Merge branch 'master' of http://git.tfgamessite.com/LillianL/girllife-ecv

locations/anushapt

@@ -38,9 +38,10 @@ cla
 
 !!this is the text and chances anyone is at Anushka''s apartment.
 if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
-	'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptdoor.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/aptdoor.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walk up to the front door and knock.'
 	if hour > 24:
+		!!LillianL-Is the above if-statement ever true? Can hour be 24 or above, doesn't it loop back to 0? If the intent is to block the door after midnight I suggest skipping this line since it's handled by hour < 8 below anyway. However, looking at the hour intervals in the code below, I'm guessing this was meant to say if hour >= 22 since Maksim answers the door up until that point.
 		'It''s too late in the day to visit Anushka.'
 		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pavComplexb2','etaj_4'
 	elseif hour < 8:
@@ -51,27 +52,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household, hoping Anushka is the one to come and open the door.'
 		'Anushka opens the door smiling, "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Come in."'
 		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway' 
-	elseif (hour >= 15 and hour < 20) or (week > 5 and hour >= 10 and hour < 20):
-		if rand(0,4) = 0:
+	elseif ((hour >= 15 and hour < 20) or (week > 5 and hour >= 10 and hour < 20)) and (rand(0,4) = 0):
 !if the above doesn't happen 1 in 5 chance this happens between the hours of 15:00 to 20:00 during the week or 10:00 to 20:00 on the weekends.
-			*clr & cla
-			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household, knocking on the door. It takes quite a while until someone opens the door at the end it turns out it''s Anushka''s mother.'
-			'The mother glares at you for a while, "Well then don''t just stand there, what do you want? Let me guess you want to see Anushka? Well the little slut isn''t here and I don''t know when she will be back. So why don''t you just go bother someone else." Before you can even get a word in, she closes the door in your face and you can hear the locks click in place. Having no other option you turn to leave.'
-			act 'Move away from the door':gt'pavComplexb2','etaj_4'
-		else
+		*clr & cla
+		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household, knocking on the door. It takes quite a while until someone opens the door at the end it turns out it''s Anushka''s mother.'
+		'The mother glares at you for a while, "Well then don''t just stand there, what do you want? Let me guess you want to see Anushka? Well the little slut isn''t here and I don''t know when she will be back. So why don''t you just go bother someone else." Before you can even get a word in, she closes the door in your face and you can hear the locks click in place. Having no other option you turn to leave.'
+		act 'Move away from the door':gt'pavComplexb2','etaj_4'
+	elseif (hour >= 15 and hour < 22) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour < 22):
 !If neither of the above happens then this happens. If between the hours of 15:00 and 22:00 during the week or 08:00 to 22:00 on the weekends.
-			*clr & cla
-			'You stand outside the Konstantinov household, waiting for Anushka to come and open the door.'
-			'Maksim answers the door. "Anushka''s not home right now, she is probably out sucking some guys dick or something. But if you want you could wait for her in her room."'
+		*clr & cla
+		'You stand outside the Konstantinov household, waiting for Anushka to come and open the door.'
+		'Maksim answers the door. "Anushka''s not home right now, she is probably out sucking some guys dick or something. But if you want you could wait for her in her room."'
+		if maksimDoor = 0:
+		!!LillianL-Created variable maksimDoor to track if Maksim has opened the door before.
 		!!the first time this happens the text below happens.
+			maksimDoor = 1
 			'You are a bit aghast her brother would say that about her. "Why would you tell people that?"'
 			'He looks a bit confused like he doesn''t know what you mean at first then shrugs. "That''s what mom always says when I ask where she is."'
 			'You shake your head not sure what to think, should you wait for her or just go? You can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes and staring straight at your tits.'
+		else
 		!!after the first time this text happens instead.
 			'You shake your head a bit, but there is nothing you can do about it, should you wait for her or just go? You can feel Maksim undressing you with his eyes and staring straight at your tits, as always.'
-			act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway' 
-			act 'Leave':gt'pavComplexb2','etaj_4'
 		end
+		act 'Enter': gt 'anushapt','hallway' 
+		act 'Leave': gt 'pavComplexb2','etaj_4'
 	else
 !!this one happens during school hours during the week or if none of the above happen.
 		'You knock of the door several times but no one answers. No one must be home.'
@@ -85,11 +89,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hallway':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Entrance hall</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/hallway.jpg"></center>'\
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/hallway.jpg"></center>'
+	if anushkaFirstvisit = 0:
+!!LillianL-Created variable anushkaFirstvisit to keep track of if this is the first visit or not.
 !!first time here you get this text
-	'As you enter the Konstantinov household you notice something that''s not quite right, it''s somewhat depressing. The whole aprtment feels strange, you don''t feel the loving feeling that your mother keeps at home. All the doors are closed, but you hear noise from a tv coming from one of the rooms and some yelling from the other one.'
+		anushkaFirstvisit = 1
+		'As you enter the Konstantinov household you notice something that''s not quite right, it''s somewhat depressing. The whole apartment feels strange, you don''t feel the loving feeling that your mother keeps at home. All the doors are closed, but you hear noise from a TV coming from one of the rooms and some yelling from the other one.'
+	else
 !!follow up times you get this.
-	'This is the entrance hall to Anushka''s apartment, it is fairly bare, shoes and some toys are pushed against one wall, leaving just enough room to walk past them. Things seem to be fine on the surface but there is something very off, but you are not sure what. From here you can reach all the other rooms in the house.'
+		'This is the entrance hall of Anushka''s apartment, it is fairly bare, shoes and some toys are pushed against one wall, leaving just enough room to walk past them. Things seem to be fine on the surface but there is something very off, but you are not sure what. From here you can reach all the other rooms in the house.'
+	end
+	
 	act 'Anushka''s Room': gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 	act 'Bathroom': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
 	act 'Anushka''s brother''s room': gt 'anushapt','brotherroom'
@@ -116,53 +126,66 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	$location_type = 'bathroom'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners of the bathroom and the bathroom hasn''t probably been cleaned for some while. The toilet sits along the far wall. There is also a bath tub, with a old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above the bathtub. The latch on the door seems to be broken.'
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'The bathroom has seen better days. There''s some mold in the corners of the bathroom and the bathroom probably hasn''t been cleaned for some while. The toilet sits along the far wall. There is also a bath tub, with a old plastic shower curtain hanging from a rod above the bathtub. The latch on the door seems to be broken.'
 	'You can do your hair and makeup in the <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
 	*nl
     if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
+    
+!!LillianL-Reordered shower events from uneventful->brother->father to father->brother->uneventuful to make it easier to write the if/else statement. I ignored the comment that the brother event would happen in place of a normal shower since the dialogue suggests that a normal shower does in fact take place. Should these events be possible to trigger more than once per day?
 	act 'Take a shower':
 		cls
 		minut += 10
 		dynamic $showerdin
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.gif"></center>'
-		'You take a quick shower.'
-		act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
-!!random event where Anushka's brother is peeking while Sveta takes a shower. 1 in 5 and it takes the place of the shower above.
-		pcs_exhibition += 1
-		'Despite the clattering noise of water, you hear the bathroom door creaking open slightly, you look past the shower curtain and see the bathroom door cracked open. Through the small crack in the doorway, you notice Anushka''s brother Maksim watching you.'
-		act 'Yell at him':
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showergetout.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head. "Get out of here you little pervert!"'
-			'He laughs and then ducks away. You hear Anushka yelling at him, wanting to know what he was doing. During the rest of the shower you hear some more yelling and even a crash before silence.'
-			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
-		end
+		temp = rand(0,4)
+		!!LillianL-Randomise which shower event happens.
+		if ((hour >= 20 and hour < 23) or (week > 5 and hour >= 8 and hour < 16) or (week > 5 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23)) and temp = 0:
+!!between 20:00 and 23:00 during the week, or on the weekends between 08:00 to 16:00 and again from 18:00 and 23:00, there is a 1 in 5 chance this scene happens if Sveta takes a shower.
+			pcs_exhibition += 1
+			'Despite the clattering noise of water, you hear the bathroom door open, you look past the shower curtain and see Eduard walking up to the toilet, unzipping his pants.'
+			act 'Um excuse me?':
+				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showergetout.jpg"></center>'
+				'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head, and you look at him a bit confused.'
+				'He looks up at you when you say something and it takes him a moment to realize who you are. He quickly zips up his pants. "Shit sorry, I thought you was my wife." He turns away and hurries for the door. "I''ll just be going, sorry again." He says as he pulls the door closed. Not sure what to think you finish your shower.'
+				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+			end
+			if pcs_exhibition >= 30:
 !!if exhibition is 30+ then this option shows up.
-		act 'Give him a show':
-			pcs_exhibition += 3
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showershow.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see him and you smile at him, then you pull the curtain wide open, giving him a nice view of your soapy naked body. His eyes get huge and he creeps into the bathroom and pulls the door closed behind him. After a few minutes you notice him pulling out his phone to take a picture. You shake your head at him. "No pictures or I will tell your sister you snuck in here and started taking pictues of me." He doesn''t say anything but gives you a look of mixed disgust, annoyance and fear at mention of his sister.'
-			'He settles in to watch you take a shower and dry off. As you start to get dressed you shoo him out before you finished getting dressed.'
-			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
-		end
-!!between 20:00 and 23:00 during the week, or on the weekends between 08:00 to 16:00 and again from 18:00 and 23:00, there is a 1 inf 5 chance this scene happens if Sveta takes a shower.
-		pcs_exhibition += 1
-		'Despite the clattering noise of water, you hear the bathroom door open, you look past the shower curtain and see Eduard walking up to the toilet, unzipping his pants.'
-		act 'Um excuse me?':
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showergetout.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head, and you look at him a bit confused.'
-			'He looks up at you when you say something and it takes him a moment to realize who you are. He quickly zips up his pants. "Shit sorry, I thought you was my wife." He turns away and hurries for the door. "I''ll just be going, sorry again." He says as he pulls the door closed. Not sure what to think you finish your shower.'
