[text edit] Tidy up and some corrections for bio-dad history from nutluck

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -287,7 +287,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about the time you saw her in the back room of the cafe with her boss. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> got noticeably pale and sat down on a stool. With her head cast down in shame, she softly asks: "And what exactly did you see?", hoping you didn''t see anything too bad.'
-				'You tell her about how you saw her on her knees deepthroating her boss, and then getting roughly fucked from behind. You decide to leave out the part about how she willingly licked him clean and seemed to be very much into it, when you notice the distraught look on her face. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sits on the stool, speechless. After carefully mulling over her words at least a dozen times in her mind, she confesses: "Well yes, I sleep with Slava. Times are tough, you know? I really need that job and he likes me. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>, don''t try to blackmail me. If any of this comes out, it would destroy our family."'
+				'You tell her about how you saw her on her knees deepthroating her boss, and then getting roughly fucked from behind. You decide to leave out the part about how she willingly licked him clean and seemed to be very much into it, when you notice the distraught look on her face.'
+				*nl
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sits on the stool, speechless. After carefully mulling over her words at least a dozen times in her mind, she confesses: "Well yes, I sleep with Slava. Times are tough, you know? I really need that job and he likes me. But please <<$pcs_nickname>>, don''t try to blackmail me. If any of this comes out, it would destroy our family."'
 				'You''ve never seen your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> this devastated before. She''s really afraid of the consequences. You understand and nod reassuringly. "Don''t worry <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, your secret is safe with me." She smiles at you gratefully and returns to what she was doing.'
 
 				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $loc_arg
@@ -421,20 +423,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 			if $loc = 'kuhrPar':
 				if npc_rel['A29'] < 80:
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+					'You have no memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
 					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about him, it brings back too many bad memories. Just know that Vladimir, your stepfather, raised you and Anya as if they were his own daughters."'
 				else
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+					'You have no memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
 					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies. "I have no idea where Mikhail is and what he does now, I haven''t seen him in many years. We went to the same school when we were young, and were dating back then... nothing serious. Things weren''t great between us, but then I got pregnant with your sister Anya. Our parents forced us to get married. We tried to make the most of it, and for a while things didn''t seem so bad. A few months after I had you, we got into a huge argument though. We decided we couldn''t live together any more, and got divorced." You can''t help but notice she won''t tell you what the argument was about, but you don''t interrupt her. It''s rare enough to get her to talk about your real father as it is.'
+					*nl
 					'"A year later I married Vladimir, your stepfather. We had Kolka together, but Vladimir always treated you and Anya as if they were his own daughters too. He looked after you, bathed you, told you stories at night and took you for walks whenever he could." Those memories seem to have cheered her up, and she has a serene smile on her face. "Vladimir really is a wonderful man..." she adds, while you thank her for the story.'
 				end
 			else
 				if npc_rel['A29'] < 80:
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> watching TV you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+					'You have no memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> watching TV you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
 					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about him, it brings back too many bad memories. Just know that Vladimir, your stepfather, raised you and Anya as if you were his own daughters."'
 				else
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> watching TV you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+					'You have no memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> watching TV you decide to ask. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
 					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies. "I have no idea where Mikhail is and what he does now, I haven''t seen him in many years. We went to the same school when we were young, and were dating back then... nothing serious. Things weren''t great between us, but then I got pregnant with your sister Anya. Our parents forced us to get married. We tried to make the most of it, and for a while things didn''t seem so bad. A few months after I had you, we got into a huge argument though. We decided we couldn''t live together any more, and got divorced." You can''t help but notice she won''t tell you what the argument was about, but you don''t interrupt her. It''s rare enough to get her to talk about your real father as it is.'
+					*nl
 					'"A year later I married Vladimir, your stepfather. We had Kolka together, but Vladimir always treated you and Anya as if you were his own daughters too. He looked after you, bathed you, told you stories at night and took you for walks whenever he could." Those memories seem to have cheered her up, and she has a serene smile on her face. "Vladimir really is a wonderful man..." she adds, while you thank her for the story.'
 				end
 			end
@@ -454,8 +458,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, what were your parents like?"'
