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locations/journal_uni.qsrc

@@ -6,15 +6,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'professors':
 	'<center><h2>Professors & Facility</h2></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/254.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Klim Kovalyov</center>'
-	'Klim is the professor of General Education for teaching, he is young professor, in his late twenties or maybe early thirties at the oldest. He is in good shape and most girls find him very attractive. He dresses casually and is very friendly with his students, he is know to let people get away with a lot and is even know to join in with the horsing around in class or even telling jokes during his lectures. He is rumored to be single.'
+	'Klim is the professor of General Education for teaching. He is young and in good shape, with most girls finding him very attractive. He dresses casually and is very friendly with his students, known to let them get away with a lot and join in with the horsing around and joke telling during lectures. He is rumored to be single.'
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/255.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Grigorii Pasternak</center>'
-	'Grigorii is the professor of Teaching Methods for teaching, he is an older stoic man, dresses well gets on with things and expects everyone to give there full attention to him during his lectures. After class or if you want to visit is office, he is happy to help any of his students answering questions or even spending some time helping out students that are in trouble or struggling in his class. He has wife and kids in their teens.'
+	'Grigorii is the professor of Teaching Methods. He is an older stoic man who dresses well and gets on with things, expecting his students to give their full attention during his lectures. He is happy to help any of his students by answering questions and helping anyone who is in trouble or struggling in his class. He is married and has teenage children.'
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/256.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Selena Kovalchuk</center>'
-	'Selena is the professor of Learning Theories for teaching, she is a bit nerdy, she seems to know about the latest sci-fi, fantasy, supernatural, superhero, and things like that in movies, tv and possible even comics. Some say she even goes to those conventions and cosplays. She''s in her forties dresses smart-casual not unattractive but a bit mousy. She''s married with a young daughter but great nanny who looks after her, her husband is also a lecturer in another department.'
+	'Selena is the professor of Learning Theories. She is in her forties and dresses well, but is extremely nerdy, often talking at length about the latest sci-fi, fantasy, supernatural and superhero TV shows, films and comics. Some say she even attends conventions and cosplay events. She''s married with a young daughter; her husband is a lecturer in a different department.'
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'uni'
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -23,138 +23,132 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlovsk_university_students':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Pavlovsk University Students</h2></center>'
-	'Your fellow students that came from Pavlovsk to attend the University as well.'
+	'Your fellow students that came from Pavlovsk to attend university.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/149.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Lazar Pajari</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Lazar Pajari was the Pavlovsk school football star and the best athlete. The former team captain, is now a midfielder on the University team. He excels in several sports, but his passion is football, at least when he is not chasing after girls or, more often than not, being chased by them, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with several different girls. He has even been seen hanging out with Albina, who mostly ignores the boys in Pavlovsk school.'
+		'Lazar Pajari was the school''s football star and best athlete. The former team captain, he is now a midfielder on the university team. He excels in several sports, but his passion is football, at least when he is not chasing after girls or, more often than not, being chased by them, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with several different ones. He has even been seen hanging out with Albina, who mostly ignored the boys at school.'
 	else
-		'Lazar Pajari was the Pavlovsk school football star and the best athlete. The former team captain, is now a midfielder on the University team. He excels in several sports, but his passion is football, at least when he is not chasing after girls or, more often than not, being chased by them, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with several different girls.'
+		'Lazar Pajari was the school''s football star and best athlete. The former team captain, he is now a midfielder on the university team. He excels in several sports, but his passion is football, at least when he is not chasing after girls or, more often than not, being chased by them, whom he happily lets catch him. His status and good looks make him desirable among the girls and he is often seen with several different ones.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A149'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/1.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Dimka Nosov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He even threw some epic parties, back in Pavlovsk that everyone tried to get invited too, even kids from Pushkin sometimes attend. His New Years party was the one party he invited everyone too. He was the king of the school and everyone wanted to either be his friend or hang out with him. Now he is just a freshmen in a totally new environment, though he seems to be doing almost as well as he use to.'
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. He even threw some epic parties back in Pavlovsk that everyone tried to attend. He was the king of the school and everyone wanted to either be his friend or hang out with him, but now he is just a freshman in a totally new environment, though he seems to be doing almost as well as he used to back in school.'
 	else
-		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He was considered the coolest kid in Pavlovsk school. The guys tended to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. After Lavrenti started hanging out with the gopniks, Dimka became even the king of the parties. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there are rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting those he considers less than him, when given the chance.'
+		'Dimka Nosov is a cute guy and all the girls adore him. He was considered the coolest kid in school and the guys tended to either befriend him or loath him. He comes from a fairly wealthy family and is always dressed in expensive stylish clothes. After Lavrenti started hanging out with the gopniks, Dimka became the king of the parties. Despite his pleasant smile and friendly demeanor, there were rumors saying he is a sadist bastard that always gets what he wants. He seems to love verbally tormenting those he considers lesser than him when given the chance.'
 	end
-	'He is getting a business degree at the University.'
+	'He is getting a business degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A1'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A1'] >= 60:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/22.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Elžbieta "Bella" Artamonov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Bella Artamonov was the most beautiful girl in Pavlovsk school and knew it, which makes her come off as arrogant. Even at the University she still might be the pretties girl there. You don''t know her very well since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids". She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around with people much older than herself. Now at the University she seems much happier, like she is finally around others like herself.'
+		'Bella Artamonov was the most beautiful girl in school and knew it, which made her come off as arrogant. You don''t know her very well since she didn''t want to deal with "kids". She seemed to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. There were even rumors about her only hanging around with people much older than herself. Now that she''s at the university, she seems much happier, like she finally feels like she''s around others like herself.'
 	else
-		'Bella Artamonov was the most beautiful girl in Pavlovsk school and knew it, which makes her come off like a self centered bitch. Even at the University she still might be the pretties girl there. You don''t know her at all really since she doesn''t want to deal with "kids", especially those with no sense of style. She seems to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. You''ve heard some rumors about her only hanging around with people much older than herself.'
+		'Bella Artamonov was the most beautiful girl in school and knew it, which made her come off as a self centered bitch. You don''t know her at all since she didn''t want to deal with "kids", especially those with no sense of style. She seemed to consider herself an adult already and the rest of her classmates as being beneath her, too young and childish for her to be around. There were even rumors about her only hanging around with people much older than herself.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A22'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A22'] >= 60:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/23.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Albina Barlovskaya</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and is considered to be one of the most attractive girls in Pavlovsk school. She is a gifted dancer and was the leader of the cheerleaders at Pavlovsk school, she is always trying to conduct herself properly, but she is well known for her short temper and is intimidating if angered, despite her rather petite size. She lead a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers was allowed to join, which all came crashing down when her father got arrested and sent to jail on corruption charges. There was several rumors about her going around Pavlovsk school, but nobody dares mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
-	else
-		'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy family and was considered to be one of the most attractive girls in Pavlovsk school. She is a gifted dancer and cheerleader, who is trying to conduct herself properly, but she is well known for her short temper and is intimidating if angered, despite her rather petite size. She lead a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers was allowed to join, which all came crashing down when her father got arrested and sent to jail on corruption charges. There was several rumors about her going around Pavlovsk school, but nobody dares mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
-	end
-	'She is getting a nursing degree at the University.'
-	if npc_rel['A23'] >= 80:
-		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
-	elseif npc_rel['A23'] >= 50:
-		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
+    'Albina Barlovskaya comes from a wealthy background and was considered to be one of the most attractive girls in school. She is a gifted dancer and was the leader of the school cheerleaders who was well known for her short and intimidating temper, despite her rather petite size. She also lead a dance troupe that only the prettiest and best dancers were allowed to join, but it was disbanded shortly after her father was arrested. There were several rumors about her going around school, but nobody dared mention them in front of her out of fear of incurring her wrath.'
+	'She is getting a nursing degree at the university.'
+	if AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2:
+		'She considers you more than just a good friend, trusting you more than anyone else.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
+		'She really likes you and enjoys your company.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you, and makes this point well known to you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/17.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Irina Devyatova</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl. She knows it and takes full advantage of it, using her looks to sweet talk the boys and professors alike, to get her way. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality hidden behind her sweet smile. She considers herself to be the queen of what is in fashion and often berates those she deems with out a sense of style, more than once driving other girls to tears. She is often the center of attention when students hangout. When needed she often sweet talks the boys do her dirty work, making them think they have a chance with her and then laughing at them behind their back.'
+		'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl who knows it and takes full advantage of it, using her looks to get her way. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality hidden behind her sweet smile and considers herself to be the queen of what is in fashion, often berating those she deems to have no sense of style, often driving other girls to tears. When needed, she often sweet talks boys into doing her dirty work, making them think they have a chance with her and then laughing at them behind their back.'
 	else
-		'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl. She knows it and takes full advantage of it, using her looks to sweet talk the boys and professors alike, to get her way. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality hidden behind her sweet smile. She considers herself to the queen of what is in fashion and often berates those she deems with out a sense of style, more than once driving other girls to tears. When needed she often sweet talks the boys do her dirty work.'
+		'Irina Devyatova is a tall and pretty girl who knows it and takes full advantage of it, using her looks to sweet talk boys and professors alike to get her way. She has a very arrogant and haughty personality hidden behind her sweet smile and considers herself to the queen of what is in fashion, often berating those she deems to have no sense of style, often driving other girls to tears. When needed, she often sweet talks boys into doing her dirty work.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A17'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A17'] >= 60:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A17'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/144.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Anushka "Nush" Konstantinov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and part time vocalist in Radomir''s band. She and the band often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and is very open about her bisexuality or her sexuality. She often teases the boys and even some of the girls at school and now at the University. She is also a bit of a exhibitionist and her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She did surprisingly well at Pavlovsk school, enough to get a scholarship for the University, despite the fact she seemed to like getting into and causing trouble more.'
-		*nl
-		'She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally, whatever she deems to be the most fun at the time, with the exception of Gerasim, who she had been seen protecting from being bullied even from the other gopniks, back at Pavlovsk school. While she has a bit of a reputation as a slut, the reality is most of the guys try to get in her panties, but few succeed, she loves making them all think they have a chance. Most known she and Radomir use to date and broke up a little over a year ago. Rumor is he cheated on her or she cheated on him.'
+		'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and part time vocalist in Radomir''s band. She and the band often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and is very open about her bisexuality, often teasing boys and girls alike. She is also a bit of an exhibitionist and her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She did surprisingly well at school, enough to get a scholarship into the university, despite the fact she seemed to like getting into and causing trouble more than studying.'
+		'She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally. While she had a bit of a reputation as a slut, the reality is most of the guys tried to get in her panties, but few succeeded. She and Radomir used to date, but broke up a little over a year ago. Rumor is that they both cheated on each other.'
 	else
-		'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and part time vocalist in Radomir''s band. She and the band often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and is not shy about her bisexuality or her sexuality. She often teases the boys and even some of the girls at Pavlovsk school and now at the University. She is also a bit of a exhibitionist and her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She seemed to like getting into and causing trouble, yet obviously did well enough in school to get into the University.'
-		*nl
-		'She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally, whatever she deems to be the most fun at the time, with the exception of Gerasim, who she had been seen protecting from being bullied even from the other gopniks. She has a reputation for being a slut, most wonder why she wasn''t a outcast slut.  She and Radomir use to date, but broke up over a year ago, most think she likely cheated on him, due to her reputation. The running theory is, she was the gopniks personal slut and let all the guys fuck her, that was why she wass allowed to hang out with them.'
+		'Anushka Konstantinov is the lead guitarist and part time vocalist in Radomir''s band. She and the band often use her good looks to their advantage. She is very adventurous and is not shy about her bisexuality, often teasing boys and girls alike. She is also a bit of an exhibitionist and her main goal in life seems to just be having fun. She seemed to like getting into and causing trouble, yet somehow did well enough in school to get into the university.'
+		'She doesn''t seem to be hung up on social standing and seems willing to hang out with or pick on everyone equally. She had a reputation for being a slut and most wonder why she wasn''t an outcast. A popular rumor was that she was the gopniks personal slut and let all the guys fuck her. She and Radomir used to date, with many rumors surronding their break-up.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A144'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/155.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Lavrenti Romanov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed when Dimka fucked his girl friend at the time, they had it out in Pavlovsk school where Lavrenti beat Dimka badly, which earned him the respect of the gopniks. After the fight, he started hanging out with the gopniks and became mean and violent. However, he is more of a follower, the other gopniks tolerated him while he used his money to supply them with alcohol and drugs, sometimes throwing parties at his house when his parents are away. He kept his grades up enough to get into the University, which many found surprising.'
+		'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed when Dimka fucked his girlfriend at the time and they had it out in school where Lavrenti beat Dimka badly, which earned him the respect of the gopniks. After the fight, he started hanging out with the gopniks and became mean and violent. However, he was more of a follower; the other gopniks tolerated him while he used his money to supply them with alcohol and drugs, sometimes throwing parties at his house when his parents were away. He kept his grades up enough to get into the university, which many found surprising.'
 	else
-		'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed a few years ago. He became mean and violent, which resulted in him and Dimika having a major falling out, where he ended up beating Dimka up at school. Since the fight, he started hanging out with the gopniks. However, he is more of a follower, the gopniks seemed to tolerate him while using him for his money. He kept his grades up enough to get into the University, which many found surprising.'
+		'Lavrenti Romanov comes from a wealthy family. He is an only child with parents that are rarely around. He used to be one of the cool kids, but his attitude abruptly changed a few years ago. He became mean and violent, which resulted in him and Dimika having a major falling out, where he ended up beating Dimka up at school. Since the fight, he started hanging out with the gopniks. However, he is more of a follower; the gopniks seemed to tolerate him while using him for his money. He kept his grades up enough to get into the university, which many found surprising.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A155'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A155'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A155'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/15.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Viktoriya "Vicky" Meynold</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students at Pavlovsk school and was considered to be one of the most popular girls in Pavlovsk school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky was often found at the disco with her sister and boy friend Vanya. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility and tried out for many of the sports, especially cheerleading. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
+		'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students at school and was considered to be one of the most popular girls. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky was often found at the disco with her sister and boyfriend Vanya. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. As a child, she took gymnastic lessons and as a result has excellent flexibility and tried out for many of the sports, especially cheerleading. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
 	else
-		'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students at Pavlovsk school and was considered to be one of the most popular girls in Pavlovsk school. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky could often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. She was one of the cheerleaders and even sometimes tries out for sports. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
+		'Vicky Meynold is the opposite of her sister. On one side a smart ass and on the other a cheerful girl. She is very sociable, being friends with many of the students at school and was considered to be one of the most popular girls. With a passionate love for dancing, Vicky could often be found at the disco with her sister and good friend Vanya. A good humored girl, she loves bright and crazy colored clothing. She was one of the cheerleaders and even sometimes tries out for sports. A bit flighty and unpredictable, you never know what thoughts she will come up with next. Logic and reason were never her strong suit as she lives by her emotions and feelings, making decisions from her heart rather than her head. Despite her flighty and unpredictable nature, her liveliness and spontaneity make her fun to hang out with.'
 	end
 	'She is getting a science degree at the University.'
 	if npc_rel['A15'] >= 80:
@@ -162,202 +156,202 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlovsk_university_students':
 	elseif npc_rel['A15'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A15'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/147.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Andrey Aleksandrov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Andrey Aleksandrov''s was a late bloomer among the boys, he was small for his age and a bit goofy looking and shy, his status was boosted a lot when he started dating Staysa. Yet when he did finally grow into his body, he got a lot better looking and now is consider cute and his confidence grew as well. Recently his family took part in the exchange student program. They were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey didn''t mind and welcomed Marcus right away. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girlfriend Stasya. The Pavlovsk school nurse is his aunt.'
+		'Andrey Aleksandrov was a late bloomer among the boys. Small for his age and a bit goofy looking and shy, his status was boosted when he started dating Staysa.  When he did finally grow into his body, he got a lot better looking and more confident. His family took part in the exchange student program and were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey didn''t mind and welcomed Marcus right away. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tended to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spent a lot less time with Stasya.'
 	else
-		'Andrey Aleksandrov''s was a late bloomer among the boys, he was small for his age and a bit goofy looking and shy, despite that he and Staysa started dating. Yet when he did finally grow into his body, he got a lot better looking and now is consider cute and his confidence grew as well, now more than a few girls are jealous Staysa seen what he could be and snagged him up. Rumor is they were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey doesn''t seem to mind. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tends to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spends a lot less time with his long time girlfriend Stasya. The Pavlovsk school nurse is his aunt.'
