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  KevinSmarts d1bd0ea41e [fixes] stat file change for fat to energy conversion so that excess fat can restore low energy from Vaelon 6 years ago
  3xpurt 581e504943 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  3xpurt 7863c79a1b [changed] "cookies" to "tea biscuits" in multiple files to standardise the name throughout the game. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 56845a1dfe [added] more of akossi's item descriptions for shops to _stock_item_info. 6 years ago
  3xpurt d8c5f744fc [fixed] pavsharedapt missing action to leave boy's rooms. 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 666de3299a Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/3xpurt/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 37fe9af781 [Fixes] Changed all 15 cases of <<pcs_nickname>> to <<$pcs_nickname>> 6 years ago
  3xpurt 50b37ab33c [changed] obj_din and cum_arrcheat now have three attempts at finding an exit for emergency exit cancel and OOX debug leave. 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 4957f97aa0 [Fixed] stat_display had the wrong start time for Pussy-Cats job 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 23fcfa77d0 [fixed] Used day instead of week so it never updated. 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 5cbfa1a229 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/3xpurt/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 4b21e25be0 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/hornguy6/GLifeHornguy 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 81f4a8b9d4 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 48c8da01ef [fixed] still had exhibition variable 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts b2e1fed9a7 [changed] New comment guidelines for commits 6 years ago
  Kevin_Smarts b4ec4a0cda Merge branch 'master' of Fanley/glife into master 6 years ago
  Fanley 532946b64b Mettre à jour 'locations/placer_sex.qsrc' 6 years ago
  Fanley 7db0e0cd9b Mettre à jour 'locations/placer_sex.qsrc' 6 years ago
  3xpurt 267aa4d139 [fixed] sisterQW reference to Sveta being covered in cum, when there is no cause for it. Increased alko value to match drink type. Ran clean-up and space to tab conversion. 6 years ago
  hornguy6 0080965ff1 wrong variable sending you to the wrong outcome 6 years ago
  3xpurt a7adaed237 [fixed] apostrophe error and missing black eye stat in hotel_resep. 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 664eb7e3d4 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/julzor/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 7856ee8816 exhibition to inhib updater 6 years ago
  julzor bca1e22278 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 64537dcaef Highway sound from nutluck 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 78351af87e Sound for the shopping center from nutluck 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 768aa5b279 Sounds for the metro from nutluck 6 years ago
  julzor e40aae51b8 fixed inhibition cheat 6 years ago
  julzor ab4db4e75e fixed inhibition in the custom start 6 years ago
  julzor b993a3fd76 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  julzor b01ad416b8 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/3xpurt/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts bc2b06638a Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/3xpurt/glife 6 years ago
  julzor 8ad537a661 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts debf7efc41 Merge branch 'fotofix' of https://git.catrenelle.com/ml/glife 6 years ago
  3xpurt 5b70f8f1a0 [fixed] vokzalgin. Now return to work menu when working at pav trainstation instead of root menu. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 79fc8d3573 [fixed] rent due display in telefon. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 480a880407 [fixed] buying snacks when not having the money to do so in stwork. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 8bf04cb029 [fixed] being able to buy products requiring bag > 0, without owning a bag in shop and gadmarket. 6 years ago
  3xpurt add75167a7 [fixed] progression and blank actions in foto. 6 years ago
  3xpurt e5fe34da1b [fixed] being charged for utilities without property ownership. 6 years ago
  3xpurt a9b4bdb343 [fixed] incorrect arousal call in brothel 6 years ago
  3xpurt b4087102ce [fixed] incorrect cum_call in abduction. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 60f350903d Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  3xpurt 6faf35dd47 [fixed] very minor grammar annoyance. (my eye hurts). 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts a8faf35012 Exhibititionism code removed 6 years ago
  Mona Lisa aa6eff8ecb fix foto 6 years ago
  3xpurt ee3b3acb88 [fixed] free drugs. 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 2c71207110 Show succubus energy in the stat bars for Succubae 6 years ago
  3xpurt 2a28342f11 [changed] Can no longer rent properties from the laptop (where did the key come from?). You can also see which properties are currently available and pre-pay your rent. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 5cf8b70ea7 [fixed] missing else in brother_voyeur. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 37a9b3751d [changed] reduced client lag in pornfilm - Now only loads max 2 images instead of 5, in finale of film 11, 12. Separated exit from last sex scene. Finale now loads 1/3 random 'walk away' videos, not all 3. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 9bfd313d35 [changed] Made some formatting changes to brother_voyeur. Split homework to brother_lessons. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 9244a553a0 [fixed] missing apostrophe's in young_shop 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 88b2b3d9eb Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/julzor/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 32872a9800 Exhib to inhib for shop filter 6 years ago
  julzor 486560313a Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 59fe3fc177 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/3xpurt/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts c745e34861 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/hornguy6/GLifeHornguy 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts a08b003180 exhib to inhib change 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 28ce073513 Text edits from nutluck and blatte 6 years ago
  julzor 408192ef29 the stepdad dream could repeat every night 6 years ago
  3xpurt d32c618318 [fixed] missing ends and if. Minor formatting changes. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 8c83e7dac4 [fixed] minor fixes. 6 years ago
  3xpurt 8e793b9f4f [fixed] redundant or missing ends in foto, foto_events, gadforest. Extra : in foto. 6 years ago
  3xpurt cd3f9f2397 [fixed] missing end 6 years ago
  3xpurt 797c4364b2 [fixed] double space after if 6 years ago
  hornguy6 a3272ea5e5 changed "and" to "end" in brother_voyeur 6 years ago
  hornguy6 5c75c4d719 forgot to include a variable change for a photo event 6 years ago
  hornguy6 e4c00f3ff0 missing *clr 6 years ago
63 changed files with 1780 additions and 1479 deletions
  1. 12 0
      README.md
  2. 1 0
      glife.qproj
  3. 1 1
      locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc
  4. 3 3
      locations/Gadhouse.qsrc
  5. 42 30
      locations/Komp.qsrc
  6. 1 1
      locations/NikoDates.qsrc
  7. 112 33
      locations/Snpc.qsrc
  8. 10 0
      locations/_stock_item_info.qsrc
  9. 1 1
      locations/abduction.qsrc
  10. 48 23
      locations/agentned.qsrc
  11. 1 1
      locations/anushka.qsrc
  12. 0 1
      locations/brothel.qsrc
  13. 68 63
      locations/brother.qsrc
  14. 534 0
      locations/brother_lessons.qsrc
  15. 285 732
      locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc
  16. 2 2
      locations/buklinik_event.qsrc
  17. 4 13
      locations/cikl.qsrc
  18. 7 1
      locations/cum_arrcheat.qsrc
  19. 2 2
      locations/dachain.qsrc
  20. 1 1
      locations/dreams.qsrc
  21. 28 32
      locations/foto.qsrc
  22. 5 5
      locations/foto_events.qsrc
  23. 7 5
      locations/gadforest.qsrc
  24. 6 4
      locations/gadmarket.qsrc
  25. 10 10
      locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc
  26. 20 19
      locations/hotel_resep.qsrc
  27. 15 1
      locations/housing.qsrc
  28. 3 3
      locations/kiosk.qsrc
  29. 2 2
      locations/kit_din.qsrc
  30. 2 2
      locations/kuhr.qsrc
  31. 2 2
      locations/kuhr2x.qsrc
  32. 3 3
      locations/kuhrPar.qsrc
  33. 1 1
      locations/larek.qsrc
  34. 1 1
      locations/metro.qsrc
  35. 3 3
      locations/mey_home.qsrc
  36. 1 1
      locations/mother.qsrc
  37. 1 1
      locations/nyp_school.qsrc
  38. 7 1
      locations/obj_din.qsrc
  39. 2 2
      locations/obkitchen.qsrc
  40. 1 1
      locations/park.qsrc
  41. 1 1
      locations/pavComplex.qsrc
  42. 6 6
      locations/pavSharedApt.qsrc
  43. 2 0
      locations/placer_sex.qsrc
  44. 106 93
      locations/pornfilm.qsrc
  45. 4 3
      locations/preSYS2.qsrc
  46. 2 2
      locations/qwBarBilliard.qsrc
  47. 1 1
      locations/qwBarEncounters.qsrc
  48. 1 0
      locations/road.qsrc
  49. 8 3
      locations/saunawhore.qsrc
  50. 10 0
      locations/saveupdater.qsrc
  51. 3 3
      locations/sexshop.qsrc
  52. 4 6
      locations/shop.qsrc
  53. 12 11
      locations/sisterQW.qsrc
  54. 3 0
      locations/stat.qsrc
  55. 9 4
      locations/stat_display.qsrc
  56. 4 2
      locations/stwork.qsrc
  57. 1 0
      locations/telefon.qsrc
  58. 1 1
      locations/torgcentr.qsrc
  59. 69 61
      locations/train.qsrc
  60. 54 51
      locations/vokzalGin.qsrc
  61. 1 1
      locations/wardrobe.qsrc
  62. 3 3
      locations/ykuh.qsrc
  63. 220 220
      locations/young_shop.qsrc

+ 12 - 0
README.md

@@ -1,5 +1,17 @@
 # Girl Life (ЭТО) [English Community Version] - github edition
 
+## Formatting comments when posting commits
+Please use one of the following terms:
+* fixed
+* changed
+* added
+* removed
+* text edit
+Added and removed are for files being added or removed, fixed is for bug/code fixes, changed is for when events are changed and text edit is for changes to the text that'll appear on screen.
+These are for searching to aid those working on the files.
+Can you also include filenames (unless its a large number of files) and include any description you feel will help.
+If adding content that is disabled (due to being WIP) can you comment in the file that its disabled and include your name so that it doesn't get activated in error.
+
 ## Quick start (for Unixy machines)
 * clone/fork the repo
 * make edits to the files in `locations`

+ 1 - 0
glife.qproj

@@ -355,6 +355,7 @@
     <Folder name="Brother porn">
       <Location name="brother"/>
 	  <Location name="brother_voyeur"/>
+	  <Location name="brother_lessons"/>
       <Location name="seeporn"/>
       <Location name="brosh"/>
       <Location name="porn_view"/>

+ 1 - 1
locations/Cheatmenu_din.qsrc

@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ $cheatmenu['stats'] = {
 	if MagikDostup = 0: pl 'Magic (<<magik_lvl>>): <a href="exec:magik_lvl += 1 & magik_lvlst = magik_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+1</a> <a href="exec:magik_lvl += 5 & magik_lvlst = magik_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+5</a> <a href="exec:magik_lvl += 10 & magik_lvlst = magik_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+10</a> <a href="exec:magik_lvl -= 1 & magik_lvlst = magik_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-1</a> <a href="exec:magik_lvl -= 5 & magik_lvlst = magik_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-5</a> <a href="exec:magik_lvl -= 10 & magik_lvlst = magik_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-10</a>'
 	nl
 	pl'<b>Sexual:</b>'
-	pl 'Inhibition level (<<100 - pcs_inhib>>): <a href="exec:inhib_lvl -= 1 & intel_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+1</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl -= 5 & intel_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+5</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl -= 10 & intel_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+10</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl += 1 & intel_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-1</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl += 5 & intel_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-5</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl += 10 & intel_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-10</a>'
+	pl 'Inhibition level (<<100 - pcs_inhib>>): <a href="exec:inhib_lvl -= 1 & inhib_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+1</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl -= 5 & inhib_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+5</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl -= 10 & inhib_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >+10</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl += 1 & inhib_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-1</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl += 5 & inhib_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-5</a> <a href="exec:inhib_lvl += 10 & inhib_lvlst = inhib_lvl & dynamic $cheatmenu[''stats'']" >-10</a>'
 	if pcs_dom < 0 or sub < 0: pcs_dom = 0 & sub = 0
 	if pcs_dom > 100: pcs_dom = 100
 	if sub > 100: sub = 100

+ 3 - 3
locations/Gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -268,9 +268,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Main':
 	end
 
 	if pranik > 0:
-		'You have <<pranik>> cookies on the plate.'
+		'You have <<pranik>> tea biscuits on the plate.'
 
-		act 'Drink tea with cookies (0:05)':
+		act 'Drink tea with biscuits (0:05)':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Main':
 			frost = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enjoy a cup of tea while you eat some of the cookies. They''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
+			'You enjoy a cup of tea while you eat some of the tea biscuits. They''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
 
 			act 'Get up from the table':gt 'Gadhouse', 'Main'
 		end

+ 42 - 30
locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brows':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 		'You go to your favourite start page, while you try to decide on what you want to see right now.'
 
-		'A blinking banner for a <a href="exec:GT ''Komp'',''agent''">real estate agency</a> keeps popping up in the corner.'
+		'A blinking banner for a <a href="exec:GT ''Komp'',''agent''">Kirsanova Real Estate Agency</a> keeps popping up in the corner.'
 
 		if home_owned[1] = 2 and husband = 0:act 'Rent your apartment out':gt 'Komp', 'sale'
 
@@ -532,13 +532,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agent':
 	internet -= 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'housing', 'rent'
-	'<center><b>Real estate agency</b></center>'
+	gs 'housing', 'sale'
+	'<center><b>Kirsanova Real Estate Agency</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/accessories/computer/agent.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re currently at the website of the largest real estate agency in the area.'
-	'They have apartments available in the city residential district and Pushkin. Renting one would cost you as low as 10000 <b>₽</b> for 30 days.'
-	''
-	if ArendHouseSL > 0:'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your St. Petersburg apartment.'
-	if ArendHouseSL4 > 0:'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your Pushkin apartment.'
+	*nl
+	'You''re currently at the website of the largest real estate agency in the area, Kirsanova Real Estate Agency.'
+	'<br>The website shows they have apartments available for rent or purchase in various areas, both in and out of the city. Renting or purchase requires you visit the agency in the city center to fill an application and collect the keys. Rent on all properties is deducted every month on the 25th.'
+	*nl
+	'<b>Property listing</b>:'
+	if ArendHouseSL > 0:
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your St. Petersburg apartment.'
+		*nl
+	elseif home_owned[1] = 0 and ArendHouseSL = 0:
+		'There is an apartment in St. Petersburg residental area available, for rent or puchase.'
+		'Rent is: <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ per month. Curent sale price is listet at: <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b>'
+		*nl
+	end
+
+	if home_owned[3] = 0:
+		'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the communal village for sale.'
+		'Current sale price is listed at: <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+		*nl
+	end
+	
+	if home_owned[4] > 0 and ArendHouseSL4 > 0:
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your Pushkin apartment.'
+		*nl
+	elseif home_owned[4] = 0 and ArendHouseSL4 = 0:
+		'There is a n apartment in Pushkin area available to rent.'
+		'Rent is: <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ per month.'
+		*nl
+	end
+
+	if home_owned[5] = 0:
+		'There is a plot in the suburbs available for puchase, with planning permission for a mansion.'
+		'Current sale price is listed at: <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+		*nl
+	end
+
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_rent[1] and home_owned[1] = 1:
 		act 'Pay rent on St. Petersburg':
 			cla
@@ -547,15 +578,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agent':
 			'After a very simple procedure, you can now call an apartment in the city residential district home for another 30 days. You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your apartment.'
 			act 'Leave this website':gt 'Komp','brows'
 		end
-	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_rent[1] and home_owned[1] = 0:
-		act 'Rent a city apartment':
-			cla
-			karta -= home_rent[1]
-			ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due
-			home_owned[1] = 1
-			'After a very simple procedure, you can now call an apartment in the city residential district home for 30 days.'
-			act 'Leave this website':gt 'Komp','brows'
-		end
 	end
 	if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_rent[4] and home_owned[4] > 0:
 		act 'Pay rent on Pushkin':
@@ -565,24 +587,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'agent':
 			'After a very simple procedure, you can now call an apartment in Pushkin home for another 30 days. You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> remaining on the rental of your apartment.'
 			act 'Leave this website':gt 'Komp','brows'
 		end
-	elseif karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_rent[4] and home_owned[4] = 0:
-		act 'Rent a Pushkin apartment':
-			cla
-			karta -= home_rent[4]
-			ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due
-			home_owned[4] = 1
-			'After a very simple procedure, you can now call an apartment in Pushkin home for 30 days.'
-			act 'Leave this website':gt 'Komp','brows'
-		end
 	end
-
 	act 'Leave this website':gt 'Komp','brows'
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'fin':
-	gt $loc, $metka
-end
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mfc':
 	if mesec > 0:
 		cls
@@ -1521,5 +1529,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bank':
 	act 'Close your browser':gt 'Komp', 'start'
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'fin':
+	gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
 --- Komp ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 2':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick.." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch, as he says, "Come on <<pcs_nickname>>, it won''t take long.". You quickly pull away then slap him across his face, causing him to pause for a second before he raises his hand then smacks you across the face, as he shouts, "YOU FUCKING UNGRATEFUL BITCH! I have done so much for you, and you toss it in my face. Get the fuck out and swim!" Niko grabs you by the neck, and pushes you off the boat then begins angrily paddling away, as you do your best to swim back to the shore. You arrive at the shore completely drenched, so you hang your clothes on a nearby tree, and wait for it to dry. You take a few seconds to think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>What the fuck was his problem!? What a nutjob!</font>'
+						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick.." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch, as he says, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, it won''t take long.". You quickly pull away then slap him across his face, causing him to pause for a second before he raises his hand then smacks you across the face, as he shouts, "YOU FUCKING UNGRATEFUL BITCH! I have done so much for you, and you toss it in my face. Get the fuck out and swim!" Niko grabs you by the neck, and pushes you off the boat then begins angrily paddling away, as you do your best to swim back to the shore. You arrive at the shore completely drenched, so you hang your clothes on a nearby tree, and wait for it to dry. You take a few seconds to think to yourself, <font color=#FF00FF>What the fuck was his problem!? What a nutjob!</font>'
 						*nl
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/fight/grab.jpg"></center>'
 

+ 112 - 33
locations/Snpc.qsrc

@@ -7,17 +7,17 @@ $static_num = $school_static_num[numnpc]
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 '<<$npc_notes[$static_num]>>'
 
-if grupTipe[numnpc] = 5:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is an outcast in school, and doesn''t have anyone to sit with during lunch.'
+if grupTipe[numnpc] = 5:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is an outcast in school, and often gets picked on at school.'
 if grupTipe[numnpc] = 6:''
-if grupTipe[numnpc] = 3:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is a nerd, and usually spends lunch time with them.'
+if grupTipe[numnpc] = 3:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is a nerd, and is often found around the rest of the nerds doing homework or a their game night.'
 if grupTipe[numnpc] = 2:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is part of the athletic clique in your school.'
 if grupTipe[numnpc] = 1:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is popular, and spends time with the other popular kids usually.'
 if grupTipe[numnpc] = 4:'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> is a Gopnik, and spends a lot of time doing what Gopniks usually do: be loud, and drink beer.'
-if npc_rel[$static_num] < 20:'You don''t get along at all.'
-if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 20 and npc_rel[$static_num] < 40:'You don''t get along very well.'
-if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 40 and npc_rel[$static_num] < 60:'You have a normal relationship.'
-if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 60 and npc_rel[$static_num] < 80:'You have a good relationship.'
-if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 80:'You have a great relationship.'
+if npc_rel[$static_num] < 20:'They really don''t like you.'
+if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 20 and npc_rel[$static_num] < 40:'They are fairly indifferent to you.'
+if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 40 and npc_rel[$static_num] < 60:'The two of you get along together fairly well together, more of casual friends.'
+if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 60 and npc_rel[$static_num] < 80:'You get along great with them, they are one of your friends.'
+if npc_rel[$static_num] >= 80:'They are one of your best friends.'
 
 if numnpc = 14 and KatjaOTN > 0:
 	if KatjaHorny < 20:'Katja looks calm and stoic.'
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if numnpc = 9:gs 'kotovtalker'
 !!!!!!!!!!!!!
 if grupTipe[numnpc] = 4:
 	if $loc = 'gdkin':
-		if pav_slut < 50:
+		if pav_slut < 125:
 			if numnpc ! 9:
 				if npcPol[numnpc] = 0:
 					'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> offers you a beer and says: "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Let''s drink some beer and have some fun!"'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if grupTipe[numnpc] = 4:
 
 				act 'Decline':npc_rel[$static_num] -= 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 			end
-		elseif pav_slut >= 50:
+		elseif pav_slut >= 125:
 			if npcPol[numnpc] = 0:
 				'<<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> looks at you wearily: "What do you want? Looking for a dick to suck on or something?"'
 			else
@@ -106,43 +106,122 @@ if grupTipe[numnpc] = 4:
 end
 
 if numnpc = 45:
-	if $loc ! 'gdkin' and npc_rel[$static_num] > 50 and (grupTipe = 4 or Anush_sex > 0 or hotcat >= 7):
+!!I would like to change this so even if all the requirements are meet it only fires one in 5 times. 
+	if $loc ! 'gdkin' and npc_rel[$static_num] > 50 and (Anush_sex > 0 or hotcat >= 7) and rand(0,4) = 0:
 		act 'You''re looking flushed':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			if Anush_lunch = 0:
-				pcs_horny += 10
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/45.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Hey Anush you feeling ok? You kinda look flush, is something wrong? Would you like to talk about it?"'
 				'She leans in close and tries to kiss you, while one hand reaches down and squeezes your butt. You turn your head and pull away. "What are you doing? I was only seeing if you was ok."'
 				'She crowds you a bit and leans in close. "You talk to much, I can think of better things you can do with that tongue of yours."'
+				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
+				minut -= 5
+				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Um that''s not what I meant':
 					*clr
 					cla
+					npc_rel['A45'] -= 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
 					'You place your hand on her shoulders and gentle push her away. "No I don''t want to."'
 					'She rolls her eyes. "Fine what ever, if you don''t want to have a little fun, I will find someone that does." With that she turns and walks off, leaving you unsure what just happened.'
-
 					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
-				act 'Go with it':
-					inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
-					cls
+				act 'Kiss her back.':
+					*clr
+					cla
 					Anush_lunch = 1
-					pcs_horny += 10
+					npc_rel['A45'] += 1
+					pav_sex +=1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You breath heavily feeling yourself turned on. "Ok, where?"'
-					'You barely even have time to get the words out when she is leaning in and kissing you, you kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each others bodies, several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. After a couple of minutes she grabs you by the hands and pulls you along with her.'
-
-					act 'Go somewhere private':  gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
+					'You kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each others bodies, several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. Several of them starting hooting, hollering or whistling as the two of you make out hard right in front of them. After a couple of minutes she grabs you by the hands and says "Come on lets go some place more private to continue this.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
+					minut -= 5
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Not today':
+						*clr
+						cla
+						npc_rel['A45'] -= 2
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
+						'You place your hand on her shoulders and gentle push her away. "No I don''t want to."'
+						'She rolls her eyes. "Fine what ever, if you don''t want to have a little fun, I will find someone that does." With that she turns and walks off, leaving you unsure what just happened.'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					end
+					act 'Go with it':
+						*clr
+						cla
+						Anush_lunch = 1
+						pcs_horny += 10
+						npc_rel['A45'] += 1
+						grupvalue[4] +=1
+						pav_sex +=1
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'You breath heavily feeling yourself turned on. "Ok, where?"'
+						'Her hand slides up your skirt and rubs your clit. "Come with me, I know just the place." With that she takes you by the hand and the two of your head off, with the whistles and cat calls of the other gopniks behind you.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
+						minut -= 5
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Go somewhere private':  gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
+					end
 				end
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"You are looking pretty flush again today, would you like me to help you out with that?"'
-				'You barely even have time to get the words out when she is leaning in and kissing you, you kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each others bodies, several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. After a couple of minutes she grabs you by the hands and pulls you along with her.'
-
-				act 'Go somewhere private':  gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
+				'Noticing she is looking fairly turned on today, well more so than usual, you say to her. "You ok? You are looking pretty flush again today."'
+				'You barely even have time to get the words out when she is leaning in and kissing you, her hands reach around to squeeze you butt.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
+				minut -= 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				act 'Not today':
+					*clr
+					cla
+					npc_rel['A45'] -= 2
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
+					'You place your hand on her shoulders and gentle push her away. "No I don''t want to."'
+					'She rolls her eyes. "Fine what ever, if you don''t want to have a little fun, I will find someone that does." With that she turns and walks off, leaving you unsure what just happened.'
+					act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+				end
+				act 'Kiss her back.':
+					*clr
+					cla
+					Anush_lunch = 1
+					npc_rel['A45'] += 1
+					pav_sex +=1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'You kiss her back. Your hands are roaming each others bodies, several of the other gopniks are checking the two of you out, especially the guys. Several of them starting hooting, hollering or whistling as the two of you make out hard right in front of them. After a couple of minutes she grabs you by the hands and says "Come on lets go some place more private to continue this.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
+					minut -= 5
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Not today':
+						*clr
+						cla
+						npc_rel['A45'] -= 2
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/nomake.jpg"></center>'
+						'You place your hand on her shoulders and gentle push her away. "No I don''t want to."'
+						'She rolls her eyes. "Fine what ever, if you don''t want to have a little fun, I will find someone that does." With that she turns and walks off, leaving you unsure what just happened.'
+						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+					end
+					act 'Go with it':
+						*clr
+						cla
+						Anush_lunch = 1
+						pcs_horny += 10
+						npc_rel['A45'] += 1
+						grupvalue[4] +=1
+						pav_sex +=1
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/makeout.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'You breath heavily feeling yourself turned on. "Ok, where?"'
+						'Her hand slides up your skirt and rubs your clit. "Come with me, I know just the place." With that she takes you by the hand and the two of your head off, with the whistles and cat calls of the other gopniks behind you.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'exhibitionism'
+						minut -= 5
+						gs 'stat'
+						act 'Go somewhere private':  gt 'gschool_sex', 'Anush_private'
+					end
+				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -156,7 +235,7 @@ if numnpc = 23:
 	if albinaQWdance > 0 and AlbinaBlokDance = 0 and ZvezdEnd = 0:
 		'Albina offers you a friendly smile and says: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re progressing very well in your training. Don''t forget to keep attending!"'
 
-		if pav_slut > 25:'By the way, some people are telling some pretty disgusting rumours about you.'
+		if pav_slut > 100:'By the way, some people are telling some pretty disgusting rumours about you.'
 	end
 
 	if artemIzdev = 1:
@@ -261,14 +340,14 @@ if numnpc = 2:
 			npc_rel[$static_num] += 5
 			sub += 1
 
-			if pav_slut < 75:artemLernQW = 1
+			if pav_slut < 100:artemLernQW = 1
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 
-			if pav_slut < 75:'You approach Artem and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. Artem is a bit surprised: "What... you want my help? Well, okay I guess. Come meet me at my place if you want to do homework together."'
-			if pav_slut >= 75:'You approach Artem and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. Artem is outraged: "Bah... the school whore needs my help? I don''t think so."'
+			if pav_slut < 100:'You approach Artem and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. Artem is a bit surprised: "What... you want my help? Well, okay I guess. Come meet me at my place if you want to do homework together."'
+			if pav_slut >= 100:'You approach Artem and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. Artem is outraged: "Bah... the school whore needs my help? I don''t think so."'
 
 			if $loc ! 'gdkin':
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -285,6 +364,7 @@ end
 
 	if numnpc = 3:gt 'IvanEv', 'School Chat'
 
+
 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 !!Vitek Kotov!!
 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@@ -318,8 +398,8 @@ if numnpc = 12:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 
-			if pav_slut < 25:'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
-			if pav_slut >= 25:'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She makes some comments about your lousy reputation in school, but at the same time doesn''t seem to care too much about it and agrees to help you anyway. As long as you don''t tell anyone.'
+			if pav_slut < 100:'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
+			if pav_slut >= 100:'You approach Julia and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She makes some comments about your lousy reputation in school, but at the same time doesn''t seem to care too much about it and agrees to help you anyway. As long as you don''t tell anyone.'
 			if $loc ! 'gdkin':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			if $loc ! 'gdkin':
 				xgt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break', 'nopict'
@@ -427,7 +507,6 @@ if numnpc = 14:
 	if (npc_rel[$static_num] > 60) and (KatjaOTN > 0) and (KatjaLust > 15) :
 		!!new Katja stuff not sure where you want to put it. It should be a option when you talk to her at school or the dance where it says Chat, but add this as a option.
 		act 'Kiss Katja':
-			inhib_exp += rand(0,1)
 			cls
 			if $loc = 'gdkin':
 				minut += 1
@@ -509,8 +588,8 @@ if numnpc = 16:
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/<<numnpc>>.jpg"></center>'
 
-			if pav_slut < 25:'You approach Natasha and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
-			if pav_slut >= 25:'You approach Natasha and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She makes some comments about your lousy reputation in school, but at the same time doesn''t seem to care too much about it and agrees to help you anyway. As long as you don''t tell anyone.'
+			if pav_slut < 100:'You approach Natasha and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She thinks it over for a second, but happily agrees: "Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, that could be fun!"'
+			if pav_slut >= 100:'You approach Natasha and explain how you''re struggling in school and could really use his help studying. She makes some comments about your lousy reputation in school, but at the same time doesn''t seem to care too much about it and agrees to help you anyway. As long as you don''t tell anyone.'
 			if $loc ! 'gdkin':
 				xgt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break', 'nopict'
 			else

+ 10 - 0
locations/_stock_item_info.qsrc

@@ -24,6 +24,16 @@ $item_info['poroshok'] = '<center><b>Clothing detergent</b></center><br>A box of
 $item_info['cltarelka'] = '<center><b>Plates</b></center><br>A set of five plain white dinner plates.'
 $item_info['kosmetica'] = '<center><b>Cosmetics</b></center><br>A complete cosmetic set that covers every part of your makeup routine. There''s enough products in there to allow you to create various looks.'
 $item_info['stanok'] = '<center><b>Razors</b></center><br>Cheap and disposable razors. They''re not meant to last very long, but they get the job done.'
+$item_info['pranik'] = '<center><b>Tea biscuits</b></center><br>A small package of yummy biscuits you can eat in a single sitting, perfect to be paired with a nice cup of tea'
+$item_info['siga'] = '<center><b>Pack of cigarettes</b></center><br>On the front in large print is a warning about potential health risks but it doesn''t seem to stop some people from buying them...'
+$item_info['bottle'] = '<center><b>Bottle of water</b></center><br>A cheap and convenient bottle of water that fits into any bag to be carried around with you.'
+$item_info['buterbrod'] = '<center><b>Sandwich</b></center><br>A single serving deli-style sandwich to satisfy hunger for the moment.'
+$item_info['wine'] = '<center><b>Cheap Bottle of wine</b></center><br>It tastes kind of bad, but it''s cheap and gets the job of getting drunk done if you drink enough of it.'
+$item_info['fashmag'] = '<center><b>Fashion magazine</b></center><br>Aimed at young women and teenage girls, the pages are filled with images of beautiful people and detail the latest trends in makeup, hair and fashion from all over the world!'
+$item_info['compmag'] = '<center><b>Computer magazine</b></center><br>While most of the articles contain interesting and helpful info regarding computers and other tech, there''s still advertisements slipped in trying to sell you on some pricey equipment you "absolutely need to buy".'
+$item_info['biomag'] = '<center><b>Biographical magazine</b></center><br>An educational magazine that explores the lives and minds of various leaders, artists, educators, innovators, and entrepreneurs from all over the world.'
+$item_info['cookmag'] = '<center><b>Cooking magazine</b></center><br>Whether your food is always turning out burnt or you know your way around a kitchen, this magazine is perfect for everyone! Inside are tons of tips and tricks along with various recipes ranging from quick 5 Minute dishes to baking some yummy desserts!'
+$item_info['knitmag'] = '<center><b>Knitting magazine</b></center><br>For those that are creative, this magazine offers in-depth guides ranging from super simple to challenging, with varying styles of traditional to cutting edge modern designs.'
 if $item_info[$ARGS[0]]!'':
 	$RESULT = '<a href="exec: MSG ''<<$item_info[$ARGS[0]]>>''"><img src="images/system/icon/anptekainfo.jpg"></a>'
 else

+ 1 - 1
locations/abduction.qsrc

@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdRape':
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoom'
 	elseif rapeType = 3:
 		pain['asshole'] += 10
-		gs 'cum_call', 'anal', 'torturer'
+		gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'torturer'
 		gifornot = rand (1, 100)
 		if gifornot > 50:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/fucktiedanal'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'

+ 48 - 23
locations/agentned.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs'stat'
 	gs'dina'
 	gs 'housing', 'rent'
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kirsanova Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	'The head office of the largest real estate agency in the area.'
@@ -39,7 +39,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'View rentals': gt 'agentned', 'rent'
 	act 'View properties for sale': gt 'agentned', 'buy'
 
-	act '<B>Leave</B>': minut += 5 & gt'down'
+	act '<B>Leave</B>':
+		minut += 5
+		gt'down'
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'buy':
@@ -47,26 +50,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy':
 	*clr
 	gs 'housing', 'sale'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if home_owned[1] = 0 or home_owned[3] = 0 or home_owned[4] = 0 or home_owned[5] = 0:
 		if home_owned[1] = 0:
-			'There is an apartment in the city residential area available for 2 million <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is an apartment in the city residential area available for <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			*nl
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[1]:act 'Buy the city residential apartment': gt 'agentned', 'buy_cityres'
 		elseif home_owned[1] = 1:
-			'You could buy your current rental apartment for 2 million <b>₽</b>.'
+			'You could buy your current rental apartment for <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			*nl
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[1]:act 'Buy the city residential apartment': gt 'agentned', 'buy_cityres'
 		end
 
 		if home_owned[3] = 0:
-			'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the village, for 150,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the village, for <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			*nl
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[3]:act 'Buy the cottage in the village': gt 'agentned','buy_dacha'
 		end
 
 		if home_owned[5] = 0:
-			'There is a plot in the suburbs with planning permission for a mansion for 1.5 million <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is a plot in the suburbs with planning permission for a mansion for <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			*nl
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[5]:act 'Buy the plot in the suburbs': gt 'agentned','buy_Mansion'
 		end
 	else
@@ -80,15 +87,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 	*clr
 	gs 'housing', 'sale'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	if home_owned[1] = 2 and rembedr = 1 and remsitr = 1 and remkorr = 1 and remvanr = 1 and remkuhr = 1:
 		!Renovated city residential apartment
 		home_value1 = ((home_value[1] + 250000) + rand(-100000, 100000)) 
 		'We have found a buyer for your renovated apartment in the city residential area. They will offer <<home_value1>> <b>₽</b>, minus 5% for fees and taxes, bringing the total to <<home_value1/100*95>>'
 		act 'Sell the renovated apartment':
+			*clr
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your renovated apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1>> <b>₽</b> have been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your renovated apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[1] = 0
 			ArendHouseSL = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
@@ -105,8 +115,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 		home_value1 = (home_value[1] + rand(-100000, 100000))
 		'We have found a buyer for your apartment in the city residential area. They will offer <<home_value1>> <b>₽</b>, minus 5% for fees and taxes, bringing the total to <<home_value1/100*95>>'
 		act 'Sell the city apartment':
+			*clr
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1>> <b>₽</b> have been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[1] = 0
 			ArendHouseSL = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
@@ -123,8 +136,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 		home_value3 = (home_value[3] + rand(-5000, 5000))
 		'We have found a buyer for your small communal cottage. They will offer <<home_value3>> <b>₽</b>, minus 5% for fees and taxes, bringing the total to <<home_value3/100*95>>'
 		act 'Sell the holiday cottage':
+			*clr
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3>> <b>₽</b> have been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[3] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value3/100*95
@@ -140,8 +156,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 		home_value3 = ((home_value[3] + 200000) + rand(-10000, 10000))
 		'We have found a buyer for your small renovated communal cottage. They will offer <<home_value3>> <b>₽</b>, minus 5% for fees and taxes, bringing the total to <<home_value3/100*95>>'
 		act 'Sell the renovated cottage':
+			*clr
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of the renovated cottage, with a loss of 1around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3>> <b>₽</b> have been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of the renovated cottage, with a loss of 1around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[3] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value3/100*95
@@ -157,8 +176,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 		home_value5 = (home_value[5] + rand(-50000, 50000))
 		'We have found a buyer for your vacant plot of land in the suburbs. They will offer <<home_value5>> <b>₽</b>, minus 5% for fees and taxes, bringing the total to <<home_value5/100*95>>'
 		act 'Sell the vacant plot':
+			*clr
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the vacant plot, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value5>> <b>₽</b> have been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the vacant plot, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value5/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[5] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value5/100*95
@@ -187,7 +209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -197,6 +219,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0 and home_owned[4] = 0:
 		''
 		'There are two properties available for rent.'
+		*nl
 		'There is an apartment in the city residential area, and an apartment in Pushkin available'
 		act 'View the city apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_cityres'
 		act 'View the Pushkin apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_pushkin'
@@ -220,11 +243,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'“We have a flat available right now in the residential area of St. Petersburg.” The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. “Rent is 15,000₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing.”'
-	'He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. “Interested? We can get you moved in right away.”'
+	'“We have a flat available right now in the residential area of St. Petersburg.” The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. “Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing.”'
+	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. “Interested? We can get you moved in right away.”'
 
 	if money >= home_rent[1]:
 		act 'Agree and pay':
+			cla
+			*clr
 			cls
 			minut += 30
 			money -= home_rent[1]
@@ -251,7 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head, “Actually, I need more time to think about this.”'
-		'The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
+		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
 
 		act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	end
@@ -264,8 +289,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'“We have a small apartment available right now in Pushkin’s city center. It’s a little bit pricey, but it’s been recently renovated to be more modern, and it looks quite nice. You won’t find a place like that outside of Pushkin.” The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. “Rent is 10,000₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing.”'
-	'He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. “Interested? We can get you moved in right away.”'
+	'“We have a small apartment available right now in Pushkin’s city center. It’s a little bit pricey, but it’s been recently renovated to be more modern, and it looks quite nice. You won’t find a place like that outside of Pushkin.” The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. “Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing.”'
+	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. “Interested? We can get you moved in right away.”'
 
 	if money >= home_rent[4]:
 		act 'Agree and pay':
@@ -297,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head, “Actually, I need more time to think about this.”'
-		'The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
+		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
 
 		act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	end
@@ -314,7 +339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_cityres':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork to buy an apartment in the residential area. 2,000,0000 <b>₽</b> are removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork to buy an apartment in the residential area. <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -331,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_dacha':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden on the co-op 5km up the north road. 150,000 <b>₽</b> have been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden on the co-op 5km up the north road. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -347,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_Mansion':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a lot for building a mansion 1km up the north road. 1,500,0000 <b>₽</b> have been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a lot for building a mansion 1km up the north road. <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chatWhileWaiting':
 			'You listen and don''t hear anything at all. "No I don''t hear anything."'
 			'She grins at you. "Yeah means the janitor has moved on, so we can head out. Come on lets go." She gets up and heads for the door, she opens it slowly and then looks out both ways checking to see if it is clear. Then she steps out and hurries down the hall, with you just behind her.'
 			*nl
-			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library, sneaking back in the way you left. Heading back to where you stashed your clothes the two of you start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on, the bell that signals detention is over starts ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "Perfect timing, as always. See you later <<pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
+			'The two of you quickly make your way back to the library, sneaking back in the way you left. Heading back to where you stashed your clothes the two of you start to get dressed again. Just as the two of you get your clothes back on, the bell that signals detention is over starts ringing. She looks at you and smiles. "Perfect timing, as always. See you later <<$pcs_nickname>>, unless you want to come over?"'
 			'With that the two of you leave school.'
 			act 'Go with Anushka':
 				cla

+ 0 - 1
locations/brothel.qsrc

@@ -232,7 +232,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abducted':
 		:abdrapeloop
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rapist', rand(35,50)
 		gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		cumarrcon = 0

+ 68 - 63
locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -30,24 +30,29 @@ if npc_QW['A34'] > 20 and npc_QW['A34'] < 25: npc_QW['A34'] = 20
 ! brotherConfidence: if it is over 10 he might try and touch you during a homework (not used yet)
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
-
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kolka</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/brother.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your brother Kolka is younger than you, he''s <<brotherAge>> years old. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you, and enjoys soccer.'
 
