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[text edit] clean up sitr2x

Spackled Lanturn 3 years ago
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      locations/sitr2x.qsrc

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locations/sitr2x.qsrc

@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 
 'luxurious <a href="exec:gt ''divan'',''start''">leather sofa</a>'
 
-'modern <a href="exec:gt ''stol'',''start''">curbstones</a>'
+'modern <a href="exec:gt ''stol'',''start''">desk</a>'
 
-if obruch > 0:'In the corner stands a hoop.'
-if skak > 0:'On a shelf is a jump rope.'
-if bookYog > 0:'The cabinet has a book on yoga and a yoga mat'
+if obruch > 0:'Your hula hoop stands in a corner.'
+if skak > 0:'Your jump rope is on a shelf.'
+if bookYog > 0:'Your book on yoga and your yoga mat are in the cabinet.'
 
-if mishka > 0:'On a shelf is <<mishka>> teddy bear'
+if mishka > 0:iif(mishka = 1, 'Your teddy bear is', 'Your <<mishka>> teddy bears are') + ' on a shelf.'
 
 *nl
 
@@ -47,13 +47,13 @@ gs 'exercise', 'start'
 if husband > 0 and husbandrink ! 10 and husbandrinkday ! daystart:
 	if week < 6:
 		if hour > 17 and hour <= 22:
-			'<a href="exec: gt''husb'',''start'' ">My husband is sitting on the couch watching TV.</a>'
+			'<a href="exec: gt''husb'',''start'' ">Your husband is sitting on the couch watching TV.</a>'
 		end
 	else
 		if hour > 7 and hour < 17:
-			'<a href="exec: gt''husb'',''start'' ">My husband is sitting on the couch watching TV.</a>'
+			'<a href="exec: gt''husb'',''start'' ">Your husband is sitting on the couch watching TV.</a>'
 		elseif hour > 17 and hour <= 22:
-			'<a href="exec: gt''husb'',''start'' ">My husband is sitting on the couch watching TV.</a>'
+			'<a href="exec: gt''husb'',''start'' ">Your husband is sitting on the couch watching TV.</a>'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -86,82 +86,82 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 				'You sit down on the couch and push a dildo into your pussy.'
 
 				if hour > 17 and hour <= 22:'<<$husName>> looks at you, stunned by your sudden act of lewdness.'
-				if hour = 16 or hour > 22:'<<$husName>> enters the room, after he heard moans from outside.'
+				if hour = 16 or hour > 22:'<<$husName>> enters the room after he heard moans from outside.'
 
 				if harakHusb = 0:
-					'"What are you doing?", <<$husName>> asks.'
-					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it and you''re always busy," you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
-					'"And how often do you that", he asks.'
-					'"Every now and then, sometimes I put it in the ass too, would you like to watch me?" you ask him'
+					'"What are you doing?" <<$husName>> asks.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it, and you''re always busy," you reply without stopping masturbating.'
+					'"And how often do you that?" he asks.'
+					'"Every now and then, sometimes I put it in my ass too, would you like to watch me?" you ask him.'
 
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						husband -= 1
-						'"I think I''ll step outside until you are done", he says and leaves the apartment. You continue to satisfy yourself, but are a bit sad, he didn''t ''help'' you.'
+						'"I think I''ll step outside until you are done," he says and leaves the apartment. You continue to satisfy yourself but are a bit sad he didn''t ''help'' you.'
 						pcs_horny = 0
 						orgasm += 1
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'sitr2x'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I''m... I''m not sure", he stutters.'
-						'"So, what do you want?", you ask'
+						'"Well, I''m... I''m not sure," he stutters.'
+						'"So, what do you want?" you ask.'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m12.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull out the dildo from your pussy and wink at your husband, then you push the dildo into your ass. <<$husName>> watches closely as the dildo moves in and out. You notice the obvious bulge in trousers.'
-							'"Dear, is there anything else you want?", you ask, smiling at him.'
-							'"Can I join?", he asks you a little embarrased.'
+							'You pull out the dildo from your pussy and wink at your husband, then you push the dildo into your ass. <<$husName>> watches closely as the dildo moves in and out. You notice the obvious bulge in his trousers.'
+							'"Dear, is there anything else you want?" you ask, smiling at him.'
+							'"Can I join?" he asks you, a little embarrassed.'
 