+		'Andrey Aleksandrov was a late bloomer among the boys. Small for his age and a bit goofy looking and shy, his status was boosted when he started dating Staysa.  When he did finally grow into his body, he got a lot better looking and more confident. His family took part in the exchange student program and were less than happy when the student they sent was an African American, but Andrey didn''t mind and welcomed Marcus right away. He and Marcus quickly became friends and he tended to use Marcus'' rising popularity to boost his own and in the process, spent a lot less time with Stasya.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A147'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A147'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A147'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/139.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Stanislava "Stasya" Pavlov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, to those she considers beneath her, which is the nerds, outcasts, gopniks and even some of the cool kids and jocks. Now that her boyfriend Andrey hangs around with Marcus more than her, she has become jealous of all the time Andrey and Marcus spend together with out her, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts, or complain to her friends Irina and Lizaveta.'
+		'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch to those she considers beneath her, which was pretty much everyone, even some of the cool kids and jocks. When her boyfriend Andrey started hanging around with Marcus more than her, she became jealous of all the time Andrey and Marcus spend together without her, but never said anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she took out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts, or complained to her friends Irina and Lizaveta.'
 	else
-		'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but now that her boyfriend Andrey hangs around with Marcus more than her, she has become a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never says anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seems to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
+		'Stasya Pavlov is a complete bitch, and always has been one, but ever since her boyfriend Andrey started hanging around with Marcus more than her, she became a lot worse. She doesn''t care for Marcus at all, but never said anything around Marcus or Andrey. Instead, she seemed to take out her anger on everyone around her, especially the nerds and the outcasts.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A139'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A139'] >= 55:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A139'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/146.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Marcus Larson</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student who arrived at the Pavlovsk school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in Pavlovsk school, is a good athlete and seems to really enjoy Russia. He has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are much more beautiful than the girls back home and is a decent looking guy himself which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead, as he seems to get along with them even more than most of the cool kids.'
+		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student who opted to stay for a second year. He did well in school, is a good athlete and seems to really enjoy Russia. He has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are much more beautiful than the girls back home and is a decent looking guy himself which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, made him popular with the cool kids and jocks. He is friendly and outgoing and if he wasn''t such close friends with Andrey, he would have likely been a jock instead, as he seemed to get along with them even more than most of the cool kids.'
 	else
-		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student who arrived at the Pavlovsk school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in Pavlovsk school, is a good athlete and seems to really enjoy Russia. He has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are much more beautiful than the girls back home and is a decent looking guy himself which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him popular with the cool kids and jocks. Those same traits and especially his skin color has made him just a unpopular with most of the gopniks, who go out of their way to mess with him or make raciest comments. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
+		'Marcus Larson is an African American exchange student who arrived at the Pavlovsk school last year and opted to stay for a second year. He does well in Pavlovsk school, is a good athlete and seems to really enjoy Russia. He has an eye for Russian girls, always going on about how they are much more beautiful than the girls back home and is a decent looking guy himself which, combined with his exotic looks, accent, athletic ability and different views, has made him popular with the cool kids and jocks. Those same traits and especially his skin color made him just as unpopular with most of the gopniks, who went out of their way to mess with him or make racist comments. He is friendly and outgoing, and stays with Andrey''s family, whom he has become close friends with.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A146'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A146'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A146'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/16.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Natasha Belova</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your Pavlovsk school. Even though you both live in the same building, her parents are very poor and it shows as Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends as most of the other girls shun her or mock her poor clothing. Julia and her use to be best friends but they recently had a falling out, she rarely attends nerd gaming night or other such events. All of you know she dreams of being one of the popular girls. Recently she has been seen attending the disco.'
+		'Natasha was an excellent student and one of the smartest people in school. Even though you both lived in the same building, her parents are very poor and it showed as Natasha was always dressed in second-hand clothes and could never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she didn''t have many friends as most of the other girls shunned her or mocked her poor clothing. She rarely attended gaming night or other such events, attending the disco to try and befriend the popular girls instead.'
 	else
-		'Natasha is an excellent student and one of the smartest people in your Pavlovsk school. Even though you both live in the same building, her parents are very poor and it shows as Natasha is always dressed in second-hand clothes and can never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she doesn''t have many friends as most of the other girls shun her or mock her poor clothing. She doesn''t even seem to get along with her fellow nerds to much.'
+		'Natasha was an excellent student and one of the smartest people in school. Even though you both lived in the same building, her parents are very poor and it showed as Natasha was always dressed in second-hand clothes and could never afford to do anything fun. As a result, she didn''t have many friends as most of the other girls shunned her or mocked her poor clothing. She didn''t even seem to get along with her fellow nerds that much.'
 	end
-	'She is getting a fashion degree at the University.'
+	'She is getting a fashion degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A16'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A16'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A16'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/152.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Feofan Krupin</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in Pavlovsk school, but not as well as most would expect. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that are way out of his league. He is the Game Master for the weekly game night and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He did well in school, but not as well as most would have expected. He was the most outgoing of the nerds and wasn''t afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that were way out of his league. He is the Game Master for the weekly game night and often invites others over to play games at his house.'
 	else
-		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He does well in Pavlovsk school, but not as well as most would expect. He is a nerd''s nerd, but isn''t bad looking for one. He is the most outgoing of the nerds and is not afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that are way out of his league. Rumor is that he runs some silly game night for the other nerds, which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds."'
+		'Feofan Krupin is heavily into science fiction, fantasy and the like. He has a serious love for superheroes and loves talking about them, their movies and comic books all the time. He also has a collection of cosplay outfits of all the most famous superheroes. He did well in school, but not as well as most would have expected. He is a nerd''s nerd, but isn''t bad looking for one. He was the most outgoing of the nerds and wasn''t afraid to talk to the other students, even flirting with girls that were way out of his league. Rumor is that he runs some silly game night for the other nerds, which has earned him the nickname "King of the Nerds."'
 	end
-	'He is getting a programing degree at the University.'
+	'He is getting a programing degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A152'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A152'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A152'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/140.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Yelizaveta "Lizaveta" Petrov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain. Though most everyone has a hefty respect for what she knows, the few times she has really gone after someone she has destroyed their status and reputation among their peers. She is often found with Irina and Stasya'
+		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and willing to use her looks to sweet talk boys into sharing any juicy gossip. If you want to know anything about anyone, she is the one to ask. Luckily, she seems more interested in collecting and sharing gossip than using it for her own gain.'
 	else
 		'Lizaveta Petrov wants to know everyone''s secrets, but is completely incapable of keeping them. Extremely nosy, she is the first to arrive at the scene of any commotion, eager to pry into the details. She is pretty and most boys seem torn. They are attracted to her, but are afraid she will tell everyone everything about them and their whole life becomes public knowledge.'
 	end
-	'She is getting a psychology degree at the University.'
+	'She is getting a psychology degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A140'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A140'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A140'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/2.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Artem Chebotarev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Artem Chebotarev lives in the same apartment building as you. He is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in Pavlovsk school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of Pavlovsk school. He is always at DnD night and tends to assume the role of party leader while playing, he is especially close friends with Petka. He otherwise tries to keep a low profile at Pavlovsk school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
+		'Artem Chebotarev lived in the same apartment building as you. He is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He did very well in school and was popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he befriended a lot of jocks as he was their tutor outside of school. He is always at D&D night and tends to assume the role of party leader while playing. He is close friends with Petka, but otherwise tried to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
 	else
-		'Artem Chebotarev lives in the same apartment building as you. He is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He does very well in Pavlovsk school and is popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he has befriended a lot of jocks as he is also their tutor outside of Pavlovsk school. He otherwise tries to keep a low profile at Pavlovsk school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
+		'Artem Chebotarev lived in the same apartment building as you. He is a typical geek, but one could easily be deceived by his looks as he is actually not that bad looking. He did very well in school and was popular with the other geeks, not to mention that, thanks to his looks and good grades, he befriended a lot of jocks as he was their tutor outside of school. He otherwise tried to keep a low profile at school, especially around the cool kids and gopniks.'
 	end
-	'He is getting a science degree at the University.'
+	'He is getting a science degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A2'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A2'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A2'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/18.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Christina Zvereva</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Christina is one of the Pavlovsk school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know, she is very muscular as well and a surprisingly skilled fighter, not afraid to start a fight with any of the other girls in Pavlovsk school or even some of the boys. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is, however, a bully to most of the non-jock girls in Pavlovsk school, verbally, emotionally, and physically bullying the other girls, while she tends to just dominate most of the other girl jocks. She also seems to utterly hate you in particular and goes out of her way to torment you when she can.'
+		'Christina was one of the school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She is very muscular and a surprisingly skilled fighter, not afraid to start a fight with any of the other girls at school or even some of the boys. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She was, however, a bully to most of the non-jock girls in school, verbally, emotionally, and physically tormenting them while tending to dominate most of the other girl jocks. She also seemed to utterly hate you in particular and went out of her way to torment you when she could, a hatred that has carried over into university.'
 	else
-		'Christina is one of the Pavlovsk school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know, she is very muscular as well and rumored to be a good fighter, not afraid to start a fight with any of the other girls in Pavlovsk school or even some of the boys. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She is, however, a bully to most of the non-jock girls in Pavlovsk school, verbally, emotionally, and physically bullying the other girls. She also seems to utterly hate you in particular and goes out of her way to torment you when she can.'
+		'Christina was one of the school''s best athletes and is the most athletic girl you know. She is very muscular and rumored to be a good fighter, not afraid to start a fight with any of the other girls at school or even some of the boys. She has leadership abilities that, together with her tenacity and intelligence, make her a dominant presence wherever she goes. She was, however, a bully to most of the non-jock girls in school, verbally, emotionally, and physically tormenting the other girls. She also seemed to utterly hate you in particular and went out of her way to torment you when she could, a hatred that has carried over to university.'
 	end
-	'She is getting a teaching degree at the University.'
+	'She is getting a teaching degree at the university.'
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/14.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Ekaterina "Katja" Meynold</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Katja Meynold is a attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a keen interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but can also be impulsive at times. She is a avid reader and can be found sometimes discussing books with the nerds, often she can be found at the disco with her sister.'
+		'Katja Meynold is an attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a keen interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, but can also be impulsive at times. She is an avid reader and could sometimes be found discussing books with the nerds, but more often than not could be found at the disco with her sister.'
 	else
-		'Katja Meynold is a attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a keen interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, she is a avid reader and can be found sometimes discussing books with the nerds. She can often be found at the disco with her sister.'
+		'Katja Meynold is an attractive and petite girl, a redhead with a keen interest in fashion and cosmetics. She and her twin sister, Vicky, are like two sides of the same coin. As a quiet and sensible girl, Katja is shy and intelligent, she is an avid reader and could sometimes be found discussing books with the nerds, but more often than not could be found at the disco with her sister.'
 	end
-	'She is getting a teaching degree at the University.'
+	'She is getting a teaching degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A14'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/165.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Vanya Yanka</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never goes too far with his jokes and is a good morale booster, so everyone likes him. Despite his easy going attitude, he is a better athlete than most would suspect. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at Pavlovsk school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky, whom he is dating.'
+		'Vanya Yanka was a little goofy jock, playing jokes on his teammates and annoying the coaches. He never went too far with his jokes and was a good morale booster, so everyone liked him. Despite his easy going attitude, he was a better athlete than most would suspect. When he wasn''t training or competing, he spent most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. He was popular with the girls at school, but only seemed to have eyes for Vicky, whom he is dating.'
 	else
-		'Vanya Yanka is a little goofy jock, he often plays jokes at Pavlovsk school on others, even during class. He never goes too far with his jokes, so most everyone likes him, except the nerds who tend to be the butt of his jokes more often than not. When he''s not training or competing, he spends most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. Vanya is also popular with the girls at Pavlovsk school, but only seems to have eyes for Vicky, whom he is dating.'
+		'Vanya Yanka was a little goofy jock who often played jokes at school, even during class. He never went too far with his jokes, so everyone except the nerds, who tended to be the butt of his jokes, liked him. When he wasn''t training or competing, he spent most of his free time hanging out with Vicky and Katja. He was popular with the girls at school, but only seemed to have eyes for Vicky, whom he is dating.'
 	end
-	'He is getting a teaching degree at the University.'
+	'He is getting a teaching degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A165'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A165'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A165'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/153.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Gerasim Vasilyev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Gerasim Vasilyev is confined to a wheelchair from an early childhood accident. He is kind and nice to everyone, even if most don''t return the favor. He is well accepted by his fellow nerds and, surprisingly, a few of the jocks and the gopnik Anushka, who has been seen defending him from her fellow gopniks, when asked he tends to be vague about it saying they just get along. No one seems to know exactly why she likes him. The rest see him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
+		'Gerasim Vasilyev was confined to a wheelchair after an early childhood accident. He was friendly to everyone, even if most didn''t return the favor. He was well accepted by his fellow nerds and, surprisingly, a few of the jocks and even Anushka, who was often seen defending him from her fellow gopniks. No one seems to know exactly why she liked him, but the rest seen him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
 	else
-		'Gerasim Vasilyev is confined to a wheelchair from an early childhood accident. He is kind and nice to everyone, even if most don''t return the favor. He is well accepted by his fellow nerds and, surprisingly, a few of the jocks and the gopnik Anushka, who has been seen defending him from her fellow gopniks. No one seems to know exactly why she likes him. The rest see him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
+		'Gerasim Vasilyev was confined to a wheelchair after an early childhood accident. He was friendly to everyone, even if most didn''t return the favor. He was well accepted by his fellow nerds and, surprisingly, a few of the jocks and even Anushka, who was often seen defending him from her fellow gopniks. No one seems to know exactly why she liked him, but the rest seen him as an easy target to bully and/or force him to do their homework.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A153'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A153'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A153'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/12.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Julia Milov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and doesn''t really have any friends other than her fellow nerds. She use to be best friends with Natasha, but they had a bit of a falling out and now she seems to be best friends with Zinaida, whom she spends a lot of time with. She seems to like keeping to herself, but has sometimes been caught eyeing the other girls while they are changing after gym lessons, likely jealous of them.'
+		'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and didn''t really have any friends other than her fellow nerds. She seemed to like keeping to herself, but was sometimes caught eyeing the other girls while they were changing after gym lessons, likely jealous of them.'
 	else
-		'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and doesn''t really have any friends other than her fellow nerds. She seems to like keeping to herself, but has sometimes been caught eyeing the other girls while they are changing after gym lessons, likely jealous of them.'
+		'Julia is a diligent and silent girl. She''s very nerdy and didn''t really have any friends other than her fellow nerds. She seems to like keeping to herself, but was sometimes caught eyeing the other girls while they were changing after gym lessons, likely jealous of them.'
 	end
 	'She is getting a science degree at the University.'
 	if npc_rel['A12'] >= 80:
@@ -365,26 +359,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlovsk_university_students':
 	elseif npc_rel['A12'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A12'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/6.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Petka Klyuyev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other students, preferring to only talk to his fellow nerds and mostly spends his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He is another of the regulars to the DnD game night. He does very well in Pavlovsk school and has been known to tutor others sometimes.'
+		'Petka Klyuyev was a nerd who usually didn''t interact with other students, preferring to only talk to his fellow nerds and mostly spent his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you could usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He is another of the regulars at the D&D game night. He did very well in school and was known to tutor others.'
 	else
-		'Petka Klyuyev is a nerd who usually doesn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you can usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He does very well in Pavlovsk school and has been known to tutor others sometimes. However, he is afraid of his own shadow and is thus an easy target for bullying; other students are known to steal his homework.'
+		'Petka Klyuyev was a nerd who usually didn''t interact with other people, mostly spending his time reading. He''s good friends with Artem and you could usually hear them recommending what to read to each other. He did very well in school and was known to tutor others sometimes. However, he is afraid of his own shadow and was thus an easy target for bullying; other students were known to steal his homework.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A6'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A6'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A6'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/13.jpg"></center>'
@@ -393,128 +387,125 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlovsk_university_students':
 		if christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2 or christinaQW['fight'] = 1:
 			'Lariska is an athletic girl who is highly insecure, being very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. Christina used to control her, but ever since you got the upper hand on Christina, Lariska has been a lot more energetic. She has a sparkle in her eyes, and is almost always in a good mood.'
 		else
