[Fixed] Punctaution fixes, smoothed some dialogue, still need work

locations/gschool_break.qsrc

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'watercooler':
 	if rand(1,4) = 1:
 		menu_off = 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/watercoolergossip.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stop at the water cooler to get a drink, as you do, several other students are near it as well gossiping about varies things.'
+		'You stop at the water cooler to get a drink. Nearby, several students are gossiping with each other about a variety of topics.'
 		gs 'gschool_gossip', 'mixed'
 	else
 		menu_off = 0
@@ -122,23 +122,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 	girls_event_rand = rand(1,22)
 	if girls_event_rand = 1:
 		menu_off = 1
-		gs 'stat'	
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/teacher1.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You walk into the girls bathroom and, as you are washing your hands, you hear some noise coming from the last stall. You creep down and see the stall door is partially open. Inside you see Vice Principal Kuznetsov standing next to the toilet with his dick out and his hand on the back of Ms. Orlov''s head as she sucks his cock. His dick glistens, wet with her saliva down its length to his balls. A strand of saliva, and likely a good amount of precum, droops from the base of his cock to her bottom lip. It sways and stretches with each slide of her mouth over the length of his cock. She is sitting on the toilet with her blouse off and her tits hanging out of her bra, while her skirt is pulled up and her panties down around her ankles. With both her hands she rubs her clit vigorously, completely exposing her soaking wet pussy as her labia slightly spreads apart and back together with the motion of her hands.'
+		'You walk into the girls bathroom and begin washing your hands, when you hear a strange noise coming from the last stall. You sneak over to it, and find the stall door partially open. Looking inside, you see Vice Principal Kuznetsov standing next to the toilet with his dick out and his hand on the back of Ms. Orlov''s head, as she sucks his cock. Her head bobs up and down his glistening cock, strands of saliva and likely precum hanging from her mouth, still connected to the base of his dick. She is sitting on the toilet with her tits hanging out, her skirt pulled up, and her panties down around her ankles. With both hands she rubs her clit vigorously, completely exposing her soaking wet pussy, as her labia slightly spreads apart and back together with the motion of her hands.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		act 'Watch':
 			*clr & cla
-			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/teacher2.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'After sucking his dick for several minutes, they finally change positions. Mr. Kuznetsov sits on the toilet, while Ms. Orlov straddles his lap, facing the door. You duck back a moment to make sure you are not seen. The moans get louder and you peek again. She''s riding his dick hard, taking his cock balls deep into her twat while he reaches around and fondles her breasts. Her hard nipples poke between his fingers, he squeezes them lightly each time her pussy wetly sinks back down from his cock to his balls. Strands of her arousal glisten and stretch from his balls to her cunt, each time she rises to the top of his cock, before she slams back down again.'
+			'After sucking his dick for several minutes, they change positions. Mr. Kuznetsov sits on the toilet, while Ms. Orlov straddles his lap, facing the door. You duck back a moment to make sure you aren''t seen, until the moans get louder again, before you risk taking another peek. She''s riding his dick hard, taking his cock deep into her twat, while he reaches around and fondles her breasts. He squeezes her rock hard nipples each time her pussy wetly sinks down his cock to his balls. Strands of her arousal glisten and stretch from his balls to her cunt, each time she rises to the top of his cock, before she slams back down again.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
-			act 'Leave before you''re caught': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Leave before you''re caught':
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
+				gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+			end
 			act 'Continue to watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/teacher3.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Several long minutes pass, before he lifts her off of him and they switch positions again. She stands on one side of the toilet slightly bent over, her face and hands pressed against the side of the stall, while he stands on the opposite side of the toilet from her. He lines up his dick and slowly pushes it in, eliciting a moan from both of them. After a moment he starts gradually thrusting into her. You hear him say: "Fuck Arina, your ass is so fucking tight." He continues to fuck her ass, slowly getting faster and harder. Her breasts bounce in rhythm with each thrust of his cock into her ass. From the sounds of their moans you can tell they are both getting close to orgasm. You decide it is time to leave before you get caught.'
+				'Several minutes pass before he lifts her off and they switch positions again. She stands on one side of the toilet slightly bent over, her face and hands pressed against the side of the stall, while he stands on the opposite side of the toilet from her. He lines up his dick and slowly pushes it in, eliciting a moan from both of them. He starts gradually thrusting into her before saying; "Fuck Arina, your ass is so fucking tight." He continues to fuck her ass, slowly going faster and harder, her breasts bouncing in rhythm with each thrust. From the sounds of their moaning you can tell they are both getting close to orgasm, you decide it''s time to leave before you get caught.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -149,8 +152,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/occupied.jpg"></center>'
-		'You head into the girls bathroom only to find all the stalls occupied. A gopnik girl is in each of the stalls, standing on the toilets so they can look over the top of the doors. They talk loudly to each other, some snicker, as a joke or insult, has just been tossed out. They''re obviously just being bitches to keep the other girls from using the bathroom. Luckily you just needed to wash your hands, is all. Lera spots you. "Occupied, you will just have to wait." She says with a slight laugh.'
-		'You know it is pointless to reply to her, so you just finish up washing your hands and leave.'
+		'You head into the girls bathroom and find the gopnik girls hanging out, one in each of the stalls, standing on the toilets so they can look over the top of the doors. You can tell they are just trying to be bitches, and blocking any of the other girls from using the toilets. Luckily you just need to wash your hands, so you''re not bothered by it. Lera spots you and says, "Occupied, you will just have to wait."'
+		'You know it is pointless to reply, so you just shrug, finish washing your hands, and head back outside.'
 		act 'Leave the restroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	elseif girls_event_rand = 3:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/pose.jpg"></center>'
@@ -169,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 		gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
 	elseif girls_event_rand <= 10:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsgossip'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you enter the restroom, there is a group of girls clustered together gossiping about the latest gossip or whatever has caught their interest of late. As you go about your business, you over hear them saying.'
