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[text edit] clean up virginity_call

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locations/virginity_call.qsrc

@@ -76,11 +76,11 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 	if $ARGS[2] = 'unaware':
 		if $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal':
 			if $firstvagrough = 'gentle':
-				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>>. I woke up <<$firstvagloc>> and my pussy hurt so I went to have a checkup and the gynaecologyst told me I wasn''t a virgin."'
+				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>>. I woke up <<$firstvagloc>>, and my pussy hurt, so I went to have a checkup, and the gynaecologist told me I wasn''t a virgin."'
 			elseif firstvagrough = 'rough':
-				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>>. I woke up <<$firstvagloc>> and my pussy felt like it was on fire so I went to have a checkup and the gynaecologyst told me I wasn''t a virgin."'
+				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>>. I woke up <<$firstvagloc>>, and my pussy felt like it was on fire, so I went to have a checkup, and the gynaecologist told me I wasn''t a virgin."'
 			elseif $firstvagrough = 'unknown':
-				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>>. I woke up <<$firstvagloc>> and my pussy hurt a lot so I went to have a checkup and the gynaecologyst told me I wasn''t a virgin."'
+				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>>. I woke up <<$firstvagloc>>, and my pussy hurt a lot, so I went to have a checkup, and the gynaecologist told me I wasn''t a virgin."'
 			end
 			$firstvagmsg2 = '"I broke down crying right there in his office. It''s just so... so creepy... and wrong!"'
 			if $firstvagstate = 'sober' or $firstvagstate = 'tipsy':
@@ -90,11 +90,11 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 			end
 		elseif $ARGS[0] = 'anal':
 			if $firstanalrough = 'gentle':
-				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>>. I woke up <<$firstanalloc>> and my ass hurt so I went to have a checkup and the gynaecologyst told me it was because of anal sex. He even tried giving me advice on lubricants."'
+				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>>. I woke up <<$firstanalloc>>, and my ass hurt, so I went to have a checkup, and the gynaecologist told me it was because of anal sex. He even tried giving me advice on lubricants."'
 			elseif firstanalrough = 'rough':
-				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>>. I woke up <<$firstanalloc>> and my ass felt like it was on fire so I went to have a checkup and the gynaecologyst told me it was because of anal sex. He showed me his bloody fingertip and tried giving me advice on lubricants."'
+				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>>. I woke up <<$firstanalloc>> and my ass felt like it was on fire, so I went to have a checkup, and the gynaecologyst told me it was because of anal sex. He showed me his bloody fingertip and tried giving me advice on lubricants."'
 			elseif $firstanalrough = 'unknown':
-				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>>. I woke up <<$firstanalloc>> and my ass hurt a lot so I went to have a checkup and the gynaecologyst told me I wasn''t a virgin. He even tried giving me advice on lubricants."'
+				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>>. I woke up <<$firstanalloc>>, and my ass hurt a lot, so I went to have a checkup, and the gynaecologist told me I wasn''t a virgin. He even tried giving me advice on lubricants."'
 			end
 			$firstanalmsg2 = '"I broke down crying right there in his office. It''s just so... so creepy... and wrong!"'
 			if $firstanalstate = 'sober' or $firstanalstate = 'tipsy':
@@ -104,11 +104,11 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 			end
 		elseif $ARGS[0] = 'oral':
 			if $firstoralrough = 'gentle':
-				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I think I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>>. I woke up <<$firstoralloc>> and my throat hurt so I went to have a checkup and the doctor told me I had a bruised throat. He gently tried to tell me I should be careful when taking a penis in my throat."'
+				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I think I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>>. I woke up <<$firstoralloc>>, and my throat hurt, so I went to have a checkup, and the doctor told me I had a bruised throat. He gently tried to tell me I should be careful when taking a penis in my throat."'
 			elseif firstoralrough = 'rough':
-				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I think I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>>. I woke up <<$firstoralloc>> and my throat felt like it was on fire so I went to have a checkup and the doctor told me I had a badly bruised throat. He tried to tell me I should practice before letting someone fuck my throat."'
+				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I think I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>>. I woke up <<$firstoralloc>>, and my throat felt like it was on fire, so I went to have a checkup, and the doctor told me I had a badly bruised throat. He tried to tell me I should practice before letting someone fuck my throat."'
 			elseif $firstoralrough = 'unknown':
-				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I think I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>>. I woke up <<$firstoralloc>> and my throat hurt a lot so I went to have a checkup and the doctor told me I had a bruised throat. He gently tried to tell me I should be careful when taking a penis in my throat."'
