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locations/pornfilm.qsrc

@@ -98,8 +98,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He''s standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		act 'Jerk him off':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/hjcumontits.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'<<$pactor[1]>> caresses your tits as you continue to jerk his cock. After a few minutes, he stops feeling you up, leans back and starts groaning. You pick up the pace in repsonse, vigorously jerking his dick as you aim it at your tits.'
-			'He soon lets out a loud grunt and his hot cum starts squirting over your tits. When he finishes, you show your cum covered tits to the camera, playfully teasing your future viewers with a show of you squeezing and wiggling them before the shoot ends.'
+			'<<$pactor[1]>> caresses your tits as you continue to jerk his cock. After a few minutes, he stops feeling you up, leans back and starts groaning. You pick up the pace in response, jerking his dick as you aim it at your tits.'
+			'He soon lets out a loud grunt, and his hot cum starts squirting over your tits. When he finishes, you show your cum covered tits to the camera, playfully teasing your future viewers with a show of you squeezing and wiggling them before the shoot ends.'
 			gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $pactorID[1], 1
 			gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling, with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He is standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		act 'Blow him':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/bj.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'His cock now rock hard, you take it into your mouth and start sucking.'
+			'His cock is now rock-hard. You take it into your mouth and start sucking.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/deep.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hair in his fists and begins to fuck your mouth, driving his cock down your throat with every thrust.'
-				'After a few minutes of this, he takes his cock out and you wipe the saliva from your mouth while gasping for air.'
+				'After a few minutes, he takes his cock out, and you wipe the saliva from your mouth while gasping for air.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -178,8 +178,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/bj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You keep your eyes fixed on him as you gently lick every last drop of sperm from his cock before taking it back in your mouth and sucking, causing him to groan loudly in pleasure.'
-						'You then pop his dick out of your mouth and smile up at him as the shoot is called to an end.'
+						'You keep your eyes fixed on him as you gently lick every last drop of sperm from his cock before taking it back in your mouth and sucking, causing him to groan loudly.'
+						'You then pop his dick out of your mouth and smile up at him as the shoot ends.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -202,14 +202,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He is standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/hj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The camera starts rolling and the scene starts with you walking onto the set and giving the camera a very teasing striptease and close up of your naked body.'
-		'<<$pactor[1]>> then walks over and sits on the bed. You kneel in front of him, take his dick in your hand and start stroking it.'
+		'The camera starts rolling, and the scene begins with you walking onto the set and giving the camera a teasing striptease and close-up of your naked body.'
+		'<<$pactor[1]>> then walks over and sits on the bed. You kneel before him, take his dick in your hand and start stroking it.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 			act 'Deepthroat':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/deep.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hair in his fists and begins to fuck your mouth deeply, occasionally withdrawing completely to allow you to catch your breath, before returning more vigorously.'
+				'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hair in his fists. He begins to fuck your mouth intensely, occasionally withdrawing completely to allow you to catch your breath before returning more vigorously.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 					pcs_vag += 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/doggysex.mp4"></video></center>'
 					'You stand and get on all fours on the edge of the bed. <<$pactor[1]>> guides his dick into your pussy and begins to fuck you hard from behind.'
-					'You spend the next few minutes getting fucked in this position before calling for a break. Once you''re rested, you get back into position and spend quite a bit of time getting fucked in a variety of other poses.'
+					'You spend the next few minutes getting fucked in this position before calling for a break. Once you''re rested, you get back into position and spend quite a bit of time getting fucked in various poses.'
 
 					!! Precum pregnancy check
 					cumnostd = 1
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 						
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cum.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'<<$pactor[1]>> is pounding you hard in the missionary position, your legs spread high and wide as you talk dirty for the camera, when you hear him panting loudly and feel him pulling out of you. You slide off the bed onto your knees in front of him and he shoots his load across your face with a loud grunt.'
+						'<<$pactor[1]>> pounds you hard in the missionary position, your legs spread high and wide as you talk dirty for the camera. You hear him panting loudly and feel him pulling out of you. You slide off the bed onto your knees before him, and he shoots his load across your face with a loud grunt.'
 
 						act 'Clean his cock':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -286,14 +286,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He is standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/hj.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'The camera starts rolling and the scene starts with you walking onto the set and giving the camera a very teasing striptease and close up of your naked body.'
-		'<<$pactor[1]>> then walks over and sits on the bed. You kneel in front of him, take his dick in your hand and start stroking it.'
+		'<<$pactor[1]>> then walks over and sits on the bed. You kneel before him, take his dick in your hand and start stroking it.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 			act 'Suck further':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/deep.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactor[1]>> relaxes as you take control, trying to take the full length of his cock down your throat.'
+				'<<$pactor[1]>> relaxes as you take control, trying to take the entire length of his cock down your throat.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -318,8 +318,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_vag += 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/sex.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You straddle <<$pactor[1]>> and guide his dick into your pussy. You begin to ride him hard and really get into it. After a few minutes, he lifts you off of his dick, throws you on your back and spreads your legs so he can fuck you missionary style.'
-					'After pounding your pussy in a variety of other poses, <<$pactor[1]>> pulls his cock out of you and gets you on all fours, your ass high in the air. You feel him pressing against your anus.'
+					'You straddle <<$pactor[1]>> and guide his dick into your pussy. You begin to ride him hard and really get into it. After a few minutes, he lifts you off his dick, throws you on your back and spreads your legs so he can fuck you missionary-style.'
+					'After pounding your pussy in various poses, <<$pactor[1]>> pulls his cock out of you and gets you on all fours, your ass high in the air. You feel him pressing against your anus.'
 
 					!! Precum pregnancy check
 					cumnostd = 1
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 						*clr & cla
 						pcs_ass += 1
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/sex1.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You try as best as you can to relax as <<$pactor[1]>> pushes into your ass and immediately goes at it like a jackhammer. He pulls out a few times to let you recover, the camera coming in for shots of your stretched hole each time, before he plunges his dick back inside you.'
+						'You try as best as possible to relax as <<$pactor[1]>> pushes into your ass and immediately goes at it like a jackhammer. He pulls out a few times to let you recover, the camera coming in for shots of your stretched hole each time before he plunges his dick back inside you.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 							
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cum.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs you by the hips and really starts pounding your ass. Just as it''s starting to hurt, he pulls out of your ass and you quickly turn and kneel before him. He vigorously jerks his dick and his cum is soon splattering across your face and onto your tongue.'
+							'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs you by the hips and really starts pounding your ass. As it''s starting to hurt, he pulls out of your ass, and you quickly turn and kneel before him. He vigorously jerks his dick, and his cum soon splatters your face and your tongue.'
 							cumnostd = 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 36
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 4
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 								minut += 5
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/bj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-								'You keep look deep into his eyes as you lick and suck his cock clean. He steps aside to let the camera come in for a shot of you. '
+								'You look deep into his eyes as you lick and suck his cock clean. He steps aside to let the camera come in for a shot of you. '
 								'You look up at the camera and smile, playfully showing off your cum coated face before the shoot ends.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -383,8 +383,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'You co-stars for this shoot are <<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>>. They are watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
+	'The set is already bustling, with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'Your co-stars for this shoot are <<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>>. They watch porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
 
 	act 'Undress and kneel':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 			pornbj += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/tbj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You then start sucking the two dicks in front of you in turn, jerking the other with your hand. The two men moan loudly in pleasure and encourage you to take them deeper.'
+			'You then start sucking the two dicks in front of you, jerking the other with your hand. The two men moan loudly in pleasure and encourage you to take them deeper.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 				pcs_vag += 1
 				pornvag += 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/three.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'The men get you on all fours and <<$pactor[1]>> slides his dick into your pussy while you continue to suck <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick.'
+				'The men get you on all fours, and <<$pactor[1]>> slides his dick into your pussy. At the same time, you continue to suck <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick.'
 				'The two men spend the next few minutes repositioning you and taking turns fucking your pussy.'
 
