[text edit] rewrite of stepdad sex scenes to break the wall of text problem and proof read them with a little code all from Erized

locations/vanrPar.qsrc

@@ -16,17 +16,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
-	'The bathroom is very small and unimpressive. Nevertheless, it has everything you need:'
+	'The bathroom is very small and unimpressive. Nevertheless, it has everything you need.'
 	*nl
 	'A shower, toilet, sink, <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, and even a bath tub.'
-	
+
+	'There is a shower, toilet, sink, <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>, where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair, and even a bath tub.'
+
 	gs'selfplay','suction_dildo'
 	if motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] > 0 and motherknowsdildo = 1:
 		'<i>Huh? Where''d my dildos go? I thought I- oh shit! <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> probably took them again...</i>'
 	elseif motherQW['bathroom_dildos'] > 0 and vanrPar_suction_dildo = 0:
 		'<i>Huh? Where''d my dildos go? I thought I left them right here...</i>'
 	end
-	
+
+	*nl
+
 	if vanr_lock = 0:
 		if fullmorrout = 1:
 			act 'Finish and go to the kitchen':gt 'kuhrPar'
@@ -49,7 +53,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 		stepdadqw_day = daystart
 		if npc_rel['A28'] < 60 or stepdadqw < 3:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_0.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'As luck would have it, you hear footsteps at the door. Turning around, you barely have time to see the figure of your stepfather as he disappears muttering something about the door, leaving you alone, confused and with a rapidly beating heart.'
+			'As luck would have it, you hear footsteps at the door. Turning around, you catch a glimpse of your stepfather through the gap in the door, right before he moves away, muttering something about the door. Once again alone, you find yourself feeling confused, and with a rapidly beating heart.'
 			stepdadqw += 1
 			act 'Finish': gt 'vanrPar'
 		else
@@ -61,7 +65,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 				else
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_3.jpg"></center>'
-					'You suddenly hear the sound of the door as it creaks open. Turning around, you see your stepfather. He is standing in the hallway, devouring your naked body with his eyes. In your mind''s eye, you see a flash of all the little moments the two of you have shared and then it dawns on you: your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is at work. You smirk, and you feel your core tighten with desire:'
+					'Suddenly you hear the sound of the bathroom door as it creaks open. Turning around, you see your stepfather. He is standing outside the door, devouring your naked body with his eyes. In that instant, all the little moments the two of you have shared flash through your mind, while it dawns on you that your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is at work... .'
+					'You feel your core tighten with desire, and smirk.'
 					'"Daddy, do you want to join me?"'
 					act 'Daddy wants to join?': gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex'
 				end
@@ -70,8 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 	elseif ((hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and week < 6) or (hour >= 20 and hour < 23 and week >= 6)) and brother_ev1 ! daystart and rand(0,4) < 2 and indorf = 0:
 		*clr & cla
 		brother_ev1 = daystart
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/spotkolka.jpg"></center>'
-		'Despite the clattering noise of water, you hear the bathroom door creaking open slightly. Through a small opening in the doorway, you notice your brother watching you.'
+		'Despite the pattering sound of the water, you hear the bathroom door creaking open slightly. Through the crack in the door, you notice your brother Kolka watching you.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'easy'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Scream (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'easy' & gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist' & gt 'brother', 'brother_go_away'
@@ -101,7 +105,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'peek':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if brothershowertalk > 0: act 'Tell him you''re too busy to talk': gt 'brother_voyeur','showertalkbusy'
+		if brothershowertalk > 0: act 'Tell him that you''re too busy to talk': gt 'brother_voyeur','showertalkbusy'
 		exit
 	end
 end
@@ -109,7 +113,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_nosex':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You hear movement at the door and turn around. It''s your stepfather, it looks like he passed by and accidentally peeked in. Catching his glance, you feel mischievous and excited, so you blow him a kiss. Without a word, he disappears, yet you can''t help smiling and giggling as you continue washing your hair.'