-							act 'Solve':
+							act 'Together':
 								cla
 								*clr
 								analorgasm += 1
 								orgasm += 1
 								pcs_horny = 0
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m13.jpg"></center>'
-								'<<$husName>> takes out his dick and starts to masturbate right in front of you, you''re surprised, because you expected he''d to fuck you or something like that a long the line. You sigh silently and continue to fuck your ass with the dildo. <<$husName>> now masturbates furiously, as you moaning becomes louder. Both of you realize, it won''t be long until either of you cums.'
-								'With a final thrust, it''s you, who experiences the first orgasm and it''s so strong, that you fall off the couch onto the floor. You talk your dildo out of your ass and lick it clean, while locking eyes with your husband. He finds this incredibly erotic and it takes him merely a few more seconds to cum, spraying his salty fluids over the couch and carpet. In the afterbliss of both of your orgasms you kiss each other passionately.'
+								'<<$husName>> takes out his dick and starts to masturbate right in front of you. You''re surprised because you expected he''d fuck you or something along those lines. You sigh silently and continue to fuck your ass with the dildo. <<$husName>> now masturbates furiously, as your moaning becomes louder. Both of you realize it won''t be long until either of you cums.'
+								'With a final thrust, it''s you who experiences the first orgasm, and it''s so strong that you fall off the couch onto the floor. You take your dildo out of your ass and lick it clean while locking eyes with your husband. He finds this incredibly erotic, and it takes him merely a few more seconds to cum, spraying his salty fluids over the couch and carpet. In the afterbliss of both of your orgasms, you kiss each other passionately.'
 
 								act 'Finish':gt 'sitr2x'
 							end
 						end
 					end
 				elseif harakHusb = 1:
-					'"I guess sex with me isn''t enough?", he asks.'
-					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it and you''re always busy", you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
-					'"Well then, why don''t you show me everything then? I''d love to watch", he says.'
-					'"Do you want to see me putting in my ass too?" you ask'
+					'"I guess sex with me isn''t enough?" he asks.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it, and you''re always busy," you reply without stopping masturbating.'
+					'"Well then, why don''t you show me everything then? I''d love to watch," he says.'
+					'"Do you want to see me putting it in my ass too?" you ask'
 
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						husband += 1
 						husbizvradd += 1
-						'"No, not yet, and that''s enough for now", he says and sits down on a chair. You continue to satisfy yourself rapidly and soon orgasm in front of your husband. <<$husName>> applauds you. "Bravo! Care to do it again?", he says chuckling.'
-						'"Anytime for such a lovely audience, but I need a quick break", you laugh and take the dildo out of your pussy.'
+						'"No, not yet, what you''re doing is enough for now," he says and sits down on a chair. You continue to satisfy yourself rapidly and soon orgasm in front of your husband. <<$husName>> applauds you. "Bravo! Care to do it again?" he says chuckling.'
+						'"Anytime for such a lovely audience, but I need a quick break," you laugh and take the dildo out of your pussy.'
 						pcs_horny = 0
 						orgasm += 1
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'sitr2x'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
 						husband += 1
-						'"And what are you going to show me now?", he asks.'
-						'"Whatever you would like to see", you answer.'
+						'"And what are you going to show me now?" he asks.'
+						'"Whatever you would like to see," you answer.'
 
 						act 'Put on a show':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m12.jpg"></center>'
-							'You move your dildo slowly into your ass. <<$husName>> watches closely as the dildo moves in and out of your ass. You notice the bulge in his pants.'
-							'It''s hard for you not to look at it, therefore you ask him, if he would like to participate somehow.'
-							'"Now that you ask", he says, "you could blow me, while pump that toy into your ass." So he unbuttons his pants and takes his cock out.'
+							'You move your dildo slowly into your ass. <<$husName>> watches closely as the dildo moves in and out. You notice the bulge in his pants.'
+							'It''s hard for you not to look at it. Therefore, you ask him if he would like to participate somehow.'
+							'"Now that you ask," he says, "you could blow me while pump that toy into your ass." He unbuttons his pants and takes his cock out.'
 
