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Text edits for Albina files

Vengeance_11 1 year ago
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4 changed files with 496 additions and 517 deletions
  1. 200 211
      locations/albina_chat.qsrc
  2. 182 192
      locations/albina_chat2.qsrc
  3. 79 77
      locations/albina_house_events.qsrc
  4. 35 37
      locations/albina_sex_chat.qsrc

+ 200 - 211
locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Make small talk':gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
-	act 'Talk about sex':gt'albina_sex_chat','sex_talk_start'
+	act 'Make small talk': gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
+	act 'Talk about sex': gt'albina_sex_chat','sex_talk_start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'small_talk':
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-	act 'Keep talking':gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
+	act 'Keep talking': gt'albina_chat','small_talk2'
 	act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 end
 
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'small_talk2':
 	*nl
 	if rand(1,2) = 1:
 		!! Sveta chooses the conversation topic
-!!		gs'albina_chat','pube_talk'
-		gs'albina_chat','maid_conversation'
-		gs'albina_chat','bella_conversation'
-		gs'albina_chat','lazar_conversation'
-		gs'albina_chat','zoya_conversation'
+!!		gs 'albina_chat','pube_talk'
+		gs 'albina_chat','maid_conversation'
+		gs 'albina_chat','bella_conversation'
+		gs 'albina_chat','lazar_conversation'
+		gs 'albina_chat','zoya_conversation'
 		
 	else
 		!! Albina takes the lead
@@ -54,13 +54,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_talk1':
 	act 'My mom':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I get most of my money from my mom too," you say reluctantly. "Starlets was all the extra money I made too."'
-		'"<i>Fuuuuck</i>," Albina groans, flipping over to stare at the ceiling in frustration. "What else can I do? I''m <i>so</i> over getting fucked for money."'
+		'"<i>Fuuuuck</i>," she groans, flipping over to stare at the ceiling in frustration. "What else can I do? I''m <i>so</i> over getting fucked for money."'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	act 'Odd jobs':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Odd jobs here and there," you shrug. "There''s a lot of things to do around town. They don''t pay very much, but it gives me some spending money. You could try doing that?" Albina wrinkles her nose in disgust.'
-		'"I don''t want to <i>work</i> for a living," she says, sending both of you into giggles.'
+		'"Odd jobs here and there," you shrug. "There''s a lot of things to do around town. They don''t pay very much, but it gives me some spending money. You could try doing that?"' 
+		'She wrinkles her nose in disgust. "I don''t want to <i>work</i> for a living," she says, sending both of you into giggles.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -92,18 +92,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I... do some strip dancing in the city," you admit, blushing hard.'
 		if age < 18:
-			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina''s jaw drops. "How? You''re underage!"'
+			'"You''re a stripper?" Her jaw drops. "How? You''re underage!"'
 			if alterstrtimg = 18 or alterstrtimg = 19 or alterstrtimg = 20 or alterstrtimg = 21:
-				'"I''ve had a fake passport for years, Albina," you shrug uncomfortably. "Easiest way to get booze. Now it helps me with other things too."'
+				'"I''ve had a fake passport for years," you shrug uncomfortably. "Easiest way to get booze. Now it helps me with other things too."'
 			else
 				'"I... got a fake passport that the club don''t really care to check," you admit. "It... wasn''t easy getting it."'
-				'Albina grins. "Maybe I''ll come visit you at work one night..."'
+				'She grins. "Maybe I''ll come visit you at work one night..."'
 				'"Please don''t...." you reply uncomfortably and she pats you on the shoulder.'
 				'"Don''t panic, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m just kidding!"'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		else
-			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina''s jaw drops and you laugh nervously.'
+			'"You''re a stripper?" Her jaw drops and you laugh nervously.'
 			'"Y-Yeah. I needed money and it''s... an easy job," you reply.'
 			'"Say no more. I''ve always thought about doing it myself, I just don''t know what Mama would say about it..."'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I do some strip dancing in the city," you say casually.'
 		if age < 18:
-			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina exclaims, her jaw dropping. "How? You''re underage!"'
+			'"You''re a stripper?" she exclaims, her jaw dropping. "How? You''re underage!"'
 			if alterstrtimg = 18 or alterstrtimg = 19 or alterstrtimg = 20 or alterstrtimg = 21:
 				'"I''ve had a fake passport for years, Albina," you say, rolling your eyes. "How do you think I got all my booze?"'
 			else
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk1':
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		else
-			'"You''re a stripper?" Albina exclaims and you shrug.'
+			'"You''re a stripper?" she exclaims and you shrug.'
 			'"Yeah. It''s easy money for an easy job," you reply.'
 			'"Easy, huh?" She strokes her chin, mulling it over. "It sounds fun but... I don''t know what Mama would say if she found out..."'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -136,12 +136,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stripper_talk1':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I do some strip dancing in the city," you admit, letting a smug smile creep onto your lips.'
 		if age < 18:
-			'"You''re a stripper?!" Albina exclaims, her jaw dropping. "How? You''re underage!"'
+			'"You''re a stripper?!" she exclaims, her jaw dropping. "How? You''re underage!"'
 			if alterstrtimg = 18 or alterstrtimg = 19 or alterstrtimg = 20 or alterstrtimg = 21:
-				'"I''ve had a fake passport for years, Albina," you grin. "Easiest way to get booze. Now it helps me with other things too."'
+				'"I''ve had a fake passport for years," you grin. "Easiest way to get booze. Now it helps me with other things too."'
 			else
 				'"I got a fake passport. Expensive sumbitch, but it gets me into 18+ areas."'
-				'Albina grins. "Maybe I''ll come visit you at work one night..."'
+				'She grins. "Maybe I''ll come visit you at work one night..."'
 				'"I''m not giving you a free show," you smirk.'
 				'She smiles even wider. "Don''t worry, I''d happily pay to watch you shake that ass!"' 
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -161,8 +161,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk1':
 			$AlbinaQW['porn_talk'] = 'embarrassed'
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Actually I..." you mumble, a blush already heating up your face. "I''ve been uhh... starring in some... adult films...?"'
-			'"Ew! You''re doing porn? Seriously?" Albina grimaces at you in disgust.'
+			'"Actually I..." you mumble, a blush already heating up your face. "I''ve been uhh... starring in some... <i>adult films</i>...?"'
+			'"Ew! You''re doing porn?! Seriously?!" She grimaces at you in disgust.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk2'
 		end
 		
@@ -170,8 +170,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk1':
 			$AlbinaQW['porn_talk'] = 'casual'
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"I''ve been starring in pornos," you say, with a casual shrug of your shoulders.'
-			'"Ew! You''re doing porn? Seriously?" Albina grimaces at you in disgust.'
+			'"I''ve been starring in pornos," you say with a casual shrug of your shoulders.'
+			'"Ew! You''re doing porn?! Seriously?!" She grimaces at you in disgust.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk2'
 		end
 		
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk1':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Actually I..." you say, a smile tugging at the corners of your mouth. "I''ve been shooting some porn."'
-			'"Ew! You''re doing porn? Seriously?" Albina grimaces at you in disgust.'
+			'"Ew! You''re doing porn?! Seriously?!" She grimaces at you in disgust.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk2'
 		end
 	end
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2.1':
-	act'What''s wrong with porn?':
+	act 'What''s wrong with porn?':
 		cla & *nl
 		if $AlbinaQW['porn_talk'] = 'embarrassed':
 			'"What''s wrong with doing porn?" you ask, your cheeks heating up even more as annoyance overtakes your embarrassment. "Don''t you watch it?"'
@@ -219,250 +219,244 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2.1':
 			'"What''s wrong with doing porn?" you ask, your face heating up with irritation. "Don''t you watch it?"'
 		end
 		if AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] > 0:
-			'"Yeah but I don''t <i>make</i> it," she sneers. "I can''t believe after everything you and I went through, you''re still willing to get fucked on camera just for some extra cash. Besides, there''s already enough porn of me floating around out there with my dad''s creepazoid child-fucker friends. I don''t need any more."'
+			'"Yeah, but I don''t <i>make</i> it!" she sneers. "I can''t believe after everything you and I went through, you''re still willing to get fucked on camera just for some extra cash. Besides, there''s already enough porn of me floating around out there with my dad''s creepazoid child-fucker friends. I don''t need any more."'
 			'"This is different," you protest. "This is what <i>I</i> want."'
-			'"Yeah well I want to keep money out of my sex life," Albina says. "It''s already fucked up my life enough. I guess if you want to keep fucking up your''s with it, that''s your choice."'
+			'"Yeah? Well, I want to keep money out of my sex life," she says. "It''s already fucked up my life enough. I guess if you want to keep fucking up yours with it, then that''s your choice."'
 		else
-			'"Yeah but I don''t <i>make</i> it," she sneers. "I can''t believe after everything I protected you from, you''re willing to get fucked on camera just for some extra cash. Besides, there''s already enough porn of me floating around out there with my dad''s creepazoid child-fucker friends. I don''t need any more."'
+			'"Yeah, but I don''t <i>make</i> it!" she sneers. "I can''t believe after everything I protected you from, you''re willing to get fucked on camera just for some extra cash. Besides, there''s already enough porn of me floating around out there with my dad''s creepazoid child-fucker friends. I don''t need any more."'
 			'"This is different," you protest. "This is what <i>I</i> want."'
-			'"Yeah well I want to keep money out of my sex life," Albina says. "It''s already fucked up my life enough. I guess if you want to fuck up your''s, that''s your choice."'
+			'"Yeah? Well, I want to keep money out of my sex life," she says. "It''s already fucked up my life enough. I guess if you want to fuck up yours, then that''s your choice."'
 		end
-		gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
-		gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
+		gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
+		gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2.2':
-	act'Really need the money (ashamed)':
+	act 'I really need the money (ashamed)':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"It''s not my first choice of job," you admit, a sharp arrow of shame piercing your chest at your friend''s judgemental tone. "But I really need the money right now..."'
-		gs'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant1'
+		gs 'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant1'
 		'Albina turns and suddenly stops, looking abashed when she sees the expression on your face. She takes a deep breath.'
-		'"Sorry," she mumbles. "I didn''t mean to be so harsh. I... I think I was taking this a little too personally. With everything that happened... I guess I just have a problem with sex and money. Mama would probably say I was projecting."'
+		'"Sorry..." she mumbles. "I didn''t mean to be so harsh. I... I think I was taking this a little too personally. With everything that happened... I guess I just have a problem with sex and money. Mama would probably say I was projecting."'
 		'She gives you a sad smile.'
-		act'Forgive her':
+		act 'Forgive her':
 			cla & *nl
 			'You take a deep breath, trying to settle your nerves a little before you respond.'
-			'"Look, you don''t need to agree with what I''m doing. I don''t even know I agree with myself doing it. But just don''t judge me for it, okay? It really hurts."'
-			'Albina nods solemnly and you breath a sigh of relief.'
+			'"Look, you don''t need to agree with what I''m doing. I don''t even know if I agree with myself doing it, but don''t judge me for it, okay? It really hurts."'
+			'She nods solemnly and you breathe a sigh of relief.'
 			'"Thanks," you say and finally move on to other topics.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2.3':
 	if $AlbinaQW['porn_talk'] ! 'embarrassed':
-		act'Really need the money (casual)':
+		act 'I really need the money (casual)':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I need the money," you shrug. "It pays decently well."'
-			gs'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant1'
+			gs 'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant1'
 			
-			gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
-			gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
+			gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2.4':
-	act'Want to afford nice stuff':
+	act 'I want to afford nice stuff':
 		cla & *nl
 		if $AlbinaQW['porn_talk'] = 'embarrassed':
 			'"I just want to be able to afford nice things," you say, your blush deepening at your own justification. "The pay is pretty good and lets me buy expensive stuff."'
 		else
 			'"I just want to be able to afford nice things," you shrug. "The pay is pretty good and lets me buy expensive stuff. Is that so wrong?"'
 		end
-		gs'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant2'
+		gs 'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant2'
 		
-		gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
-		gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
+		gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
+		gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk2.5':
-	act'It''s fun':
+	act 'It''s fun':
 		cla & *nl
 		if $AlbinaQW['porn_talk'] = 'embarrassed':
 			'"It''s kind of fun actually," you say, your blush deepening at the admission. "The sex is really good and it kind of makes me feel like a movie star."'
 		else
 			'"It''s kind of fun actually," you smirk. "The sex is really good and it kind of makes me feel like a movie star."'
 		end
-		gs'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant2'
+		gs 'albina_chat','albina_porn_rant2'
 		
-		gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
-		gs'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
+		gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.1'
+		gs 'albina_chat','pornstar_talk3.2'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk3.1':
-	act'Agree to disagree':
+	act 'Agree to disagree':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Whatever," you sigh. "Let''s just talk about something else."'
-		'"Yeah," Albina mutters back, looking away from you.'
-		gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+		'"Yeah," she mutters while looking away from you.'
+		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pornstar_talk3.2':
-	act'Get mad':
+	act 'Get mad':
 		AlbinaQW['porn_fight'] = 1
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Well <i>so-rry</i> that I was born into a poor family that lives on an estate, barely scraping by week to week, instead of getting to live in a mansion with a pool and a walk-in closet and a maid!" you snap back at her. "<i>Excuse me</i> if I have to resort to sex work because I don''t have a credit card to just buy all the lacy thongs I want without a second thought! Because I have to buy every single piece of clothing in my wardrobe without any help!"'
-		'Albina''s eyes fill with rage and she opens her mouth like she''s about to say something before it dies in her throat. Her mouth closes slowly and she looks away, seeming abashed. She chews on her lip for a few moments, still facing away.'
+		'Albina''s eyes fill with rage and she opens her mouth like she''s about to say something before it dies in her throat. Her mouth closes slowly and she looks away, seeming abashed. She chews on her lip for a few seconds while avoiding eye contact with you.'
 		*nl
-		'"Sorry," she mumbles. "I shouldn''t have said those things. You''re right. I have a car and a pool and a mama who loves me and probably enough clothes to last me a decade without buying a new one. I went through what I went through but I''ve never had to struggle for money before. I shouldn''t be making judgements on someone who does."'
+		'"Sorry..." she mumbles. "I shouldn''t have said those things. You''re right. I have a car and a pool and a mama who loves me and probably enough clothes to last me a decade without buying new ones. I went through what I went through, but I''ve never had to struggle for money before. I shouldn''t be making judgements on someone who does."'
 		'She finally turns back towards you, wearing a sad smile on her face.'
-		act'Forgive her':
+		act 'Forgive her':
 			cla & *nl
 			'You take a deep breath as your adrenaline comes down.'
-			'"Look, you don''t need to agree with what I''m doing. But just don''t judge me for it, okay? It really hurts."'
-			'Albina nods solemnly and you breath a sigh of relief.'
+			'"Look, you don''t need to agree with what I''m doing, but just don''t judge me for it. It really hurts."'
+			'She nods solemnly and you breathe a sigh of relief.'
 			'"Thanks," you say and finally move on to other topics.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'Apologize':
+		act 'Apologize':
 			cla & *nl
 			'You take a deep breath as your adrenaline comes down.'
 			'"I''m sorry too," you say. "I got too mad. It''s not your fault that you were born rich any more than it''s my fault I was born poor."'
-			'"No, don''t apologize," Albina shakes her head. "It <i>was</i> my fault. Judging you was anyways. Mama would probably tell me I''ve been projecting."'
-			'Her smile takes on a self deprecating tone but you can see some real humor in there as well and you smile back.'
+			'She shakes her head. "No, don''t apologize! It <i>was</i> my fault. Mama would probably tell me I''ve been projecting."'
+			'Her smile takes on a self deprecating tone, but you can see some real humor in there as well and you smile back.'
 			*nl
 			'With this little tiff between friends over, you finally move on to other topics.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'underwear_talk':
-	'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, where do you buy your panties?" Albina asks.'
-	act'I buy from G&M':
+	'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, where do you buy your panties?" she asks.'
+	act 'G&M':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I get most of mine from G&M," you admit.'
 		'"Seriously?" she scoffs.'
-		act'They''re cheap':
+		act 'They''re cheap':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"They''re cheap and affordable," you shrug. "Not everybody''s a rich princess like you."'
-			'"I''ll have you know I get all my thongs from a seedy sex shop in the red light district for 500 <b>₽</b> a pop," Albina says, turning her nose up at you. "I''m no princess. I''m a dirty little girl who likes her panties cheap and snappable."'
+			'"I''ll have you know I get all my thongs from a seedy sex shop in the red light district for 500 <b>₽</b> a pop," she says while turning her nose up at you. "I''m no princess. I''m a dirty little girl who likes her panties cheap and snappable."'
 			*nl
 			'You both laugh at that.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'I like them':
+		act 'I like them':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"I just like them," you shrug. "They''re cheap and comfortable and I like the designs."'
-			'"If cheap is all you''re after, you should try the sex shop in the red light district," Albina says, eyes twinkling. "Lots of thongs, all 500 <b>₽</b> a pop. Which is great for replacements when someone snaps them right off your pussy," she grins.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			'"I just like them," you shrug. "They''re cheap and comfortable, and I like the designs."'
+			'"If cheap is all you''re after, you should try the sex shop in the red light district," she replies, eyes twinkling. "Lots of thongs, all 500 <b>₽</b> a pop. Which is great for replacements when someone snaps them right off your pussy," she grins.'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'I buy from Pussy Kats':
+	act 'Pussy Kats':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I get most of my underwear from Pussy Kats," you tell her.'
-		'"Oh yeah? What do you like about them?"'
-		act'They''re comfy':
+		'"I get most of my underwear from Pussy Kats," you reply.'
+		'"Yeah? What do you like about them?"'
+		act 'They''re comfy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"They''re really comfy," you answer. "Nice soft cotton, elastic that doesn''t rub or itch. I just feel better when I''m wearing them."'
-			'"Full panties feel too constricting for my fat ass," Albina says, wrinkling her nose. "It feels wrong if I''m not wearing a thong. Plus no V-P-O."'
-			'She punctuates her acronym by drawing an inverted triangle with both her index fingers, smirking and bouncing her eyebrows at you.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			'"Full panties feel too constricting for my fat ass," she replies while wrinkling her nose. "It feels wrong if I''m not wearing a thong. Plus no V-P-O."'
+			'She punctuates her acronym by drawing an inverted triangle with both her index fingers while smirking and bouncing her eyebrows at you.'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'They''re cute':
+		act 'They''re cute':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"I like cute panties," you answer. "Between the cuts, designs, and colors, Pussy Kats are the cutest."'
+			'"I like cute panties," you answer. "Between the cuts, designs and colors, Pussy Kats are the cutest."'
 			'"Sexy is always better than cute," Albina grins. "You ought to try a thong sometime. One look at your ass in a mirror and you''ll never go back."'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'I buy from Fashionista':
+	act 'Fashionista':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I get most of my underwear from Fashionista," you tell her.'
+		'"I get most of my underwear from Fashionista," you reply.'
 		'"You''re into lace like Katja, huh?"'
 		'"I guess. I just like the way it looks and feels."'
-		gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
-	act'I buy from Lusso':
+	act 'Lusso':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I get most of my underwear from Lusso Intimo," you tell her.'
-		'"Look at you, you fancy bitch," she teases you. "That''s where all of mama''s underwear is from too."'
+		'"I get most of my underwear from Lusso Intimo," you reply.'
+		'"Look at you, you fancy bitch," she teases. "That''s where Mama gets her underwear from too."'
 		'"If you''re gonna wear it, it ought to be nice, don''t you think?"'
-		'"Quality doesn''t matter to me as long as it''s a thong and it looks good. And they don''t sell thongs there," Albina grins wickedly.'
-		gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+		'"Quality doesn''t matter to me as long as it''s a thong and it looks good. And they don''t sell thongs there," she grins wickedly.'
+		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
-	act'I mostly wear sports underwear':
+	act 'I mostly wear sports underwear':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I mostly buy sports underwear actually," you tell her.'
+		'"I mostly buy sports underwear actually," you reply.'
 		'"Seriously?"'
-		act'They''re comfy':
+		act 'They''re comfy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Yeah, seriously! They''re made of good material and form fitting, nice and stretchy. It''s just comfortable."'
-			'"Got hella V-P-O though," Albina says, drawing an inverted triangle with both her index fingers and bouncing her eyebrows suggestively. '
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			'"Got hella V-P-O though," she says while drawing an inverted triangle with both her index fingers and bouncing her eyebrows suggestively.'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'Good for dancing':
+		act 'Good for dancing':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"They''re good for dancing," you shrug. "Nice and flexible, no chaffing."'
-			'"You''re still dancing?" Albina asks seriously. "After Starlets shut down and all I thought you might..."'
+			'"You''re still dancing?" she asks seriously. "After Starlets shut down and all I thought you might..."'
 			'"Of course I''m still dancing! Aren''t you?"'
 			'"I guess that''s a fair point," she smiles back, perhaps feeling a little silly for assuming.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 	end
 	
