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Merge remote-tracking branch 'CroWke/master'

KevinSmarts 5 years ago
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      locations/MEastbed.qsrc
  2. 94 93
      locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

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locations/MEastbed.qsrc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestB':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/mis_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A well dressed women is very much enjoying giving a blowjob, she must be a switch.'
+		'A well dressed woman is very much enjoying giving a blowjob, she must be a sub.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -99,8 +99,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestC':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedmff.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you watch the man notices you and motions you over, obeying you walk over to him. He keeps fucking the woman on the bed he says."Straddle her face and look at me."'
-				'You do as you was told and the womans tongue plunges into your pussy at once as she starts tongue fucking you. The man pulls you forward and kisses you as he keeps fucking the other woman.'
+				'As you watch the man notices you and motions you over. Obeying you walk over to him. While he keeps fucking the woman on the bed he says. "Straddle her face and look at me."'
+				'You do as you are told and the woman''s tongue plunges into your pussy at once as she starts tongue fucking you. The man pulls you forward and kisses you as he keeps fucking the other woman.'
 				'You orgasm before he does and when he does, he does deep inside or her. Once finished they get dressed.'
 				
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestC':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_pun1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women has been tied and gagged with a body massager strapped to her pussy. Poor thing, hopefully someone will let her go soon.'
+		'A submissive woman has been tied and gagged with a body massager strapped to her pussy. Poor thing, hopefully someone will let her go soon.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedrand6.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women is tied up and gagged, her domme is fucking her with a strap-on.'
+		'A submissive woman is tied up and gagged, her domme is fucking her with a strap-on.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -177,17 +177,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/bedrand6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You keep watching them, at the rough treatment the sub occasionally cries out through the gag, which only seems to annoy her dom, which gives her a smack each time and tell her to take it like a good whore.'
-				'Noticing you the dom turns and pulls out of her sub. "You come over here and show my worthless sub how to take it like a good whore."'
+				'You keep watching them. At the rough treatment the sub occasionally cries out through the gag. Which only seems to annoy her domme, who gives her a smack each time and tell her to take it like a good whore.'
+				'Noticing you the domme turns and pulls out of her sub. "You come over here and show my worthless sub how to take it like a good whore."'
 
 				act 'Obey':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_ass += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/fffdomstrap.jpg"></center>'
-					'You undress and walk over to her as she unties her sub. As you get to the bed she grabs you and pushes you down face first on the bed. She crawls up on top of you and rubs the strap-on against your asshole.'
-					'With only the lube from her subs pussy juices she shoves it in your ass, sliding it balls deep in you, then she starts to furiously fuck you as she tells her sub this is how she should take it.'
-					'After a long time she beings to pant and sweat from her efforts in fucking you. Finally rolling off you to take a break, she looks at you. "You may go." You get up and get dressed leaving them still in the room.'
+					'You undress and walk over to her while she unties her sub. As you get to the bed she grabs you and pushes you down face first on the bed. She crawls up on top of you and rubs the strap-on against your asshole.'
+					'With only the lube from her subs pussy juices she shoves it in your ass, sliding it balls deep in you. Then she starts to furiously fuck you as she tells her sub this is how she should take it.'
+					'After a long time she beings to pant and sweat from her efforts in fucking you. Finally rolling off you to take a break, she looks at you. "You may go." You get up and get dressed leaving them in the room.'
 					
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_pun2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women appears to have broken the dress code and is being punished.'
+		'A submissive woman appears to have broken the dress code and is being punished.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guestD':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/suburb/bdsm_club/sex/maid_b7.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'A submissive women is having her face fucked by a dom in a suit.'
+		'A submissive woman is having her face fucked by a dom in a suit.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'

+ 94 - 93
locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

@@ -177,13 +177,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 			elseif pcs_dancero < 50:
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"You did okay..."</i></font> nods Tamara Mikhailovna. <font color="maroon"><i>"But you still need to improve."</i></font>'
 			else
-				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Very nice, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"</i></font> nods Tamara Mikhailovna approvingly. <font color="maroon"><i>"One less thing you need to teach."</i></font>'
+				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Very nice, <<$pcs_nickname>>!"</i></font> nods Tamara Mikhailovna approvingly. <font color="maroon"><i>"One less thing you need to learn."</i></font>'
 			end
 
 			act 'Hmm...':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning10.jpg"></center>'
-				'Tamara stands up from the table, pushing her cup, which she only had taken a sip of:'
+				'Tamara stands up from the table, putting down her cup, which she had only taken a sip of:'
 				'<font color="maroon"><i>"Let''s take a trip to the city, my dear, so we can get going. Consider this the beginning of your studies."</i></font>'
 
 				if pcs_apprnc < 15: 
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 				end
 
 				if pcs_apprnc >= 30 and pcs_apprnc < 50: 
-					'<font color="maroon"><i>"You''re quite good looking, and with such appearance there will be many suitors asking for your hand in marriage. You might even marry some average sugar daddy, being used by them for some years, until he finds someone prettier.</i></font>'
+					'<font color="maroon"><i>"You''re quite good looking, and with such an appearance there will be many suitors asking for your hand in marriage. You might even marry some average sugar daddy, being used by them for some years, until he finds someone prettier.</i></font>'
 				end
 
 				if pcs_apprnc >= 50: 
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 
 	act 'Go shopping':
 		cla
-		'Under the watchful eye of your mentor, she tells you can buy two outfits, one from Pussy-Cats and the other one from the expensive boutique.'
+		'Under the watchful eye of your mentor, she says you can buy two outfits, one from Pussy-Cats and the other one from the expensive boutique.'
 
