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  KevinSmarts 9d092ad9a3 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/3xpurt/glife 6 years ago
  Scott 'Anach 68a224ff14 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  julzor 2c795c7e92 added time to going and leaving the cafe in the city park 6 years ago
  julzor 64db804d87 job description fix and removed double state increase 6 years ago
  Scott 'Anach 35f4b37aa5 [changed] adjusted food/drink times (Forgot PC has no friends). 6 years ago
  julzor e5f89e0a78 small edit 6 years ago
  julzor 40cbcaae30 added back passing of time after the text edits 6 years ago
  julzor db644476ee Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts c2c1468ca5 Text edits from Lantera 6 years ago
  julzor 21259e968f small edits 6 years ago
  julzor 05ab96e21f made the info msg for the bank a little bit more clear 6 years ago
  julzor ddbf313fed added a normal way to enter the city residential apartment 6 years ago
  julzor 9ca5d05e16 adjusted taking out the trash to match the same action in the kitchen 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 78df22eb1f Fixes for bag snatcher event 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 337cdb3aa6 Pay adjustment 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 1955faf20f Turn random lovaers back on so it can actually be tested 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 289ca67485 Fixes for purse snatching so it makes sure you have a purse and that the chasing is based on running skill and stamina 6 years ago
  julzor f58c1f0a1a commented out the borislav link until hornguy finishes the content 6 years ago
  julzor 6619972b1a fixes for dimka 6 years ago
  julzor 409bc01ef3 removed a time inconsistency moving between the road an pavlovsk 6 years ago
  julzor 40a17dc399 time changes part 5 (city center) 6 years ago
  julzor 8d94d5e88f time changes part 4 (industrial region) 6 years ago
  julzor 48a9ba9aeb time changes part 3 (city suburbs) 6 years ago
  julzor b4a1be3043 time changes part two (vasilyevsky island) 6 years ago
  julzor 805c16aed3 added time to movement and made the flow of time more consistent 6 years ago
  julzor 114015474c made movement to the clinic and pharmacy time consistent 6 years ago
  julzor c97f6d4202 Revert "Revert "made the names and large and lower case of the names consistent among all city regions"" 6 years ago
  julzor 05c966bc22 Revert "made the names and large and lower case of the names consistent among all city regions" 6 years ago
  julzor 06da178741 made the names and large and lower case of the names consistent among all city regions 6 years ago
  julzor 55ead4afdf fixes for the new girl in town start 6 years ago
  Scott 'Anach 7354497626 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  Scott 'Anach f6a5602c94 [changed] Moved hydra/sleep stat caps to 'stat' to comply with other stat caps. Lowered health reduction from negative water. Added dehydration to alko event. 6 years ago
  hangry a3449e28cc changed all ' to '' in the starting comments 6 years ago
  hangry 8db05492e9 small changes 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 0af49964fd Text edit to present tense 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts f9e5f3d87a Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/julzor/glife 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 2288bd9e71 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/hornguy6/GLifeHornguy 6 years ago
  hangry 18c9233b61 fixed missing ends and missing : 6 years ago
  hangry 8c7fdb6590 dima fix 6 years ago
  hornguy6 99ca15a107 saving this to make sure I don't accidentally delete it again without a backup 6 years ago
  KevinSmarts 412d856743 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/julzor/glife 6 years ago
  Scott 'Anach 9ff6d244e1 [Fixed] hunters dialogue returning blanks screen. 6 years ago
  hangry 853a5bbf67 small text edits 6 years ago
  hangry eaa867aed2 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 6 years ago
  hangry 567a814acf typo 6 years ago
  hangry 01bec0ccab description fix 6 years ago
  hangry 62391b4f9a small changes 6 years ago
79 changed files with 1921 additions and 673 deletions
  1. 1 7
      locations/LCwork
  2. 8 3
      locations/Maria1
  3. 9 9
      locations/NewCloShop
  4. 14 14
      locations/Nord
  5. 20 20
      locations/ParkKafe
  6. 5 0
      locations/Snpc
  7. 5 2
      locations/agentned
  8. 12 10
      locations/anushapt
  9. 2 2
      locations/anushkaev1
  10. 3 4
      locations/autoservisF
  11. 12 14
      locations/autotraidF
  12. 6 6
      locations/beverage
  13. 27 25
      locations/budgetclothes
  14. 21 13
      locations/burger
  15. 17 18
      locations/butik
  16. 3 3
      locations/casino
  17. 3 3
      locations/cityTrain
  18. 6 7
      locations/clener
  19. 1 1
      locations/club
  20. 5 3
      locations/dimaEv
  21. 94 95
      locations/dinSex
  22. 5 7
      locations/dk
  23. 1 1
      locations/dolls
  24. 1 1
      locations/dorm
  25. 15 13
      locations/down
  26. 1 1
      locations/downlibrary
  27. 1 1
      locations/elevator
  28. 4 3
      locations/etoexhib
  29. 14 14
      locations/food
  30. 18 18
      locations/foto
  31. 3 1
      locations/gkafe
  32. 37 37
      locations/gopnew
  33. 2 2
      locations/hairsalon
  34. 1 2
      locations/hall
  35. 2 2
      locations/hanters
  36. 5 5
      locations/hotel
  37. 1 1
      locations/island
  38. 10 11
      locations/kafe
  39. 12 7
      locations/kiosk
  40. 1 0
      locations/korr
  41. 2 2
      locations/korrPar
  42. 3 2
      locations/kuhr
  43. 1 1
      locations/kuhrPar
  44. 1 1
      locations/lakecafe
  45. 3 3
      locations/metro
  46. 1215 1
      locations/motherkafeboss
  47. 12 12
      locations/musorkaexh
  48. 5 5
      locations/office
  49. 9 7
      locations/park
  50. 2 2
      locations/pavCommercial
  51. 2 2
      locations/pharmacy
  52. 115 103
      locations/poli
  53. 6 6
      locations/pornstudio
  54. 20 14
      locations/preNT
  55. 7 11
      locations/psiklin
  56. 5 5
      locations/qwBarPolet
  57. 5 5
      locations/qwBarPoletToilet
  58. 1 1
      locations/restoran
  59. 3 3
      locations/rinok
  60. 3 6
      locations/rinwork
  61. 6 6
      locations/road
  62. 3 4
      locations/salon
  63. 2 2
      locations/sauna
  64. 3 3
      locations/shop
  65. 1 1
      locations/shopdacha
  66. 6 6
      locations/sportShop
  67. 8 4
      locations/stat
  68. 0 3
      locations/stat_display
  69. 13 9
      locations/street
  70. 8 13
      locations/street_event
  71. 12 12
      locations/torgcentr
  72. 8 8
      locations/trashplace
  73. 2 2
      locations/vokzal
  74. 3 3
      locations/vokzalholle
  75. 1 1
      locations/vokzaltoilet
  76. 1 1
      locations/young_shop
  77. 1 1
      locations/youplace
  78. 2 0
      locations/zaprF
  79. 13 16
      locations/zoomagazine

+ 1 - 7
locations/LCwork

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start1':
 	*clr
 	horand = rand(1, 100)+ 40
 	facial += 1
-	slutty += 1
 	dynamic $venerasiakOral
 	dynamic $venerasiak
 	randLCpay = 1000
@@ -60,7 +59,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start2':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	horand = rand(1, 100)
-	slutty += 1
 	facial += 1
 	spafinloc = 11
 	gs 'cum_manage'
@@ -102,7 +100,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start3':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	horand = rand(1, 100) + 20
-	slutty += 1
 	facial += 1
 	spafinloc = 11
 	gs 'cum_manage'
@@ -149,7 +146,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	horand = rand(1, 100) + 20
-	slutty += 1
 	spafinloc = 14
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	randLCpay = 500
@@ -246,7 +242,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start5':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	horand = rand(1, 100)
-	slutty += 1
 	randLCpay = 500
 	girl += 1
 	dynamic $venerasiak
@@ -278,7 +273,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start6':
 	*clr
 	horand = rand(1, 100)
 	facial += 1
-	slutty += 1
 	randLCpay = 500
 	guy += 1
 
@@ -323,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Kitchen':
 	LCwork2day = daystart
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/bbq/kitchenworkcafe.jpg"></center>'
 	'Eugene gives you a warm smile and says: "That would be great, thanks!"'
-	'You spend the next hour and a half washing dishes, cleaning the floors, chopping vegetables and cooking food. When you''re finished, Eugene gives you your well-earned 175 <b>₽</b>.'
+	'You spend the next hour and a half washing dishes, cleaning the floors, chopping vegetables and cooking food. When you''re finished, Eugene gives you your well-earned 100 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 	act 'Continue':
 		gs 'stat'

+ 8 - 3
locations/Maria1

@@ -1,11 +1,13 @@
 # Maria1
 clr
+minut += 1
 '<right><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/casino/metrd.jpg"></right>'
 'You walk up to the front reception and get greeted by a smiling young woman behind the counter.'
 '"How can I help you?" she asks.'
 
 act 'See the room descriptions':
 	cla
+	minut += 2 
 	'There are 4 types of rooms available:'
 	'1. Budget rooms, our most simplest rooms for the ones that just want a bed to sleep the night. There''s a public bathroom shared with the rest of the floor.'
 	'2. Standard rooms, our reasonably priced rooms. Every room has a private bathroom and a TV.'
@@ -18,6 +20,7 @@ end
 if nom_1 = 0:
 	act 'Flirt':
 		cla
+		minut += 1
 		'You smile at her and ask, "What are you doing tonight?"'
 		'She looks at you, "Having dinner with my husband. Anything else you wanted to know?"'
 
@@ -28,6 +31,7 @@ if nom_1 = 0:
 		act 'Why is the hotel so crowded?':
 			cla
 			tobiQW = 2001
+			minut += 1
 			'"Why so the hotel so crowded today?" you ask.'
 			'"There''s an conference on indigenous languages, they meet every year and complain about their disappearing languages." he says laughing.'
 
@@ -40,6 +44,7 @@ if nomer = 0:
 
 	act 'Rent a room':
 		cla
+		minut += 1 
 		'"I would like to rent a room." you tell the girl at the counter.'
 		'"Unfortunately, we have no rooms available." she replies.'
 		act 'Walk away':gt'Maria1'
@@ -80,7 +85,7 @@ if nomer = 0:
 	end
 end
 
-act 'Move away':gt 'hotel'
+act 'Move away': minut += 1 & gt 'hotel'
 
 !{
 if nom_1 = 1 and flag = 0:
@@ -106,7 +111,7 @@ if nom_1 = 1 and flag = 0:
 		nom_nom = rand(1, 1000)
 		'"Thank you for staying at our hotel. Your room number is <<nom_nom>>."'
 
-		act 'Goodbye':gt 'hotel'
+		act 'Goodbye': minut += 1 & gt 'hotel'
 	end
 
 	act 'Change Your Mind':
@@ -117,7 +122,7 @@ if nom_1 = 1 and flag = 0:
 end
 
 if nom_1 = 0:
-	act 'Move away':gt 'hotel'
+	act 'Move away': minut += 1 & gt 'hotel'
 end
 }
 --- Maria1 ---------------------------------

+ 9 - 9
locations/NewCloShop

@@ -19,19 +19,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionista/fashinista.jpg"</center>'
 	'This shop features many big name brands and designer clothing. Even their bags look cool.'
 	
-	act 'View Clothing': gt 'NewCloShop', 'clothes'
-
-	act 'View panties': gt 'NewCloShop', 'panties'
-
-	act 'View bras': gt 'NewCloShop', 'bras'
-
-	act 'View purses': gt 'NewCloShop', 'purses'
-
 	act 'Leave':
-		minut += 15
+		minut += 3
 		view
 		gt 'torgcentr'
 	end
+	
+	act 'View Clothing': minut += 1 & gt 'NewCloShop', 'clothes'
+
+	act 'View panties': minut += 1 & gt 'NewCloShop', 'panties'
+
+	act 'View bras': minut += 1 & gt 'NewCloShop', 'bras'
+
+	act 'View purses': minut += 1 & gt 'NewCloShop', 'purses'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clothes':

+ 14 - 14
locations/Nord

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 
 	'<center><h2>St. Petersburg</h2></center>'
-	'<center><b>Industrial region</b></center>'
+	'<center><b>Industrial Region</b></center>'
 	if month >= 11 or month <= 3:
 		if hour >= 8 and hour <= 21:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/industw.jpg"></center>'
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	gs'street_event','Nord', 'extras'
 
-	act 'Walk to the main road to Pavlovsk (15 min)':minut += 15 & nroad = 0 & gt'road'
-	act 'Visit the Red Light district': gt 'Nord', 'redlight'
+	act 'Walk to the main road to Pavlovsk (0:15)': minut += 15 & nroad = 0 & gt'road'
+	act 'Visit the Red Light District (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord', 'redlight'
 	act 'Wait':
 		cla
 		waiting = input ("How long would you like to wait? (Not more than 120 minutes)")
@@ -65,33 +65,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	'The towns <a href="exec:hour += 1 & gt ''park'', ''start''">central park</a> is an hours walk from here.'
 
-	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$locM = ''Nord'' & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
+	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$locM = ''Nord'' & minut += 1 & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
 
 	'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''vokzal''">Train Station</a> to get to the small Town.'
 
 	if hour < 16: 
 		'The Bar "Rabotnik" is here, but it seems to be closed. A sign by the door tells you that it''s open every day between 16:00 and 24:00.'
 	else:
-		'The <a href="exec:gt ''qwBarPolet''">Bar "Rabotnik"</a> seems to be open.'
+		'The <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''qwBarPolet''">Bar "Rabotnik"</a> seems to be open.'
 	end
 	![slavaQW - Related to Glory; references to bar "Flight" have to be fixed - requirement to access the bar has been removed for now, since content not related - Variable not used by anything else at the moment]
 
 	litltown = 0
-	'There is a <a href="exec:gt ''zaprF'', ''start''">Gas</a> Station near the street'
+	'There is a <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''zaprF'', ''start''">Gas</a> Station near the street'
 
 	if hour >= 5 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec:gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> Station is within a 5 minute walk from here.'
-	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 20 and week < 7:'<a href="exec:gt ''autoservisF'', ''start''">Repair Shop</a>'
-	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and week > 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''autotraidF'', ''start''">Car Dealership</a>'
-	if hour >= 9 and hour < 17 and week < 6:'<a href="exec:gt ''dk'', ''start''">Community centre</a>'
+	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 20 and week < 7:'<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''autoservisF'', ''start''">Repair Shop</a>'
+	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and week > 1:'<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''autotraidF'', ''start''">Car Dealership</a>'
+	if hour >= 9 and hour < 17 and week < 6:'<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''dk'', ''start''">Community centre</a>'
 
 	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 17 and (StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0) or bumtolik > 3: '<a href="exec:GT ''buklinik'',''start''">Mercy clinic</a>'
-	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The parking lot, which is engulfed in bright lights, belongs to a <a href="exec:gt ''shop'', ''start''">Supermarket</a>'
-	if hour >= 12 and hour <= 19:'Above the door to a basement room is a bright neon sign for the <a href="exec:gt ''pirsingsalon'', ''start''">Tattoo & Piercing parlor</a>'
+	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The parking lot, which is engulfed in bright lights, belongs to a <a href="exec: minut += 2 & gt ''shop'', ''start''">Supermarket</a>'
+	if hour >= 12 and hour <= 19:'Above the door to a basement room is a bright neon sign for the <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''pirsingsalon'', ''start''">Tattoo & Piercing parlor</a>'
 	if tobiQW >= 1:'The old mansion, home to <a href="exec:gt ''kakuzu'', ''start''">Kakuzu</a>'
 
-	'There is a huge building, with bright lights, which houses a <a href="exec:gt ''casino''">Casino</a>.'
+	'There is a huge building, with bright lights, which houses a <a href="exec: minut += 10 & gt ''casino''">Casino</a>.'
 
-	if hour >= 14 or hour < 4:'Located far away from the buildings <a href="exec:gt ''lakecafe'', ''main''">barbecue</a>.'
+	if hour >= 14 or hour < 4:'Located far away from the buildings <a href="exec: minut += 2 & gt ''lakecafe'', ''main''">barbecue</a>.'
 	if jouryResult = 10:'You can go to one of the apartment blocks and visit <a href="exec:gt ''youry'',''start''">Yuri''s</a> flat'
 	if IvanKvartira > 0:'In one of these building is <a href="exec:gt ''ivanRoom''">Manager Ivans</a> apartment'
 
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'redlight':
 	'A shop for <a href="exec:gt ''sexshop'', ''start''">sex toys</a> is open for perverts from all around the city.'
 	if bordel > 0 and hour >= 20 or bordel > 0 and hour <= 3:'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
 
-	act 'Return to the industrial area': gt 'Nord'
+	act 'Return to the Industrial Region (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 	
 		act 'Wait':
 		cla

+ 20 - 20
locations/ParkKafe

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if arand = 6:'You are watching the cafe visitors and notice two <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''Armenians''">Armenians</a> sitting at a table.'
 	if arand = 7:'You are watching the cafe visitors and notice two <a href="exec:gt ''ParkKafe'', ''guys''">sporty guys</a> sitting at a table and drinking beer.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'guys':
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'guys':
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 		'You look at them intensely, but you don''t think they notice you.'
 
-		act 'Go home':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	else
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 
 		if parkara > 0:
 			'Jora Senya notices you, but continues to drink beer with his friends.'
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'klof 1':
 	'You try to rise from the grass in front of the guys, your legs and hands are shaking from the rough pounding they gave you. Your vagina feels itchy as warm gooey sperm tickles down your legs. "Did you like it baby?" Asks one of the guys mockingly.'
 
 	act 'Yes':gt 'event', 'klof 2'
-	act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Armenians':
@@ -120,11 +120,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Armenians':
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 		'You look at them intensely, but you don''t think they notice you.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	else
 		'Your looks were noticed by the Armenians and one of them comes over to your table with a bottle of champagne.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 
 		act 'Drink together':
 			cla
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Armenians':
 
 				'They finish in your mouth and laughing, they leave you there.'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 			else
 				if parkarman = 0:guy += 2 & parkarman = 1
 
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Armenians':
 
 				'One of them finishes in your mouth and you greedily swallow it all, while the other hastily pulls out and cums on your ass.'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'man':
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 		'You stealthily glance at the respectable man, but it doesn''t look like he noticed you.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	else
 		cla
 		'A man walks up to you and invites you to dance.'
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'man':
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'woman':
 	cla
 	'You stealthily glance at the imperious woman, but it doesn''t look like she noticed you.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'youth':
@@ -246,17 +246,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'youth':
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 		'You look at the group of snickering youths, but they don''t seem to notice you.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	else
 		'A tipsy young man approaches you and invites you to go and enjoy their company.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 
 		act 'Company':
 			cla
 			'You joined their table and started talking with the cheerful and noisy group of young people. You had a good time and they invite you to continue having fun with them at a late night party held at their apartment.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 
 			act 'Party!':
 				minut += 60
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'youth':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/cafe/student.jpg"></center>'
 				'You continue to enjoy yourself at the flat. As the night went on most people went home, you were left alone with one girl and six guys. The guys started kissing with the girl, eventually she got on her knees. The boys eagerly got their members out, the girl started stroking two of them with her hands, while the rest guys started masturbating in front of her face'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 
 				act 'Join her':
 					cls
@@ -311,13 +311,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'negros':
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0 or afra >= 1:
 		'You stealthily glance at the Africans, but it looks like they overlooked you.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	else
 		afra = 1
 		obs = 1
 		'A few of the Africans come over to your table, they are quite unrestrained, talking a lot in English, grabbing your back and chest. One of them introducing himself as DeMarcus, he tells you that they are all students from Africa and live in the dorm, he gives you directions on how to get to the hostel and find them.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -327,18 +327,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'the_boy':
 	if rand(0, 1) = 0 and gosh = 0:
 		'You secretly look at the young boy, but it looks like he didn''t notice you.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 	else
 		if gosh = 1:
 			'You secretly look at the young boy. It''s Gosha, but it looks like he didn''t notice you.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 		else
 			gosh = 1
 			obs = 1
 			'A young man comes to your table and introduces himself as Gosha, you become acquainted with him, you learn that he is a student and that he lives in the hostel. Gosha tells you how to get to the hostel and how to find his dorm.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'park', 'start'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 5 - 0
locations/Snpc

@@ -75,6 +75,11 @@ if grupTipe[numnpc] = 4:
 					minut += 5
 					npc_rel[$static_num] += 5
 					alko += 1
+					if pcs_hydra >= 100:
+						pcs_hydra += 5
+					else
+						pcs_hydra += 10
+					end
 					cumspclnt = 2
 					gs 'cum_cleanup'
 					pcs_breath = 0

+ 5 - 2
locations/agentned

@@ -5,7 +5,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	*clr
 	CLOSE ALL
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 10
 	gs'stat'
 	gs'dina'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
@@ -21,10 +20,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'View rentals': gt 'agentned', 'rent'
 	act 'View properties for sale': gt 'agentned', 'buy'
 	
-	act '<B>Leave</B>':gt'down'
+	act '<B>Leave</B>': minut += 5 & gt'down'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'buy':
+	minut += 5
 	if home_owned[1] = 0:
 		'There is an apartment in the city residential area available for 2 million <b>₽</b>.'
 		if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 2000000:act 'Buy the city residential apartment': gt 'agentned', 'buy_cityres'
@@ -62,6 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
+	minut += 5
 	if ArendHouseSL ! 0:
 		'You already have a rental home with us'
 	else
@@ -106,6 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 	act 'Decline':
 		cla
 		*clr
+		minut += 5
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head, “Actually, I need more time to think about this.”'
@@ -144,6 +146,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 	act 'Decline':
 		cla
 		*clr
+		minut += 5
 		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		'You shake your head, “Actually, I need more time to think about this.”'

+ 12 - 10
locations/anushapt

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 # anushapt
 
-!!Eduard Konstantinov - Anushka's father, who is known as being a hard and dangerous man. Since marrying Valeria and starting a family, he has mellowed out slightly, but he is still someone you don't want to piss off. In his youth, he was the leader of a local gang that would cause mayhem and chaos wherever they went. Surprisingly, he's managed to avoid spending any time behind bars.
+!!Eduard Konstantinov - Anushka''s father, who is known as being a hard and dangerous man. Since marrying Valeria and starting a family, he has mellowed out slightly, but he is still someone you don''t want to piss off. In his youth, he was the leader of a local gang that would cause mayhem and chaos wherever they went. Surprisingly, he''s managed to avoid spending any time behind bars.
 
-!!Valeria Konstantinov - Anushka's mother, who enjoyed being a bad girl and a heart breaker in her youth. Ironically, she is now a wife and mother of three, which she has come to resent. More often than not, she has nothing good to say about her family. Still living in the fantasy that she's still a youthful heart breaker makes her a hot topic among the rumormongers in the town that she flirts with a lot of men, but none of them are willing to risk fooling around with her as long as Eduard is her husband.
+!!Valeria Konstantinov - Anushka''s mother, who enjoyed being a bad girl and a heart breaker in her youth. Ironically, she is now a wife and mother of three, which she has come to resent. More often than not, she has nothing good to say about her family. Still living in the fantasy that she''s still a youthful heart breaker makes her a hot topic among the rumormongers in the town that she flirts with a lot of men, but none of them are willing to risk fooling around with her as long as Eduard is her husband.
 
-!!Maksim Konstantinov - Anushka's younger brother, who is four years younger than her. Until recently, he was considered a good kid, but now he has started to notice girls, bully other kids at school, and hassle old people in town. He seems to idolize Radomir, often saying he wants to be just like him.
+!!Maksim Konstantinov - Anushka''s younger brother, who is four years younger than her. Until recently, he was considered a good kid, but now he has started to notice girls, bully other kids at school, and hassle old people in town. He seems to idolize Radomir, often saying he wants to be just like him.
 
-!!Timofey Konstantinov - Anushka's youngest brother, who is a couple years younger than Maksim. Unlike his brother, he is still doing great in school and is seen as the nicer sibling compared to Maksim. When he isn't following his brother around, he is often found playing with the other kids or riding his skateboard around the apartment complex.
+!!Timofey Konstantinov - Anushka''s youngest brother, who is a couple years younger than Maksim. Unlike his brother, he is still doing great in school and is seen as the nicer sibling compared to Maksim. When he isn''t following his brother around, he is often found playing with the other kids or riding his skateboard around the apartment complex.
 
 !AnushkaLoc tells us where Anushka is located
 !----------------------------------------------
@@ -666,7 +666,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 	end
-	act 'Ask about her being a free-spirit.':
+	act 'Ask about her being a free-spirit':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
@@ -845,7 +845,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
 !!double check I did this if and else for hotcat correctly, the if should fire if hotcat is 5 or higher.
-		if hotcat => 5
+		if hotcat => 5:
 			'As you lay side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not that far from yours and you can''t help it, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and give her a kiss. She returns your kiss fully.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -929,6 +929,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 										gs 'arousal', 'end'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Get dressed':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+									end
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -1640,6 +1641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
 			'You blush slightly as she is watching you looking at her sex toys. You shake your head no and close the drawer, which just causes her to smirk in amusement.'
 			act 'Close the drawer':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+		end
 		act 'Strapon': gt 'anushkaev1', 'strapon1'
 	else
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1666,7 +1668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nushshower':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom/dry1.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you approach the bathroom you can hear the water running. Checking the door you find the latch still broke, as you open the door and walk in, the water turns off. You look around and see that the bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners of the walls and floors and the place probably hasn''t been cleaned for quite some time. The toilet sits along the far wall. There''s also a bathtub, with an old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above it. Anushka peeks out from around the curtain and when she see''s it''s you, she pushes it aside and grabs a towel. "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'
-	act 'Just came over to hangout.':
+	act 'Just came over to hangout':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 1
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1763,11 +1765,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_wait':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/nushbed.jpg"></center>'
-	if showerphotos = 0
+	if showerphotos = 0:
 		'While Nush gets dried off you go into her room to wait for her. The room is surprisingly clean, even if it''s somewhat dusty. The walls are covered with pictures and posters and the room is skillfully decorated with various strings of coloured lights. You take a seat on the bed as you wait for her to come join you. A couple of minutes later she walks in completely naked and quickly gets dressed before jumping on the bed next to you.'
-	if showerphotos = 1
+	elseif showerphotos = 1:
 		'Having messed around a bit taking her picture while she dried off, you decided to give her privacy and come wait in her room. The room is surprisingly clean, even if it''s somewhat dusty. The walls are covered with pictures and posters and the room is skillfully decorated with various strings of coloured lights. You take a seat on the bed as you wait for her to come join you. A couple of minutes later she walks in completely naked and quickly gets dressed before jumping on the bed next to you.'
-	if showerphotos = 2
+	elseif showerphotos = 2:
 		'With the impromptu photo shoot and selfies done the two of you head to her room. She walks from the bathroom to her room, completely naked. Once inside she quickly gets dressed, while you take a seat on her bed as she does. Once she is fully dressed she flops down on the bed next to you.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2, 'lesbian'

+ 2 - 2
locations/anushkaev1

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 												gs 'pain', 2, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 												gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian'
 												gs 'stat'
-												act '"Not so rough."':
+												act '"Not so rough"':
 													*clr & cla
 													'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/strapon/strapme10.jpg"></center>'
 													'Once she starts to really hammer your ass the pleasure stats, but the pain grows a bit. You grip the bed sheets tightly in your hands, unsure if the pleasure or pain is winning out. Rising up your upper body you grunt out. "Not so rough!"'
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 		'You pull out the strap-on harness and hold it up. "Yeah, I like this."'
 		'She laughs, walks over and takes it from you. She puts it back in the drawer and closes it. "Well then maybe you should buy one, then huh?"'
 		'A bit disappointed she doesn''t want to play you nod. "Yeah, guess I should."'
-		act 'Look around some more.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+		act 'Look around some more':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 	end
 end
 

+ 3 - 4
locations/autoservisF

@@ -5,7 +5,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
     $location_type = 'event'
 	cla
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'avtonorm'
 	'<center><b>Car Service Center</b></center>'
@@ -34,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/carservicesta/autoservis2.jpg"></center>'
 						'Since he tells you that it''s not gonna take long, you go into a waiting or recreation room, with couches and a TV. After about an our of flipping through channels, the car is ready and you pay <<normrem>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
-						act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+						act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -56,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'The car looks brandnew! Not a single dent, not one scratch, and when you start the engine to make sure it''s working, it sounds better than ever before. You ask the foreman how he and his crew managed to repair the car, and that quickly, but his only response is a shrug.'
 					'Before he sends you back into the office to pay the <<normrem>> <b>₽</b>, he asks you to not bring them cars in this pitiable state anymore - you''re not sure whether he was joking or not.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -82,7 +81,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 end
 
 --- autoservisF ---------------------------------

+ 12 - 14
locations/autotraidF

@@ -5,7 +5,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
     $location_type = 'event'
 	cla
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Car Dealership</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/usedcar/autotraid.jpg"></center>'
@@ -21,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Look at the used cars for sale':gt 'autotraidF', 'car'
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'manager1':
@@ -29,7 +28,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'manager1':
 	$loc = $CURLOC
 	cla
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Used Car Dealership</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/usedcar/autotraid.jpg"></center>'
@@ -38,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'manager1':
 	if cardrive = 9 and car > 0:
 		'The shifty-looking salesman circles around your car a couple of times, making exaggerated displeased noises all the while and pointing out practically every speck of dust as if it was a huge damage. When he turns to you, he states that the best he can do is <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> - while he claims that he''s taking a risk with that price, you''re pretty sure he''s ripping you off.'
 
