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Fix some more typos in Anna's arc

HotMike 1 年之前
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      locations/hotel_anna.qsrc

+ 11 - 11
locations/hotel_anna.qsrc

@@ -753,7 +753,7 @@ if ARGS[0] = 7:
 	!				minut += 61
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/session_start0a.jpg"></center>'
-					'<font color = blue> "Understandable. Well in that case we can only talk about how things are going in the world..." </font> Both you and Anna spend an hour speaking of various thing, sometimes the arguments drop on the BDSM but mostly it''s unrelated to it... . It seems that Anna couldn''t teach you nothing more without practice... . At the end she lead you to the exit letting you know she''s avaible for further experimentation... <font color = blue> "...and...if you want to return on our steps...feel free to pass anytime."</font> Then she give you two great kisses on your cheeck and you go on your own way...'
+					'<font color = blue> "Understandable. Well in that case we can only talk about how things are going in the world..." </font> Both you and Anna spend an hour speaking of various thing, sometimes the arguments drop on the BDSM but mostly it''s unrelated to it... . It seems that Anna couldn''t teach you nothing more without practice... . At the end she leads you to the exit letting you know she''s avaible for further experimentation... <font color = blue> "...and...if you want to return on our steps...feel free to pass anytime."</font> Then she give you two great kisses on your cheeck and you go on your own way...'
 					act'Thanks Anna, see you...': gt'pav_hotel'
 				end
 			end
@@ -796,20 +796,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anna_sub_session':
 	BDSM_Knowledge += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub0.jpg"></center>'
 	!if storyline
-	'You both go to change your dress; Anna require you to wear like a school girl... . She gave you a uniform with a short skirt, but you saw someting more daring for sure; it shouldn''t be a problem afterall. <font color = blue> "...Uhhmff!...Sometimes i feel that i could use the lingerie to restrict!"</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...Do you need any help?"</font><font color = blue> "...No thanks my dear....Ngghh!...Ahhh...there we are. Mmmm...i should speak with the Pav G&M owner... . Anyway you could feel that today will be less than what you could expect, or even what you saw or done since today; that''s because i want you to pass through an entire session from the beginning to the end, and i don''t want any rush; we''ll see what to do as we proceed. That said: are you ready? We''ll start collaring you..."</font>'
+	'You both go to change your dress; Anna requires you to wear like a school girl... . She gave you a uniform with a short skirt, but you saw someting more daring for sure; it shouldn''t be a problem afterall. <font color = blue> "...Uhhmff!...Sometimes i feel that i could use the lingerie to restrict!"</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...Do you need any help?"</font><font color = blue> "...No thanks my dear....Ngghh!...Ahhh...there we are. Mmmm...i should speak with the Pav G&M owner... . Anyway you could feel that today will be less than what you could expect, or even what you saw or done since today; that''s because i want you to pass through an entire session from the beginning to the end, and i don''t want any rush; we''ll see what to do as we proceed. That said: are you ready? We''ll start collaring you..."</font>'
 
 	act'...': 
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You are a bit reluctantly to have a collar on your neck; but it''s part of the session and you shouldn''t come back...<font color = blue> "A little scared? Do not worry, i cannot hurt those puppy eyes...hehehe. Also, remember that there''s no real meaning if you don''t look for it."</font> Anna goes behind your back and wrap the collar on you. '
+		'You are a bit reluctantly to have a collar on your neck; but it''s part of the session and you shouldn''t come back...<font color = blue> "A little scared? Do not worry, I cannot hurt those puppy eyes...hehehe. Also, remember that there''s no real meaning if you don''t look for it."</font> Anna goes behind your back and wrap the collar on you. '
 		act'...': gt'hotel_anna','Anna_sub_session1'
 	end
 	act'Offer your neck...': 
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub1a.jpg"></center>'
-		'<font color = blue> "Good girl, i see you enter the role. Of course it stay within the session, it has no real meaning if you aren''t looking for it."</font> You offer an easy access to your neck.'
+		'<font color = blue> "Good girl, I see you enter the role. Of course it stays within the session, it has no real meaning if you aren''t looking for it."</font> You offer an easy access to your neck.'