 		newdress_count = 0
 		newdress_loop = 0
@@ -260,14 +260,14 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 		
 		act 'Buy the clothes':
 			cla
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"This will do, it''s the first time after all."</i></font> she says, approaching the counter, pulling out the purse.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"This will do, it''s the first time after all."</i></font> she says, approaching the counter, pulling out her purse.'
 			'<font color="navy"><i>"But it''s so expensive! I can''t..."</i></font> you are taken aback by such generosity.'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear! Don''t see it as a gift but as an investment in a long-term project."</i></font><br>'
 
 			act 'Enter the beauty salon':
 				cla
 				*clr
-				'Looks like Tamara Mikhailovna is well-known in both of the shops. As soon as she entered, the most experienced salesperson dropped everything, walked over to you and started picking out clothes for you.<br>'
+				'Looks like Tamara Mikhailovna is well-known in both of the shops. As soon as she entered, the most experienced salesperson dropped everything, walked over to you and started picking out clothes.<br>'
 
 				tan = 10
 				if pcs_lashes < 2:pcs_lashes = 2
@@ -301,8 +301,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 					if newdress_id = 0 and newdress_loop <= 38:jump 'looptamaraschool'
 					
 					if newdress_id > 0:
-						'<font color="navy"><i>"I picked a real sexy outfit, it''s so sexy that the boys will be spontaneously cumming in their pants."</i></font> you said smiling.'
-						'<font color="maroon"><i>"Good! Now remember it’’s only to be used in school. Now lets start training how you walk. You can start by getting out of my car and take a walk home."</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna hands you two thousand rubles. <font color="maroon"><i> "It''s important that you take care of your health so take the money and head over to the clinic and get an health exam. I''ll be waiting for you by the restaurant by 9 o''clock, don''t be late."</i></font>'
+						'<font color="navy"><i>"I picked a real sexy outfit, it''s so sexy that the boys will spontaneously be cumming in their pants."</i></font> you said smiling.'
+						'<font color="maroon"><i>"Good! Now remember it’’s only to be used in school. Now lets start training you how to walk elegantly. You can start by getting out of my car and take a walk home."</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna hands you two thousand rubles. <font color="maroon"><i> "It''s important that you take care of your health so take the money and head over to the clinic and get an health exam. I''ll be waiting for you by the restaurant at 9 o''clock, don''t be late."</i></font>'
 						
 						killvar 'newdress_id'
 						killvar 'newdress_count'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 						minut += 20
 						gs 'stat'
 						'Tamara Mikhailovna reaches into the purse and hands you two thousand rubles.'
-						'<font color="maroon"><i>"I need to buy yourself a decent looking school uniform. And it''s only attended to be worn in school. I don''t want to see you wearying it somewhere else."</i></font>'
+						'<font color="maroon"><i>"You need to buy yourself a decent looking school uniform. And it''s only intended to be worn in school. I don''t want to see you wearying it somewhere else."</i></font>'
 						'<font color="navy"><i>"Where should I buy it?" you ask her.</i></font>'
 						'Tamara Mikhailovna nods towards a sign. Looking up you see the luminous sign showing "Sex Shop".'
 						'<font color="maroon"><i>"I''ll wait for you in the car."</i></font>'
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 								mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke10.jpg"></center>'
 								'As you''re about to leave she stops you in the doorway...'
-								'<font color="maroon"><i>"I hope you were paying attention to what I said today,"</i></font> and in a second the image of a smiling middle-aged housewife turns into the ice queen. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can''t barely wait until our next lesson!</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna warmly smiles at you while she says goodbye.'
+								'<font color="maroon"><i>"I hope you were paying attention to what I said today,"</i></font> and in a second the image of a smiling middle-aged housewife turns into the ice queen. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can barely wait until our next lesson!</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna adds warmly as she says goodbye.'
 								'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh yeah, I forgot one thing. I called your mother and told her that the girls and I are enjoying your company so we agreed that you would be staying with us for the next two weeks. I want to keep you on a tight leash."<font color="maroon"><i>'
 
 								act 'Move away': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party0':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party0.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear, my company is having an office party tonight, would you like to accompany me? I would like to introduce you to some people. If you do decide to tag along, you need to make yourself presentable. As soon as we enter I want the whole room to look in awe at you."</i></font>'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear, my company is having an office party tonight, would you like to accompany me? I would like to introduce you to some people. If you do decide to tag along, you need to make yourself presentable. As soon as we enter I want the whole room to look at you in awe."</i></font>'
 
 	act 'Refuse':
 		cla
@@ -467,8 +467,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'party0':
 		! gotta get ready for work
 		mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 41
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"I would love to accompany you to the party, aunt Tamara! I''ll go and get ready right away."</i></font>'
-'Tamara Mikhailovna looks mischievously at you, but strictly instructs you to...'
-'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wear your formal dress and put on normal makeup," she smiles. "Don''t overdo the makeup you should look normal, not too little, but don''t put on a ton of makeup either, you''re not a soldier, putting on war paint before battle! Be ready by 18 o''clock. I can''t be bothered waiting for you, I''ll be leaving by that time. Fail to show up and there might be some consequences..."</i></font>'
+		'Tamara Mikhailovna looks mischievously at you, but strictly instructs you to...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wear your formal dress and put on normal makeup," she smiles. "Don''t overdo the makeup. You should look normal. Not too little, but don''t put on a ton of makeup either. You''re not a soldier, putting on war paint before battle! Be ready by 18 o''clock. I can''t be bothered waiting for you. I''ll leave without you if you''re not on time and there might be some consequences..."</i></font>'
 
 		act 'Move away': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	end
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'check_look':
 		! if long hair is desired styling
 		if shorthair = 0 and pcs_hairbsh = 0:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party0.jpg"></center>'
-			'Tamara Mikhailovna examines you and shake his head in disproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
+			'Tamara Mikhailovna examines you and shakes her head in dissaproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
 
 			act 'Depart': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 		else
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'check_look':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party0.jpg"></center>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna examines you and shake his head in disproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
+		'Tamara Mikhailovna examines you and shakes her head in dissaproval. You''re not ready for your great "debut"... Disappointed, you head back...'
 
 		act 'Depart': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	end
@@ -508,19 +508,19 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 	minut += 30
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/expensiverest/restoran.jpg"></center>'
 	'Tamara Mikhailovna stops the car in front of the restaurant.'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen closely now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s a very formal party with some big shots from the city so try not to embarrass me. You should act like Cinderella at the ball, being charming and entrance them with your beauty. Don''t get drunk and begin dancing naked on the table or accompany different men to the toilet, you''re not a prostitute. I really hope you follow my advice. Unlike the time I let Vicky tag along...</i></font>'
-	'You wisely decided not to ask aunt Tamara what happened that time she brought Vicky with her, you''ll ask her at the party instead.'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen closely now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s a very formal party with some big shots from the city so try not to embarrass me. You should act like Cinderella at the ball, be charming and entrance them with your beauty. Don''t get drunk and begin dancing naked on the table or accompany different men to the toilet, you''re not a prostitute. I really hope you follow my advice. Unlike the time I let Vicky tag along...</i></font>'
+	'You wisely decide not to ask aunt Tamara what happened that time she brought Vicky with her, you''ll ask her at the party instead.'
 
