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
+															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tatiana meanwhile handed him a glass of water, thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tatiana asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what I wanted. Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tatiana grinned, "It''s done Ivan you go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tatiana turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tatiana, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
 
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
@@ -240,14 +240,14 @@ else
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tanya started to explain "In your disguise Ivan won''t recognize you. We have to seduce him, for that I have the means,this aphrodisiac is  enough strong and he just has to smell it, and immediately he''ll be horny. The main thing we keep ourselves out of the vapor. Then when he is ready to offer him a drink, that shoul untie his tongue. We record his confession on camera. And thats it."'
+			'Tanya started to explain "In your disguise Ivan won''t recognize you. We have to seduce him, for that I have the means,this aphrodisiac is enough strong and he just has to smell it, and immediately he''ll be horny. The main thing we keep ourselves out of the vapor. Then when he is ready to offer him a drink, that shoul untie his tongue. We record his confession on camera. And thats it."'
 			act 'Let''s begin':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				pcs_horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-				'Tanya said "Here, take this bottle its the aphrodisiac. Carefull with that remember it will affect us as well." Tanya gives you the bottle and you splash a little on the frame of the door, trying not to inhale the aroma. Tanya rang the bell and waited a few minutes for him to answer it. On the threshold appeared Ivan, He looked a little perplexed at you. Tanya smiled sweetly Ivan "We conducting a social survey, Can we ask you a few questions?" Ivan stands aside inviting you to go to the apartment.'
+				'Tanya said "Here, take this bottle its the aphrodisiac. Carefull with that remember it will affect us as well." Tanya gives you the bottle and you splash a little on the frame of the door, trying not to inhale the aroma. Tanya rang the bell and waited a few minutes for him to answer it. On the threshold appeared Ivan, he looked a little perplexed at you. Tanya smiled sweetly Ivan "We conducting a social survey, Can we ask you a few questions?" Ivan stands aside inviting you to go to the apartment.'
 				act 'Go in to the apartment':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ else
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-								'After a short conversation where Tanya asked quite a few very personal questions of Ivan, all the while displaying her cleavage, you take your que and ask if Ivan would like to have a drink with you and Tanya. He chuckled, "Girls, I do not know what you''re up to here, but I think this is over." You start to protest but he cuts you off. ""No. Two good looking but strange girls, come to my house, asking me stupid questions, trying to entice me, then you want to drink, then what, I pass out?  Then you rob my house as I sleep? " Tanya is noticeably flustered realizing that her plan has unravelled at the seams. Ivan gets up from the couch and asks you to leave the apartment. Tanya tries to think of something else but Ivan is already holding the door open for you have nothing left to do but to leave.'
+								'After a short conversation where Tanya asked quite a few very personal questions of Ivan, all the while displaying her cleavage, you take your que and ask if Ivan would like to have a drink with you and Tanya. He chuckled, "Girls, I do not know what you''re up to here, but I think this is over." You start to protest but he cuts you off. ""No. Two good looking but strange girls, come to my house, asking me stupid questions, trying to entice me, then you want to drink, then what, I pass out? Then you rob my house as I sleep? " Tanya is noticeably flustered realizing that her plan has unravelled at the seams. Ivan gets up from the couch and asks you to leave the apartment. Tanya tries to think of something else but Ivan is already holding the door open for you have nothing left to do but to leave.'
 
 								act 'Get out of the apartment':
 									cls
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ else
 															cumface = 0
 															gs 'stat'
 															'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/shared/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
-															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tanya meanwhile handed him a glass of water after putting something into it,  thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tanya asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what i wanted.  Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tanya grinned, "it''s done Ivan, go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tanya turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tanya, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
+															'You secretly prepared a camera filming through a hole in her purse at Ivan. Tanya meanwhile handed him a glass of water after putting something into it,  thirsty Ivan drank the water as Tanya asked him. Tell me how you stole from his boss. Ivan grinned "Elementary, I lost big time at the casino and I urgently needed the money. I knew this old asshole kept his bribe money in the safe. And he really liked the dumb slut dishwasher. And I came up with a brilliant plan. I convinced her to distract the manger. He would have done anything she asked he was so hot for her. I convinced her to get the keys for me and stood where the cameras could not see me and took what i wanted. Then I had the cleaning woman take the money out and return it to me outside of work for a small cut. "And where is the money now?" Ivan said sadly "It''s all gone I paid off my casino debt and some other bills." Tanya grinned, "it''s done Ivan, go to sleep." Ivan was immediately snoring on the couch. Tanya turned to you. "That was close we almost screwed up because of his cold. Good lesson for you. Everything can not go according to plan. Thought I would have to paralyze him, but I have tried that once. Paralyzed object can choke if you''re not careful. Okay, let''s get out of here we got what we need." You quickly wash up in the bathroom with Tanya, washing the left over sperm from each others faces and chests. She smiles at you while looking into yours and gets the last of the sperm off your chin and together you return to the street.'
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
 															act 'Leave':gt'city_industrial'