+		'As you enter the restroom, there is a group of girls clustered together chatting about the latest gossip or whatever has caught their interest of late. As you go about your business, you over hear them saying;'
 		gs 'gschool_gossip', 'mixed'
 
 		gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
@@ -183,14 +186,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 		if grupTipe = 4:
 			'As you enter the restroom, you see Paulina, Lena and Lera hanging around the stalls, chatting and tormenting some of the other girls. You exchange smiles and hello''s with them, as you go about your business.'
 		else
-			'As you enter the restroom, you see Paulina, Lena and Lera hanging around the stalls, chatting and tormenting some of the other girls. As you go about your business, they start taunting you as well, but you know better than to start something back at three to one odds. You do your best to ignore them, as you go about your business.'
+			'As you enter the restroom, you see Paulina, Lena and Lera hanging around the stalls, chatting and tormenting some of the other girls. As you go about your business, they start taunting you as well, but you know better than to start something back at 3-to-1 odds. You do your best to ignore them as you go about your business.'
 		end
 
 		gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
 	elseif girls_event_rand = 13:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/seemypanties.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you enter the restroom, you see Anushka on her way out. She pauses long enough to pull up her skirt and show off her panties. "Do you think these are cute panties?"'
-		'Not all that phased by her anymore, you just nod yes. "Yes very cute." With that she drops her skirt and leaves the restroom, while you go about your business.'
+		'Not even fazed by her anymore, you just nod. "Yes, very cute." With that she drops her skirt and leaves the restroom, while you go about your business.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -208,7 +211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sweettalk1.jpg"></center>'
 		if grupTipe = 4 and hotcat >= 6:
 			'As you enter the bathroom, you see Lena standing in the corner. She watches you as you come in, then bites her lower lip. You notice her watching you and decide to ask what''s up. "You ok, Lena? You are looking a bit flushed."'
-			'She shakes her head no. "No that bitch Lera got me all worked up and then got herself in trouble, leaving me here with blue balls. How about you help me out with this little problem." She says, as she spreads her legs slightly.'
+			'She shakes her head. "No, that bitch Lera got me all worked up and then got herself in trouble, leaving me here with blue balls. How about you help me out with this little problem," She says, spreading her legs open.'
 			act 'Sorry':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A20'] -= 3
@@ -220,7 +223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 			act 'Help her out': gt 'gschool_break', 'lena_gop'
 		elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 			'As you enter the bathroom, you see Lena standing in the corner. She watches you as you come in, then narrows her eyes a little. You notice her watching you and decide to ask what''s up. "You ok Lena? You are looking a bit flushed."'
-			'She gives you a evil little smile. "No that bitch Lera got me all worked up and then got herself in trouble, leaving me here with blue balls. So why don''t you come over here and eat my pussy like a good little girl." She says as she spreads her legs slightly.'
+			'She gives you a evil little smile. "No, that bitch Lera got me all worked up and then got herself in trouble, leaving me here with blue balls. So why don''t you come over here and eat my pussy like a good little girl," She says as she spreads her legs open.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 			if will_cost < pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell her no (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -231,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/characters/shared/photos/big20.jpg"></center>'
 					'You shake your head. "What? No I''m not going to eat your pussy."'
 					'She takes a step towards you. "You better, if you know what''s good for you."'
-					'You know these gopnik girls are dangerous, most of them like to fight for fun and many of them carry knives. Not sure how serious she is about this, you know that you are far enough away that you can just dash out of the restroom, but she might come after you later, or you could do what she says and lick her pussy.'
+					'You know these gopnik girls are dangerous, most of them like to fight for fun and many of them carry knives. Not sure how serious she is about this, you know you''re far enough away that you can just dash out of the restroom, but she might come after you later, or you could do what she says and lick her pussy.'
 !!ToDo: Add in a option to fight once we revamp fighting (nutluck)
 					gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'easy'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -253,8 +256,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 			end
 			act 'Agree': gt 'gschool_break', 'lena_dom'
 		elseif grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5:
-			'As you enter the bathroom, you see Lena standing in the corner. She watches you as you come in, then narrows her eyes a little. You notice her watching you and decided to ask what''s up. "You ok Lena? You are looking a bit flushed."'
-			'She gives you a evil little smile. "No that bitch Lera got me all worked up and then got herself in trouble, leaving me here with blue balls. So get over here and get on your knees and eat my pussy, before I beat you ass and make you do it." She says, as she spreads her legs slightly.'
+			'As you enter the bathroom, you see Lena standing in the corner. She watches you come in, then narrows her eyes a little. You notice her watching and decided to ask what''s up. "You ok Lena? You are looking a bit flushed."'
+			'She gives you a evil little smile. "No that bitch Lera got me all worked up and then got herself in trouble, leaving me here with blue balls. So get over here, get on your knees, and eat my pussy, before I beat your ass and make you do it." She says, as she spreads her legs open.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist'
 			if will_cost < pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Tell her no (<<will_cost>> willpower)':
@@ -264,8 +267,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/characters/shared/photos/big20.jpg"></center>'
 					'You shake your head. "What? No, I''m not going to eat your pussy."'
-					'She takes a step towards you. "Well then, I guess I am going to work out my frustration by kicking you in your face."'
-					'You know these gopnik girls are dangerous, most of them like to fight for fun and many of them carry knives. Not sure how serious she is about this, you know that you are far enough away that you can just dash out of the restroom, but she might come after you later, or you could do what she says and lick her pussy.'
+					'She takes a step towards you. "Well then, I guess I''m going to work out my frustrations by kicking your face in."'