-			'Lariska is a very athletic girl, with an exceptional talent for volleyball. However, she has a very weak personality and is very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. She spends most of her time trying to appease others, especially Christina. She considers Christina to be her best friend and she can often be seen following her around Pavlovsk school.'
+			'Lariska is a very athletic girl, with an exceptional talent for volleyball. However, she has a very weak personality and is very dependent on other people''s opinions of her. She spends most of her time trying to appease others, especially Christina, whom she considered to be her best friend and could often be seen following her around school.'
 		end
 	else
 		if christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2 or christinaQW['fight'] = 1:
-			'Christina used to control her, but ever since you got the upper hand on Christina, Lariska has been a lot more energetic and friendly. She now almost never bullies others in Pavlovsk school, though she will join in if some of her fellow jocks start bullying someone. She seems to enjoy playing sports even more than before.'
+			'Christina used to control her, but ever since you got the upper hand on Christina, Lariska has been a lot more energetic and friendly. She almost never bullied others at school, though she still joined in if some of her fellow jocks started bullying someone. She seems to enjoy playing sports even more than before.'
 		else
-			'Lariska is a very athletic girl, who is one of the best players on the girls volleyball team. She follows Christina around like a puppy or toady, often doing her bidding and helping Christina bully the other girls and even some of the boys in Pavlovsk school.'
+			'Lariska is a very athletic girl, who is one of the best players on the girls volleyball team. She followed Christina around like a puppy, often doing her bidding and helping Christina bully the other girls and even some of the boys in school.'
 		end
 	end
-	'She is getting a nursing degree at the University.'
+	'She is getting a nursing degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A13'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A13'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A13'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/19.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Avelina "Lina" Starov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... but not really. The right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually does anything Christina wants her to do, as if she doesn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, she would be a lot more popular, but most of the jocks find her doormate personality off putting.'
+		'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. While she looked like Christina''s friend, the right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually did anything Christina wanted her to do, as if she didn''t have a mind of her own. She is a very pretty girl and if she would have thought for herself, she would have been a lot more popular since most of the jocks found her doormat personality off putting.'
 	else
-		'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. She''s sort of Christina''s friend... she usually does anything Christina wants her to do, often helping Christina bully others and when not doing that, following Christina around telling her how great she is. She is a very pretty girl and if she would think for herself, she would be a lot more popular.'
+		'Lina Starov is a mediocre athlete. While she looked like Christina''s friend, the right term would be Christina''s lapdog. She usually did anything Christina wanted her to do, often helping her bully others or following her around telling her how great she is. She is a very pretty girl and if she would have thought for herself, she would have been a lot more popular.'
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A19'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A19'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A19'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	if npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/25.jpg"></center>'
 		'<center>Sonia Ivanko</center>'
 		if grupTipe = 1:
-			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much, other than her sense of fashion. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at Pavlovsk school. Pretty, smart, cheerful, and sociable, Sonia loves to have fun and is rarely in a bad mood. She even has good grades nearly as good as most of the nerds.' 
-			*nl
-			'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation has been in shambles. Not long after a video of her blowing the boys circulated as well, curtsy of Paulina. Most of the girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
-		elseif grupTipe = 4:
-			'Sonia Ivanko is pretty, smart and sociable, Sonia loves to have fun and is rarely in a bad mood. She started hanging out with the gopniks, trying to go to their parties. After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation has been in shambles. Not long after a video of her blowing the boys circulated as well, curtsy of Paulina. Most of the girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
+			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much, other than her sense of fashion. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, able to pull off many great looks and earning the envy of many other girls at school. Pretty, smart, cheerful and sociable, Sonia loves to have fun and is rarely in a bad mood. She even had grades nearly as good as most of the nerds.' 
+			'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation is in shambles. Even at university, most of the girls give her the silent treatment while the guys still treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her.'
 		else
-			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much, other than her sense of fashion. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, many of the other popular girls seem jealous of her sense of style. Pretty, smart, cheerful, and sociable, Sonia loves to have fun and is rarely in a bad mood. She even has good grades nearly as good as most of the nerds.' 
-			*nl
-			'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation has been in shambles. Not long after a video of her blowing the boys circulated as well, curtsy of Paulina. Most of the girls give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to refuse. Many say she has embraced being a cheap slut, happily letting anyone use her, while others say she has started to prostitute herself.'
+			'Sonia Ivanko is an ordinary girl and doesn''t stand out much, other than her sense of fashion. Despite her lack of money or variety of clothing, she has an amazing sense of style, many of the other popular girls seem jealous of her sense of style. Pretty, smart, cheerful and sociable, Sonia loves to have fun and is rarely in a bad mood. She even had grades nearly as good as most of the nerds.' 
+			'After a series of slutty incidents that crescendoed at the dance where she got way too drunk, gave Vitek and his buddies a simultaneous blowjob and returned with her face covered in their cum, Sonia''s reputation has been in shambles. Even at university, most of the girls give her the silent treatment while the guys still treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her.'
 		end
-		'She is getting a fashion degree at the University.'
+		'She is getting a fashion degree at the university.'
 		if npc_rel['A25'] >= 80:
 			'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A25'] >= 50:
 			'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A25'] <= 20:
-			'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+			'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 		else
-			'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+			'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 		end
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/4.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Igor Kruglov</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face, many consider him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in Pavlovsk school, shields him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
+		'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you seen one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face, many considered him to be very feminine. Normally a boy like him would be mocked but his friendship with Dimka, the most popular boy in school, shielded him from such abuse. Many wonder about their friendship as they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor didn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
 	else
-		'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you see one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face, many consider him to be very feminine. Many wonder why the cool kids keep him around, Dimka''s pull with the other cool kids seems to be enough to keep him accepted by the rest. Many wonder about their friendship as Igor follows Dimka around so often and they seem to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor doesn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
+		'Igor Kruglov is Dimka''s best friend and whenever you seen one of them, the other is usually not too far away. With a small stature, high pitched voice and pretty face, many considered him to be very feminine. Many wondered why the cool kids kept him around, but Dimka''s pull with the other cool kids seemed to be enough. Many wonder about their friendship as they seemed to have always been friends. Some would even say that Igor is overly attached to Dimka. Other than Dimka, Igor didn''t seem to have any other close friends.'
 	end
-	'He is getting a teaching degree at the University.'
+	'He is getting a teaching degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A4'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A4'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A4'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/142.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Zinaida "Zina" Alkaev</center>'
 	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. She is also always at the DnD game night and seems to love attending and gets into role playing her character more than most, she always seems eager to attend events when Feofan is there. Recently her and Julia have started hanging out all the time together. The boys seem to love that she knows as much as they do about that stuff and that she can beat most of them at the games they play.'
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly kept to herself playing various games on her phone, although she is great at video games and knows all about fantasy, sci-fi, superheroes and other important things. She is always at the D&D game night and loves getting into role playing her character more than most. The boys seemed to love that she knows as much as they do about that stuff and can beat most of them at the games they play.'
 	else
-		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly keeps to herself, playing various games on her phone, although she is fairly popular with the male nerds for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seems to be a complete loner unless she is around her fellow nerds.'
+		'Zinaida Alkaev is a mousey girl who is very plain looking. She never wears makeup, dresses in baggy clothes and barely bothers to brush her hair. She mostly kept to herself playing various games on her phone, although she was fairly popular with the male nerds for reasons unknown to everyone else. She seemed to be a complete loner unless she was around her fellow nerds.'
 	end
-	'She is getting a programing degree at the University.'
+	'She is getting a programing degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A142'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A142'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A142'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center>Lesco Tsarev</center>'
-	'Everyone bullies Lesco about anything and everything. He is the nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera. He resides with the Tsarevs after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very sociable. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone. He is getting a teaching degree at the University.'
+	'Everyone bullied Lesco about anything and everything. The nephew of Mr. Tsarev and the cousin of Lera, he had been residing with his uncle after his mother abandoned him for a week on one of her drug binges. He is very ugly and not very sociable. He always seems be sad and just wants to be left alone.' 
+	'He is getting a teaching degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A7'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A7'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A7'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/159.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Petia Alkaev</center>'
-	'Petia Alkaev is the class mooch, persistently asking others for food, money and cigarettes. He can''t take a hint and doesn''t know the meaning of "personal space", which is made worse by the fact that he seems to be unaware of what soap is as well. He is an unattractive, overweight loser who makes girls uncomfortable by repeatedly hitting on them. No matter how many beatdowns he suffers or how many cruel pranks are pulled on him, he never seems to learn his lesson.'
+	'Petia Alkaev was the class mooch, persistently asking others for food, money and cigarettes. He can''t take a hint and doesn''t know the meaning of "personal space", which is made worse by the fact that he seems to be unaware of what soap is. He was and still is an unattractive, overweight loser who makes girls uncomfortable by repeatedly hitting on them. No matter how many beatdowns he suffers or how many cruel pranks are pulled on him, he never seems to learn his lesson.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'uni'
@@ -524,57 +515,57 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'university_students':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Pavlovsk University Students</h2></center>'
-	'Students attend the University.'
+	'Students who are attending the university.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/82.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Djibril Maina</center>'
-	'Djibril is from African, attending the Saint Petersburg University. He is the nephew of Oluuosegun, your aunts boyfriend, and he lives in the student dorms. He is getting a business degree at the University.'
+	'Djibril is from Africa. He is the nephew of Oluuosegun, your aunt''s boyfriend, and lives in the student dorms. He is studying for a business degree.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/83.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Goshi Sidorov</center>'
-	'Goshi has live in Saint Petersburg his whole life, he comes from a well off family, not rich but not wanting for things. He is use to always getting his way. His mother is a stay at home mom and his dad is a business man. He is going to the University to follow in his fathers footsteps, by getting a business degree at the University.'
+	'Goshi has lived in Saint Petersburg his whole life and comes from a well off family; not rich, but not wanting for things. He is used to always getting his way. His mother is a stay at home mom and his dad is a business man. He is going to the university to follow in his father''s footsteps by getting a business degree.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/77.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Tryndin Maximovich</center>'
-	'Lives in apartment 37 in the Residential area of the City and attends the city University.'
+	'Tryndin lives in apartment 37 in the residential area of the city and attends the city university.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/242.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Lebogang "Lebo" Kayode</center>'
-	'Djibril''s closet friend in Russia. They both live on the same floor in the same dorm and he also attends the University. He is also from Africa.'
+	'Djibril''s closet friend in Russia. They both live on the same floor in the same dorm and also attends the university. He is also from Africa.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/243.jpg"></center>'
@@ -585,89 +576,88 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'university_students':
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/244.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Farai Ihejirika</center>'
-	'Djibril''s roommate at the university dorms. He is also from Africa.'
+	'Farai is Djibril''s roommate at the university. He is also from Africa.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/245.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Haruna Babatunde</center>'
-	'Haruna is close friends with Djibril, having met in their freshmen year. He lives on the same floor of the dorms, and is also from Africa.'
+	'Haruna is close friends with Djibril, having met in their freshman year. He lives on the same floor of the dorms, and is also from Africa.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/246.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Arendse Idowu</center>'
-	'Arendse is Haruna''s roommate and friend. They live in the same dorm room and both attend the University. He is also from Africa.'
+	'Arendse is Haruna''s roommate and friend. They live in the same dorm room and both attend the university. He is also from Africa.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, he can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/84.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Kendra Abiodun</center>'
-	'Kendra is from South Africa and attends the University in Saint Petersburg now. She is well known to have a dominate personality, she often tries to dominate those around her. Some believe she is a racist as she seems to especially love dominate white students that attend the university. She is getting a business degree at the University.'
+	'Kendra is from South Africa and attends the university in Saint Petersburg. She is well known to have a dominant personality, often trying to dominate those around her. Some believe she is a racist as she seems to especially love dominating white students that attend the university. She is studying for a business degree.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/220.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Vika Kirilova</center>'
-	'Vika lives in the dorms and attends the city university. She comes from a town in a truly remote part of Russia. Her family is poor. Yet despite that she seems to always have money.'
-!!We should give all the Uni students starting relationships of 35
+	'Vika lives in the dorms and attends the city university. She comes from a town in a truly remote part of Russia. Her family is poor, yet she seems to always have money.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/247.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Liliya Lyubimova</center>'
-	'Liliya is a very attractive and rather tall girl. Nobody knows really too much about her other than that she is a true tease. She finds amusement and fun teasing the boys with flashing her privates -usually naked- or just looking seductively. She refuses any advances made by the boys and she doesn''t let anybody to touch her or even try to flirt her. Usually those attempts end with a slap or some emasculating comeback lines. She is getting a teaching degree at the University.'
-!!We should give all the Uni students starting relationships of 35
+	'Liliya is a very attractive and rather tall girl. Nobody knows too much about her other than that she is a true tease. She finds amusement in teasing the boys by flashing them or just looking seductively. She refuses any advances made towards her and doesn''t let anybody to touch or even try to flirt with her. Those who attempt to do so end up recieving a slap or some emasculating comeback line.'
+	'She is getting a teaching degree at the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A159'] >= 80:
 		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] >= 50:
 		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A159'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way, she can''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'uni'
@@ -677,335 +667,262 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'former_pavlovsk_students':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h2>Cool kids</h2></center>'
-	'The former cool kids that didn''t go to the University in Saint Petersburg.'
+	'The former cool kids that didn''t go to the university in Saint Petersburg.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/148.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Mefodiy Utkin</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 1:
-		'Mefodiy Utkin is reasonably intelligent, with middle-of-the-road grades. He is fairly average looking, but possesses a good sense of humor and comedic timing. He isn''t too popular, just popular enough to hang among the cool kids, who like his humor. He seems to enjoy mocking or making jokes at the gopniks expense, often in ways they don''t always understand.'
-	else
-		'Mefodiy Utkin is reasonably intelligent, with middle-of-the-road grades. He is fairly average looking, but possesses a good sense of humor and timing. He isn''t too popular, just popular enough to hang among the cool kids, who like his humor.'
-	end
-	'He just packed up and left right after graduation, rumors are he is traveling around Europe.'
+	'Mefodiy Utkin was reasonably intelligent, with middle-of-the-road grades. He was fairly average looking, but possessed a good sense of humor and timing. He wasn''t too popular, just popular enough to hang among the cool kids, who liked his humor.'
+	'He just packed up and left right after graduation. Rumors are he is traveling around Europe.'
 	if npc_rel['A148'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A148'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A148'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn'' stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><h2>Jocks</h2></center>'
-	'The former jocks that didn''t go to the University in Saint Petersburg.'
+	'The former jocks that didn''t go to the university in Saint Petersburg.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/3.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Ivan Prokhorov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who is able to succeed in any sport he takes part in. He is mostly into boxing and running and is considered to be very good looking by the girls in Pavlovsk school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He isn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, he tends to be home taking care of his little brother and sister while his mother works two jobs. Although he occasionally hangs out with Fedor, or even on rare occasions shows up at the disco or some of the jock parties. He is calm and collected by nature, some might even say apathetic.'
-	else
-		'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who is able to succeed in any sport he takes part in. He is mostly into boxing and running and is considered to be very good looking by the girls in Pavlovsk school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He isn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, tends to keep to himself, although he occasionally hangs out with Fedor. He is calm and collected by nature, some might even say apathetic.'
-	end
-	'He stayed in Pavlovsk to work and support his family. Though he does go to the city to train in boxing and has started boxing professionally.'
+	'Ivan Prokhorov is a talented athlete who was able to succeed in any sport he took part in. He is mostly into boxing and running and was considered to be very good looking by the girls in school. He spends a lot of time training and is regularly away competing. He wasn''t very sociable and, other than when he is training, tended to keep to himself, although he occasionally hung out with Fedor. He was calm and collected by nature, some might even say apathetic.'
+	'He stayed in Pavlovsk to work and support his family, though he does go to the city to train in boxing and has started boxing professionally.'
 	if npc_rel['A3'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A3'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A3'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/8.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Svyatoslav Voinov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit, perhaps the most competitive of the boys, unfortunately for him, he is not as good of a athlete as Lazar or Ivan is and almost always comes in third. He is on every one of the Pavlovsk schools sports teams. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at Pavlovsk school. His other focus is football, where he competes with Lazar to be the best player on the team. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
+	'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He ran track and often competed with Ivan to be the fastest boy at school. His other focus was football, as well as many other sports the school offered. He was always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely managed to beat either of them at anything.'
+	'He left Pavlovsk to attend a university in Moscow.'
+	if npc_rel['A8'] >= 80:
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
+		'He really liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'Svyatoslav Voinov is an athletic guy with a very competitive spirit. He is always engaged in sports one way or another. He runs track and often competes with Ivan to be the fastest boy at Pavlovsk school. His other focus is football, as well as many other sports the Pavlovsk school offers. He''s always trying to one up Ivan or Lazar, but rarely manages to beat either of them at anything.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
-	'He left to attend to University in Moscow.'
 	
