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locations/KatjaHomeTalk.qsrc

@@ -15,39 +15,39 @@
 !! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =2 You have agreed to help Katja have anal sex with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =3 Katja has had anal sex with a boy and you discussed it afterwards.
 
-!! katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] 	The stages of the side quest of getting Katja to go comando to school. 1 to 3 are just temprary counts,
-!!							4 means you have gotten Katja to take of her panties when you ask her, and 5 means that she wont wear panties to school anymore.
-!!							So if you waht to chack if Katja are not wearing pantios at school use katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5. (katjaTanga, katja_tanga_end)
+!! katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] 	The stages of the side quest of getting Katja to go commando to school. 1 to 3 are just temprary counts,
+!!							4 means you have gotten Katja to take off her panties when you ask her, and 5 means that she won''t wear panties to school anymore.
+!!							If you want to check if Katja is not wearing panties at school use katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5. (katjaTanga, katja_tanga_end)
 
-!! katjaQW['school_kiss'] Increases the first two times you kiss as school, used to trigger the kissing competition in the park. (flag_start_parc)
-									
-!! katjaQW['slut'] a number that increasese as Katja becomes more and more sexualy liberated, and alows her to be villing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
+!! katjaQW['school_kiss'] Increases the first two times you kiss at school. Used to trigger the kissing competition in the park. (flag_start_parc)
+	
+!! katjaQW['slut'] a number that increases as Katja becomes more and more sexualy liberated, and alows her to be villing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
 !! katjaQW['horny'] a messure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she have an orgasmn and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
-!! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tell if Katja is dominant or submissiv. 0 is neutal, a negative means she is submessive and a possitive that she is dominant. In general the absulut valu nee to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
+!! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutal, a negative means she is submissive and a positive means she is dominant. In general the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
 
-!! katjaQW['park_sex'] 	a messure of what experience Katja have had with random guys in the park. 0 means she have not have had sex whit anybody in the park, 
-!!					1 means that she have had sex with one guy at a time (either alone, in a threesome with the player character or in while the the player have sex with another guy next to them)
-!!					2 means she have had a threesome whit 2 guys you met in the park, and 3 means she has paticipated in an orgy with guys from the park. (katjaSex)
+!! katjaQW['park_sex'] 	a measure of what experience Katja has had with random guys in the park. 0 means she has not had sex with anybody in the park, 
+!!					1 means that she has had sex with one guy at a time (either alone, in a threesome with the player character or while the player had sex with another guy next to them)
+!!					2 means she has had a threesome with 2 guys you met in the park, and 3 means she has paticipated in an orgy with guys from the park. (katjaSex)
 
-!! katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja have started masturbating at night if she get to horny. (KatjaMastr)
-!! The following 3 varibles functions as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja have sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
+!! katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja has started masturbating at night if she get too horny. (KatjaMastr)
+!! The following 3 varibles functions as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja has sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
 !! npc_throat['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) down her throat. (KatjaThroat)
 !! npc_vag['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in the vagina.
 !! npc_ass['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in her ass. (KatjaAnus)
 
-!! katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1 Katja have given a bj to your strap-on.
-!! katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s pussy with youe strap-on.
-!! katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s ass with youe strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1 Katja has given a BJ to your strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s pussy with your strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s ass with your strap-on.
 
-!! katjaQW['ivan_pussy'] = 1 Katja have take Ivan''s cock in her pussy.
-!! katjaQW['ivan_anal'] = 1 Katja have take Ivan''s cock in her ass.
-!! katjaQW['marcus_pussy'] = 1 Katja have take Marcus''s cock in her pussy.
-!! katjaQW['marcus_anal'] = 1 Katja have take Marcus''s cock in her ass.
-!! katjaQW['marcus_disco'] = 1 Katja and the player character have had a threesome with Marcus''s at the comunity center disco.
+!! katjaQW['ivan_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Ivan''s cock in her pussy.
+!! katjaQW['ivan_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Ivan''s cock in her ass.
+!! katjaQW['marcus_pussy'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her pussy.
+!! katjaQW['marcus_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her ass.
+!! katjaQW['marcus_disco'] = 1 Katja and the player character have had a threesome with Marcus at the community center disco.
 
-!! katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if you ar Katja ask to have a threesome with Marcus. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
+!! katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if you or Katja ask to have a threesome with Marcus. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
 
-!! katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] This is set to the daystart value from the day Katja''s birth control will be efective effect, if the player tells her to use it. Should be used to Check if katja can become pregnant by a if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] ! 0 and katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] < daystart to make sure is protected.
+!! katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] This is set to the daystart value from the day Katja''s birth control will be effective if the player tells her to use it. Should be used to check if Katja can become pregnant by if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] ! 0 and katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] < daystart to make sure is protected.
 
 !! KatjaQW['orgasm_day'] Is set to be equal to daystart when Katja gain an orgasm (It is not set all palces). (KatjaOrgasm)
 !! katjaQW['take_of_panties_day'] is set to ddaystart if you get >katja to take of her panties during school break.
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 	end
 
 	if university['student'] = 1 and katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0 and $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies':
-		act 'Tell Katja that you are going to the university': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'uni_tell'
+		act 'Tell Katja that you''re going to the university': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'uni_tell'
 	end
 
 	act 'Chat with Katja':
@@ -1793,9 +1793,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uni_tell':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	if katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0:
-		'You tell Katja that you have enrolled in the program at the university for studying to become a teacher. She reply that she also plans to do the same, and that is going to be so much fun studying at the university together. She bombards you with question about the how the enrolment was.'
+		'You tell Katja that you have enroled at the university to study to become a teacher. She replies that she also plans to do the same, and that it will be fun studying at the university together. She bombards you with questions about how your enrolment process went.'
 	else
-		'You tell Katja that you have also enrolled in the teaching studies program at the university. She reply that it is going to be so much fun studying at the university together. You then spend the next few minutes talking excited about what you know about the program.'
+		'You tell Katja that you have also enroled to study teaching at the university. She replies that it will be fun studying at the university together before you spend the next few minutes talking excitedly about what you know about the program.'
 	end
 	if $loc = 'mey_home':
 		act 'Talk about something else': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
@@ -1814,12 +1814,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja_uni_tell':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	if katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0:
-		'Katja excitedly tells you that she has been accepted to the teaching program at the university. She then continue to tell you about how great the program is.' 
+		'Katja excitedly tells you that she has been accepted into the university to study teaching. She then tells you about how great the program is.' 
 		if university['student'] = 1 and $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies':
-			act 'Tell Katja that you are going to the university': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'uni_tell'
+			act 'Tell Katja that you''re going to the university': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'uni_tell'
 		end	
 	else
-		'Katja excitedly tells you that she has now also been accepted in the teaching studies program at the university, and that it is going to be so much fun studying at the university together. You then spend the next few minutes talking excited about what you know about the program.'
+		'Katja excitedly tells you that she has also been accepted into the university to study teaching, and that it will be fun studying at the university together. You then spend the next few minutes talking excitedly about what you know about the program.'
 	end
 	if $loc = 'mey_home':
 		act 'Talk about something else': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'