 							act 'Blowjob':
 								cla
 								*clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m14.jpg"></center>'
-								'You start to suck on his flaccid penis, while you continue to pleasure yourself, by pumping that dildo in and out of your ass. After a short while, <<$husName>>s dick became rock hard, when it finally is, he says "Time for me to fuck that hole."'
+								'You start to suck on his flaccid penis while you continue to pleasure yourself by pumping the dildo in and out of your ass. After a short while, <<$husName>>''s dick becomes rock hard. When it finally is, he says, "Time for me to fuck that hole."'
 
-								act 'Anal Sex':
+								act 'Anal sex':
 									picrand = 88
 									gt 'sex', 'anal'
 								end
@@ -170,12 +170,12 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 					end
 				elseif harakHusb = 2:
 					'"Is your hole itching?" he asks.'
-					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it and you''re always busy", you reply, without stopping to masturbate.'
+					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it, and you''re always busy," you reply without stopping masturbating.'
 
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						husband += 1
 						husbizvradd += 1
-						'"Well then, open your mouth", he orders you, pulls out his cock and pushes it into your mouth by force. He holds you by the hair and fucks your mouth, while telling you not to stop masturbating. Soon after he becomes tired of your mouth, "Now take out that damn toy, time for me to scratch your itch."'
+						'"Well then, open your mouth," he orders you, pulling out his cock and pushing it into your mouth by force. He holds you by the hair and fucks your mouth while telling you not to stop masturbating. Soon after, he becomes tired of your mouth. "Now take out that damn toy, time for me to scratch your itch."'
 
 						act 'Spread your legs':
 							picrand = 88
@@ -183,15 +183,15 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 						end
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
 						husband += 1
-						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass and you submissivly oblige to do so. "Now open your mouth and suck me off", he tells you.'
+						'<<$husName>> orders you to put your toy into your ass, and you submissively oblige to do so. "Now open your mouth and suck me off," he tells you.'
 
 						act 'Blowjob':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m14.jpg"></center>'
-								'You start to suck on his flaccid penis, while you continue to pleasure yourself, by pumping that dildo in and out of your ass. After a short while, <<$husName>>s dick became rock hard, when it finally is, he says "Time for me to fuck your ass-pussy."'
+								'You start to suck on his flaccid penis while you continue to pleasure yourself by pumping the dildo in and out of your ass. After a short while, <<$husName>>''s dick became rock hard. When it finally is, he says, "Time for me to fuck your ass-pussy."'
 
-							act 'Anal Sex':
+							act 'Anal sex':
 								picrand = 88
 								gt 'sex', 'anal'
 							end
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 				pcs_horny = 0
 				orgasm += 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/mast/mastr.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You put your dildo on the floor and start to ride it. It moves in and out and you feel the pleasure running through your entire body with each thrust. You begin to moan and a few minutes later you climax and a wave of pleasure runs through your entire body.'
+				'You put your dildo on the floor and start to ride it. It moves in and out, and you feel the pleasure running through your entire body with each thrust. You begin to moan, and a few minutes later, you climax and a wave of pleasure runs through your entire body.'
 
 				act 'Breathe':gt 'sitr2x'
 			end
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if dildo > 0 and pcs_horny >= 50:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			orgasm += 1
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/mast/mastr.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You put your dildo on the floor and start to ride it. It moves in and out and you feel the pleasure running through your entire body with each thrust. You begin to moan and a few minutes later you climax and a wave of pleasure runs through your entire body.'
+				'You put your dildo on the floor and start to ride it. It moves in and out, and you feel the pleasure running through your entire body with each thrust. You begin to moan, and a few minutes later, you climax and a wave of pleasure runs through your entire body.'
 
 			act 'Breathe':gt 'sitr2x'
 		end