[text edit]Text edits by Lurk Morrison

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -1437,18 +1437,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/f (7.<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 			if npc_QW['A34'] = 5:
 				if npc_QW['A34'] = 5:npc_QW['A34'] = 6
-				'Recovering from your orgasm you are now aware of what has happened:'
-				'"Oh!" He exclaims almost too loudly while looking at the cum on your stomach.'
-				'"Aha..." Kolka said, out of breath.'
-				'"Whore... You... NO WORDS!"'
-				'"And I liked it..." He grins.'
-				'"Not a word to anyone!"'
-				'"Yes, I know and don''t shout our mother might hear you!"'
+				'Recovering from your orgasm, you are now aware of what just happened.'
+				'Kolka looks at your stomach, stained with his cum. "Whoa!" he exclaims, almost too loudly.'
+				'"Kolka..." you whisper to him.'
+				'He doesn''t bother to lower his volume, "That was... awesome!"'
+				'"Kolka, keep your voice down. Do you want <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> to hear you?" you chide him.'
+				'He looks towards the hallway, "No."'
+				'You move his face back to yours, "Not a word to anybody, do you hear me?"'
+				'"O-of course," he stammers.'
 			elseif npc_QW['A34'] > 5:
-				'You look at your brother who is smiling:'
-				'"Aha..." Kolka says, out of breath.'
-				'"Lucky no one caught us"'
-				'"Come on... <<$pcs_nickname>> it was fun!"'
+				'You look at your brother, a huge smile is plastered across his face.'
+				'"Aha..." he breathes heavily.'
+				'"Lucky we didn''t get caught!" you tell him.'
+				'"Come on, <<$pcs_nickname>>... that was fun!"'
 			end
 			act'Dress':gt $loc, $metka
 		end

locations/seeporn.qsrc

@@ -182,8 +182,10 @@ act 'Watch it':
 
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial22.jpg"></center>'
-						'Suddenly, your brother takes his dick out of your mouth and a jet of hot cum slaps you in the face. Mishan laughs "Kolka, you just fucked your sister in the mouth. Fuck!" Kolka wiping the sweat from his forehead says "Holy fuck, I don''t fucking believe it. She asked for it, the slut. No one could have resisted."'
-
+						'Suddenly, your brother takes his dick out of your mouth a jet of hot cum splatters across your face.'
+						'Mishan laughs, "Kolka, you just fucked your sister in the mouth!"'
+						'Kolka wipes the sweat from his forehead, "Holy shit, I don''t fucking believe it! The slut was asking for it! No man could have resisted!"'
+						
 						act 'Leave':gt 'gschool_grounds', 'sports'
 					end
 				end