 				!! Precum pregnancy check
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 					pcs_ass += 1
 					pornanal += 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/threea.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'<<$pactor[1]>> takes his cock out of your pussy and plunges it into your ass. The extra tightness quickly overwelms him and after only a few minutes in your ass, you feel him unloading inside you with a loud grunt.'
+					'<<$pactor[1]>> takes his cock out of your pussy and plunges it into your ass. The extra tightness quickly overwhelms him. After a few minutes in your ass, you feel him unloading inside you with a loud grunt.'
 					'You keep sucking <<$pactor[2]>>, who sounds like he is also close to climax.'
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 40
@@ -468,8 +468,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'<<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> are your co-stars for this shoot. They are watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'<<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> are your co-stars for this shoot. They watch porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 		act 'Suck them':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/tbj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You start to suck both dicks in turn, jerking the other with your hand.'
+			'You start to suck both dicks, jerking the other with your hand.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -491,8 +491,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 				*clr & cla
 				pcs_vag += 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/three.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You get on all fours and <<$pactor[1]>> fucks you from behind while you suck <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick.'
-                'You spend the next few minutes getting fucked in a variety of poses by the two men, who take turns fucking your pussy.'
+				'You get on all fours, and <<$pactor[1]>> fucks you from behind while you suck <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick.'
+                'You spend the next few minutes getting fucked in various poses by the two men, who take turns fucking your pussy.'
 				!! Precum pregnancy check
 				cumnostd = 1
 				gs 'cum_call', 'precum', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 1
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 						pcs_ass += 1
 						pcs_vag += 1
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/three2.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'<<$pactor[1]>> takes his dick out of your ass and lies down. Knowing <<$pactor[1]>> wants more, you straddle his cock.'
+						'<<$pactor[1]>> takes his dick out of your ass and lies down. Then, knowing<<$pactor[1]>> wants more, you straddle his cock.'
 						'You feel his cock fill your pussy while <<$pactor[2]>> moves in behind you and pushes his dick into your ass.'
 						'The guys find a rhythm and grind away at your holes as you moan loudly.'
 
@@ -530,9 +530,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '6':
 							minut += 5
 							
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/tcum.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'The guys tell you they''re close and both pull out. You grab <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick and begin to suck it.'
-							'As you suck his dick, your head is suddenly grabbed and you are turned around. <<$pactor[2]>> shoots his load across your face and into your mouth, <<$pactor[1]>> following him close behind.'
-                            'The two men step aside to let the camera get a shot of you. You look up at the camera and smile, swallowing the cum in your mouth and finishing with a close up of your cum splattered face.'
+							'The guys tell you they''re close, and both pull out. You grab <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick and begin to suck it.'
+							'As you suck his dick, your head is suddenly grabbed, and you are turned around. <<$pactor[2]>> shoots his load across your face and into your mouth, <<$pactor[1]>> following him close behind.'
+                            'The two men step aside to let the camera get a shot of you. You look up at the camera and smile, swallowing the cum in your mouth and finishing with a close-up of your cum splattered face.'
 							cumnostd = 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 10
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 30
@@ -563,14 +563,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'Your co-star for this shoot is <<$pactor[1]>>. He is standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		pornbj += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/bj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You start by teasing the camera. You play with your tits and show off your pussy before <<$pactor[1]>> walks up. You kneel between his legs, take his shaft into your mouth and start passionately sucking his dick.'
+		'You start by teasing the camera. You play with your tits and show off your pussy before <<$pactor[1]>> walks up. Then, you kneel between his legs, take his shaft into your mouth and start passionately sucking his dick.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 30, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/deep.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hair in his fists and begins to fuck your mouth, driving his cock down your throat with every thrust.'
-			'After a few minutes of this, he takes his cock out and you wipe the saliva from your mouth.'
+			'After a few minutes, he takes his cock out, and you wipe the saliva from your mouth.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -588,8 +588,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/pronebone.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hips, throws you on the couch and climbs on top of you. You feel him slide into your pussy and he begins to fuck you hard.'
-                'You spend the next few minutes getting fucked by him in a variety of positions.'
+				'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hips, throws you on the couch and climbs on top of you. You feel him slide into your pussy, and he begins to fuck you hard.'
+                'You spend the next few minutes getting fucked by him in various positions.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porncp<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 							'You are really getting into it and soon reach your orgasm. Your convulsing pussy tightens around <<$pactor[1]>>, which sends him over the edge. You soon feel yourself being filled with a considerable amount of sperm.'
-							'He climbs off of you, but you stay on the couch while the camera comes forward to film your pussy as you squeeze <<$pactor[1]>>''s load out from deep inside you. After a few minutes the director nods his head, and you get up.'
+							'He climbs off you, but you stay on the couch while the camera comes forward to film your pussy as you squeeze <<$pactor[1]>>''s load out deep inside you. Finally, after a few minutes, the director nods, and you get up.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -625,8 +625,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 						!! gs 'cum_call', '', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 40 (Not sure if this is needed anymore based on context. Delete if not.)
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porncp<<rand(1,3)>>.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-						'<<$pactor[1]>> is pounding your pussy a little too hard and cums too soon, his cum splattering across your stomach when he pulls out. The director cuts and <<$pactor[1]>> moves aside as an assistant comes forward with a towel and a plastic syringe. She wipes you clean before pushing the syringe inside you, causing you to gasp as you feel a cold liquid pool inside your vagina. Once he is hard again, <<$pactor[1]>> gets back into position and penetrates you.'
-						'The camera resumes filming and he starts thrusting. After a few minutes, you both fake an orgasm and he climbs off of you, but you stay on the couch while the camera comes forward to film your pussy as you squeeze the fake cum out from deep inside you. After a few minutes the director nods his head, and you get up.'
+						'<<$pactor[1]>> is pounding your pussy a little too hard and cums too soon, his cum splattering across your stomach when he pulls out. The director cuts, and <<$pactor[1]>> moves aside as an assistant comes forward with a towel and a plastic syringe. She wipes you clean before pushing the needle inside, causing you to gasp as you feel a cold liquid pool inside your vagina. Once he is hard again, <<$pactor[1]>> gets back into position and penetrates you.'
+						'The camera resumes filming, and he starts thrusting. After a few minutes, you both fake an orgasm, and he climbs off of you, but you stay on the couch while the camera comes forward to film your pussy as you squeeze the fake cum out from deep inside you. After a few minutes, the director nods, and you get up.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -654,8 +654,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'<<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> are your co-stars for this shoot. They are watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'<<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> are your co-stars for this shoot. They watch porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
 