-	if npc_rel['A34'] < 20:'You and your brother argue all the time.'
-	if npc_rel['A34'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A34'] < 40:'You and your brother bicker sometimes.'
-	if npc_rel['A34'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A34'] < 60:'You and your brother have a normal relationship.'
-	if npc_rel['A34'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A34'] < 80:'You have a good relationship with your brother.'
-	if npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:'You have a great relationship with your brother.'
+	if npc_rel['A34'] < 20:
+		'You and your brother argue all the time.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A34'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A34'] < 40:
+		'You and your brother bicker sometimes.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A34'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A34'] < 60:
+		'You and your brother have a normal relationship.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A34'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A34'] < 80:
+		'You have a good relationship with your brother.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
+		'You have a great relationship with your brother.'
+	end
 	*nl
 	if hour >= 7 and hour < 21:
 		! WD: Fix old nude variable
 		if (cumloc[1] > 0 or cumloc[4] > 0 or cumloc[8] > 0 or cumloc[9] > 0 or cumloc[10] > 0 or cumloc[14] > 0 or cumloc[15] > 0) and $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none' and cumloc[1] = 1:
 				if brotherknowslut < 1: brotherknowslut = 1
-				'"Go wash yourself, you''ve got something on your pussy."'
+					'"Go wash yourself, you''ve got something on your pussy."'
 				if brotherSex = 0:
 					npc_rel['A34'] -= 1
 					act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -55,7 +60,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				end
 			elseif $pantyworntype = 'none' and cumloc[4] = 1:
 				if brotherknowslut < 1: brotherknowslut = 1
-				'"Go wash yourself, you''ve got something on your butt."'
+					'"Go wash yourself, you''ve got something on your butt."'
 				if brotherSex = 0:
 					npc_rel['A34'] -= 1
 					act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -63,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				end
 			else
 				if brotherknowslut < 1: brotherknowslut = 1
-				'"Go wash yourself, you''re covered in cum and it''s disgusting."'
+					'"Go wash yourself, you''re covered in cum and it''s disgusting."'
 				if brotherSex = 0:
 					npc_rel['A34'] -= 1
 					act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
@@ -274,7 +279,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/kolka/9vh2v.jpg" ></center>'
 				'"Look what I have," you walk up to Kolka, your chest bare, showing off your nipple pircings, "Don''t be shy, you can touch them."'
 				'Your brother, dumbfounded by your suggestion, hesitantly touches the piercing in one of your nipples, causing you to moan gently.'
-				if  brotherSex = 0:
+				if brotherSex = 0:
 					'He abruptly withdraws his hand and apologizes for his rudeness. You have no choice, but to apologise, that wasn''t fair. You cover your chest.'
 				else
 					'Seeing the pleasure playing with your nipples brings you, he begins to play harder with your piercings, sometimes squeezing your exposed Breasts.
@@ -288,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 
 		if indorf = 0 and $clothingworntype = 'nude' and pirsF > 0 and brothersawpirsF = 0:
-			if  brotherSex = 0:
+			if brotherSex = 0:
 				if npc_rel['A34'] >= 70:
 					'"Looks good on you." your brother winks, and points toward your pierced nipples.'
 					if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += 1
@@ -359,9 +364,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								end
 
 							end
-						$risk_boy = 'your own brother'
-						gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
-						gs 'brother', 'sleepsexcum'
+							$risk_boy = 'your own brother'
+							gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
+							gs 'brother', 'sleepsexcum'
 						end
 					end
 				else
@@ -463,14 +468,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'Your brother Kolka is younger than you, he''s <<brotherAge>> years old. While you share the same mother, unlike you and your sister, Kolka''s dad is your stepfather. He is a student at the same school as you, and enjoys soccer.'
 			*pl
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, can you help me with my homework?"'
-			act'"Sure"':gt 'brother_voyeur', 'homework'
+			act'"Sure"':gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
 			act'"Later, I am busy now."':
 				cla
 				'Sorry, I''m busy right now.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'sitrPar'
 			end
 		else
-			act'Offer help with homework': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'homework'
+			act'Offer help with homework': gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -610,7 +615,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
 		'"Yes, I need help."'
 	end
 
-	act 'Further': gt 'brother_voyeur', 'homework'
+	act 'Further': gt 'brother_lessons', 'homework'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
@@ -663,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherSexStart':
 
 				gs 'brother', 'brotherSexEnd'
 			end
-			
+
 			act 'Remove from your mouth':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
@@ -1146,7 +1151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anus_check':
 		elseif brother_saw_analplug = 1:
 			'"There it is again with this thing in your ass?" asked Kolka, obviously referring to sex-toy in your ass.'
 			'"Aha..." you coquettishly answer.'
-			if  brotherSex > 0:
+			if brotherSex > 0:
 				'"Maybe you should take it out and put it back in?" He asks.'
 				'"Maybe next time, Kolka"'
 			else
@@ -1419,7 +1424,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 			end
 		exit
 
-	
+
 		elseif ($clothingworntype = 'nude' and pregchem > 2000) or ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and pregchem > 3460) and brotherSex = 0 and kid > 0:
 			'"You''re already pregnant again? This is starting to look like a new hobby," he laughs.'
 			'"You know what? Maybe it is," you joke back. "Some girls play sports; I get serially impregnated."'
@@ -1427,10 +1432,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 			'"Thanks, I''m glad someone is proud of me," you reply.'
 			'Kolka takes a serious tone. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I am always proud of you. You''re my sister and I''ll love you no matter what."'
 			'You''re briefly taken aback by his uncharacteristic sincerity. "Thanks, really. I love you, too."'
-			'You leave your brother to what he was doing before, glad that the two of you have the relationship that you do.'			
+			'You leave your brother to what he was doing before, glad that the two of you have the relationship that you do.'
 
 			act 'Continue' :pregTalkbrother = 1 & gt 'sitrPar'
-		
+
 		elseif brotherSex > 0 and pregTalkMom = 0 and kid > 0 and (($clothingworntype = 'nude' and pregchem >= 2000) or ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and pregchem >= 3460) or ($clothingworntype = 'nude' and pregchem < 2000) or ($clothingworntype ! 'nude' and pregchem < 3460)):
 			cla
 			'"Wow, you''re pregnant again? Is it mine this time?"'
@@ -1452,46 +1457,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows1':
 	*nl
 	'Yeah, this baby is yours," you say, rubbing your belly. "And after it''s born, I might let you help me make another one," you add before giving your brother a kiss. You start to leave your brother alone, still visibly erect. '
 	'"Wait! You''re not going to tell mom I got you pregnant, are you?"'
-  
+
 	act 'No':
 		cla
 		'"Don''t worry, I''ll think of something to tell her. I''ll probably just say I was raped on the way home from the disco. This''ll just be our little secret." You wink and blow a kiss to your brother before finally walking away.'
-		
+
 		act 'Continue' :brotherSecret = 1 & gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
-	
+
 	act 'No (Blackmail him)':
 		cla
 		'"I don''t know. I might need some... incentive to keep this secret. I''ll let you know what I think of later." Your brother is clearly nervous as you walk away.'
-		
+
 		act 'Continue' :brotherSecret = 1 & brotherBlackmail = l & gt 'sitrPar'
-	end	
-	
+	end
+
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla
 		'"Oh, I definitely am. She has a right to know and just thinking about the look on her face when I tell her turns me on so much. I want everyone to know my own brother put this baby in me." Your brother is clearly dealing with a mixture of panic and arousal as you leave.'
-		
+
 		act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
-end	
+end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows2':
-   cla
-   pregTalkbrother = 1
-   *nl
+	cla
+	pregTalkbrother = 1
+	*nl
 	'"Yes, it is and you''re going to take responsibility. I am not going to be a single mother raising this child on my own."'
 	'Kolka stares at you in shock. "But I don''t know anything about raising children."'
 	'"Then you should have thought of that before knocking me up! You''re going to have to figure it out." Your brother is clearly crestfallen as you walk away.'
 	'"Wait!" Kolka yells after you. "You''re not going to tell mom I got you pregnant, right?"'
-	
+
 	act 'No (Blackmail him)':
 		cla
 		'You glare at Kolka. "Fuck you! I told you that you got me pregnant, and you''re still worried about yourself? Fine, I''ll keep it a secret, but you''d better fall in line! If you don''t do everything I say, I''ll end you!"'
 		'You storm away from Kolka, leaving him to squirm in discomfort.'
-		
+
 		act 'Continue' :brotherSecret = 1 & brotherBlackmail = l & gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
-		
+
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla
 		'You glare at Kolka. "Fuck off! Can you think about anything other than yourself for one second? I''m not protecting you. Mom is going to find out, and you''ll just have to deal with that!"'
@@ -1499,15 +1504,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows2':
 
 		act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
-end	
-		
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows3':
 	cla
 	pregTalkbrother = 1
 	*nl
 	'"It could be, I''m still not sure yet. I just wanted to give you a heads up." You then add with a wink "Honestly, I''m kind of hoping it is."'
 	'"Me too," he states just a little too eagerly. He then quickly moves his lips to yours and you share a passionate kiss.'
-	
+
 	act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
@@ -1515,10 +1520,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows4':
 	cla
 	pregTalkbrother = 1
 	*nl
-	'"I''m still not sure, but if it is, you had better take responsibility."' 
+	'"I''m still not sure, but if it is, you had better take responsibility."'
 	'"Then I really hope it''s someone else''s problem."'
 	'"Fuck off! If it''s yours then I''ll make sure you take responsibility!" You then storm away, leaving Kolka to stew.'
-	
+
 	act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
@@ -1528,7 +1533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows5':
 	*nl
 	'"No, you got lucky this time. It''s actually <<$wombthfath>>''s, I just wanted to share the news with my little brother."'
 	'"Oh, well congratulations!" He tries to sound happy, but you detect a note of disappointment in his voice.'
-	  
+
 	act 'Continue':gt 'sitrPar'
 end
 
@@ -1538,32 +1543,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows6':
 	*nl
 	if arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') >= 0 and arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') ! arrsize('$ChildThFath')-1 and BrotherHappy = 1:
 		cla
-		'"Yeah, you knocked me up again." You smile at him. "I think you''re doing this on purpose." You walk closer to your brother and straddle his lap. You affectionately wrap your arms around his neck and lean your face close to his.' 
+		'"Yeah, you knocked me up again." You smile at him. "I think you''re doing this on purpose." You walk closer to your brother and straddle his lap. You affectionately wrap your arms around his neck and lean your face close to his.'
 		'"You like knocking up your sister, don''t you? You just love that this belly shows the whole world that I let my own brother fuck me, huh?"'
-		'Kolka stares into your <<$pcs_eyecol>> eyes, his face bright red and a bulge growing in his pants.' 
+		'Kolka stares into your <<$pcs_eyecol>> eyes, his face bright red and a bulge growing in his pants.'
 		'"Well?" you inquire. His face grows brighter as he realizes that those weren''t rhetorical questions and that you actually expect an answer. Sweat runs down his face as he considers what to say and you find that you enjoy watching your little brother squirm. '
-		'He finally gathers his courage and says "Yes, I love getting you pregnant. Every time we fuck, I have to fight the urge to just unload inside you, and every time I give in is the best moment of my life.' 
-		'Knowing that every rope I shoot into your wonderful pussy could knock you up turns me on more than anything else. Even before we had sex for the first time, I would fantasize about knocking you up every time I masturbated.' 
+		'He finally gathers his courage and says "Yes, I love getting you pregnant. Every time we fuck, I have to fight the urge to just unload inside you, and every time I give in is the best moment of my life.'
+		'Knowing that every rope I shoot into your wonderful pussy could knock you up turns me on more than anything else. Even before we had sex for the first time, I would fantasize about knocking you up every time I masturbated.'
 		'I love knowing that I put that baby in you and that your body will tell everyone else. I want to impregnate you over and over, keeping you pregnant for as long as I can."'
-		'As he finishes, you stare in silence. You were hoping for a confession, but that was way beyond what you were expecting. Unable to bear the silence any longer, Kolka breaks the tension by gripping your ass and kissing you as passionately as he can. This snaps you back to reality and you return the kiss.' 
+		'As he finishes, you stare in silence. You were hoping for a confession, but that was way beyond what you were expecting. Unable to bear the silence any longer, Kolka breaks the tension by gripping your ass and kissing you as passionately as he can. This snaps you back to reality and you return the kiss.'
 		'After several minutes, you pull back and lick your lips. Still sitting in Kolka''s lap, you say'
 		'"Every moment that we’re together is fantastic, and I love that this baby is yours, but I don''t know if I want any more children after this. So, when we have sex after this baby is born, please try to control yourself." He nods.'
 		if momKnowsKolka = 1 and home_owned[2] = 1:
 			cla
 			'"Since mom already knows I''ve gotten you pregnant before, we probably don''t need to keep this one secret, do we?"'
 			'"No, I don''t think we do. Even though she freaked she fuck out the first time, I''m actually looking forward to her reaction this time. She''s had plenty of time to come to terms with our… special relationship."'
-			'"God, I hope you''re right. I don''t think I could handle that again. I didn''t know she could be so scary." You both laugh.' 
+			'"God, I hope you''re right. I don''t think I could handle that again. I didn''t know she could be so scary." You both laugh.'
 			'You never dreamed that you would be building a family with your own brother, but now you wouldn''t want it any other way.'
 			'You kiss your brother one more time before getting up from his lap. Now that you''ve told him the news, it''s time to tell your mother. You really hope your right about her reaction…'
 
 			act 'Continue':minut += 10 & gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
 		elseif momKnowsKolka = 1 and home_owned[2] = 0:
 			cla
-			'"Since mom already knows I''ve gotten you pregnant before, we probably don''t need to keep this one secret, do we?"' 
+			'"Since mom already knows I''ve gotten you pregnant before, we probably don''t need to keep this one secret, do we?"'
 			'You scowl. "I don''t give a fuck what mom knows. She''s not speaking to me and I really don''t care to say anything to her"'
 			'Kolka softly caresses your cheek. "Sorry, I shouldn''t have brought her up. I wasn''t thinking."'
-			'You smile. "It''s alright. The only thing that matters right now is us and our baby."' 
-			'Once you''re finished speaking, your brother covers your <<$liptalk3>> with his own and you joyfully reciprocate his kiss.' 
+			'You smile. "It''s alright. The only thing that matters right now is us and our baby."'
+			'Once you''re finished speaking, your brother covers your <<$liptalk3>> with his own and you joyfully reciprocate his kiss.'
 			'You never dreamed that you would be building a family with your own brother, but now you wouldn''t want it any other way.'
 
 			act 'Continue':minut += 10 & gt 'sitrPar'
@@ -1585,9 +1590,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows6':
 		end
 	elseif arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') >= 0 and arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') ! arrsize('$ChildThFath')-1 and BrotherAngry = 1:
 		cla
-		'"Yeah, it''s yours. I can''t believe you got me pregnant again. I don''t know why the hell I thought you''d be more careful after the first time."' 
+		'"Yeah, it''s yours. I can''t believe you got me pregnant again. I don''t know why the hell I thought you''d be more careful after the first time."'
 		'"You thought I''d be more careful? It takes two, sweetheart. And I didn''t hear you complaining while we were fucking."'
-		'"You shut your god damn mouth. You don''t have to walk around with a baby inside you. I do. So yeah, I have every right to be pissed and you’re just going to sit back and deal with it."' 
+		'"You shut your god damn mouth. You don''t have to walk around with a baby inside you. I do. So yeah, I have every right to be pissed and you’re just going to sit back and deal with it."'
 		if momKnowsKolka = 1 and home_owned[2] = 1:
 			cla
 			'"Mom already knows you got me pregnant before. I am not looking forward to telling her about this."'
@@ -1623,16 +1628,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows6':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows7':
-   cla
-   pregTalkbrother = 1
-   *nl
-   if arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') >= 0 and arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') ! arrsize('$ChildThFath')-1 and BrotherHappy = 1:
+	cla
+	pregTalkbrother = 1
+	*nl
+	if arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') >= 0 and arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') ! arrsize('$ChildThFath')-1 and BrotherHappy = 1:
 		'"It could be, I''m still not sure yet. I just wanted to give you a heads up." You then add with a wink "Honestly, I''m kind of hoping it is. I would love to be carrying another one of my brother''s children."'
 		'"I hope so, too," he states just a little too eagerly. He then quickly moves his lips to yours and you share a passionate kiss.'
-		
+
 		act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
-	elseif arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') >= 0 and arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') ! arrsize('$ChildThFath')-1 and BrotherAngry = 1:	
-		'"I''m still not sure, but if you knocked me up again, you had better take responsibility."' 
+	elseif arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') >= 0 and arrpos('$ChildThFath','Kolka') ! arrsize('$ChildThFath')-1 and BrotherAngry = 1:
+		'"I''m still not sure, but if you knocked me up again, you had better take responsibility."'
 		'"Then I really hope it''s someone else''s problem."'
 		'"Fuck off! If it''s yours then I''ll make sure you take responsibility!" You then storm away, leaving Kolka to stew.'
 
@@ -1641,8 +1646,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows7':
 		act 'Happy':gt 'brother', 'brotherknows3'
 		act 'Angry':gt 'brother', 'brotherknows4'
 	end
-end	
-		
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows8':
 	cla
 	pregTalkbrother = 1
@@ -1663,7 +1668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherknows8':
 
 		act 'Continue' :gt 'sitrPar'
 	end
-end	
+end
 
 --- brother ---------------------------------
 

+ 534 - 0
locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,534 @@
+# brother_lessons
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
+	brother_homework = daystart
+	if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += 1
+	minut += RAND(50,70)
+	ivrand = RAND(1,2)
+	gs 'stat'
+	if npc_QW['A34'] >= 2 and npc_rel['A34'] >= 60 and ivrand = 1:
+		cls
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework_touch.mp4" width="1000" height="422"></center>'
+		if npc_QW['A34'] >= 3 and father_go = 1:
+			cla
+			pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
+			'As soon as you begin to explain the material, Kolka begins again to stroke your leg his hand.'
+			act'Ignore and continue':
+				cla
+				if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += 2
+				pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
+				'You continue to do the homework, trying hard not to pay attention to Kolka''s hand on your leg. Kolka knowing that you do not mind continues to have nice feel of your leg. You feel the warm rush of excitement.'
+				ivrand = RAND(1,3)
+				if ivrand = 1 and brotherEvSex ! daystart:
+					cla
+					if (sub > 0 and brotherknowslut = 1) or pav_slut >= 75 or brotherknowslut = 2:
+						'Kolka boldly slides his hands further upwards, continuing to stroke the insides of your leg, while he tells you:'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, help me with another matter now!"'
+						if pcs_horny > 90:
+							act 'I thought you would never ask': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
+						else
+							act 'Sure, I''m always willing to help my little brother': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
+							act 'Maybe next time...': gt 'sitrPar'
+						end
+					else
+						'After you finish explaining the new material, Kolka goes red with excitement and asks:'
+						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Can you help me out here now?"'
+						if pcs_horny > 80:
+							act 'How could i say no if you keep asking so nice?': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
+						else
+							act 'I think i could teach you a thing or two': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
+							act 'Maybe next time...': gt 'sitrPar'
+						end
+					end
+				elseif ivrand = 2 and (brotherEvSex ! daystart or anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1):
+					gs 'brother_lessons', 'showbody'
+				else
+					act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
+				end
+			end
+			act'Remove hand and continue':
+				cls
+				cla
+				pcs_horny += RAND(1,5)
+				npc_rel['A34'] -= 5
+				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
+				'You whisper:'
+				'"Don''t, Our parents will see us." You remove his hand from your leg.'
+				'Kolka mutters something under his breath with grim resentment on his face.'
+
+				act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
+			end
+		else
+			cla
+			pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
+			'As you explain the material, Kolka suddenly began to slowly stroke your leg with his hand. You freeze in surprise, not knowing what to do.'
+			act'Ignore and continue':
+				cla
+				if npc_QW['A34'] < 3: npc_QW['A34'] = 3
+				npc_rel['A34'] += 2
+				pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
+				'You decide to continue to do homework, trying not to pay attention to Kolka''s hand on your leg. He realizes that you don''t mind so he continues to stroke higher up your leg.'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
+			end
+			act'Remove hand and continue':
+				cla
+				pcs_horny += RAND(1,5)
+				pcs_dom += 1
+				'You decide to remove his hand and continue to do homework. Kolka begins to blush and starts to try hard to solve the problems. While not looking you in the eye.'
+				act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
+			end
+		end
+	else
+		cls
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
+		'You help your brother with his homework for an hour.'
+
+		act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
+	cla & *clr
+	minut += RAND(3,5)
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
+	if brothersexed < 1:
+		if anatomyhomeworkhelp = 0:
+			'	After you both finish studying, Kolka suddenly goes quiet and his cheeks turn a bright red.'
+			'	"<<$pcs_nickname>>..." he starts. "I have to learn about human anatomy, but I am having trouble with it. Can you help me?"'
+			'	"What do you mean?" you ask, a little confused.'
+			'	"Well, um..." Kolka hesitated, "Can you show me what girls look like...'
+			if sub < 30:
+				act'"No way"':
+					cla
+					'"How the fuck can I do that? Should I just take my clothes off in front of you and let you gawk at me? I''m your sister!"'
+					'"Yes, you are right. I''m sorry..." Kolka responded in embarrassment.'
+					act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
+				end
+			end
+
+			act'"Huh..."':
+				cla
+				'You briefly reflect on your brother''s request and reply, "How would you want me to do that? Should I just take my clothes off in front of you and let you gawk at me!?"'
+				'"Well... That would help but you could also explain each part." He adds.'
+				'You sigh and shake your head, "Surely your text books have pictures"'
+				'"There are pictures, but everything is so badly written, and the teacher skipped the lesson, saying "You already know everything." He explains with flushed face.'
+				'"Okay, I will help you, but only if you don''t tell anyone. Agreed? I''m serious, not a single person!" You say in a strict tone.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise not a word to anyone!"'
+				'After his promise you consider what to do.'
+
+				act'Undress':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
+				act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $metka
+			end
+
+			act'"What do you mean?"':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'	"What do you mean?" you ask quizzically.'
+				'	"Uhmm... Well... T-the diagrams of b-bodies in this book a-aren''t very good... I d-don''t really get them..." he stammers. "So... I was hoping t-that... m-maybe I could just s-see the real thing... i-if... y-you know... y-you''d let me s-see yours..." When he''s finished speaking he looks down, seemingly ashamed for even asking.'
+				act'"What?! No way!"':
+					cla
+					*nl
+					'	It finally dawns on you what he''s asking and you pull back in disgust. "What the hell?! No way! I''m not about to let you use me as a science project! Ugh! Get a grip Kolka!"'
+					'	"I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>..." he whimpers. "I shouldn''t have asked..."'
+					act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
+				end
+
+				act'Well, nothing beats practical learning':
+					cla
+					*nl
+					'	Now that you finally understand what he''s suggesting, you muse over it for a moment.'
+					'	<i>Well... practical learning is pretty helpful... Might help to show him the real thing,</i> you think to yourself while Kolka visibly squirms in front of you.'
+					'	"Okay. Sure."'
+					'	Kolka looks up at you in surprise. "Really? You''ll really do it?"'
+					'	"Yeah, I''ll do it," you say. "Like you said, it might help if you get to see the real thing. I''m happy to do it to help my little brother," you smile.'
+					npc_rel['A34'] += rand(2,3)
+					act'Undress':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
+				end
+			end
+		else
+			'	Towards the end of the study session, Kolka seems to remember something.'
+			'	"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, remember when you said that you would help me with my anatomy homework? You know, when..." he stops and cups his hands, leaning in to whisper, "...when you were in the shower? Are you still willing to help me with that?"'
+			act'"Not right now"':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'	"Of course I am Kolka, just not right now," you say. "I''m a little busy at the moment, but if you ask me again later, maybe some other day, okay?"'
+				'	"Okay!" he nods, taking it as a promise.'
+				act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
+			end
+
+			act'"Of course!"':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'	"Yeah of course!" you say. "How could I forget a promise to my little brother?"'
+				'	"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! So, before I told you I was having trouble understanding the pictures and diagrams," he says, holding out the book to you. "Is there anything you can do to help me understand it better?" You take the book and flip through the pages he''s supposed to be studying. Looks like basic anatomy right now, but later on it seems to move into sexual reproduction and general sex ed.'
+				*nl
+				'	How do you want to try and teach it to Kolka?'
+				act'Use the book and try to find a way to explain it':
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
+					'	You do your best to go through the text with your brother and explain it to him but he''s still really struggling with it. Even you have to admit, those pictures and diagrams really aren''t very good.'
+					act'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
+				end
+
+				act'Use your body as an example and explain it that way':
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/sitrpar.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"I think I have a pretty good idea..." you say mischievously while he looks at you quizzically.'
+					act'Undress':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	else
+		'	After finishing the rest of his homework, Kolka pipes up, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I could still use some more help with my anatomy homework. Will you help me?"'
+		act'"Not right now"':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'	"I''m sorry Kolka," you say. "I''m a little busy at the moment, maybe next time okay?"'
+			'	"Okay!" he nods, packing up the rest of his schoolwork.'
+			act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
+		end
+
+		act'"Sure!"':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'	"Sure," you grin at him. "Just let me get ''presentable'' for you," you say with a wink before you start undressing.'
+			act'Undress':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson1'
+		end
+
+		act'"Maybe i try something else this time"':
+			cla
+			*nl
+			'"I will help you, but only if you don''t tell anyone. Agreed? I''m serious, not a single person!" You say in a strict tone.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise not a word to anyone!"'
+			'After his promise you consider what to do.'
+
+			act'Undress':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
+			act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $metka
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson1':
+	cla & *clr
+	if brothersexed > 0:gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson2'
+	brothersexed += 1
+	gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+	gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/1.jpg"></center>'
+	'	After taking a look around to make sure you''re in the clear, you quickly strip down until you''re completely naked in front of your brother.'
+	if anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1:
+		'<br>	"Woah! What are you doing?" Kolka exclaims.'
+		'<br>	"I''m doing what you asked me to do!" you say with a grin. "I''m going to help you understand the material better! Nothing should help you more with anatomy than being able to look at someone else''s body right?"'
+	end
+	act'Start the lesson':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/2.jpg"></center>'
+		'	"So looking at your book it says you''re learning about arteries and veins right now. Arteries are some of the tubes that carry blood around your body. And they all start here," you say, putting your hand around your left breast. "When you breathe in, your lungs take in oxygen which the rest of the body needs to survive. But in order to get it to the rest of the body, your heart needs pathways to deliver it. The oxygen attaches itself to your red blood vessels, and your arteries are the pathways that deliver it. So, for example if your body wants to get oxygenated blood from your heart to your brain it travels along an artery that passes right through..."'
+		act'Continue':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/3.jpg"></center>'
+			'	"... here!" you say, pointing to your neck. "This is your carotid artery, and it supplies all of your head and your neck with oxygenated blood. Come here and feel it!"'
+			'	Your brother timidly moves closer and puts his finger on your neck.'
+			'	"Push in gently. Do you feel the little ''ba-bump, ba-bump, ba-bump, ba-bump?'' That''s my heartbeat and you can feel the pulse through this artery. Since arteries come directly from the heart, they are the easiest ways to feel someone''s pulse!"'
+			'	"Woah!" your brother says in amazement. "That''s cool!"'
+			act'Continue':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/4.jpg"></center>'
+				'	You lay back and spend the rest of the lesson letting Kolka use your body as a map, tracing your blood vessels with his finger to understand where they all go and where they branch out from.'
+				*nl
+				'	As the lesson goes on, you suddenly realize that the gentle touch all over your body is actually turning you on a little bit. The tracing of his fingers feel like a lover''s caress and you feel warmth in your hips signalling that you''re starting to get wet.'
+				pcs_horny += 15
+				act'Continue':
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/5.jpg"></center>'
+					'	Eventually, Kolka has traced out all the arteries and veins you have and you bring the lesson to a close.'
+					'	You quickly sit up to hide the growing wetness between you legs and ask him, "So how was that? Do you think you have a better understanding of the material now?"'
+					'	"Yeah!" he says excitedly. "I think I get it now! You really helped me out <<$pcs_nickname>>!" He unexpectedly wraps his arms around you, giving you a big hug. You''re surprised by this, mostly because you weren''t expecting him to do something like this while you were still naked.'
+					'	"You''re the best sister ever!" he cries.'
+					'	You hug him back, feeling the warmth of your bare skin spreading into his shirt. "Aww, thanks Kolka."'
+					'	He pulls back from the hug, eagerly sitting in front of you. "Will you help me with this again sometime?"'
+					'	"Of course I will. But you need to let me get dressed before mom or dad sees me helping you out like this. I don''t think they''d approve. Do you?" He twists his mouth up and shakes his head. "I didn''t think so. So make sure you don''t tell anyone else about this. But if you need more help, just ask me and I''ll see what I can do," you say, giving him a sweet smile before getting dressed again.'
+					act'Get dressed':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+						gt $loc, $metka
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
+	cla & *clr
+	brothersexed += 1
+	gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+	gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/1.jpg"></center>'
+	'	You quickly get undressed taking small peeks at the book while you do so you know what you''re helping him with. It looks like this section is about female genitals.'
+	*nl
+	'	Once you''re completely naked you kneel down again and say, "Alright Kolka. All ready for today''s lesson?" He nods eagerly. "Okay! Let''s begin then!"'
+	act'Begin the lesson':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/6.jpg"></center>'
+		'	"So, your lesson today is about female genitals. We''ll start with the most obvious one because I know you love to look at them: breasts!" You pull your arms back behind your head to give him a good view. "Women have breasts because they''re used to feed babies-" you start to say before Kolka interrupts you.'
+		'	"Can I get a closer look? You know... for uhh... scientifical reasons?" he says. The look on his face says he''s genuinely curious but you''re still a little skeptical he isn''t doing this just to get close to your tits.'
+		'	<i>Oh, whatever. As long as he learns something right?</i>'
+		act'Continue':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/7.jpg"></center>'
+			'	"Uhh-ha... Okay I guess," you say with a bit of a nervous giggle. You stick your chest out some more and Kolka brings his face right next to your breasts.'
+			act'Continue':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/8.jpg"></center>'
+				'	A few awkward long moments go by of Kolka closely examining your breasts and nipples before you realize that he''s not going to sit back down. You sigh and figure you might as well get on with the lesson in the mean time. At least he''ll be able to see them clearly.'
+				'	"So... Like I was saying, women have breasts because of babies. When a woman is pregnant, her breasts start to produce milk which is then used to feed her newborn."'
+				'	"How does the milk come out?" Kolka asks, now inspecting your breasts from multiple angles. "Do you squeeze it and milk it out like cows?"'
+				'	You sputter in laughter saying, "What? No, silly! That would be really painful because girls nipples are very sensitive! No, the baby suckles, meaning they just use their mouth and suck to draw the milk out. That''s why they call it ''breastfeeding.''"'
+				'	"Oh! So you mean like this?" and before you can stop him, Kolka leans in to put your nipple in his mouth and starts sucking.'
+				act'"Hey! Stop that!"':
+					cla & *clr
+					pcs_horny += 20
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/7.jpg"></center>'
+					'	You push him back immediately. "Hey! What do you think you''re doing?! You can''t just do that to a girl!"'
+					'	"But you were sayin-"'
+					'	"I know what I was saying! You''re not a baby Kolka. You can''t just start sucking on someone''s nippes like that. I told you..." you trail off, nervously noticing the wetness beginning to seep from your pussy. "... girl''s nipples are very sensitive..."'
+					'	"Oh." he says very matter of factly. "Right. You did just say that. I forgot. I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+					'	"It''s okay," you reply, gently massaging your nipple and trying your best not to accidentally wipe your love juice on anything. "Just, don''t do that so suddenly like that okay? At least ask next time."'
+					'	"Wait so if I ask I can do it?" he pipes up.'
+					'	"No!" you say with a stern smile. "I mean... I''ll think about it. But expect the answer to be more likely no than yes okay?"'
+					'	"Mkay," he says, while writing down some things in his notebook.'
+					'	<i><b>sigh</b> Boys...</i>'
+					'	Looking at the next part of the homework it talks about the anatomy of the vulva but doesn''t go on to the internals. At least you''ll be able to use your arousal for the lesson now..."'
+					act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
+				end
+
+				act'"Wai-! Sto-... Ohhh..."':
+					cla & *clr
+					pcs_horny += 40
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/8.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"Kolk-! Ahh~! Wai- Uh~! Sto-... Ohh~!" you try to voice protests but they get lost in your stifled moans.'
+					'	Your brother continues to suck on your nipple with increased vigor, now grabbing your other breast to use as leverage and keep his face close. You squirm under his advances, trying to push him off but you''re too weak, your body floundering in pleasure.'
+					'	He pulls his lips off with a pop. "Huh. Why isn''t any milk coming out?" he asks. At last! A respite! You start to catch your breath and just as you''re about to tell him not to do that again, he leans forward and starts sucking again.'
+					'	"Ahh~!" A cry briefly escapes your lips before you clamp your own hand over them to make sure the rest of your family doesn''t overhear you. You can only imagine your mother''s reaction if she came in to find your brother sucking on your tits like this.'
+					'	After another minute of sucking and squirming, your brother finally relents. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I thought you said milk came out. I''ve been sucking all this time and nothing''s come out. Why''s that?" Then he notices your heavy breathing. "Hey, are you okay? Is there something wrong with you?"'
+					act'Continue':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/7.jpg"></center>'
+						'	"Kolka..." you sigh deeply before continuing. "First of all, you can''t just suck on a girl''s nipples like that! I told you..." you trail off, taking notice of the love juices dripping from your snatch and nervously smiling. "... they''re very sensitive... Second of all, I''m not pregnant dummy! Breasts only produce milk if you''re pregnant or recently gave birth."'
+						'	"Oh. Sorry."'
+						'	"It''s okay... It felt kind of good to be honest..." you admit with some embarrassment. "Just... ask next time? Please?"'
+						'	"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says, writing some things down in his notebook.'
+						'	You sigh again. Taking a look in the textbook, it says the next part of the homework is about the external female organs: the vulva. You slyly smile to yourself.'
+						'	<i>Well, at least I didn''t get wet for nothing.</i>'
+						act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson3'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/9.jpg"></center>'
+	'	"Okay Kolka, the next part of the lesson is about the vulva," you say, leaning back and spreading your legs to give visual access to your pussy. "That means just the external parts, not what''s inside. We''ll go over that as part of your next lesson."'
+	'	"Woah..." he says, clutching his notebook but still sitting from afar.'
+	'	"Well come on! You just sucked on my tits, don''t be shy now, take a closer look!"'
+	act'Continue':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/10.jpg"></center>'
+		'	You spread your legs a little farther apart as Kolka leans in to take a look. You briefly go over everything explaining the mons pubis is where the hair grows and that the labia are the "lips" of your vagina.'
+		'	"Are you always this slimy down here?" he asks, in obvious reference to your wetness.'
+		'	"Well <i>that</i> is actually your fault!" you say.'
+		'	"Huh?" he looks up, concerned that he''s in trouble.'
+		'	"When a girl gets stimulated, say from sex or, I don''t know, getting their nipples sucked," you say meaningfully, causing him to blush, "They get wet down there. It comes from the Bartholin glands and it naturally lubricates the vagina to make sex more comfortable."'
+		'	"Ohhh! Okay!" he says, writing everything down. <i>This might just be helping him in school after all...</i> you think to yourself.'
+		act'Continue':
+			cla & *clr
+			if pcs_vag = 0:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag0.jpg"></center>'
+				'	"Next is a very special part of the vagina," you start. You spread your pussy lips apart and let him look inside. "This is the hymen. Every girl is born with one and will have it until it gets torn."'
+				'	"How does it get torn?" Kolka quickly asks while continuing to stare at yours in wonder.'
+				'	"Well, it can get torn in a number of ways but the most common is when a girl loses her virginity. We''ll talk about this more next time, but when a boy and a girl have sex, the boy sticks his penis inside the girl''s vagina. The only way to get the penis all the way inside is to push through the hymen and break it. It usually causes a small amount of bleeding. That''s why they call it ''popping a cherry,''" you smile.'
+				'	He continues to look at your hymen for a few moments before asking, "So... does this mean..."'
+				'	"That I''ve never had sex? Yeah Kolka. It means I''m a virgin." The admittance causes you to blush for some reason, you''re not sure why. After a couple more questions, you continue with the lesson.'
+				act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+
+			elseif pcs_vag > 0 and guy > 0:
+				if pcs_vag <= 25:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag3.jpg"></center>'
+				elseif pcs_vag > 25 and pcs_vag <= 35:
+					'	"Is it supposed to look this loose?" he asks, causing you to blush hard.'
+					act'"I''ve had a lot of sex"':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'	"I''ve had a lot of sex..." you say slowly.'
+						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					end
+
+					act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'	"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
+						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					end
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag4.jpg"></center>'
+				elseif pcs_vag > 35:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag5.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"The next part I can''t actually show you, but I might as well show you where it should be," you say. You spread your pussy lips apart and let him look inside. "Normally, there''s something called a ''hymen'' here. You can see a diagram of it in your textbook. Every girl is born with one and will have it until it gets torn."'
+					'	"How does it get torn?" Kolka quickly asks while continuing to stare at yours in wonder.'
+					'	"Well, it can get torn in a number of ways but the most common is when a girl loses her virginity. We''ll talk about this more next time, but when a boy and a girl have sex, the boy sticks his penis inside the girl''s vagina. The only way to get the penis all the way inside is to push through the hymen and break it. It usually causes a small amount of bleeding. That''s why they call it ''popping a cherry,''" you smile.'
+					'	He takes note of your clear lack of a hymen and asks, "So... does this mean you''ve... you know...?"'
+					'	"That I''ve had sex? Yeah. Someone already took my v-card," You say somewhat proudly. "But don''t tell mom!"'
+					'	He nods in acknowledgement while writing down some more notes.'
+					'<br>	"Woah! It''s like a cave in there! Are they all this wide?" he exclaims. You blush harder than you think you''ve ever blushed in your life.'
+					act'"I''ve had a lot of sex"':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'	"I''ve had a lot of sex..." you say slowly.'
+						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					end
+
+					act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
+						cla
+						*nl
+						'	"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
+						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+						act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+					end
+				else
+					*nl
+					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+				end
+			else
+				if pcs_vag <= 25:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag3.jpg"></center>'
+				elseif pcs_vag > 25 and pcs_vag <= 35:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag4.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"Is it supposed to look this loose?" he asks again. You blush even harder.'
+					'	"I masturbate a lot..."'
+					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+				elseif pcs_vag > 35:
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag5.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"The next part I can''t actually show you, but I might as well show you where it should be," you say. You spread your pussy lips apart and let him look inside. "Normally, there''s something called a ''hymen'' here. You can see a diagram of it in your textbook. Every girl is born with one and will have it until it gets torn."'
+					'	"How does it get torn?" Kolka quickly asks while continuing to stare at yours in wonder.'
+					'	"Well, it can get torn in a number of ways but the most common is when a girl loses her virginity. We''ll talk about this more next time, but when a boy and a girl have sex, the boy sticks his penis inside the girl''s vagina. The only way to get the penis all the way inside is to push through the hymen and break it. It usually causes a small amount of bleeding. That''s why they call it ''popping a cherry,''" you smile.'
+					'	He takes note of your clear lack of a hymen and asks, "So... does this mean you''ve... you know...?"'
+					'	"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "... mastur...bating..."'
+					'<br>	"Woah! It''s like a cave in there! Are they all this wide?" he exclaims. You blush even harder.'
+					'	"No... Not all..." you force out. "I masturbate a lot, okay...?" you mutter somewhat ashamed.'
+					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+				else
+					*nl
+					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
+					act'Continue':gt'brother_lessons', 'anatomylesson4'
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson4':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/11.jpg"></center>'
+	'	"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> is it alright if you lift your hips a bit? It''s kind of hard to see everything so close to the ground."'
+	'	"Uhm, sure?" you say, lifting your hips as he asked.'
+	'	You lean your weight back to make it easier on yourself while he continues to inspect your vagina for a little while while comparing it to his textbook and write things down in his notebook.'
+	'	"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s this little thing at the top?" he asks. You look down and he''s using his pencil to point towards the top of your labia. After a moment, you realize he''s pointing at your clit.'
+	'	"Oh! That! That''s..." You think to yourself how you want to proceed.'
+	act'Just explain it to him':
+		cla
+		*nl
+		'	"So, remember how we talked about the Bartholin glands and why girls get wet? That right there is called the clitoris and its only purpose is to get girls wet."'
+		'	"Woah! Really? That''s cool! How does it work?"'
+		'	"Well, it''s the most sensitive place a girl has on her body. When someone touches it with their fingers or licks it with their tongue or if a penis rubs it in the right way, it makes a girl feel <i>really</i> good. Do that enough, a girl can orgasm from it. I bet you already know what an orgasm is though, don''t you?" you say, causing him to blush.'
+		*nl
+		'	"Anyways, that''s the end of this section. Did you enjoy the lesson today?" you ask, followed by more of his furious nodding.'
+		'	"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best!" You smile back at him before going to get dressed.'
+		act'End the lesson':
+			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+			gs 'stat'
+			gt $loc, $metka
+		end
+	end
+
+	act'Give him a "practical" lesson':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/10.jpg"></center>'
+		'	With a sly look on your face, you decide to go through with your idea.'
+		'	"Kolka..." you start. "Did you like sucking on my nipples?" He blushes when you bring it up. "Oh come on, don''t be shy. Tell me the truth: did you enjoy it?"'
+		'	"Y-yeah..." he says, hesitantly.'
+		'	"Well, since you liked that, why don''t I let you try a more ''hands on'' approach to show you what you''re asking about?" He looks at you quizzically. You spread your legs open some more and roll your hips a little. "You see Kolka, what you''re asking about is called the clitoris and it exists for exactly one purpose: to give girls pleasure." His jaw drops as he stares at you with wide eyes.'
+		'	"It''s the most sensitive place a girl has on her body," you continue. "When someone touches it with their fingers or licks it with their tongue, it makes a girl feel <i>really</i> good. Do that enough and do it right, a girl can orgasm from it..." You trail off and look him right in the eye. "You want to see what that looks like?"'
+		'	"Yeah!" he almost shouts.'
+		'	You curl your index finger, motioning for him to come closer as you get up on the couch and invite him in between your legs. "Well then hurry up and get your head down here! Come find out what a girl tastes like!"'
+		act'Continue':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylick1.mp4"></center>'
+			'	You instruct him as best you can as he leans in and starts giving you head. It''s a little rough at first but with your encouragement he starts to focus more on your clit, licking and swirling his tongue around it.'
+			act'Continue':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylick3.mp4"></center>'
+				'	Before you know it, he''s found a rhythm and is licking you like there''s no tomorrow. You eyes roll back in your head and every other sensation fades and blurs into the background except the feeling of your brother''s tongue on your clit.'
+				'	He stops briefly and you vaguely hear him say, "Girls taste good," before diving back in and returning you to bliss.'
+				act'"I''m cumming!"':
+					cla & *clr
+					pcs_horny = 100
+					gs'stat'
+					'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylickorgasm.mp4"></center>'
+					'	All your muscles start to tense up and you can feel a powerful orgasm approaching. Unable to do anything but moan as quietly as you can, you feel yourself explode in climax, your body violently quivering.'
+					'	Even through your orgasm, Kolka continues to lick you. His tongue on your hyper-sensitive clit is too much and you try to pull away but your brother is unrelenting, grabbing onto your legs and pulling you back, trying to keep drinking the flood of juices spilling from your honeypot.'
+					act'Continue':
+						cla & *clr
+						orgasm += 1
+						pcs_horny = 15
+						kuni += 1
+						gs'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/12.jpg"></center>'
+						'	After what seems like an eternity of excruciating pleasure, your orgasm winds down and you find the mental acuity to speak, though your brother continues to lap up your girl cum.'
+						'	As tempting as it is to let him go another round, you push his head away, saying, "Okay Kolka, that''s enough," before laying back in exhaustion. You look at him with a weak smile. "Good job bro..."'
+						'	"Really?" he says, grinning. "I did good?"'
+						'	Your smile gets a bit more strength when you reply, "Good? Kolka you blew my fucking mind!"'
+						'	"Well, I had a great teacher didn''t I?" he says before starting to lick your pussy again.'
+						'	"Ohhh! Kolka~!" you say, pushing his head away with more than a small amount of regret. "As much as I''d love to let you keep going, we have to stop now. We don''t want mom or dad to catch us."'
+						'	"Yeah I know..." he says in a disappointed tone. "You just taste so good I want more!"'
+						'	You''re so tempted but your fear outweighs your temptation right now. "Maybe some other time kiddo," you say before you find the strength to put your clothes on while Kolka packs up his schoolwork.'
+						act'End the lesson':
+							gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+							gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+							gs 'stat'
+							gt $loc, $metka
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+!!if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson_uterus':
+!!end
+
+--- brother_lessons ----------------------------------
+