-		act 'No way, not at that price - Leave':gt 'Nord'
+		act 'No way, not at that price - Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 		
 		act 'Sell ​your car (<<bupay>> <b>₽</b>) (1:00)':
 			cla
@@ -49,7 +47,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'manager1':
 			'So, as much as you hate it, you give your car one last look before you shake hands with him and follow him into the tiny shed he calls his "office" to sign the papers. He hands you the money in cash and, with a nasty grin, suggests that you look around the yard.' 
 			'"Maybe you see something you like."'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 		end
 	elseif cardrive ! 9:
 		'The salesman tells you, his smile sneering rather than friendly, that he needs to look at you car before he can tell you how much it''s worth. "But if you want, I can have somebody tow it here. It only costs 3000 <b>₽</b>. Very cheap!"'
@@ -67,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'manager1':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
@@ -112,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -144,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you... and that''s it.' 
 					'If you want to get the car to a garage, you''ll have to go there and have it towed.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -175,7 +173,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -206,7 +204,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -237,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -268,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -300,7 +298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -333,7 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'car':
 					'You agree. Before you know it, the car salesman and you have signed all the necessary documents, you hand over the <<bupay>> <b>₽</b> in cash and the car is yours.' 
 					'Since it''s crammed in between about a million other vehicles, the car salesman moves it outside near the yard''s entrance for you and warns you that there is very little gas in the tank.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 6 - 6
locations/beverage

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_kva':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 1
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	fat += 2
 	money -= val($_drink['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 5
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_jui':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 1
 	alko -= 1
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	fat += 3
 	money -= val($_drink['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 8
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_mil':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 1
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	fat += 6
 	money -= val($_drink['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 5
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_wat':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 1
 	alko -= 1
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	money -= val($_drink['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 10
 	pcs_energy += 4
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_cof':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
 	alko -= 1
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	money -= val($_drink['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 5
 	pcs_mood += 20
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bev_tea':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
 	alko -= 1
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	money -= val($_drink['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 10
 	pcs_mood += 20

+ 27 - 25
locations/budgetclothes

@@ -19,76 +19,78 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 	end
 
+	act 'Leave the store':
+		cla
+		$shoplocation = ''
+		if torg = 1:
+			minut += 3
+			gt 'torgcentr'
+		else
+			gt 'Gshveyfab', 'start'
+		end
+	end
+	
 	act 'Visit clothing department':
 		cla
+		
+		act 'Return':gt 'budgetclothes', 'start'
+		
 		act 'View cheap clothing':
-			minut += 2
+			minut += 1
 			gt 'budgetclothes', 'clothes'
 		end
 		
 		act 'View office wear':
-			minut += 2
+			minut += 1
 			gt 'budgetclothes', 'office'
 		end
 
 		act 'View uniforms':
-			minut += 2
+			minut += 1
 			gt 'budgetclothes', 'uniform'
 		end
 
 		act 'View school uniforms':
-			minut += 2
+			minut += 1
 			gt 'budgetclothes', 'school'
 		end
-
-		act 'Return':gt 'budgetclothes', 'start'
 	end
 
 	act 'Visit shoe department':
 		cla
+		
+		act 'Return':gt 'budgetclothes', 'start'
+		
 		act 'Look at regular shoes':
-			minut += 2
+			minut += 1
 			gt 'budgetclothes', 'shoes'
 		end
 
 		act 'Look at exercise shoes':
-			minut += 2
+			minut += 1
 			gt 'budgetclothes', 'trainers'
 		end
-
-		act 'Return':gt 'budgetclothes', 'start'
 	end
 
 	act 'View coats':
-		minut += 2
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'coats'
 	end
 
 	act 'View purses':
-		minut += 2
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'purses'
 	end
 
 	act 'View panties':
-		minut += 2
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'panties'
 	end
 
 	act 'View bras':
-		minut += 2
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'budgetclothes', 'bras'
 	end
-
-	act 'Leave the store':
-		cla
-		$shoplocation = ''
-		if torg = 1:
-			minut += 3
-			gt 'torgcentr'
-		else
-			gt 'Gshveyfab', 'start'
-		end
-	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clothes':

+ 21 - 13
locations/burger

@@ -6,7 +6,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	cls
     $location_type = 'public_indoors'
 	CLOSE ALL
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:
 		fcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
@@ -26,7 +25,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	act 'Leave':
 		cla
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'down'
 	end
 
@@ -41,16 +40,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Ask about work':gt 'burger', 'apply'
 	elseif posuda >= 3 and posudaA = 0:
 		act 'Go to the manager':gt 'burger', 'manager'
-	elseif posuda >= 1 and posudaday ! daystart and NoBistroWork = 0 and PersSecWork = 0:
+	end
+	
+	if posuda >= 1 and posudaday ! daystart and NoBistroWork = 0 and PersSecWork = 0:
 		act 'Wash the dishes for 70 <b>₽</b> (1:00)':gt 'burger', 'dishes'
-	elseif posudaA >= 1 and posudaAday ! daystart and hour < 10 and NoBistroWork = 0 and PersSecWork = 0:
-		act 'Wash the floor for 70 <b>₽</b>(1:00)':gt 'burger', 'floor'
+	end
+	
+	if posudaA >= 1 and posudaAday ! daystart and hour < 10 and NoBistroWork = 0 and PersSecWork = 0:
+		act 'Wash the floor for 70 <b>₽</b> (1:00)':gt 'burger', 'floor'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
+	minut += 5
 	'You go to the office of the owner. He is sitting at his desk, dealing with your papers. Anatoly Borisovich looks at you and says, "Well? Do you have any news?"'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
@@ -58,6 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 	if money >= 650000:
 		act 'Repay the debt (650,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cls
+			minut += 5
 			money -= 650000
 			IvanPodstavaQW = 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -70,6 +75,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'office':
 	if IvanEvidence = 1:
 		act 'Show proof':
 			cls
+			minut += 5
 			IvanPodstavaQW = 6
 			IvanKvartira = 0
 			IvanEvidence = 0
@@ -83,6 +89,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'apply':
 	cla
+	minut += 5
 	'You go into the manager''s office where you meet a smart girl. She begins to tell you, that you can work almost every day, "Come in any time, run the snack bar and wash the dishes for 1:00. You will get 70 <b>₽</b> immediately on hand."'
 
 	act 'Refuse and leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
@@ -98,6 +105,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'manager':
 	cla
+	minut += 5
 	'You go to the office of the manager. The girl tells the manager that you are doing good work and offers you another part-time job, "You can wash the floors in the morning, from 8 to 9. 1 hour of cleaning floors will get you 70 <b>₽</b> immediately on hand."'
 
 	act 'Refuse and leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
@@ -309,7 +317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 							'Anatoly pale, flushed and hissing angrily jumps out of the fitting followed by your loud laughter.'
 
 							act 'Leave':
-								minut += 5
+								minut += 1
 								gt 'down'
 							end
 						end
@@ -426,7 +434,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/bj4.jpg"></center>'
 						'You squat in front of the manager and swallow his sperm before licking the remnants of his semen off of the still standing, but quickly lowering penis.'
-						'Finally Ivan sinks back, completely satisfied and gives you half thousand <b>₽</b> for the work you have done.'
+						'Finally Ivan sinks back, completely satisfied and gives you 500 <b>₽</b> for the work you have done.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -470,7 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/bj4.jpg"></center>'
 							'You squat in front of the manager and swallow his sperm as you began to lick the remnants of his semen off of the still standing, but quickly lowering penis.'
-							'Finally Ivan sinks back, completely satisfied and gives you half thousand <b>₽</b> for the work you have done.'
+							'Finally Ivan sinks back, completely satisfied and gives you 500 <b>₽</b> for the work you have done.'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -502,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/diner/sex/bjud.jpg"></center>'
 				'You crawl under the table and Ivan pulls out his penis in front of your face. You wrap your lips around it and begin to suck trying to get it into your mouth as deeply as possible. It is cramped and uncomfortable under the table, but you cope with it and after a few minutes of skilfully sucking him off you get Ivan to release his semen into your mouth. You quickly start to swallow, trying to avoid getting your clothes dirty.'
-				'Afterwards, Ivan takes out half a thousand rubles and hands them to you.'
+				'Afterwards, Ivan takes out 500 <b>₽</b> and hands them to you.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -613,7 +621,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dishes':
 				soplakTimes1 += 1
 				if soplaktimes1=10:set soplaktimes=3
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/mouth/cum19.jpg"></center>'
-				'A hot jet of sperm slaps you in the mouth, while you continue to stroke his member. You are careful not to spill a drop of the nasty smelling liquid out of your mouth. Finally the stream dries up and you swallow the sperm. He grins and tosses three-hundred rubles on the floor. You pick them up and hide them in your pocket as you rise up from your knees and leave the office.'
+				'A hot jet of sperm slaps you in the mouth, while you continue to stroke his member. You are careful not to spill a drop of the nasty smelling liquid out of your mouth. Finally the stream dries up and you swallow the sperm. He grins and tosses 300 <b>₽</b> on the floor. You pick them up and hide them in your pocket as you rise up from your knees and leave the office.'
 				''
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -699,7 +707,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss':
 						cls
 						minut += 1
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You tell him, that you already work somewhere else. Anatoly Borisovich smiles a little, "What can I do to make you quit your job and work for me? You can think about it, I won''t force you, but I''ll pay you a normal salary. You will get 1250 rubles per day."'
+						'You tell him, that you already work somewhere else. Anatoly Borisovich smiles a little, "What can I do to make you quit your job and work for me? You can think about it, I won''t force you, but I''ll pay you a normal salary. You will get 1250 <b>₽</b> per day."'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 					end
@@ -709,7 +717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss':
 							cls
 							minut += 1
 							gs 'stat'
-							'You ask about the job. Anatoly Borisovich smiles a little, "You can think about it, I won''t force you, but I''ll pay you a normal salary. You will get 1250 rubles per day. I''m looking for loyalty, hard work, and strict compliance with my guidelines."'
+							'You ask about the job. Anatoly Borisovich smiles a little, "You can think about it, I won''t force you, but I''ll pay you a normal salary. You will get 1250 <b>₽</b> per day. I''m looking for loyalty, hard work, and strict compliance with my guidelines."'
 
 							act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
@@ -775,7 +783,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boss':
 				end
 
 			elseif bistroQW >= 65:
-				'You sit down on a chair and Anatoly Borisovich gives you a grim look. "I did not think you were so cheap. What is your fee? 300 rubles for a blowjobto?" He pulls 300 <b>₽</b> out of his pocket and throws them on the floor. "Get down on your knees and do your work, slut."'
+				'You sit down on a chair and Anatoly Borisovich gives you a grim look. "I did not think you were so cheap. What is your fee? 300 <b>₽</b> for a blowjob?" He pulls 300 <b>₽</b> out of his pocket and throws them on the floor. "Get down on your knees and do your work, slut."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 

+ 17 - 18
locations/butik

@@ -9,7 +9,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	clr
 	*clr
 	mag = 1
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:
 		fcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
@@ -52,15 +51,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	'The boutique sells designer winter coats, formal clothing, beautiful shoes, expensive underwear and exquisite handbags.'
 
-	act 'Browse the clothing': gt 'butik', 'clothes'
+	act 'Leave the boutique':
+		cla
+		minut += 3
+		gt 'torgcentr'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Browse the clothing': minut += 1 & gt 'butik', 'clothes'
 
-	act 'Browse the panties': gt 'butik', 'panties'
+	act 'Browse the panties': minut += 1 & gt 'butik', 'panties'
 
-	act 'Browse the bras': gt 'butik', 'bras'
+	act 'Browse the bras': minut += 1 & gt 'butik', 'bras'
 
-	act 'Browse the shoes': gt 'butik', 'shoes'
+	act 'Browse the shoes': minut += 1 & gt 'butik', 'shoes'
 
-	act 'Browse the handbags': gt 'butik', 'purses'
+	act 'Browse the handbags': minut += 1 & gt 'butik', 'purses'
 
 	if money >= 50000:
 		if coat[9] < 1:
@@ -71,12 +76,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if coat[11] = 0:dynamic 'act ''Look at designer coat 11'':gt ''clothing'', ''view_clothing_item'', ''shop'', ''coat'', 11, 50000'
 		end
 	end
-
-	act 'Leave the boutique':
-		cla
-		minut += 5
-		gt 'torgcentr'
-	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clothes':
@@ -245,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 	'"Can I help you with anything?" the seller asks.'
 
 	act 'No, thank you':gt 'butik', 'start'
-	act 'Silently leave':gt 'down'
+	act 'Silently leave': minut += 8 & gt 'down'
 
 	act 'Stare at her breasts':
 		cls
@@ -285,7 +284,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 						'As a result, you spent time together, while in your head you wonder about Rima, and her mysterious and curious body.'
 						'As you go home you suddenly feel eyes on you'
 
-						act 'Ignore':gt 'down'
+						act 'Ignore': minut += 8 & gt 'down'
 
 						act 'Look around':
 							cls
@@ -307,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 								'"What is the situation where when?" You will not hide anger.'
 								'"Yes, in the vacant lot where you were having ''fun'' with a dog" girl replied with a grin.'
 
-								act 'Yes you ohereli! (Go)':gt 'down'
+								act 'Yes you ohereli! (Go)': minut += 8 & gt 'down'
 
 								act 'Extort taken in head? What do you want?':
 									cls
@@ -324,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 									'"<<$pcs_nickname>>" you reply.'
 									'"I''m looking forward to our meeting." she says as she leaves.'
 
-									act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+									act 'Leave': minut += 8 & gt 'down'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -383,7 +382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 								'"Let''s meet then," You agree"By way I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>"'
 								'"Margaret" She responds'
 
-								act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+								act 'Leave': minut += 8 & gt 'down'
 							end
 						end
 					end
@@ -392,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rima':
 				'You and Rimma search for a dress, but couldn''t find one. You leave and Rimma is a little sad in saying goodbye to you.'
 				'You think it might help keep her attention if you make a real effort with your appearance and wear one of the nce outfits from here.'
 
-				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 8 & gt 'down'
 			end
 		end
 	end

+ 3 - 3
locations/casino

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 # casino
-minut += 10
+
 gs 'stat'
 '<right><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/casino/zdcasino.jpg"></right>'
 'You stand in front of the door of the huge building casinos.'
 
-act 'Enter the casino':gt 'hall'
+act 'Enter the casino': minut += 1 & gt 'hall'
 
-act 'Return to the city industrial area':gt 'nord'
+act 'Return to the city industrial area': minut += 10 & gt 'nord'
 
 !!if tobiQW < 1000:tobiQW = 1000
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/cityTrain

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'In the parking lot is <a href="exec:GS ''carF'',''start''">your <<$car>></a>.'
 	end
 
-	act 'Enter the station building': gt 'cityTrain', 'inside'
+	act 'Enter the station building': minut += 1 & gt 'cityTrain', 'inside'
 	act 'Go to the city center':minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 end
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 	else
 		act 'Buy a ticket': gt 'cityTrain', 'tickets'
 	end
-	act 'Leave the station': gt 'cityTrain', 'start'
+	act 'Leave the station': minut += 1 & gt 'cityTrain', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tickets':
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_ticket':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave the ticket office':minut += 1 & gt 'cityTrain', 'inside'
+	act 'Leave the ticket office': minut += 1 & gt 'cityTrain', 'inside'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'platform':

+ 6 - 7
locations/clener

@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	*clr
 	CLOSE ALL
 	if sound = 0 and hour >= 8 and hour < 17:PLAY 'sound/office.mp3',30 & PLAY 'sound/office2.mp3',30
-	minut += 5
 	clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:
@@ -207,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			cla
 			'You ask Boris Ivanovich whether he has more work for you. He says that he needs a cleaner to clean the toilets. You''ll be almost able to work every day. Cleaning toilets for an hour earns you 65 <b>₽</b> upfront.'
 
-			act 'Refuse and leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Refuse and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 			act 'Accept':
 				cla
@@ -222,9 +221,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if clener = 1:
 		act 'Ask about available jobs':
 			cla
-			'You head into the office that advertised the job. You see a large man in a jacket sitting there. He tells you can clean the Office for 200 <b>₽</b> per hour, payed upfront.'
+			'You head into the office that advertised the job. You see a large man in a jacket sitting there. He tells you can clean the Office for 65 <b>₽</b> per hour, payed upfront.'
 
-			act 'Refuse and leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Refuse and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 			act 'Accept':
 				cla
@@ -328,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						pcs_dom += 1
 						jouryResult = 1
 						'You''re offended by his behaviour and without any hesitation you tell Yuri to go to hell. He quickly turns and walks away.'
-						'You continue on by mopping the floor and polish the toilets and urinals. You are given 100 <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+						'You continue on by mopping the floor and polish the toilets and urinals. You are given 65 <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'clener', 'start'
 					end
@@ -382,13 +381,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				exit
 			end
 
-			'You wash the floor and polish all the booths and urinals. You are given 100 <b>₽</b> for your work.'
+			'You wash the floor and polish all the booths and urinals. You are given 65 <b>₽</b> for your work.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'clener', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 --- clener ---------------------------------

+ 1 - 1
locations/club

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Night club</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/nightclub/club.jpg"></center>'
-	'The entrance area of the club is full of young people. The entrance itself is guarded by the heavy and strong type of men, who check everyones passport. A Ticket costs 500 <b>₽</b>.'
+	'The entrance area of the club is full of young people. The entrance itself is guarded by the heavy and strong type of men, who check everyones passport. A Ticket costs 250 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 	act 'Return to the city center':
 		minut += 5

+ 5 - 3
locations/dimaEv

@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackmail':
 		'"You fucking whore!" he roars, standing quickly and flinging his chair halfway across the room, "You useless fucking whore. You think you can come prancing in here just like that and all is forgiven?"'
 		'You barely have time to register that he is moving before he grabs your lower jaw with bruising force. He spits in your face violently. "You..You..Fucking whore." he screams in your face.'
 		'You never felt the blow, but he must have hit you as you curl now on the floor into a ball. He grabs you by the hair and forces you into a chair.'
-		act 'Continue':gt 'dimaEv', 'dimkawarn'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'dimaEv', 'dimkawarns'
 	else
 		'The room is surprisingly clean and organized for a boys room. It is fairly tastefully decorated. Along one wall next to the bed is a wardrobe with mirrored doors, a small zebra pattern love seat sits along a wall near the bed. Next to the love seat is a mini fridge and just above that on a shelf is a stereo system. There is also a desk with a desktop computer setup on it and a laptop laying nearby as well. All in the room seems pretty expensive. Sitting at the desk is Dimka, he apparently heard you open the door as he turns to face you as you walk in.'
 		'As he sees you, an evil smile spreads across his face. "So good of you to join me. Now take off your clothes. Slut."'
@@ -1031,10 +1031,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka_warning':
 !!this one is if Dimka sends a warning
-	if dimkawarn = 1:
+	if dimkawarn = 0:
 		cls
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		DimkaWarnedToday = 1
+		dimkawarn += 1
 		minut += 5     
 		gs 'stat'
 	   '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/head/7.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1046,10 +1047,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Dimka_warning':
 	   'You turn the envelope over in your hands. It only has your name written on the front with the word "Private". You open it and find pictures of you sucking a dick. You realize these are from the video that Dimka made that first time you went to his house.'
 	   'On the back of one of the pictures you find a note. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, come see me or the next envelope will be for your mom." There is no signature.'
 	   act 'Move away':gt 'korrPar'
-	elseif dimkaWarn >= 2:
+	elseif dimkaWarn >= 1:
 		cls
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		DimkaWarnedToday = 1
+		dimkawarn += 1
 		minut += 5     
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/package1.jpg"></center>'

+ 94 - 95
locations/dinSex

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ $dinrandbj = {
 	tperbjran = rand(0, 3)
 	if tperbjran = 0:$tperbj = 'Your <<$liptalk>> wraps around <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member'
 	if tperbjran = 1:$tperbj = 'Your <<$liptalk>> clasps <<$xyr>> the purple head of the <<dick>> centimeter member'
-	if tperbjran = 2:$tperbj = 'You held your <<$liptalk>> on the head of <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member and pulled it into your mouth'
-	if tperbjran = 3:$tperbj = 'The <<dick>> centimeter dick rested between your <<$liptalk>>, you opened them slightly and let the dick in your mouth.'
+	if tperbjran = 2:$tperbj = 'You hold your <<$liptalk>> on the head of <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member and pull it into your mouth'
+	if tperbjran = 3:$tperbj = 'The <<dick>> centimeter dick rests between your <<$liptalk>>, you open them slightly and let the dick in your mouth.'
 	if tperbjran = 4:$tperbj = ''   
 	if tperbjran = 5:$tperbj = ''
 	tperbjran2 = rand(0, 2)
-	if tperbjran2 = 0:$tperbj2 = 'Your mouth quickly opened and was filled by a slightly salty and hard cock, which you started to suck.'
-	if tperbjran2 = 1:$tperbj2 = 'The big cock inside your mouth went hard and hot, and you started sucking'
+	if tperbjran2 = 0:$tperbj2 = 'Your mouth quickly opens and is filled by a slightly salty and hard cock, which you start to suck.'
+	if tperbjran2 = 1:$tperbj2 = 'The big cock inside your mouth grows hard and hot, and you start sucking'
 	if tperbjran2 = 2:$tperbj2 = 'The hard cock around your <<$liptalk>> is filling your whole mouth and with every move it''s going down your throat.'
 	if tperbjran2 = 3:$tperbj2 = ''
 	if tperbjran2 = 4:$tperbj2 = ''
@@ -22,17 +22,17 @@ $dinrandbj = {
 
 $dinrandswallow = {
 	tperswalrand = rand(0, 2)
-	if tperswalrand = 0:$tperswal = 'Suddenly your mouth is shot with a jet of viscous semen.'
-	if tperswalrand = 1:$tperswal = 'The cock twitched and jets of sperm flew between your lips into your mouth.'
-	if tperswalrand = 2:$tperswal = 'Your mouth has been filled with sperm and you started to remove your mouth from the dick.'
+	if tperswalrand = 0:$tperswal = 'Suddenly shots of viscous semen fill your mouth.'
+	if tperswalrand = 1:$tperswal = 'The cock twitches and jets of sperm fly between your lips into your mouth.'
+	if tperswalrand = 2:$tperswal = 'Your mouth is filled with sperm and you move back to allow the dick to slide out.'
 	tperswalrand2 = rand(0, 2)
-	if tperswalrand2 = 0:$tperswal2 = 'Your mouth is quickly filled with warm sperm and you feel its sharp taste.'
-	if tperswalrand2 = 1:$tperswal2 = 'Your mouth is filled with cum and began to run down your <<$liptalk2>>'
-	if tperswalrand2 = 2:$tperswal2 = 'Hot seed quickly filled your mouth, making you experience the whole scale and sharp taste of sperm.'
+	if tperswalrand2 = 0:$tperswal2 = 'Your mouth quickly fills with warm sperm and you feel its sharp taste.'
+	if tperswalrand2 = 1:$tperswal2 = 'Your mouth fills with cum and begins to run down your <<$liptalk2>>'
+	if tperswalrand2 = 2:$tperswal2 = 'Hot seed quickly fills your mouth, making you experience the whole stale and sharp taste of sperm.'
 	tperswalrand3 = rand(0, 2)
-	if tperswalrand3 = 0:$tperswal3 = 'You gulped and swallowed the sperm located in your mouth. The taste of semen stayed in your mouth and you could smell <<$xyr>> scent.'
+	if tperswalrand3 = 0:$tperswal3 = 'You gulp and swallow the sperm filling your mouth. The taste of semen stays in your mouth and you can smell <<$xyr>> scent.'
 	if tperswalrand3 = 1:$tperswal3 = 'You swallow the warm cum that fills your mouth and lick the remnants of the seed with your <<$liptalk3>>.'
-	if tperswalrand3 = 2:$tperswal3 = 'You swallow the viscous semen that is filling your mouth, and then lick your lips to make sure you don''t leave any drop.'
+	if tperswalrand3 = 2:$tperswal3 = 'You swallow the viscous semen that is filling your mouth, and then lick your lips to make sure you don''t leave a single drop.'
 	'<<$tperswal>> <<$tperswal2>> <<$tperswal3>>'
 }
 
@@ -144,10 +144,10 @@ $sexstart = {
 		protect = 1
 		if preziktype = 2:
 			sexcontra = 7
-			'<<$boydesc>> took your sabotaged condom and put it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
+			'<<$boydesc>> take your sabotaged condom and put it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
 		else
 			sexcontra = 3
-			'<<$boydesc>> took your condom and put it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
+			'<<$boydesc>> take your condom and put it on <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter member.'
 		end
 	else
 		sexcontra = 0
@@ -266,47 +266,47 @@ $sexstart2 = {
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood -= 15
 			pcs_willpwr -= 15
-			'You groaned in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrated your pussy. Tears flowed from your eyes and it felt like someone drove a red-hot rod in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You groan in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrates your pussy. Tears flow from your eyes and it feels like someone drove a red-hot poker in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 1:
 			if vgape < 2:vgape = 2
 			pcs_horny -= 10
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			pcs_willpwr -= 10
-			'You bite your lip in pain when <<$boydesc>> entered, it is very painful. You are frowning and moaning in pain while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You bite your lip in pain when <<$boydesc>> enters, it is very painful. You frown and moan in pain while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 2:
 			if vgape < 1:vgape = 1
 			pcs_horny -= 5
 			pcs_mood -= 5
 			pcs_willpwr -= 5
-			'You winced at the sudden pain when <<$boydesc>> entered, it hurts but it gradually became quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy, but you did not succeed.'
+			'You wince at the sudden pain when <<$boydesc>> enters, it hurts but it gradually becomes quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy, but you do not succeed.'
 		elseif orgazm = 3:
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_willpwr += 5
-			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching when <<$boydesc>> entered you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching when <<$boydesc>> enters you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 4:
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			pcs_willpwr += 10
-			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching as <<$boydesc>> entered you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end.'
+			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching as <<$boydesc>> enters you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreases a little and remains like that until the end.'
 		elseif orgazm = 5:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood += 15
 			pcs_willpwr += 15
 			orgasm += 1
 			vaginalOrgasm += 1
-			'You flinched from a pleasant feeling when your pussy is stretched by <<$xyr>> dick. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling became unbearable and your entire body was covered with hot waves of orgasm, you scream with pleasure.'
+			'You flinched from a pleasant feeling when your pussy is stretched by <<$xyr>> dick. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling becomes unbearable and your entire body is covered with hot waves of orgasm, you scream with pleasure.'
 		elseif orgazm = 6:
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_willpwr += 5
-			'You can feel <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This feels nice between your legs , but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick is significantly less than what your pussy needs. This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end.'
+			'You can feel <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This feels nice between your legs, but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick is significantly less than what your pussy needs. This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreases a little and remains like that until the end.'
 		end
 		if pcs_vag = 0:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood -= 15
 			pcs_willpwr -= 15
 			pcs_vag += 1
-			'You were biting your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears started to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> entered, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
+			'You are biting your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears start to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> enters, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
 		elseif pcs_vag <= dick:
 			pcs_vag += 1
 		end
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ $sexstart3 = {
 		pcs_horny = 0
 		pcs_mood -= 10
 		pcs_willpwr -= 10
-		'You have your period and blood slowly flows from your vagina while you move on <<$xyr>> dick. This is giving you painful and pleasants sensations . You moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter penis fucks you.'
+		'You have your period and blood slowly flows from your vagina while you move on <<$xyr>> dick. This is giving you painful and pleasant sensations .You moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter penis fucks you.'
    
 	elseif cycle > 0 and pcs_vag > 0:
 		!!no monthly
@@ -336,7 +336,6 @@ $sexstart3 = {
 		
 		smazka = pcs_horny / 10
 		prinat = smazka + pcs_vag
-
 		if dick >= prinat * 2:
 			!!member of the critical features more years
 			if silavag = 0:orgazm = 0
@@ -431,49 +430,49 @@ $sexstart3 = {
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood -= 15
 			pcs_willpwr -= 15
-			'You groaned in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrated your pussy. Tears flowed from your eyes and it felt like someone drove a red-hot rod in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You groan in pain as <<$boydesc>> penetrates your pussy. Tears flow from your eyes and it feels like someone drove a red hot poker in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 1:
 			if vgape < 2:vgape = 2
 			pcs_horny -= 10
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			pcs_willpwr -= 10
-			'You bite your lip in pain when you got on the penis and felt the dick of <<$boydesc>> entering you. It really hurts between your legs. You are frowning and moaning in pain while moveing up and down on his strong <<dick>> centimeter penis.'
+			'You bite your lip in pain as feel <<$boydesc>>''s cock entering you. It really hurts between your legs. You are frowning and moaning in pain while moving up and down on his strong <<dick>> centimeter penis.'
 			
 		elseif orgazm = 2:
 			if vgape < 1:vgape = 1
 			pcs_horny -= 5
 			pcs_mood -= 5
 			pcs_willpwr -= 5
-			'You winced at the sudden pain when you felt the penis of <<$boydesc>> entering you.  The pain between your legs gradually dissapeared and it became quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while rhythmically moving on <<$xyr>> sturdy and strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucking your pussy, but you do not succeed.'
+			'You wince at the sudden pain as you feel the penis of <<$boydesc>> entering you.  The pain between your legs gradually disappears and it becomes quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while rhythmically moving on <<$xyr>> sturdy and strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucking your pussy, but you do not succeed.'
 		elseif orgazm = 3:
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_willpwr += 5
-			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretched when you lowered yourself on the cock of <<$boydesc>> and you could feel him entering you. Between your legs you get a little nice feeling when you move up and down on a strong <<dick>> centimeter penis.'
+			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretched as you lower yourself on the cock of <<$boydesc>> and you can feel him entering you. Between your legs you get a little nice feeling as you move up and down on a strong <<dick>> centimeter penis.'
 		elseif orgazm = 4:
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			pcs_willpwr += 10
-			'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretched when you lowered yourself on the cock of <<$boydesc>> and you could feel him entering you. Between your legs you get a little nice feeling when you move up and down on a strong <<dick>> centimeter penis. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end.'
+			'You try to enjoy the unique feeling of your pussy being stretched as you lower yourself on the <<$boydesc>>''s cock and you feel him entering you. Between your legs you get a little nice feeling as you move up and down on a strong <<dick>> centimeter penis. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreases a little and remains like that until the end.'
 		elseif orgazm = 5:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood += 15
 			pcs_willpwr += 15
 			orgasm += 1
 			vaginalOrgasm += 1
-			'You flinched from a pleasant feeling when your pussy is stretched by <<$xyr>> dick. Between your legs you are getting a very warm and pleasant feeling when you move up and down on the strong <<dick>> centimeter penis. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling became unbearable and your entire body was covered with hot waves of orgasm. You scream with pleasure.'
+			'You flinch from a pleasant feeling as your pussy is stretched by <<$xyr>> dick. Between your legs you are getting a very warm and pleasant feeling as you move up and down on the strong <<dick>> centimeter penis. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations start building up in your stomach. Then the feeling becomes unbearable and your entire body is covered with hot waves of orgasm. You scream with pleasure.'
 		elseif orgazm = 6:
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_willpwr += 5
-			'You can feel <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This feels nice between your legs , but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick  is significantly less than what your pussy needs .This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end.'
+			'You can feel <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This feels nice between your legs, but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick is significantly less than what your pussy needs. This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreases a little and remains like that until the end.'
 		end
 		if pcs_vag = 0:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood -= 15
 			pcs_willpwr -= 15
 			pcs_vag += 1
-			'You were biting your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears started to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> entered, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
+			'You are biting your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears start to flow from your eyes as <<$boydesc>> enters you, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
 		elseif pcs_vag <= dick:
 			pcs_vag += 1
 		end
@@ -489,7 +488,7 @@ $sexstart4 = {
 		pcs_horny = 0
 		pcs_mood = pcs_mood - 10
 		pcs_willpwr = pcs_willpwr - 10
-		'You are menstruating but this does not stop <<$xe>> from ramming <<$xyr>> dick into you. vaginal blood flows slowly out of your pussy. You are experiencing  both painful and pleasant sensations. You moan while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+		'You are menstruating but this does not stop <<$xe>> from ramming <<$xyr>> dick into you. Vaginal blood flows slowly out of your pussy. You are experiencing both painful and pleasant sensations. You moan while the strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 	elseif cycle > 0 and pcs_vag > 0:
 		!!no monthly
 		!!horny - excitement
@@ -596,48 +595,48 @@ $sexstart4 = {
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood -= 15
 			pcs_willpwr -= 15
-			'You groaned in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrated your pussy. Tears flowed from your eyes and it felt like someone drove a red-hot rod in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You groan in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrates your pussy. Tears flow from your eyes and it feels like someone drove a red hot poker into your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 1:
 			if vgape < 2:vgape = 2
 			pcs_horny -= 10
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			pcs_willpwr -= 10
-			'You bit your lip in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrated you. You feel some pain between your legs. You are frowning and moaning in pain while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You bit your lip in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrates you. You feel some pain between your legs. You are frowning and moaning in pain while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 2:
 			if vgape < 1:vgape = 1
 			pcs_horny -= 5
 			pcs_mood -= 5
 			pcs_willpwr -= 5
-			'You flinched at the sudden pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrated you. You feel some pain between your legs. It gradually settles down and becomes quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy, but you could not succeed.'
+			'You flinched at the sudden pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrates you. You feel some pain between your legs. It gradually settles down and becomes quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy, but you could not succeed.'
 		elseif orgazm = 3:
 			pcs_horny = pcs_horny + 5
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_willpwr += 5
-			'You flinched from the feeling that your pussy is being stretched, when <<$boydesc>> penetrated you. You have a little nice sensation between your legs while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
+			'You flinch from the feeling that your pussy is being stretched, when <<$boydesc>> penetrates you. You have a little nice sensation between your legs while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		elseif orgazm = 4:
 			pcs_horny = pcs_horny + 10
 			pcs_mood += 10
 			pcs_willpwr += 10
-			'You flinched from the feeling that your pussy is being stretched when <<$boydesc>> penetrated you. You have a little nice sensation between your legs while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end.'
+			'You flinch from the feeling that your pussy is being stretched when <<$boydesc>> penetrates you. You have a little nice sensation between your legs while a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreases a little and remains like that until the end.'
 		elseif orgazm = 5:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood += 15
 			pcs_willpwr += 15
 			orgasm += 1
 			vaginalOrgasm += 1
-			'You are startled by a pleasant sensation when your pussy is stretched and start taking a dick. You have a very warm and pleasant feeling between the legs when a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling became unbearable and your entire body was covered with hot waves of orgasm, you scream with pleasure.'
+			'You are startled by a pleasant sensation when your pussy is stretched as it starts taking a dick. You have a very warm and pleasant feeling between the legs when a strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling became unbearable and your entire body is covered with hot waves of orgasm, you scream with pleasure.'
 		elseif orgazm = 6:
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			pcs_mood += 5
 			pcs_willpwr += 5
-			'You feel  <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This feels nice between your legs , but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick  is significantly less than what your pussy needs .This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end.'
+			'You feel <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This feels nice between your legs, but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick is significantly less than what your pussy needs. This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreases a little and remains like that until the end.'
 		end
 		if pcs_vag = 0:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood -= 15
 			pcs_willpwr -= 15
 			pcs_vag += 1
-			'You suddenly bite your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears started to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> entered you, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
+			'You suddenly bite your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears start to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> enters you, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
 		elseif pcs_vag <= dick:
 			pcs_vag += 1
 		end
@@ -664,22 +663,22 @@ $sexcum = {
 			!!Out
 			if pose = 0:
 				spafinloc = 14
-				'<<$boydesc>> groaned and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> came on your stomach.'
+				'<<$boydesc>> groans and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> cums on your stomach.'
 			elseif pose = 1:
 				spafinloc = 4
-				'<<$boydesc>> groaned and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> came on your ass.'
+				'<<$boydesc>> groans and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> cums on your ass.'
 			end
 		end
 		gs 'Cum_Manage'
 	elseif protect = 1:
 		$tmp = ''
 		if sexcontra = 7: $tmp = 'sabotaged '
-		'<<$boydesc>> groaned and you realized that <<$xe>> came in the <<$tmp>>condom.'
+		'<<$boydesc>> groans and you realize that <<$xe>> came in the <<$tmp>>condom.'
 		gs 'Cum_Manage'
 		if sexcontra = 4:
-			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> said "Hmm, the condom burst."'
+			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> says "Hmm, the condom burst."'
 		elseif sexcontra = 5:
-			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> said "Hmm, the condom is missing."'
+			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> says "What the fuck? The condom is missing."'
 		end
 		gs 'cuminsidereact'
 		protect = 0
@@ -728,7 +727,7 @@ $sexcumsk = {
 		if sexcontra = 4:
 			'Pulls <<$xyr>> cock out of you and, looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$shultextrand33>> says "Hmm, the condom burst."'
 		elseif sexcontra = 5
-			'Pulls <<$xyr>> cock out of you and, looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$shultextrand33>> says "Hmm, the condom is missing."'
+			'Pulls <<$xyr>> cock out of you and, looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$shultextrand33>> says "What the fuck? The condom is missing."'
 		end
 		gs 'cuminsidereact'
 		protect = 0
@@ -747,11 +746,11 @@ $analsex = {
 		lubonus = 10
 		!!!
 		analplugin = 0
-		'<<$boydesc>> has pulled out your ass plug'
+		'<<$boydesc>> pulls out your ass plug'
 	end
 
 	if dick >= pcs_ass:pcs_ass += 3
-	'<<$boydesc>> began to massage your anus with <<$xyr>> fingers.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> begins to massage your anus with <<$xyr>> fingers.'
 	!!!WD: Replaced
 	!!if lubri > 0:
 	!!!
@@ -759,26 +758,26 @@ $analsex = {
 	!!!
 		lubri -= 1
 		lubonus += rand(1, 5)
-		'You squeezed anal lube on your hand and began to smear it in your ass. Then you gave it to <<$xem>> and <<$xe>> smeared it on <<$xyr>> dick'
+		'You squeeze anal lube on your hand and begin to smear it in your ass. Then you give it to <<$xem>> and <<$xe>> smear it on <<$xyr>> dick'
 	end
 
-	if pcs_ass < 10:'<<$xec>> inserted three fingers into your ass and you groaned in pain.'
-	if pcs_ass >= 10:'<<$xec>> started to stretch your anus with three fingers.'
-	'<<$boydesc>> pulled <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you felt <<$xyr>> hard cock near your hole.'
-	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 < dick:'You screamed and bit your lip from a sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick entered your ass.'
-	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 >= dick:'You moaned when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick entered your ass.'
-	'<<$boydesc>> stopped for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it, and then started to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
+	if pcs_ass < 10:'<<$xec>> inserts three fingers into your ass and you groan in pain.'
+	if pcs_ass >= 10:'<<$xec>> starts to stretch your anus with three fingers.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> pulls <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you feel <<$xyr>> hard cock near your hole.'
+	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 < dick:'You scream and bite your lip from a sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 >= dick:'You moan when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> stops for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it, and then starts to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
 
 	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 < dick:
 		if pcs_makeup > 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 		pcs_horny -= 20
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		if agape < 3:agape = 3
-		'You cried and bit your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock began to fuck your ass on (! full force !). Your ass felt like it was on fire and all you wanted was for this torture to be over quickly.'
+		'You cry and bite your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock begins to fuck your ass full force. Your ass feels like it is on fire and all you want is for this torture to be over quickly.'
 	elseif pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 >= dick:
 		pcs_horny += 10
 		if agape < 2 and lubonus = 0:agape = 2
-		'You started to moan rhythmically, matching the timings of  <<$xyr>> cock''s movements inside you. You feel your anus stretching when <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
+		'You started to moan rhythmically, matching the timings of <<$xyr>> cock''s movements inside you. You feel your anus stretching when <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 100:
 			if stat['anal'] >= 10 and orgasm > 0:
@@ -791,7 +790,7 @@ $analsex = {
 		end
 	end
 	lubonus = 0
-	'After some time <<$boydesc>> groaned and you feel your ass filling up with a pleasant warmth.'
+	'After some time <<$boydesc>> groans and you feel your ass filling up with a pleasant warmth.'
 	spafinloc = 3
 	gs 'Cum_Manage'
 }
@@ -805,10 +804,10 @@ $analsex2 = {
 		lubonus = 10
 		!!!
 		analplugin = 0
-		'<<$boydesc>> pulled your butt plug out of your narrow and tight ass.'
+		'<<$boydesc>> pulls your butt plug out of your narrow and tight ass.'
 	end
 	if dick >= pcs_ass:pcs_ass += 3
-	'<<$boydesc>> began to massage your anus with <<$xyr>> fingers.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> begins to massage your anus with <<$xyr>> fingers.'
 