 	act 'Undress and kneel':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 		act 'Suck them':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/tbj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You then start sucking the two dicks in front of you in turn, jerking the other with your hand. The two men moan loudly in pleasure and encourage you to take them deeper.'
+			'You then start sucking the two dicks in front of you, jerking the other with your hand. The two men moan loudly in pleasure and encourage you to take them deeper.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -681,12 +681,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', '', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 40
 					gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $pactorID[2], 1, 0, 0, 40
-					'<<$pactor[1]>> lays on the bed and you climb on top of him, sliding his cock into your pussy, then wait until <<$pactor[2]>> pushes into your ass. He starts to fuck you enthusiastically, making you ride <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick. They fuck you like for a while before spending time repositioning you into various poses and fucking both your holes. After getting fucked in a variety of positions, the director signals to the guys that they should cum inside you.'
+					'<<$pactor[1]>> lays on the bed, and you climb on top of him, sliding his cock into your pussy, then wait until <<$pactor[2]>> pushes into your ass. Then, he starts to fuck you enthusiastically, making you ride <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick. They fuck you like for a while before spending time repositioning you into various poses and fucking both your holes. Finally, after getting fucked in multiple positions, the director signals to the guys that they should cum inside you.'
 				else
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', '', $pactorID[2], 1, 0, 10000, 40
 					gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 40
-					'<<$pactor[2]>> lays on the bed and you climb on top of him, sliding his cock into your pussy, then wait until <<$pactor[1]>> pushes into your ass. He starts to fuck you enthusiastically, making you ride <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick. They fuck you like for a while before spending time repositioning you into various poses and fucking both your holes. After getting fucked in a variety of positions, the director signals to the guys that they should cum inside you.'
+					'<<$pactor[2]>> lays on the bed, and you climb on top of him, sliding his cock into your pussy, then wait until <<$pactor[1]>> pushes into your ass. Then, he starts to fuck you enthusiastically, making you ride <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick. They fuck you like for a while before spending time repositioning you into various poses and fucking both your holes. Finally, after getting fucked in multiple positions, the director signals to the guys that they should cum inside you.'
 				end
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', -25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -703,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 							porngasm += 1
 							orgasmbonus += 10
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-							'You have a real and very explosive orgasm. Your legs buckle and you almost collapse on the guy beneath you as they both unload inside you. Once they are finished, they pull out and you lie on the bed with your legs spread so the camera can get a close up of your pussy and ass as their cum trickles out of you. After a few seconds, the director nods his head and you get up.'
+							'You have a real and very explosive orgasm. Your legs buckle, and you almost collapse on the guy beneath you as they both unload inside you. Once they are finished, they pull out, and you lie on the bed with your legs spread so the camera can get a close-up of your pussy and ass as their cum trickles out of you. After a few seconds, the director nods, and you get up.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -719,7 +719,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '8':
 					act 'Fake orgasm':
 						cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-						'You fake a screaming orgasm and talk dirty to the guys as they unload inside you. Once they are finished, they pull out and you lie on the bed with your legs spread so the camera can get a close up of your pussy and ass as their cum trickles out of you. After a few seconds, the director nods his head and you get up.'
+						'You fake a screaming orgasm and talk dirty to the guys as they unload inside you. Once they are finished, they pull out, and you lie on the bed with your legs spread so the camera can get a close-up of your pussy and ass as their cum trickles out of you. After a few seconds, the director nods, and you get up.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -746,8 +746,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'<<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> are your co-stars for this shoot. They are watching porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'<<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> are your co-stars for this shoot. They watch porn on a monitor, getting their cocks ready for you.'
 
 	act 'Undress and kneel':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -760,8 +760,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 		act 'Suck them':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/tbj2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You then start sucking the two dicks in front of you in turn, jerking the other with your hand. The two men moan loudly in pleasure and encourage you to take them deeper.'
-			'You are sucking <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick when he grabs your hair for leverage and starts face fucking you. After a while, the director gestures for you to move onto the next scene, so he releases you and urges you to push your ass out.'
+			'You then start sucking the two dicks in front of you, jerking the other with your hand. The two men moan loudly in pleasure and encourage you to take them deeper.'
+			'You are sucking <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick when he grabs your hair for leverage and starts face fucking you. After a while, the director gestures for you to move on to the next scene, so he releases you and urges you to push your ass out.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -782,7 +782,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $pactorID[2], 1, 0, 0, 40
 
-					'You get in position before <<$pactor[2]>> and start to suck him while <<$pactor[1]>> starts to fuck your pussy. He fucks you enthusiastically, making you swallow <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick. They fuck you like this and in a number of other poses and take turns switching between your mouth and pussy before the director signals that it is time for the finale.'
+					'You get in position before <<$pactor[2]>> and start to suck him while <<$pactor[1]>> starts to fuck your pussy. He fucks you enthusiastically, making you swallow <<$pactor[2]>>''s dick. They fuck you like this and in several other poses and take turns switching between your mouth and pussy before the director signals it is time for the finale.'
 				else
 					!! Precum pregnancy check
 					cumnostd = 1
@@ -793,13 +793,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 0, 40
 
-					'You get in position before <<$pactor[1]>> and start to suck him while <<$pactor[2]>> starts to fuck your pussy. He fucks you enthusiastically, making you swallow <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick. They fuck you like this and in a number of other poses and take turns switching between your mouth and pussy before the director signals that it is time for the finale.'
+					'You get in position before <<$pactor[1]>> and start to suck him while <<$pactor[2]>>v starts to fuck your pussy. He fucks you enthusiastically, making you swallow <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick. They fuck you like this and in several other poses and take turns switching between your mouth and pussy before the director signals it is time for the finale.'
 				end
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', -25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				'The guys immediately start to fuck you even faster while still coordinating with each other and you soon feel them twitching inside you simultaneously. Your pussy is filled with cum as another load hits your throat, causing you to choke slightly.'
+				'The guys start to fuck you even faster while coordinating with each other, and you soon feel them twitching inside you simultaneously. Your pussy is filled with cum as another load hits your throat, causing you to choke slightly.'
 