 	act 'Go inside the restaurant':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party6.jpg"></center>'
-		'The doorman opens the door for you. The restaurant is hall filled with people. Men in expensive suits, and all the women in evening gowns. You hear classic music playing, the waiters carrying drinks are moving effortlessly among the guests. Tamara Mikhailovna takes a glass of champagne from a tray while a waiter passes by.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t be shy, my dear. Start mingling. I''ll call you over when I need you. Remember don''t drink too much. And be charming!"</i></font> she says while she theatrically raises her glass, smiling, and quickly moving towards someone she recognizes.'
+		'The doorman opens the door for you. The restaurant''s hall filled with people. The men in expensive suits and all the women in evening gowns. You hear classical music playing. The waiters, carrying drinks, are moving effortlessly among the guests. Tamara Mikhailovna takes a glass of champagne from a tray while a waiter passes by.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t be shy, my dear. Start mingling. I''ll call you over when I need you. Remember don''t drink too much. And be charming!"</i></font> She says while she theatrically raises her glass, smiling, and quickly moving towards someone she recognizes.'
 
 		act 'Enter':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party7.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look around the hall. There''s a soft playing live string quartet in one of the corners. This is not some regular diner with a cheap tape recorder and karaoke. In another corner there''s a set of tables with all sorts of appetizers. The waiters are tirelessly running around the room with their trays...'
+			'You look around the hall. There''s a live string quartet playing in one of the corners. This is not some regular diner with a cheap tape recorder and karaoke. In another corner there''s a set of tables with all sorts of appetizers. The waiters are tirelessly running around the room with their trays...'
 			'You grab a glass from a waiters tray while he''s passing by, with the same grace and elegance like your mentor. Around the room you see groups of people with glasses in their hands, mingling with each other. There''s a lot of people, but no one catches your attention.'
 
 			act 'Have a drink':
@@ -529,13 +529,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You walk down the hall with a glass, observing the people around you. You notice that you''re the only youth there, mainly the guests are respectable middle-aged men and elderly women pretending being younger than what they are. You would think that these "middle-aged" women should be classy, but they''re all tacky dressed, showing more skin than you would expect them to do. You also notice the expensive jewelry being worn by the women, there''s enough jewelry to fill three stores!'
+				'You walk down the hall with your glass, observing the people around you. You notice that you''re the only youth there. Mainly, the guests are respectable middle-aged men and women. Most of the women are pretending to be younger than they really are. You would think that these "middle-aged" women should be classy, but they''re all dressed tackily, showing more skin than you would expect them to. You also notice the expensive jewelry being worn by the women. There''s enough jewelry to fill three stores!'
 
 				act 'Look around':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party9.jpg"></center>'
-					'In the Banquet hall you hear a light humming. The guests have splited into smaller groups, speaking about something inaudibly. Tamara Mikhailovna has left you to fend for yourself, once again spotting someone she recognized. You, not knowing anyone else but her, feel scared approaching someone, striking up a conversation with these refined guests.'
-					'Playing with your glass, you decide for yourself "Tamara Mikhailovna said to get noticed. It''s time to let them know who I am..." You take a big sip from the glass, and start slowly wandering around the room, trying to find someone to approach.'
+					'In the Banquet hall you hear a light humming. The guests have split into smaller groups, speaking about something inaudibly. Tamara Mikhailovna has left you to fend for yourself, once again spotting someone she recognizes. You, not knowing anyone else but her, feel scared approaching someone, striking up a conversation with these refined guests.'
+					'Playing with your glass, you decide for yourself "Tamara Mikhailovna said to get noticed. It''s time to let them know who I am..." You take a big sip from the glass, and slowly start wandering around the room, trying to find someone to approach.'
 
 					act 'Enter the banquet hall':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -543,8 +543,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 						alko += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party10.jpg"></center>'
-						'Some men look in your direction, but most of them are occupied with some boring business conversation. You spend about twenty minutes aimlessly wandering around not being able to find anyone interesting.'
-						'<font color="navy"><i>"This won''t do, I''m too nervous... To hell with the advice aunt Tamara gave me!"</i></font> you think to yourself. The first glass is empty, and you grab another glass from a waiters tray. You taste the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma, and a wonderful aftertaste making it easy to drink.'
+						'Some men look in your direction. But most of them are occupied with some boring business conversation. You spend about twenty minutes aimlessly wandering around, not being able to find anyone interesting.'
+						'<font color="navy"><i>"This won''t do, I''m too nervous... To hell with the advice aunt Tamara gave me!"</i></font> you think to yourself. The first glass is empty, and you grab another glass from a waiters tray. You taste the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma and a wonderful aftertaste, making it easy to drink.'
 
 						act 'Eavesdrop on the men': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 					end
@@ -559,13 +559,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 	*clr & cla
 	if hour = 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/expensiverest/restoran.jpg"></center>'
-		'The party finishes, the restaurant is closing, it''s time to go home.'
+		'The party finishes. The restaurant is closing. It''s time to go home.'
 
 		act 'Go inside': minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 		exit
 	end
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party'+rand(8,10)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'"You must try the food, it''s what the oligarchs usually eat..." someone points you in the direction of a luxuriously table filled with appetizers.'
+	'"You must try the food, it''s what the oligarchs usually eat..." someone points you in the direction of a luxurious table filled with appetizers.'
 
 	act 'Try the food':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party7.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take a sip of the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma, and a wonderful aftertaste making it easy to drink.'
+		'You take a sip of the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma and a wonderful aftertaste, making it easy to drink.'
 
 		act 'Step away': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 	end
@@ -596,7 +596,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party9.jpg"></center>'
-		'By now you''re really bored and feeling left out, Tamara Mikhailovna, is too absorbed by the conversation, not paying you any attention.'
+		'By now you''re really bored and feel left out.	Tamara Mikhailovna is too absorbed by the conversation, not paying you any attention.'
 
