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locations/post_events.qsrc

@@ -8,31 +8,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	posteventQW1 = 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postevent1-1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You return to the man''s house after you leave the post office, and ring the doorbell. "Ah, you came back!" he smiles happily when he opens the door. "Please come in, this will only take a minute of your time."'
+	'You return to the man''s house after you leave the post office and ring the doorbell. "Ah, you came back!" he smiles happily when he opens the door. "Please come in, this will only take a minute of your time."'
 	'"I only need to make sure it fits your body well. So, you know, she doesn''t hate me!" he laughs nervously. "Anyway, right this way!"'
-	'He ushers you into the bathroom, giving you the gown after taking it out of the package carefully. He tells you to take as long as you need, and closes the door so you have some privacy.'
+	'He ushers you into the bathroom, giving you the gown after taking it out of the package carefully. He tells you to take as long as you need and closes the door so you have some privacy.'
 	act 'Model the gown for him':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postevent1-2.jpg"></center>'
-		'He didn''t lie, the gown covers you up enough so you don''t feel too exposed. You carefully put it on and open the bathroom door, modeling the gown for him.'
+		'He didn''t lie. The gown covers you up enough so you don''t feel too exposed. You carefully put it on and open the bathroom door, modeling the gown for him.'
 		'The man''s eyes light up the moment you enter the room.'
-		'"That''s great! Fantastic! She''s going to look so hot..." the man murmurs.'
-		''
+		'"That''s great! Fantastic! She''s going to look so hot..." he murmurs.'
+		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'easy'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Flirt with him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"What about me?" you ask him sweetly. When he looks at you askingly, you ask again: "What about me? Do you think I look hot in it?"'
-				'"I uhh..." the man mumbles.'
+				'"What about me?" you ask him sweetly. When he looks at you, you ask again. "What about me? Do you think I look hot in it?"'
+				'"I, uhh..." he mumbles.'
 				'"It''s okay! Your wife isn''t here, right? It''s just you and me! You can say whatever you want!" you wink at him.'
-				'The man is still speechless, but the bulge in his pants tell you everything you need to know. Nevertheless, you want to hear him say it.'
+				'The man is still speechless, but the bulge in his pants tells you everything you need to know. Nevertheless, you want to hear him say it.'
 				'"Well?" you ask him sharply.'
-				'"You look... very sexy," the man confesses. He''s actually fairly attractive, despite his age.'
-				''
+				'"You look... Very sexy," he confesses. He''s actually fairly attractive, despite his age.'
+				
 				gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'force', 'easy'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Press on and seduce him (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postevent1-3.jpg"></center>'
-						'"It''d be so easy for you to just throw me down on that bed and fuck me..." you say huskily, whisking the gown to the side to show him your snatch. "See? Easy access, I wouldn''t even have to take it off!"'
-						'The man knows he shouldn''t be looking at you, but at the same time can''t look away. Still, he makes no move and mutters: "Please, I''m a married man!"'
-						'"And? Married men still have needs! Don''t you want to fuck me?" you whisper into his ear, while you rub your hand over his groin. "Maybe I''ll do the things your wife won''t, if you ask me nicely..."'
-						'You seem to have struck a nerve there! He looks you in the eye to be sure you''re not joking, and then sighs: "Needs? Things my wife won''t do? "That would be just about everything. She''s never ever given me a blowjob, she thinks it''s degrading and disgusting!"'
-						'You slip out of the gown and stand naked before him, and smile sweetly: "Well, I don''t. Forget about your wife for a while, and focus on me. Your wife is not here, I am. If there was one thing you could ask of me... anything at all! What would it be?"'
-						'The man ponders for a second, and then looks at you as if he''s too embarrassed to say it. Then he says: "The blowjob. Definitely the blowjob. I haven''t had one in forever!"'
-						''
+						'"It''d be so easy for you to just throw me down on that bed and fuck me..." you say huskily, whisking the gown to the side to show him your pussy. "See? Easy access. I wouldn''t even have to take it off!"'
+						'The man knows he shouldn''t be looking at you, but at the same time can''t look away. Still, he makes no move. "Please, I''m a married man!" he mumbles.'
+						'"And? Married men still have needs! Don''t you want to fuck me?" you whisper in his ear while rubbing your hand over his groin. "Maybe I''ll do the things your wife won''t, if you ask me nicely..."'
+						'You seem to have struck a nerve there! He looks you in the eye to be sure you''re not joking, then sighs. "Needs? Things my wife won''t do? "That would be just about everything. She''s never ever given me a blowjob because she thinks it''s degrading and disgusting!"'
+						'You slip out of the gown and stand naked before him while smiling sweetly. "Well, I don''t. Forget about your wife for a while and focus on me. Your wife isn''t here, I am. If there was one thing you could ask of me, anything at all, what would it be?"'
+						'The man ponders for a second, then looks at you as if he''s too embarrassed to say it. "A blowjob, definitely a blowjob. I haven''t had one in forever!"'
+						
 						gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist', 'easy'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Don''t do it, but tell him he deserves better (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -56,20 +56,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								postmarriedQW = 1
-								'"You know what... no. Ask your wife one last time," you tell him. "Just be straight with her and tell her what you want, like you told me. If she cares for you, she''ll do it."'
-								'The man looks at you a bit confused for a second, but nods. In a way he actually looks relieved... he was about to cheat on his wife with you, but you stopped him!'
-								'"And if she keeps saying no, it''s her own fault if you find someone else who''s more willing. Someone like me. Right?" you smile at him. You''re still completely naked, and the man''s eyes explore your body once more.'
-								'"Right..." the man says doubtfully. You can tell that he''s very conflicted. He wants you, but he wants to remain faithful to his wife as well.'
-								'"You deserve someone who takes care of you! I mean it! You''re a great guy!" you tell him, to give him some confidence. "Let''s make a deal. Ask your wife tonight. If she says no, I will do it next time I deliver mail here. Okay?"'
+								'"You know what? No. Ask your wife one last time," you reply. "Just be straight with her and tell her what you want, like you told me. If she cares for you, she''ll do it."'
+								'The man looks at you in confusion for a second, but nods. In a way, he actually looks relieved...'
+								'"And if she keeps saying no, then it''s her own fault if you find someone else who''s more willing. Someone like me. Right?" you smile at him. You''re still completely naked, and the man''s eyes explore your body once more.'
+								'"Right..." he says doubtfully. You can tell that he''s very conflicted.'
+								'"You deserve someone who takes care of you! I mean it! You''re a great guy!" you tell him to give him some confidence. "Let''s make a deal. Ask your wife tonight. If she says no, I''ll do it next time I deliver mail here. Okay?"'
 								'"I guess that sounds fair?" he says, still a bit confused.'
-								'You give him a soft kiss on the cheek and say: "Good luck tonight!"'
+								'You give him a soft kiss on the cheek. "Good luck tonight!"'
 								'Before he can reply, you go to the bathroom and change back into your regular clothes.'
 								act 'Leave his apartment': gt 'pav_residential'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Don''t do it, but tell him he deserves better (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 						end	
-						act 'Give him a blowjob he''ll never forget':gt 'post_events', '1-1'
+						act 'Give him a blowjob he''ll never forget': gt 'post_events', '1-1'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Press on and seduce him (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -79,11 +79,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 					minut += 5
 					money += 300
 					gs 'stat'
-					'"Anyway... that''s all you needed from me, right?" you ask him with a wink, after he''s been staring at your outfit for a while.'
-					'The man snaps out of his daydream and instantly feels guilty for lusting over you. He mutters: "Erm, yes! Thank you! That was exactly what I needed to see, it looks great..."'
-					'"Great on me, you mean?" you laugh at him, nodding at the tenting erection in his pants. The man nods embarrassedly and leaves so you can change.'
-					'You put your regular clothes back on and go find him outside, who clearly looks relieved.'
-					'He offers you 300 <b>₽</b> and a wide smile: "Thank you so much! I know it was weird of me to ask, but you really helped me out today. Please take this for your time."'
+					'"Anyway, that''s all you needed from me, right?" you ask him with a wink after he''s been staring at your outfit for a while.'
+					'The man snaps out of his daydream and instantly feels guilty for lusting over you. "Erm, yes!" he mutters. "Thank you! That was exactly what I needed to see. It looks great..."'
+					'"Great on me, you mean?" you laugh while nodding at the tenting erection in his pants. The man nods embarrassedly and leaves so you can change.'
+					'You put your regular clothes back on and find him waiting outside, clearly looking relieved.'
+					'He offers you 300 <b>₽</b> and a wide smile. "Thank you so much! I know it was weird of me to ask, but you really helped me out today. Please take this for your time."'
 					act 'Take the money and leave': gt 'pav_residential'		
 				end
 			end
@@ -95,10 +95,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			minut += 5
 			money += 300
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"Uhh... that''s all you needed from me, right?" you ask the man, after he''s been staring at your outfit for a while.'
-			'The man snaps out of his daydream and nods: "Erm, yes! Thank you! That was exactly what I needed to see, it looks great!"'
-			'You change back into your regular clothes and go find the man outside, who clearly looks relieved.'
-			'"If this won''t do it, I don''t know what will," he mutters. He offers you 300 <b>₽</b> and a wide smile: "Thank you so much! I know it was weird of me to ask..."'
+			'"Uhh... That''s all you needed from me, right?" you ask after he''s been staring at your outfit for a while.'
+			'The man snaps out of his daydream and nods. "Erm, yes! Thank you! That was exactly what I needed to see. It looks great!"'
+			'You change back into your regular clothes and find him waiting outside, clearly looking relieved.'
+			'"If this won''t do it, I don''t know what will," he mutters before he offers you 300 <b>₽</b> and a wide smile. "Thank you so much! I know it was weird of me to ask..."'
 			act 'Take the money and leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 		end
 	end
@@ -109,30 +109,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1-1':
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Nice man', 38
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent1-4.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Really, just a blowjob? You could literally ask me to do anything you can think of, and all you ask for is a blowjob?" you grin at him. "That''s... kinda sweet, actually. I''ll make it a good one!"'
-	'You help him out of his pants and drop to your knees before him, giving his cock a few testy strokes with your hand.'
-	'"Mmm... you have a nice cock!" you muse, and close your lips around the shaft. As you slowly begin to suck him off, he looks around a bit uncomfortably. He''s not sure what his role is in all this.'
+	'"Just a blowjob? You could literally ask me to do anything you can think of, and all you ask for is a blowjob?" you grin at him. "That''s... kind of sweet, actually. I''ll make it a good one!"'
+	'You help him out of his pants and drop to your knees before him, giving his cock a few strokes with your hand.'
+	'"Mmm... You have a nice cock!" you muse and close your lips around the shaft. As you slowly start sucking him off, he looks around uncomfortably.'
 	'"Are you sure you want to do this?" he asks with some concern in his voice. "You don''t have to do it, you know. I can ju-"'
-	'Wow, this guy really is whipped!'
-	'You let his dick slip out of your mouth for a second and interrupt him: "It really has been a while, huh? I love the taste of your cock... you just sit back and relax..."'
-	'Then you close your lips around his erection again and try to take as much of his length down your throat as you can, while looking him straight in the eye. You make an effort of showing how much you enjoy sucking him off, and your slurping sounds fill the room. It''s a good thing his wife isn''t around, or she''d surely hear you!'
-	'Within a few minutes, the man''s breaths grow shorter and shallower until he groans: "Oh m- I''m going to cum!"'
+	*nl
+	'You let his dick slip out of your mouth and interrupt him. "It really has been a while, huh? I love the taste of your cock... You just sit back and relax..."'
+	'You close your lips around his cock again and try to take as much of his length down your throat as you can while looking him straight in the eye. You make an effort of showing how much you enjoy sucking him off as your slurping sounds fill the room.'
+	'Within a few minutes, the man''s breaths grow shorter and shallower until he groans. "Oh m- I''m going to cum!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Take his load on your body':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', 'Nice man'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent1-5.jpg"></center>'
-		'When he''s about to burst, you release his cock from your mouth and jerk him off, aiming the head at your boobs. Thick wads of his sperm cover your boobs, while you sit there grinning.'
+		'When he''s about to burst, you release his cock from your mouth and jerk him off while aiming the head at your breasts. Thick sperm soons covers them while you sit there grinning.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'"That was... oh wow... I don''t..." the man mumbles, as he sits down on a chair and regains his breath.'
-		'"What a big load! Maybe you should be a bit more firm with your wife to get what you want! It''s a crime to let a nice cock like that go to waste..." you wink at him, to give him some confidence.'
-		'"My wife... what have I done!?" the man exclaims, suddenly realizing he cheated on her. "Oh no. No no no! This is bad..."'
+		'"That was... Oh wow... I don''t..." the man mumbles as he sits on a chair and regains his breath.'
+		'"Maybe you should be a bit more firm with your wife to get what you want! It''s a crime to let a nice cock like that go to waste..." you wink at him.'
+		'"My wife... What have I done!?" he exclaims, suddenly realizing what he''s done. "Oh no. No no no! This is bad..."'
 		'He looks at you desperately, expecting you to say something.'
-		''
-		act 'Reassure him he did nothing wrong':
+		
+		act 'Reassure him':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 15
 			noshampoo = 1
@@ -142,12 +142,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1-1':
 			!!cum cleanup - you clean his (and anyone else''s cum that happens to be there) off you with a washcloth
 			'"Relax, you did nothing wrong! She''s the one not taking care of you! Right?" you tell him. The man looks at you, still rather doubtful.'
 			'"Right!?" you repeat.'
-			'"I guess... but..." he mutters.'
-			'"No buts," you continue. "If she''s not taking care of your needs, this is her fault more than yours. She should be happy to have a nice cock like yours at her disposal! Anyway... no one knows what we did, it''s our little secret!"'
-			'You put your hand on his shoulder and tell him: "Just give her the gown like you intended to, tonight. And show some confidence! Girls like that."'
-			'He nods decisively and smiles: "You know what? You''re right... Thank you so much!"'
-			'"Happy to help!" you wink at him, and go to the bathroom to freshen up. After you use a wash cloth to clean the sperm off your body, you get dressed again and return to the living room. The man is already rehearsing some lines he plans to use on his wife tonight.'
-			'You give him a soft kiss on his cheek and whisper: "Good luck tonight! You can do it!" and see yourself out.'
+			'"I guess... But..." he mutters.'
+			'"No buts," you continue. "If she''s not taking care of your needs, this is her fault more than yours. She should be happy to have a nice cock like yours at her disposal! Anyway, no one knows what we did, so it''s our little secret!"'
+			'You put your hand on his shoulder. "Just give her the gown like you intended to and show some confidence! Girls like that."'
+			'He nods decisively and smiles. "You know what? You''re right! Thank you so much!"'
+			'"Happy to help!" you wink before heading to the bathroom to freshen up. After you use a wash cloth to clean the sperm off your body, you get dressed and return to the living room. The man is already rehearsing some lines he plans to use on his wife tonight.'
+			'You give him a soft kiss on his cheek. "Good luck tonight! You can do it!" you whisper and see yourself out.'
 
