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@@ -785,52 +785,50 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
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'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/school_run.jpg"></center>'
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if curr_home = 2:
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if npc_rel['A34'] > 50:
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- 'You hear your name and turn to find Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>>... <<$pcs_nickname>> you won!" Kolka shouts running towards you with a huge grin. He crashes into you and gives you a big hug.'
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+ 'You hear your name and turn to see Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>>... <<$pcs_nickname>> you won!" Kolka shouts while running towards you with a huge grin. He crashes into you and gives you a tight hug.'
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'"Hey, how''s my favourite brother? Thanks for coming, I wasn''t aware you knew I was running."'
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- 'Kolka still grinning replies "Hey didn''t you think I spotted you doing all those laps when the school was closed and training at the community center. You''re always out wearing your sports gear and carying that water bottle so clearly not just meeting friends!"'
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+ 'Kolka, still grinning, replies "Hey, you didn''t think I spotted you doing all those laps when the school was closed and training at the community center? You''re always out wearing your sports gear and carrying that water bottle, so you''re clearly not just meeting friends!"'
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else
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- 'You hear your name and turn to find Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you won well done."'
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+ 'You hear your name and turn to find Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you won! Well done."'
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'"Hi Kolka. Thanks for coming, I wasn''t aware you knew I was running."'
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- '"Yeah well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asked me to keep an eye out on what you were doing always out in your sports gear with that water bottle so I asked the coach."'
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+ '"Yeah, well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asked me to keep an eye out on what you were doing since you''re always out in your sports gear with that water bottle, so I asked the coach."'
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end
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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act 'Continue':
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*clr & cla
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menu_off = 1
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- 'At this point Sveta sees her <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and stepdad approaching.'
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+ 'At this point, you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and stepfather approaching.'
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if npc_rel['A29'] > 50:
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- 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> approaches you and gives you a big hug. "I know we''ve had our differences but I only want the best for you. I''m so proud of you. Why didn''t you say something"?'
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+ 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> approaches you and gives you a hug. "I know we''ve had our differences, but I only want the best for you. I''m so proud of you. Why didn''t you say something?"'
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if npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
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- 'You see Anya coming over a little way behind Kolka. "Go girl! Well done. Hey sis you should have told me about this during our nightly chats." She comes over and gives you a big hug.'
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+ 'You see Anya coming over behind Kolka. "Go girl! Well done. You should have told me about this during our nightly chats." She comes over and gives you a hug.'
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else
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- 'You see Anya coming over a little way behind Kolka. "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. Ummm... Why didn''t you say something, maybe in the evenings before bed that way we''d get to know each other better?"'
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+ 'You see Anya coming over behind Kolka. "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. Ummm... Why didn''t you say something, maybe in the evenings before bed? That way we''d get to know each other better?"'
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'"Thanks Anya and umm... well you''re always reading and I didn''t want to disturb you... Sorry."'
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- '"Hey, don''t worry about it. As said well done but I''d be interested to hear what''s going on with you so don''t worry about disturbing be."'
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- '"Ok thanks Anya... I''ll try." You give her a hug.'
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+ '"Hey, don''t worry about it. As I said well done, but I''d be interested to hear what''s going on with you so don''t worry about disturbing me."'
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+ '"Okay, thanks Anya... I''ll try." You give her a hug.'
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end
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-
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- 'Your stepdad now joins the conversation. "Come on Sveta get showered and changed and we''ll meet you outside the changing rooms."'
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- '"You don''t have to I know money is tight and anyway I''m already so happy you all took the time to come and support me, it means a lot."'
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- '"No I insist. I''ve talked about this with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she agrees. It''s not often we get the chance to do something like this and we think that some quality family time would be good for all of us."'
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+
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+ 'Your stepfather now joins the conversation. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, get showered and changed and we''ll meet you outside. We''re all going out for dinner to celebrate."'
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+ '"You don''t have to! I know money is tight and I''m already so happy you all took the time to come and support me. It means a lot."'
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+ '"No, I insist. I''ve talked about this with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she agrees. It''s not often we get the chance to do something like this and we think that some quality family time would be good for all of us."'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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- act 'Go take your shower':
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+ act 'Go for a shower':
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*clr & cla
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- 'After showering and changing you head out and greet the family who all head out.'
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+ 'After showering and changing, you head out and greet the family.'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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act 'Go to a restaurant':
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*clr & cla
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'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/restaurant_family.jpg"></center>'
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- 'At a local restaurant [Del Parco] you all spend a lovely couple of hours enjoying your meal and the family providing you with encouragement to continue and improve but stressing that they are very proud of what you''ve achieved so far.'
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- 'Your dad orders some wine and although your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives him a disapproving look he gives you a glass so you can toast your victory.'
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- 'At the end of a very enjoyable meal and some quality family time you thank them again for their kindness and acknowledge that you really appreciate this as you know that money is tight.'