+				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I think I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>>. I woke up <<$firstoralloc>>, and my throat hurt a lot, so I went to have a checkup, and the doctor told me I had a bruised throat. He gently tried to tell me I should be careful when taking a penis in my throat."'
 			end
 			$firstoralmsg2 = '"I broke down crying right there in his office. It''s just so... so creepy... and wrong!"'
 			if $firstoralstate = 'sober' or $firstoralstate = 'tipsy':
@@ -127,9 +127,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstvagmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstvagage>> by <<$firstvagwho>>. It happened with <<$firstvagobj>> <<$firstvagloc>>."'
 				end
 				if $firstvagrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It hurt when my hymen broke but I guess I should be thankful I wasn''t just used the second my pussy was bared. I-I was played with to prepare me first."'
+					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It hurt when my hymen broke, but I guess I should be thankful I wasn''t just used the second my pussy was bared. I-I was played with to prepare me first."'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'rough':
-					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my pussy was bared I was used roughly."'
+					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my pussy was bared, I was used roughly."'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstvagmsg2 = '"To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses."'
 				end
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				elseif $firstvagstate = 'hornyfromdrugs':
 					$firstvagmsg3 = '"I guess I should count myself lucky that I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really care about it while it happened."'
 				elseif $firstvagstate = 'unabletomove':
-					$firstvagmsg3 = '"It was horrible. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. It would have been better if I had been unconcious because now I have to relive it in full detail from time to time in my nightmares."'
+					$firstvagmsg3 = '"It was horrible. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. It would have been better if I had been unconscious because now I have to relive it in full detail from time to time in my nightmares."'
 				end
 			! Building auto responses in case it was consensual
 			elseif $firstvagconsent = 'consensual':
@@ -150,9 +150,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstvagmsg1 = '"I lost my virginity when I was <<firstvagage>>. It was <<$firstvagwho>> who claimed my first time. It all happened <<$firstvagloc>> with <<$firstvagobj>>."'
 				end
 				if $firstvagrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It hurt a bit when my hymen broke but soon after it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time."'
+					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It hurt a bit when my hymen broke, but soon after, it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time."'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'rough':
-					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my pussy was bared I was used roughly."'
+					$firstvagmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my pussy was bared, I was used roughly."'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstvagmsg2 = '"To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses."'
 				end
@@ -161,18 +161,18 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				elseif $firstvagstate = 'verydrunk':
 					$firstvagmsg3 = '"I sometimes wonder if it would have gone differently if I hadn''t been so drunk. Maybe..."'
 				elseif $firstvagstate = 'hornyfromdrugs':
-					$firstvagmsg3 = '"At the time I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really do anything but go on."'
+					$firstvagmsg3 = '"At the time, I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really do anything but go on."'
 				! I added this message even though it is unlikely that Sveta would agree to sex and take a daterape drug at the same time
 				elseif $firstvagstate = 'unabletomove':
-					$firstvagmsg3 = '"It was very uncomfortable. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. Thinking about it still makes me a bit uneasy."'
+					$firstvagmsg3 = '"It was very uncomfortable. I wasn''t able to lift a finger, but I felt every second of it as it happened. Thinking about it still makes me a bit uneasy."'
 				end
 			! Building auto responses in case Sveta did it herself
 			elseif $firstvagconsent = 'self':
-				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I broke my own hymen when I was <<firstvagage>>. I did it <<$firstvagloc>> whith <<$firstvagobj>>."'
+				$firstvagmsg1 = '"I broke my own hymen when I was <<firstvagage>>. I did it <<$firstvagloc>> with <<$firstvagobj>>."'
 				if $firstvagrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstvagmsg2 = 'It hurt a bit when I broke my hymen but soon after it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time.'
+					$firstvagmsg2 = 'It hurt a bit when I broke my hymen, but soon after, it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time.'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'rough':
-					$firstvagmsg2 = 'It was so painful I almost had to stop completely. As was too worked up and just shoved it in. Take it from me, that''s not the way for a girl to lose her virginity.'
+					$firstvagmsg2 = 'It was so painful I almost had to stop completely. I was too worked up and just shoved it in. Take it from me, that''s not the way for a girl to lose her virginity.'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstvagmsg2 = 'To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses.'
 				end
@@ -192,9 +192,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstanalmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstanalage>> by <<$firstanalwho>> <<$firstanalloc>>. It happened with <<$firstanalobj>>."'
 				end
 				if $firstanalrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It hurt when it happened but I guess I should be thankful I wasn''t just used the second my ass was bared. I-I was played with to prepare me first."'
+					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It hurt when it happened, but I guess I should be thankful I wasn''t just used the second my ass was bared. I-I was played with to prepare me first."'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'rough':
-					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my ass was bared I was used roughly."'
+					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my ass was bared, I was used roughly."'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstanalmsg2 = '"To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses."'
 				end
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				elseif $firstanalstate = 'hornyfromdrugs':
 					$firstanalmsg3 = '"I guess I should count myself lucky that I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really care about it while it happened."'
 				elseif $firstanalstate = 'unabletomove':
-					$firstanalmsg3 = '"It was horrible. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. It would have been better if I had been unconcious because now I have to relive it in full detail from time to time in my nightmares."'
