[Text edit] Minor corrections

locations/gschool_socialchg.qsrc

@@ -1590,14 +1590,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnik slut':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/oldschool/gophangout/slut/7.jpg"></center>'
 									'After several minutes of fisting you, Lena pulls her hand out. Her and Lera grab the rest of your clothes and completely strip you naked, pulling you off the table they lead you over to a pillar. They stand you against the pillar, with your back too it. "Stay right her bunny and don''t move." Lera says with a laugh, with that they both walk off to get another drink.'
 									*nl
-									'You stand in place completely naked, some people check you out, others laugh. Then one of them takes out their phone and takes your picture. Which starts them all off doing it, soon everyone is taking your picture as you stand their naked.'
+									'You stand in place completely naked, some people check you out, others laugh. Then one of them takes his phone out and takes some pictures of you. This makes more of them start doing the same, soon everyone is taking pictures while you stand there naked.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'group', 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 									gs 'stat'
 
 									act 'The boys':
 										cla & *clr
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/oldschool/gophangout/slut/8.jpg"></center>'
-										'Once they get bored taking your picture, a couple of the guys come over and fondle you naked body. One of them pinches your nipple hard. Soon guys are taking turns fingering your pussy roughly, squeezing your tits and pinching your nipples. After awhile you lose track of the number of guys that manhandle you.'
+										'Once they get bored taking picture, a couple of the guys come over and start fondling your naked body. One of them pinches your nipple hard. Soon the guys are taking turns fingering your pussy roughly, squeezing your tits and pinching your nipples. After awhile you''ve lost track of how many guys have manhandled you.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'group', 'rough', 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 										gs 'pain', 5, 'nipples', 'pinch'
 										gs 'stat'

locations/park.qsrc

@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape1':
 	SUB += 3
 	money = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/rape.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly, you are hit on the head. You awake sometime later in a bush. Somehow you''re not able to move your arms, they must be tied up. As you look down on yourself, you realize, that you''re not wearing anything and before you can even react some dude is ramming his into your cunt. "Shit", you think yourself, "I''m being raped."'
+	'Suddenly, you are hit on the head. You wake up sometime later in a bush. Somehow you''re not able to move your arms, they must be tied up. As you look down on yourself, you realize, that you''re not wearing anything and before you can even react some dude is ramming his dick into your cunt. "Shit", you think yourself, "I''m being raped."'
 	gs 'arousal', 5, 'vaginal', 'rape'
 
 	act 'Try to resist':
@@ -742,7 +742,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape1':
 		stat['anal'] += 1
 		SUB += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/rapean.jpg"></center>'
-		'It doesn''t take long for the rapist to realize you''re not resisting. "Good girl!", he says to you. He pushes you onto your knees and intends to take you doggy-style. He spreads your asscheeks aside and pushes his cock inside. You cry out in pain, but he holds your mouth shut and doesn''t stop fucking your asshole.'
+		'It doesn''t take long for the rapist to realize you''re not resisting. "Good girl!", he says to you. He pushes you onto your knees, seems he intends to take you doggy-style. He spreads your buttocks and pushes his cock into your ass. You cry out in pain, but he holds your mouth shut and doesn''t stop fucking your asshole.'
 		gs 'arousal', 15, 'anal', 'rape'
 
 		act 'Go on':
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rape1':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			SUB += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/centralpark/sex/cum.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Give me a blowjob and you''ll get your reward for not resisting, woman.", he tells you. You nod obidiently and move on your knees and begin to give him head.'
+			'"Give me a blowjob and you''ll get your reward for not resisting, girl.", he tells you. You nod obidiently and move on your knees and begin to give him head.'
 			gs 'arousal', 15, 'bj', 'rape'
 			'It doesn''t take long for him to groan out in pleasure, "You better swallow it all, slut!" Shortly after that you can taste his hot cum inside your mouth and you swallow every drip of it, somehow enjoying the taste. Then he stand up, buttons up his pants and takes your money. While you were still liking your fingers clean from any drips of cum, he smiles and says to you, "Have a nice day slut."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/shulga_room.qsrc

@@ -71,9 +71,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			pcs_horny += 5
 			sub += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You walk into the room and the boys smile at you. "Well look who it is. <<$pcs_nickname>>, our own personally like fuck slut. Isn''t that right slut?"'
+			'You walk into the room and the boys smile at you. "Well look who it is. <<$pcs_nickname>>, our own personal fuck slut. Isn''t that right slut?"'
 			'You nod your head yes, knowing you have no choice but to obey. "Yes I''m your fuck slut."'
-			'Laughing they look to each other. "Damn if we don''t have the bitch well trained." Then they look back to you. "Well take off your clothes and come on over here, like a good little slut, like we know you are."'
+			'Laughing they look to each other. "Damn if we don''t have the bitch well trained." Then they look back to you. "So... Take off your clothes,then, and come on over here, like the good little slut we know you are."'
 			'You walk over to them taking off your clothes.'
 			act 'Serve them': gt 'shulga_room', 'gang_sex_room_ev1_2'
 		exit