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locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -631,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			else
 				'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, "Albina smiles at you. "I wanted to thank you again for what you did. I don''t want to get into any mushy bullshit, but I just wanted to let you know I appreciated it. It meant a lot."'
 			end
-			'"It was no problem Albina. You''re my friend. That''s what friends do," you say.'
+			'"It was no problem, Albina. You''re my friend. That''s what friends do," you reply.'
 			'She smiles. "Also, I''m disbanding the Starlets," she says. "Too many bad memories you know?"'
 			'"I get it."'
 			'Albina embraces you in a tight hug before giving you a quick smile and continuing down the hall.'

locations/pav_beach_chat.qsrc

@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 	if AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 1:
 		AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'set', 'A23', 100
-		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and smiles gratefully when she notices you. "I just wanted to thank you again <<$pcs_nickname>>. There''s some stupid shit about ''a friend in need'' or something. I''m letting you know that I''m disbanding the Starlets as well. Too many bad memories you know?"'
+		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and smiles gratefully when she notices you. "I just wanted to thank you again, <<$pcs_nickname>>. There''s some stupid shit about ''a friend in need'' or something. I''m letting you know that I''m disbanding the Starlets as well. Too many bad memories you know?"'
 		'You tell her you understand and she embraces you in a tight hug before composing herself, staring down anyone looking at her with a cold glare and returning to her sunbathing.'
 	elseif AlbinaQW['Friends'] = 2:
 		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up when you block her light, but smiles when she sees you.'
@@ -313,7 +313,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off to swim in the lake. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up at you when you block her light.'
-			'"What do you want, you fake ass bitch?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
+			'"What do you want, you fake ass bitch?" she scowls.'
+			'You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
 		else
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up at you when you block her light. "What do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she asks in an exasperated tone.'
 			'"I just wanted to talk," you reply with a smile.'
@@ -325,7 +326,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			'She engages you in a friendly, yet awkward conversation where you both talk about the sports you enjoy and which of the male jocks have caught your eye, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off to swim in the lake. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up at you when you block her light.'
-			'She scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
+			'She scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?"'
+			'You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
 		else
 			'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up at you when you block her light. "What do you want, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she asks in an exasperated tone.'
 			'"I just wanted to talk," you reply with a smile.'
@@ -348,8 +350,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 	elseif grupTipe = 4:
 		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up at you when you block her light. "Oh god, it''s you. What the fuck do you want?"'
 		'"What''s your problem, bitch? I just want to talk," you scornfully reply.'
-		'She looks at you unimpressed. "My problem is that some knuckle brained moron is blocking my sunlight! Can you fuck off now?"'
+		'She looks at you unimpressed. "<i>My problem</i> is that some knuckle brained moron is blocking my sunlight! Can you fuck off already?!"'
 		'"Fucking stuck up rich bitch..." you mutter as you walk away, but she doesn''t hear you.'
+		'You don''t know why, but she seems to have an intense hatred for the gopniks, yourself included.'
 	else
 		'Albina is relaxing in the sun and working on her tan as you approach. She lifts her sunglasses and glares up at you when you block her light before pulling them down again.'
 		'When you don''t move and continue blocking her light, she lifts her glasses again and looks up at you with an annoyed glare. "What the fuck do you want, you social reject? Can''t you see I''m working on my tan?"'

locations/pav_lake.qsrc

@@ -647,7 +647,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school_mates':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/lake/beach_hangout/school_mates.jpg"></center>'
 	if fame['pav_slut'] >= 225:
-		'You start approaching them, but are immediately greeted with disgusted stares and rude comments before Dimka walks over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost slut! We don''t want you here." You sigh before turning and walking away.'
+		'You start approaching them, but are immediately greeted with disgusted stares and rude comments before Dimka walks over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost, slut! We don''t want you here."'
+		'You sigh before turning and walking away.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_lake'
 	elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 		'You start approaching them and are greeted with friendly smiles as several wave at you to come over and join them.'
@@ -658,8 +659,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school_mates':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_lake'
 		act 'Join them': gt 'pav_lake', 'beach_hangout'
 	else
-		'You start approaching them and are greeted with annoyed stares and rude comments before Dimka walks over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost loser! We don''t want you here." You sigh before turning and walking away.'
-		act 'Leave': gt'pav_lake'
+		'You start approaching them and are greeted with annoyed stares and rude comments before Dimka walks over with Svyatoslav. "Get lost, loser! We don''t want you here."'
+		'You sigh before turning and walking away.'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pav_lake'
 	end
 end