 			act 'Leave his apartment': gt 'pav_residential'
 		end
@@ -159,117 +159,122 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	posteventQW2 = 3
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postevent2-2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go back to the apartment and climb the stairwell to the floor where you met Jenya. She''s already waiting for you in the stairwell, bottle in hand.'
-	'"There you are! I knew you''d come back!" she grins, and gives you another kiss on the mouth. Her breath smells faintly of sperm mixed with booze.'
-	'"Arsen was getting antsy! He didn''t think you''d come back..." she says. "I knew you would, though! I saw that look in your eyes... come on, they''re waiting for you!"'
-	'She pulls you into the apartment, and begins to undress you before the door is even closed.'
+	'You return to the apartment and climb the stairwell to the floor where you met Jenya. She''s already waiting for you in the stairwell, bottle in hand.'
+	'"There you are! I knew you''d come back!" she grins and gives you another kiss on the lips. Her breath smells faintly of sperm mixed with booze.'
+	'"Arsen was getting antsy! He didn''t think you''d come back..." she says. "I knew you would, though! I saw that look in your eyes... Come on, they''re waiting for you!"'
+	'She pulls you into the apartment and starts undressing you before the door is even closed.'
 	'Arsen and Maksim are behind a PC, looking through some photos Maksim took earlier. You see Jenya deepthroating Arsen like a pro, the happiness clearly visible in her eyes.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'porn', 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'"He loves it when I do that!" she whispers in your ear, while she keeps undressing you. "And... I do too! Shhh!"'
+	'"He loves it when I do that!" she whispers in your ear as she keeps undressing you. "And... I do too! Shhh!"'
 	'She gives you a conspiratory wink and undresses too.'
 	act 'Follow her to the bedroom':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-3.jpg"></center>'
-		'"You know where we''ll be, boys!" she shouts to the guys, and ushers you into a bedroom without waiting for an answer. She guides you to a bed and lies down next to you.'
-		'Her hands explore your body eagerly, while she aggressively slips her tongue into your mouth and kisses you dominantly.'
+		'"You know where we''ll be, boys!" she shouts to the guys and ushers you into a bedroom without waiting for an answer. She guides you to a bed and lies down next to you.'
+		'Her hands explore your body eagerly while she aggressively slips her tongue into your mouth and kisses you dominantly.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'"Are you okay, dear? Want some vodka for your nerves?" she asks, when she feels you''re a bit overwhelmed by her raw sexuality.'
-		''
-		act 'Drink the vodka':
+		'"Are you okay, dear? Want some vodka for your nerves?" she asks when she feels you''re a bit overwhelmed by her raw sexuality.'
+		
+		act 'Drink vodka':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-4.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Maybe a few sips to take the edge off," you mutter, but she pours a mug full and hands it to you. "Cheers!" she grins, and takes a swig straight from the bottle before putting it away.'
+			'"Maybe a few sips to take the edge off," you mutter, but she pours a mug full and hands it to you. "Cheers!" she grins and takes a swig straight from the bottle before putting it away.'
 			'You take a few sips of the vodka. It''s the cheap home brewed stuff, but it gets the job done.'
-			'Within minutes you feel a slight buzz in your head, and Jenya begins to kiss you again. She starts off slowly but her kisses become more and more passionate, and you struggle to keep the mug straight.'
-			'Realizing you need to get rid of the mug, you decide to just gulp down the rest and let yourself fall back down on the bed, where Jenya is immediately on top of you. After a few minutes, she refills the mug and hands it to you again.'
+			'Within minutes, you feel a slight buzz in your head and Jenya starts kissing you again. She starts off slowly, but her kisses become more and more passionate, and you struggle to keep the mug straight.'
+			'Realizing you need to get rid of the mug, you decide to just gulp down the rest and let yourself fall back down on the bed, where Jenya immediately climbs on top of you. After a few minutes, she refills the mug and hands it to you again.'
 			act 'Close your eyes and enjoy her touch': gt 'post_events', '2-1'
 		end
+		
 		act 'Ask about the camera':
 			cla
-			'"What''s the deal with the camera guy?" you ask her.'
-			'"Arsen likes to show me off," the girl smiles. "He''s such a sweetie! I''m not sure what Maksim does with the photos. I think he runs a website, or uses them for a magazine or whatever."'
-			'"You never asked him?" you ask her. "Aren''t you afraid someone will recognize you?"'
-			'Jenya laughs: "And then what? They would see I''m hot, that I love sex, and that I''m good at it! That''s nothing to be ashamed of! Besides, it hasn''t happened yet. I think he only publishes abroad..."'
-			'When she sees your face, she kisses your neck and says: "You''re not getting cold feet, are you? Here, have some vodka to ease your nerves! You''ll be fine, trust me!"'
+			'"What''s the deal with the camera guy?" you ask.'
+			'"Arsen likes to show me off," she smiles. "He''s such a sweetie! I''m not sure what Maksim does with the photos. I think he runs a website, or uses them for a magazine or whatever."'
+			'"You never asked him?" you ask. "Aren''t you afraid someone will recognize you?"'
+			'She laughs. "And then what? They would see I''m hot, that I love sex, and that I''m good at it! That''s nothing to be ashamed of! Besides, it hasn''t happened yet. I think he only publishes abroad..."'
+			'When she sees your face, she kisses your neck. "You''re not getting cold feet, are you? Here, have some vodka to ease your nerves! You''ll be fine, trust me!"'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Say you don''t want to do this and leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'You don''t want to do this (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					cla
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'"I''m sorry, but I really can''t do this," you tell her, and push her off you.'
-					'Jenya looks disappointed, but doesn''t try to stop you. She smiles: "That''s a shame. Arsen would''ve loved to have a cutie like you. Oh well, more cock for me!"'
+					'"I''m sorry, but I really can''t do this," you tell her and push her off you.'
+					'Jenya looks disappointed, but doesn''t try to stop you. "That''s a shame," she smiles. "Arsen would''ve loved to have a cutie like you. Oh well, more cock for me!"'
 					'You''re gathering your clothes when Arsen and Maksim enter the room. Both their cocks are semi-erect and bob up and down with every step.'
-					'"You''re leaving?" he asks you in disbelief. "We waited over an hour for this!?"'
-					'Maksim also seems upset: "I already promised the subscribers a threesome!"'
-					'"Relax, baby! It''s okay. Come here, I''ll take care of the both of you! That''s still a threesome, right?" she says, pulling the two of them towards the bed. "See yourself out, will you?" the girl waves you off with a wink, before she takes both the cocks in her hands and begins to jerk them off. You hear loud slurping sounds coming from the bedroom while you get dressed again in the living room. Jenya truly seems to enjoy what she does...'
+					'"You''re leaving?" he asks in disbelief. "We waited over an hour for this!"'
+					'Maksim also seems upset. "I already promised the subscribers a threesome!"'
+					'"Relax, baby! It''s okay. Come here, I''ll take care of both of you! That''s still a threesome, right?" she says while pulling the two of them towards the bed. "See yourself out, will you?" she says with a wink before she takes both their cocks in her hands and starts jerking them off. You hear loud slurping sounds coming from the bedroom as you get dressed in the living room. Jenya truly seems to enjoy what she does...'
 
 					act 'Leave the apartment': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Say you don''t want to do this and leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'You don''t want to do this (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 			act 'Drink the vodka':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-4.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Maybe a few sips to take the edge off," you mutter, but she completely fills the mug and hands it to you. "Cheers!" she grins, and takes a swig straight from the bottle before putting it away.'
+				'"Maybe a few sips to take the edge off," you mutter, but she completely fills the mug and hands it to you. "Cheers!" she grins and takes a swig straight from the bottle before putting it away.'
 				'You take a few sips of the vodka. It''s the cheap home brewed stuff, but it gets the job done.'
-				'Within minutes you feel a slight buzz in your head, and Jenya begins to kiss you again. She starts off slowly but her kisses become more and more passionate, and you struggle to keep the mug straight.'
-				'Realizing you need to get rid of the mug, you decide to just gulp down the rest and let yourself fall back down on the bed, where Jenya is immediately on top of you. After a few minutes, she refills the mug and hands it to you again.'
+				'Within minutes, you feel a slight buzz in your head and Jenya begins to kiss you again. She starts off slowly, but her kisses become more and more passionate, and you struggle to keep the mug straight.'
+				'Realizing you need to get rid of the mug, you decide to just gulp down the rest and let yourself fall back down on the bed, where Jenya immediately climbs on top of you. After a few minutes, she refills the mug and hands it to you again.'
 
 				act 'Close your eyes and enjoy her touch': gt 'post_events', '2-1'
 			end
 		end
+		
 		act 'Tell her you only want to be with her':
 			cla
 			'"To be honest, I only wanted to be with you!" you say softly.'
-			'Jenya shakes her head resolutely and says: "Sorry, honey. Me and Arsen share everything! Including our lovers. He got me several guys already, but you''re the first girl we share. There''s no way he would just watch, especially with a girl as cute as you! He''s going to be all over you!"'
-			'"Come on, please?" you ask her. "I really like you, but..."'
-			'She sighs and thinks for a second. Then she offers: "Okay, look. I will try to keep him happy and do most of the work, but you can''t ignore him. At least suck him off a little, you know? Does that sound okay?"'
-			'Before you answer, she clarifies: "I''ll offer myself when the time is there." She takes a deep breath, and continues: "I''ll tell him he can fuck my ass, if it really comes to that. He loves my ass, but I never let him have it. He just doesn''t know how to pace himself and make it feel good for me too! Anyway, I don''t think he''ll say no... but if he goes for you, I won''t stop him. I can''t stop him. Not after everything he does for me. I already promised him he''d get to fuck a young cutie today, so..."'
+			'She shakes her head resolutely. "Sorry, honey, but me and Arsen share everything, including our lovers. He got me several guys already, but you''re the first girl we''ve shared. There''s no way he would just watch, especially with a girl as cute as you! He''s going to be all over you!"'
+			'"Come on, please?" you plead. "I really like you, but..."'
+			'She sighs and thinks for a second. "Okay, look. I''ll try to keep him happy and do most of the work, but you can''t ignore him. At least suck him off a little, you know? Does that sound okay?"'
+			'Before you can answer, she continues. "I''ll tell him he can fuck my ass, if it really comes to that. He loves my ass, but I never let him have it. He just doesn''t know how to pace himself and make it feel good for me too! Anyway, I don''t think he''ll say no, but if he goes for you, I won''t stop him. I can''t stop him. Not after everything he does for me. I already promised him he''d get to fuck a young cutie today, so..."'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Say you don''t want to do this and leave (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'You don''t want to do this (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					cla
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'"I''m sorry, but I really can''t do this," you tell her, and push her off you.'
-					'The girl looks disappointed, but doesn''t try to stop you. She says: "That''s a shame. Arsen would''ve loved to have a cutie like you. Oh well, more cocks for me!"'
-					'You''re gathering your clothes when Arsen and Maksim enter the room. Both their cocks are fully erect and bob up and down with every step they take.'
-					'"You''re leaving?" he mutters in disbelief. "We waited over an hour for this!?"'
-					'Maksim also seems upset: "I already promised the subscribers a threesome! This sucks..."'
-					'"Relax, baby! I''m sorry, she changed her mind. Come here, I''ll take care of the both of you! That''s still a threesome, right Maksim?" she smiles, pulling the two of them towards the bed. "See yourself out, will you?" the girl waves you off with a wink, before she takes both the cocks in her hands and begins to jerk them off. The guys completely forget about you, and you walk out of the room quietly.'
+					'"I''m sorry, but I really can''t do this," you tell her and push her off you.'
+					'The girl looks disappointed, but doesn''t try to stop you. "That''s a shame. Arsen would''ve loved to have a cutie like you. Oh well, more cocks for me!"'
+					'You''re gathering your clothes when Arsen and Maksim enter the room. Both their cocks are semi-erect and bob up and down with every step.'
+					'"You''re leaving?" he asks in disbelief. "We waited over an hour for this!"'
+					'Maksim also seems upset. "I already promised the subscribers a threesome!"'
+					'"Relax, baby! I''m sorry, she changed her mind. Come here, I''ll take care of both of you! That''s still a threesome, right Maksim?" she smiles while pulling the two of them towards the bed. "See yourself out, will you?" she says with a wink before she takes both their cocks in her hands and starts jerking them off. The guys completely forget about you and you walk out of the room quietly.'
 
 					act 'Get dressed and leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Say you don''t want to do this and leave (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'You don''t want to do this (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
+			
 			act 'Ask for the vodka':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-4.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Maybe some vodka to take the edge off isn''t such a bad idea after all," you mutter, and she pours a mug full and hands it to you. "Cheers!" she grins, and takes a swig straight from the bottle before putting it away.'
+				'"Maybe some vodka to take the edge off isn''t such a bad idea after all," you mutter and she pours a mug full and hands it to you.' 
+				'"Cheers!" she grins and takes a swig straight from the bottle before putting it away.'
 				'You take a few sips of the vodka. It''s the cheap home brewed stuff, but it gets the job done.'
-				'Within minutes you feel a slight buzz in your head, and the girl begins to kiss you again. She starts off slowly but her kisses become more and more passionate, and you struggle to keep the mug straight.'
-				'Realizing you need to get rid of the mug, you decide to just gulp down the rest and let yourself fall back down on the bed, where the girl is immediately on top of you again. After a few minutes, she refills the mug and hands it to you again.'
+				'Within minutes, you feel a slight buzz in your head and Jenya starts kissing you again. She starts off slowly, but her kisses become more and more passionate, and you struggle to keep the mug straight.'
+				'Realizing you need to get rid of the mug, you decide to just gulp down the rest and let yourself fall back down on the bed, where Jenya immediately climbs on top of you again. After a few minutes, she refills the mug and hands it to you again.'
 
