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[text Edit] Removal of colons leading to speech

Kevin_Smarts 1 year ago
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      locations/albina_starlets.qsrc
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      locations/artemhome.qsrc

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locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 		tipdarand = rand(0, 1)
 
 		if tipdarand = 0:
-			'After sucking their cocks for a good ten minutes, one of them says: "It''s time for you to get roasted, little lamb."'
+			'After sucking their cocks for a good ten minutes, one of them says, "It''s time for you to get roasted, little lamb."'
 			'You are grabbed by the hair and roughly pulled to your feet before you are thrown onto the bed on all fours.'
 			'The two men undress and move into position at both ends. "You might be the sweetest thing I''ve ever seen. Even sweeter than that last whore your friend gave us!" one of the men laughs.'
 			'You start thinking of that girl and how she handled these men when a sharp slap to the face brings you back and you notice the cock hanging in front of you. "Get back to work whore!" he shouts.'

+ 54 - 54
locations/artemhome.qsrc

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 					'"I am Glinina, Artem''s mom. What''s your name?"'
 					'"<<$pcs_nickname>>." You answer her and don''t elaborate further.'
 					if artlie = 2 or artembrokenheart = 1 or artemblok = 1:
-						'When she hears your name her demeanor changes swiftly. Frowning she says: "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
+						'When she hears your name her demeanor changes swiftly. Frowning she says, "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 					else
 						'She keeps up her smile. "Is he going to tutor you dear?" Obviously expecting the answer to be yes.'
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home':
 					if artlie = 2 or artembrokenheart = 1 or artemblok = 1:
 						'"Who should I tell him is here?"'
 						'"I''m <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'When she hears your name her demeanor changes swiftly. Frowning she says: "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
+						'When she hears your name her demeanor changes swiftly. Frowning she says, "Oh, it''s you. I don''t know what you did to my sweet Artem but he says he never wants to see you again, so please leave." With that she closes the door in your face.'
 						act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 					else
 						'She seems pleased. "You must be one of Artem''s little friends. I am Glinina, Artem''s mom. Whats your name dear?"'
@@ -359,11 +359,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemroom':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
 								if artdryhump = 0:
-									'Artem trips over his words when he tries to suggest something: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe we could... maybe I... I really want you... can I touch your ass? Please?"'
+									'Artem trips over his words when he tries to suggest something, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe we could... maybe I... I really want you... can I touch your ass? Please?"'
 									act 'Let him caress your ass': gt 'artem_events','artdryhump'
 								elseif artdryhump <= 1:
 									if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
-										'Artem looks at you with embarrassment, but gathers the courage to ask: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best thing that''s ever happened to me. I enjoyed last time so much... but could you strip down to your underwear?"'
+										'Artem looks at you with embarrassment, but gathers the courage to ask, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re the best thing that''s ever happened to me. I enjoyed last time so much... but could you strip down to your underwear?"'
 										act 'Strip to your panties': gt 'artem_events','artdryhump1'
 										gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 										if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -375,11 +375,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemroom':
 											act 'Refuse to strip (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 										end
 									else
-										'Artem trips over his words when he tries to suggest something: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe we could... I really want you... can I touch your ass again? Please?"'
+										'Artem trips over his words when he tries to suggest something, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, maybe we could... I really want you... can I touch your ass again? Please?"'
 										act 'Let him caress your ass': gt 'artem_events','artdryhump'
 									end
 								elseif artdryhump <= 2 and artemStripSee = 1:
-									'Artem looks at you with embarrassment, but gathers the courage to ask: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, last time you let me rub your ass it was great, but now that I have seen you naked... could you strip naked first?"'
+									'Artem looks at you with embarrassment, but gathers the courage to ask, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, last time you let me rub your ass it was great, but now that I have seen you naked... could you strip naked first?"'
 									act 'Strip': gt 'artem_events','artdryhump2'
 									gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 									if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemroom':
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
 										'You pull your hand away from the bulge in his pants but keep kissing him, he lets go and stops trying to force your hand down to his crotch and instead focuses on kissing and fondling you. The two of you spend some time on his bed making out, like... well the couple of horny teenagers you are.'
 										if artemStripSee > 0:
-											'Artem has a embarrassed look on his face, as he pulls away from you when he says: "I enjoyed seeing your naked last time, I want you to strip for me again but can you make a bit more of a show of it this time?"'
+											'Artem has a embarrassed look on his face, as he pulls away from you when he says, "I enjoyed seeing your naked last time, I want you to strip for me again but can you make a bit more of a show of it this time?"'
 											gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
 											gs 'stat'
 											gs 'artemhome', 'askedstrip'
@@ -1186,12 +1186,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			menu_off = 1
 			dimaRevenge = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You''re not sure how to start this conversation, and take a deep breath. You carefully suggest: "Artem... we''re good friends, right?"'