locations/katjaEv.qsrc

@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A14'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A14'']>></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big14.jpg"></center>'
 					'As you suggest to pass some time in the public sauna, Katja frowns.'
-					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, spending too much time in there isn''t going to do any good, It is best to leave it for another day."'
+					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, spending too much time in there isn''t going to do any good, it is best to leave it for another day."'
 					'It is evident that this isn''t a good idea. You better to look for something else to do.'
 
 					act 'Continue': gt 'katjaEV','kathan'
@@ -2600,7 +2600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kathan17':
 	elseif random_event = 16:
 		'"Ok, she knows how to dress? Yes! Use make up? Yes! Beautiful? Yes! Leadership skills that grant her the respect and admiration of all her friends! Yes! So why doesn''t Albina hang around with us?! I don''t have anything against "cough" most "cough" jocks, but it''s like she doesn''t belong with them."'
 	elseif random_event = 17:
-		'"I have seen her dancing over the ice, It is one of the most beautiful things I have ever saw. Ronnie, is whithout doubt, one of the most talented and driven individuals I will ever meet, but all that comes with a cost. She is rich and beautiful, but the weirdest part? Ronnie doesn''t care! I don''t know if I could live that way."'
+		'"I have seen her dancing over the ice, it is one of the most beautiful things I have ever saw. Ronnie, is whithout doubt, one of the most talented and driven individuals I will ever meet, but all that comes with a cost. She is rich and beautiful, but the weirdest part? Ronnie doesn''t care! I don''t know if I could live that way."'
 	elseif random_event = 18:
 		'"Pfff. Lazar? Great biceps! A Greek god in the flesh! I can''t believe I sucked his penis! God he needs to breed all of us so the human race can reach the next stage of evolution! I have heard girls saying these things TO him. Seriously! If somebody strokes more than his ego, there is going to be an explosion!"'
 	elseif random_event = 19:
@@ -3429,7 +3429,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katnatsex1':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/KWS6.jpg"></center>'
 	'"Ok Slut, this is what is going to happen. You see cute little Katja here? Well, you are coming with us and will eat her pussy like there is no tomorrow. Do that and I will condone some of your debt. Understood?"'
-	'Natasha looks at you, but doesn''t retort, She just looks to Katja for a moment and then nods. Yeah! Total control!'
+	'Natasha looks at you, but doesn''t retort, she just looks to Katja for a moment and then nods. Yeah! Total control!'
 	'"Hey! Let''s show Natasha your room!"'
 	'You grab Katja''s hand and exit the shop, followed by a meekly Natasha. The journey back seems to take an eternity as the two girls eye one another silently, but finally, you enter Katjas''s room, quickly undress and jump onto the bed.'
 	'"So girls, how do we begin?"'

locations/kazinosvid.qsrc

@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			act 'Keep playing':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/cards/5.jpg"></center>'
-				'Minutes later, You are both naked, and he is standing in front of you with his pants down. It must''ve been the wine that lead you to this predicament.'	
+				'Minutes later, you are both naked, and he is standing in front of you with his pants down. It must''ve been the wine that lead you to this predicament.'	
 				'"Well ladies, it looks you''re all out of clothes. There is only one thing you have left to offer as payment," he says, while slowly stroking himself.'
 
 				act 'Go for it':

locations/kotovdom.qsrc

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kotov_kom':
 		act 'Walk home with Vitek': gt 'kotovdom', 'walk'
 	end
 	if npc_rel[$boy] <= 50 and $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and pcs_sweat < 20 :
-		'"Thanks for fun <<$pcs_nickname>>. " he says looking up at you from the bed. Seeing that you are ready to go, he tells: "Take care, You are always welcome here."'
+		'"Thanks for fun <<$pcs_nickname>>. " he says looking up at you from the bed. Seeing that you are ready to go, he tells: "Take care, you are always welcome here."'
 		act 'Say goodbye and leave his apartment':gt 'pav_residential'
 	end
 	if pcs_sweat >= 20:

locations/kuhr2x.qsrc

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ if dirttarelka > 0:'The sink has <b><<dirttarelka>></b> pieces of dirty dishes.
 if fairy > 0:
 	'above the sink is a detergent to wash the dishes with, there is enough for <b><<fairy>></b> time.'
 else
-	'<b><font color = red>you do not have any detergent to wash the dishes, You need to buy detergent.</font></b>'
+	'<b><font color = red>you do not have any detergent to wash the dishes, you need to buy detergent.</font></b>'
 end
 
 if eda > 0:

locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if hour = 7 and breakfast_day ! daystart and indorf = 0:
 		if kanikuli = 0 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0:
             if pcs_grades >= 80:
                 'You smile to him. "Really great. We were just learning something interesting the other day." You go on to talk about some of the stuff you have learned recently in school. He just nods, while you mother gives you a proud smile, Kolka just rolls his eyes.'
-                'The rest of breakfast is taken up with some small talk about what everyone has been up to of late, You thoroughly enjoy your breakfast with your family.'
+                'The rest of breakfast is taken up with some small talk about what everyone has been up to of late, you thoroughly enjoy your breakfast with your family.'
             else
                 'You glance to him. "Um ok, I guess." You notice your mother frowning at you, so you quickly try to change the subject, but they won''t let you. You do your best to make them think you are doing better than you are, but neither seem to have bought it. Kolka snickers at you getting grilled.'
                 'The rest of breakfast is taken up with talk about how Kolka is doing in school. He seems to be doing better than you and is showered with praise from your mother and stepfather. The food is good, even if the conversation wasn''t the best. You quickly finish your meal.'

locations/masharoom.qsrc

@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'masha':
 				*clr
 				picrand = rand(49, 51)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/masha/sex/r<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You grab the whip from the table and plunge the handle into her pussy and start fucking her hard with it, She starts screaming and moaning, she quickly has an orgasm.'
+				'You grab the whip from the table and plunge the handle into her pussy and start fucking her hard with it, she starts screaming and moaning, she quickly has an orgasm.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo_give', 10, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 				gs 'stat'

locations/moncheri.qsrc

@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'Seeing that the she is a novice saleswoman and that you are most likely her first client, you decided to go for it. just as you opened your mouth to say some harsh sentence, your eyes came to rest on her chest. The Bra together with the shirt successfully emphasized her breasts, and even though only the upper part of her chest was visible, your imagination filled in the rest. You wonder what her nipples are like The thought crossed your mind suprisingly'
-		'"Yes, You can give me a few minutes of your time."You said.'
+		'"Yes, you can give me a few minutes of your time, "You said.'
 		'Your words make an impression on the saleswoman, and she blushes slightly embarassed.'
 		'"Yes, yes, yes - often we ask: what dress color do you like? shape of the neckline of the dress? do you want more freedom to move? or turn? do you want to highlight your perfect figure?"'
 		'"Stop, stop, - you''re a person and not a stranger, first tell me what you would like me to call you" Your words make an impression on the girl, she is flattered by your words. '

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -1344,7 +1344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo_react':
 				*clr & cla
 				!! TEMPORARY PICTURE
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'With a loud huff, You give in. "Fine, whatever! Just shut up with all the nagging! It''s hurting my fucking ears and I''m tired of hearing it all the time."'
+				'With a loud huff, you give in. "Fine, whatever! Just shut up with all the nagging! It''s hurting my fucking ears and I''m tired of hearing it all the time."'
 				'"Fix your tone or I''ll fix it for you," Natasha hisses. She takes a step closer to you in an attempt to intimidate you but it only makes you laugh.'
 				'"You can''t even get Anya to respect you, so give me a fucking break! I said I''m changing so go back to cleaning the kitchen or whatever the hell you do," you snap.'
 				act 'Go to your room and change': gt 'bedrPar'