 		if alko >= 3:
 			if mesec = 0 and pcs_vag > 0 and mey_tamara['drink_qw'] = 0:
@@ -621,9 +621,10 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party3':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party15.jpg"></center>'
-	'Champagne is a treacherous drink. It goes down like lemonade, but once it hits you it feels you like a sledgehammer hit you. Towards the end of the evening you are swaying about clearly drunk. You keep on drifting around with a glass, giggling and hiccupping. At the end, your legs are no longer being able to serve you. Gathering your last remaining strength, you find a chair in the corner, crashing on it thinking <font color="navy"><i>"I need to take a short break. Just a few seconds and then I''m good to go again!"</i></font>'
-	'You''re awoken by Tamara Mikhailovna in the yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll about this talk tomorrow."</i></font>'
+	'Champagne is a treacherous drink. It goes down like lemonade. But once it hits you it feels like you were hit by a sledgehammer. Towards the end of the evening you are swaying about, clearly drunk. You keep on drifting around with a glass, giggling and hiccuping. At the end, your legs are no longer able to keep you on your feet. Gathering your last remaining strength, you find a chair in the corner. You crash on it thinking <font color="navy"><i>"I need to take a short break. Just a few seconds and then I''m good to go again!"</i></font>'
+	'...'
+	'You''re awoken by Tamara Mikhailovna in the front yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll talk about this tomorrow."</i></font>'
 
 	mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 50
 	mey_tamara['qw_end'] = 1
@@ -650,18 +651,18 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party'+zz_stage+'.jpg"></center>'
 	if zz_stage = 16:
 		zz_stage += 1
-		'The champagne silently creeps up on you. You''re feeling more loose and finally find the strength to mingle. The alcohol is making you a bit horny and you can''t shake off this desire that you want to hook up with someone. You are totally forgetting about the strict orders that Tamara Mikhailovna gave you about "keeping your composure at all times, and don''t go looking for sexual encounters".'
+		'The champagne silently creeps up on you. You''re feeling more loose and finally find the strength to mingle. The alcohol is making you a bit horny and you can''t shake off the desire, wanting to hook up with someone. You are totally forgetting about the strict orders that Tamara Mikhailovna gave you about "keeping your composure at all times, and not going looking for sexual encounters".'
 		'You look around the room observing the men. The only men you notice are either ugly or they''ve brought their wives or girlfriends with them.'
 		'"Well, fuck!" you think angrily. "They''re either ugly or taken!"'
-		'All of a sudden you notice something very interesting... A man in his thirties having a rowdy discussion with his girlfriend. You could see him getting upset when his girlfriend said something quite upsetting. She starts pushing him away, wanting him to leave her alone. As he''s moving away she mocks him by doing a foul gesture. Sensing blood, you head in his direction...'
+		'All of a sudden you notice something very interesting... A man in his thirties having a rowdy discussion with his girlfriend. You can see him getting upset when his girlfriend says something quite upsetting. She starts pushing him away, wanting him to leave her alone. As he moves away she mocks him with a foul gesture. Sensing blood, you head in his direction...'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party4a'
 	elseif zz_stage = 17:
 		zz_stage += 1
-		'You slowly approach the man, leaning close to him, glancing, not really sure how to approach the situation. He immediately notices you, and clearly signaling that he doesn''t want to be bothered right now...'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"I see that you''re having some issues with your girlfriend?"</i></font> you say while trying to look as flirtatious as you can.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Her? She''s a gold-digger that doesn''t know when to shut up. She''s not going anywhere. She''ll get it all out at the club with her friends, then return home and sleep in my bed. When she wakes up tomorrow all will be back to normal again..."</i></font> said the man. <font color="maroon"><i>"And you see, I can do whatever I want tonight, fuck her..."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"Well, if you want I could help you out with so you don''t feel lonely tonight. I find this party very boring!"</i></font> you look seductively at him.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Yeah, sure why not. Come with me, I''ll give you a grand tour of the restaurant. I''m one the co-owners. I''ll show you the hidden parts here around. I''m sure you''ll find it exciting."</i></font>'
+		'You slowly approach the man, leaning close to him, glancing, not really sure how to approach the situation. He immediately notices you, and clearly signals that he doesn''t want to be bothered right now...'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"I see that you''re having some issues with your girlfriend?"</i></font> You say while trying to look as flirtatious as you can.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Her? She''s a gold-digger that doesn''t know when to shut up. She''s not going anywhere. She''ll get it all out at the club with her friends, then return home and sleep in my bed. When she wakes up tomorrow, everything will be back to normal again..."</i></font> Says the man. <font color="maroon"><i>"And you see, I can do whatever I want tonight, fuck her..."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"Well, if you want I could help you out so you don''t feel lonely tonight. I find this party very boring!"</i></font> You look seductively at him.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Yeah, sure why not. Come with me, I''ll give you a grand tour of the restaurant. I''m one the co-owners. I''ll show you the hidden parts around here. I''m sure you''ll find it exciting."</i></font>'
 		act 'Refuse':
 			mey_tamara['drink_qw'] = 1
 			gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
@@ -674,28 +675,28 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4a':
 	*clr & cla
 	zz_stage = 18
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party18.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you get out of the Banquet hall. As you''re walking he''s feeling your butt and you start getting more excited. You stop at a door, with a bronze sign showing "Employees only". He tells you that this is the first stop and opens the door. Well inside he opens another door leading you deeper insider.'
-	'As soon as the door closes the two of you start passionately kissing. Riled up, you push the man on the table, grabbing his tie pulling him towards you.'
+	'The two of you get out of the Banquet hall. As you walk he feels your butt and you start getting more excited. You stop at a door, with a bronze sign showing "Employees only". He tells you that this is the first stop and opens the door. Further inside he opens another door leading you in.'
+	'As soon as the door closes the two of you start kissing passionately. Riled up, you push the man on the table and seat yourself next to him, grab his tie and pull him towards you.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party19.jpg"></center>'
-		'Without any hesitation he slides his hand between your legs. Touching your wet pussy lips, making you moan softly. You grab him by the shoulders and push him down on his knees, lifting your dress and starts kissing you just above your clit. You move your panties aside and he starts licking you. The sensation that hits you is indescribable and when he starts using his finger you can''t avoid nearing the edge. Your breathing intensifies and your wet pussy is pulsating, the moaning is getting louder and louder and before you know it, you cum in his mouth...'
+		'Without any hesitation he slides his hand between your legs. Touching your wet pussy lips, making you moan softly. You grab him by the shoulders and push him down on his knees. He lifts your dress and starts kissing you just above your clit. You move your panties aside and he starts licking you. The sensation that hits you is indescribable and when he starts using his finger you can''t avoid nearing the edge. Your breathing intensifies and your wet pussy is pulsating, the moaning is getting louder and louder and before you know it, you cum in his mouth...'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party20.jpg"></center>'
-			'Wanting to repay the favor you undo his pants pulling out his hard cock, you kneel and begin caressing it with your hands. You switch over enveloping his throbbing cock with your mouth. He''s now groaning louder and louder and his cock is growing inside your mouth, not wanting it to end too early you stop and take off your dress.'
+			'Wanting to repay the favor you undo his pants and pull out his hard cock. You kneel and begin caressing it with your hands. Wanting to taste it, you switch over to enveloping his throbbing cock with your mouth. He starts groaning louder and louder and his cock grows inside your mouth. Not wanting it to end too early, you stop and take off your dress.'
 			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party21.jpg"></center>'
-				'The man overcome with lust bends you over the table, pulling your panties off, sliding a finger inside your now dripping wet pussy testing to see if you''re ready. You turn your head nodding wanting him to enter you...'
+				'The man, overcome with lust, bends you over the table, pulls your panties off and slides a finger inside your now dripping wet pussy. Testing to see if you''re ready. You turn your head and nod, wanting him to enter you...'
 				act 'Continue':
 					cls
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party22.jpg"></center>'
-					'He teases you by stroking the tip of his cock against your lips, making you wetter. Suddenly you feel his cock penetrate you, as you gasp by the size of his cock. After a slow start he begin picking up his pace as he''s pounding you. You start moaning louder and louder, trembling and cumming again.'
+					'He teases you by stroking the tip of his cock against your lips, making you wetter. Suddenly, you feel his cock penetrate you and the size of his cock makes you gasp. After a slow start he begins picking up the pace as he''s pounding you. You start moaning louder and louder, trembling and cumming again.'
 					act 'Continue':
 						cls
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -706,13 +707,13 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4a':
 							cls
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party24.jpg"></center>'
-							'As you come out from the office you stumble upon an angry Tamara Mikhailovna. Not allowing you to go to back to the party, she orders you to...'
+							'As you come out from the office you stumble upon an angry Tamara Mikhailovna. Not allowing you to go back to the party, she orders you...'
 							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Follow me!"</i></font>'
-							'You faintly realize that you''ve done something wrong, but champagne is still controlling your senses, and you''re in a great mood after the sex. You try to justify that nothing happened and that you "just went out to powder your nose and that it took a while..." However, Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t even budge, she walks in front of you, now visibly upset.'
+							'You faintly realize that you''ve done something wrong. But champagne is still controlling your senses, and you''re in a great mood after the sex you just had. You try to justify yourself saying that nothing happened and that you "just went out to powder your nose and that it took a while..." However, Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t even budge, she walks in front of you, now visibly upset.'
 							'Approaching her car, she opens the rear passenger door...'
 							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Get in, now!"</i></font>'
 							'You sit down, not understanding why she''s so upset.'
-							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wait for me here! You can blame yourself. You have no idea what you''ve done..."</i></font> says Tamara Mikhaylovna before returning to the restaurant.'
+							'<font color="maroon"><i>"Wait for me here! You can blame yourself. You have no idea what you''ve done..."</i></font> Says Tamara Mikhaylovna before returning to the restaurant.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								cls
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -740,8 +741,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'party4a':
 									pcs_sleep += 3
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party15.jpg"></center>'
-									'You''re awoken by Tamara Mikhailovna in the yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
-									'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll about this talk tomorrow."</i></font>'
+									'You''re awoken by Tamara Mikhailovna in the front yard. She deliberately slams the car door, while you were sleeping in the back seat. Your mouth tastes like crap and you have a hell of a headache.'
+									'<font color="maroon"><i>"Go to your room! We''ll talk about this tomorrow."</i></font>'
 
