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+ 2 - 2
locations/FedorEv4_sex.qsrc

@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3way2':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/cumface3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You turn to Ivan, letting Fedors dick slide out of your mouth but then extend your hand to jerk him off as you respond, "I''d rather you both cover me in your cum." Ivan grins. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>> you''re a little minx aren''t you?" he then rapidly increases his pace and then Fedor pulls out of you and holds your face to his dick as he unloads all his cum into your face which seems to cause Ivan to groan and pull out just in time to paint both your ass and back with his load. You lay on your back catching your breath as you listen to Fedor and Ivan chat. "Damn Fedor, you really lucked out with <<$pcs_firstname>>. I never fucked a girl with an ass as fine as her''s."'
 				*nl
-				'Fedor responds, "I like to believe that it''s more than luck but I can''t help but feel very lucky everytime I look at her." Fedor''s comments cause you to blush as Ivan responds, "<<$pcs_nickname>>''s a good catch. I wish you both the very best." as he gets dressed then walks out of the room. Fedor turns to you then gives you a kiss on the forehead "Let''s get you cleaned up." he lifts you up then carries you to the bathroom.'
+				'Fedor responds, "I like to believe that it''s more than luck but I can''t help but feel very lucky every time I look at her." Fedor''s comments cause you to blush as Ivan responds, "<<$pcs_nickname>>''s a good catch. I wish you both the very best." as he gets dressed then walks out of the room. Fedor turns to you then gives you a kiss on the forehead "Let''s get you cleaned up." he lifts you up then carries you to the bathroom.'
 				*nl
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum3.mp4"></video></center>'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A3'
@@ -1469,7 +1469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Bedroom 1':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/home/bedroom/sex/lick'+rand(2,3)+'.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch everytime your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re... driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on much longer"'
+			'You stare into Fedor''s eyes as you begin licking the tip of his penis. Fedor lets out a moan as your tongue hits the very tip of his penis which reveals to you just how sensitive that spot is, so you continue licking his penis in a circular motion, enjoying his body flinch every time your tongue hits his tip. Fedor looks down at you and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re... driving me crazy doing that. I can''t hold on much longer"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/LariskaSex.qsrc

@@ -652,7 +652,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boyfriend_sex':
 					end
 					if anal_slip < 4: gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
 					'"I''m a virgin," you say, reaching back and spreading your buttcheeks. Taking the hint, he lines his cock up with your anus and pushes his way in.'
-					'Thankfully, his dick was lubed upenough that it slid right in. Lariska tries to distract you from any pain by tweaking your nipples and kissing them.'
+					'Thankfully, his dick was lubed enough that it slid right in. Lariska tries to distract you from any pain by tweaking your nipples and kissing them.'
 					'Lev starts thrusting in and out of your asshole, as the sounds of your buttcheeks slapping against his hips fills the room. He is barely able to contain his excitement as he watches you and Lariska continue to kiss.'
 					'The sensations of the pounding he is giving you and making out with Lariska is overwhelming your senses. She moves her hands between your legs, and returns the favor from earlier by rubbing your clit.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5,'lesbian', 'group'

+ 1 - 1
locations/alexandriaChat.qsrc

@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'magic':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'"Archetype, Ethos or Personality are some names for a relatively extended magical practice that originated in the mask-wearing on <i>mundane</i> magical and religious rituals. Of course, true wizards don''t need masks to invoke their powers, but they can help magic-users to channel their powers better."'
-			'"At its core is the knowledge that the human mind can''t hope to grasp all the power that magic offers, and the risk, to be changed back in a magical mismatch. Taking into certain vital philosophies, behaviors and taboos, the wizard shields themself from these dangers, which lets them tap into more power."'
+			'"At its core is the knowledge that the human mind can''t hope to grasp all the power that magic offers, and the risk, to be changed back in a magical mismatch. Taking into certain vital philosophies, behaviors and taboos, the wizards shield themselves from these dangers, which lets them tap into more power."'
 			'"Not all wizards follow this tradition, that not without reason give us certain... let''s say eccentric fame. If you want to know, I follow <i>The Autarch Ethos</i>."'
 
 			act 'Continue talking about magic':gt 'alexandriaChat',	'magic'

+ 1 - 1
locations/bdsm_training.qsrc

@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/r4_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mistress tickles your heels and growls at you everytime you try to move your legs.'
+			'Mistress tickles your heels and growls at you every time you try to move your legs.'
 			'"Return to position!"'
 			'You obey. Mistress leans forward and you feel something touching your pussy. Then you hear a buzzing sound, and you feel the vibration.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_vibe', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'bound'

+ 1 - 1
locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/6.jpg"></center>'
 		'"So, your lesson today is about female genitals. We''ll start with the most obvious one because I know you love to look at them: breasts!" You pull your arms back behind your head to give him a good view. "Women have breasts because they''re used to feed babies-" you start to say before Kolka interrupts you.'
-		'"Can I get a closer look? You know... for uhh... scientifical reasons?" he says. The look on his face says he''s genuinely curious but you''re still a little skeptical he isn''t doing this just to get close to your tits.'
+		'"Can I get a closer look? You know... for uhh... scientific reasons?" he says. The look on his face says he''s genuinely curious but you''re still a little skeptical he isn''t doing this just to get close to your tits.'
 		'<i>Oh, whatever. As long as he learns something right?</i>'
 		act'Continue':
 			cla & *clr

+ 1 - 1
locations/costuming.qsrc

@@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_costume':
 			act'Blush hard':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/costuming/makeup.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your face flushes with heat as it turns beet red but otherwise don''t say anything while she rummages aroundin a drawer to find you an appropriate pair of panties to put on. She hands them to you, sternly saying, "Remember to return these," before walking away shaking her head.'
+				'Your face flushes with heat as it turns beet red but otherwise don''t say anything while she rummages around in a drawer to find you an appropriate pair of panties to put on. She hands them to you, sternly saying, "Remember to return these," before walking away shaking her head.'
 				act 'Back to makeup': gt 'costuming', 'costume_end'
 			end
 			act'Smile shyly':