-			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
-		end
+				act 'Give him a show':
+					pcs_exhibition += 3
+					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showershow.jpg"></center>'
+					'You see him and he hasn''t looked over and seen you yet. Then you pull the curtain wide open, giving him a nice view of your soapy naked body. "Is this what you were looking for?" You ask him.'
+					'He is a bit surprised at first. "Sorry I thought you were my wife." Though his eyes roam up and down your naked body, as he pulls out his dick and takes a piss in the toilet. "Don''t mind me, go back to your shower." He adds with a smirk.'
+					'You keep showering with the curtain open, glancing at him, but you notice after his first once over he doesn''t seem to pay you much attention. Once he is done, he washes his hands and leaves, closing the door behind him with out another glance at your naked body. You finish up your shower after that.'
+					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+				end
+			end
+		elseif temp = 1:
+!!random event where Anushka's brother is peeking while Sveta takes a shower. 1 in 5 and it takes the place of the shower above.
+			pcs_exhibition += 1
+			'Despite the clattering noise of water, you hear the bathroom door creaking open slightly, you look past the shower curtain and see the bathroom door cracked open. Through the small crack in the doorway, you notice Anushka''s brother Maksim watching you.'
+			act 'Yell at him':
+				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showergetout.jpg"></center>'
+				'You pull the shower curtain tight against your body to make sure there is nothing for him to see other than your head. "Get out of here you little pervert!"'
+				'He laughs and then ducks away. You hear Anushka yelling at him, wanting to know what he was doing. During the rest of the shower you hear some more yelling and even a crash before silence.'
+				act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+			end
+			if pcs_exhibition >= 30:
 !!if exhibition is 30+ then this option shows up.
-		act 'Give him a show':
-			pcs_exhibition += 3
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showershow.jpg"></center>'
-			'You see him and he hasn''t looked over to see you yet. Then you pull the curtain wide open, giving him a nice view of your soapy naked body. "Is this what you was looking for?" You ask him.'
-			'He is a bit surprised at first. "Sorry I thought you was my wife." Though his eyes roam up and down your naked body, as he pulls out his dick and takes a piss in the toilet. "Don''t mind me, go back to your shower." He adds with a smirk.'
-			'You keep showering with the curtain open, glancing at him, but you notice after his first once over he doesn''t seem to pay you much attention. Once he is done, he washes his hands and leaves, closing the door behind him with out another glance at your naked body. You finish up you shower after that.'
+				act 'Give him a show':
+					pcs_exhibition += 3
+					'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/showershow.jpg"></center>'
+					'You see him and you smile at him, then you pull the curtain wide open, giving him a nice view of your soapy naked body. His eyes get huge and he creeps into the bathroom and pulls the door closed behind him. After a few minutes you notice him pulling out his phone to take a picture. You shake your head at him. "No pictures or I will tell your sister that you snuck in here and started taking pictures of me." He doesn''t say anything but gives you a look of mixed disgust, annoyance and fear at mention of his sister.'
+					'He settles in to watch you take a shower and dry off. As you start to get dressed you shoo him out before you finish getting dressed.'
+					act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
+				end
+			end
+		else
+			!!LillianL-Uneventful shower in over 60% of all cases.
+			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></h4></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.gif"></center>'
+			'You take a quick shower.'
 			act 'Get out of the shower': gt 'anushapt','bathroom'
 		end
 	end
@@ -179,8 +202,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushroom':
 	minut += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/nushroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is surprisingly clean but somewhat dusty. The walls are covered with posters and the lighting is skillfully decorated. In the center of the room, right under the window is a single narrow <a href="exec:gt ''bed'',''anushapt''">bed</a>. Against the opposite wall is a small desk and a chair, with a <a href="exec:gt ''computer'',''anushapt''">laptop computer</a> on it, next to it on the desk sits a decent sized flatscreen tv. Next to the desk is a book shelf with a fairly large collection of books, just below the shelves leaning against the wall rests a couple of guitars, a <a href="exec:gt ''guitar'',''anushapt''">acoustic guitar</a> and a electric guitar. Leaning against one of the walls is a skateboard.'
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/nushroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'The room is surprisingly clean but somewhat dusty. The walls are covered with posters and the lighting is skillfully decorated. In the center of the room, right under the window is a single narrow <a href="exec:gt ''bed'',''anushapt''">bed</a>. Against the opposite wall is a small desk and a chair, with a <a href="exec:gt ''computer'',''anushapt''">laptop computer</a> on it, next to it on the desk sits a decent sized flatscreen TV. Next to the desk is a bookshelf with a fairly large collection of books, just below the shelves leaning against the wall rests a couple of guitars, a <a href="exec:gt ''guitar'',''anushapt''">acoustic guitar</a> and a electric guitar. Leaning against one of the walls is a skateboard.'
 	act 'Leave Anushka''s room': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 end
 
@@ -188,39 +211,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 !!if Anushka is in the room and the first time Sveta clicks the computer.
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/laptop.jpg"></center>'
 	'You point towards the computer. "You''re so lucky having your own computer."'
 	'"I bought it with some of the money I made from our gigs and some modeling work I did in the city. Other than to write songs, look up music, and play some games. I mostly just use it to look up porn when i am feeling horny and want to masturbate. I get so fucking turned on watching it, I just can''t resist playing with myself."'
 	'You''re amazed by how matter of factly she''s says that, like it is the most normal thing in the world to talk about your sex life openly. She is just so carefree. You don''t know if you could ever just tell someone like that, that you watch porn and masturbate. "I wish I was as open and confident as you are, to just say things like that and do them."'
 	'She grins at that and apparently finds it amusing. "Well we can watch porn together if you want, it''s really not a big deal."'
 	'You blush a little at the idea of watching porn with someone else, but there is some appeal to it, but she also mentioned earning money modeling.'
-	act 'Find something else to look at.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
-	act 'Ask about modeling.':
+	act 'Find something else to look at':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+	act 'Ask about modeling':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You perk up at the mention of modeling earning enough to buy a nice laptop like that. "Does modeling really pay that well?"'
-		'She nods a bit. "Yeah, well sorta. I mean if you are willing to do nude modeling you can make a lot in a short amount of time. You interested?" She asks while arching one shapely eybrow.'
+		'She nods a bit. "Yeah, well sorta. I mean if you are willing to do nude modeling you can make a lot in a short amount of time. You interested?" She asks while arching one shapely eyebrow.'
 		'Nude? Still if it pays that much, maybe. "I don''t know, maybe. Where is it?"'
 		'She grins a bit at your reply. "In the city center." She then explains exactly where it is and to let the photographer know she sent you.'
+		!!LillianL-The above needs to be linked to the photographer somehow.
 		act 'Thanks':gt 'anushapt','anushroom':
 		act 'Underaged?':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'Then a thought occurs to you, you''re underaged to do nude modeling but then so is Anushka. "Wait how did you get past the age check?"'
 			'She laughs a bit. "I sometimes forget everyone doesn''t have a fake passport. It is easy to pick one up." She explains the most likely places to catch the guy that sells fake passports. "Once you have that, then no problems at all."'
+			!!LillianL-The player doesn''t necessarily know where to find the passport guy.
 			act 'Thanks':gt 'anushapt','anushroom':
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Agree to watch porn.':
+	act 'Agree to watch porn':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
-		'She grins and then pulls the tv into the laptop and starts some lesbian porno. You can''t help but notice the porno is about two teenager girls having a sleep over in one of their bedrooms. The talk for a bit which quickly leads to them having sex.'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
+		'She grins and then connects the TV to the laptop and starts some lesbian porno. You can''t help but notice the porno is about two teenager girls having a sleep over in one of their bedrooms. They talk for a bit which quickly leads to them having sex.'
 		'You feel yourself getting really aroused watching the porn, then you glance over and notice Anushka has her hand in her panties and her pants around her knees masturbating with you sitting right next to her. You are stunned and look away and at first try to pretend she isn''t doing it, but you keep sneaking peeks at her. If she doesn''t think it is a big deal maybe it isn''t.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'unknown'
 		act 'Leave Anushka''s room': gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 		act 'Just watch':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/watchporn.jpg"></center>'
 			'You do your best to ignore the fact that Anushka is right next to you on the bed masturbating as you watch the porno. Long before it is over Anushka starts moaning, louder and louder until she finally has a orgasm. A few moments later she gets up and pulls her pants back up, then turns the porno off. Then she turns to look at you. "I don''t know about you but I could use a snack. Come on lets go raid the kitchen." She heads out of her room waving you to follow. Not sure what else to do, you get up and follow.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'unknown'
 			act 'Follow': gt 'anushapt','Follow her'
@@ -229,9 +254,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Masturbate as well':
 			pcs_exhibition += 3
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/dualmast.gif"></center>'
-			'You think fuck it, your horny and she doesn''t seem to think it is a big deal. So you start to masturbate as well, at first it is a little hard to get into it, knowing she is right next to you. Soon though you relax and gives into the sensations, you feel your arousal growing and growing. You glance over at her and see her looking at you with a huge grin on her face while you both masturbate, neither of you is really watch the porno and instead just laying back on the bed side by side masturbating.'
-			'Some time goes by and finally you hear Anushka orgasm which is just enough to send you over the edge, you quicken your pace and with in moments a huge orgasm rocks your body. By the time you have fully recovered Anushka has already turn the porno off and is standing there with her pants backup and nods towards the door. "I don''t know about you but I could use a snack. Come on lets go raid the kitchen." She heads out of her room waving you to follow. She is acting like that is completely normal and who knows maybe it is for her. You get up and follower her.'
+			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/dualmast.gif"></center>'
+			'You think fuck it, your horny and she doesn''t seem to think it is a big deal. So you start to masturbate as well, at first it is a little hard to get into it, knowing she is right next to you. Soon though you relax and gives into the sensations, you feel your arousal growing and growing. You glance over at her and see her looking at you with a huge grin on her face while you both masturbate, neither of you is really watching the porno and instead just lay back on the bed side by side masturbating.'