+	'You hear movement at the door and turn around. It''s your stepfather, it looks like he passed by and accidentally peeked in. Catching his glance, you feel mischievous and excited, so you blow him a kiss. Without a word, he disappears, yet you can''t help smiling and giggling as you continue drying your hair.'
 	stepdadqw += 1
 	act 'Finish': gt 'vanrPar'
 end
@@ -119,9 +123,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A28'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You turn around just in time to see your stepfather as he opens the door. He nervously licks his lips before he makes his decision and quickly jumps inside, locking the door behind him. He is a large man and the bathroom quite small, ao it suddenly feels a little crowded, yet you can''t help but feel a little excited at the size difference between the two of you.'
-	'"You drive me crazy." he says, with a manic look in his eyes as he frantically undresses. You decide to tease him even more by giggling and thrusting forward with your hips, while leaning against the cold tile wall for support. You know you look like a horny little imp, wet and willing, but to hell with it! You like it and how it makes you feel.'
-	'Your step-father climbs in the shower with you as soon as he is undressed. He is roughly groping at your body. Suddenly he spins you around and you find yourself pressed up against the cold tiled wall. You spread your feet a little wider as you feel his fingers grope at the inside of your thighs, teasing your asshole on their way down. You are already treacherously wet, and bite your lips to stop yourself from moaning when his fingers find your dripping pussy. You expect more teasing but his fingers are immediately replaced by his hard throbbing member.'
+	'You turn around just in time to see your stepfather pull the bathroom door open. He stands at the threshold for a moment, staring at you and nervously licking his lips, then he seems to come to a decision. He steps inside - crossing the line that''s always separated you up until now - and locks the door behind him.'
+	'Because he''s a large man and the bathroom is quite small, the room suddenly feels crowded, but the obvious size difference between the two of you makes you feel excited.'
+	'"You drive me crazy," he mutters, voice rough and a manic look in his eyes. Then he''s frantically undressing.'
+	'Giggling, you decide to use the opportunity to tease him - leaning back against the wall and thrusting your hips in a slow, provocative manner. You know you look like a horny little imp, all wet and willing, but you get a rush from it.'
+	'As soon as he''s undressed, your stepfather climbs in the shower with you. He wastes not time in feeling you up - tracing your curves and molding your breasts with his large, rough hands.'
+	'Then he turns you around, forcing you against the cold, tiled wall. You spread your legs a little wider when you feel his hands grope over your ass and between your thighs, briefly teasing your asshole on their way to your pussy.'
+	'At this point you''re already dripping wet, and you bite your lip to stop yourself from moaning loudly when his fingers find your pussy.'
 	stepdadqw += 1
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
@@ -130,70 +138,120 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex':
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'willpower', 'cum_inside', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-		act 'Hey, what about a condom? (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		act 'Hey, can you put on a condom? (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'cum_inside', 'resist'
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
-			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'rough'
-			gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A28', 1
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_6.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You don''t know how but apparently your head still works and you don''t forget about protection. After all it''s you that will end up pregnant if he doesn''t wear a condom, not him. So it''s your responsibility to remind him about it.'
-			'"Hey, what about a condom?" you ask anxiously.'
-			'Your stepfather pauses for a moment, clearly he too doesn''t want to impregnate his teenage stepdaughter, but he''s too exited to stop now, so he whispers soothingly:'
-			*nl
-			'"Shhhh sunshine, everything will be fine. I''ll pull out in time."'
-			'You bite your lips to keep quiet and not voice more concerns, like pulling out doesn''t work all the time or at all. Still you really want to have him inside of you despite the risk. So you just moan in agreement as you feel his strong hard member finally make its way into your vagina. He enters you slowly at first, with very gentle thrusts, but after a few moments with a sharp powerful move you feel him go in balls deep, causing your eyes to roll back into your head from the pleasure.' 
-			'Looks like your constant teasing is finally paying off you think, giggling hysterically. Soon your giggles turn into more moans as you are being slammed against the cold tiled wall, squashed by your stepfather''s powerful thrusts and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck as his thrusts increase in speed and power - he''s clearly intending to show you who''s the boss. And it turns out you don''t mind at all. You turn into a little moaning bitch, groaning under him and moving your hips as much as you can, searching, wanting more. You don''t think you will last much longer. After all, the pounding you''re recieving is very fast paced. You finally climax, feeling a pleasant warmth spread all over your body, and your fingers and toes curl in satisfaction. Your sweet moans help your stepfather cum too, he pulls out and spills his seed all over your ass.'