 									act 'Go to the car': 
 										msg 'End of current story'
@@ -761,27 +762,27 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party5':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party25.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Why is such a sweet young thing standing here alone?"</i></font> you hear a male voice behind the shoulder. <font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t worry I''ll keep you company..."</i></font>'
-	'You turn facing the direction the voice is coming from. You spot a bald short man dressed in an expensive suit. The outfit fits him badly mostly because of his enormous belly. Judging by the looks he has the classic sugar-daddy appearance.'
-	'<font color="maroon"><i>"How can it be possible that such a delicate flower is by herself, you do know it''s not good for you to be alone."</i></font> he smiles. <font color="maroon"><i>"A delicate flower like yourself must be carefully nurtured and groomed properly, preferably by an experienced gardener. Let me buy you some champagne, I promise it''ll taste just as heavenly as you."</i></font>'
-	'He extend his hand and you notice his thick hairy fingers which are studded with multiple rings. The sugar-daddy grabs another glass from a tray and brings it to you. He speaks up again...'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"Why is such a sweet young thing standing here alone?"</i></font> you hear a male voice saying behind you. <font color="maroon"><i>"Don''t worry I''ll keep you company..."</i></font>'
+	'You turn facing the direction the voice is coming from. You spot a short, bald man dressed in an expensive suit. The outfit fits him badly, mostly because of his enormous belly. You judge his looks to be those of the classic sugar-daddy.'
+	'<font color="maroon"><i>"How can it be possible that such a delicate flower is by herself, don''t you know it''s not good for you to be alone?"</i></font> he smiles. <font color="maroon"><i>"A delicate flower like yourself must be carefully nurtured and groomed properly, preferably by an experienced gardener. Let me buy you some champagne. I promise it''ll taste just as heavenly as you."</i></font>'
+	'He extends his hand and you notice his thick hairy fingers are decorated with multiple rings. The sugar-daddy grabs another glass from a tray and brings it to you. He speaks up again...'
 
 	act 'Mingle':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party26.jpg"></center>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You should try the lobster! It goes perfectly with the champagne! To be honest, I''m not that big of a fan when it comes to champagne and lobster, I''d rather have a glass of vodka and cabbage rolls in a modest hut by the river. Or a beer and some crayfish! I own a modest house near the town. I''m just a simple contractor, as I''ve built the house myself, it''s very modest, the pool is only twenty five meters."</i></font> he obscenely laughs, making his second chin shake.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You should try the lobster! It goes perfectly with the champagne! To be honest, I''m not that big of a fan when it comes to champagne and lobster, I''d rather have a glass of vodka and cabbage rolls in a modest hut by the river. Or a beer and some crayfish! I own a modest house near town. I''m just a simple contractor. As I''ve built the house myself, it''s very modest. The pool is only twenty five meters long."</i></font> he laughs obscenely, making his second chin shake.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"So what do you say my delicate flower, I would love to take you on a date. We''d had a great time, we can swim in the pool, grab something to eat."</i></font> he says while trying to hug you by the waist.'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"What a disgusting pig."</i></font> you think to yourself. <font color="navy"><i>"But a very rich pig, he''s a simple minded buffoon that I can probably use to my advantage."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come on gorgeous. Don''t worry I''m very kind, you won''t regret it."</i></font> he pulls out a big cell phone from his inside pocket a cell phone asking what''s your name and number.'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"What a disgusting pig."</i></font> You think to yourself. <font color="navy"><i>"But a very rich pig. He''s a simple minded buffoon that I can probably use to my advantage."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come on gorgeous. Don''t worry, I''m very kind, you won''t regret it."</i></font> He pulls a big cell phone from his inside pocket and asks for your name and number.'
 