 	if npc_grupTipe['A5'] = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/5.jpg"></center>'
 		'<center>Fyodor "Fedor" Kozlov</center>'
-		if grupTipe = 2:
-			'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks Ivan''s level of natural talent. He is on all the Pavlovsk schools sports teams and goes to the community center, to train in boxing with sometimes with Ivan. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
-		else
-			'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trains with his good friend Ivan, but lacks Ivan''s level of talent. He is a member of all the Pavlovsk schools sports teams. He is decent looking and often is seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
-		end
+		'Fedor Kozlov is a decent athlete. He often trained with his good friend Ivan, but lacked Ivan''s level of talent. He was a member of all the school''s sports teams. He was decent looking and could often be seen chasing Ivan''s leftovers.'
 		'He stayed in Pavlovsk.'
 		if npc_rel['A5'] >= 80:
-			'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+			'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A5'] >= 50:
-			'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+			'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A5'] <= 20:
-			'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+			'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 		else
-			'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+			'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 		end
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/150.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Erast Vagin</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Erast Vagin is a huge boy, nearly two meters tall, and is very strong, having little fat on his broad shouldered frame. He is not a looker or even clever, though anyone that has played sports with him knows he is not as dumb as he comes across. He memorizes plays well, he just seems to have little interest in learning anything out of sports. He is always polite and a little shy, especially around girls. He often defends girls from being bullied by the other boys, not afraid to stand up to several gopniks at once. However, when he is playing sports he changes into a demon, putting his all into winning and nothing else. He is an average athlete and relies on his size and strength to win the day for him. Other than playing sports, he sometimes boxes with Ivan.'
-	else
-		'Erast Vagin is a huge boy, nearly two meters tall, and is very strong, having little fat on his broad shouldered frame. He is not a looker or even clever, but is always polite and a little shy, especially around girls. He often defends girls from being bullied by the other boys, not afraid to stand up to several gopniks at once. Most of the girls are nice to him because of it, though a few of them love to tease him and make him blush. No one that has seem him play sports would mistake him for a big teddy bear, as he can be ferocious when he chooses to be. He is an average athlete and relies on his size and strength to win the day for him. Other than playing sports, he sometimes boxes with Ivan.'
-	end
+	'Erast Vagin was a huge boy, nearly two meters tall, and was very strong. He wasn''t a looker or even clever, but was always polite and a little shy, especially around girls. He often defended girls from being bullied by the other boys, not afraid to stand up to several gopniks at once. Most of the girls were nice to him because of it, though a few of them loved to tease him and make him blush. No one that seen him play sports would mistake him for a big teddy bear, as he could be ferocious when he chose to be. He was an average athlete and relied on his size and strength to win the day for him. Other than playing sports, he sometimes boxed with Ivan.'
 	'He stayed in Pavlovsk.'
 	if npc_rel['A150'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A150'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A150'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/141.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Veronika "Ronnie" Sokolov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 2:
-		'Veronika Sokolov is sometimes called the "Ice Queen" by the non jocks in Pavlovsk school behind her back for a few reasons. One is that she is a very talented ice skater, there is even talk about how she might compete in the next winter Olympics. The other is because she often comes across as cold and indifferent and never lets anyone get close to her. You know that isn''t true, she can be nice or even sweet at times, it is just she is hyper focused on her skating and rarely has any free time between Pavlovsk school and training. She comes from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
-	else
-		'Veronika Sokolov is called the "Ice Queen" by her fellow students behind her back for a few reasons. One is that she is a very talented ice skater, there is even talk about how she might compete in the next winter Olympics. The other is because she is cold and indifferent and never lets anyone get close to her. She comes from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
-	end
+	'Veronika Sokolov was called the "Ice Queen" by her fellow students behind her back for two reasons. One is that she was a very talented ice skater, while the other is because she was cold and indifferent and never let anyone get close to her. She came from one of the wealthier families in Pavlovsk.'
 	'She left to join the Russian Olympic skating team.'
 