+ 285 - 732
locations/brother_voyeur.qsrc

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk1':
 					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 				end
 			end
-		and
+		end
 
 		act'Ask him about his day':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -113,16 +113,23 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 	brothershowertalk += 1
+	npc_rel['A34'] += rand(2,3)
 	if brothershowerlook = 1:gt'brother_voyeur','brothershowerlook'
 	cla & *clr
-	if brothershowerask ! daystart:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk1.jpg"></center>'
-	if brothershowerask = daystart:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalkbusy.jpg"></center>'
+	if brothershowerask ! daystart:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk1.jpg"></center>'
+	elseif brothershowerask = daystart:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalkbusy.jpg"></center>'
+	end
 	'	Seeing your brother spy on you through a crack the door again, call out to him.'
 	'	"Hey Kolka! Did you want to have another chat with me while I shower?"'
-	if brothershowertalk > 1 and brothershowertalk <= 5:'	He nods shyly at you. "Okay, come on in! Don''t forget to close the door!"'
-	if brothershowertalk > 5 and brothershowerlook >= 1:'	He nods enthusiastically, unable to hide his eager grin. "Well hurry up then!" you say with a smile to match his. "Quick! Before mom catches us!"'
-	if brothershowertalk > 5 and brothershowerlook < 1:'	He nods eagerly. You can''t help but smile at his resemblance to a begging puppy. "Well hurry up then!" you say. "Quick! Before mom catches you coming in!"'
-	npc_rel['A34'] += rand(2,3)
+	if brothershowertalk > 1 and brothershowertalk <= 5:
+		'	He nods shyly at you. "Okay, come on in! Don''t forget to close the door!"'
+	elseif brothershowertalk > 5 and brothershowerlook >= 1:
+		'	He nods enthusiastically, unable to hide his eager grin. "Well hurry up then!" you say with a smile to match his. "Quick! Before mom catches us!"'
+	elseif brothershowertalk > 5 and brothershowerlook < 1:
+		'	He nods eagerly. You can''t help but smile at his resemblance to a begging puppy. "Well hurry up then!" you say. "Quick! Before mom catches you coming in!"'
+	end
 
 	act'Continue':
 		if brothershowerlook >= 1:gt'brother_voyeur','brothershowerlook'
@@ -135,15 +142,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 		act'"You can look at me you know"':
 			*clr & cla
 			brothershowerlook = 1
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk4.jpg"></center>'
 			npc_rel['A34'] += 5
+			bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk4.jpg"></center>'
+			
 			'	"Kolka..." When you say this he starts to turn towards you a little bit but then stops himself and continues to stare at the wall. You sigh sympathetically. "It''s okay to look at me you know."'
 			'	He perks up and turns towards you slowly. "R-really?" His wide eyes rapidly flit between your face, your breasts, your <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy, the walls, and the floor, unable to make up his mind of where he should be looking.'
 			'	"Yes really!" you laugh. "Yeah, yeah, I know. I''ve got boobs. I''ve got a pussy instead of a penis. I know it''s strange and distracting and all that, but you''re my brother and I love you! I don''t want to have to share my conversations between you and the wall. So, I don''t mind you looking. If it means I can spend this time getting closer to you, you can look all you want. Okay?"'
 			'	Kolka''s eyes finally come to rest on your face, looking confidently at you confidently now. You can tell there''s love in his eyes and this vulnerability you''ve shown really means something to him and your relationship with him. "Okay!" he says with an enthusiastic smile.'
 			'	"Just don''t tell anyone else about it!" you laugh when he furiously nods in promised agreement. The two of you happily talk about random topics while you finish up your shower. For the most part, Kolka continues to look at your face but you can''t help but notice the frequent quick glance at your breasts that ever so slightly widens his smile.'
 			'	<i>Boys will be boys after all...</i> you muse to yourself, a smile subconsciously turning the corners of your own lips.'
-			bro_ass_compliment = rand(1,3)
 			if bro_ass_compliment = 1:
 				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','ass_compliment'
 			elseif pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
@@ -181,8 +189,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 				elseif brothershowerdaytalk = 2:
 					'	"... so, yeah. Mom wants me to clean up my stuff on the couch, but if I''m going to sleep there anyways, why does it matter?" he asks, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
 					*nl
-					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:'	"I know it seems pointless but you should listen to mom. You''ll get in trouble otherwise," you admonish him.'
-					if npc_rel['A29'] < 40:'	"Ugh, I know! Mom is always nagging me about everything! She can be such a pain in the ass sometimes!" you '
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+						'	"I know it seems pointless but you should listen to mom. You''ll get in trouble otherwise," you admonish him.'
+					elseif npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
+						'	"Ugh, I know! Mom is always nagging me about everything! She can be such a pain in the ass sometimes!" you '
+					end
 					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
 						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 					else
@@ -220,8 +231,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalk2':
 				if brothershowerschooltalk = 1:
 					'	"I hate math so much!" he moans, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I wish it could just go die in a hole!"'
 					*nl
-					if pcs_grades >= 50:'	"Oh, you shouldn''t think like that Kolka. Math is important!"'
-					if pcs_grades < 50:'	"Blegh! Yeah, you''re right. Math sucks!" you grumble in agreement.'
+					if pcs_grades >= 50:
+						'	"Oh, you shouldn''t think like that Kolka. Math is important!"'
+					elseif pcs_grades < 50:
+						'	"Blegh! Yeah, you''re right. Math sucks!" you grumble in agreement.'
+					end
 					if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
 						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
 					else
@@ -328,24 +342,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk3.jpg"></center>'
 	inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 	if npc_rel['A34'] <50 and brothershowerask ! daystart:npc_rel['A34'] += rand(1,2)
-	if brothershowertalk < 10 and brothershowerask ! daystart:'	He slips inside and takes his usual place on the toilet along with the traditional quick glance at your breasts. He''s gripping the edge of the seat and leaning forward with an eager smile. If nothing else, he''s certainly happy to be here.'
-	if brothershowertalk >= 10 and brothershowerask ! daystart:'	He slips inside and takes his usual place on the toilet seat, gripping the edge and leaning forward eagerly.'
-	if brothershowertalk >= 10 and brothershowerask ! daystart:*nl
-	if brothershowertalk >= 10 and brothershowerask ! daystart:'	You''ve noticed something recently. Lately, when Kolka has come in for these shower talks, he hasn''t been ogling you as much as he used to. A brief glance at your breasts here, a quick look at your ass there, of course, but no one could avoid looking entirely. For the most part though, he maintains eye contact with you. Although, you reason that he probably still gets a good look when you''re shampooing your hair or sudsing up your body.'
-	if brothershowerask = daystart:'	Maybe he''s right. It is a little risky and it would certainly be a much more compromising position for your mother to catch you in. Maybe it is better you just talk normally after all.'
+	if brothershowertalk < 10 and brothershowerask ! daystart:
+		'	He slips inside and takes his usual place on the toilet along with the traditional quick glance at your breasts. He''s gripping the edge of the seat and leaning forward with an eager smile. If nothing else, he''s certainly happy to be here.'
+	elseif brothershowertalk >= 10 and brothershowerask ! daystart:
+		'	He slips inside and takes his usual place on the toilet seat, gripping the edge and leaning forward eagerly.'
+		'<br>	You''ve noticed something recently. Lately, when Kolka has come in for these shower talks, he hasn''t been ogling you as much as he used to. A brief glance at your breasts here, a quick look at your ass there, of course, but no one could avoid looking entirely. For the most part though, he maintains eye contact with you. Although, you reason that he probably still gets a good look when you''re shampooing your hair or sudsing up your body.'
+	elseif brothershowerask = daystart:
+		'	Maybe he''s right. It is a little risky and it would certainly be a much more compromising position for your mother to catch you in. Maybe it is better you just talk normally after all.'
+	end
 	*nl
 	'	What do you want to talk about with him today?'
-
 	if npc_rel['A34'] >= 70 and brothershowerask ! daystart:
 		act'Ask if he wants to shower with you':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_together_ask'
 	end
 
 	act'Ask him about his day':
 		cla & *clr
-		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
-		if brothershowertalk < 10:'	He happily talks to you about his day, sometimes unabashedly staring directly at your breasts while he goes off on a tangent. Not that it matters to you. Where he wants to look is his business. After all, you''re the one who invited him in, you can hardly complain now. You''re just happy to be spending some quality time with him.'
-		if brothershowertalk >= 10:'	He happily talks to you about his day, only rarely taking glances at your exposed breasts. For the most part, his attention seems to be focused more on the conversation than your naked body.'
 		brothershowerdaytalk = rand(1,3)
+		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
+		if brothershowertalk < 10:
+			'	He happily talks to you about his day, sometimes unabashedly staring directly at your breasts while he goes off on a tangent. Not that it matters to you. Where he wants to look is his business. After all, you''re the one who invited him in, you can hardly complain now. You''re just happy to be spending some quality time with him.'
+		elseif brothershowertalk >= 10:
+			'	He happily talks to you about his day, only rarely taking glances at your exposed breasts. For the most part, his attention seems to be focused more on the conversation than your naked body.'
+		end
 		*nl
 		if brothershowerdaytalk = 1:
 			'	"... but, yeah. It was a pretty good day overall," he finishes, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room.'
@@ -385,10 +404,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 
 	act'Ask how school''s going':
 		cla & *clr
-		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
-		if brothershowertalk < 10:'	He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, unabashedly trying to get a good look at your ass the majority of the time. Not that it matters to you. Where he wants to look is his business. After all, you''re the one who invited him in, you can hardly complain now. You''re just happy to be spending some quality time with him.'
-		if brothershowertalk >= 10:'	He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, pretty much only taking a look at your ass when you turn around to wash or rinse. For the most part, he seems to be more engrossed by the conversation than your naked body.'
 		brothershowerschooltalk = rand(1,3)
+		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
+		if brothershowertalk < 10:
+			'	He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, unabashedly trying to get a good look at your ass the majority of the time. Not that it matters to you. Where he wants to look is his business. After all, you''re the one who invited him in, you can hardly complain now. You''re just happy to be spending some quality time with him.'
+		elseif brothershowertalk >= 10:
+			'	He energetically talks to you about school and how it''s going for him, pretty much only taking a look at your ass when you turn around to wash or rinse. For the most part, he seems to be more engrossed by the conversation than your naked body.'
+		end
 		*nl
 		if brothershowerschooltalk = 1:
 			'	"I hate math so much!" he moans, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "I wish it could just go die in a hole!"'
@@ -440,10 +462,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brothershowerlook':
 
 	act'Ask him about his friends':
 		cla & *clr
-		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
-		if brothershowertalk < 10:'	He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what mischief they get up to together, shamelessly taking long appreciative looks at your <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy at random intervals of the conversation. Not that it matters to you. Where he wants to look is his business. After all, you''re the one who invited him in, you can hardly complain now. You''re just happy to be spending some quality time with him.'
-		if brothershowertalk >= 10:'	He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what mischief they get up to together, only looking at your pussy when his attention is inadvertently drawn by you washing between your legs. For the most part, he seems more engaged in the conversation than your naked body.'
 		brothershowerfriendtalk = rand(1,3)
+		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
+		if brothershowertalk < 10:
+			'	He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what mischief they get up to together, shamelessly taking long appreciative looks at your <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy at random intervals of the conversation. Not that it matters to you. Where he wants to look is his business. After all, you''re the one who invited him in, you can hardly complain now. You''re just happy to be spending some quality time with him.'
+		elseif brothershowertalk >= 10:
+			'	He cheerfully talks to you about him and his friends and what mischief they get up to together, only looking at your pussy when his attention is inadvertently drawn by you washing between your legs. For the most part, he seems more engaged in the conversation than your naked body.'
+		end
 
 		if brothershowerfriendtalk = 1:
 			'	... and then he sprayed milk all over his locker!" he says with a burst of laughter, snapping you out of your idle thoughts and bringing you back to the room. "It was <i>so</i> funny! Hey, are you listening?"'
@@ -653,9 +678,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 
 			elseif brother_shower_times >= 3 or brotherSex >= 1:
 				'	Kolka answers readily, telling you about the mischief he gets up to with his friends.'
-				if seepornofut >= 1:'	"Still watching porn together like a bunch of gay bros?" you ask, teasingly.'
-				if seepornofut >= 1:'	"Yeah, you should join us again sometime," he grins. "It''s always so much better when you have a nice slut there to give handjobs."'
-				if seepornofut >= 1:'	You give him the finger but grin back at him anyways.'
+				if seepornofut >= 1:
+					'	"Still watching porn together like a bunch of gay bros?" you ask, teasingly.'
+					'<br>	"Yeah, you should join us again sometime," he grins. "It''s always so much better when you have a nice slut there to give handjobs."'
+					'<br>	You give him the finger but grin back at him anyways.'
+				end
 				act'Finish showering together':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_end'
 				act'Suggest you wash each other':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash'
 			end
@@ -663,6 +690,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 	end
 	if pcs_inhib >= 50 or npc_rel['A34'] >= 80:
 	act'Suggest you wash each other (0:10)':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_wash_first'
+	end
 
 	if brother_shower_times > 2:
 		if pcs_inhib >= 50 or npc_rel['A34'] > 80:
@@ -698,7 +726,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_together':
 					end
 				end
 			end
-			act'Give him "shower head"':
+			act'"Give him "shower head"':
 				cla
 				npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 				if brotherbj < 1 and brotherfuck < 1:
@@ -739,20 +767,27 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_wash':
 	npc_rel['A34'] += 5
 	cla & *clr
-	gs 'arousal','breasts',3
-	gs 'arousal','massage',3
 	brotherwash += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brotherwash.jpg"></center>'
 	'	You and Kolka spend some time lathering each other with soap and rubbing each other down, both of you appreciatively feeling each other''s bodies as you do so.'
-	if brotherwash > 5 or brotherSex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0:'	Kolka even slips his hands between your legs and gives your pussy a good cleaning, paying special attention to your clit and causing you to squirm and and moan under his touch.'
-	if brotherwash > 5 or brotherSex > 1:gs 'arousal','vaginal_finger',3
+	if brotherwash > 5 or brotherSex > 0 or brotherfuck > 0:
+		'	Kolka even slips his hands between your legs and gives your pussy a good cleaning, paying special attention to your clit and causing you to squirm and and moan under his touch.'
+		gs 'arousal','vaginal_finger',3
+	end
+	gs 'arousal','breasts',3
+	gs 'arousal','massage',3
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if pcs_leghair > 3 or pcs_pubes > 3:
 		*nl
-		if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3:'	As you rinse off, your brother gives a meaningful look at your lower body and you follow his gaze to your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy.'
-		if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes < 3:'	As you rinse off, your brother gives a meaningful look at your lower body and you follow his gaze to your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs.'
-		if pcs_leghair < 3 and pcs_pubes > 3:'	As you rinse off, your brother gives a meaningful look at your lower body and you follow his gaze to your <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy.'
+		if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3:
+			'	As you rinse off, your brother gives a meaningful look at your lower body and you follow his gaze to your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy.'
+		elseif pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes < 3:
+			'	As you rinse off, your brother gives a meaningful look at your lower body and you follow his gaze to your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs.'
+		elseif pcs_leghair < 3 and pcs_pubes > 3:
+			'	As you rinse off, your brother gives a meaningful look at your lower body and you follow his gaze to your <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy.'
+		end
 		'	"Aren''t you going to shave?"'
 		if stanok = 0:
 			act'"I can''t. I don''t have any razors"':
@@ -1090,7 +1125,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_shave':
 						*nl
 						'	"No? Why would I? I like it like this?" you say.'
 						if kolka_shave_ask = daystart:
-								kolka_shave_ask2 = daystart
+							if kolka_shave_ask2 = daystart
 								'	Kolka frowns. "I thought you said you were going to do what I asked?"'
 								*nl
 								act'Not going to change my mind':
@@ -1247,8 +1282,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_shave':
 						'	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Maybe you''re right after all," you say and start lathering up your legs and begin carefully shaving them.'
 						*nl
 						'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
-						if brothershave = 1:'	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-						if brothershave = 1:'	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+						if brothershave = 1:
+							'<br>	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
+							'<br>	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+						end
 						act'Continue':
 							if brotherfuck > 0 or brotherbj > 0 or brotherwash > 5:
 								cla & *clr
@@ -1261,7 +1298,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_shave':
 									cla & *clr
 									gs 'arousal','vaginal_finger', 5
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowersex2.jpg"></center>'
-									'	Clean from your shower together, and now with freshly a shaved pussy, you can''t help yourself as you start to get frisky with your brother. His hands slide up your body to caress your breasts. In response, you reach back and start jerking his cock feeling him harden under your touch.'									act'Blow him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_bj'
+									'	Clean from your shower together, and now with freshly a shaved pussy, you can''t help yourself as you start to get frisky with your brother. His hands slide up your body to caress your breasts. In response, you reach back and start jerking his cock feeling him harden under your touch.'
+									act'Blow him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_bj'
 									act'Fuck him':gt'brother_voyeur','brother_shower_fuck'
 								end
 							else
@@ -1357,22 +1395,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_end':
 end
 
 !!if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_sex':
+!!end
 
 
 !!	act'Keep going':
+!!	end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_bj':
 	gs 'boystat','A34'
-	gs 'arousal', 'bj', rand(3,5)
 	npc_rel['A34'] += 3
 	brotherbj += 1
 	brothershowerbj = daystart
 	brotherSex += 1
-	gs 'stat'
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/showerbj.mp4"></center>'
 	'	Kneeling down, you take Kolka''s freshly washed cock and push it between your lips, sucking gently. Several minutes go by while you to continue blowing your brother, going slowly up and down his length, the sound of water raining down from the showerhead muting the soft slurping sounds coming from your mouth.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', rand(3,5)
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'stat'
 	act'Keep sucking':
 		cla
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', rand(1,5)
@@ -1990,9 +2031,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_first2':
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
 		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/broshowervirgin.mp4"></center>'
 		'	Holding your breath, you push back on Kolka, feeling his tip stretch your pussy. He eventually pushes the entire length of his cock inside causing you to gasp in pain as his <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm dick tears through your hymen. Despite your pain, neither of you stop moving, continuing to thrust against each other.'
-	!!elseif stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0:
-	!!	'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
-	!!	'	Kolka slides inside you with surprising ease. Though his dick still stretches your pussy, you find it to be pleasant instead of painful. Of course you''ve heard stories that say it doesn''t hurt for some girls, but you always thought it was a myth or at least a rare occurrence. <i>I must be pretty lucky!<</i> you think to yourself.'
+		!!elseif stat['hidden_vaginal'] > 0:
+		!!	'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
+		!!	'	Kolka slides inside you with surprising ease. Though his dick still stretches your pussy, you find it to be pleasant instead of painful. Of course you''ve heard stories that say it doesn''t hurt for some girls, but you always thought it was a myth or at least a rare occurrence. <i>I must be pretty lucky!<</i> you think to yourself.'
 	else
 		'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/shower/broshower.mp4"></center>'
 		'	Your pussy easily swallows your brother''s <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm cock and you immediately start building into a rhythm, pushing back on him in time with his thrusts for maximum depth of penetration.'
@@ -2295,7 +2336,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_fuck_cum':
 				'	"I''m sorry Kolka! Your cock just felt so good, I couldn''t stop! You can''t be mad at me for being too addicted to your cock to stop, right?" You kneel down, trying to apologize by cleaning him up with your tongue.'
 				'	He grumbles a bit but you can tell that he''s not mad at you. "I guess I can''t be mad about that... But next time I ask, I want to cum on your face!"'
 				'	"Okay, it''s a promise!" you say, standing back up and kissing him on the cheek. "So long as I can stop myself that is."'
-					if pillcon >= 30000 or tabletkishot >= 1:
+				if pillcon >= 30000 or tabletkishot >= 1:
 					'	<i>Fuck, that felt good...</i> you think to yourself, looking down to watch another glob dribbles out of you with satisfaction.'
 					'	<i>It''s a good thing I''m on birth control...</i>'
 				elseif mesec > 0:
@@ -2467,8 +2508,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 				npc_rel['A34'] += 25
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
-				if brothervirginlie = 1:'	"I... I don''t know. I just panicked I guess. Thought that maybe it might be better for you if you thought your big sister was more experienced and had been with other boys before." You look back at him apprehensively, worried about what he''ll say or do next now that you''ve admitted the truth.'
-				if brothervirginlie = 2:'	"I... I don''t know. I just panicked I guess. Thought that maybe it might be better for you if you thought your big sister was a big slut who fucked all the boys in town." You look back at him apprehensively, worried about what he''ll say or do next now that you''ve admitted the truth.'
+				if brothervirginlie = 1:
+					'	"I... I don''t know. I just panicked I guess. Thought that maybe it might be better for you if you thought your big sister was more experienced and had been with other boys before." You look back at him apprehensively, worried about what he''ll say or do next now that you''ve admitted the truth.'
+				elseif brothervirginlie = 2:
+					'	"I... I don''t know. I just panicked I guess. Thought that maybe it might be better for you if you thought your big sister was a big slut who fucked all the boys in town." You look back at him apprehensively, worried about what he''ll say or do next now that you''ve admitted the truth.'
+				end
 				'	Your brother regards you for a moment. And then he smiles.'
 				'	"Dummy."'
 				'	You shy away. And then blink a few times registering what you just heard.'
@@ -2482,6 +2526,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 				'	"... now we have a bond that other siblings don''t have," you finish. "And no matter what else happens, we''ll carry each other''s virginities for the rest of our lives." He nods.'
 				act'Continue':
 					minut += 5
+					gs 'stat'
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
 					'	You stand together for a few more minutes, holding each other under the water of the shower, not saying anything. Finally, you break the silence.'
@@ -2518,46 +2563,49 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_shower_fuck_end':
 				*nl
 				act'Ruffle his hair and send him on his way':
 					cla
-					'	"Well, glad you enjoyed yourself," you say, ruffling his hair, smiling when he cringes back in response to the child-like treatment. "See you later bro."'
-					'	He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
 					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 					brothervirginlie = 0
+					'	"Well, glad you enjoyed yourself," you say, ruffling his hair, smiling when he cringes back in response to the child-like treatment. "See you later bro."'
+					'	He nods back at you, picking up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
 					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 
 				act'Kiss him goodbye':
 					cla
+					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
+					brothervirginlie = 0
 					'	You lean in to give your brother an intimate kiss, then stepping back to meet his eyes.'
 					'	"See you later," you whisper.'
 					'	He smiles back at you and picks up his clothes before peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there and slipping out the door.'
-					brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
-					brothervirginlie = 0
 					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 
 				act'Until next time (grab his cock)':
 					cla
+					brotherSex += 1
+					brothervirginlie = 0
 					'	A sly smile on your face, you step forward to grab him by the cock.'
 					'	"Until next time little brother," you murmur into his ear, giving his dick a hard squeeze. Then, you slap his ass and push him towards the door. "Now, shoo! Before someone catches us in here together."'
 					'	Startled, he does as you say, picking up his clothes and peeking into the hallway to make sure no one is there before slipping out the door.'
-					brotherSex += 1
-					brothervirginlie = 0
 					act'Finish drying off':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 				end
 			end
 			act'Kick him out':
 				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
-				if brothervirginlie ! 2:'	Thoroughly annoyed with Kolka, you shove him towards the door.'
-				if brothervirginlie = 2:'	Not knowing what else to do, you yank open the shower curtain and shove Kolka towards the door.'
-				'	"Get out."'
-				'	"But I-!"'
-				'	"Out!"'
-				'	Still dripping wet with his clothes in his arms, you shove your brother into the hallway naked. If your parents ask about it, you''ll just tell them he was peeping on you and you sprayed him with the showerhead.'
-				if brothervirginlie = 2:'	Your brother out of the room you lean back onto the door and close your eyes, feeling bad for what you just did. Maybe you shouldn''t have lied to him about that after all...'
-				if pcs_horny > 70 and brothervirginlie ! 2:'	And fuck! You''re still so goddamn horny!'
 				brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 				brothervirginlie = 0
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/vanrpar.jpg"></center>'
+				if brothervirginlie ! 2:
+					'	Thoroughly annoyed with Kolka, you shove him towards the door.'
+				elseif brothervirginlie = 2:
+					'	Not knowing what else to do, you yank open the shower curtain and shove Kolka towards the door.'
+					'	"Get out."'
+					'	"But I-!"'
+					'	"Out!"'
+					'	Still dripping wet with his clothes in his arms, you shove your brother into the hallway naked. If your parents ask about it, you''ll just tell them he was peeping on you and you sprayed him with the showerhead.'
+					'<br>	Your brother out of the room you lean back onto the door and close your eyes, feeling bad for what you just did. Maybe you shouldn''t have lied to him about that after all...'
+				end
+				if pcs_horny > 70 and brothervirginlie ! 2:'	And fuck! You''re still so goddamn horny!'
 				act'Finish up':mirror_steam = hour & gt $loc
 			end
 		end
@@ -2567,13 +2615,13 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ass_compliment':
 	cla & *clr
+	inhib_exp += 1
 	'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/ass_compliment.mp4"></center>'
 	'	While you''re shampooing your hair, your brother decides to speak up about something.'
 	'	"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Can I say something?"'
 	'	"Hmm? Sure, what is it Kolka?"'
 	'	"You have a great ass!"'
 	'	Feeling his smile radiating from behind you, you look over your shoulder and give him a grin and a little shake of your ass to show your appreciation for his compliment.'
-	inhib_exp += 1
 	act'Continue':
 		if pcs_pubes >= 4 or pcs_leghair >= 4:
 			gt'brother_voyeur','shave'
@@ -2586,179 +2634,204 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 	cla & *clr
 	if brothershowerlook = 1:
-		if pcs_leghair > 3 or pcs_pubes > 3:
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk4.jpg"></center>'
-			'	You''re rinsing off when you notice Kolka staring at your legs and what''s between them.'
-			'	"Excuse me?" you ask him pointedly. "Can I help you with something?"'
-			if pcs_pubes < 11 and pcs_leghair > 3:'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking kind of stubbly down there." You follow his gaze to look at your legs and pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
-			if pcs_pubes > 10 and pcs_pubes < 21 and pcs_leghair > 3:'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re growing a bit of a bush down there." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and your trimmed pussy hair. "Looks like your legs are growing grass to match. Aren''t you going to shave?"'
-			if pcs_pubes > 20 and pcs_leghair > 3:'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "That bush you''ve got is looking more like a forest right now." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and the thick bush of pubic hair that covers your pussy. "Plus it looks like your legs are growing grass to match. Aren''t you going to shave?"'
-			if pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes < 11: '	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking kind of stubbly down there." You follow his gaze to look at the stubble growing on your pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
-			if pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes > 10 and pcs_pubes < 21: '	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re growing a bit of a bush down there." You follow his gaze to look at the small patch of hair on your pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
-			if pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes > 20:'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "That bush you''ve got is looking more like a forest right now." You follow his gaze to look at the thick bush of pubic hair that covers your pussy.'
-			if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes <= 3:'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking a little hairy down there." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
-
-			if stanok = 0:
-				act'"I can''t. I don''t have any razors"':
-					cla
-					*nl
-					'	"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "I''m out of razors. Can''t shave without a razor kiddo."'
-					'	"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
-					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-				end
+		if pcs_leghair > 0 or pcs_pubes > 0:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk4.jpg"></center>'
+		'	You''re rinsing off when you notice Kolka staring at your legs and what''s between them.'
+		'	"Excuse me?" you ask him pointedly. "Can I help you with something?"'
+		elseif pcs_pubes < 11 and pcs_leghair > 3:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking kind of stubbly down there." You follow his gaze to look at your legs and pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+		elseif pcs_pubes >= 11 and pcs_pubes < 21 and pcs_leghair > 3:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re growing a bit of a bush down there." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and your trimmed pussy hair. "Looks like your legs are growing grass to match. Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+		elseif pcs_pubes >= 21 and pcs_leghair > 3:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "That bush you''ve got is looking more like a forest right now." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs and the thick bush of pubic hair that covers your pussy. "Plus it looks like your legs are growing grass to match. Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+		elseif pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes < 11:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking kind of stubbly down there." You follow his gaze to look at the stubble growing on your pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+		elseif pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes >= 11 and pcs_pubes < 21:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re growing a bit of a bush down there." You follow his gaze to look at the small patch of hair on your pussy. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+		elseif pcs_leghair <= 3 and pcs_pubes >= 21:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "That bush you''ve got is looking more like a forest right now." You follow his gaze to look at the thick bush of pubic hair that covers your pussy.'
+		elseif pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
+			'	His lips twisted in thought, he says, "You''re looking a little hairy down there." You follow his gaze to look at your <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs. "Aren''t you going to shave?"'
+		end
+		if stanok = 0:
+			act'"I can''t. I don''t have any razors"':
+				cla
+				*nl
+				'	"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "I''m out of razors. Can''t shave without a razor kiddo."'
+				'	"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
+				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+			end
 
