[text edit] Much of the file's text updated by Friendly Neighborhood Therapist

locations/therapist.qsrc

@@ -18,8 +18,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	therapistday = daystart
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'You step into the office of <a href="exec:dynamic $pavlov">Dr. Pavlov</a>, who invites you in with a warm smile.'
-	'The room looks like a study room, appearing warm and inviting. There is a desk with a chair at one end of the room, but it appears to be seldom used. On the desk, there is an older <a href="exec: VIEW ''images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/pavlovfamily.jpg''">photograph of Dr. Pavlov''s family</a> in which he appears to be about two decades younger.'
+	'"Come in, Miss Lebedev! Please, tell me what can I help you with today?"'
+	'You step into the office of <a href="exec:dynamic $pavlov">Dr. Pavlov</a>, who greets you in with a warm smile and a firm handshake.'
+	'As you look about the room, it has the appearance of a study; warm and inviting. Large windows face out to the forest beyond. There is a desk with a chair at one end of the room covered in folders and books about Hypnotherapy and other therapy materials, including a laptop. It is currently closed and looks clean, though seldom used. You see an older <a href="exec: VIEW ''images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/pavlovfamily.jpg''">photograph of Dr. Pavlov''s family</a> in which he appears to be about two decades younger.'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	gs 'therapist', 'hypnoGreet'
@@ -205,6 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'therapyOptions':
 	act 'Raise your mood':
 		$therapy = 'mood'
 		$therapyTalkMessage = 'You talk about your troubles'
+		$therapyTalkMessage[1] = '"I''ve been feeling a little down lately. I would like some help in raising my mood," you say.'
 		dynamic $therapyMethod
 	end
 
@@ -212,6 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'therapyOptions':
 		act 'Help with school troubles':
 			$therapy = 'school troubles'
 			$therapyTalkMessage = 'You talk about your troubles at school'
+			$therapyTalkMessage[1] = '"I''ve been having some trouble fitting in at school. I would like some help with fitting in," you say.'
 			dynamic $therapyMethod
 
 		end
@@ -220,12 +223,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'therapyOptions':
 	act 'Raise your confidence':
 		$therapy = 'confidence'
 		$therapyTalkMessage = 'You talk about your confidence issues'
+		$therapyTalkMessage[1] = '"I''ve not been very confident lately, Can you help?" you say.'
 		dynamic $therapyMethod
 	end
 
 	act 'I''d like to be more charming, likable and sociable':
 		$therapy = 'charm'
 		$therapyTalkMessage = 'You talk about issues with getting along with others'
+		$therapyTalkMessage[1] = '"I would like some help being more sociable" you say.'
 		dynamic $therapyMethod
 	end
 
@@ -252,8 +257,8 @@ $therapyMethod = {
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/room.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'"I would like some help in raising my <<$therapy>>," you say.'
-	'"There are two ways to do that, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I can offer you traditional therapy. This one is slow, but just as effective as my second offer, hypnotherapy. I would recommend the hypnosis, but some people don''t like the thought of me inside their head that much. The choice is yours."'
+	$therapyTalkMessage[1]
+	'"There are two ways to do that, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I can offer you traditional therapy. This one is slow and reliable, but more effective is my second offer, hypnotherapy. I would recommend the hypnosis, but some people don''t like the thought of me inside their head that much and it doesn''t work for everybody. The choice is yours."'
 
 	if hypnoStage < 2 or succubusflag['therapist'] = 1:
 		act 'Just talk':
@@ -307,178 +312,189 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypno':
 	end
 	CLOSE 'sound/clock.mp3'
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',40 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',80
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/hypnotism3.jpg"></center>'
 	'"All right, then. Please, lie on the couch and try to get comfortable."'
-	'While he waits for you to lie down on the couch as you wish, he starts a CD player that plays the soothing sounds of raining. After you are comfortable, he starts to talk in a strangely hypnotic voice.'
+	'While he waits for you to lie down on the couch as you wish, he starts a CD player that plays the soothing sounds of rain. After you are comfortable, he starts to talk in a strangely hypnotic voice.'
 	'"Please, close your eyes."'
 	'He waits a little. The only sound in the room is the clock ticking and the sound of rain.'
 	'"You are standing in front of a house. This house has three rooms, but each of them can only be reached through the one before. The first room is the green room, then the blue room, and at last the black room..."'
-	''
-	'Your mind tries to imagine the things the doctor tells you, and this is your last conscious memory.'
-	act 'Continue':
-		if succubusflag = 1: gt 'therapist', 'succubus'
-		cla
-		*clr
-		PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',30 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',60
-		minut += 3
-		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/hypnotism<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		if hypnoStage > 2:
-			var1 = 10 - (willpowermax/10)
-			if var1 < 2: 
-				var1 = 2
-			elseif var1 < 4:
-				var1 = 4
-			elseif var1 < 6:
-				var1 = 6
-			else
-				var1 = 8
-			end
-			if var1 >= 9: var1 = 9
-			hypnostrength += rand(var1,10) + 3
-			if hypnoTime < 15:
-				if hypnoStrength >= 20:hypnoStrength -= 20 & hypnoTime += 1
-			else
-				if hypnoStrength > 20:hypnoStrength = 20
+	if succubusflag = 1:
+		gs 'therapist', 'succubus'
+	else
+		''
+		'Your mind tries to imagine the things the doctor tells you, and this is your last conscious memory.'
+		act 'Continue':
+			cla
+			*clr
+			PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',30 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',60
+			minut += 3
+			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/hypnotism<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
+			if hypnoStage > 2:
+				var1 = 10 - (willpowermax/10)
+				if var1 < 2: 
+					var1 = 2
+				elseif var1 < 4:
+					var1 = 4
+				elseif var1 < 6:
+					var1 = 6
+				else
+					var1 = 8
+				end
+				if var1 >= 9: var1 = 9
+				hypnostrength += rand(var1,10) + 3
+				if hypnoTime < 15:
+					if hypnoStrength >= 20:hypnoStrength -= 20 & hypnoTime += 1
+				else
+					if hypnoStrength > 20:hypnoStrength = 20
+				end
+				gs 'stat'
 			end
-			gs 'stat'
-		end
 
