locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gossip':
 			end
 			*nl
 			'"Did you hear what happened at the disco the other night? Sonia gave like five guys a blowjob, at once!"'
-			'"I heard. I don''t think anyone would want to go out with her any more now, not after Kotov and his cronies had their way with her."'
+			'"Yeah, I heard. I don''t think anyone would want to go out with her any more now, not after Kotov and his cronies had their way with her."'
 			'"What do you mean?"'
 			'"They all came right on her face, and made her walk out like that. I bet half the town has seen pictures of her face covered in cum. It''s disgusting!"'
 		elseif soniaPS = 2:
@@ -559,19 +559,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 		'"Dude, you''re not gonna believe this. There''s this chick in my class, she''s always letting me look down her shirt!"'
 		'"Man, you''re so full of shit!"'
 	elseif chat_rand = 36:
-		'"I hear Anushka and Alyona sometimes like to run around the school naked after hours."'
-		'"Really? They are so hot, maybe I should hang around school for a while before going home."'
+		'"I heard that Anushka and Alyona sometimes like to run around the school naked after lessons are over."'
+		'"Really? They are so hot! Maybe I should hang around school for a while before going home."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 37:
 		'"I heard Lariska sometimes does a striptease for the jocks after school."'
 		'"Really? God they are so lucky, I wish I was athletic enough to try out for sports, lucky bastards, they get all the girls."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 38:
 		'"I went to see my cousin in Moscow this weekend and we were talking about girls."'
 		'"So what''s new about that, that is all you guys talk about."'
-		'"Yeah, I know, but he was saying that when he stayed here a couple of weeks this summer that, things are different here."'
+		'"Yeah, I know, but he was told me that when he stayed here a couple of weeks this summer, noticed that things are different here."'
 		'"Different? Different how?"'
 		'"Well, he said Pavlovsk is like living in a porn movie or video game. That Moscow is nothing like this."'
 		'The second boy laughs. "More like the girls there see through his bullshit and don''t give him play."'
-		'"Yeah, maybe, but I don''t know. The girls are just different there. I mean, normally it isn''t too hard to find a girl that will let you fuck her, but they are a lot more resistant."'
+		'"Yeah, maybe, but I don''t know. The girls are just different there. I mean, normally it isn''t too hard to find a girl that will let you fuck her, but they are a lot more resistant there."'
 		'"Well, what do you expect? It''s Moscow, they are obsessed with being all prime and proper. Moscow is just boring, it''s not us that are different, but them."'
 		'"Hmm yeah, you''re most likely right, but man it would be fun to live in a porn movie or video game though, wouldn''t it?"'
 		'"Fuck yeah it would!"'

locations/pod_ezd.qsrc

@@ -682,16 +682,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_ev3':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/stairs/event/sex/sex_ev3_6.jpg"></center>'
 						'When they''re both close to orgasming, they tell you to get on your knees.'
 						'The older guy orders you: "Take it all in your mouth, slut. Don''t swallow it until we tell you to."'
-						'You nod, just as the first guy is shooting his sperm all over your face. You do your best to catch as much of it as you can in your mouth, and seconds later the second guy follows. You open mouth to the guys, showing them your cum coated mouth. After about a minute of this the older one smirks to the younger buy and then gives you the nod to swallow their cum.'
+						'You nod, just as the first guy is shooting his sperm all over your face. You do your best to catch as much of it as you can in your mouth, and seconds later the other guy makes the same. You open mouth to the guys, showing them your cum coated mouth. After about a minute of this the older one smirks to the younger buy and then gives you the nod to swallow their cum.'
 						'The older one shoos you away: "Good job, slut. You can go now, we''re done here."'
-						'You quickly gather your things and leave before they decide to come back for seconds.'
+						'You quickly gather your things up and leave before they change their mind to come back for a second round.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
-end
+end 
 
 !mini game events on 2 floor
 !boys smoking

locations/skverdin.qsrc

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ $d_pp_bj = {
 		parkslut += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/ppbj.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your lips wrapped around a hard <<dick>>cm cock, and you suck it carefully feeling his tongue and lips.'
+		'You wrap your lips wrapped around his hard <<dick>>cm cock, and suck it carefully feeling it with your tongue and lips.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		tiprand = rand(1, 100)
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ $d_pp_bj = {
 			dynamic $d_pp_sex
 			dynamic $d_pp_bjcum
 		else
-			'You chustvuete stiffen cock, it seems he is ready is about to finish'
+			'You feel his cock stiffen, it seems he is already about to finish'
 			dynamic $d_pp_hjcum
 			dynamic $d_pp_bjcum
 		end
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ $d_pp_bjcum = {
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/ppbjcum.jpg"></center>'
-		'You continued to suck and less than a minute as a member became razryazhatsya your mouth seed, Sperm were so many, that part of it poured on your lips and mouth .'
+		'You continue to suck and in less than a minute his member bursts filling your mouth with seed. The sperm is so much, that part of it drips out on your lips and chin .'
 		dynamic $d_pp_goend
 	end
 }
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ $d_pp_goend = {
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/park/sex/ppendno.jpg"></center>'
 		end
 
-		'You began to brush up. <<$boydesc>> pretty buttoned pants "Well pokeda <<$pcs_nickname>>, I still have things, can be seen as a."'
+		'You began to brush up. <<$boydesc>> has already buttoned his pants "Well, catch you around <<$pcs_nickname>>, I still have things to do now, hope to see you again."'
 
 		act 'Leave':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'