-			else
-				if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok = 1:
-					msg'As you pick up your razor, you realize that it''s probably only sharp enough for shaving one set of things. If you want to shave you''ll have to decide between keeping a <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy or <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs.'
-				end
+		else
+			if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok = 1:
+				msg'As you pick up your razor, you realize that it''s probably only sharp enough for shaving one set of things. If you want to shave you''ll have to decide between keeping a <<$pcdesc_pubes>> pussy or <<$pcdesc_legs>> legs.'
+			end
 
-				act'"Not with you watching!"':
+			act'"Not with you watching!"':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk3.jpg"></center>'
+				'	"Not with you watching!" you laugh. "That''s a bit intimate. Maybe I will when you''re not around."'
+				'	"Hmm..." He seems disappointed.'
+				act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+			end
+
+			if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 1:
+				act 'Shave your legs and pussy (0:10)':
 					cla & *clr
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothertalk3.jpg"></center>'
-					'	"Not with you watching!" you laugh. "That''s a bit intimate. Maybe I will when you''re not around."'
-					'	"Hmm..." He seems disappointed.'
+					minut += 10
+					pcs_leghair = 0
+					pcs_pubes = 0
+					pcs_horny += 5
+					brothershave += 1
+					stanok -= 2
+					inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+					'	"Yeah, sure. Why not?" you smile.'
+					'	You lather up your legs and crotch and then start carefully shaving them. Kolka stares at you and watches the process intently.'
+					'	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'
+					*nl
+					'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling.'
+					if brothershave = 1:
+						'	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
+						'<br>	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+					end
 					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 				end
+			end
 
-				if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 1:
-					act 'Shave your legs and pussy (0:10)':
-						cla & *clr
-						minut += 10
-						pcs_leghair = 0
-						pcs_pubes = 0
-						pcs_horny += 5
-						brothershave += 1
-						stanok -= 2
-						inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
-						'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-						'	"Yeah, sure. Why not?" you smile.'
-						'	You lather up your legs and crotch and then start carefully shaving them. Kolka stares at you and watches the process intently.'
-						'	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'
-						*nl
-						'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling.'
-						if brothershave = 1:'	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-						if brothershave = 1:'	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
-
-						act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-					end
-				end
+			if pcs_leghair > 3:
+				act 'Shave your legs (0:05)':
+					cla
+					*clr
+					minut += 5
+					pcs_leghair = 0
+					pcs_horny += 5
+					stanok -= 1
+					inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave2.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"Yeah, I guess my legs could do with a shave."'
+					'	You lather up your legs and then start carefully shaving them.'
+					if pcs_pubes > 3:
+						'	Kolka frowns. "You''re not going to shave your pussy?"'
+						if stanok = 0:
+							act'"I can''t. Razor''s gone dull"':
+								cla
+								*nl
+								'	"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "Razor''s gone dull." You thumb the razor to show him. Need a sharp razor to shave. <i>Especially</i> down there," you smile suggestively.'
+								'	"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
+								act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+							end
+						else
+							act'"Nah, I don''t feel like it right now"':
+								cla
+								*nl
+								'	"Nah," you say, continuing to run the razor over your legs. "I don''t feel like doing it right now. Too much work."'
+								'	Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
+								act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+							end
 
-				if pcs_leghair > 3:
-					act 'Shave your legs (0:05)':
-						cla
-						*clr
-						minut += 5
-						pcs_leghair = 0
-						pcs_horny += 5
-						stanok -= 1
-						inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave2.jpg"></center>'
-						'	"Yeah, I guess my legs could do with a shave."'
-						'	You lather up your legs and then start carefully shaving them.'
-						if pcs_pubes > 3:
-							'	Kolka frowns. "You''re not going to shave your pussy?"'
-							if stanok = 0:
-								act'"I can''t. Razor''s gone dull"':
+							if pcs_pubes < 21:
+								act'"Nope! I''m thinking of growing it out"':
 									cla
 									*nl
-									'	"I couldn''t even if I wanted to," you say to him wistfully. He looks at you in confusion. "Razor''s gone dull." You thumb the razor to show him. Need a sharp razor to shave. <i>Especially</i> down there," you smile suggestively.'
-									'	"Oh." He looks disappointed.'
+									'	"Nope! I''m thinking about growing it out," you say cheerfully, smiling at him.'
+									if pcs_pubes > 3 and pcs_pubes < 11:
+										'	"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you just kept it smooth..." he mutters.'
+									elseif pcs_pubes >= 11 and pcs_pubes < 21:
+										'	"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
+									end
+									'	Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
 									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 								end
 							else
-								act'"Nah, I don''t feel like it right now"':
+								act'"Nah, I''m too lazy"':
 									cla
 									*nl
-									'	"Nah," you say, continuing to run the razor over your legs. "I don''t feel like doing it right now. Too much work."'
-									'	Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
+									'	"Nah," you say. "I''m too lazy to do it. If I start shaving now, I''ll have to keep shaving every few days. Too much trouble to maintain."'
+									'	"Hrmph. No wonder it''s such a mess down there..." he mutters.'
+									'	You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning. He seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
 									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 								end
+							end
 
-								if pcs_pubes < 21:
-									act'"Nope! I''m thinking of growing it out"':
-										cla
-										*nl
-										'	"Nope! I''m thinking about growing it out," you say cheerfully, smiling at him.'
-										if pcs_pubes > 3 and pcs_pubes < 11:'	"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you just kept it smooth..." he mutters.'
-										if pcs_pubes > 10 and pcs_pubes < 21:'	"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
-										'	Kolka seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-										act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-									end
-								else
-									act'"Nah, I''m too lazy"':
-										cla
-										*nl
-										'	"Nah," you say. "I''m too lazy to do it. If I start shaving now, I''ll have to keep shaving every few days. Too much trouble to maintain."'
-										'	"Hrmph. No wonder it''s such a mess down there..." he mutters.'
-										'	You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning. He seems disappointed. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-										act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-									end
+							if pcs_pubes > 10:
+								act'"I like it like this!"':
+									cla
+									*nl
+									'	"I like it like this! Nothing wrong with a girl wanting to have a bit of bush down there," you say cheerfully, smiling at him.'
+									if pcs_pubes > 20:'	"Hrmph. More like a jungle..." he mutters. You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning. "I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
+									if pcs_pubes < 21:'	"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
+									'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
+									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 								end
+							end
 
-								if pcs_pubes > 10:
-									act'"I like it like this!"':
-										cla
-										*nl
-										'	"I like it like this! Nothing wrong with a girl wanting to have a bit of bush down there," you say cheerfully, smiling at him.'
-										if pcs_pubes > 20:'	"Hrmph. More like a jungle..." he mutters. You glare at him a little but he doesn''t see it as he''s already crossed his arms and looked away, still frowning. "I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
-										if pcs_pubes < 21:'	"Hmph. I still think you''d look better if you shaved it off..."'
-										'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, making sure you didn''t miss a spot.'
-										act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
-									end
+							act'"Hmm, maybe you''re right"':
+								cla & *clr
+								pcs_pubes = 0
+								pcs_horny += 5
+								brothershave += 1
+								minut += 5
+								stanok -= 1
+								'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+								if pcs_pubes < 11:
+									'<br>	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Maybe you''re right after all," you say and start lathering up your crotch.<br>	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the bits of stubble from around your pussy.'
+								elseif pcs_pubes >= 11:
+									'<br>	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Yeah, you''re right. Maybe it''s time to get rid of this bush," you say and start lathering up your crotch.<br>	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the hair from around your pussy.'
+									'<br>	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'
 								end
-
-								act'"Hmm, maybe you''re right"':
-									cla & *clr
-									pcs_pubes = 0
-									pcs_horny += 5
-									brothershave += 1
-									minut += 5
-									stanok -= 1
-									'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-									if pcs_pubes < 11:'	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Maybe you''re right after all," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
-									if pcs_pubes < 11:'	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the bits of stubble from around your pussy.'
-									if pcs_pubes > 10:'	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Yeah, you''re right. Maybe it''s time to get rid of this bush," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
-									if pcs_pubes > 10:'	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the hair from around your pussy.'
-									'	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'
-									*nl
-									'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
-									if brothershave = 1:'	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-									if brothershave = 1:'	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
-									act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+								*nl
+								'<br>	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling.'
+								if brothershave = 1:
+									'<br>	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
+									'<br>	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
 								end
+								act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 							end
 						end
 					end
 				end
-				if pcs_pubes > 3:
-					act'"Hmm, maybe you''re right"':
-						cla & *clr
-						pcs_pubes = 0
-						pcs_horny += 5
-						brothershave += 1
-						minut += 5
-						stanok -= 1
-						inhib_exp += 1
-						'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
-						if pcs_pubes < 11:'	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Maybe you''re right after all," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
-						if pcs_pubes < 11:'	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the bits of stubble from around your pussy.'
-						if pcs_pubes > 10:'	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Yeah, you''re right. Maybe it''s time to get rid of this bush," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
-						if pcs_pubes > 10:'	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the hair from around your pussy.'
-						'	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'
-						*nl
-						'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your freshly shaved pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling.'
-						if brothershave = 1:'	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
-						if brothershave = 1:'	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
-						act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
+			end
+			if pcs_pubes > 3:
+				act'"Hmm, maybe you''re right"':
+					cla & *clr
+					pcs_pubes = 0
+					pcs_horny += 5
+					brothershave += 1
+					minut += 5
+					stanok -= 1
+					inhib_exp += 1
+					gs 'stat'
+					'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave.mp4"></center>'
+					if pcs_pubes < 11:
+						'<br>	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Maybe you''re right after all," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
+						'<br>	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the bits of stubble from around your pussy.'
+					elseif pcs_pubes > 10:
+						'<br>	"Hmm." You think to yourself for a moment. "Yeah, you''re right. Maybe it''s time to get rid of this bush," you say and start lathering up your crotch.'
+						'<br>	Kolka stares at you intensely as you carefully remove the hair from around your pussy.'
+						'<br>	"Enjoying the show?" you say teasingly. He doesn''t say anything except nod, not looking away for a second. You have to admit, it''s a little bit exciting having someone watch you do this. You might be enjoying this almost as much as your brother is.'
 					end
+					*nl
+					'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your freshly shaved pussy, enjoying the smooth feeling.'
+					if brothershave = 1:
+						'<br>	As you rinse the remains of the lather away, Kolka asks, "So this is what all the girls do when they need to shave?"'
+						'<br>	You laugh at the naiveté of his question. "Yes, yes we do. So be appreciative when a girl''s clean shaven for you! We put a lot of work into looking nice for boys. Or other girls," you wink.'
+					end
+					act'Dry off':gt'brother_voyeur','dryoff'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><video src="images/shared/home/bathroom/brothershowertalk.mp4"></center>'
-		if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 0:'	While rinsing off, you notice your legs and pussy could use a shave. You look up and Kolka is still looking at the wall.'
-		if pcs_leghair < 4 and pcs_pubes > 3 and stanok > 0:'	While rinsing off, you notice that your pussy could use a shave. You look up and Kolka is still looking at the wall.'
-		if pcs_leghair > 3 and pcs_pubes < 4 and stanok > 0:'	While rinsing off, you notice your legs could use a shave. You look up and Kolka is still looking at the wall.'
+		if pcs_leghair >= 4 and pcs_pubes >= 4 and stanok > 0:
+			'	While rinsing off, you notice your legs and pussy could use a shave. You look up and Kolka is still looking at the wall.'
+		elseif pcs_leghair < 4 and pcs_pubes >= 4 and stanok > 0:
+			'	While rinsing off, you notice that your pussy could use a shave. You look up and Kolka is still looking at the wall.'
+		elseif pcs_leghair >= 4 and pcs_pubes < 4 and stanok > 0:
+			'	While rinsing off, you notice your legs could use a shave. You look up and Kolka is still looking at the wall.'
+		end
 		'	Do you want to shave right now?'
 		act'Skip it':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -2775,6 +2848,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				pcs_pubes = 0
 				pcs_horny += 5
 				stanok -= 2
+				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
 				'	You casually continue the conversation with your brother while lathering up your legs and crotch before starting to carefully shave them. You notice your brother make a few curious peeks but decide not to say anything and simply continue on with your business and the conversation.'
 				'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
@@ -2790,6 +2864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				pcs_leghair = 0
 				pcs_horny += 5
 				stanok -= 1
+				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave2.jpg"></center>'
 				'	You casually continue the conversation with your brother while lathering up your legs before starting to carefully shave them. You notice your brother make a few curious peeks but decide not to say anything and simply continue on with your business and the conversation.'
 				'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth legs, enjoying the feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
@@ -2805,6 +2880,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shave':
 				pcs_pubes = 0
 				pcs_horny += 5
 				stanok -= 1
+				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bathroom/shave3.jpg"></center>'
 				'	You casually continue the conversation with your brother while lathering up the area between your legs before starting to carefully shave it. You notice your brother make a few curious peeks but you decide not to say anything and simply continue on with your business and the conversation.'
 				'	Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy, enjoying the feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
@@ -2857,528 +2933,5 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showertalkbusy':
 	act'Get out and dry off':gt $loc
 end
 
-if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
-	brother_homework = daystart
-	if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += 1
-	minut += RAND(50,70)
-	ivrand = RAND(1,2)
-	if npc_QW['A34'] >= 2 and npc_rel['A34'] >= 60 and ivrand = 1:
-		cls
-		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
-		'<center><video src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework_touch.mp4" width="1000" height="422"></center>'
-		if npc_QW['A34'] >= 3 and father_go = 1:
-			cla
-			pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
-			'As soon as you begin to explain the material, Kolka begins again to stroke your leg his hand.'
-			act'Ignore and continue':
-				cla
-				if npc_rel['A34'] <50:npc_rel['A34'] += 2
-				pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
-				'You continue to do the homework, trying hard not to pay attention to Kolka''s hand on your leg. Kolka knowing that you do not mind continues to have nice feel of your leg. You feel the warm rush of excitement.'
-				ivrand = RAND(1,3)
-				if ivrand = 1 and brotherEvSex ! daystart:
-					cla
-					if (sub > 0 and brotherknowslut = 1) or pav_slut >= 75 or brotherknowslut = 2:
-						'Kolka boldly slides his hands further upwards, continuing to stroke the insides of your leg, while he tells you:'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, help me with another matter now!"'
-						if pcs_horny > 90:
-							act 'I thought you would never ask': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
-						else
-							act 'Sure, I''m always willing to help my little brother': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
-							act 'Maybe next time...': gt 'sitrPar'
-						end
-					else
-						'After you finish explaining the new material, Kolka goes red with excitement and asks:'
-						'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, Can you help me out here now?"'
-						if pcs_horny > 80:
-							act 'How could i say no if you keep asking so nice?': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
-						else
-							act 'I think i could teach you a thing or two': gs 'brother', 'brotherSexStart'
-							act 'Maybe next time...': gt 'sitrPar'
-						end
-					end
-				elseif ivrand = 2 and (brotherEvSex ! daystart or anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1):
-					gs 'brother_voyeur', 'showbody'
-				else
-					act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
-				end
-			end
-			act'Remove hand and continue':
-				cls
-				cla
-				pcs_horny += RAND(1,5)
-				npc_rel['A34'] -= 5
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You whisper:'
-				'"Don''t, Our parents will see us." You remove his hand from your leg.'
-				'Kolka mutters something under his breath with grim resentment on his face.'
-
-				act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
-			end
-		else
-			cla
-			pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
-			'As you explain the material, Kolka suddenly began to slowly stroke your leg with his hand. You freeze in surprise, not knowing what to do.'
-			act'Ignore and continue':
-				cla
-                if npc_QW['A34'] < 3: npc_QW['A34'] = 3
-				npc_rel['A34'] += 2
-				pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
-				'You decide to continue to do homework, trying not to pay attention to Kolka''s hand on your leg. He realizes that you don''t mind so he continues to stroke higher up your leg.'
-				act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
-			end
-			act'Remove hand and continue':
-				cla
-				pcs_horny += RAND(1,5)
-				pcs_dom += 1
-				'You decide to remove his hand and continue to do homework. Kolka begins to blush and starts to try hard to solve the problems. While not looking you in the eye.'
-				act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
-			end
-		end
-	else
-		cls
-		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You help your brother with his homework for an hour.'
-
-		act 'Finish': gt 'sitrPar'
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'showbody':
-	cla & *clr
-	minut += RAND(3,5)
-	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
-	if brothersexed < 1:
-		if anatomyhomeworkhelp = 0:
-			'	After you both finish studying, Kolka suddenly goes quiet and his cheeks turn a bright red.'
-			'	"<<$pcs_nickname>>..." he starts. "I have to learn about human anatomy, but I am having trouble with it. Can you help me?"'
-			'	"What do you mean?" you ask, a little confused.'
-			'	"Well, um..." Kolka hesitated, "Can you show me what girls look like...'
-			if sub < 30:
-				act'"No way"':
-					cla
-					'"How the fuck can I do that? Should I just take my clothes off in front of you and let you gawk at me? I''m your sister!"'
-					'"Yes, you are right. I''m sorry..." Kolka responded in embarrassment.'
-					act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
-				end
-			end
-
-			act'"Huh..."':
-				cla
-				'You briefly reflect on your brother''s request and reply, "How would you want me to do that? Should I just take my clothes off in front of you and let you gawk at me!?"'
-				'"Well... That would help but you could also explain each part." He adds.'
-				'You sigh and shake your head, "Surely your text books have pictures"'
-				'"There are pictures, but everything is so badly written, and the teacher skipped the lesson, saying "You already know everything." He explains with flushed face.'
-				'"Okay, I will help you, but only if you don''t tell anyone. Agreed? I''m serious, not a single person!" You say in a strict tone.'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise not a word to anyone!"'
-				'After his promise you consider what to do.'
-
-				act'Undress':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
-				act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $metka
-			end
-
-			act'"What do you mean?"':
-				cla
-				*nl
-				'	"What do you mean?" you ask quizzically.'
-				'	"Uhmm... Well... T-the diagrams of b-bodies in this book a-aren''t very good... I d-don''t really get them..." he stammers. "So... I was hoping t-that... m-maybe I could just s-see the real thing... i-if... y-you know... y-you''d let me s-see yours..." When he''s finished speaking he looks down, seemingly ashamed for even asking.'
-				act'"What?! No way!"':
-					cla
-					*nl
-					'	It finally dawns on you what he''s asking and you pull back in disgust. "What the hell?! No way! I''m not about to let you use me as a science project! Ugh! Get a grip Kolka!"'
-					'	"I''m sorry <<$pcs_firstname>>..." he whimpers. "I shouldn''t have asked..."'
-					act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
-				end
-
-				act'Well, nothing beats practical learning':
-					cla
-					*nl
-					'	Now that you finally understand what he''s suggesting, you muse over it for a moment.'
-					'	<i>Well... practical learning is pretty helpful... Might help to show him the real thing,</i> you think to yourself while Kolka visibly squirms in front of you.'
-					'	"Okay. Sure."'
-					'	Kolka looks up at you in surprise. "Really? You''ll really do it?"'
-					'	"Yeah, I''ll do it," you say. "Like you said, it might help if you get to see the real thing. I''m happy to do it to help my little brother," you smile.'
-					npc_rel['A34'] += rand(2,3)
-					act'Undress':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson1'
-				end
-			end
-		else
-			'	Towards the end of the study session, Kolka seems to remember something.'
-			'	"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, remember when you said that you would help me with my anatomy homework? You know, when..." he stops and cups his hands, leaning in to whisper, "...when you were in the shower? Are you still willing to help me with that?"'
-			act'"Not right now"':
-				cla
-				*nl
-				'	"Of course I am Kolka, just not right now," you say. "I''m a little busy at the moment, but if you ask me again later, maybe some other day, okay?"'
-				'	"Okay!" he nods, taking it as a promise.'
-				act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
-			end
-
-			act'"Of course!"':
-				cla
-				*nl
-				'	"Yeah of course!" you say. "How could I forget a promise to my little brother?"'
-				'	"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! So, before I told you I was having trouble understanding the pictures and diagrams," he says, holding out the book to you. "Is there anything you can do to help me understand it better?" You take the book and flip through the pages he''s supposed to be studying. Looks like basic anatomy right now, but later on it seems to move into sexual reproduction and general sex ed.'
-				*nl
-				'	How do you want to try and teach it to Kolka?'
-				act'Use the book and try to find a way to explain it':
-					cla & *clr
-					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolka</font></b></center>'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/homework1.jpg"></center>'
-					'	You do your best to go through the text with your brother and explain it to him but he''s still really struggling with it. Even you have to admit, those pictures and diagrams really aren''t very good.'
-					act'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
-				end
-
-				act'Use your body as an example and explain it that way':
-					cla & *clr
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/sitrpar.jpg"></center>'
-					'	"I think I have a pretty good idea..." you say mischievously while he looks at you quizzically.'
-					act'Undress':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson1'
-				end
-			end
-		end
-	else
-		'	After finishing the rest of his homework, Kolka pipes up, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I could still use some more help with my anatomy homework. Will you help me?"'
-		act'"Not right now"':
-			cla
-			*nl
-			'	"I''m sorry Kolka," you say. "I''m a little busy at the moment, maybe next time okay?"'
-			'	"Okay!" he nods, packing up the rest of his schoolwork.'
-			act 'Finish':gt $loc, $metka
-		end
-
-		act'"Sure!"':
-			cla
-			*nl
-			'	"Sure," you grin at him. "Just let me get ''presentable'' for you," you say with a wink before you start undressing.'
-			act'Undress':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson1'
-		end
-
-		act'"Maybe i try something else this time"':
-			cla
-			*nl
-				'"I will help you, but only if you don''t tell anyone. Agreed? I''m serious, not a single person!" You say in a strict tone.'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, I promise not a word to anyone!"'
-				'After his promise you consider what to do.'
-
-				act'Undress':gt'brother','brother_voyeur_ev4'
-				act'Don''t do it':gt $loc, $metka
-		end
-
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson1':
-	cla & *clr
-	if brothersexed > 0:gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson2'
-	brothersexed += 1
-	gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-	gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'	After taking a look around to make sure you''re in the clear, you quickly strip down until you''re completely naked in front of your brother.'
-	if anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1:'	"Woah! What are you doing?" Kolka exclaims.'
-	if anatomyhomeworkhelp = 1:'	"I''m doing what you asked me to do!" you say with a grin. "I''m going to help you understand the material better! Nothing should help you more with anatomy than being able to look at someone else''s body right?"'
-	act'Start the lesson':
-		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/2.jpg"></center>'
-		'	"So looking at your book it says you''re learning about arteries and veins right now. Arteries are some of the tubes that carry blood around your body. And they all start here," you say, putting your hand around your left breast. "When you breathe in, your lungs take in oxygen which the rest of the body needs to survive. But in order to get it to the rest of the body, your heart needs pathways to deliver it. The oxygen attaches itself to your red blood vessels, and your arteries are the pathways that deliver it. So, for example if your body wants to get oxygenated blood from your heart to your brain it travels along an artery that passes right through..."'
-		act'Continue':
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/3.jpg"></center>'
-			'	"... here!" you say, pointing to your neck. "This is your carotid artery, and it supplies all of your head and your neck with oxygenated blood. Come here and feel it!"'
-			'	Your brother timidly moves closer and puts his finger on your neck.'
-			'	"Push in gently. Do you feel the little ''ba-bump, ba-bump, ba-bump, ba-bump?'' That''s my heartbeat and you can feel the pulse through this artery. Since arteries come directly from the heart, they are the easiest ways to feel someone''s pulse!"'
-			'	"Woah!" your brother says in amazement. "That''s cool!"'
-			act'Continue':
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/4.jpg"></center>'
-				'	You lay back and spend the rest of the lesson letting Kolka use your body as a map, tracing your blood vessels with his finger to understand where they all go and where they branch out from.'
-				*nl
-				'	As the lesson goes on, you suddenly realize that the gentle touch all over your body is actually turning you on a little bit. The tracing of his fingers feel like a lover''s caress and you feel warmth in your hips signalling that you''re starting to get wet.'
-				pcs_horny += 15
-				act'Continue':
-					cla & *clr
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/5.jpg"></center>'
-					'	Eventually, Kolka has traced out all the arteries and veins you have and you bring the lesson to a close.'
-					'	You quickly sit up to hide the growing wetness between you legs and ask him, "So how was that? Do you think you have a better understanding of the material now?"'
-					'	"Yeah!" he says excitedly. "I think I get it now! You really helped me out <<$pcs_nickname>>!" He unexpectedly wraps his arms around you, giving you a big hug. You''re surprised by this, mostly because you weren''t expecting him to do something like this while you were still naked.'
-					'	"You''re the best sister ever!" he cries.'
-					'	You hug him back, feeling the warmth of your bare skin spreading into his shirt. "Aww, thanks Kolka."'
-					'	He pulls back from the hug, eagerly sitting in front of you. "Will you help me with this again sometime?"'
-					'	"Of course I will. But you need to let me get dressed before mom or dad sees me helping you out like this. I don''t think they''d approve. Do you?" He twists his mouth up and shakes his head. "I didn''t think so. So make sure you don''t tell anyone else about this. But if you need more help, just ask me and I''ll see what I can do," you say, giving him a sweet smile before getting dressed again.'
-					act'Get dressed':
-						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-						gs 'stat'
-						gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-						gt $loc, $metka
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		end
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson2':
-	cla & *clr
-	brothersexed += 1
-	gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-	gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/1.jpg"></center>'
-	'	You quickly get undressed taking small peeks at the book while you do so you know what you''re helping him with. It looks like this section is about female genitals.'
-	*nl
-	'	Once you''re completely naked you kneel down again and say, "Alright Kolka. All ready for today''s lesson?" He nods eagerly. "Okay! Let''s begin then!"'
-	act'Begin the lesson':
-		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/6.jpg"></center>'
-		'	"So, your lesson today is about female genitals. We''ll start with the most obvious one because I know you love to look at them: breasts!" You pull your arms back behind your head to give him a good view. "Women have breasts because they''re used to feed babies-" you start to say before Kolka interrupts you.'
-		'	"Can I get a closer look? You know... for uhh... scientifical reasons?" he says. The look on his face says he''s genuinely curious but you''re still a little skeptical he isn''t doing this just to get close to your tits.'
-		'	<i>Oh, whatever. As long as he learns something right?</i>'
-		act'Continue':
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/7.jpg"></center>'
-			'	"Uhh-ha... Okay I guess," you say with a bit of a nervous giggle. You stick your chest out some more and Kolka brings his face right next to your breasts.'
-			act'Continue':
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/8.jpg"></center>'
-				'	A few awkward long moments go by of Kolka closely examining your breasts and nipples before you realize that he''s not going to sit back down. You sigh and figure you might as well get on with the lesson in the mean time. At least he''ll be able to see them clearly.'
-				'	"So... Like I was saying, women have breasts because of babies. When a woman is pregnant, her breasts start to produce milk which is then used to feed her newborn."'
-				'	"How does the milk come out?" Kolka asks, now inspecting your breasts from multiple angles. "Do you squeeze it and milk it out like cows?"'
-				'	You sputter in laughter saying, "What? No, silly! That would be really painful because girls nipples are very sensitive! No, the baby suckles, meaning they just use their mouth and suck to draw the milk out. That''s why they call it ''breastfeeding.''"'
-				'	"Oh! So you mean like this?" and before you can stop him, Kolka leans in to put your nipple in his mouth and starts sucking.'
-				act'"Hey! Stop that!"':
-					cla & *clr
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/7.jpg"></center>'
-					pcs_horny += 20
-					'	You push him back immediately. "Hey! What do you think you''re doing?! You can''t just do that to a girl!"'
-					'	"But you were sayin-"'
-					'	"I know what I was saying! You''re not a baby Kolka. You can''t just start sucking on someone''s nippes like that. I told you..." you trail off, nervously noticing the wetness beginning to seep from your pussy. "... girl''s nipples are very sensitive..."'
-					'	"Oh." he says very matter of factly. "Right. You did just say that. I forgot. I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-					'	"It''s okay," you reply, gently massaging your nipple and trying your best not to accidentally wipe your love juice on anything. "Just, don''t do that so suddenly like that okay? At least ask next time."'
-					'	"Wait so if I ask I can do it?" he pipes up.'
-					'	"No!" you say with a stern smile. "I mean... I''ll think about it. But expect the answer to be more likely no than yes okay?"'
-					'	"Mkay," he says, while writing down some things in his notebook.'
-					'	<i><b>sigh</b> Boys...</i>'
-					'	Looking at the next part of the homework it talks about the anatomy of the vulva but doesn''t go on to the internals. At least you''ll be able to use your arousal for the lesson now..."'
-					act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson3'
-				end
-
-				act'"Wai-! Sto-... Ohhh..."':
-					cla & *clr
-					pcs_horny += 40
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/8.jpg"></center>'
-					'	"Kolk-! Ahh~! Wai- Uh~! Sto-... Ohh~!" you try to voice protests but they get lost in your stifled moans.'
-					'	Your brother continues to suck on your nipple with increased vigor, now grabbing your other breast to use as leverage and keep his face close. You squirm under his advances, trying to push him off but you''re too weak, your body floundering in pleasure.'
-					'	He pulls his lips off with a pop. "Huh. Why isn''t any milk coming out?" he asks. At last! A respite! You start to catch your breath and just as you''re about to tell him not to do that again, he leans forward and starts sucking again.'
-					'	"Ahh~!" A cry briefly escapes your lips before you clamp your own hand over them to make sure the rest of your family doesn''t overhear you. You can only imagine your mother''s reaction if she came in to find your brother sucking on your tits like this.'
-					'	After another minute of sucking and squirming, your brother finally relents. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I thought you said milk came out. I''ve been sucking all this time and nothing''s come out. Why''s that?" Then he notices your heavy breathing. "Hey, are you okay? Is there something wrong with you?"'
-					act'Continue':
-						cla & *clr
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/7.jpg"></center>'
-						'	"Kolka..." you sigh deeply before continuing. "First of all, you can''t just suck on a girl''s nipples like that! I told you..." you trail off, taking notice of the love juices dripping from your snatch and nervously smiling. "... they''re very sensitive... Second of all, I''m not pregnant dummy! Breasts only produce milk if you''re pregnant or recently gave birth."'
-						'	"Oh. Sorry."'
-						'	"It''s okay... It felt kind of good to be honest..." you admit with some embarrassment. "Just... ask next time? Please?"'
-						'	"Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>," he says, writing some things down in his notebook.'
-						'	You sigh again. Taking a look in the textbook, it says the next part of the homework is about the external female organs: the vulva. You slyly smile to yourself.'
-						'	<i>Well, at least I didn''t get wet for nothing.</i>'
-						act'Continue the lesson':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson3'
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		end
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson3':
-	cla & *clr
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/9.jpg"></center>'
-	'	"Okay Kolka, the next part of the lesson is about the vulva," you say, leaning back and spreading your legs to give visual access to your pussy. "That means just the external parts, not what''s inside. We''ll go over that as part of your next lesson."'
-	'	"Woah..." he says, clutching his notebook but still sitting from afar.'
-	'	"Well come on! You just sucked on my tits, don''t be shy now, take a closer look!"'
-	act'Continue':
-		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/10.jpg"></center>'
-		'	You spread your legs a little farther apart as Kolka leans in to take a look. You briefly go over everything explaining the mons pubis is where the hair grows and that the labia are the "lips" of your vagina.'
-		'	"Are you always this slimy down here?" he asks, in obvious reference to your wetness.'
-		'	"Well <i>that</i> is actually your fault!" you say.'
-		'	"Huh?" he looks up, concerned that he''s in trouble.'
-		'	"When a girl gets stimulated, say from sex or, I don''t know, getting their nipples sucked," you say meaningfully, causing him to blush, "They get wet down there. It comes from the Bartholin glands and it naturally lubricates the vagina to make sex more comfortable."'
-		'	"Ohhh! Okay!" he says, writing everything down. <i>This might just be helping him in school after all...</i> you think to yourself.'
-		act'Continue':
-			cla & *clr
-			if pcs_vag = 0:
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag0.jpg"></center>'
-				'	"Next is a very special part of the vagina," you start. You spread your pussy lips apart and let him look inside. "This is the hymen. Every girl is born with one and will have it until it gets torn."'
-				'	"How does it get torn?" Kolka quickly asks while continuing to stare at yours in wonder.'
-				'	"Well, it can get torn in a number of ways but the most common is when a girl loses her virginity. We''ll talk about this more next time, but when a boy and a girl have sex, the boy sticks his penis inside the girl''s vagina. The only way to get the penis all the way inside is to push through the hymen and break it. It usually causes a small amount of bleeding. That''s why they call it ''popping a cherry,''" you smile.'
-				'	He continues to look at your hymen for a few moments before asking, "So... does this mean..."'
-				'	"That I''ve never had sex? Yeah Kolka. It means I''m a virgin." The admittance causes you to blush for some reason, you''re not sure why. After a couple more questions, you continue with the lesson.'
-				act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-
-			elseif pcs_vag > 0 and guy > 0:
-				if pcs_vag <= 25:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag3.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_vag > 25 and pcs_vag <= 35:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag4.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_vag > 35:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag5.jpg"></center>'
-				'	"The next part I can''t actually show you, but I might as well show you where it should be," you say. You spread your pussy lips apart and let him look inside. "Normally, there''s something called a ''hymen'' here. You can see a diagram of it in your textbook. Every girl is born with one and will have it until it gets torn."'
-				'	"How does it get torn?" Kolka quickly asks while continuing to stare at yours in wonder.'
-				'	"Well, it can get torn in a number of ways but the most common is when a girl loses her virginity. We''ll talk about this more next time, but when a boy and a girl have sex, the boy sticks his penis inside the girl''s vagina. The only way to get the penis all the way inside is to push through the hymen and break it. It usually causes a small amount of bleeding. That''s why they call it ''popping a cherry,''" you smile.'
-				'	He takes note of your clear lack of a hymen and asks, "So... does this mean you''ve... you know...?"'
-				'	"That I''ve had sex? Yeah. Someone already took my v-card," You say somewhat proudly. "But don''t tell mom!"'
-				'	He nods in acknowledgement while writing down some more notes.'
-				if pcs_vag > 35:
-					'	"Woah! It''s like a cave in there! Are they all this wide?" he exclaims. You blush harder than you think you''ve ever blushed in your life.'
-					act'"I''ve had a lot of sex"':
-						cla
-						*nl
-						'	"I''ve had a lot of sex..." you say slowly.'
-						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-					end
-
-					act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
-						cla
-						*nl
-						'	"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
-						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-					end
-				elseif pcs_vag > 25 and pcs_vag <= 35:
-					'	"Is it supposed to look this loose?" he asks, causing you to blush hard.'
-					act'"I''ve had a lot of sex"':
-						cla
-						*nl
-						'	"I''ve had a lot of sex..." you say slowly.'
-						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-					end
-
-					act'"There''ve been a few... big ones..."':
-						cla
-						*nl
-						'	"There''ve been..." you don''t really know how to say this without saying it. "There''ve been a few uhh, big guys inside me..." you trail off.'
-						'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-						act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-					end
-				else
-					*nl
-					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-				end
-			else
-				if pcs_vag <= 25:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag3.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_vag > 25 and pcs_vag <= 35:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag4.jpg"></center>'
-				if pcs_vag > 35:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/pussy/vag5.jpg"></center>'
-				'	"The next part I can''t actually show you, but I might as well show you where it should be," you say. You spread your pussy lips apart and let him look inside. "Normally, there''s something called a ''hymen'' here. You can see a diagram of it in your textbook. Every girl is born with one and will have it until it gets torn."'
-				'	"How does it get torn?" Kolka quickly asks while continuing to stare at yours in wonder.'
-				'	"Well, it can get torn in a number of ways but the most common is when a girl loses her virginity. We''ll talk about this more next time, but when a boy and a girl have sex, the boy sticks his penis inside the girl''s vagina. The only way to get the penis all the way inside is to push through the hymen and break it. It usually causes a small amount of bleeding. That''s why they call it ''popping a cherry,''" you smile.'
-				'	He takes note of your clear lack of a hymen and asks, "So... does this mean you''ve... you know...?"'
-				'	"That I''ve had sex? No actually. I actually broke mine-" You stop and blush with the realization of what you''re about to admit. "... mastur...bating..."'
-				if pcs_vag > 35:
-					'	"Woah! It''s like a cave in there! Are they all this wide?" he exclaims. You blush even harder.'
-					'	"No... Not all..." you force out. "I masturbate a lot, okay...?" you mutter somewhat ashamed.'
-					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-				elseif pcs_vag > 25:
-					'	"Is it supposed to look this loose?" he asks again. You blush even harder.'
-					'	"I masturbate a lot..."'
-					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-				else
-					*nl
-					'	After a couple more questions, you continue on with the lesson.'
-					act'Continue':gt'brother_voyeur','anatomylesson4'
-				end
-			end
-		end
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson4':
-	cla & *clr
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/11.jpg"></center>'
-	'	"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> is it alright if you lift your hips a bit? It''s kind of hard to see everything so close to the ground."'
-	'	"Uhm, sure?" you say, lifting your hips as he asked.'
-	'	You lean your weight back to make it easier on yourself while he continues to inspect your vagina for a little while while comparing it to his textbook and write things down in his notebook.'
-	'	"<<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s this little thing at the top?" he asks. You look down and he''s using his pencil to point towards the top of your labia. After a moment, you realize he''s pointing at your clit.'
-	'	"Oh! That! That''s..." You think to yourself how you want to proceed.'
-	act'Just explain it to him':
-		cla
-		*nl
-		'	"So, remember how we talked about the Bartholin glands and why girls get wet? That right there is called the clitoris and its only purpose is to get girls wet."'
-		'	"Woah! Really? That''s cool! How does it work?"'
-		'	"Well, it''s the most sensitive place a girl has on her body. When someone touches it with their fingers or licks it with their tongue or if a penis rubs it in the right way, it makes a girl feel <i>really</i> good. Do that enough, a girl can orgasm from it. I bet you already know what an orgasm is though, don''t you?" you say, causing him to blush.'
-		*nl
-		'	"Anyways, that''s the end of this section. Did you enjoy the lesson today?" you ask, followed by more of his furious nodding.'
-		'	"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best!" You smile back at him before going to get dressed.'
-		act'End the lesson':
-			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-			gs 'stat'
-			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-			gt $loc, $metka
-		end
-	end
-
-	act'Give him a "practical" lesson':
-		cla & *clr
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/10.jpg"></center>'
-		'	With a sly look on your face, you decide to go through with your idea.'
-		'	"Kolka..." you start. "Did you like sucking on my nipples?" He blushes when you bring it up. "Oh come on, don''t be shy. Tell me the truth: did you enjoy it?"'
-		'	"Y-yeah..." he says, hesitantly.'
-		'	"Well, since you liked that, why don''t I let you try a more ''hands on'' approach to show you what you''re asking about?" He looks at you quizzically. You spread your legs open some more and roll your hips a little. "You see Kolka, what you''re asking about is called the clitoris and it exists for exactly one purpose: to give girls pleasure." His jaw drops as he stares at you with wide eyes.'
-		'	"It''s the most sensitive place a girl has on her body," you continue. "When someone touches it with their fingers or licks it with their tongue, it makes a girl feel <i>really</i> good. Do that enough and do it right, a girl can orgasm from it..." You trail off and look him right in the eye. "You want to see what that looks like?"'
-		'	"Yeah!" he almost shouts.'
-		'	You curl your index finger, motioning for him to come closer as you get up on the couch and invite him in between your legs. "Well then hurry up and get your head down here! Come find out what a girl tastes like!"'
-		act'Continue':
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylick1.mp4"></center>'
-			'	You instruct him as best you can as he leans in and starts giving you head. It''s a little rough at first but with your encouragement he starts to focus more on your clit, licking and swirling his tongue around it.'
-			act'Continue':
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylick3.mp4"></center>'
-				'	Before you know it, he''s found a rhythm and is licking you like there''s no tomorrow. You eyes roll back in your head and every other sensation fades and blurs into the background except the feeling of your brother''s tongue on your clit.'
-				'	He stops briefly and you vaguely hear him say, "Girls taste good," before diving back in and returning you to bliss.'
-				act'"I''m cumming!"':
-					cla & *clr
-					pcs_horny = 100
-					gs'stat'
-					'<center><video src="images/shared/sex/kuni/pussylickorgasm.mp4"></center>'
-					'	All your muscles start to tense up and you can feel a powerful orgasm approaching. Unable to do anything but moan as quietly as you can, you feel yourself explode in climax, your body violently quivering.'
-					'	Even through your orgasm, Kolka continues to lick you. His tongue on your hyper-sensitive clit is too much and you try to pull away but your brother is unrelenting, grabbing onto your legs and pulling you back, trying to keep drinking the flood of juices spilling from your honeypot.'
-					act'Continue':
-						cla & *clr
-						orgasm += 1
-						pcs_horny = 15
-						kuni += 1
-						gs'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/anatomylesson/12.jpg"></center>'
-						'	After what seems like an eternity of excruciating pleasure, your orgasm winds down and you find the mental acuity to speak, though your brother continues to lap up your girl cum.'
-						'	As tempting as it is to let him go another round, you push his head away, saying, "Okay Kolka, that''s enough," before laying back in exhaustion. You look at him with a weak smile. "Good job bro..."'
-						'	"Really?" he says, grinning. "I did good?"'
-						'	Your smile gets a bit more strength when you reply, "Good? Kolka you blew my fucking mind!"'
-						'	"Well, I had a great teacher didn''t I?" he says before starting to lick your pussy again.'
-						'	"Ohhh! Kolka~!" you say, pushing his head away with more than a small amount of regret. "As much as I''d love to let you keep going, we have to stop now. We don''t want mom or dad to catch us."'
-						'	"Yeah I know..." he says in a disappointed tone. "You just taste so good I want more!"'
-						'	You''re so tempted but your fear outweighs your temptation right now. "Maybe some other time kiddo," you say before you find the strength to put your clothes on while Kolka packs up his schoolwork.'
-						act'End the lesson':
-							gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-							gs 'stat'
-							gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
-							gt $loc, $metka
-						end
-					end
-				end
-			end
-		end
-	end
-end
-
-!!if $ARGS[0] = 'anatomylesson_uterus':
-
 --- brother_voyeur ----------------------------------
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# buklinik_event
+# buklinik_event
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 	cla
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos9':
 	'He shouts back, "No way! I''m good here. I see lovely young ladies jogging past every day. I won''t leave here unless you''ve got hot girls in panties there."'
 	'The volunteer turns to you, "We''ve been trying to move this old pervert out from here for weeks. <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you have any idea how to lure him out?'
 