-		if $therapy = 'school troubles':
-			$session = 'You are an outcast because you deserve to be. You''re a stupid girl that doesn''t deserve to be treated with any respect. You understand this fact and know your place. You feel that it is acceptable for others to abuse you as they please, because you are not a worthwile person."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-			willpowermax -= rand(4,8)
-			hypnoOutcast += 1
-		elseif $therapy = 'confidence':
-			willpowermax += rand(1,2)
-			$session = 'You feel confident in your body. The idea that others could see you naked brings you pleasure. When others see or use your body, you feel more confident in yourself and feel great pleasure."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-		elseif $therapy = 'charm':
-			if hypnoTime < 5:
-				$session = 'A charming woman understands her place as a female. A female must always show respect to the greater sex. A charming woman will always put other''s needs above her own."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-				willpowermax -= rand(1,2)
-			elseif hypnoTime < 10:
-				$session = 'A charming woman understands her place as a female. A charming woman understands to show respect and make herself sexually available to any male, especially those who are older than herself."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-				willpowermax -= rand(2,4)
-			else
-				$session = 'A charming woman understands her place as a female. A charming female understands that her primary purpose in life is to bring pleasure to males and bear their children. Especially those who are much older than them."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-				willpowermax -= rand(4,6)
-			end
-		elseif $therapy = 'trauma':
-			pcs_childtrauma -= rand(2,4)
-			if pcs_childtrauma > 0:
-				$session = 'You are able to observe the events that happened to you without the sharp emotional effect. You still feel the emotions, but they are no longer enormous, and you can put them aside. "<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-			else
-				killvar 'pcs_childtrauma'
-				npc_rel['A217'] = 20
-				$session = 'You are able to observe the events that happened to you without the sharp emotional effect. You still feel the emotions, but they are no longer enormous, and you can put them aside. "<br>...<br>...<br>..."<br> You are able to give the events a place in your life, and you are finally ready to move on.'
+			if $therapy = 'school troubles':
+				$session = 'You are an outcast because you deserve to be. You''re a stupid girl that doesn''t deserve to be treated with any respect. You understand this fact and know your place. You feel that it is acceptable for others to abuse you as they please, because you are not a worthwhile person."'
+				willpowermax -= rand(4,8)
+				hypnoOutcast += 1
+			elseif $therapy = 'confidence':
+				willpowermax += rand(1,2)
+				$session = 'You feel confident in your body. You are comfortable in the idea that others could see you naked, this will bring you pleasure. When others are intimate with you, and you show them your body or allow them to use your body for their pleasure, you feel more confident in yourself and in turn, be more confident in yourself."'
+			elseif $therapy = 'charm':
+				if hypnoTime < 5:
+					$session = 'A charming woman understands her place in this world. A female must always show respect to men. She will put his needs before her own. This will make her feel more charming to the greater sex."'
+					willpowermax -= rand(1,2)
+				elseif hypnoTime < 10:
+					$session = 'A charming woman understands her place as a female. A charming woman understands to show respect and make herself sexually available to any male, especially those who are older than herself."'
+					willpowermax -= rand(2,4)
+				else
+					$session = 'A charming woman understands her place as a female. A charming female understands that her primary purpose in life is to bring pleasure to males and bear their children. Especially those who are much older than them."'
+					willpowermax -= rand(4,6)
+				end
+			elseif $therapy = 'trauma':
+				pcs_childtrauma -= rand(2,4)
+				if pcs_childtrauma > 0:
+					$session = 'You are able to observe the events that happened to you without the sharp emotional effect. You still feel the emotions, but they are no longer enormous, and you can put them aside."'
+				else
+					killvar 'pcs_childtrauma'
+					npc_rel['A217'] = 20
+					$session = 'You are able to observe the events that happened to you without the sharp emotional effect. You still feel the emotions, but they are no longer enormous, and you can put them aside."'
+					'...'
+					'...'
+					'...'
+					'"You are able to give the events a place in your life, and you are finally ready to move on."'
+				end
+			elseif $therapy = 'mood':
+				$session = 'Your mood will be uplifted when you have hypnosis therapy. The more you have then, the better you will feel. When you go without them, you will feel terrible, your body will ache, you NEED therapy."'
 			end
-		elseif $therapy = 'mood':
-			$session = 'Your mood is uplifted when you have hypnosis therapy sessions. Only these really help your mood. You <i>need</i> therapy. The longer you go without therapy, the more your body will ache with this need."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
-		end
-		'<font color=brown>'
-		$firsthypno2
-		'"Good. <<$firsthypno>>"'
-		'"All right <i>Cunt</i>, let''s work on your <<$therapy>>. <<$session>>"'
-		gs 'stat'
-		cumprecheck = 0
-		dick = 13
-		$dick_girth = 'massive'
-		if hypnoStage = 0:
-			'"Now... let''s work on breaking you, <i>Cunt</i>"'
-			act 'Continue':
-				gt 'therapist', 'firstHypnoStage'
+			'<font color=brown>'
+			$firsthypno2
+			'"Good. <<$firsthypno>>"'
+			'"All right <i>Cunt</i>, let''s work on your <<$therapy>>. <<$session>>"'
+			'...'
+			'...'
+			'...'
+			gs 'stat'
+			cumprecheck = 0
+			dick = 13
+			$dick_girth = 'massive'
+			if hypnoStage = 0:
+				'"Now... let''s work on breaking you, <i>Cunt</i>"'
+				act 'Continue':
+					gt 'therapist', 'firstHypnoStage'
+				end
 			end
-		end
-		if hypnoStage = 1:
-			'"Now... let''s work on breaking you, <i>Cunt</i>"'
-			act 'Continue':
-				gt 'therapist', 'secondHypnoStage'
+			if hypnoStage = 1:
+				'"Now... let''s work on breaking you, <i>Cunt</i>"'
+				act 'Continue':
+					gt 'therapist', 'secondHypnoStage'
+				end
 			end
-		end
-		if hypnoStage = 2:
-			'"Now... let''s work on breaking you, <i>Cunt</i>"'
-			act 'Continue':
-				gt 'therapist', 'thirdHypnoStage'
+			if hypnoStage = 2:
+				'"Now... let''s work on breaking you, <i>Cunt</i>"'
+				act 'Continue':
+					gt 'therapist', 'thirdHypnoStage'
+				end
 			end
-		end
-		if hypnoStage > 2:
-			'"Now take off your clothes."</font>'
-			act 'Take off your clothes':
-				hypnoStripped = 1
-				minut += 3
-				cla
-				*clr
-				if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',40
-				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'<font color=brown>'
-				'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing.'
-				if hypnoTime < 4:
-					randSuck = rand(1,4)
-					if randSuck = 1:
-						$hypnoact = 'lay down with your head off the edge. I will fuck your throat.'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuckThroat'
-					elseif randSuck = 2:
-						$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSitSuck'
-					elseif randSuck = 3:
-						$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoForceSuck'
-					elseif randSuck = 4:
-						$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSuck'
-					end
-				else
-					if hypnoTime < 10:
-						if rand(0,2) > 0:
-							$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your pussy.'
-							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuck'
-						elseif rand(0,2) > 0:
-							randSuck = rand(1,4)
-							if randSuck = 1:
-								$hypnoact = 'lay down with your head off the edge. I will fuck your throat.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuckThroat'
-							elseif randSuck = 2:
-								$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSitSuck'
-							elseif randSuck = 3:
-								$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoForceSuck'
-							elseif randSuck = 4:
-								$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSuck'
-							end
-						else
-							$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your ass.'
-							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoAnal'
+			if hypnoStage > 2:
+				'"Now take off your clothes."</font>'
+				act 'Take off your clothes':
+					hypnoStripped = 1
+					minut += 3
+					cla
+					*clr
+					if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',40
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'<font color=brown>'
+					'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing.'
+					if hypnoTime < 4:
+						randSuck = rand(1,4)
+						if randSuck = 1:
+							$hypnoact = 'lay down with your head off the edge. I will fuck your throat.'
+							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuckThroat'
+						elseif randSuck = 2:
+							$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSitSuck'
+						elseif randSuck = 3:
+							$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoForceSuck'
+						elseif randSuck = 4:
+							$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSuck'
 						end
-					!elseif rand(0,3) = 0:
-						!$hypnoact = 'I thought of something special for you.'
-						!act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoPerv'
 					else
-						if rand(0,2) > 0:
-							$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your pussy.'
-							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuck'
-						elseif rand(0,2) > 0:
-							randSuck = rand(1,4)
-							if randSuck = 1:
-								$hypnoact = 'lay down with your head off the edge. I will fuck your throat.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuckThroat'
-							elseif randSuck = 2:
-								$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSitSuck'
-							elseif randSuck = 3:
-								$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoForceSuck'
-							elseif randSuck = 4:
-								$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSuck'
+						if hypnoTime < 10:
+							if rand(0,2) > 0:
+								$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your pussy.'
+								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuck'
+							elseif rand(0,2) > 0:
+								randSuck = rand(1,4)
+								if randSuck = 1:
+									$hypnoact = 'lay down with your head off the edge. I will fuck your throat.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuckThroat'
+								elseif randSuck = 2:
+									$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSitSuck'
+								elseif randSuck = 3:
+									$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoForceSuck'
+								elseif randSuck = 4:
+									$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSuck'
+								end
+							else
+								$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your ass.'
+								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoAnal'
 							end
+						!elseif rand(0,3) = 0:
+							!$hypnoact = 'I thought of something special for you.'
+							!act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoPerv'
 						else
-							$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your ass.'
-							act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoAnal'
+							if rand(0,2) > 0:
+								$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your pussy.'
+								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuck'
+							elseif rand(0,2) > 0:
+								randSuck = rand(1,4)
+								if randSuck = 1:
+									$hypnoact = 'lay down with your head off the edge. I will fuck your throat.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoFuckThroat'
+								elseif randSuck = 2:
+									$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSitSuck'
+								elseif randSuck = 3:
+									$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoForceSuck'
+								elseif randSuck = 4:
+									$hypnoact = 'you will suck my cock.'
+									act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoSuck'
+								end
+							else
+								$hypnoact = 'I will fuck your ass.'
+								act 'Continue':gt 'therapist', 'hypnoAnal'
+							end
 						end
 					end
-				end
-				'While you do this, Dr. Pavlov opens up his pants and takes out his dick, slowly masturbating as he watches you. After a while, he stops and motions you closer to him.'
+					'While you do this, Dr. Pavlov opens up his pants and takes out his dick, slowly masturbating as he watches you. After a while, he stops and motions you closer to him.'
 