-			'Artem nods, unsure why you look so distraught: "Of course! Why, what''s wrong?"'
-			'You continue: "And you''re good with computers? I could really use your help."'
-			'He nods again: "Yea, I know a thing or two about computers. If I can help you out, I certainly will. What do you need?"'
-			'You look at him, and decide to tell him: "Can you hack into someone else''s computer? To remove a file? I need you to hack into Dimka''s computer and delete a video. Just promise me you won''t look at it, please!"'
-			'Artem looks a bit confused: "Erm, yea... I think I can do that. Why, what''s the video about?"'
+			'You''re not sure how to start this conversation, and take a deep breath. You carefully suggest, "Artem... we''re good friends, right?"'
+			'Artem nods, unsure why you look so distraught, "Of course! Why, what''s wrong?"'
+			'You continue, "And you''re good with computers? I could really use your help."'
+			'He nods again, "Yea, I know a thing or two about computers. If I can help you out, I certainly will. What do you need?"'
+			'You look at him, and decide to tell him, "Can you hack into someone else''s computer? To remove a file? I need you to hack into Dimka''s computer and delete a video. Just promise me you won''t look at it, please!"'
+			'Artem looks a bit confused, "Erm, yea... I think I can do that. Why, what''s the video about?"'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Lie to him':
@@ -1199,8 +1199,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				artlie = 1
 				artdimhelp = daystart
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You lie to him: "I got very drunk in the disco, a few nights ago. He made a video of it and threatened to tell my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> would kill me!"'
-				'Artem nods: "Alright, I''ll see what I can do."'
+				'You lie to him, "I got very drunk in the disco, a few nights ago. He made a video of it and threatened to tell my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>. My <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> would kill me!"'
+				'Artem nods, "Alright, I''ll see what I can do."'
 				act 'Keep talking': gt 'artemhome', 'chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'artemhome', 'artemroom'
 			end
@@ -1210,8 +1210,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 				artdimhelp = daystart
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You have to gather some courage to tell him the truth, and remain silent for a second.'
-				'You stare at your feet, afraid to look him in the eye when you tell him: "I thought I loved him. He made a video of me giving him a blowjob... he''s blackmailing me with it now, forcing me to do all sorts of nasty things. Please, it would mean the world to me if you could make that video disappear.'
-				'Artem nods: "That sounds horrible! Okay, I''ll see what I can do."'
+				'You stare at your feet, afraid to look him in the eye when you tell him, "I thought I loved him. He made a video of me giving him a blowjob... he''s blackmailing me with it now, forcing me to do all sorts of nasty things. Please, it would mean the world to me if you could make that video disappear.'
+				'Artem nods, "That sounds horrible! Okay, I''ll see what I can do."'
 				act 'Keep talking': gt 'artemhome', 'chat'
 				act 'Stop talking': gt 'artemhome', 'artemroom'
 			end
@@ -1232,15 +1232,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		artlie = 2
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', - 50
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem looks away from you, with a blank stare in his eyes. He mutters: "You know... I watched that video you wanted me to delete from Dimka''s computer. I can''t believe it... I was willing to do anything for you. Anything!"'
-		'He continues: "Ever since I''ve seen that video... Now I can''t even look at you, how could you?" He looks away from you in disgust. "Please leave, I never want to see you again."'
+		'Artem looks away from you, with a blank stare in his eyes. He mutters, "You know... I watched that video you wanted me to delete from Dimka''s computer. I can''t believe it... I was willing to do anything for you. Anything!"'
+		'He continues, "Ever since I''ve seen that video... Now I can''t even look at you, how could you?" He looks away from you in disgust. "Please leave, I never want to see you again."'
 		'You don''t know what to say, you just nod your head and then get up and walk out.'
 		act 'Leave his apartment': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 	elseif artlie = -1 and artdim ! 1 and artdimhelp ! daystart:
 		artdim = 1
 		DimaRudeBlock = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem tells you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I managed to get onto Dimka''s computer and deleted the video. It''s gone."'
+		'Artem tells you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I managed to get onto Dimka''s computer and deleted the video. It''s gone."'
 		act 'Thank him':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1254,23 +1254,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 !!need code if Sveta is a slut outcast, not sure how to do it since different groups kick Sveta out at different levels of pav slut rep
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You quietly walk past Artem and enter his room. You sit down on the couch, without saying a word.'
-		'Artem looks at you questioningly: "<<$pcs_nickname>>..."'
+		'Artem looks at you questioningly, "<<$pcs_nickname>>..."'
 		'Tears roll down your cheeks, but you still don''t know what to say and just sit there, crying softly.'
 		'Artem is clueless as to what he should do, and just hugs you. You''re fairly sure he knows about your reputation. Surely he must...'
-		'Eventually, you sniffle: "They all know... Everyone in Pavlovsk knows!"'