 	!!!WD: Replaced
 	!!if lubri > 0:
@@ -817,27 +816,27 @@ $analsex2 = {
 	!!!
 	lubri -= 1
 	lubonus += rand(1, 5)
-	'You squeezed anal lube on your hand and began to smear it in your ass. Then you gave the guy a tube and <<$xe>> started lucricating <<$xyr>> cock.'
+	'You squeeze anal lube on your hand and begin to smear it in your ass. Then you gave the guy a tube and <<$xe>> starts lucricating <<$xyr>> cock.'
 	end
-	if pcs_ass < 10:'When <<$xe>> entered three fingers in your ass you groaned in pain.'
+	if pcs_ass < 10:'When <<$xe>> enters three fingers in your ass you groan in pain.'
    	if pcs_ass >= 10:'<<$xec>> started to stretch your anus with three fingers.'
-	'<<$boydesc>> pulled <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you felt <<$xyr>> hard cock near your hole.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> pulls <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you feel <<$xyr>> hard cock near your hole.'
 	!!!WD: Added lubonus
-	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 < dick:'You screamed and bit your lip from a sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick entered your ass.'
-	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 >= dick:'You moaned when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick entered your ass.'
+	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 < dick:'You scream and bit your lip from a sharp pain as <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 >= dick:'You moan as <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
 	!!!
-	'<<$boydesc>> stopped for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it. Then he started to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> stops for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it. Then he starts to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
 
 	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 < dick:
 		if pcs_makeup > 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 		pcs_horny -= 20
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		if agape < 3:agape = 3
-		'You cried and bit your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock began to fuck your ass on (! full force !). Your ass felt like it was on fire and all you wanted was for this torture to be over quickly.'
+		'You cry and bite your lip as <<dick>> centimeter cock begins to fuck your ass on with <<$xyr>> full force. Your ass feels like it is on fire and all you want is for this torture to be over quickly.'
 	elseif pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 >= dick:
 		pcs_horny += 10
 		if agape < 2 and lubonus = 0:agape = 2
-		'You started to moan rhythmically following the movements of <<$xyr>> cock inside you. You can feel your anus stretching when <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
+		'You started to moan rhythmically following the movements of <<$xyr>> cock inside you. You can feel your anus stretching as <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 100:
 			if stat['anal'] >= 10 and orgasm > 0:
@@ -851,7 +850,7 @@ $analsex2 = {
 	end
 
 	lubonus = 0
-	'After some time <<$boydesc>> groaned and you feel your ass filling with a pleasant warmth.'
+	'After some time <<$boydesc>> groans and you feel your ass filling with a pleasant warmth.'
 	spafinloc = 3
 	gs 'Cum_Manage'
 }
@@ -865,17 +864,17 @@ $analsexrude = {
 		lubonus = 10
 		!!!
 		analplugin = 0
-		'<<$boydesc>> pulled your butt plug out of your narrow and tight ass.'
+		'<<$boydesc>> pulls your butt plug out of your narrow and tight ass.'
 	end
 
 	if dick >= pcs_ass:pcs_ass += 3
-	'<<$boydesc>> tucked a finger into your anus, then a second one .'
-	if pcs_ass < 10:'When <<$xe>> entered three fingers in your ass you groaned in pain.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> tucks a finger into your anus, then a second one.'
+	if pcs_ass < 10:'When <<$xe>> enters three fingers in your ass you groan in pain.'
 	if pcs_ass >= 10:'<<$xec>> started to stretch your anus with three fingers.'
-	'<<$boydesc>> pulled <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you feel <<$xyr>> pushing his hard cock into your hole.'
-	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 < dick:'You screamed and bit your lip from a sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick entered your ass.'
-   	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 >= dick:'You moaned when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick entered your ass.'
-	'<<$boydesc>> stopped for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it. Then he started to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> pulls <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you feel <<$xyr>> pushing his hard cock into your hole.'
+	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 < dick:'You scream and bite your lip from a sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+   	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 10 >= dick:'You moan when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+	'<<$boydesc>> stops for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it. Then he starts to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
 
 	if pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 < dick:
    		if pcs_makeup > 1:pcs_makeup = 0
@@ -883,12 +882,12 @@ $analsexrude = {
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		if agape < 3:agape = 3
 
-		'You cried and bit your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock began to fuck your ass on (! full force !). Your ass felt like it was on fire and all you wanted was for this torture to be over quickly.'
+		'You cry and bite your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock began to fuck your ass on (! full force !). Your ass feels like it is on fire and all you want is for this torture to be over quickly.'
    
 	elseif pcs_ass + lubonus + 2 >= dick:
 		pcs_horny += 10
 		if agape < 2 and lubonus = 0:agape = 2
-		'You started to moan rhythmically, following the movements of <<$xyr>> cock inside you. You can feel your anus stretching when <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
+		'You start to moan rhythmically, following the movements of <<$xyr>> cock inside you. You can feel your anus stretching when <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
 
 		if pcs_horny >= 100:
 			if stat['anal'] >= 10 and orgasm > 0:
@@ -904,7 +903,7 @@ $analsexrude = {
 	lubonus = 0
 	spafinloc = 3
 	gs 'Cum_Manage'
-	'After some time <<$boydesc>> groaned and you feel your ass filling with a pleasant warmth.'
+	'After some time <<$boydesc>> groan and you feel your ass filling with a pleasant warmth.'
 }
 
 ! "deal_with_condom" procedure should be replacement of "sexstart" dynamic procedure
@@ -1050,20 +1049,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal_sex':
 	if pcs_vag > 0:
 		gs 'arousal','vaginal',ARGS[1],$ARGS[2],$ARGS[3],$ARGS[4],$ARGS[5],$ARGS[6],$ARGS[7],$ARGS[8]
 		$temp_mens = iif(cycle <= 0,' and menstruation blood leaks from your vagina','')
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 30: 'You groaned in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrated you, tears flowed from your eyes and it feels like someone drove a red-hot rod in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>.'
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 20 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 30: 'You bite your lip in pain when <<$boydesc>> entered, it is very painful. You are frowning and moaning in pain while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 30: 'You groan in pain when <<$boydesc>> penetrates you, tears flowed from your eyes and it feels like someone drove a red hot poker in your vagina. You cry and moan while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 20 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 30: 'You bite your lip in pain when <<$boydesc>> enters, it is very painful. You are frowning and moaning in pain while <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>.'
 		if cycle <= 0: $temp_mens = ' even though' + $temp_mens
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 12 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 20: 'You winced at the sudden pain when <<$boydesc>> entered, it hurt but gradually it became quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>, but you did not succeed.'
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 7 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 12: 'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching when <<$boydesc>> entered you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>.'
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >=  2 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 7: 'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching as <<$boydesc>> enters you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end<<$temp_mens>>.'
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= -3 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 2: 'You flinched from a pleasant feeling when your pussy is stretched by <<$xyr>> dick. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling became unbearable and your entire body was covered with hot waves of orgasm You scream with pleasure.'
-		if (vgrdif + vltdif) <  -3: 'You feel  <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This gives you a nice tingling feeling between your legs , but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick  is significantly less than what your pussy needs .This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remained like that until the end<<$temp_mens>>.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 12 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 20: 'You winced at the sudden pain when <<$boydesc>> enters, it hurt but gradually it became quite tolerable. You are trying to get aroused while <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>, but you did not succeed.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= 7 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 12: 'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching when <<$boydesc>> enters you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >=  2 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 7: 'You are startled by the feeling that your pussy is stretching as <<$boydesc>> enters you. It feels good when <<$xyr>> strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remains like that until the end<<$temp_mens>>.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) >= -3 and (vgrdif + vltdif) < 2: 'You flinched from a pleasant feeling when your pussy is stretched by <<$xyr>> dick. It feels good when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy<<$temp_mens>>. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling became unbearable and your entire body is covered with hot waves of orgasm You scream with pleasure.'
+		if (vgrdif + vltdif) <  -3: 'You feel  <<$xyr>> penis entering your pussy. This gives you a nice tingling feeling between your legs , but <<$xyr>> <<dick>> cm dick  is significantly less than what your pussy needs .This is not enough for you. Gradually a pleasant warmth and some pulsations started building up in your stomach. Then the feeling decreased a little and remains like that until the end<<$temp_mens>>.'
 	else
 		$temp_mens = iif(cycle <= 0,' and menstruation blood leaks from your vagina','')
 		pcs_horny = 0
 		pcs_mood -= 15
 		pcs_willpwr -= 15
-		'You were biting your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears started to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> penetrated you, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
+		'You were biting your <<$liptalk>> in pain and tears started to flow from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> penetrates you, breaking your hymen. You moan while crying and <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal','vaginal',ARGS[1],$ARGS[2],$ARGS[3],$ARGS[4],$ARGS[5],$ARGS[6],$ARGS[7],$ARGS[8]
 	end
 	killvar '$temp_mens'
@@ -1082,13 +1081,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'analsex':
 	*p '<<$boydesc>> pulls <<$xyr>> fingers out of your ass and you feel '
 	if rand(0,1)=0: '<<$xyr>> hard cock near your hole.' else '<<$xem>> pushing <<$xyr>> hard cock into your hole.'
 	gs 'arousal','anal',ARGS[1],$ARGS[2],$ARGS[3],$ARGS[4],$ARGS[5],$ARGS[6],$ARGS[7],$ARGS[8]
-	if (agrdif + altdif) >= 20:'You scream and bit your lip from a sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
+	if (agrdif + altdif) >= 20:'You scream and bite your lip from the sharp pain when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
 	if (agrdif + altdif) <  20:'You moan when <<$xyr>> <<dick>> centimeter dick enters your ass.'
 	'<<$boydesc>> stops for a moment, giving your ass time to adjust to <<$xyr>> cock in it. Then he starts to slowly move, stretching your anus.'
 
 	if (agrdif + altdif) >= 30:
 		if pcs_makeup > 1:pcs_makeup = 0
-		'You cry and bit your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock begins to fuck your ass on (! full force !). Your ass feels like it is on fire and all you want is for this torture to be over quickly.'
+		'You cry and bite your lip when <<dick>> centimeter cock begins to fuck your ass on (! full force !). Your ass feels like it is on fire and all you want is for this torture to be over quickly.'
 	elseif (agrdif + altdif) >= 20 and (agrdif + altdif) < 30:
 		pcs_horny += 10
 		'You start to moan rhythmically in time with <<$xyr>> cock''s movements inside you. You feel like your anus is stretched when <<$xyr>> penis enters you.'
@@ -1115,20 +1114,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexcum':
 			!!Out
 			if pose = 0:
 				spafinloc = 14
-				'<<$boydesc>> groaned and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> came on your stomach.'
+				'<<$boydesc>> groans and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> came on your stomach.'
 				gs 'cum_call','stomach',$boy,1
 			elseif pose = 1:
-				'<<$boydesc>> groaned and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> came on your ass.'
+				'<<$boydesc>> groans and after pulling out <<$xyr>> dick, <<$xe>> came on your ass.'
 				gs 'cum_call','butt',$boy,1
 			end
 		end
 	else
 		$tmp = iif(sexcontra = 7,'sabotaged ','')
-		'<<$boydesc>> groaned and you realized that <<$xe>> ejaculated in the <<$tmp>>condom.'
+		'<<$boydesc>> groans and you realized that <<$xe>> ejaculated in the <<$tmp>>condom.'
 		if sexcontra = 4:
 			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> said "Hmm, the condom burst."'
 		elseif sexcontra = 5:
-			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> said "Hmm, the condom is missing."'
+			'Pulling out of you and looking at <<$xyr>> dick, <<$boydesc>> said "Fuck! The condom is missing."'
 		end
 		eff_contra = sexcontra
 		gs 'cum_call','',$boy,1
@@ -1145,7 +1144,7 @@ end &! --- sexcum ---
 !! phrases rewrited by Filicophyte 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dinrandbj':
 	tperbjran = rand(0, 3)
-	if tperbjran = 0:$tperbj = 'You wrap your <<$liptalk>> around <<$xyr>> <<dick>>cm member.'
+	if tperbjran = 0:$tperbj = 'You wraps your <<$liptalk>> around <<$xyr>> <<dick>>cm member.'
 	if tperbjran = 1:$tperbj = 'Your <<$liptalk>> engulf the purple head of <<$xyr>> <<dick>>cm member.'
 	if tperbjran = 2:$tperbj = 'You plant your <<$liptalk>> on the bulbous tip of <<$xyr>> <<dick>>cm cock and greedily slide your mouth down along <<$xyr>> throbbing maleness.'
 	if tperbjran = 3:$tperbj = 'The <<dick>> centimeters dick rests between your <<$liptalk>> then you slightly part them and allow the delicious invador to slide into your mouth.'

+ 5 - 7
locations/dk

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 # dk
 $location_type = 'public_indoors'
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
-	minut += 5
 	'<center><b>The Vladimir Lenin community centre</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/community/dk4.jpg"></center>'
 	'Open: 9 through 17 on workdays, closed on Saturday and Sunday.'
@@ -23,13 +22,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				act 'Leave':gt 'dk', 'holl'
 			end
 		end
-	else
-		act 'Leave':gt 'nord'
 	end
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'nord'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'holl':
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>The Vladimir Lenin community centre</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/community/dk1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -210,7 +208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'holl':
 						'When you came to him for your first lesson, he immediately recognized your talent, even though your unique voice hadn''t reached its full potential, but he claims that you have been improving massively under his guidance and he is blown away by how good you''ve already become. You cannot help but smile at his compliments - how often do you get praise by a real musician, after all?' 
 						'Thanks to the conversation, you barely even notice where your feet and Alexei are taking you until you find yourself at an apartment door. Alexei charmingly smiles at you and invites you into his home.'
 
-						act 'Leave': alexeyQW -= rand(2,3) & gt 'nord'
+						act 'Leave': alexeyQW -= rand(2,3) & minut += 6 & gt 'nord'
 
 						act 'Enter Alexei''s home':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -268,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'holl':
 										'You try to push him off but your position doesn''t make it any easier. After a few attempts, you manage to free yourself and crawl out from under his sleeping body, pushing him on his back in the process. Alexei''s snoring fills the room and your actions don''t seem to have stirred him. You indignantly dress yourself and decide to leave the apartment.'
 										gs 'stat'
 
-										act 'Leave':gt 'nord'
+										act 'Leave': minut += 6 & gt 'nord'
 									end
 								end
 							end
@@ -389,7 +387,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'holl':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'nord'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 6 & gt 'nord'
 end
 
 --- dk ---------------------------------

+ 1 - 1
locations/dolls

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 		act 'Go to the counter': gt 'dolls', 'viola'
 	end
-	act 'Leave': gt 'island'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 2 & gt 'island'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'clothing':

+ 1 - 1
locations/dorm

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if student =0:
 		'Since you''re not attending the University you are not allowed to enter unless you''re visiting someone you know.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'island'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'island'
 
 		if afra > 0 and hour < 22 and hour >= 7:
 			act 'I''m here to visit DeMarcus':

+ 15 - 13
locations/down

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # down
 
 $metka = $ARGS[0]
-$loc = $CURLOC
+$loc = 'down'
 $location_type = 'public_outdoors'
 CLOSE ALL
 if sound = 0:
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 if streetevent_hour ! hour:gt 'street_event','down', 'main'
 
 '<center><h2>St. Petersburg</h2></center>'
-'<center><b>City center</b></center>'
+'<center><b>City Center</b></center>'
 if month >= 11 or month <= 3:
 	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 21:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/downw.jpg"></center>'
@@ -121,17 +121,17 @@ else
 	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The metro is closed and will reopen at 4:00''">the metro</a>'
 end
 
-'You have easy access to the <a href="exec:gs ''cityTrain'', ''start''">train station</a> and <<$desc_txt1>> is only a short walk from there. Both connect you quickly to other parts of St Petersburg and the subway is great if you are tight on cash. If you can''t afford either, the <a href="exec:minut += 34 & gt ''park'', ''start''">central park</a> is a thirty minute walk from here and provides a more scenic route to the other city districts.'
+'You have easy access to the <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gs ''cityTrain'', ''start''">train station</a> and <<$desc_txt1>> is only a short walk from there. Both connect you quickly to other parts of St Petersburg and the subway is great if you are tight on cash. If you can''t afford either, the <a href="exec:minut += 35 & gt ''park'', ''start''">central park</a> is a thirty minute walk from here and provides a more scenic route to the other city districts.'
 *nl
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:
-	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a>'
+	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The Ruch kiosk is closed and will reopen at 8:00''">kiosk</a>'
 end
 'The neon green sign of a <<$desc_txt1>> catches your eye. It''s open 8-10 selling magazines and cigarettes for cheap.'
 *nl
 if hour >= 9 and hour <= 20:
-	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:gt ''torgcentr''">The Galeria mall</a>'
+	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''torgcentr''">The Galeria mall</a>'
 	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:gt ''fit'', ''start''">Havana Fitness Center</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The Galeria mall is closed and will reopen at 9:00''">The Galeria mall</a>'
@@ -139,12 +139,12 @@ else
 end
 '<<$desc_txt1>> is front and center in the commercial area. Nearby is a <<$desc_txt2>> which has a swimming pool that can be used for a small fee.'
 if hour >= 9 and hour <= 23:
-	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:gt ''foto'', ''start''">Aphrodite Photography</a>'
+	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''foto'', ''start''">Aphrodite Photography</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt1 = '<a href="exec:msg ''Aphrodite Photography is closed and will reopen at 9:00''">Aphrodite Photography</a>'
 end
 if hour >= 6 and hour <= 23:
-	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:gt ''burger'', ''start''">Diner Bystroeshka</a>'
+	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''burger'', ''start''">Diner Bystroeshka</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:msg ''Diner Bystroeshka is closed and will reopen at 6:00''">Diner Bystroeshka</a>'
 end
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ end
 if week >= 4 and hour >= 18:
 	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:gt ''club'', ''start''">the nightclub</a>'
 else
-	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The nightclub is closed and will reopen at 18:00''">The nightclub</a>'
+	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The nightclub is closed and will open from Friday to Sunday at 18:00''">The nightclub</a>'
 end
 'At night the only place open here is <<$desc_txt3>>.'
 *nl
@@ -180,27 +180,29 @@ else
 end
 if week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 18:
 	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:gt ''bank'', ''start''">VTB bank</a>'
+elseif week < 5 and hour > 18:
+	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:msg ''VTB bank is closed and will reopen tomorrow at 9:00''">VTB bank</a>'
 else
-	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:msg ''VTB bank is closed and will reopen at 9:00''">VTB bank</a>'
+	$desc_txt2 = '<a href="exec:msg ''VTB bank is closed and will reopen on monday at 9:00''">VTB bank</a>'
 end
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:
-	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:gt ''agentned'', ''start''">Kirsanova Realty</a>'
+	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''agentned'', ''start''">Kirsanova Realty</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:msg ''Kirsanova Realty is closed and will reopen at 8:00''">Kirsanova Realty</a>'
 end
 if (week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 16) or (week = 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 13):
-	$desc_txt4 = '<a href="exec:gt ''postoffice'', ''start''">post office</a>'
+	$desc_txt4 = '<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''postoffice'', ''start''">post office</a>'
 elseif (week = 5 or week = 6) and hour > 16:
 	$desc_txt4 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The post office is closed and will reopen at 9:00 on Monday''">post office</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt4 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The post office is closed and will reopen at 9:00''">post office</a>'
 end
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
-	$desc_txt5 = '<a href="exec:gt ''downlibrary''">National Library of Russia</a>'
+	$desc_txt5 = '<a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''downlibrary''">National Library of Russia</a>'
 else
 	$desc_txt5 = '<a href="exec:msg ''The National Library of Russia is closed and will reopen at 8:00''">National Library of Russia</a>'
 end
-'Next door is the <<$desc_txt1>> followed by a <<$desc_txt2>> and <<$desc_txt3>> and the 5-star <a href="exec:gt ''hotel''">Hotel Indigo</a> for your housing needs. Lastly, the local <<$desc_txt4>> and <<$desc_txt5>> can be found at the end of the road.'
+'Next door is the <<$desc_txt1>> followed by a <<$desc_txt2>> and <<$desc_txt3>> and the 5-star <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''hotel''">Hotel Indigo</a> for your housing needs. Lastly, the local <<$desc_txt4>> and <<$desc_txt5>> can be found at the end of the road.'
 *nl
 
 if Enable_tablemap = 0:

+ 1 - 1
locations/downlibrary

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/library/downlibint.jpg"></center>'
 'A huge library with thousands upon thousands of books. You could spend years here and you probably still wouldn''t be able to read it all.'
 
-act 'Leave the library':gt 'down'
+act 'Leave the library': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 18:
 	act 'Read a science book (1:00)':

+ 1 - 1
locations/elevator

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # elevator
-act 'Back':gt 'hotel'
+act 'Back': minut += 1 & gt 'hotel'
 
 act 'Go to your room':
 	msg 'Excuse me, but the elevator is not working'

+ 4 - 3
locations/etoexhib

@@ -1530,7 +1530,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos51':
 	cla
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/podezd.jpg"></center>'
 	'Entrance to the 5-floors building in which you live. The lock on the door leading to the attic is broken.'
@@ -1571,6 +1571,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos51':
 			'<b><font color="red">You are too ill to walk to the street.</font></b>'
 			xgt $curloc
 		else
+			minut += 1
 			xgt 'street'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1581,7 +1582,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos52':
 	cls
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/cherdak.jpg"></center>'
 	'A flight of stairs that lead to the roof through the attic. It''s dark and scary. This is clearly no place for a decent girl.'
@@ -1603,7 +1604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos53':
 	$loc = $CURLOC
     $location_type = 'secluded'
 	cls
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/roof.jpg"></center>'
 	'The roof of your apartment building.'

+ 14 - 14
locations/food

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pirosh':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 25
+	minut += 15
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 5
 	mood += 5
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'golub':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 20
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 10
 	mood += 5
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pozhar':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 20
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 15
 	mood += 10
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'reuben':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 35
+	minut += 25
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 20
 	mood += 25
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'salfan':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 35
+	minut += 40
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 20
 	mood += 20
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'strofan':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 35
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 20
 	mood += 30
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'blifan':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 20
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 30
 	mood += 40
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ryesna':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 5
 	mood += 10
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'crisps':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 5
 	mood += 20
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'onring':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 15
+	minut += 10
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 10
 	mood += 5
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'vegburg':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 20
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 20
 	mood += 10
@@ -373,7 +373,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'turburg':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 20
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 10
 	mood += 10
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'batfish':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 20
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 15
 	mood += 15
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cheburg':
 	*clr & cla
 	frost = 0
-	minut += 30
+	minut += 25
 	money -= val($_eat['<<args[1]>>,price'])
 	pcs_health += 20
 	mood += 20

+ 18 - 18
locations/foto

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Photography studio</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
 		'	It''s after midnight and the studio is closing down. You get dressed and leave before you get locked in.'
-		act'Leave':gt'down'
+		act'Leave': minut += 1 & gt'down'
 	end
 	
 		
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 			if artemIzdev = 2:'"Yes, I can get you this, but it is expensive."' & artemIzdev = 3
 
 			if money < 70000:
-				'You do not the 70,000 rub required.'
+				'You do not have the 70,000 <b>₽</b> required.'
 			else
 				'"Oh, looks like you have enough cash."'
 				act 'Buy microcamera':
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 
 	if pfilmNO = 1:
 		'	"You''re blacklisted, no decent studio will deal with you, goodbye."'
-		act 'Leave':gt'down'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt'down'
 	end
 	
 	if model = 1:
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 				'	You ask about working as a model, but the photographer says to you, "I''m sorry, but you look like a pretty mature woman, we need models with a more youthful appearance." This is his way of telling you that you look too old for this business.'
 			elseif pcs_skin < 40:
 				'	"Girl, your face is covered in acne unless you improve your appearance there is no chance of working here."'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 			elseif fotofakepassport = 1:
 				'	You walk up to the front desk and find the same man who "interviewed" you previously. He looks up at you from his computer as you approach.'
 				'	"Hello there. Did you find your passport?"'
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 						'	"Good. Now don''t come back without that passport. I don''t like having my time wasted."'
 						'	He shoos you away and you leave the studio, getting ready for the next step.'
 						if money < 3000:'	<i>Great. Now I just need to find 3000 <b>₽</b> for the fake passport. Just great. Big load of trouble this job is...</i>'
-						act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+						act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 					end
 				else
 					'	"Yup, I''ve got it right here."'
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 					model = 1
 					modelyear = year
 					act'Head to the back':gt'foto','start'
-					act'Leave the studio':gt'down'
+					act'Leave the studio': minut += 1 & gt'down'
 				end
 			elseif fotofakepassport >= 2:
 				'	You walk up to the front desk and find the same man who "interviewed" you previously. He looks up from his computer and recognizing you, he gives you a lewd smile and a knowing look.'
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 				if fakepassport ! 1:
 					'	"Not yet." He scowls at you.'
 					'	"Then get out and stop wasting our time here."'
-					act'Leave the studio':gt'down'
+					act'Leave the studio': minut += 1 & gt'down'
 				elseif fotofakepassport = 2: 
 					'	"Yup," you smile back, handing him your new fake passport.'
 					'	He takes it from you and begins copying the information onto his computer. As he types he occasionally glances at you, like he can''t wait to see you naked again. Finally, he hits a key on his keyboard with an air of finality and holds up the fake passport one more time to compare the information he just typed in. Satisfied that it has been entered accurately, he nods and clicks a few more times to save the data.'
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 				model = 1
 				modelyear = year
 				act'Head to the back':gt'foto','start'
-				act'Leave the studio':gt'down'
+				act'Leave the studio': minut += 1 & gt'down'
 			else
 				gt'foto','interview'
 			end
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/foto.jpg"></center>'
 				'	Even if it''s just this one time, you can''t do it after all. It''s simply too embarrassing to get naked in front of a total stranger. You blush, apologize, and leave the studio.'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 			end
 			
 			act 'Tell the truth and tell him how much you need the money':
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 					gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 					gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'Down'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'Down'
 				end
 			end
 			
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 					gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 					gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 		end
 
 		act 'Plead':
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 			'	With wide eyes and a smile of relief, you nod furiously and rush to get dressed before running out.'
 			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 		end
 		
 		act 'Ask for alternatives':
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'Down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'Down'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 				'	You tear your hand away and give him a look before moving back over to your clothes and getting dressed before leaving.'
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 			end
 
 			act 'Tell him to fuck off':
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'job_offer':
 				gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
 				gs 'underwear', 'wear'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+				act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -2306,7 +2306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackm':
 										'"You can keep your presents from the guys." says Victor as he quickly makes you dress and leads you to the exit.'
 										'"I hope you''ve learned your lesson. I will be here to teach stupid girls like you that you cannot get away with such behaviour and if needed I will put you through this all over again."'
 
-										act 'Leave':gt 'Down'
+										act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'down'
 									end
 								end
 							end

+ 3 - 1
locations/gkafe

@@ -70,7 +70,9 @@ else
 			if hour >= 6 and hour < 16 and StoryLine > 0:
 				'Your <a href="exec:gt ''mother''">mother</a> is currently working at the cafe bar.'
 			else
-				'The bar owner <a href="exec:GT ''motherkafeboss''">Borislav</a> is currently taking orders in the bar. Most people call him Slava.'
+				!!the borislav content is broken at the moment
+				!!'The bar owner <a href="exec:GT ''motherkafeboss''">Borislav</a> is currently taking orders in the bar. Most people call him Slava.'
+				'The bar owner Borislav is currently taking orders in the bar. Most people call him Slava.'
 			end
 		end
 			

+ 37 - 37
locations/gopnew

@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start1':
 		'"Come on, babe!" he tries. "Surely you can spare like 30 minutes and have a chat with me?"'
 
 		act 'Go drink beer with him':gt 'gopnew', 'pivas'
-		act 'Decline and leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Decline and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go drink beer with him':gt 'gopnew', 'pivas'
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start2':
 		'"Come on, babe!" he tries. "Surely you can spare like 30 minutes and have a chat with me?"'
 
 		act 'Go drink beer with him':gt 'gopnew', 'pivas'
-		act 'Decline and leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Decline and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go drink beer with him':gt 'gopnew', 'pivas'
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start2':
 			gopota += 1
 			'You walk through the park with Vasan, but don''t find any marks worth robbing. You still had a fun time chatting with him, though.'
 