 		act'...': gt'hotel_anna','Anna_sub_session1'
 	end
 end
@@ -818,13 +818,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anna_sub_session1':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub2.jpg"></center>'
-	'<font color = blue> "Collaring is a great sign of obedience; today we''ll speak a little about obedience, and we''ll pass to practical mainly, if you are willing of course. I don''t have to remember that nothing has a meaning if you don''t want."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"O-ok.."</font><br><font color = blue>"...Anyway, i want you to not being worried about not accomplished some task. Depending on yourself you could find something too much degrading, and i have no reason to let you feel some discomfort. "</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"T-thanks...i think..."</font><br><font color = blue>"...Expecially, showing obedience, that if you accept within a BDSM relationship, has a deep meaning. And we''ll start with that. Now: do you have something in mind that you could use to show me your obedience?"</font>'
+	'<font color = blue> "Collaring is a great sign of obedience; today we''ll speak a little about obedience, and we''ll pass to practical mainly, if you are willing of course. I don''t have to remember that nothing has a meaning if you don''t want."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"O-ok.."</font><br><font color = blue>"...Anyway, I want you to not being worried about not accomplished some task. Depending on yourself you could find something too much degrading, and I have no reason to let you feel some discomfort. "</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"T-thanks...I think..."</font><br><font color = blue>"...Expecially, showing obedience, that if you accept within a BDSM relationship, has a deep meaning. And we''ll start with that. Now: do you have something in mind that you could use to show me your obedience?"</font>'
 	act'Refuse...': 
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		Anna_see_asub -= 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You shake your head... . <font color = blue>"...Ok. For example you could lower your body and kiss my feet. Feet have a great meaning too; subs put their life under the Dominant''s feet. You can clearly see that there''s a big meaning about subs; what you may not think as first is that it''s a great responsibility for Dominant. Life is a delicate crystal, and NEVER, i said NEVER, Dominant should think about damaging it. That''s a rule, and there''s no deal on that."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"I see...i think..."</font><br><font color = blue>"Sssshhh!!!"</font>...Anna point her index to the ceiling...<font color = blue>"Listen! Don''t speak. That''s an hand code for silence."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"..."</font>You nod<br><font color = blue>"Good. Now follow me."</font>'
+		'You shake your head... . <font color = blue>"...Ok. For example you could lower your body and kiss my feet. Feet have a great meaning too; subs put their life under the Dominant''s feet. You can clearly see that there''s a big meaning about subs; what you may not think as first is that it''s a great responsibility for Dominant. Life is a delicate crystal, and NEVER, I said NEVER, Dominant should think about damaging it. That''s a rule, and there''s no deal on that."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"I see...I think..."</font><br><font color = blue>"Sssshhh!!!"</font>...Anna points her index to the ceiling...<font color = blue>"Listen! Don''t speak. That''s a hand code for silence."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"..."</font>You nod<br><font color = blue>"Good. Now follow me."</font>'
 		act'...': gt'hotel_anna','Anna_sub_session2'
 	end
 	act'Show your obedience': 
@@ -832,7 +832,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anna_sub_session1':
 		gs 'stat'
 		AnnaQW['sub'] += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub2a.jpg"></center>'
-		'You had it... . <font color = blue>"You are a good girl, that''s a perfect sign of obedience. You have to know that feet have a great meaning too; subs put their life under the Dominant''s feet. You can clearly see that there''s a big meaning about subs; what you may not think as first is that it''s a great responsibility for Dominant. Life is a delicate crystal, and NEVER, i said NEVER, Dominant should think about damaging it. That''s a rule, and there''s no deal on that."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"I see...i think..."</font><br><font color = blue>"Sssshhh!!!"</font>...Anna point her index to the ceiling...<font color = blue>"Listen! Don''t speak. That''s an hand code for silence."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"..."</font>You nod<br><font color = blue>"Good. Now follow me."</font>'
+		'You had it... . <font color = blue>"You are a good girl, that''s a perfect sign of obedience. You have to know that feet have a great meaning too; subs put their life under the Dominant''s feet. You can clearly see that there''s a big meaning about subs; what you may not think as first is that it''s a great responsibility for Dominant. Life is a delicate crystal, and NEVER, I said NEVER, Dominant should think about damaging it. That''s a rule, and there''s no deal on that."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"I see...I think..."</font><br><font color = blue>"Sssshhh!!!"</font>...Anna points her index to the ceiling...<font color = blue>"Listen! Don''t speak. That''s a hand code for silence."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"..."</font>You nod<br><font color = blue>"Good. Now follow me."</font>'
 		act'...': gt'hotel_anna','Anna_sub_session2'
 	end
 end
@@ -841,24 +841,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anna_sub_session2':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub3.jpg"></center>'