 	if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] = 3:
-		act'I don''t wear underwear':
+		act 'I don''t wear underwear':
 			AlbinaQW['commando_know'] = 3
 			cla
-			act'Shy':
+			act 'Shy':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Actually..." you start. "I stopped wearing panties."'
-				'Albina''s jaw drops.'
-				'"So... at school... when you''re in your uniform with a <i>skirt</i>..."'
+				'Her jaw drops. "So... At school... When you''re in your uniform with a <i>skirt</i>..."'
 				'"Yeah..." You feel your face redden.'
 				'"And right now you''re..."'
 				'"Yeah..." Your cheeks are blazing hot.'
-				'Albina stares at you for a few moments.'
-				'"Slut." Her face breaks into one of the biggest grins you''ve ever seen her wear.'
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				'She stares at you for a few seconds. "Slut," she replies as her face breaks into one of the biggest grins you''ve ever seen her wear.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 			
-			act'Casual':
+			act 'Casual':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I don''t," you shrug.'
-				'"What do you mean you don''t?" Albina asks, looking puzzled.'
-				'"I don''t buy panties. Don''t wear ''em."'
-				'Albina''s jaw drops.'
-				'"So... at school... when you''re in your uniform with a <i>skirt</i>..."'
+				'"What do you mean you don''t?" she asks, looking puzzled.'
+				'"I don''t buy panties because I don''t wear them."'
+				'Her jaw drops. "So... At school... When you''re in your uniform with a <i>skirt</i>..."'
 				'"Yup," you say deadpan.'
 				'"And right now you''re..."'
 				if CloSkirtShortness > 0:
-					'"Feeling the breeze," you say with equal lack of emotion.'
+					'"Feeling the breeze," you say with an equal lack of emotion.'
 				else
-					'"Feeling the inside of my pants," you say with equal lack of emotion.'
+					'"Feeling the inside of my pants," you say with an equal lack of emotion.'
 				end
-				'Albina stares at you for a few moments.'
-				'"Slut." Her face breaks into one of the biggest grins you''ve ever seen her wear.'
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				'She stares at you for a few seconds. "Slut," she replies as her face breaks into one of the biggest grins you''ve ever seen her wear.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 			
-			act'Proud':
+			act 'Proud':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I don''t wear panties," you smirk.'
-				'Albina''s jaw drops.'
-				'"Seriously."'
-				'"Seriously," you say letting your smirk transform into a grin.'
+				'Her jaw drops. "Seriously?"'
+				'"Seriously," you reply, letting your smirk transform into a grin.'
 				'"Never?"'
 				'"Never ever!"'
-				'Albina stares at you for a few moments.'
-				'"Slut." Her face breaks into one of the biggest grins you''ve ever seen her wear.'
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				'She stares at you for a few seconds. "Slut," she replies as her face breaks into one of the biggest grins you''ve ever seen her wear.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -470,52 +464,48 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'commando_talk':
 	if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0:
-		'"So you really never wear underwear?" Albina asks, looking like she''s only half asking out of horniness and is genuinely curious.'
+		'"So you really never wear underwear?" she asks, looking like she''s only half asking out of horniness and is genuinely curious.'
 		if pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] = 3:
 			'"Nope. Never."'
-			'"I have to ask... why?"'
-			act'I don''t remember':
+			'"I have to ask... Why?"'
+			act 'I don''t remember':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I..." you start to say before trailing off. "... I don''t remember actually..."'
 				'"What? What do you mean you don''t remember? You just forgot to put on panties one day and never put them on again?"'
-				'"Maybe. I don''t remember the reason I started going commando. I just know that now it feels more wrong to wear them than not. It feels weird having something between my legs covering my pussy. It would be like if I walked around with tape over my nipples under my shirt."'
-				'"<i>That''s</i> weird," she says, giving you a funny look.'
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				'"Maybe? I don''t remember the reason I started going commando. I just know that now it feels more wrong to wear them than not. It feels weird having something between my legs covering my pussy. It would be like if I walked around with tape over my nipples under my shirt."'
+				'"<i>That''s</i> weird," she says while giving you a funny look.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 			
-			act'Seemed sexy':
+			act 'It seemed sexy':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"It just seemed sexy at the time. Made me <i>feel</i> sexy. That''s why I started anyways. Now I can''t go back. It feels weird having something between my legs covering my pussy. It would be like if I walked around with tape over my nipples under my shirt."'
-				if CloSkirtShortness > 0:
-					'"Well, you''re right about the sexy part," she smirks, eyeing your ass, clearly what''s underneath your skirt.'
-				else
-					'"Well, you''re right about the sexy part," she smirks, eyeing your ass, clearly what''s underneath your pants."'
-				end
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				'"Well, you''re right about the sexy part," she smirks while eyeing your ass.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 			
-			act'Panty lines':
+			act 'Panty lines':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I started because I didn''t want panty lines," you explain. "But now it''s a personal comfort thing. It feels weird having something between my legs covering my pussy. It would be like if I walked around with tape over my nipples under my shirt."'
-				'"Could''ve just switched to thongs," Albina points out.'
-				'"I could''ve. But those give me a wedgie. Going commando was way easier."'
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				'"Could''ve just switched to thongs," she points out.'
+				'"I could''ve, but those give me a wedgie. Going commando was way easier."'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		else
 		
 		end
 	else
-		'"So you really never wear underwear?" Albina asks, that twinkle back in her eye again.'
+		'"So you really never wear underwear?" she asks, that twinkle back in her eye again.'
 		'"I told you, it''s not like that!" you protest. "It was just that one time!"'
 		'"Mhmm. Suuuure..."'
 		'"Seriously! I wear panties!"'
 		'"Prove it."'
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			'"Uhh..." Your face flushes with heat.'
-			'"HA! I knew it!" Albina cackles.'
+			'"HA! I knew it!" she cackles.'
 			'"I forgot them today!"'
 			'"Nobody just ''forgets'' their underwear you slut," she says, continuing to laugh.'
-			gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		else
 			act'Show her':
 				cla & *clr
@@ -524,38 +514,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'commando_talk':
 				if CloSkirtShortness > 0:
 					'You sit crosslegged on the bed and hike your skirt a little, showing her your panties underneath.'
 				else
-					'You reach back and pull back your waistband to show her your panty-clad ass underneath your trousers.'
+					'You reach back and pull back your waistband to show her your panty-clad ass underneath your pants.'
 				end
 				'"Nice..." Albina says, openly leering.'
 				'"Wait, was this all just a scheme for you to look at my panties?"'
 				'"Sure was," she grins.'
-				gs'albina_chat','small_talk'
+				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk':
-	act'Ask about her pubes':
+	act 'Ask about her pubes':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I can''t help but notice when we''re in the locker room that you keep your pussy clean," you say. "Do you shave every day or something?"'
 		if AlbinaQW['shower_caught'] = 0:
-			'"You spying on me or something?" Albina asks with a raised eyebrow. She''s giving you a "glare" but you can also see a smirk tugging at the corner of her lips. When the full smile finally breaks out, she laughs and says, "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I can''t stand the feeling of stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
+			'"You spying on me or something?" she asks with a raised eyebrow. She''s giving you a "glare", but you can also see a smirk tugging at the corner of her lips. When the full smile finally breaks out, she laughs. "I wax all my body hair, pussy included. I used to use a razor, but I can''t stand the feeling of stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
 		elseif AlbinaQW['shower_caught'] = 1:
-			'"Is that what you were looking at when I caught you staring?" Albina says with a smug smirk. She holds the look for a few seconds before laughing. "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I can''t stand the feeling of stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
+			'"Is that what you were looking at when I caught you staring?" she says with a smug smirk. She holds the look for a few seconds before laughing. "I wax all my body hair, pussy included. I used to use a razor, but I can''t stand the feeling of stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
 		else
-			'"How often are you peeping on me in there?" Albina laughs. "I wax all my pussy and leg hair. I used to use a razor but I hate stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
+			'"How often are you peeping on me in there?" she laughs. "I wax all my body hair, pussy included. I used to use a razor, but I hate stubble. Prickly, pokey, ick!"'
 		end
 		'She shivers with a grimace of disgust and annoyance.'
 		'"Waxing takes care of the problem for weeks at a time. Which is great cause shaving hurt my neck too!"'
 		*nl
 		if rand(1,100) < pcs_prcptn:
 			AlbinaQW['pube_hint'] = 1
-			'Albina laughs and you start to laugh with her when it suddenly strikes you; Is it just you or does her laugh seem a little... forced?'
+			'She laughs and you start to laugh with her when it suddenly strikes you; Is it just you or does her laugh seem a little... forced?'
 			'Whether or not it''s your imagination, you don''t get any time to think about it as she turns the question on you.'
 		else
-			'Albina barks a short laugh before swiftly turning the question back on you.'
+			'She barks a short laugh before swiftly turning the question back on you.'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat','pube_talk2'
 	end
@@ -566,7 +556,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 	'"What about you? Do you shave?"'
 	if $pube_style['word'] = 'shaved':
 		!! clean shaven
-		act'I hate bush too':
+		act 'I hate bush too':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Yeah," you nod. "I hate bush too. It''s itchy and scratchy and just makes me feel gross down there. I much prefer being cleanshaven."'
@@ -574,15 +564,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'It''s stylish':
+		act 'It''s stylish':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Bush is so unfashionable," you roll your eyes. "So 20th century. It''s <<year>> for goodness'' sake! Who the hell still has bush?"'
-			'"Pfft-! You''re just like Katja," Albina snickers. "But I won''t complain that you see it my way either. Smooth pussy revolution!" she cheers, high-fiving you.'
+			'"Bush is so unfashionable," you say while rolling your eyes. "So 20th century. It''s <<year>> for goodness'' sake! Who the hell still has bush?"'
+			'"Pfft-! You''re just like Katja," she snickers. "But I won''t complain that you see it my way either. Smooth pussy revolution!" she cheers, high-fiving you.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'Boys like it':
+		act 'Boys like it':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
@@ -594,12 +584,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 				*nl
 				'<i>There it is again!</i>'
 				*nl
-				'Just for a split second, Albina''s smile falters before covering it up with a bright and toothy grin.'
+				'Just for a split second, Albina''s smile falters before she covers it up with a bright and toothy grin.'
 				'"Ha! You slut!" she snickers teasingly, pushing your shoulder lightly before moving on to other topics.'
 				*nl
 				'<i>What is that about...</i>'
 			else
-				'"Ha! You slut!" Albina snickers teasingly, pushing your shoulder lightly before moving on to other topics.'
+				'"Ha! You slut!" she snickers teasingly, pushing your shoulder lightly before moving on to other topics.'
 			end
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
@@ -608,7 +598,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 		
 	elseif $pube_style['word'] = 'stubbly':
 		!! stubbly
-		act'I really need to':
+		act 'I really need to':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I really need to sometime," you sigh. "I normally do but I''ve been busy lately and haven''t had time to take care of it. I''m all stubbly right now."'
@@ -620,52 +610,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pube_talk2':
 		gs 'albina_chat','grow_pubes_chat1'
 		
 		if pubestyle = 11:
-			act'Only once it gets bad (lazy)':
+			act 'Only once it gets bad (lazy)':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I''m too lazy to keep it clean all the time," you shrug. "I''ll get to it eventually."'
-				'"Doesn''t it bother you?" Albina grimaces back at you.'
+				'"Doesn''t it bother you?" she grimaces back at you.'
 				'"Not enough to do it today."'
 				'"Ew. I don''t know how you can stand it. If I feel stubble, the wax comes out <i>that night</i>."'
 			end
 		end
 		
-		'"I can''t help but notice in the locker room that you don''t keep your stubble clean all the time," Albina remarks with a raised eyebrow.'
+		'"I can''t help but notice in the locker room that you don''t keep your stubble clean all the time," she remarks with a raised eyebrow.'
 	elseif pcs_pubes <= 15:
 		!! small patch
-		'"I can''t help but notice in the locker room that you ," Albina remarks with a raised eyebrow.'
+		'"I can''t help but notice in the locker room that you ," she remarks with a raised eyebrow.'
 	elseif pcs_pubes <= 25:
 		!! trimmed/styled bush
 		if (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 8) or pubestyle >= 12:
 			!! styled section
-			'"Ugh, how can you stand having hair down there?" Albina rants. "I bet making it look all fancy doesn''t make it any less itchy!"' 
+			'"Ugh, how can you stand having hair down there?" she rants. "I bet making it look all fancy doesn''t make it any less itchy!"' 
 			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'shave_answer5'
 		else
 			!! trimmed section
-			'Ugh, how can you stand having hair down there?" Albina rants. "You''ve already trimmed it down, so why not just finish the job and shave it off?"' 
+			'Ugh, how can you stand having hair down there?" she rants. "You''ve already trimmed it down, so why not just finish the job and shave it off?"' 
 			gs 'albina_wine_event', 'shave_answer5'
 		end
 	elseif pcs_pubes <= 30:
 		!! full bush
-		'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina says, a disgusted look on her face as she turns to glance down at the pubic hair covering your pussy. "It feels like I''m putting my head on a fucking hamster!"'
+		'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" she says, a disgusted look on her face as she turns to glance down at the pubic hair covering your pussy. "It feels like I''m putting my head on a fucking hamster!"'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer5'
 	else
 		!! untamed jungle
-		'"Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you <i>ever</i> shave?" Albina says with a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap before turning to glance down at the wild bush between your legs. "You practically have an entire sheep down there! How can you stand it?"'
+		'"Holy shit <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you <i>ever</i> shave?" she asks with a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap before turning to glance down at the wild bush between your legs. "You practically have an entire sheep down there! How can you stand it?"'
 		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer6'
 	end
 	
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'grow_pubes_chat1':
-	act'Growing it out':
+	act 'Growing it out':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I''m actually growing it out right now," you say.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','grow_pubes_chat2'
 	end
 	
-	act'Thinking about growing it out':
+	act 'Thinking about growing it out':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I''ve actually been thinking about growing it out lately," you say.'
@@ -675,17 +665,17 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'grow_pubes_chat2':
 	'"Ew." Albina wrinkles her nose in disgust. "What the fuck would you do that for?"'
-	act'Change of pace':
+	act 'Change of pace':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"No reason," you shrug back. "Change of pace I guess. Might feel nice having some hair down there again."'
 	end
 	