 				if orgasm_buildup => 200 - pcs_inhib:
 					if orgasm_buildup < 300 - pcs_inhib: gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'hard'
@@ -810,7 +810,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 							orgasmbonus += 10
 							porngasm += 1
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-							'You have a real orgasm and explosive orgasm, your moans muffled by the cock in your mouth. The guys finish and step away so the camera can film you swallowing the load in your mouth before moving down for a close up of the cum trickling out of your pussy.'
+							'You have a real orgasm and explosive orgasm, your moans muffled by the cock in your mouth. The guys finish and step away so the camera can film you swallowing the load in your mouth before moving down for a close-up of the cum trickling out of your pussy.'
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '9':
 					act 'Fake orgasm':
 						cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-						'You fake an orgasm alongide the guys, your moans muffled by the cock in your mouth. The guys finish and step away so the camera can film you swallowing the load in your mouth before moving down to get a close up of the cum trickling out of your pussy.'
+						'You fake an orgasm alongside the guys, your moans muffled by the cock in your mouth. Finally, the guys finish and step away so the camera can film you swallowing the load in your mouth before moving down to get a close-up of the cum trickling out of your pussy.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -854,14 +854,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'Your co-stars <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
-	'As they continue arguing with each other, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close up shots of both your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
+	'Your co-stars, <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>>, are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
+	'As they continue arguing, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close-up shots of your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
 
 	act 'Warmup':
 		*clr & cla
 
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually reach an agreement and gather around you. You starting sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. The other two get creative - one of them sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
+		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually agree and gather around you. You start sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. The other two get creative - one sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', -20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -892,7 +892,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 
 				if rand(0,5) > 0:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbath<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-					'<<$pactor[1]>> is fucking you when he suddenly groans and pulls out, coating your labia with his load of cum. You look up at him seductively while biting your lip, a look of satisifed pleasure on his face.'
+					'<<$pactor[1]>> is fucking you when he suddenly groans and pulls out, coating your labia with his load of cum. You look up at him seductively while biting your lip, a look of satisfied pleasure on his face.'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'labia', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 40
 				else
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbathm<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4" width="500"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbath<<rand(1,4)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
@@ -917,7 +917,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 				'When he is done, he is replaced by <<$pactor[2]>>, who quickly penetrates you and starts thrusting.'
 				if rand(0,5) > 0:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbath4.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-					'Reaching climax, <<$pactor[2]>> groans and pulls out, aiming his dick at your tits. He jerks his dick and you look down to see hot cum splatter over your tits. You giggle and smile as you squeeze your cum covered tits in your hands.'
+					'Reaching climax, <<$pactor[2]>> groans and pulls out, aiming his dick at your tits. He jerks his dick, and you look down to see hot cum splatter over your tits. You giggle and smile as you squeeze your cum covered tits in your hands.'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'breasts', $pactorID[2], 1, 0, 10000, 40
 				else
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbath4.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
@@ -932,7 +932,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 					orgasmbonus += 10
 					pornorg = 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-					'You are playing with your tits as <<$pactor[2]>> fucks you. You pinch your nipple just as he pulls out and have an explosive orgasm as he coats your writhing body with his cum.'
+					'You are playing with your tits as Sergei Tatarov fucks you. You pinch your nipple as he pulls out and has an explosive orgasm as he coats your writhing body with his cum.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 					gs 'stat'
 				end
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'face', $pactorID[3], 1, 0, 10000, 20
 				else
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbathm<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4" width="500"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbath2.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-					'<<$pactor[3]>> is pounding you hard. He reaches climax rather quickly, but doesn''t pull out fast enough. His first shot of cum shoots straight into your open pussy, and the rest splatters over your already covered labia.'
+					'<<$pactor[3]>> is pounding you hard. He reaches climax rather quickly but doesn''t pull out fast enough. His first shot of cum shoots straight into your open pussy, and the rest splatters over your already-covered labia.'
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', '', $pactorID[3], 1, 0, 10000, 10
 					gs 'cum_call', 'labia', $pactorID[3], 1, 0, 10000, 15
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $pactorID[4], 1, 0, 10000, 40
 				else
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbathm<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4" width="500"></video><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumbath3.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-					'<<$pactor[4]>> fucks you for only a few minutes before he pulls out, but messes up when his first shot of cum shoots straight into your open pussy. He quickly corrects his aim, and the rest splatter across your stomach.'
+					'<<$pactor[4]>> fucks you for a few minutes before he pulls out but messes up when his first shot of cum shoots straight into your open pussy. He quickly corrects his aim, and the rest splatter across your stomach.'
 					cumnostd = 1
 					gs 'cum_call', '', $pactorID[4], 1, 0, 10000, 10
 					gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $pactorID[4], 1, 0, 10000, 30
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 					orgasmbonus += 10
 					pornorg = 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-					'The four guys fucking has aroused you greatly. You end up having an explosive orgasm as he coats your writhing body with his load.'
+					'The four guys fucking has aroused you incredibly. You end up having an explosive orgasm as he coats your writhing body with his load.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				end
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -992,7 +992,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '10':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'The men finished, you lie on the bed and teasingly play with your cum covered body for a few seconds, the camera getting few close ups of you before you sit up and use your fingers to scoop some cum off your tits, making a seductive show of sucking your fingers clean and smiling at the camera. The director is pleased and ends the shoot.'
+				'The men finish, and you lie on the bed teasingly, playing with your cum covered body for a few seconds. The camera gets a few close-ups of you before you sit up and use your fingers to scoop some cum off your tits. You make a seductive show of sucking your fingers clean and smiling at the camera. Finally, the director is pleased and ends the shoot.'
 
 				act 'Take a shower': gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
 			end
@@ -1014,14 +1014,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'Your co-stars <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
-	'As they continue arguing with each other, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close up shots of both your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'Your co-stars <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>>, are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
+	'As they continue arguing, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close-up shots of your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
 
 	act 'Warmup':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually reach an agreement and gather around you. You starting sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. The other two get creative - one of them sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
+		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually agree and gather around you. You start sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. The other two get creative - one sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', -20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -1059,8 +1059,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 							*clr & cla
 							if orgasm_buildup < 300 - pcs_inhib: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porncp4some.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-							'You lie on your back, spread your legs and smile at the guys, talking dirty and inviting them to cum in you. They gather round and take turns fucking you, making you moan as you feel each load of cum pump deep inside you. The cum from the first two guys start to leak from you and pool below you as the last guy fucks you fast and hard.'
-							'Since you are already on edge, this pushes you over and you cum around his dick, milking it even more. This pleases the director greatly. As soon as the guys are finished, the camera comes for a close up as a stream of cum runs from your pussy. It then pans up to you and you give it a wink and kiss.'
+							'You lie on your back, spread your legs and smile at the guys, talking dirty and inviting them to cum inside you. They gather around and take turns fucking you, making you moan as you feel each load of cum pump deep inside you. The cum from the first two guys starts to leak from you and pool below you as the last guy fucks you fast and hard.'
+							'Since you are already on edge, this pushes you over, and you cum around his dick, milking it even more. This pleases the director greatly. As soon as the guys are finished, the camera comes for a close-up as a stream of cum runs from your pussy. It then pans up to you, and you give it a wink and kiss.'
 							orgasmbonus += 10
 							porngasm += 1
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -1083,8 +1083,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '11':
 					act 'No orgasm':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porncp4some.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-						'You lie on your back, spread your legs and smile at the guys, talking dirty and inviting them to cum in you. They gather round and take turns fucking you, making you moan as you feel each load of cum pump deep inside you. The cum from the first two guys start to leak from you and pool below you as the last guy fucks you fast and hard.'
-						'As soon as the guys are finished, the camera comes for a close up as a stream of cum runs from your pussy. It then pans up to you and you give it a wink and kiss.'
+						'You lie on your back, spread your legs and smile at the guys, talking dirty and inviting them to cum inside you. They gather around and take turns fucking you, making you moan as you feel each load of cum pump deep inside you. The cum from the first two guys starts to leak from you and pool below you as the last guy fucks you fast and hard.'
+						'As soon as the guys are finished, the camera comes for a close-up as a stream of cum runs from your pussy. It then pans up to you, and you give it a wink and kiss.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish':
@@ -1115,14 +1115,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'Your co-stars <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
-	'As they continue arguing with each other, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close up shots of both your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'Your co-stars, <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>>, are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
+	'As they continue arguing, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close-up shots of your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
 