+ 4 - 3
locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -965,7 +965,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study_door':
 				AlbinaQW['flashdrive'] = 1
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/study.jpg"></center>'
-				'You find yourself in a modern, lavishly decorated study. You take a quick look around, but find nothing of any real interest to you. This was clearly her father''s study. No wonder Albina hates coming in here. Just as you''re about to leave, you accidently knock one of the heavy books off the shelf, gritting your teeth in pain when it lands on your foot. Thankfully, nobody seems to have heard and you kneel down to pick it back up. As you do, something falls out from between the pages. Placing the book back, you glance down and see a flash drive at your feet. You pick it up and pocket it, curious about why someone would hide it. With nothing else to see, you climb back out and return the window to its original ajar position before shuffling back across the ledge to the bathroom, being careful not to stumble this time. Once you''re back in the bathroom, you close the window and head to Albina''s bedroom.'
+				'You find yourself in a modern, lavishly decorated study. You take a quick look around, but find nothing of any real interest to you. This was clearly her father''s study. No wonder Albina hates coming in here. Just as you''re about to leave, you accidently knock one of the heavy books off the shelf, gritting your teeth in pain when it lands on your foot. Thankfully, nobody seems to have heard and you kneel down to pick it back up. As you do, something falls out from between the pages. Placing the book back, you glance down and see a flash drive at your feet. You pick it up and pocket it, curious about why someone would hide it.' 
+				'With nothing else to see, you climb back out and return the window to its original ajar position before shuffling back across the ledge to the bathroom, being careful not to stumble this time. Once you''re back in the bathroom, you close the window and head to Albina''s bedroom.'
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
 			end
@@ -1012,13 +1013,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_drive':
 			act 'Watch the third video':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'The third video opens with Albina standing in a bedroom in her school uniform. You hear her whimper slightly as the door opens and loudly slams before a figure grabs her and forces her over his knee. He flips her skirt up and delivers a series of stinging smacks to her exposed ass, but Albina silently takes it without complaint, which seems to annoy the man. By now, you''ve identified him as her father, who grabs her hair and roughly pulls her head back as he gives her now bright red ass another hard smack. Albina yelps as strands of her hair visibly snap and she finally breaks. "I''m sorry daddy, I''ll be a good girl from now on!" she blurts out and he smiles. "Good. I would hate if something bad were to happen to you again."'
+				'The third video opens with Albina standing in a bedroom in her school uniform. You hear her whimper slightly as the door opens and loudly slams before a figure grabs her and forces her over his knee. He flips her skirt up and delivers a series of stinging smacks to her exposed ass, but other than a few grunts, Albina takes it without complaint, which seems to annoy the man. By now, you''ve identified him as her father, who grabs her hair and roughly pulls her head back as he gives her now bright red ass another hard smack. Albina yelps as strands of her hair visibly snap and she finally breaks. "I''m sorry daddy, I''ll be a good girl from now on!" she blurts out and he smiles. "Good. I would hate if something bad were to happen to you again."'
 				'He throws Albina off of his knee and leaves the room. Albina sits on the bed quietly sobbing before glaring at the door with fire in her eyes.' 
 
 				act 'Watch the fourth video':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/laptop/video4.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You open the fourth video and immediately notice that it was taken from a hidden camera in the study where you found the flash drive. Albina is on her knees wearing only a crop top, looking at the floor and avoiding eye contact with the naked man in front of her. The man grabs a fistful of her hair and pulls her head up to slap her face. "Look at me when I''m talking to you, bitch!" he snarls. "Now get those perky little tits of yours out!" Albina reaches down and slowly pulls her crop top up to expose her breasts. Satisfied, the man slaps his erect cock against her face before shoving it into her mouth. "Be a good little whore and suck my dick!" Still holding her by her hair, he starts forcing her head up and down on his cock, not caring as she gags and splutters before he forces her to take it into her throat and deepthroat him. This continues for a few more minutes before he finally lets her go. "That''s one fine looking ass you''ve got, slut. I wonder how loose it will be after I''m done with it?" Albina looks helplessly into the camera before the mysterious man grabs her tightly by the wrist and roughly drags her out of sight. The video cuts off when you hear Albina sobbing after being slapped off screen.'
+					'You open the fourth video and immediately notice that it was taken from a hidden camera in the study where you found the flash drive. Albina is on her knees wearing only a crop top, looking at the floor and avoiding eye contact with the naked man in front of her. The man grabs a fistful of her hair and pulls her head up to slap her face. "Look at me when I''m talking to you, bitch!" he snarls. "Now get those perky little tits of yours out!" Albina reaches down and slowly pulls her crop top up to expose her breasts. Satisfied, the man slaps his erect cock against her face before shoving it into her mouth. "Be a good little whore and suck my dick!" Still holding her by her hair, he starts forcing her head up and down on his cock, not caring as she gags and splutters before he forces her to take it into her throat and deepthroat him. This continues for a few more minutes before he finally lets her go. "That''s one fine looking ass you''ve got, slut. I wonder how loose it will be after I''m done with it?" Albina kicks and screams in protest as the mysterious man grabs her tightly by the wrist and roughly drags her out of sight. The video cuts off when you hear Albina sobbing after being slapped off screen.'
 