+ 1 - 1
locations/dream_events.qsrc

@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypno_dreams':
 		else
 			'You dream that you''re riding someone''s cock. You keep slamming your pussy into his massive rod as hard as you can and your tits flop around wildly as you do so.'
 			if guy = 0:
-				'You''ve never done something like this. Something deep inside hurts everytime you sit all the way down, but it also feels good! You can''t will yourself to turn and look at who you are riding.'
+				'You''ve never done something like this. Something deep inside hurts every time you sit all the way down, but it also feels good! You can''t will yourself to turn and look at who you are riding.'
 			else
 				'It almost feels real, like you''re actually riding someone''s huge cock! You can''t will yourself to turn and look at who you''re riding though.'
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gad_forest.qsrc

@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_edge':
 				'You try your best to stay in the shadows as you move towards your grandparents'' house as stealthily as possible.'
 			end
 			! Allow schoolgirl player to leave naked but go straight back home
-			! Non-schoolgirls will just find a random sweatshirt to put on - it is the same everytime but walking around naked in the village is not implemented yet
+			! Non-schoolgirls will just find a random sweatshirt to put on - it is the same every time but walking around naked in the village is not implemented yet
 			act 'Go back to Gadukino naked':
 				*clr & cla
 				inhib_exp += rand(1,3)

+ 1 - 1
locations/gp_elene.qsrc

@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'set_talk_acts':
 				'"It took about two months, and she got really sick... I, among others, visited her, and everything looked fine at first glance. But as soon as I closed the door, she started acting erratic and hallucinating. These were the characteristics of rabies. Unfortunately, since she was living alone, no one noticed it before it was too late to save her life..."'
 			elseif temp = 5:
 				'"One evening during the Christmas holidays in my younger days, I was hanging out with my girlfriends in the kitchen. But, of course, it was my school friends, so we were always up to some mischief."'
-				'"We were home alone, and one of my friends persuaded us to do a séance. She tells us that a fortune-teller had explained how one could summon a spirit. So we lit some candles and began chanting for the spirits to show themself."'
+				'"We were home alone, and one of my friends persuaded us to do a séance. She tells us that a fortune-teller had explained how one could summon a spirit. So we lit some candles and began chanting for the spirits to show themselves."'
 				'"I managed to summon the profile of a male figure. He was holding something resembling a bouquet of flowers. My second friend summoned a kettle-looking object, while my last friend managed to summon an infant, which frightened us."'
 				'"Not being discouraged, we decided to try again, excited by what we would manage to summon this time. This time I summoned a large steamer. My second friend didn''t summon anything special, but my third friend summoned the same infant again. The difference this time was that the infant was in a stroller."'
 				'"We ended the séance and went back to doing ordinary stuff. Suddenly we heard a knock on the door, the young man from the séance. He pulled out a beautiful bouquet of roses and gave them to me. I asked him what the reason was, but he just answered that he felt he should deliver flowers to a girl in this village. After that, I got the chills because I remembered the man with a bouquet of flowers from the séance."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_detention.qsrc

@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strange':
 						npc_rel['A152'] -= 5
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/feofan/sex/school/detlick2.jpg"></center>'
-						'While licking your pussy, he reaches up and starts to fingerbang you, but you slap his hand, causing him to jerk it away and give you a confused look. "I said lick my pussy, not finger it. So keep licking." You notice a hint of frustration in his expression, but he obediently goes back to licking your pussy. You feel a rush of power, getting a boy to do exactly what you want, the way you want it. It is perhaps the most exciting feeling of this entire experience.'
+						'While licking your pussy, he reaches up and starts to finger you, but you slap his hand, causing him to jerk it away and give you a confused look. "I said lick my pussy, not finger it. So keep licking." You notice a hint of frustration in his expression, but he obediently goes back to licking your pussy. You feel a rush of power, getting a boy to do exactly what you want, the way you want it. It is perhaps the most exciting feeling of this entire experience.'
 						*nl
 						'You start to pant and moan louder and have to bite the sleeve of your shirt to keep it down, but your arousal is more than a match for the piece of cloth.'
 						$orgasm_txt = 'You end up clamping a hand over your own mouth to keep from crying out as you feel yourself having an earth-shattering orgasm. You lean back on the desk, shaking uncontrollably and desperately trying to swallow your screams as he keeps licking you through your orgasm.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -1008,7 +1008,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 	elseif break_rand = 22:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/handstand.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['fight'] = 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2:
-			'As you stop by your locker, you see some girls from your brother''s class doing handstands against the wall. Everytime their skirts flip down, the boys watching cheer. Giggling, they keep doing it until a teacher is spotted, and everybody scatters.'
+			'As you stop by your locker, you see some girls from your brother''s class doing handstands against the wall. Every time their skirts flip down, the boys watching cheer. Giggling, they keep doing it until a teacher is spotted, and everybody scatters.'
 		else
 			'As you stop at your locker, you overhear Christina berating Lariska and Lina for yesterday''s practice. Something about how worthless they are and how it will make them lose their first game if they play that badly. They try to appologise and promise to do better, but Christina is having none of it. She tells the girls to do hand stands in the hallway until the next class.'
 			'"But our skirts will fall up and everyone will see our panties!" Lariska points out.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -1554,7 +1554,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', rand(4,8)
 				pcs_memory['school_no_panty__anal_plug_flash'] = daystart
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties_buttplug.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidentality drop the cloth and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug.'
+				'You''ve been called up to answer the question written on the blackboard, but while solving it, you need to erase something. You accidentally drop the cloth and hesitate to pick it up as you think about the fact that not only are you not wearing any panties, your ass is stuffed with a butt plug.'
 				*nl
 				'"Well?" Mr. Yenotin prods impatiently.'
 				'With a coy smile, you slowly bend over until you feel your skirt rise up, exposing your bare pussy and ass to your classmates. Hearing the flurry of murmurs and whispers, you can''t help but squeeze and clench around the toy. The boys sound both surprised and intrigued by the sight while the girls whisper to one another that you''re a slut.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/hotel_anna_gear.qsrc