-	if pcs_horny > 50 and $pantyworntype ! 'none' and PCloSkirt > 1 and pcs_exhibition > 20:
+	if pcs_horny > 50 and $pantyworntype ! 'none' and PCloSkirt > 1 and pcs_inhib > 20:
 		act 'There is one idea':gt 'buklinik_event', 'pos10'
 	end
 	act 'I have no idea':gt 'buklinik', 'olga2'

+ 4 - 13
locations/cikl.qsrc

@@ -696,15 +696,6 @@ end
 
 exhibition_outdoors = 0
 
-if pcs_inhib = 0:
-	if inhib_exp >= 5: pcs_inhib = 1 & inhib_exp -= 5
-else
-!!Intentional double to add up to 2 points
-	if inhib_exp >= 5 * pcs_inhib / 2: inhib_exp -= 5 * pcs_inhib / 2 & pcs_inhib += 1
-	if inhib_exp >= 5 * pcs_inhib / 2: inhib_exp -= 5 * pcs_inhib / 2 & pcs_inhib += 1
-end
-if pcs_inhib > 50 and exhibitionQW < 3: pcs_inhib = 50
-
 !counter for Dimka avoidance
 if dimaFilm = 1 and dimaRudeBlock = 0:
 	nodimkaK += 1
@@ -915,9 +906,9 @@ if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 11:husbandrink = rand(0, 10)
 
 !!Pussy_Kats job settings
 inWorkYoungShop = 0
-if day = 1 and young_shop_work = 100: young_shop_work = 1
-if day = 5 and young_shop_work1 = 100: young_shop_work1 = 1
-if day = 1 and young_shop_work2 = 100: young_shop_work2 = 1
+if week = 1 and young_shop_work = 100: young_shop_work = 1
+if week = 5 and young_shop_work1 = 100: young_shop_work1 = 1
+if week = 1 and young_shop_work2 = 100: young_shop_work2 = 1
 
 husbandsexday = 0
 borsexkol = 0
@@ -1143,7 +1134,7 @@ if day = 25:
 	end
 
 	! Utilities for all apartments.
-	if electroday = 0:
+	if (home_owned[1] > 0 or home_owned[4] > 0 or home_owned[5] = 2) and electroday = 0:
 		gs 'housing', 'util'
 		if bankAccount = 1 and karta >= elektro:
 			'<b><font color="yellow"> <<elektro>> <b>₽</b> for utilities, has been automatically deducted from your bank account.</font></b>'

+ 7 - 1
locations/cum_arrcheat.qsrc

@@ -258,7 +258,13 @@ else
 	'No Pregnancies registered.'
 end
 killvar '$cycletemp'
-act 'Leave':gt $curloc
+if $loc ! '' and $metka ! '':
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+elseif $loc ! '':
+	act 'Leave':gt $loc
+elseif $curloc ! '':
+	act 'Leave':gt $curloc
+end
 
 --- cum_arrcheat ---------------------------------
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/dachain.qsrc

@@ -95,9 +95,9 @@ if $args[0] = 'dachakit':
 
 	if pranik > 0:
 		if pranik = 1:
-			'You only have one more portion of cookies.'
+			'You only have one more portion of tea biscuits.'
 		else
-			'You have enough cookies for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
+			'You have enough tea biscuits for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
 		end
 		dynamic $pranik
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/dreams.qsrc

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/vladimir/sex/bath_voyer_1.jpg"></center>'
 		'Today you had a very strange dream: You were blindfolded, having sex with a stranger. After the two of you are done you remove the blindfold and recognize the stranger to be your stepfather.'
 		pcs_horny = 100
-		!you need trigger event (bath) again to advance. or we can simply add a stepdadqw += 1  by illume
+		stepdadqw += 1
 	elseif succubusQW = 1 or succubusQW = 2:
 		!this is for initial dream and a reoccuring dream if the feeling was ignored
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bedroom/dream/sex/succubdream.jpg"></center>'

+ 28 - 32
locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -30,9 +30,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fullstrip.mp4"></video></center>'
 		studio_strip += 1
 		inhib_exp += 3
-		gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-		gs 'stat'
 		*nl
 		if pcs_inhib < 20:
 			'	You squirm with discomfort as you drop the last of your clothing and stand completely naked. You feel cold, your skin tingling with discomfort and your hands immediately covering yourself up as you look around shivering in self-consciousness. You really don''t like being naked like this, especially in front of strangers, but rules are rules. What are you supposed to do about this?'
@@ -256,8 +253,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 				'	You go to your locker in the back room and start to throw on your clothes when you suddenly remember that one of the managers took your underwear earlier today. You''ll have to go see him to get it back...'
 				act'Go see the manager':gt'foto_events','underwear_steal2'
 			else
-				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/dress.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'	You go into the back room to put on clothes and get ready to go home.'
@@ -413,6 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 		if age >= 18:
 			howoldareyou = 2
 			'	I''m <<age>>.'
+			'	"I see. Alright, undress. Let me take a look at you."'
 		elseif fakepassport = 1:
 			howoldareyou = 2
 			'	"I''m 18."'
@@ -431,11 +429,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 				gs'foto','interview'
 			end
 		end
-	end
-	if howoldareyou < 0:
+	elseif howoldareyou > 0:
 		if howoldareyou = 1:
-			howoldaryou = 2:
-			if age_truth = 1 or age >= 18:'	"I''m <<age>>."'
+			howoldareyou = 2
+			if age_truth = 1 or age >= 18:
+				'	"I''m <<age>>."'
 				'	"I see. Alright, undress. Let me take a look at you."'
 			elseif fakepassport = 1:
 				'	"I''m 18."'
@@ -477,29 +475,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 				act'Continue':gt'foto','job_offer'
 			end
 		elseif pcs_inhib >= 15:
-				act'Reluctantly undress':
-					reluctant_undress = 1
-					*clr & cla
-					gs 'clothing', 'strip'
-					gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip1.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'	You take a deep breath and begin to take off your clothes. As long as it''s just this one time, you can handle it for now. You leave them on the floor while the photographer examines you.'
-					!if pcs_inhib <= 20'	You instinctively cover up as he steps closer, your hands trying to shield your nipples and pussy.'
-					'	He circles you slowly, occasionally asking you to adjust your pose slightly, carefully inspecting every aspect of your nude body. Your <<$pcs_eyecol>> eyes framed by your <<$pcs_haircol>> hair, your <<$liptalk3>>, your <<$titsize>> breasts, your <<$skin1>> <<$pcs_tan>> skin, your thighs, even your <<$vaginatipe>> pussy...'
-					'	He spends several minutes doing this without saying anything. Several people walk by while he does, including several beautiful and nude women who glance at you, whispering to each other before moving on.'
-					'	<i>This is so embarrassing!</i>'
-					act'Continue':gt'foto','job_offer'
-				end
-			end
-
-			act'I can''t do it':
+			act'Reluctantly undress':
+				reluctant_undress = 1
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
-				'	Even if it''s just this one time, you can''t do it after all. It''s simply too embarrassing to get naked in front of a total stranger. You blush, apologize, and leave the studio.'
-				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
+				gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+				gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip1.mp4"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	You take a deep breath and begin to take off your clothes. As long as it''s just this one time, you can handle it for now. You leave them on the floor while the photographer examines you.'
+				!if pcs_inhib <= 20'	You instinctively cover up as he steps closer, your hands trying to shield your nipples and pussy.'
+				'	He circles you slowly, occasionally asking you to adjust your pose slightly, carefully inspecting every aspect of your nude body. Your <<$pcs_eyecol>> eyes framed by your <<$pcs_haircol>> hair, your <<$liptalk3>>, your <<$titsize>> breasts, your <<$skin1>> <<$pcs_tan>> skin, your thighs, even your <<$vaginatipe>> pussy...'
+				'	He spends several minutes doing this without saying anything. Several people walk by while he does, including several beautiful and nude women who glance at you, whispering to each other before moving on.'
+				'	<i>This is so embarrassing!</i>'
+				act'Continue':gt'foto','job_offer'
 			end
 		end
+		act'I can''t do it':
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
+			'	Even if it''s just this one time, you can''t do it after all. It''s simply too embarrassing to get naked in front of a total stranger. You blush, apologize, and leave the studio.'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -561,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 				fotofakepassport = 2
 				'	You take a deep breath and step closer to him to say, "Okay, the truth is that I''m not really 18. I''m <<age>> okay? But I really need this job! Can''t we work something out?"'
 				'	He studies you for a moment, still completely naked before him, not a scrap of clothing to hide your naked body. You realize it suddenly, almost as if you had forgotten and you feel your face flush with embarrassment.'
-				act '...':
+				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
 					'	"Hmmm..." He rubs his chin thoughtfully while continuing to look at your body before saying, "Alright, listen, I''m not supposed to do this but you really do have an exceptional body so I''m going to make an exception."'
@@ -630,7 +626,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 			'	You''ve come this far, you can''t turn back now.'
 			'	"Okay, so I''m not 18. But I really want to earn some money right now. Isn''t there any way I can still work here?'
 			'	He studies you for a moment, still completely naked before him, not a scrap of clothing to hide your naked body. You realize it suddenly, almost as if you had forgotten and you feel your face flush with embarrassment.'
-			act '...':
+			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Hmmm..." He rubs his chin thoughtfully while continuing to look at your body before saying, "Alright, listen, I''m not supposed to do this but you have an exceptional body so I''m going to make an exception."'
@@ -742,7 +738,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showers':
 						'Soon you feel a warm wave spreading over your entire body and you shudder as an orgasm overtakes you. You quickly look around hoping no one noticed your public masturbation session.'
 						act 'Dry off':gt 'foto', 'showers'
 					else
-						exhibition_exp +=8
+						exhibition_exp += 8
 						orgasm += 1
 						pcs_mood += 15
 						pcs_willpwr += 15
@@ -1364,7 +1360,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'practicemodel':
 						mdlng_exp += 1
 						inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
 						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/seethru1.jpg"></center><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/seethru2.jpg"></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/seethru1.jpg"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/seethru2.jpg"></center>'
 						'	You feel like practicing something risqué today without being completely nude. You pick out a transparent top and go to to the practice set.'
 						*nl
 						'	You spend two hours posing for the photographer, learning the best ways to make a see-through top work for you and make you look even sexier.'

+ 5 - 5
locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -116,8 +116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio_strip_talk2':
 			end
 			'	"Fine, fine," he grumbles. "I''ll give you one more week. But that''s it! At the end of this week I expect those panties to come off! Now get to work!"'
 			'	The manager turns around and walks away and you heave a sigh of relief at his departure. It''s not exactly what you want, but you still have one more week now...'
-				act'Go back to the main floor':gt'foto','studio'
-			end
+			act'Go back to the main floor':gt'foto','studio'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -142,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'underwear_steal':
 		if pcs_inhib < 30:
 			'	Blushing hard, you nervously do as he says. As hot as your face feels from removing your bra in front of him and exposing your breasts, it somehow manages to burn even hotter when your panties come down after exposing your pussy. Clutching your underwear to your body, you stand back up to see the manager holding out his hand.'
 		else
-			'	You blush hard but do as he says. As you slide down your panties you have to admit to yourself that even if you don''t like this, it''s still bearable to you. You don''t have any more excuses not to comply with the dress code. Picking your underwear back up, you turn towards the locker room but stop when you see the manager holding out his hand.'
+			'	You blush hard but do as he says. As you slide down your panties you have to admit to yourself that even if you aren''t fully comfortable with this, you''re also not shy enough to make it a big deal. You don''t have any more excuses not to comply with the dress code. Picking your underwear back up, you turn towards the locker room but stop when you see the manager holding out his hand.'
 		end
 		'	"What?"'
 		'	"Give me your underwear."'
@@ -157,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'underwear_steal':
 		if pcs_inhib < 30:
 			'	Blushing hard, you nervously do as he says, face burning hot as you slip your panties down around your legs, keenly aware of your now visible pussy. Clutching your underwear to your body, you stand back up to see the manager holding out his hand.'
 		else
-			'	You blush hard but do as he says. As you slide down your panties you have to admit to yourself that even if you don''t like this, it''s still bearable to you. You don''t have any more excuses not to comply with the dress code. Picking your underwear back up, you turn towards the locker room but stop when you see the manager holding out his hand.'
+			'	You blush hard but do as he says. As you slide down your panties you have to admit to yourself that even if you aren''t fully comfortable with this, you''re also not shy enough to make it a big deal. You don''t have any more excuses not to comply with the dress code. Picking your underwear back up, you turn towards the locker room but stop when you see the manager holding out his hand.'
 		end
 		'	"What?"'
 		'	"Give me your underwear."'
@@ -170,6 +169,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'underwear_steal2':
 	cla & *clr
+	underwear_steal = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
 	minut += 2
 	'	Walking through the studio you find the manager you''re looking for. He sits at a desk flipping through a magazine that looks to be produced by the studio. Is that a new copy? Is he proof reading or something? Stepping up to him, you awkwardly clear your throat and he looks up at you.'
@@ -387,7 +387,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fine_art':
 									'	She stares at you flatly. "Okay, how about zis? I vill pay you an extra 30,000 <b>₽</b> on top of ze already agreed upon fee if you do zis for me. Not an inzignificant amount of money, but we muzt make zacrifices for great art! I vill zacrifice my money to you, if you zacrifice your virginity for me. Do ve have a deal?"'
 									act'No, I''m not losing my virginity':
 										cla & *clr
-										fine_art_deal = 2
+										fine_art_deal = 3
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
 										'	"No," you say, standing firm. "I''m not about to lose my virginity just for a modelling job. You''ll have to make do with that, or get another model who''s willing to <b>whore herself</b> out for your art."'
 										'	"Ugh," she rolls her eyes and waves her hand dismissively. "Vine, vine. I vill not take your virginity. Ve are vasting too much time. But Alexhandar, maintain your erection. I cannot have a flaccid penis in a piece that iz zat iz zupposed to exude <i>lust</i> and <i>eroticism!</i>"'

+ 7 - 5
locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -117,15 +117,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		end
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and sunWeather = 1:
-			act 'Walking in the woods':
-				cla
-				*clr
+		act 'Walking in the woods':
+			cla
+			*clr
 			minut += 60
 			pcs_mood += 20
 			pcs_willpwr += willpowermax/5
 			if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 				pcs_health += healthmax/5 & pcs_horny += 5
 				inhib_exp += rand(1,5)
+			end
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			if month >= 4 and month <= 10:
@@ -154,8 +155,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		end
 	end
 	if hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and month >= 6 and month <= 9 and boletus + bilberry < 10 and edge_forestday ! daystart:
-			act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
-				cla
+		act 'To look for mushrooms and berries':
+			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 30
 			temp_gf = rand(1,2)
@@ -238,6 +239,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	end
 	if rand(1,10)> 9: gs 'gadforest', 'torncloth'
 end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	$location_type = 'secluded'
 	!inside

+ 6 - 4
locations/gadmarket.qsrc

@@ -14,17 +14,19 @@ set minut += 5
 *nl
 
 $gadmarkettab = '<center><table align="center">'
-$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 10, 'Package of Cookies', 400, 'pranik', 'gadmarket')
+$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 10, 'Package of tea biscuits', 400, 'pranik', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 20, 'Cigarettes', 150, 'siga', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Fashion magazine', 450, 'fashmag', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Computer magazine', 450, 'compmag', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Biographical magazine', 450, 'biomag', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Cooking magazine', 450, 'cookmag', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Knitting magazine', 450, 'knitmag', 'gadmarket')
-$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 5, 'condoms', 600, 'prezikcount', 'gadmarket')
+$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 5, 'Condoms', 600, 'prezikcount', 'gadmarket')
 $gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 20, 'Tampons', 250, 'tampon', 'gadmarket')
-$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Sandwich', 200, 'buterbrod', 'gadmarket')
-$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Bottle of wine', 700, 'wine', 'gadmarket')
+$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$stock_item', 10, 'Razors', 1000, 'stanok', 'gadmarket')
+$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Bottle of water', 100, 'bottle', 'gadmarket', '', iif(bag > 0, 0, 1), 'You need a handbag')
+$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Sandwich', 100, 'buterbrod', 'gadmarket', '', iif(bag > 0, 0, 1), 'You need a handbag')
+$gadmarkettab += FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Cheap Bottle of wine', 200, 'wine', 'gadmarket', '', iif(bag > 0, 0, 1), 'You need a handbag')
 $gadmarkettab += '</table></center>'
 *pl $gadmarkettab
 killvar '$gadmarkettab'

+ 10 - 10
locations/gschool_lessons.qsrc

@@ -1598,7 +1598,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		if RAND(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Miss Orlov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time she asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
-			'"<<pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Be a smart ass':
 				*clr & cla
 				demerit +=5
@@ -1646,7 +1646,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about, sense you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, realizing that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "<<pcs_nickname>> you''re a smart girl, I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." She says trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re a smart girl, I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." She says trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake during the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
@@ -1673,7 +1673,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		if RAND(1,4) = 1:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a feminine throat clearing, you look up and see Miss Orlov looking at you. "Please put your phone away <<pcs_nickname>> and pay attention."'
+			'You hear a feminine throat clearing, you look up and see Miss Orlov looking at you. "Please put your phone away <<$pcs_nickname>> and pay attention."'
 			act 'Put your phone away':
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[4] -=3
@@ -1693,10 +1693,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					pcs_horny += 10
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirtselfie.jpg"></center>'
 					'You decide to have some fun with your teacher, and quickly move the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt as you see Miss Orlov walking towards your desk.'
-					'When Miss Orlov arrives at your desk, she tells you, "Please give me your phone <<pcs_nickname>>, this is important you need to pay attention."'
+					'When Miss Orlov arrives at your desk, she tells you, "Please give me your phone <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is important you need to pay attention."'
 					'You hand over your phone, the screen still on, with the last picture you took still on the screen of the phone.'
 					*nl
-					'Miss Orlov looks at what''s on the screen and she blushes deep red, quickly turning your phone off. She walks back to the head of class and takes a moment to compose herself. She then continues the lesson telling you, "I''m holding onto your phone for now, <<pcs_nickname>>. You can have it back after class."'
+					'Miss Orlov looks at what''s on the screen and she blushes deep red, quickly turning your phone off. She walks back to the head of class and takes a moment to compose herself. She then continues the lesson telling you, "I''m holding onto your phone for now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can have it back after class."'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 				act 'Put the phone between your boobs':
@@ -1922,7 +1922,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		if RAND(1,4) = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'Today''s lessons don''t particularly interest you, and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while you notice Miss Orlov has stopped teaching and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. Apparently this is already the third time she asked; you missed the first two completely while you was lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you now.'
-			'"<<pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam for sure."'
 			act 'Be a smart ass.':
 				*clr & cla
 				demerit +=5
@@ -1970,7 +1970,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about, sense you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, realizing that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "<<pcs_nickname>> you''re a smart girl, I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." She says trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you''re a smart girl, I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." She says trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake during the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
@@ -1997,7 +1997,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		if RAND(1,4) = 1:
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hear a feminine throat clearing, you look up and see Miss Orlov looking at you. "Please put your phone away <<pcs_nickname>> and pay attention."'
+			'You hear a feminine throat clearing, you look up and see Miss Orlov looking at you. "Please put your phone away <<$pcs_nickname>> and pay attention."'
 			act 'Put your phone away':
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[4] -=3
@@ -2017,10 +2017,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					pcs_horny += 10
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/upskirtselfie.jpg"></center>'
 					'You decide to have some fun with your teacher, and quickly move the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt as you see Miss Orlov walking towards your desk.'
-					'When Miss Orlov arrives at your desk, she tells you, "Please give me your phone <<pcs_nickname>>, this is important you need to pay attention."'
+					'When Miss Orlov arrives at your desk, she tells you, "Please give me your phone <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is important you need to pay attention."'
 					'You hand over your phone, the screen still on, with the last picture you took still on the screen of the phone.'
 					*nl
-					'Miss Orlov looks at what''s on the screen and she blushes deep red, quickly turning your phone off. She walks back to the head of class and takes a moment to compose herself. She then continues the lesson telling you, "I''m holding onto your phone for now, <<pcs_nickname>>. You can have it back after class."'
+					'Miss Orlov looks at what''s on the screen and she blushes deep red, quickly turning your phone off. She walks back to the head of class and takes a moment to compose herself. She then continues the lesson telling you, "I''m holding onto your phone for now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. You can have it back after class."'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 				act 'Put the phone between your boobs':

+ 20 - 19
locations/hotel_resep.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if hotelcollect > 0:
 	'The brunette quickly checks the computer and then gives you <<maidtime*250>> <b>₽</b> for all the shifts you worked in the hotel.'
 	maidtime=0
 end
-	
+
 act'Rent a room':
 	cls
 	gs'stat'
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ act'Rent a room':
 				end
 				if hotelroom1day = 0:gt'HotelHole'
 			end
-				
+
 			act'Luxury room':
 				*clr
 				cla
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ act'Rent a room':
 				end
 				if hotelroom1day = 0:gt'HotelHole'
 			end
-				
+
 			act'Royal suite':
 				*clr
 				cla
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ act'Rent a room':
 	end
 end
 if proshotelopen = 1 and proshotelday ! daystart:
-	act'Ask for ''The Peacock''':
+	act'Ask for "The Peacock"':
 		if pavhotprosQW = 6:
 			pavhotprosQW = 7
 			PavlinQW = 1
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 		act'Go back to the hotel lobby':gt'HotelHole','skip_resepevent'
 		exit
 	end
-	
+
 	if npc_rel['A217'] > 6:
 		'"This was not what we agreed to you say, I need more..."'
 		'"Sure, you can have more, but you need to do some extra work for that."'
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 			cls
 			'"Fine" you say. You open his fly and take out his half-erect penis.'
 			if npc_rel['A217'] >= 10:
-				
+
 				'"Why don''t you use your mouth today?"'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/Pavlin_bj.jpg"></center>'
 				'You look around to make sure nobody is watching you and then move your head towards his penis.'
@@ -185,11 +185,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 				'You sit straight again and look at Pavlin.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'prostitution'
 				swallow +=1
-			else	
+			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/Pavlin/Pavlin_hj.jpg"></center>'
 				'After two minutes of stroking you can feel him coming all over your hand.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'prostitution'
-				
+
 			end
 			'With a stupid grin on his face he reaches in his pocket and hands you an extra 250 <b>₽</b>.'
 			money += 1000
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 			if npc_rel['A217'] <= 15 or npc_rel['A217'] > 19:npc_rel['A217'] += 1
 			act'Go back to the hotel lobby':gt'HotelHole','skip_resepevent'
 		end
-			
+
 	end
 	if npc_rel['A217'] <= 5:
 		'You are sure the money he received from the customer was more than double this amount but you don''t feel like arguing.'
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 		'"You are right <<$pcs_firstname>>, come with me to my car I''ll give you a bonus today."'
 		'You are excited at the prospect of finally getting the money you earned but you are unsure if you can trust Pavlin.'
 		minut += 5
-		
+
 		act 'Take no chances, accept the amount for today':
 			cls
 			money += 750
@@ -231,8 +231,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 			'Once you turned the corner and are out of sight from the street Pavlin suddenly grabs you by the shoulders and throws you against the wall'
 			'You are stunned and want to say something when suddenly Pavlin hits you with his fist in your face'
 			'"WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE, BITCH? You work for ME, I decide how much money you get. YOU UNDERSTAND ME?"'
-			'He is screaming and after every sentence he hits you in the face again.' 
-			!only check for strength and dom at the moment, might change later 
+			'He is screaming and after every sentence he hits you in the face again.'
+			!only check for strength and dom at the moment, might change later
 			if pcs_dom > 50 and pcs_stren > 60:
 				PavlinQW = 3
 				'You try to defend yourself and start hitting back. He did not expect this and is startled for a moment.'
@@ -255,7 +255,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavlbar':
 				pavlevent = 1
 				pavldaystart = daystart
 				npc_rel['A217'] = 3
-			
+				fingal = 1
+
 			act'Run away':gt'vokzalG'
 		end
 	end
@@ -282,27 +283,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavgenpros':
 	pavproscount += 1
 	cls
 	gs'stat'
-	gs 'npcgeneratec', '0'				
+	gs 'npcgeneratec', '0'
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	'The customer was <<$npc_notes[$npclastgenerated]>> and introduced himself as <<$boydesc>>.'
 	'Then you both got undressed and you started doing your job.'
 	picrand = rand(0, 14)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<picrand>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	gs 'dinsex','dinrandbj'
-	
+
 	'You move the dick out of your mouth and tell him to put on a condom and fuck you.'
 	if pcs_dom >= 25:
 		'The man wanted to start arguing but he could see you would not be pursuaded.'
 		gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_his_condom'
 	elseif rand(0,2) = 1 and pcs_dom < 25:
-	
+
 		'The man started laughing and tells you he paid to fuck you ''raw'' so that''s what he was going to do.'
 		dynamic $venerasiak
-		
+
 	else
 		'The man started arguing but you could convince him that using a condom would be safer for both of you.'
 		gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_his_condom'
-		
+
 	end
 	gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex'
 	picrand = rand(1, 5)
@@ -330,7 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pavgenpros':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			act'Go to the bar':gt 'hotel_resep','pavlbar'
 		end
-			
+
 	else
 		gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 		act'Go to the bar':gt 'hotel_resep','pavlbar'

+ 15 - 1
locations/housing.qsrc

@@ -36,16 +36,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
 	end
 
 	home_rent[1] = 15000
-	!home_rent[3] = 0000
+	$home_rent_txt[1] = '15,000'
+
+	!home_rent[3] = 00000
+	!$home_rent_txt[3] = '00,000'
+
 	home_rent[4] = 10000
+	$home_rent_txt[4] = '10,000'
+
 	!home_rent[5] = 00000
+	!$home_rent_txt[5] = '00,000'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sale':
 	home_value[1] = 2000000
+	$home_value_txt[1] = '2,000,000'
+
 	home_value[3] = 150000
+	$home_value_txt[3] = '150,000'
+
 	!home_value[4] = 000000
+	!$home_value_txt[4] = '000,000'
+
 	home_value[5] = 1500000
+	$home_value_txt[5] = '1,500,000'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'util':

+ 3 - 3
locations/kiosk.qsrc

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if pcs_exhibition >= 45 or pcs_inhib >= 55:
-			act 'Flash both your tits and your pussy to skip the line':
+			act 'Flash both your tits and your pussy to jump the queue':
 				cls
 				minut += 1
 				exhibition_exp += rand(12,15)
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if pcs_exhibition >= 40 or pcs_inhib >= 55:
-			act 'Flash your pussy to skip the line':
+			act 'Flash your pussy to jump the queue':
 				cls
 				minut += 1
 				exhibition_exp += rand(9,12)
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if pcs_exhibition >= 35 or pcs_inhib >= 40:
-			act 'Flash your tits to skip the line':
+			act 'Flash your tits to jump the queue':
 				cls
 				minut += 1
 				exhibition_exp += rand(5,8)

+ 2 - 2
locations/kit_din.qsrc

@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ $posudomashina = {
 }
 
 $pranik = {
-	act 'Have tea with cookies (0:05)':
+	act 'Have tea with biscuits (0:05)':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ $pranik = {
 		frost = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have tea with cookies. Sweet and very bad for your figure, but so good.'
+		'You have tea with biscuits. Sweet and very bad for your figure, but so good.'
 
 		act 'Get up from the table':gt $loc, $metka
 	end

+ 2 - 2
locations/kuhr.qsrc

@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@ end
 
 if pranik > 0:
 	if pranik = 1:
-		'You only have one more portion of cookies.'
+		'You only have one more portion of tea biscuits.'
 	else
-		'You have enough cookies for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
+		'You have enough tea biscuits for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
 	end
 	dynamic $pranik
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/kuhr2x.qsrc

@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@ end
 
 if pranik > 0:
 	if pranik = 1:
-		'You only have a couple of cookies for a snack.'
+		'You only have a couple of tea biscuits for a snack.'
 	else
-		'You have enough cookies for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
+		'You have enough tea biscuits for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
 	end
 	dynamic $pranik
 end

+ 3 - 3
locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ act 'Have a cup of tea (0:05)':
 end
 
 if pranik > 0:
-	'You have <<pranik>> cookies.'
+	'You have <<pranik>> tea biscuits.'
 
-	act 'Drink tea with cookies (0:05)':
+	act 'Drink tea with biscuits (0:05)':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ if pranik > 0:
 		frost = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-		'You drank tea and enjoyed the cookies. You know they''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
+		'You drank tea and enjoyed the tea biscuits. You know they''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
 
 		act 'Get up from the table':gt $curloc
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/larek.qsrc

@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ act 'Exit Department':gt'larek','start'
          cls
          money-=300
          pranik+=10
-         'You bought a bag of cookies that go well with tea. You figure there''s about ten servings inside.'
+         'You bought a bag of biscuits that go well with tea. You figure there''s about ten servings inside.'
          act 'Exit Department':gt'larek','food'
          end
      end

+ 1 - 1
locations/metro.qsrc

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	CLOSE ALL
-	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/metro.mp3',30
+	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/metro' + rand(1,4) + '.mp3',30
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Metro station</font></b></center>'
 	if $loc = 'street':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Residential Area</font></b></center>'

+ 3 - 3
locations/mey_home.qsrc

@@ -181,9 +181,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	end
 
 	if pranik > 0:
-		'You brought your <<pranik>> cookies with you.'
+		'You brought your <<pranik>> tea biscuits with you.'
 
-		act 'Drink tea with cookies (0:05)':
+		act 'Drink tea with biscuits (0:05)':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			frost = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enjoy a cup of tea while you eat some cookies. You know they''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
+			'You enjoy a cup of tea while you eat some tea biscuits. You know they''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
 
 			act 'Get up from the table':gt 'mey_home', '1'
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 										!!not prostitute
 										if CloStyle = 4:jump 'markbuyclomother'
 										!!Sveta can wear it and not too revealing
-										if CloExhibit > pcs_exhibition or CloExhibit > 30:jump 'markbuyclomother'
+										if CloInhibit > pcs_inhib or CloInhibit > 30:jump 'markbuyclomother'
 
 										if cheap[numrand] = 0:
 											cheap[numrand] = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/newyear/forceddrink.jpg"></center>'
 						'You shake your head no. "No thinks guys."'
-						'One of them snorts, while Dan says. "I don''t think you understand <<pcs_nickname>> we wasn''t asking." You feel someone grab your hair and pull your head back. While Dan grabs your chin and forces your mouth open, while someone pours vodka into your mouth. You try to spit some out, but once your mouth is full, Dan forces your mouth closed. Then covers your mouth with his hand and pinches your nose closed, forcing you to swallow or drown. After several times of this, you are so drunk you can barely stand.'
+						'One of them snorts, while Dan says. "I don''t think you understand <<$pcs_nickname>> we wasn''t asking." You feel someone grab your hair and pull your head back. While Dan grabs your chin and forces your mouth open, while someone pours vodka into your mouth. You try to spit some out, but once your mouth is full, Dan forces your mouth closed. Then covers your mouth with his hand and pinches your nose closed, forcing you to swallow or drown. After several times of this, you are so drunk you can barely stand.'
 						minut += 10
 						alko += 5
 						gs 'stat'

+ 7 - 1
locations/obj_din.qsrc

@@ -1922,7 +1922,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exit':
 	cla
 	if StoryLine = 1:act 'Go to Pavlovsk':gt 'pavResidential'
 	act 'Go to City Residental':gt 'street'
-	act 'Cancel':gt $curloc
+	if $loc ! '' and $metka ! '':
+		act 'Cancel':gt $loc, $metka
+	elseif $loc ! '':
+		act 'Cancel':gt $loc
+	elseif $curloc ! '':
+		act 'Cancel':gt $curloc
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'new':

+ 2 - 2
locations/obkitchen.qsrc

@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@ if $args[0] = '':
 
 	if pranik > 0:
 		if pranik = 1:
-			'You only have one more portion of cookies.'
+			'You only have one more portion of tea biscuits.'
 		else
-			'You have enough cookies for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
+			'You have enough tea biscuits for <b><<pranik>></b> more snacks.'
 		end
 		dynamic $pranik
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/park.qsrc

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'"Nah, just didn''t feel like it," you shrug and continue on your way.'
 			else
 				'You blush with shame and you try to walk out of his sight as fast as possible.'
-			
+			end
 		end
 	end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/pavComplex.qsrc

@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garages':
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/garage/val6.jpg"></center>'
 													'He starts grunting as he fucks your ass and suddenly pulls out of you. He stands up and pulls you up to your knees, turning to face him. As you do, he is already jerking off and within moments warm cum starts spurting out of his dick and covering your tits in sperm. After a couple of more spurts of cum, the spray stops and he moans a sigh of relief.'
 													*nl
-													'He grins down at your cum covered tits grinning at his handy work. Then he cleans himself up and gets dressed as you do the same. Once you are both fully dressed again, he turns to you. "Thanks <<pcs_nickname>> I needed that, but I should get back to work on my bike. Talk to you tomorrow at school kay." Then he starts working on his bike again. You take one last look around to make sure you didn''t forget anything and leave.'
+													'He grins down at your cum covered tits grinning at his handy work. Then he cleans himself up and gets dressed as you do the same. Once you are both fully dressed again, he turns to you. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>> I needed that, but I should get back to work on my bike. Talk to you tomorrow at school kay." Then he starts working on his bike again. You take one last look around to make sure you didn''t forget anything and leave.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'unknown'
 													gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $boy, 1
 													gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 6 - 6
locations/pavSharedApt.qsrc

@@ -633,9 +633,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 	end
 
 	if pranik > 0:
-		'You have <<pranik>> cookies.'
+		'You have <<pranik>> tea biscuits.'
 