+					'You know these gopnik girls are dangerous, most of them like to fight for fun and many of them carry knives. Not sure how serious she is about this, you know that you''re far enough away that you can just dash out of the restroom, but she might come after you later, or you could do what she says and lick her pussy.'
 					act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_break', 'lena_dom'
 !!ToDo: Add in a option to fight once we revamp fighting (nutluck)
 					gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist'
@@ -275,7 +278,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/characters/shared/photos/big20.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn and run for the door. As you make it to the door you hear Lena call after you. "You can run all you want bitch, I will find you and kick your ass, eventually"'
+							'You turn and run for the door. As you make it through the door you hear Lena call after you, "Run all you want bitch, I will find and kick your ass, eventually"'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					else
@@ -287,8 +290,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 			end
 			act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_break', 'lena_dom'
 		else
-			'As you enter the bathroom, you see Lena standing in the corner. She watches you as you come in, then bites her lower lip. You notice her watching you and decide to ask what''s up. "You ok Lena? You are looking a bit flushed."'
-			'She shakes her head no. "Mind your own business." She says angrily.'
+			'As you enter the bathroom, you see Lena standing in the corner. She watches as you come in, then bites her lower lip. You notice her watching you and decide to ask what''s up. "You ok Lena? You are looking a bit flushed."'
+			'She shakes her head no. "Mind your own business," She says angrily.'
 			'"Ok, I was just asking." You say to her, but she ignores you and walks out.'
 			gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
 		end
@@ -297,7 +300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlspose1.jpg"></center>'
 		if grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk in, you see a group of gopnik girls all talking, you know Lena, Lera, Paulina, and Ekaterina but the other ones are from your brother''s class. They exchange causal greetings with you, but seem engrossed in there conversation.'
+			'As you walk in, you see a group of gopnik girls standing around chatting. You know who Lena, Lera, Paulina, and Ekaterina are, but the other ones are from your brother''s class. They exchange causal greetings with you, but seem engrossed in their conversation.'
 			act 'Listen in':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlspose1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -316,7 +319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 			end
 			gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
 		else
-			'As you walk in, you see a group of gopnik girls, all talking. Obviously up to something by the way they are acting, they turn almost as one to glare at you and you feel a chill run down your spine. You picked the wrong time to come to the bathroom, you know Lena, Lera, Paulina, and Ekaterina but the other ones are from your brothers class. Paulina takes a step towards you and in a menacing tone. "Leave now!" You know you should leave, you are no match for this many girls and if they decided to kick your ass or worse you won''t be able to stop them or escape, but you are also tired of the gopniks acting like they run the school and the rules don''t apply to them.'
+			'As you walk in, you see a group of gopnik girls standing around chatting. It''s obvious they are up to something, as they turn as one to glare at you. A chill run down your spine, you picked the wrong time to come to the bathroom. You know who Lena, Lera, Paulina, and Ekaterina are, but the other ones are from your brother''s class. Paulina takes a step towards you and in a menacing tone says, "Leave, now!" You know you should leave, you are no match for this many girls. If they decide to kick your ass or worse you won''t be able to prevent it or escape, but you are also tired of the gopniks acting like they run the school and the rules don''t apply to them.'
 			act 'Leave the restroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost < pcs_willpwr:
@@ -327,19 +330,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlspose1.jpg"></center>'
 					if pav_slut > 200:
-						'You are tired of it and decide to stand up to them. "No! I have as much right to be in this bathroom as you do, if you don''t like it, you can leave."'
-						'Paulina gives you a dangerous smile. "Well, looks like this bitch needs to be taught a lesson, I say we beat the shit out of her here and now."'
-						'Hearing that, you take a step back, but the other girls quickly surround you giving your nowhere to go. As you start to look for a way to escape, Lena speaks up. "No, we can''t do it now, we will have to wait for her after school. If we give her the beating she deserves, the teachers will see the blood and the marks on her face. It''s better to wait, so no one asks questions."'
+						'You are tired of it and decide to stand up to them. "No! I have as much right to be in this bathroom as you do. If you don''t like it, leave."'
+						'Paulina gives you a dangerous smile. "Well, looks like this bitch needs to be taught a lesson. I say we beat the shit out of her, here and now."'
+						'Hearing that, you take a step back, but the other girls quickly surround you, giving your nowhere to go. As you start to look for a way to escape, Lena speaks up. "No, we can''t do it now, we will have to wait for her after school. If we give her the beating she deserves, the teachers will see the blood and marks on her face. It''s better to wait, so no one asks questions."'
 						*nl
-						'The other girls seem none to happy about waiting, but they understand the logic and for just a brief moment you think you might have got a reprive, even if only temporary one, but then Lera steps up and grabs you by the hair. "Or we can teach her a lesson right now and not leave any marks on her, least none she is going to go around showing others and show her wait happens to little sluts that don''t know their place. I got all the toys we need in my backpack." She says indicating her backpack.'
+						'The other girls seem none to happy about waiting, but they understand the logic. For just a brief moment you think you might have got a reprieve, even if only temporary one. Then Lera steps up and grabs you by the hair, and says "Or we can teach her a lesson right now, and not leave any marks on her. At least none she will show others, she needs to see what happens to little sluts that don''t know their place. I got all the toys we need in my backpack."'
 						*nl
-						'Ekaterina shakes her head, maybe to keep them from doing this to you. "God you are such a dyke Lera."'
-						'Lera lets go of you and steps towards Ekaterina. "Fuck you bitch." As Ekaterina steps forward towards Lera, Paulina steps between the two of them, dashing your hopes they might fight amoung themselves letting you escape. "Enough both of you, but Lera makes a good point." Then she looks at the rest of the girls. "So do we wait or teach her a lesson now?" After a brief exchange they decided to do it now, they can always kick your ass later as well. Then they all start grabbing you.'
+						'Ekaterina shakes her head, maybe to keep them from doing this to you. "God, you are such a dyke, Lera."'
+						'Lera lets go of you and steps towards Ekaterina. "Fuck you bitch." As Ekaterina steps towards Lera, Paulina gets between the two of them, dashing your hopes they might start fighting amongst themselves while you escape. "Enough, both of you! Lera makes a good point, though." She looks at the rest of the girls. "So do we wait or teach her a lesson now?" After a brief exchange they decide to do it now, they can always kick your ass later as well. Then they all start grabbing you.'
 						act 'Try to resist':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You try to pull away but there are too many of you, your only chance is to scream and hope someone hears you. Almost as if they can read your mind, Ekaterina holds a knife up in front of your face and places it against your cheek. "If you scream I will cut your face up so bad, not even your mother will recognize you." You swallow hard, perhaps you should have left when they told you to.'