 					'She stops what she''s doing and turns to you, clearly surprised by your question. "Where''s this coming from so suddenly?"'
 					'"I''m just curious. Do you remember them at all?"'
+					*nl
 					'<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sighs, leaning back against the counter. "It was a long time ago, but I still remember a little. My mother died giving birth to me, so the most I knew of her was from photos and keepsakes she left for me. She was a very beautiful woman. Grandmother said she always dressed in colorful, flowing skirts. She caught the eye of quite a few men, before she met my father and fell in love. When I look at you, I see a little of her in your features, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					'"As for my father, I lived with him until I was four. I don''t remember that much about him, but I do recall he was a tall, solid man. With a big bushy beard, and very blue eyes." She smiles, wistfully. "He was very gentle, too, and smiled a lot. He would take me for walks in the flower fields after he got home from work, hoisting me up on his shoulders wherever the grass grew too tall. Then, at night, he''d sit by the fire smoking his pipe and reading the paper, while I played until bedtime. He called me Zvonochek and I called him Papulia."'
+					*nl
 					'These memories are old and scant, but your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s eyes sparkle and dance as she recalls them, almost as if she''d been transported back to that time. It''s strange to see her like this, considering the expressions you''re more used to her having, and you find yourself openly staring.'
 					'"Like many men at the time, he eventually got called to war. I don''t remember anything beyond him being there one day, and seeing him driving off in the back of a truck the next." She stops and thinks for a moment, eyes dimming. "Sometime I''m not even sure I remember that much, or if my mind has filled in the gaps over time. I do recall missing him terribly, and often wishing my grandfather would hoist me on his shoulders like Papulia did." She swallows. "He never came back home. Grandmother told me that they said he was taken prisoner by the Afghans and died in their camp, but his body was never found."'
 					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> turns back around and starts wiping the countertop again. You''re not sure if she''s crying or not, but she doesn''t turn around as she says "now, let''s not talk about that anymore."'
@@ -465,8 +471,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, what were your parents like?"'
 					'She stops watching and turns to you, clearly surprised by your question. "Where''s this coming from so suddenly?"'
 					'"I''m just curious. Do you remember them at all?"'
+					*nl
 					'<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sighs, leaning back against the counter. "It was a long time ago, but I still remember a little. My mother died giving birth to me, so the most I knew of her was from photos and keepsakes she left for me. She was a very beautiful woman. Grandmother said she always dressed in colorful, flowing skirts. She caught the eye of quite a few men, before she met my father and fell in love. When I look at you, I see a little of her in your features, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					'"As for my father, I lived with him until I was four. I don''t remember that much about him, but I do recall he was a tall, solid man. With a big bushy beard, and very blue eyes." She smiles, wistfully. "He was very gentle, too, and smiled a lot. He would take me for walks in the flower fields after he got home from work, hoisting me up on his shoulders wherever the grass grew too tall. Then, at night, he''d sit by the fire smoking his pipe and reading the paper, while I played until bedtime. He called me Zvonochek and I called him Papulia."'
+					*nl
 					'These memories are old and scant, but your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s eyes sparkle and dance as she recalls them, almost as if she''d been transported back to that time. It''s strange to see her like this, considering the expressions you''re more used to her having, and you find yourself openly staring.'
 					'"Like many men at the time, he eventually got called to war. I don''t remember anything beyond him being there one day, and seeing him driving off in the back of a truck the next." She stops and thinks for a moment, eyes dimming. "Sometime I''m not even sure I remember that much, or if my mind has filled in the gaps over time. I do recall missing him terribly, and often wishing my grandfather would hoist me on his shoulders like Papulia did." She swallows. "He never came back home. Grandmother told me that they said he was taken prisoner by the Afghans and died in their camp, but his body was never found."'
 					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> turns back and starts watching TV again. "Let''s not talk about that anymore," she says, her voice sounding a bit strained.'