locations/natbelapt.qsrc

@@ -1422,7 +1422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'natknows':
 	if $wombthfath = 'Kolka' and npc_rel['A34'] > 50:
 		'You smile. "I''m sure you won''t be surprised to hear that Kolka got me pregnant."'
 		'"Wow. He really has a thing for knocking girls up." She says while touching her own pregnant belly. "I didn''t expect that to extend to his own sister, though."'
-		'"Yeah, you know how it is. Some men just want to conquer as many wombs as they can, It doesn''t matter who they''re attached to," you reply. "But don''t worry, he still has a permanent claim on yours. We''ll make sure he has plenty of opportunities to keep getting you pregnant. Who knows how many of his children you''ll have before he''s finished."'
+		'"Yeah, you know how it is. Some men just want to conquer as many wombs as they can, it doesn''t matter who they''re attached to," you reply. "But don''t worry, he still has a permanent claim on yours. We''ll make sure he has plenty of opportunities to keep getting you pregnant. Who knows how many of his children you''ll have before he''s finished."'
 		'Natasha''s face goes completely red with embarrassment, and she starts to mumble something before you cut her off with a passionate kiss. When you finally break the kiss, she is still visibly red, but she isn''t protesting your suggestion. You know what she wants.'
 	elseif $wombthfath = '':
 		'"I don''t actually know." You laugh. "I guess my life has gotten a little out of hand recently."'

locations/nerd_game_night.qsrc

@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_playing_on2':
 			'The others start laughing, "Sure you did," they wink, "<<$pcs_nickname>>''s naked body."'
 			'"I didn''t know you were such a perv, Petka!" The tension rises a bit before easing up as the rest tease Petka about his unfortunate choice of words. You tell him your fine and the return to camp, then you finish bathing, get dressed and head back to camp. After you do the rest of them take your lead and one at a time their characters all go and bath as well. Apparently enjoying the more immersive roll playing you are doing.'
 			*nl
-			'As the party beds down for the night, You and the others keep teasing Petka throughout the rest of the game as it nears the end.'
+			'As the party beds down for the night, you and the others keep teasing Petka throughout the rest of the game as it nears the end.'
 			'Feofan anounces, "We''re out of time," since all of you are having fun you let out a sigh, "Don''t worry, there are lots of adventures left to explore. We''ll pick it up the next time, hopefully Petka will get to see <<$pcs_nickname>> naked again." He says with a wink which gets everyone laughing again and Petka blushing once more, then the group gathers up their books and walk out of the library. Julia and Zinaida leave together, as does Artem and Petka. Gerasim and Feofan each leave on their own.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'pav_commcenter', 'lobby'
 		end
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'group':
 		'Feofan then says. "Well <<$pcs_nickname>> what are you going to do? Pay them or...?"'
 		*nl
 		'You really want the information and you think it''ll be right move for the group, "How much?"'
-		'What seems to be the leader licks his lips and tells you the price he wants you to pay, The price is pretty much the last of the gold your party has. "No haggling, you understand girl! That''s the price, take it or leave it!"'
+		'What seems to be the leader licks his lips and tells you the price he wants you to pay, the price is pretty much the last of the gold your party has. "No haggling, you understand girl! That''s the price, take it or leave it!"'
 		'Several players all chime in suggesting what you should do, only to have Feofan interrupt them, "Okay, enough guys, your characters are not there. You sent Sveta''s character up alone so it is her choice." then he looks at you, "So what will it be?"'
 		act 'Pay up':
 			*clr & cla

locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olunush':
 	if OluQW['nush_count'] = 0:
 		'After awhile you hear a knock on the door, you get up and go answer it. You see Anushka standing there looking at you with a questioning look. "Well where is this huge massive cock you promised me?"'
 		'you grin and shake your head, opening the door wide to let her walk in. "Olu this is my friend Nush."'
-		'He smiles to her and stands up. "Hello, You are very pretty."'
+		'He smiles to her and stands up. "Hello, you are very pretty."'
 		'She walks over to him and starts stripping. "You''re not so bad yourself and <<$pcs_nickname>> told me you have a massive cock." She practically purrs.'
 		'He nods. "It is true, very big, how you say ... massive yes?"'
 		'She stops next to him stripped down to just her underwear and grabs his crotch and her eyes get big and she grins. "Massive might be a understatement. I don''t know if it will fit but i want to try." She turns and starts rubbing her butt against his crotch. "I want you to tear up my tight little white holes with your monster black dick, I want you to fuck me hard and rough and rip my tight little holes up."'