-		act 'Drink tea with cookies (0:05)':
+		act 'Drink tea with biscuits (0:05)':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
@@ -655,7 +655,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kitchen':
 			frost = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-			'You drank tea and enjoyed the cookies. You know they''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
+			'You drank tea and enjoyed the tea biscuits. You know they''re too sweet and can''t be good for your figure, but they taste so good!'
 
 			act 'Get up from the table':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'kitchen'
 		end
@@ -1047,8 +1047,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ndRoom':
 		else
 			'You don''t have enough laundry detergent to clean the room'
 		end
-		act 'Leave':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'start'
 	end
+	act 'Leave':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gpRoom':
@@ -1077,8 +1077,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gpRoom':
 		else
 			'You don''t have enough laundry detergent to clean the room'
 		end
-		act 'Leave':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'start'
 	end
+	act 'Leave':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'spRoom':
@@ -1109,8 +1109,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'spRoom':
 		else
 			'You don''t have enough laundry detergent to clean the room'
 		end
-		act 'Leave':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'start'
 	end
+	act 'Leave':gt 'pavSharedApt', 'start'
 end
 
 --- pavSharedApt ---------------------------------

+ 2 - 0
locations/placer_sex.qsrc

@@ -2131,6 +2131,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sleeping_parc_alco_rape':
 													pcs_willpwr += 25
 													if dick - pcs_vag > 8: vgape = 2
 													gs 'arousal', 'end'
+													gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+													gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 													gs 'stat'
 													act 'Leave the apartment':
 														if ParkBench = 1:

+ 106 - 93
locations/pornfilm.qsrc

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	city_porn += 10
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'To the side stands the actor <<$pakter[1]>>, stroking his member.'
 
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		minut -= 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Masturbate him':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-		
+
 			act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
 			act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
 		end
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		minut -= 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Suck it':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
-		
+
 			act 'Keep sucking':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
-			
+
 				act 'Open your mouth':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		end
 	end
 end
-	
+
 if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	if rand(0,2)=0:pornhj += 1
 	if rand(0,2)=0:pornbj += 1
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		minut -= 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Blow him':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 			act 'Suck more':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
-			
+
 				act 'Doggy style':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					minut -= 15
 					gs 'stat'
-		
+
 					act 'Kneel down and open your mouth':
 						cla
 						*clr
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		minut -= 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Blow him':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
-		
+
 			act 'Suck further':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
-		
+
 				act 'Doggy style':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 					minut -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
-					
+
 					act 'Anal':
 						cla
 						*clr
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 						gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 						minut -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
-					
+
 						act 'Kneel down and open your mouth':
 							cla
 							*clr
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 							spafinloc = 11
 							sexvolume = 4
 							gs 'cum_manage'
-						
+
 							act 'Clean his cock with your mouth':
 								cla
 								*clr
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
 		gs 'stat'
-					
+
 		act 'Suck them':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 			minut -= 15
 			gs 'stat'
-					
+
 			act 'Fuck':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -463,13 +463,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 				cumprecheck = 1
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				gs 'stat'
-				
+
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 15
 				gs 'stat'
-					
+
 				act 'Anal':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -481,13 +481,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 					spafinloc = 3
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
-				
+
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					minut -= 15
 					gs 'stat'
-				
+
 					act 'Cum on face':
 						cla
 						*clr
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
 		gs 'stat'
-				
+
 		act 'Suck':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			minut -= 15
 			gs 'stat'
-				
+
 			act 'Fuck':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -565,13 +565,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 				cumprecheck = 1
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				gs 'stat'
-				
+
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				minut -= 15
 				gs 'stat'
-					
+
 				act 'Anal':
 					cla
 					*clr
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					minut -= 15
 					gs 'stat'
-				
+
 					act 'Double Penetration':
 						cla
 						*clr
@@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 						gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 						minut -= 15
 						gs 'stat'
-				
+
 						act 'Finish in mouth':
 							cla
 							*clr
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 	city_porn += 20
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'To the side stands the actor <<$pakter[1]>>, stroking his member.'
 
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		minut -= 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Keep sucking':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 			minut -= 15
 			gs 'stat'
-		
+
 			act 'Lay down on the couch':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -688,7 +688,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				minut -= 15
 				gs 'stat'
-			
+
 				if pcs_horny < 85 and pcs_inhib < 80:
 					act 'Fake orgasm':
 						cla
@@ -708,7 +708,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 						act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
 						act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
 					end
-				else									
+				else
 					act 'Orgasm':
 						cla
 						minut += 15
@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 	gang += 1
 	porngang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'Actors <<$pakter[1]>> and <<$pakter[2]>>, are watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you...'
 
@@ -763,7 +763,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
 		gs 'stat'
-			
+
 		act 'Suck them':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			minut -= 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 			act 'Fuck them':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -792,13 +792,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 					spafinloc = 3
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'<<$pakter[1]>> lays on the bed and you climb above him, fitting his cock in your pussy, then wait until <<$pakter[2]>> pushes his member in your ass. He soon starts to fuck you enthusiastically, making you ride <<$pakter[1]>>''s dick. This continues for a while, but soon the director signals the guys that they should cum inside.'
-				
+
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					minut -= 25
 					gs 'stat'
-						
+
 				else
 					gs 'boyStat', $pakterID[2]
 					sexpartkno = 1
@@ -808,13 +808,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 					spafinloc = 3
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'<<$pakter[2]>> lays on the bed and you climb above him, fitting his cock in your pussy, then wait until <<$pakter[1]>> pushes his member in your ass. He soon starts to fuck you enthusiastically, making you ride <<$pakter[2]>>''s dick. This continues for a while, but soon the director signals the guys that they should cum inside.'
-				
+
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					minut -= 25
 					gs 'stat'
-					
+
 				end
 				'The guys starts to fuck you even faster as a reply, and pretty soon you feel them twitching inside of your body.'
 				''
@@ -851,7 +851,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	minut += 30
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'Actors <<$pakter[1]>> and <<$pakter[2]>>, are watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you...'
 
@@ -866,7 +866,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 10
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Suck them':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -879,14 +879,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			minut -= 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 			act 'Fuck them':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				pornvag += 1
 				pornswall += 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/group/threesomePM<<rand(1,12)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-				
+
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
 					gs 'boyStat', $pakterID[1]
 					sexpartkno = 1
@@ -896,13 +896,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 					spafinloc = 12
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'You get in position before <<$pakter[2]>> and starts to suck him, while <<$pakter[1]>> starts to fuck your pussy. He soon works on that part enthusiastically, making you swallow <<$pakter[2]>>''s dick. This continues for a while, but soon the director signals that the scene is good enough, and it is time for the finale.'
-					
+
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					minut -= 25
 					gs 'stat'
-					
+
 				else
 					gs 'boyStat', $pakterID[2]
 					sexpartkno = 1
@@ -912,13 +912,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 					spafinloc = 3
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'You get in position before <<$pakter[1]>> and starts to suck him, while <<$pakter[2]>> starts to fuck your pussy. He soon works on that part enthusiastically, making you swallow <<$pakter[1]>>''s dick. This continues for a while, but soon the director signals that the scene is good enough, and it is time for the finale.'
-					
+
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					minut -= 25
 					gs 'stat'
-					
+
 				end
 				'The guys immediately starts to fuck you even faster, clearly trying to cum as soon as possible, while still coordinating with each other, and since they are professional, you soon feel them twitching inside oy your body simultaneously, bathing your cunt in seed while your mouth quickly fills with sperm too.'
 				''
@@ -955,7 +955,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 	minut += 30
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'Actors <<$pakter[1]>>, <<$pakter[2]>>, <<$pakter[3]>> and <<$pakter[4]>> are talking loudly, trying to decide the order they will fuck you, while watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you...'
 
@@ -963,7 +963,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 		'The actors gather around you, and you soon suck one guy while giving a handjob for an another one. The two other guys get creative, one of them sucking your tits, while the other licking your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
@@ -972,7 +972,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
-					
+
 		act 'Fuck them':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -984,7 +984,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			minut -= 20
 			gs 'stat'
-		
+
 			act 'Cream bath':
 				killvar 'cuminside'
 				cla
@@ -994,7 +994,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
-			
+
 				gs 'boyStat', $pakterID[1]
 				sexpartkno = 1
 				cumprecheck = 1
@@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'stat'
 				end
-				
+
 				'When he is done, he is replaced by <<$pakter[3]>>, who also fucks you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -1084,7 +1084,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 					'You have a real orgasm while filming. You keep your eyes fixed on the guy as he coats your writhing body with his seed.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				end
-				
+
 				'When he is done, he is replaced by <<$pakter[4]>>, who also fucks you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 		'The actors gather around you, and you soon suck one guy while giving a handjob for an another one. The two other guys get creative, one of them sucking your tits, while the other licking your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
@@ -1156,7 +1156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
-				
+
 		act 'Fuck them':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -1186,7 +1186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			minut -= 20
 			gs 'stat'
-		
+
 			act 'Creampie':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -1205,36 +1205,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 				gs 'boyStat', $pakterID[4]
 				sexpartkno = 1
 				gs 'cum_manage'
-				
+
 				if pcs_horny < 85 and pcs_inhib < 80:
 					'You pull your legs up to your chest and smile at the guys, inviting them to come and cum in you, and in moments one of them steps up to you, pushing his dick in your pussy and groaning as he pumps his considerable amount of sperm in your vagina. As soon as he steps aside, an another guy replaces him, and after a few pumps you get your second helping of seed. Soon the third and fourth guys also cum in you, and you carefully open your pussylips with your fingers for the camera to show your sperm-full vagina.'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk1.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk2.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk3.mp4" height="200"></video></center>'
-					'The scene ends with you pulling up your panties and skirt, and step out the door with the four guys'' load still inside you.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					minut -= 20
 					gs 'stat'
-			
+					act 'Finish':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk'+rand(1,3)+'.mp4" height="200">'
+						'The scene ends with you putting on your dress, and stepping out the door, with the four guy''s load still inside you.'
+						act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
+						act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
+					end
 				else
 					'You pull your legs up to your chest and smile at the guys, inviting them to come and cum in you, and in moments one of them steps up to you, pushing his dick in your pussy and groaning as he pumps his considerable amount of sperm in your vagina.'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 					'Since you are already on edge, this pushes you over and you came around his dick, milking it even more. The director seems extremely pleased with this, as the cameraman captured it all from about a meter distance. As soon as he steps aside, an another guy replaces him, and after a few pumps you get your second helping of seed, while you are still in the afterthroes of your first orgasm. Soon the third and fourth guys also cum in you, and you carefully open your pussylips with your fingers for the camera to show your sperm-full vagina.'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk1.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk2.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk3.mp4" height="200"></video></center>'
-					'The scene ends with you pulling up your panties and skirt, and step out the door with the four guys'' load still inside you.'
 					orgasmbonus += 10
 					porngasm += 1
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					minut -= 20
 					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Finish':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk'+rand(1,3)+'.mp4" height="200">'
+						'The scene ends with you putting on your dress, and stepping out the door, with the four guy''s load still inside you.'
+						act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
+						act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
+					end
 				end
-				gs 'stat'
-				gs 'arousal', 'end'
-				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
-				act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1253,7 +1259,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	minut += 30
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'Actors <<$pakter[1]>>, <<$pakter[2]>>, <<$pakter[3]>> and <<$pakter[4]>> are talking loudly, trying to decide the order they will fuck you, while watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you...'
 
@@ -1261,7 +1267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 		'The actors gather around you, and you soon suck one guy while giving a handjob for an another one. The two other guys get creative, one of them sucking your tits, while the other licking your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
@@ -1270,12 +1276,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Fuck them':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/group/threesomePM<<rand(0,5)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'	
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/group/threesomePM<<rand(0,5)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 			'The guys starts to fuck your ass, one after the other, but never cumming. All the while you keep them ready with your hands and mouth.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -1284,7 +1290,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 			gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			minut -= 20
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 			act 'Ass creampie':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -1308,32 +1314,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/porncp<<rand(1,4)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 				if pcs_horny < 85 and pcs_inhib < 80:
 					'You lower your head on the pillows while pushing your ass in the air, giving the guys easy access. One of them immediately starts to fuck your ass, then stops, and pushing his dick in deep he pumps his considerable amount of sperm in your colon. As soon as he steps aside, another guy replaces him, then the third and fourth guys also cum in your ass.'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk1.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk2.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk3.mp4" height="200"></video></center>'
-					'The scene ends with you pulling up your panties and skirt, and step out the door with the four guys'' load still inside you.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					minut -= 20
 					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Finish':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk'+rand(1,3)+'.mp4" height="200">'
+						'The scene ends with you putting on your dress, and stepping out the door, with the four guy''s load still inside you.'
+						act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
+						act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
+					end
 				else
 					'You lower your head on the pillows while pushing your ass in the air, giving the guys easy access. One of them immediately starts to fuck your ass, then stops, and pushing his dick in deep he pumps his considerable amount of sperm in your colon.'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 					'Since you are already on edge, this pushes you over and you came around his dick, milking it even more. The director seems extremely pleased with this, as the cameraman captured it all from about a meter distance. As soon as he steps aside, another guy replaces him, then the third and fourth guys also cum in your ass.'
-					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk1.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk2.mp4" height="200"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk3.mp4" height="200"></video></center>'
-					'The scene ends with you pulling up your panties and skirt, and step out the door with the four guys'' load still inside you.'
 					orgasmbonus += 10
 					porngasm += 1
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					minut -= 20
 					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Finish':
+						*clr & cla
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/pornwalk'+rand(1,3)+'.mp4" height="200">'
+						'The scene ends with you putting on your dress, and stepping out the door, with the four guy''s load still inside you.'
+						act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
+						act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
+					end
 				end
-				gs 'stat'
-				gs 'arousal', 'end'
-				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Shower':gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
-				act 'Don''t bother to clean up': gt 'pornstudio', 'postvideo'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1353,7 +1366,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 	minut += 30
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants setting up lighting, so that there are no shadows.'
 	'Actors <<$pakter[1]>>, <<$pakter[2]>>, <<$pakter[3]>> and <<$pakter[4]>> are talking loudly, trying to decide the order they will fuck you, while watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you...'
 
@@ -1361,7 +1374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
-					
+
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 		'You kneel in front of the guys and start to suck <<$paktor>> and <<$paktor2>> in turns, while giving a handjob to <<$paktor3>> and <<$paktor4>>. Pretty soon they are all hard and ready, and the director nods to you.'
 
@@ -1370,7 +1383,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 		gs 'arousal', 'porn', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		minut -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
-		
+
 		act 'Let them fuck you':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -1382,7 +1395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/group/doublevag<<rand(1,4)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-			
+
 			if pcs_horny < 85 and pcs_inhib < 80:
 				'<<$paktor>> lies down on the floor, and you sit in his dick, spearing yourself on it in the process. <<$paktor2>> steps behind you and pushes his hard dick inside of your already occupied vagina, and the two guys start to fuck you in tandem. When the director signals, the two guys starts to fuck you more forcefully, and thanks to their timing, they came inside of you at the same time.'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/porgasmfake.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
@@ -1391,7 +1404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'porn', 30, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				minut -= 30
-				gs 'stat'		
+				gs 'stat'
 			else
 				orgasmbonus += 10
 				porngasm += 1
@@ -1405,7 +1418,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 				gs 'stat'
 			end
 			gs 'stat'
-			
+
 			act 'They fuck your ass':
 				cla
 				*clr
@@ -1419,7 +1432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 				gs 'cum_manage'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/doublean<<rand(1,4)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-				
+
 				if pcs_horny < 85 and pcs_inhib < 80:
 					'While still dripping the sperm of the previous two guys from your pussy, <<$paktor3>> and <<$paktor4>> switches places with <<$paktor>> and <<$paktor2>>, but they just dip their dick in your slick pussy, then pushes their dick in your anus. At first the place is pretty tight, but soon start to build up a good rithm. They also cum in you, this time in your ass.'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/porgasmfake.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
@@ -1468,7 +1481,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 60, 'gangbang'
 	gs 'stat'
-	
+
 	act 'Undress and lie on the bed':
 		cla
 		*clr
@@ -1614,7 +1627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/sex/fuckfifty<<rand(0,12)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 		'Your fans gather around you, and starts to fuck you with great entusiasm, but little technique. Most of them cum almost immediately when they are in your body, but since they are many, it doesn''t hurt the shoot, even heightens the quality<<$gangorg>> It still takes about six hours of constant fucking to finish with all of the guys.'
-		
+
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 360, 'gangbang'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 4 - 3
locations/preSYS2.qsrc

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Set money (<<money>>₽)': money = input 'Set Cash Amount' & gt'preSYS2','start'
 	act 'Return to preset character menu': gt 'preSYS', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm these options':
+		pcs_inhib = 100 - pcs_inhib
 		!!This line should get sveta to wear school uniform because she has no other clothing with >=40
 		if pcs_inhib >= 40: gs 'clothing', 'wear', 'school', 6
 		if bag = 1:
@@ -205,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modite_mis':
 	'<center><table border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=25  bgcolor=#808080><TH></TH><TH>Set to zero</TH><TH>Minus 10</TH><TH>Minus 5</TH><TH>Plus 5</TH><TH>Plus 10</TH><TH>Set to 100</TH>'
 	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'siga', 'Cigarettes'
 	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'dur', 'Cocaine'
-	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pranik', 'Cookies'
+	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pranik', 'Tea Biscuits'
 	'</table></center>'
 	act 'Return': gt 'preSYS2','modite'
 end
@@ -387,7 +388,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'modatt':
 	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pcs_prcptn', 'Perception'
 	if MagikDostup = 0: gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pcs_magik', 'Magic'
 	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pcs_grades', 'Grades'
-	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pcs_inhib', 'Exhibitionism'
+	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pcs_inhib', 'Inhibition'
 	gs 'preSYS2', 'modrel_setup2', 'pcs_heels', 'Heels'
 	'</table></center>'
 	nl
@@ -509,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'none':
 	pcs_chrsm = 30
 	pcs_prcptn = 30
 	pcs_grade = 75
-	pcs_inhib = 0	
+	pcs_inhib = 100	
 	pcs_heel = 5
 
 	!!Mental Skills Reset

+ 2 - 2
locations/qwBarBilliard.qsrc

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard_ev1':
 					end
 					if pcs_inhib >= 20:
 						act 'You''re on':
-							cla
+							cla & *clr
 							*nl
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/pool/pool2.jpg"></center>'
 							billiard_ev_var = 2
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard_ev2':
 					'"It''s been a long day," one of them explains, "and I don''t think any of us are really up for a wager tonight, even if it''s a small one. We''d rather just have a good time, no risk involved."'
 
 					act 'Have a friendly match instead':
-						cla
+						cla & *clr
 						pool_exp += rand(1,4)
 						pcs_mood += rand(1,3)
 						minut += 30

+ 1 - 1
locations/qwBarEncounters.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			*nl
 			'You watch in silence as the three of them exchange a few more insults before the two older guys gather their things and finally leave. Jaska grabs his glass and finishes off the last bit of alcohol before making his way over to you. He leans against the pool table and looks you up and down. He’s close enough that you can smell a mixture of alcohol, cigarette and a hint of musk.'
 			'"I don’t think I’ve seen you around here before," he says after a moment, "What’s your name?"'
-			'"<<pcs_nickname>>," you tell him.'
+			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>," you tell him.'
 			'"Right. Well, I’m Jaska, if you didn’t already know." He laughs ruefully, "So, you ever play pool?" You shake your head and Jaska’s face lights up a bit. "Then how about I teach you," he suggests, not really asking as much as telling you.'
 
 			if pcs_billiard < 10:

+ 1 - 0
locations/road.qsrc

@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@ $location_type = 'public_outdoors'
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	CLOSE ALL
+	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/highway.mp3',50
 	$metka = $ARGS[0]
 	$loc = $CURLOC
 	cls

+ 8 - 3
locations/saunawhore.qsrc

@@ -817,7 +817,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 		'You go up to her and she demands your bared arm. You present your arm as required and she takes out a syringe filled with drugs. "Sit still, I''ll give you a shot now and it will make you feel like normal again."'
 
 		act 'Leave':StrongNarkota += 25 & SNarkTimes += 1 & minut += 10 & gt 'saunawhore', 'saunawork'
-
 		exit
 	end
 	if workDolg <= 0 and pcs_mood <= 50 and SaunaWhore > 0 and money >= 1000:
@@ -827,8 +826,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'saunawork':
 			'You are beckoned by the nurse. "OK, come here."'
 			'You go up to her and she asks for your bared arm. You present your arm and she takes out a syringe filled with drugs. "Sit still, I''ll give you a shot now and it will make you feel like normal again."'
 
-			act 'Leave':StrongNarkota += 25 & SNarkTimes += 1 & minut += 10 & gt 'saunawhore', 'saunawork'
-
+			act 'Leave':
+				StrongNarkota += 25
+				SNarkTimes += 1
+				minut += 10
+				money -= 1000
+				gs 'stat'
+				gt 'saunawhore', 'saunawork'
+			end
 			exit
 		end
 	end

+ 10 - 0
locations/saveupdater.qsrc

@@ -342,5 +342,15 @@ if $home_town = '':
 	killvar 'svidboykafe'
 end
 
+!! exhibition to inhib
+if pcs_exhibition > 0 or exhibition_exp > 0:
+	pcs_inhib = pcs_exhibition
+	inhib_exp = exhibition_exp
+	inhib_lvlst = pcs_exhibition
+	inhib_lvl = pcs_exhibition
+	killvar 'pcs_exhibition'
+	killvar 'exhibition_exp'
+end
+
 --- saveupdater ---------------------------------
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -502,11 +502,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'clo2':
 	:loopburlesque
 		if burlesque[i] = 0:
 			gs 'clothing_attributes', 'burlesque', i
-			if clothingfilter_comf = 0 and CloExhibit + 10 < pcs_exhibition:
+			if clothingfilter_comf = 0 and CloInhibit + 10 < pcs_inhib:
 				if (clothingfilter_prost = 0 or CloStyle ! 4) and (clothingfilter_bimbo = 0 or CloBimbo = 0): *p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''sexshop'', ''burlesque''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/13burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
-			elseif clothingfilter_daring = 0 and CloExhibit + 10 >= pcs_exhibition and CloExhibit <= pcs_exhibition:
+			elseif clothingfilter_daring = 0 and CloInhibit + 10 >= pcs_inhib and CloInhibit <= pcs_inhib:
 				if (clothingfilter_prost = 0 or CloStyle ! 4) and (clothingfilter_bimbo = 0 or CloBimbo = 0): *p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''sexshop'', ''burlesque''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/13burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
-			elseif clothingfilter_too_daring = 0 and CloExhibit > pcs_exhibition:
+			elseif clothingfilter_too_daring = 0 and CloInhibit > pcs_inhib:
 				if (clothingfilter_prost = 0 or CloStyle ! 4) and (clothingfilter_bimbo = 0 or CloBimbo = 0): *p '<a href="exec: i = <<i>> & gt ''sexshop'', ''burlesque''"><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/13burlesque/<<i>>.jpg" 	height="250" /></a>'
 			end
 		end

+ 4 - 6
locations/shop.qsrc

@@ -240,11 +240,9 @@ if $shoplocation = 'grocery':
 	*P FUNC ('$stock_item', 1, 'Diet food', 300, 'edaD', $CURLOC)
 	*P FUNC ('$stock_item', 10, 'Diet food', 3000, 'edaD', $CURLOC)
 	*P FUNC ('$stock_item', 10, 'Tea biscuits', 400, 'pranik', $CURLOC)
-	*P iif(bag > 0, FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Bottle of water', 100, 'bottle', $CURLOC), '<tr><td></td><td>Bottle of water</td><td colspan=2>You need a handbag</td><td>for 50 <b>₽</b></td></tr>')
-	*P iif(bag > 0, FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Sandwich', 100, 'buterbrod', $CURLOC), '<tr><td></td><td>Sandwich</td><td colspan=2>You need a handbag</td><td>for 100 <b>₽</b></td></tr>')
-	*P iif(bag > 0, FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Cheap Bottle of wine', 200, 'wine', $CURLOC), '<tr><td></td><td>Bottle of wine</td><td colspan=2>You need a handbag</td><td>for 500 <b>₽</b></td></tr>')
-	!!*P iif(bag > 0, FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Average Bottle of wine', 500, 'wine', $CURLOC), '<tr><td></td><td>Bottle of wine</td><td colspan=2>You need a handbag</td><td>for 500 <b>₽</b></td></tr>')
-	!!*P iif(bag > 0, FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Quality Bottle of wine', 1000, 'wine', $CURLOC), '<tr><td></td><td>Bottle of wine</td><td colspan=2>You need a handbag</td><td>for 500 <b>₽</b></td></tr>')
+	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Bottle of water', 100, 'bottle', $CURLOC, '', iif(bag > 0, 0, 1), 'You need a handbag')
+	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Sandwich', 100, 'buterbrod', $CURLOC, '', iif(bag > 0, 0, 1), 'You need a handbag')
+	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Cheap Bottle of wine', 200, 'wine', $CURLOC, '', iif(bag > 0, 0, 1), 'You need a handbag')
 	*P '</table></center>'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:
@@ -585,7 +583,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'tech':
 	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Washing machine', 30000, 'stiralka', $CURLOC, '', iif(home_owned[1] > 0 or home_owned[3] > 0 or home_owned[4] = 1 or home_owned[5] > 2, 0, 1), 'You need your own home')
 	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Camera', 20000, 'zenit', $CURLOC)
 	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Mini camera disguised as a cigarette pack', 100000, 'minifoto', $CURLOC)
-	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Webcam', 2000, 'webcamera', $CURLOC, '', iif((npc_rel['A11']>=30 and webcamera = 0) or (camwhore = 1 and webcamera = 0), 0, 1), 'You have no use this')
+	*P FUNC ('$single_stock_item', 1, 'Webcam', 2000, 'webcamera', $CURLOC, '', iif((npc_rel['A11']>=30 and webcamera = 0) or (camwhore = 1 and webcamera = 0), 0, 1), 'You have no use for this')
 	*P '</table></center>'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:

+ 12 - 11
locations/sisterQW.qsrc

@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 	'You began to help the guys to lay out the table, they carried the drinks, you snacks, but there was so much booze that it covered the table leaving no where to put the snacks.'
 	'Everyone started to thump in unison, dealing, laughing, telling funny stories.'
 	'You cheerfully ask Anya. "You won''t leave me alone at the party will you?"'
-    'Anya smiles and hands you a bottle of vodka. "Of course not <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+	'Anya smiles and hands you a bottle of vodka. "Of course not <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 	act 'Drink':
 		cls
 		minut += 15
@@ -720,8 +720,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You took the bottle from her hands'
-        '"Well, let''s party." You say and gulp down a huge amount of vodka.'
-        ' Roma looks at Anya and smirks. "Look, <<$pcs_nickname>> is drinking more than you." with these words, everyone began to drink heavily.'
+		'"Well, let''s party." You say and gulp down a huge amount of vodka.'
+		' Roma looks at Anya and smirks. "Look, <<$pcs_nickname>> is drinking more than you." with these words, everyone began to drink heavily.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sisterQW', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sisterQW', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sisterQW', 'sit'
@@ -742,8 +742,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You politely try and refuse the drink.'
-        'But seeing everyone watching gathered around began to chant: "Drink, drink, drink, drink, drink, drink."'
-        'Giving into peer pressure you take the bottle from Anya''s hand, and gulp down a huge amount of vodka.'
+		'But seeing everyone watching gathered around began to chant: "Drink, drink, drink, drink, drink, drink."'
+		'Giving into peer pressure you take the bottle from Anya''s hand, and gulp down a huge amount of vodka.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sisterQW', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sisterQW', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sisterQW', 'sit'
@@ -759,8 +759,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sisboyQW_party':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_9.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'Standing, you tried to get out from behind the table, to go dancing, but no one was dancing they was all just sitting and drinking.'
-        'Seeing, you got up and wanting to leave the table, Rex pulls you over: "Where are you going, it''s only the beginning, hold the bottle, and let''s drink, otherwise I would be offended."'
-        'You couldn''t deny the birthday boy and took the bottle from his hands, and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
+		'Seeing, you got up and wanting to leave the table, Rex pulls you over: "Where are you going, it''s only the beginning, hold the bottle, and let''s drink, otherwise I would be offended."'
+		'You couldn''t deny the birthday boy and took the bottle from his hands, and gulp down a huge shot, feeling it burn down your throat. You hear others shouting in encouragement.'
 		act 'Go dance': gt 'sisterQW', 'dance'
 		act 'Drink': gt 'sisterQW', 'drink'
 		act 'Sit': gt 'sisterQW', 'sit'
@@ -930,14 +930,15 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reks':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
-	alko += 1
+	alko += 2
 	cumspclnt = 2
 	gs 'cum_cleanup'
 	pcs_breath = 0
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/sisboyqwparty_19.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You''ve clearly been having fun this evening and to his surprise you are still covered in semen.'
+	!!'You''ve clearly been having fun this evening and to his surprise you are still covered in semen.'
+	!! 'Not sure how Sveta is supposed to be covered in semen at this point, as there is no application or check on this that I could see - 3xpurt'
 	'"Hey girly, damn you''ve been having fun. Oh yeah, you''re Anya''s sister, I know, she''s... that''s odd, I haven''t seen her. Although I have been drinking bubbly all day, here, drink up."'
 	'With this he starts pouring the sweet Champagne down your throat, he''s so drunk he pours it much to fast and as much as you try to keep up, alot of it spills on the floor.
 	 Then, without a word, Rex just staggers off.'
@@ -1002,7 +1003,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boy':
 			'"Fuck I think you''re right, she''s a sweet little thing, but I don''t fuck Schoolgirls." Looking at his friend getting a blowjob from you. "Hey I''ll trade you."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
-			minut -= 5 
+			minut -= 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Switch':
 				cls
@@ -1027,7 +1028,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'two_boy':
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'group', 'unknown'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
-				minut -= 5 
+				minut -= 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Look For Anya': gt 'sisterQW', 'anna_find'
 			end

+ 3 - 0
locations/stat.qsrc

@@ -510,6 +510,9 @@ if minut >= 60:
 	if pcs_energy > 100:
 		fat += (pcs_energy - 100) / 4
 		pcs_energy = 100
+	elseif pcs_energy <= (10 + vitalbuf / 25) and fat > (2 + vitalbuf / 25):
+		pcs_energy += 6
+		fat -= 2
 	end
 
 	if pcs_hydra > 200: pcs_hydra = 200

+ 9 - 4
locations/stat_display.qsrc

@@ -271,6 +271,7 @@ else
 
 		$stat_extra_msg += '<font color="<<$st_temp>>"><TABLE cellpadding="1" cellspacing="0" width="300"><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '3', 100+pcs_dom-sub, 100+pcs_dom-sub,$dom_stat_msg)+'</TD><TD> Dominance</TD></TR>  <TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_stren, pcs_stren)+'</TD><TD> Strength</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_agil, pcs_agil)+'</TD><TD> Agility</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_vital, pcs_vital)+'</TD><TD> Endurance</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_intel, pcs_intel)+'</TD><TD> Intelligence</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_sprt, pcs_sprt)+'</TD><TD> Spirit</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_react, pcs_react)+'</TD><TD nowrap> Mental Agility</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_chrsm, pcs_chrsm)+'</TD><TD> Charisma</TD></TR><TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_prcptn, pcs_prcptn)+'</TD><TD> Perception</TD></TR>'
 		if MagikDostup = 0: $stat_extra_msg += '<TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_magik, pcs_magik)+'</TD><TD> Magic</TD></TR>'
+		if succubusflag = 1: $stat_extra_msg += '<TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', sucexcess, sucexcess)+'</TD><TD> Succubus Energy</TD></TR>'
 		$stat_extra_msg += '<TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_apprnc / 2, pcs_apprnc)+'</TD><TD> Attractiveness</TD></TR>'
 		if SchoolAtestat = 0 and StoryLine > 0:$stat_extra_msg += '<TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', pcs_grades, pcs_grades)+'</TD><TD nowrap> School Grades</TD></TR>'
 		$stat_extra_msg += '<TR><TD width="85%">'+FUNC('indiktab', '1', 100 - pcs_inhib, 100 - pcs_inhib)+'</TD><TD> Inhibition</TD></TR>'
@@ -307,6 +308,10 @@ else
 		if MagikDostup = 0:
 			gs 'indik', '1', pcs_magik, pcs_magik
 			$stat_extra_msg += '<BR><<$ind>> Magic'
+			if succubusflag = 1:
+				gs 'indik', '1', sucexcess, sucexcess
+				$stat_extra_msg += '<BR><<$ind>> Succubus energy'
+			end
 		end
 		gs 'indik', '1', pcs_apprnc / 2, pcs_apprnc
 		$stat_extra_msg += '<BR><<$ind>> Attractiveness'
@@ -1110,14 +1115,14 @@ if analplugIN = 1:$stat_msg += '<BR><b><font color="red">You have a butt plug in
 if vibratorin = 1:$stat_msg += '<BR><b><font color="red">You have a vibrator inserted in your vagina.</font></b>'
 !$stat_msg += '<BR>'
 if young_shop_work = 1:
-	if hour = 15 and minut <= 5 and week < 6 and inWorkYoungShop = 0:
+	if hour = 16 and minut <= 5 and week < 6 and inWorkYoungShop = 0:
 		'You are late for work at Pussy-Cats.'
-	elseif hour = 15 and week < 6 and inWorkYoungShop = 0 and misscheck ! daystart:
+	elseif hour = 16 and week < 6 and inWorkYoungShop = 0 and misscheck ! daystart:
 		misscheck = daystart
 		young_shop_miss += 1
 		$stat_msg += '<BR><b><font color="red">You missed work.</font></b>'
-	elseif (hour = 14 or hour = 13) and week < 6:
-		$stat_msg += '<BR><b><font color="red">By 15:00 you have to be at Pussy-Cats to start work.</font></b>'
+	elseif (hour = 14 or hour = 15) and week < 6:
+		$stat_msg += '<BR><b><font color="red">You start work at Pussy-Cats today at 16:00.</font></b>'
 	end
 end
 

+ 4 - 2
locations/stwork.qsrc

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'There are several <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirrors</a> hanging on the wall, where you can <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''brush''">brush</a> your hair, and a selection of <a href="exec:gt ''wardrobe'', ''start''">clothes</a> hanging on rails for the girls to dress in.'
 	'There are some stairs leading to the <a href="exec:gt ''stwork'', ''stripgirl''">stage</a> where you can head out to perform.'
 	'To the side there''s a <a href="exec:stripMir = 0 & gt ''stripclub'', ''start''">steel door</a> which overlooks the back yard and the staff uses as an entrance, to save them from meeting scummy customers. Standing by this entrance, there''s always <a href="exec:gt ''stwork'', ''guard''">security</a> keeping the talent safe.'
-	'Near the exit door is a vending machine selling <a href="exec:stripMir = 0 & gt ''food'', ''snack''">snacks</a>, and a <a href="exec:stripMir = 0 & gt ''beverage'', ''bev_wat''">water cooler</a>, which is heavily used by staff after coming off stage'
+	'Near the exit door is a vending machine selling '+iif(money >= 100,'<a href="exec:money -= 100 & gt ''food'', ''snack''">snacks</a>','snacks')+' and a <a href="exec:gt ''beverage'', ''bev_wat''">water cooler</a>, which is heavily used by staff after coming off stage'
 	'Behind a wooden door there''s the <a href="exec:gt ''stwork'', ''toilet''">staff toilet</a>.'
 	
 	if tatlech > 0:stripKoef = rand(1, 3)
@@ -70,7 +70,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	
 	act 'Have a cup of water (0:05)':gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
-	act 'Have a snack (0:05) (100 <b>₽</b>)': money -= 100 & gs 'food', 'snack'
+	if money >= 100:
+		act 'Have a snack (0:05) (100 <b>₽</b>)': money -= 100 & gs 'food', 'snack'
+	end
 	act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
 	if pcs_hairbsh = 0: act 'Brush your hair': gt 'mirror', 'brush'
 	act 'Change your clothes':gt 'wardrobe', 'start'

+ 1 - 0
locations/telefon.qsrc

@@ -666,6 +666,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Phone_notebook':
 	pl'<center><img src="<<FUNC(''$phone_theme'')>>icon_notebook.png" height="80" width="80"></center>'
 	pl'<center><<year>>-<<$month>>-<<day>>, <<$week[week]>><br></center>'
 	rent1 = -1
+	rent4 = -1
 	if home_owned[1] > 0 and ArendHouseSL > 0:rent1 = ArendHouseSL
 	if home_owned[4] > 0 and ArendHouseSL4 > 0:rent4 = ArendHouseSL4
 	preg1 = pregtime

+ 1 - 1
locations/torgcentr.qsrc

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # torgcentr
 CLOSE ALL
-if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/gipermarket.mp3',30
+if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/mall.mp3',30
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><b>Shopping mall</b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/torgcentr.jpg"></center>'

+ 69 - 61
locations/train.qsrc

@@ -480,23 +480,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 	train_event = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
-    '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
-    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
-    'After you bought your ticket, they told you that you had just missed the train. A little miffed at this, you take a seat on one of the benches on the platform to wait for the next train to the city to one to arrive.'   
-    act 'A man approaches you with an offer':
+	'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
+	'After you bought your ticket, they told you that you had just missed the train. A little miffed at this, you take a seat on one of the benches on the platform to wait for the next train to the city to one to arrive.'	
+	act 'A man approaches you with an offer':
 		*clr
 		cla
-        '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
-        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weed.jpg" ></center>'
+		'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weed.jpg" ></center>'
 		'Only a few minutes have passed when you hear someone walk up behind you and stop. You know they must be mere inches away, so you turn to look. Standing there is a young man, smiling at you, holding up a self-rolled cigarette... that looks suspiciously like a joint. The guy doesn''t seem too concerned about somebody catching him with that in public, though, and focuses entirely on you:'
-        *nl		
+		*nl		
 		'"Hey beautiful, I couldn''t help but notice you sitting here all by yourself. Guess you missed the train, too, huh?" He looks around, as if he only just noticed that he was walking around a public place with a joint in his hand, then leans down and whispers conspiratorially: "How about we blaze one while we wait?"'
 