+					$firstanalmsg3 = '"It was horrible. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. It would have been better if I had been unconscious because now I have to relive it in full detail from time to time in my nightmares."'
 				end
 			elseif $firstanalconsent = 'consensual':
 				if $firstanalobj = '':
@@ -214,9 +214,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstanalmsg1 = '"I lost my anal virginity when I was <<firstanalage>>. It was <<$firstanalwho>> who claimed my first time. It all happened <<$firstanalloc>> with <<$firstanalobj>>."'
 				end
 				if $firstanalrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It hurt a bit at first but soon after it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time."'
+					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It hurt a bit at first, but soon after, it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time."'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'rough':
-					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my ass was bared I was used roughly."'
+					$firstanalmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my ass was bared, I was used roughly."'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstanalmsg2 = '"To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses."'
 				end
@@ -225,17 +225,17 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				elseif $firstanalstate = 'verydrunk':
 					$firstanalmsg3 = '"I sometimes wonder if it would have gone differently if I hadn''t been so drunk. Maybe..."'
 				elseif $firstanalstate = 'hornyfromdrugs':
-					$firstanalmsg3 = '"At the time I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really do anything but go on."'
+					$firstanalmsg3 = '"At the time, I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really do anything but go on."'
 				! I added this message even though it is unlikely that Sveta would agree to sex and take a daterape drug at the same time
 				elseif $firstanalstate = 'unabletomove':
-					$firstanalmsg3 = '"It was very uncomfortable. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. Thinking about it still makes me a bit uneasy."'
+					$firstanalmsg3 = '"It was very uncomfortable. I wasn''t able to lift a finger, but I felt every second of it as it happened. Thinking about it still makes me a bit uneasy."'
 				end
 			elseif $firstanalconsent = 'self':
 				$firstanalmsg1 = '"I first started exploring my ass when I was <<firstanalage>>. I did it <<$firstanalloc>> with <<$firstanalobj>>."'
 				if $firstanalrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstanalmsg2 = 'It hurt a bit when I forced the <<$fistanalobj>> in but soon after it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time.'
+					$firstanalmsg2 = 'It hurt a bit when I forced the <<$fistanalobj>> in, but soon after, it felt good. I was soaking wet at the time.'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'rough':
-					$firstanalmsg2 = 'It was so painful I almost had to stop completely. As was too worked up and just shoved it in. Take it from me, that''s not the way for a girl to play with her ass the first time.'
+					$firstanalmsg2 = 'It was so painful I almost had to stop completely. I was too worked up and just shoved it in. Take it from me, that''s not the way for a girl to play with her ass the first time.'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstanalmsg2 = 'To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses.'
 				end
@@ -255,9 +255,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstoralmsg1 = '"I-I was raped when I was <<firstoralage>> by <<$firstoralwho>> <<$firstoralloc>>. It all happened with <<$firstanalobj>>."'
 				end
 				if $firstoralrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It was humiliating. First I had to lick it, when that wasn''t enough I had to suck. Eventually I even had to take it in my troat, I almost puked then."'
+					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It was humiliating. First, I had to lick it. When that wasn''t enough, I had to suck. Eventually, I even had to take it in my throat. I almost puked then."'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'rough':
-					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my mouth was forced open I was throatfucked roughly. I was very close to throwing up several times. The only way I kept it down was the fact that I knew it would get only worse if I actually threw up."'
+					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as my mouth was forced open, I was throatfucked roughly. I was very close to throwing up several times. The only way I kept it down was the fact that I knew it would get only worse if I actually threw up."'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstoralmsg2 = '"To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses."'
 				end
@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				elseif $firstoralstate = 'hornyfromdrugs':
 					$firstoralmsg3 = '"I guess I should count myself lucky that I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really care about it while it happened."'
 				elseif $firstoralstate = 'unabletomove':
-					$firstoralmsg3 = '"It was horrible. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. It would have been better if I had been unconcious because now I have to relive it in full detail from time to time in my nightmares."'
+					$firstoralmsg3 = '"It was horrible. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. It would have been better if I had been unconscious because now I have to relive it in full detail from time to time in my nightmares."'
 				end
 			elseif $firstoralconsent = 'consensual':
 				if $firstoralobj = '':
@@ -277,9 +277,9 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstoralmsg1 = '"I sucked my first <<$firstoralobj>> when I was <<firstoralage>>. It was <<$firstoralwho>> who claimed my first time. It all happened <<$firstoralloc>>."'
 				end
 				if $firstoralrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It turned me on so much as I was doing it. First I licked it, when I got it nice and wet I went on and started sucking. Eventually I even tried to take it in my troat. I almost puked then so I just went back to sucking it."'