 					act 'Watch the fifth video':
 						cla & *clr

+ 139 - 144
locations/office.qsrc

@@ -30,23 +30,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/lobby.jpg"></center>'
 	if workSec = 1:
 		if CloStyle3 = 4 and PCLoSkirt > 0:
-			'You walk into the building, you give a wave to the receptionist, who smiles back to you as you head for for the elevators.'
+			'You walk into the building and wave at the receptionist, who smiles back at you as you head for the elevators.'
 			act 'Go to your floor': gt 'office', 'work_floor'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 		else
-			'You walk into the building, you give a wave to the receptionist, who shakes her head and waves you over. As you walk over she says. "You know the dress code, I''m afraid you can''t go to work dressed like that. You need to be wearing a womens business suit with a skirt. You will need to go home and change, before you can go to work." You sigh and nod, then turn and leave.'
+			'You walk into the building and wave at the receptionist, who shakes her head and waves you over. "You know the dress code. I''m afraid you can''t go to work dressed like that. You need to be wearing a woman''s business suit with a skirt. You will need to go home and change before you can go to work." You sigh and nod before turning to leave.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 		end
 	elseif jobsec = 1:
-		'You enter the office building of Titran-Express Engineering, the lobby is very fancy. Black marble floors, the inner walls look to be made out of white marble with lots of gold colored trim. Near the doors is a desk with a reception area, off to the side is several couches. A corridor leads off the entrance to a long row of elevators. As you look around you see the receptionist is looking at you, likely wondering why you are here. You walk over to her and say. "Hello I am here for a interview with Mrs Torbica."'
-		'She smiles to you. I assume you have your secretary certification?"'
+		'You enter the office building of Titran-Express Engineering. The lobby is very fancy, with black marble floors and white marble walls with lots of gold colored trim. Near the doors is a desk with a reception area, with several couches nearby. A corridor leads off to a long row of elevators. As you look around, you notice the receptionist is looking at you, likely wondering why you''re here. You smile and walk over to her. "Hello, I''m here for an interview with Mrs Torbica."'
+		'She smiles at you. "I assume you have your secretary certification?"'
 		if secrDiplom = 1:
 			act 'Yes':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Engineering company offices</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/lobby.jpg"></center>'
-				'You nod your head yes. "Yes I do."'
-				'"Excellent." She says before she looks down at her screen a moment, then back to you and smiles. "Let me call her." Then she picks up the phone and makes a call. "Excuse me ma''am, a young lady is here looking to get a interview with you." A brief pause while she listens to the reply. "Of course ma''am." Then she hangs up and looks back to you. Please go down the corridor to the elevators and take it up to the twenty third floor, then make a right. Go to the end of the hall and a left, then go to the corner office and they will get you sorted. Have a nice day."'
+				'You nod your head. "Yes, I do."'
+				'"Excellent," she replies before she looks down at her screen, then back at you with a smile. "Let me call her."' 
+				'She picks up the phone and makes a call. "Excuse me ma''am, a young lady is here looking to get an interview with you." A brief pause ensues while she listens to the reply. "Of course ma''am." Then she hangs up and looks back at you. "Please go down the corridor to the elevators and take it up to the twenty third floor, then make a right. Go to the end of the hall and take a left, then go to the corner office and they will get you sorted. Have a nice day."'
 				act 'Go to the interview': gt 'office', 'interview'
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 			end
@@ -55,23 +56,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Engineering company offices</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/lobby.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head no. "No do I need one?"'
-				'She keeps up the pleasent smile. "Yes I am afraid you do, you can''t interview for the job with out one."'
-				'You frown a little, you was hoping to get this job. "Oh I see. Thank you."'
-				'She smiles. "My pleasure and if you ever get your certification, please feel free to come back and apply then. Have a nice day."'
+				'You shake your head. "No. Do I need one?"'
+				'She keeps up the pleasent smile. "Yes, I''m afraid you do. You can''t interview for the job without one."'
+				'You frown a little. You were hoping to get this job. "Oh, I see. Thank you."'
+				'She smiles. "My pleasure. If you ever get your certification, please feel free to come back and apply then. Have a nice day."'
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		'You enter the office building of Titran-Express Engineering, the lobby is very fancy. Black marble floors, the inner walls look to be made out of white marble with lots of gold colored trim. Near the doors is a desk with a reception area, off to the side is several couches. A corridor leads off the entrance to a long row of elevators. As you look around you see the receptionist is looking at you, likely wondering why you are here. Perhaps you should see if they have a job, a large office building likely this likely has lots of secretaries, maybe they have a opening. You walk over and ask her. "Would there be a job opening for a secretary?"'
-		'She smiles to you. I assume you have your secretary certification?"'
+		'You enter the office building of Titran-Express Engineering. The lobby is very fancy, with black marble floors and white marble walls with lots of gold colored trim. Near the doors is a desk with a reception area, with several couches nearby. A corridor leads off to a long row of elevators. As you look around, you notice the receptionist is looking at you, likely wondering why you''re here. Perhaps you should see if they have a job vacany available? A large office building like this must have lots of secretaries. You walk over to the receptionist and smile at her. "Is there a job opening available for a secretary?"'
+		'She smiles at you. "I assume you have your secretary certification?"'
 		if secrDiplom = 1:
 			act 'Yes':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Engineering company offices</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/lobby.jpg"></center>'
-				'You nod your head yes. "Yes I do."'
-				'"Excellent." She looks down at her screen a moment, then back to you and smiles. "Yes there is, Mrs Torbica is doing interview for the position. Let me call her and see if she has time to see you." Then she picks up the phone and makes a call. "Excuse me ma''am, a young lady is here looking to get a interview with you." A brief pause while she listens to the reply. "Of course ma''am." Then she hangs up and looks back to you. Please go down the corridor to the elevators and take it up to the twenty third floor, then make a right. Go to the end of the hall and a left, then go to the corner office and they will get you sorted. Have a nice day."'
+				'You nod your head. "Yes, I do."'
+				'"Excellent," she replies before she looks down at her screen, then back at you with a smile. "Yes, there is. Mrs Torbica is doing interviews for the position. Let me call her and see if she has time to see you." She picks up the phone and makes a call. "Excuse me ma''am, a young lady is here looking to get an interview with you." A brief pause ensues while she listens to the reply. "Of course ma''am." Then she hangs up and looks back at you. "Please go down the corridor to the elevators and take it up to the twenty third floor, then make a right. Go to the end of the hall and take a left, then go to the corner office and they will get you sorted. Have a nice day."'
 				act 'Go to the interview': gt 'office', 'interview'
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 			end
@@ -80,10 +81,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Engineering company offices</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/lobby.jpg"></center>'
-				'You shake your head no. "No do I need one?"'
-				'She keeps up the pleasent smile. "Yes I am afraid you do, you can''t interview for the job with out one."'
-				'You frown a little, you was hoping to get this job. "Oh I see. Thank you."'
-				'She smiles. "My pleasure and if you ever get your certification, please feel free to come back and apply then. Have a nice day."'
+				'You shake your head. "No. Do I need one?"'
+				'She keeps up the pleasent smile. "Yes, I''m afraid you do. You can''t interview for the job without one."'
+				'You frown a little. You were hoping to get this job. "Oh, I see. Thank you."'
+				'She smiles. "My pleasure. If you ever get your certification, please feel free to come back and apply then. Have a nice day."'
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 			end
 		end
@@ -118,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work_floor':
 					end
 				!! Otherwise it''s return to work if already at work
 				elseif sek['atwork'] = daystart:
-					act 'Go back to work station':
+					act 'Go back to your work station':
 						sekDay += 1
 						if hour = 12: minut += 60 - minut 
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -129,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work_floor':
 					'You''re too late for work, so you''re told to take the day off.'
 				end
 				!! The remaining actions are always available				
-				act 'Go to the breakroom':gt 'office', 'break_room'
+				act 'Go to the break room':gt 'office', 'break_room'
 				act 'Go to restrooms':gt 'office', 'restrooms'
 				act 'Resign':
 					gt 'office', 'resign'
@@ -152,13 +153,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretary_office':
 	if hour < 17:
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">corridor</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/secoffice.jpg"></center>'
-		'This is rows of tables divided into small workstations. Most of the people here are young attractive women, with a few older still attracive women, and a couple of young attractive men. Many or the work stations are filled by your co-workers, most busy at what ever task they need to do. A few are relaxing between tasks. You walk over to your assigned work station and take a seat.'
+		'There are rows of tables divided into small work stations. Most of the people here are young attractive women, with a few older but still attracive women, and a couple of young attractive men. Many of the work stations are filled by your co-workers, who are busy with whatever tasks they need to do. You walk over to your assigned work station and take a seat.'
 		act 'Get to work':gt 'office', 'work'
 		act 'Go to the corridor':gt 'office', 'work_floor'
 	else
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">corridor</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/secoffice_afterhours.jpg"></center>'
-		'The secretary office is empty, it seems everyone has gone home for the day.'
+		'The secretary office is empty. It seems like everyone has gone home for the day.'
 		act 'Leave work': minut += 5 & gt 'city_center'
 	end
 end
@@ -174,10 +175,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_room':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Break Room</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/breakroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'The room is neat and clean. Across from the door is a couch along one wall with a few comfortable chairs. With a large table in the middle of the room and along one wall is a set of cabinets, with a sink, some appliances and a fridge to store your lunch in, if you bring one.'
+	'The break room is neat and clean and features a large table in the middle of the room flanked by a couch along one wall with a few comfortable chairs. A set of cabinets, a sink, some appliances and a fridge to store your lunch, if you happen to bring one, are set along the far wall.'
 	dynamic $driwater
 	if buterbrod > 0 and hour = 12:
-		act 'Eat brought lunch':
+		act 'Eat your lunch':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 20
 			buterbrod = 0
@@ -188,9 +189,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_room':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Break Room</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/eat_lunch.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get your lunch out of the fridge and warm it up in the microwave. After that you sit down to enjoy a pleasant lunch.'
+			'You get your food out of the fridge and warm it up in the microwave before you sit down to enjoy a pleasant lunch.'
 			act 'Go to the corridor':gt 'office', 'work_floor'
-			act 'Go back to work station':
+			act 'Go back to your work station':
 				sekDay += 1
 				if hour = 12: minut += 60 - minut
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -210,18 +211,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'restrooms':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Office Restrooms</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/restrooms.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to the restrooms at the end of the hall. There is a sign for the men''s and the women''s restroom.'
+	'You go to the restrooms at the end of the hall. There is a sign for the mens and the womens restroom.'
 	act 'Go to the women''s restroom': gt 'office', 'womens_restrooms'
 	gs 'willpower', 'action', 'self', 'medium'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-		act 'Go to the men''s restroom (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		act 'Go to the mens restroom (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			gs 'stat'
 			gt 'office', 'mens_restrooms'
 		end
 	else
-		act 'Go to the men''s restroom (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+		act 'Go to the mens restroom (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 	end
 	act 'Go to the corridor':gt 'office', 'work_floor'
 end
@@ -235,8 +236,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'womens_restrooms':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Womens Restrooms</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/womensbr.jpg"></center>'
-	if office_ladies_entry = 0:	office_ladies_entry = 1 & 'You enter the womens restroom, there is a couple of other women at the sink. One checking her makeup as they both talk for a moment. They give you a brief smile and then both exit leaving you alone in the restroom.'
-	'The restroom is very clean and nice, it is one of the nicest if not the nicest restroom you have been in.'
+	if office_ladies_entry = 0:	office_ladies_entry = 1 & 'You enter the womens restroom and find some women at the sink, one checking her makeup as they both talk. They give you a brief smile before they both exit, leaving you alone in the restroom.'
+	'The restroom is very clean and is one of the nicest, if not the nicest, restrooms you''ve ever been in.'
 