 	act 'Warmup':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually reach an agreement and gather around you. You starting sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. The other two get creative - one of them sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
+		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually agree and gather around you. Next, you start sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. Then, the other two get creative - one sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', -20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -1160,7 +1160,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 							if orgasm_buildup < 300 - pcs_inhib: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/anal4some.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 							'You lower your head onto the pillows while pushing your ass in the air and spreading your cheeks to give the guys easy access to your hole. You feel a dick slide into your asshole and start fucking you hard for a few seconds before stopping. You then feel it push deep into your ass and pump a considerable amount of warm cum into your bowels.'
-							'Since you are already on edge, this pushes you over and you moan into the pillow as your legs buckle in orgasm. The director seems extremely pleased with this. The guy pulls out and you immediately feel another dick replace him, pushing deep into your ass before it starts thrusting. The other guys take their turns cumming in your ass, and by the time they''re done, you can feel a considerable amount of cum pooled inside you.'
+							'Since you are already on edge, this pushes you over, and you moan into the pillow as your legs buckle in orgasm. The director seems exceptionally pleased with this. The guy pulls out, and you immediately feel another dick replace him, pushing deep into your ass before it starts thrusting. The other guys take their turns cumming in your ass, and you can feel a considerable amount of cum pooled inside you when they''re done.'
 							orgasmbonus += 10
 							porngasm += 1
 							$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/anal4some.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 						'You lower your head onto the pillows while pushing your ass in the air and spreading your cheeks to give the guys easy access to your hole. You feel a dick slide into your asshole and start fucking you hard for a few seconds before stopping. You then feel it push deep into your ass and pump a considerable amount of warm cum into your bowels.' 
-						'The guy pulls out and you immediately feel another dick replace him, pushing deep into your ass before it starts thrusting. The other guys take their turns cumming in your ass, and by the time they''re done, you can feel a considerable amount of cum pooled inside you.'
+						'The guy pulls out, and you immediately feel another dick replace him, pushing deep into your ass before it starts thrusting. Then, the other guys take turns cumming in your ass, and you can feel a considerable amount of cum pooled inside you when they''re done.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1215,14 +1215,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'Your co-stars <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
-	'As they continue arguing with each other, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close up shots of both your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'Your co-stars, <<$pactor[1]>>, <<$pactor[2]>>, <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>>, are watching porn while loudly discussing who gets to do what first.'
+	'As they continue arguing, you do a striptease for the camera, allowing it to get close-up shots of your holes as you talk dirty, teasing the viewers.'
 
 	act 'Warmup':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/warmupgang.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually reach an agreement and gather around you. You starting sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. The other two get creative - one of them sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
+		'Under pressure from the director, the men eventually agree and gather around you. Next, you start sucking one guy''s dick while giving a handjob to another. Then, the other two get creative - one sucks your tits while the other licks your pussy. The guys switch places once in a while, and soon the director indicates to change the scene.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', -20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
@@ -1240,7 +1240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 
 			if orgasm_buildup < 200 - pcs_inhib:
 			    '<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactor[1]>> lies down on the bed and you slide down onto his dick, moaning as it stretches your pussy. <<$pactor[2]>> steps behind you and pushes his dick inside of your already occupied vagina, and the two guys start to fuck you in tandem. When the director signals, the two guys start fucking you more forcefully, and thanks to their timing, they cum inside you at the same time.'
+				'<<$pactor[1]>> lies on the bed, and you slide down onto his dick, moaning as it stretches your pussy. <<$pactor[2]>> steps behind you and pushes his dick inside your already-occupied vagina. The two guys start to fuck you in tandem. When the director signals, the two guys start fucking you more forcefully, and thanks to their timing, they cum inside you at the same time.'
 				'You talk dirty to them and fake an orgasm while you wait for them to finish unloading inside you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1248,8 +1248,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 				orgasmbonus += 10
 				porngasm += 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactor[1]>> lies down on the bed and you slide down onto his dick, moaning as it stretches your pussy. <<$pactor[2]>> steps behind you and pushes his dick inside of your already occupied vagina, and the two guys start to fuck you in tandem. When the director signals, the two guys start fucking you more forcefully, and thanks to their timing, they cum inside you at the same time.'
-				'Thnaks to the two dicks stretching your pussy and fucking you hard, you also cum, crying out in pleasure as your pussy contracts around them while they unload inside you.'
+				'<<$pactor[1]>> lies on the bed, and you slide down onto his dick, moaning as it stretches your pussy. Then, <<$pactor[2]>> steps behind you and pushes his dick inside your already-occupied vagina. Next, the two guys start to fuck you in tandem. When the director signals, the two guys start fucking you more forcefully, and thanks to their timing, they cum inside you at the same time.'
+				'Thanks to the two dicks stretching your pussy and fucking you hard, you also cum, crying out in pleasure as your pussy contracts around them while they unload inside you.'
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1267,7 +1267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13':
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 25, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/doublean<<rand(1,4)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-                'Cum leaks from your pussy as <<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> pull out and let <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> replace them. You give them both a quick blowjob before <<$pactor[3]>> lies on the bed and pulls you on top of him, sliding his cock into your ass. <<$pactor[4]>> moves in behind and inserts his dick into your already stretched hole. Despite the tightness, the guys quickly find a rhythm.'
+                'Cum leaks from your pussy as <<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> pull out and let <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> replace them. You give them a quick blowjob before <<$pactor[3]>> lies on the bed and pulls you on top of him, sliding his cock into your ass. <<$pactor[4]>> moves in behind and inserts his dick into your already stretched hole. Despite the tightness, the guys quickly find a rhythm.'
 				
 				if orgasm_buildup => 200 - pcs_inhib:
 					if orgasm_buildup < 300 - pcs_inhib: gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'hard'
@@ -1302,7 +1302,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '13a':
 	act 'Fake orgasm':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
-		'Cum leaks from your pussy as <<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> pull out and let <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> replace them. You give them both a quick blowjob before <<$pactor[3]>> lies on the bed and pulls you on top of him, sliding his cock into your ass. <<$pactor[4]>> moves in behind and inserts his dick into your already stretched hole. Despite the tightness, the guys quickly find a rhythm.'
+		'Cum leaks from your pussy as <<$pactor[1]>> and <<$pactor[2]>> pull out and let <<$pactor[3]>> and <<$pactor[4]>> replace them. You give them a quick blowjob before <<$pactor[3]>> lies on the bed and pulls you on top of him, sliding his cock into your ass. <<$pactor[4]>> moves in behind and inserts his dick into your already stretched hole. Despite the tightness, the guys quickly find a rhythm.'
 		'You talk dirty to them while they fuck your ass and fake an orgasm when they cum inside you.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1324,8 +1324,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 	$orgasm_or = 'no'
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'There are fifty guys standing around. They are your fans, and they have come just for the chance to fuck you. They are all nervously talking, and watching your previous works on screens.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'Fifty guys are standing around. They are your fans and have come just for the chance to fuck you. They are all nervously talking and watching your previous works on screens.'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/touching.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
 	'You lie down on the stage and let them touch you to get them into the mood.'
 