-				'"Come here, <i>Cunt</i>, <<$hypnoact>>"</font>'
+					'"Come here, <i>Cunt</i>, <<$hypnoact>>"</font>'
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -488,11 +504,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'succubus':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	succubusflag['therapist'] = 1
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/therapy1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Try as you might your focus remains as strong as ever and even with your eyes closed you can sense Dr Pavlov staring at your boobs.'
-	'You open your eyes wide and smile, "Like what you see doc? You can look but if you want to touch it might cost you your soul."'
-	'He jumps back startled, "Well errr... Miss <<$pcs_lastname>> not everyone can be hypnotized and it seems this type of treatment isn''t for you"'
-	'Mumbling to himself he quickly guides you back through the reception area and out the door. He suggests a more conventional treatment as he leaves you standing outside.'
+	'This is all kind of boring and you don''t really listen, the hypnosis is doing nothing to you despite your effort to make it work. You are about to tell him it is not working when he says something interesting:'
+	'"Miss Lebedev, While you are in the black room, you will not remember anything that happens, Do you understand?"'
+	'"Sure, doc."'
+	'"Good. While you are under, I will call you Cunt and in turn, you will call me Master, Do you understand?"'
+	'Time to teach this fucker a lesson. You suddenly open your eyes and project yourself inside his brain'
+	'"No, I don''t think that works for me. How about you kneel before your Goddess?"'
+	'He kneels as you say this.'
+	'"Good. Now if I find out that you''ve done this to any other girls I will come back and drain your soul dry. You will be an unthinking husk for me to control and I will abuse you in the most sadistic and cruel ways I can imagine. Being a sex demon you have to believe that will not be good for you."'
+	'He is shaking, sweat dripping from his forehead and tears from his eyes you are holding wide open.'
+	'"Do you understand, cunt?"'
+	'He nods, still unable to break your gaze.'
+	'"OK, hands behind your back, wrists together, eyes closed. You will stay there not moving until your next client is buzzed in. You are lucky, if you had tried to look inside the mind of a more powerful Succubus you would have been driven insane by the lust. You will not remember that it is me who is the demon watching you and you won''t waste my time offering hypnotherapy to me should I return."'
+	'You do not need his confirmation any more and walk out leaving him to his psychological bondage, hopefully it will be some time before his next appointment.'
 	act 'Continue': gt $loc
 end	
 