-							'They roughly start pulling your clothes off, you hear a few small rips as they do. A couple of them grab some toys, dildo''s and strapons out of Lera''s pack. Once stripped, they pull you down till you are laying on the floor spread eagle, held in place. While one of the girls reaches over and smacks your pussy, one grabs your clit between her fingers and pinches it hard. You can''t help but squeal in pain.'
+							'You try to pull away but there are too many of them, your only chance is to scream and hope someone hears you. Almost as if they can read your mind, Ekaterina holds a knife up and places it against your cheek. "If you scream I will cut your face up so bad, not even your mother will recognize you." You swallow hard, perhaps you should have left when they told you to.'
+							'They roughly start pulling your clothes off, you hear them rip as they do. A couple of them grab some toys, dildo''s, and strapons out of Lera''s pack. Once your naked, they pull you down till you are laying on the floor, spread eagle and held in place. While one of the girls reaches over and smacks your pussy, one grabs your clit between her fingers and pinches it hard. You can''t help but squeal in pain.'
 							gs 'pain', 3, 'clitoris', 'pinch'
 							gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -347,21 +350,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'boyStat', 'D2' 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully2.jpg"></center>'
-								'Several of the girls hold you down, while Lera straps on one of the strapon harnesses with a rather large looking dildo attached. She sits down between your legs and scoots closer to you, she spits on your pussy and rubs her spit around on it, grinning at you. "Some lubrication for you slut." Then she pushes the head of the dildo against your slit and shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo inside of your twat. She grabs you by the thighs and pulls herself closer. As she fucks you with the dildo, the other girls make rude comments about how much you love it.'
+								'Several of the girls hold you down, while Lera puts on one of the strapon harnesses with a rather large looking dildo attached. As she sits between your legs and scoots closer, she spits on your pussy and rubs the saliva around, grinning at you. "Some lubrication for you, slut." Then she pushes the head of the dildo against your slit and shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo inside of your twat. She grabs you by the thighs and pulls herself closer. As she fucks you with the dildo, the other girls make rude comments about how much you love it.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 2, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'pain', 2, 'vaginal', 'stretch'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully3.jpg"></center>'
-									'Lera gets frustated at the position, sitting she can''t really pound you. She pulls out and stands up. "Get the slut up so I can pile drive this bitch." The other girls lift your hips in the air, pulling your legs forward so your knees are almost against your shoulders, as they hold your arms and legs in place. Now with a much better vantage point, Lera slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo back inside of your pussy and starts fucking you hard, making comments about how loose you are, while the other girls laugh.'
+									'Lera gets frustated at the position, sitting she can''t really pound you. She pulls out and stands up. "Get the slut up so I can pile drive this bitch." The other girls lift your hips in the air, pulling your legs forward so your knees are almost against your shoulders, as they hold your arms and legs in place. Once your in a better position to be pounded in, Lera slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo back inside of your pussy and starts fucking you hard, making comments about how loose you are, while the other girls laugh.'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 3, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Continue':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'boyStat', 'D3' 
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully4.jpg"></center>'
-										'Lena puts on one of the large strapons, she pushes Lera out of the way. "Let me show you how to do it." With that she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo back into your pussy and like Lera before her, starts hammering away at you. Unable to do anything, you just have to endure what the other girls are doing to you. After a while your cries start to get too loud, a hand covers you mouth to silence you.'
+										'Lena puts on one of the large strapons and pushes Lera out of the way. "Let me show you how it''s done." With that she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo into your pussy and, like Lera before her, starts hammering away at you. Unable to do anything, you just have to endure what the other girls are doing to you. After a while your cries start to get too loud, so someone covers your mouth to silence you.'
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 3, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Continue':
@@ -369,8 +372,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 											gs 'pain', 3, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 											gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully5.jpg"></center>'
-											'Lera pulls out. After a brief discussion, another girl, one of the younger ones, puts on the harness and lays down. "Come on slut mount me." Not giving a choice the other girls pull you over on top of you and force you down on the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo, as it slides all the way up in you. A couple of the other girls slap your ass hard, to encourage you to to do the work.'
-											'Lena kneels down behind you, moments later you feel her spit against your asshole, then the pressure of the head of a dildo in her hand. With only that bit of spit for lubrication she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo in your ass. A couple of the other girls add their spit to the shaft of the dildo so it slides a little easier.'
+											'Lera pulls out. After a brief discussion, another girl, one of the younger ones, puts on the harness and lays down. "Come on slut, mount me." Not giving you a choice, the other girls pull you over to her and force you down onto the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo. A couple of the other girls slap your ass hard, to encourage you to to do the work.'
+											'Lena kneels down behind you, moments later you feel her spit against your asshole, then the pressure of the head of a dildo in her hand. With only that bit of spit for lubrication she shoves the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo in your ass. A couple of the other girls add their spit to the shaft of the dildo, so it slides a little easier.'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 3, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 											gs 'arousal', 'anal_dildo', 3, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 											minut -= 3
@@ -378,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 											act 'Continue':
 												*clr & cla
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully6.jpg"></center>'
-												'Paulina puts on the other harness and then takes takes the dildo from Lera, making her pull it out of your ass to your relief. "Give me that, if we are going to do this, then we should at least fuck the slut right." Mounting the dildo to the harness, she kneels down behind you and shoves it back up your ass, it feels like the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo is ripping your ass, as both dildo''s are hammered into both your holes.'