@@ -1483,7 +1483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '14':
 		killvar '$orgasm_or'
 		*clr
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/fuckfifty<<rand(0,5)>>.mp4" width="500"></video></center>'
-		'Your fans gather around and start to fuck you with great enthusiasm, but little technique. The gangbang lasts for hours and you are plastered in cum by the time they are finished.'
+		'Your fans gather around and start to fuck you with great enthusiasm but little technique. The gangbang lasts for hours, and you are plastered in cum by the time they are finished.'
 
 		if gangOrg > 0: 'During the shoot you managed to ' + iif(gangOrg = 1, 'have one orgasm.', 'orgasm <<gangOrg>> times.')
 		orgasmbonus += gangOrg*10
@@ -1508,14 +1508,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He is standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		pornbj += 1
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/bj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The scene starts with you giving a camera a striptease and bending over to give it a close up view of your asshole. You then finger your ass and use a dildo to fuck yourself before <<$pactor[1]>> walks over.'
+		'The scene starts with you giving a camera a striptease and bending over to provide a close-up view of your asshole. You then finger your ass and use a dildo to fuck yourself before <<$pactor[1]>> walks over.'
 		'You crawl up to him with a seductive gaze, take his cock in your mouth and begin sucking it.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 30, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -1525,7 +1525,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/deep.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'<<$pactor[1]>> grabs your hair in his fists and begins to fuck your mouth, driving his cock down your throat with every thrust.'
-			'After a few minutes of this, he takes his cock out and you wipe the saliva from your mouth.'
+			'After a few minutes, he takes his cock out, and you wipe the saliva from your mouth.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1533,7 +1533,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 			act 'Penetration':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/analinsert.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactor[1]>> sits on the bed and you turn around, presenting your ass to him. He slaps and squeezes your ass a few times before you start grinding his cock between your ass cheeks, your saliva coating your asshole. <<$pactor[1]>> then guides his cock to your now wet hole and slowly penetrates you, both of you groaning as he slides inside you.'
+				'<<$pactor[1]>> sits on the bed, and you turn around, presenting your ass to him. He slaps and squeezes your ass a few times before you start grinding his cock between your ass cheeks, your saliva coating your asshole. <<$pactor[1]>> then guides his cock to your now wet hole and slowly penetrates you, both of you groaning as he slides inside you.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1542,8 +1542,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_ass += 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/sex2.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'<<$pactor[1]>> enjoys the tightness as you ride his dick hard, occasionally sliding it out to show both <<$pactor[1]>> and the camera your stretched hole. This continues for a while before it starts hurting and you pull out to suck his dick for a few minutes to let your ass recover.'
-					'You then get on all fours and <<$pactor[1]>> slides back inside you and resumes fucking your ass. You get ass fucked in a variety of positions, with breaks being called to let you rest or to let <<$pactor[1]>> get hard again.'
+					'<<$pactor[1]>> enjoys the tightness as you ride his dick, occasionally sliding it out to show both <<$pactor[1]>> and the camera your stretched hole. This continues for a while before it starts hurting, and you pull out to suck his dick for a few minutes to let your ass recover.'
+					'You then get on all fours, and <<$pactor[1]>> slides back inside you and resumes fucking your ass. You get ass fucked in various positions, with breaks being called to let you rest or <<$pactor[1]>> get hard again.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1579,8 +1579,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15a':
 
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porncpanal.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 		'You have returned to riding <<$pactor[1]>>''s dick when you feel him starting to twitch inside you. It''s too early for him to finish, so he lifts you off of him, but not fast enough. You feel spurts of warm cum plastering your ass cheek.'
-		'The director cuts and motions for an assistant to come and clean you up. As she wipes the cum from your ass, you hear the director tell <<$pactor[1]>> that there isn''t enough time left to wait for him to get hard again, so makes the decison to take his place and make it a POV shot to hide his face.'
-		'The assistant finishes cleaning you as the director undresses and sits on the bed. You straddle him, slide down onto his awaiting dick and start riding him as he takes the camera in his hand and resumes filming. After a few minutes, you feel him unload deep inside your ass. You pull yourself off of him and bend over on all fours as he moves in behind you with the camera. Your ass lets out a loud squelch as you squeeze the cum from your well fucked asshole.' 
+		'The director cuts and motions for an assistant to come and clean you up. As she wipes the cum from your ass, you hear the director tell <<$pactor[1]>>  that there isn''t enough time left to wait for him to get hard again, so he decides to take his place and make it a POV shot to hide his face.'
+		'The assistant finishes cleaning you as the director undresses and sits on the bed. You straddle him, slide down onto his awaiting dick and start riding him as he takes the camera in his hand and resumes filming. After a few minutes, you feel him unload deep inside your ass. You pull yourself off him and bend over on all fours as he moves in behind you with the camera. Your ass lets out a loud squelch as you squeeze the cum from your well fucked asshole.' 
 		'The director seems satisfied with the scene and ends the shoot.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1600,7 +1600,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15b':
 
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porncpanal.mp4" width="400"></video></center>'
 	'You have returned to riding his dick and are really getting into it. You soon reach your orgasm and let out a pleasured scream as your ass tightens around <<$pactor[1]>>, which also sends him over the edge. You feel your bowels being flooded with warm cum.'
-	'You climb off of <<$pactor[1]>> and bend over on all fours as the camera moves in behind you. Your well fucked hole lets out a loud squelch as you squeeze the cum from your ass.'
+	'You climb off <<$pactor[1]>> and bend over on all fours as the camera moves in behind you. Your well fucked hole lets out a loud squelch as you squeeze the cum from your ass.'
 	'The director seems satisfied with the scene and ends the shoot.'
 	$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -1621,13 +1621,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactor[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. He is standing to the side, slowly stroking his dick.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/hj.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The scene starts with you giving a camera a striptease and getting on all fours on a sofa to give it a close up view of your asshole. You then finger your ass before <<$pactor[1]>> walks over.'
+		'The scene starts with you giving a camera a striptease and getting on all fours on a sofa to provide it with a close-up view of your asshole. You then finger your ass before <<$pactor[1]>> walks over.'
         '<<$pactor[1]>> sits on the sofa next to you. You kneel beside him, take his dick in your hand and start jerking it while making out with him.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 30, 'exhibitionism'
@@ -1644,7 +1644,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 			act 'Rimjob':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/rimming.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, you get up and seductively walk over to a nearby table. You lie down on the table and spread your ass for <<$pactor[1]>>, who walks over and begins to rim you, expertly flicking his tongue over your hole.'
+				'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, you get up and seductively walk to a nearby table. You lie down on the table and spread your ass for <<$pactor[1]>>, who walks over and begins to rim you, expertly flicking his tongue over your hole.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1653,8 +1653,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 					*clr & cla
 					pcs_ass += 1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/sexanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Your asshole now wet and ready, <<$pactor[1]>> fingers your hole before standing and inserting his dick inside. He begins to fuck you hard, occasionally pulling out to show your gaping hole to the camera.'
-                    'You get ass fucked in various poses both on and next to the table with a number of breaks in filming to let you rest or let him get hard again. You eventually return to the pose on the table you started with.'
+					'Your asshole is now wet and ready. <<$pactor[1]>> fingers your hole before standing and inserting his dick inside. He begins to fuck you hard, occasionally pulling out to show your gaping hole to the camera.'
+                    'You get ass fucked in various poses on and next to the table, with several breaks in filming to let you rest or let him get hard again. You eventually return to the pose on the table you started with.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1665,7 +1665,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 						gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 40
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/cumanal.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'<<$pactor[1]>> starts fucking your ass fast and hard as you talk dirty to him and the camera. He starts panting, and just as he is about to cum, he pulls out and shoots his load over your ass.'
+						'<<$pactor[1]>> starts fucking your ass fast and hard as you talk dirty to him and the camera. Finally, he starts panting, and just as he is about to cum, he pulls out and shoots his load over your ass.'
 