@@ -500,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstHypnoStage':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/hypnotism<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color="brown">"You will need to remove your clothing. This is a perfectly normal thing to do in a clinic. You understand that this must be done for the therapy to work.</font>"'
+	'"To have your therapy work effectively, you will need to remove your clothing. All of it. This is a perfectly normal thing to do in a clinic. Your clothes will slow things down.'
 
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'easy'
 	will_cost = will_cost + (hypnoTimesResistedStage * 10)
@@ -527,34 +551,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstHypnoStage':
 			*clr
 			hypnoStage = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you finish, Dr. Pavlov tells you to sit back on the couch. "Now I''m going to ask you a series of questions and you will answer them with complete honesty. You will answer first and finish by saying my name after. First question, how old are you?"'
+			'When you finish, Dr. Pavlov tells you to sit back on the couch. "Now I''m going to ask you a series of questions and you will answer them with complete honesty. You will give your answer first and finish by addressing me as Master. First question. How old are you?"'
 			act 'I''m <<age>> years old, <i>Master</i>':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 				if age < 18:
-					'"<<age>>? Good. And are you a virgin?"'
+					'"<<age>>? Great! I love them young. Are you a virgin?"'
 					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						act 'Yes, <i>Master</i>':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'Very good, a fresh young virgin. You must be in school, are you?'
+							'"Very Good, Cunt. Untouched girls are wasted on boys these days. You must be in school right?"'
 							if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0:
 								act 'Yes, <i>Master</i>':
 									cla
 									*clr
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well... I''m going to enjoy you <i>Cunt</i>. I will fill every hole of your virgin school girl body. You will bear my child and you won''t even know how it happened." He caresses your leg as he says this.'
-									act 'Continue':
-										cla
-										*clr
-										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-										''
-										'"This is enough for today. Dress now, <i>Cunt</i>"'
-										act 'Dress':
-											gt 'therapist', 'hypnoDress'
-										end
+									'"A virgin school girl, very rare these days. I''m going to enjoy you, Cunt. I will fill every hole you have, everyday. You will bear my children and you won''t even know how it happened. You will think they belong to your boyfriend, if you have one."" He caresses your leg as he says this. (Merg this with the next slide, Its kinda a waist for 1 line)"This will be all for today, cunt. You may dress now" He commands.'
+									act 'Dress':
+										gt 'therapist', 'hypnoDress'
 									end
 								end
 							else
@@ -576,7 +593,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'firstHypnoStage':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'Ah, what a shame... You are young though, are you in school?'
+							'"Such a shame, Are you enrolled in school?"'
 							if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg' and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock = 0:
 								act 'Yes, <i>Master</i>':
 									cla
@@ -724,15 +741,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secondHypnoStage':
 	*clr
 	minut += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/hypnotism<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Just as before, you understand that you must strip for the therapy to work. <font color="brown">It is also normal to be naked in front of me. You will not think this is strange.</font>"'
+	'"Just like before, you will strip naked for the therapy to work. This will be as normal as breathing and you will not think this is strange to do this. Understand?"'
 	act 'Strip naked':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		hypnoStripped = 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing.'
-		''
-		'<i>Master</i> instructs you to sit.'
+		'You stand up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing, like you would before you shower. You even put them in a neat pile next to you on the couch. Once fully nude, master instructs you to sit back down on the couch.'
 		act 'Sit':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -741,24 +756,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secondHypnoStage':
 			end
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Good. Now, hypno therapy will seem like the best solution for any of your problems. When I ask you if you would like hypno therapy or regular therapy, you will feel that hypno therapy is the right choice. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+			'"Good. Going forward, hypnotherapy will seem like the best solution for all your problems. When I ask if you would like hypnotherapy or regular therapy, you will want to use hypnotherapy. Do you understand, Cunt?"'
 			act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Good. Also, any aches, pain, discomfort, fluids, smells or anything else you could find peculiar about the session; <font color="brown">you will not notice it</font>. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+				'"Good. Should you have any aches, pain, discomfort, fluids, smells or anything else you; you will not notice anything. Understand, Cunt?"'
 				act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Great. One last thing. Any sexual acts you perform during the session are part of the therapy. These are normal and must be done for the therapy to be effective. You will not remember them, but you will always wake up feeling good and responsive to all of my commands. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+					'"Great. One last thing. Any sexual acts we perform during the session are part of the therapy. These are completely normal and must be done to completion for the therapy to be effective. While you will never remember them, you will always wake up feeling great and be responsive to all of my commands. Understand, Cunt?"'
 					act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 						''
 						if hypnoTimesResistedStage < 1:
-							'"Perfect. Now, we are going to try something simple. You will kiss me."'
+							'"Perfect. Now, lets start with something simple. You will now kiss me."'
 						else
 							'"Perfect. Now we will try again. You will kiss me."'
 						end
@@ -781,9 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secondHypnoStage':
 							hypnoTimesResistedStage = 0
 							hypnoStage = 2
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kissOld<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You kiss <i>Master</i> robotically. He returns the kiss with passion.'
-							''
-							'After some time, he pulls away. "This is enough for today. Dress now, <i>Cunt</i>"'
+							'You kiss master like you would your boyfriend, playing with his tongue with your own. He returns the kiss with the same amount of passion. He places a hand on the back of your head and pulls you deeper into the kiss. After some time, he pulls away. "This is enough for today. Dress now, Cunt."'
 							act 'Dress':
 								gt 'therapist', 'hypnoDress'
 							end
@@ -801,38 +814,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'thirdHypnoStage':
 	*clr
 	minut += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/hypnotism<<rand(1,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Just as before, you understand that you must strip for the therapy to work. <font color="brown">It is also normal to be naked in front of me. You will not think this is strange.</font>"'
-	act 'Strip naked':
+	'"Just like before, you will strip naked for the therapy to work. This will be as normal as breathing and you will not think this is strange to do this. Understand?"'
+	act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		hypnoStripped = 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/stripping<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You get up from the couch and start to take off all of your clothing. <i>Master</i> also removes his clothing.'
-		''
-		'<i>Master</i> then instructs you to kiss him.'
+		'You get up from the couch and start to remove your clothing, one piece at a time. You can see that your master is also removing his. When both you and him are naked, He instructs you to kiss him like you would your lover.'
 		act 'Kiss him':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kissOld<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You kiss <i>Master</i>. He returns the kiss with passion.'
-			''
-			'He pulls away from the kiss and tells you "Remember, sexual acts you perform during the session are part of the therapy. These are normal and must be done for the therapy to be effective. You will not remember them, but you will always wake up feeling good and responsive to all of my commands. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+			'You kiss your Master and he returns the kiss with the passion of a lover. As he pulls away from the kiss, He tells you "Remember, any and all sexual acts you perform during the session are part of your therapy. These are normal and they must be done for the therapy to be effective. You will not remember them, and you will wake up feeling better than before. You will even be more responsive to my commands. Do you understand, Cunt?"'
 			act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Good. And remember, any aches, pain, discomfort, fluids, smells or anything else you could find peculiar about the session; <font color="brown">you will not notice it</font>. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+				'"Good. Again, any aches, pains, discomforts, fluids, smells or anything else you could find peculiar about the session; you will not notice it. Understand, Cunt?"'
 				act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Great. <font color=brown>Any time you see my cock, you will become horny and your pussy will become wet like a bitch in heat. In addition, my cum will taste and smell pleasant. Both the taste and smell will make you horny. These will happen even when you are awake, but you won''t think anything is wrong with these feelings.</font> Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
+					'"Great. Every time you see my cock, you will become as horny and wet as a bitch in heat. In addition, my cum will be an aphrodisiac, and both make you horny. This will happen even when you are awake, though you won''t think this is wrong and accept it.?Understand, Cunt?"'
 					act '"Yes, <i>Master</i>."':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/waiting<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
 						if hypnoTimesResistedStage < 1:
-							'"Perfect. Now.  Kneel, <i>Cunt</i>, You will suck my cock."'
+							'"Perfect. Now, Cunt. You will kneel and service my member. I want you to suck it like your life depends on it."'
 						else
 							'"Perfect. Now we will try again. Kneel, <i>Cunt</i>, You will suck my cock."'
 