+												'Paulina puts on the other harness and then takes takes the dildo from Lera, making her pull it out of your ass,to your relief. "Give me that, if we are going to do this, then we should at least fuck the slut right." Mounting the dildo to the harness, she kneels down behind you and shoves it back up your ass. It feels like the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo is ripping your ass, as both dildo''s are hammered into your holes.'
 												gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 3, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 												gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 3, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 												minut -= 3
@@ -386,7 +389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 												act 'Continue':
 													*clr & cla
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully7.jpg"></center>'
-													'The girl on the bottom finally has had enough and pushes you up enough, until the dildo slips out of your pussy. Paulina keeps fucking your ass for a bit, while the other one slides out from under you. Soon the other girls demand a turn, it seems none of them feel like sliding back under you or using your pussy anymore. Instead several more of them, maybe all of them, you can''t tell, take turns wearing a strapon and fucking your ass.'
+													'The girl on the bottom finally has had enough and pushes you off her dildo. Paulina keeps fucking your ass for a bit, while the other one slides out from under you. Soon the other girls demand a turn, though none seem to want to use your pussy anymore. They take turns wearing a strapon and fucking your ass, your not sure if all of them did, but it sure feels like it.'
 													gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'humiliation', 'maso', 'gangbang', 'lesbian'
 													gs 'arousal', 'end'
 													gs 'stat'
@@ -397,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 														gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 														gs 'stat'
 														'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully8.jpg"></center>'
-														'Finally, they seem to get bored and the last one pulls the dildo out of your ass, that now feels like it is on fire. Paulina reaches down and grabs you by the chin. "Next time we fucking tell you to leave, you better listen." With that the girls laugh and talk as they leave, but you don''t really pay attention. You crawl over into one of the stalls and curl up, waiting until you can no longer hear them. Maybe next time you will do what Paulina says and leave when you can. Once you are sure they are gone, you do your best to clean up and thats when you notice they also stole your clothes.'
+														'Your ass has been pounded so hard and so much it feels like it''s on fire. They seem to get bored, finally, and the last one pulls the dildo out of your ass. Paulina reaches down, grabs you by the chin, and says "Next time we fucking tell you to leave, you better listen." With that the girls leave, laughing and talking about you, but your not paying attention. You crawl over into one of the stalls and curl up, waiting until you can no longer hear them. Maybe next time you will do what Paulina says and leave when you can. Once you are sure they are gone, you do your best to clean up, but that''s when you notice they also stole your clothes.'
 														act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_break', 'naked_bathroom'
 													end
 												end
@@ -408,13 +411,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 							end
 						end
 					else
-						'You are tired of it and decide to stand up to them. "No! I have as much right to be in this bathroom as you do, if you don''t like it, you can leave."'
-						'Paulina gives you a dangerous smile. "Well looks like this bitch needs to be taught a lesson, I say we beat the shit out of her, here and now."'
-						'Hearing that, you take a step back, but the other girls quickly surround you giving you nowhere to go. As you start to look for a way to escape, Lena speaks up. "No, we can''t do it now, we will have to wait for her after school. If we give her the beating she deserves, the teachers will see the blood and the marks on her face. Better to wait, so no one asks questions."'
+						'You are tired of it and decide to stand up to them. "No! I have as much right to be in this bathroom as you do. If you don''t like it, then you leave."'
+						'Paulina gives you a dangerous smile. "Well looks like this bitch needs to be taught a lesson. I say we beat the shit out of her, here and now."'
+						'Hearing that, you take a step back, but the other girls quickly surround you, giving you nowhere to go. As you start to look for a way to escape, Lena speaks up. "No, we can''t do it now, we will have to wait for her after school. If we give her the beating she deserves, the teachers will see the blood and marks on her face. Better to wait, so no one asks questions."'
 						*nl
-						'The other girls seem none to happy about waiting but they understand the logic and for just a brief moment you think you might have got a reprive, even if only temporary one, but then Lera steps up and grabs you by the hair. "Or we can teach her a lesson right now." She says.'
+						'The other girls don''t seem happy about waiting, but they understand the logic. For just a brief moment you think you might have got a reprieve, even if only temporary one. Then Lera steps up and grabs you by your hair, and says "Or we can teach her a lesson right now."'
 						*nl
-						'Paulina looks at the rest of the girls. "So do we wait or teach her a lesson now?" After a brief exchange they decided to do it now, they can always kick your ass later as well. Then they all start grabbing you.'
+						'Paulina looks at the rest of the girls. "So do we wait, or teach her a lesson now?" After a brief exchange they decide to do it now, they can always kick your ass later as well. Then they all start grabbing you.'
 						act 'Try to resist':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'clothing', 'strip'
@@ -422,9 +425,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 							gs 'stat'
 							gs 'exhibitionism', 4
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/gbully8.jpg"></center>'
-							'You try to pull away, but there are to many for you, your only chance is to scream and hope someone hears you. Almost as if they can read your mind, Ekaterina holds a knife up in front of your face and places it against your cheek. "If you scream I will cut your face up so bad, not even your mother will recognize you." You swallow hard, perhaps you should have left when they told you to.'
+							'You try to pull away, but there are too many of them. Your only chance is to scream and hope someone hears you. Almost as if they can read minds, Ekaterina holds a knife up and places it against your cheek. "If you scream, I will cut your face up so bad, not even your own mother will recognize you." You swallow hard, thinking you should have left when they told you to.'
 							*nl
-							'They roughly start pulling your clothes off, you hear a few small rips as they do. Once stripped, they pull you over to one of the toilets and dunk your head, holding your head in the toilet water until your lungs start to burn. When they finally let you up, you cough up some of the toilet water, with that they all laugh and walk out of the bathroom taking your clothes with them. Leaving you naked on the floor.'
+							'They roughly start pulling your clothes off, you hear them rip as they do. Once stripped, they pull you over to one of the toilets and dunk your head, holding your head in the toilet water until your lungs start to burn. When they finally let you up, you start coughing up toilet water. Laughing, they walk out of the bathroom with your clothes, leaving you naked on the floor.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_break', 'naked_bathroom'
 						end
 					end
@@ -449,17 +452,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 	boys_event_rand = rand (1,12)
 	if boys_event_rand <= 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-		'You enter the boys bathroom and see several boys using the urinals and sinks. A couple of the boys are standing by the windows, smoking. As they notice you, a couple get embarrassed, one rushes out, a couple seem amused, while one of the boys from your brothers class confronts you. "What are you doing in here? This is the boys room."'