 		act 'Try the lobster':
 			*clr & cla
 			mey_tamara['builder_qw'] = 1
 			minut += 15
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party27.jpg"></center>'
-			'You contemplate giving him your real number. You know that this disgusting pig only wants to fuck you, it''s written all over his face. But he can come in handy one day. You decide to give him your real the phone number. He smirks and hands you a business card...'
+			'You contemplate giving him your real number. You know that this disgusting pig only wants to fuck you. It''s written all over his face. But he can come in handy one day. You decide to give him your real phone number. He smirks and hands you a business card...'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"If you ever need anything just give me a call. And I really mean anything. You won''t regret it, I love pleasing pretty girls!"</i></font>'
-			'You say goodbye, barely escaping from this so called man that wants to take you to his "house" to have god knows what with you. Once again you find yourself alone and decide to make another round around the room.'
+			'You say goodbye, barely escaping from this so called man that wants to take you to his "house" to do god knows what with you. Once again you find yourself alone and decide to make another round around the room.'
 
 			act 'Mingle': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 		end
@@ -792,7 +793,7 @@ end
 if $args[0] = 'party6':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party28.jpg"></center>'
-	'You notice a middle-aged, short, but an awe-inspiring man with a square face. He''s rough and ugly, but there''s something attractive about him, some sort of charisma, just like Charles Bronson. He keeps looking in your direction very often as he''s assessing you. He''s standing with an older, once very beautiful woman. She manages to keep up her good looks by paying a lot of money to maintain her appearance, but you can''t win the battle against time...'
+	'You notice a middle-aged, short, but awe-inspiring man with a square face. He''s rough and ugly, but there''s something attractive about him, some sort of charisma, just like Charles Bronson. He looks in your direction very often as he assesses you. He''s standing with an older, once very beautiful woman. She manages to keep up her good looks by paying a lot of money to maintain her appearance, but you can''t win the battle against time...'
 	act 'Observe the man':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party29.jpg"></center>'
@@ -803,18 +804,18 @@ if $args[0] = 'party6':
 			*clr & cla
 			mey_tamara['bronson_qw'] = 1
 			minut += 15
-			'Grabbing you by the elbow, she leads you to the very couple that had awoken your attention, "Bronson" and his lady friend.'
-			'She greets the man like an old friend, kissing him on the cheek, but indifferently greets his lady friend. "Something complicated happened between these two..." you think to yourself.'
+			'Grabbing you by the elbow, she leads you to the very couple that had awoken your interest, "Bronson" and his lady friend.'
+			'She greets the man like an old friend, kissing him on the cheek, but indifferently greets the woman by his side. "Something complicated happened between these two..." you think to yourself.'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Let me introduce my pupil, <<$pcs_nickname>>."</i></font>'
-			'"Bronson" smiles, making you back off a bit seeing his face up close. It looks quite rough like someone had slashed his face with a razor. Him missing teeth makes his smile seem off and crooked. But despite the roughly slashed face and crooked smile, he seems very sincere.'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"It''s so nice meeting someone young here! The only other people here are old goblins and hags... But not you, with your youth and beauty, you''re like a ray of light! You have to forgive an old man for the bad compliments, <<$pcs_firstname>>."</i></font>'
+			'"Bronson" smiles, making you back off a bit seeing his face up close. It looks quite rough like someone has slashed his face with a razor. His missing teeth makes his smile seem off and crooked. But despite the roughly slashed face and crooked smile, he seems very sincere.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"It''s so nice meeting someone young here! The only other people here are old goblins and hags... But not you. With your youth and beauty, you''re like a ray of sunshine! You have to forgive an old man for the bad compliments, <<$pcs_firstname>>."</i></font>'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"My dear Tamara! You always had a great eye for talent!"</i></font>'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"I still remember your scent, it''s the same one when you helped me many years ago... When I had to get away from my husband..."</i></font> sighed Tamara Mikhailovna with concealed sadness briefly glancing at him. <font color="navy"><i>"There''s definitely something going on here."</i></font> you think to yourself.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"I still remember your scent, it''s the same one when you helped me many years ago... When I had to get away from my husband..."</i></font> Sighed Tamara Mikhailovna with concealed sadness, briefly glancing at him. <font color="navy"><i>"There''s definitely something going on here."</i></font> You think to yourself.'
 			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, let''s not dwell on the past. Let bygones be bygones!</i></font> "Bronson" smiles, answering without any malice or mockery. His friend, feeling clearly undesirable in this conversation, places her half empty glass of champagne on the table, grabbing a new one from a passing waiter, silently walked away towards the musicians. She moves away without having said one word.'
-			'You keep up the small talk. "Bronson" gradually looks at you like he''s trying to read you. With some help by Tamara Mikhailovna you don''t get embarrassed by this prying eyes. The way the two of them behave it''s quite obvious that they’re old friends, though you believe that they''re more than friends.'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, will you make an old man happy and dine with him?"</i></font> he asks you confidently. The way he conduct himself in a conversation, despite the sloppy appearance, makes him somehow, likable and not frightening.'
+			'You keep up the small talk. "Bronson" gradually looks at you like he''s trying to read you. With some help from Tamara Mikhailovna you don''t get embarrassed by this prying eyes. The way the two of them behave it''s quite obvious that they’re old friends. Though, you believe that they''re more than friends.'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"<<$pcs_firstname>>, will you make an old man happy and dine with him?"</i></font> He asks you confidently. The way he conducts himself in a conversation, despite the sloppy appearance, makes him somehow, likable and not frightening.'
 			'<font color="navy"><i>"I would be honoured."</i></font>'
-			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, then it''s settled, <<$pcs_firstname>>!"</i></font> "Bronson" smiles and moves away from you and aunt Tamara. You suddenly realize that he didn''t ask you about your number, now that you think about it, he never properly introduced himself, even though you talked for a good hour!'
+			'<font color="maroon"><i>"Well, then it''s settled, <<$pcs_firstname>>!"</i></font> "Bronson" smiles and moves away from you and aunt Tamara. You suddenly realize that he didn''t ask you for your number. Now that you think about it, he never properly introduced himself, even though you talked for a good hour!'
 