-        act 'Refuse':
+		act 'Refuse':
 			*clr
 			cla
-            '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
-            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
+			'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
 			'You have no idea what could be in it and have no intention of being caught out in the open with marijuana either, so you shake your head. "No, thanks."'
 			'He shrugs and steps away. "Alright, just trying to be friendly. It''s your loss."'
 			*nl
@@ -505,17 +505,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 			'You can see them talk a little and even from where you''re sitting you can tell that the woman is giving him wanton looks. Before long, the two of them sneak off across the tracks and disappear; just as the train arrives, they come rushing back, clothes out of place and hair disheveled.'
 			'It isn''t hard to guess what they were doing to kill time.'
 
-            act 'Board the train to the city':
-                *clr & cla
-                minut += 40
-                gs 'stat'
-                '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
+			act 'Board the train to the city':
+				*clr & cla
+				minut += 40
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
 				'After 40 minutes, you see the town of Pavlovsk approaching. Pavlovsk Castle is an impressive sight, even from a long distance. The train stops at its final destination, a platform in Pavlovsk station.'
 				act 'Get off the train':
 					if rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 					gt 'vokzalperG'
 				end
-            end
+			end
 		end
 		act 'Smoke with him':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -527,20 +527,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 			'You smile and nod, taking the joint from him - you only live once and it''s as good a pastime as any. He lights it as you take a long slow drag off it and hold it in, feeling it in your lungs... until you start coughing, causing him to chuckle. You feel the relaxing effect almost at once, your head feeling both lighter and heavier, your mind slowing down... but you notice a slightly odd taste to the smoke that you can''t place - maybe that''s just what this variety tastes like. You pace it back and forth with him, chatting idly as you smoke, and as you do, you are starting to feel aroused: Your nipples harden, your pussy is getting soaking wet and you feel so wound up that you have to actively keep your hands in check to prevent yourself from masturbating out in the open.'
 			'One thing you know for sure, even in your current state: Marijuana isn''t supposed to have this effect. You look at your smoking buddy. "What else was in this joint?"'
 			'"XTC", he responds with hesitation, a lazy smile on his face. "It feels great, right?" He grabs you by the hand and pulls you up along with him. "Come on, let''s go have some fun before the train arrives. I know you''re just as horny as I am."'
-			'If you were simply horny, you might not have accompanied him, but the XTC had fully taken effect by now, your mind was in a rush and you felt like you could trust the guy who just drugged you, so you went with him, looking forward to some ''fun''.'       
+			'If you were simply horny, you might not have accompanied him, but the XTC had fully taken effect by now, your mind was in a rush and you felt like you could trust the guy who just drugged you, so you went with him, looking forward to some ''fun''.'		
 
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr
 				cla
-	            '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
-	            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
-			    'You still have enough presence of mind to know this would be a bad idea, so you shake your head. "No, thanks."'
-			    'He shrugs and steps away. "Alright, just trying to be friendly. It''s your loss."'
-			    *nl
-			    'He wanders around for a bit. Eventually another young woman comes down to the platform. You watch him go over, and you are sure he''s making her the same offer, but unlike you, she nods and they smoke the joint together. You briefly consider going to the bathrooms to masturbate but you don''t want to miss the train again.'
-			    *nl
-			    'You can see them talk a little and even from where you''re sitting you can tell that the woman is giving him wanton looks. Before long, the two of them sneak off across the tracks and disappear; just as the train arrives, they come rushing back, clothes out of place and hair disheveled.'
-			    'It isn''t hard to guess what they were doing to kill time. A part of you wishes you had taken him up on the offer.'
+				'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
+				'You still have enough presence of mind to know this would be a bad idea, so you shake your head. "No, thanks."'
+				'He shrugs and steps away. "Alright, just trying to be friendly. It''s your loss."'
+				*nl
+				'He wanders around for a bit. Eventually another young woman comes down to the platform. You watch him go over, and you are sure he''s making her the same offer, but unlike you, she nods and they smoke the joint together. You briefly consider going to the bathrooms to masturbate but you don''t want to miss the train again.'
+				*nl
+				'You can see them talk a little and even from where you''re sitting you can tell that the woman is giving him wanton looks. Before long, the two of them sneak off across the tracks and disappear; just as the train arrives, they come rushing back, clothes out of place and hair disheveled.'
+				'It isn''t hard to guess what they were doing to kill time. A part of you wishes you had taken him up on the offer.'
 				act 'Board the train to the city':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 40
@@ -574,20 +574,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'deepthroat', 'unknown'
 					act 'Fuck him':
 						*clr & cla
-                        '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
-                        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedvag.jpg" ></center>'
+						'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedvag.jpg" ></center>'
 						'He is having the time of his life, but all your blowjob does is making you hornier, and you can''t take it any longer: You start removing your clothes bit for bit while you keep blowing him, until every item below your waist is removed. Once your pussy and ass are bare, you pull him down and get him to lay down on his back.'
 						*nl
 						'He has barely even touched the ground when you have already straddled him, facing his legs, and lowering yourself down until you feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock stretch out your wet cunt. You moan out loud as you impale yourself on his shaft, going all the way down on the first stroke. You lift yourself up again and, again, take his entire length, faster this time. Then again, and again, riding him harder and faster with every stroke, his cock feeling as big as that of a prized stallion.'
-                        gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom', 'unknown'
+						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom', 'unknown'
 						act 'Take his cum':
 							*clr & cla
-                            spafinloc = 12
-                            gs 'cum_manage'
-                            spafinloc = 11
-                            gs 'cum_manage'
-                            '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
-                            '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedcum.jpg" ></center>'
+							spafinloc = 12
+							gs 'cum_manage'
+							spafinloc = 11
+							gs 'cum_manage'
+							'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedcum.jpg" ></center>'
 							'You give him the fuck of a lifetime, feeling your orgasm approaching fast, so close, so very close... but he lifts you off and quickly stands up. "I''m about to cum!"'
 							*nl
 							'You have half a mind to say the same but you are too turned on to speak. You squat down in front of him again, and start jerking him off as you open your mouth and stick out your tongue. It only takes a few strokes before he shoots most of his load into your mouth, with a few stray squirts landing on your chin.'
@@ -595,26 +595,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 							'With your mouth still open, you show him his sperm on your tongue before you swallow it down, then start sucking his cock again. He was getting soft, but you feel him getting hard again in your mouth and you are already looking forward to another go so you can have your own orgasm.' 
 							*nl
 							'That''s when you hear the train coming. "The train''s here; we have to stop", he states, with a hint of regret, as he pulls his cock out of your mouth. Without another look at you, he quickly pulls up his pants and rushes over to the train as it comes to a stop. You hurriedly get dressed as well and then rush after him to get on the train. You make it just in time - the doors close almost as soon as you are in.'
-                            gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
-                            act 'Board the train to the city':
-                                *clr & cla
-                                minut += 5
-                                gs 'stat'
-                                '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg"></center>'
-                                'Once on the train, you look around but you don''t see the young man. Perhaps he got on a different car? You go looking for him, passing through a few different sections, hoping to continue what you started and deal with your overwhelming horniness, but after checking the entire train without seeing a hint of him, you give up and find a seat.'
+							act 'Board the train to the city':
+								*clr & cla
+								minut += 5
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg"></center>'
+								'Once on the train, you look around but you don''t see the young man. Perhaps he got on a different car? You go looking for him, passing through a few different sections, hoping to continue what you started and deal with your overwhelming horniness, but after checking the entire train without seeing a hint of him, you give up and find a seat.'
 								'After 40 minutes, you see the town of Pavlovsk approaching. Pavlovsk Castle is an impressive sight, even from a long distance. The train stops at its final destination, a platform in Pavlovsk station.'
 								act 'Get off the train':
 									if rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
 									gt 'vokzalperG'
 								end
-                            end
-                        end
-                    end
-                end
-            end
-        end
-    end
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
 end
 
 !!events starting on the train. Only one act will show up depending which one triggered but they all start the same.
@@ -624,12 +624,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 	minut -= 35
 	train_event = 1
 	gs 'stat'
-    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
 	'You board the train and walk past several of the private compartments on your way to the general seating on the car you are on.'
 	act 'You walk past the private compartments':
 		*clr
 		cla
-	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
 		'After the first stop you are walking past the open door of one of the private compartments, you hear a man''s voice call out to you: "Hello there, young lady! Would you care to join me?"'
 		'You stop and look inside, finding a clean-shaved man sitting there with a select few wrinkles that accentuate his angular features; you estimate that he''s in his late thirties or early forties. The expensive suit he''s wearing and the hints of cologne tickling your nose speak volumes of his wealth and his self-confident, even smug expression tells the rest of the story. He motions for you to sit with him. "It''s alright, there''s plenty of room in here. Why don''t you come in and close the door?"'
 		*nl
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 			*clr
 			cla
 			minut += 35
-	        '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride2.jpg" ></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/ride2.jpg" ></center>'
 			'You shake your head indignantly. "Fuck you, I''m no whore! Who do you think you are?!" You don''t give him time to respond but simply walk away and take a seat in the general seating area.' 
 			*nl
 			'You spend some time talking to some of your fellow passengers and share the story with a couple of them. They seem shocked that a man would make such an offer to a nice young lady like you right on this train and speculate that only a crook would be insolent enough to try something like that.'
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 
 				act 'Second stop':
 					*clr & cla
-				    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/rideanal.jpg" ></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/rideanal.jpg" ></center>'
 					'Once he has you laying on your back, bedded on dusty seat cushions and your nether parts fully exposed to him and anybody who might enter, he moves up and slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass without warning. It enters surprisingly easily and even though you are unprepared, you manage to relax enough to avoid any pain. It certainly helps that he is taking it slow, giving your plenty of time to adjust to his cock while your mind is racing, running hot as it tries to comprehend how a simple train ride ended up with you having anal sex, on the train, with a complete stranger!' 
 					*nl
 					'Honestly, it makes relaxing difficult because your muscles are twitching around him in excitement and you can barely contain your moans. He goes a little deeper and a little faster, but your ass is too much for him and he can''t last much longer. You feel the first spurt of sperm deposited in your ass a second later and, as he continues to cum, he pulls out of you.'
@@ -686,20 +686,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 						money += 500
 						gs 'cum_call','anus',$boy, 0,'','',20
 						gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy, 0,'','',20
-	                    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/ridecum.jpg" ></center>'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/ridecum.jpg" ></center>'
 						'As he does, several spurts shoot all over your ass and you can feel more of his spunk leaking out of your gaping anus. With a final grunt and spurt, he sits down opposite you, giving you and the state he left you in an appreciative look before he puts his cock away and hands you the 500<b>₽</b>... And then, he simply pulls out a newspaper and starts reading it. The switch from ravaging your asshole to perusal is so sudden that you are confused for a moment. You soon realize, however, that he is really no longer paying attention to you and you are laying around with cum dripping out of your backdoor, so you quickly get up and get yourself cleaned up.'
 						
 						act 'Your stop':
 							*clr & cla
-						    '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/train/pantyup.mp4" ></video></center>'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/train/pantyup.mp4" ></video></center>'
 							'Once you are dressed again and have removed most off the sperm, you sit down and quietly study the man you had sex with who seems content to spend the rest of the ride in silence and feigned obliviousness to your presence. After a bit, you pull out your phone and amuse yourself with it until the train finally reaches your destination. "Well, this is my stop", you tell him.'
-						    *nl
-						    'He looks up from his newspaper for the first time since he came. "I wish you a safe trip. And thank you for making this ride a bit less dull." he adds with a wink before returning to the headlines. You leave the compartment, the strange and naughty events fresh on your mind, and make your way to the closest exit.'
-						    gs 'arousal', 'end'
-						    gs 'stat'
+							*nl
+							'He looks up from his newspaper for the first time since he came. "I wish you a safe trip. And thank you for making this ride a bit less dull." he adds with a wink before returning to the headlines. You leave the compartment, the strange and naughty events fresh on your mind, and make your way to the closest exit.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
 
 							act 'Get off the train':gt $loc, $metka
-				        end
+						end
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1014,7 +1014,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 				'Well, that, and the hard cock you''re sucking with passion.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unknown'
 				gs 'stat'
-
+				
+				act '"Um... No"':
+					*clr
+					cla
+					'Even as he''s pulling down his pants, you are already shaking your head and laughing. "Do you think I''m a slut or something? I''m not gonna do something with you after a couple of compliments, especially not out in the open like this!" You turn and walk off, calling over your shoulder: "I thought you were a nice guy, but I guess I was wrong."' 
+					*nl
+					'The gopnik seems anything but pleased by your response. He tries to pull his pants back up and yells: "You fucking tease! Get back here!" You don''t; on the contrary, you exploit his current distraction with his pants to run back down the stairs to the platform and into the station before he can follow.'
+					act 'Return to the station': gt $loc, $metka
+				end
 				act 'Let him fuck you':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/gopnikvag.jpg" ></center>'

+ 54 - 51
locations/vokzalGin.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 	end
 
-
 	'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
 	'The center of the station building is a large waiting room, where passengers can wait until their train arrives. Opposite to that you can find the <a href="exec:dynamic $din_vokzalg_kabinet">station manager''s office</a>, and the <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''vokmantoiev'', ''start''">toilets</a> on the other end of the building.'
@@ -54,64 +53,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if vokzalVork >= 1:
 		if cleZalDay ! daystart or cleMTDay ! daystart or cleWTDay ! daystart:
-			act 'Work':
-				cla
-				if cleZalDay ! daystart:
-					act 'Mop the waiting room floor (1:00)':
-						cls
-						cleZalDay = daystart
-						gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 60, 'stren_exp', 'vital_exp'
-						pcs_mood -= 6
-						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You take some cleaning supplies from the maintenance closet, pour some water and soap into a bucket and wash the floor in the waiting room.'
-
-						act 'Continue':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
-					end
-				end
-
-				if cleMTDay ! daystart:
-					act 'Clean the men''s restroom (0:30)':
-						cls
-						cleMTDay = daystart
-						gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 30, 'stren_exp', 'vital_exp'
-						pcs_mood -= 6
-						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You take some cleaning supplies from the maintenance closet, pour some water and soap into a bucket and go to the men''s room.'
-						gs 'vokmantoiev', 'toilet_event'
-						!!'You began to wash the floor in the men''s room, and then began to scrub toilets.'
-
-						act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
-					end
-				end
-
-				if cleWTDay ! daystart:
-					act 'Clean the women''s restroom (0:30)':
-						cls
-						cleWTDay = daystart
-						gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 30, 'stren_exp', 'vital_exp'
-						pcs_mood -= 6
-						gs 'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You take some cleaning supplies from the maintenance closet, pour some water and soap into a bucket and scrub the toilets in the ladies'' room before mopping the floor.'
-						gs 'vokdinvera'
-
-						act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
-					end
-				end
-				act 'Return': gt 'vokzalGin'
-			end
+			act 'Work': gt 'vokzalGin', 'work'
 		elseif cleZarplatDay ! daystart:
 			act 'Collect your salary':
-				cls
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
 				cleZarplatDay = daystart
 				vokzalVork += 1
 				money += 130
 				minut += 3
 				gs 'stat'
 				'When you are done cleaning all the places you were told to clean, you go to the cashier and collect your well-earned salary.'
-
 				act 'Continue':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 			end
 		end
@@ -158,7 +111,57 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 		act 'Take a look at the clock':gt 'vokzalGin'
 	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
+	if cleZalDay ! daystart:
+		act 'Mop the waiting room floor (1:00)':
+			cls
+			cleZalDay = daystart
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 60, 'stren_exp', 'vital_exp'
+			pcs_mood -= 6
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You take some cleaning supplies from the maintenance closet, pour some water and soap into a bucket and wash the floor in the waiting room.'
+
+			act 'Continue':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin', 'work'
+		end
+	end
 
+	if cleMTDay ! daystart:
+		act 'Clean the men''s restroom (0:30)':
+			cls
+			cleMTDay = daystart
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 30, 'stren_exp', 'vital_exp'
+			pcs_mood -= 6
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You take some cleaning supplies from the maintenance closet, pour some water and soap into a bucket and go to the men''s room.'
+			gs 'vokmantoiev', 'toilet_event'
+			!!'You began to wash the floor in the men''s room, and then began to scrub toilets.'
+
+			act 'Leave restroom':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin', 'work'
+		end
+	end
+
+	if cleWTDay ! daystart:
+		act 'Clean the women''s restroom (0:30)':
+			cls
+			cleWTDay = daystart
+			gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 30, 'stren_exp', 'vital_exp'
+			pcs_mood -= 6
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/office/clener1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You take some cleaning supplies from the maintenance closet, pour some water and soap into a bucket and scrub the toilets in the ladies'' room before mopping the floor.'
+			gs 'vokdinvera'
+
+			act 'Leave restroom':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin', 'work'
+		end
+	end
+	act 'Return': gt 'vokzalGin'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ticket':

+ 1 - 1
locations/wardrobe.qsrc

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	act 'Choose a default outfit': gt 'wardrobe', 'default'
 
-	act 'View stored clothing': gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'store'
+	act 'Organise stored clothing': gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'store'
 
 	act 'Set image height for this view':
 		cla

+ 3 - 3
locations/ykuh.qsrc

@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ act 'Leave the room':minut += 1 & gt 'ymans'
 if edahot > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $edahotd">There''s a warm meal on the table.</a>'
 
 if pranik > 0:
-	'You have <<pranik>> cookies.'
-	act 'Drink tea with cookies (0:05)':
+	'You have <<pranik>> tea biscuits.'
+	act 'Drink tea with biscuits (0:05)':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ if pranik > 0:
 		frost = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/food.jpg"></center>'
-		'You drank tea with cookies, it''s sweet and very bad for your figure, but they''re so good you can''t resist.'
+		'You drank tea with tea biscuits, it''s sweet and very bad for your figure, but they''re so good you can''t resist.'
 
 		act 'Get up from the table':gt $curloc
 	end

+ 220 - 220
locations/young_shop.qsrc

@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<b><center><font size="4">Pussy-Cats</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/young_shop.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'The latest pop song by whoever is popular at the moment is playing through the small store. The interior is decorated in bright colors and bold designs, and the floor is packed with stands and tables displaying clothes with a more daring style. Looking around at all the advertisements with attractive yet emaciated models, you''ll either leave here seduced into buying something or with lower self-esteem.'
+	'The latest chart topping pop single is playing throughout the small store. The interior is decorated in bright colors and bold designs, and the floor is packed with stands and tables displaying clothes with a more daring style. Looking around at all the advertisements with attractive yet emaciated models, you''ll either leave here seduced into buying something or with lower self-esteem.'
 
 	if young_shop_work = 0 and young_shop_work1 = 0 and young_shop_work2 = 0:
 		*nl
-		'As you were entering, you noticed a for hire sign with a note scribbled onto it that reads, "<b>The Manager Mr. Sobulyagin works weekdays from 09:00 to 18:00; Applicants should speak to him weekdays BEFORE 14:30!</b>"'
+		'As you enter, you notice a for hire sign with a note scribbled on it that reads, "<b>The Manager Mr. Sobulyagin works weekdays from 09:00 to 18:00; Applicants should speak to him weekdays BEFORE 14:30!</b>"'
 		if hour >= 9 and (hour < 15 or (hour = 14 and minut <= 30)) and week < 6:
 			act 'Talk to the manager':
 				minut += 1
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	! if hour > 21 or hour < 8 or week >= 6:
 	if hour > 21 or hour < 8:
 		cla
-		'"Sorry, but the store is closed" the guard comes up to you. "Proceed to the exit."'
-		'<b><center><font color="red">The store is closing.</font></center></b>'
+		'"Sorry, but the store is closed," the guard comes up to you. "You''ll have to leave."'
+		'<b><center><font color="red">The store is closed.</font></center></b>'
 
 		act '<b>Get out of the shop</b>': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 	end
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	cla
-	'There is a black man in the shop looking at long underwear. He is asking for you to try it on, telling you that you have the same figure as his girlfriend.'
+	'There is a black man in the shop looking at long underwear. He wonders if you could model it for him, as you have the same body shape as his girlfriend.'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 		guy += 1
 		picrand = 19
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/sex/mag0.jpg"></center>'
-		'You begin to change right in front of him, showing off your body and otherwise demonstrating all your charms. Soon you seem to get what you want. After you once again spread your legs showing off your panties he kneels in front of you and presses his lips to your crotch'
+		'Not even bothering to head towards the changing booth, you instead just begin stripping here right in front of the man. His eyes drift over your body as you remove your clothing and begin to put on the underwear. When you''re finished, you begin posing. The man eagerly licks his lips and kneels before you, placing kisses on your stomach, before moving down to your crotch.'
 
 		act 'Entertain':gt 'sex', 'kuni'
 	end
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	cla
-	'A man enters the store and looks at women''s clothing, finally asking you to try it on, citing the fact that you have the same a figure as his girlfriend.'
+	'A man enters the store and begins looking at women''s clothing. A few moments later he asks if you would try on a particular piece, saying that you have the same figure as his girlfriend.'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/mag2.jpg"></center>'
-	'A young couple is in the store. They walk around the store for a long time and constantly look over to you, seemingly arguing. They come up to you and the girl, looking very embarrassed, tries to explain what they want from you. From what she tells you she is still a virgin and is not yet ready to have sex. But she also does not want to lose her guy, so he finds girls he wants to sleep with, and she oversees the process. She offers you 2000 rubles to have sex with her boyfriend with her in the room.'
+	'You notice a young couple wandering through the store. They appear to be arguing when they approach you. Somewhat embarassed, the young girl pulls you aside and explains her situation: She is a virgin and isn''t ready to start having sex. However, to keep from losing her boyfriend, she allows him to find other girls to sleep with as long as she is around to keep an eye on things. She offers you 2,000 rubles to have sex with her boyfriend with her in the room.'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 
@@ -230,14 +230,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/mag3.jpg"></center>'
-	'There are some guys walking down the hall, two of them white, the other two black. They seem to argue about something and soon come up to you to tell you about the reason. You are a little taken aback when you find out they were discussing whether you can tell the difference between sucking a black and a white cock while being blindfolded. The winners of the argument will fuck you, if you agree to help them find it out.'
+	'There are four guys walking into the store: two white, two black. They seem to be arguing about something when they approach you. You ask if you can help them and one of them replies, "We certainly hope so!" The four men have a bet over whether a blindfolded girl could tell the difference between a black cock and a white cock using only her mouth. You stare at the four and ask if they''re serious. Then you ask how you could possible help with this before realizing they want to volunteer you for this test. They tell you the two who are right will have sex with you, on the spot.'
 
 	act 'Send them away':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 
 	act 'Ask what else you''ll get':
 		cla
 		picrand = 15
-		'You ask what else you will get for this and the guys laugh and say that you will get an unforgettable feeling.'
+		'You ask what else you will get for this and the guys laugh and say a threesome you''ll never forget.'
 
 		act 'Send them':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 			$boy[1] = $npclastgenerated
 			guy += 2
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/sex/mag4.jpg"></center>'
-			'You take the guys to the back room where they unzip their pants and pull out their members. You are blindfolded and you start trying to find out the difference through the taste of their cocks, but you can not guess which is which. Since you can''t find it out the two white guys win the bet and the others leave the back room.'
+			'You take the guys into the back room, where they unzip their pants and pull out their members. You are blindfolded and start trying to find out the difference through the taste of their cocks, but you can not guess which is which. Since you can''t figure it out the two white guys win the bet and the others leave the back room.'
 
 			act 'Prize winners':xgt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		end
@@ -262,13 +262,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/mag5.jpg"></center>'
-	'For half of the day two guys in the store are always flirting with you and distracting you from your work. They pinch your ass, and after several unsuccessful attempts to send them away, you are quite desperate to get rid of them.'
+	'For half of the day, two guys in the store continuously flirt with you and distract you from your work. They pinch your ass, and after several unsuccessful attempts to send them away, you are quite desperate to get rid of them.'
 
 	act 'Call the manager':
 		cla
 		'The manager quickly shoves the guys out of the store.'
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 
 	act 'Give them what they want':
@@ -287,9 +287,9 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	cla
-	'Two Girls stopped by the store, and for about an hour you show them the goods while they are constantly touching you you as if by accident. When they bought all they wanted, one of them comes up to you and asks if she can kiss you on the lips. You''re a little dumbfounded by her forwardness:'
-	'"Of course, everything you wish"'
-	'"Well, then take off your panties. Like I said: I want to kiss your lips"'
+	'Two girls stop by the store and for about an hour you show them the goods while they are constantly touching you, as if by accident. When they''ve bought all they wanted, one of them comes up to you and asks if she can kiss you on the lips. You''re a little dumbfounded by her forwardness:'
+	'"O-of course, anything to keep our customers happy!"'
+	'"Well, then take off your panties. Like I said: I want to kiss your lips!"'
 
 	act 'Send them away':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/sex/mag8.jpg"></center>'
 				'All this time the second girl stood on the sidelines masturbating while watching you. When you are finished she sits in a chair and spreads her legs wide calling to you:'
-				'"Hey girls, you completely forgot about me"'
+				'"Hey girls, you completely forgot about me!"'
 				'The two of you go over to the girl, kneel down and begin to lick her pussy, your tongues constantly in contact. It feels like a strange kiss'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
@@ -344,10 +344,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Heavy day</font></center></b>'
-	'There are a lot of buyers today. You are exhausted. You are working hard, there is barely any time to make conversation. And it has only been two hours.'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Busy day</font></center></b>'
+	'There are a lot of customers today. You are exhausted. You are working hard, there is barely any time to make conversation. And it has only been two hours.'
 	'At the end of your shift the manager comes and asks you to stay for another hour.'
-	'"Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we have a problem: as you can see we are short on staff. Hang on for another hour, and I''ll give you a premium, you will not regret it!"'
+	'"Listen, <<$pcs_nickname>>, we have a problem: as you can see we are short on staff. Hang on for another hour, and I''ll give you a bonus, you won''t regret it!"'
 
 	act 'Stay for another hour':
 		cla
@@ -355,10 +355,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 		young_shop_bonus += 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'It seems that you have no choice. You can''t let down your co-workers.'
-		'After working for another hour, you are very tired, but the thought of a premium warms the soul.'
+		'After working for another hour, you are very tired, but the thought of a bonus makes you smile.'
 
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 
 	act 'I can''t':
@@ -367,29 +367,29 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 		'"If it was any other day, fine, but today I can''t.." you begin to make excuses, but the manager just shrugs:'
 		'"Okay, go home, we''ll manage without you. Just don''t count on a bonus for today!"'
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Cool time</font></center></b>'
-	'No buyer for the rest of your shift. You are chatting with Nastya. She normally talks about her sexual experiences and feelings.'
-	'Today she decides to relive her first sexual experience. This is her favorite subject, you even lost count of how many times she told you everything is in detail. One pleases, although she is not confused and always calls the same number of guys that she lost her virginity in the school locker room after phys-ed.'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Break time</font></center></b>'
+	'No customers for the rest of your shift. You are chatting with Nastya. She normally talks about her sexual experiences and feelings.'
+	'Today she decides to tell you of how she lost her virginity. She leaves very little to the imagination as she regales you with how she was gangbanged in the locker room after gym class one day. Though some time has passed, she still vividly remembers every detail, including the name of every boy involved.'
 
-	act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+	act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
+	'<b><center><font size="4">Katia</font></center></b>'
 
 	if katia = 1:
 		'Today Katia comes in again. She is a very shy girl and it is difficult to understand what''s on her mind. You told her several times to ask questions, when she comes in, looks through the clothes and buys nothing, but she always remains silent. You simply want to help.'
-		'It is a pity that the staff is forbidden to invite friends to shop and chat with them, because of this you have to stay away from Katie''s on. Although, if you could talk to her, you doubt that you would have a constructive dialogue. Usually all the questions she answers with:"I do not know, " "simple, " or "Well .." and silence.'
-		'You think that Kate is constantly looking at you, and when you look back, she smiles, blushes and turns away.'
+		'It''s a shame that store policy states that you are not allowed to fraternize with customers, as you''d like the opportunity to befriend Katia. Though even if you could speak with her, you''d doubt she say much. Even when asking if she simply needs help, she rarely mutters more than a few words like "I don''t know," "I''m not sure," "Well..." or just looks away in silence.'
+		'You get the feeling that Katia is constantly looking at you. Whenever you glance at her, she smiles, blushes then turns away.'
 
 	elseif katia = 0:
 		katia = 1
@@ -397,52 +397,52 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 		'You constantly get the impression that she is looking at you. When you raise your eyes, you can see how she starts to fuss, turns and glares at the nearest skirt beginning to examine it with interest.'
 		'You tried many times to offer assistance, but she constantly lowers her eyes, blushes and mutters under her breath:'
 		'"No, thanks, I''ll handle it." A minute after that, she just runs away from the store.'
-		'Actually, you do not even remember that she ever bought something. She just walks around forever looking at the clothes. She dresses simply, but not poor, so you don''t think that she can''t afford it and just comes to dream.'
-		'It is kind of strange ..'
+		'Actually, you don''t ever recall her buying anything. She just walks around for a long time looking at clothes. She dresses plainly but doesn''t look as though she''s poor, so she simply couldn''t be window shopping.'
+		'It is kind of strange...'
 	end
 
-	act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+	act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	*clr
 	cla
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Cum See Me After Work</font></center></b>'
 	'At the beginning of the shift the manager asks you to come to him after work, but doesn''t tell you the reason why.'
 	'You approach the door to his office and you are about to knock as you notice that the door is slightly ajar. You look inside.'
 
 	act 'Look inside':
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/sex/young_shop_quest10.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your eyes witness an obscene picture. Andrei Mikhailovich is facing the monitor, his pants pulled down, his member in his hands. The manager looks at the monitor and strokes his penis, which has a condom on. Almost immediately he throws back his head and starts to cum.'
-		'Filling a condom with sperm, he removes it wipes his member and throws the condom in the waste basket. Then he starts to pull up his pants and walks toward the door.'
-		'You''re trying not to make a sound, run back from the door and hide behind the boxes near the service exit. Andrei Mikhailovich, noticing nothing, passes you and goes into the toilet. You''re out of your hiding place and go to his office. Out of curiosity, you look at the monitor and some selected German porn. Then you look into the basket and see the lying in a condom full of sperm.'
+		'Your eyes witness an obscene picture. Andrew Sobulyagin is facing the monitor, his pants pulled down, his member in his hands. The manager looks at the monitor and strokes his penis, which has a condom on. Almost immediately he throws back his head and starts to cum.'
+		'Almost immediately, he pulls off the condom and throws it in the nearby trash can and wipes his cock off. Then he starts to pull up his pants and walk towards the door.'
+		'Trying to be as quiet as possible, you rush back from the door and hide behind some boxes near the service exit. Mr. Sobulyagin, noticing nothing, passes you and goes into the toilet. You''re out of your hiding place and go to his office. Out of curiosity, you look at the monitor and some selected German porn. Then you peak in the trash can and notice the used condom.'
 
 		act 'Wait for the manager':
 			cla
-			'With a smile, you step away from the manager''s table, thinking about what he''d do if he saw me at the monitor, with a condom in your hand.'
+			'With a smile, you step away from the manager''s table, thinking about what he''d do if he saw you looking at his computer.'
 			'A minute later, Andrew returns:'
-			'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice of you to come! Wait, I have something to sign for you." the manager goes to his desk and goes through the papers handing you a sheet.'
-			'Your are not really focused on the piece of paper so you don''t read it, sign it and return the document to the manager. After saying goodbye, you''re going back to the shop floor.'
+			'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice of you to come! I have something for you to sign," the manager goes to his desk and shuffles through some paperwork before handing you a form.'
+			'You''re not really focused on the piece of paper so you don''t read it before signing and returning the document to the manager. After saying goodbye, you''re go back to the shop floor.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		end
 
 		act 'Take the condom':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/condom_cum.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide to have a little fun, reach into the basket and take out the condom. It is slippery and still warm. You hold up the condom over your head and hold it against the light to see through it. Then suddenly you hear the door open to the soffice. Another half a second and he sees you with a condom in your hand! You do not even have an extra moment to hide your hands behind your back.'
+			'Deciding to have a bit of fun, you reach into the garbage can and pull out the used condom. It feels a bit slippery and is still warm. You hold the condom up to see through it out of curiosity. Suddenly you hear the door open, Mr. Mikhailovich is coming back! Oh shit, you have a split second to react, what do you do?!'
 
 			act 'In your mouth!':
 				cla
-				'You have no other options .. You barely have time to shove the condom in your mouth, as you see Andrei''s eyes:'
-				'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice of you to come! Wait, I have something to sign for you." the manager comes over to his desk and looks through his paper for a long time finally handing you a sheet.'
-				'You absolutely do not read it, sign it, then utter:'
-				'"G''bye" You leave the office and run straight to the locker room, take the condom out of your mouth, and throw it in the trash.'
-				'At least Andrei tied the condom up before throwing it away, otherwise you would have had a mouth full of sperm!'
+				'Not seeing any other options, you quickly pop the condom into your mouth. Andrew doesn''t seem to notice your distress and begins speaking to you.'
+				'"Ah, <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice of you to come! I have something for you to sign," the manager goes to his desk and shuffles through some paperwork before handing you a form.'
+				'You don''t read the form, you just sign the sheet and hope to leave his office as quickly as possible.'
+				'"G''bye," you mutter before leaving the office, straight to the locker room and spit the used condom out straight into the trash.'
+				'At least Mr. Sobulyagin tied the condom up before throwing it away, otherwise you would have had a mouth full of sperm!'
 
-				act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+				act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -452,53 +452,53 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 	*clr
 	cla
 	money += 1000
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">No Money, No Problems</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/young_shop_quest6.jpg"></center>'
 	'Into the store stumble three boozy women of indeterminate age, dressed in shabby clothes. All three of them are wearing torn stockings, colorful miniskirts and dirty T-shirts.'
-	'"Whores?" you ask Nastya.'
-	'"Oh, by the way, you see the one in the red skirt?" Nastya nods toward the ugliest of them. "She studied in a parallel class."'
-	'"She''s what, 18 years?? That''s horrific, what brings someone to such a depraved lifestyle" you declare accusingly.'
-	'"Depravity has nothing to do with it" says Nastya. "Some girls have had more guys than her, but they do not look like it! You have to look past their appearance."'
-	'The sluts, not even really looking at the clothes, choose the first few available things and carry them to the cashier. Nastya''s friend throws a pile of dirty crumpled <b>₽</b> on the counter and pulling a face says:'
-	'"Same procedure?" Without waiting for an answer, the girls take their belongings and leave the store.'
-	'"Here you go, you get half" Nastya gives you a pile of <b>₽</b>. "They are a little short changed. They don''t have to pay in full .."'
-
-	act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+	'Nastya smiles when she sees them. You give her an inquisitive look.'
+	'She points towards one of them, "You see her, the one in the red skirt? I know her from school."'
+	'"She barely looks 18 years old," you reply. "It''s quite depraved how whorish she looks for someone so young."'
+	'"Depravity has nothing to do with it, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Nastya scolds you. "Some girls have had more guys than her, but they do not look like it! You have to look past their appearance."'
+	'The group, not even really looking at the clothes, grab the first few available things and carry them to the register. Nastya''s friend throws a pile of dirty, crumpled <b>₽</b> on the counter.'
+	'"Thanks, Nastya!" she says as the girls take their belongings and leave the store.'
+	'"Here you go, you should get half," Nastya says as she hands you a handful of <b>₽</b>."They''re a bit short on funds, so... I give them a discount," she says, winking at you.'
+
+	act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	*clr
 	cla
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
-	'<<$pcs_nickname>>, look here - Nastya approaches you. "I''ve got a nice blouse, new, but with a slight defect. The manager is going to put it at a good discount <b>-70%</b>, maybe you want to take it yourself?"'
-	'The store is selling it for <b>2400</b> <b>₽</b> , but you can buy it for <b>720</b>.'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Employee Perks</font></center></b>'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, look here," Nastya approaches you. "I''ve got a nice, new blouse but it''s got a slight defect. The manager is just going to put it in the <b>70%</b> off discount bin, but maybe you want to take it yourself?"'
+	'The store is selling it for <b>2400₽</b> , but you can buy it for <b>720</b>.'
 