 						act 'Clean his cock':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -1695,7 +1695,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactress[1]>> is your co-star for this shoot. She is sitting to the side, fondling her breasts while watching porn on a monitor.'
 
 	act 'Start':
@@ -1717,7 +1717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 			act 'Your turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'After pleasing her for a while, you withdraw your tongue from her crotch as she quickly pulls you down onto your back. She lifts your legs and practically rips your panties off, tossing them aside. She wastes no time and buries her face right into your pussy, teasing your engorged clit as she vigorously eats you out, her tongue lapping up the juices that run from your pussy.'
+				'After pleasing her for a while, you withdraw your tongue from her crotch as she quickly pulls you down onto your back. She lifts your legs and practically rips your panties, tossing them aside. She wastes no time and buries her face right into your pussy, teasing your engorged clit as she vigorously eats you out, her tongue lapping up the juices that run from your pussy.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1725,7 +1725,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 				act 'Tribbing':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo3.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Satisfied with pleasing you with her tongue, <<$pactress[1]>> straddles you and holds your leg to one side as she brings her pussy down to meet your own. You let out a pleasured moan as your clits make contact. She then begins rocking her hips back and forth and you both enjoy the sensation as your wet labia makes it easy for her to slide herself across you.'
+					'Satisfied with pleasing you with her tongue, <<$pactress[1]>> straddles you and holds your leg to one side as she brings her pussy down to meet your own. You let out a pleasured moan as your clits make contact. She then begins rocking her hips back and forth, and you both enjoy the sensation as your wet labia makes it easy for her to slide across you.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'tribbing', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1733,7 +1733,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 					act 'Double dildo':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo4.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'<<$pactress[1]>> stops her movements and reaches over to grab a sizeable doubled headed dildo. She sucks on one end and slides it into your pussy. The toy buried firmly in your hole, she slides herself down onto the other end. She then starts to ride the dildo, her movements pushing it deeper into your pussy.'
+						'<<$pactress[1]>> stops her movements and reaches over to grab a sizeable, doubled-headed dildo. She sucks on one end and slides it into your pussy. The toy is buried firmly in your hole, and she slides down onto the other end. She then starts to ride the dildo, her movements pushing it deeper into your pussy.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1742,7 +1742,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '17':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/porgasm.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'<<$pactress[1]>> reaches her climax as she slams down on the dildo, sending it deep into her pussy. Her body is overwhelmed in pleasure as her juices run down the shaft of the dildo and onto your pussy. She withdraws the dildo from her pussy and pulls it out of you. You both suck the ends of it clean.'
+							'<<$pactress[1]>> reaches her climax as she slams down on the dildo, sending it deep into her pussy. Her body is pleased as her juices run down the shaft of the dildo and onto your pussy. Finally, she withdraws the dildo from her pussy and pulls it out of you. You both suck the ends of it clean.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1764,7 +1764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 	minut += 180
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
 	'<<$pactress[1]>>, your co-star for this shoot, is sitting to the side, fondling her breasts while watching porn on a monitor.'
 
 	act 'Start':
@@ -1786,7 +1786,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 			act 'Your turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'After pleasing her for a while, you withdraw your tongue from her crotch as she quickly pulls you down onto your back. She lifts your legs and practically rips your panties off, tossing them aside. She wastes no time and buries her face right into your pussy, teasing your engorged clit as she vigorously eats you out, her tongue lapping up the juices that run from your pussy.'
+				'After pleasing her for a while, you withdraw your tongue from her crotch as she quickly pulls you down onto your back. Next, she lifts your legs and practically rips your panties, tossing them aside. Then, she wastes no time and buries her face right into your pussy, teasing your engorged clit as she vigorously eats you out, her tongue lapping up the juices that run from your pussy.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1794,7 +1794,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 				act 'Get fucked':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo5.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You are lying on the bed as <<$pactress[1]>> moves off to the side and slips on a strapon dildo. She moves over to you as you slide down, take the plastic cock in your mouth and give her a blowjob. She pushes you down onto the bed and climbs on top of you. She slides inside your pussy and begins to fuck you hard.'
+					'You are lying on the bed as Katrina Valentine moves off to the side and slips on a strap-on dildo. She moves over to you as you slide down, take the plastic cock in your mouth and give her a blowjob. Next, she pushes you down onto the bed and climbs on top of you. She slides inside your pussy and begins to fuck you hard.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1802,7 +1802,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 					act 'Her turn':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo6.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'After the vigorous pounding, <<$pactress[1]>> pulls out, slides the strapon off and gets on all fours as you stand and strap yourself in. She is on her knees before you begging you to fuck her ass and you are eager to comply. The plastic cock is coated in your juices and this makes it easy to push yourself into her awaiting hole. You begin to fuck her ass as she begs you to go harder.'
+						'After the vigorous pounding, <<$pactress[1]>> pulls out, slides the strapon off and gets on all fours as you stand and strap yourself in. She is on her knees before you begging you to fuck her ass, and you are eager to comply. The plastic cock is coated in your juices, making it easy to push yourself into her awaiting hole. You begin to fuck her ass as she begs you to go harder.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 15, 'exhibitionism'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -1811,7 +1811,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '18':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/lesbo7.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'The relentless ass fucking you give <<$pactress[1]>> is enough to bring her to orgasm. Her juices spray from her twitching pussy as her ass tightens around your fake cock. You pull out of her and the camera comes in for a shot of her stretched hole. The scene ends with you locking tongues with <<$pactress[1]>> '
+							'The relentless ass fucking you give <<$pactress[1]>> is enough to bring her to orgasm. Her juices spray from her twitching pussy as her ass tightens around your fake cock. You pull out of her, and the camera comes in for a shot of her stretched hole. The scene ends with you locking tongues with <<$pactress[1]>> '
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 
@@ -1838,18 +1838,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '19':
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'<<$pactor[1]>> is watching porn on a monitor, getting himself ready while <<$pactress[1]>> is having her make up touched up.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'<<$pactor[1]>> watches porn on a monitor, getting himself ready while <<$pactress[1]>> has her make-up touched up.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff0.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The camera starts rolling and comes for a close up of you and <<$pactress[1]>>. As it does, she grabs your ass and gives it a jiggle for the camera. <<$pactor[1]>> moves into the scene and you both kneel before him.'
+		'The camera starts rolling and comes for a close-up of you and <<$pactress[1]>>. As it does, she grabs your ass and gives it a jiggle for the camera. Then, <<$pactor[1]>> moves into the scene, and you both kneel before him.'
 