 				act 'Close your eyes and enjoy her touch': gt 'post_events', '2-1'
 			end
-			act 'Tell her that sounds fair':
+			
+			act 'That sounds fair':
 				cla
-				'You give her ass cheeks a soft squeeze and kiss her before saying: "Yea, okay. I can do that, if it means I get to be with you..."'
+				'You give her ass cheeks a soft squeeze and kiss her. "Yeah, okay. I can do that, if it means I get to be with you..."'
 				'At that point, Arsen and Maksim enter the room. They''re still completely naked, and their semi-erect cocks bob up and down with every step. Arsen theatrically jumps onto the bed and gets between the two of you, while Maksim readies his camera.'
 				'"Put your hand on his cock!" Jenya whispers in your ear. "Go on!"'
-				'You do as she says and smile for the camera when Maksim begins to take photos. Hopefully no one you know will see these...'
-				'"That''s it. Get that cock nice and hard," Arsen orders you.'
+				'You do as she says and smile for the camera as Maksim starts taking photos. Hopefully no one you know will see these...'
+				'"That''s it. Get that cock nice and hard," Arsen orders.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'post_events', '2-2'
 			end
@@ -281,57 +286,60 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-1':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A163'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-6.jpg"></center>'
-	'Suddenly you feel movement on the bed. When you open your eyes, your vision is a bit blurry but you can distinctly see Arsen''s cock. In the distance you hear the clicking of a camera.'
-	'Jenya whispers: "Go on, cutie. Suck his cock for me. Make him feel good."'
-	'You do as she says, gently sucking on the head of his cock while you do your best to hold the mug straight. Jenya kisses him fondly, asking Arsen: "Do you like her, babe? I figured you would..."'
+	'You suddenly feel movement on the bed. When you open your eyes, your vision is a bit blurry but you can distinctly see Arsen''s cock. You can also hear the clicking of a camera.'
+	'"Go on, cutie!" Jenya says. "Suck his cock for me. Make him feel good."'
+	'You do as she says, gently sucking on the head of his cock while you do your best to hold the mug straight. Jenya kisses him fondly. "Do you like her, babe? I figured you would..."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'For the next few minutes, you suck Arsen off while Maksim takes dozens of photos.'
 	act 'Continue':
-		cla
-		*clr
+		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Then Jenya slides down and takes the mug from your hand, putting it on the nightstand. She brings her mouth to Arsen''s dick, and also begins to lick his shaft while you suck on the head. For the next few minutes, you take turns sucking him off while the other licks on his balls.'
-		'"Do you want to fuck her now, babe?" you vaguely hear Jenya whispers in Arsen''s ear. "You can do whatever you want... she''s hammered, she''ll do whatever you want!"'
+		'Jenya slides down and takes the mug from your hand, putting it on the nightstand. She then brings her mouth to Arsen''s dick, and starts licking his shaft while you suck on the head. For the next few minutes, you take turns sucking him off while the other licks on his balls.'
+		'"Do you want to fuck her now, babe?" you vaguely hear Jenya whisper in Arsen''s ear. "You can do whatever you want... She''s hammered, so she''ll do whatever you want!"'
+		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-8.jpg"></center>'
 			!!precum check for Arsen fucking you
 			cumprecheck = 1
 			gs 'cum_manage'
-			'The alcohol is really hitting you hard now, and the room feels a bit wobbly when Arsen pulls you on top of him. He guides his cock to your pussy and grunts in your ear: "Sit down on it. Go on."'
-			'You slowly lower yourself onto his cock, feeling it penetrate you further and further. Jenya is smiling at you from the corner of the bed, idly jerking off Maksim who is still taking photos.'
-			'Arsen spanks your ass cheeks repeatedly, until you begin to move your hips back and forth.'
+			'The alcohol is really hitting you hard now, and the room feels a bit wobbly when Arsen pulls you on top of him. He guides his cock to your pussy and grunts in your ear. "Sit down on it. Go on."'
+			'You slowly lower yourself onto his cock, feeling it penetrate you further and further. Jenya is smiling at you from the corner of the bed, idly jerking off Maksim as he continues taking photos.'
+			'Arsen spanks your ass cheeks repeatedly until you move your hips back and forth.'
 			gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks'
-			'"That''s it, cutie! Ride that cock! Isn''t it the best cock you ever had?" Jenya grins, happy to see how enthusiastic you are. Is it because of the alcohol... or just because his cock makes you feel really good?'
+			'"That''s it, cutie! Ride that cock! Isn''t it the best cock you ever had?" Jenya grins, happy to see how enthusiastic you are. Is it because of the alcohol or just because his cock makes you feel really good?'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
+			
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-9.jpg"></center>'
-				'The next thing you remember is being on your knees next to the bed, getting fucked from behind by Arsen. Jenya eagerly grinds her crotch against your face, guiding your mouth to where she wants it.'
-				'Maksim taking photos of you getting fucked didn''t even cross your mind any more, and you moan eagerly while Arsen drills his cock inside you over and over.'
+				'The next thing you remember is being on your knees next to the bed, getting fucked from behind by Arsen as Jenya eagerly grinds her crotch against your face, guiding your mouth to where she wants it.'
+				'Maksim taking photos of you getting fucked doesn''t even cross your mind any more, and you moan eagerly while Arsen drills his cock inside you over and over.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -10, 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'"Remember, don''t cum inside her!" Jenya reminds Arsen. "If you''re cumming inside anyone, it should be me..."'
+				
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					!!both cum on your face, but Jenya licks it off before you leave. No cum deposit needs to be tracked, if anything a ''clean face'' trigger
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-10.jpg"></center>'
-					'Arsen pulls out of you, and tells you to get on your knees.'
-					'As Arsen guides his cock to your mouth, Jenya gets up from the bed and motions for Maksim to come closer. She takes the camera from him and grins: "Go on. You look like you''re about to pop too!"'
-					'It takes you a second to realize that there are two cocks in front of you instead of one, but you absent-mindedly close your fingers around them and suck the guys off in turns.'
+					'Arsen pulls out of you and tells you to get on your knees.'
+					'As he guides his cock to your mouth, Jenya gets up from the bed and motions for Maksim to come closer. She takes the camera from him and grins. "Go on. You look like you''re about to pop too!"'
+					'It takes you a second to realize that there are two cocks in front of you instead of one, but you absent-mindedly close your fingers around them and suck the guys off in turn.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A163', 1
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A164'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A164', 1
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Maksim gasps: "This... girl is amazing!" right when he hits his orgasm, and warm wads of his cum land on your face.'
-					'Arsen laughs: "Drunk sluts are the best! You''ve really outdone yourself this time, Jenya..."'
-					'Seconds later, he groans loudly and adds his load to Maksim''s, completely covering your face. Jenya takes photos of it all, grinning at you like a proud mother hen.'
+					'"This girl is amazing!" Maksim gasps right when he hits his orgasm and his warm cum lands on your face.'
+					'Arsen laughs. "Drunk sluts are the best! You''ve really outdone yourself this time, Jenya."'
+					'Seconds later, he groans loudly and adds his load to Maksim''s, completely covering your face. Jenya takes photos of it all while grinning at you like a proud mother hen.'
+					
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 15
@@ -342,15 +350,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-1':
 						gs 'cum_cleanup'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-11.jpg"></center>'
 						'Jenya gives the camera back to Maksim and gets down on the bed with you, softly kissing you and lapping their cum off your face with her tongue.'
-						'Maksim takes a few more photos of the two of you, and after that leaves the room with Arsen. You''re alone with Jenya now.'
+						'Maksim takes a few more photos of the two of you before he leaves the room with Arsen. You''re alone with Jenya now.'
 						'"You were so great! Did you see how happy Arsen was!?" she beams between kisses. "Mmm... mmm... delicious..."'
 						'For the next half hour, Jenya keeps kissing and fondling you. In your drunken haze, you can''t think of anything else to do than to just kiss and fondle her back.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 30
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'Eventually she gets up and says: "Alright, cutie! Time to get you out of here. Come on, I''ll help you get dressed."'
-						'You put your clothes back on with a little help from Jenya, and walk to the living room with her. You see Arsen and Maksim near the PC again, looking over photos of you getting fucked from behind while you eat Jenya''s snatch. They both give you a dismissive nod when they realize you''re leaving.'
-						'She walks you down the stairs and kisses you on the cheek one more time before heading back up. Hopefully they''ll keep those photos to themselves...'
+						'She eventually gets up. "Alright, cutie! Time to get you out of here. Come on, I''ll help you get dressed."'
+						'You put your clothes back on with a little help from Jenya and walk to the living room with her. You see Arsen and Maksim near the PC again, looking over photos of you getting fucked from behind while you eat Jenya''s pussy. They both give you a dismissive nod when they realize you''re leaving.'
+						'Jenya walks you down the stairs and kisses you on the cheek one more time before heading back up. Hopefully they''ll keep those photos to themselves...'
 