-			act 'Say goodbye and go back home':gt 'street'
+			act 'Say goodbye and go back home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		elseif goprandwork < 95:
 			cla
 			gopstop += 1
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start2':
 			minut += 60
 			'You help the guys steal a few cellphones by distracting random people in the park, but didn''t get much done. The few rubles you all got for selling the items, were immediately used to buy more beer.'
 
-			act 'Say goodbye and go back home':gt 'street'
+			act 'Say goodbye and go back home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		else
 			cla
 			gopstop += 1
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start2':
 			money += randmon
 			'You and the guys had a pretty good day, and they managed to steal several wallets and cell phones while you distracted the marks. After Vasan sells the lot to the pawn shop, he gives you your share: <<randmon>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
-			act 'Say goodbye and go back home':gt 'street'
+			act 'Say goodbye and go back home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start3':
 	'"Of course not! You know me!" you reassure them. You sit down and tell the guys what happened, omitting some of the sexual details. When you''re finished, one of them grins: "We should find this cop bitch, and catch her! You deserve to fuck her, after all she did to you!"'
 	'The other Gopniks laugh, and you laugh with them. If only they knew...'
 
-	act 'Excuse yourself and leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Excuse yourself and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start4':
 		'"Come on, babe!" he tries. "Surely you can spare like 30 minutes and have a chat with me?"'
 
 		act 'Go drink beer with him':gt 'gopnew', 'pivas'
-		act 'Decline and leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Decline and leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go drink beer with him':gt 'gopnew', 'pivas'
@@ -192,13 +192,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start5':
 			'"Got the money?" he asks intently.'
 
 			if money >= 2000:
-				act 'Give him the money (-2,000 rubles)':
+				act 'Give him the money (-2,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 					cla
 					money -= 2000
 					gopopusday = daystart
-					'You offer him the 2,000 rubles he expects from you. He counts it quickly and gives you an affirmative grunt.'
+					'You offer him the 2,000 <b>₽</b> he expects from you. He counts it quickly and gives you an affirmative grunt.'
 
-					act 'Walk away quickly':gt 'street'
+					act 'Walk away quickly': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 					if GLust > 0:
 						cla
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start5':
 			else
 				'Vasan spits on the ground in front of you and grunts: "You''re lucky no one wants you right now, bitch. Get out of here, before I change my mind."'
 
-				act 'Get away from him':gt 'street'
+				act 'Get away from him': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -238,19 +238,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start5':
 		if gopopusday = daystart:
 			'Vasan laughs: "Look at her run! A bit bow-legged at that... probably fresh from getting her worthless cunt fucked again! Keep running, whore!"'
 
-			act 'Run away from them':gt 'street'
+			act 'Run away from them': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		elseif gopopusday ! daystart:
 			'Unfortunately, he doesn''t. He and his friends quickly overtake you and surround you.'
 			'"Do you have cum in your ears or something, slut? We asked you a question! Where''s our fucking money?" Vasan shouts.'
 
 			if money >= 2000:
-				act 'Give him the money (-2,000 rubles)':
+				act 'Give him the money (-2,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 					cla
 					money -= 2000
 					gopopusday = daystart
-					'You offer him the 2,000 rubles he expects from you. He counts it quickly and gives you an affirmative grunt.'
+					'You offer him the 2,000 <b>₽</b> he expects from you. He counts it quickly and gives you an affirmative grunt.'
 
-					act 'Walk away quickly':gt 'street'
+					act 'Walk away quickly': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 					if GLust > 0:
 						cla
@@ -284,11 +284,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start6':
 		'He rubs his groin awkwardly while he tells you: "How long has it been? I want you, now. Follow me."'
 
 		act 'Go with him':gt 'gopnew', 'sexstart'
-		act 'Walk away quickly':gt 'street'
+		act 'Walk away quickly': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	else
 		'When you approach them, he gives you a dismissive nod, noticing you didn''t ignore him. "Good, you listened. Now get out of here, before we change our minds."'
 
-		act 'Quickly leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Quickly leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start7':
 				gopdolg = 0
 				'You give the guy <<gopdolg>> <b>₽</b>. He counts the money, almost disappointed to see it''s all there.'
 
-				act 'Quickly go away':gt 'street'
+				act 'Quickly go away': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 			end
 		else
 			'"Guys, please! I have no money!" you cry out, with tears in your eyes.'
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start7':
 		exit
 	end
 
-	act 'Quickly walk away from them':gt 'street'
+	act 'Quickly walk away from them': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pivas':
@@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pivas':
 		if VasanTut = 2 or BerezaTut = 2 or VitekTut = 2 or KostilTut = 2 or UdmurtTut = 2 or SeriTut = 2:gt 'gopnew', 'sexstart'
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave them be':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave them be': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bazar':
@@ -677,8 +677,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tf':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/rapebjcum2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You close your eyes as you close your lips around the head of his cock again, not wanting to look him in the eye while you swallow his load and lick him clean.'
-				'"Vasan pulls his cock away when he''s bored of it, and says: "Listen up, whore. You just got yourself into a heap of trouble. As an apology, you will bring me 2,000 rubles every day for as long as I want. I will fuck you whenever I want as well, got that?"'
-				'The amount dazzles you - 2,000 rubles every day!? How are you supposed to get that kind of money?'
+				'"Vasan pulls his cock away when he''s bored of it, and says: "Listen up, whore. You just got yourself into a heap of trouble. As an apology, you will bring me 2,000 <b>₽</b> every day for as long as I want. I will fuck you whenever I want as well, got that?"'
+				'The amount dazzles you - 2,000 <b>₽</b> every day!? How are you supposed to get that kind of money?'
 				'"Don''t even try to hide from me, whore. I will find you. You''re mine! I will fucking end you if you don''t keep coming, understood?"'
 
 				act 'Nod meekly':
@@ -691,9 +691,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tf':
 					'Vasan grabs your face in his hands and forces your mouth open, spitting in your mouth as he says: "That goes for my buddies as well! If they want to have fun with you, you do as they say!"'
 					'Then he grins to his friends: "She''s all yours, guys. Have fun."'
 					'Just when they came closer to you pulling their cocks out of their pants, you hear shouting at the end of the alley. Someone spotted you!'
-					'The Gopniks quickly run away, leaving you alone on the pavement covered in cum, saliva and tears. "Remember, whore... 2,000 rubles! Tomorrow!" Vasan shouts, before he disappears around a corner.'
+					'The Gopniks quickly run away, leaving you alone on the pavement covered in cum, saliva and tears. "Remember, whore... 2,000 <b>₽</b>! Tomorrow!" Vasan shouts, before he disappears around a corner.'
 
-					act 'Return to the streets':gt 'street'
+					act 'Return to the streets': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -710,14 +710,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dolg':
 	'You feel dazzled when you hear the amount - <<gopdolg>> <b>₽</b>! How the hell are you supposed to gather than in ten days?'
 	'"We will find you if you don''t pay, <<$pcs_nickname>>. Don''t bother trying to hide from us," Konstantin says with a mean grin on his face."'
 
-	act 'Leave while you can':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave while you can': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 	act 'Tell them you can''t gather that much money':
 		cla
 		'"Guys, come on!" you plead. "I can''t gather that amount on such short notice!"'
 		'Not my problem," Vasan shrugs. "Perhaps you can earn it with your body, eh? You seem to be good at that..."'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 		act 'Ask if there is another way':
 			cla
@@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dolg':
 			'"How about you pay us directly with your body? I guess I wouldn''t mind a good fuck every now and then, and neither would my buddies! Fine... forget about the money, but you''re ours to fuck whenever we want. Deal?" Vasan grins.'
 			'The large bulge in his groin tells you he wants you to start ''paying'' right away, if you say yes. It might be your only way out, though... how are you going to gather <<gopdolg>> <b>₽</b> in ten days?'
 
-			act 'Refuse, maybe you can get the money after all':gt 'street'
+			act 'Refuse, maybe you can get the money after all': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 
 			act 'Agree to let them fuck you when they want':
 				gnewQW = 6
@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexstart':
 			act 'Go with Gray':SeriTut = 3 & gs 'gopnew', 'sexboy1'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'sexboy':
@@ -908,7 +908,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 
 	'<<$boydesc>> wipes his cock on your ass cheeks and tucks it back into his pants. After that, he goes back to drinking beer with his friends, not paying any more attention to you.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '11':
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 			swallow += 1
 			'You swallow <<$boydesc>>''s sperm diligently after which he wipes his dick on your lips, making you lick the last remains off. Once he''s satisfied, he pulls his pants up again and returns to his friends.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 
 		act 'Spit it out':
@@ -946,7 +946,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'You wait for <<$boydesc>> to turn his back on you, and discreetly spit the semen onto the ground. He doesn''t seem to care what you do with it, he''s already walking away from you.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -965,7 +965,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 			'He wipes the last remains of sperm off onto your cheek, and makes you lick his cock clean before tucking it back into his pants. Then he leaves, no longer caring about what you do.'
 		end
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -995,7 +995,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 
 	'<<$boydesc>> pulls out right before he orgasms, and ends up spraying his sperm all over your ass cheeks. He wipes his cock clean on an unsoiled spot on your ass and tucks it back into his pants, returning to his friends for another beer. He no longer cares what you do or where you go next.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '2':
@@ -1032,7 +1032,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 
 		'They cum all over your face and in your mouth, and your face looks like a mess by the time they finally let you go.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	elseif tiprand = 1 or GLust = 2:
 		stat['bj'] += 1
 		pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1086,7 +1086,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 
 		'The guys just cum wherever they feel like while they''re fucking you, giving you no warning. By the time they all finish, you''re a mess. You should probably go take a shower...'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -1140,7 +1140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		'You orgasm during their relentless pounding, holding your hand over your mouth to stop yourself from crying out loud.'
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'degrading':
@@ -1163,7 +1163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'degrading':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/deg'+rand(1, 9)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	'The guys drive you to a nearby building and drag you inside, forcing you to undress. They spend the next two hours degrading you in every way imaginable: they slap your face and tits, they spit in your face, but most of the time they try to force large objects into your vagina and ass. By the time you''re exhausted, they pick you up and dump you in the back yard with your clothes. When you catch your breath again, you slowly put your clothes on and try to find your way back to the main streets.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 --- gopnew ---------------------------------

+ 2 - 2
locations/hairsalon

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if hour =< 8 or hour >= 20:
 		cls
 		'The hair salon is closed. You should come back during their working hours.'
-		act 'Leave':minut += 2 & gt 'torgcentr'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 		exit
 	end
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	'<a href=' + iif(money >= 1250, '"exec:gt ''hairsalon'', ''braidhair''"', '') + '>Get your hair braided - 1250 <b>₽</b></a>'
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 2 & gt 'torgcentr'
+	act 'Leave':minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 
 	if money >= 100:
 		act 'Buy Scrunchies - 100 <b>₽</b>':

+ 1 - 2
locations/hall

@@ -1,14 +1,13 @@
 # hall
 clr
 *clr
-minut += 5
 gs 'stat'
 picrand = rand(1, 3)
 '<right><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/casino/hcasino<<picrand>>.jpg"></right>'
 'You enter the foyer of the casino, there are lots of games .'
 'You can go:'
 
-act 'Leave':gt 'Nord'
+act 'Leave': minut += 11 & gt 'Nord'
 
 'In the hall are various <a href="exec:gt ''igravt''">slot machines</a>.'
 'In the games room there is <a href="exec:gt ''roulette''">Roulette</a> and <a href="exec:gt ''cards''">card games</a>.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/hanters

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if hantersKnow = 0:
 		$npc_usedname['A172'] = 'Andrei'
 		$npc_usedname['A173'] = 'Igor'
 		$npc_usedname['A174'] = 'Sergei'
-		act 'Sit down': gt 'hanters'
+		act 'Sit down': gt 'hanters', 'start'
 		act 'Move away': gt 'swamp_yard'
 	end
 elseif hour = 8 or hour = 14 or hour = 19:
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ elseif hour = 8 or hour = 14 or hour = 19:
 				'You approach the hunters sitting in the meadow. "Guys, let me shoot the rifle," you look at them with your puppy eyes.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, come closer," replied Andrei. "If you want to shoot you need to repay us somehow."'
 
-				act'Approach':gt 'hanters'
+				act'Approach':gt 'hanters', 'start'
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5

+ 5 - 5
locations/hotel

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # hotel
 clr
-minut += 5
 nom_o[1] = 100
 nom_o[2] = 1000
 nom_o[3] = 10000
@@ -16,6 +15,7 @@ if tobiQW = 2001:
 	act 'Excuse me':
 		cla
 		*clr
+		minut += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/casino/oldman.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I didn''t mean to disturb you, but what language is the book written in?" you ask the man.'
 		'The man stops, looks up to you and cheerfully answers, "This book right here is written in old Japanese language. Why do you ask?" the man asks curiously.'
@@ -26,13 +26,13 @@ if tobiQW = 2001:
 		'"My name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>." you answer.'
 		'"I hope this doesn''t sound too creepy but would you please follow me to my room?" Plato asks you.'
 
-		act 'Go with Plato':gt 'mqroom'
+		act 'Go with Plato': minut += 1 & gt 'mqroom'
 	end
 end
 
-act 'Go to the reception desk':gt 'Maria1'
-act 'Go to the lift':gt 'elevator'
-act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+act 'Go to the reception desk': minut += 1 & gt 'Maria1'
+act 'Go to the lift': minut += 1 & gt 'elevator'
+act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 
 --- hotel ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/island

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ end
 
 gs 'taxi'
 
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$locM = ''island'' & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$locM = ''island'' & minut += 1 & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:gt ''dolls'', ''start''">Patch Work Dolls</a> is a clothing store that caters to Alternative styles, like gothic, punk, skater, and the like.'
 if hour >= 4 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec:gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> Station is within a 5 minute walk from here.'
 if week < 6 and hour >= 7:'At the <a href="exec:gt ''univer'', ''start''">University</a> where you can earn your bachelors degree.'

+ 10 - 11
locations/kafe

@@ -6,7 +6,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
 	CLOSE ALL
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/cafe.mp3',30
-	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'kit_din'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The Roadhouse</font></b></center>'
@@ -23,7 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	act 'Sit down at a table': gt 'kafe', 'table'
 	
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'table':
@@ -267,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+				act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 			end
 
 			if pcs_horny >= 50:
@@ -294,7 +293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+						act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 					end
 
 					act 'Spit sperm into her mouth':
@@ -321,7 +320,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
 
-								act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+								act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 							end
 						end
 
@@ -334,7 +333,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 							'You wiped the remnants of sperm off your face, help her to feet and sort her out. Ira, regaining her senses, looks to you with a beatific smile "That Givi is chock-bellied ugly, but he fucked me like I''ve never been fucked before. I even lost consciousness from an orgasm."'
 							'Ira is still floating in ecstasy, so you decide to walk her home. At her front door, she kisses you on the lips and leaves.'
 
-							act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+							act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -748,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'workPred':
 					'The basement has all the tools set out ready. You sit on a chair and a heavily tattooed orangutan comes up to you with a clip and a pair of scissors, he pull your tongue out of your mouth and pierces it with lightning speed. Into the bleeding wound in your tonuge he attaches a small bar.'
 					'Damn, it''s very painful. You moan with your tongue hanging out, the bandits laughing at your pain. Finally your tongue is freed. Tears roll down your cheeks as the bandits escort you out of the cottages.'
 
-					act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+					act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				elseif kaferand > 25 and (opusk > 0 or gnewQW = 5) and pirsA > 0 and hour >= 12 and hour <= 19 and cafe_mobster ! daystart:
 					*clr & cla
 					cafe_mobster = daystart
@@ -842,19 +841,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'razvod':
 		'<<$boydesc>> invites you to dance.'
 		act 'Dance':gt 'cafe2', 'dance'
 		if pcs_horny < 75:
-			act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	elseif deyst = 1:
 		'<<$boydesc>> asks permission to sit down at the same table as you.'
 		act 'Drink':gt 'cafe2', 'booze'
 		if pcs_horny < 75:
-			act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	elseif deyst = 2:
 		'<<$boydesc>> invites you to a nearby party which he is going to.'
 		act 'Agree':gt 'cafe2', 'kompashka'
 		if pcs_horny < 75:
-			act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	elseif deyst = 3:
 		'<<$boydesc>> is incredibly drunk and you feel tipsy just from the smell of booze on him. "Hey baby, got some spare time? Come have fun in the outhouse."'
@@ -871,7 +870,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'razvod':
 				else
 					'"Well, okay, get out of here, you are ugly anyway."'
 				end
-				act 'Fuck you':gt 'street'
+				act 'Fuck you': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 			end
 		end
 	end

+ 12 - 7
locations/kiosk

@@ -10,17 +10,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/kiosk/kiosk21.jpg"></center>'
 		'It is currently very busy and looks like you''ll have to wait to get to the counter.'
+		
+		act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt $loc
+		
 		act 'Wait in line (20 Minutes)':
 			minut += 20
 			gt 'kiosk', 'counter'
 		end
 
-		act 'Leave':gt $loc
-
 		if pcs_exhibition >= 45:
 			act 'Flash both your tits and your pussy':
 				cls
-
+				minut += 1
 				exhibition_exp += rand(12,15)
 				gs 'events', 'flash_full', 'outdoors', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -32,6 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if pcs_exhibition >= 40:
 			act 'Flash your pussy':
 				cls
+				minut += 1
 				exhibition_exp += rand(9,12)
 				gs 'events', 'flash_pussy', 'outdoors', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -43,6 +45,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if pcs_exhibition >= 35:
 			act 'Flash your tits':
 				cls
+				minut += 1
 				exhibition_exp += rand(5,8)
 				gs 'events', 'flash_tits', 'outdoors', 5
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -51,7 +54,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if SUB >= 15:
+		if sub >= 15:
 			act 'Suggest a blowjob in exchange for jumping the queue':
 				if cumloc[12] = 0 and cumloc[11] = 0:
 					cls
@@ -79,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						act 'Go to the counter': gt 'kiosk', 'counter'
 					end
 
-					act 'Cum on your mouth':
+					act 'Cum inside your mouth':
 						cls
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/cumlip.jpg"></center>'
 						'The man cums inside your mouth.'
@@ -92,11 +95,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						act 'Go to the counter': gt 'kiosk', 'counter'
 					end
 				else
+					cls
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/punch.mp4"></video></center>'	
 					'The Man punches you in the gut and says, <font color="#0D42C0">"Go away bitch, your mouth is full of sperm."</font> You stagger away from the kiosk and spend 2 hours curled up in a ball.'
 					minut += 120
 					gs 'pain', 4, 'tummy', 'hit'
-
+					gs 'stat'
+					
 					act 'Recover':gt $loc
 				end
 			end
@@ -131,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'counter':
 	'</table></center>'
 	*pl
 
-	act 'Leave (0:05)': $kioskloc = '' & gt $loc
+	act 'Leave': $kioskloc = '' & minut += 1 & gt $loc
 
 	act 'Buy a snack (100 <b>₽</b>) (0:05)':
 		*clr & cla

+ 1 - 0
locations/korr

@@ -46,6 +46,7 @@ act '<b><font color="maroon">Go outside</font></b>':
 		'<b><font color="red">You''re too sick to walk around in the streets.</font></b>'
 		xgt $curloc
 	else
+		minut += 2
 		xgt 'street', 'start'
 	end
 end

+ 2 - 2
locations/korrPar

@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ if indorf = 1:'With your parents being away to visit your grandparents, the apar
 
 !to add a counter if you avoid Dimka
 if nodimkaK >= rand(7,10) and DimkaWarnedToday = 0:
-   if hour >= 14 and hour < 24 and week <=5 and DimkaWarnedToday = 0: gt 'DimkaWarning'
-   if hour >= 9 and hour < 24 and week >=6 and DimkaWarnedToday = 0: gt 'DimkaWarning'
+   if hour >= 14 and hour < 24 and week <=5 and DimkaWarnedToday = 0: gt 'dimaEv', 'Dimka_warning'
+   if hour >= 9 and hour < 24 and week >=6 and DimkaWarnedToday = 0: gt 'dimaEv', 'Dimka_warning'
 end
 
 $korrParMomHeader = '<center><h1><font color="maroon">Mom</font></h1></center><center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center><br />'

+ 3 - 2
locations/kuhr

@@ -329,11 +329,12 @@ if zoo >= 6 and sobaka ! 0:
 end
 
 if musor > 3:
-	act 'Throw out rubbish':
+	act 'Take out the trash':
 		if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 			'I can not go to the trash cans naked!'
 		else
-			killvar 'fullmorrout' & gt 'trashplace', 'start'
+			musor = 0
+			killvar 'fullmorrout' & minut += 3 & gt 'trashplace', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/kuhrPar

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ gs 'family'
 
 act 'Eat a meal (0:30)':gs 'food', 'm_meal'
 
-act 'Have a snack (0:05)':gs 'food', 'snack'
+act 'Have a snack (0:15)':gs 'food', 'snack'
 
 act 'Drink some water (0:05)':gs 'beverage', 'bev_wat'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/lakecafe

@@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'barmensha':
 							cla
 							'You press Eugene for more information.'
 							'Eugene seems to be hurt by your insistance to find out more, but she reluctantly relents.'
-							'"All our regulars know that we ''arrange meetings'' every Monday between 22:00 and 23:00. If you''re here at that time and want to earn some money, introduce yourself to the person or group you want to service and say: ''I''ll be your waitress tonight.'' They''ll know what it means. From what the girls told me, they get paid between 500 and 2,000 <b>₽</b>."'
+							'"All our regulars know that we ''arrange meetings'' every Monday between 22:00 and 23:00. If you''re here at that time and want to earn some money, introduce yourself to the person or group you want to service and say: ''I''ll be your waitress tonight.'' They''ll know what it means. From what the girls told me, they get paid between 500 and 1,000 <b>₽</b>."'
 							'Before you leave, she adds: "Please don''t do it. I''m starting to care for you and..."'
 							'She looks away from you.'
 							act 'Say you won''t do it':

+ 3 - 3
locations/metro

@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if sound = 0:PLAY 'sound/metro.mp3',30
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Metro station</font></b></center>'
 	if $loc = 'street':
-		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Residential area</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Residential Area</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/platresident.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif $loc = 'down':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">City Center</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/platcenter.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif $loc = 'Nord':
-		'<center><b><font color="maroon">City Industrial Area</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">City Industrial Region</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/platindust.jpg"></center>'
 !!new locations for the metro, you will have to see how the code works and for now the island will be commented out until we add that area of the city
 	elseif $loc = 'psiklin':
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if $loc ! 'Nord':
-			act 'Go to the <b>City Industrial Area</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
+			act 'Go to the <b>City Industrial Region</b> (16 <b>₽</b>)':
 				$loc = 'Nord'
 				$metka = ''
 				money -= 16

+ 1215 - 1
locations/motherkafeboss

@@ -1,9 +1,1223 @@
 # motherkafeboss
+
+!!slavatalk - if you''ve confronted Borislav about your mother
+!!slavatalk = 2 - re-confront Borislav when you catch him continuing to fuck your mother
+!!pcafejob = 1 - made a deal to fuck Borislav but do not work for him
+!!pcafejob = 2 - made a deal to fuck Borislav and be a part time waitress
+!!pcafejob = 3 - found out your mother fucks Borislav for fun and not because he blackmails her
+!!pcafejob = 4 - found out your mother fucks Borislav for fun and are deciding to revenge fuck him to get back at your mother for being a hypocritical slut
+!!pcafejob = 5 - found out about your mother, quit working for Borislav
+!!pcafe_skirt = 1 - conservative uniform
+!!pcafe_skirt = 2 - normal uniform
+!!pcafe_skirt = 3 - cute uniform
+!!pcafe_skirt = 4 - slutty uniform
+
+
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/cafe/Borislav.jpg"></center>'
+gs 'boyStat', 'A119'
+'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/borislav.jpg"></center>'
 'The owner of the cafe, called Borislav. He is a tall, thin man in his forties. Most people call him Slava.'
 
+!!{if pcafejob = 2 and cloth_pick < 1:'"<<$pcs_firstname>>! Are you here to pick up your uniform?"'
+
+if pcafejob = 2:'"<<$pcs_firstname>>," he greets you. "Are you here to work a shift?"'
+
+if pcafejob = 1:'"<<$pcs_firstname>>," he greets you. "Are you here for another interview to discuss that ''job offer?'' he says with the faintest hint of a smile at the corners of his lips.'
+
 act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
 