 	'<center><h2>Nerds</h2></center>'
-	'The former nerds that didn''t go to the University in Saint Petersburg.'
+	'The former nerds that didn''t go to the university in Saint Petersburg.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/151.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Evgeny Kuznetsov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 3:
-		'Evgeny Kuznetsov is the Pavlovsk school chess champion and you can always find him at the chess club at the community center. He is shy and very intelligent, but has not shown any interest in girls, or anyone else for that matter. The other nerds often try and get him interested in their activities but it rarely works, the do go support him when he plays competitive chess. His family has confirmed he does indeed have autism.'
-	else
-		'Evgeny Kuznetsov is the Pavlovsk school chess champion and you can always find him at the chess club at the community center. He is shy and very intelligent, but has not shown any interest in girls, or anyone else for that matter. No one would be surprised if he has mild autism.'
-	end
-	'He left to attend the University in Moscow.'
+	'Evgeny Kuznetsov was the Pavlovsk school chess champion and you could always find him at the chess club at the community center. He was shy and very intelligent, but didn''t show any interest in girls, or anyone else for that matter. No one would be surprised if he had mild autism.'
+	'He left to attend the university in Moscow.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/240.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></center>'	
-	'Natalia is a very smart, but weak willed girl. She constantly struggles to maintain friendships, but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevents her from being an outcast. Despite this, she is rarely seen hanging out with anyone. She also fiercely guards a notebook she likes to keep private, never letting anyone read or even touch it.'
-	'She left to attend the University in Moscow.'
+	'Natalia was a very smart, but weak willed girl. She constantly struggled to maintain friendships, but her good looks and eagerness to help others prevented her from being an outcast. Despite this, she was rarely seen hanging out with anyone. She also fiercely guarded a notebook she liked to keep private, never letting anyone read or even touch it.'
+	'She left to attend the university in Moscow.'
 