-	'Anna put her index into the ring of the collar...you have the reflex to put your hands on hers, but she scold you immediately. <font color = blue> "No!...Do not act if not asked. Put your hands, behind your back."</font> You obey the order Anna gave you, mainly because she''s joking with the collar and she''s not pulling it. <font color = blue> "The reflex you had, show me you are not willing to be dragged by your collar; that''s why i didn''t pull it: to let you get acquainted. Honestly i don''t want to pull it, i''d like you to stand up on your own."</font>You start rising yourself...<font color = blue>"...Without hands."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...But..how..."</font><br><font color = blue>"Bend one knee and start rise...it will be natural after that. Don''t worry...I''ll follow your movements with my finger. And don''t rush, i don''t want you to fall."</font>You nod and rise your body without your hands...it wasn''t difficult afterall. '
+	'Anna puts her index into the ring of the collar...you have the reflex to put your hands on hers, but she scolds you immediately. <font color = blue> "No!...Do not act if not asked. Put your hands, behind your back."</font> You obey the order Anna gave you, mainly because she''s joking with the collar and she''s not pulling it. <font color = blue> "The reflex you had shows me you are not willing to be dragged by your collar. That''s why I didn''t pull it: to let you get acquainted. Honestly I don''t want to pull it, I''d like you to stand up on your own."</font>You start rising yourself...<font color = blue>"...Without hands."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...But..how..."</font><br><font color = blue>"Bend one knee and start rising...it will be natural after that. Don''t worry...I''ll follow your movements with my finger. And don''t rush, I don''t want you to fall."</font>You nod and rise your body without your hands...it wasn''t difficult afterall. '
 	act'...': 
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub3a.jpg"></center>'
-		'Anna took a chair from the room...<font color = blue>"Now bend over."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"..."</font><br><font color = blue>"See it wasn''t difficult...was it?"</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...It''s the situation...i mean...i feel a little exposed."</font><br><font color = blue>"That''s great!"</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"W-what do you mean?"</font><br><font color = blue>"Exposure was the think i had to speak about, and since you felt a little exposed i can skip that part. Ok...next... ."</font>Anna move from the room and return with a flogger immediately. <font color = blue>"Again: obedience. This is a flogger as you know; another great sign of obedience is to kiss it, to kiss the Discipline tool, to kiss it show the respect subs have to have toward the Discipline and the time the Dominant spend for their education. Will you show me your obedience?"</font>'
+		'Anna took a chair from the room...<font color = blue>"Now bend over."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"..."</font><br><font color = blue>"See it wasn''t difficult...was it?"</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...It''s the situation...I mean...I feel a little exposed."</font><br><font color = blue>"That''s great!"</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"W-what do you mean?"</font><br><font color = blue>"Exposure was the think I had to speak about, and since you felt a little exposed I can skip that part. Ok...next... ."</font>Anna moves from the room and returns with a flogger immediately. <font color = blue>"Again: obedience. This is a flogger as you know; another great sign of obedience is to kiss it, to kiss the Discipline tool, to kiss it shows the respect subs have to have toward the Discipline and the time the Dominant spend for their education. Will you show me your obedience?"</font>'
 		act'Refuse': 
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub4.jpg"></center>'
-			'<font color = blue> "...Understandable. In that case feel the flogger..."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"WHAT?"</font><br><font color = blue> "...that softly crawl on your back..."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...A-Anna...you scared me..."</font><br><font color = blue> "...sweety...i didn''t finished the sentence. Ok, now the reminder spanking."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"WHAT??? I heard well that time."</font><br><font color = blue>"It''s symbolical <<$pcs_nickname>>, it take care of things that could have been missed."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...w-we didn''t spoke about spanking...."</font><br><font color = blue>"Uhhmm...let me think. What about a game?"</font> '
+			'<font color = blue> "...Understandable. In that case feel the flogger..."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"WHAT?"</font><br><font color = blue> "...that softly crawl on your back..."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...A-Anna...you scared me..."</font><br><font color = blue> "...sweety...I didn''t finished the sentence. Ok, now the reminder spanking."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"WHAT??? I heard well that time."</font><br><font color = blue>"It''s symbolic <<$pcs_nickname>>, it take care of things that could have been missed."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...w-we didn''t speak about spanking...."</font><br><font color = blue>"Uhhmm...let me think. What about a game?"</font> '
 			act'...?????...': gt'hotel_anna','table1'
 		end
 		act'Show your obedience': 
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/Anna/sessionpracticend/sub/sub4a.jpg"></center>'
-			'<font color = blue> "Good girl. Ok, now the reminder spanking."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"WHAT???"</font><br><font color = blue>"It''s symbolical <<$pcs_nickname>>, it take care of things that could have been missed."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...w-we didn''t spoke about spanking...."</font><br><font color = blue>"Uhhmm...let me think. What about a game?"</font>' 
+			'<font color = blue> "Good girl. Ok, now the reminder spanking."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"WHAT???"</font><br><font color = blue>"It''s symbolic <<$pcs_nickname>>, it takes care of things that could have been missed."</font><br><font color = #DC143C>"...w-we didn''t speak about spanking...."</font><br><font color = blue>"Uhhmm...let me think. What about a game?"</font>' 
 			act'...?????...': gt'hotel_anna','table1'
 		end
 	end