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Fixes and edits in preparation for expansion

Vengeance11 2 лет назад
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  1. 3 6
      locations/albina_mother_events.qsrc
  2. 12 16
      locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

+ 3 - 6
locations/albina_mother_events.qsrc

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 		act 'Go with her':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You follow Albina to her room where she pulls the strings on her bikini thong, letting it fall to her ankles before kicking it aside.'
+			'You follow Albina to her room, where she pulls the strings on her bikini thong and letting it fall to her ankles before kicking it aside.'
 			'"I need to take a shower and wash all this lotion and sweat off. Care to join me?" She smiles playfully at you.'
 			minut +=6
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Doing yoga with Albina':
 
 	act 'Just talk':
 		cla & *clr
-		 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/showering.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/showering.jpg"></center>'
 		'"No thanks. But I wouldn''t mind talking while you do."'
 		'"Suit yourself," she shrugs. Albina heads into her personal bathroom, leaving the door open for you to follow her in. You sit down on the edge of her bath while she steps into the shower.'
 		'"So you and your mother work out together?"'
@@ -265,10 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_shower':
 	act 'Continue':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/5.jpg"></center>'
-		'You squeeze more of the scented gel into your hands and start ''cleaning'' her ass, rubbing, squeezing and smacking her cheeks as you kiss her neck. Your hand then finds its way between her legs but before you can go any further, she suddenly turns and pushes you up against the shower wall before moving in and locking lips with you. You passionately make out under the steamy water, fondling each other''s wet bodies for a few seconds before she breaks the kiss and moves away from you.'
-		'"Okay, I think I''m clean enough now. Just let me finish up in here and I''ll be out." she says with a wink. You nod and step out of the shower, grabbing one of the nearby towels to dry yourself off before walking back into her bedroom.'
-		'You start putting your clothes back on and a few minutes later, you hear the water turn off and a naked Albina casually strolls into the room, fishes out her own clothes and gets dressed herself.'
-		minut +=6
+		'You squeeze more of the scented gel into your hands and start ''cleaning'' her ass, rubbing, squeezing and smacking her cheeks as you kiss her neck. She reaches back and starts passionately kissing you as you continue.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		act 'Continue': CLOSE ALL & gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'

+ 12 - 16
locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -1033,8 +1033,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackthreesome.jpg"></center>'
 				'You continue sucking away at the first guy as the other one pushes his massive cock into your ass. Your pained moans at your hole being stretched are muffled by the cock in your mouth.'
 				'Your ass is pretty dry and your eyes start watering as he starts to slowly but painfully grind away at your hole. You reach down and start rubbing your clit to try and mask the pain as he picks up his pace.'
-				'Eventually, the guy in your ass starts grunting and empties so much cum into your ass that it leaks out while his cock is still in you and you feel more than a little bloated.'
-				'When he does pull out, a steady stream of thick cum oozes from you, runs down the inside of your leg and pools on the bed beneath you as you keep sucking the cock in your mouth.'
+				'Eventually, the guy in your ass starts grunting and empties spurt after spurt of warm cum into your bowels.'
+				'When he pulls out, a steady stream of thick cum oozes from you, runs down the inside of your leg and pools on the bed beneath you as you keep sucking the cock in your mouth.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'dick', 'sub', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', -1, 'dick1', 'sub', 'group'
 				gs 'pain', 4, 'asshole', 'stretch'
@@ -1045,14 +1045,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 				tipdarand = rand(0, 1)
 
 				if tipdarand = 0:
-					'The guy you are sucking suddenly grabs you by the head and you start choking as the huge cock slides down your throat.'
-					'Cum starts flooding into your mouth.'
+					'The guy you are sucking suddenly grabs you by the head and you start choking as the huge cock slides down your throat and cum starts flooding into your mouth.'
 					act 'Swallow it':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackfacial.jpg"></center>'
 						'You let out a strangled gurgle and frantically start swallowing it all down until he finally finishes. He slides his cock out of your mouth and you swallow the last of the cum in your mouth.'
 						'You look up at him, seeking approval. He pats you on the head. "I guess you little white girls really do crave it.'
-						'You take the two monster cocks in your hands and finish them off with a final blowjob each, to their immense satisfaction.'
+						'You take their cocks in your hands and finish them off with a final blowjob each, to their immense satisfaction.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick1', 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough', 'humiliation'
 						gs 'pain', 1, 'throat', 'choke'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $AlbinaQW['Cust1'], 0, 0, 0, 120
@@ -1066,10 +1065,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 					act 'Open your mouth':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/blackfacial.jpg"></center>'
-						'You close your eyes and stick your tongue out and soon a stream of warm cum is landing on your face and splashing your tongue, drenching you.'
-						'Once he is finally finished, you take his cock back into your mouth and suck him clean. You then wipe the cum from your eyes and look at them.'
-						'"Damn girl, I guess you are a hot mess!" one of the men laughs.'
-						'You take the two monster cocks in your hands and finish them off with a final blowjob each, to their immense satisfaction.'
+						'You close your eyes and stick your tongue out. Spurts of warm cum start splattering across your face and tongue.'
+						'Once he finishes, you take his cock back into your mouth and suck him clean. You then wipe the cum from your eyes and look at them.'
+						'"Damn girl, you are a hot mess!" one of the men laughs.'
+						'You take their cocks in your hands and finish them off with a final blowjob each, to their immense satisfaction.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'dick2', 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $AlbinaQW['Cust1']
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face', $AlbinaQW['Cust1'], 0, 0, 0, 120
@@ -1082,7 +1081,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 			end
 		elseif tipdarand = 1:
 			'The guys then effortlessy lift you up and lay you on the bed, your head leaning over the edge.'
-			'One of the guys climbs in beside you and spreads your legs, his cock then grinding between your labia. The other moves to the edge of the bed and presses his cock against your lips. '
+			'One of the guys climbs in beside you and spreads your legs before his cock starts grinding between your labia. The other moves to the edge of the bed and presses his cock against your lips.'
 