@@ -1182,7 +1182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'restraints_leash':
 		AnnaQW['sub'] += 1
 		BDSM_Knowledge += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionhotel/collnomean.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You strip down; Anna puts the collar on you and closes it around your neck, she has you kneel down so she can attach the leash. "Some collars can be worn as a jewellery you know. You look wonderful dear."'
+		'You strip down; Anna puts the collar on you and closes it around your neck, she has you kneel down so she can attach the leash. "Some collars can be worn as a jewelry you know. You look wonderful dear."'
 		'"Ok <<$pcs_nickname>>... let''s go for a walk? Just a few steps around the room, nothing serious. First, can you show me what it is to be submissive?"'
 		act 'Show her':
 			*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/hunter_interactions.qsrc

@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_with_hunters_theme':
 			hunter_collective_opinion += 1
 			'"No, I do not really have someone. At least no one special.", you answer'
 			if hunter_sexual_comfort < 25 or hunter_collective_opinion > 40:
-				'"How come?" says Igor. "Those... uh... boys in your class musssss... be stipud" drunkenly slurs Igor'
+				'"How come?" says Igor. "Those... uh... boys in your class musssss... be stupid" drunkenly slurs Igor'
 			else
 				'"Well guess it is better that way. You do not have someone to think about while we are having some fun" says Andrei'
 			end

+ 2 - 2
locations/igorhome.qsrc

@@ -1201,7 +1201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen5':
 		*clr & cla
 		'You try to speak up, but she instantly tells you to shut up.'
 		'"I don''t want to hear it! Get out! Now!"'
-		'Igor looks lamblike at you, taking you by the hand and leading you away from the kitchen, begging for forgiveness about how his mother is behaving and telling you he''ll have a talk with her and fix everything.'
+		'Igor gazes at you with a lamblike expression, taking you by the hand and leading you away from the kitchen, begging for forgiveness about how his mother is behaving and telling you he''ll have a talk with her and fix everything.'
 		'"Igor! As soon as you''ve shown her out, come back here. We have some things to discuss," you hear his mother loudly say as Igor pushes you out of the kitchen.'
 		'As you stand in the hallway, Igor tells you to wait here, slamming the kitchen door behind him as he returns to the kitchen.'
 		IgorQW['met_mother'] = 1
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen6':
 	*clr & cla
 		'You try to speak up, but she instantly tells you to shut up.'
 		'"I don''t want to hear it! Get out! Now!"'
-		'Igor looks lamblike at you, taking you by the hand and leading you away from the kitchen, begging for forgiveness about how his mother is behaving and telling you he''ll have a talk with her and fix everything.'
+		'Igor gazes at you with a lamblike expression, taking you by the hand and leading you away from the kitchen, begging for forgiveness about how his mother is behaving and telling you he''ll have a talk with her and fix everything.'
 		'"Igor! As soon as you''ve shown her out, come back here. We have some things to discuss," you hear his mother loudly say as Igor pushes you out of the kitchen.'
 		'As you stand in the hallway, Igor tells you to wait here, slamming the kitchen door behind him as he returns to the kitchen.'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/katja_nightclub.qsrc

@@ -1671,7 +1671,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance_two_girls3':
 	if pcs_hotcat < rand(0,12):
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'After some time, they thanks you for the dance and excuses themself, but tanks you for the dance at tell '+iif(pcs_danc < rand(50,75), 'That you are a great dancer and it was a pleasure', 'it was fun')+' dancing you you before they leave.'
+		'After some time, they thank you for the dance and excuse themselves, but thank you for the dance and tell you, ' + iif(pcs_danc < rand(50,75), 'That you are a great dancer and it was a pleasure', 'that it was fun') + ' dancing with you before they leave.'
 		'"That was fun," Katja says with a smile.'
 		gs 'katja_nightclub', 'dance_end'
 	else

+ 3 - 3
locations/katja_uni_sex.qsrc

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time_fingerbang_her':
 	menu_off = 1
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time7.jpg"></center>'
-	'You slip one of your fingers into her soaking wet twat and she watches you intently, moaning and biting her lower lip as you slowly start to fingerbang her. You slide in a second finger and finally a third as you fingerbang her pussy.'
+	'You slip one of your fingers into her soaking wet twat and she watches you intently, moaning and biting her lower lip as you slowly start fingering her. You slide in a second finger and finally a third as you fingering her pussy.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', 2, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Eat her out': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time_cuni_give'
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time_cuni_give':
 	cla & *clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time8.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a few minutes, you slip out all but one of your fingers, then dip your head down. You start licking, kissing and sucking at her clit while continuing to fingerbang her. Her moans are starting to get louder and you can feel her starting to tense up until she suddenly cries out as an orgasm rips through her body, leaving her shaking and breathing hard.'
+	'After a few minutes, you slip out all but one of your fingers, then dip your head down. You start licking, kissing and sucking at her clit while fingering her. Her moans are starting to get louder and you can feel her starting to tense up until she suddenly cries out as an orgasm rips through her body, leaving her shaking and breathing hard.'
 	katjaQW['horny'] = 0
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger_give', -3, 'lesbian'
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time_cuni_give':
 		act 'Let her finish you':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/sex/first_time10.jpg"></center>'
-			'It seems she''s just mimicking exactly what you did as she pulls out all but one finger and then starts to lick, kiss, and suck on your clit while she continues to fingerbang you.'
+			'It seems she''s just mimicking exactly what you did as she pulls out all but one finger and then starts to lick, kiss, and suck on your clit while she continues to finger you.'
 			temporgasm = orgasm
 			if temporgasm = orgasm: 'After some time, you feel the waves of pleasure come crashing over your body as you orgasm.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 3, 'lesbian'