+if pcafejob = 2:act'Work a shift':gt'motherkafeboss','work_shift'
+
+!!if pcafejob = 1 and cloth_pick = 0:act'Pick your uniform':gt'motherkafeboss','uniform'
+
+if momslut = 2 and slavatalk = 0:act'Confront him about your mother':gt'motherkafeboss','confrontation'
+		
+if slavatalk = 2:act'Confront him about your deal':gt'motherkafeboss','dealbreaker'
+!!if $ARGS[0] = 'uniform':
+		
+if $ARGS[0] = 'confrontation':
+	cla & *clr
+	slavatalk = 1
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/borislav.jpg"></center>'
+	'	You walk up to Borislav and he turns to face you.'
+	'	"Hello there, <<$pcs_nickname>>. What brings you by today? Did you want something to eat?"'
+	'	Ignoring his question you bluntly say, "I know you''ve been fucking mom." He pauses briefly at your words and glances around the room at the customers.'
+	'	"Why don''t we talk about this in the back?" he says calmly. "We don''t want to cause trouble for your mother do we?" You give him a hard look and follow him as he escorts you into a back room of the cafe.'
+	act'. . .':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/borislav.jpg"></center>'
+		'	Once both inside, he shuts the door behind you and sits down casually in a desk chair.'
+		'	"So. What''s this about?"'
+		'	"I told you. I know you''ve been fucking mom. She told me everything."'
+		'	He raises his eyebrow as you say this. "What exactly did she tell you?"'
+		'	"She told me that you only hire her because she lets you fuck her! And since she needs the job, she can''t do anything but continue to let you fuck her and make a cuck out of dad!"'
+		'	Borislav shifts in his chair and studies you. Given the subject of the conversation, you can''t help but feel that he''s acting too calmly."'
+		'	"So? This doesn''t explain why you''re here. What do you want from me?"'
+		act'"I want you to stop blackmailing mom"':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/borislav.jpg"></center>'
+			'	"I want you to stop blackmailing mom," you say. "Stop extorting her for sex and just let her work here as a normal waitress."'
+			'	Borislav snorts slightly, dismissive of your suggestion. "And why should I do that?" You start to raise your voice and tell him of the consequences when he interrupts you.'
+			'	"Say you go to the police about this, you have no proof that I''ve done anything wrong here. And even if you did, it doesn''t work out for you in the end does it? If I get punished or go to jail, your mother is out of a job so you lose anyways."'
+			'	Your arguments die in your throat. He''s right. Even if you win here, you still lose.'
+			'	"Did you have anything else you wanted to get off your chest or are we done here?" Borislav asks while inattentively checking the time on his watch.'
+			act'Accept defeat':
+				cla & *clr
+				pcs_mood -= 10
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/gkafe2.jpg"></center>'
+				'	There''s nothing you can do. With a sinking heart you shake your head before Borislav gets up and opens the door, watching you walk away before going back to his customers.'
+				act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+			end
+			
+			act'Make a deal':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'	You think about what he''s just said, mind racing for a way out of this to make everyone happy, or at least solve the problems with your parents marriage. Suddenly, you realize there''s only one thing you can do...'
+				act'Don''t do it':
+					cla & *clr
+					pcs_mood -= 10
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/gkafe2.jpg"></center>'
+					'	No. You just can''t do it. Even if it''s for your parents sake, you can''t make a deal like this.'
+					'	"Well?" he asks, impatiently checking his watch again.'
+					'	You shake your head in anger, more at yourself than at him. Borislav walks past you to open the door and you leave with your head held low.'
+					act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+				
+				act'Let him fuck you if he stops fucking mom':
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"I''ll make a deal with you," you say firmly.'
+					'	"Oh?" Slava seems to be interested in what you have to say for the first time. "What kind of deal?"'
+					'	"Stop fucking mom. And in return..." you trail off into a pause. "I''ll let you fuck me instead."'
+					if age < 20:'	"Oh ho ho," he chuckles. "I must admit, I wasn''t expecting this. I''d be lying if I didn''t find this offer tempting," he says, eyeing your nubile teenage body. "The younger model does seem like it might be more fun than the older one... But still, I''m not sure how I feel about taking something like this without giving something in return. Are you also looking for a job here? Something to supplement your family''s income? Or are you just doing this for the sake of your mother''s -- or should I say stepfather''s -- honor?"'
+					if age >= 20:'	"Oh ho ho," he chuckles. "I must admit, I wasn''t expecting this. I''d be lying if I didn''t find this offer tempting," he says, eyeing your young nubile body. "The younger model does seem like it might be more fun than the older one... But still, I''m not sure how I feel about taking something like this without giving something in return. Are you also looking for a job here? Something to supplement your family''s income? Or are you just doing this for the sake of your mother''s -- or should I say stepfather''s -- honor?"'
+					act'Don''t let him pay you, you''re doing this for family':
+						cla & *clr
+						pcafejob = 1
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+						'	"No!" you cry. "I won''t let you make this about money! I''m doing this to save my parent''s marriage."'
+						'	Slava laughs again. "Very well, your choice. If you ever change your mind, feel free to let me know." He gets up from his chair and moves towards you.'
+						'	"Right then. Take off your clothes."'
+						act'"What??"':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex'
+					end
+					
+					act'Take the job':
+						cla & *clr
+						pcafejob = 2
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+						'	You mull it over in your mind. In a strange way, if you took the job, it <i>would</i> feel like justice. Even if he''s still getting away with something, he''ll essentially be doubling his payment having to pay both your mother and you.'
+						'	"Yes. I want compensation. If I''m going to do this, then you have to pay me as a waitress."'
+						'	"So long as you recognize you''re going to work as a waitress too. I don''t need to spend extra money paying for a whore. If I wanted that, I''d just get it from your mother for free."'
+						'	You grit your teeth in anger at his final comment as he stands from his chair and moves towards you.'
+						'	"Right then. Take off your clothes."'
+						act'"What??"':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'dealbreaker':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/gkafe2.jpg"></center>'
+	'	"Back room. Now."'
+	*nl
+	'	You forcefully spit words at him and then move straightaway to the back room and wait for him at his desk.'
+	act'. . .':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+		'	He curiously follows you in and shuts the door behind him.'
+		*nl
+		'	What''s this about <<$pcs_nickname>>? Did you want to talk about something?"'
+		act'I thought we had a deal!':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/borislav.jpg"></center>'
+			'	"Yeah I wanted to talk about something!" you say with a raised voice, practically shouting. "I thought we had a deal!"'
+			'	Slava seems to have a confused look on his face. "We do have a deal, and I''m--"'
+			'	You cut him off. "I know you''re still fucking mom! I saw you when you closed the cafe again! What do you think you''re doing? You said we had a deal but you''re not--"'
+			'	It''s Slava''s turn to cut you off this time only it''s with laughter. Wholehearted, cheerful laughter. You can''t believe what you''re seeing. How can he laugh at you like this?"'
+			'	"Oh so you think it''s so funny that you''re just fucking my family like this? How can you do this? What''s so funny about this?!"'
+			act'. . .':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/borislav.jpg"></center>'
+				'	Slava finishes his laughter and chuckles while you sit there in front of him fuming before he finally speaks.'
+				'	"Well, it is true that I was lying to you about our deal. But in some ways I supposed that finding out the truth would be much more painful."'
+				'	"What?? How could the truth be more painful than--" he holds up his hand to stop you.'
+				'	"Let me explain," he says. "I don''t deny that I acted selfishly, getting a little extra on the side from you. After all, it''s hard to turn down the opportunity to fuck a younger girl''s pussy. But the only lie I told was when I let you believe I was blackmailing your mother."'
+				act'"What?"':
+					cla & *clr
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+					'	"What are you talking about?" you ask suspiciously.'
+					'	He smiles at you and continues. "You see <<$pcs_firstname>>, I never extorted your mother to begin with. That story she told you about how I fuck her in return for letting her work here is the real lie. She''s a good worker and an excellent waitress. Her contributions here are what earns her her place here, not anything else. The truth is that your mother is just a slut."'
+					'	"How dare you!" you shout back. "How dare you shame my mother and drag her name through the gutter like this! All just to keep pretending you''re not lying! How dare you call her a slut!"'
+					'	Slava starts to laugh again. "Girl, if your mother''s name is in the gutter it''s because she put it there herself. Your mother has been a slut since as long as this town can remember. She was a slut when she was in school, she was a slut before she got pregnant, she was a slut after she had kids, and she''s still a slut today. I fuck your mother because she asks me to and no other reasons."'
+					'	You feel your face go pale as you consider what he''s saying. "But-!"'
+					'	"But what?" he interrupts. "Think about what you saw, really. Did it look like I was blackmailing her? Did she look reluctant or unhappy? Or did she look like a wanton whore, ready, willing, and wanting to please?"'
+					act'. . .':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+						'	You slump your shoulders and lean back against the desk with the realizations. How loud your mother''s moans were even through the window, how quickly she''d drop to her knees after he came inside her, the whispers you hear about your family around town. He''s right. Your mother is undeniably a slut.'
+						*nl
+						if pcafejob = 2:'	"Listen," he says. "Since you''ve found out the truth, our bargain doesn''t hold up anymore. If you want to stop that, you can even still work here, no strings attached. Like I said, I need another waitress anyways. How does that sound?"'
+							
+							act'Leave without saying anything':
+								pcafejob = 3
+								*nl
+								'	Unable to say a word, you just walk out, your head spinning as you do.'
+								act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+							end
+							
+							act'I can''t work here anymore':
+								pcafejob = 5
+								cla & *clr
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+								'	"No," you say. "I can''t work here anymore." Everything about this has shaken you to your core. You can''t just keep going on like nothing happened.'
+								*nl
+								'	Slava nods. "I understand. If you ever change your mind, just let me know."'
+								*nl
+								'	You don''t know how you''re supposed to feel about that. The only thing you''re sure of is that you feel like throwing up...'
+								act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+							end
+							
+							act'I need to think about this':
+								pcafejob = 3
+								cla & *clr
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+								'	"I... I need to think about this..." you say, and stumble out of the room before Slava can respond.'
+								*nl
+								'Everything about this has shaken you to your core. Your head is spinning. What are you supposed to do about this?'
+								act 'Leave':gt $loc, $metka
+							end
+							
+							act'Fuck mom! I''m fucking him!':
+								cla & *clr
+								pcafejob = 4
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+								'	As thoughts of your mother circulate you suddenly think of her obsessive controlling behavior.'
+								'	How she made you go to the doctor to prove your virginity every month...'
+								'	How much she tells you to stay away from boys...'
+								'	How she keeps telling you not to become a slut...'
+								'	All these thoughts about your mother''s hypocritical behavior whirl through your head and you finally snap.'
+								'	"I have an idea instead..." you say mischievously.'
+								act'Strip down':
+									cla & *clr
+									gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+									gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+									gs 'stat'
+									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/undress/kotovpre11.mp4"></video></center>'
+									'	You start to tear off your clothes and soon enough you''re completely naked.'
+									'	"I must admit, this is not the reaction I was expecting," Slava smiles appreciatively as you back him up and push him down onto the couch.'
+									'	You smile back and kneel down to unzip his trousers, "My mother has been telling me not to be a slut or have a boyfriend or do anything sexual for as long as I can remember. Let''s just say I''m sick of that."'
+									act'. . .'
+										cla & *clr
+										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/kotovbj1.jpg"></center>'
+										'	You pull Slava''s already hardening cock out, gently jacking it off and licking the tip.'
+										'	"You''re doing all this just to get back at your mother?"'
+										act'Exactly':
+											*nl
+											'"Exactly," you say, before getting down to business.'
+											act'Blow him':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_slut_bj'
+										end
+										
+										act'No, I just want to be free':
+											*nl
+											'"No, this isn''t about her," you say before teasingly circling your tongue around his tip. "I''ve been locked up in this cage of chastity for too long. It''s not about mom, it''s about me. I''m free to do whatever I want and no one is going to tell me otherwise anymore." You give him one last smile before plunging onto his cock headfirst.'
+
+											act'Blow him':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_slut_bj'
+										end
+										
+										act'No, you just helped me realize I love sex':
+											*nl
+											'"Nope!" you say, teasingly circling the tip of his cock with your tongue. "You just helped me realize how much I love sex." And with that, you waste no more time and plunge yourself headfirst onto his cock.'
+											act'Blow him':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_slut_bj'
+										end
+										
+										act'I''m going to become a huge slut just to show her':
+											*nl
+											'"Exactly," you say. "I''m going to become a huge slut just to piss her off. She thinks she fucked around when she was my age? I''ll show her. I''ll show everyone what it really means to be a slut. And I might not be satisfied until I''ve tasted every cock in this town, maybe even every cock in St. Petersburg!"'
+											*nl
+											'And with that declaration, you can''t take it anymore and climb onto the sofa to ride his cock.'
+											act'Ride him':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_slut_ride'
+										end
+									end
+								end
+							end
+						end
+								
+						if pcafejob = 1:
+end
+
+!!End of mother dialogues
+!!---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
+!!Start of work events
+
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'work_shift':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/gkafe.jpg"></center>'
+	'Placeholder'
+	pcafetip = rand(40,140)
+	money += 300 + pcafetip
+	minut += 120
+	'	You worked as a waitress for 2 hours and made 300<b>₽</b> plus <<$pcafetip>><b>₽</b> in tips.'
+	*nl
+	if slavadealfuck ! daystart:
+		'	As you finish up your shift, Slava catches your eye and gestures towards the back room.'
+		act'Uphold the deal':
+			slavadealfuck = daystart
+			gt'motherkafeboss','slava_deal'
+		end
+	else
+		'	You finish up your shift and glance at Slava but since you''ve already fucked today, your end of the deal has already been upheld and he doesn''t pay attention to you.'
+		act'Finish your shift':gt'gkafe'
+		
+		!act'Tell him you want to fuck anyways':
+		
+		!act'Call him to the back room':
+		
+	end
+end
+	
+	
+	
+!!end of work events
+!!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
+!!sex scenes
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex1':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'	"W-what??" you stammer, instinctively backing up as he comes closer.'
+	'	"Oh come now <<$pcs_nickname>>, I thought you were serious about this. If you''re going to take your mother''s place then you might as well start now, shouldn''t you?"'
+	'	"I-! I-!" You have to admit, you didn''t entirely think this through. When you talked about the deal you thought of it as something in the distant future, not something about to happen right now!'
+	'	"W-w-what about your customers?" you try to say as an excuse.'
+	act'"Eek-!"':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
+		'	You yelp when you suddenly feel Slava''s hand on your ass, giving it a firm groping.'
+		'	"They''ll be fine without me for a few minutes. It''s not like this is going to take very long... Now come on. Clothes off. <i>Now.</i> Or the deal is off."'
+		act'Reluctantly undress':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	On the verge of crying, you begin to take off your clothes one by one until you stand completely nude. Your clothes littering the floor around you, you cover your breasts and pussy in shame and look away.'
+			'	Suddenly you hear a sound and you look back to see Borislav unzipping his trousers and pulling his cock out.'
+			'	"Get on your knees."'
+			act'Do as he says':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/blowjob_forced.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	Kneeling down, his cock practically slaps you in the face as he waves it around in front of you.'
+				'	"I don''t have all day for this girl," he says, roughly grabbing you by the hair and forcing his cock into your mouth.'
+				'	Your eyes go wide and tear up. You concentrate on keeping your mouth as wide as possible and it''s all you can do not to choke on it. Soon one thrust turns into five and five into fifteen and soon you have no idea how long it''s been, unable to keep track of anything but the tip of his cock bumping into the back of your throat and your silent prayer that he''ll cum soon and it will be over.'
+				'	Finally, Slava pulls out completely and lets go of your hair, leaving you gasping for breath.'
+				'	"You''re really starting to make me question this deal you know," he says, looking down at you as you cough a few more times. "At least Natasha gets into it and gives me a proper blowjob. I love a good facefucking as much as the next man, but feeling a woman suck like a vacuum is always a superior experience.'
+				'	"Now, get on the table."'
+				act'Do as he says':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex2'
+			end
+		end
+			
+		act'Bravely undress':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	You steel yourself and remember why you''re doing this. This is your decision, you''re going through with it.'
+			'	Without another hesitation, you mechanically take off your clothes until they lay in a pile on the ground and you stand before him completely nude. You watch him unzip his unzip his trousers and pull out his already hardening cock.'
+			'	"Get on your knees."'
+			act'Do as he says':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/blowjob_grope.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	Borislav''s cock hangs in your face before you. Wanting to get this over with quickly, you wrap your lips around him and start to suck as hard as you can.'
+				'	He grunts in satisfaction and reaches down to slap your breast. It initially gives you a shock but as both hands come down to grope both your breasts simultaneously, you ignore his fondling to concentrate on the blowjob. You thought about putting in a token effort, but you figure if you focus on your task, you might get lucky and he''ll cum sooner. Though hopefully not in your mouth.'
+				'	"Ahh..." he sighs. "I have to say, Natasha is still better at giving head but a younger and more supple pair of breasts..." he says, emphasizing his words with hard squeezes, "is always better than an older pair."'
+				'	You ignore his comments and press on, trying to get a little deeper when he suddenly pulls you upward by your breasts. You feel conflicted with your vague sense of disappointment to no longer have your mouth around him, but you attribute it to your hope to get it over with sooner.'
+				'	Now standing in front of Borislav, he says, "Time for the main course. Get on the table."'
+				act'Do as he says':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex2'
+			end
+		end
+		
+		act'Angrily undress':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/citycenter/photo/strip2.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	Despite recognizing that you put yourself up to this, you can''t help but be angry with his audacity in the situation.'
+			'	You mechanically take off your clothes, glaring at Borislav the whole time until they lay in a pile on the ground and you stand before him completely nude. You watch him unzip his unzip his trousers and pull out his already hardening cock.'
+			'	"Get on your knees."'
+			act'Do as he says':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/blowjob_grope.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	"Ugh." Kneeling down, Borislav''s cock hangs before you in front of your face. You briefly consider biting his dick off, but you want to get this over with quickly. Rather than indulge in your fantasies, you waste no more time and start blowing him.'
+				'	He grunts in satisfaction and reaches down to slap your breast. Your eyes widen at the impact and you go back to thinking about biting down before his other hand joins the first and begins to massage your breasts skillfully. You decide to fuck around with him and put in a token effort, lightly sucking on the head of his cock instead of trying to go for depth.'
+				'	<i>No balls like blue balls...</i> you think to yourself.'
+				'	"Ahh..." he sighs. "I have to say, Natasha is still better at giving head but a younger and more supple pair of breasts..." he says, emphasizing his words with hard squeezes, "is always better than an older pair."'
+				'	With his comments about your mother while he''s abusing your body, you''re ready to snap. You try to to get a little deeper so when you bite you can take off as much of his dick as possible when he suddenly yanks you upward by your breasts. You feel genuinely disappointed you couldn''t have blown him for a couple more seconds or he''d have become a eunuch.'
+				'	Now standing in front of Borislav, he pushes you backwards onto the desk and says, "Time for the main course."'
+				act'. . .':gt 'motherkafeboss','first_sex2'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex2':
+	cla & *clr
+	slavafuck += 1
+	if vag > 0:
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/pre.jpg"></center>'
+		'	Pushing you backwards onto the table, Borislav now lines up his cock to fuck your pussy.'
+		act'Cry':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/table.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	Unable to contain yourself any longer, you begin to cry as he thrusts all the way inside in one smooth motion. His cock is thick and long and you can''t help but cry louder as he fills you completely. He grabs your legs and pulls you closer with each thrust and you can''t believe it''s come to this.'
+			'	He wastes no time and immediately starts fucking you at a steady pace without any buildup whatsoever. The room is filled with the sound of your flesh slapping together, the squelching sounds of his thick cock pumping in and out of your pussy, and your soft cries that go up in volume at intervals that correspond with his cock bumping against your cervix. You lose track of everything but the sound of your own crying and the feeling of his cock violating you and just as your mind is about to go blank you feel him pull out and pull you off the desk.'
+			'	"Get back on your knees," you hear him growl.'
+			act'. . .':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	He forces you down and starts jacking off in front of you.'
+				'	"Cumming inside Natasha is one thing, but I could get in serious trouble for cumming inside her daughter. Thankfully, that''s what your pretty face is for."'
+				'	As he finishes his sentence you feel hot liquid spatter on your skin, Borislav ejaculating all over your face.'
+				'	You don''t even flinch, exhausted from the ordeal as more droplets hit you in the face. As Borislav''s fresh cum drips down your cheeks, you wonder to yourself, <i>Is this really worth it?</i>'
+				'	"Hey, don''t just sit there. Clean me up."'
+				act'. . .':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					gs 'cum_call', 'hair', $boy
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/c.jpg"></center>'
+					'	In your state of shock, you barely even notice when Slava pushes his cock into your mouth. It automatically opens for him and you can feel him exploring every part of your mouth, essentially using your tongue and lips to wipe himself clean. In the back of your mind, you vaguely notice that you can taste your own pussy juices and his cum mixing together in your mouth.'
+					'	Eventually he pulls back, wipes his manhood on your hair and tells you to get dressed.'
+					if pcafejob = 2:'	"Come by later to pick out which uniform you want to wear. Your available hours are any time your mother isn''t working here."'
+					if pcafejob = 1:'	If you ever change your mind about that job, let me know. The offer still stands. As much as I enjoy getting you as a fucktoy for free, I could honestly use another part time waitress. Come see me if you change your mind."'
+					'	He pulls up his trousers and moves to the door, bidding you goodbye.'
+					*nl
+					'	"I look forward to our future relationship with this deal. And oh," he says, looking back at you. "Don''t forget to clean your face up. Can''t have rumors spreading about you, can we?" before shutting the door behind him.'
+					'	You look back down at yourself and the feeling of emptiness between your legs and you wonder what control over your body you''ve just relinquished. Another drop of cum slides off your face onto the ground where your clothes are scattered before you start to move again, putting your clothes back on.'
+					act 'Get dressed and leave':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+						gs 'arousal','end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt $loc, $metka
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+		
+		act'Think of your family':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/table.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	There''s a moment of apprehension as you feel him press into you, but thinking of your mother and what you''re doing for your parents'' marriage, you resign yourself to the situation.'
+			'	<i>This is for the best. I''m doing this because I love mom and dad. Mom won''t have to suffer for our sake anymore.</i>'
+			'	Your thoughts are interrupted as Borislav grabs you by the thighs and thrusts all the way inside you in one go, causing an involuntary gasp. His cock is quite large and seems to fill you wall to wall. You''re glad that you gave him a good blowjob to help lube him up for this.'
+			'	Without hesitation or any slow buildup, he begins fucking you at a steady speed. The room is filled with the sound of your flesh slapping together and the squelching sound of his cock pumping in and out of your pussy. Between his grunts you hear the sound of your own voice as you instinctively start to moan, the tip of his cock eliciting involuntary cries whenever it bumps against your cervix.'
+			'	After several minutes of this, he suddenly pulls out, growling, "Get on your knees."'
+			act'. . .':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	Holding you by the shoulders, he forces you down and starts jacking off in front of you.'
+				'	"Cumming inside Natasha is one thing, but I could get in serious trouble for cumming inside her daughter. Thankfully, that''s what your pretty face is for."'
+				'	As he finishes his sentence you flinch, feeling hot liquid spatter on your skin, Borislav ejaculating all over your face.'
+				'	You squint hard, trying to keep it out of your eyes, feeling it dribble down your face.'
+				'	<i>At least he has the decency not to cum inside me,</i> you think to yourself. <i>Or in a way, is this actually <b>more</b> degrading?</i>'
+				'	"Hey, don''t just sit there. Clean me up," Slava says, interrupting your train of thought by sticking his cock in your face.'
+				act'. . .':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/cum_clean.jpg"></center>'
+					'	Resigned to the fact that this is just going to be part of the deal you give him a thorough tongue bath to clean off your slick pussy juices before finishing with another blowjob, sucking hard to draw the last remnants of semen from his sperm duct. Looking around you don''t see any tissues or anything else to do with what''s in your mouth so you swallow, tasting the strange combination of your juices and his sperm.'
+					'	"Oooooohhh... There''s nothing better than a girl who knows how to suck cum to the last drop. Always much better than when it seeps out into your underwear later. Nice to see good etiquette runs in the family," he says with a cheeky grin.'
+					*nl
+					if pcafejob = 2:'	"Anyways, you''ll need to get a uniform if you want to work here. You can pick one up from the G&M store. Your available hours are any time your mother isn''t working here."'
+					if pcafejob = 1:'	"Anyways, if you ever change your mind about that job, let me know. The offer still stands. As much as I enjoy getting you as a fucktoy for free, I could honestly use another part time waitress. Come see me if you change your mind."'
+					*nl
+					'	He pulls up his trousers and moves to the door, bidding you goodbye.'
+					*nl
+					'	"I look forward to our future relationship with this deal. And oh," he says, looking back at you. "Don''t forget to clean your face up. Can''t have rumors spreading about you, can we?" before shutting the door behind him.'
+					'	<i>Yeah, thanks for the help looking out for me...</i> you think to yourself as you squint to stop another dribble of cum from sliding into your eye.'
+					act 'Get dressed and leave':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+						gs 'arousal','end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt $loc, $metka
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+		
+		
+		act'Grit your teeth':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/table.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	As the tip of his cock penetrates your sex, you can''t help but clench and grind your teeth in anger.'
+			'	<i>I can''t believe he''s taking advantage of us, of me like this! Who does he think he is pulling shit like th-!</i>'
+			'	Your thoughts are interrupted as Borislav grabs you by the thighs and thrusts all the way inside you in one go, causing an involuntary gasp. His cock is quite large and seems to fill you wall to wall. Despite your anger, you feel a vague sense of regret you didn''t give him a better blowjob to lube him up for this. That almost split you in half!'
+			'	Without hesitation or any slow buildup, he begins fucking you at a steady speed. The room is filled with the sound of your flesh slapping together and the squelching sound of his cock pumping in and out of your pussy. With every grunt you hear from him you feel your teeth clench harder and your hands ball into fists. The idea that he''s using your body like this is so repulsive that it makes you want to stop but you still remember why you''re doing this and focus on the feeling of your nails digging into the palms of your hands.'
+			'	Your concentration is interrupted when you hear him say, "Oh yeah, keep tightening up like that! Feels great when a young girl like you knows how to clamp down on a cock!"'
+			'	For a second you don''t know what he''s talking about when you realize that your anger is unconsciously making your pussy tighter. Ironically, the realization causes your rage to build even further and tensing your body even more. His grunts become even more satisfactory, creating a vicious cycle of anger and pleasure between you and Slava.'
+			'	After several minutes of this, he suddenly pulls out, growling, "Get on your knees."'
+			act'. . .':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	Grabbing you by the shoulders, he forces you down and starts jacking off in front of you.'
+				'	"Cumming inside Natasha is one thing, but I could get in serious trouble for cumming inside her daughter. Thankfully, that''s what your pretty face is for."'
+				'	As he finishes his sentence you flinch, feeling Borislav ejaculate all over your face.'
+				'	You squint hard and grimace, trying to keep it out of your eyes, feeling it dribble down your face.'
+				'	<i>Ugh, could there have been anything more degrading than this?</i> you think to yourself. <i>Making a girl take a cumshot to the face as part of a deal to stop fucking her mother. This is just ridiculous.</i>'
+				'	"Hey, don''t just sit there. Clean me up," Slava says, interrupting your train of thought when you feel his cock poking you in the face.'
+				act'. . .':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/cum_clean.jpg"></center>'
+					'	Your mouth briefly hangs agape in awe of his audacity. Only for the sake of your mother do you hold your tongue (or rather your teeth). In an act of malicious compliance, you glare at Borislav and give him a thorough tongue bath to clean your slick pussy juices off his still-hard cock. With every lick and every taste of his cock, you continue to stare at him, never breaking eye contact, doing your best to know how much you hate this. Finally, you wrap him in your mouth and suck as hard as you can to draw the last remnants of semen from his sperm duct, hoping you can turn intense pleasure into pain.'
+					'	Your hopes are shattered when he says, "Oooooohhh... There''s nothing better than a girl who knows how to suck cum to the last drop. Always much better than when it seeps out into your underwear later. Nice to see good etiquette runs in the family," he says with a cheeky grin. You say nothing in response but feeling the mixture of cum and pussy juice in your mouth, you viscous spit it onto the floor where it lands with a satisfying splat.'
+					*nl
+					if pcafejob = 2:'	"Hey, I''d be careful of doing that if I were you. You''re about to work for me, it might be more work for you if you''re the one cleaning it up in the end. Anyways, you''ll need to get a uniform if you want to work here. You can pick one up from the G&M store. Your available hours are any time your mother isn''t working here."'
+					if pcafejob = 1:'	"Anyways, if you ever change your mind about that job, let me know. The offer still stands. As much as I enjoy getting you as a fucktoy for free, I could honestly use another part time waitress. Come see me if you change your mind."'
+					*nl
+					'	He pulls up his trousers and moves to the door, bidding you goodbye.'
+					*nl
+					'	"I look forward to our future relationship with this deal. And oh," he says, looking back at you. "Don''t forget to clean your face up. Can''t have rumors spreading about you, can we?" before shutting the door behind him.'
+					'	<i>Yeah, thanks for the help looking out for me...</i> you think to yourself as you squint to stop another dribble of cum from sliding into your eye.'
+					act 'Get dressed and leave':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+						gs 'arousal','end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt $loc, $metka
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	else
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/pre.jpg"></center>'
+		'	Pushing you backwards onto the table, Borislav lines up his cock to fuck your pussy. He presses inside and stops when he bumps up against your hymen.'
+		'	"Is this..." he pauses. "Are you a virgin?" Before you can say anything he continues on, "Unexpected, but I''m not going to deny myself a treat when offered!" and plunges into you balls deep.'
+		act'!!!':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/deflower.jpg"></center>'
+			'	You shriek in pain as Borislav thrusts the entirety of his manhood inside you, tearing your hymen with such force that for a brief moment you thought that your entire body would split in two.'
+			'	"Ahh, nothing better than popping a cherry in one go," he sighs as he pulls back out. You look down and see the blood of your virginity leaking from your pussy and coating his dick. "Virgins are always so tight! Can''t waste that by being too gentle," he grunts, thrusting back inside full force.'
+			act'Cry':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/table.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	Unable to contain yourself any longer, you begin to cry. Losing your virginity like this is simply too much for you to bear. His cock is thick and long, filling you up and stretching you out, too big for your virgin pussy. He grabs your legs and pulls you closer with each thrust and you can''t believe it''s come to this.'
+				'	The room is filled with the sound of your flesh slapping together, the squelching sounds of his thick cock pumping in and out of your bloody pussy, and your soft cries that go up in volume at intervals that correspond with his cock bumping against your cervix. You lose track of everything but the sound of your own crying and the feeling of his cock violating you and just as your mind is about to go blank you feel him pull out and pull you off the desk.'
+				'	"Get back on your knees," you hear him growl.'
+				act'. . .':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'	He forces you down and starts jacking off in front of you.'
+					'	"Cumming inside Natasha is one thing, but I could get in serious trouble if I cum inside her virgin daughter. Thankfully, that''s what your pretty face is for."'
+					'	As he finishes his sentence, Borislav ejaculates all over your face.'
+					'	You don''t even flinch, exhausted from the ordeal as the hot sticky liquid spatters across your face. Borislav''s fresh cum drips down your cheeks, mixing with your tears and you think dejectedly to yourself, <i>Is this what my virginity was worth?</i>'
+					'	"Hey, don''t just sit there. Clean me up."'
+					act'. . .':
+						cla & *clr
+						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+						gs 'cum_call', 'hair', $boy
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/c.jpg"></center>'
+						'	In your state of shock, you barely even notice when Slava pushes his cock into your mouth. It automatically opens for him and you can feel him exploring every part of your mouth, essentially using your tongue and lips to wipe himself clean. You can taste the tart of pussy juice and the salt of cum and the copper of blood mixing together in your mouth.'
+						'	Eventually he pulls back, wipes his manhood on your hair and tells you to get dressed.'
+						if pcafejob = 2:'	"Come by later to pick out which uniform you want to wear. Your available hours are any time your mother isn''t working here."'
+						if pcafejob = 1:'	If you ever change your mind about that job, let me know. The offer still stands. As much as I enjoy getting you as a fucktoy for free, I could honestly use another part time waitress. Come see me if you change your mind."'
+						'	He pulls up his trousers and moves to the door, bidding you goodbye.'
+						*nl
+						'	"I look forward to our future relationship with this deal. And oh," he says, looking back at you. "Don''t forget to clean your face up. Can''t have rumors spreading about you, can we?" before shutting the door behind him.'
+						'	You look back down at yourself, vision blurred by tears, feeling the emptiness between your legs and the residual pain of your lost virginity and you wonder what control over your body you''ve just relinquished. Another drop of cum slides off your face onto the ground where your clothes are scattered before you start to move again, putting your clothes back on.'
+						act 'Get dressed and leave':
+							gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+							gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+							gs 'arousal','end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							gt $loc, $metka
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			act'Think of your family':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/table.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	Borislav fucks you roughly with no regard for your comfort or enjoyment. His large <<dick>> cm cock and not only fills you wall to wall but painfully stretches your virgin sex. There''s a brief moment where you want to cry, but thinking of your mother and what you''re doing for your parents'' marriage, you resign yourself to the situation.'
+				'	<i>This is for the best. I''m doing this because I love mom and dad. They won''t have to suffer anymore and any price is worth that. Even my virginity.</i>'
+				'	The room is filled with the sound of your flesh slapping together and the squelching sound of his cock pumping in and out of your bloody pussy. Between his grunts you hear the sound of your own voice as you instinctively start to moan, the tip of his cock eliciting involuntary cries whenever it bumps against your cervix.'
+				'	After several minutes he suddenly pulls out, growling, "Get on your knees."'
+				act'. . .':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'	Holding you by the shoulders, he forces you down and starts jacking off in front of you.'
+					'	"Cumming inside Natasha is one thing, but I could get in serious trouble if I cum inside her virgin daughter. Thankfully, that''s what your pretty face is for."'
+					'	As he finishes his sentence you flinch as Borislav ejaculates all over your face.'
+					'	You squint hard, trying to keep it out of your eyes, feeling the hot liquid spatter across your face.'
+					'	<i>Is this what mom feels every day she goes to work?</i> you think to yourself. <i>Is this how much she loves us?</i>'
+					'	"Hey, don''t just sit there. Clean me up," Slava says, interrupting your train of thought by sticking his cock in your face.'
+					act'. . .':
+						cla & *clr
+						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/cum_clean.jpg"></center>'
+						'	Your thoughts still on your mother, you give him a thorough tongue bath to clean off your slick pussy juices. As much as you try not to think about it, you can''t help but notice the taste of blood from your torn hymen mixed in with his cum and your pussy juice. You try to distract yourself from these thoughts by sucking hard on Slava''s dick to draw the last remnants of semen from his sperm duct. Pulling your lips from his head, you look around but don''t see any tissues or anything else to do with what''s in your mouth. Unable to come up with an alternative solution, you swallow, once again trying to focus on the taste of his sperm rather than your blood.'
+						'	"Oooooohhh... There''s nothing better than a girl who knows how to suck to the last drop. Always much better than when it seeps out into your underwear later. Nice to see good etiquette runs in the family," he says with a cheeky grin.'
+						*nl
+						if pcafejob = 2:'	"Anyways, you''ll need to get a uniform if you want to work here. You can pick one up from the G&M store. Your available hours are any time your mother isn''t working here."'
+						if pcafejob = 1:'	"Anyways, if you ever change your mind about that job, let me know. The offer still stands. As much as I enjoy getting you as a fucktoy for free, I could honestly use another part time waitress. Come see me if you change your mind."'
+						*nl
+						'	He pulls up his trousers and moves to the door, bidding you goodbye.'
+						*nl
+						'	"I look forward to our future relationship with this deal. And oh," he says, looking back at you. "Don''t forget to clean your face up. Can''t have rumors spreading about you, can we?" before shutting the door behind him.'
+						'	The door clicks shut and you sigh. <i>For mom and dad...</i> you think to yourself as you squint to stop another dribble of cum from sliding into your eye.'
+						*nl
+						'	You pick up your clothes and get ready to leave.'
+						act 'Get dressed and leave':
+							gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+							gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+							gs 'arousal','end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							gt $loc, $metka
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			
+			act'Grit your teeth':
+				cla & *clr
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/table.mp4"></video></center>'
+				'	You grit your teeth as Borislav fucks you roughly with no regard for your comfort or enjoyment. His large <<dick>> cm cock and not only fills you wall to wall but painfully stretches your virgin sex. With every thrust, you grind your teeth more and more to prevent yourself from crying out in pain.'
+				'	Even through the pain you think to yourself, <i>This is fucking bullshit. I can''t believe this is how I''m losing my virginity. Practically getting raped on a table in the back of a cafe. If it weren''t for mom, I wouldn''t ev--</i>'
+				'	Your thoughts are interrupted as Borislav grabs you by the thighs and thrusts even deeper inside you, causing an involuntary gasp followed by a grunt of pain.'
+				'	<i>Fuck! He could at least pretend that he cares about making this feel good for me!</i>'
+				'	The room is filled with the sound of your flesh slapping together and the squelching sound of his cock pumping in and out of your bloody pussy. With every grunt you hear from him you feel your teeth clench harder and your hands ball into fists. The idea that he''s using your body like this is so repulsive that it makes you want to stop. In the best case scenario your mother never finds out about this, but you still hope she''s fucking grateful. After that thought, you try to focus on the feeling of your nails digging into the palms of your hands instead of Slava''s stupid dick fucking your cunt.'
+				'	Your concentration is interrupted when you hear him say, "Oh yeah, keep tightening up like that! Feels great when a young girl like you knows how to clamp down on a cock!"'
+				'	For a second you don''t know what he''s talking about when you realize that your anger is unconsciously making you flex your muscles and it''s making your pussy tighter. Ironically, the realization only causes your rage to build even further and you feel your snatch clench harder on his invading cock. His grunts become even more satisfactory, creating a vicious cycle of anger and pleasure between you and Slava.'
+				'	After several minutes he suddenly pulls out, growling, "Get on your knees."'
+				act'. . .':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial0,3.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'	Grabbing you by the shoulders, he forces you down and starts jacking off in front of you.'
+					'	"Cumming inside Natasha is one thing, but I could get in serious trouble if I cum inside her virgin daughter. Thankfully, that''s what your pretty face is for."'
+					'	As he finishes his sentence, Borislav ejaculates, his spunk spattering all over your face.'
+					'	You scowl and squint hard, trying to keep it out of your eyes as it dribbles down your face.'
+					'	<i>Ugh, could there have been anything more vile than this?</i> you think to yourself. <i>Making a girl blow you, then taking her virginity, and then cumming on her face, all just to get him to stop fucking her mother. Just despicable...</i>'
+					'	"Hey, don''t just sit there. Clean me up," Slava says, interrupting your train of thought when you feel his cock poking you in the face.'
+					act'. . .':
+						cla & *clr
+						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/cum_clean.jpg"></center>'
+						'	Your mouth hangs agape in awe of his audacity. "Come on, get to it. This isn''t going to clean itself. Or would you rather it fuck your mother dirty?" You glare daggers at Borislav and give him a thorough tongue bath to clean your slick pussy juices off his still-hard cock. With every lick and every taste of his cock, you continue to stare him right in the eyes, doing your best to know how much you hate this. The only time you break eye contact is when you taste the blood of your virginity, involuntarily grimacing. Finally, you wrap him in your mouth and suck as hard as you can to draw the last remnants of semen from his sperm duct, hoping you can turn intense pleasure into pain.'
+						'	Your hopes are shattered when he bites his lip in pleasure saying, "Oooooohhh... There''s nothing better than a girl who knows how to suck cum to the last drop. Always much better than when it seeps out into your underwear later. Nice to see good etiquette runs in the family," he says with a cheeky grin. You say nothing in response but feeling the strange mixture of cum, blood, and pussy juice in your mouth, you viscous spit it onto the floor where it lands with a satisfying splat.'
+						*nl
+						if pcafejob = 2:'	"Hey, I''d be careful of doing that if I were you. You''re about to work for me, it might be more work for you if you''re the one cleaning it up in the end. Anyways, you''ll need to get a uniform if you want to work here. You can pick one up from the G&M store. Your available hours are any time your mother isn''t working here."'
+						if pcafejob = 1:'	"Anyways, if you ever change your mind about that job, let me know. The offer still stands. As much as I enjoy getting you as a fucktoy for free, I could honestly use another part time waitress. Come see me if you change your mind."'
+						*nl
+						'	He pulls up his trousers and moves to the door, bidding you goodbye.'
+						*nl
+						'	"I look forward to our future relationship with this deal. And oh," he says, looking back at you. "Don''t forget to clean your face up. Can''t have rumors spreading about you, can we?" before shutting the door behind him.'
+						'	<i>Yeah, thanks for the help looking out for me...</i> you think to yourself as you feel your sore pussy throb and squint to stop another dribble of cum from sliding into your eye.'
+						*nl
+						'	Picking up your scattered clothes, you begin to get ready to leave.'
+						act 'Get dressed and leave':
+							gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+							gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+							gs 'arousal','end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							gt $loc, $metka
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'slava_deal':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'	You follow Slava into the back room where he unzips his trousers and pulls out his cock expectantly.'
+	if slava_condom_ask = 0:
+		act'"Can we at least use a condom?"':
+			slava_condom_ask = 1
+			*nl
+			'	"Can we please use condoms?" you ask pleadingly.'
+			'	"I don''t use that rubber shit," Slava laughs at you. "Don''t worry though, unlike younger men I have real self control. I promise I won''t cum anywhere but on that pretty face of yours."'
+			'	You frown in skepticism and paranoia, but there''s nothing you can really do to convince him. You suppose you could always start birth control as a precaution...'
+		end
+	end
+		
+	if mesec > 0:
+		act'Ask to give a blowjob since you''re on your period'
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/backroom.jpg"></center>'
+			'	"Slava, I''m on my period. Can I just blow you today?"'
+			'	"Well, there''s nothing we can do about that I suppose," he says and you sigh in relief.'
+			'	"Well? Get to it."'
+			act'Take off your clothes and blow him':gt'motherkafeboss','bj'
+			
+			act'Don''t undress, just blow him':gt'motherkafeboss','cloth_bj'
+		end
+	end
+
+	if slava_fuck < 6:
+		act'Reluctantly let him fuck you':gt'motherkafeboss','sad_fuck'
+	end
+	
+	act'Dutifully fuck him':
+		slava_fuck_pick = rand(1,4)
+		if slava_fuck_pick = 1:gt'motherkafeboss','couch_fuck'
+		if slava_fuck_pick = 2:gt'motherkafeboss','table_fuck'
+		if slava_fuck_pick = 3:gt'motherkafeboss','bj'
+		if slava_fuck_pick = 4:gt'motherkafeboss','cloth_bj'
+	act'Fuck him on your terms':
+		
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'couch_fuck':
+	slavafuck += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+	gs 'stat'
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'table_fuck':
+	slavafuck += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+	gs 'stat'
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
+	slava_bj += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
+	gs 'stat'
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'cloth_bj':
+	cla & *clr
+	slava_bj += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/cloth_bj.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'	Slava sits in his chair with his cock hanging out and you kneel in front of him. You dutifully suck his cock, using your tongue and everything at your disposal to make him feel good. You do this partially to honor the deal but also out of worry that if you''re a bad lay he might go back to extorting your mother.'
+	*nl
+	slava_cumming = rand(1,3)
+	if slavacumming = 1:
+		'	"Oh shit!" Slava suddenly exclaims. "It''s too much! I''m cumming!"'
+		act'Take it in your mouth':
+			cla & *clr
+			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/clothd_bj_shot.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'	Your real effort paid off today. Since he''s cumming now, he probably won''t fuck you afterwards. You pull off his cock and when he makes no move to blow his load on your face, you open your mouth. You figure that if he''s going to make you clean his cock anyways you would swallow rather than leave with a facial.'
+			*nl
+			'	Slava starts to cum and you catch as much of it as you can on your tongue until you don''t feel anymore come out. You swallow and clean him off by licking up the rest.'
+			'	"Ahh, that was satisfying," he says while zipping up his trousers. "Keep up the good work <<$pcs_nickname>>," and with that he leaves the room.'
+			*nl
+			'	It was all over so quickly that you think there''s something you''re forgetting to do but since you never took off your clothes and don''t have anything to clean off your face, you shrug and leave behind him.'
+			act'Leave'gt'gkafe'
+		end
+	if slava_cumming = 2:
+		'	After a couple minutes of blowing him he pulls you back and says, "Alright, time for the main course," and bends you over the table.'
+		act'Undress':gt'motherkafeboss','cloth_pre_fuck'
+	
+	else
+		'	After a couple minutes of blowing him he pulls you back and says, "Alright, time for the main course," and begins to undress.'
+		act'Undress':gt'motherkafeboss','table_fuck'
+	
+if $ARGS[0] = 'cloth_pre_fuck':
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
+		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+		if slavafuck < 4:'	"I feel like fucking you in your uniform today," he says, pulling down your panties and in one quick thrust plunges balls deep inside you. You grunt at the unexpected sensation of his entire cock filling you so suddenly and he sighs. "Ahh... Even after over a dozen years of owning a cafe, there novelty of fucking a waitress never wears off."'
+		if slavafuck >= 4 and slavafuck < 10:'	"I feel like fucking you in your uniform today," he says, pulling down your panties. You hold your breath as Slava thrusts hard, plunging the full length of his cock into you. The sensation causes you to exhale with force almost like you''ve been winded. You''re getting used to his antics but it doesn''t make it any more comfortable that he insists on going balls deep on the first thrust every time. He sighs saying, "Maybe it''s just me being spoiled by your youth but it always feels like you''re tighter when you''re still in uniform," before beginning to fuck you.'
+		if slavafuck >= 10:'	"I feel like fucking you in your uniform today," he says, pulling down your panties. You barely even flinch when Slava thrusts the entirety of his manhood into you in one go. Whether you like it or not, it seems your body has gotten used to having his large cock rammed balls deep into you. "Just as enjoyable as the first time," he says, pausing to appreciate the tightness of your pussy. He begins to fuck you saying, "Good coochie must run in the family."'
+		act'. . .'gt'motherkafeboss','cloth_fuck'
+	else	
+		if slavafuck < 4:'	"I feel like fucking you in your uniform today," he says, reaching for your panties only to find your bare pussy. "Oooh," You can feel his grin even from behind you. "I hope you got some nice tips today," he says, causing you to blush. Without warning he plunges balls deep into you with one quick thrust. You grunt at the unexpected sensation of his entire cock filling you so suddenly and he sighs. "Ahh... Even after over a dozen years of owning a cafe, there novelty of fucking a waitress never wears off."'
+		if slavafuck >= 4 and slavafuck < 10:'	"I feel like fucking you in your uniform today," he says, reaching for your panties only to find your bare pussy. "Oooh," You can feel his grin even from behind you. "I hope you got some nice tips today," he says, causing you to blush. You hold your breath as Slava thrusts hard, plunging the full length of his cock into you. The sensation causes you to exhale with force almost like you''ve been winded. You''re getting used to his antics but it doesn''t make it any more comfortable that he insists on going balls deep on the first thrust every time. He sighs saying, "Maybe it''s just me being spoiled by your youth but it always feels like you''re tighter when you''re still in uniform," before beginning to fuck you.'
+		if slavafuck >= 10:'	"I feel like fucking you in your uniform today," he says, reaching for your panties only to find your bare pussy. "Oooh! Good girl..." You can feel his grin even from behind you. "You keep this up, I''ll have the most popular cafe in Pavlovsky. Or are you doing it just for me?" he says, causing you to blush. You barely even flinch when Slava thrusts the entirety of his manhood into you in one go. Whether you like it or not, it seems your body has gotten used to having his large cock rammed balls deep into you. "Just as enjoyable as the first time," he says, pausing to appreciate the tightness of your pussy. He begins to fuck you saying, "Good coochie must run in the family."'
+		act'. . .'gt'motherkafeboss','cloth_fuck'
+	end
+end
+		
+				
+				
+if $ARGS[0] = 'cloth_fuck':
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+	gs 'stat'
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+	'	As usual, he wastes no time, not bothering to build up the tempo slowly but instead preferring to go straight to full fuck speed. The table rocks underneath you and creates a strange melody of squeaking wood, slapping flesh, and moans and grunts. In the middle of this hypnotic rhythm, you find your mind thinking of...'
+	*nl
+		if slavafuck < 4:
+			act'Nothing in particular':
+				cla
+				'	Your mind wanders but doesn''t focus on any one thought in particular. Mostly you just get lost in the rhythmic sounds and Slava''s cock pounding in and out of your pussy.'
+				*nl
+				'	Eventually Slava pulls out and tells you to get on your knees.'
+				act'Get on your knees':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'	You do as he commands as he starts jacking off. He doesn''t cum immediately but you patiently wait and as you see his face begin to contort you position yourself under his cock and close your eyes, feeling his hot sperm dribble all over your face.'
+					*nl
+					'	Afterwards, you dutifully clean his cock, licking off your pussy juice and sucking out the remnants as you did before. He pulls up his trousers and leaves you wishing that he had a sink or at least would bring a tissue box back here to clean up your face afterwards.'
+					act'Find your panties and leave':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'arousal','end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt'gkafe'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			act'Your mother':
+				cla
+				'	Once again, your thoughts become centered on your mother. This experience isn''t very enjoyable for you but if your mother could endure it for you, you can endure it for her.'
+				*nl
+				'	Your thoughts are interrupted when Slava pulls out and tells you to get on your knees.'
+				act'Get on your knees':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'	You do as he commands as he starts jacking off. He doesn''t cum immediately but you patiently wait and as you see his face begin to contort you position yourself under his cock and close your eyes, feeling his hot sperm dribble all over your face.'
+					*nl
+					'	Afterwards, you dutifully clean his cock, licking off your pussy juice and sucking out the remnants as you did before. He pulls up his trousers and leaves you wishing that he had a sink or at least would bring a tissue box back here to clean up your face afterwards.'
+					act'Find your panties and leave':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'arousal','end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt'gkafe'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			
+			act'Am I... enjoying this?':
+				cla
+				pcs_horny += 25
+				gs 'stat'
+				if pcs_horny >= 100:
+					'	You notice a feeling between your legs. Something building up inside you. With every thrust of Slava''s cock it builds more and more. You squirm, unable to figure out what''s going on. You wonder if you''re having a panic attack when it suddenly hits you.'
+					*nl
+					'	You''re about to cum.'
+					*nl
+					'	The very thought that you could be enjoying this on any level bewilders you. You''re being blackmailed right? You can''t be enjoying this! You can''t be about to cum from this large well shaped cock, pounding in and out of you, hard and... filling you up... just right...'
+					act'Try to resist':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You lose your balance on the table and fall down to one shoulder, your face pressed against the desk. Your teeth are clenched together and your eyes squeezed shut, thinking to yourself, <i>Please don''t cum! Please don''t cum! Please don''t cum!</i> over and over in some kind of mantra.'
+						*nl
+						'	But despite your best efforts you can''t hold back what''s about to happen. You clamp your hand over your mouth to stop yourself from screaming as you explosively climax. Your whole body spasms and your legs quiver trying to stay standing. You feel your pussy clenching hard on Slava''s cock, which is still fucking you hard and the sensation is driving you insane. Finally, he thrusts into you one last time and holds it there while you ride out the rest of your orgasm.'
+						*nl
+						'	You release your mouth from your hand, breathing hard, drooling onto the table a little bit. In a twist of terrible irony, it seems your efforts to hold yourself back only resulted in an even more powerful climax. You feel exhausted.'
+						*nl
+						'	"Did you just cum <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Slava asks. You can''t turn around right now but you can feel his grin from behind you all the same. "Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am. All the same, feeling you tighten up on me like that brought me pretty close. Turn around, I''ll give you what you came here for."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 0
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Slava pulls out of you and you turn around, kneeling down. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. With great shame, you realize having his cock so close in front of your face is causing your juices to flow even more, practically on the edge of a secondary orgasm when his hot sticky cum spatters onto your face.'
+							*nl
+							'	As per usual, he pushes his dick towards your mouth afterwards and you obediently clean it despite your exhaustion, subconsciously trying to savour the thickness of him and every last drop of his cum.'
+							*nl
+							'	Afterwards, he pulls up his trousers saying, "I''ll just leave you here a while to collect yourself. Don''t want you going back outside and collapsing do we?" He smirks at you and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	Still sitting on the ground, his cum plastering your face and your juices sticking to your legs, you think to yourself...'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>How could this happen...</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+					
+					act'Give into the pleasure':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You can''t hold back and scream in orgasm, gripping the edge of the table until your knuckles turn white.'
+						*nl
+						'	Your whole body shudders and your legs quiver trying to stay standing. You feel your pussy clenching hard on Slava''s cock, which is still fucking you hard and the sensation is driving you insane. Finally, he thrusts into you one last time and holds it there while you ride out the rest of your orgasm.'
+						*nl
+						'	As your orgasm winds down, you lean forward onto the table, breathing hard.'
+						*nl
+						'	"Did you just cum <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Slava asks. You can''t turn around right now but you can feel his grin from behind you all the same. "Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am. All the same, feeling you tighten up on me like that brought me pretty close. Turn around, I''ll give you what you came here for."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 20
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Slava pulls out of you and you turn around, kneeling down. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. You undeniably want more and having his cock so close in front of your face makes you squirm, wishing it was still inside you. You''re practically on the edge of a second orgasm when his hot sticky cum spatters onto your face.'
+							*nl
+							'	As per usual, he pushes his dick towards your mouth afterwards and you jump at the chance to wrap something of yourself around it. Your lips and tongue explore every centimeter of his cock, trying to savour the feeling and every last drop of his cum.'
+							*nl
+							'	Much to your regret, he eventually pulls away from you like a mother pulls away her nipple from her baby. His cock disappears back inside his trousers and he says, "I''ll just leave you here a while to collect yourself. Don''t want you going back outside and collapsing do we?" He smirks at you and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	You continue to sit on the ground awhile thinking about what just happened with mixed feelings and his cum still plastering your face, your juices sticking to your legs.'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>Is this okay? Am I allowed to be enjoying this...?</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				else
+					'	You notice a feeling between your legs. Something is different today. Something about Slava''s cock. Is it smoother today? Is it not as big? There''s something about this that-- And suddenly it hits you.'
+					*nl
+					'	You''re wet.'
+					*nl
+					'	His cock is so slick with your juices that his furious fucking feels smoother. And it''s not just your natural wetness, you can feel your pussy leaking noticeably more than before, so much that it''s starting to drip down your thighs.'
+					act'Panic':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You start to go into a panic, your mind racing.'
+						*nl
+						'	<i>How can I be getting wet? Am I enjoying this? How can I be enjoying this? I''m being blackmailed into letting him fuck me, I can''t be enjoying his cock! His big... hard... cock... that fills me just righ-! No!! This can''t be happening!</i>'
+						*nl
+						'	You''re so absorbed in your anxiety that you don''t hear whatever it is Slava is saying and you suddenly find yourself thrusting your hips backward into empty air. You stop, confused for a moment before you realize what happened. You were so caught up in it that you didn''t notice him pull out. Your eyes go wide with a worse realization. You were moving your hips on your own. You were fucking him as much as he was fucking you. You slowly turn your head around to look at him in horror.'
+						*nl
+						'	"Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am," Slava says, grinning. Noticing the expression on your face he continues, "Oh, don''t look like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s natural for a girl your age to be enjoying sex. Here, kneel down and I''ll cheer you up with something."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 0
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Still in your state of shock, Slava pulls you down to your knees in front of him. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. With great shame, you realize having his cock so close in front of your face is causing your juices to flow even more. With even greater shame you realize it''s because you want him back inside you.'
+							*nl
+							'	His hot cum spatters across your face and you hear him whisper, "There you go. A nice treat for a nice girl." As per usual, after he finishes cumming he pushes his dick towards your mouth for cleaning. You obediently clean it, subconsciously moving with eagerness to have his cock back inside you, even if only your mouth.'
+							*nl
+							'	He pulls his trousers back up and grins at you again. "Oh, cheer up <<$pcs_firstname>>. You can always come back again tomorrow if you want to fuck some more," and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	After he leaves you sink to the ground, his cum plastering your face and your juices sticking to your legs. You think to yourself...'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>Am I really enjoying this...? How could this happen...</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+					
+					act'Enjoy yourself':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	Now that you notice how good it feels, you can''t help but sink into the feeling. You press your hands into the table, leaning your ass back into Slava and his hard cock. Your moaning becomes louder and more natural, flowing out of your mouth like juices out of your pussy.'
+						*nl
+						'	<i>Uh! Uhh! Ahh! Aah!</i>'
+						*nl
+						'	You''re so absorbed in your pleasure that you don''t hear whatever it is Slava is saying and you suddenly find yourself thrusting your hips backward into empty air. You stop, confused, almost frustrated, for a moment wondering what happened to that good feeling. You slowly turn your head around to see what happened and see Slava slowly jacking himself. You were so caught up in it that you didn''t notice him pull out. He pulled out when your body wanted to keep going and missing his cock, your hips kept thrusting anyways. You were fucking him as much as he was fucking you. '
+						*nl
+						'	"Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am," Slava says, grinning. Noticing the expression on your face he continues, "Oh, don''t look like that <<$pcs_firstname>>. If you want more, we can keep fucking tomorrow. Here, kneel down and I''ll cheer you up with something."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 0
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Slava pulls you down to your knees in front of him and speeds up his masturbation. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. You realize having his cock so close in front of your face is causing your juices to flow even more. You lick your lips and realize even more, it''s because you want him back inside you.'
+							*nl
+							'	His hot cum spatters across your face and you hear him whisper, "There you go. A nice treat for a nice girl." As per usual, after he finishes cumming he pushes his dick towards your mouth for cleaning. You obediently clean it, moving with eagerness to have his cock back inside you, even if only your mouth. You lick every centimeter of his cock and balls and suck hard, savouring him to the last drop before he pulls away, your lips trailing behind like your hips did earlier.'
+							*nl
+							'	He pulls his trousers back up and grins at you again. "I''m glad to see you''re getting as much out of this deal as I am," he says and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	After he leaves you sink to the ground, his cum plastering your face and your juices sticking to your legs. You think to yourself...'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>Is it okay? Is it bad to be enjoying this?</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		else
+			act'Nothing in particular':
+				cla
+				'	Your mind wanders but doesn''t focus on any one thought in particular. Mostly you just get lost in the rhythmic sounds and Slava''s cock pounding in and out of your pussy.'
+				*nl
+				'	Eventually Slava pulls out and tells you to get on your knees.'
+				act'Get on your knees':
+					cla & *clr
+					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'	You do as he commands as he starts jacking off. He doesn''t cum immediately but you patiently wait and as you see his face begin to contort you position yourself under his cock and close your eyes, feeling his hot sperm dribble all over your face.'
+					*nl
+					'	Afterwards, you dutifully clean his cock, licking off your pussy juice and sucking out the remnants as you did before. He pulls up his trousers and leaves you wishing that he had a sink or at least would bring a tissue box back here to clean up your face afterwards.'
+					act'Find your panties and leave':
+						gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+						gs 'arousal','end'
+						gs 'stat'
+						gt'gkafe'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			if motherthoughts = 0:
+				act'Your mother':
+					motherthoughts = 1:
+					cla
+					'	You try to think of your mother as you did before but you find it impossible to focus. After all these times with Slava you don''t feel sympathy for your mother in the way that you used to. For whatever reason, you find that thoughts of her no longer help you to endure this and can only suffer in moans and groans as Slava''s cock roughly pumps in and out of you '
+					*nl
+					'	These troubling thoughts swirling through your head, this fucking feels like it drags on forever, even though it''s probably only been a few minutes. Eventually, Slava pulls out and tells you to get on your knees.'
+					act'Get on your knees':
+						cla & *clr
+						gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You do as he commands as he starts jacking off. He doesn''t cum immediately but you patiently wait and as you see his face begin to contort you position yourself under his cock and close your eyes, feeling his hot sperm dribble all over your face.'
+						*nl
+						'	Afterwards, you dutifully clean his cock, licking off your pussy juice and sucking out the remnants as you did before. He pulls up his trousers and leaves you.'
+						act'. . .':
+							*nl
+							'	Once you''re alone, your thoughts go back to when Slava was fucking you. Up until now, you used thoughts of your mother to keep yourself going during this time. You tried to remember that you were doing it for her so she wouldn''t have to but it didn''t help. You feel empty inside as you realize that thoughts of your mother no longer drive you.'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			act'This isn''t so bad':
+				cla
+				'	It''s been a while since you made this deal with Slava and '
+			
+			act'Am I... enjoying this?':
+				cla
+				pcs_horny += 25
+				gs 'stat'
+				if pcs_horny >= 100:
+					'	You notice a feeling between your legs. Something building up inside you. With every thrust of Slava''s cock it builds more and more. You squirm, unable to figure out what''s going on. You wonder if you''re having a panic attack when it suddenly hits you.'
+					*nl
+					'	You''re about to cum.'
+					*nl
+					'	The very thought that you could be enjoying this on any level bewilders you. You''re being blackmailed right? You can''t be enjoying this! You can''t be about to cum from this large well shaped cock, pounding in and out of you, hard and... filling you up... just right...'
+					act'Try to resist':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You lose your balance on the table and fall down to one shoulder, your face pressed against the desk. Your teeth are clenched together and your eyes squeezed shut, thinking to yourself, <i>Please don''t cum! Please don''t cum! Please don''t cum!</i> over and over in some kind of mantra.'
+						*nl
+						'	But despite your best efforts you can''t hold back what''s about to happen. You clamp your hand over your mouth to stop yourself from screaming as you explosively climax. Your whole body spasms and your legs quiver trying to stay standing. You feel your pussy clenching hard on Slava''s cock, which is still fucking you hard and the sensation is driving you insane. Finally, he thrusts into you one last time and holds it there while you ride out the rest of your orgasm.'
+						*nl
+						'	You release your mouth from your hand, breathing hard, drooling onto the table a little bit. In a twist of terrible irony, it seems your efforts to hold yourself back only resulted in an even more powerful climax. You feel exhausted.'
+						*nl
+						'	"Did you just cum <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Slava asks. You can''t turn around right now but you can feel his grin from behind you all the same. "Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am. All the same, feeling you tighten up on me like that brought me pretty close. Turn around, I''ll give you what you came here for."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 0
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Slava pulls out of you and you turn around, kneeling down. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. With great shame, you realize having his cock so close in front of your face is causing your juices to flow even more, practically on the edge of a secondary orgasm when his hot sticky cum spatters onto your face.'
+							*nl
+							'	As per usual, he pushes his dick towards your mouth afterwards and you obediently clean it despite your exhaustion, subconsciously trying to savour the thickness of him and every last drop of his cum.'
+							*nl
+							'	Afterwards, he pulls up his trousers saying, "I''ll just leave you here a while to collect yourself. Don''t want you going back outside and collapsing do we?" He smirks at you and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	Still sitting on the ground, his cum plastering your face and your juices sticking to your legs, you think to yourself...'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>How could this happen...</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+					
+					act'Give into the pleasure':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You can''t hold back and scream in orgasm, gripping the edge of the table until your knuckles turn white.'
+						*nl
+						'	Your whole body shudders and your legs quiver trying to stay standing. You feel your pussy clenching hard on Slava''s cock, which is still fucking you hard and the sensation is driving you insane. Finally, he thrusts into you one last time and holds it there while you ride out the rest of your orgasm.'
+						*nl
+						'	As your orgasm winds down, you lean forward onto the table, breathing hard.'
+						*nl
+						'	"Did you just cum <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Slava asks. You can''t turn around right now but you can feel his grin from behind you all the same. "Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am. All the same, feeling you tighten up on me like that brought me pretty close. Turn around, I''ll give you what you came here for."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 20
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Slava pulls out of you and you turn around, kneeling down. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. You undeniably want more and having his cock so close in front of your face makes you squirm, wishing it was still inside you. You''re practically on the edge of a second orgasm when his hot sticky cum spatters onto your face.'
+							*nl
+							'	As per usual, he pushes his dick towards your mouth afterwards and you jump at the chance to wrap something of yourself around it. Your lips and tongue explore every centimeter of his cock, trying to savour the feeling and every last drop of his cum.'
+							*nl
+							'	Much to your regret, he eventually pulls away from you like a mother pulls away her nipple from her baby. His cock disappears back inside his trousers and he says, "I''ll just leave you here a while to collect yourself. Don''t want you going back outside and collapsing do we?" He smirks at you and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	You continue to sit on the ground awhile thinking about what just happened with mixed feelings and his cum still plastering your face, your juices sticking to your legs.'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>Is this okay? Am I allowed to be enjoying this...?</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				else
+					'	You notice a feeling between your legs. Something is different today. Something about Slava''s cock. Is it smoother today? Is it not as big? There''s something about this that-- And suddenly it hits you.'
+					*nl
+					'	You''re wet.'
+					*nl
+					'	His cock is so slick with your juices that his furious fucking feels smoother. And it''s not just your natural wetness, you can feel your pussy leaking noticeably more than before, so much that it''s starting to drip down your thighs.'
+					act'Panic':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	You start to go into a panic, your mind racing.'
+						*nl
+						'	<i>How can I be getting wet? Am I enjoying this? How can I be enjoying this? I''m being blackmailed into letting him fuck me, I can''t be enjoying his cock! His big... hard... cock... that fills me just righ-! No!! This can''t be happening!</i>'
+						*nl
+						'	You''re so absorbed in your anxiety that you don''t hear whatever it is Slava is saying and you suddenly find yourself thrusting your hips backward into empty air. You stop, confused for a moment before you realize what happened. You were so caught up in it that you didn''t notice him pull out. Your eyes go wide with a worse realization. You were moving your hips on your own. You were fucking him as much as he was fucking you. You slowly turn your head around to look at him in horror.'
+						*nl
+						'	"Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am," Slava says, grinning. Noticing the expression on your face he continues, "Oh, don''t look like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s natural for a girl your age to be enjoying sex. Here, kneel down and I''ll cheer you up with something."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 0
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Still in your state of shock, Slava pulls you down to your knees in front of him. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. With great shame, you realize having his cock so close in front of your face is causing your juices to flow even more. With even greater shame you realize it''s because you want him back inside you.'
+							*nl
+							'	His hot cum spatters across your face and you hear him whisper, "There you go. A nice treat for a nice girl." As per usual, after he finishes cumming he pushes his dick towards your mouth for cleaning. You obediently clean it, subconsciously moving with eagerness to have his cock back inside you, even if only your mouth.'
+							*nl
+							'	He pulls his trousers back up and grins at you again. "Oh, cheer up <<$pcs_firstname>>. You can always come back again tomorrow if you want to fuck some more," and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	After he leaves you sink to the ground, his cum plastering your face and your juices sticking to your legs. You think to yourself...'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>Am I really enjoying this...? How could this happen...</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+					
+					act'Enjoy yourself':
+						cla & *clr
+						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/wait_fuck.mp4"></video></center>'
+						'	Now that you notice how good it feels, you can''t help but sink into the feeling. You press your hands into the table, leaning your ass back into Slava and his hard cock. Your moaning becomes louder and more natural, flowing out of your mouth like juices out of your pussy.'
+						*nl
+						'	<i>Uh! Uhh! Ahh! Aah!</i>'
+						*nl
+						'	You''re so absorbed in your pleasure that you don''t hear whatever it is Slava is saying and you suddenly find yourself thrusting your hips backward into empty air. You stop, confused, almost frustrated, for a moment wondering what happened to that good feeling. You slowly turn your head around to see what happened and see Slava slowly jacking himself. You were so caught up in it that you didn''t notice him pull out. He pulled out when your body wanted to keep going and missing his cock, your hips kept thrusting anyways. You were fucking him as much as he was fucking you. '
+						*nl
+						'	"Glad to see you''re enjoying this deal as much as I am," Slava says, grinning. Noticing the expression on your face he continues, "Oh, don''t look like that <<$pcs_firstname>>. If you want more, we can keep fucking tomorrow. Here, kneel down and I''ll cheer you up with something."'
+						act'. . .':
+							cla & *clr
+							orgasm += 1
+							pcs_horny = 0
+							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $boy
+							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/trainstation/cafe/facial.mp4"></video></center>'
+							'	Slava pulls you down to your knees in front of him and speeds up his masturbation. You can''t help but be aware of how empty you feel and the slick pussy juices you feel running down your legs. You realize having his cock so close in front of your face is causing your juices to flow even more. You lick your lips and realize even more, it''s because you want him back inside you.'
+							*nl
+							'	His hot cum spatters across your face and you hear him whisper, "There you go. A nice treat for a nice girl." As per usual, after he finishes cumming he pushes his dick towards your mouth for cleaning. You obediently clean it, moving with eagerness to have his cock back inside you, even if only your mouth. You lick every centimeter of his cock and balls and suck hard, savouring him to the last drop before he pulls away, your lips trailing behind like your hips did earlier.'
+							*nl
+							'	He pulls his trousers back up and grins at you again. "I''m glad to see you''re getting as much out of this deal as I am," he says and closes the door behind him.'
+							*nl
+							'	After he leaves you sink to the ground, his cum plastering your face and your juices sticking to your legs. You think to yourself...'
+							*nl
+							'	<i>Is it okay? Is it bad to be enjoying this?</i>'
+							act'Find your panties and leave':
+								gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+								gs 'arousal','end'
+								gs 'stat'
+								gt'gkafe'
+							end
+						end
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			
+				
+if $ARGS[0] = 'sad_fuck':
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_bj':
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_fuck':
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_cowgirl':
+
+	slavafuck += 1
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+	gs 'stat'
+			
+				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy
+
+				
+			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
+			gs 'underwear', 'remove'
+			gs 'stat'
+			
+			gs 'underwear', 'wear'
+			gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn'
+			gs 'arousal','end'
+			gs 'stat'}
 --- motherkafeboss ---------------------------------
 