+					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It turned me on so much as I was doing it. First I licked it, and then, when I got it nice and wet, I went on and started sucking. Eventually, I even tried to take it in my throat. I almost puked then, so I just went back to sucking it."'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'rough':
-					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as I was on my knees I was used roughly."'
+					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It was so painful. As soon as I was on my knees, I was used roughly."'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstoralmsg2 = '"To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses."'
 				end
@@ -291,14 +291,14 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 					$firstoralmsg3 = '"At the time I was so horny from the drugs that I just couldn''t really do anything but go on."'
 				! I added this message even though it is unlikely that Sveta would agree to sex and take a daterape drug at the same time
 				elseif $firstoralstate = 'unabletomove':
-					$firstoralmsg3 = '"It was very uncomfortable. I wasn''t able to lift a finger but I felt every second of it as it happened. Thinking about it still makes me a bit uneasy."'
+					$firstoralmsg3 = '"It was very uncomfortable. I wasn''t able to lift a finger, but I felt every second of it as it happened. Thinking about it still makes me a bit uneasy."'
 				end
 			elseif $firstoralconsent = 'self':
 				$firstoralmsg1 = '"I decided to practice before sucking a real dick when I was <<firstoralage>>. I did it <<$firstoralloc>> whith <<$firstoralobj>>."'
 				if $firstoralrough = 'gentle':
-					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It turned me on so much as I was doing it. First I licked it, when I got it nice and wet I went on and started sucking. Eventually I even tried to take it in my troat. I almost puked then so I just went back to sucking it."'
+					$firstoralmsg2 = '"It turned me on so much as I was doing it. First I licked it, and then, when I got it nice and wet, I went on and started sucking. Eventually, I even tried to take it in my throat. I almost puked then, so I just went back to sucking it."'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'rough':
-					$firstoralmsg2 = 'It was so painful I almost had to stop completely. As was too worked up and just shoved it in my throat. Take it from me, that''s not the way for a girl test her throating skills for the first time.'
+					$firstoralmsg2 = 'It was so painful I almost had to stop completely. I was too worked up and just shoved it in my throat. Take it from me, that''s not the way for a girl to test her throating skills for the first time.'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstoralmsg2 = 'To be honest, I don''t really know how it felt at the time. I mostly just remember feeling discomfort after it was over. When I... got back to my senses.'
 				end
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				if $firstvagrough = 'gentle' or $firstvagrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstvagstat = 'You broke your own hymen when you were <<firstvagage>>. You did it <<$firstvagloc>> using <<$firstvagobj>>.'
 				elseif $firstvagrough = 'rough':
-					$firstvagstat = 'You broke your own hymen when you were <<firstvagage>>. You fucked yourself rougly <<$firstvagloc>> using <<$firstvagobj>>.'
+					$firstvagstat = 'You broke your own hymen when you were <<firstvagage>>. You fucked yourself roughly <<$firstvagloc>> using <<$firstvagobj>>.'
 				end
 				if $firstvagstate = 'sober':
 					$firstvagstat += ' You remember every moment of it as you were <<$firstvagstate>>.'
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				if $firstanalrough = 'gentle' or $firstanalrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstanalstat = 'You popped your own anal cherry when you were <<firstanalage>>. You did it <<$firstanalloc>> using <<$firstanalobj>>.'
 				elseif $firstanalrough = 'rough':
-					$firstanalstat = 'You popped your own anal cherry when you were <<firstanalage>>. You fucked yourself rougly <<$firstanalloc>> using <<$firstanalobj>>.'
+					$firstanalstat = 'You popped your own anal cherry when you were <<firstanalage>>. You fucked yourself roughly <<$firstanalloc>> using <<$firstanalobj>>.'
 				end
 				if $firstanalstate = 'sober':
 					$firstanalstat += ' You remember every moment of it as you were <<$firstanalstate>>.'
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ if ($ARGS[0] = 'vaginal' and firstvag ! 1) or ($ARGS[0] = 'anal' and firstanal !
 				if $firstoralrough = 'gentle' or $firstoralrough = 'unknown':
 					$firstoralstat = 'You popped your own anal cherry when you were <<firstoralage>>. You did it <<$firstoralloc>> using <<$firstoralobj>>.'
 				elseif $firstoralrough = 'rough':
-					$firstoralstat = 'You popped your own anal cherry when you were <<firstoralage>>. You fucked yourself rougly <<$firstoralloc>> using <<$firstoralobj>>.'
+					$firstoralstat = 'You popped your own anal cherry when you were <<firstoralage>>. You fucked yourself roughly <<$firstoralloc>> using <<$firstoralobj>>.'
 				end
 				if $firstoralstate = 'sober':
 					$firstoralstat += ' You remember every moment of it as you were <<$firstoralstate>>.'