+			'Some time goes by and finally you hear Anushka orgasm which is just enough to send you over the edge, you quicken your pace and with in moments a huge orgasm rocks your body. By the time you have fully recovered Anushka has already turned the porno off and is standing there with her pants back up and nods towards the door. "I don''t know about you but I could use a snack. Come on lets go raid the kitchen." She heads out of her room waving you to follow. She is acting like that is completely normal and who knows maybe it is for her. You get up and follow her.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 50, 'unknown'
 !!add enough arousal so that Sveta for sure has a orgasm since they just masturbate till they each have one.
 			act 'Follow': gt 'anushapt','Follow her'
@@ -244,7 +269,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 !!add in all the normal options you get from using Vasily''s computer. Except porn, which is below.
 	act 'Check her porn':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/usecomp.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/usecomp.jpg"></center>'
 		'You sit in front of the computer. "Maybe I should take a look at what kind of porn Anushka is watching, she won''t mind right?" You think to yourself.'
 		'You start up the computer, it loads quickly faster than what you are use to, it must be a pretty nice computer. Once it is done loading you click on the internet browser and look through her browsing history and bookmarks.'
 		'There are all kinds of porn sites and videos she''s watched. There is a lot of public exhibitionist porn in a variety of different sex acts, the rest is mostly kinky boy girl stuff, some girl dominate, some boy dominate, some anal, a lot of lesbian sex, especially strapon lesbian. As you keep on browsing you feel yourself getting a bit aroused.'
@@ -254,79 +279,85 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 !!This next one only shows up as a option if Anushka is not home.
 		act 'Masturbate':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.gif"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.gif"></center>'
 			'You find one of her porno''s that you like and lean back in the chair and start to masturbate, before long you completely forget that you are in someone else bedroom masturbating to their porn on their laptop.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10, 'unknown'
 			act 'Continue':
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-				'<center><img  src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.gif"></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushcmast.gif"></center>'
 				'You keep rubbing your clit, you can feel your climax building and building. You are sure you are almost there.'
+				temp = rand(0,3)
+				!!LillianL-Randomise which computer event happens.
+				if temp = 0:
 !!chance brother catches you. 1 in 4 chance the following text is added to the text above
-				'Just before you are about to explode you hear someone snickering. Your heart starts pounding with fear and you turn your head and see Maksim standing in the doorway with the door wide open, watching you. Your blood runs cold and you quickly stop and pulls your clothes back in place as you yell at him. "Get our of her you little pervert!"'
-				'He points and laughs at you. "You was jerking off to porn."'
-				'You are in no mood to correct him that girls don''t jerk off and you start to get up. As you turn scarlet red. "Get out of her now or I will tell Anushka!" With that he bolts out the door and down the hall. You quick go over and close the door, but the mood is ruined.'
-				act 'Find something else to do.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+					'Just before you are about to explode you hear someone snickering. Your heart starts pounding with fear and you turn your head and see Maksim standing in the doorway with the door wide open, watching you. Your blood runs cold and you quickly stop and pull your clothes back in place as you yell at him. "Get our of here you little pervert!"'
+					'He points and laughs at you. "You were jerking off to porn."'
+					'You are in no mood to correct him that girls don''t jerk off and you start to get up. As you turn scarlet red. "Get out of her now or I will tell Anushka!" With that he bolts out the door and down the hall. You quick go over and close the door, but the mood is ruined.'
+					act 'Find something else to do':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+				elseif temp = 1:
 !!chance Anushka catches you. if the above doesn''t happen then this follow text can happen 1 in 4 chance
-				'You are so caught up in the moment you never heard the door open or someone walk in behind you. You do feel the slender arms wrap around your shoulders and the hands fondling your breasts. Squeeking loudly you practically jump out of the chair in shock, you turn around to see Anushka cracking up'
-				'You give her a dirty look, which only makes her laugh harder. "You almost scared me to death, that wasn''t funny." Though there is very little real heat in your voice as you are so emberressed, having been caught masturbating. "Sorry about.." You start to say but she waves you to stop.'
-				'"It''s fine, I don''t care if you masturbate in my room while you wait for me, but if you are that horny. I could always help you out with that." She says while licking her upper lip.'
-				act 'No thanks':
-					'You shake your head. "Thanks but you scared the mood right out of me, um how about we just change the subject?" She laughs a bit but doesn''t seem to mind you turning her down, as she flops down on her bed.'
-					act 'Find something else to do.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
-				end
-				act 'Sure':
-					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-					'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile at her as you get up and once you are standing you move close and give her a long passionate kiss, while you are kissing the two of you stumble over to her bed,crawling onto it, as you are caressing each others bodies.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
-					act 'Undress her':
-						npc_rel['A144'] += 3
+					'You are so caught up in the moment you never heard the door open or someone walk in behind you. You suddenly feel slender arms wrap around your shoulders and hands fondling your breasts. Squeeking loudly you practically jump out of the chair in shock, you turn around to see Anushka cracking up'
+					'You give her a dirty look, which only makes her laugh harder. "You almost scared me to death, that wasn''t funny." Though there is very little real heat in your voice as you are so emberressed, having been caught masturbating. "Sorry about—" You start to say but she waves you to stop.'
+					'"It''s fine, I don''t care if you masturbate in my room while you wait for me, but if you are that horny. I could always help you out with that." She says while licking her upper lip.'
+					act 'No thanks':
+						'You shake your head. "Thanks but you scared the mood right out of me, um how about we just change the subject?" She laughs a bit but doesn''t seem to mind you turning her down, as she flops down on her bed.'
+						act 'Find something else to do':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+					end
+					act 'Sure':
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Once in bed you waste no time pulling her clothes off, she returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you wasn''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others bodies. Regardless before long, both of you are naked.'
+						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les1.jpg"></center>'
+						'You smile at her as you get up and once you are standing you move close and give her a long passionate kiss, while you are kissing the two of you stumble over to her bed, crawling onto it, as you are caressing each others bodies.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
-						act 'Get pleasured':
+						act 'Undress her':
+							npc_rel['A144'] += 3
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-							'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les3.jpg"></center>'
-							'After a bit of passionate kissing and fondling once your both naked, you lay back on the bed and spread your legs. You place your hand on top of her head and gentle guide her face to your pussy. She really doesn''t need any encouragement, she dives straight in. Her tongue flicking your clit at first, then sucking on your clit, before she plunges her tongue up your wet pussy, as she eats you out.'
-							gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
-							pcs_horny += 10
-							gs 'stat'
+							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
+							'Once in bed you waste no time pulling her clothes off, she returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you were''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others bodies. Regardless before long, both of you are naked.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 							act 'Get pleasured':
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-								'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les4.jpg"></center>'
-								'You lose track of time as she eats you out, she either has a lot of natural talent or she eats out girls a lot because she is amazing at it. You feel yourself starting to get close and apparently she notices as well, because she stops. You are only disappointed for a moment, as she knee walks her way over to you and straddles your face. You can''t blame her for wanting her own pleasure for you. With her pussy right over your face you can see she is already sopping wet. You kiss, her pussy at first and gently licking it a few times teasing her with light touches.'
-								'It seems to be to much for her as she lowers herself and starts to grind her twat against your face, you give up your teasing and plunge your tongue into her pussy, pleasuring her, like she just pleasured you.'
-								gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
-								act '69':
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les3.jpg"></center>'
+								'After a bit of passionate kissing and fondling once your both naked, you lay back on the bed and spread your legs. You place your hand on top of her head and gently guide her face to your pussy. She really doesn''t need any encouragement, she dives straight in. Her tongue flicking your clit at first, then sucking on your clit, before she plunges her tongue up your wet pussy, as she eats you out.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
+								pcs_horny += 10
+								gs 'stat'
+								act 'Get pleasured':
 									'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-									'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les5.jpg"></center>'
-									'You can hear her starting to breath heavier and moan louder, you are about to suggest switching again, but apparently she had the same idea. She briefly stops straddling your face before turning around and then straddling your face again, while going down on her hands and knees so she can 69 you.'
-									'You feel her tongue licking against your clit, you lift up your head slightly and begin licking her pussy again as well. Her tongue is magic it doesn''t take all that long until your body is rocked by a orgasm. Apparently hearing you start to orgasm sets her off as well, as her pussy juices flow out coating your face as she has a orgasm as well.'
-									gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
-									gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give' 10, 'lesbian'
-									minut -= 10
-									pcs_horny += 10
-									gs 'stat'
-									act 'After glow':
+									'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les4.jpg"></center>'
+									'You lose track of time as she eats you out, she either has a lot of natural talent or she eats out girls a lot because she is amazing at it. You feel yourself starting to get close and apparently she notices as well, because she stops. You are only disappointed for a moment, as she knee walks her way over to you and straddles your face. You can''t blame her for wanting her own pleasure for you. With her pussy right over your face you can see she is already sopping wet. You kiss, her pussy at first and gently licking it a few times teasing her with light touches.'
+									'It seems to be to much for her as she lowers herself and starts to grind her twat against your face, you give up your teasing and plunge your tongue into her pussy, pleasuring her, like she just pleasured you.'
+									gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
+									act '69':
 										'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-										'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les6.jpg"></center>'
-										'With you both spent she rolls off you and the two of you lay side by side for several minutes while you catch your breath. Then you suggest "Maybe we should get dressed before someone walks in, like your brothers."'
-										'She nods "Yeah your right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks you deeply in your eyes. The shared look is only broken but occasionally quick but soft kisses from her and soon you as well. Then she gives you a long slow soft passionate kiss, that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
-										'With that she gets out of bed and starts getting dress, soon you do the same and with in a couple of minutes you are both fully dressed again.'
-										gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
-										act 'Get dressed.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+										'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les5.jpg"></center>'
+										'You can hear her starting to breathe heavier and moan louder, you are about to suggest switching again, but apparently she had the same idea. She briefly stops straddling your face before turning around and then straddling your face again, while going down on her hands and knees so she can 69 you.'
+										'You feel her tongue licking against your clit, you lift up your head slightly and begin licking her pussy again as well. Her tongue is magic it doesn''t take all that long until your body is rocked by a orgasm. Apparently hearing you start to orgasm sets her off as well, as her pussy juices flow out coating your face as she has a orgasm as well.'