-	act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+	act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	*clr
 	cla
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Queer Eye for the Queer Guys</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/young_shop_quest5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Two guys with very glamorous appearance come into the shop to look at the transparent blouses. You often notice them in this neighborhood and they probably live somewhere near. They constantly go together and hold hands. You go to the guys and helpfully ask:'
+	'Two guys with a very glamorous appearance come into the shop to look at the transparent blouses. You often notice them in this neighborhood and they probably live somewhere close by. They are constantly together and even hold hands. You go to the guys and helpfully ask:'
 
 	act 'Can I help you?':
 		cla
 		'"Hello, I see you are picking out a gift for a girl, can I help?"'
 
 		if pcs_apprnc < 200:
-			'The guys appreciatively examines you from head to toe and one of them says with disdain:'
-			'"Get out, nasty, as i see it, you need the help!" He starts insultingly discussing your appearance with his boyfriend.'
-			'You go away from them looking for another customer.'
+			'The guys examine you from head to toe before one of them says with disdain:'
+			'"Honey, it looks like you need the help!" He starts insultingly discussing your appearance with his boyfriend.'
+			'You leave them to look for another, hopefully nicer, customer.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		else
-			'The guys appreciatively examines you from head to toe and one of them says with interest:'
-			'"What a pretty girl. Do not worry, my beauty, we can do it on our own!" The guy waves you goodbye, and takes his friend''s hand, admiringly discussing your appearance.'
-			'You go away from them and looking for another customer.'
+			'The guys examine you from head to toe before one of them says with interest:'
+			'"My, what a pretty girl! Don''t worry, beautiful, we can help ourselves!" The guy waves you goodbye, and takes his friend''s hand, admiringly discussing your appearance.'
+			'With a spring in your step, you look for another customer.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -506,25 +506,25 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
-	'A man of 40 years approaches you and asks for help in choosing clothes for his little daughter:'
-	'"Hello, my beauty, help me to choose a gift for my daughter''s birthday."'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Why Don''t You Have Seat Over There?</font></center></b>'
+	'A man who looks to be in his 40s approaches you.'
+	'"Hello, my lovely. Could you help me choose a gift for my daughter''s birthday?"'
 	'"Yes, of course. What''s her size?"'
-	'"I don''t even know .. Well, her figure is like yours, only with smaller breasts. Maybe you can try in on yourself?"'
-	'"In principle, I do not mind, so pick out some clothes. And how old is your daughter?" You are at work, but for some reason there are not many visitors today, so trying on clothes is a great way to waste away a few minutes.'
-	'"She is much younger than you, but is developing rapidly. She already looks like 16!" The buyer''s eyes sparkle as he begins to think about his daughter.'
+	'"I don''t even know... Well, her figure is like yours, only with smaller breasts. Maybe you can try some things on yourself?"'
+	'"Sure, I could help you." Normally you wouldn''t have time to help a customer to this extent but the store has been rather empty today, so you relish the opportunity to try on some new clothes, even if they''re not for you. "Let''s find some things your daughter might like. How old is she?"'
+	'"She''s fairly younger than yourself, but she''s developing quite rapidly," he says, somewhat hungrily. "Why, she already looks 16!"'
 
 	if pcs_intel >= 40:
-		'Suddenly it strikes you .. Yes, he''s a pedophile, he is choosing these clothes for his little daughter, with a smile on his face. Maybe I need to do something about it? ..'
+		'It suddenly occurs to you: this man may be a pedophile. This little girl could be in danger! Should you do something about it?'
 
-		act 'Tell on the pedophile':
+		act 'Report the man':
 			cla
-			'"I am happy to try on a few options for you. Wait here, and I''ll run to the store and immediately find all the blouses and skirts to fit and will try them on!" Trying not to show your nervousness, you leave the man behind to wait for you.'
-			'After describing everything to the manager, you''re going to the warehouse, quickly find several options of clothes and change into them in the booth. The pedophile lustfully watches as you stand in front of him in a skirt, when several policemen show up in the store.'
-			'The policemen don''t even think about listening to the men''s argument, pinning him down and leading him to a patrol car.'
-			'"Don''t say anything. We are going to send your daughter to workers care, where she will get help from psychologists." with these words the cops lead the guy from the store.'
+			'"I''m happy to help however I can. Wait right here while I go grab some clothes! I''ll be right back..." You try not to sound too nervous as you turn to leave and find the manager.'
+			'After explaining the situation to your manager, you return to the man to try on some outfits. You can feel him eyeing you up as you as emerge from the changing room in a new skirt. Suddenly a few police officers approach the man.'
+			'The man attempts to explain himself, but the police do not listen to him. Instead, they tackle him to the ground before handcuffing him.'
+			'As they lead the man away, they explain that the daughter will be moved into protective custody where she can receive any help she may need. They thank you for reporting the man.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -532,31 +532,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 		if pcs_intel >= 40:
 			cla
 			*clr
-			'Actually, it''s none of your business if his daughter is not happy with something. She herself may apply to the authorities, and you can not destroy the whole family, by sticking your nose where it doesn''t belong!'
+			'It''s really none of your business. You''re sure that his daughter is smart enough to take care of herself. Besides, what if you''re wrong about this man? Could you live with yourself if you destroyed a family over a baseless accusation?'
 		elseif pcs_intel < 40:
 			cla
 			*clr
 			pcs_horny += 30
 			gs 'stat'
-			'Suspecting nothing, you tell him that nowadays all children develop precociously.'
-			'You go to the warehouse and collect all the clothes that fit you, and go back to the changing rooms ..'
-			'The man constantly jokes and makes very nice compliments about your figure. Every time you''re hiding behind the curtain, he tries to peep how you dress up and continues to laugh it off when you notice it.'
-			'During the show, he tells you to spin on the spot, trying to see what is hidden under the skirt as well as looking at breasts which are barely covered by the blouse.'
-			'His actions seem a little suspicious to you, but you write it off on his jaunty mood and sociability.'
-			'Once you finally tried on all the skirts and blouses, he chooses to buy one and asks you to change once more.'
-			'"What a beauty, my daughter will look simply amazing. Listen .. do you want to make some money?"'
-			'"In what sense?" you ask surprised.'
-			'"You know, you''re so beautiful and sexy, I''m very excited looking at you! I will pay you 5000 rubles if you just show off this blouse and this skirt without panties and bra. You don''t have to do anything else."'
+			'"Oh! Well in that case I have some ideas! Lemme go grab some outfits and I''ll be right back!"'
+			'You rush off and grab some clothes, eager to show off and make a sale today. After you''ve gathered a few items, you return to the man and head towards the changing rooms.'
+			'The man constantly jokes and makes very nice compliments about your figure. Every time you''re hiding behind the curtain, he tries to peep on you dressing up and continues to laugh it off when you notice.'
+			'Each time you show off an outfit, the man asks you to spin around. You oblige each time, though you notice your panties and bra become visible while you do this.'
+			'His actions seem a little suspicious to you, but you write it off due to his jaunty mood and sociability.'
+			'Once you''ve finally tried on all the skirts and blouses, he chooses to buy one and asks you to change once more.'
+			'"What a beauty, my daughter will look simply amazing. Listen... would you like to make some money?"'
+			'"What do you mean?" you ask surprised.'
+			'"You know, you''re so beautiful and sexy, I''m very excited looking at you! I will pay you 5,000 rubles if you just show off this blouse and this skirt... without your bra and panties. You don''t have to do anything else."'
 		end
 
 		act 'Refuse':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/young_shop_quest4.jpg"></center>'
-			'"What are you, crazy?! I''m not going to do that!" You refuse his blatant bid. You''re not going to do that. "Don''t even try to persuade me, I just won''t do it! Go offer your daughter to do that."'
-			'"Fine. Just let me buy the clothes then." The buyer goes out of the booth and waits until you change back, and give him the clothes. He calmly pays and leaves the store. You look after him, disgusted.'
+			'"What are you, crazy?! I''m not going to do that!" You refuse his outrageous request. You''re not going to do that. "Don''t even try to persuade me, I just won''t do it! Find someone else for that!"'
+			'"Fine. Just let me buy the clothes then." The man leaves the booth and waits until you change back, where you give him the clothes. He calmly pays and leaves the store. You look at him, disgusted.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		end
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 80:
@@ -572,15 +572,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 			*clr
 			money += 5000
 			pcs_horny += 10
-			msg 'Excited the buyer pulls his wallet out of his pocket and hands you <b>5000</b> <b>₽</b>'
+			msg 'Excitedly the man pulls out his wallet and hands you <b>5,000₽</b>.'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"Okay, but I won''t do anything more!" 5, 000 <b>₽</b> - a great motivator and it would be foolish to ignore such a sum.'
-			if pcs_horny >= 100:'Yes, and your body just craves to have someone look at it.'
+			'"Okay, but I won''t do anything more!" <b>5,000₽</b> is a great motivator and it would be foolish to ignore such a sum of money.'
+			if pcs_horny >= 100:'Besides, you kind of want to show off your body a bit.'
 			'You unfasten and put away your bra baring your breasts to a stranger.'
 			'You put on a little blouse to cover your bare chest and thrust your hand under the skirt to slowly remove your panties.'
 			'Licking your lips, you take the edges of the mini skirt and little by little, begin to lift the edges up. Meanwhile the man unzips his fly and his already hardened member pops out of his pants.'
-			'You are flushed with excitement, standing in the locker room without panties and bra, lifting your skirt so that your pussy is perfectly visible, and look at how the man is jerking his cock. You do not have time to recover as the man begins to wheeze, and you realize that he is about to finish.'
-			'Suddenly he takes a step forward and lays his hand on your shoulder. You are surprised by his strength as he pushes you down on your knees. You try to argue against this behavior, citing your agreement, but you realize that there is no time to do it. The Men gives a muffled moan and you understand that his cock is about to explode.'
+			'You are flushed with excitement, standing in the changing room without your bra and panties, lifting your skirt so that your pussy is perfectly visible, and look at how the man is jerking his cock. You do not have time to recover as the man begins to wheeze, and you realize that he is about to finish.'
+			'Suddenly he takes a step forward and lays his hand on your shoulder. You are surprised by his strength as he pushes you down on your knees. You try to argue, but you realize that there is no time. The man gives a muffled moan and you realize he''s going to cum.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -601,11 +601,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'There is just so much on you! You start to collect sperm in your hands, and lick it of your fingers with great pleasure.'
 					'The smell and taste is driving you crazy, your legs give way and you feel your underbelly beginning to shudder. You''re coming.'
-					'Recovering, you see the man standing over you smiling:'
-					'"Thank you, beautiful! Let''s take these clothes off, I want to buy them" You begin to tell him, that you need to bring out new ones, or at least clean the dirty ones, but the buyer interrupts you. "No, they do not need to be cleaned, these tracks will remind me of the wonderful moments with you."'
-					'You undress and change back to your clothes, then quickly run to the locker room. Your shift is not over yet, and before leaving you should clean yourself up.'
+					'Recovering, you see the man standing over you smiling.'
+					'"Thank you, beautiful! Let''s take these clothes off, I want to buy them" You begin to tell him that you should bring out new ones, or at least clean the dirty ones, but he interrupts you. "No, they do not need to be cleaned, these stains will remind me of this wonderful moment with you."'
+					'You undress and change back to your clothes, then quickly run to the restroom. Your shift is not over yet, and you should clean yourself up before returning to work.'
 
-					act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+					act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 				else
 					'When the sperm stops hitting you in the face, you open your eyes and see a big appetizing dick before you. It is covered in sperm, emanating a strong masculine fragrance.'
 
@@ -616,137 +616,137 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 						'You can''t hold back and take the cock in your mouth. It turns out that he was not completely drained and you feel his last flinches as your mouth gets filled with sperm. You clean off his member before he takes it out of your mouth.'
 					end
 
-					'You look up to the buyer and smile at him.'
-					'"Thank you, beautiful! Let''s take these clothes off, I want to buy them" You begin to tell him, that you need to bring out new ones, or at least clean the dirty ones, but the buyer interrupts you. "No, they do not need to be cleaned, these tracks will remind me of the wonderful moments with you."'
-					'You undress and change back to your clothes, then quickly run to the locker room. Your shift is not over yet, and before leaving you should clean yourself up'
+					'You look up to the man and smile at him.'
+					'"Thank you, beautiful! Let''s take these clothes off, I want to buy them" You begin to tell him that you should bring out new ones, or at least clean the dirty ones, but he interrupts you. "No, they do not need to be cleaned, these stains will remind me of this wonderful moment with you."'
+					'You undress and change back to your clothes, then quickly run to the restroom. Your shift is not over yet, and you should clean yourself up before returning to work.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					
-					act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+					act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
-	'You go to the changing booths and collect clothes that another buyer left after fitting. Accidentally you drop a mini-skirt and as you pick it up, you notice a very inconspicuous thing on the plinth. You immediatly recognize it:'
-	'"Yes, it''s a hidden camera" the thought pierces you like an arrow. You can not think of a reason why you would find something like this in the store!'
-	'What should you do now? You should probably tell the manager, he will understand, or .. What if he already knows? No, that''s ridiculous.'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">I Always Feel Like Somebody''s Watching Me</font></center></b>'
+	'You go to the changing booths and collect clothes that another buyer left after fitting. You accidentally drop a mini-skirt and as you pick it up, you notice a very inconspicuous thing on the plinth. You immediately recognize it.'
+	'"Yes, it''s a hidden camera," the thought pierces you like an arrow. You can not think of a reason why you would find something like this in the store!'
+	'What should you do now? You should probably tell the manager, he will understand, or... What if he already knows? No, that''s ridiculous.'
 
 	act 'Tell the manager about the camcorder':
 		cla
-		'You''re storming into the manager''s office without knocking and start chattering about what happened.'
-		'"Hey, hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, calm down! What happened??"'
-		'"There! There! In the booth!" with trembling hands you point in the direction of the changing booths. "Faster!"'
-		'The Manager reluctantly rises from his chair and goes with you. Going into the booth, he squats down and pulls on the camera glued to the plinth.'
-		'"It is necessary to call.." you begin to prompt the manager, but he interrupts you mid-sentence:'
-		'"Wait, we should think about this" the manager stands and twirls the camera in his hands. "If we call the cops, here is what will happen.. the shop gets closed, the place gets searched, and we can be fined or something worse. Let''s not do anything rash."'
-		'"Let''s just do this: You calm down and go home, and I will inspect everything here. This way we won''t get any problems! It is good that you were vigilant and found it, but there is no need to tell anyone, okay?"'
-		'"Yes, of course - your shift is coming to an end anyway and you decide to just go home and forget about everything."'
+		'You storm into the manager''s office without knocking and start chattering about what happened.'
+		'"Hey, hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>, calm down! What happened?"'
+		'"There! There! In the booth!" with trembling hands you point in the direction of the changing booths. "Hurry!"'
+		'The manager reluctantly rises from his chair and goes with you. Going into the booth, he squats down and pulls on the camera glued to the plinth.'
+		'"We should call th-" you begin to prompt the manager, but he interrupts you mid-sentence.'
+		'"Wait, we should think about this" the manager stands and twirls the camera in his hands. "If we call the cops, here is what will happen... the shop gets closed, the place gets searched, and we can be fined or something worse. Let''s not do anything rash."'
+		'"Let''s just do this: You calm down and go home, and I will inspect everything here. This way we won''t have any problems! It is good that you were vigilant and found it, but there is no need to tell anyone, okay?"'
+		'Yes, of course - your shift is coming to an end anyway and you decide to just go home and forget about everything.'
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Leave work':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 
 	act 'Keep silent':
 		cla
-		'You take a few deep breaths and force yourself to calm down, bringing your thoughts in order.'
-		'You did not install the camera, you are not responsible. You can always say that you didn''t know about it. You did not get dressesd in the booth. Generally, girls who did will not know there was a camera. Someone has probably seen them and was entertained. But you do not mind.'
+		'You take a few deep breaths and force yourself to calm down, gathering your thoughts.'
+		'You didn''t install this camera, so really, you''re not responsible. You can always say that you didn''t know about it. You haven''t changed in this booth, and most girls who have will likely never know there was a camera anyways.'
 		'You decide not to touch the camera and just keep working.'
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
-	'You go to the changing booths and find that someone left shirt. You remember that it belongs to a girl who just 5 minutes ago bought a blouse and went out of the store. Apparently, she decided she can no longer use the t-shirt and just left it in the booth.'
-	'You decide to wait until the end of the shift, as the shopper may return. An hour passes and your shift ends, but nobody comes for the shirt. You carefully look at it: it is an ordinary shirt, almost new, no holes, no dirt, nothing. Can you keep it yourself?'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">The Shirt Off Her Back</font></center></b>'
+	'You go to the changing booths and find that someone has left a shirt behind. You remember that it belongs to a girl who just 5 minutes ago bought a blouse and left the store. Apparently, she decided she no longer needs the t-shirt and just left it in the booth.'
+	'You decide to wait until the end of the shift, as the shopper may return. An hour passes and your shift ends, but nobody comes for the shirt. You carefully look at it: it is an ordinary shirt, almost new, no holes, fairly clean. Could you just keep it for yourself?'
 
 	act 'Keep it':
 		cla
-		'Before leaving, you take the shirt with you. The girl doesn''t seem to need it, and you are not rich enough to throw away almost new things.'
+		'Before leaving, you take the shirt with you. The girl didn''t seem to want it, and you''re not about to throw away fairly new clothing. Your mother raised you better than that!'
 
 		! WD: Uninitialised ~ 'wear_chest_have_'
 		if wear_chest_have_[6] = 0:
 			'no action'
 		else
-			'<b>- Although... you also already have the same one. Even with the amount of clothes you have you are still tempted .. Still, you already the exact same one. You don''t need it - You leave the T-shirt in the store.</b>'
+			'<b>However, it occurs to you that you already have this shirt. You decide to leave the shirt behind in the store. Perhaps it could be resold? Your boss will love you for that!</b>'
 		end
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 
-	act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+	act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">And you thought your job sucked...</font></center></b>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/sex/young_shop_quest2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Passing the changing room, you hear strange noises from there. Perhaps someone is just changing, but there seems to be something wrong.'
-	'Curious, you make sure that no one notices, look inside and see a rather strange picture:'
-	'Whether a couple couldn''t make it home, whether they have nowhere else to go, whether they are just perverts. It is difficult to say, and now it doesn''t matter.'
-	'You watch as the cute girl very skillfully sucks a man''s penis and don''t know how to react. You can''t continue watching them. What will they think if they see an employee spying on customers in the changing booth?'
+	'While passing by the changing room, you hear strange noises from within. Perhaps someone is just changing, but there seems to be something wrong.'
+	'Curious, you make sure that no one is watching and look inside to see a rather erotic display.'
+	'A young looking woman is on her knees giving quite a skillful blowjob to an equally young looking man.'
+	'You shouldn''t be watching this! What would this couple do if they caught you spying? What would a customer say if they saw you peeking in the changing booth?'
 
 	if pcs_horny >= 80:
-		'But you are too excited to ignore what is happening or care about getting caught.'
+		'You want to turn away, but you''re far too excited to leave now or even care about being caught.'
 
 		act 'Eavesdrop':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			'You decide to stand next to the cabin and listen to the joy of the young couple. You listen as she licks and sucks his cock loudly. Suddenly she makes a strange sound indicating that something has changed.'
+			'You decide to stand next to the cabin and listen to the young couple. You listen as she licks and sucks his cock loudly. Suddenly she makes a strange sound indicating that something has changed.'
 			'"Did they stop?" You look down again into the booth and see what''s wrong. The guy is holding the girl''s hair and pulls her mouth firmly onto his penis. You have never seen a girl getting fucked in the throat with such force.'
-			'"She could suffocate." the thought suddenly crosses your mind. But instead of easing up or helping the girl her boyfriend runs a hand over her hardened nipples and down to her skirt.'
-			'Then you hear the guy starting to moan, and the girl coughing plaintively tells him:'
-			'"Come on, come on, cum on my face, yes .." You once again look into the booth.'
+			'"She could suffocate," you think. But instead of easing up or helping the girl, her boyfriend runs a hand over her hardened nipples and down to her skirt.'
+			'Then you hear the guy starting to moan, he must be close.'
+			'The girl, coughing, pleads him on, "Yes, yes, cum on my face, yes..."'
 
 			act 'Look into the booth':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/sex/young_shop_quest3.jpg"></center>'
 				'The girl''s whole face is covered with a thick layer of sperm.'
-				'The Guy again puts his cock into her mouth to let her clean off his semen. Then he quietly begins to put on pants, watching the girl as she uses her hands to collect sperm from her face putting it into her mouth.'
-				'You decide to get away from the booth, so you won''t get caught. A minute later, the pair shows up and you can see that she didn''t wipe her face very thoroughly as traces of sperm are still visible to the naked eye.'
-				'As such, the two of them go out of the store into the street.'
+				'The guy puts his cock back into her mouth to let her clean off his cum. Then he quietly begins to pull up on his pants, watching the girl as she uses her hands to collect sperm from her face and licks her fingers clean.'
+				'You decide to get away from the booth, so you won''t get caught. A minute later, the pair shows up and you see that she didn''t wipe her face very thoroughly as traces of sperm are still visible to the naked eye.'
+				'You decide to stay quiet as the two of them leave the store.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+				act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif pcs_horny < 80:
 		act 'Ignore':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			'This is clearly not your business, and snooping around and eavesdropping is indecent. Of course, you could get rid of them, but you do not want to deprive these young people of good memories and spoil their fun.'
+			'This is clearly none of your business, plus snooping and eavesdropping is indecent. Of course, you could get rid of them, but you do not want to spoil their fun.'
 			'You go away from the booth and start folding scattered blouses. After a few minutes, the couple comes out of the booth and you see traces of semen on the girl''s face. All your efforts to stop yourself from smiling fail.'
-			'Soon she and her boyfriend go out of the store into the street.'
+			'Soon she and her boyfriend quietly leave the store.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		end
 
 		act 'Disperse':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			'"Ahem, uh .." You cough. "Are you all right, can I help?"'
-			'"Yeah, you can come in and help" you hear the muffled voice of the guy. "Ouch, that hurts."'
-			'The Girl takes his member out of her mouth and hits the guy in the balls, loudly saying:'
-			'"We are just finishing and will leave soon."'
-			'A minute later the pair comes out of the booth and the girl gives me a shy smile and blushes a little, taking her boyfriend out of the store.'
+			'"Ahem, uh..." You cough. "Are you all right, can I help?"'
+			'"Yeah, you can come in and help," you hear the muffled voice of the guy. "Ouch, that hurts."'
+			'You can only imagine that the girl wasn''t very appreciative of that comment.'
+			'You hear a somewhat hoarse, yet feminine voice reply, "We''re just finishing and will leave soon."'
+			'A minute later the pair comes out of the booth and the girl gives you a shy smile and blushes a little, taking her boyfriend out of the store.'
 
-			act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+			act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -754,28 +754,28 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
-	'You just finished hanging up cute blouses from the new collection, as an old lady comes up to you. She looks 70 years old and begins a long, dull monologue about herself, her work, the contemporary fashion and tradition.'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Those were the days</font></center></b>'
+	'You''ve just finished hanging up some cute blouses from the new collection, when an older lady comes up to you. She looks to be in her 70s and begins a long, dull monologue about herself, her work, modern fashion and the old days.'
 	'The grandmother starts complaining about modern society and its flaws: Deception, corruption, drugs, sex and everything in general. Then she remembers the good old times when the grass was greener and women married as virgins at the age of 18:'
-	'"And now it has come to this .. In my granddaughter''s classroom there are no virgins left. She is a 7th grade student and they have 15 girls in the classroom! How can this be? .. And one girl, Lena, already had three abortions. What has this world come to?" the grandmother complains for 20 minutes and you can not manage to calm her down and show her the door of the store.'
-	'"Here''s my granddaughter. Did you also go to the same school? Is that why you dress this way? Are you not ashamed?"'
+	'"And now it has come to this... In my granddaughter''s classroom there are no virgins left. She is a 7th grade student and they have 15 girls in the classroom! How can this be? ...and one girl, Lena, already had three abortions. What has this world come to?" the grandmother complains for 20 minutes and you can not manage to calm her down and show her the exit.'
+	'"Here''s my granddaughter," she shows you a picture of a younger girl. "Did you also go to the same school? Is that why you dress this way? Are you not ashamed?"'
 
-	act 'Shame on you, grandmother!':
+	act 'Shame on you, grandma!':
 		cla
-		'"And why should I be ashamed of that? I did nothing wrong or depraved! They are just beautiful clothes. It''s todays fashion, we don''t live in Stalin''s time anymore."'
+		'"And why should I be ashamed of that? I''ve done nothing wrong or depraved! These are just beautiful clothes. This is just today''s fashion, we don''t live in Stalin''s time anymore."'
 		'"Yeah, during Comrade Stalin''s time this would not have happened!" She begins a new lecture about old times, honesty, integrity and correctness.'
 		'The old lady keeps ranting for a long time, but finally gets bored and begins to waddle out the door, cursing at the shop and the modern youth.'
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 
-	act 'It is part of your job':
+	act 'It''s just part of your job':
 		cla
-		'"Of course it is a shame, but I can not do different. I need to work and earn money, so I can eat. I also need to take care of my sister" you explain for a long time, talking about your need to work and promise the grandmother never to go out like this.'
-		'Finally the grandmother, satisfied with your answer, says a little prayer and gives you the sign of the cross, wishing you happiness and kindness.'
+		'"Of course it is a shame, but I can do nothing about it. I need to work to earn money. Without that, how could I survive?" you explain while promising the grandmother you never go out like this.'
+		'Finally she relents, satisfied with your answer, says a little prayer and gives you the sign of the cross, wishing you happiness and kindness.'
 		'You sigh with relief as the old lady goes to the exit.'
 
-		act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+		act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -783,16 +783,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	kira = 1
-	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Case for paper</font></center></b>'
-	'Twenty minutes before the end of the day a lady comes up to me with a glamorous looking girl. The Girl constantly turns and asks the woman:'
-	'"Mom, this is not necessary. Let''s not shop in this store .. Well, MAAM .."'
-	'"Stop acting up! All your classmates are wearing these sort of clothes. I do not want my girl to be bullied because she is not like them at all!" The Woman is full of determination and certainly won''t change her intentions.'
-	'"Hello, can I help you?" With a smile on your face you walk over to the mother and her daughter.'
-	'The Lady inspects you appraising your appearance, then turns her head to her daughter:'
-	'"You see, Kira, this girl is only a little older than you, and dressed .." She does not have time to finish the sentence, because Kira starts acting up again:'
-	'"Well, here where hardly anyone sees it! I can not be seen on the street in these clothes and without a bra. People will be able to see everything!"'
-	'"And why shouldn''t they?" The Woman throws up her hands in surprise, "You are grown up. It would be a shame not to show it! So, that''s enough, I''m tired."'
-	'She turns to you with a haughty smile and looks you in the eyes:'
+	'<b><center><font size="4"><font color="black">Parents just don''t understand</font></center></b>'
+	'Twenty minutes before the end of your shift, a lady approaches you with a glamorous looking girl beside her. The girl seems somewhat upset.'
+	'"Mom, this isn''t necessary. Let''s not shop in this store..."'
+	'"Stop acting up! Your classmates are wearing these styles of clothes. You want to be popular right? You don''t want the others to make fun of you, do you?"'
+	'"Hello, may I help you?" You ask with a smile on your face.'
+	'The mother inspects you, appraising your appearance before turning to her daughter.'
+	'"You see, Kira, this girl is only a little older than you, and dressed..." She does not have time to finish the sentence before Kira starts complaining again.'
+	'"Well, hardly anyone can see her here! I can''t wear this outside, especially without a bra; people will be able to see me!"'
+	'"And why shouldn''t they?" The woman throws up her hands in surprise, "You are growing up! It would be a shame not to show off your body! So, that''s enough, I''m tired of arguing with you."'
+	'The mother returns her gaze to you with a haughty smile.'
 	'"Girl, tell me, would clothes like yours fit my Kira?" she says with a little nod clearly just waiting for a positive response.'
 
 	act 'Yes, of course':
@@ -800,31 +800,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 		*clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/cats/young_shop_quest9.jpg"></center>'
 		'Throwing another look at the girl, you confidently reply:'
-		'"Naturally! All my friends buy their clothes only in this shop. We have a transparent blouse that will look great on your daughter! And in a suitable size. And yes, all our products are designed to be worn without a bra" You quickly find the right size and hand it over to a tearful Kira. "There is a booth over there, where you can try it on!"'
-		'The Woman grabs her daughter by the arm and takes her to the booth. 7 minutes later, they return.'
+		'"Yes, of course! All of my friends buy their clothes here. We have a transparent blouse that will look <i>amazing</i> on your daughter! And of course, all of our products are designed to be worn without a bra," you wink. You quickly find the right size and hand it over to a tearful Kira. "There is a booth over there, where you can try it on!"'
+		'The woman grabs her daughter by the arm and takes her to the booth. A few moments later, they return.'
 		'You are happy to announce, "As I thought, you look great in this blouse! By the way, this model has just arrived in our shop, it was created by a famous Italian designer."'
-		'"Yes, all of Kiras girlfriends will be jealous! And how much is this beauty?"'
-		'"Exclusive offer - only 2, 400."'
+		'"Yes, all of Kira''s girlfriends will be jealous! And how much is this beauty?"'
+		'"It''s only 2,400₽."'
 		'You notice that Kira is already resigned to her fate and decide to go further:'
 
-		act 'With a mini-skirt better':
+		act 'Suggest a mini-skirt':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'"You know, with a mini-skirt the outfit will be 100% more revealing. Look at this model, imagine how great it will look on your daughter!"'
-			'"What, do I have to really bare everything?" Kira sighs, not expecting a positive outcome for her.'
-			'The Woman takes the skirt in her hand, twirls it, inspects it for defects, and, with a confident expression, leads her daughter into the dressing room.'
-			'"Such skirts are worn without panties or am I mistaken?" the woman says looking back at you.'
-			'"It is highly desirable." you say, nodding.'
+			'"What, do I have to really bare everything?" Kira sighs, not expecting a positive outcome for herself.'
+			'The mother takes the skirt in her hand, twirls it, inspects it for defects, and with a confident expression, leads her daughter back towards the dressing room.'
+			'"Girls usually don''t wear underwear with these types of skirts, correct?" the woman asks, looking back at you.'
+			'"It is highly desirable," you say, nodding.'
 			'"Alright."'
-			'After a couple of minutes there is some scuffling behind the curtain. Apparently the girl started to act up again. Her mom, looking pretty scruffy and tired, comes out of the booth and asks for help:'
+			'After a few minutes, you can hear the two arguing again. The mother exits the booth.'
 			'"She always resists, can you do something about it?"'
-			'Looking at the woman''s face it becomes clear to you that, if her daughter won''t get rid of her underwear completely, they will simply leave and won''t buy anything, and you would lose the premium you could earn for this sale.'
-			'You go into the booth and see Kira, who, despite her tearful appearance, looks amazing in the new outfit. It is a pity that your words probably won''t have any impact, but if you remove her panties yourself, the seemingly shy Kira probably won''t even try to stop you.'
+			'Fearing that you might lose this sale if you don''t act now, you respond, "Of course, let me speak with her."'
+			'As you step into the booth, you can''t help but notice how <i>stunning</i> Kira appears in her new outfit, despite her rather tearful face. You just need to find a way to remove her panties. Maybe she can be persuaded?'
 
 			act 'Persuade Kira':
 				*clr
 				delact 'Persuade Kira'
-				'You decide to use your psychological skills and persuade Kira to take off her panties.'
+				'You decide to use your psychological skills and convince Kira to take off her panties.'
 
 				if pcs_intel >= 50:
 					cla
@@ -833,72 +833,72 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 					! WD: IMAGE NEEDED ~ '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pictures/characters/photo_dressed_[$vika]_13.src="></center>'
 					'Fortunately Kira is a very trusting girl, and your leadership qualities are apparent. You manage to convince her that there is no reason to be embarrassed and that the mother only wants the best for her.'
 					'Kira slowly puts her hands under her skirt and pulls off her panties.'
-					'"Do you feel the breeze blowing up your bottom? Imagine how nice it would be walking like this on the street."'
-					'"What if someone sees me like this?"'
-					'"Oh, don''t be greedy." you say, as you pat Kira on the shoulders. "Let them look and dream. All your friends will envy you and ask why, when you''re with them, all the guys only look at you."'
+					'"Doesn''t the air feel good on your pussy? Imagine how nice it would be walking like this outside."'
+					'She eyes you questioningly, "But won''t people stare?"'
+					'You gently run your fingers through Kira''s hair. "You know the saying, "<b>if you''ve got it, flaunt it,</b>" right? Well you, Kira, have <i>definitely</i> got <b>it</b>," you say to her with a wink and a smile.'
 					'You take Kira back from the locker room and give the panties to her mother.'
 					'"This is awkward, but can I leave them here, or let you throw them away? I want to wean my daughter from underwear, so that these purchases won''t be wasted. I will hide her other panties and bras from her until she gets used to it."'
 					'You decide to leave the panties with her and shove them in her purse. The mom is paying at the cash register and takes her daughter, all dressed up in her new blouse and mini-skirt, outside.'
-					'Kira looks back at you and smiles saying goodbye. She then leaves, flashing naked her booty with every breeze.'
+					'Kira looks back at you and smiles, saying goodbye. She then leaves, her bare bottom flashing with every breeze.'
 
-					act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+					act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 				else
-					'Unfortunately, despite your best efforts, you can not get her to talk and there is only one way out ..'
+					'Unfortunately, Kira refuses to listen to you. Looks like there''s only one other option left...'
 
 					act 'Remove her panties':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						$ImageNeededPlacholder
 						! WD: IMAGE NEEDED ~ '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pictures/characters/photo_dressed_[$vika]_13.png"></center>'
-						'"Well..." you quickly bend over and thrust your hands under her skirt. The girl could not even imagine that you would do that.'
-						'You lift her mini skirt and slowly pull off Kira''s panties. Her bare pussy is right before your eyes at a distance of 10 centimeters. You notice that the situation seems to make the girl very excited and her panties are a little wet. A delicate aroma hits your nose and you smile.'
-						'Kira''s panties are off, you show her the wet spot, and then hide the panties behind your back as the two of you get out of the booth.'
-						'"We managed to agree." smiling you pretend that you managed to persuade Kira to take off her panties on her own.'
-						'"Oh, how wonderful, wonderful." the woman examines her daughter and quickly decides to buy the blouse and mini-skirt.'
+						'Sighing loudly, you huff, "Looks like I have no choice." You grab Kira by the waist and spin her around, her back now facing you.'
+						'"W-what are you d-doing?" Kira tries to object, but she puts forth no resistance. Your hands move towards the bottom of her skirt, lifting it up slightly before slipping your fingers into the top of her panties. Through the mirror you see a slight blush cross her face. You slowly begin pulling down the girl''s underwear.'
+						'You hear her breath hitch, her face growing redder. Kira raises a leg, then the other as you remove her underwear. You notice a damp spot in the center of her panties, something comes over you and you move the panties to your face, smelling her wetness as she turns back to face you.'
+						'A few minutes later, you exit the booth. "I made her see our way," you gloat to her a mother, a coy smile etched on your face.'
+						'"Oh, how wonderful, wonderful," the woman examines her daughter and quickly decides to buy the blouse and mini-skirt.'
 						'Before leaving Kira thanks you, and you wink at her. You receive a very pleasant smile in return.'
 
-						act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+						act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'No, it is too early':
+	act 'No, she is too young':
 		cla
 		*clr
-		'You shrug, "Sorry, but it is too early for her to wear such clothes. Especially since she does not want it."'
-		'"How so? I''ve seen on TV that everyone has these these outfits!" the woman looks at you with disbelief. She obviously could not imagine that you would be arguing against the clothing worn by yourself especially since you should be selling them.'
-		'"The mother clearly wants her daughter to look like a whore." You smile as you look the lady in the eyes.'
+		'You shrug, "Sorry, but it''s too soon for her to wear such clothes. Maybe in a few more years she will understand."'
+		'"Really? I''ve seen on TV that young girls everywhere are wearing this style!" The woman looks at you with disbelief. She obviously couldn''t imagine that you would be arguing against a potential sale.'
+		'<i>"Mom clearly wants her daughter to look like a whore,"</i> you think to yourself as you look the woman in the eyes.'
 		act 'Dissuade the woman':
 			cla
 			delact 'Dissuade the woman'
-			'She shouldn''t to that! You decide to do everything in your power to dissuade the strange mother.'
+			'She can''t do that! You decide you need to dissuade this strange mother.'
 
 			if pcs_intel >= 60:
 				$ImageNeededPlacholder
 				! WD: IMAGE NEEDED ~ '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pictures/characters/photo_dressed_[$vika]_13.png"></center>'
-				'"You seriously think so, do you ..?" the glamorous lady ponders your words and decides to accept your advice. "Okay, let''s go to a regular store."'
-				'Before leaving Kira smiles at me and says:'
-				'"Thank you .. bye!" The girl waves at you and runs after her mother.'
+				'"You really think so?" The glamorous lady ponders for a moment before accepting your advice, "okay, we''ll go to a regular store."'
+				'You notice Kira beaming at you.'
+				'"Thank you so much. G''bye!" The girl waves at you and runs after her mother.'
 
-				act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+				act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 			else
 				$ImageNeededPlacholder
 				! WD: IMAGE NEEDED ~ '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pictures/characters/photo_dressed_[$vika]_13.png"></center>'
-				'"What are you saying? I see these outfits all the time on TV! Why am I talking to you at all?" The glamorous lady does not understand what you are trying to say. "Alright Kira, we go to another store."'
-				'Before leaving, the girl thanks you for trying to save her and runs away after her mother.'
+				'The mother refuses to listen to you. "Fine, if you won''t help us, I''ll find another clerk who will!"'
+				'Before leaving, the girl thanks you for trying to save her and runs back towards her mother.'
 
-				act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+				act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '19':
-	'A regular days work, nothing interesting happens and its now time to go home.'
+	'A regular day of work, nothing interesting happened and it''s now time to clock out.'
 
-	act 'Finish the job':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
+	act 'Finish your shift':gt 'young_shop', 'endwork'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'endwork':
@@ -906,9 +906,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'endwork':
 	cla
 
 	if week = 5 and young_shop_salary > 0:
-		act '<font color="green">Get a Salary</font>':gt 'andrey'
+		act '<font color="green">Collect your pay</font>':gt 'andrey'
 	else
-		act '<b>Get out of the shop</b>':
+		act '<b>Leave the store</b>':
 			minut += 3
 			gt 'torgcentr'
 		end