+ 12 - 12
locations/lesbidomhouse.qsrc

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW1':
 	'You take a deep breath and slowly feel your reluctance fade. Even though you''re still nervous, you slowly enter her apartment and pull the door shut behind you.'
 	'The woman is nowhere to be seen, and you''re not sure what to do. It would be rude to just walk around her house. "Hello!?" you shout, hoping she will come. "It''s <<$pcs_nickname>>, from the boutique!"'
 	'The woman then appears, wearing a gorgeous red dress. "Ah, it''s you," she says dismissively. She wordlessly gestures for you to follow her and walks towards a door, not looking to see if you''re coming.'
-	
+
 	act 'Follow her':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW3':
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Leave her apartment':gt'city_residential'
 	end
 	if MistressResist = 1:
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW4':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/mistress.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you enter her apartment, Mistress is already waiting for you. She takes a few steps back and appraises your body from head to toe. "You know the drill, slave. Get rid of those clothes and present your pussy to me. Make it quick."'
-	
+
 	act 'Show her your pussy':
 		*clr & cla
 		lesbiQW = 5
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW5':
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 20, 'sub', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Lick her pussy':
 			*clr & cla
 			if pcs_horny >= 100: orgasm += 1 & pcs_horny = 0
@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW7':
 	'You''re confused as to whether you should take your clothes off. Mistress kindly grabs you by the arm and ushers you to the living room, sitting you down on the couch. "Wait here, I''ll be right back."'
 	*nl
 	'She''s carrying a small paper bag when she comes back. It looks like it''s from some fancy boutique. "Here, this is for you," she smiles weakly. "I''m really sorry about last time, I shouldn''t have taken my poor mood out on you."'
-	'You nod shyly at her, thanking her for the gift before opening it. You twist and turn the item in your hands, it looks like some sort of jewellery. Then you see it: it''s a g-string! A very sexy one, with some sort of jewel attached to it.'
+	'You nod shyly at her, thanking her for the gift before opening it. You twist and turn the item in your hands, it looks like some sort of jewelry. Then you see it: it''s a g-string! A very sexy one, with some sort of jewel attached to it.'
 	'Mistress smiles at you. "Go ahead, put it on! When you''re ready we''ll go out for a drink, my treat. It''ll be a good opportunity for me to teach you about how a submissive girl should behave in public in the presence of her domme."'
 
 	act 'Put it on and go to the terrace':
@@ -878,7 +878,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW7':
 		'When you pay attention, you hear her say "When we''re in public, we need to be a bit more discrete. No one should be able to tell from your behaviour that you are a submissive, and that I am your domme. I might reveal this situation as I see fit, respecting your privacy of course. I won''t get you into trouble... I would only disclose our little secret to people I trust."'
 		'She winks at you reassuringly and you give her an idle nod, having trouble focusing. "Oh, and also: in public, you may call me Natalya if we are among company. If no one is listening, it''s still Mistress."'
 		'"Yes Mistress," you obediently reply, getting seriously worked up now. You reach the terrace and have a seat at one of the tables. It''s one of the more up-scale places in town.'
-		
+
 		act 'Have a drink':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/sex/sub202.jpg"></center>'
@@ -963,7 +963,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW8':
 			'Mistress then puts her magazine aside and unties you before she walks back to the couch and turns her ass towards you, leaning on the couch with one hand. She doesn''t say a word, but gives you an inviting look as she lifts up her skirt.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 40, 'sub', 'exhibitionism', 'bound', 'humiliation'
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 		elseif temp = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/natalya/sex/sub14.jpg"></center>'
 			'As soon as you approach Mistress, she turns around and walks into the living room, expecting you to follow her. When you enter the living room, you see a collar and leash sitting on the couch. You quickly take off your clothes when she orders you to, and silently let her lock the collar around your neck. She orders you to get down on all fours and follow her to the window.'
@@ -1003,7 +1003,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW8':
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 20, 'sub', 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 			act 'Leave her apartment': gt 'city_residential'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW9':
 			'Mistress shows no sign of compassion whatsoever, and continues to bark obscenities at you while she firmly binds you. She puts cuffs on your wrists and ankles, and locks them with heavy padlocks.'
 			'"I''m tired of your fucking yelling, whore. Quiet time for you!" she snarks before forcing a ball gag into your mouth. She also secures that with a padlock.'
 			'In your current predicament, you can do little more than shuffle around on your knees. You''re completely powerless, and have no choice but to bend to her every whim.'
-			
+
 			act 'Crawl':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 10
@@ -1236,7 +1236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW10a':
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'bound'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-	
+
 			act 'Get dressed and leave': gt 'city_residential'
 		end
 		act 'Get dressed and leave':
@@ -1501,7 +1501,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW10b3':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 15, 'sub', 'bound'
 	gs 'stat'
 	temp = rand(0,2)
-	
+
 	if temp = 1:
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1670,7 +1670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW10c':
 		'Luckily, no one has to use the restroom while you serve as a toilet brush. Two hours later, Mistress finally comes to see you. She seems cheerful - the talk with the representative from the club must have gone well.'
 		'She benevolently strokes your hair for a second after taking the gag harness off before whispering in your ear. "You''ve been a terrific slave lately, do you know that? There''s no time today, but next time you''re here, I''ll make sure you''re well rewarded for your service..."'
 		'Mistress continues to undo your binds, and throws the rope in a corner. When you move to coil it for her, she waves you away. "Don''t worry about that, I''ll do it later. Come on, I''ll walk you out."'
-		
+
 		if temp < 2:
 			act 'Follow Mistress to the hallway':
 				*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/lesbimistress.qsrc

@@ -1124,7 +1124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_9':
 		'Once you''re almost nude she snaps your cuffs onto the chain, and hoists it up so your arms are stretched over your head. She then slips some thin panties onto you and pulls out a camera.'
 		'"Someone I know has an interest in you," she says. "I need some photos to show him how far you are in your training. Give us a smile, dear!"'
 		'You fake a smile for some of the photos, but you''re not very happy about this. Mistress doesn''t care, however, and just grins as she takes photos of you. "That reluctant look suits you well, slave. This''ll look great in your scrapbook!" she snickers as she unties you. "Put your clothes back on. Time for our next stop."'
-		
+
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 30, 'sub', 'exhibitionism'

+ 1 - 1
locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'first_meet':
 		elseif class['school_grade_average'] < 80:
 			'You shake your head and lower it slightly, "I''m passing my classes, but only just barely. I still have a ways to go if I hope to go to college."'
 			'"It is good that you are at least passing, but yes, you will have to do better if you want to get into college. Vicky had some issues keeping her grades up as well, but lately she has been catching up.'
-			'She recently decided she wanted to get into a medical career. And even though she has not yet decided on any particular feild of study, it was enough to motivate her to work harder at school. Maybe if you think hard on what your own goals are, that could help motivate you as well." Tamara beams you a motherly smile as she talks.' 
+			'She recently decided she wanted to get into a medical career. And even though she has not yet decided on any particular feild of study, it was enough to motivate her to work harder at school. Maybe if you think hard on what your own goals are, that could help motivate you as well." Tamara beams you a motherly smile as she talks.'
 			'Your own <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> could take some parenting lessons from this lady. All she ever did was yell and complain about how Anya isn''t doing anything worthwhile; holding her up as a poster child of failure, in an attempt to ''scare'' you into doing better.'
 			'"Thanks Ms. Meynold, that''s very good advice." you reply, while nodding thoughtfully...'
 			'What are your goals? Who are you? Who do you want to be? ... You can''t help but think it over as you finish the last bit of your tea.'