 	act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
 	dynamic $tampon
@@ -259,35 +260,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mens_restrooms':
 		temp = rand(1,6)
 		if temp = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/restroom/mensroom/fuck1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You gather your courage up and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking, you think it is the nicest mens room you have ever been in. But that''s not what catches your eye. No that would be one of your fellow secretaries naked and bent over the sink counter, with one of the managers fucking her hard from behind. She is looking your direction, you don''t know if she hear the door or even sees you yet. You quickly duck back outside before you are spotted.'
+			'You gather your courage and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking and you think it''s the nicest mens room you''ve ever been in, but that''s not what catches your eye. You''ve walked in on one of your fellow secretaries naked and bent over the sink as one of the managers fucks her hard from behind. Unsure if you were spotted, you quickly duck back outside.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'office', 'restrooms'
 		elseif temp = 2:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/restroom/mensroom/fuck2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You gather your courage up and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking, you think it is the nicest mens room you have ever been in. But that''s not what catches your eye. No that would be one of your fellow secretaries naked from the waist down, bent over, holding onto one of the stall walls, moaning loudly, with one of the managers fucking her hard from behind. You quickly duck back outside before you are seen by either of them.'
+			'You gather your courage and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking and you think it''s the nicest mens room you''ve ever been in, but that''s not what catches your eye. One of your fellow secretaries is naked from the waist down and bent over, holding onto one of the stall walls as one of the managers fucks her hard from behind. You quickly duck back outside before you''re spotted.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'office', 'restrooms'
 		elseif temp = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/restroom/mensroom/group_fuck.jpg"></center>'
-			'You gather your courage up and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking, you think it is the nicest mens room you have ever been in. But that''s not what catches your eye. No that would be one of your fellow secretaries naked from the waist down, bent over the sink counter, holding onto one of the stall walls, moaning loudly, with one of the managers fucking her hard from behind and another standing next to them, you assume waiting his turn. You quickly duck back outside before you are seen by any of them.'
+			'You gather your courage and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking and you think it''s the nicest mens room you''ve ever been in. but that''s not what catches your eye. One of your fellow secretaries is naked from the waist down and leaning against one of the stall walls as one of the managers fucks her hard from behind while another stands next to them, presumably waiting his turn. You quickly duck back outside before you''re spotted.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'office', 'restrooms'
 		elseif temp = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/restroom/mensroom/older_bj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You gather your courage up and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking, you think it is the nicest mens room you have ever been in. But that''s not what catches your eye. No that would be one of your fellow secretaries squatting down in front of one of the senior managers, with her tits pulled out, while she sucks his dick. You quickly duck back outside before you are seen by either of them.'
+			'You gather your courage and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking and you think it''s the nicest mens room you''ve ever been in, but that''s not what catches your eye. One of your fellow secretaries is squatting down in front of one of the senior managers, her tits pulled out as she sucks his dick. You quickly duck back outside before you''re spotted.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave':gt 'office', 'restrooms'
 		elseif temp = 5:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/sex/restroom/mensroom/stall_bj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You gather your courage up and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking, you think it is the nicest mens room you have ever been in. But that''s not what catches your eye. No that would be under one of the stalls, you see what appears to be a woman sitting on her ankles on the floor, facing in, while male legs with pants and underwear pushed down around his ankles faces her. You can hear him moaning softly and the distinct slurping sounds of a sloppy blow job. You quickly duck back outside before you are found out.'
+			'You gather your courage and walk into the mens restroom. The restroom is very clean and nice looking and you think it''s the nicest mens room you''ve ever been in, but that''s not what catches your eye. Under one of the stalls, you see what appears to be a woman sitting on her ankles on the floor, facing in, while male legs with pants and underwear pushed down around his ankles faces her. You can hear him moaning softly and the distinct slurping sounds of a sloppy blowjob. You quickly duck back outside before you''re spotted.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -302,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mens_restrooms':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/mensbr.jpg"></center>'
-		'You gather your courage up and walk into the mens restroom. Inside you find it empty, you are not sure if you are happy or disappointed by that. The restroom is very clean and nice looking, you think it is the nicest mens room you have ever been in.'
+		'You gather your courage and walk into the mens restroom. It''s empty, and you''re not sure if you''re happy or disappointed by that. The restroom is very clean and nice looking and you think it''s the nicest mens room you''ve ever been in.'
 		act 'Look in the mirror': gt 'mirror', 'start'
 		dynamic $tampon
 		dynamic $quickwash
@@ -322,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your workstation</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work_station.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once seated at your work station you say hi to a few of your co-workers and then look at what work you need to get done today.'
+	'Once seated at your work station, you greet a few of your co-workers before looking at what work you need to get done today.'
 	if (hour >= 8 and hour < 12) or (hour >= 13 and hour < 17):
 		act 'Start working':
 			if hour = 12: minut += 60 - minut + 240
@@ -334,31 +335,31 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			temp = rand(1,27)
 			if temp = 1:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/answeringphone' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period on the phone, either talking to clients or mangers about varies things.'
+				'You spend most of your work period on the phone, either talking to clients or managers about various things.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 2:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/getbinders' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period going to get several binders on varies projects and taking them from office to office while the mangers look over them until they send you to someone else or to finally replace the binders.'
+				'You spend most of your work period collecting several binders on various projects and taking them from office to office while the managers look over them until they send you to someone else or to finally replace the binders.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 3:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/getcoffee' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period fetching coffee for the varies managers. A few make some inappropriate comments but you ignore them.'
+				'You spend most of your work period fetching coffee for the various managers. A few make some inappropriate comments, but you ignore them.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 4:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/getfiles' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away.'
+				'You spend most of your work period collecting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 5:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/helpcoworker1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period helping a co-working on a large project she is having trouble with.'
+				'You spend most of your work period helping a co-worker on a large project she is having trouble with.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 6:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/makecopies' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of many documents, organizing them into binders and then putting them away.'
+				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of documents and organizing them into binders before filing them away.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 7:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/takenotes' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period in a managers office taking notes as he brainstorms out loud his plans on a new project the company is about to start on soon.'
+				'You spend most of your work period in a manager''s office taking notes as he brainstorms out loud his plans for a new project the company is about to start soon.'
 				gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 8:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/workatdesk' + rand(1,7) + '.jpg"></center>'
@@ -367,15 +368,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			elseif temp = 9:
 				mood += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/relax1.jpg"></center>'
-				'This work period has proven to be fairly relaxing, you have rarely been asked to do much of anything. You spend most of your time surfing the net on your computer, playing on your phone or working on your makeup.'
+				'This work period has proven to be fairly relaxing. You''ve rarely been asked to do much of anything and so have spent most of your time surfing the net on your computer, playing on your phone or working on your makeup.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 10:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/argument.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. But your work is interrupted as across the room several of your fellow secretaries starting arguing, soon two of them are yelling at each other. It is quickly broken up by a manager from a nearby office, you get the impression they was arguing over a man.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks before you''re interrupted by several of your fellow secretaries arguing. It is quickly broken up by a manager from a nearby office as you get the impression they were arguing over a man.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 11:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/butt_grab.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices you are place files down where you was directed. As you slightly bend forward to set the files down, you feel his hand groping your butt, squeezing it.'
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices, you are placing the files on the desk and are slightly bending forward to do so when you suddenly feel a hand groping your ass and firmly squeezing it.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Ignore it':
@@ -383,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					office_slut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/butt_grab_allow.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ignore his hand and let him keep squeezing your butt, you need this job. He then directs you to stack the files in a certain order, as you do what he asks he keeps feeling you up. Once you are done you return back to work.'