+		'You enter the boys bathroom and see several boys using the urinals or sinks. A couple of the them are standing by the windows, smoking. As they notice you, some get embarrassed or seem amused. One of the boys from your brother''s class tries to confront you. "What are you doing in here? This is the boys room."'
 		act 'Rush out':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You blush slightly, as the boys catch you going into the bathroom. Not knowing what to say you turn around and rush out.'
+			'You blush slightly, as the boys have caught you going into their bathroom. Not knowing what to say, you turn around and rush out.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 		
 		act 'Stay':
 			cla & *nl
-			'You glance at him as you walk to the sinks. "Shut up. I just need to use the mirrors, not like it''s hurting you." You tell him, as you take a look at yourself in the mirror, checking your hair and makeup.'
+			'You glance at him as you walk to the sinks. "Shut up, I just need to use a mirror. It''s not like it''s hurting you," you tell him as you take a look at yourself in the mirror, checking your hair and makeup.'
 			gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
 		end
 	elseif boys_event_rand = 3 and soniaPS >= 3:
@@ -495,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 			act 'Peek':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/soniabj.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You close the door quick enough that they don''t notice you were there, but leave open just a crack and continue to peek through. You watch as Sonia is really working that cock with a vigor you''ve never seen before. After about another minute the boy grabs her by the hair and pulls her towards him, while thrusting his hips forward. After violently shaking for a few seconds, he pulls back with a gasp as long strands of cum splatter onto the floor, unable to be contained by her mouth or caught by her hands. The boy pulls her head towards him again and pokes her in the cheek with his member saying, "Come on slut. Finish the job and clean me up." Sonia obediently starts licking his cock clean. Knowing they are finished, you don''t want to get caught spying on them, so you close the door and move away.'
+				'You close the door quick enough that they don''t notice you were there, but leave it open a crack and continue to peek through. You watch as Sonia is really working that cock with a vigor you''ve never seen before. After about another minute the boy grabs her by the hair and pulls her towards him, while thrusting his hips forward. After violently shaking for a few seconds, he pulls back with a gasp, as long strands of cum splatter onto the floor, unable to be contained by her mouth or caught by her hands. The boy pulls her head towards him again and pokes her in the cheek with his member saying, "Come on slut. Finish the job and clean me up." Sonia obediently starts licking his cock clean. Deciding you don''t want to get caught spying on them after they''re done, you close the door and move away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -506,11 +509,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A25'] -= 5
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/soniabj.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'Undaunted in the face of such shameless debauchery, you continue with your business and go straight to the sink. While you lather your hands in soap you turn to face the two of them and say: "God you are such a fucking slut, do your knee''s have calluses on them from all the kneeling you do?"'
+					'Undaunted in the face of such shameless debauchery, you continue with your business and go straight to the sink. While you lather your hands in soap you turn to face the two of them and say "God you''re such a fucking slut. Do your knee''s have calluses on them from all the kneeling you do?"'
 					*nl
-					'Sonia does her best to ignore your barbs as she keeps sucking the boy''s cock. Drying your hands off, you walk over to the boy and lean on the wall next to him, while gently putting your hand on the back of Sonia''s head and pushing it forward until you hear her gagging on his cock. You glance to the boy and say: "You would think she would be used to this after all the cock she has sucked." you remark to the boy. "You should get yourself checked out at the clinic after this, who knows how many diseases she has."'
+					'Sonia does her best to ignore your barbs and keeps sucking the boy''s cock. Drying your hands off, you walk over to the boy and lean on the wall next to him, while gently putting your hand on the back of Sonia''s head and pushing it forward until you hear her gagging on his cock. You glance to the boy and say "You would think she would be used to this after all the cock she has sucked." You then tell the boy, "You should get yourself checked out at the clinic after this, who knows how many diseases she has."'
 					*nl
-					'The boy nods only half paying attention to what you are saying, as you let go of Sonia''s head and start to move out of the bathroom. "I''ll let the rest of the boys know you are open for business, per usual." you call back, as you hear the boy groan loudly and presumably ejaculates down Sonia''s throat.'
+					'The boy nods, only half paying attention to what you are saying, as you let go of Sonia''s head and start to move out of the bathroom. "I''ll let the rest of the boys know you are open for business, per usual," you call back, as you hear the boy groan loudly and presumably ejaculate down Sonia''s throat.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -522,12 +525,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A25'] += 3
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/soniabj.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Undaunted in the face of such shameless debauchery, you continue with your business and go straight to the sink. While you lather your hands in soap you turn to face the two of them and say: "Hi Sonia! Having fun on your ''date?''"'
+				'Undaunted in the face of such shameless debauchery, you continue with your business and go straight to the sink. While you lather your hands in soap you turn to face the two of them and say "Hi Sonia! Having fun on your ''date?''"'
 				*nl
 				'Sonia bobs her head up and down a bit more, as if she is nodding while humming to you a rough, "Mhmm!" that is mostly blocked by the cock in her mouth. Drying your hands off, you walk over to the boy and lean on the wall next to him while gently putting your hand on the back of Sonia''s head and assisting the forward movement of her blowjob.'
 				*nl
-				'"She''s really giving it her all today isn''t she?" you remark to the boy. "This is a special treat! Don''t waste it!" you say as you let go of Sonia''s head and start to move out of the bathroom.'
-				'"I''ll see you in class later Sonia!" you call back as you hear the boy groan loudly and presumably ejaculate down Sonia''s throat.'
+				'"She''s really giving it her all today, isn''t she?" You remark to the boy. "This is a special treat! Don''t waste it!" you say as you let go of Sonia''s head and start to move out of the bathroom.'