+ 64 - 64
locations/nichApartment.qsrc

@@ -27,23 +27,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 	*clr & cla
 	$location_type = 'private'
 	killvar '$locclass'
-		
+
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Nicholas'' Apartment</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nichApartment/hallway.jpg"></center>'
-		
+
 	'You are standing in a luxurious and spacious city center home.'
-	
+
 	$nickFamDesc = 'It belongs to <a href="exec: gt ''nichNicholas'', ''desc''">Nicholas</a>, who is also the head of home.'
 	if nichGalaDisabled = 0: $nickFamDesc += ' He lives here with his wife <a href="exec: gt ''nichGala'', ''desc''">Gala</a>.'
 	$nickFamDesc += ' <a href="exec: gt ''nichTanya'', ''desc''">Tanya</a> is the daughter of Gala and step-daughter of Nicholas. She also lives here.'
 	$nickFamDesc
 	killvar '$nickFamDesc'
-	
+
 	if nichWork = 2:
 		'You work here as a live-in maid.'
-		
-		
+
+
 		if nichNote = 1:
 			*nl
 			'<font color = red><b>You see a note hanging at the door to your room:</b></font>'
@@ -79,62 +79,62 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 		'You used to work here.'
 	end
 	'The corridor''s floor and walls are a tasteful mix of marble and wood. Besides several paintings and small statues for decoration, the only thing of note in it is are a coat and shoe rack for guests.'
-	
+
 	$nichGalaAct = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','gala')
 	$nichNichAct = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','nicholas')
 	$nichTanyAct = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','tanya')
-	if $nichNichAct = 'leaveWork': 
+	if $nichNichAct = 'leaveWork':
 		'<a href="exec: gt ''nichNicholas'', ''start''">Nicholas</a> is wearing an expensive suit and is about to leave for work.'
-	elseif $nichNichAct = 'returnWork':  
+	elseif $nichNichAct = 'returnWork':
 		'Nicholas is wearing one of his expensive suits. Apparently he just returned from work.'
-	elseif $nichNichAct = 'leaveShopping':  
+	elseif $nichNichAct = 'leaveShopping':
 		'Nicholas is about to leave the apartment. It looks as if he wants to go shopping.'
-	elseif $nichNichAct = 'returnShopping':  
+	elseif $nichNichAct = 'returnShopping':
 		'Nicholas just returned from shopping. Apparently he bought some things from expensive shops.'
-	elseif $nichNichAct = 'leaveClub':  
+	elseif $nichNichAct = 'leaveClub':
 		'Nicholas is wearing one of his finest black tie suits. Apperently he is about to leave for his club.'
-		if $nichGalaAct = 'leaveClub': 
+		if $nichGalaAct = 'leaveClub':
 			'Gala accompanies him. She is wearing her silver jewelry and an expensive looking dress which is a perfect combination of classy and sexy.'
 		end
-	elseif $nichNichAct = 'returnClub':  
-		if $nichGalaAct = 'returnClub': 
+	elseif $nichNichAct = 'returnClub':
+		if $nichGalaAct = 'returnClub':
 			'Nicholas and Gala just returned from their club.'
 		end
 		'Nicholas just returned from his club.'
 	end
-	
-	if $nichGalaAct = 'leaveSpa': 
+
+	if $nichGalaAct = 'leaveSpa':
 		'Gala is about to leave the apartment. As far as you know she is going to her spa.'
-	elseif $nichGalaAct = 'returnSpa':  
+	elseif $nichGalaAct = 'returnSpa':
 		'Gala just entered the apartment. She seems to be very releaxed. Apparently she was at her spa.'
-	elseif $nichGalaAct = 'leaveFriend':  
+	elseif $nichGalaAct = 'leaveFriend':
 		'Gala is about to leave the apartment. She is wearing one of her favorite short dresses and apparently spent much effort applying her make-up. As far as you know she wants to visit a friend of hers.'
-	elseif $nichGalaAct = 'returnFriend':  
+	elseif $nichGalaAct = 'returnFriend':
 		'Gala just entered the apartment. As far as you know she visited a friend.'
 	end
-	
-	if $nichTanyAct = 'leaveUni': 
+
+	if $nichTanyAct = 'leaveUni':
 		'Tanya is about to leave the apartment. It looks as if she is about to attend her classes at university.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnUni':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnUni':
 		'Tanya just entered the apartment. Apparently she returned from university.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveBallet':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveBallet':
 		'Tanya is about to leave the apartment. Apperently she is going to attend to her ballet lessons.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnBallet':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnBallet':
 		'Tanya just entered the apartment. As far as you know she was at her ballet lessons.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveFriend': 
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveFriend':
 		'Tanya is about to leave the apartment. As far as you know she is going to visit a friend.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnFriend':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnFriend':
 		'Tanya just entered the apartment. As far as you know she visited a friend.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveShopping':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveShopping':
 		'Tanya is about to leave the apartment. From the way she is dresses you assume that she is heading for a shopping trip.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnShopping':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnShopping':
 		'Tanya just entered the apartment. She carries some plastic bags with her, indicating that she bought some new clothes and shoes.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveClub':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'leaveClub':
 		'Tanya is about to leave to a dance club.'
-	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnClub':  
+	elseif $nichTanyAct = 'returnClub':
 		'Tanya just entered the apartment. She wears the clothes she usually wears to her dance club. She appears to be a little bit exhausted.'
 	end
-	
+
 	killvar '$nichNichAct'
 	killvar '$nichGalaAct'
 