+					'You ignore him and let him keep squeezing your ass since you need this job. He then directs you to stack the files in a certain order, and he keeps feeling you up as you do as he asked. Once you''re done, you return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -394,10 +395,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					mood -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/butt_grab_no.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn your head towards him. "Stop that."'
+					'You turn your head towards him. "Please stop that."'
 					'He laughs. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
-					'You swallow a bit at the not so veiled threat. "I don''t like it, I just want to do my job."'
-					'He laughs some more. "This is part of your job, but sure for now." He lets go of your butt and you finish placing the files, just before you leave he slaps your ass pretty hard. Fluster you return back to work.'
+					'You swallow at the not so veiled threat. "I don''t like it. I just want to do my job."'
+					'He laughs again. "This is part of your job, but you''re free to go. For now." He lets go of you and you finish placing the files. Before you leave, he slaps your ass pretty hard. Flustered, you quickly return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -405,30 +406,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif temp = 12:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/butt_slap.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices you are place files down where you was directed. As you slightly bend forward to set the files down, you feel the slight sting of a hard slap on the ass. "That''s a good girl, now back to work." He says with a grin.'
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices, you are placing the files on the desk when you feel the sting of a hard slap on the ass. "That''s a good girl! Now get back to work!" he says with a grin.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 13:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/coffee_grab.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period fetching coffee for the varies managers. A few make some inappropriate comments but you ignore them. One of them even grabs you by the ass, before you can walk away and squeezes it hard. You manage to get free and get back to work easily enough.'
+				'You spend most of your work period fetching coffee for the various managers. A few make some inappropriate comments and you manage to ignore them, but one of them grabs you firmly by the ass and squeezes it hard. You manage to squirm free and get back to work.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 14:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/copier_sit.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of many documents, organizing them into binders and then putting them away. During one of your trips to the copy room, you find one of your fellow secretaries sitting on the copier photocopying her butt. A small stack of copies of her butt already sit in the bin. She turns to you and smiles. "It''s for the manager to brighten up there day." She says with a giggle.'
-				'You don''t really know how to respond. So you just nod. "OH... ok, I will come back later then." She giggles as you leave, you wait out in the hall until she leaves then go back to making copies.'
+				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of documents and organizing them into binders before filing them away. During one of your trips to the copy room, you find one of your fellow secretaries sitting on the copier photocopying her ass. A small stack of copies of her ass already sit in the bin. She turns to you and smiles. "It''s for the manager. To brighten up their day!" she says with a giggle.'
+				'You don''t really know how to respond, so you just nod. "Okay, I''ll come back later then..." She giggles as you leave and you wait out in the hall until she leaves before getting back to work.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 15:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/copier_tits.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of many documents, organizing them into binders and then putting them away. During one of your trips to the copy room, you find one of your fellow secretaries leaning across the copier, with her shirt pulled open, photocopying her tits. A small stack of copies of her bear tits already sit in the bin. She turns her head towards you and smiles. "It''s for the manager to brighten up there day." She says with a giggle.'
-				'You don''t really know how to respond. So you just nod. "OH... ok, I will come back later then." She giggles as you leave, you wait out in the hall until she leaves then go back to making copies.'
+				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of documents and organizing them into binders before filing them away. During one of your trips to the copy room, you find one of your fellow secretaries leaning across the copier with her shirt pulled open, photocopying her tits. A small stack of copies of her breasts already sit in the bin. She turns her head towards you and smiles. "It''s for the manager. To brighten up their day!" she says with a giggle.'
+				'You don''t really know how to respond, so you just nod. "Okay, I''ll come back later then..." She giggles as you leave and you wait out in the hall until she leaves before getting back.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -436,14 +437,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 			elseif temp = 16:
 				mood -= 10
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/flying_files.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices you are place files down where you was directed. As soon as the manager picks up the files, he flings them across the room. "What the fuck is this? These arn''t the files I asked for, you stupid fucking cow."'
-				*nl
-				'You a bit shocked by his outburst. "I''m sorry, I must have taken these to the wrong office, I will go get yours now."'
-				'He sneers at you. "Clean this up and get my files. I won''t tolerate these kinds of mistakes, young pretty things like you are easily replaced." Then he throws a few more loose papers from the files on the floor before he goes back to work. You quickly gather up the papers and go back to work.'
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices, you place the files on the desk, but as soon as the manager picks them up, he throws them back at you. "What the fuck is this? These aren''t the files I asked for, you stupid fucking cow!"'
+				'You''re a little shocked by his outburst. "I''m sorry, I must have taken them to the wrong office. I will go and get them now."'
+				'He sneers at you. "Clean this up and get my files. I won''t tolerate these kinds of mistakes! Young pretty things like you are easily replaced." He throws a few more loose papers from the files on the floor before he goes back to work. You quickly gather up the papers and go back to work.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 17:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/get_file1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. While you are getting some files out of one of the filing cabinets, you feel someone walk up behind you. Soon you feel some hands placed on your hips, from behind.'
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. While you''re getting some files out of one of the filing cabinets, you feel someone walk up behind you and place their hands on your hips.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -452,8 +452,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					office_slut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/get_file2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ignore his hands, you need this job. As you ignore him, his hands slide down your hips across your thighs and back up again, he steps even closer up behind you and you can feel his semi hard dick pressed against your ass. Finally you have the files you need, you pull away from him with the files in hand. "Excuse me, but I need to deliver these."'
-					'He lets go and grins at you. "I have a delivery for you as well." You give him a fake smile and walk out of the room to go deliver these files and return to work.'
+					'You ignore them and continue gathering the files you need. Their hands slide down to your thighs and they step even closer to you. You can feel a semi erect dick press against your ass as you finish gathering what you need and pull away from him with the files in hand. "Excuse me, but I need to deliver these."'
+					'He lets go and grins at you. "I have a delivery for you as well." You give him a fake smile and walk out of the room to deliver the files and return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -464,10 +464,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					mood -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/no.jpg"></center>'
-					'You step away pulling away from his grasp and turn to face him. "Stop that."'
+					'You pull away from his grasp and turn to face him. "Please stop that."'
 					'He laughs. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
-					'You swallow a bit at the not so veiled threat. "I don''t like it, I just want to do my job in peace, is that to much to ask?"'
-					'He laughs some more. "This is part of your job, but sure for now." He turns and walks out, leaving you fluster as you return back to work.'
+					'You swallow at the not so veiled threat. "I just want to do my job in peace. Is that too much to ask?"'
+					'He laughs even more. "This is part of your job. Remember that in the future." He turns and walks out, leaving you flustered as you return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif temp = 18:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/harras1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices the manager is away from his desk and directs you to place the files on his desk. As you set the files down, you feel someone walk up behind you. Soon you feel some hands placed on your hips, from behind. Then his hands start to roam around your body.'
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. In one of the offices, the manager is away from his desk and directs you to place the files on his desk. As you set the files down, you feel someone walk up behind you and place their hands on your hips before they start roaming around your body.'
 				gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					office_slut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/harras_allow.jpg"></center>'
-					'One hand slides up your side and grabs you tit, he turns you slightly and leans in to nuzzle and then lick your neck, you find this impossible to ignore.'
+					'One hand slides up your side and grabs your breast before he turns you slightly and leans in to nuzzle and lick your neck. You find this impossible to ignore.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Let him':
@@ -493,10 +493,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 						office_slut += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/harras2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You choose to still ignore it as best you can, he lifts one of your legs up and places it on his chair. He pulls your skirt up and starts rubbing your ass with his hands, then he moves closer and you can feel his semi hard cock grinding against your butt. Just when you think he is going to do more, another manager comes in and stops.'
-						*nl
-						'Instead of looking shocked he just grins really big. "Hey sorry to interrupt Ruvim but we got a meeting."'
-						'The one feeling you up named Ruvim suddenly stops. "Fuck now?" The other manager nods. "Fuck alright." Ruvim says to the other manager, who then ducks out and leaves, then Ruvim turns his attention back to you, he slaps your ass hard. "We will have to finish this some other time." Then he walks out as well, leaving you to straighten out your skirt, before going back to work.'
+						'You choose to ignore it as best you can as he lifts one of your legs up and places it on his chair. He pulls your skirt up and starts groping your ass with his hands as he moves closer. Just when you think he''s going to do more, another manager comes in and stops.'
+						'Instead of looking shocked, he just grins. "Sorry to interrupt Ruvim, but we''ve got a meeting."'