-			'He exhales wearily, wiping sweat from his forehead, "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>." he says.'
-			'He then gives you a good hard slap on the ass before exiting the shower, getting dressed and leaving you alone in the bathroom. It looks like you''ll have to shower again.'
-
-			gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_9.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'Thankfully, your mind is still clear enough to remember protection. You know you''ll probably pay the price if your stepfather doesn''t wear a condom.'
+			'"Hey, can you put on a condom?" you ask, glancing at him anxiously.'
+			'Your stepfather pauses for a moment. Though he probably doesn''t want to impregnate his teenage stepdaughter, there are no condoms in the bathroom, and he''s far too excited to step away from this.'
+			'"<i>Shhhh,</i> Sunshine," he whispers soothingly, kissing your ear, "Everything will be fine. I''ll pull out in time."'
+			'<i>But pulling out doesn''t work all the time...</i>'
+			'While you''re still worrying over this, you suddenly feel your stepfather''s hot, hard dick enter your pussy, and then nothing else seems to matter.'
+			'He moves slowly and gently at first, but after a few moments of this he abruptly shuttles forward and buries himself balls-deep. Your eyes roll back into your head from the sharp spike of pleasure.'
+			'<i>Looks like my constant teasing has finally payed off.</i>'
+			act 'You giggle deliriously.':gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex2'
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Hey, what about a condom? (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		act 'Hey, can you put on a condom? (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
+	
 	gs 'willpower', 'cum_inside', 'resist', 'easy'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Just don''t come inside me! (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'cum_inside', 'resist', 'easy'
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
-			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'rough'
-			gs 'cum_call', '', 'A28', 1
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_7.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'At this point you are too horny, so your head doesn''t work in time and you forget about protection. Your stepfather also seems like he is not up to it, his mind is only set to fucking you without a care about the consequences. You realize this as you feel his bare hard member enter you, slowly almost gently, you moan involuntary, but your mind protests at the lack of a condom.'
-			'"Oh... Just don''t cum inside me... accidentally." you moan anxiously.'
-			'Your stepfather pauses for a moment and then, with unexpected speed and power he drives his hard penis balls deep into your vagina, causing your eyes to roll back into your head from pleasure. It''s not very typical of him to enter you with such force, he''s usually more gentle with you, but you feel so good, that you don''t resist or protest the change of pace. You can''t help but moan as he keeps fucking you harder and harder, slamming you against the cold tiled wall, squashing you with his powerful thrusts and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck as his thrusts increase in speed and power, he''s clearly intending to show you who''s the boss. And it turns out you don''t mind at all. You turn into a little moaning bitch, groaning under him and moving your hips as much as you can, searching, wanting more. You don''t think you will last much longer. After all, the pounding you''re recieving is very fast paced. You finally climax, feeling a pleasant warmth spread all over your body, and your fingers and toes curl in satisfaction.' 
-			'The thought that his unprotected penis is still throbbing in you as he is nearing his orgasm flashes warningly again before your eyes. Will he even have time to pull out at this rate? You try to warn him again. "Don''t forget... to... pull...out!" you moan each word as he keeps thrusting even harder at every word that comes out of your mouth, it''s as if he is trying to fuck you into submission. Your suspicion that he is not going to pull out at all turns out to be true, when instead of even attempting to pull out when the first gush of sperm hits your vaginal walls, he thrusts even deeper and keeps his hips tightly against yours to stop even the tiniest bit of sperm from escaping. You start wiggling in protest and trying to get out from under him, hoping he''d get it and pull out already, so at least some of his sperm will spill out, but instead he is shamelessly holding your hips in place until every bit of his never ending fertile seed ends up deep into your unprotected pussy. You''ve never been filled up like that, you didn''t even know it was possible for a man to cum so much. The feeling of pleasure you get from being so full nearly makes you cum again, but you are too angry for that.'
-			*nl
-			'"Hey! I told you to pull out!" you spit angrily at him.'
-			'Removing his member at last, your stepfather scratches his head sheepishly and starts making excuses.'