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 			gt $CURLOC
 		end
 	end
-	
+
 	if nichWork = 2:
 		act '<b>Go to your bedroom</b>':
 			minut += 1
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 			gt 'nichBedroomServant'
 		end
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'Go to the living room':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'nichLivingroom'
@@ -170,49 +170,49 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 		gt 'nichBedroomMaster'
 	end
 
-	
+
 
 	act 'Go to Tanya''s room':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'nichBedroomTanja'
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'Go to the study':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'nichStudy'
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'Go to the guest cloakroom':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'nichBathGuest'
 	end
 
 	if nichWork = 2:
-	
+
 		gs 'nichChore','inspect','hallway'
-		
+
 		if nichWorkState > 0:
 			act 'Clean apartment':
 				gt 'nichChore', 'cleanApartment', 'start'
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	
+
 	if nichDebug = 1:
 		act 'Debug Menu':
 			gt 'nichUtil', 'debug'
 		end
-	end	
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'jobInterview':
 	*clr & cla
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	menu_off = 1
-	
+
 	'The adress you have been given leads you to a very expensive looking apartment building. A porter stands at the door, inspecting you while you come closer.'
 	'"Hello, I am here to apply for the job as live-in maid."'
-	
+
 	if $clothingworntype ! 'gm_maid':
 		'"I am afraid I am not allowed to let you pass dressed like this, Miss. Master Nicholas made it very clear that every applicant for this position has to be dressed in an appropriate outfit. Meaning you have to wear a maid uniform for the job interview. You can get one at the mall nearby."'
 		act 'Turn around': gt 'city_center'
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jobInterview':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/tanya/01.jpg"></center>'
 			'Finally the elevator stops and its doors open.'
-			
+
 			if nichTanya['Known'] = 0:
 				'In front of you stands a cute girl smiling at you.'
 				'"Hello. My name is Tanya. You are here for the maid-job I guess? Just follow me to the living room. My parents are waiting for you."'
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'jobInterview':
 				'In front of you stands a cute girl smiling at you. It is Tanya!'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>? You are the girl applying as a maid? Why didn''t you tell me that you are interested in a maid-job? Anyways, follow me. My parents want to meet you."'
 			end
-			
+
 			act 'Follow her': gt 'nichApartment', 'hiring'
 		end
 	end
@@ -245,23 +245,23 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hiring':
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	menu_off = 1
-	
+
 	if nichHotelReferral = 2:
 		nichHireMode = 1
-	else	
+	else
 		nichHireMode = 2
 	end
-	
+
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/01.jpg"></center>'
 	'Tanya leads you into the living room. Nicholas, her step-father, and her mother Gala are already sitting there.'
-	
-	
+
+
 	if nichHireMode = 1:
 		'"This is <<$pcs_nickname>>." Tanya says before sitting down next to her mother. You have the feeling that you are expected to keep standing.'
 	elseif nichHireMode = 2:
 		'"This is <<$pcs_nickname>>, the girl I told you about." Tanya says before sitting down next to her mother. You have the feeling that you are expected to keep standing.'
 	end
-	
+
 	if FUNC('body_din','pregnancyVisibility',0,'nude') = 1:
 		'Nicholas only takes a short look at you.'
 		'"I am sorry, but I can''t have a pregnant woman be my maid. You might apply again once you have given birth. If the position is still open then."'
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hiring':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'city_center'
 		exit
 	end
-	
+
 	if CloInhibit > 20:
 		nichGalaOpinion = 1
 		if nichHireMode = 1:
@@ -329,17 +329,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hiring':
 		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I expect from my maids what I expect from all of my employees, and what they can expect of me: An immaculate appearance that commands respect, for you, for me, for my company, for my family. If you want to work for us you will start taking care of your hair."'
 	end
 	if nichImperfections = 0:
-		'Unable to find anything to criticize, he gives you an approving nod.' 
+		'Unable to find anything to criticize, he gives you an approving nod.'
 		'"The uniform suits you, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and it seems you know how to take care of your appearance. Good."'
 	end
 	killvar 'nichImperfections'
-	
+
 	if nichHireMode = 1:
 		'He sits back down and takes a look at your referral. Then he looks at the two women sitting next to him. Both of them shrug.'
 	elseif nichHireMode = 2:
 		'He sits back down. "Tanya told me that you will do a good job as our maid. And I trust her judgment." He takes a look at the two women sitting next to him. Tanya beams back while Gala shrugs.'
 	end
-	
+
 	'"Well then. In the name of my family I would like to offer you the job as our live-in maid. There are a few rules you should be aware of:'
 	*nl
 	'1. You have to look presentable at all times. During work you will wear your uniform.'
@@ -404,17 +404,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hiring':
 	act 'No':
 		cla
 		'"I... Uh, I don''t know if this is right for me", you stutter.'
-		'Nicholas seems surprised and annoyed - he most likely isn''t used to people just telling him they changed their mind at the very last second - but he maintains a friendly face and simply states: "That is unfortunate, but I''m sure you have your reasons."' 
+		'Nicholas seems surprised and annoyed - he most likely isn''t used to people just telling him they changed their mind at the very last second - but he maintains a friendly face and simply states: "That is unfortunate, but I''m sure you have your reasons."'
 		if nichHireMode = 2:
-			'Tanya, however, looks livid. She doesn''t say a word, her lips so tightly pressed together she probably wouldn''t be able to say anything without yelling, but her silence says more than her screams possibly could: You dealt severe damage to your relationship with her by making her look stupid like this.' 
+			'Tanya, however, looks livid. She doesn''t say a word, her lips so tightly pressed together she probably wouldn''t be able to say anything without yelling, but her silence says more than her screams possibly could: You dealt severe damage to your relationship with her by making her look stupid like this.'
 			'As you excuse yourself, turn and quietly leave the apartment, you realize that you will have to put some effort into restoring Tanya''s friendship with you... if you can save it at all.'
-			
+
 			npc_rel['A218'] = 1
 			nichWork = 0
 			nichJobRefused = 1
 			nichJobRefusedTReact = 1
 		end
-		
+
 		act 'Leave now before you can do anymore damage':gt 'city_center'
 	end
 end
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'visitTanya':
 	!! Visiting Tanya is only possible if PC is not employed by Nicholas. If she is she can find Tanya by going to her room.
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	menu_off = 1
-	
+
 	if nichWork = 1:
 		gt 'nichApartment', 'agreed_to_job'
 	elseif nichTanya['FuckCounter'] > rand(15,18) and nichJobRefused < 1 and nichWork = 0 and FUNC('body_din','pregnancyVisibility',0,'nude') = 0:
@@ -524,17 +524,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 			nichJobRefused = 1
 			act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'city_center'
 		end
-		
+
 		act 'Agree':
 			xgt 'nichTanya','hire'
 		end
-		
+
 		act 'Maybe later':
 			cla
 			nichJobRefused = 2
 			'"Of course I''d love to be able to spend more time here with you but I have other commitments and I can''t just drop them so how about if circumstances change I get back to you? For now let''s leave things as they are and just enjoy our times together."'
 			'"So maybe in the future? Talk to me when you can start working here. We seem to get through maids very quickly for some reason."'
-			
+
 			'Without saying another word she takes your hand and leads you to her room.'
 			act 'Have sex with Tanya': gt 'nichTanya', 'sexL'
 		end
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casual_visit':
 	else
 		'Tanya opens the door and smiles warmly at you. "Hello <<$pcs_nickname>>! After all these weeks of not hearing anything from you I was beginning to wonder if you would show up again. I''m very happy you did."'
 	end
-	
+
 	'Without saying another word she takes your hand and leads you to her room.'
 	act 'Have sex with Tanya': gt 'nichTanya', 'sexL'
 	act 'Chat with Tanya': gt 'nichTanya', 'chat'