 	'<center><h2>Gopniks</h2></center>'
-	'The former gopniks that didn''t go to the University in Saint Petersburg.'
+	'The former gopniks that didn''t go to the university in Saint Petersburg.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/9.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Vitek Kotov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Vitek Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy who considers himself to be a "gangsta". He is very loud, obnoxious, and not very attractive. Lena is his twin sister, whom he is overly protective of, which has caused more than a fair share of drama. He is the leader of the true local gopniks, even the rest of the trouble makers tend to respect him and as such is the most feared boy in Pavlovsk school. Even some adults are afraid of him. He is even involved with the local organized crime selling and running drugs for them.'
-	else
-		'Vitek Kotov is an aggressive and strong guy who considers himself to be a "gangsta". He is very loud, obnoxious, and not very attractive. Lena is his twin sister, whom he is overly protective of, which has caused more than a fair share of drama. He is the leader of the local gopniks and as such is the most feared boy in Pavlovsk school. Even some adults are afraid of him. He is even rumored to be involved with the local organized crime selling drugs.'
-	end
+	'Vitek Kotov was an aggressive and strong guy who considered himself to be a "gangsta". He was very loud, obnoxious, and not very attractive. Lena was his twin sister, whom he was overly protective of, which has caused more than a fair share of drama. He was the leader of the local gopniks and as such was the most feared boy in school. Even some adults were afraid of him. He was even rumored to be involved with the local organized crime selling drugs.'
 	'He stayed in Pavlovsk and got more involved with Vadim Bely.'
 	if npc_rel['A9'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A9'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A9'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/157.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Roman Yakovlev</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Roman Yakovlev is an absolute psychopath, everyone but Vitek seems to be afraid of him. Despite his small size he is wiry, with hard compact muscles. He''ll start fights out of boredom, because he just loves to fight and he is a very good fighter, that has no problems fighting dirty. He enjoys being especially cruel or sadistic to his victims. He once smashed a bottle over a guy''s head and then stabbed him in the face with it, all because he said the guy looked at him funny. Roman always has a snide remark and is not afraid to speak back to the teachers or other adults. He''s not doing great at Pavlovsk school because he doesn''t care. The other gopniks find his attitude amusing and seem to like that he''s always getting them into fights.'
-	else
-		'Roman Yakovlev is an absolute psychopath, just about everyone is afraid of him. He''s one of the smaller kids, but he is always causing trouble. He''ll start fights out of boredom, knowing that the other gopniks will have his back. He enjoys being especially cruel or sadistic to his victims. He once smashed a bottle over a guy''s head and then stabbed him in the face with it, all because he said the guy looked at him funny. Roman always has a snide remark and is not afraid to speak back to the teachers or other adults. He''s not doing great at Pavlovsk school because he doesn''t care. The other gopniks find his attitude amusing and seem to like that he''s always getting them into funny situations.'
-	end
+	'Roman Yakovlev was an absolute psychopath and just about everyone was afraid of him. He was one of the smaller students, but he was always causing trouble. He would start fights out of boredom, knowing that the other gopniks would have his back. He enjoyed being especially cruel or sadistic to his victims. He once smashed a bottle over a guy''s head and then stabbed him in the face with it, simply because he said the guy looked at him funny. He always had a snide remark and wasn''t afraid to speak back to the teachers or other adults. He didn''t do great at school because he didn''t care, but the other gopniks found his attitude amusing and seemed to like that he was always getting them into funny situations.'
 	'He stayed in Pavlovsk.'
 	if npc_rel['A157'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A157'] >= 60:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A157'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/10.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Dan Ryzhov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Dan Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy who has nothing but disdain and contempt for anyone not a gopnik, he even feels that way about some of the gopniks. He is also well known even by gopnik standards to have no respect for girls, seeing them as nothing more than a wet hole to stick his dick in. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument be. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily, and is considered to be the smartest of the bunch, although most don''t consider that to be much of a feat. He is the one that takes Vitek''s idea''s and turns them into plans.'
-	else
-		'Dan Ryzhov is a tall and skinny guy whose body language screams his disdain and contempt for others. He''s a very stubborn guy who will never let an argument be. He''s best friends with Vitek and Vasily and is considered to be the smartest of the bunch, although most don''t consider that to be much of a feat.'
-	end
+	'Dan Ryzhov was a tall and skinny guy whose body language screamed his disdain and contempt for others. He was a very stubborn guy who would never let an argument be. He was best friends with Vitek and Vasily and was considered to be the smartest of the bunch, although most didn''t consider that to be much of a feat.'
 	'He stayed in Pavlovsk, still hanging out with Vitek.'
 	if npc_rel['A10'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A10'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A10'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/156.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Arkadi Fyodorov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was held back a year, at some point, so now is a year older than all of his fellow students. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks, when not hanging out with the band he is often found hanging out with Roman, they both love to get into fights. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is. He often encourages the rest of the band to practice more.'
-	else
-		'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family recently moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was held back a year, at some point, so now is a year older than all of his fellow students. He is very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks. He is also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk is.'
-	end
-	'He and the rest of the boys in the band and Alyona. Rented a place in the city, near the University'
+	'Arkadi Fyodorov is the drummer in Radomir''s band. His family moved from Saint Petersburg to Pavlovsk. He was held back a year at some point, so was a year older than his fellow students. He was very violent when angry, especially with anyone outside the gopniks. He was also not shy about reminding everyone how much harder the city is and how lame Pavlovsk was.'
+	'He and the rest of the band and Alyona rented a place in the city, near the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A156'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A156'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A156'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/158.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Valentin Bogdanov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. However, this doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame to seduce and use girls, he is just rarely a dick about it. He and Radomir where the two that first started the band. His goal is to make enough cash to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad, working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band, or practicing with his bass guitar.'
-	else
-		'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. However, this doesn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame to use girls. He is just rarely a dick about it. His goal is to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He can often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad, working on his motorcycle when he is not hanging out with the band.'
-	end
-	'He and the rest of the boys in the band and Alyona. Rented a place in the city, near the University'
+	'Valentin Bogdanov is the bassist in Radomir''s band and the nicest guy in the band. However, this didn''t stop him from using his small amount of fame to use girls. He was just rarely a dick about it. His goal was to make enough cash from the band to buy an old American motorbike and ride it across the country. He could often be found hanging out with Anushka''s dad, working on his motorcycle when he wasn''t hanging out with the band.'
+	'He and the rest of the band and Alyona rented a place in the city, near the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A158'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A158'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A158'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/154.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Radomir Popov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Reydery (Pussy Raiders). He has a great deal of raw talent and is convinced the band is going to become mega stars. In fact he already acts like they are more famous then they are. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some girls adore him because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame, but he is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification. Everyone knows he use to date Anushka, but they broke up over a year ago. Rumors are he cheated on her or she cheated on him depending on who you ask.'
-	else
-		'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Reydery (Pussy Raiders). They are considered fairly talented, but he is more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. Thus, he can be arrogant to almost everybody. Some girls adore him because they think he is cool or are just groupies that latch onto his limited fame, but he is more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seems to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification. Most seem to know he use to date Anushka, but they broke up over a year ago.'
-	end
-	'He and the rest of the boys in the band and Alyona. Rented a place in the city, near the University'
+	'Radomir Popov is the lead singer, backup guitarist and leader of a local underground rock/punk band named Pizdá Reydery (Pussy Raiders). They were considered fairly talented, but he was more or less an asshole who thinks he should already be a star. He could thus be arrogant to almost everybody. Some girls adored him because they think he was cool or were just groupies that latched onto his limited fame, but he was more than happy to use his small amount of fame to let him use as many girls as he can, as often as he can. He seemed to think girls only exist to provide him with sexual gratification. He used to date Anushka, but they broke up over a year ago.'
+	'He and the rest of the band and Alyona rented a place in the city, near the university.'
 	if npc_rel['A154'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A154'] >= 60:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A154'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/145.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Katyusha Maksimov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Katyusha Maksimov is the least attractive girl in Pavlovsk school, her face and body is too masculine, she tends to dress like a boy and never shaves her arm pits or legs. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She gets her booze by either stealing it or hanging out with the boys. When she "plays" with the boys, it only goes as far as she wants it. While the boys are afraid of Lena''s brother, she prefers fighting the boys herself, which has left them with a healthy respect for her.'
-		*nl
-		'Regardless of the whether, she practices Sambo in the park every day before Pavlovsk school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming "boxing is for pussies" and that real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik, but other people consider her one. This doesn''t bother her because she only cares about the opinion of the people whom earn her respect, which is really hard to do. She mostly hangs out Arkadi, Roman, and Paulina, she has no respect at all for the other gopniks girls, often wondering why they are even allowed to hangout with them. She seems to especially dislike Lera and Anushka.'
-	else
-		'Katyusha Maksimov is the least attractive girl in Pavlovsk school, her face and body is too masculine, she tends to dress like a boy and never shaves her arm pits or legs. She only seems to care about two things, booze and fighting. She is the only girl in Pavlovsk school that many of the boys are afraid off. Regardless of the weather, she practices Sambo in the park every day before Pavlovsk school. She often taunts or makes fun of the boxers by claiming "boxing is for pussies" and that real fighters fight without rules. She doesn''t see herself as a gopnik, but other people consider her one.'
-	end
-	'Shortly after graduation she moved away with out telling anyone where. Rumors are she joined the army.'
+	'Katyusha Maksimov was the least attractive girl in school. Her face and body were too masculine and she tended to dress like a boy while never shaving her arm pits or legs. She only seemed to care about two things; booze and fighting. Regardless of the weather, she practiced Sambo in the park every day before school, often taunting or making fun of the boxers by claiming "boxing is for pussies" and that real fighters fight without rules. She didn''t see herself as a gopnik, but other people considered her one.'
+	'Shortly after graduation, she moved away without telling anyone where she was going. Rumors are she joined the army.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/24.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Pauline Sebagotulina</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Pauline Sebagotulina is a bit of a wild child, which makes her very unpredictable. She is a bit of a tomboy and mostly hangs out with the gopniks boys, she doesn''t seem to have a lot of respect for the other gopniks girls, except Katyusha. No one dares to mess with her because she''s been in more fights than anyone else. She and Katyusha can sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
-	else
-		'Pauline Sebagotulina is a bit of a wild child, which makes her very unpredictable. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by them. No one dares to mess with her because she''s been in more fights than anyone else. She and Katyusha can sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
-	end
+	'Pauline Sebagotulina was a bit of a wild child, which made her very unpredictable. She often hung out with the gopniks in your class and was liked by them. No one dared to mess with her because she was in more fights than anyone else. She and Katyusha could sometimes be found sparring together and starting fights with others.'
 	'She stayed in Pavlovsk.'
 	if npc_rel['A24'] >= 80:
-		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
+		'She really liked you and considered you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A24'] >= 50:
-		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
+		'She liked you and considered you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A24'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, she couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with her, but she didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/11.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Vasily Shulgin</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Also known as Shulga, Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek since they are his best friends. He''s considered the physically weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the others laugh, which makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you were younger, you were good friends with him and as you both drifted towards the gopniks, have stayed good friends.'
-	else
-		'Also known as Shulga, Vasily is always hanging out with Dan and Vitek since they are his best friends. He''s considered the physically weakest one of the bunch, but is a bit of a prankster and is always making the others laugh, which makes him popular with the gopniks. He was raised by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant. When you were younger, you were good friends with him, but as you grew up you have somewhat drifted apart.'
-	end
+	'Also known as Shulga, Vasily was always hanging out with Dan and Vitek since they were his best friends. He was considered the physically weakest one of the bunch, but was a bit of a prankster and was always making the others laugh, which made him popular with the gopniks. He was raised by his father after his mother left when he was still an infant.'
 	'He stayed in Pavlovsk, still hanging out with Vitek.'
 	if npc_rel['A11'] >= 80:
-		'He really likes you and considers you one of his best friends.'
+		'He really liked you and considered you one of his best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A11'] >= 50:
-		'He likes you and considers you to be one of his friends.'
+		'He liked you and considered you to be one of his friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A11'] <= 20:
-		'He really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way he obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'He really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, he couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with him, but he doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with him, but he didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/189.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Nikolai Volkov</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying, he is hanging out with Lavrenti, with many saying that he only spends time with Lavrenti for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, his family use to be fairly wealthy but fell on hard times, they still live in their house but it seems to be falling into a bit of disrepair.'
-	else
-		'Niko Volkov is clever, but short tempered. When he is not drinking and partying, he is hanging out with Lavrenti, with many saying that he only spends time with Lavrenti for his money. Niko always seems confident and well spoken, but he can sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
-	end
-	'Shortly after graduation he just disappeared, no one has seen him since.'
+	'Niko Volkov was clever, but short tempered. When he wasn''t drinking and partying, he was hanging out with Lavrenti, with many saying that he only spent time with Lavrenti for his money. He always seemed confident and well spoken, but could sometimes come off as paranoid and unstable.'
+	'He disappered just after graduation and no one has seen him since.'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/20.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Yalena "Lena" Kotova</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Lena Kotov is Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she is one of the local gopniks. She has a chip on her shoulder, so she can be aggressive and unpredictable. She''s best friends with Lera and they can often be found together smoking in the Pavlovsk school''s restrooms or hanging out after Pavlovsk school. Because her brother scares off all the boys, she can sometimes be found making out with Lera, everyone knows they hookup, much to Vitek''s annoyance. Katyusha has said the only reason Lena is a gopnik is because of her brother.'
-	else
-		'Lena Kotov is Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she is one of the local gopniks. She often bullies the nerds and outcast, even bullies some of the jocks and cool kids. She''s best friends with Lera and they can often be found together smoking in the Pavlovsk school''s restrooms or hanging out after Pavlovsk school. Rumor is they hookup in the restrooms.'
-	end
+	'Lena Kotov was Vitek''s twin sister. Just like her brother, she was one of the local gopniks. She often bullied the nerds and outcasts, even targeting some of the jocks and cool kids at times. She was best friends with Lera and they could often be found together smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school.'
 	'She stayed in Pavlovsk.'
 	if npc_rel['A20'] >= 80:
-		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
+		'She really liked you and considered you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A20'] >= 50:
-		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
+		'She liked you and considered you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A20'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, she couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with her, but she didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/143.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Alyona Zima</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker. She lives to cause trouble and jumps into any trouble she can find. She can often be found drinking alcohol, she is drunk more often than not. The only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka, she occasionally hangs out with the boys from the band or Lena and Lera. It is well known she carries a knife with her everywhere she goes and isn''t afraid to use it. She comes from a troubled family as her parents are alcoholic drug addicts. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
-	else
-		'Alyona Zima is a hardcore troublemaker. She lives to cause trouble and jumps into any trouble she can find. She can often be found drinking alcohol, she is drunk more often than not. The only person she seems to spend a lot of time around is Anushka, she occasionally hangs out with the boys from the band or Lena and Lera. It is well known she carries a knife with her, everywhere she goes. Which causes most others to give her a wide berth. Rumor is her mother is a drug addict and her father is a alcoholic. Most people view her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree. Her father is well known as a bad guy and a bully.'
-	end
+	'Alyona Zima was a hardcore troublemaker. She lived to cause trouble and jumped into any trouble she can find. She could often be found drinking alcohol, and was drunk more often than not. The only person she seemed to spend a lot of time around was Anushka, although she occasionally hung out with the boys from the band or Lena and Lera. It was well known that she carried a knife with her everywhere she went, which caused others to give her a wide berth. Rumor is her mother is a drug addict and her father is an alcoholic bully. Most people viewed her as the apple that didn''t fall far from the tree.'
 	'She moved to the city and moved in with the boys from the band.'
 	if npc_rel['A143'] >= 80:
-		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
+		'She really liked you and considered you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A143'] >= 55:
-		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
+		'She liked you and considered you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A143'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, she couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with her, but she didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/21.jpg"></center>'
 	'<center>Valeria "Lera" Tsarev</center>'
-	if grupTipe = 4:
-		'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, her father Anatoly Tsarev is one of the teachers at Pavlovsk school. Her cousin Lesco recently moved in with them and attends Pavlovsk school, she often picks on him and the other outcasts at Pavlovsk school. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by most of them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together, smoking in the Pavlovsk school''s restrooms or hanging out after Pavlovsk school. She is protective of Lena and always follows her lead. Just about all the gopniks are convinced she is a lesbian, while she has had sex with boys before it is rare. It is well known her and Lena hook up fairly regular and she has been seen making eyes at some of the other pretty gopnik girls. Katyusha seems disgusted by Lera and dislikes her, almost as much as she dislikes Anushka.'
-	else
-		'Lera Tsarev comes from a poor family, but her father Anatoly Tsarev works at the Pavlovsk school as a teacher. Her cousin Lesco recently moved in with them and attends Pavlovsk school, she often picks on him and the other outcasts at Pavlovsk school. She often hangs out with the gopniks in your class and is liked by them. She''s best friends with Lena and they can often be found together, smoking in the Pavlovsk school''s restrooms or hanging out after Pavlovsk school. She is protective of Lena and always takes her lead. It is rumored that she is a lesbian and in love with Lena.'
-	end
+	'Lera Tsarev came from a poor family. Her father works at the school as a teacher. After her cousin Lesco moved in with them, she often picked on him and the other outcasts at school. She often hung out with the gopniks in your class and was liked by them. She was best friends with Lena and they could often be found together, smoking in the school''s restrooms or hanging out after school. She was protective of Lena and always took her lead. It was rumored that she is a lesbian and was in love with Lena.'
 	'She stayed in Pavlovsk.'
 	if npc_rel['A21'] >= 80:
-		'She really likes you and considers you one of her best friends.'
+		'She really liked you and considered you one of her best friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A21'] >= 50:
-		'She likes you and considers you to be one of her friends.'
+		'She liked you and considered you to be one of her friends.'
 	elseif npc_rel['A21'] <= 20:
-		'She really dislikes you, maybe even hates you. Either way she obviously can''t stand you.'
+		'She really disliked you, maybe even hated you. Either way, she couldn''t stand you.'
 	else
-		'You are acquaintances with her, but she doesn''t really seem to care much about you either way, neither like nor dislike.'
+		'You were acquaintances with her, but she didn''t seem to care much about you either way.'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'friends_family'

locations/katjaEvDin.qsrc

@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'You bring your face to Katjas face and feel her hot breath on your lips. Katja closes her eyes and touches her lips to your lips.'
-	'Katjas nimble tongue darts into your mouth, you suck on her tongue, then your tongue goes into Katja''s mouth and she very gently caressed it with her tongue and sucks on your tongue.'
+	'You bring your face to Katja''s and feel her hot breath on your lips. Katja closes her eyes and touches her lips to your lips.'
+	'Her nimble tongue darts into your mouth and you suck on her tongue before your tongue goes into Katja''s mouth and she very gently caresses it with her tongue.'
 	'Katja finally pushes away from your flushed face and licks her lips.'
 