-	act'Too much work':
+	act 'Too much work':
 		cla & *nl
 		
 	end
 	
-	act'Feels weird':
+	act 'Feels weird':
 		cla & *nl
 		
 	end
@@ -721,8 +711,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid_conversation':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Have you seen the new maid, Milena, yet? She''s a little older but just as, if not more, attractive than the last one, but my father isn''t here to charm her into sucking his dick. Not that it would work anyway. She bats for the other team, if you know what I mean..." she says with a wink. "Mama says I shouldn''t disturb her when she''s doing her work, but we like chatting with each other about pretty much everything. That''s when I found out about her girlfriend."'
 			'You laugh. "Disappointed that you can''t get in her pants?"'
-			'She gives you a hard stare in response. "She has to hide the fact that she''s openly lesbian or she''d get fired by her asshole boss. He''s not quite... accepting and I wouldn''t risk her job like that." She smiles softly. "Mama would no doubt find out anyway, but she would understand and not say anything. She''d be more pissed at me for fucking the maid and preventing her from doing her job. Mama likes a clean house after all."'
-			'You both laugh before she changes the subject.'
+			'She gives you a hard stare in response. "She has to hide the fact that she''s a lesbian or she''d get fired by her asshole boss. He''s not quite... accepting and I wouldn''t risk her job like that."'
+			'You just nod before she changes the subject.'
 			AlbinaQW['Maid'] = 0
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
@@ -735,7 +725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella_conversation':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"So are you friends with Bella? You seem to talk a lot," you ask.'
-		'"Why? You jealous?" Albina laughs with a mock curious gaze. "I''m just kidding. We run in the same social circles and have known each other for a long time. She''ll never admit it, but yeah, we are sort of like friends. She and Vicky were the only girls I could trust growing up, even if Bella is a bit of a bitch. She''s invited me to hang with the people she calls her friends, but these are guys and girls who are <i>way</i> older than her and I didn''t get a good feeling from them, so I chose to keep my distance. They throw awesome parties though, if Bella decides you''re ''mature enough'' for her to invite you."'
+		'"Why? You jealous?" she laughs with a mock curious gaze. "I''m just kidding. We run in the same social circles and have known each other for a long time. She''ll never admit it, but yeah, we are sort of like friends. She and Vicky were the only girls I could trust growing up, even if Bella is a bit of a bitch. She''s invited me to hang with the people she calls her friends, but these are guys and girls who are <i>way</i> older than her and I didn''t get a good feeling from them, so I chose to keep my distance. They throw awesome parties though, if Bella decides you''re ''mature enough'' for her to invite you."'
 		'"She seems a bit too bitchy for anyone to be her friends," you reply, but Albina cuts you off.'
 		'"I''m not going down that rabbit hole, <<$pcs_nickname>>. She is who she is, but she''s actually kind of cool if she decides to be friendly with you. Fat chance of that happening though."'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
@@ -753,17 +743,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_conversation':
 				'"What''s the deal with you and Lazar?" you ask her.'
 				'"What do you mean?" She gives you a puzzled look. "I told you, it''s just casual sex. Hell, you''ve had a threesome with us!"'
 				'"<i>Is</i> it just sex or is there something more?" you try to imply but she shakes her head.'
-				'"We''re just friends with benefits. Or ''fuck buddies'' as Marcus says it''s called in America."'
+				'"We just have sex when we feel like it, no strings attached."'
 				'"So there''s nothing serious then? No chance of you guys ever becoming a couple?"'
-				'She hesitates, as if trying to decide how much to say.'
-				'"Lazar was a shoulder for me to cry on when I needed it. He listened to me and helped me when I was down without expecting anything in return. He was and still is a good friend to me. It ended up turning into casual sex one day and we found we liked it that way. We''re never going to hook up, end of story." She really doesn''t want to continue this conversation and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
+				'"We have sex, but he was and still is a good friend to me. We''re never going to be a couple, end of story." She really doesn''t want to have this conversation with you and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
 			else
 				'"What''s the deal with you and Lazar?" you ask her.'
 				'What do you mean?" She gives you a puzzled look.'
 				'"It''s no secret that the two of you hook up at school. Is it just sex or is there something more?" you imply but she he shakes her head.'
-				'"No, we''re just friends with benefits. Or ''fuck buddies'' as Marcus says it''s called in America. We just have sex when we feel like it, no strings attached. I don''t care about being his ''girlfriend'' and he enjoys all the female attention he gets. It would never work between us."'
+				'"We just have sex when we feel like it, no strings attached. I don''t care about being his ''girlfriend'' and he enjoys all the female attention he gets. It would never work between us."'
 				'"So there''s nothing serious then? No chance of you guys ever becoming a couple?"'
-				'She hesitates, as if trying to decide how much to say. "Look <<$pcs_nickname>>, Lazar was a shoulder for me to cry on when I needed it. He listened to me and helped me when I was down without expecting anything in return. He was and still is a good friend to me. It ended up turning into casual sex one day and we found we liked it that way. We''re never going to hook up, end of story." She really doesn''t want to continue this conversation and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
+				'"We have sex, but he was and still is a good friend to me. We''re never going to be a couple, end of story." She really doesn''t want to have this conversation with you and you know better than to push your luck with her.'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'"So what about you? Hooked up with anyone?" she asks, turning the conversation on you.'
@@ -777,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head. "Not really, no..."'
-		'She shakes her head and smiles. "Don''t worry <<$pcs_nickname>>, not everyone''s interested in dating."' 
+		'She shakes her head and smiles. "Don''t worry, not everyone''s interested in dating."' 
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 	end
@@ -787,7 +776,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Pretty much the same deal as you," you smile. "I keep it casual with a fuckbuddy. We booty call each other whenever we want to get off."'
-			'"Better that way, isn''t it?" Albina smirks. "Romance is overrated. Let''s not kid ourselves. We''re all in it for the fucking."'
+			'"Better that way, isn''t it?" she smirks. "Romance is overrated. Let''s not kid ourselves. We''re all in it for the fucking."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -795,8 +784,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 		act 'I have a stable of fuckbuddies':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Pretty much the same deal as you," you smile. "I have a bunch of boys I keep it casual with. They booty call me whenever they want to hook up."'
-			'"A bunch?" Albina raises an eyebrow. "How much is ''a bunch''?"'
+			'"Pretty much the same deal as you," you smile. "I have a bunch of guys I keep it casual with. They booty call me whenever they want to hook up."'
+			'"A bunch?" She raises an eyebrow. "How much is ''a bunch''?"'
 			'"Umm... <<arrsize(''$fuckbuddy'') - 1>> or <<arrsize(''$fuckbuddy'')>>? Give or take."'
 			'"You hussy!" she grins, mock shoving you a little.'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
@@ -807,7 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Pretty much the same deal as you," you smile. "I keep it casual with a few fuckbuddies I have stashed around the way. They booty call me whenever they want to hook up."'
-			'"Better that way, isn''t it?" Albina smirks. "Romance is overrated. Let''s not kid ourselves. Even couples are just looking for an excuse to fuck."'
+			'"Better that way, isn''t it?" she smirks. "Romance is overrated. Let''s not kid ourselves. Even couples are just looking for an excuse to fuck."'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 		end
@@ -818,7 +807,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"You know how guys try to pick you up around town?" you ask and Albina rolls her eyes.'
-			'"Duh. I can''t go a day without some pervert catcalling me about my ass, trying to get me to go home with them."'
+			'"Duh. I can''t go a day without some pervert catcalling me about my ass and trying to get me to go home with them."'
 			'"Sometimes I let them," you wink and Albina''s jaw drops.'
 			'"You slut!" she grins.'
 			'"Hey!" you say, shoving her back with both hands but laughing anyways.'	
@@ -827,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 			act 'It''s hit or miss':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"It''s pretty hit or miss," you admit. "But when it''s good, it''s great. I can put up with a few bad lays and tiny dicks for that. Hit enough quantity, you''ll get quality."'
-				'"You really are a slut!" Albina guffaws loudly.'
+				'"You really are a slut!" she guffaws loudly.'
 				'"Take it back you bitch!" you laugh back.'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 				act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
@@ -836,7 +825,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 			act 'Absolutely':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Absolutely," you grin. "I love trying new dicks! I think I''m up to <<stat[''vaginal'']>>."'
-				'"You really are a slut!" Albina guffaws loudly.'
+				'"You really are a slut!" she guffaws loudly.'
 				'"Take it back you bitch!" you laugh back.'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 				act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
@@ -853,7 +842,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 				act 'Niko':
 					cla
 					'"Niko," you tell her.'
-					'Albina gives you a concerned look. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, he''s bad news. He isn''t what he seems, so just... just be careful with him, okay?"'
+					'Albina gives you a concerned look. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, he''s bad news. He isn''t what he seems, so just... Just be careful with him, okay?"'
 					'"What do you mean?" you ask curiously, but she just dimisses the question and changes the subject.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 					act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
@@ -870,7 +859,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 					else
 						'"Fedor? You''re setting your sights pretty low with him. Why not go for Ivan?" she says with a smile.'
 						'"I like him. He''s sweet. Why don''t you go for Lazar?" you shoot back.'
-						'She smiles in response. "Sharp tongue <<$pcs_nickname>>, I like it! You know why Lazar and I will never hook up. I don''t know what you see in him, but if Fedor makes you happy, then go for it," she tells you and proceeds to keep teasing you on your taste in boys.'
+						'She smiles in response. "Sharp tongue <<$pcs_nickname>>, I like it! I don''t know what you see in him, but if Fedor makes you happy, then go for it," she tells you and proceeds to keep teasing you on your taste in boys.'
 					end
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 					act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
@@ -891,9 +880,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
                     '"Artem," you reply and she arches a brow.'
                     '"Artem? Geeky little Artem?" She stops and seems to consider it. "Well, I guess he is kind of cute... I bet you have him wrapped around your little finger and he does whatever you want, right?" she says with a sly smile.'
 					'You shake your head. "He''s sweet, and really nice to me."'
-					'She laughs, seemingly amused by your words. "Yeah, I''m sure he is ''nice'' and ''sweet''. Does he rock your world though?" she asks with a grin."'
-					'You disregard her comment. "There''s more to life than sex you know." The amused look on her face tells you she isn''t buying it. "Okay fine, he''s pretty good at it... Good enough anyway."'
-					'She again laughs at your comment. "I''m sure that feedback will be well received. Whatever, he''s a nerd who''s getting some pussy. That makes him the alpha of that pack of losers," she says while shrugging her shoulders.' 
+					'She laughs, seemingly amused by your words. "Yeah, I''m sure he is ''nice'' and ''sweet''. Does he rock your world though?" she asks with a grin.'
+					'You disregard her comment. "There''s more to life than sex you know!" The amused look on her face tells you she isn''t buying it. "Okay fine, he''s pretty good at it... Good enough anyway."'
+					'She again laughs at your comment. "I''m sure that feedback will be well received! Whatever, he''s a nerd who''s getting some pussy. That makes him the alpha of that pack of losers," she says while shrugging her shoulders.' 
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 					act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 				end
@@ -949,14 +938,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 					act 'It''s just blowjobs':
 						cla & *nl
 						if brotherwakeup > 0:
-							'"It''s not like I let him fuck me,"  you say, trying to justify yourself. "It''s just the occassional blowjob, help him relieve the tension. Or to motivate him to wake up for school."'
+							'"It''s not like I let him fuck me," you say, trying to justify yourself. "It''s just the occassional blowjob to help him relieve the tension or motivate him to wake up for school."'
 						else
-							'"It''s not like I let him fuck me,"  you say, trying to justify yourself. "It''s just the occassional blowjob, help him relieve the tension."'
+							'"It''s not like I let him fuck me," you say, trying to justify yourself. "It''s just the occassional blowjob to help him relieve the tension."'
 						end
 						'Albina holds up her hand, cutting you off.'
 						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, grimacing. "That''s fucking disgusting."'
 						'"But you aske-"'
-						'"<i>No,</i>" she says firmly. "I''m just going to pretend you never told me that. Keep your weird family business to yourself and we''re never talking about this again."'
+						'"<i>No,</i>" she says firmly. "I''m just going to pretend you never told me that. Keep your weird family business to yourself. We''re never talking about this again."'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 						act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 					end
@@ -967,9 +956,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"It''s just casual," you say, trying to justify yourself. "Totally physical, purely for pleasure purposes only. You know, for a little brother, he''s got a surprisingly good coc-"'
 						'Albina holds up her hand, cutting you off.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, grimacing. "That''s fucking disgusting."'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she grimaces. "That''s fucking disgusting."'
 						'"What? It''s not like we''re gonna get married. Is it so wrong to have a little fun together and-"'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says firmly interrupting you again. "I''m going to pretend you never said that. And I don''t want to hear about it ever again."'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, firmly interrupting you again. "I''m going to pretend you never said that. And I don''t want to hear about it ever again."'
 						'"Bu-"'
 						'"<i>Ever. Again.</i>"'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
@@ -980,11 +969,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 				if brotherSex = 10:
 					act 'I love him':
 						cla & *nl
-						'"Recently," you say. "I''ve realized that I see him as more than just a brother. I let him into the shower with me and one thing led to another and-"'
+						'""I''ve recently realized that I see him as more than just my brother. I let him into the shower with me and one thing led to another and-"'
 						'Albina holds up her hand, cutting you off.'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, grimacing. "That''s fucking disgusting."'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she grimaces. "That''s fucking disgusting."'
 						'"Albina, I <i>love</i> him. He means everything to me and I want to spend the rest of my life-"'
-						'"Okay, <i>stop.</i>" Albina firmly interrupts you again. "If that''s how you really feel I... I''m not going to harp on you for it. But I''m also going to pretend you never said it. And I don''t want to hear about it ever again."'
+						'"Okay, <i>stop</i>." She firmly interrupts you again. "If that''s how you really feel I... I''m not going to harp on you for it, but I''m also going to pretend you never said it. I don''t want to hear about it ever again."'
 						'"Bu-"'
 						'"<i>Ever. Again.</i>"'
 						act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
@@ -993,8 +982,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lover_conversation':
 				end	
 			else
 				'"Well, still mostly Kolka, but-"'
-				'Albina shoves her hand directly into your face and clamps it over your mouth, glaring at you.'
-				'"I fucking told you <<$pcs_nickname>>. I don''t want to hear about this. That''s your weird family business and <b>I. Don''t. Want. To. Know.</b>"'
+				'Albina shoves her hand directly into your face and clamps it over your mouth while glaring at you.'
+				'"I told you I don''t want to hear about that. That''s your weird family business and <b>I. Don''t. Want. To. Know.</b>"'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 				act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 			end
@@ -1008,8 +997,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_conversation':
 			AlbinaQW['Mom_Future'] = 1
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re not sure how you should ask this, but you are curious about her mother. "I don''t mean to pry, but what''s the story with your mother?"'
-			'Albina glances at you, but relents. "My mother is fascinated by the human mind and wanted to become a psychiatrist, so she ended up doing modelling, a lot of it erotic, to earn enough money to go to university. She met my... my father in a nightclub and they had a one night stand. Soon after, they started dating and eventually got married. She ended becoming his trophy wife that he paraded around at every social event."'
+			'You''re not sure how you should ask this, but you''re curious about her mother. "I don''t mean to pry, but what''s the story with your mother?"'
+			'Albina glances at you, but relents. "My mother is fascinated by the human mind and wanted to become a psychiatrist, so she ended up doing modelling, a lot of it nude and erotic, to earn enough money to go to university. She met my... my father through a mutual friend and they started dating and eventually got married. She ended becoming his trophy wife that he paraded around at every social event."'
 			act 'Continue':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1028,16 +1017,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_conversation':
 				act 'Go to the university':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-					'You get a bit excited. "I''m planning to attend university as well. At least now I will know someone there."'
-					'"Maybe we could be roommates? Let''s talk about it more when the time comes, yeah?"'
+					'You get a little excited. "I''m planning to attend university as well. At least now I''ll know someone there."'
+					'"Maybe we could get dorm rooms next to each other?" she says and you both smile.'
 					act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 					act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 				end
-				if Rex_Love = 1:	act 'Get married to Rex': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Rex'
+				if Rex_Love = 1: act 'Get married to Rex': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Rex'
 				if artemQW['bf'] = 1: act 'Get married to Artem': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Artem'
 				if kotovLoveQW = 1: act 'Get married to Vitek': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Vitek'
 				if fedorKozlovQW >= 5: act 'Get married to Fedor': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Fedor'
-				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5:	act 'Get married to Niko': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Niko'
+				if NikoVolkovQW >= 5: act 'Get married to Niko': gt 'albina_chat', 'telling_marrige_dreams', 'Niko'
 				i = 0
 				:marrid_looop
 				if loverGender[i] ! 1: dynamic '	act ''Get married to <<$npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]>>'': gt ''albina_chat'', ''telling_marrige_dreams'', $npc_usedname["<<$lover[i]>>"]'
@@ -1076,7 +1065,7 @@ end
 
 if NikoPayback = 2 and AlbinaQW['niko_help'] = 0:
 	act 'Ask for help with Niko':
-	cla & *clr
+	*clr & cla
 	AlbinaQW['niko_help'] = 1
 	minut += 30
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'

