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[text edit] typos fixed by colwyvern

Kevin_Smarts 2 years ago
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+ 2 - 2
locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -1003,14 +1003,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 	elseif cumVol = 4:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, sometimes even hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'As <<$bName>> shoots his load, you can feel a wamth spread inside you...'
+			'As <<$bName>> shoots his load, you can feel a warmth spread inside you...'
 		else
 			'As he shoots his load, you can feel a warmth spread inside you...'
 		end
 		'He pulls out and his cum squirts out of your gaping hole.'
 	elseif cumVol >= 5:
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'<<$bName>>''s <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, with each thrust forcfully hitting your intestinal walls.'
+			'<<$bName>>''s <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, with each thrust forcefully hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		else
 			'The customer''s <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, with each thrust forcefully hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		end

+ 8 - 8
locations/act_extras1.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 			act'Next shot':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/extra/cadaver/2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Filming ccontinues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
+				'Filming continues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
 				act'Next shot':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/extra/cadaver/3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 						castability += 1
 						'With the discomfort of their fingers pulling up your eyelid and the movement of the camera, you can''t help but blink or twitch your eye, ruining the take. You have to do several additional takes before you manage to get your natural instincts under control and stare lifeless into the camera and finally get an acceptable shot.'
 					else
-						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dialation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
+						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dilation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
 					end
 					act'Next shot':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -172,24 +172,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	if $acting['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the locker room when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $acting['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $acting['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		if pcs_perform < 20:
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You actually react to the signal a little bit late and your bra drops after all the other girls have revealed their own breasts. Luckily, no one else seemed to really notice and the shot is accepted without a second take.'
 		else
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You cheer on the director''s signal perfectly, your hands going up with all the other girls and your breasts being shown right on cue. You''re not sure if anybody is going to praise you for it, but it still feels good to get it right on the first try.'
 		end
@@ -241,11 +241,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'student1':
 	!! IMAGE HERE
-	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don’’t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
+	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don''t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
 
 	'Finally, a beautiful assistant director comes over to you to place all you extras on your marks. The set has been built like a classroom, reminding you of your bygone high school days. You wonder what show or film they''re shooting.'
 
-	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You’’re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
+	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You''re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
 
 	'"Yes." You reply dutifully.'
 

+ 8 - 8
locations/act_extras3.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 			act'Next shot':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/misc/cadaver/2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Filming ccontinues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
+				'Filming continues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
 				act'Next shot':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/misc/cadaver/3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 						castability += 1
 						'With the discomfort of their fingers pulling up your eyelid and the movement of the camera, you can''t help but blink or twitch your eye, ruining the take. You have to do several additional takes before you manage to get your natural instincts under control and stare lifeless into the camera and finally get an acceptable shot.'
 					else
-						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dialation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
+						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dilation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
 					end
 					act'Next shot':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -172,24 +172,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	if $role = 'Modest Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the locker room when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $role = 'Underwear Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $role = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		if pcs_perform < 20:
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You actually react to the signal a little bit late and your bra drops after all the other girls have revealed their own breasts. Luckily, no one else seemed to really notice and the shot is accepted without a second take.'
 		else
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You cheer on the director''s signal perfectly, your hands going up with all the other girls and your breasts being shown right on cue. You''re not sure if anybody is going to praise you for it, but it still feels good to get it right on the first try.'
 		end
@@ -241,11 +241,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'student1':
 	!! IMAGE HERE
-	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don’’t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
+	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don''t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
 
 	'Finally, a beautiful assistant director comes over to you to place all you extras on your marks. The set has been built like a classroom, reminding you of your bygone high school days. You wonder what show or film they''re shooting.'
 