-			'"I''m sorry dear! The devil made me do it. I completely forgot. Don''t worry, nothing will come of it. Everything will be fine!"'
-			'The bastard has the audacity to smirk at you with a cocky grin. Old fart! Frowning and mad, you push him with his clothes out of the bathroom. You have to wash once more because you have cum dripping down your legs.'
-
-			gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
+			'At this point you are so horny that checking for protection is the last thing on your mind. Your stepfather is in a similar condition, all he cares about is getting his dick inside your pussy as soon as possible.'
+			'"Just don''t cum inside me, please," you breathe. It''s your final moment of clarity before his hard, unprotected dick enter you. Then the sensation of skin-on-skin sweeps you away.'
+			'He moves slowly and gently at first, but after a few moments of this he abruptly shuttles forward and buries himself balls-deep, making your eyes roll back into your head from the sharp spike of pleasure. It''s not his style to be so rough, but when he forcefully enters you it feel so good that you don''t even think of protesting.'
+			'He begins to fuck you at a punishing pace, and you moan wildly, dominated by his strong hands and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck as he continues at this brutal pace, and it''s clear he intends for you to understand who the boss is here.'
+			'As it turns out, you''re only too happy to be his little bitch. You move your hips frantically, desperately seeking every bit of pleasure he''ll give you. With the intense pounding your stepfather is giving you, you doubt you''ll last much longer.'
+			'As you near orgasm, you register that your stepfather is too. You can feel his unprotected dick throbbing inside you, and the realisation sends a warning flashing through your mind.'
+			act '<i>At this rate, will he even have time to pull out?</i>':gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex3'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Just don''t come inside me! (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
+	
 	act 'Fuck me!':
 		*clr & cla
-		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'rough'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'gentle'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A28', 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_8.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'At this point you are so horny for his strong hard dick that you can''t think straight. All your thoughts are consumed by the need to have it inside of you. It looks like your stepfather is thinking along the same lines - gone is the careful family man that you know. Right now he is just a man, a man who wants to fuck you like a bitch. Your ass is wagging invitingly, almost involuntarily and almost immediately your wish is granted as your pussy is slowly and gently filled by his hard member. You moan involuntary, satisfied, and just ask for what you really want:'
-		'"Oh... Just fuck me!"'
-		'But he is in no hurry. He takes his time, thrusting confidently and slowly, savouring every inch of your narrow little slit, making you moan and beg for more. Gradually the thrusts become faster and faster, harder and harder until it starts to feel like he is literally tearing you apart. Looks like your constant teasing is finally paying off you think, giggling hysterically. Soon your giggles turn into more moans as you are slammed against the cold tiled wall, squashed by your stepfather''s powerful thrusts and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck as his thrusts increase in speed and power - he''s clearly intending to show you who''s the boss. And it turns out you don''t mind at all. You turn into a little moaning bitch, groaning under him and moving your hips as much as you can, searching, wanting more. You don''t think you will last much longer. After all, the pounding you''re recieving is very fast paced. You finally climax, feeling a pleasant warmth spread all over your body, and your fingers and toes curl in satisfaction. Your sweet moans help your stepfather cum too - he suddenly pulls out and spills his seed across your ass.'
-		'"Ffuh" he exhales wearily, wiping the sweat from his forehead. "Oh, I''d fuck you any time."'
-		'He says this sweetly, and you can''t help but smile, still basking in the glow of your powerful orgasm and almost sliding down the wall. After a few minutes, your stepfather leaves the shower and begins to get dressed. It looks like you have to wash yet again.'
-
-		gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
+		'At this point you''re so horny for his dick inside you that you can''t think straight. Your stepfather is obviously in a similar condition. Gone is the careful family man, right now he''s just a dog who sees a bitch in heat and wants to mount her.'
+		'You wiggle your ass invitingly, and that''s all it takes for him to step forward and guide himself inside you - slowly filling your pussy with his hot, hard dick.'
+		'You moan with satisfaction, and lustily beg, "Fuck me hard, Daddy!"'
+		'But your stepfather is in no hurry. He thrusts into you with slow, measured strokes, savouring every inch of your tight little pussy, making you impatiently beg for it.'