+				'"I''ll see you in class later, Sonia!" you call back as you hear the boy groan loudly and presumably ejaculate down Sonia''s throat.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -554,7 +557,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 			act 'Peek':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonia.school1,'+rand(0,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'You close the door quick enough that they don''t notice you were there, but leave open just a crack and continue to peer through. You watch as the boy pounds Sonia hard for all he''s worth. After about another minute the boy grabs her by the hair and pulls her head back towards him while thrusting his hips forward vigorously. After a couple of minutes, he pulls back and violently shaking for a few seconds, as his cock pulses, sending long strands of cum spattering all over her ass. The boy pulls her head towards him and pokes her in the cheek with his dick, saying: "Come on slut. Finish the job and clean me up." Sonia obediently starts sucking his cock clean. Knowing they are finished, you don''t want to get caught spying on them, so you close the door and move away.'
+				'You close the door quick enough that they don''t notice you were there, but leave it open just a crack and continue to peer through. You watch as the boy pounds Sonia for all he''s worth. After about another minute, the boy grabs her by the hair and pulls her head back towards him while thrusting his hips forward vigorously. After a couple more minutes, he pulls back and violently shakes for a few seconds, as his cock pulses, sending long strands of cum spattering all over her ass. The boy pulls her head towards him and pokes her in the cheek with his dick, saying "Come on slut. Finish the job and clean me up." Sonia obediently starts sucking his cock clean. Knowing they are finished, you decide you would rather not be caught spying on them, so you close the door and move away.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'unknown'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -565,11 +568,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A25'] -= 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonia.school1,'+rand(0,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'Undaunted in the face of such shameless debauchery, you continue with your business and go straight to the sink. While you lather your hands in soap, you turn to face the two of them and say: "God you are such a fucking slut, I would be surprised if he can feel anything with how loose you must be after every guy in town has fucked you!"'
+					'Undaunted in the face of such shameless debauchery, you continue with your business and go straight to the sink. While you lather your hands in soap, you turn to face the two of them and say "God you are such a fucking slut! I wouldn''t be surprised if he can feel anything with how loose you must be after every guy in town has fucked you!"'
 					*nl
-					'Sonia does her best to ignore your barbs as she keeps letting the boy fuck her. Drying your hands off, you walk over to the boy and Sonia. You stand next to her hips facing the boy. You reach down to grab her ass cheeks in your hands, as you spread them apart. You glance to the boy and say: "You should fuck her ass, it might be a little tighter." you remark to the boy. He looks at you only a moment, but smiles and seems to like the idea. He pulls his dick out of her pussy and shoves it balls deep in her ass. Sonia cries out a bit in pain as he starts roughly fucking her ass.'
+					'Sonia does her best to ignore your barbs as she keeps letting the boy fuck her. Drying your hands off, you walk over to the boy and Sonia. You stand next to her hips facing the boy, reach down to grab her ass cheeks in your hands, and spread them apart. You glance to the boy and say "You should fuck her ass, it might be a little tighter." He looks at you only a moment, but smiles and seems to like the idea. He pulls his dick out of her pussy and shoves it balls deep in her ass. Sonia cries out a bit in pain as he starts roughly fucking her ass.'
 					*nl
-					'The boy moans loudly, obviously enjoying the new hole he is fucking. As you let go of Sonia''s ass and start to move out of the bathroom, you say to the boy: "You should get yourself checked out at the clinic after this, who knows what disease she has." Then to Sonia you add. "I''ll let the rest of the boys know you are open for business per usual." As you walk out of the restroom.'
+					'The boy moans loudly, obviously enjoying the new hole he is fucking. As you let go of Sonia''s ass and start to move out of the bathroom, you say to the boy "You should get yourself checked out at the clinic after this, who knows what diseases she has." Then to Sonia you add "I''ll let the rest of the boys know you are open for business, per usual."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5, 'unknown'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -677,7 +680,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'force'
 							gs 'boyStat', 'A147'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/andrey2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You get up and put your hand on his chest. "How about you lay down and let me ride you like the wild stallon you are?" He grins a bit at that and lays down on his back. You straddle him and slowly lower yourself down, grabbing his dick to line it up, you slowly impale yourself on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. You feel it slowly slide inside your pussy as you lower yourself down, filling you up. Then you at first slowly start to ride him, picking up speed, as it starts feeling better and better.'
+							'You get up and put your hand on his chest. "How about you lay down and let me ride you like the wild stallion you are?" He grins a bit at that and lays down on his back. You straddle him and slowly lower yourself down, grabbing his dick to line it up, you slowly impale yourself on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick. You feel it slowly slide inside your pussy as you lower yourself down, filling you up. Then you at first slowly start to ride him, picking up speed, as it starts feeling better and better.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Lay back':
@@ -800,7 +803,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided to avoid the other girls, they can be so catty at times and go into the boys bathroom instead. Peeking in, you don''t see anyone inside, so you push the door open and walk inside. You only take a few steps inside, when you hear a moaning sound coming from one of the stalls, the stall door is partially open. Perhaps you should leave, or maybe just take a peek.'
+		'You decided to avoid the other girls, they can be so catty at times, and go into the boys bathroom instead. Peeking in, you don''t see anyone inside, so you push the door open and walk in. You have only take a few steps when you hear a moaning sound coming from one of the stalls, the stall door is partially open. Perhaps you should leave, or maybe just take a peek.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		act 'Take a peek':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -819,7 +822,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/alylav1.jpg"></center>'
 					if grupTipe < 5 and hotcat >= 6:
-						'You push the stall door open to get a better look, Lavrenti glances over at you as the door opens and seems a bit surprised to see you there. Meanwhile Alyona glances up, but doesn''t stop sucking Lavrenti''s dick. Lavrenti gives you a questioning look. "Do you need something? Or do you just want to watch?" He asks with a laugh.'
+						'You push the stall door open to get a better look, Lavrenti glances over at you as the door opens and seems a bit surprised to see you there. Meanwhile Alyona glances up, but doesn''t stop sucking his dick. Lavrenti gives you a questioning look. "Do you need something? Or do you just want to watch?" He asks with a laugh.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'I just want to watch':
@@ -827,7 +830,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys_restroom_events':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/alylav2.jpg"></center>'
 							'You smile to the couple. "Oh don''t mind me, just pretend I am not here, I thought I might be able to learn a thing or two."'