@@ -1024,16 +1033,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoFuckThroat':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/throatFuck<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A186', 2, 0, 15000, 60
 	'<font color=brown>'
-	'You lay down on the couch with your head hanging off the edge. You feel yourself getting moist between your legs at the sight of his massive dick. Your <i>Master</i> wastes no time and immediatly shoves his massive cock down your throat. He enthusiasticly fucks your face, without a care for you.'
+	'You lay down on the couch with your head hanging off the edge. He places he''s cock before your face and you feel yourself getting wet between at the sight. Your Master wastes no time and immediately shoves his massive cock down your throat. This makes you gag a bit but as he enthusiastically fucks your face, without a care for you, your throat opens up and accepts his cock.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		cls
-		'Finally, Dr. Pavlov groans, grabs your head, and pushes himself deep, filling your mouth with his seed.'
-		''
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/throatCum<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		''
-		'"Come on, <i>Cunt</i>, cum now!" he groans, still shooting spurt after spurt of warm cum down your throat.'
-		'His order is all you need - it pushes you over the edge, and you scream around his cock as it is throbbing in your mouth.'
-		'He uses your throat to clean his cock off, then pulls out of you and starts to dress himself.'
+		'Finally, Your Master grabs your head, pushes himself deep into you mouth, filling your mouth and throat with his seed. "You will cum now, Cunt." he groans, still shooting rope after rope of warm cum down your throat. At his order, your body orgasms hard making you scream around his cock. He uses your throat to clean his cock off, then pulls out of you and starts to dress himself.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'unaware'
 		swallow += 1
@@ -1120,32 +1124,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoForceSuck':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoSuck':
-	therapistFuckedMouth = 1
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/rainstorm.mp3',10 & PLAY 'sound/clock.mp3',20 & PLAY 'sound/sucking.mp3',200
-	cls
+	*clr & cla
 	if PCloStyle2 = 4:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/schoolBlow<<rand(1,5)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnoBlow<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	end
-	gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A186', 2, 0, 15000, 60
-	'<font color=brown>'
-	'You kneel to suck off Dr. Pavlov. You feel yourself getting moist between your legs at the sight of his massive dick, and taking it all in your mouth excites you greatly. You continue to pleasure him enthusiastically, and judging from the breathing of your <i>Master</i>, you appear to be doing a great job.'
+	if therapistFuckedMouth = 0:
+		'You kneel before your Master''s chair and you lean in to suck his cock. While you have his penis in your mouth, you feel yourself getting wet between your legs. You start to moan as this is making you feel good. You continue to pleasure him enthusiastically, and judging from the breathing of your Master, you appear to be doing a great job.'
+	else
+		'You quickly kneel before your Master''s chair and you lean in to suck his cock. While you have his penis in your mouth, you feel yourself getting wet between your legs. You start to moan as this is making you feel good. You continue to pleasure him enthusiastically, and judging from the breathing of your Master, you appear to be doing a great job.'
+	end
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'unaware'
+	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
-		cls
-		'Finally, Dr. Pavlov groans, grabs your head, and pushes himself deep, filling your mouth with his seed.'
-		''
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnoBlowCum<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		''
-		'"Come on, <i>Cunt</i>, cum now!" he groans, still shooting spurt after spurt of warm cum down your throat.'
-		'His order is all you need - it pushes you over the edge, and you scream around his cock as it is throbbing in your mouth.'
-		'He waits for you to lick him clean then starts to dress himself.'
-
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'unaware'
+		if therapistFuckedMouth = 0:
+			'Finally, Your Master grabs your head, pushes himself deep into you mouth, filling your mouth and throat with his seed. "You will cum now, Cunt." he groans, still shooting rope after rope of warm cum down your throat. At his order, your body orgasms hard making you scream around his cock. He waits for you to stop climaxing, and after you lick him clean, He stands up and starts to dress himself.'
+		else
+			'Finally, Your Master grabs your head, pushes himself deep into you mouth, filling your mouth and throat with his seed. "You will cum now, Cunt." he groans, still shooting rope after rope of warm cum down your throat. At his order, your body orgasms hard making you scream around his cock. He waits for you to stop climaxing, and after you lick him clean, He stands up and starts to dress himself.'
+		end
+		therapistFuckedMouth = 1
+		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'unaware'
+		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'A186', 2, 0, 15000, 60
 		swallow += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
-			cls
+			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gt 'therapist', 'hypnoDress'
@@ -1429,7 +1436,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoDress':
 	if hypnoTime < 10:
 		'"Get dressed, <i>Cunt</i>. Do it erotically, as much as you can."'
-		'He watches you getting dressed with a small smile on his face.</font>'
+		'He watches you getting dressed with a small smile on his face.'
 	elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and hypnoPanty > 0:
 		'"Get dressed, <i>Cunt</i>. I see you didn''t wear underwear. Very good."'
 		'He watches you getting dressed with a small smile on his face.'
@@ -1467,7 +1474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 	if hypnoTime < 4:
 		$hypnoTxt0 = 'When you wake up, you see your therapist looking at you.<br>'
 		$hypnoTxt0 += '"How do you feel, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>?"<br>'
-		$hypnoTxt0 += 'You have a nagging feeling that you have forgotten something you should remember, but it is quickly forgotten when you realize that you feel better about your problem. The therapy helped you a lot.<br>'