locations/party_girls.qsrc

@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ira_dance':
 	'Moving to the rhythmic sounds, you indulge in an unrestrained dance with Lena and Ira.'
 	'You jump, sway your body, and rock your booty, losing yourself in the general merriment.'
 	if pcs_danc >= 50: 'You move your body perfectly with the rhythm of the music in an erotic way, getting you a lot of attention from others and you love they attention.'
-	if pcs_danc < 50: 'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care.'
+	if pcs_danc < 50: 'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, you dance badly, but you do not care.'
 	act 'Have a rest': gt $loc, $loc_arg
 	act 'Kiss':
 		cls

locations/pav_aptcourtev.qsrc

@@ -1396,7 +1396,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eatlera':
 			*nl
 			'"Yeah look at her, she doesn''t care there is no beer. She just wanted some pussy." Alyona adds.'
 			'"Yeah well next time she can eat mine then." Lena replies.'
-			'"When you bring the beer maybe, which is never, you''re almost as bad as Mooch." Lera tells Lena, The other girls laugh.'
+			'"When you bring the beer maybe, which is never, you''re almost as bad as Mooch." Lera tells Lena, the other girls laugh.'
 			'You all fall back into some banter for a bit before everyone decides it is time to go.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5,  'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/salon.qsrc

@@ -1323,7 +1323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				money -= 500
 				pcs_pubecol[2] = pcs_pubecol
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1346,7 +1346,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				pcs_pubecol[3] = pcs_pubes*2
 				money -= 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1370,7 +1370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				pcs_pubecol[3] = rand(35,42)
 				money -= 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1394,7 +1394,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				pcs_pubecol[3] = pcs_pubes*2
 				money -= 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				pcs_pubecol[3] = pcs_pubes*2
 				money -= 500
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1444,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				money -= 500
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1469,7 +1469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				money -= 500
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				money -= 500
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1521,7 +1521,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				money -= 500
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
@@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubes':
 				money -= 500
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$pube_image'')>>"></center>'
-				'45 minutes later, The dye has taken and dried in.'
+				'45 minutes later, the dye has taken and dried in.'
 				'The beauty technician checks that everything is OK. "All done, you can get dressed."'
 				'You pull your clothes back up and pay her 500 <b>₽</b>.'
 

locations/seeporn.qsrc

@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'SeePornPalevo':
 
 			if see_rand1 < 30:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornblowbang.jpg"></center>'
 			if see_rand1 >= 30:'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/seeporn/sex/seepornbro0,<<rand(0,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'Your silence is taken as consent, Zhendos gets his dick out and pulls your face toward it, You dutifully wrapped your lips around it and began to suck.'
+			'Your silence is taken as consent, Zhendos gets his dick out and pulls your face toward it, you dutifully wrapped your lips around it and began to suck.'
 			'Your brother Kolka and Mishan also get their members out and stand around you, you start to masturbate and suck dick. You find the unusual and awkward situation a little exciting.'
 
 			act 'Suck':

locations/skverdin.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ $d_pp_bj = {
 		tiprand = rand(1, 100)
 
 		if tiprand = 100:
-			'Suddenly, He laughed and said "shit, <<$boydesc>> fifteen minutes you can not leave, already what that heifer cheek wheeled." <<$boydesc>> laughed and turned to his friend "What do you tupish? Come_Over!" The second guy immediately came up to you and pulled out of his pants his dick.'
+			'Suddenly, he laughed and said "shit, <<$boydesc>> fifteen minutes you can not leave, already what that heifer cheek wheeled." <<$boydesc>> laughed and turned to his friend "What do you tupish? Come_Over!" The second guy immediately came up to you and pulled out of his pants his dick.'
 			dynamic $d_pp_double
 		elseif tiprand >= 90:
 			'<<$boydesc>> suddenly took out a member of your mouth and began to say a word to lift you and expand back to him'

locations/webcam_site.qsrc

@@ -533,14 +533,14 @@ $webcam_show = {
 					analplugin = 0
 					'Vaska pulled out of your ass anal plug.'
 				end
-				'Basil began to stroke your charms, He began massaging the hole with your fingers.'	
+				'Basil began to stroke your charms, he began massaging the hole with your fingers.'	
 				!grease
 				if lubri = 0: vgape = 1
 				if lubri > 0:
 					lubri -= 1
 					'He forced lubrication his arms and began to lubricate your charms'
 				end
-					'Minutes 30 You fucked with him on camera. He wanted to spit you like, sometimes pochityvaya chat and perform the whim of spectators: fucked something quickly, then slowly, He thrusts his dick in pussy, in the ass, Do not forget about your mouth.'
+					'30 minutes you fucked with him on camera. He wanted to spit you like, sometimes pochityvaya chat and perform the whim of spectators: fucked something quickly, then slowly, he thrusts his dick in pussy, in the ass, Do not forget about your mouth.'
 					'Viewers liked all the action, count-in increased, gratuities fell even faster'
 					
 				pcs_horny += 30