@@ -619,6 +627,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pharmacy.jpg"></center>'
 						'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
 						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to go to the pharmacy, to get some medicine. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s sister, Lyudmila, works there and always gives your family the medicine you need for free. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gave you a list of the items you need, and when you enter the pharmacy you see your aunt Luda behind the counter as always. She smiles when she recognizes you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! How are you? I hope everything is okay?"'
+						*nl
 						'"Hello aunt!" You greet her back, and have a chat with her before you give her list your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> made. Aunt Luda quickly gathers the items your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> wrote down, gathers them in a paper bag and hands the bag over to you. "Here you go, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Have a nice day, tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I said hi!"'
 						'You say you will and wave her goodbye. When you come home, you give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> the bag. After a few minutes you realize you forgot to pass on aunt Luda''s regards to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but decide to not bother now.'
 					else
@@ -930,6 +939,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoPregReact':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 			'You tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> you''re pregnant. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gasps and nearly falls on the ground, managing to sit down on a stool right on time. Tears are slowly forming in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, oh no... I was afraid this would happen... Why did this happen..."'
 			'She stares at you for a good ten seconds through her tears, trying to think of what to say next. She then realizes that you need her to be on your side, and remembered how difficult it was for her when she was in your situation. "I know it will be difficult, but you must have this child <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you have an abortion now, it will be much more difficult to have children in the future. You can''t risk ending up barren, do you understand?"'
+			*nl
 			'You stare blankly at her as she reacts with no emotion on your face. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face becomes more worried.'
 			'"Sweetie, we''ll get through this together", she reassures you, hugging you. Despite her supportive attitude, you can tell she''s very disappointed in you. You''ll have to put in some work if you want to get back on her good side.'
 			'"So, who''s the father?"'
@@ -972,6 +982,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> you''re pregnant. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gasps and nearly falls on the ground, managing to sit down on a stool right on time. Tears are slowly forming in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, oh no... I was afraid this would happen... Why did this happen..."'
 				'She stares at you for a good ten seconds through her tears, trying to think of what to say next. She then realizes that you need her to be on your side, and remembered how difficult it was for her when she was in your situation. "I know it will be difficult, but you must have this child <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you have an abortion now, it will be much more difficult to have children in the future. You can''t risk ending up barren, do you understand?"'
+				*nl
 				'You''re not quite sure about that just yet, but you see the concern on her face and figure the best thing you can do right now is just nod and give her a hug. "I understand, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... is it okay if I come to you for advice from time to time?"'
 				'"Of course you can sweetie, we''ll get through this together", she reassures you, returning your hug. Despite her supportive attitude, you can tell she''s very disappointed in you. You''ll have to put in some work if you want to get back on her good side.'
 				'"So, who''s the father?"'
@@ -992,6 +1003,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> you''re pregnant. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gasps and nearly falls on the ground, managing to sit down on a stool right on time. Tears are slowly forming in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, oh no... I was afraid this would happen... Why did this happen..."'
 				'She stares at you for a good ten seconds through her tears, trying to think of what to say next. She then realizes that you need her to be on your side, and remembered how difficult it was for her when she was in your situation. "I know it will be difficult, but you must have this child <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you have an abortion now, it will be much more difficult to have children in the future. You can''t risk ending up barren, do you understand?"'
+				*nl
 				'You''re not quite sure about that just yet, but you see the concern on her face and figure the best thing you can do right now is just nod and give her a hug. "I understand, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... is it okay if I come to you for advice from time to time?"'
 				'"Of course you can sweetie, we''ll get through this together", she reassures you, returning your hug. Despite her supportive attitude, you can tell she''s very disappointed in you. You''ll have to put in some work if you want to get back on her good side.'
 
@@ -1030,6 +1042,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> you''re pregnant. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> eyes widen and tears are slowly forming in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, again? You will ruin your life, why..."'
 				'She stares at you for a good ten seconds through her tears, trying to think of what to say next. She then realizes that you need her to be on your side. "You must have this child <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you have an abortion now, it will be much more difficult to have children in the future. This has to be the last though, do you understand?"'
+				*nl
 				'You''re not quite sure about that just yet, but you see the concern on her face and figure the best thing you can do right now is just nod and give her a hug. "I understand, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>..."'