-	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You’’re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
+	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You''re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
 
 	'"Yes." You reply dutifully.'
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/act_main1.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude3':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude/3_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'"Shit. Well, if I can help at all, you''ll let me know right? Cause you like me, don''t you?"'
 		'You snicker back at Vitaly and reach down to take a big grab of his ass.'
-		'"Oh please, you know I only like you for your sweet fuckable ass." The line is delivered with clear sarcasm to show you''re just teasing, but also avoids the implied quesiton the character was really asking about. "Anyways, I gotta go. I have to pick up my sister from school," you say, getting up to end the scene.'
+		'"Oh please, you know I only like you for your sweet fuckable ass." The line is delivered with clear sarcasm to show you''re just teasing, but also avoids the implied question the character was really asking about. "Anyways, I gotta go. I have to pick up my sister from school," you say, getting up to end the scene.'
 		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
@@ -297,10 +297,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 			'He''s not actually licking your pussy but you can feel his breath on your clit and it''s <i>very</i> irritating. Your hand didn''t go down because you were acting, you were trying to stop from squirming too much and ruin the shot. It''s like something tickling your face during a haircut. You just want to stop and scratch the itch but now isn''t the time or place.'
 		else
 			gs'arousal','cuni',10
-			'Even while you were filming the close up shot, this extra has been steadily licking your pussy and for fuck''s sake he''s really good at it and it''s fucking distracting! When your hand went down to grab the sheets earlier, that wasn''t acting, that was an unvoluntary reaction. But you guess that''s kind of the whole point of this scene isn''t it?'
-		end
-		'Someone calls out the next line of what the person on the other end of the phone is supposed to be saying.'
-		'"Misha, it''s Yulya, she says she''s not feeling great."'
+			'Even while you were filming the close up shot, this extra has been steadily licking your pussy and for fuck''s sake he''s really good at it and it''s f***ing distracting! When your hand went down to grab the sheets earlier, that wasn''t acting, that was an involuntary reaction. But you guess that''s kind of the whole point of this scene isn''t it?'
+ 		end
+ 		'Someone calls out the next line of what the person on the other end of the phone is supposed to be saying.'
+ 		'"Misha, it''s Yulya, she says she''s not feeling great."'
 		'"No no no no no, don''t put Misha on..."'
 		'A different person on set calls out the next line.'
 		'"You can''t make the lunch shift?'
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex5':
 				'You groan hard, trying to imagine what it might feel like for a big cock to suddenly thrust itself inside you and use that image to fuel the reaction you''re trying to emote.'
 			end
 			'"Ugh! Ugh! What? That''s what you''re after? We just went for drinks at the bar the other night! Besides, when have you ever cared about anything other than pussy?"'
-			'"That doesn''t count and you know it Yulya. We fucked in the bathroom that night too unlesss you were too drunk to remember it."'
+			'"That doesn''t count and you know it Yulya. We fucked in the bathroom that night too unless you were too drunk to remember it."'
 			'"Oh for fuck''s sake! Just hurry up and cum already, I can''t deal with this today."'
 			'The argument continues until Vitaly "cums" and you get dressed and leave in a rush. The scene ends with Vitaly looking dejected and unsatisfied alone in the room.'
 			act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'

+ 2 - 2
locations/act_minor1.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'club_flash':
 			*nl
 			'"There''s a problem?"'
 			*nl
-			'"I-it''s a meat market! I mean everyone''s a commodity and i-it''s all about scoring." He looks down at your breasts poking out from the thin brown top costuming picked out for you while he continues speaking. "There''s no room left for just being a person." His look is so distracted and lusftul that you aren''t sure if he''s a good actor or if he''s <i>actually</i> just checking out your tits. Maybe he''s a method actor'
+			'"I-it''s a meat market! I mean everyone''s a commodity and i-it''s all about scoring." He looks down at your breasts poking out from the thin brown top costuming picked out for you while he continues speaking. "There''s no room left for just being a person." His look is so distracted and lustful that you aren''t sure if he''s a good actor or if he''s <i>actually</i> just checking out your tits. Maybe he''s a method actor'
 			act'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/minor/club_flash/3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'diner_waitress2':
 		act'"Action!"':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/minor/diner_waitress/2_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'The direcotr calls action and you start riding your co-star for all they''re worth as the camera moves in behind you.'
+			'The director calls action and you start riding your co-star for all they''re worth as the camera moves in behind you.'
 			*nl
 			'Per instructions, you can''t actually raise your hips at all or else the camera will see the pad beneath and so you go into a hard rocking motion with your hips, causing your pussy to really rub uncomfortably against it. You moan loudly, faking climax and shake your breasts for the camera while your co-star grabs your ass and facilitates your rocking motion.'
 			act'"Cut!"':