 	if katjaQW['horny'] >= 60:
@@ -31,8 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 			katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tits.jpg"></center>'
-			'Katja bares your breasts and touches them with her fingers, then she bows her head and begins to lick your nipple.'
-
+			'Katja bares your breasts and touches them with her fingers before she bows her head and begins to lick your nipple.'
 			gs 'KatjaEvDin', 'sex'
 		end
 
@@ -66,8 +65,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 			'You touch Katja''s tender breasts and she sighs deeply, biting her lip.'
 
 			if katjaQW['horny'] < rand(0,60):
-				'You''re her breasts a little before Katja moves away from you.'
-				'"I''m not in the mood right now Sveta" Katja says "Another time"'
+				'You play with her breasts a little before she moves away from you.'
+				'"I''m not in the mood right now <<$pcs_nickname>>. Another time, maybe?"'
 
 				act 'Accept Katja''s decision':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -89,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 						if pcs_dom < KatjaQW['dom']:
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
-							'Katja pushes your arms apart and pulls away, you understand that she doesn''t want more.'
+							'Katja pushes your arms apart and pulls away. You understand that she doesn''t want more.'
 
 							if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
 								Act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
@@ -105,8 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 								katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tits_katja_get.jpg"></center>'
-								'You free Katja''s small, firm breasts from under her clothes and begin to lick them, paying special attention to her nipples. Katja closed her eyes in pleasure and bites her lip.'
-
+								'You free Katja''s small, firm breasts from under her clothes and begin to lick them, paying special attention to her nipples. Katja closes her eyes in pleasure and bites her lip.'
 								gs 'KatjaEvDin', 'sex'
 							end
 						end
@@ -115,8 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 					act 'Grab her (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
 			else
-				'Katja moves her hands to your chest and gently touches them with her finger.'
-				'Katja starts stroking your chest stronger and you feel as she undoes your bra, trying to get to your breasts.'
+				'Katja moves her hands to your breasts and gently touches them with her finger before she starts squeezing them and you feel her undoing your bra.'
 
 				act 'Let her':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -124,16 +121,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 					katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tits.jpg"></center>'
-					'Katja bares your breasts and touches them with her fingers, then she bows her head and begins to lick your nipple.'
-
+					'Katja bares your breasts and touches them with her fingers before she bows her head and begins to lick your nipple.'
 					gs 'KatjaEvDin', 'sex'
 				end
 
-				act 'Ask Katja to stop.':
+				act 'Ask her to stop':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/touch.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ask Katja to stop but she ignores you.'
-
+					'You ask Katja to stop, but she ignores you.'
 					gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'hard'
 
 					act 'Give in to her touch':
@@ -143,8 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss':
 						katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tits.jpg"></center>'
-						'Katja bares your breasts and touches them with her fingers, then she bows her head and begins to lick your nipple.'
-
+						'Katja bares your breasts and touches them with her fingers before she bows her head and begins to lick your nipple.'
 						gs 'KatjaEvDin', 'sex'
 					end
 					
@@ -222,9 +216,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_main':
 
 	if katjaQW['horny'] < 0:katjaQW['horny'] = 0
 
-	act 'Get dressed  and talk about something else': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	act 'Get dressed and talk about something else': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
 	if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
-		Act 'Smile and leave the room': 
+		act 'Smile and leave the room': 
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 		end
@@ -243,7 +237,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_bj':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/strapon_bj.jpg"></center>'
 	'You grab a handful of Katja''s red hair and keep a good hold on it as you pull her face over to the strap-on and smack her lips with it a few times until she opens her mouth. Once her mouth is open, you slide it in and let her suck it before you buck your hips forward and start fucking her mouth and throat with the strap-on, your hand in her hair holding her head in place as you do so.'
-
 	if katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 0: katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'dom', 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -251,13 +244,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_bj':
 	if dick < npc_throat['A14']:
 		katjaQW['slut'] += 1
 		katjaQW['horny'] += 5
-		'Katja expertly swallows the strap-on to the hilt, Her eyes water slightly, but she''s very practiced at deep throating and easily takes the dildo all the way down her throat.'
-
+		'Katja expertly swallows the strap-on to the hilt. Her eyes water slightly, but she''s very practiced at deep throating and easily takes the dildo all the way down her throat.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'dom', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif dick < npc_throat['A14']*2:
 		katjaQW['horny'] -= 5
-		'Katja tries to accommodate the dildo plunging down her throat, but she keeps gagging a little, her eyes shed tears and saliva drips from her mouth, but she''s able to take it.'
+		'Katja tries to accommodate the dildo plunging down her throat. Although she keeps gagging, her eyes shed tears and saliva drips from her mouth, she''s able to take it.'
 	else
 		katjaQW['horny'] -= 10
 		'Katja tries to accommodate the dildo plunging down her throat, but she keeps gagging, her eyes shed tears, snot runs from her nose and saliva drips from her mouth.'
@@ -272,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_bj':
 		'Katja moans and bites her lip, looking like she''s already about to orgasm just from sucking the strap-on. "You look so pretty with that big cock slamming home in your throat baby!" you tell her as her hand darts to her clit and she starts to rub herself furiously. In mere seconds, she pushes herself over the edge and starts to tremble violently, all the while moaning around the dildo still pumping her throat.'
 	end
 
-	act'Further':gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'strapon_main'
+	act 'Further':gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'strapon_main'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_miss':
@@ -295,7 +287,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_miss':
 		if npc_vag['A14']*2 < dick: npc_vag['A14'] += 1
 		katjaQW['slut']-=1
 		katjaQW['horny'] -= 10
-		'Katja bites her lip and moans as you fuck her with the strap-on and she gradually starts to get into it. She winces from time to time from one of your hard thrusts into her, obviously hurting her a little, but she reluctantly tolerates it.'
+		'Katja bites her lip and moans as you fuck her with the strap-on and she gradually starts to get into it. She winces from time to time from one of your hard thrusts into her, but she reluctantly tolerates it.'
 	elseif dick > npc_vag['A14'] + 3 or katjaQW['horny'] < 10:
 		if npc_vag['A14'] < dick: npc_vag['A14'] += 1
 		if npc_vag['A14']*2 < dick: npc_vag['A14'] += 1
@@ -322,7 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_miss':
 		'Katja moans and bites her lip, looking like she''s already about to orgasm. You lock gazes with her while you increase the pace of your thrusts. After only a few seconds, you feel her starting to tremble violently. You let her ride out her orgasm while slowly pushing the dildo in and out of her a few more times, listening to her sweet moaning while she tries to regain her breath.'
 	end
 
-	act'Further':gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'strapon_main'
+	act 'Further':gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'strapon_main'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_anal':
@@ -373,7 +365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon_start':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs'stat'
 	if katjaQW['horny'] >= 100: katjaQW['horny'] = 80
-	'You get your handbag and pull out the toy.'
+	'You grab your handbag and pull out the toy.'
 	act 'Strap it on':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 3
@@ -397,7 +389,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		if katjaQW['slut'] >= 20:
 			katjaQW['slut'] += 1
 			'Katja puts her hand between your legs. You become aroused and your pussy becomes wet.'
-
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -435,7 +426,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		if katjaQW['slut'] >= 20:
 			katjaQW['slut'] += 1
 			'You put your hand between her legs, feeling her wet pussy under her panties.'
-
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -463,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 		end
 	end
 
-	!!This is for a scene of using a dildo on Katja. But such a scene is not yet written.
+	!!This is for a scene of using a dildo on Katja. Such a scene is not yet written.
 	!!if (katjaQW['slut'] >= 30) and katjaQW['horny'] >= 30 and dildo > 0:
 	!!	act 'Grab a dildo': gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'dildo'
 	!!end
@@ -489,12 +479,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/kuni2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You lean in between Katja''s legs and begin to lick her pussy. She moans and closes her eyes, enjoying your tongue, and after a few minutes, she shivers and her pussy starts to contract rhythmically.'
 	'Katja clutches your hair, no longer able to hold back as she moans loudly in orgasm. She then pushes your head away from her.'
-
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if pcs_horny >= 50:
-		'Katja smiles at you "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Spread your legs."'
+		'Katja smiles at you. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Spread your legs."'
 		act 'Spread your legs': gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'kuni_p'
 	else
 		act 'Talk about something else':
@@ -529,10 +518,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fisting':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/home/fisting/fisting_repeat.jpg"></center>'
-	'After making sure Katja was well lubed and ready, she lays back to spread her legs for you. As she massages her clit with a toy, you slide your fingers in one at a time, working them in, out and around, bringing her pleasure with each thrust, she cries out in orgasm more than once, which makes her more wet and ready.'
-	'With a final push, you tuck your thumb in and curl your hand to slide it all the way in, till her netherlips wraps around your wrist. You give her only a few moments rest before twisting and thrust your hand more vigorously within her sex. It doesn''t take Katja long before her climax breaks again, she arches her back and attempts to keep her voice down as you continue to move your hand and fingers inside of her, but eventually you slow down and slide your hand out of her.'
-	'Katja Tries to catch her breath as she continues to have aftershock orgasms, while you watch as her sex closes slowly around something that isn''t there. Eventually you climb up and lay next to her, holding her as she shakes with her final orgasms and kissing her softly until you are ready for something else...'
-
+	'After making sure Katja is well lubed and ready, she lays back to spread her legs for you. As she massages her clit with a toy, you slide your fingers in one at a time, working them in, out and around, bringing her pleasure with each thrust. She cries out in orgasm more than once, which makes her more wet and ready.'
+	'With a final push, you tuck your thumb in and curl your hand to slide it all the way in, till her netherlips clench around your wrist. You give her only a few moments rest before twisting and thrusting your hand more vigorously within her pussy. It doesn''t take Katja long before her climax breaks again and she arches her back and attempts to keep her voice down as you continue to move your hand and fingers inside of her, but eventually you slow down and slide your hand out of her.'
+	'Katja tries to catch her breath as she continues to have aftershock orgasms, while you watch her pussy close slowly around something that isn''t there. Eventually you climb up and lay next to her, holding her as she shakes with her final orgasms and kissing her softly until you are ready for something else...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_fist_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 
@@ -575,7 +563,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_p':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if katjaQW['horny'] > 0:
-		'Katja smiles at you "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come on now, my turn."'
+		'Katja smiles at you. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come on now, my turn."'
 		act 'Lick Katja': gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'kuni'
 	else
 		act 'Talk about something else':
@@ -616,11 +604,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 
 	if pcs_horny >= 50:
 		if katjaQW['dom'] < rand(-50,50) and (katjaQW['strapon_bj'] + katjaQW['strapon_vag'] + katjaQW['strapon_ass']) < 3:
-			'Katja smiles at you "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, spread your legs."'
+			'Katja smiles at you. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, spread your legs."'
 			act 'Spread your legs': gt 'KatjaEvDin', 'kuni_p'
 		else
 			'She looks at you with a satisfied grin, aware you''re horny as well. She smiles at you with a mischievous look in her eye. "That was great <<$pcs_nickname>>, but I think that''s enough of that for today."'
-
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Say goodbye and go home (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -639,8 +626,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 				pcs_horny += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/myturn.jpg"></center>'
-				'You beg her to give you a turn, but she shakes her head. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m just not in the mood to go down on you, but if you really want something, I''ve got this..." She pulls out a strap-on harness with a rather large dildo attached to it and gives you a wicked grin. You can tell she is just itching to use it on you.'
-
+				'You beg her to give you a turn, but she shakes her head. "Sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, I''m just not in the mood to go down on you. If you really want something, I''ve got this..." She pulls out a strap-on harness with a rather large dildo attached to it and gives you a wicked grin. You can tell she is just itching to use it on you.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'hard'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Decline and go home (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -666,9 +652,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/katstrapbj.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'As you get naked, she makes sure the harness is securely in place before she looks over at you and grins, swinging her hips back and forth to make the dildo swing along with her, which makes her giggle. After she amuses herself, she looks at you with a wicked grin and walks over.'
 						'She grabs you by your hair, not too hard but not very gently either, pulls you off the bed and gets you down in front of her on your knees. Once you''re on your knees, she pushes the head of the dildo against your lips and slides it into your mouth. With a firm hold on your hair, she starts fucking your mouth and is soon ramming the dildo down your throat.'
-						'No matter how used to being throat fucked you are, she makes you gag. She buries it to the base in your throat and leaves it there until you start to gag, before going back to roughly fucking your mouth. Each time she makes you gag, you can hear her giggle, clearly enjoying herself.'
+						'No matter how used to being throat fucked you are, she makes you gag. She buries it to the base in your throat and leaves it there until you start to gag before going back to roughly fucking your mouth. Each time she makes you gag, you can hear her giggle, clearly enjoying herself.'
 						'With tears running down your cheeks and saliva dripping from your mouth, she finally pulls your head away by your hair. "Okay, I think we got this wet enough, don''t you? Ready for round two?"'
-
 						gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -693,8 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 							'She holds the dildo with one hand and starts rubbing it against your pussy lips, while using the other to grab your hair again and pull your head back as she slides the dildo into your wet pussy. She barely has the tip all the way in when she pulls back on your hair, forcing you to lean back as she thrusts her hips forward, shoving the dildo the full length of the dildo inside you.'
 							'Before she even gives you a chance to get used to it, she starts roughly and furiously fucking you. Your moans get louder as the pleasure builds. "Yeah, you love this, don''t you bitch?!" 
 							"Yes, yes please fuck me. Use me!" you moan back and she doubles her efforts before she finally pulls out of you, keeping hold of your hair as she drags you off the bed. She takes you over to her desk and bends you over it.'
-							'"Reach back and pull those ass cheeks apart so I can fuck you in the ass!" she commands you. You don''t know if you can resist her, you don''t know if you even want to.'
-
+							'"Reach back and pull those ass cheeks apart so I can fuck you in the ass!" she commands. You don''t know if you can resist her, you don''t know if you even want to.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 							gs 'stat'
 