 				'"We''ll get through this together", she reassures you, returning your hug. Despite her supportive attitude, you can tell she''s very disappointed in you. You''ll have to put in some work if you want to get back on her good side.'
 				'"So, who''s the father?"'
@@ -1050,6 +1063,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 				'You tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> you''re pregnant. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> eyes widen and tears are slowly forming in her eyes. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, again? You will ruin your life, why..."'
 				'She stares at you for a good ten seconds through her tears, trying to think of what to say next. She then realizes that you need her to be on your side. "You must have this child <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you have an abortion now, it will be much more difficult to have children in the future. This has to be the last though, do you understand?"'
+				*nl
 				'You''re not quite sure about that just yet, but you see the concern on her face and figure the best thing you can do right now is just nod and give her a hug. "I understand, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>..."'
 				'"We''ll get through this together", she reassures you, returning your hug. Despite her supportive attitude, you can tell she''s very disappointed in you. You''ll have to put in some work if you want to get back on her good side.'
 
@@ -1119,6 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact1':
 		'"What? Are you okay? Why did''t you tell me sooner?"'
 		'"I was scared and ashamed and I didn''t know how you would react." Your lip quivers as tears begin to flow down your face. "I''m sorry. I should have said something."'
 		'"No, it''s not your fault." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> tries her best to comfort you, giving you a hug and speaking in the most calming voice she can manage. "I know it''s difficult, but please try to tell me what happened."'
+		*nl
 		'You do your best to make up a convincing story while also trying to act convincingly. You can''t seem to keep all of the details of your story consistent, but your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> seems to write off your mistakes as the result of stress. You also manage to make most of your crying convincing, secretly thinking to yourself that your show would make trained actors jealous.'
 		'"Oh sweetheart, I''m so sorry. I''m right here with you. We''ll get through this together," she says as she wipes your fake tears from your eyes.'
 
@@ -1141,6 +1156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact1':
 		'"What? Are you okay? Why did''t you tell me sooner?"'
 		'"I was scared and ashamed and I didn''t know how you would react." Your lip quivers as tears begin to flow down your face. "I''m sorry. I should have said something earlier."'
 		'"No, it''s not your fault." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> tries her best to comfort you, giving you a hug and speaking in the most calming voice she can manage. "I know it''s difficult, but please try to tell me what happened."'
+		*nl
 		'You do your best to make up a convincing story while also trying to act convincingly. You can''t seem to keep all of the details of your story consistent, but your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> seems to write off your mistakes as the result of stress. You also manage to make most of your crying convincing, secretly thinking to yourself that your show would make trained actors jealous.'
 		'"Oh sweetheart, I''m so sorry. Don''t worry, I''ll stand right by your side. We''ll get through this together." she says as she wipes your fake tears from your eyes.'
 
@@ -1165,6 +1181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact1':
 			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you skeptically, but seeing as you are actually freaking out, she quickly hugs you.'
 			'"It will be all right, pumpkin, we will figure it out." She hugs you a bit, then pushes you back a bit and asks you with a frown.'
 			'"Did any of the boys... release on you? On your tummy or pussy?"'
+			*nl
 			'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>!!!" you yell, with a bit of histerical laugh in your voice.'
 			'"All right, I had to ask," she says, hugging you again. A bit later she whispers in your ear. "You know, it will not be that bad. You will be still young when your child grows up. You can even go to parties with her. Or him. Whatever. And I will be the awesome hot grandma."'
 			'The image conjured by that thought makes you giggle a bit. Maybe it will not be that bad.'
@@ -1201,6 +1218,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreact1':
 					'"What? Are you okay? Why did''t you tell me sooner?"'
 					'"I was scared and ashamed and I didn''t know how you would react." Your lip quivers as tears begin to flow down your face. "I''m sorry. I should have said something."'
 					'"No, it''s not your fault." Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> tries her best to comfort you, giving you a hug and speaking in the most calming voice she can manage. "I know it''s difficult, but please try to tell me what happened."'