+										gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
+										gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give' 10, 'lesbian'
+										minut -= 10
+										pcs_horny += 10
+										gs 'stat'
+										act 'After glow':
+											'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
+											'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les6.jpg"></center>'
+											'With you both spent she rolls off you and the two of you lay side by side for several minutes while you catch your breath. Then you suggest "Maybe we should get dressed before someone walks in, like your brothers."'
+											'She nods "Yeah you''re right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks you deeply in your eyes. The shared look is only broken by occasional quick but soft kisses from her and soon you as well. Then she gives you a long slow soft passionate kiss that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
+											'With that she gets out of bed and starts getting dressed, soon you do the same and within a couple of minutes you are both fully dressed again.'
+											gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
+											act 'Get dressed':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+										end
 									end
 								end
 							end
 						end
 					end
-				end
+				else
 !!If neither of the above scenes trigger than this text is added to act 'continue' above.
-				'You lean further back in the chair and spread your legs wider apart as you feel your climax approaching. You turn and bury your mouth in your own shoulder to keep from crying out as a orgasm rocks your body. It takes you a few moments to recover, once you do. You straight everything up and wonder what you can do next to kill time.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 50, 'unknown'
+					'You lean further back in the chair and spread your legs wider apart as you feel your climax approaching. You turn and bury your mouth in your own shoulder to keep from crying out as a orgasm rocks your body. It takes you a few moments to recover, once you do. You straighten everything up and wonder what you can do next to kill time.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 50, 'unknown'
 !!add enough arousal so that Sveta for sure has a orgasm since she just masturbates till she has one.
-				act 'Find something else to do.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+				end
+				act 'Find something else to do':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -367,25 +398,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-	'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 	'The two of you lay on her bed and talk about a variety of topics.'
 	act 'Make small talk':
 		npc_rel['A144'] += 2
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'The two of you chat about a variety of things, mostly school, music, clothes, and what has been going on in Pavlovsk lately.'
 	end
-	act 'Ask where she buys he clothes':
+	act 'Ask where she buys her clothes':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'Seeing her clothes in the room, some hanging up, others draped over chairs a few laying on the floor. They all are of a similar style. After a bit you get curious where she gets her clothes, it is obviously she doesn''t get them locally. None of the local stores carry clothes like she wears and you rarely see them much in the city. "Hey Nush where do you buy your clothes? Online?"'
 		'"Dolls, well Patchwork Dolls to be exact near the University in the city." She proceeds to tell you how to find the place.'
 !!this part only shows up if Sveta has never been to the store.
 		'"If you stop by, tell Savva or Viola I said they still owe me a round from last time." You nod that you will, though you have no idea who they are, but if you go to the store you will find out you suppose.'
+	!!Lillian-A flag problably needs to be set here to link together with Savva/Viola at the shop
 	end
 	act 'Ask about the band':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'The two of you sit near to each other; "I''ve heard a lot about your band. Most people tell me you''re really good."'
 		'"I guess so. All the lyrics are written by me so of course we''re good." Anushka replies nonchalantly. You rolls your eyes a bit at how she replies. Anushka''s is always like this.'
 		*nl
@@ -396,19 +428,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 	act 'Ask about the boys in the band':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You lay next to Anushka eager to ask about her the band members; "Tell me about the others in the band? I really want to know more about them."'
-		'"Well, there''s Radomir, he''s okay I guess, all the girls think he''s the shit, but he wasn''t that impressive if you know what I mean. My mothers got a hard on for him though and wants me marry him or some shit, but fuck that. Even if I wanted to get married he isn''t someone I would consider."'
+		'"Well, there''s Radomir, he''s okay I guess, all the girls think he''s the shit, but he wasn''t that impressive if you know what I mean. My mothers got a hard-on for him though and wants me marry him or some shit, but fuck that. Even if I wanted to get married he isn''t someone I would consider."'
 		*nl
-		'"And then we have Arkady, he''s really fun, always up for whatever. I love drinking with him but he''s got this temper and can cause shit to go sideways fast if you arn''t to careful. Yeah, he''s a loose cannon but I enjoy his company, plus he''s a great hard fuck, especially if you piss him off first." She says with a wink and a grin.'
+		'"And then we have Arkady, he''s really fun, always up for whatever. I love drinking with him but he''s got this temper and can cause shit to go sideways fast if you aren''t too careful. Yeah, he''s a loose cannon but I enjoy his company, plus he''s a great hard fuck, especially if you piss him off first." She says with a wink and a grin.'
 		'"Finally there''s Valentin, the only one in the band that''s down to earth and overall a pretty decent guy. If it wasn''t for the music I am not sure he would hang out with us, though then I am not sure I would hang out with Radomir either. I''m glad he''s with us, the band would probably split up if it wasn''t for him."'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 	end
 	act 'Ask about her getting naked':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"How did you get so free spirited?" you ask as Anushka is laying on her bed.'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'"How did you get so free-spirited?" you ask as Anushka is laying on her bed.'
 		'"I don''t really know. I''ve always felt different than everybody else, it''s been like this, as far back as I can remember. I use to just love the sensation of the wind on my bare skin or the warmth of the sun. As I got older and discovered my sexuality, I started to enjoy showing off my body, and watching most guys and more than a few girls checking me out. It''s quite uplifting getting all the looks and I get so fucking turned on by that."'
 		'You sit there in silence wondering if you dare asking her about sex, quietly you ask; "I don''t mean to pry but I''ve heard rumors about your sexuality...?"'
 		*nl
@@ -421,7 +453,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 	act 'Ask about Alyona':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I see you often hanging out with Alyona, aren''t you scared of her?" you curiously ask Anushka.'
 		'"Yeah, she''s my partner in crime and confidant. We hang out a lot and I really enjoy her company, she''s also our bands number one fan. But be aware, she''s very protective of our relationship and means trouble. Most people are afraid of her but she doesn''t really give a fuck, that''s what I really like about her."'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
@@ -429,38 +461,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 	act 'Ask about her brothers':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'"I don''t mean to pry, but you are your bothers seem to have a rocky relationship."'
-		'"I know we have a hate love relationship, they can be such little assholes but at the same time they have their moments when they''re a absolute blast. If the oldest one just could stop creeping and perving out on all my female friends. We would get along a lot better and if my mom would stop poisoning them against me and girls in general. I swear she wants to turn them into sexist assholes."'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'"I don''t mean to pry, but you and your bothers seem to have a rocky relationship."'
+		'"I know we have a hate love relationship, they can be such little assholes but at the same time they have their moments when they''re an absolute blast. If the oldest one just could stop creeping and perving out on all my female friends. We would get along a lot better and if my mom would stop poisoning them against me and girls in general. I swear she wants to turn them into sexist assholes."'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
 		act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 	end
-	act 'Ask about the future.':
+	act 'Ask about the future':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"What will you do if the music path doesn''t work out? Don''t get me wrong... I mean you''re talented and all but you might never catch your big break..." you say with a hesitation, afraid about how Anushka will react.'
 		'She looks at you smiling; "I''m not too worried about that, I''m certain we''ll make it. Either way it might not seem like it but I''ll let you in on a little secret even though you might not see me at school that often I''ve got pretty good grades and I know exactly how far I can push the boundaries before getting into too much trouble. I am planning to attend the University in the city after school regardless how the band goes. I know my father wants me to study more and focus on being a good girl, but if he would just cut me some fucking slack I might surprise him."'
 		'Before you can say something she asks you. "What about you? What are your plans for the future?"'
 		act 'I don''t know':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'"I''m not sure, I have a few options I guess." You tell her.'
-			'She nods a bit. "Well you should decided before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. Unless that''s what you want, not judging just saying."'
+			'She nods a bit. "Well you should decide before you get stuck in this crappy little town and end up married to some asshole popping out his kids every few years. Unless that''s what you want, not judging just saying."'
 			'Not sure what more to say about it, you decided to change the subject.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		end
 		act 'Go to the University':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get a bit excited. "I am planning to attend the University too. Now I will for sure know someone there."'
-			'She gets thoughtful a moment. "Maybe we should think about being room mates then when we go. As you said then we would know someone and we already get along. But lets talk about it some more when the time comes and decided then."'
+			'She gets thoughtful a moment. "Maybe we should think about being roommates then when we go. As you said then we would know someone and we already get along. But lets talk about it some more when the time comes and decided then."'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
 			act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 		end
 		act 'Get married':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 !!can you make the <<boyfriend>> be the name of who ever Sveta is dating? Niko, Fedor, Artem, etc? I have no clue how hard that would be to code but eventually we will need a code like that, for the expanded chats with NPC's at school, home and the disco.
 			'You sigh in a way only those in love can sigh. "Hopefully <<boyfriend>> and I can get married soon."'
 			'She gives you a somewhat skeptical look and then shrugs. "Well best of luck with that."'
@@ -471,16 +503,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 	act 'Ask if she has a boyfriend':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You know she is seeing some guys, it is not really a secret and some girls. Not sure if you should even ask but you are curious. "So do you have a boyfriend? Or girlfriend?"'
 		'Shaking her head no. "Nope, not really looking. I am young and carefree. I plan to as they say sow my wild oats while I can. I am not against the idea mind you, if that right person came along and just blew me away, then I would likely consider it anyways." She pauses a moment and then gives you a wicked grin. "Why do you ask? You wanting to fill that [i]slot?[/i]"'
 		'The way she says it, makes you blush a little. She leaves no doubt what slot she means and she makes it sound so dirty and exciting at the same time. But did you mean that?'
 		act 'Maybe':
 			npc_rel['A144'] += 3
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
 			'You feel put on the spot, that is not what you meant... or maybe subconsciously that is why you asked. Either way a part of you would really like to be Anushka''s girlfriend. "I guess maybe, I have been thinking about it a bit."'
-			'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction, not sure you want to know it, but then you feel her place a finger under your chin and raise it up till you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face and you find yourself looking into her eyes. Then, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, not a lustful one, or not much, but something deeper and more. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you all you know is the kiss is amazing.'