+						'The one feeling you up suddenly stops. "Fuck! Now?" The other manager nods before leaving as Ruvim turns his attention back to you and slaps your ass hard. "We''ll have to finish this some other time." He then walks out of the office, leaving you to straighten out your skirt before going back to work.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -507,10 +506,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 						mood -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/harras_no.jpg"></center>'
-						'You try to step away, but he grabs hold of you to hold you in place, you try to pulls his hands free but he is stronger than you are. "Stop that."'
-						'He laughs and pulls up on your skirt. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
-						'You swallow a bit at the not so veiled threat. "I don''t like it, I just want to do my job in peace, is that to much to ask?"'
-						'He laughs some more. "This is part of your job, but sure for now." He lets go of you, allowing you to pull away and leave, feeling flustered you return back to work.'
+						'You try to step away, but he grabs hold of you to hold you in place. You try to pull his hands away, but he''s stronger than you are. "Please stop that."'
+						'He laughs and pulls up your skirt. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
+						'You swallow at the not so veiled threat. "I just want to do my job in peace. Is that too much to ask?"'
+						'He laughs. "This is part of your job, but you can go. For now." He lets go of you, allowing you to pull away and leave. Feeling flustered, you quickly return to work.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -522,10 +521,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					mood -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/harras_no.jpg"></center>'
-					'You try to step away, but he grabs hold of you to hold you in place, you try to pulls his hands free but he is stronger than you are. "Stop that."'
-					'He laughs and pulls up on your skirt. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
-					'You swallow a bit at the not so veiled threat. "I don''t like it, I just want to do my job in peace, is that to much to ask?"'
-					'He laughs some more. "This is part of your job, but sure for now." He lets go of you, allowing you to pull away and leave, feeling flustered you return back to work.'
+					'You try to step away, but he grabs hold of you to hold you in place. You try to pull his hands free, but he''s stronger than you are. "Please stop that."'
+					'He laughs and pulls up your skirt. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
+					'You swallow at the not so veiled threat. "I just want to do my job in peace. Is that too much to ask?"'
+					'He laughs. "This is part of your job, but you can go. For now." He lets go of you, allowing you to pull away and leave. Feeling flustered, you quickly return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -533,41 +532,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif temp = 19:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/getfiles' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. While delivering a file to one of the senior managers, he is sitting on the couch reading some files. After you place the new files down, you turn to leave. "Excuse miss, but can you retrieve my pen." He doesn''t sound like he is really asking.'
-				*nl
-				'You smile to him. "Of course sir, where did you last see it?"'
-				'He point to some chairs a bit away from him. "I last had it sitting over there, I think I might have dropped it on the floor."'
-				act 'Look for pen':
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. After delivering a file to one of the senior managers, he stops you when you turn to leave. "Excuse miss, but can you retrieve my pen?" He doesn''t sound like he''s asking.'
+				'You smile at him. "Of course, sir. Where did you last see it?"'
+				'He points to some chairs. "I last had it sitting over there. I think I might have dropped it on the floor."'
+				act 'Look for the pen':
 					*clr & cla
 					office_slut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/look.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile then start trying to look for the pen, after a bit of not seeing it you get down on your hands and knee''s, with some prompting from him you keep looking, eventually you end up on your elbows and knees looking under everything in his office. You can''t help but realize with his directions you are in this position with your butt facing him each time. Finally after you have looked under everything twice you announce. "I''m sorry but I don''t think it is here."'
-					*nl
-					'He has a lustful smile on his face then, holds up a pen. "Oh I found it, silly me I had it in my jacket pocket, thank you for looking though, best get back to work."'
-					'You just nod and smile to him as you leave his office and go back to work.'
+					'You smile and start trying to look for the pen. After a few minutes, you get down on your hands and knees and proceed to look under everything in his office. You quickly realize that your ass is on full display to him the entire time before you give up and quickly sit up on your knees. "I''m sorry, but I don''t think it''s here, sir."'
+					'He has a lustful smile on his face as he holds up a pen. "Silly me! I had it in my jacket pocket the whole time! Thank you for looking though. You best get back to work, young lady."'
+					'You just nod and smile at him as you leave his office and go back to work.'
 					act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 				end
-				act 'Don''t look for pen':
+				act 'Don''t look for the pen':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/hallway.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I''m sorry but I don''t have time right now, I have several other files I have to get at once." You say to him with a sweet smile as nicely as you.'
-					'He frowns deeply and looks unhappy. He is about to say something when you hurry up and walk out of his office. "Again sorry but I really must be going." With that you leave before he can say anything in response.'
+					'"I''m sorry, but I don''t have time right now. I have several other files I have to deliver," you say to him with a sweet smile as nicely as you can.'
+					'He frowns deeply and looks unhappy. He''s about to say something when you decide to quickly walk out of his office. "My apologies, but I really must be going." With that you leave before he can say anything in response.'
 					act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 				end
 			elseif temp = 20:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/move_hair.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. While you are working at your computer one of the managers comes by and sits on the edge of your desk, he makes a bit of small talk with you. It is a pleasant conversation, even if it is a bit of a distraction, then he suddenly reaches over and brushes your hair back over your ear. "My you are a cute one." With that he gets up and walks away, you notice several of the other secretaries giving you knowing smiles, you do your best to forget it and go back to work.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. While you''re working, one of the managers comes by and sits on the edge of your desk. He makes a bit of small talk with you before he suddenly reaches over and brushes your hair back over your ear. "My my, you are a cute one." With that, he gets up and walks away as you notice several of the other secretaries giving you knowing smiles. You do your best to forget about it and go back to work.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 21:
 				mood += 5
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/office_race' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. While delivering a file to one of the managers, you are nearly run over by some of your co-workers. Two of the managers are pushing office chairs with a couple of your fellow secretaries sitting on them down the hallway in some apparent race. You jump aside just in time as they rest past you and down the hall, all of them laughing as they go, once they are clear you go back to delivering files.'
+				'You spend most of your work period getting files and taking them to different managers in different offices, or getting files from them and filing them away. While delivering a file to one of the managers, you are nearly run over by some of your co-workers. Two of the managers are pushing office chairs with a couple of your fellow secretaries sitting on them down the hallway in some apparent race. You jump aside just in time as they rush past you and down the hall, all of them laughing as they go. Once they''re clear, you go back to delivering files.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 22:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. While you are working at your computer one of the managers comes up behind you, he places his hands on your shoulders. "My you feel tense." Then he starts massaging your shoulders, he is pretty decent at it and you feel yourself relaxing.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. While you''re working, one of the managers comes up behind you and places his hands on your shoulders. "My my, you feel tense," he says as he starts massaging your shoulders. He''s pretty good at it and you feel yourself relaxing.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'massage', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Let him':
@@ -577,7 +574,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					gs 'fame', 'city', 'sex', 'Tiny', 'local'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/officemassage.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep working and let him massage your shoulders, it feels really good. After a few minutes of this, his hands slide down from your shoulders, down your chest where he grabs and squeezes your tits.'
+					'You keep working and let him massage your shoulders since it feels really good. After a few minutes of this, his hands slide down to your chest and he starts grabbing and squeezing your breasts.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'massage', 5, 'inhibition'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Ignore it':
@@ -585,7 +582,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 						office_slut += 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/officeharras.jpg"></center>'
-						'You choose to still ignore it as best you can, he plays with your tits for a few more minutes, you notice several of your fellow secretaries glancing in your direction, some seem pissed, or maybe jealous, while others just look amused. None of them look surprised or act like this is out of place, so you do your best to work while he plays with your breasts, apparently this is the type of stuff you will have to put up with if you want to work here. Finally he lets go and walks off. "Have fun ladies." Several of the women giggle at that as you all go back to work.'
+						'You choose to ignore it as best you can as he plays with your breasts for a few more minutes. You notice several of your fellow secretaries glancing in your direction. Some seem pissed, or maybe jealous, while others just look amused. None of them look surprised or act like this is out of place, so you do your best to work while he plays with your breasts. After a few more minutes, he finally lets go and walks away. "Have fun ladies." Several of the women giggle as you all go back to work.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'inhibition'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -596,8 +593,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 						mood -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder_resist.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn your body away form him as best you can while seated and then pushes he hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
-						'He growls. "Fine, try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... bitch." Then he storms off, you notice all the other secretaries looking at you and you get the feeling you just made a mistake. You do your best to focus back on work.'
+						'You turn your body away from him as best as you can and push his hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