-		'Artem keeps hugging you: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I..."'
-		'You break away from him, and shout hysterically: "What do you mean, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! No one calls me that any more! It''s just <<$gnikname>> now..."'
+		'Eventually, you sniffle, "They all know... Everyone in Pavlovsk knows!"'
+		'Artem keeps hugging you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I..."'
+		'You break away from him, and shout hysterically, "What do you mean, <<$pcs_nickname>>?! No one calls me that any more! It''s just <<$gnikname>> now..."'
 		'Artem wipes the tears from your face, and hugs you tightly.'
 		*nl
-		'He whispers: "I still love you..."'
-		'You smirk at him: "Are you sure you want to be seen with a whore? Everyone will look down on you too!"'
-		'Artem tells you: "I don''t care what others call you, or what they think... I just want to be with you."'
+		'He whispers, "I still love you..."'
+		'You smirk at him, "Are you sure you want to be seen with a whore? Everyone will look down on you too!"'
+		'Artem tells you, "I don''t care what others call you, or what they think... I just want to be with you."'
 		if soniaPS > 0:
-			'You continue: "You saw what happened to Sonia! She used to get along with everyone... but ever since the incident at the disco they all treat her like dirt! That will happen to me too, I just know it! And you, if people see you near me!"'
+			'You continue, "You saw what happened to Sonia! She used to get along with everyone... but ever since the incident at the disco they all treat her like dirt! That will happen to me too, I just know it! And you, if people see you near me!"'
 		else
-			'You shake your head sadly: "I know you think that now, but it won''t be the same. People will treat me like dirt, Artem! And they would do the same to you!"'
+			'You shake your head sadly, "I know you think that now, but it won''t be the same. People will treat me like dirt, Artem! And they would do the same to you!"'
 		end
-		'You hear his voice crack when he tries to reassure you things will be okay: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please calm down! We''ll figure something out! Just give it some time..."'
+		'You hear his voice crack when he tries to reassure you things will be okay, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, please calm down! We''ll figure something out! Just give it some time..."'
 		'You can tell it has been on his mind as well, and that he''s having a difficult time with it too. Nevertheless, he''s willing to support you.'
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -1279,8 +1279,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			artemslutlove =1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk2.jpg"></center>'
 			'You lean towards Artem and kiss him amorously.'
-			'You mutter: "Thank you, Artem... I don''t know what to say, besides... I love you!"'
-			'Artem replies: "I love you too, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+			'You mutter, "Thank you, Artem... I don''t know what to say, besides... I love you!"'
+			'Artem replies, "I love you too, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 			'You press your lips against his again, and kiss him. He embraces you and kisses you back.'
 			'You just lay silent in each other''s arms for a minute, just thinking about the implications of it all. After that, you realize you need to get on with your day and he probably does too. You give Artem a quick kiss on his cheek and thank him for his support as you get up and gather your things. At least you know you''re not alone in this.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5
@@ -1292,8 +1292,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			artsveslut = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/talk3.jpg"></center>'
 			'You quietly get up, and begin to gather your things.'
-			'Artem looks at you questioningly: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what are you doing?"'
-			'You shake your head as you softly mutter through your tears: "I''m sorry, Artem... I can''t ask this from you. I can''t ask this from anyone. I''m really sorry... but I don''t think we should see each other any more."'
+			'Artem looks at you questioningly, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what are you doing?"'
+			'You shake your head as you softly mutter through your tears, "I''m sorry, Artem... I can''t ask this from you. I can''t ask this from anyone. I''m really sorry... but I don''t think we should see each other any more."'
 			'After you gather your things you leave his apartment, ignoring his pleas.'
 			act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 5 & artemblok = 1 & gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 		end
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		*clr & cla
 		artemQW['dateask'] = daystart
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem smiles at you, and suggests: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to go for a walk in the park?"'
+		'Artem smiles at you, and suggests, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to go for a walk in the park?"'
 		act 'Stay here': 
 			*clr & cla
 			artfall -= 4
@@ -1317,7 +1317,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artdate += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile back: "Sure Artem, we could go for a walk, that sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile back, "Sure Artem, we could go for a walk, that sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave the apartment with him, heading for the park.'
 			act 'Walk in the park': gt 'artem_date_events','firstdate'
 		end
@@ -1340,7 +1340,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artdate += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile back: "Sure Artem, we can go out on a date, that sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile back, "Sure Artem, we can go out on a date, that sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave the apartment with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -1367,8 +1367,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			artdate += 1
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'adore'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/makeout.jpg"></center>'
-			'What a nice gesture! You smile at him and mutter: "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
-			'Artem blushes when he tells you: "Not as beautiful as you..."'
+			'What a nice gesture! You smile at him and mutter, "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
+			'Artem blushes when he tells you, "Not as beautiful as you..."'