+ 4 - 4
locations/nichBedroomMaster.qsrc

@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 	$nichGalaAct = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','gala')
 	$nichNichAct = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','nicholas')
 	$nichTanyAct = func('nichUtil','npcActivity','tanya')
-	
+
 	nichGalaPresent = func('nichUtil','isPresent','gala','masterBedroom')
 	nichNichPresent = func('nichUtil','isPresent','nicholas','masterBedroom')
 	nichTanyPresent = func('nichUtil','isPresent','tanya','masterBedroom')
-	
+
 	if $nichGalaAct = 'snooze' and evtGalaMast1 = 0:
 		!! Todo: another trigger
 		gt $loc, 'evtGalaMast1'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '' or $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = 'return':
 		minut += 1
 		gt 'nichBathMaster'
 	end
-	
+
 	if nichWork = 2:
 		if nichNichPresent = 1:
 			'With Nicholas being present it wouldn''t be appropriate to clean this room now.'
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'evtGalaMast1':
 		act 'Leave':
 			gt 'nichApartment', 'return'
 		end
-		
+
 	end
 end
 --- nichBedroomMaster ---------------------------------

+ 3 - 3
locations/nichTaras.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dungeon':
 		act 'Inspect yourself':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/taras/hogtie1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see the reflexion of your bound self in the mirror.'
+			'You see the reflection of your bound self in the mirror.'
 		end
 		if nichTarasMirror = 0:
 			act 'Throw over':
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'session':
 			'Of course Taras can''t miss the fact that you threw over his mirror.'
 			'"What the hell, bitch? Did you seriously throw my mirror over?"'
 			'He walks over to it and places it back up.'
-			'"Oh, I understand. You don''t like the way you are looking now." he grabs you by the hair and pulls you to the mirror, forcing you to look at your reflexion.'
+			'"Oh, I understand. You don''t like the way you are looking now." he grabs you by the hair and pulls you to the mirror, forcing you to look at your reflection.'
 			'"This is what you truely are. A dirty little slut, nothing but I toy for finer people."'
 			'"I will make sure you understand and accept that."'
 			act 'Further':
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ elseif $ARGS[0] = 'session':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/taras/mirrorEvent1c.jpg"></center>'
 						'You feel the whip on your body again and again. The pain is almost too much to bare.'
 						*nl
-						'You try to keep your eyes on your reflexion. You can''t believe the girl in the mirror who gets abused so horribly is acutally you.'
+						'You try to keep your eyes on your reflection. You can''t believe the girl in the mirror who gets abused so horribly is acutally you.'
 						act 'Further':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/taras/mirrorEvent1d.jpg"></center>'

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_disco_gopniks.qsrc

@@ -1257,7 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lena_lera':
 						'You notice Lera looks unhappy. "I thought we were all going to dance together?"'
 						*nl
 						'Lena frowns. "Don''t be like that. Are you going to cover for me or not?" she asks, sounding more than a little annoyed.'
-						'Lera looks exserbated. "Fine."'
+						'Lera looks exacerbated. "Fine."'
 						'Lena smiles, hugs Lera and disappears with the boy.'
 						act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_classmates', 'classmates'
 						act 'Ask Lera about the boy':

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_discoev1.qsrc

@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girlfriend_ask':
 	act 'Leave the disco':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big4.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go outside with Igor. In a bout of passion, Igor takes you by the hand and looks you in the eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re such a pretty girl. Everytime I see you, my mood gets better, even when I''m feeling down. I like you very much <<$pcs_nickname>>, and I''d really like to start a relationship with you."'
+		'You go outside with Igor. In a bout of passion, Igor takes you by the hand and looks you in the eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re such a pretty girl. Every time I see you, my mood gets better, even when I''m feeling down. I like you very much <<$pcs_nickname>>, and I''d really like to start a relationship with you."'
 
 		act 'Refuse and leave':gt $loc, $loc_arg
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/pushkin_ballet_class.qsrc

@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'makeup':
 		'"Today, we''ll be going over how you present yourself for your assessment on Saturday. The assessors will judge your abilities as a dancer and how well you apply makeup and care for your hair."'
 		'"You all have your partners, so today, you will help each other prepare for your assessment. If you end up working together in future, you will help each other during rehearsals and shows, and if you are capable, the rest of your Corp."'
 		'"As dancers, we all look after each other. Remember this!" She says the last few words with strong emphasis, reminding you that ballet is as much a team effort as it is about self-discipline. "Now class, split up and work with your partner. If you need assistance, put your hand up."'
-		'"Your guidelines for the exam are as follows: Your hair must be in a bun, ensuring your face and neck aren''t obscured. If needed, use pins and ensure there are no hair wisps. No jewellery is to be worn except ear studs. Make-up must be complimentary and kept to a minimum. Remember to use your setting powder. Any questions? Good, carry on."'
+		'"Your guidelines for the exam are as follows: Your hair must be in a bun, ensuring your face and neck aren''t obscured. If needed, use pins and ensure there are no hair wisps. No jewelry is to be worn except ear studs. Make-up must be complimentary and kept to a minimum. Remember to use your setting powder. Any questions? Good, carry on."'
 		'Today your teacher is more active, going between the various students, and complimenting or advising them as required. You see her have a short conversation with Nikita, and you''re curious about what it was about before <<$npc_firstname[''A274'']>> grabs your attention to carry on with practising your makeup.'
 	end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/sex_ev_cum.qsrc