 						act 'Lean against a wall and figure out where you are': gt 'pav_residential'
 					end
@@ -364,21 +372,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A163'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-12.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get down on your back again and gently stroke his cock until it is completely erect, occasionally kissing the head.'
+	'You get down on your back again and gently stroke his cock until it''s completely erect while occasionally kissing the head.'
 	'Jenya joins you and the two of you run your tongues across Arsen''s shaft, making him groan with delight. You occasionally hear a soft click from a camera in the background, but don''t pay attention to it.'
-	'"Go on, cutie. Take it in your mouth!" Jenya winks at you, and then uses her lips to guide Arsen''s erection towards your mouth.'
-	'Remembering your deal with her, you part your lips obediently and close them again around his shaft, licking his precum off the head. It tastes a bit salty, but not necessarily unpleasant.'
-	'Arsen repositions a little so he can get more of his length into your mouth, while Jenya gets between your legs and begins to lick your pussy lips. Wow, she''s good at this...'
+	'"Go on, cutie. Take it in your mouth!" Jenya winks at you and uses her lips to guide Arsen''s erection towards your mouth.'
+	'Remembering your deal with her, you obediently part your lips and close them around his shaft, licking his precum off the head. It tastes a bit salty, but not necessarily unpleasant.'
+	'Arsen repositions a little so he can get more of his length into your mouth, while Jenya gets between your legs and starts licking your pussy. She''s good at it...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -5
 	gs 'stat'
+	
 	act 'Continue':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-13.jpg"></center>'
 		*clr & cla
-		'When Arsen looks like he wants more, Jenya quickly intervenes shooting you a wink: "I''m so horny right now! I need you to fuck me, babe! Please?"'
-		'Arsen grins and guides his dick into Jenya''s welcoming snatch, making her moan with delight. You watch her tits bounce back and forth over your head for a while, occasionally pinching her nipples while you play with yourself.'
-		'Then you sit up straight and kiss Jenya on her mouth, stifling her moans while Arsen fucks her harder and harder to try and coax a reaction out of her.'
-		'After a few minutes, Arsen slows down a little and collapses down on the bed, gasping for breath. His erection, glistening with Jenya''s juices, is pointing straight up in the air.'
+		'When Arsen looks like he wants more, Jenya quickly intervenes, shooting you a wink. "I''m so horny right now! I need you to fuck me, babe! Please?"'
+		'Arsen grins and guides his dick into Jenya''s welcoming pussy, making her moan with delight. You watch her breasts bounce back and forth over your head for a while, occasionally pinching her nipples while you play with yourself.'
+		'You then sit up straight and kiss Jenya on the lips, stifling her moans while Arsen fucks her harder to try and coax a reaction out of her.'
+		'After a few minutes, Arsen slows down a little and collapses on the bed, gasping for breath. His erection, glistening with Jenya''s juices, is pointing straight up in the air.'
 		'Jenya takes a moment to catch her breath as well, and wipes the sweat from her forehead. "What do you think, sweetie? Do you want to take it for a ride?" she asks between breaths. She looks fairly tired from the fucking Arsen just gave her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', -5
@@ -389,27 +398,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-14.jpg"></center>'
-				'You discretely shake your head at her, remembering her about your deal.'
-				'Jenya bites her lower lip in disappointment, but then smiles at Arsen as she straddles him. "You''re not done yet, babe!" she tells him in a sing-song voice while she slowly lets his cock sink into her again.'
+				'You discretely shake your head at her and she bites her lower lip in disappointment, but then smiles at Arsen as she straddles him. "You''re not done yet, babe!" she tells him in a sing-song voice while she slowly lets his cock sink into her again.'
 				'She silently mouths the words "You owe me!" to you while she begins to ride Arsen. From the ecstatic look on her face a few seconds later, she really doesn''t seem to mind all that much!'
-				'Jenya''s high-pitched squeals fill the room while she rides Arsen enthusiastically, despite her fatigue. Realizing you have to do at least something, you gently fondle Arsen''s balls.'
-				'Suddenly he realizes you''re still here, and his hand finds its way between your legs. He slips several fingers inside your sopping pussy and begins to finger you.'
+				'Jenya''s high-pitched squeals fill the room as she rides enthusiastically Arsen, despite her fatigue. Realizing you have to do <i>something</i>, you gently fondle Arsen''s balls.'
+				'He suddenly realizes you''re still here and his hand finds its way between your legs. He slips several fingers inside your pussy and starts fingering you.'
 				'Arsen is very interested in you and keeps trying to get close to you, but Jenya is always one step ahead of him and offers herself so you don''t have to.'
-				'Eventually his breathing grows short and more ragged, and you realize he must be close to orgasming. Jenya smiles tiredly at you and says: "Go ahead, cutie. Finish him off with your mouth!"'
+				'Eventually, his breathing grows short and more ragged, and you realize he must be close to orgasming. Jenya smiles tiredly at you. "Go ahead, cutie. Finish him off with your mouth!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 5
 				gs 'stat'
+				
 				act 'Give Arsen a blowjob':
-					cla
-					*clr
+					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-15.jpg"></center>'
-					'Jenya has done so much already, you can''t say no to this too. You nod and get on your knees before Arsen, gently running your tongue across his shaft. You can taste Jenya''s juices on it very clearly. The taste is intoxicating! Hopefully she''s not too tired for some alone time with you later...'
-					'Meanwhile Jenya beckons the photographer to come closer and grins: "I know I shouldn''t, but you look like you could use some relief too, Maksim!"'
-					'The photographer''s cock had been hard throughout the shoot, and Jenya takes most of his length in her mouth immediately before he can even say no. You focus on giving Arsen a good blowjob, while you hear Maksim groan behind you. Jenya already got him off!'
+					'You nod and get on your knees before Arsen, gently running your tongue across his shaft. You can taste Jenya''s juices on it.'
+					'Jenya beckons Maksim to come closer and grins. "I know I shouldn''t, but you look like you could use some relief too, Maksim!"'
+					'Maksim''s cock had been hard throughout the shoot, and Jenya takes most of his length in her mouth immediately before he can say a word. You focus on sucking Arsen''s dick as you hear Maksim groan behind you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'				
+					
 					act 'Let Arsen cum in your mouth':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 5
@@ -418,12 +427,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A164', 1
 						!!cum management: you have the loads of both Maksim and Arsen in your mouth and swallow them
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-16.jpg"></center>'
-						'"I''m going to cum!" Arsen groans, and you feel the first jets of his sperm landing on your tongue. Jenya immediately gets down next to you, and eagerly watches how her boyfriend shoots his load in your mouth. Arsen''s load isn''t very big, but that''s no surprise - how many times did Jenya make him cum already today?'
-						'When Arsen pulls back, she grins proudly at you and locks her lips onto yours. Suddenly your mouth is even more filled with sperm! Jenya kept Maksim''s load in her mouth when he came, and just fed it to you...'
-						'After a passionate kiss, she orders you: "Show their cum to the camera and swallow it, cutie! Enjoy your tasty treat..."'
-						'You obediently open your mouth, and Maksim takes several more photos of you. "Oh man! This next update is going to be spectacular... I don''t know where you found her, but wow!" he grins at Arsen.'
-						'Then you swallow the sperm, and Maksim takes several more photos of your empty mouth. When he has the shots he wants, him and Arsen leave for the living room. You relax on the bed for a moment with Jenya.'
-						'"I''m exhausted!" Jenya says tiredly. "I''m going to take a nap. You can stay if you want? We can nap together?"'
+						'"I''m going to cum!" Arsen groans and you feel the first jets of his sperm landing on your tongue. Jenya immediately gets down next to you and eagerly watches how her boyfriend shoots his load in your mouth. Arsen''s load isn''t very big, but that''s no surprise - how many times did Jenya make him cum already today?'
+						'When Arsen pulls back, she grins proudly at you and locks her lips onto yours. Your mouth is then filled with even more cum.'
+						'"Show their cum to the camera and swallow it, cutie!" she orders. "Enjoy your tasty treat..."'
+						'You obediently open your mouth and Maksim takes several more photos of you. "Oh man! This next update is going to be spectacular! I don''t know where you found her, but wow!" he grins at Arsen.'
+						'You then swallow the cum and Maksim takes several more photos of your empty mouth. When he has the shots he wants, he and Arsen leave as you relax on the bed with Jenya.'
+						'"I''m exhausted!" she says tiredly. "I''m going to take a nap. You can stay if you want? We can nap together?"'
+						
 						act 'Stay and nap with Jenya':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 65
@@ -432,27 +442,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 							gs 'stat'
 							!!energy gain, equivalent of an hour of napping
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-17.jpg"></center>'
-							'A nap doesn''t sound so bad! "Now that you mention it, I could use a nap..." you tell her, and get comfortable in the bed.'
-							'Jenya embraces you and you both fall asleep. An hour later she wakes up again and begins to rub her body against yours. Her soft kisses on your neck give you goosebumps all over your body.'
+							'"Now that you mention it, I could use a nap..." you reply and get comfortable on the bed.'
+							'Jenya embraces you and you both fall asleep. You''re then awoken by the sensation of her rubbing her body against yours. Her soft kisses on your neck give you goosebumps all over your body.'
 							'"Sorry cutie, but we have plans for tonight!" she whispers with some regret in her voice. "Maybe we''ll see you again?"'
-							'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile while you get out of bed and put your clothes back on. Jenya doesn''t bother to put any on, herself.'
+							'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile as you get out of bed and put your clothes back on. Jenya doesn''t bother to put any on.'
 							'When the two of you walk to the living room, Arsen and Maksim are taking turns smoking the water pipe.'
 							'"All done, boys?" she grins. "Look, Maksim is done with the upload. Let''s see how we did!"'
 							'You see a foreign porn website on the computer screen. A picture of your sperm-filled mouth is very prominent on it. The image set has already been downloaded several hundred times!'
-							'"You''re going to be a big hit in Germany!" Maksim winks. "Nah, just kidding. It''s a German amateur website, don''t worry. No one in Russia will find it, your secret is safe!"'
-							'Before you can say anything more, Jenya grabs you by the arm and pulls you to the door. "So... maybe we''ll see you soon, ''porn star''!" she grins, pushing you out of the apartment before giving you one last kiss before closing the door behind you.'
-							'Well, that just happened...'
+							'"You''re going to be a big hit in Germany!" Maksim winks. "Just kidding. It''s a German amateur website, so no one in Russia will find it. Your secret is safe!"'
+							'Before you can say anything, Jenya grabs you by the arm and pulls you to the door. "So... Maybe we''ll see you soon, ''porn star''!" she grins while pushing you out of the apartment before giving you one last kiss and closing the door behind you.'
+							
 							act 'Return to the streets': gt 'pav_residential'
 						end
-						act 'Tell her you can''t stay':
+						
+						act 'I can''t stay':
 							cla
 							minut += 5
-							''
-							'"Sorry, I can''t stay," you tell her, shaking your head.'
-							'Jenya pouts a bit but nods understandingly. She gets up to give you one last kiss and says: "You were so much fun! I loved having you around... Maybe I''ll see you again?"'
-							'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile while you put your clothes back on.'
-							'When you walk through the living room on your way out, you see Maksim and Arsen sitting at a desk in front of a computer screen again. They browse back and forth between images of your sperm-filled mouth, trying to decide on which is the best one. You probably don''t want to know what they''re going to do with those...'
-							'You decide not to disturb them, and leave the apartment.'
+							gs 'stat'
+							'"Sorry, but I can''t stay," you reply while shaking your head.'
+							'She pouts, but nods understandingly. She gets up to give you one last kiss. "You were so much fun and I loved having you around! Maybe I''ll see you again?"'
+							'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile as you put your clothes back on.'
+							'When you walk through the living room on your way out, you see Maksim and Arsen sitting at a desk in front of the computer screen again. They browse back and forth between images of your sperm-filled mouth, trying to decide on which is the best one. You probably don''t want to know what they''re going to do with those...'
+							'You decide not to disturb them and leave the apartment.'
 							act 'Return to the streets': gt 'pav_residential'
 						end
 					end
@@ -461,6 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 		else
 			act 'Decline and let her do it (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
+		
 		act 'Agree to ride Arsen':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
@@ -469,37 +481,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-8.jpg"></center>'
-			'Jenya looks exhausted, and very satisfied... you want that too! Without saying a word, you throw your leg over Arsen and straddle him, slowly guiding his cock to your wet slit.'
-			'You groan loudly as you feel his erection parting your pussy lips, slowly sinking further and further into your body. Jenya is smiling at you from the corner of the bed, idly jerking off Maksim who is still taking photos.'
-			'Arsen spanks your ass cheeks a few times, and you automatically begin to ride him.'
+			'Without saying a word, you throw your leg over Arsen and straddle him before slowly guiding his cock to your wet slit.'
+			'You groan loudly as you feel his cock parting your pussy lips and slowly sink into your body. Jenya is smiling at you from the corner of the bed while idly jerking off Maksim as he continues taking photos.'
+			'Arsen spanks your ass cheeks a few times and you automatically start riding him.'
 			'"That''s it, cutie! Ride that cock!" Jenya grins, happy to see how enthusiastic you are.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
+			
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-9.jpg"></center>'
-				'The next thing you remember is being on your knees next to the bed, getting fucked from behind by Arsen. Jenya eagerly grinds her crotch against your face, guiding your mouth to where she wants it.'
-				'Maksim taking photos of you getting fucked didn''t even cross your mind any more, and you moan eagerly into Jenya''s snatch while Arsen drills his cock inside you over and over.'
+				'The next thing you remember is being on your knees next to the bed, getting fucked from behind by Arsen as Jenya eagerly grinds her pussy against your face, guiding your mouth to where she wants it.'
+				'Maksim taking photos of you getting fucked doesn''t even cross your mind any more, and you moan eagerly into Jenya''s pussy as Arsen drills his cock inside you over and over.'
 				'"Remember, don''t cum inside her!" Jenya reminds him. "If you''re cumming inside anyone, it should be me..."'
-				'Eventually his breathing grows short and more ragged, and you realize he must be close to orgasming. Jenya smiles at you and says: "Go ahead, cutie. Finish him off with your mouth!"'
+				'Eventually, his breathing grows short and more ragged, and you realize he must be close to orgasming. Jenya smiles at you. "Go ahead, cutie. Finish him off with your mouth!"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -15, 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
+				
 				act 'Let Arsen cum in your mouth':
 					*clr & cla
 					!!cum management: you have the loads of both Maksim and Arsen in your mouth and swallow them
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-16.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m going to cum!" Arsen groans, mere seconds after you take his cock in your mouth. You feel the first jets of his sperm landing on your tongue. Jenya immediately gets down next to you, and eagerly watches how her boyfriend shoots his load in your mouth. Arsen''s load isn''t very big, but that''s no surprise - how many times did Jenya make him cum already today?'
+					'"I''m going to cum!" Arsen groans, mere seconds after you take his cock into your mouth. You feel the first jets of his sperm landing on your tongue as Jenya immediately gets down next to you and eagerly watches how her boyfriend shoots his load in your mouth. Arsen''s load isn''t very big, but that''s no surprise - how many times did Jenya make him cum already today?'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A163', 1
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A164'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A163', 1
 					gs 'stat'
-					'When Arsen pulls back, she grins proudly at you and locks her lips on yours. Suddenly your mouth is filled with much more sperm! Jenya must''ve gotten Maksim off while you were busy, and kept his sperm in her mouth when he came...'
-					'After a passionate kiss, she orders you: "Show the load to the camera and swallow it, cutie! Enjoy your tasty treat..."'
-					'You obediently open your mouth, and Maksim takes several more photos of you. "Oh man! This next update is going to be spectacular... I don''t know where you found her, but wow!" he grins at Arsen.'
-					'Then you swallow the sperm, and Maksim takes several more photos of your empty mouth. When he has the shots he wants, him and Arsen leave for the living room. You relax on the bed for a moment with Jenya.'
-					'"I''m exhausted!" Jenya says tiredly. "I''m going to take a nap. You can stay if you want? We can nap together?"'
+					'When Arsen pulls back, she grins proudly at you and locks her lips on yours. Your mouth is suddenly filled with even more cum! Jenya must''ve gotten Maksim off while you were busy and kept his cum in her mouth.'
+					'"Show the load to the camera and swallow it, cutie!" she orders. "Enjoy your tasty treat..."'
+					'You obediently open your mouth and Maksim takes several more photos of you. "Oh man! This next update is going to be spectacular! I don''t know where you found her, but wow!" he grins at Arsen.'
+					'You then swallow the sperm and Maksim takes several more photos of your empty mouth. When he has the shots he wants, he and Arsen leave as you relax on the bed with Jenya.'
+					'"I''m exhausted!" she says tiredly. "I''m going to take a nap. You can stay if you want? We can nap together?"'
+					
 					act 'Stay and nap with Jenya':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 65
@@ -508,26 +523,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2-2':
 						gs 'stat'
 						!!energy gain, equivalent of an hour of napping
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent2-17.jpg"></center>'
-						'A nap doesn''t sound so bad! "Now that you mention it, I could use a nap..." you tell her, and get comfortable in the bed.'
-						'Jenya embraces you and you both fall asleep. An hour later she wakes up again and begins to rub her body against yours. Her soft kisses on your neck give you goosebumps all over your body.'
+						'"Now that you mention it, I could use a nap..." you reply and get comfortable on the bed.'
+						'Jenya embraces you and you both fall asleep. You''re then awoken by the sensation of her rubbing her body against yours. Her soft kisses on your neck give you goosebumps all over your body.'
 						'"Sorry cutie, but we have plans for tonight!" she whispers with some regret in her voice. "Maybe we''ll see you again?"'
-						'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile while you get out of bed and put your clothes back on. Jenya doesn''t bother to put any on, herself.'
+						'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile as you get out of bed and put your clothes back on. Jenya doesn''t bother to put any on.'
 						'When the two of you walk to the living room, Arsen and Maksim are taking turns smoking the water pipe.'
 						'"All done, boys?" she grins. "Look, Maksim is done with the upload. Let''s see how we did!"'
 						'You see a foreign porn website on the computer screen. A picture of your sperm-filled mouth is very prominent on it. The image set has already been downloaded several hundred times!'
-						'"You''re going to be a big hit in Germany!" Maksim winks. "Nah, just kidding. It''s a German amateur website, don''t worry. No one in Russia will find it, your secret is safe!"'
-						'Before you can say anything more, Jenya grabs you by the arm and pulls you to the door. "So... maybe we''ll see you soon, ''porn star''!" she grins, giving you one last kiss before closing the door.'
+						'"You''re going to be a big hit in Germany!" Maksim winks. "Just kidding. It''s a German amateur website, so no one in Russia will find it. Your secret is safe!"'
+						'Before you can say anything, Jenya grabs you by the arm and pulls you to the door. "So... Maybe we''ll see you soon, ''porn star''!" she grins while pushing you out of the apartment before giving you one last kiss and closing the door behind you.'
 						act 'Return to the streets': gt 'pav_residential'
 					end
-					act 'Tell her you can''t stay':
+					
+					act 'I can''t stay':
 						cla
 						minut += 5
-						''
-						'"Sorry, I can''t stay," you tell her, shaking your head.'
-						'Jenya pouts a bit but nods understandingly. She gets up to give you one last kiss and says: "You were great! Maybe I''ll see you again?"'
-						'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile while you put your clothes back on.'
-						'When you walk through the living room on your way out, you see Maksim and Arsen sitting at a desk in front of a computer screen again. They browse back and forth between images of you having sperm in your mouth, trying to decide on which is the best one. You probably don''t want to know what they''re going to do with those...'
-						'You decide not to disturb them, and leave the apartment.'
+						gs 'stat'
+						'"Sorry, but I can''t stay," you reply while shaking your head.'
+						'She pouts, but nods understandingly. She gets up to give you one last kiss. "You were so much fun and I loved having you around! Maybe I''ll see you again?"'
+						'"Maybe. I deliver mail every week!" you smile as you put your clothes back on.'
+						'When you walk through the living room on your way out, you see Maksim and Arsen sitting at a desk in front of the computer screen again. They browse back and forth between images of your sperm-filled mouth, trying to decide on which is the best one. You probably don''t want to know what they''re going to do with those...'
+						'You decide not to disturb them and leave the apartment.'
 						act 'Return to the streets': gt 'pav_residential'
 					end
 				end
@@ -543,10 +559,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A108'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent3-2.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I knew you''d come back," the man grins when you return to his house. "Something in your eyes told me you like being a little slut even more than I like having one around. Come in."'
-	'You give the man a weak smile and walk past him, entering his house. There''s no turning back now.'
-	'He takes you by the arm and guides you to his bedroom, where he strips and lies down on the bed. "Strip and join me," he orders you. "Play with my cock while we talk."'
-	'You nod and take your clothes off, before you sit down on the bed and wrap your fingers around his shaft.'
-	'"So, girl... tell me. Who are you, and why are you here holding the cock of a man you''ve just met?" the man asks sharply, letting out a satisfied groan when you begin to move your hand slowly. His cock is definitely not small, that''s for sure!'
+	'You give the man a weak smile and enter his house. There''s no turning back now.'
+	'He takes you by the arm and guides you to his bedroom, where he strips and lies down on the bed. "Strip and join me," he orders. "Play with my cock while we talk."'
+	'You nod and take your clothes off before you sit on the bed and wrap your fingers around his shaft.'
+	'"So, girl... Tell me. Who are you and why are you here holding the cock of a man you''ve just met?" he asks sharply, letting out a satisfied groan when you start moving your hand slowly. His cock is definitely not small, that''s for sure!'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'prostitution'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'"Uhhh, I''m <<$pcs_firstname>>," you say. "And I''m here because..."'
@@ -554,16 +570,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	act '"I want what''s in that package."':
 		cla
 		'"I want what''s in that package."'
-		'"I see... so you''re a whore?" he remarks.'
-		'When you''re about to object, he continues: "You have sex with men, and in return they give you things. Sounds like a whore to me?"'
-		'The man laughs when he sees you think, and reassures you: "Don''t worry, I''m not judging you... I love whores who know what they''re doing. Make me happy and I''ll make it worth your while. Show me what you can do with your mouth. Only your mouth, no hands."'
+		'"I see. So you''re a whore?" he remarks.'
+		'When you''re about to object, he continues. "You have sex with men and they give you something in return. That sounds like a whore to me."'
+		'The man laughs when he sees your reaction. "Don''t worry, I''m not judging you. I love whores who know what they''re doing. Make me happy and I''ll make it worth your while. Show me what you can do with your mouth. Only your mouth, no hands."'
 		
 		act 'Please him with your mouth': gt 'post_events', '3-1'
 	end
 	act '"I love cocks!"':
 		cla
 		'"I love cocks!"'
-		'"Hah! My favourite type of girl!" he laughs, not expecting such a direct answer from you. "In that case: impress me. Take care of me and you''ll get all the cock you want. And I''ll take care of you... I love spoiling my little sluts. Go on. Show me what you can do with your mouth. Only your mouth, no hands."'
+		'"Hah! My favourite type of girl!" he laughs, not expecting such a direct answer from you. "In that case: impress me. Take care of me and you''ll get all the cock you want. And I''ll take care of you. I love spoiling my little sluts. Go on. Show me what you can do with your mouth. Only your mouth, no hands."'
 		
 		act 'Please him with your mouth': gt 'post_events', '3-1'
 	end	
@@ -571,8 +587,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		cla
 		postcuffs = 1
 		'"I like being told what to do."'
-		'"Do you, now?" the man grins evilly. "In that case, let''s make this a little bit more interesting. Close your eyes, turn around and put your hands behind your back."'
-		'You hear him rummaging in the nightstand drawer for a moment, and then feel the cold touch of metal on your wrists. He tells you: "Those are not coming off until you get me off. Start sucking."'
+		'"Do you, now?" he grins evilly. "In that case, let''s make this a little bit more interesting. Close your eyes, turn around and put your hands behind your back."'
+		'You hear him rummaging in the nightstand drawer before you feel the cold touch of metal on your wrists. "Those are not coming off until you get me off. Start sucking."'
 