+			'With your eyes downcast you don''t see her reaction, not sure you want to know it, but then you feel her place a finger under your chin and raise it up ''til you are looking at her. Her face is inches from yours and you can feel her breath on your face and you find yourself looking into her eyes. Then, the two of you are kissing. A deep long passionate kiss, not a lustful one, or not much, but something deeper and more. You don''t know if you kissed her or she kissed you, all you know is that the kiss is amazing.'
 			*nl
 			'Finally the kiss ends, both of you needing to breath a bit. She leans back and sucks on her lower lip a moment while looking at you. Then gives you a smirking smile. "Like I said, I''m not looking but then again I''m not against it. So let''s just see where the ride takes us." Before things can go further, she asks about the homework from one of your classes and you get it. She doesn''t want to rush things, but she isn''t saying no either.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
@@ -488,7 +520,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 		act 'No':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 			'You shake your head, this conversation really went off the rails and not at all what you meant. "No. I mean I like you, but not like that, not that..." She reaches up and places a finger over your lips to stop you from going on and seems amused by your response.'
 			'"It''s fine, I was just yanking your chain. I like things just how they are too."'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
@@ -496,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 		act 'I have a boyfriend':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 !!can you make the <<boyfriend>> be the name of who ever Sveta is dating? Niko, Fedor, Artem, etc? I have no clue how hard that would be to code but eventually we will need a code like that, for the expanded chats with NPC's at school, home and the disco.
 			'You tell her. "I have a boyfriend you know."'
 			'She grins at you. "Right who are you dating again?"'
@@ -510,16 +542,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			'Then she smiles and before you can ask what she meant by that she asks. "Hmm think he would be up for a threesome?" She says as she makes a kissy face at you.'
 			act 'No':
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-				'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'Shaking your head no. "Sorry but he is all mine." You tell her with a grin.'
 				'She makes a tsking sound. "To bad. Oh well if you change your mind let me know." Not sure what else to say to that you change the subject.'
 			end
 			act 'Maybe':
 				npc_rel['A144'] += 2
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-				'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 				'You blush slightly. "Let me think about it and talk to him. Then will see, I''ll let you know if we do."'
-				'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decided to change the subject.'
+				'Anushka laughs at that. "He''s a guy, they all want to fuck two girls at once, but sure, let me know." You roll your eyes slightly at her comment, true or not. Then you decide to change the subject.'
 				act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
 			end
@@ -528,9 +560,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 !!asking about her mother can only show up once Sveta has had a conversation with the other, Either the snack conversation or one of the ones in the parents badroom.
 	act 'Ask about her mother':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
-		'Unsure how to ask this, but you are curious whats wrong with her mother. "I don''t mean to pry, but what''s wrong with your mother?"'
-		'Anushka glances at you. "You mean to ask, why is my mother a complete fucking cunt?" When she see''s the look on your face she waves her hand dismissively. "Don''t worry everyone but her knows it. Honestly I don''t really know, she wasn''t always like this. When I was really young she was pretty fun and then she just changed." She sighs and looks a little sad.'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'Unsure how to ask this, but you are curious what''s wrong with her mother. "I don''t mean to pry, but what''s wrong with your mother?"'
+		'Anushka glances at you. "You mean to ask, why is my mother a complete fucking cunt?" When she see''s the look on your face she waves her hand dismissively. "Don''t worry, everyone but her knows it. Honestly I don''t really know, she wasn''t always like this. When I was really young she was pretty fun and then she just changed." She sighs and looks a little sad.'
 		'"Best I can tell is my mother was a party girl looking for a guy she could latch onto, who would give her a party life forever. My dad was the biggest baddest mother fucker around back then, so perfect for my mom. But sometime after I was born, he settled down and I think it just hit her. This was her life, just that of a house wife and mother. She resents him, my brothers, and me for it and blames us for every bad thing that has happened in her life."'
 		'Then her tone turns a bit hard. "She is just a loser bitch that wanted to live off a man and didn''t get her way, like my dad says. She''s just a waste of fucking space." Then she looks away for a moment before saying more. "I don''t really want to talk about this."'
 		act 'Keep talking': gt 'anushapt', 'chat'
@@ -538,13 +570,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 	act 'Kiss her':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you lay side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe to long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not far from yours and you can''t help if, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and kiss her. She returns your kiss fully.'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtkiss.jpg"></center>'
+		'As you lay side by side you look at her for a moment, maybe too long, or maybe she just senses it. She turns her head to look at you, her face not far from yours and you can''t help it, you just think she is so damn pretty. You lean over and kiss her. She returns your kiss fully.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 		act 'Stop kissing and talk more': gt 'anushapt', 'Chat'
 		act 'Make out':
 			'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-			'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtmakeout.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/brtmakeout.jpg"></center>'
 			'She wraps her arms around you neck and pulls you close and soon the two of you are passionately kissing. The kisses are full of eager lust and urgent need. You feel yourself getting more and more aroused.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 			act 'Stop making out': 
@@ -554,31 +586,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			end
 			act 'Peeking':
 				'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-				'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les1.jpg"></center>'
+				'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les1.jpg"></center>'
 				'As the two of you keep kissing she breaks the kiss and uses one of her hands to pull down your top and expose your breasts, she takes a long hard look at your breasts. "Nice tits" You can''t help it, just the way she says it in the moment makes you giggle, but your giggle is short lived as she starts kissing you again.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 				act 'Undress her':
 					npc_rel['A144'] += 3
 					'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-					'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
+					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les2.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once in bed you waste no time pulling her clothes off, she returns the favor and starts removing your clothes as well. It would go a lot faster if the two of you wasn''t also passionately kissing and caressing each others bodies. Regardless before long, both of you are naked.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
 					act 'Get pleasured':
 						'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-						'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les3.jpg"></center>'
+						'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les3.jpg"></center>'
 						'After a bit of passionate kissing and fondling once your both naked, you lay back on the bed and spread your legs. You place your hand on top of her head and gentle guide her face to your pussy. She really doesn''t need any encouragement, she dives straight in. Her tongue flicking your clit at first, then sucking on your clit, before she plunges her tongue up your wet pussy, as she eats you out.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 						pcs_horny += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Get pleasured':
 							'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-							'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les4.jpg"></center>'
+							'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les4.jpg"></center>'
 							'You lose track of time as she eats you out, she either has a lot of natural talent or she eats out girls a lot because she is amazing at it. You feel yourself starting to get close and apparently she notices as well, because she stops. You are only disappointed for a moment, as she knee walks her way over to you and straddles your face. You can''t blame her for wanting her own pleasure for you. With her pussy right over your face you can see she is already sopping wet. You kiss, her pussy at first and gently licking it a few times teasing her with light touches.'
 							'It seems to be to much for her as she lowers herself and starts to grind her twat against your face, you give up your teasing and plunge your tongue into her pussy, pleasuring her, like she just pleasured you.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 10, 'lesbian'
 							act '69':
 								'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-								'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les5.jpg"></center>'
+								'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les5.jpg"></center>'
 								'You can hear her starting to breath heavier and moan louder, you are about to suggest switching again, but apparently she had the same idea. She briefly stops straddling your face before turning around and then straddling your face again, while going down on her hands and knees so she can 69 you.'
 								'You feel her tongue licking against your clit, you lift up your head slightly and begin licking her pussy again as well. Her tongue is magic it doesn''t take all that long until your body is rocked by a orgasm. Apparently hearing you start to orgasm sets her off as well, as her pussy juices flow out coating your face as she has a orgasm as well.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
@@ -588,12 +620,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'After glow':
 									'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-									'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les6.jpg"></center>'
+									'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/caughtmast/les6.jpg"></center>'
 									'With you both spent she rolls off you and the two of you lay side by side for several minutes while you catch your breath. Then you suggest "Maybe we should get dressed before someone walks in, like your brothers."'
-									'She nods "Yeah your right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks you deeply in your eyes. The shared look is only broken but occasionally quick but soft kisses from her and soon you as well. Then she gives you a long slow soft passionate kiss, that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
-									'With that she gets out of bed and starts getting dress, soon you do the same and with in a couple of minutes you are both fully dressed again.'
+									'She nods "Yeah your right." As you both start to get up, she reaches over and pulls you close to her. With you both on your knees she pulls you over until your face is nearly touching hers and she looks you deeply in your eyes. The shared look is only broken by occasional quick but soft kisses from her and soon you as well. Then she gives you a long slow soft passionate kiss that leaves you breathless, before she pulls away.'
+									'With that she gets out of bed and starts getting dressed, soon you do the same and within a couple of minutes you are both fully dressed again.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'lesbian'
-									act 'Get dressed.':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
+									act 'Get dressed':gt 'anushapt','anushroom'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -604,55 +636,63 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 	act 'Snacks':
 		'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Anushka''s Room</font></h4></center>'
-		'<center><img  src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/bedroomtalk.jpg"></center>'
 		'You bite your lip a moment and unsure if you should ask, it might seem rude but you could use a snack and drink. "Hey Nush you got anything to snack on or drink?"'
-		'She looks a bit surprised and then a bit abashed, which is a new look on her. "Yeah sorry, didn''t think about it. Feel free to just grab something if you want in the future but come one."'
+		'She looks a bit surprised and then a bit abashed, which is a new look on her. "Yeah sorry, didn''t think about it. Feel free to just grab something if you want in the future but come on."'
 		act 'Follow her':
 			'She gets up and heads out of her room and to the kitchen, the two of you are talking and laughing as you enter the kitchen.'
+			temp = rand(0,9)
+			!!LillianL-Randomise which kitchen event happens.
+			if temp = 0 and valeriaIntroduced = 0:
 !!There is a 1 in 10 chance this event happens.
-			'All of a sudden the mood changes and you feel chills going down your spine. There is a woman standing cooking.'
-			act 'Hi! I''m...'
-				*clr & cla
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Yeah, yeah. To be honest, I don''t really care who you are." the older woman answers sourly.'
-				'You quickly stare down on the floor while Anushka without any hesitation begins talking back, "Can''t you at least try to be nice to someone you just met for once? God, why are you always such a bitch?"'