 			act 'Mingle': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 		end
@@ -832,50 +833,50 @@ if $args[0] = 'reputation':
 	elseif zz_stage = 1:
 		'You start sniffing and let out...'
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"Please, I beg you, don''t send me away! Please! I... I''ll do whatever you want..."</i></font> you say bursting into tears.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh... What am I going to do with you?"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna sighed after a few minutes. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can''t really kick you out, but I can''t let you off the hook either... I guess I''ll keep on mentoring you..."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="navy"><i>"Ma-m-maybe, it''s possible redeem myself? Some way to improve?"</i></font> you sob, trying to wipe away the tears.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I really thought you were smarter than my girls. They''ve got their brains after their daddy. Both of them."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Oh... What am I going to do with you?"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna sighs after a few minutes. <font color="maroon"><i>"I can''t really kick you out, but I can''t let you off the hook either... I guess I''ll keep on mentoring you..."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="navy"><i>"Ma-m-maybe, it''s possible to redeem myself? Some way to improve?"</i></font> you sob, trying to wipe away the tears.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I really thought you were smarter than my girls. They''ve got their brains from their daddy. Both of them."</i></font>'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Especially Vicky, lascivious like a cat in the spring. Not caring who she picks as a sexual partner. You being an example."</i></font>'
 	elseif zz_stage = 2:
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna was deeply in her thoughts, biting her glasses, twisting them in her hands until...'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"But you should be praised that you immediately came here and confessed, so I didn''t find it out through the "grapewine". So you''re not completely hopeless. But you''ve made things more complicated for yourself. There''s a simple way to save face though. But we need something to raise your reputation all over again..."</i></font>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna thinks out loud to herself, sucking on her glasses, not paying attention to you. The tears are still rolling down your cheeks, but you are start getting back your composure! Aunt Tamara starts talk to herself again, silently pointing to the door.'
+		'Tamara Mikhailovna was deep in her thoughts, biting her glasses, twisting them in her hands until...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"But you should be praised that you immediately came here and confessed. So I didn''t find it out through the "grapevine". So you''re not completely hopeless. But you''ve made things more complicated for yourself. There''s a simple way to save face though. But we need something to raise your reputation all over again..."</i></font>'
+		'Tamara Mikhailovna thinks out loud to herself, sucking on her glasses, not paying attention to you. The tears are still rolling down your cheeks, but you start getting back your composure! Aunt Tamara starts talking to herself again, silently pointing to the door.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 3:
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/reputation3.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna pauses for a short time, continuing to nibble on the earpiece and starts clicking her nails on the armrest. A couple of minutes later seeming like an eternity she finally looks at you.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen very carefully, I will not repeat myself. I''ve come up with a way how you can redeem yourself. But for someone like you this might be very hard!"</i></font> she starts while you fully focus on her. She stands up and continues...'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"First and foremost. From now on, you''re going to behave as a nun. You should avoid sex unless for education purpose... No more of that generous attitude to having sex everywhere, the disco, in parks, not even in school! You are forbidden having sex with anyone in Pavlovsk. The only people you can even considerate having sex with is people closest to you who you can fully trust. You have to strictly maintain the good girl reputation in Pavlovsk."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"If you really find it unbearable and have to let off some steam go to the city, there''s a club there or you can go somewhere else where you can meet someone. If nobody knows you, you can have sex however you want and without harm to your reputation. The main thing is that you do not forget to use protection or people will know and then not even I can help you."</i></font>'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"And finally,"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna claps her hands. <font color="maroon"><i>"time for a lesson. What''s the quickest way to orgasm?"</i></font>'
+		'Tamara Mikhailovna pauses for a short time, continuing to nibble on the earpiece and starts clicking her nails on the armrest. A couple of minutes later, that seem like an eternity, she finally looks at you.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Listen very carefully, I will not repeat myself. I''ve come up with a way how you can redeem yourself. But for someone like you this might be very hard!"</i></font> She starts while you fully focus on her. She stands up and continues...'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"First and foremost. From now on, you''re going to behave as a nun. You should avoid sex unless for education purpose... No more of that generous attitude to having sex everywhere, the disco, in parks, not even in school! You are forbidden to have sex with anyone in Pavlovsk. The only people you can even consider having sex with are the people closest to you, those who you can fully trust. You have to strictly maintain the good girl reputation in Pavlovsk."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"If you really find it unbearable and have to let off some steam, go to the city. There''s a club there. Or you can go somewhere else where you can meet someone. If nobody knows you, you can have sex however you want and without harm to your reputation. The main thing is that you don''t forget to use protection or people will know and then not even I can help you."</i></font>'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"And finally."</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna claps her hands. <font color="maroon"><i>"Time for a lesson. What''s the quickest way to orgasm?"</i></font>'
 		'<font color="navy"><i>"By having anal sex..."</i></font> you quickly answer without thinking, instantly regretting your answer.'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Come here!"</i></font> Tamara Mikhailovna sternly tells you...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 4:
 		'She makes you take off your panties, bending you across her knees. She then proceeds slapping your butt over and over again...'
-		'You try to endure because you''re deserving it but Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t stop after a few slaps, she continues slapping you butt harder and harder, leaving your poor butt with a burning sensation, hurting like hell. You start squealing more loudly with each slap. At the end, you can''t handle it anymore and you start crying floods. The spanking immediately stops.' 
+		'You try to endure because you deserve it. But Tamara Mikhailovna doesn''t stop after a few slaps, she continues slapping your ass harder and harder, leaving your poor butt with a burning sensation, hurting like hell. You start squealing more loudly with each slap. At the end, you can''t handle it anymore and you start crying hard. The spanking immediately stops.' 
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"There, there, baby, don''t cry. Come on, stop, I admit, I was filled with anger and got carried away, I may have overdone it a little."</i></font>'