+ 1 - 1
locations/gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		'You went out into the yard and noticed Mira standing there.'
-		'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>> hi, hope you don’’t mind me visiting. I was bored being home alone." she said smiling.'
+		'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>> hi, hope you don''t mind me visiting. I was bored being home alone." she said smiling.'
 		mira_guestday = daystart
 		minut += 5
 		mira_guest = 1

+ 2 - 2
locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'"The last time I visited here I was really young. I remember some of the houses, but the clearest memory I have is going swimming with Mitya." you reply.'
 				'"And look how big you''ve become! Just look at you." grandma smiled.'
 				'She begins telling you about the village.'
-				'"The village is small, as you know. You’’ll probably find Mitya by the river or the beach where you can go swimming and sunbathe. There are still some fishermen here in the village if you want to go fishing, ask around after Stepan, he’’ll lend you a fishing rod."'
+				'"The village is small, as you know. You''ll probably find Mitya by the river or the beach where you can go swimming and sunbathe. There are still some fishermen here in the village if you want to go fishing, ask around after Stepan, he’’ll lend you a fishing rod."'
 				'"There is nothing interesting in the village itself. Oh yes... I just remembered... recently a new family moved in, a single parent with his daughter. Could you imagine that, someone new moving in? The girl is about your age. Her father works in the city and from the rumors I''ve heard he''s hardly here because his work forces him to stay in the city most of the time. You''ll probably meet her while you take a walk in the village."'
 				'"In the outskirts of the village is the field where the cattle graze and beyond the field is the forest. You''ll usually find our local hunter Andrew in the forest. He often brings along his friends to hunt, they often stay there for days. They say he built a hut somewhere in the forest. So, if you meet Andrew and his friends out there, don''t be afraid. If you want to go to the forest make sure to ask grandfather first."'
 				'"If you like running, you can take a run on the road leading into the forest. Or you can take a ride on our old bike. I''m pretty sure the bike is in the shed. Make sure to look for it if you''re interested. And if you want to watch your figure, then go to the garden, have some fruit, it''s as healthy as the diet meals you''re eating, if not more healthier."'
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				!Keep the word brigade if you want to change the text. It''s what the people working on the kolkhoz were called.
 				elseif temp = 7:
 					'"One day my mother, rest her soul, sent us four siblings out to the forest for berry gathering", your grandma begins. "We took our berry collectors and headed out. We reached the entrance of the forest pretty quickly and decided that it would be best to split up to complete the task faster. Since we were familiar with the area we all dispersed to our cherished spots and began gathering berries."'
-					'"My favorite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes and in the middle of the plot there was a huge stump. It’’s was really a great spot and as I approached I noticed very large number of ripe strawberries. I was rejoicing over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. All of a sudden I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
+					'"My favorite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes and in the middle of the plot there was a huge stump. It''s was really a great spot and as I approached I noticed very large number of ripe strawberries. I was rejoicing over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. All of a sudden I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
 					'"I shook off the eerie feeling and go back gathering strawberries again. All of a sudden I get this strange feeling... I look up and I see a person squatting on the stump. He''s completely still and just stares at me. I got really scared and ran away screaming and crying towards my brothers. They tried to stop and calm me down, but I just kept on running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You see <<$pcs_nickname>> long time ago we had central collective farms that were called kolkhoz, your grandma explains."'
 					'"We were lucky that the farms were close to the forest and didn''t have to run through the woods for long. I kept looking back if this person was following us but there was no sign of him. We knew we were safe when we see the farmers belonging to the brigade. My brothers and I ran up to the foreman and explained to him what had happened. He immediately grabbed the phone and called someone. The other farmers reassured us that we were safe now. After we had calmed down we got sent home. Our mother met as at home, she fed us and comforted me."'
 					'"The following day we were informed that not far from the train station Ratomka some people found dismantled railroad rails. Apparently it was done by the same man that I came across in the forest. I didn''t know it then but before the war our area was prone to sabotage by infiltrators, and staying hidden was easy, as the territory is covered by forest, stretching all the way to the border."'