+					*nl
 					'"Through your tears you recount the events of your rape to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, stopping several times as your sobbing prevented you from speaking. Every time you paused your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> did her best to comfort you before encouraging to continue. After some time, you finally manage to finish your story.'
 					'"Oh sweetheart, I''m so sorry. I''m right here with you. We''ll get through this together," she says as she wipes the tears from your eyes.'
 					'"Thank you. I''m so glad I can always count on you." The two of you then share a warm embrace.'
@@ -1223,6 +1241,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		'Kolka tries to speak up. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, <<$pcs_nickname>>-"'
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> quickly cuts him off. "Kolka, shut the fuck up and go to the living room. I''ll deal with you later."'
 		'He shuffles out of the room, stopping in the doorway for a moment to look at you sympathetically.'
+		*nl
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> releases your hair as tears begin to stream down your face.'
 		'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m s-"'
 		'She slaps you hard across the face before you can finish the sentence.'
@@ -1238,6 +1257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		'Before you can even finish the second syllable of your brother''s name, you see the rage building in your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face. She balls her fists and visibly shakes, making it clear that she is using all of her strength to stop herself from transferring that strength from her open palm to your face... '
 		'When she finally speaks, it''s through gritted teeth, and she just says "Get out."'
 		'You stare at her dumbfounded, unsure where she expects you to go.'
+		*nl
 		'Your brother tries to speak up in your defense, but as the first letter rolls off his tongue, a quick glare from your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shuts him down. She shifts her gaze back from your brother to you before growling'
 		'"Why are you still here?"'
 		'"Where am I supposed to go?" you manage to ask through quivering lips, tears welling in your eyes.'
@@ -1253,11 +1273,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		'Kolka follows your example.'
 		'"How could you?" She gasps. "What were you thinking?"'
 		'You start to reply before your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> cuts you off.'
+		*nl
 		'"It doesn''t matter; you can''t stay here. You have to leave."'
 		'Your brother grabs your hand before rising to your defense. "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, that''s not fair. You can’t just kick <<$pcs_nickname>> out."'
 		'"Kolka, sweetheart. Let go of your sister''s hand right now and shut up. Now is not the time."'
 		'Your brother reluctantly releases your hand, and in that moment you want nothing more than to feel the warmth of his skin against yours again. His hand''s departure from your own makes you feel more alone and terrified than you ever have.'
 		'Still, you can''t fault Kolka for that. There isn''t much else he could have done in that situation. If you survive this, you fully intend to reward your brother for his moment of bravery.'
+		*nl
 		'Your eyes well with tears that begin to stream down past your quivering lips.'
 		'"Where am I supposed to go?"'
 		'"I don''t know, but you can''t stay here."'
@@ -1271,6 +1293,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 	elseif npc_rel['A29'] < 60 and (npc_pregtalk['A34'] = 0 or brothersecret = 1):
 		'As soon as your brother''s name crosses your lips, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face visibly reddens. Her mouth curls into a snarl and she reaches up and grips you by your hair. '
 		'"What the fuck is wrong with you?" she screams in your face. "I knew you were a worthless whore, but this? Even I didn''t think you’d go so far as to try corrupting your brother, too."'
+		*nl
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> releases your hair as tears begin to stream down your face.'
 		'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m s-"'
 		'She slaps you hard across the face before you can finish the sentence.'
@@ -1286,6 +1309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		'Before you can even finish the second syllable of your brother''s name, you see the rage building in your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face. She balls her fists and visibly shakes, making it clear that she is using all of her strength to stop herself from transferring that strength from her open palm to your face... '
 		'When she finally speaks, it''s through gritted teeth, and she just says "Get out."'
 		'You stare at her dumbfounded, unsure where she expects you to go.'
+		*nl
 		'"Why are you still here?"'
 		'"Where am I supposed to go?" you manage to ask through quivering lips, tears welling in your eyes.'
 		'"I don''t care, just get out of my sight. You''re not welcome here anymore."'
@@ -1300,6 +1324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactbrother':
 		'"How could you?" She gasps. "What were you thinking?"'