+						'He growls. "Fine! I try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... Fucking bitch..." he mumbles before storming off. You notice all the other secretaries looking at you and get the feeling you just made a mistake. You put your head down and do your best to focus on your work.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'inhibition'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -609,8 +606,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					mood -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder_resist.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn your body away form him as best you can while seated and then pushes he hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
-					'He growls. "Fine, try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... bitch." Then he storms off, you notice all the other secretaries looking at you and you get the feeling you just made a mistake. You do your best to focus back on work.'
+					'You turn your body away from him as best as you can and push his hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
+					'He growls. "Fine! I try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... Fucking bitch..." he mumbles before storming off. You notice all the other secretaries looking at you and get the feeling you just made a mistake. You put your head down and do your best to focus on your work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'massage', 2, 'inhibition'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -618,7 +615,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif temp = 23:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/work/makecopies' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of many documents, organizing them into binders and then putting them away. As you are standing at the printer, you hear someone walking up behind you, then you feel his hand groping your butt, squeezing it.'
+				'You spend most of your work period in the copy room making copies of documents and organizing them into binders before filing them away. As you''re standing at the printer, you hear someone walking up behind you and feel a hand groping and squeezing your ass.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Ignore it':
@@ -626,8 +623,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					office_slut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/printer_grab.jpg"></center>'
-					'You ignore his hands, you need this job. As you ignore him, his hands continue to group your butt until they slide up to your hips as he steps even closer up behind you and you can feel his semi hard dick pressed against your ass. Finally you have the files you need, you pull away from him with the files in hand. "Excuse me, but I need to deliver these."'
-					'He lets go and grins at you. "I have a delivery for you as well." You give him a fake smile and walk out of the room to go deliver these files and return to work.'
+					'As you ignore him, his hands continue to group your ass until they slide up to your hips as he steps even closer behind you and you can feel his semi erect dick pressed against your ass. Finally having the files you need, you grab them and quickly pull away from him. "Excuse me, but I need to deliver these."'
+					'He lets go and grins at you. "I have a delivery for you as well." You give him a fake smile and walk out of the room to deliver the files and return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -638,10 +635,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					mood -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/reactions/no.jpg"></center>'
-					'You step away pulling away from his grasp and turn to face him. "Stop that."'
+					'You step away pulling away from his grasp and turn to face him. "Please stop that."'
 					'He laughs. "You need to learn your place if you want to keep this job."'
-					'You swallow a bit at the not so veiled threat. "I don''t like it, I just want to do my job in peace, is that to much to ask?"'
-					'He laughs some more. "This is part of your job, but sure for now." He turns and walks out, leaving you fluster as you return back to work.'
+					'You swallow at the not so veiled threat. "I just want to do my job in peace. Is that too much to ask?"'
+					'He laughs. "This is part of your job. Remember that in the future." He turns and walks out, leaving you flustered as you return to work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -649,14 +646,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif temp = 24:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/selfie_bra.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. You glance up to see one of your fellow secretaries, with her blouse pulled open, exposing her bra taking several selfies. You watch her take several of them and then you return back to your work occasionally glancing up at her until she finishes.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. You glance up to see one of your fellow secretaries with her blouse pulled open, exposing her bra as she takes several selfies. You watch her for a few seconds before returning to your work, occasionally glancing up at her until she finishes.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			elseif temp = 25:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. While you are working at your computer one of the managers comes up behind you, he places his hands on your shoulders. "What are you working on?" Then he starts giving you some pointers which are helpful for you work, but as he does he keeps leaning in closer and closer, until you feel his crotch pressed against your upper back.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. As you''re working, one of the managers comes up behind you and places his hands on your shoulders. "What are you working on?" he asks before he starts giving you some pointers, but as he does so he keeps leaning in closer until you feel his crotch pressed against your upper back.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'massage', 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Ignore it':
@@ -666,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					gs 'fame', 'city', 'sex', 'Tiny', 'local'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder_allow.jpg"></center>'
-					'You keep working and letting him loam over you and crowd you at your desk. At least his advice is helpful and helps you finish your work a bit faster. Finaly when you finish you tell him. "Thanks, for your help but I think I got it from here." Hoping he takes the hint.'
+					'You keep working while letting him crowd you at your desk. At least his advice is helpful and helps you finish your work a bit faster. "Thanks for your help, but I think I''ve got it from here," you tell him.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'massage', 5, 'inhibition'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Let him':
@@ -674,7 +671,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 						office_slut += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-						'To your surprise he reaches down and takes one of your hands and lifts it up to his face and kisses the back of it. "You are most welcome." With that he turns and walks off. You are unsure what just happened but notice the amused smiles from some of your co-workers, with a few looking jealous. You do your best to ignore the looks and go back to work.'
+						'To your surprise, he reaches down, grabs one of your hands and kisses the back of it. "You are most welcome." With that, he turns and walks away. You''re unsure what just happened, but notice the amused smiles from some of your co-workers, with a few looking jealous. You do your best to ignore the looks and go back to work.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'inhibition'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -685,8 +682,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 						mood -= 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder_resist.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn your body away form him as best you can while seated and then pushes he hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
-						'He growls. "Fine, try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... bitch." Then he storms off, you notice all the other secretaries looking at you and you get the feeling you just made a mistake. You do your best to focus back on work.'
+						'You turn your body away from him as best as you can and push his hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
+						'He growls. "Fine! I try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... Fucking bitch..." he mumbles before storming off. You notice all the other secretaries looking at you and get the feeling you just made a mistake. You put your head down and do your best to focus on your work.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'inhibition'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -698,8 +695,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					mood -= 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/shoulder_resist.jpg"></center>'
-					'You turn your body away form him as best you can while seated and then pushes he hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
-					'He growls. "Fine, try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... bitch." Then he storms off, you notice all the other secretaries looking at you and you get the feeling you just made a mistake. You do your best to focus back on work.'
+					'You turn your body away from him as best as you can and push his hands away from you. "Please stop that."'
+					'He growls. "Fine! I try and do something nice and this is the thanks I get... Fucking bitch..." he mumbles before storming off. You notice all the other secretaries looking at you and get the feeling you just made a mistake. You put your head down and do your best to focus on your work.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'massage', 2, 'inhibition'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -707,14 +704,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 				end
 			elseif temp = 26:
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/skirt_caught.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. You hear a bit of giggling from beside you, you glance over and notice several of the women giggling and looking past you. You turn and look and see one of the women with her skirt caught in the top of her panties, leaving her panty clad butt exposed for all to see. You can''t help but smile yourself, before you can decide if you want to say something one of the other women tells her. She blushes and quickly fixes her skirt before sitting down to work. Soon all of you have turned your attention back to work.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. You hear giggling beside you and glance over to see several of the women giggling while looking past you. You turn and see one of the women with her skirt caught in the top of her panties, leaving her panty clad ass exposed for all to see. You can''t help but smile yourself, but before you can decide if you want to say something, one of the other women tells her. She blushes and quickly fixes her skirt before sitting down to work.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 2
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/events/upskirt_photo.jpg"></center>'
-				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. As you are working you see one of the managers standing behind one of the women, as she bends forward slightly to grab some files, he drops his phone down and you are sure he is taking photo''s with his phone up her skirt. Before you can say something she turns and notices, but instead of being upset she giggles and lightly punches his shoulder, the banter playfully a bit as they both leave together.'
+				'You spend most of your work period at your desk working on your computer doing a variety of tasks. As you''re working, you see one of the managers standing behind one of the women as she bends forward slightly to grab some files. He slides his phone down and you''re sure he''s taking photos up her skirt. Before you can say something, she turns and notices, but instead of being upset, she giggles and lightly punches his shoulder. They banter playfully as they both leave together.'
 				act 'Go back to work': gt 'office', 'secretary_office'
 			end
 		end
@@ -727,26 +724,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 15