+ 15 - 15
locations/intro_sg_select.qsrc

@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'grades', 'createclass', 'school', 'his', 2, 2, 'yes', 'yes', 0, 0
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/pre_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, nicknamed <<$pcs_nickname>> by friends and family. Your mother''s name is <<$npc_firstname[''A29'']>> and your biological father left when you were a baby, your mother marrying your stepfather, <<$npc_firstname[''A28'']>>, shortly afterwards.' 
-	'<<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> is your older sister, who is two years older than you but is still living at home while working at the local grocery store. She chose not to attend university and instead spends most of her free time drinking and going to parties with her friends, much to your mother''s dismay.' 
+	'Your name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, nicknamed <<$pcs_nickname>> by friends and family. Your mother''s name is <<$npc_firstname[''A29'']>> and your biological father left when you were a baby, your mother marrying your stepfather, <<$npc_firstname[''A28'']>>, shortly afterwards.'
+	'<<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> is your older sister, who is two years older than you but is still living at home while working at the local grocery store. She chose not to attend university and instead spends most of her free time drinking and going to parties with her friends, much to your mother''s dismay.'
 	'You also have a younger half-brother, <<$npc_firstname[''A34'']>>, who is really into sports, especially football, and is shaping up to be a fine athlete. He is a year younger than you and his father is your stepfather.'
 	'Your <<$npc_usedname[''A30'']>> lives in the same building as you do, though you rarely see her except when you pass her in the stairwell. She is your mother''s older sister. <<$npc_usedname[''A54'']>>, as everyone calls him, is best friends with your stepfather. <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A11'']>>, your childhood friend, is the same age as you and grew up living in the same apartment building on the floor above yours. His father, <<$npc_firstname[''A112'']>>, is an old friend of your mother.'
 