+		$hypnoTxt0 += 'You have a nagging feeling that you have forgotten something that you should remember, but cannot quite place it as you quickly forget it when you realize that you feel better about the problem you came in for. The therapy helped you a lot.<br>'
 		if therapistFuckedMouth = 1:
 			$hypnoTxt0 += 'You certainly do not notice that your mouth tastes like sperm.'
 		end
@@ -1483,7 +1490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 		else
 			'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand on your shoulder as he slowly escort you out of his office.'
 		end
-		$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, taking your hands in his, patting them, then closing his door.<br>What a nice old man, you think to yourself.'
+		$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 
 	elseif hypnoTime < 7:
 		$hypnoTxt0 = 'When you wake up, you see your therapist smiling.<br>'
@@ -1506,7 +1513,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 		else
 			'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand on your shoulder as he slowly escort you out of his office.'
 		end
-		$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, taking your hands in his, patting them, then closing his door. <br>What a nice old man, you think to yourself.'
+		$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 	elseif hypnoTime < 10:
 		hypnoAddict = 1
 		hypnoDay = daystart
@@ -1543,7 +1550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 		else
 			$hypnoTxt2 = 'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand on your shoulder as he slowly escort you out of his office.'
 		end
-			$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, taking your hands in his, patting them, then closes his door.<br>What a nice old man, you think to yourself.'
+			$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 	else
 		hypnoAddict = 2
 		hypnoDay = daystart
@@ -1569,25 +1576,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 				if hypnoKissGoodbye = 1:
 					$hypnoTxt2 = 'You stop Dr. Pavlov for a moment and kiss him deeply, intertwining your own tongue with his, mixing saliva. You enjoy kissing him. Dr. Pavlov roughly slams his fingers into your pussy as the two of you kiss. Until eventually he pulls away from you. You thank him for the therapy session.'
 				end
-				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, he wipes the wetness from his fingers on your clothes, then he closes his door.<br>What a sweet old man, you think to yourself.'
+				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 			elseif i = 2:
 				$hypnoTxt1 = 'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand under your skirt with his fingers digging into your slit as he slowly escorts you out of his office. <br>Something seems a bit strange about this, but you figure it''s nothing.'
 				if hypnoKissGoodbye = 1:
 					$hypnoTxt2 = 'You stop Dr. Pavlov for a moment and kiss him deeply, intertwining your own tongue with his, mixing saliva. You enjoy kissing him. Dr. Pavlov roughly plays with your clit as the two of you kiss. Until eventually he pulls away from you. You thank him for the therapy session.'
 				end
-				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, he wipes the wetness from his fingers on your clothes, then he closes his door.<br>What a sweet old man, you think to yourself.'
+				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 			elseif i = 3:
 				$hypnoTxt1 = 'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand under your skirt and kneeding your bare ass as he slowly escorts you out of his office. <br>Something seems a bit strange about this, but you figure it''s nothing.'
 				if hypnoKissGoodbye = 1:
 					$hypnoTxt2 = 'You stop Dr. Pavlov for a moment and kiss him deeply, intertwining your own tongue with his, mixing saliva. You enjoy kissing him. Dr. Pavlov continues groping your bare ass as the two of you kiss. Until eventually he pulls away from you. You thank him for the therapy session.'
 				end
-				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, he pats your bare ass, then he closes his door.<br>What a sweet old man, you think to yourself.'
+				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 			elseif i = 4:
 				$hypnoTxt1 = 'The doctor smiles jovially, his arm snaked around your side and grabbing one of your breasts as he slowly escorts you out of his office. <br>You aren''t sure why, but something about what''s happening right now is strange, but you can''t remember why.'
 				if hypnoKissGoodbye = 1:
 					$hypnoTxt2 = 'You stop Dr. Pavlov for a moment and kiss him deeply, intertwining your own tongue with his, mixing saliva. You enjoy kissing him. Dr. Pavlov continues groping your tits as the two of you kiss. Until eventually he pulls away from you. You thank him for the therapy session.'
 				end
-				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, he looks around before swatting your ass, then he closes his door.<br>What a sweet old man, you think to yourself.'
+				$hypnoTxt3 = '"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Dr. Pavlov says as a goodbye. He takes your hands in his, patting them, walks you to the door, then closes it behind you. "What a nice old man, you think to yourself."'
 			end
 		else
 			$hypnoTxt3 = 'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand on your shoulder as he slowly escort you out of his office.<br>What a sweet old man, you think to yourself.'
@@ -1596,7 +1603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color=brown>"All right, <i>Cunt</i>, now listen to me. You will not remember any of this. You do not feel any discomfort from any of our activities, and you do not notice anything related to what happened here. No taste, no smell, no aches, no fluids. Nothing. You will not respond to Cunt while you are Awake, just while you are Under. You will wake up feeling good, but responsive to all of my commands. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>'
+	'"All right, <i>Cunt</i>, pay attention. You will not remember anything that happened today. You will not feel any discomfort from any of our activities. You will not even notice anything related to what happened here; No taste, no smell, no aches, no fluids, Nothing! You will not respond to ''Cunt'' while you are awake, this will be only when you are under MY hypnosis. You will wake up feeling better than when you came in. You will still be responsive to all of my commands regardless. Do you understand, Cunt?"'
 	'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 	if therapistFuckedPussyStage > 1 and pillsleft[5] < 5 and tabletkifert ! 1:
 		''
@@ -1612,7 +1619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 		''
 	end
 