+ 182 - 192
locations/albina_chat2.qsrc

@@ -7,18 +7,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk1':
 			AlbinaQW['know_model'] = daystart
 			cla & *nl
 			if fame['pav_modelling'] >= 400 and stat['school_knows_model'] = 0:
-				'"I... do some modelling in the city..." you admit slowly. Albina''s eyes go wide.'
+				'"I... Do some modelling in the city..." you admit slowly. Albina''s eyes go wide.'
 				'"Holy shit! The rumors are true!" she shouts gleefully, suddenly punching you in the arm.'
 				'"Ow! What rumors?" you ask in sudden bewilderment.'
-				'"The ones about a model that looks like you!" Albina grins. "I figured they had to be bullshit, but this means it really is you! Why would you hide that from me?"'
+				'"The ones about a model that looks like you!" she grins. "I figured they had to be bullshit, but this means it really is you! Why would you hide that from me?"'
 			else
-				'"I... do some modelling in the city..." you admit slowly. Albina''s eyes go wide right before she swiftly punches you in the arm. "Ow! What the hell!"'
+				'"I... Do some modelling in the city..." you admit slowly. Albina''s eyes go wide right before she swiftly punches you in the arm. "Ow! What the hell!"'
 				'"You''ve been modelling this whole time and you''re only just telling me now?" she says, managing to look betrayed while wearing a huge smile at the same time. "Why would you hide that from me?"'
 			end
 			if age < 18:
-				'"It''s not..." you say hesitantly. "Strictly speaking... legal..."'
-				'Albina''s eyes narrow.'
-				'"Why? What kind of modelling are you doing?" she asks suspiciously.'
+				'"It''s not..." you say hesitantly. "Strictly speaking... Legal..."'
+				'Albina''s eyes narrow. "Why? What kind of modelling are you doing?" she asks suspiciously.'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy1'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk2'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_proud2'
@@ -27,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk1':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"I just didn''t want to spread it around," you mumble. "Word gets around town fast, you know? Could you imagine what my mother would say if she found out?"'
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, looking at you seriously. "I''ve kept secrets a lot worse than this over the years. I would''ve kept this one. Don''t you trust me?"'
-					'Albina looks away from you, seeming genuinely offended that you didn''t tell her until now.'
+					'She looks away from you, seeming genuinely offended that you didn''t tell her until now.'
 					gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 				end
 			end
@@ -41,17 +40,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_proud2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		if $model['type'] = 'catalog':
 			'"Catalogue modelling!" you say with bubbly excitement. "The kind that you see on websites to show what''s for sale or in magazines with a company''s stock. It''s not much right now, but it''s a foot in the door!"'
-			'"Why didn''t you tell me sooner?!" Albina squeals gleefully alongside you.'
+			'"Why didn''t you tell me sooner?!" she squeals gleefully.'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "And since I''m underage, I have to keep it on the down low. I needed a fake passport just to get registered there. They do all kinds of other stuff there. Fashion, lingerie, nudes, you name it."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'fashion':
 			'"Fashion modelling!" you whisper excitedly. "Fancy dresses, designer clothing, all the stuff you see in magazines but never actually see people wearing in real life. <i>I</i> get to wear that!"'
-			'"That''s so cool!" Albina shouts, punching you in the arm again. "Why are you hiding it?"'
+			'"That''s so cool!" she shouts, punching you in the arm again. "Why are you hiding it?"'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do all kinds of other stuff there. Fashion, lingerie, nudes, you name it."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'lingerie':
 			'"I''m a freaking lingerie model!" you whisper excitedly. "High end bras and panties, brand names like Victoria''s Secret and Mon Cheri!"'
-			'"That''s so cool!" Albina shouts, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you hiding it?"'
+			'"That''s so cool!" she shouts, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you hiding it?"'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'glamour':
@@ -59,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_proud2':
 				'"I do glamour modelling!" you whisper excitedly. "Sexy shoots with tight or thin clothing, a lot of cleavage and a lot of leg. I''ve even gone topless!"'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk4'
 			else
-				'"I do glamour modelling!" you whisper excitedly. "Sexy shoots with tight or thin clothing, a lot of cleavage and a lot of leg. Sometimes my ass too, but never my tits or pussy. They do that kind of modelling there too."'
+				'"I do glamour modelling!" you whisper excitedly. "Sexy shoots with tight or thin clothing, a lot of cleavage and a lot of leg. Sometimes my ass too, but never my tits or pussy. They do that kind of modelling there too though."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 			end
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'fitness':
@@ -85,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_proud2':
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk4'
 			else
 				'"All kinds of modelling," you say excitedly. "High end fashion. Lacy lingerie. Tight clothing, thin material. You name it."'
-				'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! "Why are you hiding it?"'
+				'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! "Why are you hiding it?"'
 				'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 			end
@@ -99,17 +98,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		if $model['type'] = 'catalog':
 			'"Just some catalogue modelling," you say nonchalantly. "You know, the kind that you see on websites to show what''s for sale. No big deal."'
-			'"Why all the secrecy then?" Albina asks curiously.'
+			'"Why all the secrecy then?" she asks curiously.'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do all kinds of other stuff there. Fashion, lingerie, nudes, you name it."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'fashion':
 			'"Fashion modelling mostly," you say, shrugging nonchalantly. "Fancy dresses, designer clothing, all the stuff you see in magazines but never actually see people wearing in real life."'
-			'"That''s so cool!" Albina shouts, punching you in the arm again. "Why are you hiding it?"'
+			'"That''s so cool!" she shouts, punching you in the arm again. "Why are you hiding it?"'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do all kinds of other stuff there. Fashion, lingerie, nudes, you name it."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'lingerie':
 			'"I''m a lingerie model," you say, shrugging casually. "High end bras and panties. Sexy stuff, usually made with lace. The kind Katja might buy."'
-			'"That''s so cool!" Albina shouts, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! "Why are you hiding it?"'
+			'"That''s so cool!" she shouts, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! "Why are you hiding it?"'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'glamour':
@@ -117,7 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk2':
 				'"Mostly glamour stuff," you say. "But you can see my tits in some of them. Not exactly something I want to spread around school."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk4'
 			else
-				'"It''s pretty risqué stuff," you say, shrugging. "Thin material. Form fitting. A lot of exposure. Not the kind of stuff I want floating around school. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
+				'"It''s pretty risqué stuff," you say while shrugging. "Thin material. Form fitting. A lot of exposure. Not the kind of stuff I want floating around school. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 			end
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'fitness':
@@ -125,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk2':
 				'"Mostly sports related stuff," you say. "But you can see my tits in some of them. Not exactly something I want to spread around school."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk4'
 			else
-				'"Mostly sports related stuff," you say, shrugging. "But it''s pretty risqué. Sports bras and tight yoga pants and stuff like that. Not the kind of stuff I want floating around school. The kind I could imagine most of our classmates jacking off to. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
+				'"Mostly sports related stuff," you say while shrugging. "But it''s pretty risqué. Sports bras and tight yoga pants and stuff like that. Not the kind of stuff I want floating around school. The kind I could imagine most of our classmates jacking off to. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 			end
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'artistic nude':
@@ -143,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk2':
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk4'
 			else
 				'"All kinds of stuff," you say, shrugging casually. "High end fashion. Lacy lingerie. Tight clothing, thin material. You name it."'
-				'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! "Why are you hiding it?"'
+				'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! "Why are you hiding it?"'
 				'"It''s an 18+ agency," you explain. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do other stuff there too. Erotic nudes and all that."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk3'
 			end
@@ -152,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk3':
-	'"Nude modelling?" Albina asks, eyes glittering with sudden interest. "Have <i>you</i> done any?"'
+	'"Nude modelling?" she asks, her eyes glittering with sudden interest. "Have <i>you</i> done any?"'
 	if modelfoto['topless'] > 0:
 		if modelfoto['topless'] > 20:
 			'"I go topless a lot," you say without hesitation. "Never done a full nude though."'
@@ -177,18 +176,18 @@ end
 !!not done
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk4':
 	if modelfoto['nude'] > 0:
-		'"You''re naked in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide and scrambles for her laptop. "Oh, I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
+		'"You''re naked in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide and she scrambles for her laptop. "Oh, I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
 	elseif modelfoto['topless'] > 0:
-		'"You''re topless in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide and scrambles for her laptop. "Oh, I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
+		'"You''re topless in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide and she scrambles for her laptop. "Oh, I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
 	end
-	act'Stop her':
+	act 'Stop her':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No!" you squeal, grabbing her by the arm to stop her. Albina back looks at you, bewildered.'
 		AlbinaQW['model_no_look'] = 1
 		cla & *nl
 		
-		'"I don''t mind that you know what I do but I don''t want you to look. Please..." you say, looking deep into your friend''s eyes. Albina stares back tenderly, putting her other hand on top of yours.'
+		'"I don''t mind that you know what I do, but I don''t want you to look. Please..." you say, looking deep into your friend''s eyes. Albina stares back tenderly, putting her other hand on top of yours.'
 		'"Okay, I won''t," she says. "I''m sorry. I was just teasing you. I didn''t think- No, it doesn''t matter what I thought. I promise, I won''t go looking for naked pictures of you on the internet for everyone to see."'
 		*nl
 		'The twinkle in her eye lets you know she''s kidding and she really won''t go looking, but Albina being Albina means that she has to pretend nothing serious happened.'
@@ -196,63 +195,62 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk4':
 	end
 	
 	if $model['nickname'] = $pcs_firstname or $model['nickname'] = $pcs_nickname or $model['firstname'] = $pcs_nickname or $model['firstname'] = $pcs_nickname:
-		act'It''s not my name (lie)':
+		act 'It''s not my name (lie)':
 			AlbinaQW['model_no_look'] = 2
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"You''re not gonna find anything just Yandexing my name," you tell her, dramatically rolling your eyes. "Do you really think I''m stupid enough to start nude modelling and use my real name?"'
 			*nl
-			'Albina stops, turning to look at you with a frown. You snicker internally but manage to maintain a straight face, hoping she won''t see through your bluff.'
+			'She stops and turns to look at you with a frown. You snicker internally but manage to maintain a straight face, hoping she won''t see through your bluff.'
 			*nl
-			'"Fuck!" she swears after a moment. "Tell me what to search!"'
-			'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, enjoying the feeling of pulling one over on Albina.'
+			'"Fuck!" she pouts. "Tell me what to search!"'
+			'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, enjoying the feeling of pulling one over on her.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'Let her search':
+		act 'Let her search':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina searches and finds your profile.'
-			'"You didn''t even change your name?" she snickers.'
-			act'It seemed wrong':
+			'Albina searches and quickly finds your profile. "You didn''t even change your name?" she snickers.'
+			act 'It seemed wrong':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"It felt weird going by something that wasn''t my name," you shrug as she clicks a link you know leads straight to your nude debut. "My name is who I am after all."'
-				act'Continue':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
 			end
 			
-			act'It was a hassle':
+			act 'It was a hassle':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"It felt like a hassle, needing to remember to go by different names and all that," you shrug as she clicks a link you know leads straight to your nude debut.'
-				act'Continue':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
 			end
 			
 			if $model['firstname'] = $pcs_nickname or $model['nickname'] = $pcs_nickname:
-				act'It''s my nickname (protest)':
+				act 'It''s my nickname (protest)':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"It''s not like it''s my real legal name," you protest weakly.'
-					'"Still found you in all of two minutes searching," Albina smirks clicking a link that leads straight to your nude debut.'
-					act'Look at the photos':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
+					'"Still found you in all of two minutes searching," she smirks before clicking a link that leads straight to your nude debut.'
+					act 'Look at the photos': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		act'It''s not my name':
+		act 'It''s not my name':
 			AlbinaQW['model_no_look'] = 2
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"You''re not gonna find anything just Yandexing my name," you tell her, dramatically rolling your eyes. "Do you really think I''m stupid enough to start nude modelling and use my real name?"'
 			*nl
-			'Albina stops, turning to look at you with a frown. You give her a stare and she stares back.'
+			'She stops and turns to look at you with a frown. You give her a stare and she stares back.'
 			*nl
-			'"Damn!" she swears after a moment. "Tell me what to search!"'
+			'"Damn it!" she pouts. "Tell me what to search!"'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_tell'
 		end
 			
-		act'Let her search':
+		act 'Let her search':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina searches for you using your real name but can''t find it because you used a pseudonym.'
-			'"Why can''t I find it?!" she grumbles, cursing.'
+			'Albina searches for you using your real name, but can''t find it because you used a pseudonym.'
+			'"Why can''t I find you?!" she grumbles in frustration.'
 			'"I don''t use my <i>actual</i> name when modelling," you say. "Do you think I''m crazy?"'
 			'"Come ooooonnn!" she moans. "Tell me what to search!"'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_tell'
@@ -261,91 +259,90 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk4':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_tell':
-	act'Nope':
+	act 'Nope':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, enjoying a rare moment of superiority over your friend.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
-	act'Tell her':
+	act 'Tell her':
 		cla & *nl
-		'You spend a few moments considering tantalizing her with the knowledge but eventually you relent.'
-		'"Okay," you snicker. "I go by <<$model[''firstname'']>> <<$model[''lastname'']>>."'
-		'Her eyes light up and immediately starts clacking away on the keyboard. Moments later, she''s clicking a link that you know leads to your nude debut.'
-		act'Look at the photos':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
+		'You spend a few seconds considering tantalizing her with the knowledge, but you eventually relent.'
+		'"Okay, okay," you snicker. "I go by <<$model[''firstname'']>> <<$model[''lastname'']>>."'
+		'Her eyes light up and she immediately starts clicking away on the keyboard. Moments later, she''s clicking a link that you know leads to your nude debut.'
+		act 'Look at the photos': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude1'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/shoots/nude/debut/1.jpg"> <img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/shoots/nude/debut/2.jpg"> <img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/shoots/nude/debut/3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina''s eyes go wide as a gallery fills the screen.'
-	'"Woah! You''re so fucking hot!" your friend says, openly gaping at the full frontal nude pictures of you.'
-	act'Embarrassed':
+	'Albina''s eyes go wide as a gallery fills the screen. "Woah! You''re so fucking hot!" she says, openly gaping at the full frontal nude pictures of you.'
+	act 'Embarrassed':
 		cla & *nl
-		'You thought you weren''t embarrassed by this line of talk but it''s hard not to be when the actual pictures are right in front of you, especially when Albina expands them to full screen and takes advantage of the high definition to zoom <i>very</i> far in. A warm blush spreads through your cheeks.'
+		'You thought you weren''t embarrassed by this line of talk, but it''s hard not to be when the actual pictures are right in front of you, especially when Albina expands them to full screen and takes advantage of the high definition to zoom <i>very</i> far in. A warm blush spreads through your cheeks.'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"Hey," she says, zooming in on your pussy lips. "I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'"Hey," she says, zooming in on your pussy. "I thought you didn''t shave?"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
-	act'Embarrassed pride':
+	act 'Embarrassed pride':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I know, right?" you grin. A warm blush spreads through your cheeks despite your pride in your work, unable to help but be a little embarrassed as Albina expands the images to full screen and takes advantage of the high definition to zoom <i>very</i> far in.'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!" she exclaims. " By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
+			'"I can''t believe you were hiding these from me!" she exclaims. "By the way, what''s the deal here? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'She zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
 		else
-			'"I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!"'
+			'"I can''t believe you were hiding these from me!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible!"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
-	act'Stay casual':
+	act 'Stay casual':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Not bad, are they?" you smirk, amused by the look of excitement on Albina''s face as she rapidly clicks through photos, often expanding them to full screen to take advantage of the high definition and zoom <i>very</i> far in.'
+		'"Not bad, are they?" you smirk, amused by the look of excitement on Albina''s face as she rapidly clicks through the photos, often expanding them to full screen to take advantage of the high definition and zoom <i>very</i> far in.'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!" she exclaims. " By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
+			'"I can''t believe you were hiding these from me!" she exclaims. "By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'She zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
 		else
-			'"I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!"'
+			'"I can''t believe you were hiding these from me!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible!"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
-	act'You''re just saying that':
+	act 'You''re just saying that':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"You''re just saying that," you remark skeptically even as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
+		'"You''re just saying that," you remark skeptically, even as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
 			'"Fuck no!" she exclaims. "Why would I lie? Just looking at these makes me want to eat you out right now! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!  By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina takes advantage of the high resolution and zooms way in on your pussy, getting a close up of your cleanshaven lips.'
+			'She takes advantage of the high resolution and zooms way in on your pussy, getting a close up of your cleanshaven lips.'
 		else
 			'"Fuck no!" she exclaims. "Why would I lie? Just looking at these makes me want to eat you out right now!"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
-	act'Professional pride':
+	act 'Professional pride':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"It turned out well didn''t it?" you smile as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and going out of her way to zoom in on your tits and pussy. "It was a big step for me."'
+		'"It turned out well, didn''t it?" you smile as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and going out of her way to zoom in on your tits and pussy. "It was a big step for me."'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"I can''t believe you were hiding this from me!" she exclaims. " By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
+			'"I can''t believe you were hiding this from me!" she exclaims. "By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'She zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
 		else
-			'"I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!"'
+			'"I can''t believe you were hiding these from me!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible!"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
-	act'Self centered pride':
+	act 'Self centered pride':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Fuck yeah I do," you grin, even ogling yourself a little bit as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
+		'"Fuck yeah I do," you grin, even ogling yourself a little as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"Modest aren''t we?" she snickers back. "I can''t believe you were hiding this from me! By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
+			'"Modest, aren''t we?" she snickers. "I can''t believe you were hiding this from me! By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'She zooms way in on your crotch, getting a close up of your cleanshaven pussy.'
 		else
-			'"Modest aren''t we?" she snickers back. "I can''t believe you were hiding this from me! These photos are incredible!"'
+			'"Modest, aren''t we?" she snickers. "I can''t believe you were hiding this from me! These photos are incredible!"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
@@ -361,8 +358,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude2':
 			'Albina starts saving the images to her hard drive and rapidly clicking through other websites, bookmarking them.'
 			'"What are you doing?" you ask, confused.'
 			'"What''s it look like I''m doing?" she replies with a salty smirk. "Saving these so I can schlick off to them later."'
-			'"You are not!"You gape, horrified.'
-			'"Ab-so-fucking-lutely," Albina grins in response. "But seriously. What made you go nude?"'
+			'"You are not!" you gape, horrified.'
+			'"Ab-so-fucking-lutely," she grins in response. "But seriously. What made you go nude?"'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude3'
 		end
 	end
@@ -372,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 	act 'I asked':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I asked for it," you shrug.'
-		'"You asked?" Albina laughs out loud. "Why''d you do that?"'
+		'"You asked?" She laughs out loud. "Why''d you do that?"'
 		'"Because I wanted to!" you laugh back. "Lay off, will you?"'
 		'"I''m gonna refresh this page every day looking for your latest shoots," she grins.'
 		*nl
@@ -384,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I thought it would be good for my career," you say. "I didn''t <i>want</i> to, but everyone says that you have to bare it all at some point."'
 		'"For a girl who didn''t want it, you don''t seem so embarrassed to tell me," she grins.'
-		act'I got used to it':
+		act 'I got used to it':
 			cla & *nl
 			if modelfoto['nude'] > 24:
 				'"I got used to it," you shrug. "I''ve done dozens of nude shoots now. A little late to stay embarrassed."'
@@ -394,9 +391,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'I trust you':
+		act 'I trust you':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Cause I trust you," you smile. "It''s different if I know it''s just you looking."'
+			'"I trust you," you smile. "It''s different if I know it''s just you looking."'
 			'Albina smiles back, lacing her fingers through yours.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
@@ -423,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 	if foto['suborn'] > 0:
 		act 'I was pressured into it':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"I didn''t want to," you say. "I was... I had been working there for a while so they asked. I said no, but then they kept asking. Eventually they just... talked me into it."'
+			'"I didn''t want to," you say. "I was... I had been working there for a while so they asked. I said no, but then they kept asking. Eventually they just... Talked me into it."'
 			'You trail off and Albina''s grin melts away, her expression becoming somber.'
 			'"Oh. That''s... I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>..." She looks away. "I didn''t... I didn''t realize it was like that..."'
 			'You sit in silence for a few moments before Albina turns back towards you tentatively.'
@@ -432,7 +429,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"No." You give Albina a smile. "Whatever the underhanded reason they got me to do it, once it was done, I didn''t regret it."'
-				'"Well... you <i>are</i> pretty hot in them aren''t you?" Albina says, encouraged by your response.'
+				'"Well... you <i>are</i> pretty hot in them aren''t you?" she says, encouraged by your response.'
 				'"Only ''pretty hot''?" you tease back and she laughs aloud.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
@@ -440,8 +437,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 			act 'Not anymore':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Not anymore," you shake your head. "I <i>did</i> regret it for a while. But after some time and I got used to the idea, I''m happy I did it."'
-				'"Well... you <i>are</i> pretty hot in them aren''t you?" Albina says, encouraged by your response.'
+				'"Not anymore," you shake your head. "I <i>did</i> regret it for a while, but after some time, I got used to the idea. I''m happy I did it."'
+				'"Well... you <i>are</i> pretty hot in them aren''t you?" she says, encouraged by your response.'
 				'"That helped me a lot to get over it," you grin back and she laughs aloud.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
@@ -451,7 +448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I do," you say solemnly. "I thought it would be sexy, feel empowering. But once it started, I just felt... I realized I didn''t want it anymore. But I couldn''t take it back. And now those pictures of me are out there. On the internet or in a magazine and... I wish I could take it all back."'
-				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing. The two of you sit in silence for a few more minutes.'
+				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing as the two of you sit in silence for a few minutes.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 			
@@ -459,7 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude3':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I do," you say, solemnly. "I just wanted to get them off my back and I crossed a line that... I can''t uncross now. I should''ve stood my ground..."'
-				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing. The two of you sit in silence for a few more minutes.'
+				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing as the two of you sit in silence for a few minutes.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		end
@@ -468,47 +465,45 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude_pubes_shaved':
 	AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 1
-	act'It''s a requirement':
+	act 'It''s a requirement':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"It''s a requirement," you explain. "This was my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set."'
-		'"Great fucking policy," Albina grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo its visible in.'
+		'"It''s a requirement," you explain. "This was my nude debut and the studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set."'
+		'"Great fucking policy," she grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo where it''s visible.'
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
-	act'I wanted to':
+	act 'I wanted to':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I wanted to," you shrug. "This was my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set, so it''s not like I really had a choice, but I guess I just thought if I was gonna do it then shaved was sexier."'
-		'"Great choice," Albina grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo its visible in.'
+		'"I wanted to," you shrug. "This was my nude debut and the studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set, so it''s not like I really had a choice. I guess I just thought that if I was gonna do it, then shaved was sexier."'
+		'"Great choice," she grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo where it''s visible.'
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude2'
 	end
 	