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nerdqueen':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Queen of the nerds</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'While you love all things nerdy, what you love the most is hanging out with your fellow nerds and doing nerdy things together. This has made you fairly social for a nerd and more general in your areas of knowledge. As you got older and started to develop as a woman, it also made you much more aware of your sexuality than most nerds are comfortable with. As such, you cultivated that awareness more than most and are now more at ease with your body than most of the other nerds.' 
+	'While you love all things nerdy, what you love the most is hanging out with your fellow nerds and doing nerdy things together. This has made you fairly social for a nerd and more general in your areas of knowledge. As you got older and started to develop as a woman, it also made you much more aware of your sexuality than most nerds are comfortable with. As such, you cultivated that awareness more than most and are now more at ease with your body than most of the other nerds.'
 	'By nerd standards, you are confident, dynamic and attractive and this has led to you being the leader of your group of friends. You are more acceptable to other social groups as a result, especially the cool kids, who seem to respect your social skills and looks.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'goodstudent':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Good student</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You just love school, and your grades are more than good enough to attend the university of your choosing after graduation - all you have to do is not let them slip. You have always tried to absorb every bit of knowledge possible and have done everything you can to excel in school. While this attitude has gained you a lot of respect from the other nerds, it didn''t earn you a lot of friends and you never found the time for sports.' 
+	'You just love school, and your grades are more than good enough to attend the university of your choosing after graduation - all you have to do is not let them slip. You have always tried to absorb every bit of knowledge possible and have done everything you can to excel in school. While this attitude has gained you a lot of respect from the other nerds, it didn''t earn you a lot of friends and you never found the time for sports.'
 	'You are often asked to be a tutor and sometimes find yourself forced to do others'' homework for them. You have excellent grades, and your mother is very proud of you. She has shown her appreciation for your hard work by rewarding you with money.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'computergeek':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Computer geek</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You were always into computers, whether it be by playing video games, taking computers apart or learning programing and even hacking. You love everything about computers, but this passion left you little time to make friends - real-life friends, at least. You have managed to befriend many online players that you talk to while you play various video games, however, and you rarely spend any time outdoors, nor money on clothes or other girly stuff. You are far more interested in saving your money for a better computer in order to play even better games.' 
+	'You were always into computers, whether it be by playing video games, taking computers apart or learning programing and even hacking. You love everything about computers, but this passion left you little time to make friends - real-life friends, at least. You have managed to befriend many online players that you talk to while you play various video games, however, and you rarely spend any time outdoors, nor money on clothes or other girly stuff. You are far more interested in saving your money for a better computer in order to play even better games.'
 	'You''ve considered hosting a web series of video games or vlogs - you even took the time to learn how to video edit - but you aren''t sure if you want to put yourself out there like that.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'chessplayer':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Avid chess player</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You were always into chess as a child, and have studied all the great chess masters. You can name them all, as well as their favorite strategies! You find nothing more interesting than matching your wits against someone else''s in a game of chess. It has left you with the ability to often see the consequences of your actions better than most as you are used to looking several moves ahead.' 
+	'You were always into chess as a child, and have studied all the great chess masters. You can name them all, as well as their favorite strategies! You find nothing more interesting than matching your wits against someone else''s in a game of chess. It has left you with the ability to often see the consequences of your actions better than most as you are used to looking several moves ahead.'
 	'All of this has left you with little time to make many friends, and you rarely spend any time outdoors.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -721,7 +721,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dancer':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Avid dancer</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/jock_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You fell in love with dancing at an early age and never looked back. You spent a lot of your free time trying to improve your skills, and it paid off; you''re actually quite good now!' 
+	'You fell in love with dancing at an early age and never looked back. You spent a lot of your free time trying to improve your skills, and it paid off; you''re actually quite good now!'
 	'<<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> helpfully pointed out that an added benefit of dance was a greater increase in your flexibility (that is, of course, typical of <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>). Your obsession with dancing, however, has had some repercussions on your school performance. You''re a sub-par student, and you haven''t made many friends other than your fellow jocks.'
 	*nl
 	'You are particularly close with <<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>>, who is just as passionate about dancing as you are. You trained a lot together as children and have a mutual respect for each other''s abilities.'
@@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'socialite':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Sociable</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/popular_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re friends with all of the important kids at school, which is what really matters. You were very social growing up and enjoyed being around others, often becoming the center of attention.' 
+	'You''re friends with all of the important kids at school, which is what really matters. You were very social growing up and enjoyed being around others, often becoming the center of attention.'
 	'You''ve always had a knack for knowing the right thing to say at the right moment, which led to many other students wanting to be your friend. You can, with a little work, get along with nearly anyone if you put your mind to it.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Beautiful</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/popular_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You might not be the smartest, be the most social or have the toughest attitude - but what you do have is natural good looks. You blossomed earlier than most girls and the boys took note, especially <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>, who started acting differently around you. As you got older your looks only improved, and you are often considered one of the best looking girls wherever you go.' 