 			act 'Get filled':
 				cls
@@ -1284,8 +1283,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore7':
 	end
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore7_1':
-!! starts with BJ and 2 HJs. Progresses until you''ve blown all 12 men. (so just say 12 HJs and 12 BJs) Also add alcohol counter for vodka.
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bukkake3.jpg"></center>'
+    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bukkake3.jpg"></center>'
 	'Once the last drops of vodka have burned their way down your throat, the men release you and you collapse forward onto your hands, but a hand lifts you up and your blindfold is ripped off to reveal that all of them have their dicks out and are surronding you.
 	Before you can react, a rather large dick is stuffed into your mouth. You look up and see the man looking down at you impatiently, so you start bobbing your head up and down his shaft as you suck his dick. Two other men then grab your hands and force you to jerk them off as the man in your mouth starts getting rough, causing you to choke and gag, but nobody seems to care. Between the alcohol and your gag reflex, you almost throw up a few times, but manage to endure the rough treatment until he pulls out. However, you don''t have a chance to recover before you''re passed to another man who starts roughly throat fucking you. You lose focus and track of time as you''re passed around by the men and roughly abused by them.'
 	s=0
@@ -1303,8 +1301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore7_1':
 
 	act 'Finish':
 		*clr & cla
-		!! Apply cum from 12 men over Sveta''s face and hair
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bukkake4.jpg"></center>'
+	    '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bukkake4.jpg"></center>'
 		'Thankfully, they eventually stop and throw you back into the middle of the circle. You see them all jerking their dicks and squeal when one of them grabs you by the hair and cums over your face.
 		The rest of them take their turns blowing their loads over you and when they''re done, your face and hair are covered in sticky cum that drips off your chin. The men are seemingly finished with you, fixing their clothes and going back to smoking and drinking while ignoring you. Exhausted and drunk, you collapse into a ball on the floor, dejected as tears well up in your eyes. After a few minutes, you are able to get up on all fours, gather your clothes and slowly crawl to the bathroom, none of the men seemingly caring about you.'
 		s = 0
@@ -1319,7 +1316,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore7_1':
 
 		act 'Clean up and flee':
 			*clr & cla
-			!! Clean up cum from Sveta
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/bukkake5.jpg"></center>'
 			'Once in the bathroom, you pull yourself up to the sink and turn the water on. You rinse your face and hair as best as you can before collapsing onto the cold tiled floor of the bathroom. You sit there for a few seconds, overwhelmed by what''s happened, but you eventually manage to get dressed and stumble out of the bathroom. The men don''t ackowledge you and don''t say anything as you open the door and leave, slowly making your way down to the lobby where you phone a taxi to take you home.' 
 			cumspclnt = 2
@@ -1352,7 +1348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore8':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/dom_start.jpg"></center>'
     'The woman takes you to her car and makes you sit in the back seat. After a silent journey, you arrive at her home and she leads you inside to her bedroom.
 	"Get undressed slave!" she barks and pushes you forwards before disappearing out of the room.
-	Not wanting to anger your client, you strip out of your clothes and place them aside, finishing just as the woman reappears with some items, having exchanged her clothes for a leather dress. She pushes you down on all fours and pulls your ass up into the air. You look back and see she is holding a buttplug with a tail. She spreads your ass and the buttplug is eased into you with a loud pop, causing you to wince slightly. She then applies the collar tightly around your neck and pulls roughly on the leash, choking you slightly as she lifts you to your knees and pulls your head up so you''re looking up at her.'
+	Not wanting to anger your client, you strip out of your clothes and place them aside, finishing just as the woman reappears with some items, having exchanged her clothes for a leather dress. She pushes you down on all fours and pulls your ass up into the air. You look back and see she is holding a buttplug with a tail. She spreads your ass and the buttplug is eased into you with a loud pop, causing you to wince slightly. She then applies a collar tightly around your neck and pulls roughly on the leash, choking you slightly as she lifts you to your knees and pulls your head up so you''re looking up at her.'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/prostitute/dom_walk.jpg"></center>'