-				'"Listen here, sweetie... I don''t care about being nice to your little friends. They''re all just a nuisance to me, no better than you." the woman sighs and looks at you. "Fine, I''m Valeria, Anushka''s mother."'
-				'"Unfortunately..." you hear Anushka mumble under her breath.'
-				*nl
-				'"So where did my dear daughter pick you up from?" Valeria keeps on being obnoxious.'
-				'"W-We" you look nervously at Anushka, "are in the same class..."'
-				'Valeria starts laughing loudly, "That''s a good one, Anushka in school."'
-				'"At least I''ll finish school unlike you." Anushka answers.'
-				'Her mother ignores her comment and speaks to you. "So whats your name?"'
-				act 'Tell her':
-					'You know this woman is just wanting to pick a fight but what else can you do. "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
-					'She looks surprised a moment. "You''re Natasha''s youngest daughter, from the south building?"'
-					'When you nod yes, she bursts out laughing and then shakes her head looking at her daughter. "You would become friends with the daughter of the towns biggest slut. I bet she is just like her mother, the two of you must have so much in common."'
-					'Anushka steps up to her mother and gets right in her face. "Shut the fuck up you old cunt!" Anushka looks visibly pissed off. "You say another fucking word like that to my friend and I will knock you on your fucking ass."'
-					act 'Look nervously around':
-						'The tension in the room is tremendous. The time stands still and you just want to run out of the kitchen so you can breathe normally again.'
-						'After what feels like an eternety Valeria speaks up, "You know what, you''re lucky that you have your friend with you and that I just don''t want to deal with you today. So leave now before I change my mind."'
-						'Anushka walks over to the fridge and grabs two drinks and a bag of chips, grabbing you by the arm and leading you out of the kitchen. As you walk out, she glances back at her mother. "Bitch!"'
-						'"It was great to meet you, hope to see you again, even though I doubt it..." you hear Valeria sarcastically say that as you''re leaving the kitchen.'
-						act 'Back to her room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+				!!LillianL-Adding new variable to check if Valeria has been introduced already, event is skipped if she has.
+				valeriaIntroduced = 1
+				'All of a sudden the mood changes and you feel chills going down your spine. There is a woman standing there cooking.'
+				act 'Hi! I''m-'
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kitchen</font></b></center>'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
+					'"Yeah, yeah. To be honest, I don''t really care who you are." the older woman answers sourly.'
+					'You quickly stare down on the floor while Anushka without any hesitation begins talking back, "Can''t you at least try to be nice to someone you just met for once? God, why are you always such a bitch?"'
+					'"Listen here, sweetie... I don''t care about being nice to your little friends. They''re all just a nuisance to me, no better than you." the woman sighs and looks at you. "Fine, I''m Valeria, Anushka''s mother."'
+					'"Unfortunately..." you hear Anushka mumble under her breath.'
+					*nl
+					'"So where did my dear daughter pick you up from?" Valeria keeps on being obnoxious.'
+					'"W-We-" you look nervously at Anushka, "are in the same class..."'
+					'Valeria starts laughing loudly, "That''s a good one, Anushka in school."'
+					'"At least I''ll finish school unlike you." Anushka answers.'
+					'Her mother ignores her comment and speaks to you. "So whats your name?"'
+					act 'Tell her':
+						'You know this woman is just wanting to pick a fight but what else can you do. "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
+						'She looks surprised a moment. "You''re Natasha''s youngest daughter, from the south building?"'
+						'When you nod yes, she bursts out laughing and then shakes her head looking at her daughter. "You would become friends with the daughter of the towns biggest slut. I bet she is just like her mother, the two of you must have so much in common."'
+						'Anushka steps up to her mother and gets right in her face. "Shut the fuck up you old cunt!" Anushka looks visibly pissed off. "You say another fucking word like that to my friend and I will knock you on your fucking ass."'
+						act 'Look nervously around':
+							'The tension in the room is tremendous. The time stands still and you just want to run out of the kitchen so you can breathe normally again.'
+							'After what feels like an eternity Valeria speaks up, "You know what, you''re lucky that you have your friend with you and that I just don''t want to deal with you today. So leave now before I change my mind."'
+							'Anushka walks over to the fridge and grabs two drinks and a bag of chips, grabbing you by the arm and leading you out of the kitchen. As you walk out, she glances back at her mother. "Bitch!"'
+							'"It was great to meet you, hope to see you again, even though I doubt it..." you hear Valeria sarcastically say that as you''re leaving the kitchen.'
+							act 'Back to her room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+						end
 					end
 				end
-			end
+			elseif temp = 1 or temp = 2:
 !!This has a 1 in 5 chance of happening.
-			'As you walk into the kitchen you see Timofey sitting at the small kitchen table looking sad. Anushka points to a cabinet and the fridge. "Chips and stuff is in there and drinks in the fridge, grab us some."'
-			'Then she squats down next to her little brother and ruffles his hair. "He whats wrong Timo?"'
-			'He looks up at her as you gather the stuff. "Maksim won''t let me have a turn playing the games."'
-			'She smiles at him. "Well you go tell him that he better give you a turn or I will tell dad he hasn''t been doing his homework." Timofey lights up when she says that.'
-			'"Really? You will." He is all excited.'
-			'She laughs a bit. "No but he doesn''t know that, but if he doesn''t or keeps being mean to you, come get me and I will kick is ass for you. Ok?"'
-			'He nods all happy and gets up, she gives him a one armed hug that he tries his best to squirm away from, then he hurries out of the kitchen.'
-			'She stands up and looks at you. "Got everything?" When you nod yes she adds. "Sweet, lets go back to my room."'
-			act 'Back to her room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+				'As you walk into the kitchen you see Timofey sitting at the small kitchen table looking sad. Anushka points to a cabinet and the fridge. "Chips and stuff are in there and drinks are in the fridge, grab us some."'
+				'Then she squats down next to her little brother and ruffles his hair. "Hey what''s wrong Timo?"'
+				'He looks up at her as you gather the stuff. "Maksim won''t let me have a turn playing the games."'
+				'She smiles at him. "Well you go tell him that he better give you a turn or I will tell dad he hasn''t been doing his homework." Timofey lights up when she says that.'
+				'"Really? You will." He is all excited.'
+				'She laughs a bit. "No but he doesn''t know that, but if he doesn''t or keeps being mean to you, come get me and I will kick his ass for you. Ok?"'
+				'He nods all happy and gets up, she gives him a one armed hug that he tries his best to squirm away from, then he hurries out of the kitchen.'
+				'She stands up and looks at you. "Got everything?" When you nod yes she adds. "Sweet, lets go back to my room."'
+				act 'Back to her room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+			else
 !!If neither of the above happen then this happens.
-			'As you walk into the kitchen Anushka points to a cabinet. "Grab some chips and stuff out of their."'
-			'While you are doing that, she grabs a couple of drinks from the fridge, once you both have your spoils from your raid on the kitchen you head back to her room.'
-			act 'Back to her room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+				'As you walk into the kitchen Anushka points to a cabinet. "Grab some chips and stuff out of there."'
+				'While you are doing that, she grabs a couple of drinks from the fridge, once you both have your spoils from your raid on the kitchen you head back to her room.'
+				act 'Back to her room': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
+			end
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Stop talking': gt 'anushapt', 'anushroom'
@@ -664,12 +704,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It is fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in varies piles. There are two beds on each side cramped inside the room. There is a small tv on a stand in the room, with a playstation console laying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'
+	'The room is disorganized and untidy. It is fairly messy with a lot of clothes scattered about in varies piles. There are two beds on each side crammed inside the room. There is a small TV on a stand in the room, with a Playstation console laying partially hidden under some clothes in front of it.'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 !!With Anushka, first interaction
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s brother''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/anushapt/broroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The two of you enter the brother''s room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
+	'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
 	'The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
 	'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see what you were up to, cause I know you little shitheads are always up to something."'
 	'"What do you care what we do? Shouldn''t you be off with your band or sucking some cock?"'
@@ -693,7 +733,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			'"If you weren''t trying to film her while she is taking a shower, maybe she wouldn''t be kicking your ass, you little pervert." Anushka answers.'
 			'"Your brothers are really something else. But I guess even boys at this age think with there other head." you say.'
 			'Anushka nods in agreement, "Yeah, most of them are slaves to their lust, even if these are two young to even understand it yet."'
-			'Maksim puffs up. "I''m not to young."'
+			'Maksim puffs up. "I''m not too young."'
 			'Anushka laughs at him and turns to you, "Maybe I should tell my dad what they''re up to."'
 			act 'Laugh':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -706,10 +746,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		end
 	end
 !!With Anushka, second interaction
-	'The two of you enter the brother''s room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear.'
+	'The two of you enter her brothers room. They immediately stop doing what they were doing and look towards you in fear.'
 	'The older one gathers some courage; "What do you want? Get out of our room!"'
-	'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you was up for a rematch" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
-	'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing so hard. We''ll definetly beat you this time."'
+	'Anushka quickly replies; "Calm down. I just wanted to see if you were up for a rematch" indicating the gaming console in their room.'
+	'Both of them get excited at that. "You''re friend better be great. We''ve been practicing so hard. We''ll definitely beat you this time."'
 	'Anushka quickly replies smiling, "You really think you can beat me this time? You got your asses handed to you the last time."'
 	'The boys nod at each other, "This time will be different. We''re sure we will win."'
 	act 'What''s this all about?':
@@ -725,13 +765,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 				*clr & cla
 				'The game is equal with no one getting the upper hand. All of a sudden you make a mistake and the brothers are about to win. Just as they''re about to win, Anushka uses her foot to push Maksim off the bed. Which allows her to secure the win while he is trying to recover.'
 				'He begins to yell, "Not fair, you''re cheating. You always do this when you''re about to lose." The younger one joins in. "Anushka''s a cheater."'
-				'"Don''t be such a crybaby I thought you said you were prepared this time?" she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face, despite her brother looking made.'
-				'The comment only makes the situation worse and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka obviously taking it way to serious, after a bit Anushka gets feed up with them and starts yelling back at them.'