+		'"Please, Daddy! <i>Please!</i>"'
+		'"You want it that badly, Sunshine?" he pants, grinning.'
+		act 'Your desperate expression tells him everything.':gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex4'
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex2':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'rough'
+	gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A28', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_6.mp4"></video></center>'		
+	'Your giggles quickly turn to moans as he begins to fuck you at a punishing pace, dominating you with his strong hands and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck as he continues at this brutal pace, and it''s clear he intends for you to understand who the boss is here.'
+	'As it turns out, you don''t mind at all. You become his little bitch, moaning under him and moving your hips frantically, seeking pleasure, wanting more. With the intense pounding your stepfather is giving you, you doubt you''ll last much longer.'
+	'When your climax hits, warmth spreads all over your body, and your fingers and toes curl in satisfaction. Your sweet moans help your stepfather along too, and soon he pulls out and spills his cum all over your ass.'
+	'"Ahh, my sweet <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''ve wanted to do that for quite a while," he admits, giving you a soft smile as he wipes the sweat from his forehead.'
+	'He pinches your cheek fondly and gives you a slap on the ass, then steps out of the shower, gets dressed, and leaves.'
+	'Sweaty and covered in cum, it looks like you''ll be needing another shower before you can leave, too.'
+	gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex3':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough'
+	gs 'cum_call', '', 'A28', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_10.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'"Don''t forget-- to-- pull-- out!" you gasp, between each slap of his hips.'
+	'With each word that comes out of your mouth, he only seems to thrust harder, and you feel increasingly alarmed. It''s as if he''s deliberately ignoring your warning!'
+	'To your dismay, your suspicion proves true.'
+	'When the first shot of cum hits your pussy walls, he presses his hips tightly against yours, stopping even the tiniest bit of cum from escaping. You start struggling, trying to get free of your stepfather''s hold, but he doesn''t allow it. He stays pressed against you until every last drop of his fertile cum has been spilled deep inside your unprotected pussy.'
+	'You''ve never been filled up like this. You didn''t even know it was <i>possible</i> for a man to cum this much!'
+	'The thought alone is almost enough to make you forget the gravity of the situation - overcome with pleasure and on the cusp of orgasm - but your anger wins out.'
+	'<i>"I told you to pull out!"</i> you spit angrily, shoving him.'
+	*nl
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/salon/work/sex/creampie5.mp4"></video></center>'	
+	'Your stepfather stumbles back, and his dick slips free of your pussy, splattering cum onto the floor.'
+	'He sheepishly scratches his head, but then flashes a cocky grin. "Sorry, Sunshine, I guess the devil made me do it. I''m sure nothing will come of it though, don''t worry!"'
+	'<i>Fucking bastard!</i>'
+	'Furious, you push him and his clothes out of the bathroom, then look down at yourself with a troubled sigh. There''s cum dripping down your legs, and you''ll clearly need to have another shower.'
+	gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex4':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'rough'
+	gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'A28', 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_11.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'His pace switches up, until it feels like he''s tearing your pussy apart.'
+	'All you can think about is the amazing feeling of your stepfather''s dick spreading you open, as he dominates you with his strong hands and heavy body. You feel his hot breath on the back of your neck, and his fingers around your throat. It''s clear he intends to show you who''s the boss here.'
+	'As it turns out, you''re only too happy to be his little bitch. You move your hips frantically, desperately seeking every bit of pleasure he''ll give you. With the intense pounding your stepfather is giving you, you doubt you''ll last much longer.'
+	'When your climax hits, warmth spreads all over your body, and your fingers and toes curl in satisfaction. Your sweet moans help your stepfather along too, and soon he pulls out and spills his cum all over your ass.'
+	'"Now that was something special, Sunshine," he says afterwards, giving you a soft smile and wiping the sweat from his forehead.'
+	'You can''t help but smile, still basking in the glow of your powerful orgasm - quivering legs barely able to hold you up.'
+	'Your stepfather steps out of the shower and begins to get dressed, but it looks like you''ll have to wash yourself again before you can do the same.'
+	gs 'vanrPar', 'stepdad_sex_end'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'stepdad_sex_end':
 	menu_off = 1
 	npc_sex['A28'] += 1