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[Text Edit] corrections suggested by werewyvernx

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      locations/therapist.qsrc

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locations/therapist.qsrc

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypno':
 			$session = 'You will feel more confident. You are smart, beautiful, and if other people has other opinions, that is their problem. You know what you want, and do not fear to act upon your desires."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
 		elseif $therapy = 'dominance':
 			pcs_dom += rand(1,2)
-			$session = 'You like to do what you want to do. It pleases you if people do what you tell them to do, or act according to your wishes, and you like to couse them pleasure this way. You have to be in control constantly, but that means others around you can relax."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
+			$session = 'You like to do what you want to do. It pleases you if people do what you tell them to do, or act according to your wishes, and you like to cause them pleasure this way. You have to be in control constantly, but that means others around you can relax."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
 		elseif $therapy = 'submission':
 			sub += rand(1,2)
 			$session = 'You want to be told what to do and what to think, what to feel and whom to please. Obeying others pleases you because it pleases them, and for a while you do not have to take responsibility for your actions."<br>...<br>...<br>..."'
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/room.jpg"></center>'
 	'<font color=brown>"All right, <i>Cunt</i>, now listen to me. You will not remember any of this. You do not feel any discomfort from any of our activities, and you do not notice anything related to what happened here. No taste, no smell, no aches, no fluids. Nothing. You will not respont to Cunt while you are Awake, just while you are Under. You will wake up feeling good, but responsive to all of my commands. Understand, <i>Cunt</i>?"'
 	'"Yes, <i>Master</i>."'
-	'"Oh, I almost forgotten. While you are Awake, you will call me Dr. Pavlov, you will not have any desire to call me Master. Now, you are sitting in the black room. Stand up, and start walking through the door. As you close the door of the black room, you forget..."</font>'
+	'"Oh, I almost forgot. While you are Awake, you will call me Dr. Pavlov, you will not have any desire to call me Master. Now, you are sitting in the black room. Stand up, and start walking through the door. As you close the door of the black room, you forget..."</font>'
 	'...'
 	'...'
 	if hypnoTime < 4:
@@ -474,10 +474,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoEnd':
 		pcs_horny = 60
 		'When you wake up, you see your therapist fixing his shirt.'
 		'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, how do you feel right now?"'
-		'Without hesitation, you reply.'
-		'"I feel wounderful, Dr. Pavlov."'
+		'Without hesitation, you reply, "I feel wounderful, Dr. Pavlov."'
 		'"Good, just as expected," nods the doctor, as he escorts you out of his office.'
-		'You feel aroused, and you try to close your legs as you walk out, unconsciously trying to keep you psychologist''s sperm inside your <<$cumdesciption3>> as long as possible.'
+		'You feel aroused, and you try to close your legs as you walk out, unconsciously trying to keep your psychologist''s sperm inside your <<$cumdesciption3>> as long as possible.'
 	end
 	'The doctor smiles jovially, his hand on your shoulder as he slowly escort you out of his office.'
 	'"Please, visit me again if you have any further problems, I will be glad to help!" Says Dr. Pavlov as a goodbye, taking your hands in his, patting them, then closes his door.'