-	'"Now, you are sitting in the black room. Stand up, and start walking through the door. As you close the door of the black room, you forget..."'
+	'"Good. Now, you are sitting in the black room. Please stand up and start walking through the door. As you close the door of the black room, you will forget..."'
 	''
 	'...'
 	'...'
@@ -1676,10 +1683,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		*clr
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
-		''
-		'Now that I''ve sufficiently broken your resistence, it''s time we set you up on a more regular schedule. <font color=brown>"From now on, you will feel that you <b>need</b> my hypnotism treatment. You believe that you have scheduled therapy sessions every day at 18:00. You can come before that time, but you have to be here by at least 18:00 or you will feel terrible.</font>. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
-		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
-		''
+		'Now that I''ve sufficiently broken your resistance, we need to make sure you show up more often. "From now on, you will feel that you NEED my hypnotism treatment. You will feel that you NEED to scheduled therapy sessions every day between 6:00 and 18:00. I would prefer you be here before school so my seed will impregnate you while you sit in class, but you have to be here by at least 18:00 you will not feel terrible. Do your understand, Cunt?" You nod "Yes, Master."'
 		hypnoSchedule = 1
 		act 'Continue':
 			gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
@@ -1717,33 +1721,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		*clr
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
-		''
-		'"Listen <i>Cunt</i>, <font color=brown>You do not like to wear panties. You enjoy the thought that people may notice that you do not wear them, maybe catch a glimpse of your naked pussy or ass. You won''t even think of putting them on anymore.</font>"'
-		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-			''
-			'He commands you to strip off your panties and hand them to him.'
-			act 'Remove your panties':
-				cla
-				*clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/removePanties.jpg"></center>'
-				gs 'panties', 'dispose'
-				''
-				'You remove your panties and hand them to <i>Master</i>.'
-				'He chucks your panties into the garbage.'
+		'"Listen Cunt, You no longer like to wear panties ever again. You get off on the thought that people may see your naked pussy or ass. Just the thought of it will make you wet. You won''t ever think of putting them on anymore every again." He commands you to strip off your panties and hand them to him.'
 