 			'He leans in and kisses you before you can pull away and gently begins to caress your <<$titsize>> breasts through your clothes.'
 			minut += 2
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1379,8 +1379,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You push his hands away: "Wait... you''re going too fast, please stop!"'
-					'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes: "Sorry..."'
+					'You push his hands away, "Wait... you''re going too fast, please stop!"'
+					'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes, "Sorry..."'
 					act 'Just talk': gt 'artemhome', 'chat'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1418,13 +1418,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/flowerstrash.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look at Artem compassionately, but don''t take the flowers: "Thank you... they''re very nice, but we''re just friends... I don''t want to give you the wrong idea by accepting them, you know?"'
+			'You look at Artem compassionately, but don''t take the flowers, "Thank you... they''re very nice, but we''re just friends... I don''t want to give you the wrong idea by accepting them, you know?"'
 			'Artem sighs, and disappointedly throws the flowers into the trash.'
 			act 'Leave them in the trash and study':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You quietly walk past him and say: "Come on, let''s study?"'
-				'You can tell he''s unhappy, and he mutters: "Fine..."'
+				'You quietly walk past him and say, "Come on, let''s study?"'
+				'You can tell he''s unhappy, and he mutters, "Fine..."'
 				'You really hurt his feelings.'
 				act 'Just talk': gt 'artemhome', 'chat'
 			end
@@ -1448,7 +1448,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artdate += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile back: "Sure Artem, we can go out on a date, that sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile back, "Sure Artem, we can go out on a date, that sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave the apartment with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -1458,16 +1458,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		artdate += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/artem/wine.jpg"></center>'
 		'When you enter the room, you immediately notice the small folding table with chairs set up in the room, it has several lighted candles on it, and a bottle of wine with two glasses.'
-		'You look at Artem, slightly confused: "What''s the meaning of this, Artem?"'
-		'He smiles at you as he says: "Well, we''ve spent a lot of time dating, I figured it would be nice to make it official."'
-		'You''re still not sold on the idea, and question him further: "Make what official? And where did you get that wine from?"'
+		'You look at Artem, slightly confused, "What''s the meaning of this, Artem?"'
+		'He smiles at you as he says, "Well, we''ve spent a lot of time dating, I figured it would be nice to make it official."'
+		'You''re still not sold on the idea, and question him further, "Make what official? And where did you get that wine from?"'
 		*nl
 		if fame['pav_slut'] >= 200 or grupTipe = 4:
-			'Artem reassures you: "Relax, <<$pcs_nickname>>... my parents are leaving to see a friend, I got the wine from my uncle. So please... let''s just sit down and chat?"'
+			'Artem reassures you, "Relax, <<$pcs_nickname>>... my parents are leaving to see a friend, I got the wine from my uncle. So please... let''s just sit down and chat?"'
 		else
-			'Artem reassures you: "Relax, <<$pcs_nickname>>... my parents are leaving to see a friend, to give us some privacy. And my mom gave me that wine, to share with you! My parents are very happy I met you, and my mother picked the wine. So please... let''s just sit down and chat?"'
+			'Artem reassures you, "Relax, <<$pcs_nickname>>... my parents are leaving to see a friend, to give us some privacy. And my mom gave me that wine, to share with you! My parents are very happy I met you, and my mother picked the wine. So please... let''s just sit down and chat?"'
 		end
-		'You relax a bit and nod at him: "Okay... I have to admit, that does sound nice."'
+		'You relax a bit and nod at him, "Okay... I have to admit, that does sound nice."'
 		'You spend the next half hour talking about your plans after you finish school. The bottle of wine is empty before you know it, and you feel a bit tipsy.'
 		'After you have drank most of the wine and talked for a while, Artem is silent a moment before he asks. "<<$pcs_nickname>> Will you be my girlfriend?"'
 		minut += 30
@@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A2', 'love'
 			artdate += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You give him a cute smile back: "Sure Artem, we can go out on a date, that sounds like fun!"'
+			'You give him a cute smile back, "Sure Artem, we can go out on a date, that sounds like fun!"'
 			'You quickly pack up your things and leave the apartment with him.'
 			act 'Go on a date': gt 'artem_date_events','artem_date'
 		end
@@ -1714,8 +1714,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'artemgirlfriend':
 	act 'Tell him to stop it':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You smile at him as you push his hands away: "Artem, wait! All in good time, okay? We''ll get there, just please... slow down a little."'
-		'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes: "Sorry..." Though he is obviously disappointed.'
+		'You smile at him as you push his hands away, "Artem, wait! All in good time, okay? We''ll get there, just please... slow down a little."'
+		'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes, "Sorry..." Though he is obviously disappointed.'
 		'You finish the bottle of wine with Artem, and thank him for a nice time before you gather your things and leave.'
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'