 		act 'Please him with your mouth': gt 'post_events', '3-1'
 	end	
@@ -588,8 +604,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3-1':
 	
 	if stat['bj'] >= 50:
 		!!you swallow his load
-		'You''ve sucked cock many times before, and pull out every trick you know to best please him. He seems thoroughly impressed with your performance. Despite the thick head you manage to take his cock all the way down your throat too, which impresses him even more!'
-		'Finally, he grabs a firm hold of your head to keep it in place. Several splurts of his sperm land on your tongue, after which he finally lets you go.'
+		'You''ve sucked cock many times before, and pull out every trick you know to best please him. He seems thoroughly impressed with your performance. Despite the thick head, you manage to take his cock all the way down your throat too, which impresses him even more.'
+		'Finally, he grabs a firm hold of your head to keep it in place as several splurts of cum land on your tongue, after which he finally lets you go.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'deepthroat', 'prostitution'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A108'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -600,7 +616,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3-1':
 		!!you swallow his load
 		'You have some experience giving blowjobs, but it''s difficult to do without being able to use your hands!'
 		'You do the best you can, but struggle when he tries to push more of his length down your throat. The thick head makes it very difficult.'
-		'"Time''s up!" he grunts, and he grabs a firm hold of your head. He begins to fuck your mouth, roaring as he shoots his cum directly down your throat.'
+		'"Time''s up!" he grunts and grabs a firm hold of your head. He starts fucking your mouth, roaring as he shoots his cum directly down your throat.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'prostitution'
 		gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A108'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -608,12 +624,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3-1':
 		
 		act 'Continue': gt 'post_events', '3-2'
 	else
-		'You swallow nervously when you see his erection dangling in front of you, it''s bigger than you thought it would be!'
-		'The man notices your hesitation and says: "Well? I said: start sucking!"'
+		'You swallow nervously when you see his cock dangling in front of you. It''s bigger than you thought it would be!'
+		'The man notices your hesitation. "Well? I said start sucking!"'
 		'You try your best, but it''s painfully obvious to him that you''re no good at pleasing a man with your mouth.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
-		'After he feels your teeth on his cock for the second time, he pulls away from you and scolds you: "That was terrible! Wait here..."'
-		'He walks off, and returns showing you a ring gag. He says: "Since you can''t give a decent blowjob, you''re going to wear this. Open your mouth."'
+		'After he feels your teeth on his cock for the second time, he pulls away and scolds you. "That was terrible! Wait here..."'
+		'He walks away before returning with a ring gag. "Since you can''t give a decent blowjob, you''re going to wear this. Open your mouth."'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'humiliation', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -622,15 +638,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3-1':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				!!you swallow his load
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent3-6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head no and beg him: "No, I can do it! Please let me try again! No need for that thing."'
+				'You shake your head. "No, I can do it! Please let me try again! No need for that thing."'
 				'He looks at you intently for a second, but puts the gag away. "Alright then," he sighs. "I''ll give you one more chance. Get down on your knees in front of me."'
 				'You do as he says and take the head of his cock back into your mouth, making sure to be careful with your teeth.'
-				'Luckily the man lets you control the pace. Occasionally you try to take a bit more of his shaft in your mouth, but you decide to play it safe and mostly just focus on the head, gently sucking on it and teasing it with your tongue.'
+				'Luckily, he lets you control the pace. While you occasionally try to take a bit more of his shaft in your mouth, you decide to play it safe and mostly just focus on the head, gently sucking on it and teasing it with your tongue.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'prostitution'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A108'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"Look at me!" he groans, and a warm load of his tangy sperm fills your mouth seconds later. "That was better I guess, but rather half-hearted. Swallow," he orders you, while he strokes your hair with his hand. With him so obviously waiting for you to swallow his sperm, you decide to just do it without hesitation. He seemed unhappy enough with your performance already!'
-				'"You have a lot to learn, but... it''ll be worth it!" he sighs contently. "You could become a good little slut for me, with some training."'
+				'"Look at me!" he groans and a warm load of his cum fills your mouth seconds later. "That was better I guess, but rather half-hearted. Swallow," he orders as he strokes your hair with his hand. You do so without hesitation.'
+				'"You have a lot to learn, but it''ll be worth it!" he sighs contently. "You could become a good little slut for me, with some training."'
 				act 'Continue': gt 'post_events', '3-2'
 			end
 		else
@@ -640,13 +656,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3-1':
 			*clr & cla
 			!!you swallow his load
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent3-5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You let the man put the ring into your mouth, and wait obediently while he fastens it behind your head.'
-			'When he guides his erection back towards your wide open mouth, you realize how little control you have now. You cough and splutter several times when he shoves his cock inside your mouth further than you can handle. He usually backs off just enough to give you a moment to recover, and then continues to fuck your unexperienced throat.'
-			'You''ve come so far, though... you''re not stopping now! You make the most of it and feel relieved when you feel the man''s cum splurting down your throat a few minutes later.'
+			'You let the man put the ring into your mouth and wait obediently as he fastens it behind your head.'
+			'When he guides his cock back towards your wide open mouth, you realize how little control you have now. You cough and splutter several times when he shoves his cock inside your mouth further than you can handle. He usually backs off just enough to give you a moment to recover, then continues to fuck your unexperienced throat.'
+			'You feel relieved when you feel the man''s cum splurting down your throat a few minutes later.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'bound', 'prostitution'
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 'A108'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"Don''t feel bad, you did good!" he pants, while he undoes the gag. "Not the blowjob itself, obviously. That was terrible. But you''re not afraid to get a little kinky, and continued to try and please me even when you were having a rough time. You''re exactly the kind of girl I''m looking for!"'
+			'"Don''t feel bad, you did good!" he pants as he undoes the gag. "Not the blowjob itself, obviously. That was terrible, but you''re not afraid to get a little kinky and continued to try and please me even when you were having a rough time. You''re exactly the kind of girl I''m looking for!"'
 
 			act 'Continue': gt 'post_events', '3-2'
 		end
@@ -660,22 +676,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3-2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/gm/school/11.jpg"></center>'
-	'The man lies back down on the bed with a content smile on his face. After a few moments he remembers his promise, and nods at the package on the table: "Go ahead, it''s yours. Put it on, I want to see how you look in it."'
-	'You open the package you delivered to his house earlier today, and find a school uniform. You quickly try it on, and check yourself out in the mirror. The man was right, it fits you perfectly! This must''ve cost a few thousand rubles, too...'
-	'"Looks great on you!" he grins. When you turn around to look at him, he gets up from the bed beckons you to follow him. He walks to another room and opens a closet, filled to the brim with a girl''s clothes! A lot of it fairly high quality, but also rather skimpy.'
-	'"I don''t have time for girlfriends or wives," he begins. "Too much nagging, too much drama. I get enough of that at work, I don''t need more at home. What I''m looking for is a slut who simply does what I want, when I want."'
-	'"My last little slut was too scared that her parents would ask questions about how she paid for all those new clothes, so she kept everything I bought her here," he continues, nodding at the closet''s contents. "Then, one day, she stopped visiting. Turns out her parents found out about me fucking their precious little daughter, and forced her to move away with them! Haven''t heard from her since. Damn shame, too. She didn''t know much when I first found her, but she was always so eager to please..."'
-	'He shoots you a seductive smile as he says: "Anyway, long story short: you like clothes, I have a closet full of them. And I like you. See where I''m going with this?"'
-	'You feel his hand sliding underneath the skirt you''re still wearing, fondling your ass cheeks.'
+	'The man lies back down on the bed with a content smile on his face. After a few seconds, he remembers his promise and nods at the package on the table. "Go ahead, it''s yours. Put it on. I want to see how you look in it."'
+	'You open the package you delivered to his house earlier today and find a school uniform inside. You quickly try it on and check yourself out in the mirror.'
+	'"Looks great on you!" he grins. When you turn around to look at him, he gets up from the bed and beckons you to follow him. He walks to another room and opens a closet, filled to the brim with girl''s clothes! A lot of it is fairly high quality, but also rather skimpy.'
+	'"I don''t have time for girlfriends or wives," he states. "Too much nagging, too much drama. I get enough of that at work, so I don''t need more at home. What I''m looking for is a slut who simply does what I want, when I want."'
+	'"My last little slut was too scared that her parents would ask questions about how she paid for all those new clothes, so she kept everything I bought her here," he continues, nodding at the closet''s contents. "Then, one day, she stopped visiting. Turns out her parents found out about me fucking their precious little daughter and forced her to move away with them! Haven''t heard from her since. Damn shame, too. She didn''t know much when I first found her, but she was always so eager to please..."'
+	'He shoots you a seductive smile. "Anyway, long story short: you like clothes, I have a closet full of them. And I like you. See where I''m going with this?"'
+	'You feel his hand sliding underneath your skirt and fondling your ass cheeks.'
 	
 	act 'Continue':
-		cla
-		*clr
+		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/events/postwardrobe.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Uhh..." you let the word linger in the air, while you look at the closet full of clothes again. "I think so. You want me to..."'
-		'"I want you to be my new slut," he says. His grip on your ass tightens, and he pulls your body against his. His cock is already semi-hard again.'
-		'"I don''t know what it is about you, but..." he whispers, and kisses your neck. "If you''re a good little slut for me, everything in that closet could be yours. And more. I treat my sluts well."'
-		'Then he suddenly pulls away from you and dismisses you: "Anyway, I have to go now, more work to do. When I want you to come over, I''ll send a letter to my own house on Saturday. I assume you''ll be the one delivering it."'
+		'"Uhh..." you let the word linger in the air as you look at the closet full of clothes again. "I think so. You want me to..."'
+		'"I want you to be my new slut," he says. His grip on your ass tightens and he pulls your body against his. His cock is already semi-hard again.'
+		'"I don''t know what it is about you, but..." he whispers before kissing your neck. "If you''re a good little slut for me, everything in that closet could be yours. And more. I treat my sluts well."'
+		'He then suddenly pulls away and dismisses you. "Anyway, I have to go now. When I want you to come over, I''ll send a letter to my house on Saturday. I assume you''ll be the one delivering it?"'
 		'With that, he enters the bathroom. Figuring he expects you to see yourself out, you quickly change back into your normal clothes and put your new outfit in a bag.'
 		if gm_school[11] = 0: gm_school[11] = 1 & gm_school_h[11] = 150 & gm_school_b[11] = pcs_hips & gm_school_s[11] = 0
 		
@@ -690,12 +705,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Sleazy man', 38
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-3.jpg"></center>'
-	'With a deep sigh, you drop your bag. "Fine. Just promise me you won''t report me?" you ask him, and he smiles benevolently: "You have my word. Come, this way."'
+	'With a deep sigh, you drop your bag. "Fine. Just promise you won''t report me?" you ask and he smiles benevolently. "You have my word. Come, this way."'
 	'He tosses the envelope aside and guides you to his bed, where he lies down on his back. You''d swear his erection looks like it''s throbbing with anticipation as it pokes up into the air.'
-	'You wrap your fingers around his shaft and begin to stroke his cock, causing the man to moan softly. Still, a few minutes later he looks no closer to his orgasm than when you started.'
+	'You wrap your fingers around his shaft and start stroking his cock, causing the man to moan softly. Still, a few minutes later he looks no closer to his orgasm than when you started.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Surprised by his stamina, you give him a questioning look. He grins at you and says: "I never said it''d be easy! Maybe you have to try a little harder..."'
+	'Surprised by his stamina, you give him a questioning look and he grins at you. "I never said it''d be easy! Maybe you have to try a little harder..."'
 	
 	act 'Show some skin to get him off faster':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -705,77 +720,76 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-5.jpg"></center>'
 		end
-		'Surely getting to look at your body while you jerk him off will get him off faster?'
-		'You wordlessly slip out of your clothes, and the man grins triumphantly at you: "That''s it, girl... way to go the extra mile!"'
-		'You ignore his comments, while his eyes rove your exposed body.'
+		'You wordlessly slip out of your clothes and the man grins triumphantly at you. "That''s it, girl! Way to go the extra mile!"'
+		'You ignore his comments as his eyes rove your exposed body.'
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
-			'When he reaches out to touch you, you slap away his hand and sternly say: "No touching, that was not part of the deal. Try that again and I''m out of here."'
-			'He raises his hands apologetically and puts them behind his head, while you resume jerking him off. A few minutes later, his breathing becomes more shallow and you can tell he''s close to orgasming.'
-			'You place your fingers around the base of his shaft, and only very lightly brush one over his cock with a cruel grin until you see his cock spasm and shoot his cum straight up into the air, splattering onto his stomach.'
+			'When he reaches out to touch you, you slap his hand away. "No touching! That was not part of the deal. Try that again and I''m out of here!"'
+			'He raises his hands apologetically and puts them behind his head while you resume jerking him off. A few minutes later, his breathing becomes more shallow and you can tell he''s close to orgasming.'
+			'You place your fingers around the base of his shaft and only very lightly brush one over his cock with a cruel grin until you see his cock spasm and shoot his cum straight up into the air, splattering onto his stomach.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'The man groans in frustration, and just when he was about to complain you remind him: "You made me touch your dick, and I did. Now sign so I can go."'
-			'He signs without saying a word, still a bit dazed on how you nearly made him cum and then completely ruined his orgasm. You wipe your hand on his bed sheets and put your clothes back on.'
+			'The man groans in frustration, but just as he''s about to complain, you stop him. "You asked me to touch your dick, and I did. Now sign so I can go."'
+			'He signs without saying a word, still a bit dazed on how you completely ruined his orgasm. You wipe your hand on his bed sheets and put your clothes back on.'
 		else
 			!!cum on face
-			'You keep your bra on, to at least remain somewhat decent. Just when you want to put your hand back on his cock, he gets up from the bed and forces you down on your back, before straddling you.'
-			'"That''s better... keep stroking, girl!" he groans, while he pulls your bra aside. "You have nice tits, you shouldn''t be hiding them. Keep jerking me off! That''s it..."'
-			'Without realizing it, you had started moving your hand again. Except this time, his cock is pointed straight at your face!'
-			'"Yeah!" he grunts, and several ropes of his warm sperm land on the bottom of your chin. Only your reflexes saved you from having your entire face covered!'
+			'You keep your bra on to at least remain somewhat decent. Just as you''re about to put your hand back on his cock, he gets up from the bed and forces you down on your back before straddling you.'
+			'"That''s better... Keep stroking, girl!" he grunts as he pulls your bra aside. "You have nice tits and shouldn''t be hiding them. Keep going!"'
+			'Without realizing it, you''ve started moving your hand again. Except this time, his cock is pointed straight at your face!'
+			'"Yeah!" he grunts as several ropes of his warm cum land on the bottom of your chin.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 			gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'Sleazy man'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"Wow, you''re fun! And horribly naive..." the man pants, while he picks up the clipboard and puts his signature on the sheet. "There. I''ll be seeing you again!"'
-			'You try to ignore his triumphant grin while you put your clothes back on, after quickly cleaning yourself up with a tissue. At least the postmaster can''t give you any trouble now!'
+			'"Wow, you''re fun! And horribly naive..." the man pants as he picks up the clipboard and puts his signature on the sheet. "There. I''ll be seeing you again!"'
+			'You try to ignore his triumphant grin as you put your clothes back on. At least the postmaster can''t give you any trouble now...'
 		end
-		act 'Continue your round':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+		act 'Continue your round': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 	end
 	if mc_inventory['lubricant'] > 0:
 		act 'Use some lubricant to get him off faster':
 			*clr & cla
 			mc_inventory['lubricant'] -= 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-6.jpg"></center>'
-			'Making his dick nice and slick with some lubricant will surely help! You stop jerking him off for a moment and reach for your things, quickly squirting some lube into the palm of your hand.'
-			'The man is trying not to show you any emotions and tries to keep you here as long as possible, but when you put your hand back on his cock and begin stroking it again, he can''t help but groan. Initially from the cold touch of the lubricant, but immediately after because it feels so much better!'
-			'"Slow down! You''re going to ma-" he moans, but his cock already begins to spasm and his jizz slowly dribbles down his shaft.'
+			'You stop jerking him off and reach for your things, quickly squirting some lube into the palm of your hand.'
+			'The man is trying not to show you any emotions and tries to keep you here as long as possible, but when you put your hand back on his cock and start stroking it again, he can''t help but groan. Initially from the cold touch of the lubricant, but immediately after because it feels so much better!'
+			'"Slow down! You''re going to ma-" he moans, but his cock already is already spasming and his jizz slowly dribbles down his shaft.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"I''m going to make you cum?" you say with a sly grin. "That was exactly what I was trying to do. Now sign so I can go?"'
-			'The man sighs, and signs as promised. "I hope I''ll see you again!" he says, while you walk towards the door. "I hope not!" you yell back at him, right before you close the door behind you.'
-			act 'Continue your round':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+			'"I''m going to make you cum?" you say with a sly grin. "That was exactly what I was trying to do. Now sign so I can go!"'
+			'The man sighs and signs as promised. "I hope I''ll see you again!" he says as you walk towards the door.'
+			'"I hope not!" you yell back at him before you close the door behind you.'
+			act 'Continue your round': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Use your mouth to get him off faster':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-7.jpg"></center>'
-		'Surely you would get him off faster if you used your mouth?'
-		'You don''t want to seem too eager, so you restrict yourself to just licking the tip or sucking on the head of his cock from time to time, while you keep stroking his shaft. His cock has a faint chemical scent to it at first, but you can''t quite tell why.'
-		'"Oh, what''s this? Postslut is starting to enjoy herself! Good girl, I knew you had it in you..." the man encourages you.'
-		'You ignore his remarks and just keep doing what you''re doing, remembering your deal: once you get him off, he''ll sign and you can be on your way. And hopefully never see him again.'
-		'It seems to be having an effect on him. His breaths grow shorter, he begins to thrust his hips towards your mouth despite himself... he can''t hold back any longer!'
+		'You don''t want to seem too eager, so you restrict yourself to just licking the tip or sucking on the head of his cock from time to time while you keep stroking his shaft. His cock has a faint chemical scent to it at first, but you can''t quite tell why.'
+		'"Oh, what''s this? Starting to enjoy yourself? Good girl, I knew you had it in you..." he says with a laugh.'
+		'You ignore his remarks and just keep doing what you''re doing. Once you get him off, you can be on your way and hopefully never see him again.'
+		'It seems to be having an effect on him. His breaths grow shorter, he starts thrusting his hips towards your mouth. He can''t hold back any longer!'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Don''t let him cum in your mouth':
 			*clr & cla
 			!!cum on face
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-8.jpg"></center>'
-			'You quickly take his cock out of your mouth when you realize he''s about to burst, but can''t prevent him from shooting his warm load all over your face. Luckily you managed to close your eyes on time!'
-			'"Thaaat''s a good girl..." he groans, definitely pleased with himself. "That''s a nice look for you! But I guess you hear that a lot, huh?" he laughs.'
-			'You feel around for something to wipe your face with, and eventually settle for his bed sheets. The man shrugs: "I was going to wash those anyway. Here''s your signature... I''ll be seeing you again soon! I''ll make sure of it!"'
-			'You quickly check your face in the mirror to see if you missed anything, on the way out. You look yourself deep in the eye for a second, and mutter: "I did what I had to do... at least my job is safe!"'
-			act 'Continue your round':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+			'You quickly take his cock out of your mouth when you realize he''s about to burst, but can''t prevent him from shooting his warm load all over your face.'
+			'"Thaaat''s a good girl..." he groans, definitely pleased with himself. "That''s a nice look for you, but I guess you hear that a lot, huh?" he laughs.'
+			'You feel around for something to wipe your face with, and eventually settle for his bed sheets. "I was going to wash those anyway," he shrugs. "Here''s your signature. I''ll be seeing you again soon, I''ll make sure of it!"'
+			'You quickly check your face in the mirror to see if you missed anything before heading out.'
+			act 'Continue your round': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 		end
 		act 'Make him cum in your mouth':
 			*clr & cla
 			!!cum in mouth
 			gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', 'Sleazy man'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/sex/postevent4-9.jpg"></center>'
-			'You don''t want his cum on your face, or on your clothes! How would you explain that?'
-			'Closing your lips tightly around the head, you flick your tongue over his cock a few times and feel his warm, tangy sperm spurt against the back of your mouth. The taste is really not that bad!'
-			'When he''s mostly done, you let his cock slide out of his mouth and lick the head a few times, showing the man his load on your tongue before swallowing it.'
-			'"Oh wow! You''re... I''ve visited whores that weren''t as good..." he pants, simply amazed. He signs for his mail, and gives you 200 <b>₽</b>: "Here, take this. If you ever want to make some extra cash during your round, you know where I live! Knock twice."'
-			'"Uhh, I''ll keep it in mind," you tell him, as you stand up to leave his apartment.'
-			act 'Continue your round':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+			'You don''t want his cum on your face or on your clothes. How would you explain that?'
+			'Closing your lips tightly around the head, you flick your tongue over his cock a few times and feel his warm, tangy cum spurt against the back of your mouth.'
+			'When he''s mostly done, you let his cock slide out of your mouth and lick the head a few times, showing him his load on your tongue before swallowing it.'
+			'"Oh wow! You''re... I''ve visited whores that weren''t as good..." he pants, simply amazed. He signs for his mail and gives you 200 <b>₽</b>. "Here, take this. If you ever want to make some extra cash during your round, you know where I live! Knock twice."'
+			'"Uhh, I''ll keep it in mind," you tell him as you stand up to leave his apartment.'
+			act 'Continue your round': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 		end			
 	end
 	if pcs_intel > 70:
@@ -784,53 +798,51 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			''
-			'How is he no closer to orgasming at all that you''ve done? This doesn''t make any sense! Is he tricking you?'
-			'When you quickly cast a glance at his nightstand, you see an opened tube. Wait, is that... it''s numbing cream!?'
-			'"Numbing cream!?" you shout, making the guy flinch. Your hand is still firmly wrapped around his cock, and he groans when you clench your fist in anger. He might''ve numbed the head of his cock with it, but the way you''re squeezing his cock and balls instantly puts the fear of God into him.'
+			'How is he no closer to orgasming after all that you''ve done?! This doesn''t make any sense! Is he tricking you?'
+			'When you quickly cast a glance at his nightstand, you see an opened tube. Wait, is that... numbing cream!?'
+			'"Numbing cream!?" you shout, making the guy flinch. Your hand is still firmly wrapped around his cock and he groans when you clench your fist in anger. He might''ve numbed the head of his cock with it, but the way you''re squeezing his cock and balls instantly puts the fear of God into him.'
 			'"I-I''m sorry!" he shouts. "I thought it wo- ow! Oww! Please let go! I''ll sign! I''ll sign your thing! I won''t bother you ever again!"'
-			''
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'force', 'hard'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Tell him that''s not good enough (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'That''s not good enough (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					cla
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 					gs 'stat'
-					cla
-					'"Not good enough!" you yell at him, as you tighten your grip on his junk even more. "You take advantage of me, while I''m just trying to do my job!? How many girls have you degraded like this, before me? I really should make you suffer..."'
+					'"Not good enough!" you yell as you tighten your grip on his junk even more. "You take advantage of me while I''m just trying to do my job!? How many girls have you degraded like this before me? I really should make you suffer..."'
 					'"N-no! Please! I can pay! I''ll give you 1000 <b>₽</b>, just please let go! I won''t bother anyone ever again! I promise!" he cries out. You''d swear he''s nearly in tears now.'
-					''
+					
 					act 'Accept the money':
 						cla
 						money += 1000
 						'"Now you''re talking!" you say menacingly. Without you even letting go, the man promptly reaches for his wallet on the nightstand and pulls out the 1000 <b>₽</b> he promised you.'
-						'You let go of his cock and balls to take the money from his trembling hand, causing the man to sigh in relief: "Oh thank God... I thought you were going to crush them!"'
-						'"I was seriously considering it," you tell him. "And you definitely would''ve deserved it if I did. Now sign, so I never have to see your face again."'
-						'He promptly signs, and you leave his apartment. You cast a quick look at your watch: fortunately you didn''t lose too much time over this. You still have mail to deliver, though.'
+						'You let go of his cock and balls to take the money from his trembling hand, causing the man to sigh in relief. "Oh thank God... I thought you were going to crush them!"'
+						'"I was seriously considering it. And you definitely would''ve deserved it. Now sign so I never have to see your face again!"'
+						'He promptly signs and you leave his apartment. You didn''t lose too much time over this, but you still have mail to deliver.'
 