+				'"Don''t be such a crybaby I thought you said you were prepared this time?" she says teasing him, but with a smile on her face, despite her brother looking mad.'
+				'The comment only makes the situation worse and things escalate. The brothers are now yelling at Anushka obviously taking it way too serious, after a bit Anushka gets fed up with them and starts yelling back at them.'
 				*nl
-				'All of a sudden the door opens and their dad is standing their and bellows. "Knock it off." Anushka''s and the older of her two brothers shut up at once, they obviously know better than to test their dad.'
+				'All of a sudden the door opens and their dad is standing there and bellows. "Knock it off." Anushka and the older of her two brothers shut up at once, they obviously know better than to test their dad.'
 				'"But dad! She cheated again." Timofey pleads with him.'
 				'"But dad nothing, weren''t you supposed to be studying?" Eduard asks.'
-				'"Y-Yes..." both of them answer. "Well get to it" He says to them and then turns to Anushka are you. "You two get out of their room and Anushka stop tormenting your brothers." he says he holds the door open till you both leave then he pulls it shut hard.'
+				'"Y-Yes..." both of them answer. "Well get to it" He says to them and then turns to Anushka and you. "You two get out of their room and Anushka stop tormenting your brothers." he says he holds the door open ''til you both leave then he pulls it shut hard.'
 				'Anushka starts to respond. "I wasn''t..." but her dad interrupts her. "I don''t care, leave them alone so they can study. Take your friend to your room." With that he turns and goes back to the living room, while Anushka goes back to her room.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
 				end
@@ -739,10 +779,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 		end
 	end
 !!Without Anushka, first interaction
-	'As you walk pass the brothers room, you see that the door is open. You peek in seeing the boys sitting there talking about something. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
+	'As you walk past the brothers room, you see that the door is open. You peek in seeing the boys sitting there talking about something. The older one is maybe a year or two younger than Kolka, just at that age when boys start paying attention to girls and the other a year or two younger than that.'
 	act 'What are you up to?':
 		*clr & cla
-		'"Nothing much really. We were just discussing what kind of band we was going to have when we got older." Maksim responds.'
+		'"Nothing much really. We were just discussing what kind of band we were going to have when we get older." Maksim responds.'
 		'"Oh? So you want to be like your big sister and be in a band too?" You ask them.'
 		'Maksim shakes his head. "I don''t want to be like her, I want to be like Radomir. Be the band leader and get all the bitches for free. He''s the best."'
 		'Before you can respond Timofey cuts in. "Arkady is the best or maybe Valentin, they give us stuff."'
@@ -755,7 +795,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			act 'Who lets you drink?':
 				*clr & cla
 				'"Arkady!" they both shout. "But don''t tell our dad or he will get mad."'
-				'"Don''t worry I won''t tell your dad." you re-assure them.'
+				'"Don''t worry I won''t tell your dad." you reassure them.'
 				act 'What about Radomir?':
 					*clr & cla
 					'"He''s pretty cool. I want to be like him when I grow up." Maksim confidently says.'
@@ -784,7 +824,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brotherroom':
 			'Timofey just keeps on sneering at his brother.'
 			act 'Calm down':
 				*clr & cla
-				'"It''s doesn''t have to be all bad." you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
+				'"It doesn''t have to be all bad." you say. "I share a room with my sister."'
 				'"Wow. Two girls in one room... That is so hot." says Maksim. "Our sister is the only one with her own room, that''s so unfair."'
 				'"She is a girl after all. Wouldn''t be awkward if she shared a room with you?." you try to explain.'
 				'"I guess... but she could sleep in the living room and we could then each have our own room." he says as if that was totally fair.'
@@ -801,7 +841,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Living room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/livingroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room has a couple of recliners and a couch, in front of the couch is a large coffee table. Several empty beer bottles and cups are left on the table, along with some scattered paper and a pill bottle. Oposite the couch in front of the window is a fairly large tv and stereo system. The room isn''t exactly messy but it is far from clean. It doesn''t look like it has been dusted in months, nor the floor swept, recently.'
+	'The room has a couple of recliners and a couch, in front of the couch is a large coffee table. Several empty beer bottles and cups are left on the table, along with some scattered paper and a pill bottle. Opposite the couch in front of the window is a fairly large TV and stereo system. The room isn''t exactly messy but it is far from clean. It doesn''t look like it has been dusted in months, nor the floor swept, recently.'
 !!First time Sveta goes home with Anushka.
 	'You enter the living room and before Anushka''s father reacts, Anushka tells him, "Dad! This is my classmate <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 	'You greet each other. His face looks worn out making him look older than he actually is. You also notice his tattoo covered arms, you heard that Anushka''s dad was this badass biker that didn''t give a damn about anything before. "So schoolmate eh?"'
@@ -818,14 +858,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 		'Anushka a bit irritated answers, "Don''t act so surprised! You''ve seen my grades, they''re not all that bad."'
 		'"I know, I know, I''m just teasing you." he says while still smiling. Eduard turns to you, "How about you, are you doing good in school?"'
 		'You nod, slyly smiling, "I try my best."'
-		'All of a sudden you hear a loud bang, "What are those boys up to this time? Wait here, I''ll be right back I haven''t seen you in a while and I wanted to ask you something." He says to his daughter.'
+		'All of a sudden you hear a loud bang, "What are those boys up to this time? Wait here, I''ll be right back. I haven''t seen you in a while and I wanted to ask you something." He says to his daughter.'
 		act 'Wait':
 			*clr & cla
 			'As Eduard returns he lets out a loud sigh, "These kids will be the death of me... especially my darling daughter. Or at least drive me to drinking."'
 			'Anushka rolls her eyes. "You already drink dad and always have so don''t blame that at me, if you have anyone to blame it''s yourself."'
-			'He snorts a bit of a laugh at her retort but you sense a bit of pride in him that she always pushes back and you wonder if he was kidding, it would explain where Anushka got her sense of humor from. "Yeah I use to drink beers but you drove me to the hard stuff." She starts to have another retort but he holds up his hand. "Truce, you never give up." He sighs a bit, now he looks like he has a mixture of pride and regret. "Guess it''s better you take after me than you mother."'
+			'He snorts a bit of a laugh at her retort but you sense a bit of pride in him that she always pushes back and you wonder if he was kidding, it would explain where Anushka got her sense of humor from. "Yeah I used to drink beers but you drove me to the hard stuff." She starts to have another retort but he holds up his hand. "Truce, you never give up." He sighs a bit, now he looks like he has a mixture of pride and regret. "Guess it''s better you take after me than you mother."'
 			'Anushka snorts a bit of a laugh and sounds a lot like her dad when she does if a far more feminine snort. "No shit."'
-			'Her dad glances at you a moment and then looks back to her. "Anyways what, I wanted to ask you is everything okay with Alyona?"'
+			'Her dad glances at you a moment and then looks back to her. "Anyways, what I wanted to ask you is everything okay with Alyona?"'
 			'"Yeah, it''s all good. She''s alive and kicking. Why''d you ask?" Anushka answers him but you noticed she responded a bit fast and her father frowns a bit as if he noticed it too, which makes your wonder why Anushka''s father is asking about Alyona.'
 			'"Nothing special, was just wondering how she was doing, given the situation and all."'
 			'Once again you hear a loud bang coming from the other room. Eduard jumps up and dashes over to Anushka''s brothers room.'
@@ -846,7 +886,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	'He turns and looks at you and gives you a friendly smile. "Call me Ed and I have no idea where that girl is, you can check her room if you want. If she''s not there, then there is no telling where she is." He says sounding somewhat sad and worried.'
 	act 'Is everything ok?':
 		*clr & cla
-		'"What? Oh I just worry about her. She is to much like me, she is a wild child if there ever was one. She does what she wants, when she wants, how she wants. I know she can take care of herself." Then he pauses a moment with a deep frown and you give him a moment. "It''s just well she''s a girl and I know what guys are like at her age I was one, except she won''t be getting some girl knocked up, she will be the one to end up knocked up or worse."'
+		'"What? Oh I just worry about her. She is too much like me, she is a wild child if there ever was one. She does what she wants, when she wants, how she wants. I know she can take care of herself." Then he pauses a moment with a deep frown and you give him a moment. "It''s just... well she''s a girl and I know what guys are like at her age I was one, except she won''t be getting some girl knocked up, she will be the one to end up knocked up or worse."'
 		act 'Try cheering him up':
 			*clr & cla
 			'"She''s the toughest girl I know, she can take care of herself and she is smarter than she acts sometimes." You tell him.'
@@ -855,11 +895,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 			*nl
 			'He laughs a bit. "Absolutley not, she reminds me of myself in my younger days when I used to cause havoc. Hard headed and stubborn. I had my chance to set her straight when she was younger but I missed out. To busy you see with what I thought was more important things." He sighs deeply and looks like a man that is carrying around more than a few regrets. You don''t know what to say so you let him finish his thoughts.'
 			'Then he shakes his head. "Enough of my depressing talk, feel free to wait for her in her room if you want, but no telling when she might be home, or I can tell her you stopped by when I next see her."'
-			act 'Tell her I stopped by.':
+			act 'Tell her I stopped by':
 				'You nod and know how he feels, no point waiting for her. She could be gone for hours. "Thanks, let her know I stopped by. Bye."'
 				act 'Leave Anushka''s apartment': gt 'pavComplexb2', 'etaj_3'
 			end
-			act 'Thanks I''ll wait.':
+			act 'Thanks I''ll wait':
 				*clr & cla
 				'"Make yourself at home." He says with a small smile. "Just a bit of advice, if you can avoid that...that..." Ed hesitates, his teeth grinding as he struggles to find the right words. "That woman, to put it nicely. She is always looking for a reason to pick a fight and argue with someone. Honestly, if it weren''t for the kids..." He trails off before falling silent for a few moments. You think he may have forgotten who he was talking to, or that you''re even in the room, but eventually his expression softens.'
 				'"Just do your best to stay out of her way, alright? I''d hate to see her drive you off another of Nush''s friends, you seem nice and like you will be a good influence on her."'
@@ -871,25 +911,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom':
 	'You smile to Eduard. "Hello Mr Konstantinov."'
