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Fix typos reported by Dybbuk

rachels 3 سال پیش
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5فایلهای تغییر یافته به همراه6 افزوده شده و 6 حذف شده
  1. 1 1
      locations/event.qsrc
  2. 1 1
      locations/ivanRoom.qsrc
  3. 2 2
      locations/lover_likes.qsrc
  4. 1 1
      locations/ludahome.qsrc
  5. 1 1
      locations/olu.qsrc

+ 1 - 1
locations/event.qsrc

@@ -732,7 +732,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dima46':
 	'When you''re downstairs, the girl moves you into a dark room with a round hole in one wall. Almost immediately, a cock appears from the hole.'
 	'"Proceed", commandeds the girl.'
 	'As you consider, she grabs you by the neck, and forces your face to the hole.'
-	'Attempting to push the member out of your mouth, only excites the stranger behind the wall, and unable to withstand more then a minute, he cums.'
+	'Attempting to push the member out of your mouth, only excites the stranger behind the wall, and unable to withstand more than a minute, he cums.'
 	'With your head pressed tightly against the wall, you can not spit, and are forced to swallow.'
 	'"Your companion has been paid for a certain number of customers. Do you think you can manage, or do you need my help?'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'prostitution', 'unknown'

+ 1 - 1
locations/ivanRoom.qsrc

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if StoryLine = 0 or altQS = 1:
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				!!'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/industrial/apartment/gun.jpg"></center>'
-				'You ran at Ivan attempting to kick him while he reloads the gun. Ivan suddenly jumped back into a bedroom and slams the door in your face.  Your inertia carries you into the solid interior door and you rebound off of it just as another shot explodes thru the door splintering the wood and narrowly misses hitting you. As you push yourself up from the floor you see Juugo, the black designs swirling all over his exposed skin, he growls low and dangerous in his chest and you see the bullet wounds expelling the bullets from his body and closing right before your eyes. His body almost totally black now with the magical tattos you see horns sprout from his forehead. Juugo shouts furiously "NOW YOU DIE!" and charges at the wooden door that Ivan is hiding behind, lowering his head and shoulders for the impact he doesn''t even slow as he crashes through the solid wood sending splinters and shards flying inward into the room. You follow close behind entering the room and skidding to a halt. Ivan has been thrown backwards and to the ground, he''s bleeding badly from several areas with many wooden spikes impaling his body in various parts.  No sign of his gun he must have dropped it when the door exploded on him. Juugo still iin a rage falls upon the prone body and with an inhuman roar begins to pummel the unconscious man. Small lightning bolts arc through the body as Juugo continues to pound the body quickly reducing Ivan to little more then pulp.'
+				'You ran at Ivan attempting to kick him while he reloads the gun. Ivan suddenly jumped back into a bedroom and slams the door in your face.  Your inertia carries you into the solid interior door and you rebound off of it just as another shot explodes thru the door splintering the wood and narrowly misses hitting you. As you push yourself up from the floor you see Juugo, the black designs swirling all over his exposed skin, he growls low and dangerous in his chest and you see the bullet wounds expelling the bullets from his body and closing right before your eyes. His body almost totally black now with the magical tattoos you see horns sprout from his forehead. Juugo shouts furiously "NOW YOU DIE!" and charges at the wooden door that Ivan is hiding behind, lowering his head and shoulders for the impact he doesn''t even slow as he crashes through the solid wood sending splinters and shards flying inward into the room. You follow close behind entering the room and skidding to a halt. Ivan has been thrown backwards and to the ground, he''s bleeding badly from several areas with many wooden spikes impaling his body in various parts.  No sign of his gun he must have dropped it when the door exploded on him. Juugo still in a rage falls upon the prone body and with an inhuman roar begins to pummel the unconscious man. Small lightning bolts arc through the body as Juugo continues to pound the body quickly reducing Ivan to little more then pulp.'
 
 				act 'Run':
 					cls

+ 2 - 2
locations/lover_likes.qsrc

@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pierPrefTmp':
 	if pierPrefTmp = 1:
 		if pierWearCount > pierPrefTmpMax:
-			$meetpierPrefTmp = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> sees your piercings and tells you that you have to many piercings and anything more then <<pierPrefTmpMax>> is too much.'
+			$meetpierPrefTmp = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> sees your piercings and tells you that you have to many piercings and anything more than <<pierPrefTmpMax>> is too much.'
 		else
 			$meetpierPrefTmp = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is glad to see you wear very few piercings."'
 		end
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'tattPrefTmp':
 	if tattPrefTmp = 1:
 		if TattCount > tattPrefTmpMax:
-			$meettattPrefTmp = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> sees your tattoos and tells you that you have to many tattoos and anything more then <<tattPrefTmpMax>> is too much.'
+			$meettattPrefTmp = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> sees your tattoos and tells you that you have to many tattoos and anything more than <<tattPrefTmpMax>> is too much.'
 		else
 			$meettattPrefTmp = '<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is glad to see you have very few tattoos."'
 		end

+ 1 - 1
locations/ludahome.qsrc

@@ -725,7 +725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 			cla
 			LudaQW['olu_offer'] = 2
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'You nod, it sounds like it can be fun. Having a man just in your same building you can visit anytime you are feeling horning and no one else will know about it? Sounds perfect actually "OK sure Auntie as long as you are OK with it, yeah I wouldn''t mind helping out with his sexual energy." You say with a wink.'
+			'You nod, it sounds like it can be fun. Having a man just in your same building you can visit any time you are feeling horny and no one else will know about it? Sounds perfect actually "OK sure Auntie as long as you are OK with it, yeah I wouldn''t mind helping out with his sexual energy." You say with a wink.'
 			'She laughs at that "Well I will let him know, also I should warn you. He likes butts, but don''t worry I keep a large supply of lube in the apartment." Seeing your face at the thought of a man described as hung like a horse fucking your ass she quickly adds "Don''t worry, it might hurt the first time but you quickly get use to it and it even starts feeling good after awhile."'
 			'You nod to that "OK well hopefully it doesn''t take me long to get use to it then." Then the two of you start talking about anal sex and she shares a few tips with you on how to relax and making it feel better.'
 			act 'Keep talking': gt 'ludahome', 'chat_luda'

+ 1 - 1
locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex':
 				*clr & cla
 				OluQW['vaginal'] += 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/olu/sex/firstvag1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head your head. "No, I''m not a virgin a virgin" You tell him.'
+				'You shake your head. "No, I''m not a virgin." You tell him.'
 				'He nods and smiles. "Good good, then more fun for us." Then he lifts you up and lays you on the bed on your back. He pulls you to the edge of the bed till your ass is nearly hanging off the end. He spreads you legs and grabs some lube from the night stand, he lubes up his monster dick. Normally you would say you don''t need lube for your pussy but seeing the size of that thing you are not going to argue.'
 				*nl
 				'He pushes your legs apart after lubing up his dick and steps between them. He rubs the tip of his cock against your vaginal lips, you feel yourself getting naturally wet and from the lube. Once he seems happy with how slippery you are he pushes forward, you feel your pussy lips spread apart. It just keeps stretching until it you don''t think it can stretch anymore, he is being slow but even so it hurts. You wonder if this is what giving birth feels like and then you dismiss that thought, you are sure it hurts a lot worse than this. He starts to slowly fuck you at first and slowly picking up speed and pushing himself deeper as you start to moan in pleasure.'