+ 12 - 12
locations/musorkaexh

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos7':
 		'Suddenly, pulling your hand to him, he grabs you by the buttocks and starts, right through your clothes, kissing and sniffing furiously between your legs.'
 		'"Argh, sniff, sniff, what a beauty!'
 		
-		act 'Slap the freak':gt'street'
+		act 'Slap the freak and run away':gt'street'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -110,9 +110,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos8':
 	'You are standing in front of a hungover homeless man.'
 	'"You know you''re a kind person. How do I say this.'
 	'"I gathered some money and spend some of it on drink, but nothing on food. I''ve been watching you, you''re the business girl. Besides being beautiful, you''re trying to make a living."'
-	'"Now,  I''m a man, not that young anymore, but I still appreciate the pleasure of female beauty."'
+	'"Now, I''m a man, not that young anymore, but I still appreciate the pleasure of female beauty."'
 	'You interrupt, "What are you hinting at?"'
-	'"Nothing like that, I just wanted to offer money in exchange for beauty. You show me something, and I just look. Easy, and I will give you all that I gathered during the week. As much as 300 <b>₽</b>!"'
+	'"Nothing like that, I just wanted to offer money in exchange for beauty. You show me something, and I just look. Easy, and I will give you all that I gathered during the week. As much as 100 <b>₽</b>!"'
 
 	act 'Agree':
 		cls
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos8':
 		'The bum looks at you with round eyes and violently jerks his penis. You get scared, what if someone comes to empty their trash.'
 		'"Argh, wait let me finish!"'
 		'Finally with a loud puff, the homeless man collapses on his cardboard box.'
-		'"Money, money gimme!" You cry as you grab all the bums money and run away.'
+		'"Give me my money!" You cry as you grab all the bums money and run away.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos8':
 		act 'Leave':gt'street'
 	end
 
-	act 'Takeout':gt'street'
+	act 'Leave':gt'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos9':
@@ -165,9 +165,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 	'You are standing in front of a hungover homeless man.'
 	'"You know you''re a kind person. How do I say this.'
 	'"I gathered some money and spend some of it on drink, but nothing on food. I''ve been watching you, you''re the business girl. Besides being beautiful, you''re trying to make a living."'
-	'"Now,  I''m a man, not that young anymore, but I still appreciate the pleasure of female beauty."'
+	'"Now, I''m a man, not that young anymore, but I still appreciate the pleasure of female beauty."'
 	'You interrupt, "What are you hinting at?"'
-	'"Nothing like that, I just wanted to offer money in exchange for beauty. You show me something, and I just look. Easy, and I will give you all that I gathered during the week. As much as 300 <b>₽</b>!"'
+	'"Nothing like that, I just wanted to offer money in exchange for beauty. You show me something, and I just look. Easy, and I will give you all that I gathered during the week. As much as 100 <b>₽</b>!"'
 
 	act 'Agree':
 		cls
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 		'The bum looks at you with round eyes and violently jerks his penis. You get scared, what if someone comes to empty their trash.'
 		'"Argh, wait let me finish!"'
 		'Finally with a loud puff, the homeless man collapses on his cardboard box.'
-		'"Money, money gimme!" You cry as you grab the bums money and prepare to make a quick get away.'
+		'"Give me my money!" You cry as you grab the bums money and prepare to make a quick get away.'
 		
 		gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 10
 		gs 'arousal', 'flash', 10
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 		if bomjqw > 0:
 			'The homeless man asks, "Thank you very much once again, but if you agree to one more service...'
 			'"What service?"'
-			'"Could you help an old man with your lovely mouth? I''ll pat good money, well, what do you say?"'
+			'"Could you help an old man with your lovely mouth? I''ll pay good money, well, what do you say?"'
 			if pcs_horny < 50:
 				clr
 				cla
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 					act 'Suck harder':
 						cla
 						'You start sucking enthusiastically, and your efforts are paying off. The old man is ready to cum.'
-						act 'In the mouth':
+						act 'In your mouth':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							gs'stat'
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 							
 							act 'Leave': gt'street'
 						end
-						act 'On the face':
+						act 'On your face':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							gs'stat'
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 					end
 				end
 				if bomjshet >= 10:
-					act'Give the homeless':
+					act'Give yourself to the homeless man':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						dick = 14

+ 5 - 5
locations/office

@@ -57,11 +57,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			workSec = 0
 			'You Leave and you don''t get any money for the last month.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
@@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 		end
 
 	elseif hour >= 17:
-		act 'Leave work':gt 'down'
+		act 'Leave work': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kor':
 		act 'To their workplace':gt 'office', 'work'
 		act 'Restroom':gt 'office', 'kuh'
 	elseif hour >= 17:
-		act 'Leave work':gt 'down'
+		act 'Leave work': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuh':
 		act 'Eat':gs 'food', 'm_meal'
 		act 'Corridor':gt 'office', 'kor'
 	elseif hour >= 17:
-		act 'Leave work':gt 'down'
+		act 'Leave work': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 	end
 end
 

+ 9 - 7
locations/park

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Walk around the park (1:00)': gt 'parkdin'
 	
 	if hour >= 10 and hour <= 22 and money >= 100:
-		act 'Have some food in the cafe': gt 'ParkKafe', 'start'
+		act 'Have some food in the cafe': minut += 5 & gt 'ParkKafe', 'start'
 	end
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 0 and tanwork = 0 and student = 0:
@@ -118,6 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'exercise', 'tier1', 60, 'run_exp'
 			fat -= rand(0, 4)
 			pcs_sweat += 5
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Park</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/park/parkbeg.jpg"></center>'
 			'You randomly take the paths, you run them up and down and about an hour later, you are out of breath and heavily sweating.'
 