 	if modelfoto['nude_shave_no'] = 1:
-		act'They made me (liked bush)':
+		act 'They made me (liked bush)':
 			AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 2
 			cla & *nl
-			'"They made me do it," you sigh. "This is my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set. I didn''t want to do it, but they refused to do the shoot unless I did. I really liked my bush! I was so annoyed how long it took to grow back!"'
-			'Albina''s grin fades and takes on a more somber expression, scrolling through the pictures of you with new eyes.'
+			'"They made me do it," you sigh. "This is my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set. I didn''t want to do it, but they refused to do the shoot unless I did. I really liked my bush! I was so annoyed at how long it took to grow back!"'
+			'Albina''s grin fades and takes on a more somber expression as she scrolls through the pictures of you with new eyes.'
 			if AlbinaQW['shave_story'] = 1:
 				'"I told you about why I started shaving, didn''t I?" she asks in a flat tone, referring to what she told you while you were both drunk after the pool. "What you said reminds me of that."'
-				'Albina shuts the lid on her laptop and pushes it away.'
-				'"I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says tenderly. "Maybe we should talk about something else?"'
+				'She shuts the lid on her laptop and pushes it away. "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says tenderly. "Maybe we should talk about something else?"'
 			else
-				'"That''s really shitty <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, abruptly shutting the lid on her laptop. "Let''s talk about something else."'
+				'"That''s really shitty, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, abruptly shutting the lid on her laptop. "Let''s talk about something else."'
 			end
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'They made me (pressured)':
+		act 'They made me (pressured)':
 			AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 2
 			cla & *nl
-			'"They made me do it," you sigh. "This is my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set. I didn''t want to do it, but they refused to do the shoot unless I did."'
-			'Albina''s grin fades and takes on a more somber expression, scrolling through the pictures of you with new eyes.'
+			'"They made me do it," you sigh. "This is my nude debut and the studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set. I didn''t want to do it, but they refused to do the shoot unless I did."'
+			'Albina''s grin fades and takes on a more somber expression as she scrolls through the pictures of you with new eyes.'
 			if AlbinaQW['shave_story'] = 1:
 				'"I told you about why I started shaving, didn''t I?" she asks in a flat tone, referring to what she told you while you were both drunk after the pool. "What you said reminds me of that."'
-				'Albina shuts the lid on her laptop and pushes it away.'
-				'"I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says tenderly. "Maybe we should talk about something else?"'
+				'She shuts the lid on her laptop and pushes it away. "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says tenderly. "Maybe we should talk about something else?"'
 			else
-				'"That''s really shitty <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, abruptly shutting the lid on her laptop. "Let''s talk about something else."'
+				'"That''s really shitty, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, abruptly shutting the lid on her laptop. "Let''s talk about something else."'
 			end
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
@@ -522,17 +517,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		if $model['type'] = 'catalog':
 			'"Nothing bad!" you say hurriedly, holding your hands up in defense. "Just some stuff for catalogues. You know, the kind of stuff you see on G&M websites and stuff like that."'
-			'"Why all the secrecy then?" Albina asks, not letting up.'
+			'"Why all the secrecy then?" she asks, not letting up.'
 			'"It''s an... 18+ agency..." you say. "I have a fake passport just to work there. They do... <i>other</i> stuff there too..."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy2'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'fashion':
 			'"Fashion modelling mostly," you say, shrugging uncomfortably. "Fancy dresses, designer clothing, all the stuff you see in magazines but never actually see people wearing in real life."'
-			'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
+			'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you say. "I have to use a fake passport just to work there. And they do... <i>other</i> stuff there too..."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy2'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'lingerie':
 			'"I''m a... lingerie model?" you say, shrugging uncomfortably. "High end bras and panties. Sexy things, usually stuff with lace."'
-			'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
+			'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
 			'"It''s an 18+ agency," you say, rubbing your arm. "I have to use a fake passport just to work there. And they do... <i>other</i> stuff there too..."'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy2'
 		elseif $model['type'] = 'glamour':
@@ -541,7 +536,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy1':
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy4'
 			else
 				'"It''s kind of... risqué," you say, shrugging uncomfortably. "High end bras and panties. Sexy things, usually stuff with lace."'
-				'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
+				'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
 				'"It''s an 18+ agency," you say, rubbing your arm. "I have to use a fake passport just to work there. And they do... <i>other</i> stuff there too..."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy2'
 			end
@@ -551,7 +546,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy1':
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy4'
 			else
 				'"It''s kind of... risqué," you say, shrugging uncomfortably. "I do a lot of fitness related shoots. Sports bras and tight yoga pants and stuff like that."'
-				'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
+				'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
 				'"It''s an 18+ agency," you say, rubbing your arm. "I have to use a fake passport just to work there. And they do... <i>other</i> stuff there too..."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy2'
 			end
@@ -570,7 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy1':
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy4'
 			else
 				'"It''s kind of... risqué," you say, shrugging uncomfortably. "High end bras and panties. Sexy things, usually stuff with lace."'
-				'"That''s so cool!" Albina exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
+				'"That''s so cool!" she exclaims, punching you in the arm again. "You''re a goddamn supermodel! Why are you so embarrassed about it?"'
 				'"It''s an 18+ agency," you say, rubbing your arm. "I have to use a fake passport just to work there. And they do... <i>other</i> stuff there too..."'
 				gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy2'
 			end
@@ -579,12 +574,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy2':
-	'"Like nude photography?" Albina says, in classic straight-to-the-point fashion. And then, with a predatory smile, she asks, "Have <i>you</i> done any?"'
+	'"Like nude photography?" she asks in classic straight-to-the-point fashion. And then, with a predatory smile, she asks, "Have <i>you</i> done any?"'
 	if modelfoto['nude'] > 0:
 		act 'No (lie)':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"No!" you say quickly. "No way! I''m not that desperate!"'
-			'"Hmmm..." Albina looks at you suspiciously. "I don''t believe you. Why don''t we fire up my computer and do a little search for your name online? ''<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> naked''"'
+			'"Hmmm..." She looks at you suspiciously. "I don''t believe you. Why don''t we fire up my laptop and do a little search for your name online? ''<<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> naked''"'
 			'She reaches for her laptop and you slap her hand down to the bed. Albina turns slowly, giving you a smug smirk. "Want to confess something <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 			'"No," you insist, putting your nose up at her. "I just don''t want you to see any other pictures of me. It''s embarrassing."'
 			'"Oh, I am <i>so</i> going to schlick off to naked pictures of you later," she grins.'
@@ -604,9 +599,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy2':
 		act 'No':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"No!" you say quickly. "I wouldn''t. I mean, I couldn''t. Could you imagine if any of the boys at school got hold of pictures like that?"'
-			'"But what if <i>I</i> want pictures like that?" Albina bites her lip seductively, shamelessly eye fucking you.'
+			'"But what if <i>I</i> want pictures like that?" She bites her lip seductively, shamelessly eye fucking you.'
 			if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
-				'"Albina." You give her a dry stare. "We''ve fucked. What do you need pictures like that for?"'
+				'"Albina!" You give her a dry stare. "We''ve fucked. What do you need pictures like that for?"'
 				'"Maybe I want to get off on you while you''re busy," she grins.'
 			else
 				'"I can''t believe you," you scoff and she lets a smile break through.'
@@ -620,10 +615,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy3':
 	act 'I asked':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I told them I wanted to do one," you say, cheeks heating up.'
-		'"Then why are you so embarrassed about this?" Albina laughs out loud. "You got what you asked for didn''t you?"'
+		'"Then why are you so embarrassed about this?" She laughs out loud. "You got what you asked for, didn''t you?"'
 		'"It''s embarrassing to tell people I actually know!" you protest. "It''s different when <i>you</i> know!"'
-		'"Well, get used to it," she says, leaning back with a grin. "If you get famous off this, everyone you talk to will have seen your tits. Guess your pussy too."'
-		'"Stop it!" you say, blushing even harder as you push push her backwards, but she doesn''t stop and you have to endure her teasing for several minutes longer.'
+		'"Well, get used to it," she says, leaning back with a grin. "If you get famous off this, everyone you talk to will have seen your tits. Probably your pussy too."'
+		'"Stop it!" you say, blushing even harder as you push her backwards, but she doesn''t stop and you have to endure her teasing for several minutes longer.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -637,7 +632,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy3':
 	
 	act 'I really needed the money (to buy)':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I really needed the money," you say, uncomfortably. "I really wanted to buy something and I didn''t have enough and I just thought, <i>Well, I could just do a nude shoot...</i> They pay double for your nude debut."'
+		'"I really needed the money," you say, uncomfortably. "I really wanted to buy something and I didn''t have enough, so I just thought, <i>Well, I could just do a nude shoot...</i> They pay double for your nude debut."'
 		'"Must''ve been a good deal for them because I know for a fact that you look <i>great</i> naked," she grins.'
 		'"Stop it!" you say, pushing her backwards with a mock shove.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -646,24 +641,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy3':
 	act 'I really needed the money (to pay off)':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I really needed the money," you say, uncomfortably. "I owed some people money and I was desperate. They pay double for your nude debut so I just thought..."'
-		'You trail off and Albina''s grin melts away, her expression becoming somber.'
-		'"Oh. That''s... I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>." She shuts the laptop and pushes it away. "I shouldn''t have teased you. I didn''t... I didn''t realize it was like that..."'
+		'You trail off and Albina''s grin melts away, her expression becoming somber. "Oh. That''s... I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>." She shuts the laptop and pushes it away. "I shouldn''t have teased you. I didn''t... I didn''t realize it was like that..."'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 	
 	if foto['suborn'] > 0:
 		act 'I was pressured into it':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"I didn''t want to," you say. "I was... I had been working there for a while so they asked. I said no, but then they kept asking. Eventually they just... talked me into it."'
-			'You trail off and Albina''s grin melts away, her expression becoming somber.'
-			'"Oh. That''s... I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>..." She looks away. "I didn''t... I didn''t realize it was like that..."'
-			'You sit in silence for a few moments before Albina turns back towards you tentatively.'
+			'"I didn''t want to," you say. "I was... I had been working there for a while so they asked. I said no, but then they kept asking. Eventually they just... Talked me into it."'
+			'You trail off and Albina''s grin melts away, her expression becoming somber. "Oh. That''s... I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>..." She looks away. "I didn''t... I didn''t realize it was like that..."'
+			'You sit in silence for a few seconds before Albina turns back towards you tentatively.'
 			'"Do you regret it?"'
 			act 'No':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Actually... no." You give Albina a shy smile. "I''m actually really glad that I did it. But it''s still kind of embarrassing to tell you about it."'
-				'"Well, don''t be," Albina says, her eyes lighting up with your good humor. "You''re hot as fuck naked!"'
+				'"Actually... No." You give Albina a shy smile. "I''m actually really glad that I did it, but it''s still kind of embarrassing to tell you about it."'
+				'"Well, don''t be," she says, her eyes lighting up with your good humor. "You''re hot as fuck naked!"'
 				'"Stop it!" you say, your face turning crimson as you try to push her away and she laughs aloud.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
@@ -672,7 +665,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy3':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I do," you say solemnly. "I thought it would be sexy, feel empowering. But once it started, I just felt... I realized I didn''t want it anymore. But I couldn''t take it back. And now those pictures of me are out there. On the internet or in a magazine and... I wish I could take it all back."'
-				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing. The two of you sit in silence for a few more minutes.'
+				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing as the two of you sit in silence for a few more minutes.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 			
@@ -680,7 +673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy3':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I do," you say, solemnly. "I just wanted to get them off my back and I crossed a line that... I can''t uncross now. I should''ve stood my ground."'
-				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing. The two of you sit in silence for a few more minutes.'
+				'Albina leans her head against your shoulder, saying nothing as the two of you sit in silence for a few more minutes.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
 		end
@@ -691,15 +684,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy4':
 	if $model['type'] = 'glamour':
 		'"You''re naked in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide.'
 		'"I didn''t say I was naked!" you protest.'
-		'"Yeah yeah, who cares," Albina says, completely ignoring you while reaching for her laptop. "Your tits are out, that''s what matters. I <i>gotta</i> see these pics."'
+		'"Yeah yeah, who cares," she says, completely ignoring you while reaching for her laptop. "Your tits are out, that''s what matters. I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
 	else
-		'"You''re naked in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide and scrambles for her laptop. "Oh, I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
+		'"You''re naked in these?" Albina''s eyes go wide and she scrambles for her laptop. "Oh, I <i>gotta</i> see these pics!"'
 	end
-	act'Stop her':
+	act 'Stop her':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No!" you squeal, grabbing her by the arm to stop her. Albina looks at you, bewildered.'
-		act'Beg her':
+		act 'Beg her':
 			AlbinaQW['model_no_look'] = 1
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Please..." you say, looking deep into your friend''s eyes. Albina stares back tenderly, putting her other hand on top of yours.'
@@ -717,76 +710,75 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_shy4':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"You''re not gonna find anything just Yandexing my name," you tell her, dramatically rolling your eyes. "Do you really think I''m stupid enough to start nude modelling and use my real name?"'
 			*nl
-			'Albina stops, turning to look at you with a frown. You cringe internally but manage to maintain a straight face, hoping she won''t see through your bluff.'
+			'She turns to look at you with a frown. You cringe internally but manage to maintain a straight face, hoping she won''t see through your bluff.'
 			*nl
-			'"Damn!" she swears after a moment. "Tell me what to search!"'
-			'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, feeling the relief flood through you as she buys your lies.'
+			'"Damn it!" she pouts. "Tell me what to search!"'
+			'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, feeling the relief flood through you as she buys your lie.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'Let her search':
+		act 'Let her search':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina searches and finds your profile.'
-			'"You didn''t even change your name?" she snickers.'
-			act'Blush':
+			'Albina searches and quickly finds your profile. "You didn''t even change your name?" she snickers.'
+			act 'Blush':
 				cla & *nl
-				'You blush but don''t say anything as she clicks a link you know leads straight to your nude debut.'
-				act'Continue':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
+				'You blush, but don''t say anything as she clicks a link you know leads straight to your nude debut.'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
 			end
 			
-			act'I wasn''t thinking':
+			act 'I wasn''t thinking':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I wasn''t thinking about getting caught when I started working there," you mumble, feeling the color drain from your face as she clicks a link you know leads straight to your nude debut.'
-				act'Continue':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
 			end
 			
-			act'It seemed wrong':
+			act 'It seemed wrong':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"It felt weird going by something that wasn''t my name," you mumble, feeling the color drain from your face as she clicks a link you know leads straight to your nude debut.'
-				act'Continue':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
 			end
 			if $model['firstname'] = $pcs_nickname or $model['nickname'] = $pcs_nickname:
-				act'It''s my nickname (protest)':
+				act 'It''s my nickname (protest)':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"It''s not like it''s my actual name," you protest weakly.'
-					'"Still found you in all of two minutes searching," Albina smirks clicking a link that you suddenly realize leads straight to your nude debut.'
-					act'Look at the photos':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
+					'"Still found you in all of two minutes searching," she smirks before clicking a link that you suddenly realize leads straight to your nude debut.'
+					act 'Look at the photos': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		act'It''s not my name':
+		act 'It''s not my name':
 			AlbinaQW['model_no_look'] = 2
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"You''re not gonna find anything just Yandexing my name," you tell her, dramatically rolling your eyes. "Do you really think I''m stupid enough to start nude modelling and use my real name?"'
 			*nl
-			'Albina stops, turning to look at you with a frown. You give her a stare and she stares back.'
+			'She turns to look at you with a frown. You give her a stare and she stares back.'
 			*nl
-			'"Damn!" she swears after a moment. "Tell me what to search!"'
+			'"Damn it!" she pouts. "Tell me what to search!"'
 			'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, comfortable in the knowledge that she has no leads.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 		end
-			
-		act'Let her search':
+	
+		act 'Let her search':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-			'Albina searches for you using your real name but can''t find it because you used a pseudonym.'
-			'"Why can''t I find it?!" she grumbles, cursing.'
+			'Albina searches for you using your real name, but can''t find it because you used a pseudonym.'
+			'"Why can''t I find it?!" she grumbles in frustration.'
 			'"I don''t use my <i>actual</i> name when modelling," you say. "Do you think I''m crazy?"'
 			'"Come ooooonnn!" she moans. "Tell me what to search!"'
-			act'Nope':
+			act 'Nope':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Nope! You''re never finding those pics," you reply smugly, comfortable in the knowledge that she has no leads.'
 				gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 			end
-			act'Tell her':
+			act 'Tell her':
 				cla & *nl
 				'After a moment of hesitation, you relent.'
-				'"I can''t believe I''m about to do this," you sigh. "I go by <<$model[''firstname'']>> <<$model[''lastname'']>>."'
-				'Her eyes light up and immediately starts clacking away on the keyboard. Moments later, she''s clicking a link that you know leads to your nude debut.'
-				act'Look at the photos':gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
+				'"I can''t believe I''m about to do this..." you sigh. "I go by <<$model[''firstname'']>> <<$model[''lastname'']>>."'
+				'Her eyes light up and she immediately starts clicking away on the keyboard. Moments later, she''s clicking a link that you know leads to your nude debut.'
+				act 'Look at the photos': gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -795,9 +787,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude_shy1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/shoots/nude/debut/1.jpg"> <img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/shoots/nude/debut/2.jpg"> <img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/shoots/nude/debut/3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Albina''s eyes go wide as a gallery fills the screen.'
-	'"Woah! You''re so fucking hot!" your friend says, openly gaping at the full frontal nude pictures of you.'
-	act'Embarrassed':
+	'Albina''s eyes go wide as a gallery fills the screen. "Woah! You''re so fucking hot!" she says, openly gaping at the full frontal nude pictures of you.'
+	act 'Embarrassed':
 		cla & *nl
 		'You blush furiously as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
@@ -806,24 +797,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude_shy1':
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy2'
 	end
 	