@@ -717,7 +701,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 								'You grab your ass cheeks and pull them apart. Almost at once, you feel the head of the dildo pressing against your asshole. "That''s my good little butt slut. We''ll have you trained in no time."'
 								'With only the lubrication from your pussy, she slides it into your ass. She is gentle at first, working it in slowly as she thrusts in and out at a steady pace, gradually works it deeper and deeper into your ass. Once she has pushed the full length into your ass, she starts to pick up the pace and fuck you harder. You start moaning in a mixture of pleasure and pain.'
 								'She keeps picking up speed and soon the sound of her hips slapping against your ass can be heard over your moaning. She seems to lose herself in the act and stops paying attention to you. You don''t think she would even notice if you orgasmed. After a good few minutes of this, she starts panting as she gets tired.'
-
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 								
 								if pcs_horny >= 100:
@@ -725,7 +708,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 									$orgasm_txt = 'It is then that your orgasm hits you. It is sudden and amazingly intense.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', -1, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 								end
-								
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 								
@@ -761,9 +743,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_events':
 	cla
 	if katjaQW['school_kiss'] = 0:
 		katjaQW['school_kiss'] += 1
-		'While you kissed Katja, someone came nearby sighed loudly, probably, appreciating the view. But when you could break away from Katja''s lips, there was no one there.'
+		'As you kiss Katja, someone sighs loudly, probably appreciating the view. However, when you could break away from Katja''s lips, there is no one there.'
 		if $loc = 'pav_disco':
-			act 'Return to dance': gt 'pav_disco'
+			act 'Return to the dance': gt 'pav_disco'
 		else
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -774,25 +756,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_events':
 		elseif pcs_haircol = 1:
 			$textEvent = 'the sun in the autumn sky'
 		elseif pcs_haircol = 2:
-			$textEvent = 'two intertwining flames,'
+			$textEvent = 'two intertwining flames'
 		elseif pcs_haircol = 3:
 			$textEvent = 'the sun at the dawn'
 		elseif pcs_haircol = 3:
 			$textEvent = 'a fiery rainbow'
 		end
-		'While you kissed Katja, someone came nearby sighed loudly, probably, appreciating the view.'
-		'"Like <<$textEvent>>, you girls are just so a part of each other. Are all girls as close as the two of you?" You''re so surprised with this unexpectedly accurate comparison, then turned around and saw Ivan Prokhorov, who tenderly looked at you and Katja.'
-		'"Thank you, MAN and I don''t know." you reply. He again sighed, and left misty-eyed.'
+		'As you kiss Katja, someone sighs loudly, probably appreciating the view.'
+		'"Like <<$textEvent>>, you girls are just so a part of each other. Are all girls as close as the two of you?" You''re so surprised with this unexpectedly accurate comparison and turn to Ivan, who tenderly looks at you and Katja.'
+		'"Thank you. And I don''t know." you reply. He sighs again and leaves misty-eyed.'
 		if $loc = 'pav_disco':
-			act 'Return to dance': gt 'pav_disco'
+			act 'Return to the dance': gt 'pav_disco'
 		else
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif katjaQW['school_kiss'] >= 2:
 		if ($loc = 'pav_disco' and discoenable['A3'] = 1) or $loc ! 'pav_disco':
-			'While you kissed Katja, someone came nearby sighed loudly, probably, appreciating the view.'
-			'"How beautiful," again it was Ivan, he was waiting for you or something. Not being distracted, you continued to kiss Katja.'
-			'"Look, look, lesbians." one guy yelled and pointed at Katja and you.'
+			'As you kiss Katja, someone sighs loudly, probably appreciating the view.'
+			'"How beautiful." It''s Ivan again; it seems like he was waiting for you or something. Not being distracted, you continue to kiss Katja.'
+			'"Look, look! Lesbians!" one guy yells and points at you and Katja.'
 			act 'Glare at the moron':gt 'katjaEvDin', 'moron'
 		else
 			act 'Return to dance': gt 'pav_disco'
@@ -805,7 +787,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'moron':
 	cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/glare.jpg"></center>'
 	'You glare at the moron calling you lesbians.'
-
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Sing a different tune (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -814,22 +795,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'moron':
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/frenchkiss.jpg"></center>'
-			'Looking at Ivan, then at this idiot, it seems that Ivan didn''t notice, you sighed and said to the idiot. "Is that really necessary? She is my best friend and we want kiss, you just seem jealous.'
-			'"Lesbians, lesbians." He continued to scream like a freak, so much that people began to gather around to find out, what''s happening. Ivan stepped over next to you and put his hand on your shoulder, giving the idiot a glare as well. Boosted by Ivan''s support you continued. "We like boys, just not assholes like you!" with those words, you stood on tiptoe, clasping and Ivan''s head in his hands and gave him a deep long passionate kiss, with lots of tongue.'
+			'Looking at Ivan, then at this idiot, it seems that Ivan didn''t notice him. You sigh. "Is that really necessary? She is my best friend and we want to kiss. You just seem jealous!'
+			'"Lesbians! Lesbians!" He continues to scream like a freak so much that people begin to gather around to find out what''s happening. Ivan steps over next to you and puts his hand on your shoulder, giving the idiot a glare as well. Boosted by Ivan''s support, you continue. "We like boys, just not assholes like you!" With those words, you stand on your tiptoes and, clasping Ivan''s head in your hands, give him a long passionate kiss with lots of tongue.'
 
 			act 'Kiss again':
 				*clr
 				cla
 				if flag_KissEV = 0: flag_KissEV = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/prohorov_3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"And I can kiss all the boys." you said, under the joyous hubbub of guys gathering near you. You began to kiss all the boys in succession, carefully avoiding the one that called you a lesbian.'
-				'Seeing this he said offended. "The redhead doesn''t like guys, I bet." hoping Katja will kiss him to prove him wrong.'
-				'But Katja recovered and said. "Wrong again loser.", and began to repeat your route, of kissing the boys.'
+				'"And I can kiss all the boys," you say under the joyous hubbub of guys gathering near you. You begin to kiss all the boys in succession, carefully avoiding the one that called you a lesbian.'
+				'Seeing this, he seems offended. "The redhead doesn''t like guys, I bet." he says with a smirk, hoping Katja will kiss him to prove him wrong.'
+				'"Wrong again loser!" Katja replies and begins to repeat you by kissing the boys.'
 				if $loc = 'pav_disco':
 					'After kissing the last boy, you turn back and make sure Katja kisses all of them too. You now realise the guys are hoping for more and quickly drag Katja away before you accidentally start an orgy.'
 					act 'Return to dance': gt 'pav_disco'
 				else
-					'Just as you kissed the last boy, you turned around to see how Katja was doing with her kissing, but then the bell rang, and you all rushed to class.'
+					'Just as you kiss the last boy, you turn around to see how Katja is doing with her kissing, but the bell rings and you all rush to class.'
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			end
@@ -842,30 +823,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'moron':
 		*clr
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/punch.jpg"></center>'
-		'Ivan turned to glare at the guy. "Shut the fuck up." he said in a menacing tone.'
+		'Ivan turns to glare at the guy. "Shut the fuck up!" he says in a menacing tone.'
 		'They snort at Ivan. "Lesbian lover."'
-		'Ivan didn''t reply, and just punched him in the face, dropping him with a single hit.'
-		'A bit shocked but also pleased Ivan would defend you like that. "Thank you Ivan, seriously that was sweet." you said, but Katja only nodded dumbfounded.'
-		'Ivan shrugged, looking a little embarrassed. But it was obvious, he was pleased.'
+		'Ivan doesn''t reply, and just punches him in the face, dropping him with a single hit.'
+		'A bit shocked but also pleased Ivan would defend you like that, you smile at him. "Thank you Ivan. Seriously, that was sweet." Katja just nods, dumbfounded.'
+		'Ivan shrugs, looking a little embarrassed, but it''s obvious, he is pleased with himself.'
 		act 'Thank Ivan':
 			*clr & cla
 			if npc_sex['A3'] > 0 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and $loc ! 'pav_disco' and katjaQW['slut'] >= 40 and katjaQW['Horny'] >= 40:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/whisper.jpg"></center>'
-				'Approaching Ivan, you raised up on tiptoe, and, clasping her arms round his neck, and kissed, and then whispered. "Like kissing girls?" Ivan only replied with a dumbfounded nodded, "Well, then we can show you our appreciation, right Katja?"'
-				'Katja, nods only half paying attention. Then it hit her what you said, she looked at Ivan, at you and her eyes lit up with lustful fire, "Right."'
+				'Approaching Ivan, you get up on your tiptoes and, clasping your arms around his neck, give him a kiss before whispering at you. "Like kissing girls?" Ivan replies with only a dumbfounded nod. "Well, then we can show you our appreciation, right Katja?"'
+				'Katja nods, only half paying attention before she realizes what you said and looks at you and Ivan as her eyes light up with lustful fire. "Right."'
 				act 'Hug Katja': gt 'katja_sex','prohorov_sex'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/frenchkiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Thank you, Ivan." with these words, you french kissed him. He responded and passionately kissed you back, then left.'
-				'"Well, these athletes are hot." Katja said with a sigh, while looking at Ivan''s ass as he walked away.'
+				'"Thank you, Ivan." You make out with him and he responds by passionately kissing you back before quickly leaving.'
+				'"Well, these athletes are hot..." Katja says with a sigh while looking at Ivan''s ass as he walks away.'
 				if knowKatjaPreg = 1:
 					'You snort and look at Katja "Just what you need when you already have one inside."'
 				else
-					'You only snorted at Katja''s words, although Ivan did have a fine looking ass.'
+					'You only snort at Katja''s words, although Ivan does have a fine looking ass...'
 				end
 
 				if $loc = 'pav_disco':
-					act 'Return to dance': gt 'pav_disco'
+					act 'Return to the dance': gt 'pav_disco'
 				else
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end