-						act 'Continue your round':gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+						act 'Continue your round': gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 					end
-					act 'You don''t want his money, make him suffer':
+					act 'Make him suffer':
 						cla
 						posteventQW4 = 1
-						'"I don''t want your money..." you tell him, and clench your fist as hard as you can.'
-						'The man cries out in pain, and you know one thing for sure: he''ll never try to blackmail a girl again.'
-						'You no longer care about getting his signature, you''d be more than happy to explain to the postmaster why this one is missing. You give him a knee in the groin for good measure: "Asshole! Are you going to complain about this!?"'
-						'You reduced the man to a sniffling mess, curled up into a ball. "No... no... please, just leave..." he whimpers.'
-						'As you get ready to leave, you smirk at him: "A piece of advice: if you want to blackmail a girl, don''t put your most delicate parts in her hands!"'
+						'"I don''t want your money..." you reply and clench your fist as hard as you can.'
+						'The man cries out in pain and you know one thing for sure: he''ll never try to blackmail a girl again.'
+						'You no longer care about getting his signature, you''d be more than happy to explain to the postmaster why this one is missing. You give him a knee in the groin for good measure. "Asshole! Are you going to complain about this!?"'
+						'You''ve reduced the man to a sniffling mess, curled up into a ball. "No... No... Please, just leave..." he whimpers.'
+						'As you get ready to leave, you smirk at him. "A piece of advice: if you want to blackmail a girl, don''t put your most delicate parts in her hands!"'
 
-						act 'Continue your round':gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+						act 'Continue your round': gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 					end
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Tell him that''s not good enough (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'That''s not good enough (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end	
+			
 			act 'Let go':
 				cla
-				'You give his balls one more angry squeeze, and then let go. You grin at him and say: "You''re damn right you won''t bother me again. Now sign, unless you want me to tell the postmaster exactly why your signature is missing!"'
-				'"Okay, okay!" he yelps, and quickly signs before you can change your mind. He curls up into a ball after he signs, carefully caressing his junk.'
-				'"You''re pathetic, you know that?" you scoff at him, and walk away. You don''t know how many girls he tried to blackmail before you, but you''re fairly sure you put an end to it just now.'
-				act 'Continue your round':gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
+				'You give his balls one more angry squeeze before letting go. "You''re damn right you won''t bother me again!" you grin. "Now sign, unless you want me to tell the postmaster exactly why your signature is missing!"'
+				'"Okay, okay!" he yelps and quickly signs before you can change your mind. He curls up into a ball after he signs, carefully caressing his junk.'
+				'"You''re pathetic, you know that?" you scoff and walk away. You don''t know how many girls he tried to blackmail before you, but you''re fairly sure you put an end to it just now.'
+				act 'Continue your round': gt 'post_deliveries', 'resume'
 			end
 		end
 	end

locations/post_master.qsrc

@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-	'The manager of the post office, also known as the postmaster, just finished helping a customer and is about to walk back to his office when he spots you.'
-	'"You look like you want to ask something... if it''s about our regular services, you should get in line. I don''t have time to help more customers," he says.'
+	'The manager of the post office, also known as the postmaster, has just finished helping a customer and is about to walk back to his office when he spots you.'
+	'"You look like you want to ask something. If it''s about our regular services, then you should get in line. I don''t have time to help any more customers," he says.'
 	act 'Leave': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 	if postjobQW = 0:
 		act 'Ask for work':
@@ -19,25 +19,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'"A job? Haven''t got any jobs," the postmaster shrugs.'
-			'Just when you were about to turn around to leave, he ponders: "Actually, Aleksiy has been mentioning he wants to spend more time with his sick daughter on weekends. Maybe... come back here, girl."'
-			'He takes another good look at you and seems to be in deep thought for a moment, before humming contently.'
+			'"A job? I haven''t got any jobs," he shrugs.'
+			'Just as you''re about to turn around to leave, he stops you. "Actually, Aleksiy has been mentioning he wants to spend more time with his sick daughter on weekends. Maybe... Come back here, girl."'
+			'He takes another good look at you and seems to be in deep thought for a moment before humming contently.'
 			'"Alright, I''ll give you a chance to prove yourself. You can deliver some urgent letters and packages on Saturday afternoon. You''ll get the same pay Aleksiy gets, assuming you do a good job. 500 <b>₽</b> total, for about three hours of work - from 12:00 to roughly 15:00. If you do well, you can do it every week," he offers.'
-			*nl
+			
 			act 'Decline':
 				cla
 				postjobQW = 1
-				'"Sorry... but I don''t know. That''s not what I''m looking for," you tell him.'
-				'The postmaster looks at you a bit confused, wondering what other job you expected to get here. Nevertheless, he sighs: "Suit yourself. Tough luck for Aleksiy, then. Well, let me know if you change your mind."'
-				'He then nods you off, before returning to his work.'
-				act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+				'"Sorry, but I don''t know. That''s not what I''m looking for," you reply.'
+				'The postmaster looks at you in confusion, wondering what kind of job you expected to get here. Nevertheless, he sighs. "Suit yourself. Tough luck for Aleksiy, then. Well, let me know if you change your mind," he says before returning to work.'
+				act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'Accept the job':
 				cla
 				postjobQW = 2
-				'"That sounds great, thank you!" you smile at him. That''s good money!'
-				'"<b>Meet me here on Saturday, between 11:00 and 12:00.</b> I''ll talk you through the details then," he grunts. "By the way: any complaints from people not receiving their mail in good shape and you''re out. Our post office has a damn near perfect record for deliveries, and I intend to keep it that way."'
-				'He quickly records your personal information and then nods you off, before returning to his work.'
+				'"That sounds great, thank you!" you smile.'
+				'"<b>Meet me here on Saturday, between 11:00 and 12:00.</b> I''ll talk you through the details then," he grunts. "By the way: any complaints from people not receiving their mail in good shape and you''re out. Our post office has a damn near perfect record for deliveries, and I intend to keep it that way!"'
+				'He quickly records your personal information and sends you on your way before returning to work.'
 				act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 			end	
 		end
@@ -46,23 +45,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Wait... weren''t you here before?" the postmaster asks when he sees your face. "Right, you were here about that Saturday job! It''s still available if you want it?"'
-		'When you ask him about the details, he reminds you: "You can deliver some urgent letters and packages on Saturday afternoon. You''ll get the same pay Aleksiy gets, assuming you do a good job. 500 <b>₽</b> total, for about three hours of work - from 12:00 to roughly 15:00. If you do well, you can do it every week."'
-		*nl
+		'"Wait... Weren''t you here before?" he asks when he sees your face. "Right, you were here about that Saturday job! It''s still available if you want it?"'
+		'When you ask him about the details, he reminds you. "You can deliver some urgent letters and packages on Saturday afternoon. You''ll get the same pay Aleksiy gets, assuming you do a good job. 500 <b>₽</b> total, for about three hours of work - from 12:00 to roughly 15:00. If you do well, you can do it every week."'
+		
 		act 'Decline':
 			cla
-			'"Sorry... but I don''t know..." you tell him.'
-			'The postmaster looks at you a bit confused, wondering what other job you expected to get. He shrugs: "Still? Well, okay. If you''re not interested in this job, there''s no point in visiting me again... I won''t have anything else. Let me know if you change your mind. Until then, stop wasting my time."'
-			'He then nods you off, before returning to his work.'
-			act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			'"Sorry, but I don''t know..." you tell him.'
+			'He raises a brow. "Still? Okay... If you''re not interested in this job, then there''s no point in visiting me again because I won''t have anything else. Let me know if you change your mind. Until then, stop wasting my time."'
+			'He quickly returns to his work.'
+			act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		end
 		act 'Accept the job':
 			cla
 			postjobQW = 2
-			'"That sounds great, thank you!" you smile at him. That''s good money!'
-			'"<b>Meet me here on Saturday, between 11:00 and 12:00.</b> I''ll talk you through the details then," he grunts. "By the way: any complaints from people not receiving their mail in good shape and you''re out! Our post office has a damn near perfect record for deliveries, and I intend to keep it that way."'
+			'"That sounds great, thank you!" you smile'
+			'"<b>Meet me here on Saturday, between 11:00 and 12:00.</b> I''ll talk you through the details then," he grunts. "By the way: any complaints from people not receiving their mail in good shape and you''re out! Our post office has a damn near perfect record for deliveries, and I intend to keep it that way!"'
 			'He then nods you off, before returning to his work.'
-			act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		end	
 	elseif postjobQW = 2 and postworkday ! daystart:
 !!when you go to work on Saturday, first time
@@ -70,168 +69,169 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			minut += 60 - minut
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Ah good, you''re here!" the postmaster smiles when you enter the post office. "And right on time, too. Please, follow me."'
+			'"Ah good, you''re here!" the postmaster smiles when you enter the post office. "And right on time too! Please follow me."'
 			'He guides you to the back room where a number of small packages and letters are packed into a bag.'
 			'"The addresses are all fairly nearby. It might look like a lot, but you should be done by 15:00," he reassures you. "It''s simple: bring the mail to where it needs to be, have them sign on this sheet, and bring back the mail you couldn''t deliver for whatever reason."'
 			'He continues on for a while longer about the rules, but they seem rather self-explanatory and you don''t pay close attention to what he''s saying.'
-			'"Oh, before I forget: you might want to avoid certain streets," he warns you. "I''ve marked them on this map. You wouldn''t be the first to get robbed by hoodlums hoping to find something valuable in the packages. And you wouldn''t be the first to get a beating, when they get angry there was nothing of value in your bag. Anyway, avoid these areas and you should be fine."'
-			'He hands you an area map, with a bunch of streets and plazas marked. He has drawn out the best route to take today, too.'
-			act 'Begin with the deliveries':
+			'"Oh, before I forget: you might want to avoid certain streets," he warns you. "I''ve marked them on this map. You wouldn''t be the first to get robbed by hoodlums hoping to find something valuable in the packages. And you wouldn''t be the first to get a beating when there''s nothing of value in your bag. Anyway, avoid these areas and you should be fine."'
+			'He hands you a map with a bunch of streets and plazas marked out. He has drawn out the best route to take today too.'
+			act 'Start your round':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 60
 				postworkday = daystart
-				gs'stat'
+				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postgirl.jpg"></center>'
-				'The first hour goes by fairly fast. The postmaster was right, this is fairly easy. You notice you''re losing a lot of time by avoiding the streets he told you to, though. You could easily save half an hour, if not more, by just cutting through them when you need to.'
-				'Then again... he wouldn''t warn you and go through the trouble of drawing out a map, if it wasn''t important!'
+				'The first hour goes by rather quickly. It''s fairly easy work, but you notice that you''re losing a lot of time by avoiding the ''dangerous'' streets though. You could easily save half an hour, if not more, just by cutting through them if needed.'
+				'Then again, he wouldn''t warn you and go through the trouble of drawing out a map if it wasn''t important...'
 				*nl
 				act 'Stick to the ''safe'' streets':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 115
 					money += 500
-					gs'stat'
+					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-					'He probably warned you for a reason, better play it safe! Especially on your first day!'
-					'You stick to the route he suggested, and have a fairly uneventful day delivering the rest. You return to the post office a bit before 15:00.'
-					'"You managed to deliver all of them? That''s great!" the postmaster beams as you put the empty bag back where it belongs. He seems very relieved this experiment worked out well.'
-					'He hands you your pay right away, with another 50 <b>₽</b> extra. "From Aleksiy, he says thanks for his first Saturday off in months! He and his little girl dropped by earlier, he looked so happy!" he explains. "So... as far as I''m concerned, you got the job for every weekend. What do you say, same time next Saturday?"'
-					'You can do this work every Saturday from now on, from 12:00 to roughly 15:00.'
-					act 'You''re not sure':
+					'He warned you for a reason, so you think it best to play it safe, especially on your first day.'
+					'You stick to the route he suggested and have a fairly uneventful day delivering the rest of your mail. You return to the post office just before 15:00.'
+					'"You managed to deliver all of it? That''s great!" the postmaster beams as you put the empty bag back where it belongs.'
+					'He hands you your pay right away, with another 50 <b>₽</b> extra. "From Aleksiy. He says thanks for his first Saturday off in months! He and his little girl dropped by earlier and he looked so happy!" he explains. "As far as I''m concerned, you got the job for every weekend. What do you say, same time next Saturday?"'
+					
+					act 'I''m not sure':
 						cla
 						postjobQW = 3
-						'"I don''t know how next week will look yet, can I think about it?" you ask the postmaster.'
+						'"I don''t know how next week will look yet. Can I think about it?" you ask.'
 						'"I guess, but I''m telling Aleksiy he has to come in next Saturday then. I can''t work with maybes," he shrugs. "If you want the job, let me know before Saturday so I can make the arrangements. If I haven''t heard from you by closing time on Friday, I will assume you''re not coming."'
-						'You nod understandingly: "That sounds fair. I will come tell you once I''ve made my decision."'
+						'You nod understandingly. "That sounds fair. I''ll come and tell you once I''ve made my decision."'
 