 		'You start to reply before you <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> cuts you off.'
 		'"It doesn''t matter; you can''t stay here. You have to leave."'
+		*nl
 		'Your eyes well with tears that begin to stream down past your quivering lips.'
 		'"Where am I supposed to go?"'
 		'"I don''t know, but you can''t stay here?"'
@@ -1321,14 +1346,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'"What the fuck is wrong with you?" she screams in your face. "I know you are a worthless whore, but this? Even I didn''t think you''d stoop this low as seducting your own step-father... What kind of sick people are you two?"'
 		'Vladimir begins clearing his throat, "Honey, <<$pcs_nickname>> and I-"'
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> furiously cuts him off. "Vladimir, shut the fuck up right now... You''re already on a thin line, I can''t even look at you right now... I don''t care where you go, but you need to leave before I hurt the both of you... I''ll deal with you later."'
+		*nl
 		'Knowing he''s in deep trouble, he hurries out of the room, only to stop by the doorway as he looks at you sympathetically for a moment...'
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets go of your hair as tears begin to stream down your face.'
-		*nl
 		'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m s-"'
 		'You feel a hard slap across the face before you even begin explaining yourself.'
 		'"I don''t care what you have to say, there''s nothing that makes this okay. I... I can''t deal with you anymore. I want you out of this apartment right now! I don''t ever want to see you or that filthy child you''re bearing ever here again!"'
-		'You panic a little as you think that she won''t go through it, throwing you to fend on your own.'
 		*nl
+		'You panic a little as you think that she won''t go through it, throwing you to fend on your own.'
 		'You try to reason with her, "But..."'
 		'"Get! Out!" she abruptly cuts you off.'
 		if SchoolAtestat = 0:
@@ -1377,14 +1402,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pregreactstepdad':
 		'"What the fuck is wrong with you?" she screams in your face. "I know you are a worthless whore, but this? Even I didn''t think you''d stoop this low as seducting your own step-father... What kind of sick people are you two?"'
 		'Vladimir begins clearing his throat, "Honey, <<$pcs_nickname>> and I-"'
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> furiously cuts him off. "Vladimir, shut the fuck up right now... You''re already on a thin line, I can''t even look at you right now... I don''t care where you go, but you need to leave before I hurt the both of you... I''ll deal with you later."'
+		*nl
 		'Knowing he''s in deep trouble, he hurries out of the room, only to stop by the doorway as he looks at you sympathetically for a moment...'
 		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets go of your hair as tears begin to stream down your face.'
-		*nl
 		'"<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m s-"'
 		'You feel a hard slap across the face before you even begin explaining yourself.'
 		'"I don''t care what you have to say, there''s nothing that makes this okay. I... I can''t deal with you anymore. I want you out of this apartment right now! I don''t ever want to see you or that filthy child you''re bearing ever here again!"'
-		'You panic a little as you think that she won''t go through it, throwing you to fend on your own.'
 		*nl
+		'You panic a little as you think that she won''t go through it, throwing you to fend on your own.'
 		'You try to reason with her, "But..."'
 		'"Get! Out!" she abruptly cuts you off.'
 		if SchoolAtestat = 0:
@@ -1903,6 +1928,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'condom_find':
 							'You look at her with a straight face and begin to lie, "No, I haven''t had sex! I remember all the talks we had and I would never do anything to break your trust." you confidently reply.'
 							'"Okay, so who did it then?! Who stole the condoms?!" your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks.'
 							'You shrug your shoulders, "I don''t know, might have been Anya... She''s been having Roma over all the time and maybe she needed them... I don''t know, all I know is that they''re not mine!"'
+							*nl
 							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> looks at you, talling you up from head to toe, "Well then if it really is your sister that''s been stealing them you won''t mind going to the doctors for a check up then? Since I don''t really buy your story."'
 							'Deep into your lie and being your only way out you agree to go and get checked, "Fine, I''ll go get checked and then I expect an apology from you when we get the results!"'
 							'"Oh you''ll get an apology if you pass the test..." your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> replies, "But until then I''m keeping you on a short leash..."'