 	'He turns and looks at you and gives you a friendly smile. "Call me Ed." Then he frowns. "Is everything ok?"'
 	'You quickly nod. "Yes, Nush is just listening to some music and I got a little bored is all."'
-	'He nods a bit. "Ok then, yeah she can be a bit obsessive about her music at times, but better that then running around at all hours, doing god knows what." He sounds a bit sad and worried.'
+	'He nods a bit. "Okay then, yeah she can be a bit obsessive about her music at times, but better that then running around at all hours, doing god knows what." He sounds a bit sad and worried.'
 	act 'She''s a tough girl':
 		*clr & cla
 		'He smiles a little. "Oh I know that, when she was a little girl and the boys would try and push her around, she would beat their asses." He says with a smile as if it is a fond memory of his. Then the smile fades a bit. "But things are a big different now, men are just bigger and stronger than you girls, just a fact of life. I know she can take care of herself, but I am afraid one of these days she is going to get into more trouble than she can handle. Get drunk or stoned and make the wrong call and end up pregnant. A young mother or worse is not the life I want for her."'
 		'You smile and do you best to reassure him as he seems to be honestly worried about her. "She has a good head on her shoulders, I am sure she knows just how far she can push things."'
 		*nl
 		'He shakes his head slightly. "If it was only that easy, but you girls still don''t know just how dangerous the world is and it only takes one mistake or even just being in the wrong place or meeting the wrong person that can change you life for ever and not in a good way."'
-		act 'Least she has the band with her most times.':
+		act 'At least she has the band with her most times':
 			*clr & cla
-			'He barks a laugh. "Yeah, they are a big part of my worry. Val is decent enough guy, that I don''t have to worry about him to much. Arkady is apt to drag them all into more trouble than they can handle and don''t get me started on Radomir. That boy thinks girls are only their for him to have a place to stick his pecker in. To many girls your age are blinded by the whole musician thing to see what kind of guy he really is."'
+			'He barks a laugh. "Yeah, they are a big part of my worry. Val is decent enough guy that I don''t have to worry about him to much. Arkady is apt to drag them all into more trouble than they can handle and don''t get me started on Radomir. That boy thinks girls are only there for him to have a place to stick his pecker in. Too many girls your age are blinded by the whole musician thing to see what kind of guy he really is."'
 			'You ask him. "You don''t like that Nush is in the band?"'
 			*nl
 			'He shakes his head. "No it''s not that, it is just those boys are trouble." Then he sighs. "Shit but who am I to talk, I was just like them at that age. I had no respect for girls either, back then. Just the way of the world I guess."'
-			'"The band needs her, she writes a lot of their songs, plays guitar and sings some. I don''t think they would risk losing her." You tell him but even you are not completely convinced by your own words, you know all to well how boys are.'
+			'"The band needs her, she writes a lot of their songs, plays guitar and sings some. I don''t think they would risk losing her." You tell him but even you are not completely convinced by your own words, you know all too well how boys are.'
 			*nl
-			'"Maybe your right, but if they ever hurt my little girl. The best run far and fast, because if I get my hands on them, they will learn what pain really means." He says in a meancing tone with a hard glint in his eyes. It reminds you that most of the adults seem to be afraid of him and talk about how dangerous of a guy he use to be. You almost feel sorry for any boy that incur his wrath, almost, but if they do, they will likely deserve it.'
-			act 'Time to leave.':
+			'"Maybe you''re right, but if they ever hurt my little girl, they best run far and fast, because if I get my hands on them, they will learn what pain really means." He says in a menacing tone with a hard glint in his eyes. It reminds you that most of the adults seem to be afraid of him and talk about how dangerous of a guy he used to be. You almost feel sorry for any boy that incur his wrath, almost, but if they do, they will likely deserve it.'
+			act 'Time to leave':
 				'"Well it was nice talking to you, but I should likely get back to Anushka." You tell him.'
-				'He smiles a little. "Yeah wouldn''t want her wonder where you got off to, you girls have fun." Then he turns back to the tv.'
+				'He smiles a little. "Yeah wouldn''t want her wonder where you got off to, you girls have fun." Then he turns back to the TV.'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'livingroom'
 				end
 			end
@@ -917,9 +957,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Anushka''s parent''s room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/parents.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is fairly bare, what is in it is disorganized and untidy. Everything is all over the place, there is a bed, a bookshelf and a sideboard with a tv on it. Even though it''s minimalistically designed it''s still quite dirty.'
+	'The room is fairly bare, what is in it is disorganized and untidy. Everything is all over the place, there is a bed, a bookshelf and a sideboard with a TV on it. Even though it''s minimalistically designed it''s still quite dirty.'
 !!if the mother is there add this line. She is has a 50% chance of being there at any time. When not sleeping.
-	'As you walk inside the parents bedroom you see Valeria laying down on the bed watching some drama tv show while snacking on something.'
+	'As you walk inside the parents bedroom you see Valeria laying down on the bed watching some drama TV show while snacking on something.'
 !!if it is 24:00 till 07:00 then you get this instead of the above.
 	'You look into the bedroom and see Anushka''s parents asleep, they are sleeping as far apart as the bed allows. Not wanting to disturb them you close the door and leave.':gt 'anushapt','hallway'
 !!if no one is around this act shows up.
@@ -941,15 +981,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 			act 'Oh, really?':
 				*clr & cla
 				'Valeria turns all serious, "Yeah, I mean if I were in her shoes I wouldn''t give two shits about the others and focus all my energy on Radomir."'
-				'"Anushka is a fool for not latching on to Radomir. Just look at him, perfect body, he''s a really talented musician. He''ll probably mount up to something big, she''s really stupid for not latching onto him while she still can, before he makes it big and leaves her behind."'
+				'"Anushka is a fool for not latching on to Radomir. Just look at him, perfect body, he''s a really talented musician. He''ll probably amount to something big, she''s really stupid for not latching onto him while she still can, before he makes it big and leaves her behind."'
 				'You can''t even get a word in as she just keeps talking with a dreamy sigh. "Just think about the life she could have, living with a big rock star. Hell if I was younger I would''ve made sure that Radomir was all mine."'
 				'"But what about being free and living your own life just like she''s doing right now?" you ask.'
-				'She looks at you as if you just asked the stupids question ever. "Who gives a fuck. I can''t for the life of me understand why any woman would want that instead of having a man provide the perfect life. She would be free to do whatever, just party and spend his money and do what she wants." Valeria replies.'
+				'She looks at you as if you just asked the most stupid question ever. "Who gives a fuck. I can''t for the life of me understand why any woman would want that instead of having a man provide the perfect life. She would be free to do whatever, just party and spend his money and do what she wants." Valeria replies.'
 				act 'How about the other bandmates?':
 					*clr & cla
 					'Valeria looks at you confused and begins to laugh, "Who? You mean the other two losers that''s in the band? Don''t make me laugh, they''re nothing compared to Radomir."'
-					'"Maybe you should just let her chose by herself." you answer.'
-					'"Listen here <<$pcs_nickname>> I might not give two shits about Anushka but the best outcome for me..." she stops and takes a breather. "For her, I mean is to hook up with Radomir and that''s the end of the story."'
+					'"Maybe you should just let her choose for herself." you answer.'
+					'"Listen here <<$pcs_nickname>> I might not give two shits about Anushka but the best outcome for me-" she stops and takes a breather. "for her I mean, is to hook up with Radomir and that''s the end of the story."'
 					'Seeing you''re not getting anywhere with Valeria you sigh, say goodbye and turn around.'
 					act 'Ask about the photo album':gt 'anushapt', 'Photo Album'
 					act 'Bring up Alyona':gt 'anushapt', 'Ask about Alyona'
@@ -961,7 +1001,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 			*clr & cla
 			'There is a open photo album on the nightstand next to the bed, you walk up and glance at it. "Is that your family?"'
 			'In a rare occurrence Valeria almost seems to smile as she picks up the old album and starts to look through the photos of her and her family.'
-			'"We all look so happy then..." she says. "It was a whole different world back then. Come have a look."'
+			'"We all looked so happy then..." she says. "It was a whole different world back then. Come have a look."'
 			'You sit next to her as she flips through the photo album, all of a sudden you notice something...'
 			act 'Point at picture':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -971,7 +1011,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 				'You debate saying anything but feel you have to. "Maybe she wants to be her own woman and lead her own life and not have to have a guy take care of her."'
 				*nl
 				'Valeria looks at you like you just said the stupidest thing ever. "What kind of nonsense is that, mark my words if she doesn''t latch onto a good man, she will end up knocked up by some boy and end up with a no good husband and a bunch of ungrateful kids." You can''t help but feel that she is almost talking about herself.'
-				'She puts down the album and turns the volume on the tv up, more than needed. You take the queue and thank her for the story before you leave. At least you learned a lot more about why Anushka acts the way she does.'
+				'She puts down the album and turns the volume on the TV up, more than needed. You take the queue and thank her for the story before you leave. At least you learned a lot more about why Anushka acts the way she does.'
 				act 'Bring up the band':gt 'anushapt', 'Ask about the band'
 				act 'Bring up Alyona':gt 'anushapt', 'Ask about Alyona'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'
@@ -990,7 +1030,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anushparents':
 			act 'React':
 				*clr & cla
 				'"How can you say something like that? What did she do?" You wonder just what Alyona might have done to make Valeria so hostile.'
-				'"Do? She is a lying little cunt, that lets every boy fuck her like the slut she is. She brings all her misfortune down on herself just like my  daughter does. Stupid little bitches don''t know how easy they have it. They deserve all the shit they get, that happens to them."'
+				'"Do? She is a lying little cunt, that lets every boy fuck her like the slut she is. She brings all her misfortune down on herself just like my daughter does. Stupid little bitches don''t know how easy they have it. They deserve all the shit they get, that happens to them."'
 				'You stand there in shock not knowing what to say.'
 				'"Look what you''ve done, you''ve got me all worked up. I suggest you leave this room and not ask stupid questions anymore if you want to be welcome in my home!"'
 				act 'Leave':gt 'anushapt', 'hallway'