 		act 'Suck':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You take <<$pactor[1]>>''s cock into your mouth and begin sucking on his tip as <<$pactress[1]>> runs her tongue along his shaft. You then take him deeper into your throat as <<$pactress[1]>> playfully sucks on his balls.'
+			'You take <<$pactor[1]>>''s cock into your mouth and begin sucking on his tip as <<$pactress[1]>>t runs her tongue along his shaft. You then take him deeper into your throat as <<$pactress[1]>> playfully sucks on his balls.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '19':
 				*clr & cla
 				pcs_vag += 1
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'<<$pactress[1]>> remains on her knees as you move up and guide <<$pactor[1]>>''s cock into your pussy. You start riding him as <<$pactress[1]>> buries her face in your pussy and quickly starts flicking her tongue over your clit, waves of pleasure overwhelming you.'
+				'<<$pactress[1]>> remains on her knees as you move up and guide <<$pactor[1]>>''s cock into your pussy. You start riding him as <<$pactress[1]>>  buries her face in your pussy and quickly starts flicking her tongue over your clit, waves of pleasure overwhelming you.'
 
 				!! Precum pregnancy check
 				cumnostd = 1
@@ -1882,7 +1882,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '19':
 					act 'Creampie':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff4.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You eventually feel <<$pactor[1]>> starting to twitch and feel a sudden warmth flood your ass. He pulls out and a stream of cum soon follows, running down your pussy and into <<$pactress[1]>>''s awaiting mouth.'
+						'You eventually feel <<$pactor[1]>> starting to twitch and feel a sudden warmth flood your ass. Then, finally, he pulls out, and a stream of cum soon follows, running down your pussy and into <<$pactress[1]>>''s awaiting mouth.'
 
 						cumnostd = 1
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 20
@@ -1895,7 +1895,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '19':
 							minut += 5
 							pornswall += 1
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff5.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'You quickly climb off <<$pactress[1]>> and kneel before her as she opens her mouth and <<$pactor[1]>>''s load drools from her tongue and into your mouth. You show the camera your cum filled mouth before swallowing the cum and finishing the scene making out with <<$pactress[1]>>'
+							'You quickly climb off <<$pactress[1]>> and kneel before her as she opens her mouth, and <<$pactor[1]>>''s load drools from her tongue and into your mouth. You show the camera your cum filled mouth before swallowing the cum and finishing the scene making out with <<$pactress[1]>>'
 							cumnostd = 1
 							gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 20
 							act 'Take a shower': gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
@@ -1918,18 +1918,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '20':
 	gang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing the set for the shoot.'
-	'<<$pactor[1]>> is watching porn on a monitor, getting himself ready while <<$pactress[1]>> is having her make up touched up.'
+	'The set is already bustling with assistants preparing for the shoot.'
+	'<<$pactor[1]>> is watching porn on a monitor, getting himself ready, while <<$pactress[1]>> is having her make-up touched up.'
 
 	act 'Undress and start':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff0.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'The camera starts rolling and comes for a close up of you and <<$pactress[1]>>. As it does, you grab her ass and give it a jiggle for the camera. <<$pactor[1]>> moves into the scene and you both kneel before him.'
+		'The camera starts rolling and comes for a close-up of you and <<$pactress[1]>>. You grab her ass and give it a jiggle for the camera as it does. Then, <<$pactor[1]>> moves into the scene, and you both kneel before him.'
 
 		act 'Suck':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'<<$pactress[1]>> wastes no time and takes <<$pactor[1]>>''s cock right down her throat as you get down low and suck his balls.'
+			'<<$pactress[1]>> wastes no time and takes <<$pactor[1]>>''s cock down her throat as you get down low and suck his balls.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1937,7 +1937,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '20':
 			act 'Fuck':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You remain on your knees as <<$pactress[1]>> straddles <<$pactor[1]>>, slides down onto his cock and starts riding him. You take your place and bury your face into her pussy, running your tongue over her clit as she takes <<$pactor[1]>> deep inside her. She shrieks in pleasure and you''re sure that she orgasms at least once.'
+				'You remain on your knees as <<$pactress[1]>> straddles <<$pactor[1]>>, slides down onto his cock and starts riding him. Then, you take your place and bury your face into her pussy, running your tongue over her clit as she takes <<$pactor[1]>> deep inside her. She shrieks in pleasure, and you''re sure she orgasms at least once.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1945,7 +1945,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '20':
 				act 'Anal':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff3.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You lie down on the bed, <<$pactress[1]>> straddling you, her glistening pussy begging for you to please it. <<$pactor[1]>> moves in behind and inserts himself into her ass and starts to pound her, <<$pactress[1]>> begging him to go harder. You start flicking your tongue over <<$pactress[1]>>''s now massively engorged clit.'
+					'You lie down on the bed, <<$pactress[1]>> straddling you, her glistening pussy begging you to please it. <<$pactor[1]>> moves in behind, inserts himself into her ass, and starts to pound her, <<$pactress[1]>> begging him to go harder. You start flicking your tongue over <<$pactress[1]>>''s now massively engorged clit.'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 15, 'exhibitionism', 'group'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1953,7 +1953,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '20':
 					act 'Creampie':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff4.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You pull your face out of <<$pactress[1]>>''s crotch in time to see <<$pactor[1]>>''s balls twitching as he unloads inside her ass. At the same time, you see her pussy convulsing and she screams in pleasure as they reach orgasm together. You open your mouth as he pulls out of her, and a stream of cum runs from her hole down onto your tongue.'
+						'You pull your face out of <<$pactress[1]>>''s crotch in time to see <<$pactor[1]>>''s balls twitching as he unloads inside her ass. At the same time, you see her pussy convulsing, and she screams in pleasure as they reach orgasm together. You open your mouth as he pulls out of her, and a stream of cum runs from her hole down onto your tongue.'
 
 						cumnostd = 1
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $pactorID[1], 1, 0, 10000, 30
@@ -1964,7 +1964,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '20':
 							*clr & cla
 							minut += 5
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff5.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'<<$pactress[1]>> climbs off and kneels in front of you as you open your mouth and allow <<$pactor[1]>>''s load to drool from your tongue and into her mouth. She then shows her cum filled mouth to the camera and makes a rather perverted show of swallowing it. The scene ends with the two of you making out.'
+							'<<$pactress[1]>> climbs off and kneels in front of you as you open your mouth and allow <<$pactor[1]>>''s load to drool from your tongue and into her mouth. She then shows her cum filled mouth to the camera and makes a somewhat perverted show of swallowing it. The scene ends with the two of you making out.'
 							act 'Take a shower': gt 'pornstudio', 'shower'
 						end
 					end