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/waiting_interview.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to the elevators and follow the directions you was given. You pass by a break room and many offices, some open others with their door closed. You also pass by a large open room with many work stations, most likely the secretaries room. When you arrive at HR, you are asked to take a seat. As you sit and wait to be called in for your interview you reflect on what you saw on your way here. A few things stand out to you, first the office is very nice with expensive looking furniture and new computers. It looks like the company is doing very well and like to reflect that. The second thing you notice is almost all of the managers in offices are men, ranging from their mid twenties to mid forties.'
-	*nl
-	'The third thing you notice was almost all of the secretaries and personal assistants seem to be women, dressed in nice womens'' business suits with skirts. You saw a couple of young men that might also be secretaries or PAs but you are not sure. The final thing you notice is all the secretaries where either young and attractive or middle aged, yet still attractive for their age. Before you can ponder this more you are called into the office for you interview.'
+	'You go to the elevators and follow the directions you were given. You pass by a break room and many offices, as well as a large open room with many work stations, most likely the secretary room. When you arrive at HR, you are asked to take a seat. As you sit and wait to be called in for your interview, you reflect on what you saw on your way here. A few things stood out to you. The office is very expensive looking, almost all of the managers are men ranging from their mid twenties to mid forties and almost all of the secretaries and personal assistants seem to be rather young and attractive women. Before you can ponder this more, you are called into the office for your interview.'
 	act 'Interview for a job':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/npc/torbica_office.jpg"></center>'
 		if hotcat >= 6 and CloStyle3 = 4:
 			if PCLoSkirt > 0:
-				'As you walk in she looks you over and gives you a pleasant smile. "Please take a seat so we can get started."'
-				'She spends the next several minutes reading your resume and looking over your certification. Once she finishes that she talks to you and asks you a lot of questions. That is followed by a quiz you have to fill out, it seems to mostly be a morality test. Once you have finally finished it all, you glance up at the clock and notice that a hour has passed.'
+				'As you walk in, she looks you over and gives you a pleasant smile. "Please take a seat so we can get started."'
+				'She spends the next few minutes reading your resume and looking over your certification. Once she finishes, she asks you a lot of questions followed by a quiz that seems to mostly be a morality test. Once you''ve finally finished it all, you glance up at the clock and notice that an hour has passed.'
 				*nl
-				'"Congratulations, you are exactly what we are looking for at Titran-Express." She says with a pleasant smile.'
-				'You smile back. "That means I got the job?"'
-				'She laughs slightly. "Absolutely, if you are ready to work for us just come back on our next business day dressed appropriately, which is a womens'' business suit and skirt, then we can get you started. So what do you say?"'
+				'"Congratulations, you are exactly who we''re looking for at Titran-Express!" she says with a pleasant smile.'
+				'You smile back. "That means I''ve got the job?"'
+				'She laughs slightly. "Absolutely! If you''re ready to work for us, just come back on our next business day dressed appropriately, which is a womens'' business suit and skirt, then we can get you started. What do you say?"'
 				act 'Refuse':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/npc/torbica_office.jpg"></center>'
-					'You think about it a moment, some of the morality questions made you uncomfortable, perhaps this isn''t the job for you. "Um thank you but I am not sure this is a good fit."'
-					'She looks very surprised and her smile fades for a moment but then returns. "I understand if you change your mind, you are welcome to apply again." With that you get up and leave.'
+					'You think about it. Some of the morality questions made you rather uncomfortable, so perhaps this isn''t the job for you. "Um... Thank you, but I''m not sure this is a good fit."'
+					'She looks very surprised and her smile fades. "I understand. If you change your mind, then you''re welcome to apply again." With that, you get up and leave.'
 					act 'leave': minut += 75 & gt 'office', 'start'
 				end
 				act 'Take the job':
@@ -756,25 +751,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'interview':
 					sekDay = 0
 					minut += 60
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/npc/torbica_office.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Yes, I will take the job. Thank you very much." You tell her.'
-					'"Excellent, here is a welcome packet. Make sure to come to work wearing the appropriate clothes, work starts at 9am, but it is ok to show up as early as 8am. It is not ok to leave before 5pm, other than to get lunch. If you leave work early you won''t be paid for the day." After a little more pleasantries you gather your stuff and leave.'
+					'"Yes, I''ll take the job. Thank you very much!" you tell her.'
+					'"Excellent! Here''s your welcome packet. Make sure to come to work wearing the appropriate clothes. Work starts at 9am, but it''s okay to show up as early as 8am. It''s not okay to leave before 5pm, other than to get lunch. If you leave work early, then you won''t be paid for the day." After a few more pleasantries, you gather your stuff and leave.'
 					act 'Leave': minut += 15 & gt 'city_center'
 				end
 			else
-				'As soon as you walk in the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "What are you wearing?"'
-				'You start to respond that it is an office suit, not sure what her problem is, but before you can respond she keeps talking. "We expect our ladies to dress as ladies and that means office wear with a skirt or dress, I am afraid I can''t offer you the job dressed like that. If you acquire the appropriate attire, feel free to come back later for a interview. For now though I have no positions open for you. If you don''t mind I am rather busy." She says indicating towards the door behind you, crestfallen and knowing there is nothing you can say you turn to leave, it seems that you should have worn a suit with a skirt or dress.'
+				'As soon as you walk in, the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "What are you wearing?"'
+				'You start to respond that it''s an office suit, but she keeps talking before you can speak. "We expect our ladies to dress as ladies! That means office wear with a skirt or dress. I''m afraid I can''t offer you the job when you''re dressed like <i>that</i>. If you acquire the appropriate attire, feel free to come back for an interview, but for now I have no positions open for you. Now if you don''t mind, I''m rather busy." she says while indicating towards the door behind you. Crestfallen and knowing there''s nothing you can say, you turn to leave.'
 			end
 		elseif hotcat >= 6 and CloStyle3 ! 4:
-			'As soon as you walk in the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "What are you wearing?"'
-			'You start to respond that it is just your clothes, not sure what she meant by that, but before you can respond she keeps talking. "That is not appropriate attire, I am afraid I can''t offer you the job dressed like that. If you acquire the appropriate attire, which is a womens'' business suit with a skirt, feel free to come back later for a interview. For now though I have no positions open for you. If you don''t mind I am rather busy." She says indicating towards the door behind you, crestfallen and knowing there is nothing you can say you turn to leave, you should have really wore a womans'' suit.'
+			'As soon as you walk in, the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "What are you wearing?"'
+			'You start to respond, but she keeps talking before you can speak. "That is not appropriate attire! I''m afraid I can''t offer you the job when you''re dressed like <i>that</i>. If you acquire the appropriate attire, which is a womens'' business suit with a skirt, feel free to come back for an interview. For now though, I have no positions open for you. Now if you don''t mind, I''m rather busy." she says while indicating towards the door behind you. Crestfallen and knowing there''s nothing you can say, you turn to leave.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 15 & gt 'office', 'start'
 		elseif hotcat <= 5 and CloStyle3 = 4 and PCLoSkirt > 0:
-			'As soon as you walk in the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "I am afraid you are just not what we are looking for, you are dressed the part at least."'
-			'You start to respond to ask just what she means you don''t look the part, but before you can respond she keeps talking. "I am afraid I can''t offer you the job. Perhaps you should put more effort in how you look, our employees represent us and we only hire the best. If you don''t mind I am rather busy." She says indicating towards the door behind you, is she really saying she isn''t going to hire you because you are not pretty enough? You feel angry that you are being judge on your looks and not how well you could do the job, but you know it is pointless to try and argue, so you get up and leave.'
+			'As soon as you walk in, the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "I''m afraid you''re just not who we''re looking for. You dressed the part nicely at least."'
+			'You start to respond, but she keeps talking before you can speak. "I''m afraid I can''t offer you the job. Perhaps you should put more effort into your appearance. Our employees represent us and we only hire the best. Now if you don''t mind, I''m rather busy." she says while indicating towards the door behind you. You feel angry that you''re being judged on your looks and not how well you could do the job, but you know it''s pointless to try and argue, so you get up and leave.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 15 & gt 'city_center'
 		else
-			'As soon as you walk in the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "What are you wearing?"'
-			'You start to respond that it is just your clothes, not sure what she meant by that, but before you can respond she keeps talking. "It doesn''t matter. That is not appropriate attire, I am afraid I can''t offer you the job looking like this. Look around at how much effort our ladies have taken in their apperence and attire then look at yourself. We don''t hire lazy bums. Good day!" She point toward the door with her pen, crestfallen and knowing there is nothing you can say you turn to leave, you should have really worn a womans'' suit with a skirt and made more effort with your appearance.'
+			'As soon as you walk in, the woman takes one look at you and frowns. "What are you wearing?"'
+			'You start to respond, but she keeps talking before you speak. "It doesn''t matter. That is not appropriate attire! I''m afraid I can''t offer you the job looking like this. Look around at how much effort our ladies have taken in their appearance and attire then look at yourself. We don''t hire lazy bums. Good day!" She points towards the door with her pen. Crestfallen and knowing there''s nothing you can say, you turn to leave.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 15 & gt 'city_center'
 		end
 	end
@@ -784,18 +779,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'resign':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/npc/torbica_office.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into Mrs Torbica''s office and tell her. "I am resigning."'
-	'"Are you sure?" She asks obviously a little surprised you are quiting.'
-	act 'Yes, I quit.':
+	'You walk into Mrs Torbica''s office and tell her that you''re resigning.'
+	'"Are you sure?" she asks, obviously a little surprised you''re quitting.'
+	act 'Yes':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 30
 		work = 0
 		workSec = 0
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/office/npc/torbica_office.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Yes I am sure." You tender your resignation and then leave.'
+		'"Yes, I''m sure." You tender your resignation before leaving.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 15 & gt 'city_center'
 	end
-	act 'Nevermind': gt 'office', 'work_floor'
+	act 'Never mind': gt 'office', 'work_floor'
 end					
 
 --- office ---------------------------------