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- 'At the end of the meal there''s a big family hug and you all return home.'
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-
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+ 'At the local Del Parco restaurant, you all spend a few hours enjoying your meal as your family encourage you to continue and improve, but stressing that they are very proud of what you''ve achieved so far.'
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+ 'Your stepfather orders some wine and although your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives him a disapproving look, he gives you a glass so you can toast your victory.'
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+ 'At the end of a very enjoyable meal and some quality family time, you thank them again for their kindness and acknowledge that you really appreciate this as you know that money is tight. There''s a big family hug and you all return home.'
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minut += 90
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gs 'stat'
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@@ -838,38 +836,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
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end
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end
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else
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- '"Sveta you won! Well done!" your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shouts approaching you.'
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- '"Thanks and thanks for coming too."'
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- 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> replies "I know that we have our differnces but I haven''t stopped caring about you and I asked Kolka to let me know if he saw you around as I kept seeing you heading out in your sports gear with your waterbottle and wondered what you were doing as clearly not just seeing friends."'
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- 'You are a little lost for words so your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues "He told me he''s seen you running at the track when the school was closed and training at the community centre so I asked the coach. Anyway I''m so proud of you and why didn''t you say something?"'
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- 'When you don''t answer your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues "Come on Sveta get showered and changed and I''ll meet you outside the changing rooms." Anya and Kolka give you a friendly wave and leave.'
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+ '"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you won! Well done!" your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shouts as she approaches.'
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+ '"Thanks. And thanks for coming too."'
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+ '"I know that we have our differnces, but I haven''t stopped caring about you and I asked Kolka to let me know if he saw you around as I kept seeing you heading out in your sports gear with your waterbottle and wondered what you were doing." she replies.'
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+ 'You''re a little lost for words, so your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues. "He told me he''s seen you running at the track when the school was closed and training at the community centre, so I asked the coach. Anyway I''m so proud of you! Why didn''t you say something?"'
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+ 'When you don''t answer, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues. "Come on, get showered and changed and I''ll meet you outside." Anya and Kolka give you a friendly wave and leave.'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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- act 'Go take your shower':
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+ act 'Go for a shower':
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*clr & cla
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- 'After showering and changing you head out and greet your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> "Hi <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, thanks for coming it means a lot to me."'
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- '"Of course I''d come Sveta I just want the best for you and I''m proud of you and your win. Come on lets go out for a bite to eat and I think we need a chat."'
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+ 'After showering and changing, you head out and greet your mother. "Thanks for coming. It means a lot to me."'
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+ '"Of course I''d come <<$pcs_nickname>>! I just want the best for you and I''m proud of you and your win. Come on, let''s go out for a bite to eat. I think we need to have a chat."'
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'"You don''t have to <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m so glad you came and I know money is tight."'
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- '"That''s fine Sveta so long as you don''t mind the station cafe. I want to see if we can''t patch things up between us."'
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+ '"That''s fine, so long as you don''t mind the station cafe. I want to see if we can''t patch things up between us."'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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act 'Go to the cafe':
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*clr & cla
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'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/sveta_mum_restaurant.jpg"></center>'
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- 'At a local restaurant [station cafe] your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> selects a corner spot away from the main area so you can keep your chat private.'
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- 'You both initially have some general smalltalk during which she again congratulates you on your win and explains again that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can but you need to meet her half way.'
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- 'You are initially unsure how to respond but after a while in a very low shaky voice says "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''d love that but why give me such a hard time just because I had sex?"'
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- 'As your feelings start to come to the surface you continue "Yes I had sex but it doesn''t make me a bad person and what gives you the right to immediately treat me like I''m a whore!? I can do the maths, you were 15 when you had Anya and that''s younger than me!"'
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- 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sighs and a tear starts rolling down her cheek as she slowly replies "I know. Maybe I was a bit harsh but I don''t want you repeating my mistakes. I want you to have the chance to go to university and make a better life for yourself."'
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- 'You are getting upset seeing your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> cry and tell her that you''re careful and that you will try your best at school. You also reasure her that you are taking precautions.'
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- 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> responds that she accepts she may have been a bit harsh and apologises for that. She explains again that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can but you need to meet her half way.'
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- 'You reply "OK <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I''ll try and yes it would be great to have my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> back."'
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- 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and comes over to you and you both have a big hug "Thanks Sveta, that''s all I can ask and I''ll try to be more supportive too. Just please talk to me if you''re worried about anything."'
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- 'After the meal and chat you both feel much relieved and emotionally drained but happier.'
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-
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+ 'At the station cafe, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> selects a corner spot away from the main area so you can keep your chat private.'
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+ 'You both initially have some general smalltalk during which she again congratulates you on your win and explains that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can, but you need to meet her half way.'