-						act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+						act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 					end
 					act 'Accept the job':
 						cla
 						postjobQW = 4
 						'You tell him you want to work again next Saturday.'
-						'"That''s great! I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends, in that case. See you next week!" he says, shaking your hand. "And thank you for a job well done!"'
-
-						act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+						'"That''s great! In that case, I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends. See you next week!" he says while shaking your hand. "And thank you for a job well done!"'
+						'You can now deliver mail every Saturday from 12:00 to 15:00.'
+						act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 					end
 				end
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-					act 'Use the more dangerous shortcuts to be done faster (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+					act 'Use the more dangerous shortcuts (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 						minut += 70
-						gs'stat'
+						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-						'You walk by yet another empty street, looking at your map again. You think to yourself: "This is stupid, these supposedly dangerous streets are empty! What''s the worst that could happen?"'
-						'You sometimes feel a bit uncomfortable when small groups of rowdy looking guys are checking you out, but fortunately they leave you alone and your bag is empty in no time at all.'
+						'You walk by yet another empty street and look at your map again. Deciding to ignore the risk, you head down one of the streets marked as dangerous.'
+						'You sometimes feel a little uncomfortable when small groups of rowdy looking guys are checking you out, but fortunately they leave you alone and your bag is empty in no time at all.'
 						'You''re done almost an hour faster than planned, and it''s only 14:10 when you return to the postmaster.'
-						'He gives you a suspecting look and shakes his head, saying: "There''s no way you''d be back already if you listened to what I said. You ignored my warning, didn''t you?"'
-						act 'Be honest and admit that you did':
+						'He gives you a suspicious look and shakes his head. "There''s no way you''d be back already if you listened to what I said. You ignored my warning, didn''t you?"'
+						
+						act 'Be honest':
 							*clr & cla
 							money += 500
-							gs'stat'
+							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I looked carefully, those streets seemed mostly deserted... but yes," you admit. You quickly add: "I can take care of myself, though!"'
-							'He lets out an exasperated sigh but nods: "I drew out that map for your safety, girl... but fine. As long as you do a good job and everyone gets their mail on time, I won''t ask how you do it. Just be careful, okay?"'
-							'He hands you the pay for your work, the full amount despite you being done quicker. You even find 50 <b>₽</b> extra. "From Aleksiy, he says thanks for his first Saturday off in months! He and his little girl dropped by earlier, he looked so happy!" he explains. "Anyway... as far as I''m concerned, you got the job for every weekend. What do you say, same time next Saturday?"'
-							'You can do this work every Saturday from now on, from 12:00 to roughly 15:00.'
-							*nl
-							act 'You''re not sure':
+							'"Yes..." you admit. "But I can take care of myself!"'
+							'He lets out an exasperated sigh, but nods. "I drew out that map for your safety, girl, but fine. As long as you do a good job and everyone gets their mail on time, I won''t ask how you do it. Just be careful, okay?"'
+							'He hands you the full amount for your work despite you finishing quicker. You even find 50 <b>₽</b> extra. "From Aleksiy. He says thanks for his first Saturday off in months! He and his little girl dropped by earlier, he looked so happy!" he explains. "Anyway, as far as I''m concerned, you got the job for every weekend. What do you say, same time next Saturday?"'
+							
+							act 'I''m not sure':
 								cla
 								postjobQW = 3
 								minut += 2
-								gs'stat'
-								'"I don''t know how next week will look yet, can I think about it?" you ask the postmaster.'
+								gs 'stat'
+								'"I don''t know how next week will look yet. Can I think about it?" you ask.'
 								'"I guess, but I''m telling Aleksiy he has to come in next Saturday then. I can''t work with maybes," he shrugs. "If you want the job, let me know before Saturday so I can make the arrangements. If I haven''t heard from you by Friday 18:00, I will assume you''re not coming."'
-								'You nod understandingly: "That sounds fair. I will come tell you once I''ve made my decision."'
+								'You nod understandingly. "That sounds fair. I''ll come and tell you once I''ve made my decision."'
 
-								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 							end
 							act 'Accept the job':
 								cla
 								postjobQW = 4
 								minut += 2
-								gs'stat'
+								gs 'stat'
 								'You tell him you want to work again next Saturday.'
-								'"That''s great! I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends, in that case. See you next week!" he says, shaking your hand. "And thank you for a job well done!"'
-
-								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+								'"That''s great! I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends, in that case. See you next week!" he says while shaking your hand. "And thank you for a job well done!"'
+								'You can now deliver mail every Saturday from 12:00 to 15:00.'
+								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 							end
 
 						end
-						act 'Lie, saying you''re just a fast worker':
+						
+						act 'Lie':
 							*clr & cla
 							money += 500
-							gs'stat'
+							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-							'The postmaster sees right through your lie, but can''t help but laugh: "You kids and your youthful hubris! I drew out that map for your safety... but fine. As long as you do a good job and everyone gets their mail on time, I won''t ask how you do it. Just be careful, okay?"'
-							'He hands you the pay for your work, the full amount despite you being done quicker. You even find 50 <b>₽</b> extra. "From Aleksiy, he says thanks for his first Saturday off in months! He and his little girl dropped by earlier, he looked so happy!" he explains. "Anyway... as far as I''m concerned, you got the job for every weekend. What do you say, same time next Saturday?"'
-							'You can do this work every Saturday from now on, from 12:00 to roughly 15:00.'
-							*nl
+							'"No, I''m just a fast worker," you lie.'
+							'He sees right through you, but can''t help but laugh. "You kids and your youthful hubris! I drew out that map for your safety, but fine. As long as you do a good job and everyone gets their mail on time, I won''t ask how you do it. Just be careful, okay?"'
+							'He hands you the full amount for your work despite you finishing quicker. You even find 50 <b>₽</b> extra. "From Aleksiy. He says thanks for his first Saturday off in months! He and his little girl dropped by earlier, he looked so happy!" he explains. "Anyway, as far as I''m concerned, you got the job for every weekend. What do you say, same time next Saturday?"'
+							
 							act 'You''re not sure':
 								cla
 								postjobQW = 3
 								minut += 2
-								gs'stat'
-								'"I don''t know how next week will look yet, can I think about it?" you ask the postmaster.'
-								'"I guess, but I''m telling Aleksiy he has to come in next Saturday then. I can''t work with maybes," he shrugs. "If you want the job, let me know before Saturday so I can make the arrangements. If I haven''t heard from you by closing time on Friday, I will assume you''re passing up on the offer."'
-								'You nod understandingly: "That sounds fair. I will come tell you once I''ve made my decision."'
+								gs 'stat'
+								'"I don''t know how next week will look yet. Can I think about it?" you ask.'
+								'"I guess, but I''m telling Aleksiy he has to come in next Saturday then. I can''t work with maybes," he shrugs. "If you want the job, let me know before Saturday so I can make the arrangements. If I haven''t heard from you by Friday 18:00, I will assume you''re not coming."'
+								'You nod understandingly. "That sounds fair. I''ll come and tell you once I''ve made my decision."'
 
-								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 							end
 							act 'Accept the job':
 								cla
 								postjobQW = 4
 								minut += 2
-								gs'stat'
+								gs 'stat'
 								'You tell him you want to work again next Saturday.'
-								'"That''s great! I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends, in that case. See you next week!" he says, shaking your hand. "And thank you for a job well done!"'
+								'"That''s great! I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends, in that case. See you next week!" he says while shaking your hand. "And thank you for a job well done!"'
+								'You can now deliver mail every Saturday from 12:00 to 15:00.'
 
-								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+								act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 							end
 						end
 					end
 				else
-					act 'Use the more dangerous shortcuts to be done faster (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+					act 'Use the more dangerous shortcuts (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end	
 			end
 !!if you''re at the post office when it''s not working time
 		else
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
-			gs'stat'
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'The postmaster looks at you a bit confused, wondering why you''re here. "Yes? More questions? You look like you want to ask something..." he suggests.'
-			'"Uhh... could you tell me about the job again?" you ask him.'
-			'He nods and says: "Of course. As you probably know, Russian Post doesn''t deliver regular mail on Saturdays, only priority mail. That''s what you will be delivering. Not a lot of mail, but if people choose to have it delivered on Saturdays, it must be important! It''s a big responsibility, but I trust you to get the job done. It''ll take you roughly three hours, going on past experience. Some days we have more, some days we have less. <b>Make sure you''re here between 11:00 and 12:00 on Saturday, so I can talk you through what exactly it is you have to do.</b>"'
-			'He watches you for a second while you try to memorize it all, and says somewhat impatiently: "Was that all? I really need to get back to work..."'
+			'The postmaster looks at you in confusion, wondering why you''re here. "Yes? More questions? You look like you want to ask something..."'
+			'"Could you tell me about the job again?" you ask.'
+			'He nods. "Of course. As you probably know, Russian Post doesn''t deliver regular mail on Saturdays, only priority mail. That''s what you will be delivering. Not a lot of mail, but if people choose to have it delivered on Saturdays, it must be important! It''s a big responsibility, but I trust you to get the job done. It''ll take you roughly three hours, going on past experience. Some days we have more, some days we have less. <b>Make sure you''re here between 11:00 and 12:00 on Saturday, so I can talk you through what exactly it is you have to do.</b>"'
+			'He watches you for a second while you try to memorize it all. "Was that all? I really need to get back to work..." he says somewhat impatiently.'
 
-			act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif postjobQW = 3:
-!!if you said you''re not sure about taking the regular job and refuse it the first time
+!!if you said you''re not sure about taking the regular job and refused it the first time
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 2
-		gs'stat'
+		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-		'The postmaster looks at you expectantly when he sees you come back in, and asks: "Hi <<$pcs_firstname>>! We could really use you on Saturdays... I hope you''re here with good news?"'
-		'You can deliver priority mail and packages every Saturday from now on, from 12:00 to roughly 15:00.'
-		*nl
+		'The postmaster looks at you expectantly when he sees you. "Hello, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I hope you''re here with good news?"'
+		
 		act 'Decline the job':
 			cla
 			postjobQW = 5
-			'"I''ve given it some thought, but no. Sorry, you''ll have to find someone else," you tell the postmaster.'
-			'"That''s too bad, <<$pcs_firstname>>, you could''ve been a great post girl! Well... thanks for letting me know," he mutters, clearly disappointed. "My door is always open for you, if you change your mind."'
+			'"I''ve given it some thought, but no. You''ll have to find someone else," you tell him.'
+			'"That''s too bad. You could''ve been a great post girl! Well, thanks for letting me know," he mutters, clearly disappointed. "My door is always open for you if you change your mind."'
 	
-			act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		end
 		act 'Accept the job':
 			cla
 			postjobQW = 4
-			'You tell him you''ll take the job.'
-			'"That''s great! I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends, in that case. See you on Saturday!" he says, shaking your hand.'
-
-			act 'Leave the postmaster''s office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			'"I''ve given it some thought and I''d like to take the job," you tell him.'
+			'"That''s great! In that case, I''ll let Aleksiy know he no longer has to come in on weekends. See you on Saturday!" he says while shaking your hand.'
+			'You can now deliver mail every Saturday from 12:00 to 15:00.'
+			act 'Leave the postmaster''s office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif postjobQW = 4:
 		if week ! 6:
@@ -240,42 +240,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				postjobQW = 5
 				minut += 2
-				gs'stat'
+				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-				'The postmaster looks like he''s swamped with work right now, his desk is completely covered with mail.'
-				'"Excuse me?" you say, trying to get the postmaster''s attention. "I won''t be able to make it next Saturday, after all."'
-				'The postmaster looks up at you somewhat disappointedly. Nevertheless, he says: "Oh, okay. No problem. I''ll let Aleksiy know he has to come in on Saturday. Thanks for letting me know, I guess."'
+				'The postmaster looks like he''s swamped with work right now. His desk is completely covered with mail.'
+				'"Excuse me?" you say, trying to get his attention. "I won''t be able to make it next Saturday after all."'
+				'The postmaster looks up at you somewhat disappointedly."Oh, okay. No problem. I''ll let Aleksiy know he has to come in on Saturday. Thanks for letting me know, I guess."'
 				'He scribbles something down on a piece of paper and focuses on his work again.'
 
-				act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+				act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 			end
 		elseif hour < 11:
 !!if it''s Saturday but you''re early
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
-			gs'stat'
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'"You''re a bit early, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" the postmaster says when he sees you enter his office. "I don''t have your mail yet, but I like the enthusiasm. Come see me <b>between 11:00 and 12:00</b>, I should have it ready then."'
+			'"You''re a bit early, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" the postmaster says when he sees you enter his office. "I don''t have your mail yet, but I like the enthusiasm. Come see me between 11:00 and 12:00. I should have it ready then."'
 