-	act'Embarrassed pride':
+	act 'Embarrassed pride':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"You really think so?" you ask. You blush furiously as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features," but deep inside your chest you also feel a certain warmth. Something that feels good to be recognized.'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"Fuck yes!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!  By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina takes advantage of the high resolution and zooms way in on your pussy, getting a close up of your cleanshaven lips.'
+			'"Fuck yes!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me! By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'She takes advantage of the high resolution and zooms way in on your pussy, getting a close up of your cleanshaven lips.'
 		else
 			'"Fuck yes!" she exclaims. "These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!"'
 		end
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy2'
 	end
 	
-	act'You''re just saying that':
+	act 'You''re just saying that':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"You''re just saying that," you remark skeptically even as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
+		'"You''re just saying that," you remark skeptically, even as she furiously clicks through them, expanding them to full screen and even zooming in at times, especially on your "womanly features."'
 		if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
-			'"Fuck no!" she exclaims. "Why would I lie? Just looking at these makes me want to eat you out right now! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!  By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
-			'Albina takes advantage of the high resolution and zooms way in on your pussy, getting a close up of your cleanshaven lips.'
+			'"Fuck no!" she exclaims. "Why would I lie? Just looking at these makes me want to eat you out right now! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me! By the way, what''s the deal? I thought you didn''t shave?"'
+			'She takes advantage of the high resolution and zooms way in on your pussy, getting a close up of your cleanshaven lips.'
 		else
 			'"Fuck no!" she exclaims. "Why would I lie? These photos are incredible! I can''t believe you were hiding them from me!"'
 		end
@@ -835,14 +826,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude_shy2':
 	if pcs_pubes > 10 and AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 0:
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy_pubes_shaved'
 	else
-		act'Continue':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'Albina starts saving the images to her hard drive and rapidly clicking through other websites, bookmarking them.'
-			'"What are you doing?" you ask bewildered.'
+			'"What are you doing?" you ask, bewildered.'
 			'"What''s it look like I''m doing?" she replies with a salty smirk. "Saving these so I can schlick off to them later."'
 			'"You are not!" You gape, horrified.'
-			'"Ab-so-fucking-lutely," Albina grins in response. "But seriously. What made you go nude?"'
+			'"Ab-so-fucking-lutely," she grins in response. "But seriously. What made you go nude?"'
 			gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_shy3'
 		end
 	end
@@ -850,32 +841,31 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_model_talk_nude_shy_pubes_shaved':
 	AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 1
-	act'It''s a requirement':
+	act 'It''s a requirement':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"It''s a requirement," you explain. "This was my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set."'
-		'"Great fucking policy," Albina grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo its visible in.'
+		'"It''s a requirement," you explain. "This was my nude debut and the studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set."'
+		'"Great fucking policy," she grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo where it''s visible.'
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy2'
 	end
 	
-	act'I wanted to':
+	act 'I wanted to':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"I wanted to," you mumble shyly. "This was my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set, so it''s not like I really had a choice, but I guess I just thought if I was gonna do it then shaved was sexier."'
-		'"Great choice," Albina grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo its visible in.'
+		'"I wanted to," you mumble shyly. "This was my nude debut and the studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set, so it''s not like I really had a choice. I guess I just thought that if I was gonna do it, then shaved was sexier."'
+		'"Great choice," she grins, practically drooling as she zooms in on your pussy in any photo where it''s visible.'
 		gs 'albina_chat2','first_model_talk_nude_shy2'
 	end
 	
 	if modelfoto['nude_shave_no'] = 1:
-		act'They made me':
+		act 'They made me':
 			AlbinaQW['model_shave'] = 2
 			cla & *nl
-			'"They made me do it," you mumble shyly. "This is my nude debut. The studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set. I didn''t want to do it, but they refused to do the shoot unless I did."'
-			'Albina''s grin fades and takes on a more somber expression, scrolling through the pictures of you with new eyes.'
+			'"They made me do it," you mumble shyly. "This is my nude debut and the studio''s policy is that models have to go cleanshaven for their first nude set. I didn''t want to do it, but they refused to do the shoot unless I did."'
+			'Albina''s grin fades and takes on a more somber expression as she scrolls through the pictures of you with new eyes.'
 			if AlbinaQW['shave_story'] = 1:
 				'"I told you about why I started shaving, didn''t I?" she asks referring to that story she told you while you were both drunk after the pool. "What you said reminds me of that."'
-				'Albina shuts the lid on her laptop and pushes it away.'
-				'"I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says tenderly. "Maybe we should talk about something else?"'
+				'She shuts the lid on her laptop and pushes it away. "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says tenderly. "Maybe we should talk about something else?"'
 			else
-				'"That''s really shitty <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, abruptly shutting the lid on her laptop. "Should we talk about something else?"'
+				'"That''s really shitty, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says, abruptly shutting the lid on her laptop. "Should we talk about something else?"'
 			end
 			'You nod gratefully.'
 			gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
@@ -886,8 +876,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'recurrent_model_talk1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'"What''s it like working as a model?" Albina asks looking curious.'
-	act'It''s whatever':
+	'"What''s it like working as a model?" Albina asks, looking curious.'
+	act 'It''s whatever':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"It''s whatever," you shrug. "Same as any other job I guess. Show up, do the work, get paid."'
 		'"That''s all you have to say about being a fucking super model?" she grins back, punching you in the arm. "You bitch."'
@@ -899,11 +889,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'recurrent_porn_talk1':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 	'"So..." Albina starts hesitantly, nervously drumming her fingers. "How''s... the uhh... <i>porn stuff</i> going...?"'
-	act'We don''t have to talk about this':
+	act 'We don''t have to talk about this':
 		albinaQW['no_porn_talk'] = 1
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Albina," you say gently. "If you''re uncomfortable with what I do for money, we don''t have to talk about it."'
-		'She nods back, looking grateful and changes the subject.'
+		'"Albina," you say gently. "If you''re uncomfortable with what I do for money, then we don''t have to talk about it."'
+		'She nods back, looking grateful before quickly changing the subject.'
 		gs 'albina_chat','small_talk'
 	end
 end

+ 79 - 77
locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		'"You want to go swimming in <i>this</i> weather?" you ask, raising your eyebrow, following her as she walks past you down the stairs.'
 		'Albina smirks at you. "Not swimming, just a quick dip! Just long enough to get your nipples rock hard."'
 		'"And <i>why</i> would I want to do that?"'
-		'"So you can jump in the hot tub after!" She looks at you pointedly. "What, you mean you''ve never jumped in the lake before a sauna session before? Don''t you know anything about enjoying yourself <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+		'"So you can jump in the hot tub after!" She looks at you pointedly. "What, you mean you''ve never jumped in the lake before a sauna session before? Don''t you know anything about enjoying yourself, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 		'She drops her robe, revealing that she''s wearing only a skimpy bikini thong as she starts strutting towards the back door. Opening it up, she shudders as a cold wind blows over her before glancing back at you. "Well? You coming or what?"'
 	else
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t know you were here! I was just going to go jump in the pool. You coming?"'
@@ -275,8 +275,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		gs 'stat'
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinapool.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I''ll pass on that I think."'
-		'"Your loss," Albina shrugs before taking a running leap towards the pool. You hear a loud splash followed by a gleeful shriek and walk out to see Albina floating around in the pool. She smiles at you and turns to dive under the water, giving you a view of her anus as she goes under. Knowing Albina, she likely done this on purpose. After a few seconds, she swims over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throws herself over the side.'
+		'"I''ll pass, thanks."'
+		'"Your loss," she shrugs before taking a running leap towards the pool. You hear a loud splash followed by a gleeful shriek and walk out to see Albina floating around in the pool. She smiles at you and turns to dive under the water, giving you a view of her anus as she goes under. Knowing Albina, she likely done this on purpose. After a few seconds, she swims over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throws herself over the side.'
 		act 'Do something else while she''s in the tub':
 			cla
 			'You decide not to join her in the tub and sit in one of the chairs near the pool and play with your phone until Albina climbs out and wraps herself in a towel before motioning for you to follow her.'
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 	if $pantyworntype = 'none':
-		act 'Strip down':gt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub_no_panties'
+		act 'Strip down': gt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub_no_panties'
 	else
 		act 'Get in':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub_no_panties':
 	pcs_horny += 25
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/hottub.jpg"></center>'
 	'Stripping out of your clothes, you toss them in a pile on the floor.'
-	'"No panties <<$pcs_nickname>>?? How <i>daring</i> of you!" Albina teases.'
+	'"No panties, <<$pcs_nickname>>? How <i>daring</i> of you!" Albina teases.'
 	if albina['commando_know'] = 3:
 		'"You already know I don''t wear them," you smirk back.'
 	elseif albina['commando_know'] > 0:
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub_no_panties':
 	elseif pcs_traits['commando_lvl'] > 0:	
 		'"I don''t always wear them," you smirk back, stepping into the tub with her.'
 	else
-		'"I uhh, may have forgotten to wear them today..." you blush, stepping into the tub with her.'
+		'"I uhh, may have forgotten to wear them today..." you blush before stepping into the tub with her.'
 	end
 	if albina['commando_know'] = 0 and alterstrtimg = 24:
 		gs 'albina_house_events', 'goodie_two_shoes'
@@ -944,14 +944,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/snoop.jpg"></center>'
 		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek. You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes, a large butt plug and a strap-on harness all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye, but you''re interrupted before you can see what it is.'
-		'"Just what do you think you''re doing?!" Albina asks in a displeased tone behind you.'
+		'"What do you think you''re doing?!" Albina asks in a displeased tone behind you.'
 		act 'Nothing':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 			'You jump on the spot and slam the drawer closed before turning to face a rather annoyed looking Albina.'
             '"Do you mind <i>not</i> going through my personal things when I''m not here? I wouldn''t do it to you, so I don''t appreciate you doing it to me."'
             'You gingerly nod your head at her in reply.'
-			act 'Close the drawer':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+			act 'Close the drawer': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 		end
 		
 	else
@@ -961,7 +961,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You soon grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek. You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes and a large butt plug all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye.' 
 		'You glance around, but it looks like Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer just before Albina returns and smiles at you.'
-		act 'Close the drawer':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+		act 'Close the drawer': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		'"Yeah, I honestly don''t know why I bought it. I sometimes look up workout techniques and look at clothes, but I mostly just use it to watch porn when I feel like rubbing one out."'
         'You''re a little surprised that she would admit such a thing to you given how private and guarded she is about herself.'
 	
-		act 'Do something else':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+		act 'Do something else': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 		
 	elseif AlbinaQW['CompUse'] > 0:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -989,19 +989,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/laptop.jpg"></center>'
 				'You decide not to risk it and turn the laptop off before closing the screen.'
-				act 'Wait for Albina to return':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+				act 'Wait for Albina to return': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 			end
 			act 'Check out her porn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re curious about what sort of porn Albina would watch, so you click on the internet browser and proceed to look through her browsing history.'
-				'You aren''t surprised to find that she watches a lot of anal and lesbian sex, but are surprised to see that she also likes watching BDSM. You feel yourself getting aroused as you keep browsing.'
+				'You aren''t surprised to find that she watches a <i>lot</i> of anal sex with the occasional lesbian video, but are surprised to see that she also likes watching BDSM. You feel yourself getting aroused as you keep browsing.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10
 				act 'Turn it off':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/laptop.jpg"></center>'
 					'Although you''re turned on by what you''ve seen, you decide not to risk getting caught and turn the laptop off before closing the screen.'
-					act 'Wait for Albina to return':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+					act 'Wait for Albina to return': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 				end
 				act 'Masturbate':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 10, 'masturbate'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Find something else to do':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
+					act 'Find something else to do': gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -1033,8 +1033,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_yoga_1':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src=locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albyoga.jpg"></center>'
 	'The maid answers the door and lets you enter. "Miss Albina is in the gym," she says before leading you there. You find Albina doing yoga by herself. She smiles when she sees you before raising a finger, telling you to wait. The maid bows and leaves as you sit and watch Albina finish her routine.' 
-	'You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... Lazar came over one time and loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns.' 
-	'"Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by sucking and fucking his dick in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
+	'You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility. Lazar came over one time and loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns.' 
+	'"Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by fucking him in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
 
 	act 'Go with her':
 		cla & *clr
@@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_yoga_1':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No thanks. I''ll just wait until you''re done."'
-		'"Suit yourself I guess," Albina shrugs and heads into the bathroom, closing the door behind her. You twiddle your thumbs for a few minutes until she comes back out, towel wrapped around her hair and with nothing around her body. She heads straight to her dresser to start picking out clothes.'
+		'"Suit yourself I guess," she shrugs and heads into the bathroom, closing the door behind her. You twiddle your thumbs for a few minutes until she comes back out, towel wrapped around her hair and nothing around her body. She heads straight to her dresser to start picking out clothes.'
 		minut += 6
 		gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1102,31 +1102,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_sunbathe_1':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/showering.jpg"></center>'
 				cla & *nl
 				'"No thanks. But I wouldn''t mind talking while you do."'
-				'"Suit yourself," she shrugs. Albina heads into her personal bathroom, leaving the door open for you to follow her in. You sit down on the edge of her bath while she steps into the shower.'
+				'"Suit yourself," she shrugs and heads into her personal bathroom, leaving the door open for you to follow her in. You sit down on the edge of her bath while she steps into the shower.'
 				'"Do you always sunbathe naked?"'
-				'"Only when Mama isn''t here," her voice echos back off the glass and tile. "She would lecture me if she caught me doing it, saying I shouldn''t be worrying about tanlines. I swim naked when she''s not home as well." she adds with a small laugh.'
+				'"Only when Mama isn''t here," her voice echos back off the glass and tile. "She would lecture me if she caught me doing it, saying I shouldn''t be worrying about tanlines. I swim naked when she''s not home as well," she adds with a small laugh.'
 				if motherKnowWhore > 0:
 					'"Pfft. Better than my mother. Ever since she found out I''ve been having sex, she doesn''t even call me by my name anymore. Usually just ''whore'' or ''slut''. It fucking blows."'
 					'The tap squeaks off and Albina steps out of the shower, grabbing a towel to dry herself off.'
-					'"Well... still better than being called that because it''s true." Her expression goes blank and your conversation lulls into a melancholy silence for a moment, both of you thinking about her father. "At least that''s not the case anymore," she continues, heading into her room. You follow behind her, sitting on her bed and chatting about lighter topics while she gets dressed.'
+					'"Well... still better than being called that because it''s true..." Her expression goes blank and your conversation lulls into a melancholy silence for a moment, both of you thinking about her father. "At least that''s not the case anymore," she continues, heading into her room. You follow behind her, sitting on her bed and chatting about lighter topics while she gets dressed.'
 				elseif motherKnowSpravka > 0:
 					'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She keeps lecturing me about sex. It''s better than it was before, but it''s still so annoying."'
-					'"Mama always leaves condoms out for me even though I''m on the pill," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I always thought it was a little overbearing, but I guess your mother''s probably a lot worse, huh?" You follow her into her room to continue chatting while she gets dressed.'
+					'"Mama always leaves condoms out for me even though I''m on the pill," Albina says while stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I always thought it was a little overbearing, but I guess your mother''s probably a lot worse, huh?" You follow her into her room to continue chatting while she gets dressed.'
 				elseif motherKnowDildo > 0:
 					'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She keeps scolding me about leaving my dildos lying around the house. A girl has needs, you know?"'
-					'"Ugh, I know exactly what you mean," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I love Mama, but I wish she wasn''t so uptight about where I leave my toys. Always saying, ''What if a guest comes over and sees that laying around?'' or ''What if they catch you in your underwear?'' As if we have any guests these days other than my friends. Besides, isn''t this what we have a maid for? Cleaning stuff up?" She heads into her room and you follow behind, sitting down on her bed and continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
+					'"Ugh, I know exactly what you mean," she says while stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I love Mama, but I wish she wasn''t so uptight about where I leave my toys. Always saying, ''What if a guest comes over and sees that laying around?'' or ''What if they catch you in your underwear?'' As if we have any guests these days other than my friends! Besides, isn''t this what we have a maid for? Cleaning stuff up?" She heads into her room and you follow behind, sitting down on her bed and continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
 				else
 					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She still makes me see the gyno every month just to confirm I''m still a virgin."'
 						'"What??? There''s no way you''re still a virgin!"'
 						'"I... have ways of getting around it."'
-						'"Ways of ''getting around'' you mean!" Albina laughs, stepping out of the shower and grabbing her towel.'
+						'"Ways of ''getting around'' you mean!" she laughs while stepping out of the shower and grabbing her towel.'
 						'"Bitch!" you laugh back, following her into her room to keep chatting while she gets dressed.'
 					else
 						'"Pff. Still better than my mom. She still makes me see the gyno every month just to confirm I''m still a virgin."'
 						'"What?! That''s totally fucked up!"'
 						'"I know right?!"'
-						'"Maybe you should lose it," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing her towel. "Just to stick it to her, you know?"'
+						'"Maybe you should lose it," she says while stepping out of the shower and grabbing her towel. "Just to stick it to her, you know?"'
 						'"I don''t know... Maybe..."'
 						'You follow her into her room and sit down on her bed, continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
 					end
@@ -1155,32 +1155,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_photos':
 	act 'Follow her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/photo/pose1.jpg"></center>'
-		'She leads you out to the pool out back where you pull out your camera and set it up. "Okay, what sort of photos do you want me to take?" She smiles and jiggles her ass with her hands. "Let''s have a bit of fun and do something erotic." You smile and start taking photos of her as she continues teasing you. "You''re pretty good at this <<$pcs_nickname>>. Would you do it professionally?"'
+		'She leads you out to the pool out back where you pull out your camera and set it up. "Okay, what sort of photos do you want me to take?"' 
+		'She smiles and jiggles her ass with her hands. "Let''s have a bit of fun and do something erotic." You smile and start taking photos of her as she continues teasing you. "You''re pretty good at this, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Would you do it professionally?"'
 		'You shrug your shoulders. "Maybe. It depends how good I can get."'
 