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+ 'You''re initially unsure how to respond, but after a while in a very low shaky voice, you reply. "I''d love that, but why do you give me such a hard time just because I had sex?"'
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+ 'As your feelings start to come to the surface, you continue. "Yes, I had sex, but it doesn''t make me a bad person! And what gives you the right to immediately treat me like I''m a whore!? I can do the maths, you were 16 when you had Anya! That''s younger than me!"'
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+ *nl
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+ 'Your mother sighs and a tear starts rolling down her cheek as she slowly replies "I know. Maybe I was a bit harsh, but I don''t want you repeating my mistakes. I want you to have the chance to go to university and make a better life for yourself."'
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+ 'You''re getting upset seeing your mother cry and tell her that you''re careful and that you will try your best at school. You also reasure her that you are taking precautions.'
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+ 'Your mother responds that she accepts she may have been a bit harsh and apologises.'
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+ '"Okay <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''ll try and yes it would be great to have my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> back!" you reply.'
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+ *nl
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+ 'Your mother gets up and comes over to hug you. "Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, that''s all I can ask and I''ll try to be more supportive too. Just please talk to me if you''re worried about anything."'
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+ 'After the meal and chat, you both feel relieved and emotionally drained, but happier.'
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npc_rel['A29'] = 50
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minut += 60
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gs 'stat'
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@@ -881,21 +879,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
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end
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else
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if npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
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- 'You hear your sister shout your name and look round.'
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- '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, go girl well done!" She comes over and gives you a big hug. "This calls for a celebration. Lets go for a few beers... You can always burn it off later hehe."'
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- '"Thanks for coming sis, it means a lot."'
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- '"What else girl, I wasn''t going to miss the opportunity and a possible little celebration with my little sis was I?"'
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- '"OK cool, yeah I''m up for that let me go and shower and change first."'
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- '"OK just don''t be too long or I may have to leave without you hehe."'
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+ 'You hear your sister shout your name and look around.'
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+ '"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, go girl well done!" She comes over and gives you a hug. "This calls for a celebration. Lets go for a few beers! You can always burn it off later."'
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+ '"Thanks for coming sis. It means a lot."'
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+ '"I wasn''t going to miss the opportunity and a possible little celebration with my little sis, was I?"'
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+ '"Okay cool. Yeah, I''m up for that. Let me go and shower and change first."'
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+ '"Okay, just don''t be too long or I might just leave without you!"'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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- act 'Go take your shower':
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+ act 'Go for a shower':
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*clr & cla
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menu_off = 1
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- 'A few minutes later you reappear showered and changed and head off to the station cafe'
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-
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- 'You both have a few beers over the next couple of hours and spend the time catching up. Both feeling light headed and more than a little tipsy you both leave the cafe and sharing a hug promise to meet up regularly and catch up. You know that you can see Anya at the community center aroung 5pm on Fridays.'
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+ 'A few minutes later, you reappear showered and changed and head off to the station cafe.'
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+ 'You both have a few beers for the next few hours and spend time catching up. Feeling light headed and more than a little tipsy, you both leave the cafe and share a hug as you promise to meet up regularly and catch up. You know that you can see Anya at the community center on Friday evenings.'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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@@ -910,15 +907,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
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else
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lover_number = 2
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end
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- 'Sveta hears <<$lover[lover_number]>> shout her name and jogs over to meet <<$lover[lover_number]>> and you both embrace with a cuddle and a kiss on the cheek as you''re in public.'
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+ 'You hear <<$lover[lover_number]>> shouting your name and jog over to meet them. You both embrace with a cuddle and a kiss on the cheek.'
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'"Hey love, well done."'
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- '"Thanks and thanks for coming, it means a lot."'
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- '"What do you think eh? Of course I''d come and support you. Now go and get freshened up and we''ll go out, my treat and you choose."'
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- 'You both have another cuddle and you go into the changing rooms to get showerd and change.'
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+ '"Thanks. And thanks for coming, it means a lot."'
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+ '"Of course I''d come and support you. Now go and get freshened up and we''ll go out, my treat and you choose."'
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+ 'You both have another cuddle before you head into the changing rooms to get showered and changed.'
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minut += 4
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act 'Go take your shower':
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*clr & cla
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- 'Rejoining <<$lover[lover_number]>>, you both have a passionate embrace as most folks have gone. <<$lover[lover_number]>> then says "Well done again Sveta, sorry but I have something I have to do that won''t wait. See you soon.'
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+ 'Rejoining <<$lover[lover_number]>>, you both have a passionate embrace as most folks have gone. <<$lover[lover_number]>> then says "Well done again <<$pcs_nickname>>, sorry but I have something I have to do that won''t wait. See you soon."'
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minut += 4
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gs 'stat'
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act 'Go home': minut += 4 & gt 'din_npc', 'go_home'
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