-			act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		elseif hour > 11 and postworkday ! daystart:
 !!if it''s Saturday but you''re late	
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 2
 			postworkday = daystart
-			gs'stat'
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'"You''re late, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" the postmaster scoffs when he sees you enter his office. "I already called Aleksiy in to cover your shift. He was not happy, and neither am I. Don''t make this a habit..."'
-			'You try to apologize for being late, but the postmaster is not interested and tells you to leave him alone.'
+			'"You''re late, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" the postmaster scoffs when he sees you enter his office. "I already called Aleksiy in to cover your shift. He wasn''t happy, and neither am I. Don''t make this a habit..."'
+			'You try to apologize, but he''s not interested and tells you to leave him alone.'
 
-			act 'Leave his office':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			act 'Leave his office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		elseif hour = 11 and postworkday ! daystart:
 !!if it''s Saturday and you''re ready to work
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Hi there, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" the postmaster smiles when you enter the post office. "Right on time. Please, follow me."'
+			'"Hey there, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" the postmaster smiles when you enter the post office. "Right on time. Please follow me."'
 		
-			act 'Follow him':gt 'post_deliveries', 'start'
+			act 'Follow him': gt 'post_deliveries', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif postjobQW = 5:
 !!if you want to work after all next Saturday
@@ -283,23 +283,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			*clr & cla
 			postjobQW = 4
 			minut += 2
-			gs'stat'
+			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/postmaster.jpg"></center>'
-			'You enter the postmaster''s office at an opportune time, he looks like he''s not doing anything right now.'
-			'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, can I help you?" he asks, as soon as he sees you come in.'
-			'"Actually, I came to say that I can make it after all this Saturday!" you tell him.'
-			'"Ah! Excellent news. Thanks, I''ll tell Aleksiy he can stay at home with his daughter," he says, quickly making a note. "Is there anything else I can do for you?"'
-			'"Nope, that was it!" you tell him. "See you on Saturday!"'
+			'You enter the postmaster''s office at an opportune time. It like he''s not doing anything right now.'
+			'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, can I help you?" he asks as soon as he sees you.'
+			'"I came to say that I can make it after all this Saturday!" you reply.'
+			'"Ah, excellent news! I''ll tell Aleksiy he can stay at home with his daughter," he says while quickly making a note. "Is there anything else I can do for you?"'
+			'"No, that was it," you tell him. "See you on Saturday!"'
 
-			act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+			act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif postjobQW = 999:
 !!you were fired, the postmaster won''t see you again
 		*clr & cla
-		'"You! Get out of here!" the postmaster shouts angrily when you enter his office. "There''s no job for you! Not now, not ever! That screw-up of yours ruined our perfect record..."'
-		'You try to talk to the postmaster and explain what happened, but he''s simply not interested in whatever it is you have to say. It seems very unlikely that he''d consider hiring you again.'
+		'"You?! Get out of here!" he shouts angrily when you enter his office. "There''s no job for you! Not now, not ever! That screw-up of yours ruined our perfect record!"'
+		'You try to explain what happened, but he''s simply not interested in whatever it is you have to say. It seems very unlikely that he''d consider hiring you again.'
 
-		act 'Leave him alone':gt 'post_office', 'start'
+		act 'Leave him alone': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 	end
 end
 

locations/post_office.qsrc

@@ -8,15 +8,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'stat'
 	$postloc = ''
 
-	act 'Leave':$postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
+	act 'Leave': $postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
 
 	if (hour >= 9 and hour <= 10) or (hour >= 15 and hour <=16):
 
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Post Office</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/city.jpg"></center>'
-		'It is currently very busy and looks like you''ll have to wait to get to the counter.'
+		'It is currently very busy and it looks like you''ll have to wait your turn to get to the counter.'
 
-		act 'Wait in line (30 Minutes)':
+		act 'Wait in line (0:30)':
 			cla
 			minut += 30
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'flash', 'full', 'inside', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Go to the counter':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+					act 'Go to the counter': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Flash both your tits and your pussy to skip the line (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'inside', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Go to the counter':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+					act 'Go to the counter': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Flash your pussy to skip the line (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'inside', 1
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'Go to the counter':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+					act 'Go to the counter': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Flash your tits to skip the line (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if exhibitionist_lvl > 0:
 			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'self'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Suggest a blowjob in exchange for jumping the queue (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Offer a blowjob in exchange for jumping the queue (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'self'
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
@@ -88,7 +88,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					if cumloc[11] = 0:
 						gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(18,45)
 						gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
-
 						inhib_exp += rand(2,5)
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -112,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							act 'Go to the counter':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+							act 'Go to the counter': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 						end
 
 						act 'Cum in your mouth':
@@ -123,12 +122,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
-							act 'Go to the counter':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+							act 'Go to the counter': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 						end
 
 					else
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/punch.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'The Man punches you in the gut and says, <font color="#0D42C0">"Go away bitch, your face is covered in sperm."</font> You stagger away from the postoffice and spend 2 hours curled up like a ball.'
+						'The man punches you in the gut. "Go away bitch, your face is covered in cum!"' 
+						'You quickly stagger away.'
 						minut += 120
 						gs 'pain', 4, 'tummy', 'hit'
 
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					end
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Suggest a blowjob in exchange for jumping the queue (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Offer a blowjob in exchange for jumping the queue (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -155,74 +155,71 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if bankloc = 0: act 'Go to Postmaster''s Office': gt 'post_master', 'start'
+	if bankloc = 0: act 'Go to the Postmaster''s office': gt 'post_master', 'start'
 end
 
 if $postloc = 'counter':
-	cla
-	*clr
+	*clr & cla
 	$menu_loc = 'post_office'
 	$menu_arg = 'counter'
 	menu_off = 0
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Counter</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/counter.jpg"></center>'
-	'The counter, it''s boring here.'
+	'There''s nothing interesting happening. It''s rather boring here.'
 
-	act 'Leave':$postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
+	act 'Leave': $postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
 
 	if bankAccount = 1 and money > 0:
-		act 'Deposit money to your bank account':
+		act 'Deposit money into your bank account':
 			cla
 			menu_off = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			kartaIN = input ("How much money do you want to deposit into the account?")
+			kartaIN = input ("How much money do you want to deposit into your account?")
 
 			if kartaIN <= 0 or kartaIN > money:
-				'Not correct operation.'
+				'Invalid operation.'
 			else
 				karta += kartaIN
 				money -= kartaIN
 
-				'<br>You put on the account <<kartaIN>> <b>₽</b>, now you have <<karta>> <b>₽</b> on it.'
+				'<br>You deposit <<kartaIN>> <b>₽</b> into your account. You now have <<karta>> <b>₽</b> in your account.'
 			end
 
 			'"Is there anything else I can do for you?"'
 
-			act 'Leave the post office':$postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
-			act 'Yes':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+			act 'Leave the post office': $postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
+			act 'Yes': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if policeQW['legal_fine'] > 0:
-		act 'Pay toward legal fine':
+		act 'Pay your fine(s)':
 			menu_off = 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			fineIN = input ('How much money do you want to pay off your fine/s?')
+			fineIN = input ('How much do you want to pay off?')
 
 			if fineIN <= 0 or fineIN > money:
-				'Not correct operation.'
+				'Invalid operation.'
 
 			elseif fineIN >= policeQW['legal_fine']:
 				money -= policeQW['legal_fine']
 				policeQW['legal_fine'] = 0
 				policeQW['missed_fine_deadlines'] = 0
 				policeQW['fine_deadline'] = 0
-					policeQW['arrest_gameover_flag'] = 0
-
-				'<br>You pay the full amount of your outstanding fine/s to the cashier and they print out a receipt to say that it is paid off.'
+				policeQW['arrest_gameover_flag'] = 0
+				'<br>You pay the full amount of your outstanding fine(s) to the cashier and they print out a receipt to say that it''s paid off.'
 
 			else
 				policeQW['legal_fine'] -= fineIN
 				money -= fineIN
-
-				'<br>You pay <<fineIN>> <b>₽</b> of your legal fine/s, now you have <<policeQW[''legal_fine'']>> <b>₽</b> still outstanding.'
+				'<br>You pay <<fineIN>> <b>₽</b> of your legal fine(s). You have <<policeQW[''legal_fine'']>> <b>₽</b> still outstanding.'
 			end
 			killvar 'fineIN'
 		end
 
 		if money >= policeQW['legal_fine']:
-			act 'Pay off your legal fine/s':
+			act 'Pay off your fine(s)':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				money -= policeQW['legal_fine']
@@ -231,10 +228,9 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 				policeQW['fine_deadline'] = 0
 				policeQW['arrest_gameover_flag'] = 0
 				gs 'stat'
-
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Counter</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/postoffice/counter.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pay the full amount of your outstanding fine/s to the cashier and they print out a receipt to say that it is paid off.'
+				'You pay the full amount of your outstanding fine(s) to the cashier and they print out a receipt to say that it''s paid off.'
 
 				act 'Done': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 			end
@@ -242,15 +238,15 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 	end
 
 	if used_pattest > 0:
-		act 'Send paternity test (20.000 <b>₽</b>)':
+		act 'Send paternity test (20,000 <b>₽</b>)':
 			menu_off = 1
 			if money >= 20000:
 				dynamic $send_test
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You pay the fee of the testing, then you mail your used paternity test to the testing labor in Saint Petersburg with the copy of your receipt of payment. You will get answer in SMS withing a week.'
+				'You pay the fee for the testing, then mail your used paternity test to the lab in Saint Petersburg with the copy of your receipt of payment. You will get answer by SMS within a week.'
 			else
-				'Unfortunately you have no money to send the test in. You could, but they would just throw it out without the receipt of payment.'
+				'Unfortunately, you have no money to submit the test. They would just throw it out without the receipt of payment.'
 			end
 			act 'Done': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 		end
@@ -262,7 +258,7 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 		gs 'stat'
 		minut += 5
 		if mail <= 0:
-			'Sorry no mail.'
+			'You have no mail.'
 		else
 			'You have mail.'
 		end
@@ -270,7 +266,6 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 		'"Is there anything else I can do for you?"'
 
 		act 'Yes': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
-
 		act 'Leave the post office': $postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
 	end
 
@@ -310,30 +305,29 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 		act 'Put the money on the phone':
 			cla
 			menu_off = 1
-			set minut = minut + 5
-			obmennik = input ("How many <b>₽</b> do you want to deposit?")
+			minut += 5
+			obmennik = input ("How much <b>₽</b> do you want to deposit?")
 
 			if obmennik <= 0:
-				'<center><br><b>Do you want to think again?</b></center>'
-				act 'Return':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+				'<center><br><b>Invalid operation.</b></center>'
+				act 'Return': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 			else
 				if money < obmennik:
 					'<center><br>You do not have <b><<obmennik>></b> <b>₽</b>.</center>'
-					act 'Return':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+					act 'Return': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
 				end
 
 				if money >= obmennik:
 					set balans = balans + obmennik
 					set money = money - obmennik
 					clr
-					gs'stat'
+					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><br>You put <b><<obmennik>></b> <b>₽</b> to the account.</center>'
 
 					'"Is there anything else I can do for you?"'
 
-					act 'Yes':$postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
-
-					act 'Leave the post office':$postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
+					act 'Yes': $postloc = 'counter' & gt 'post_office'
+					act 'Leave the post office': $postloc = 'leave' & gt 'post_office'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -343,20 +337,16 @@ if $postloc = 'counter':
 !!Might use for the city branch, but seems ott for Pav
 !!	if askWork = 0 and bankloc = 0:
 !!		act 'Ask for work':
-
 !!			*clr & cla
+!!			askWork += 1
 !!			minut += 5
 !!			gs 'stat'
-
-!!			'You approach the counter and ask the girl at the counter: "Excuse me... I hear you are looking for postal workers? I would like to come work as a one."'
-!!'She nods understandingly: "We are looking for new workers, that''s true. I''d hire you in an instant, but unfortunately it''s not up to me. You should go see Oleg Koltsov, the postmaster. He''s usually in his office between 12:00 and 14:00. I bet he will hire you! Good luck when you go see him!"'
-!!			'"I''m afraid there is no position available at this time."'
-
-!!			act 'Step away from the counter':gt'post_office', 'start'
-!!askWork += 1
+!!			'You approach the counter and greet the girl there. "Excuse me, I hear you''re looking for postal workers?"'
+!!			'She nods understandingly. "We''re looking for new workers and I''d hire you in an instant, but unfortunately it''s not up to me. You should go see Oleg Koltsov, the postmaster. He''s usually in his office between 12:00 and 14:00. I bet he''ll hire you! Good luck when you see him!"'
+!!			act 'Step away from the counter': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 !!		end
 !!	end
-end
+!!end
 
 if $postloc = 'leave':
 	minut += 3
@@ -375,12 +365,10 @@ if $postloc = 'post_off':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Postmaster Office</font></b></center>'
-	!!Blatte: MISSING IMAGE
-	$ImageNeededPlacholder
 	!!'<center><img src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
-	'Behind his desk, a man of about 50 is busy with some paperwork. He''s dressed quite sharply, and you had never expected the postmaster would be this good looking.'
+	'An older man sits behind a desk, busy with some paperwork. He''s dressed quite sharply for his position.'
 
-	act 'Exit office':gt'post_office', 'start'
+	act 'Exit office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 
 	if post_wrk = 0:
 		act 'Ask for work':
@@ -388,31 +376,31 @@ if $postloc = 'post_off':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			!!Placeholder text
-			'You approach the man''s desk, but he doesn''t look up from his work. With a soft voice you carefully try to get his attention: "Umm... excuse me?"'
-			'He looks up from his desk: "Oh I''m sorry, I didn''t hear you come in. Hello, I''m Oleg Koltsov, postmaster at this post office. Is there a problem?"'
-			'You smile and shake your head: "No, no problem. I am looking for a job, I hear you are often looking for workers?"'
-			'You can feel his eyes exploring your body for a moment before he responds: "Yes, we are! We currently only have a part-time vacancy, for sorting the mail. You would be working between these and these hours, give or take. Does that sound good to you?"'
+			'You approach the man''s desk, but he doesn''t look up from his work. With a soft voice, you carefully try to get his attention. "Umm... Excuse me?"'
+			'He looks up at you. "Oh I''m sorry, I didn''t hear you come in. Hello, I''m Oleg Koltsov, postmaster at this post office. Is there a problem?"'
+			'You smile and shake your head. "No, no problem. I''m actually looking for a job. I hear you''re looking for workers?"'
+			'You can feel his eyes exploring your body for a second before he responds. "Yes, we are! We currently only have a part-time vacancy, for sorting the mail. You would be working between these and these hours, give or take. Does that sound good to you?"'
 
-			act'"Sorry, not interested"':
+			act '"Sorry, not interested"':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
-				'"I need to think about it if it''s okay."'
-				'"Sure <<$pcs_nickname>>, come back when you''ve made up your mind."'
+				'"I need to think about it if it''s okay?" you reply.'
+				'"Sure. Come back when you''ve made up your mind."'
 
-				act'Exit office':gt'post_office', 'start'
+				act 'Exit office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 			end
 
-			act'"That sounds great!"':
+			act '"That sounds great!"':
 				*clr & cla
 				post_wrk += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				!!Placeholder text
-				'You beam: "That sounds fantastic, thank you so much!"'
+				'You beam. "That sounds fantastic, thank you so much!"'
 				'Oleg gives you a friendly smile, happy to have found another potential worker. He quickly writes some of your personal data down.'
-				'Oleg continues: "If you want to work a shift, you need to be here between this time. There''s no point in you getting changed for just 20 minutes of work."'
-				'That also sounds fair. You give him a handshake as you get ready to leave: "Okay. Thank you sir!"'
+				'"If you want to work a shift, you need to be here between this time. There''s no point in you getting changed just for 20 minutes of work."'
+				'You give him a handshake as you get ready to leave. "Okay. Thank you sir!"'
 
-				act'Exit Office':gt'post_office', 'start'
+				act 'Exit office': gt 'post_office', 'start'
 			end
 		end
 	end