 		'Sobbing, you try to pull the panties over your bruised ass. Tamara Mikhailovna stops you, and pulls off your panties...'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You won''t be needing them yet. You don''t have to be embarrassed, no one will see you here. Let''s go to my room, I have a lotion in my room that''ll help..."</i></font> she takes you by the hand and leads you into her room.'
-		'There she grabs a bottle with some kind of lotion.'
-		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Now, lie down on the bed, and relax your little cute butt!"</i></font> You lie down on the Tamara Mikhailovna''s bed. Her bed is quite modest and hard compared to the enormous, luxurious bed in Vicky''s room!'
-		'Tamara Mikhailovna carefully starts rubbing your butt, with the pleasant-smelling ointment on your red marked ass. And as she said, the burning sensation immediately began to subside under the caress of the hands of aunt Tamara. You''re having a hard time believing these are the same hands that just severely flogged you. "How can she snap so easily?" you once again start thinking about it...'
-		'Her gentle hands continue caressing your back and feet, no longer focusing only on your butt, which, by the way, already feels much better, you start enjoying yourself a bit too much. Your bare pussy starts getting wet! Without thinking about it you start moaning by the skillful caresses.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"You won''t be needing them yet. You don''t have to be embarrassed, no one will see you here. Let''s go to my room, I have a lotion in my room that''ll help..."</i></font> She takes you by the hand and leads you into her room.'
+		'There, she grabs a bottle with some kind of lotion in it.'
+		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Now, lie down on the bed, and relax your cute little butt!"</i></font> You lie down on Tamara Mikhailovna''s bed. Her bed is quite modest and hard compared to the enormous, luxurious bed in Vicky''s room!'
+		'Tamara Mikhailovna carefully starts rubbing the pleasant-smelling ointment on your red, marked ass. And as she said, the burning sensation immediately begins to subside under the caress caressing hands of aunt Tamara. You have a hard time believing these are the same hands that just severely flogged you. "How can she snap so easily?" You once again start thinking about it...'
+		'Her gentle hands continue caressing your back and feet, no longer focusing only on your butt, which already feels much better. You start enjoying yourself a bit too much. Your bare pussy starts getting wet! Without thinking about it you start moaning under the skillful caresses.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 5:
-		'Suddenly the caresses abruptly stop. You turn your head wondering why it stopped. Next to you, sitting on the bed you notice a completely nude Tamara Mikhailovna, awkwardly cross legged, looking away from you...'
+		'Suddenly the caresses stop abruptly. You turn your head wondering why it stopped. Sitting on the bed next to you, you notice a completely nude Tamara Mikhailovna, awkwardly cross legged, looking away from you...'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"I''m sorry, <<$pcs_nickname>>, I think I got a little carried away again... you''ve never seen me naked..."</i></font>'
 	elseif zz_stage = 6:
-		'An inner impulse makes you to take off your shirt and sit next to your mentor. You start caressing her magnificent breast, touching her pink nipples with your fingers.'
+		'An impulse makes you take off your shirt and sit next to your mentor. You start caressing her magnificent breasts, touching her pink nipples with your fingers.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 7:
-		'Tamara moans, leaning towards you, grabbing you against the small of your back, pulling you in closer. She arches her back and throws her head back, like a big red cat, showing the smooth skinned neck.'
+		'Tamara moans, leans towards you, grabs you at the small of your back and pulls you in closer. She arches her back and throws her head back, like a big red cat, showing her smooth skinned neck.'
 		'Your hands start gliding over her flawless skin. You kiss her exposed neck, continuing along the jaw line...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 8:
-		'You kiss her, gently nibbling her lower lip. While you kiss, you slowly slid your hand near Tamara''s pussy lips. You start circling your finger just inside her lips being careful not to make contact with her clit.'
-		'Getting more wet Tamara pushes you on the bed and spread your legs, slowly circled her tongue just inside your lips, right on the edge. Slowly getting closer and then moving away, and then getting closer again teasing you...'
+		'You kiss her, gently nibbling her lower lip. While you kiss, you slowly slide your hand near Tamara''s pussy lips. You start circling your finger just inside her lips, being careful not to make contact with her clit.'
+		'Getting wetter, Tamara pushes you on the bed and spreads your legs. She slowly circles her tongue just inside your lips, right on the edge. Slowly getting closer and then moving away, and then getting closer again teasing you...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 9:
-		'You let out a moan, and Tamara moves up your body kissing you. As she approaches your lips you move down a little slowly making your way towards her breast. Nibbling on her breast you hear Tamara letting out tiny moans, wordlessly egging you on. You finally place your mouth around her nipple and gently start sucking them, she gasps...'
+		'You let out a moan, and Tamara moves up your body kissing you. As she approaches your lips you move down a little, slowly making your way towards her chest. Nibbling on her breasts, you hear Tamara letting out tiny moans, wordlessly egging you on. You finally place your mouth around her nipple and gently start sucking them, making her gasp...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 10:
-		'Tamara panting, begins moving down again. All of a sudden you gasp involuntarily and began moaning louder as she flicks her tongue faster over your anus. While licking your anus she slowly slides a finger inside your wet hole. Overcome with ecstasy you tighten your pussy. She devours your delicious juices and slowly introduces another finger inside of you. As you start panting she increases the speed. You shudder as you start letting out what feels like never ending orgasms. You sure can learn a lot from her...'
+		'Tamara, panting, begins to move down again. All of a sudden you gasp involuntarily and begin moaning louder as she flicks her tongue faster over your anus. While licking your anus she slowly slides a finger inside your wet hole. Overcome with ecstasy you tighten your pussy. She devours your delicious juices and slowly introduces another finger inside of you. As you start panting she increases the speed. You shudder as you start having what feels like never ending orgasms. You sure can learn a lot from her...'
 	elseif zz_stage = 11:
-		'Catching your breath, you thank your mentor. But there is no time for that. You slide a finger inside her feeling her pulsating pussy. Tamara pants harder and harder, you edge her several times. While sucking and nibbling on her pussy when you feel she can''t handle it anymore. She bends her knees, screams, and cums hard. You lick her clean after she orgasms. It looks like you''re a quick learner! She lays back after a few seconds, panting, with sweat coating her body. Tamara satisfied, finally turns to face you, saying...'
+		'Catching your breath, you thank your mentor. But there is no time for that. You slide a finger inside her feeling her pulsating pussy. Tamara pants harder and harder, you edge her several times. While sucking and nibbling on her pussy when you feel she can''t handle it anymore. She bends her knees, screams, and cums hard. You lick her clean after she orgasms. It looks like you''re a quick learner! She lays back after a few seconds, panting, with sweat coating her body. Tamara, satisfied, finally turns to face you saying...'
 		'<font color="maroon"><i>"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>! You have a real talent! Promise me you won''t waste it on those primates hanging out in the Park... They don''t deserve you..."</i></font>'
 	end