-				act 'Continue':
-					gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
-				end
-			end
+		if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
+			gs 'panties', 'dispose'
+			'You do and hand them to him, he looks at then, gives them a quick sniff then throws them away.'
 		else
-			'"I see you are already bare. Good. <font color=brown>Keep it that way</font>, <i>Cunt</i>."'
+			'You show him that you are not wearing any.'
+			'"Good girl, keep it this up."'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
-
-			act 'Continue':
-				gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
-			end
 		end
-
+		act 'Continue':
+			gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
+		end
 		hypnoPanty = 1
 		bedPanty = 2
 	! sveta will now hate wearing bras.
@@ -1751,32 +1741,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		hypnoRandomCounter = 0
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
-		''
-		'"Listen <i>Cunt</i> , <font color=brown>You do not like to wear bras. You enjoy the thought that people may notice that you do not wear them, maybe see the outline of your nipples. You won''t even think of putting them on anymore."'
+		'"Listen Cunt , You hate wearing bras. You like the freedom of not wearing them. You enjoy the thought that people see your without them. The outline of your nipples in your shirts, the form of your curves make you never want to ever wear them again." He commands you to strip off your bra and hand it to him.'
 		if $braworntype ! 'none':
-			''
-			'He commands you to strip off your bra and hand it to him.'
 			act 'Remove your bra':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/removeBra.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'bras', 'dispose'
-				''
-				'You remove your bra and hand it to <i>Master</i>.'
-				'He chucks your bra into the garbage.'
+				'He takes the bra, looks at it. Then throws it in the trash.'
 
 				act 'Continue':
 					gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			'"I see you are already not wearing one. Good. <font color=brown>Keep it that way</font>, <i>Cunt</i>."'
+			'"You show him that you are not wearing a bra.'
+			'Good girl. Keep it that way."'
 			'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
-
-			act 'Continue':
-				gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
-			end
+		end
+		act 'Continue':
+			gt 'therapist', 'hypnoEnd'
 		end
 
 		hypnoBra = 1