@@ -234,11 +235,13 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'exit':
 	cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Park</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/park.jpg"></center>'
 	act 'Cancel': gt 'park', 'start'
-	act 'Go to the highway near the park':gt 'park', 'whore'
-	act 'Go to the residential area':minut += 20 & gt 'street'
-	act 'Go to the city center':minut += 45 & gt 'down'
-	act 'Go to the city industrial region':minut += 60 & gt 'Nord'
+	act 'Go to the highway near the park (0:05)':minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'whore'
+	act 'Go to the Residential Area (0:20)':minut += 20 & gt 'street'
+	act 'Go to the City Center (0:35)':minut += 35 & gt 'down'
+	act 'Go to the City Industrial Region (1:00)':minut += 60 & gt 'Nord'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'luna':
@@ -459,7 +462,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore':
     $location_type = 'event_outdoors'
 	cla
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
 	clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">The road near the park</font></b></center>'
@@ -487,7 +489,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore':
 			act 'Go back to the park':gt 'park', 'start'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Go back to the park':gt 'park', 'start'
+	act 'Go back to the park (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'park', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'prost':

+ 2 - 2
locations/pavCommercial

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ if car > 0 and cardrive = 24:
 end
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
-	$Pharmname = ', and the <a href="exec: minut += 15 & gt ''gaptek'', ''start''">pharmacy</a> is right across the street.'
+	$Pharmname = ', and the <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''gaptek'', ''start''">pharmacy</a> is right across the street.'
 else
 	$Pharmname = '.'
 end
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ end
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 17:'The local <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''barbershop'', ''start''">barbershop</a> is within walking distance, merely a few minutes away.'
 if hour >= 7 and hour <= 18:'Pavlovsk has a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos20''">vocational school</a>, where young adults can learn a trade.'
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'There is a big chain <a href="exec:gt ''shop'', ''start''">supermarket</a> nearby.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'There is a big chain <a href="exec:minut += 2 & gt ''shop'', ''start''">supermarket</a> nearby.'
 if week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 18:'You can see the most important <a href="exec:gt ''bank'', ''start''">Bank</a> in the city from here.'
 if (week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 16) or (week = 6 and hour >= 9 and hour <= 13):'The local <a href="exec:minut += 3 & gt ''postoffice'', ''start''">post office</a> branch is open.'
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/pharmacy

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' :
 	else
 		gt 'pharmacy', 'shop'
 	end				
-	act 'Leave' : gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shop' or $ARGS[0] = '':
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'pharmacy', 'start'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Leave': gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
 --- pharmacy ---------------------------------

+ 115 - 103
locations/poli

@@ -21,26 +21,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Clinic</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/clinic/poli.jpg"></center>'
-	'General practitioner available'
-	'Psychotherapist available'
+	'A sign inside the clinic lists some of the services the clinic has to offer:'
+	'<i>General practitioner: currently available'
+	'Psychotherapist: currently available'
 	'STD testing - 1,000 <b>₽</b>.'
 	''
-	'For hospital admissions, arrive Monday before the 10th of the month.'
+	'For hospital admissions visit us on a Monday before the 10th of the month.'
 	''
-	'An abortion at the woman''s request can be performed up to 84th day of pregnancy - 15,000 <b>₽</b>.'
-	'Be warned, improperly performed abortions can be dangerous to your health. There is a risk of complications and the possibility of damage to your uterus.'
+	'An abortion at the woman''s request can be performed up until the 84th day of pregnancy - 15,000 <b>₽</b>.'
+	'Be warned, improperly performed abortions can be dangerous to your health. There is a risk of complications and the possibility of damage to your uterus.</i>'
 	''
-	'(At first you thought the warning was only health department boiler-plate. However, no sooner do you finish thinking that then you noticed a nurse pushing a cart of freshly sterilized coat hangers down the hallway and begin to wonder how competent this facility really is in terms of women''s health...)'
+	'At first you thought the warning was only health department boiler-plate. However, no sooner do you finish thinking that then you noticed a nurse pushing a cart of freshly sterilized coat hangers down the hallway and begin to wonder how competent this facility really is in terms of women''s health...'
 	''
-	'Near the entrance there is an advertisement for cosmetic surgery with directions to the surgeon''s office.'
+	'One area of the clinic is devoted to cosmetic surgery. A sign with directions on the wall point you to the surgeon''s office.'
 
-	if workhosp = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 9 and week < 6:act 'Exit to replace':gt 'poli', 'beginwork'
+	if workhosp = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 9 and week < 6:act 'Begin your work day':gt 'poli', 'beginwork'
 
-	act 'Leave Clinic':gt 'street'
-	act 'See cosmetic surgeon':gt 'poli','cosmetic1'
+	act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
+	act 'Go see a cosmetic surgeon':gt 'poli','cosmetic1'
 
 	if pcs_health < (pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5):
-		act 'Treat health (1:00)':
+		act 'Ask the doctor for a health treatment (1:00)':
 			cla
 			minut += 60
 			pcs_health = pcs_vital * 10 + pcs_stren * 5 + 1000
@@ -49,14 +50,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if hosprand = 1:gt 'poli', '1'
 			if hosprand = 2:gt 'poli', '2'
 
-			'The doctor gives you a shot and you immediately feel much better'
+			'The doctor guides you to a bed and tells you to lie down, after which he gives you a shot. You feel drowsy for a little while, but afterwards you feel a lot better and healthier.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if pain['total'] > 10:
-		act 'Pain relief (1:00)':
+		act 'Ask the doctor to treat your pains (1:00)':
 			cla
 			minut += 60
 			if pain['head'] > 0:pain['head'] -= rand(7,13)
@@ -96,13 +97,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if pain['clitoris'] > 0:pain['clitoris'] -= rand(7,13)
 			if pain['urethra'] > 0:pain['urethra'] -= rand(7,13)
 			if pain['cervix'] > 0:pain['cervix'] -= rand(7,13)
-			'You receive a combined painkiller, steroid and vitamin shot which not only helps the pain but speeds your recovery too, permanently reducing your current pain.'
+			'The doctor guides you to a bed and tells you to lie down, after which he gives you a combined painkiller, steroid and vitamin shot.'
+			'You feel drowsy for a little while, but afterwards you feel a lot better. The shot sped up your aching body''s recovery by a lot, meaning the pain probably won''t come back nearly as strongly when the shot wears off.'
 
 			if hosprand = 0:gt 'poli', '0'
 			if hosprand = 1:gt 'poli', '1'
 			if hosprand = 2:gt 'poli', '2'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -116,9 +118,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if hosprand = 0:gt 'poli', '0'
 			if hosprand = 1:gt 'poli', '1'
 			if hosprand = 2:gt 'poli', '2'
-			'You lie down on the therapists couch and tell him all about your troubles. You immediately feel much better, but your therapist seems to be in a state of shock.'
+			'You lie down on the therapist''s couch and tell him all about your troubles. You immediately feel much better, but the therapist seems to be in a state of shock.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -135,8 +137,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			money -= 750
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/clinic/poli.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are escorted into an examination room, where you are told to sit. After almost fifteen minutes a nurse comes in, sticks a needle in your arm, and depresses the plunger. "All done. Have a nice day." she says to you. You gather your things to leave.'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			'You are escorted into an examination room, where you are told to sit. After almost fifteen minutes a nurse comes in, sticks a needle in your arm, and depresses the plunger. "All done. Have a nice day!" she says to you. Wait... was that it!?'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 			
@@ -200,7 +202,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				jump 'poliabortloop'
 			end
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -247,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'cum_cleanup', 'reset'
 			dynamic $d_cycreport_choice
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -281,15 +283,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if ninelrand = 0:
 				'At the reception desk you are told that Dr. Ninel is in her office.'
 
-				act 'Go to Ninel':gt 'poli', 'ninel3'
+				act 'Go to Dr. Ninel':gt 'poli', 'ninel3'
 			elseif ninelrand = 1:
-				'At the reception desk you are told that today do not accept Dr. Ninel.'
+				'At the reception desk you are told that Dr. Ninel can''t see you today.'
 
-				act 'Leave the clinic':gt 'street'
+				act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 			elseif ninelrand = 2:
 				'At the reception desk you are told that Dr. Ninel is making house calls today.'
 
-				act 'Leave the clinic':gt 'street'
+				act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -333,11 +335,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						'You pay the dentist to straighten and polish your teeth, an hour later your smile is much brighter and more attractive.'
 					end
 
-					act 'Leave the clinic':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 				
-			act 'Leave the clinic':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -350,16 +352,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/anus/<<anpic>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You go to the office to the proctologist. He immediately asks you to remove all clothes from your lower body and bend over.'
+			'You go to the office to the proctologist. He immediately asks you to remove all clothes from your lower body and bend over a table.'
 
 			if pcs_ass <= 15:
-				'The doctor examines your anus and says, "Well, slightly distended, but no abnormalities."'
+				'The doctor examines your anus and says: "Hmm... slightly distended, but no abnormalities."'
 			elseif pcs_ass > 15 and pcs_ass <= 25:
-				'The doctor examines your anus and says, "You have a stretched anus and sphincter. I would recommend massage therapy, 1,000 <b>₽</b> per session. This will help restore the anus to its normal size."'
+				'The doctor examines your anus and says: "Hmm... your anus and sphincter appear to have stretched beyond their normal capabilities. I would recommend massage therapy, 1,000 <b>₽</b> per session. This will help restore the anus to its normal size."'
 			elseif pcs_ass > 25 and pcs_ass <= 35:
-				'The doctor examines your anus and says, "You have a greatly distended anus, most likely your sphincter is not able to close fully. I would recommend massage therapy, 1,000 <b>₽</b> per session. This will help restore the anus to its normal size."'
+				'The doctor examines your anus and says: "Oh my... you have a greatly distended anus, and most likely your sphincter is not able to close fully either? I would recommend massage therapy, 1,000 <b>₽</b> per session. This will help restore the anus to its normal size."'
 			elseif pcs_ass > 35:
-				'The doctor examines your anus and says, "Oh my God! In all my years, I have never seen a case such as this! You''ll have to be careful not to cough, or your guts will fall out. I would recommend massage therapy, 1,000 <b>₽</b> per session. This will help restore the anus to its normal size."'
+				'The doctor examines your anus and says: "Oh my God! In all my years, I have never seen anything like this! You''ll have to be careful not to cough, or your guts could fall out!"'
+				'He chuckles at his own joke, and continues: "I''m sorry, that was unprofessional of me. However, I would strongly recommend we start massage therapy right away to restore the area, it''s 1,000 <b>₽</b> per session. This will in time help restore the anus to its normal size, but it''ll take more than a few sessions."'
 			end
 
 			if money >= 1000 and pcs_ass > 15 and proktologday ! daystart:
@@ -371,13 +374,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					pcs_ass -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/body/anus/<<anpic>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pay for the therapy and the doctor spends an hour massaging your ass muscles. It really isn''t as much fun as it looked in the brochure.'
+					'You pay for the massage therapy and the doctor spends an hour carefully massaging your anal muscles, occasionally rubbing some ointment on them. It really isn''t as much fun as it looked in the brochure.'
 
-					act 'Get away from the clinic':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act 'Leave the clinic':gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -394,7 +397,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			glassqw = 2
 			glass = 1
 			blizoruk += 1
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -402,11 +405,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Go to the optometrist':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
-			'The Optometrist examines your eyes and says that he can perform laser eye surgery for 75,000 <b>₽</b>. Of course, reading books can cause your eyesight to deteriorate again.'
+			'The optometrist examines your eyes and says that he can perform laser eye surgery for 75,000 <b>₽</b>. Of course, reading books can cause your eyesight to deteriorate again.'
 
 			if glass = 1:'The doctor adds, there is also the option to buy glasses for 4,500 <b>₽</b>.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 
 			if glass = 1:
 				if money >= 4500:
@@ -418,7 +421,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'You buy a new, more stylish pair of glasses.'
 
-						act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+						act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 					end
 				else
 					*nl
@@ -436,7 +439,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						glass = 0
 						gs 'stat'
 						'You undergo laser eye surgery. Your eyesight is much better now.'
-						act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+						act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'poli', 'start'
 					end
 				else
 					*nl
@@ -587,37 +590,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stdcheck':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/zw61kh75.jpg"></center>'
-				'The doctor first monitors your heart rate then checks your breasts for lumps'
+				'The doctor first monitors your heart rate then checks your breasts for lumps.'
 				act 'Further':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/bn72qy99.jpg"></center>'
-					'The doctor examines your genitals externally and internally, carrying out tests.'
+					'The doctor examines your genitals externally and internally, carrying out several tests.'
 					if money >= 10000 and rand(1,100) >= 97:
 						cla
 						*clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/gy93cr29.jpg"></center>'
-						'While you''re lying on an examination tablem you notice there is a hidden camera in the corner of the ceiling.'
-						act 'Rebel':
+						'While you''re lying on an examination table staring at the ceiling, you notice there is a hidden camera in the corner.'
+						act 'Ask him why he''s filming your examination':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/bg28qy97.jpg"></center>'
-							'The doctor, unfazed, speaks in a calm voice as he apologizes and says, "You have two options to solve this issue."'
-							'"Give me 10000 <b>₽</b> and it will be deleted, like this never happened."'
-							'"I''ll pay you a 3000 <b>₽</b> fee."'
-							'"Lie down, think it over, but do not take too long now."'
-							act 'Pay him':gt 'poli', 'ven1'
-							act 'Take the money':gt 'poli', 'ven2'
+							'The doctor, unfazed, speaks in a calm voice: "Oh, you noticed that huh? The camera is there for your safety as well as mine, miss. I''ve been accused of molestation before."'
+							'"Then it hit me: people on the internet pay good money to see my examinations! Two birds with one stone, right?" he continues. After a moment of silence he adds with a wicked grin: "Okay... since you spotted the camera, I''ll offer you a choice. If you give me 10.000 <b>₽</b> I''ll delete the footage, as if you were never here. I''d be losing a lot of income, so that''s only fair."'
+							'Before you can reply he adds: "Or if you don''t mind being watched by a few thousand people who you''ll probably never meet anyway, I can give you... 3000 <b>₽</b> to keep quiet. It''s your call."'
+							act 'Pay him to delete the footage':gt 'poli', 'ven1'
+							act 'Take the bribe':gt 'poli', 'ven2'
 							act 'Threaten to report him':
 								cla
 								*clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/bg28qy97.jpg"></center>'
-								'The doctor brings your face to his and says in a low voice.'
-								'"Listen to me, bitch! I hope you''re just joking with me, we have plenty of accidents here. Do you want to be another ''complication''?"'
-								'"Now make your choice, and we can forget everything you just said."'
-								act 'Pay him':gt 'poli', 'ven1'
-								act 'Take the money':gt 'poli', 'ven2'
-								act 'Run':gt 'poli', 'ven3'
+								'The doctor brings his face very close to yours and hisses: "Look at where you are, bitch! You better shut your fucking mouth right now, I can make you disappear just like THAT and everyone would be none the wiser!" He snaps his fingers for emphasis. "I made you a very generous offer, don''t make me regret that. An unfortunate ''complication'' is easy to arrange..."'
+								'Then he becomes his calm self again and sighs: "Anyway, let''s forget what you just said and start over. Are you going to compensate me for having to delete the footage?"'
+								act 'Pay him to delete the footage':gt 'poli', 'ven1'
+								act 'Take the bribe':gt 'poli', 'ven2'
+								act 'Try to escape':gt 'poli', 'ven3'
 							end
 						end
 					else
@@ -676,9 +677,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ven1':
 	money -= 10000
 	gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/gy93cr29.jpg"></center>'
-    'You lie down, almost crying, in the surgery thinking it over,'
-    'You know it is not fair, but you can''t allow these images to go public.'
-    act 'Pay the money':gt'poli','start'
+    'You lie down, almost crying, mulling over the doctor''s words again and again in your head. You know it is not fair, but you can''t allow these images to go public and decide to pay him to delete the footage.'
+	'You pull the money from your wallet and give it to him, hoping he''ll keep true to his word...'
+    act 'Return to the lobby':gt'poli','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ven2':
@@ -688,9 +689,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ven2':
 	sub += 1
 	gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/gy93cr29.jpg"></center>'
-    'You lie down, almost crying, in the surgery thinking it over,'
-    'You know it is not fair, but the money would be useful...'
-    act 'Take the money':gt'poli','start'
+    'You lie down, almost crying, mulling over the doctor''s words again and again in your head. After a while you decide that you want the money... you probably won''t be recognized, and even if you do: you can always pretend you didn''t know you were being filmed?'
+	'The doctor seems somewhat surprised to hear your answer, but gives you the money as promised. He grins: "Don''t worry, most of my subscribers don''t live in the city. Maybe a hundred, tops... what are the odds of you running into one of them the coming weeks?"'
+    act 'Leave his office':gt'poli','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ven3':
@@ -699,9 +700,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ven3':
 	over = 9
 	gs'stat'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/clinic/poli.jpg"></center>'
-    'Out of fear, you run from the office.'
-    'Out of nowhere came nurses and other staff. You are restrained and dragged back. Confidently, the doctor explains to the patients and visitors that you are not well in the head.'
-    act 'Further':gt'gameover'
+    'The only thing you want to do now is get out of here! You can file a complaint later...'
+    '"Stop her! Stop her right now, she''s dangerous!" the doctor yells as you head for the door, trying to escape. Unfortunately for you, several staff members happened to be in the hallway as you tried to make your escape, who instantly spring to their colleague''s aid.'
+	'The doctor is only a few steps behind you, planting a syringe in your neck and injecting you with a liquid before you can tell them what''s happening. As your vision goes blurry and your body goes limp, you hear the doctor say: "That was close! She''s not well in the head and has these fits of violent rage because of her drug addiction! Thank you friends, I can take it from here."'
+	'He scoops you up in his arms and carries your limp body back to his office.'
+	'"Yet another overdose victim, so sad..." he mumbles to himself once the door is closed.'
+    act 'Continue':gt'gameover'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'drPP':
@@ -744,10 +748,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drPP':
 					cumcondslip = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'The doctor quickly examines you, and establishes that you are suffering from toxic shock from a spent condom in your body.'
-					'"I removed it as soon as I found it. If you were feeling sick, it should slowly subside."'
+					'He explains: "I removed the condom as soon as I found it. You might still feel sick for another while, but the feeling should slowly subside."'
 					'You thank the doctor.'
 
-					act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -765,10 +769,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'drPP':
 					minut += 20
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/apartment/event/sick/ninel03.jpg"></center>'
 					'The doctor listens to your lungs, looks down your throat and sticks a thermometer in your mouth. 60 seconds later, he removes the thermometer and says,'
-					'"Don''t worry is just a common cold. Buy small pills in the drugstore, have a couple days of bed rest and everything will be alright. Make sure to keep warm."'
+					'"Don''t worry is just the common cold. Get some vitamins in the drugstore, have a couple days of bed rest and everything will be alright. Make sure to keep warm!"'
 					'You thank the Doctor.'
 
-					act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -810,10 +814,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 					minut += 20
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam01.jpg"></center>'
 					'The doctor listens to your lungs, looks down your throat and sticks a thermometer in your mouth. 60 seconds later, she removes the thermometer and says,'
-					'"Don''t worry is just a common cold. Buy small pills in the drugstore, have a couple days of bed rest and everything will be alright. Make sure to keep warm."'
+					'"Don''t worry is just a common cold. Buy some vitamins in the drugstore, have a couple days of bed rest and everything will be alright. Make sure to keep warm."'
 					'You thank the Doctor.'
 
-					act 'Go home':gt 'street'
+					act 'Go home': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -964,7 +968,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel':
 														gs 'arousal', 'end'
 														gs 'stat'
 														
-														act 'Leave the clinic':gt 'street'
+														act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 													end
 												end
 											end
@@ -1117,7 +1121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
 											
-											act 'Thank Ninel and go':gt 'street'
+											act 'Thank Ninel and go': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 										end
 									end
 								end
@@ -1197,7 +1201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel3':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 											
-						act 'Freshen up and go':gt 'street'
+						act 'Freshen up and go': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -1206,17 +1210,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel3':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'glavdoc':
-	delact 'Visit the chief doctor'
+	delact 'Visit the clinic''s chief of staff'
 	minut += 5
 	if workhosp = 0:
-		'You enter his office and ask about the job.'
-		'The chief doctor looks at you. "Oh yeah, you''re that girl Catherine was talking about. Okay, It''s pretty simple."'
-		'"You''ll work weekdays, come here between 8 and 9, and the shift finishes at 16 hours. Miss a day and you don''t get paid. Salary paid on 25th, the pay per shift - 1000 <b>₽</b>."'
-		'"All details and assignments handled by personnel department. So, do you want the job?"'
+		'You enter the chief of staff''s office and ask him about the job.'
+		'The chief of staff looks at you and says: "Oh yeah, you must be the girl Kat was talking about. You have some experience in the medical field, right? I don''t have much time, so I''ll keep it short and will take her word for it."'
+		'He continues: "You''ll work five days per week, Mondays to Fridays. Your shift begins between 8:00 and 9:00, and finishes around 16:00. Miss a day and you don''t get paid. You''ll get 1.500 <b>₽</b> per shift, and your salary will be deposited onto your back account on the 25th of the month."'
+		'He looks at his watch again and shrugs: "You can sort out the rest of the details with the personnel department later. So, do you want the job?"'
 	else
 		'You step into the office of the chief of staff.'
-		'The doctor looks up at you from his paperwork, then smiles.'
-		'"Ah, Ms. <<$pcs_lastname>>, nice to see you! Can I help you with something?"'
+		'He looks up at you from his paperwork, then smiles: "Ah, Ms. <<$pcs_lastname>>, nice to see you! To what do I owe the please?"'
 	end
 
 	! WD: Uninitialised ~ 'workshop' use 'workhosp'
@@ -1225,15 +1228,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'glavdoc':
 			cla
 			workhosp = 1
 			work = 1
-			'The personnel department give you a pass and a booklet with T''s + C''s. "Welcome on board."'
+			'You shake his hand and sort out the paperwork with the personnel department afterwards. Whatever Kat told them must''ve worked, none of them ask any questions about your credentials!'
+			'Five minutes later when you leave the office, you''re holding a shiny new employee pass and a booklet with relevant information.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+			act 'Return to the lobby':gt 'poli', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
-	if workhosp = 1:act 'Resign':gt 'poli', 'discharge'
+	if workhosp = 1:act 'Quit your job':gt 'poli', 'discharge'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'poli', 'start'
+	act 'Return to the lobby':gt 'poli', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'beginwork':
@@ -1241,14 +1245,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beginwork':
 	*clr
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Clinic</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/hospital.jpg"></center>'
-	'You have replaced the clinic.'
+	'You enter the clinic, getting ready for a new work day.'
 
 	act 'Start work':
 		smena += 1
 		gt 'WorkHosp', 'start'
 	end
 
-	act 'Resign':gt 'poli', 'discharge'
+	act 'Quit your job':gt 'poli', 'discharge'
 
 end
 
@@ -1260,18 +1264,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'discharge':
 	pay = smena * 1000
 	money += pay
 	smena = 0
-	'Chief doctor looks at you. "Here is your outstanding pay, <<pay>> <b>₽</b> and your employment history. Goodbye."'
+	'The chief of staff looks disappointed as he says: "So... you''re leaving us, huh? That''s a shame. Here is your outstanding pay, <<pay>> <b>₽</b> and your employment history. Take care."'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+	act 'Leave the clinic': minut += 5 & gt 'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/hospsex1.jpg"></center>'
-	'During the examination, the doctor starts to flirt and touch you, clearly trying to start something intimate.'
+	'During the examination, the doctor starts to flirt with you and touch you longer than is necessary, clearly trying to start something intimate.'
 							
-	act 'Reject him':gt 'poli', 'start'
+	act 'Stop him':gt 'poli', 'start'
 
 	act 'Have some fun':
 		picrand = 11
@@ -1286,11 +1290,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/hospsex2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are examined by two doctors, they touch you everywhere clearly going beyond what is permitted'
+	'You are examined by two doctors, they touch you everywhere clearly going beyond what is permitted.'
 
 	act 'Storm out':gt 'poli', 'start'
 
-	act 'Have some fun':
+	act 'Have some fun with them':
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Doctor', rand(28,48)
 		$boy[0] = $npclastgenerated
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Doctor', rand(28,48)
@@ -1445,7 +1449,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'electrolysis':
 	money -= 80000
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/electrolysis.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip and lie down on the table. Over next few hours you are treated by a laser over and over again. You can feel a scarcely whiff from the burnt hair.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip completely and lie down on the table. Over next few hours you are treated by a laser over and over again. When the treatment is finished and you get up from the table, your skin feels silky smooth.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1458,7 +1462,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lipPlus':
 	gs 'body_shape', 'basebeautycalc', 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1471,7 +1476,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lipMin':
 	gs 'body_shape', 'basebeautycalc', 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1484,7 +1490,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eyePlus':
 	gs 'body_shape', 'basebeautycalc', 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1497,7 +1504,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'eyeMin':
 	gs 'body_shape', 'basebeautycalc', 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1511,7 +1519,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lyposuction':
 	gs 'body_shape', 'softreset'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1523,7 +1532,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bImplantA':
 	money -= 90000
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1535,7 +1545,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bImplantFill':
 	money -= 200000
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end
@@ -1547,7 +1558,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bImplantString':
 	money -= 250000
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/cosmeticsur.jpg"></center>'
-	'Surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you to breathe in. By the time you wake up, the procedure is complete.'
+	'The surgeon has you strip, put on a gown and lie down on the table. He gives you a mask and tells you: "Just breathe in deeply... we''ll be done before you know it."'
+	'By the time you wake up again, the procedure is complete.'
 
 	act 'Continue':gt 'poli', 'cosmetic1'
 end

+ 6 - 6
locations/pornstudio

@@ -857,17 +857,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postvideo':
 	pornstack -= 1
 	pornnow = 0
 	if film < 5:
-		fmulti = 100
+		fmulti = 25
 	elseif film < 10:
-		fmulti = 120
+		fmulti = 30
 	elseif film < 15:
-		fmulti = 140
+		fmulti = 35
 	elseif film < 25:
-		fmulti = 160
+		fmulti = 40
 	elseif film < 50:
-		fmulti = 180
+		fmulti = 45
 	elseif film >= 50:
-		fmulti = 200
+		fmulti = 50
 	end
 
 	film += 1

+ 20 - 14
locations/preNT

@@ -197,6 +197,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Ride':
 						cla
 						*clr
 						sub += 5
+						guy += 1
 						minut -= 2
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev2/Home/bedroom/sex/bj2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -206,6 +207,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Ride':
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'Albert'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 
 						act 'Continue riding in silence':
 							cla
@@ -259,6 +261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Ride':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					pcs_dom += 5
+					guy += 1
 					minut += 4
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pre/city/hj2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -277,6 +280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Ride':
 						gs 'cum_call', 'hands', 'Albert'
 						gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 						gs 'stat'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 
 						act 'Lay back and relax':
 							cla
@@ -387,13 +391,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Listings':
 	minut += 2
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/city/paper.jpg"></center>'
-	'Mercy Clinic Volunteer is looking for volunteers to help with elderly patients in the City Industrial District.'
-	'Salon Masseuse in the City Center.'
-	'Office Secretary in the City Center (Requires secretary diploma,)'
-	'Pussy Cats Store Clerk in the City Center Mall.'
-	'Clothing Saleswoman in the City Residential District.'
-	'Stripper in the City Center Strip Club.'
-	'Fashion Model in the City Center.'
+	'Clothing Saleswoman at the marketplace (Residential Area).'
+	'Waitress at the Roadhouse (Residential Area).'
+	'Office Secretary at Titran-Express (City Center).'
+	'Salon Masseuse at Beauty Bar in the Galeria Mall (City Center).'
+	'Store Clerk at Pussy Cats in the Galeria Mall (City Center).'
+	'Fashion Model at Aphrodite Photography (City Center).'
+	'Mercy Clinic is looking for volunteers to help with elderly patients (City Industrial Region).'
+	'Stripper in the Red Light District (City Industrial Region).'
 
 	act 'Continue toward your apartment':
 		cla
@@ -442,13 +447,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Train':
 		minut += 2
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pre/city/paper.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mercy Clinic Volunteer is looking for volunteers to help with elderly patients in the City Industrial District.'
-		'Salon Masseuse in the City Center.'
-		'Office Secretary in the City Center (Requires secretary diploma,)'
-		'Pussy Cats Store Clerk in the City Center Mall.'
-		'Clothing Saleswoman in the City Residential District.'
-		'Stripper in the City Center Strip Club.'
-		'Fashion Model in the City Center.'
+		'Clothing Saleswoman at the marketplace (Residential Area).'
+		'Waitress at the Roadhouse (Residential Area).'
+		'Office Secretary at Titran-Express (City Center).'
+		'Salon Masseuse at Beauty Bar in the Galeria Mall (City Center).'
+		'Store Clerk at Pussy Cats in the Galeria Mall (City Center).'
+		'Fashion Model at Aphrodite Photography (City Center).'
+		'Mercy Clinic is looking for volunteers to help with elderly patients (City Industrial Region).'
+		'Stripper in the Red Light District (City Industrial Region).'
 
 		act 'Finish reading':
 			cla

+ 7 - 11
locations/psiklin

@@ -7,7 +7,6 @@ if $ARGS[0]='start':
     *clr
 	$loc = 'psiklin'
 	$metka = 'start'
-    minut += 5
     gs'stat'
     '<center><H4>Elite settlement<H4></center>'
     '<left><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/settlement.jpg" ></left>'
@@ -20,44 +19,41 @@ if $ARGS[0]='start':
 
 	if home_owned[5] = 0:
 		'There is a vacant piece of land for sale where a large house could be constructed.'
-		act 'Visit the land for sale': gt 'youplace'
+		act 'Visit the land for sale': minut += 10 & gt 'youplace'
 	elseif home_owned[5] < 3:
 		'You mansion is partially built near here.'
-		act 'Visit your mansion': gt 'youplace'
+		act 'Visit your mansion': minut += 10 & gt 'youplace'
 	else
 		'One of the most impressive buildings is your newly built mansion.'
 		act 'Visit your mansion': gt 'youplace'
 	end
-    act 'View the insane asylum': gt 'psiklin', 'ps1'
-	act 'View the creepy old building': gt 'psiklin', 'ps2'
+    act 'View the insane asylum': minut += 2 & gt 'psiklin', 'ps1'
+	act 'View the creepy old building': minut += 2 & gt 'psiklin', 'ps2'
 	
-	act 'Go to the main road':nroad = 1 & gt 'road'
+	act 'Go to the main road':nroad = 1 & minut += 15 & gt 'road'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0]='ps1':
     cla
     *clr
-    minut += 2
-
     gs'stat'
     '<center><H4>Insane asylum<H4></center>'
     'The inscription on the sign by the road reads: "Closed to the public".'
     if psiklik = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/asylum0.jpg" ></center>'
     if psiklik = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/asylum1.jpg" ></center>'
 
-	act 'Go':gt'psiklin','start'
+	act 'Go': minut += 2 & gt'psiklin','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0]='ps2':
     cla
     *clr
-    minut += 2
     gs'stat'
     '<center><H4>An old abandoned building<H4></center>'
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/suburb/abandoned.jpg" ></center>'
     'An abandoned building that spoils the local communities appearance and intimidates local residents.'
 