@@ -1195,7 +1195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_brace':
 				act'Feels weird':
 					cla & *clr
 					'"I don''t like the feeling of that on my skin," you grimace, <<$sex_ev[''cum_describe2'']>>.'
-					'"So you had me come onyour face instead?"'
+					'"So you had me come on your face instead?"'
 					'"... Shut up!"'
 					gs'sex_ev_sex', 'sex_end'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/sex_ev_virgin.qsrc

@@ -1966,7 +1966,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_time_talk':
 			'"It gets better. You were probably too tight because you were a virgin."'
 			act'Really?':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"Really?" you ask, voice heavy with sketicism.'
+				'"Really?" you ask, voice heavy with scepticism.'
 				'"Yeah, really," <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> laughs back. "Some girls I know said their first time hurt. But those same girls love it now."'
 				'"Wish you could''ve warned me."'
 				'"If it''s any consolation, your pussy felt great."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/sex_ev_work_talk1.qsrc

@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whats_your_job':
 					'"Oh, all right. That''s cool I guess."'
 					'"Got a problem?"'
 					'"No, none at all," you assure him. "Gotta make a living somehow. What kind of stuff do you steal?"'
-					'"Lots of things. Cars, jewellery, I''ll rob a house every now and then."'
+					'"Lots of things. Cars, jewelry, I''ll rob a house every now and then."'
 					'"Cool, cool."'
 					gs 'sex_ev_pillow_talk2', 'small_talk'
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/shop_photography.qsrc

@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buycamera':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/photoshop/owner.jpg"></center>'
 	'"You have made a momentous decision with this purchase! Here is your very own DSLR camera to do anything from professional commissioned photography to personal snaps of small events. And now that I have launched your photographic crusade to enlightenment, what are you indeed planning to use this opportunity for in this world of possibility?"'
 	*nl
-	'"I''m thinking of just building a portfolio of pictures for now; something to test how I can build up my ability to frame a scene. I might start by going around the area and looking for pictures to take to build a catalog of photographs."'
+	'"I''m thinking of just building a portfolio of pictures for now; something to test how I can build up my ability to frame a scene. I might start by going around the area and looking for pictures to take to build a catalogue of photographs."'
 	*nl
 	'"Fantastic!  Brilliant! Tell you what; once you''ve completed your portfolio, bring it in as I would love to see it! Now go! I release you into this new world of possibility!"'
 	act 'Walk away': gt 'shop_photography' , 'start'

+ 2 - 2
locations/therapist.qsrc

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
-				'You sign the last page of the packet and then take it back to the nurse. She looks it over and somehow doessent seem to notice or care about the note on the back of it. She stands up and says. "Everything looks good. Please follow me" she says and takes you to the Therapists room.'
+				'You sign the last page of the packet and then take it back to the nurse. She looks it over and somehow doesn''t seem to notice or care about the note on the back of it. She stands up and says. "Everything looks good. Please follow me" she says and takes you to the Therapists room.'
 
 				act 'Enter the Therapist''s Office':
 					therapistQW['met'] = 1
@@ -2280,7 +2280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoRandom':
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sittingClothed.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
-		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"Now lets make sure you start having my children... <font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">Although you won''t consciously know my cum is inside of you, you will subconsciously feel it. Everytime I cum inside of you, your body will crave my seed more. You will keep your pussy clenched so my cum doesn''t leak out."</font>'
+		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">"Now lets make sure you start having my children... <font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">Although you won''t consciously know my cum is inside of you, you will subconsciously feel it. Every time I cum inside of you, your body will crave my seed more. You will keep your pussy clenched so my cum doesn''t leak out."</font>'
 		'<font color="<<$hypnocolour>>">Also, take these." He hands you a package of pills. "You will take one every day. If you have any birth control pills, you will throw them away. You won''t think about buying more. You won''t notice anything wrong with this and you will think these are simply normal birth control pills. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"</font>'
 		'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/vecher.qsrc

@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end8':
 		if pcs_horny < 100: 'You soon tire of the licking, wanting to get on with something else.'
 		if pcs_horny >= 100: pcs_horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'The muscles of your vagina start to clench and ripple with pleasure, a warm wave of pleasure suffusing your lower body as you howl in orgasm.'
 
-		'The stranger tugs his dick out of Vika with a wet schlurp and lifts his body to press it into her mouth.'
+		'The stranger tugs his dick out of Vika with a wet slurp and lifts his body to press it into her mouth.'
 
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla

+ 2 - 2
locations/viktor_sex.qsrc

@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'viktor_postsex':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				!! IMAGE
-				'Craving a smoke, you reach into your bag and pull out a cigeratte before lighting it. You take a long drag as the events of last night come back to you. You look over at Viktor still snoozing, the memory of him ravaging your pussy becoming vivid in your mind.'
+				'Craving a smoke, you reach into your bag and pull out a cigarette before lighting it. You take a long drag as the events of last night come back to you. You look over at Viktor still snoozing, the memory of him ravaging your pussy becoming vivid in your mind.'
 
 				act 'Get up':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wakeup_smoke':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	!! IMAGE
-	'Craving a smoke, you reach into your bag and pull out a cigeratte before lighting it. You take a long drag as the events of last night come back to you. You look over at Viktor still snoozing, the memory of him ravaging your pussy becoming vivid in your mind.'
+	'Craving a smoke, you reach into your bag and pull out a cigarette before lighting it. You take a long drag as the events of last night come back to you. You look over at Viktor still snoozing, the memory of him ravaging your pussy becoming vivid in your mind.'
 
 	act 'Get up':
 		*clr & cla