+	'You might not be the smartest, be the most social or have the toughest attitude - but what you do have is natural good looks. You blossomed earlier than most girls and the boys took note, especially <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>, who started acting differently around you. As you got older your looks only improved, and you are often considered one of the best looking girls wherever you go.'
 	'You are especially popular with the cool kids and jocks.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1048,7 +1048,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnikstart':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Gopnik</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are a gopnik. While you''re still low in the gopnik pecking order, you''ve already proven yourself to them and most of them accept you as an equal. You have problems at home and school due to your antisocial behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path.' 
+	'You are a gopnik. While you''re still low in the gopnik pecking order, you''ve already proven yourself to them and most of them accept you as an equal. You have problems at home and school due to your antisocial behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path.'
 	'The jocks have a not so friendly rivalry with you and the other gopniks. While you don''t get along, some of them have mutal respect for you.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'troublemaker':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Troublemaker</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are a troublemaker. Nothing makes you happier than causing problems, whether it be petty larceny, getting into fights or vandalism. You live for the thrill of breaking the rules. You get along fairly well with the gopniks and they accept you as a kindred spirit, loving your willingness to jump head first into any and all trouble you run across - and if you can''t find any, you will happily make your own, which keeps things lively.' 
+	'You are a troublemaker. Nothing makes you happier than causing problems, whether it be petty larceny, getting into fights or vandalism. You live for the thrill of breaking the rules. You get along fairly well with the gopniks and they accept you as a kindred spirit, loving your willingness to jump head first into any and all trouble you run across - and if you can''t find any, you will happily make your own, which keeps things lively.'
 	'You have problems at home and school due to your antisocial behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path. You are well known to both your teachers and the police.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1152,7 +1152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitekgf':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Vitek''s girlfriend</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>>''s girlfriend. You love the thrill and danger of hanging out with the gopniks, even if you lack the true attitude yourself. You met <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>> after he and <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> became friends. There was something about his bad boy attitude that drew you in, and you soon found yourself falling for him.'
-	'As you developed, he started to take an interest in you as well and you soon started dating. You''re not technically a gopnik - you are considered more of a wannabe - but the rest of the gopniks seem to accept you anyways. You’’re not sure what would happen if you ever broke up with <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>>, however, as being his girlfriend and hanging out with the other gopniks has cost you any real, close friends outside of their group.'
+	'As you developed, he started to take an interest in you as well and you soon started dating. You''re not technically a gopnik - you are considered more of a wannabe - but the rest of the gopniks seem to accept you anyways. You''re not sure what would happen if you ever broke up with <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>>, however, as being his girlfriend and hanging out with the other gopniks has cost you any real, close friends outside of their group.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		traits['nerd_points'] = -10
@@ -1230,7 +1230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Alternative</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You march to your own tune. You do what you want when you want, and do it with a fuck-it-all attitude. The gopniks respect you and for the most part you get along with them. You''re not one of them, however, but rather a kindred spirit looking to walk your own path and raise a little hell along the way.'
-	'Unlike the gopniks, you have far less interest in fighting or causing problems, you''re just looking for a good time - you love to party more than anything else. The cool kids don''t completely look down their nose at you. Even if they don''t approve of your clothes, they respect your love of looking nice and having a good time.' 
+	'Unlike the gopniks, you have far less interest in fighting or causing problems, you''re just looking for a good time - you love to party more than anything else. The cool kids don''t completely look down their nose at you. Even if they don''t approve of your clothes, they respect your love of looking nice and having a good time.'
 	'However, you have problems at home and school due to your behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path.'
 	act 'Select another': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1382,7 +1382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Ugly duckling</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/outcast_2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Some girls blossom early and others have natural good looks - you got neither. In fact, you seem to have been cursed with an androgynous face and body, and have been mistaken for a boy more times than you would care to admit.'
-	'Your body seems to have grown out of sync, leaving you looking odd and, at best, unattractive for most of your life. Now in your teens, your body is starting to even out in growth, but you''re still very androgynous and still considered ugly.' 
+	'Your body seems to have grown out of sync, leaving you looking odd and, at best, unattractive for most of your life. Now in your teens, your body is starting to even out in growth, but you''re still very androgynous and still considered ugly.'
 	'Your lack of good looks has made you a social pariah. Nobody seems to like you or want to spend time with you unless they are making fun of you.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1424,7 +1424,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'goodgirl':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Good girl</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/outcast_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are a good girl. The kind parents, teachers and adults love, but the other kids hate. You always reminded the teacher to give out homework and would snitch on anyone for doing anything. You also regularly attend church.' 
+	'You are a good girl. The kind parents, teachers and adults love, but the other kids hate. You always reminded the teacher to give out homework and would snitch on anyone for doing anything. You also regularly attend church.'
 	'You love the attention you get from adults, and while you can feel lonely at times, you''re pretty happy knowing you''re a good girl. The nerds seem to tolerate you the most, likely because they almost never misbehave and always do their homework anyways.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':