-	act 'Go':gt'psiklin','start'
+	act 'Go': minut += 2 & gt'psiklin','start'
 end
 
 --- psiklin ---------------------------------

+ 5 - 5
locations/qwBarPolet

@@ -14,7 +14,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	$metka = ''
 	$loc = 'qwBarPolet'
 	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
-	minut += 5
 	alko_temp = alko
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'qwBarPolet', 'intro'
@@ -87,7 +86,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			'You nod, and he gives you a hint of smile - it amazes you how that gruff face lights up as he does - before Martin returns to the regulars he had been talking to.'
 			'You spend the next 15 minutes pondering his words and the impression he has left on you, absentmindedly nursing on your drink until you notice that your glass is empty.'
 
-			act 'Continue': gt 'qwBarPolet'
+			act 'Continue': minut += 15 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 
 		else
 			*nl
@@ -99,10 +98,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'qwBarPoletToilet'
+	act 'Go to the toilet': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPoletToilet'
 	
 	act 'Leave':
 		killvar 'alko_temp'
+		minut += 5
 		gt 'nord' 
 	end
 end
@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'DrunkEncounters':
 							'You put your hands on his and stop him from undoing his pants further. You lean in to kiss his cheek, then whisper. "Thank you for this... but I gotta go. Have a nice evening."'
 							'Then, before he has even had time to process what you just said, you pull away and walk off. You can hear him calling you a "bitch" among other things, but you don''t care - you got yours, and that puts a spring in your step as you leave the bar.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
-							act 'Leave':gt 'nord'
+							act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'nord'
 						end
 
 						act 'Return the favor':
@@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billiard':
 					'"You shut your mouth or I swear I will stuff it with those pool balls! <<$pcs_firstname>>, go."'
 					'Not wanting to make him say it once more, you quickly turn and walk towards the exit. Something about the disappointment you saw in Martin''s eyes doesn''t sit well with you, though, and while you got out of giving that blowjob, you''re half-wondering if it hadn''t been better to give so you didn''t have to admit to Martin that you had taken that bet.'
 
-					act 'Leave the bar': gt 'nord'
+					act 'Leave the bar': minut += 5 & gt 'nord'
 
 				else
 					cla

+ 5 - 5
locations/qwBarPoletToilet

@@ -23,31 +23,31 @@ if temp <= 6:
 	'The <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> you see above the sinks has some cracks radiating from one of the corners, but other than that, it''s perfectly usable.'
 	dynamic $basin
 	dynamic $quickwash
-	act 'Return to the main room': gt 'qwBarPolet'
+	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 elseif temp = 7:
 	if pcs_horny < 90: pcs_horny += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bathroom/eventb1.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You hear moaning as soon as you open the door to the restroom. Quietly stepping inside, you have little trouble making out the source of it in one of the stalls with no door on it: An almost naked man is sitting on the toilet with a half-undressed woman on his lap, her feet propped up against the stall frame as she rides him for all she is worth.'
 	'You do what you came in here to do, trying not to disturb them, but their moans and the continuous slapping of flesh prove very distracting to you. Once done, you quickly wash your hands and go back to the bar, with them still going at it.'
-	act 'Return to the main room': gt 'qwBarPolet'
+	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 &  gt 'qwBarPolet'
 elseif temp = 8:
 	if pcs_horny < 90: pcs_horny += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bathroom/eventb2.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You go into the restroom and as soon as you open the door, you are greeted to the sight of a man with his pants down around his ankles, enjoying a vigorous blowjob from a middle-aged woman down on her knees. He has his hand on the back of her head, ''helping her along'' as she sucks his dick.' 
 	'When he sees you rooted to spot, he gives you a grin and a wink before directing his attention back at his enthusiastic partner. You try your best to ignore them and do your business. Once finished, you leave and return to the bar, but not without giving them one last look.'
-	act 'Return to the main room': gt 'qwBarPolet'
+	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 elseif temp = 9:
 	if pcs_horny < 90: pcs_horny += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bathroom/eventb3.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You go into the restroom and as soon as you open the door, you are greeted to the sight of a almost naked woman sitting on the sink, with her back against the mirror, while a man kneels in front of her, his face buried between her legs. She moans loudly in pleasure as he orally pleasures her.' 
 	'You do your best to ignore and not disturb them while you take care of your business, but since the only only other sink is right next to the one that are at, you have little choice but to use it. The man briefly glances up at you, but the woman never once opens her eyes - you don''t even think she is aware you are there. Once done, you return to the bar, the image of the two of them occupying you for quite some time after.'
-	act 'Return to the main room': gt 'qwBarPolet'
+	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 elseif temp = 10:
 	if pcs_horny < 90: pcs_horny += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bathroom/eventb4.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'You go into the restroom and as soon as you open the door, you are greeted to the sight of two almost-naked women in one of the stalls, making out while one is finger-fucking the other. They seem completely obviously to your presence, or at the very least they don''t care if anyone sees them.' 
 	'You watch them for a few seconds before you remember why you went into the bathroom to begin with, so you take care of your business and then return to the bar.'
-	act 'Return to the main room': gt 'qwBarPolet'
+	act 'Return to the main room': minut += 1 & gt 'qwBarPolet'
 end
 
 ![Encounters with men who are already in the bathroom? Flirts going sexual here?]

+ 1 - 1
locations/restoran

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if vladimirday = daystart and vladimirQW = 21 and hour = 20: gt 'qwmeet'
 	
 	act 'Approach the maître d'' ': gt 'restoran', 'maitred'
-	act 'Leave the restaurant': minut += 10 & gt 'down'
+	act 'Leave the restaurant': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'maitred':

+ 3 - 3
locations/rinok

@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 						'You undress and give the clothes you need adjusting to Jacob Solomonovich, it is fifteen minutes until your clothes and returned to you.'
 					end
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 10 & gt 'street'
 				end
 
 				act 'Take in different clothes':gt 'clothing', 'view_clothing_list', 'resize'
@@ -273,11 +273,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tailor':
 					'Jacob Solomonovich jumps up smartly and nimbly removes the tape from his neck and begins to measure your chest, waist and hips.'
 					'"Well, I can take in whatever clothing you bring to me for 500 <b>₽</b>."'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 10 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 10 & gt 'street'
 	end
 end
 

+ 3 - 6
locations/rinwork

@@ -24,9 +24,6 @@ $location_type = 'event_outdoors'
 !NadiaQW 		?
 !
 
-
-
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	$metka = 'start'
 	$loc = 'rinwork'
@@ -542,9 +539,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if poktiprand = 2:$pokup = 'A teenage boy approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Boy' & pokti = 3
 			if poktiprand = 3:$pokup = 'A woman approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Woman' & pokti = 1
 			if poktiprand = 4:$pokup = 'A girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Girl' & pokti = 2
-			if poktiprand = 5:$pokup = 'A teen girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Girlfriend' & pokti = 3
-			if poktiprand = 6:$pokup = 'An old man  approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Old man' & pokti = 0
-			if poktiprand = 7:$pokup = 'A Grandma  approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Granny' & pokti = 0
+			if poktiprand = 5:$pokup = 'A teen girl approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Teen girl' & pokti = 3
+			if poktiprand = 6:$pokup = 'An old man approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Old man' & pokti = 0
+			if poktiprand = 7:$pokup = 'A Grandma approaches your stall.' & $poktip = 'Old woman' & pokti = 0
 		end
 
 		'<b><<$pokup>></b>'

+ 6 - 6
locations/road

@@ -17,14 +17,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	'Calling it a highway would be too much credit, but this road is the main way to get from St. Petersburg to the town of Pavlovsk, 20km away. Smaller villages named Gadyukino and Pushkin can be found along the way. Cars are driving by you at a high speed.'
 
 	if car > 0 and cardrive = 22 and ncarroad = nroad:'You parked <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">your <<$car>></a> next to the road.'
-	if nroad = 0:act 'Enter the city industrial district':minut += 60 & gt 'nord'
-	if nroad = 16:act 'Check out the construction site':minut += 60 & gt 'obekt'
+	if nroad = 0:act 'Go to the City Industrial Region (0:15)':minut += 15 & gt 'nord'
+	if nroad = 16:act 'Check out the construction site (1:00)':minut += 60 & gt 'obekt'
 	if nroad = 20:
-		act 'Go to Pavlovsk train station': minut += 20 & gt 'vokzalG'
-		act 'Go to Pavlovsk high street': minut += 20 & gt 'pavCommercial'
+		act 'Go to Pavlovsk train station (0:15)': minut += 15 & gt 'vokzalG'
+		act 'Go to Pavlovsk high street (0:15)': minut += 15 & gt 'pavCommercial'
 	end
-	if nroad < 20:act 'Walk towards Pavlovsk':minut += 60 & nroad += 1 & gt $curloc
-	if nroad > 0:act 'Walk towards St. Petersburg':minut += 60 & nroad -= 1 & gt $curloc
+	if nroad < 20:act 'Walk towards Pavlovsk (1:00)':minut += 60 & nroad += 1 & gt $curloc
+	if nroad > 0:act 'Walk towards St. Petersburg (1:00)':minut += 60 & nroad -= 1 & gt $curloc
 	if nroad>0 and nroad<20:
 		act'Try hitchhiking towards Pavlovsk':
 			cls

+ 3 - 4
locations/salon

@@ -9,7 +9,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	salonrand = rand(0, 9)
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:
 		fcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
@@ -44,10 +43,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	if hour < 8 or hour > 20:
 		cls
 		'As the salon closes you are politely asked to leave and come again.'
-		act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'torgcentr'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 		exit
 	end
-	act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'torgcentr'
+	act 'Leave':minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'solyariy':
@@ -119,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'resnici':
 		'Remove your eyelash extensions - 500<b> ₽</b>'
 	end
 	
-	act 'back':gt 'salon','start'
+	act 'back': minut += 5 & gt 'salon','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lashTreatment':

+ 2 - 2
locations/sauna

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/sauna/sauna.jpg"></center>'
 'Luxurious high quality public sauna founded long time ago. The sauna houses separate changing rooms and shower facilities for men and women.'
 
-act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt 'street'
+act 'Leave':minut += 10 & gt 'street'
 
 !!if saunaWorkWhore > 0:act 'Go to work':gt 'saunawork'
 if SaunaWhore > 0:act 'Head to work':gt 'saunawork'
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if week = 5 and workDisk = 2:
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You hand over the disk to him and you are handed back a thick envelope.'
 
-		act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt 'street'
+		act 'Leave':minut += 10 & gt 'street'
 	end
 end
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/shop

@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/gostdt2.jpg"></center>'
 							'Dima finally finishes in your mouth, you obediently swallow and lick the remnants of sperm off his big cock.'
 
-							act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+							act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'street'
 						else
 							cla
 							stat['vaginal'] += 1
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/street/sex/gostanal2.jpg"></center>'
 							'Dima fucks you in the ass whilst slapping your butt, at first it is painful, but gradually you get it and it feels amazing. Finally, your ass fills with hot liquid and Dima moans and grabs your buttocks.'
 
-							act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+							act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'street'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $shoplocation = 'main':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave the store':gt $loc
+	act 'Leave the store': minut += 3 & gt $loc
 	exit
 end
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/shopdacha

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ end
 'You can also buy land for mansion for 1.5 million and all the many construction projects required to build and upgrade it.'
 'All payments must be made from you bank account. Current balance - <<karta>> <b>₽</b>.'
 
-act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'torgcentr'
+act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 
 if hour < 8 or hour > 20:
 	'Shop closed.'

+ 6 - 6
locations/sportShop

@@ -23,36 +23,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	act 'Leave':
 		cla
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 3
 		gt 'torgcentr'
 	end
 
 	act 'View sports clothes':
 		cla
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'sportshop', 'clo'
 	end
 
 	act 'View exercise shoes':
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'sportshop', 'trainers'
 	end
 
 	act 'View swimwear':
 		cla
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'sportshop', 'swim'
 	end
 
 	act 'View sports bras':
 		cla
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'sportshop', 'bras'
 	end
 
 	act 'View sports panties':
 		cla
-		minut += 5
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'sportshop', 'panties'
 	end
 

+ 8 - 4
locations/stat

@@ -501,11 +501,15 @@ if minut >= 60:
 
 	if mosol >= 30 and pain['pubic'] < 80: gs 'pain', 1, 'pubic', 'ache'
 
-	if pcs_energy > 100:
+	if pcs_energy > 100: 
 		fat += (pcs_energy - 100) / 4
 		pcs_energy = 100
 	end
-
+	
+	if pcs_sleep > 100: pcs_sleep = 100
+		
+	if pcs_hydra > 200: pcs_hydra = 200
+	
 	if mosol > 0:
 		if $pantyworntype ! 'none' or $clothingworntype = 'nude' or PCloPanties = 1:mosol -= rand(0,1)
 	end
@@ -852,8 +856,8 @@ end
 
 if pcs_hydra <= 0:
 	pcs_hydra = 0
-	health -= 10
-	willpower -= 1
+	pcs_health -= 5
+	pcs_willpwr -= 1
 end
 
 if pcs_mood <= 0:

+ 0 - 3
locations/stat_display

@@ -78,9 +78,6 @@ gs 'stat_sklattrib_lvlset'
 !!!Beginning Description!!!
 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
-if pcs_sleep > 100: pcs_sleep = 100
-if pcs_hydra > 200: pcs_hydra = 200
-
 !!----------------image Extra messages, start--------------------------
 $stat_imgtool_msg=''
 $stat_imgextra_msg=''

+ 13 - 9
locations/street

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if home_owned[1] > 0:
 			gt 'gopnew', 'start'
 			exit
 		end
-
+		minut += 1
 		gt 'korr'
 	end
 end
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ end
 
 gs 'taxi'
 
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'You can see the <a href="exec:$locM = ''street'' & minut += 1 & gt ''kiosk'', ''start''">kiosk</a> selling cigarettes and magazines.'
 if Enable_tablemap = 0:
 	if katkey = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''katspalnya'', ''start''">Kats</a> apartment'
 	if IrinaQW >= 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''IrinaRoom'', ''start''">Irenes</a> apartment is not far away from yours.'
@@ -125,15 +125,15 @@ else
 end
 
 if hour >= 5 and hour <= 23:'The <a href="exec:gt ''metro'', ''start''">Metro</a> Station is within a 5 minute walk from here.'
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The <a href="exec:gt ''shop'', ''start''">supermarket</a> is not far from here.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''shop'', ''start''">supermarket</a> is not far from here.'
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The <a href="exec:gt ''poli'', ''start''">clinic</a> is also nearby.'
 if hour >= 6 and hour <= 9 and military = 1 and week = 6:'There is a <a href="exec:minut += 60 & gt ''Military'', ''start''">military bus</a> waiting on the other side of the street.'
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 14 and week ! 1:'You could go shopping at the noisy local <a href="exec:gt ''rinok'', ''start''">marketplace</a>.'
-if hour >= 8 and hour <= 15 and week < 6:'Near the market is a <a href="exec:gt ''rinok'', ''tailor''">tailor shop</a> where you can get your clothes resized if needed.'
-if hour >= 11 and hour < 12 and week > 1 and week < 5 and workKafe = 1:'The side door of <a href="exec:gt ''kafe'', ''work''">"The Roadhouse"</a> is open, so employees can enter to begin their shift.'
-if hour >= 12 and hour <= 22 and week ! 1:'In a side alley, next to the uniquely styled diner <a href="exec:gt ''kafe'', ''start''">"The Roadhouse"</a>, you can hear the swearing and laughing of some <a href="exec:gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a>.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 14 and week ! 1:'You could go shopping at the noisy local <a href="exec: minut += 10 & gt ''rinok'', ''start''">marketplace</a>.'
+if hour >= 8 and hour <= 15 and week < 6:'Near the market is a <a href="exec: minut += 10 & gt ''rinok'', ''tailor''">tailor shop</a> where you can get your clothes resized if needed.'
+if hour >= 11 and hour < 12 and week > 1 and week < 5 and workKafe = 1:'The side door of <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''kafe'', ''work''">"The Roadhouse"</a> is open, so employees can enter to begin their shift.'
+if hour >= 12 and hour <= 22 and week ! 1:'In a side alley, next to the uniquely styled diner <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''kafe'', ''start''">"The Roadhouse"</a>, you can hear the swearing and laughing of some <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a>.'
 if hour > 22 or hour <= 3:'In one of the parking lots you can hear the swearing and laughing of some <a href="exec:gt ''gopnew'', ''start''">gopniks</a>.'
-if clener >= 1 and hour >= 7 and hour <= 22:'There''s a small office building where a <a href="exec:gt ''clener'', ''start''">cleaning lady</a> is needed.'
+if clener >= 1 and hour >= 7 and hour <= 22:'There''s a small office building where a <a href="exec: minut += 5 & gt ''clener'', ''start''">cleaning lady</a> is needed.'
 
 
 'The city''s large <a href="exec:minut += 20 & gt ''park'', ''start''">central park</a> is about a 20-minute walk away.'
@@ -152,7 +152,11 @@ if Enable_tablemap = 0:
 	end
 end
 
-'In the courtyard of one of the apartment buildings, you see several <a href="exec:gt ''trashplace''">trash bins</a>.'
+if home_owned[1] = 0:
+	'In the courtyard of one of the apartment buildings, you see several <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''trashplace''">trash bins</a>.'
+else
+	'In the courtyard of your <a href="exec: gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos51''">apartment building</a>, you see several <a href="exec: minut += 1 & gt ''trashplace''">trash bins</a>.'
+end
 
 if SNarkPriton > 0:'The <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''narkopriton''">drug house</a> is clearly recognizeable by the syringes and the trash that lies in front of it.'
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 23 or saunaWorkWhore > 0 or workDisk = 2:'<a href="exec:minut += 10 & gt ''sauna''">The Sauna</a> is a 10 minute walk away. Rumors say the sauna is just the front for a brothel.'

+ 8 - 13
locations/street_event

@@ -91,7 +91,11 @@ else
 	streetev_bf = 90
 end
 
-if $ARGS[1] = 'extras':
+if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
+	if lesbiday + 21 <= daystart and RAND(0,100) < streetev_mistmeet and lesbiQW >= 11 and hour >= 8 and hour < 21 and $pantyworntype ! 'none' and month > 2 and month ! 12 and sub > 0:gt 'lesbimistress', 'mistmeet'
+
+	streetrand = rand(0, 100)
+	!!start of old random street events that can always happen.
 	
 	if streetrand < streetev_bf and pcs_lover < 3 and streetbfhour ! hour:
 		streetbfhour = hour
@@ -119,15 +123,6 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'extras':
 			if svidanie[2] = 1:'<b><a href="exec:lover_number = 2 & gt ''lover_meet'', ''start''"><<$loverdesc[2]>></a> is waiting <<$streetev_home>>.</b>'
 		end
 	end
-end
-
-
-if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
-	if lesbiday + 21 <= daystart and RAND(0,100) < streetev_mistmeet and lesbiQW >= 11 and hour >= 8 and hour < 21 and $pantyworntype ! 'none' and month > 2 and month ! 12 and sub > 0:gt 'lesbimistress', 'mistmeet'
-
-
-	streetrand = rand(0, 100)
-	!!start of old random street events that can always happen.
 
 	!!Changing this event some and rewriting parts of it. I also want to change how often and when it can happen, based on clothes, time and if drunk. If drunk double the odds and for time it can happen from 24:00 to 04:00. This gets checked last after any other events could happen.
 	!!town(pav or pushkin) normal clothes 1 in 50, if drunk 1 in 25. slutty clothes(clothes that cover everything but very short skirts revealing tops etc) 1 in 30, if drunk 1 in 15. bimbo/exhibitionist clothes 1 in 20, if drunk 1 in 10. naked 1 in 5, if drunk 1 in 2
@@ -332,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 	end
 
 	streetrand = rand(0, 100)
-	if streetrand < streetev_rob and money >= 1000 and daystart >= 10 and (hour < 6 or hour >= 20) and streetev_day ! daystart:
+	if streetrand < streetev_rob and money >= 1000 and daystart >= 10 and (hour < 6 or hour >= 20) and streetev_day ! daystart and bag = 1:
 	!!I would like this one only to happen from 20:00 till 06:00 as the times it can happen.
 		cla
 		*clr
@@ -427,7 +422,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 
 	streetrand = rand(0, 100)
 
-	if streetrand < streetev_hijack and money >= 1000 and daystart >= 10 and (hour < 6 or hour >= 20) and streetev_day ! daystart:
+	if streetrand < streetev_hijack and money >= 1000 and daystart >= 10 and (hour < 6 or hour >= 20) and streetev_day ! daystart and bag = 1:
 	!!this one takes the place of the above mugging if the hours are 06:00 till 20:00
 		cla
 		*clr
@@ -445,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 		act 'Chase him':
 			*clr
 			cla
-			if pcs_react < 55 or pcs_agil < 55 or pcs_vital < 55:
+			if pcs_run + pcs_stam > rand(120,250):
 				money = 0
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<<$streetev_title>>'

+ 12 - 12
locations/torgcentr

@@ -9,43 +9,43 @@ $loc = 'torgcentr'
 $location_type = 'public_indoors'
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
-	*p '<center><a href="exec:gt ''young_shop''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a>'
+	*p '<center><a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''young_shop''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pussycat.png"></a>'
 !! Pussy-Kats - Youth clothing shop
 		*p '   '
-	*p '<a href="exec:gt ''sportShop'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a>'
+	*p '<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''sportShop'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/sports.png"></a>'
 !! Danilovich Sporting goods - Sports shop
 		*p '   '
-	*p'<a href="exec:gt ''butik'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/moncheri.png"></a>'
+	*p'<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''butik'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/moncheri.png"></a>'
 !!Mon Cheri - European style expensive boutique
 		*p '   '
-	*p '<a href="exec:GT ''NewCloShop'',''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionistat.png"></a>'
+	*p '<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''NewCloShop'',''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/fashionistat.png"></a>'
 !! Fashionista - Shop for designer brands
 	
 	*nl
 	*nl
 	*nl
 	
-	*p '<a href="exec:gt ''salon'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/beautybart.png"></a>'
+	*p '<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''salon'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/beautybart.png"></a>'
 !! Beauty bar - Salon
 		*p '   '
-	*p'<a href="exec:gt ''hairsalon'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/goldencurl.png"></a>'
+	*p'<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''hairsalon'', ''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/goldencurl.png"></a>'
 !! Golden curl - hairdressers
 		*p '   '
-	*p '<a href="exec:torg = 1 & GT ''budgetclothes'',''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/GM.png"></a>'
+	*p '<a href="exec:torg = 1 & minut += 3 & gt ''budgetclothes'',''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/GM.png"></a>'
 !! G&M - Cheap clothing store
 
 	*nl
 	*nl
 	*nl
 		
-	*p '<a href="exec:gt ''zoomagazine'',''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/petstore.png"></a>'
+	*p '<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''zoomagazine'',''start''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/petstore.png"></a>'
 !! Pet Emporium - Pet shop
 		*p '   '
-	*p '<a href="exec:gt ''shopdacha''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/constructiont.png"></a>'
+	*p '<a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''shopdacha''"><img src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/constructiont.png"></a>'
 !! Ilyich and Biryukov Construction - Builders / Land developers
 
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 	act 'Go to the supermarket': gt 'shop', 'start'
 	act 'Go bowling': gt 'bouling'
 	act 'Play pool': gt 'billiard'
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
 else
 	'The shopping center is closed and security are guiding everyone out so they can lock up.'
 	
-	act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+	act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 end
 
 !!{Old menu
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ end
 end
 
 
-act 'Leave':gt 'down'
+act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'down'
 }
 --- torgcentr ---------------------------------
 

+ 8 - 8
locations/trashplace

@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ $bomzstartqwestdi = {
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'No it seems wrong':bomzQW = -1 & gt 'street'
+	act 'No it seems wrong':bomzQW = -1 & minut += 1 & gt 'street'
 }
 
 $workbomzdi = {
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ $workbomzdi = {
 			'You go to the sauna, and you''re introduced to the local managers. it is explained to you who you need to deliver to, and reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
 			'"Don''t forget to use secure transport. We''ll see you on Fridays and don''t fuck up."'
 
-			act 'Leave':bomzQW = 2 & gt 'street'
+			act 'Leave':bomzQW = 2 & minut += 1 & gt 'street'
 		end
 	end
 }
@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@ if bumtolik = 3 and hour >= 6 and hour <= 20 and rand(0, 1) = 1:
 	act 'Ask what she''s upto':gt'musorkaexh','pos9'
 end
 
-if musor > 0:
-	act 'Take out trash':
+if musor > 3:
+	act 'Take out the trash':
 		cls
 		musor = 0
 
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if bomzQW = 0 and rand(1, 10) >= 8 and hour <= 16 and week ! 4:
 
 			'You give money to the homeless man, and he walks away thanking you. He also appears to be laughing.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt'street'
+			act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt'street'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ if bomzQW = 0 and rand(1, 10) >= 8 and hour <= 16 and week ! 4:
 		'"You should not be so rude to me. I meet a lot of people, and I know a lot of things. This may come back to haunt you, when you least expect it.'
 		'With these words, the man leaves.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt'street'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt'street'
 	end
 	exit
 end
@@ -372,14 +372,14 @@ if sub >= 80 and rand(0,5) = 0:
 					'"I think it''s time to give our little bitch a reward" one of them pants, and they all agree, they casually pull out from your abused holes and force you on your knees before removing your bonds, then they all stand up in circle around you and all start stroking themselves to orgasm.'
 					'Before long, the four hobos are all breathing heavily and you see their cocks twitching in their hands, they all start to orgasm, one of them aims for the inside of your mouth while the others shoot their disgusting loads all over your face.'
 					'"Holy Filicophyte" exclaims one of them as you gulp down the disgusting sperm that ended in your mouth, you have no idea what that means, but you don''t bother asking. As soon as they''re done painting your face with their cum, they hand you your clothes and get dressed before returning to their cans of beer. "We hope you will show us more respect in the future, slut, now leave.", you quickly get dressed and stumble without a word towards the street.'
-					act 'Leave':gt 'street'
+					act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
-act 'Leave':gt'street'
+act 'Leave': minut += 1 & gt'street'
 
 --- trashplace ---------------------------------
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/vokzal

@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ if RAND(1,100) > 70:
 	end
 end
 
-act 'Go to the city industrial region':minut += 15 & gt'nord'
-act 'Enter the station building':minut+=5&gt'vokzalholle'
+act 'Go to the city industrial region': minut += 15 & gt'nord'
+act 'Enter the station building': minut += 2 & gt'vokzalholle'
 
 --- vokzal ---------------------------------
 

+ 3 - 3
locations/vokzalholle

@@ -10,15 +10,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/train/vokzalholle.jpg" ></center>'
 	'There is a <a href="exec:GT ''dort''">path</a> leading off in to the distance, in the direction of the lake.'
-	act 'Leave the station building':gt 'vokzal' & minut+=5
+	act 'Leave the station building': minut += 2 & gt 'vokzal'
 	*nl
 	if Trainpass_day > daystart:
 		'You have <<Trainpass_day - daystart>> days left on your train pass.'
 		act 'Go to the platforms': gt 'vokzalper'
 	else
-		act 'Go to the ticket office': gt 'vokzalholle', 'ticket'
+		act 'Go to the ticket office': minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalholle', 'ticket'
 	end
-	act 'Go to the restrooms':gt 'vokzaltoilet' & minut+=5
+	act 'Go to the restrooms': minut += 1 & gt 'vokzaltoilet'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ticket':

+ 1 - 1
locations/vokzaltoilet

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ end
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/bathroom/publictoilet.jpg"></center>'
 ''
 
-act 'Return to the station hall':gt'vokzalholle'
+act 'Return to the station hall': minut += 1 & gt'vokzalholle'
 
 
 act 'Look in the mirror':gt 'mirror', 'start'

+ 1 - 1
locations/young_shop

@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ if hour > 21 or hour < 8:
 	'"Sorry, but the store is closed" the guard comes up to you. "Proceed to the exit."'
 	'<b><center><font color="red">The store is closing.</font></center></b>'
 
-	act '<b>Get out of the shop</b>':gt 'torgcentr'
+	act '<b>Get out of the shop</b>': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 end
 
 gs 'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/youplace

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ if car > 0 and cardrive = 18:
 	'<a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">Your <<$car>></a> is parked here.'
 end
 
-act 'Visit the suburbs':minut += 5 & gt 'psiklin', 'start'
+act 'Go to the suburbs':minut += 10 & gt 'psiklin', 'start'
 
 if bassMansion = 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''ybass''">Go to the pool</a>.'
 if banaMansion >= 1:'<a href="exec:gt ''yban''">Go to the sauna</a>.'

+ 2 - 0
locations/zaprF

@@ -69,11 +69,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	act 'Leave':
 		if cardrive = 6:
+			minut += 5
 			gt 'nord'
 		elseif cardrive = 21:
 			minut += 5
 			gt 'pavCommercial'
 		elseif litltown = 0:
+			minut += 5
 			gt 'nord'
 		elseif litltown = 1:
 			minut += 5

+ 13 - 16
locations/zoomagazine

@@ -3,7 +3,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	cla
 	clr
 	*clr
-	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if night_mode = 1:
 		fcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
@@ -17,6 +16,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Pet Emporium</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pet shop/shop.jpg"</center>'
 	if saveparQW = 1 and saveparQWfailed = 0:
+		minut += 5
 		'When you enter the pet store you can see the owner talking to some customers'
 		'In normal circumstances you would have simply waited your turn but you had no time now.'
 		'You notice a little ladder  standing next to the men and decide to create a distraction.'
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'he wrapped up his conversation with the men and took you to the back office'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cls
+			minut += 5
 			' - "So little girl, what is the big emergency"'
 			' - "Well, a few months ago I have bought a parrot from this shop. everything was fine at first but the last couple of weeks he has been saying some things he should not be saying."'
 			' - "Oh, what kind of things would that be?"'
@@ -39,12 +40,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'You realise the owner might just be an old pervert but it is your only chance to save your bird.'
 			act 'Berate him for wasting your time and leave the store':
 				saveparQWfailed = 1
+				minut += 3
 				gt 'torgcentr'
 			end
 			act 'Show your body':
 				gs 'npcgeneratec', '0'				
 				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 				cls
+				minut += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pet shop/pet1.jpg"</center>'
 				'You slide up your top and show off your <a href="exec:gs ''obj_din'', ''show_tits''"><<$titsize>></a> breasts.'
 				'-"hmm, he was definitely not lying about your top half, ok show me the rest."'
@@ -79,6 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex'
 						act 'Continue':
 							cls & cla
+							minut += 5
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/mall/pet shop/pet7.jpg"</center>'
 							'After a few minutes the owner pulled out and turned you around, he started stroking his dick and came all over your face.'
 							'He took another tissue and wiped some of the cum off.'
@@ -89,16 +93,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'cum_call','face', $npclastgenerated
 							guy += 1
 							saveparQW = 2
-							act 'Leave the store':gt 'torgcentr'
+							act 'Leave the store': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
 							
 						end
-						
-						
 					end
 				end
-			end
-				
-				
+			end	
 		end
 	exit
 	end
@@ -106,6 +106,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'Rabbit - 2000 <b>₽</b>'
 	'Parrot - 3000 <b>₽</b>'
 	
+	act 'Leave': minut += 3 & gt 'torgcentr'
+	
 	if money >= 3000 and sobaka = 0:
 		act 'Buy a dog (3000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			cla
@@ -147,10 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You need to have your own place before you can buy a dog'
 			end
-
-
-				act 'Leave':gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
-				
+			act 'Move away from the counter': minut += 5 & gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'		
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -169,7 +168,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You need to have your own place before you can buy a rabbit.'
 			end
-			act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
+			act 'Move away from the counter': gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -188,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			else
 				'You need to have your own place before you can buy a parrot.'
 			end
-			act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
+			act 'Move away from the counter': gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 	
@@ -206,11 +205,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			$namepopu2 = input ("I call parrot ...")
 			if $namepopu2 = '':$namepopu2 = 'Polly'
 
-			act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
+			act 'Move away from the counter': gt 'zoomagazine', 'start'
 		end
 	end
-
-	act 'Leave':gt 'torgcentr'
 end
 
 --- zoomagazine ---------------------------------