-							'Lavrenti laughs a bit at that. "Sure whatever." With that he turns his attention back to Alyona as she keeps sucking his dick, he reaches down and pulls her shirt open, exposing her perking breasts, which he fondles as she slurps on his cock.'
+							'Lavrenti laughs a bit at that. "Sure whatever." With that he turns his attention back to Alyona as she keeps sucking his dick, he reaches down and pulls her shirt open, exposing her perky breasts, which he fondles as she slurps on his cock.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 2
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Watch':
@@ -1043,7 +1046,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke2':
 	gs 'stat'
 	if rand (1,5) = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/causmo1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You pull out your pack of cigarettes and fish out a cigarette. Placing it between your lips, you use your lighter to lite the cigarette and take a long slow drag on it. You hear the other girls all leave, leaving you alone to enjoy your smoke.'
+		'You pull out your pack of cigarettes and fish out a cigarette. Placing it between your lips, you use your lighter to light the cigarette and take a long slow drag on it. You hear the other girls all leave, leaving you alone to enjoy your smoke.'
 		gs 'drugs', 'smoke'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Enjoy your smoke':
@@ -1060,7 +1063,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke2':
 					minut += 2
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/girls/causmo3.jpg"></center>'
 					'You swallow knowing you got caught breaking the rules and not wanting to make things worse. "I''m sorry Mrs Braakman, I didn''t think anyone would mind." You plead with her and give her your saddest look, hoping she lets you off with just a warning.'
-					'She takes the cigarette away from you and throws it in the toilet. "Very well, but don''t let me catch you again, or I will ofcourse have to report this to Ms Volkov and this infraction will be added to your demerits. Now go on and get out of here." With that you hurry out of the bathroom.'
+					'She takes the cigarette away from you and throws it in the toilet. "Very well, but don''t let me catch you again, or I will of course have to report this to Ms Volkov and this infraction will be added to your demerits. Now go on and get out of here." With that you hurry out of the bathroom.'
 					act 'Leave the restroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				act 'Whatever':
@@ -1360,7 +1363,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_bathroom':
 				'Ms Volkov frowns at that but her expression softens every so slightly. "Which ones?"'
 				*nl
 				if money >= 2000 or (school[35] = 1 and money >= 200):
-					'She sighs and gives you a final moment to tell the truth, when you don''t, gets up and opens up a closet, looks around in it a moment and finally pulls out a cheap very conservative school uniform and hands it over to you. "Here is a replacement one, your parents will be sent a bill for it. Now get dressed and be on your way."'
+					'She sighs and gives you a final moment to tell the truth, when you don''t, gets up and opens up a closet, looks around in it a moment and finally pulls out a cheap, conservative looking school uniform and hands it over to you. "Here is a replacement, your parents will be sent a bill for it. Now get dressed and be on your way."'
 					*nl
 					if school[35] = 0:
 						money -= 2000
@@ -1402,7 +1405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_bathroom':
 					'You shake your head. "No one did this to me, at least no one I seen I don''t know what happened to my clothes, they were just gone." You tell her sticking to your story.'
 					*nl
 					if money >= 2000 or (school[35] = 1 and money >= 200):
-						'She sighs and gives you a final moment to tell the truth, when you don''t, gets up and opens up a closet, looks around in it a moment and finally pulls out a cheap very conservative school uniform and hands it over to you. "Here is a replacement one, your parents will be sent a bill for it. Now get dressed and be on your way."'
+						'She sighs and gives you a final moment to tell the truth, when you don''t, gets up and opens up a closet, looks around in it a moment and finally pulls out a cheap, conservative looking school uniform and hands it over to you. "Here is a replacement one, your parents will be sent a bill for it. Now get dressed and be on your way."'
 						*nl
 						if school[35] = 0:
 							money -= 2000
@@ -1440,7 +1443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_bathroom':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip5.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decided it would be better to go home, then show up naked in front of the head mistress. You peek out one last time, then when you see no one. You step out into the hall way completely naked, you feel yourself blushing but also a tinglingly sensation of the thrill of being naked in public. You put such thoughts aside and sneak through the halls, careful to avoid other people. You once have to duck under the stairs to avoid being seen be Rolan, but eventually you make it outside. You could try and sneak home, it will take longer but hopefully no one will see you. Or you can just run home, while trying to hide your face and hope no one recognizes you.'
+		'You decided it would be better to go home than to show up naked in front of the Head Mistress. You peek out one last time, before steping out into the hallway completely naked. You feel yourself blushing but also a tinglingly sensation of the thrill of being naked in public. You put such thoughts aside and sneak through the halls, careful to avoid other people. You have to duck under the stairs to avoid being seen by Rolan, but eventually you make it outside. You could try and sneak home, it will take longer but hopefully no one will see you. Or you can just run home, while trying to hide your face and hope no one recognizes you.'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Run home':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -1451,7 +1454,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'naked_bathroom':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/naked/runhomenakedw.jpg"></center>'
 			end
-			'You decided to just get this over with and make a run for it. You use you hands to cover yourself as best you can, looking away from people. Sometimes you have to use your hands to cover you face in the hopes no one recognizes you. Several people gasp, more than a few people, mostly older women chastise you for being such a whore. Some of the men whistle and more than a few people take your picture, you really hope none of those pictures show your face. Finally after what seems forever you make it to the apartment complex.'
+			'You decided to just get this over with and make a run for it. You use you hands to cover yourself as best you can, looking away from people. Sometimes you have to use your hands to cover you face in the hopes no one recognizes you. Several people gasp, more than a few people, mostly older women, chastise you for being such a whore. Some of the men whistle and more than a few people take your picture, you really hope none of those pictures show your face. Finally after what seems forever you make it to the apartment complex.'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'pav_aptcourtev', 'naked_aptcomplex'
 		end