+ 1 - 1
locations/metro_events.qsrc

@@ -922,7 +922,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'train':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 18:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a girl kneeling in her seat; facing the wrong way. Her skirt is pulled up, and her panties are down around her knees. Another girl is squatting behind her eating her pussy. This goes on for several minutes until the first girl finally has an orgasm, once she’’s finished, she gets dressed, and sits by her friend. For the rest of the ride, they keep making out, leaving the car at the next stop.'
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a girl kneeling in her seat; facing the wrong way. Her skirt is pulled up, and her panties are down around her knees. Another girl is squatting behind her eating her pussy. This goes on for several minutes until the first girl finally has an orgasm, once she''s finished, she gets dressed, and sits by her friend. For the rest of the ride, they keep making out, leaving the car at the next stop.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke4.jpg"></center>'
 					'Finally Tamara ends the long drawn out silence by saying:'
-					'"Listen to me very carefully, girl. What we set out to do is a very serious and difficult task. Also, very expensive might I add. I invested my hard earned money in you. A lot of money, not to mention the effort and time and expect you to be able to justify these efforts. I don''t ask for much. But I demand complete obedience and for you to follow my instructions to the letter if you want to succeed in life. I''m hoping you don’’t think I do this all out of pure unselfishness? You''re not Aladdin and I''m not a genie here to fulfill any of your whishes. I have a lot to teach you, which will help you in many ways, giving you much more than you can accomplish alone."'
+					'"Listen to me very carefully, girl. What we set out to do is a very serious and difficult task. Also, very expensive might I add. I invested my hard earned money in you. A lot of money, not to mention the effort and time and expect you to be able to justify these efforts. I don''t ask for much. But I demand complete obedience and for you to follow my instructions to the letter if you want to succeed in life. I''m hoping you don''t think I do this all out of pure unselfishness? You''re not Aladdin and I''m not a genie here to fulfill any of your whishes. I have a lot to teach you, which will help you in many ways, giving you much more than you can accomplish alone."'
 					'"But don''t be fooled, don''t take my kindness for weakness. Otherwise we will stop this right away. I''ll be frank with you, maybe you''re pleased having a bland life, marrying someone ugly, working a dead end job at the local sewing factory, repeating the same thing day after day to the point of exhaustion. Do you want to end up like that?"'
 					'"No, I don''t!" You furiously shake your head, almost ripping it off. "I understand! Please, believe me! It will never happen again!"'
 					'"I really hope this is the only time we need to have this conversation. Because there won''t be a second time, my dear." Says Tamara, clicking her nails on the armrest.'

+ 4 - 4
locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'play_game_wish0':
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	if mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] < 27 and mey_vika['qw_day'] ! daystart: mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/sex/vika_game0.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Vanya, you’’re the athlete here, come on show off your toned body! As if you were imitating a famous ancient discus thrower!"'
+	'"Vanya, you''re the athlete here, come on show off your toned body! As if you were imitating a famous ancient discus thrower!"'
 	'Vanya grabs a plate from the table and positions it in his hands. Standing wide legged he gets in the pose of a discus thrower.'
 	'"No no no!" You and Vicky shout in unison. "That won''t do! We want to see you just exactly like the athletes completed in ancient Greece. Without any clothes! We don''t want to fantasize about your body! Take off your clothes so we can see it!"'
 	'"Where''s the music and the pole!" Laughs Vanya, moving his hips sensually, mocking male strippers.'
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'park_meet':
 			end
 		elseif mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] >= 5:
 			if npc_rel['A15'] < 60:
-				'You approach the couple and greet them, but they don’’t pay any attention to you.'
+				'You approach the couple and greet them, but they don''t pay any attention to you.'
 			else
 				'You approach the couple and greet them, right away Vicky starts gossiping, as always, Vanya mostly jokes about the things you two are talking about. You chat for a few minutes...'
 			end
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cafe_qw':
 			pcs_horny = 100
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/sex/cafe_qw2.jpg"></center>'
-			'So that''s why she was arching! You’’re so mesmerized, you don''t even notice the pussy juice flowing down your own legs. You knees tremble, but the excitement is still growing. You start to panic a bit and just a few more minutes later you know you must get away or else they''ll see you orgasm.'
+			'So that''s why she was arching! You''re so mesmerized, you don''t even notice the pussy juice flowing down your own legs. You knees tremble, but the excitement is still growing. You start to panic a bit and just a few more minutes later you know you must get away or else they''ll see you orgasm.'
 
 			act 'Say goodbye':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1240,7 +1240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gym0':
 						cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/gym5.jpg"></center>'
 						'"I''m not really dressed correctly, don''t you agree?" Surprised, Vicky starts scratching her head. "I''ll fix that right away."'
-						'"I don’’t like to wear clothes!" She says while removing her t-shirt.'
+						'"I don''t like to wear clothes!" She says while removing her t-shirt.'
 
 						act 'Further':
 							*clr