 		act 'Start':
 			gs 'exp_gain', 'photoskl', rand(1,2)
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/photo/pose2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few more photos, you decide to change the pose. "Your ass is your best feature, so why don''t you bend over and show it to me?" She grins and gets on all fours as you reposition yourself. "Like what you see <<$pcs_nickname>>?" You grin at her antics as you continue taking images. "Show me more of that ass!" She wiggles her ass at you and smiles, clearly enjoying herself. Her thong is peeking through her skimpy shorts, but you don''t think she cares. You feel like it adds to the erotic nature of the image.'
+			'After a few more photos, you decide to change the pose. "Your ass is your best feature, so why don''t you bend over and show it to me?"' 
+			'She grins and gets on all fours as you reposition yourself. "Like what you see?"' 
+			'You grin at her antics as you continue taking images. "Show me more of that ass!" She wiggles her ass at you and smiles, clearly enjoying herself. Her thong is peeking through her skimpy shorts, but you don''t think she cares. You feel like it adds to the erotic nature of the image.'
 
 			act 'Continue':
 				gs 'exp_gain', 'photoskl', rand(1,2)
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/photo/pose3.jpg"></center>'
-				'She takes you by surprise when she stands and pulls her shirt up to reveal her breasts. She quickly covers them before you can take a photo. "Not so fast. We''re not doing that kind of thing. Tasteful only!" You take a few images of her tastefully posing while hiding her breasts from you. After a few more shots, you decide to move on. "When I said show me more of that ass, I meant it Albina!" you say with a wink and she smiles. "How''s this then?"'
+				'She takes you by surprise when she stands and pulls her shirt up to reveal her breasts, but quickly covers them before you can take a photo. "Not so fast! We''re not doing that kind of thing. Tasteful only!"' 
+				'You take a few images of her tastefully posing while hiding her breasts from you. After a few more shots, you decide to move on. "When I said show me more of that ass, I meant it Albina!" you say with a wink.' 
+				'She smiles. "How''s this then?"'
 
 				act 'Continue':
 					gs 'exp_gain', 'photoskl', rand(1,2)
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/photo/pose4.jpg"></center>'
-					'She pulls her shirt back down and faces away from you before slowly pulling her shorts down, exposing her thong clad ass. She pulls on her shorts, jiggling her ass as she giggles at you. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanted to see it, now photograph it." You compose yourself and take a few photos before moving in to get some close up shots. "Lose the shorts Albina. You know you want to..." you tell her in a commanding tone.'
+					'She pulls her shirt back down and faces away from you before slowly pulling her shorts down, exposing her thong clad ass. She pulls on her shorts, jiggling her ass as she giggles at you. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, you wanted to see it, now photograph it."' 
+					'You compose yourself and take a few photos before moving in to get some close up shots. "Lose the shorts. You know you want to..." you tell her in a commanding tone.'
 
 					act 'Continue':
 						gs 'exp_gain', 'photoskl', rand(1,2)
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/photo/pose5.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Oh I love it when you take charge <<$pcs_nickname>>! You should do it more often..." You hear just a hint of arousal in her voice. She wiggles out of her shorts, allowing them to drop to her ankles before stepping out of them and kicking them aside. You can''t help but appreciate the sight in front of you. You''ve seen her shapely ass plenty of times before, but being able to freely photograph it makes it even better. You take a number of close up shots as she poses for you.'
+						'"Oh, I love it when you take charge, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You should do it more often..." You hear just a hint of arousal in her voice before she wiggles out of her shorts, allowing them to drop to her ankles before stepping out of them and kicking them aside. You can''t help but appreciate the sight in front of you. You''ve seen her shapely ass plenty of times before, but being able to freely photograph it makes it even better. You take a number of close up shots as she poses for you.'
 						'"Okay, we''re nearly done here. One more pose should be enough."'
 						'"What? You had enough of this amazing ass already?" she asks with a pout while giving her ass a wiggle.'
 						'You smile. "Yes, I''ve got enough photos of it to make an album!" you laugh.'
@@ -1199,8 +1205,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_photos':
 								portfolio_people[7] = 1
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/photography/foto/people/7.jpg"></center>'
-								'As she finishes pulling her shorts back on, you realize that you need an image for your portfolio. The ones you took are far too sexual. "Hey Albina, do you mind if I take one more photo? I need something more... suitable for my portfolio." She smiles and gives you an innocent, if slightly erotic pose. You snap the photo and thank her.'
-								'"So. Are you staying or going?"'
+								'As she finishes pulling her shorts back on, you realize that you need an image for your portfolio. The ones you took are far too sexual. "Do you mind if I take one more photo? I need something more... suitable for my portfolio."' 
+								'She smiles and gives you an innocent, if slightly erotic pose. You snap the photo and thank her.'
+								'"So. Are you staying or going?" she asks.'
 
 								act 'Stay':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -1214,12 +1221,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_photos':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/23.jpg"></center>'
 									'"I need to get going. I need to look these photos over for any flaws so I can improve my skills."'
-									'She gives you a sly grin. "Yeah, ''look for flaws''." You lightly punch her on the arm and she walks you to the door. She hugs you tightly before looking you in the eyes.'
+									'She gives you a sly grin. "Yeah, ''look for flaws''." You lightly punch her on the arm and she walks you to the door, where she hugs you tightly before looking you in the eyes.'
 
 									act 'Kiss her':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kiss4.jpg"></center>'
-										'She wants it and you want it. You lean in and lock lips with her, your tongue plunging into her mouth and wrapping around her own. You passionately make out for a few seconds before Albina breaks the kiss, looking hot and heavy. You smile at each other and she watches you intently, her thighs gently rubbing together, as you walk down the driveway.'
+										'She wants it and you want it. You lean in and lock lips with her, your tongue plunging into her mouth and wrapping around her own. You passionately make out for a few seconds before Albina breaks the kiss, looking hot and heavy. You smile at each other and she watches you intently, her thighs gently rubbing together as you walk down the driveway.'
 										act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 									end
 
@@ -1246,39 +1253,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study_door':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/doors.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you make your way up the stairs, you take note of the double doors down the hallway. Albina got rather agitated and told you to leave it alone when you first mentioned it to her. She said the room was locked for a reason and under no circumstances would she open it.'
+	'At this point, the maid walks out and heads down the hall, smiling at you as she walks past. "Hello, Miss <<$pcs_firstname>."'
 	act 'Investigate':
-		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your curiosity gets the better of you and you quietly make your way down the hall. The door is locked tight, but you notice that the guest bathroom is next door. You quickly enter and approach the window. Opening it and peering out, you notice one of the windows to the room is ajar and offers a way in... if you can reach it. The ledge looks like it''s wide enough for you to shuffle across...'
-
-		act 'Do it':
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinahome.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your curiosity again gets the better of you and, after some brief hesitation, you climb out onto the ledge. "Just don''t look down. Don''t look down!" you reassure yourself as you slowly start shuffling across the ledge. Thankfully, it''s not too far, but your foot stumbles as you reach the window. You hold in a panicked scream while quickly grabbing the window and steadying yourself. Your heart pounding, you quickly climb into the mysterious room.'
-			act 'Look around':
-				AlbinaQW['flashdrive'] = 1
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/study.jpg"></center>'
-				'You find yourself in a modern, lavishly decorated study. You take a quick look around, but find nothing of any real interest to you. This was clearly her father''s study. No wonder Albina hates coming in here. Just as you''re about to leave, you accidently knock one of the heavy books off the shelf, gritting your teeth in pain when it lands on your foot. Thankfully, nobody seems to have heard and you kneel down to pick it back up. As you do, something falls out from between the pages. Placing the book back, you glance down and see a flash drive at your feet. You pick it up and pocket it, curious about why someone would hide it.' 
-				'With nothing else to see, you climb back out and return the window to its original ajar position before shuffling back across the ledge to the bathroom, being careful not to stumble this time. Once you''re back in the bathroom, you close the window and head to Albina''s bedroom.'
-
-				act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-			end
-		end
-
-		act 'Don''t do it':
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You close the window. It''s a stupid idea that would be difficult to explain if you got stuck... or worse. You leave the bathroom and walk back down the hall to Albina''s bedroom.'
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/study.jpg"></center>'
+		'Your curiosity gets the better of you and you quietly make your way down the hall. Peeking through the door, the room appears to be some kind of study.'
 
+		act 'Enter':
+			cla
+			'Your curiosity again gets the better of you and, after some brief hesitation, you quickly duck into the room.'
+			'You find yourself in a modern, lavishly decorated study. You take a quick look around, but find nothing of any real interest to you. This was clearly her father''s study. No wonder Albina hates coming in here. Just as you''re about to leave, you accidently knock one of the heavy books off the shelf, gritting your teeth in pain when it lands on your foot. Thankfully, nobody seems to have heard and you kneel down to pick it back up. As you do, something falls out from between the pages. Placing the book back, you glance down and see a flash drive at your feet.' 
+			'You pick it up and pocket it, curious about why someone would hide it. You just need a computer to access it.' 
+			'With nothing else to see, you quickly duck back out of the study, being careful to leave the door in its original ajar position before heading to Albina''s bedroom.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 		end
 	end
 
 	act 'Leave it alone':
-		cla & *clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/doors.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide not to overstep your bounds as a guest and respect her wishes. You make your way to Albina''s room where she''s waiting for you.'
+		'You decide not to overstep your bounds as a guest and back away from the door. It would be difficult explaining yourself if you were caught snooping inside. You quickly make your way to Albina''s room where she''s waiting for you before the maid returns.'
 
 		act 'Continue':
 			AlbinaQW['studylock'] = 1
@@ -1291,44 +1285,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_drive':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
-	'You plug the flash drive into your computer and open its contents. You''re presented with a series of videos.'
+	'You plug the flash drive into your computer and find that it contains a single folder titled "Blackmail material". When you open it, you''re presented with a series of videos and a note which reads "To be used if any ''associates'' get out of line."'
 
 	act 'Watch the first video':
-		cla & *clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video1.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You click the first video and watch as a girl in a maid outfit is fucked from behind. You recognise the man''s voice. It''s Albina''s father fucking the old maid, just like Albina said. She''s barely older than you, but sounds like she''s enjoying herself and is really getting into it. "Now I remember why I hired you. You''re a cock hungry whore who loves pleasing her master with her tight holes!"'
 		'The girl moans and giggles. "Yes, I serve only to please you, sir!"'
 
 		act 'Watch the second video':
-			cla & *clr
+			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You open the second video and are shocked by what you see. It''s Sonia being fucked by Albina''s father! He roughly fucks her from behind while verbally abusing her, but Sonia seemingly doesn''t care. After a few more seconds, he pulls out and flips her over before dragging her to the edge of the bed and blowing his load over her face. "You have a nice pussy, slut. Now get your filthy ass out of my house before my daughter comes home and sees you!" is all he says before the video cuts off.' 
-
+			'You open the second video and are presented with a surprising view. Albina, wearing her school uniform, tied up with a paddle in her mouth as a man roughly fucks her while verbally and physically abusing her.'
+			if AlbinaQW['client1'] = 1:
+				'You quickly recognise the man. He''s the fat Armenian you were sold to as a Starlet. He quickly grunts and groans as he cums inside Albina, who looks to the side and avoids eye contact with him.'
+			else
+				'You don''t recognise the man, but it''s clear that Albina isn''t a willing participant in this depraved sex scene. He quickly grunts and groans as he cums inside her, and she looks to the side and avoids eye contact with him.'
+			end	
+			'Satisfied, he pulls out and makes Albina look at him. "Your time is coming, girl. I''m going to make your father a <i>very</i> generous offer and you''ll soon be my personal little fuck toy. I might even take you off birth control and put a baby inside you. I took your virginity, so might as well get you pregnant as well, no?" he laughs.'
+			'Albina just quietly whimpers as his cum slowly trickles out of her pussy.'
+		
 			act 'Watch the third video':
-				cla & *clr
+				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'The third video opens with Albina standing in a bedroom in her school uniform. You hear her whimper slightly as the door opens and loudly slams before a figure grabs her and forces her over his knee. He flips her skirt up and delivers a series of stinging smacks to her exposed ass, but other than a few grunts, Albina takes it without complaint, which seems to annoy the man. By now, you''ve identified him as her father, who grabs her hair and roughly pulls her head back as he gives her now bright red ass another hard smack. Albina yelps as strands of her hair visibly snap and she finally breaks. "I''m sorry daddy, I''ll be a good girl from now on!" she blurts out and he smiles. "Good. I would hate if something bad were to happen to you again."'
-				'He throws Albina off of his knee and leaves the room. Albina sits on the bed quietly sobbing before glaring at the door with fire in her eyes.' 
+				'The third video opens with Albina standing in her bedroom in her school uniform. You hear her whimper slightly as the door opens and loudly slams before a figure grabs her and forces her over his knee. He flips her skirt up and delivers a series of stinging smacks to her exposed ass, but other than a few grunts, Albina takes it without complaint, which seems to annoy the man. By now, you''ve identified him as her father, who grabs her hair and roughly pulls her head back as he gives her now bright red ass another hard smack. Albina yelps as strands of her hair visibly snap and she finally breaks. "I''m sorry daddy, I''ll be a good girl from now on!" she blurts out.'
+				'He smiles. "Good. I would hate if something bad were to happen to you. Again..."'
+				'He throws Albina off of his knee and leaves the room. Albina sits on her bed quietly sobbing before glaring at the door with fire in her eyes.' 
 
 				act 'Watch the fourth video':
-					cla & *clr
+					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video4.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You open the fourth video and immediately notice that it was taken from a hidden camera in the study where you found the flash drive. Albina is on her knees wearing only a crop top, looking at the floor and avoiding eye contact with the naked man in front of her. The man grabs a fistful of her hair and pulls her head up to slap her face. "Look at me when I''m talking to you, bitch!" he snarls. "Now get those perky little tits of yours out!" Albina reaches down and slowly pulls her crop top up to expose her breasts. Satisfied, the man slaps his erect cock against her face before shoving it into her mouth. "Be a good little whore and suck my dick!"'
-					'Still holding her by her hair, he starts forcing her head up and down on his cock, not caring as she gags and splutters before he forces her to take it into her throat and deepthroat him. This continues for a few more minutes before he finally lets her go and she gasps loudly for air as drool drips from her mouth. She then kicks and screams in protest as the mysterious man grabs her tightly by the wrist and roughly drags her out of sight before the video cuts off.'
+					'You open the fourth video and immediately notice that it was taken from a hidden camera in the study where you found the flash drive. Albina is on her knees wearing only a crop top, looking at the floor and avoiding eye contact with the naked man in front of her. The man grabs a fistful of her hair and pulls her head up to slap her face. "Look at me when I''m talking to you, bitch!" he snarls. "Now get those perky little tits of yours out!" Albina reaches down and slowly pulls her crop top up to expose her breasts. Satisfied, the man slaps his erect cock against her face before shoving it into her mouth. "Now be a good little whore and suck my dick!"'
+					'Still holding her by her hair, he starts forcing her head up and down on his cock, not caring as she gags and splutters before he forces her to deepthroat him. This continues for a few more minutes before he finally lets her go and she gasps loudly for air as drool drips from her mouth. She then kicks and screams in protest as the mysterious man grabs her tightly by the wrist and roughly drags her out of sight before the video cuts off.'
 
 					act 'Watch the fifth video':
-						cla & *clr
+						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video5.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You open the fifth video and find the same man from before, only this time you can see his face. You recognise him from somewhere, but you can''t place your finger on it. He''s relaxing on the bed as Albina rides him. She clearly isn''t enjoying it and constantly looks to the hidden camera in distress. "God, I haven''t had a pussy this tight since I fucked my wife''s niece so she could get a job working as my secretary. She didn''t have a fat peach of an ass like yours though." Albina just whimpers as she continues fucking him. "What''s wrong whore? Not enjoying it? Don''t worry, I''m sure you''ll cheer up when I cum deep inside this amazing pussy of yours!" You see tears welling up in Albina''s eyes as she''s forced to keep going.'
+						'You open the fifth video and see a man relaxing on a bed as Albina rides him. She clearly isn''t enjoying it and constantly looks to the hidden camera in distress. "God, I can''t remember the last time I had a pussy this tight! I can''t believe I have a cute little teen riding my dick and all I had to do was endorse your father''s election campaign! Best money I''ve ever spent!"' 
+						'Albina just whimpers and you see tears welling up in her eyes as she''s forced to keep going.'
 
 						act 'Watch the last video':
-							cla & *clr
+							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video6.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You open the last video and immediately hear Albina quietly sobbing as the man with the camera records her lying on the bed face down. "Come on slut, show us how dirty that pussy of yours is!"'
-							'Albina whimpers before a large amount of cum squirts out of her pussy. The camera pans up to show a large group of men surrounding Albina and laughing at her. You recognise many of them from the Starlet shows.'
-							if AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] > 0: 'You shudder when you see some of the men and remember the things they did to you.'
-							'"You really are a dirty fucking slut! I''ve never seen a bitch hold so much cum in her fuck hole like that before!" one of the men remarks before they flip her over. Her eyes are red and puffy from crying, her make up is smeared all over her face and "WHORE" has been scribbled across her forehead with a marker pen. A tie has been stuffed in her mouth as a makeshift gag, causing a large amount of drool to dribble down her chin. She looks almost docile, as if she''s intoxicated or even drugged, but starts sobbing when they hog tie her with belts and leave on her bed. "Stop whining, you useless bitch. If you had just given us those pretty friends of yours like we wanted, then you wouldn''t be here giving us all a ''refund'', you dumb whore! Now sit there and think about what a dirty useless slut you are and we <i>might</i> forgive you."'
-							'Albina thrashes on the bed, her sobbing pleas muffled by her gag. "What''s that whore? You want another go?" you hear another man cruelly remark before laughing.'
+							'You open the last video and immediately see Albina lying on a bed as a man cums on her face. She looks almost docile, as if she''s been... drugged? The camera pans to show that she''s covered in cum and surrounded by a group of men in what looks like a cheap motel room.' 
+							'"I didn''t think she''d resist so much that we had to inject her," one of the men says as he scrawls "WHORE" across Albina''s forehead with a marker pen. Albina doesn''t react to this and remains almost motionless on the bed.'
+							'"Lucky that I brought that sedative with me from work, eh? Bitch deserved it after she kicked me in the gut like that, but I felt like I was fucking a blow up doll. Boris owes me a free session with her, one where she''s tied up first. I love it when they squirm."'
+							'Albina then stirs and whimpers on the bed. "What''s that, whore? You want another go?" you hear a man say before laughing.'
 
 							act 'Stop':
 								AlbinaQW['flashdrive'] = 2

+ 35 - 37
locations/albina_sex_chat.qsrc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob_talk1':
 			act '"I don''t like blowjobs"':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Really? You''ve gotten off on a blowjob before?" You wrinkle your nose. "I hate blowjobs. The taste is awful, they make my jaw ache, and they''re just gross all around."'
-				'"I can understand that," Albina nods. "They''re not for everybody. I guess I''ve just seen so much cock I''m used to the taste. And just to be clear, it''s only in that specific situation that I like blowjobs."'
+				'"I can understand that," she nods. "They''re not for everybody. I guess I''ve just seen so much cock I''m used to the taste. And just to be clear, it''s only in that specific situation that I like blowjobs."'
 				gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 			end
 			
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob_talk2':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I don''t really like it," you say, wrinkling your nose. "They''re not the <i>worst</i>, but I don''t get off on them at all. I mostly just sit there bored out of my mind until it''s over."'
-		'"I get that," Albina nods. "If it''s not a skull-fucking, I feel pretty much the same way. Just something you have to do until you get to the good part."'
+		'"I get that," she nods. "If it''s not a skull-fucking, I feel pretty much the same way. Just something you have to do until you get to the good part."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob_talk2':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Hmm. I don''t know. It''s okay, I guess..." you say with a shrug. "I don''t really like them, but I don''t really hate them either. Just kind of something I do. I don''t know. It''s a cock in my mouth. Is there much more to say?"'
-		'"I get that," Albina nods. "If it''s not a skull-fucking, I feel pretty much the same way. Just something you have to do until you get to the good part."'
+		'"I get that," she nods. "If it''s not a skull-fucking, I feel pretty much the same way. Just something you have to do until you get to the good part."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob_talk2':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I like it," you say. "Knowing that I''m in charge of a guy''s pleasure is really hot. I like the feeling of them squirming inside my mouth and knowing that it''s because of me."'
-		'"I get that," Albina says with an understanding nod. "Not my personal cup of tea, but I can see the appeal when you put it like that."'
+		'"I get that," she says with an understanding nod. "Not my personal cup of tea, but I can see the appeal when you put it like that."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob_talk2':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I <i>love</i> blowjobs," you gush. "I love everything about them! The feel of a guy''s dick in my mouth, the taste, the smell, the way I can make him moan and squirm. I could get off on giving head."'
-		'"I get that," Albina smirks amusedly. "Not my personal cup of tea, but I can see the appeal when you put it like that."'
+		'"I get that," she smirks amusedly. "Not my personal cup of tea, but I can see the appeal when you put it like that."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -146,26 +146,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blowjob_talk2':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I like it when it''s a big dick," you smirk. "There''s something really satisfying about having a big dick in my mouth, making me stretch my lips to get around it. It''s... <i>meaty</i>. As opposed to when it''s small or average, it feels like there''s too much space by comparison."'
-		'"I get that," Albina smiles back amusedly. "I''ve choked on a lot of dick in my time, but always better to choke on a bigger one than a smaller one. Better to get skullfucked with."'
+		'"I get that," she smiles back amusedly. "I''ve choked on a lot of dick in my time, but always better to choke on a bigger one than a smaller one. Better to get skullfucked with."'
 		'She grins wickedly.'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '69_talk1':
-	act'"Do you like 69ing?"':
+	act '"Do you like 69ing?"':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Do you like 69ing?" you ask Albina.'
 		'"With a guy or a girl?" she smirks back wickedly.'
-		act'Guy':
+		act 'Guy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"A guy," you say.'
 			'"69ing is just a novelty if you ask me," she sighs, boredly twirling her finger through her hair. "Too much going on at once. I''m sucking dick trying to make him feel good, his face is between my legs, or at least trying to get both because matching dick to mouth and pussy to face is hard at my height, especially if he''s tall. It''s a big hassle and I can''t concentrate on anything. I just give a worse blowjob while getting less pleasure out of being eaten out. <i>If</i> he even is eating me out. And don''t get me started about when the guy''s on top. Trying to suck a dick hanging above you while in a supine position is so much harder than when it''s standing up straight."'
 			gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 		end
 		
-		act'Girl':
+		act 'Girl':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"A girl," you say.'
 			if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '69_talk1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_talk1':
-	act'Talk about cum':
+	act 'Talk about cum':
 		cla
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'cum_taste1'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'facial_talk1'
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_taste2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_talk1':
-	act'Do you like facials?':
+	act 'Do you like facials?':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Do you like it when guys cum on your face?" you ask.'
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_talk1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_talk_albina_lead':
-	act'Let her lead':
+	act 'Let her lead':
 		cla
 		AlbinaQW['chat_rand'] = rand(1,3)
 		if AlbinaQW['chat_rand'] = 1:
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'missionary2':
 	pcs_horny += 15
 	gs'stat'
 	'You both agree to disagree, but find yourself a little turned on by her response. Judging by the way she''s rubbing her thighs together, you think she is too.'
-	gs'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
+	gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	act 'Ask her about her anal fetish': gt 'albina_sex_chat', 'anal'
 end
 
@@ -330,9 +330,9 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'doggystyle2':
 	pcs_horny += 15
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'You giggle at her answer, feeling warmth blossoming between your hips and wetness seeping from your pussy. With the "fuck me eyes" Albina is giving you think she''s probably feeling something similar.'
-	gs'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
+	gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	act 'Ask her about her anal fetish': gt 'albina_sex_chat', 'anal'
 end
 
@@ -346,30 +346,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl':
 	act 'It feels better':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"It just feels better," you shrug. "I don''t know how to explain it. The angle? Just the way it fits inside when I''m on top? It feels good. What can I say?"'
-		'"I think it feels best in doggy," Albina says. "It goes way deeper and you can get surprise anal in that position, which is the <i>best</i> kind of anal. Plus spankings. If I can''t sit down after a fuck, it was a good fuck." She then gives you a sly grin. "But riding dick is a close second for me."'
+		'"I think it feels best in doggy," she says. "It goes way deeper and you can get surprise anal in that position, which is the <i>best</i> kind of anal. Plus spankings. If I can''t sit down after a fuck, it was a good fuck." She then gives you a sly grin. "But riding dick is a close second for me."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'cowgirl2'
 	end
 
 	act 'I like being in control':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I like being in control," you explain. "If I want to go slow, I can go slow. If I want to go fast, I can ride him as hard as I like. It makes me feel... powerful? Just knowing that I''m the one in charge is such a turn on for me."'
-		'"That kind of stuff doesn''t matter to me," Albina shrugs back. "I like it hard and rough every time. Don''t get all slow and gentle with me. If I''m gonna get fucked, I want to <i>feel</i> it. If I want my face forced into the sheets with a cock balls deep up my ass being spanked until my eyes water, I''m only going to get that in doggy." She grins at you, clearly imagining a cock stuffed up her ass right now, but a few seconds later, it melts into a concessionary smile. "I''ll admit though, a hard ride is pretty good too."'
+		'"That kind of stuff doesn''t matter to me," she shrugs back. "I like it hard and rough every time. Don''t get all slow and gentle with me. If I''m gonna get fucked, I want to <i>feel</i> it. If I want my face forced into the sheets with a cock balls deep up my ass being spanked until my eyes water, I''m only going to get that in doggy." She grins at you, clearly imagining a cock stuffed up her ass right now, but a few seconds later, it melts into a concessionary smile. "I''ll admit though, a hard ride is pretty good too."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'cowgirl2'
 	end
 
 	act 'I like it when he grabs my breasts':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I like having my boobs grabbed," you grin. "If I''m on top, then his hands are free to grope me."'
-		'"But he can still grab your tits from behind," Albina argues. "Plus, he can spank you until you''re red and wriggling too. Why choose when you can have both?" She gives you a sly grin. "Though I''ll admit, riding dick is a close second for me."'
+		'"But he can still grab your tits from behind," she argues. "Plus, he can spank you until you''re red and wriggling too. Why choose when you can have both?" She gives you a sly grin. "Though I''ll admit, riding dick is a close second for me."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'cowgirl2'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl2':
 	pcs_horny += 15
-	gs'stat'
+	gs 'stat'
 	'You both agree to disagree, but find yourself a little turned on by her response. Judging by the way she''s rubbing her thighs together, you think she is too.'
-	gs'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
+	gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	act 'Ask her about her anal fetish': gt 'albina_sex_chat', 'anal'
 end
 
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_fav':
 		act 'I do it for my boyfriend':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I like making my boyfriend feel good," you smile. "He likes it, so I like it."'
-			'"Oh puh-leez," Albina rolls her eyes. "If I knew you were going to talk about romantic bullshit like that, I wouldn''t have asked. Romance is for decrepit old fucks."'
+			'"Oh puh-leez," She rolls her eyes. "If I knew you were going to talk about romantic bullshit like that, I wouldn''t have asked. Romance is for decrepit old fucks."'
 			'Her words come across sharp, but you can see the twinkle in her eye that lets you know she''s just kidding.'
 			'"But seriously. Don''t you ever get tired of swallowing?"'
 			gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'spit_or_swallow'
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_fav':
 		act 'I love my boyfriend':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Because of my boyfriend," you say, involuntarily smiling as your thoughts drift towards him. "I love him so much and I love seeing the pleasure on his face when his cock is in my mouth. I want to spoil him, so I love giving him head."'
-			'"Oh puh-leez," Albina rolls her eyes. "If I knew you were going to talk about romantic bullshit like that, I woudln''t have asked. Romance is for old decrepit fucks."'
+			'"Oh puh-leez," She rolls her eyes. "If I knew you were going to talk about romantic bullshit like that, I wouldn''t have asked. Romance is for old decrepit fucks."'
 			'Her words come across sharp, but you can see the twinkle in her eye that lets you know she''s just kidding.'
 			'"But seriously. Don''t you ever get tired of swallowing?"'
 			gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'spit_or_swallow'
@@ -489,8 +489,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spit_or_swallow':
 	act 'I spit':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"What do you mean?" you say with a puzzled look. "I don''t swallow. I just spit?"'
-		'"What do <i>you</i> mean?" Albina asks, giving you a bemused look right back.'
+		'"What do you mean?" you ask with a puzzled look. "I don''t swallow. I just spit?"'
+		'"What do <i>you</i> mean?" she asks in return, giving you a bemused look right back.'
 		act 'It tastes funny':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"It tastes funny," you say matter of factly. "So I just spit it out."'
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spit_or_swallow':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"Not really," you shrug. "It''s just part of sex. I don''t really care one way or the other as long as it makes him happy."'
-		'"I guess," Albina sighs. "Well <i>I</i> get tired of it."'
+		'"I guess," she sighs. "Well <i>I</i> get tired of it."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spit_or_swallow':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I got used to the taste after a while," you shrug. "It''s not my favorite thing in the world, but I''m used to it."'
-		'"I guess I''m like that too," Albina sighs. "Still. Gets tiring if it''s all a guy wants to do, though."'
+		'"I guess I''m like that too," she sighs. "Still. Gets tiring if it''s all a guy wants to do, though."'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end
 	
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 			
 			act 'I hate condoms too':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"Me too," you say. "I can''t <i>feel</i> anything when the guy''s wearing a rubber. I want skin on skin contact. I can''t wait till I can start going bareback."'
+				'"Me too," you say. "I can''t <i>feel</i> anything when the guy''s wearing a condom. I want skin on skin contact. I can''t wait till I can start going bareback."'
 				'"It''s way better," she grins. "You''re gonna love it."'
 				gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 			end
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 			act 'I don''t want to worry':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"I just don''t want to worry about it," you sigh. "What if the guy doesn''t have one? What if I don''t have one? What if the condom breaks? He said he''s going to pull out, but what if he doesn''t? It''s too much stress. Easier to just take a pill every day."'
-				'"I would <i>never</i> let a guy to go bareback on me if I wasn''t on the pill," Albina says, looking horrified at you. "You can''t trust them with that shit. For fuck''s sake, I take it up the ass most of the time and I <i>still</i> don''t trust them not to cum in my pussy. You know what I mean?"'
+				'"I would <i>never</i> let a guy to go bareback on me if I wasn''t on the pill," she says, looking horrified at you. "You can''t trust them with that shit. For fuck''s sake, I take it up the ass most of the time and I <i>still</i> don''t trust them not to cum in my pussy. You know what I mean?"'
 				gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 			end
 			
@@ -651,7 +651,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 							'"That''s not the point," she replies while shaking her head. "A kid is a lot of responsibility. They become the priority in your life. They can get in the way of dreams and other things you want to do..."'
 							*nl
 							'She trails off, looking away.'
-							*nl
 							'"Mama had to put a lot of dreams on hold because she got pregnant with me. Because of my shitbag dad, but because of me too. I love Mama, but it wasn''t until she didn''t have to take care of me anymore that she got to actually live her life. Try to remember that before you get pregnant."'
 							gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 						end
@@ -684,7 +683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 					'"Condoms are more reliable," you say. "I can''t forget to use a condom like I can forget to take a pill."'
 					'"But condoms can still break," she argues.'
 					'"And I can get too tired and fall asleep before remembering to take my pill," you point out. "In the grand scheme of things, condoms are just safer."'
-					'"I prefer bareback," Albina says before taking a deep breath and sighing. "But I also take my pill religiously. I set alarms and everything. I guess it''s better to use condoms if you don''t trust yourself to take the pill... Wait, why not get the shot instead?"'
+					'"I prefer bareback," she says before taking a deep breath and sighing. "But I also take my pill religiously. I guess it''s better to use condoms if you don''t trust yourself to take the pill... Wait, why not get the shot instead?"'
 					gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 				end
 				
@@ -745,7 +744,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 				'"Seriously?! You would trust a guy with that shit?" She looks at you in bewilderment. "I mostly take it up the ass and I <i>still</i> take the pill because I don''t trust a guy not to blow his load in my pussy."'
 				act 'Condoms suck':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"But condoms are the <i>worst!</i>" you moan. "I can''t <i>feel</i> anything when the guy''s wearing a rubber. I want skin on skin contact. It''s bareback or nothing."'
+					'"But condoms are the <i>worst!</i>" you moan. "I can''t <i>feel</i> anything when the guy''s wearing a condom. I want skin on skin contact. It''s bareback or nothing."'
 					'"I hate condoms too, but that doesn''t explain why you won''t just get on the pill?"'
 					
 					gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'birth_control_pill_hassle_no_condoms'
@@ -767,7 +766,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 		
 		act 'I hate condoms too':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"Me too," you say. "I can''t <i>feel</i> anything when the guy''s wearing a rubber. I want skin on skin contact. It''s so much better bareback."'
+			'"Me too," you say. "I can''t <i>feel</i> anything when the guy''s wearing a condom. I want skin on skin contact. It''s so much better bareback."'
 			'"Damn straight," she grins while high-fiving you. "Condoms are fucking dumb."'
 			gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 		end
@@ -775,7 +774,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_talk':
 		act 'I don''t want to worry':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"I just don''t want to worry about it," you sigh. "What if the guy doesn''t have one? What if I don''t have one? What if the condom breaks? He said he''s going to pull out, but what if he doesn''t? It''s too much stress. Easier to just take a pill every day."'
-			'"I would <i>never</i> let a guy to go bareback on me if I wasn''t on the pill," Albina says, looking horrified at you. "You can''t trust them with that shit. For fuck''s sake, I mostly take it up the ass and I <i>still</i> don''t trust them not to cum in my pussy. You know what I mean?"'
+			'"I would <i>never</i> let a guy to go bareback on me if I wasn''t on the pill," she says, looking horrified at you. "You can''t trust them with that shit. For fuck''s sake, I mostly take it up the ass and I <i>still</i> don''t trust them not to cum in my pussy. You know what I mean?"'
 			gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 		end
 		
@@ -794,7 +793,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_pill_hassle_condom_ver':
 	act 'Too much hassle':
 		cla & *nl
-		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just easier to put a rubber on the guy''s cock before he fucks me. If the condom breaks, I can just get a morning after pill."'
+		'"Too much hassle," you sigh. "I don''t want to remember to take a pill every day. It''s just easier to put a condom on the guy''s cock before he fucks me. If the condom breaks, I can just get a morning after pill."'
 		'"I guess that''s fair," she concedes. "Just takes one missed day to get knocked up. That''s why I take mine religiously. I set alarms and everything to remind me. You don''t know what you''re missing out on, though. Bareback is the best."'
 		*nl
 		'She grins a slutty grin at you.'
@@ -817,7 +816,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'birth_control_hormones':
 	act 'No hormones':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I don''t want to mess with my body like that," you say while shaking your head. "Birth control hormones stop you from getting pregnant, but they do all other kinds of other stuff to you. I hear horror stories from changing your tastes to sudden weight gain to killing your sex drive. Which sort of defeats the point of getting on the pill in the first place."'
-		'"No periods though," Albina smirks. "But I guess you have a point. Since I started the pill, I get a lot wetter than I used to. But that just made surprise buttsex better. All natural lube.'
+		'"No periods though," she smirks. "But I guess you have a point. Since I started the pill, I get a lot wetter than I used to. But that just made surprise buttsex better. All natural lube.'
 		*nl
 		'She grins a slutty grin at you and you both erupt into laughter.'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
@@ -841,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_toys':
 	gs 'stat'
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/talk/anal_dildo.jpg"></center>'
-	'"My mom is always leaving condoms in my room trying to get me to be safe but I hate fucking with a rubber," Albina rolls her eyes. "If I''m gonna take a cock, I want to feel the cock, you know what I mean? But lately I''ve started using the condoms on my dildos instead. Saves me a lot of clean up, especially when I do anal with them."'
+	'"My mom is always leaving condoms in my room trying to get me to be safe but I hate using them," Albina says while rolls her eyes. "If I''m gonna take a cock, I want to feel the cock, you know what I mean? But lately I''ve started using the condoms on my dildos instead. Saves me a lot of clean up, especially when I do anal with them."'
 	gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 end
 
@@ -914,7 +913,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 		'''I bet her pussy is tighter than a nun''s but her asshole could fit an onion!'' '
 		*nl
 		'"I''ve heard it all, but none of the perverted fucking cowards dare mention them in front of me. I just like anal, okay?! I don''t even know why I''m justifying my sex life to you!"'
-		*nl
 		'You''ve clearly hit a nerve and quickly back off, not wanting to get hit yourself.'
 		gs 'albina_sex_chat', 'sex_talk'
 	end