[text edit] rest of lumepanters text edits

locations/beverage.qsrc

@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'afterdrink':
 
 	if pcs_hydra > 100:
-		$mtxt = ' you while your thirst is quenched, you are starting to feel bloated, with your belly full of liquids.'
+		$mtxt = ' while your thirst is quenched, you are starting to feel bloated, with your belly full of liquids.'
 	elseif pcs_hydra >= 80:
 		$mtxt = ' it was sufficant enough to quench your thirst.'
 	elseif pcs_hydra >= 60:

locations/brother2.qsrc

@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss2':
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', rand(1,3)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/kiss/kiss_lips.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You continue make out with your brother. His hands gently feel up your body, inciting pleasure and excitement wherever they go.'
+	'You continue making out with your brother. His hands gently feel up your body, inciting pleasure and excitement wherever they go.'
 	act'Finish':gt'brother2','kiss_end'
 	act'Give him a handjob':gt'brother2','hj'
 	if brotherSex >= 5:

locations/brother_lessons.qsrc

@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'homework':
 		else
 			cla
 			pcs_horny += RAND(5,10)
-			'As you explain the material, Kolka suddenly began to slowly stroke your leg with his hand. You freeze in surprise, not knowing what to do.'
+			'As you explain the material, Kolka suddenly begins to slowly stroke your leg with his hand. You freeze in surprise, not knowing what to do.'
 			act'Ignore and continue':
 				cla
 				if npc_QW['A34'] < 3: npc_QW['A34'] = 3

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ $brit = {
 					elseif pubestyle = 1:
 						'You lather up your legs and crotch and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished you gently glide your hands over your smooth pussy and legs, enjoying the smooth feeling and getting slightly more aroused by the touch.'
 					elseif pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <=7:
-						'You lather up your legs and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished gliding your hands over your smooth legs, ensuring you didn''t miss a spot, you spend some time cleaning up the area around your neatly trimed and styled patch of pussy hair as well.'
+						'You lather up your legs and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished gliding your hands over your smooth legs, ensuring you didn''t miss a spot, you spend some time cleaning up the area around your neatly trimmed and styled patch of pussy hair as well.'
 					elseif pubestyle = 8:
 						'You lather up your legs and carefully shave them. Once you''re finished gliding your hands over your smooth legs, ensuring you didn''t miss a spot, you spend some time shaving off the stubble around your small patch of hair tidy as well.'
 					elseif pubestyle >= 9:

locations/down.qsrc

@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:
 else
 	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:msg ''Babel is closed and will reopen at 8:00''">Babel</a>'
 end
-'A few buildings away is <<$desc_txt1>> and <<$desc_txt2>>, a place for cheap fast food. For a more lavish dining experience, <<$desc_txt3>> is a available.'
+'A few buildings away is <<$desc_txt1>> and <<$desc_txt2>>, a place for cheap fast food. For a more lavish dining experience, <<$desc_txt3>> is available.'
 *nl
 if week >= 4 and hour >= 18:
 	$desc_txt3 = '<a href="exec:gt ''club'', ''start''">the nightclub</a>'

locations/food.qsrc

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pirosh':
 	pcs_breath = 0
 	gs 'food', 'aftermeal'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/food/pirozhki.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enjoy some vegatarian Piroshki, and <<$mtxt>>'
+	'You enjoy some vegetarian Piroshki, and <<$mtxt>>'
 	gs 'stat'
 	killvar '$_eat'
 

locations/food_menu.qsrc

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gcafe':
 	*clr & cla
 	act 'Back':gt $loc, $metka
 	killvar '$_eat'
-	$_eat['0,name'] = 'Vegatarian Piroshki'
+	$_eat['0,name'] = 'Vegetarian Piroshki'
 	$_eat['0,type'] = 'pirosh'
 	$_eat['0,price'] = 0
 	$_eat['1,name'] = 'Herring Blini'
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cafe':
 	*clr & cla
 	act 'Back':gt $loc, $metka
 	killvar '$_eat'
-	$_eat['0,name'] = 'Vegatarian Piroshki'
+	$_eat['0,name'] = 'Vegetarian Piroshki'
 	$_eat['0,type'] = 'pirosh'
 	$_eat['0,price'] = 100
 	$_eat['1,name'] = 'Herring Blini'

locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -711,7 +711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'referral_pass':
 	*nl
 	Gspassed = 0
 	npc_rel['A29'] += 10
-	'You hand your mother the referral. She opens it, closes her eyes for a second, and breates a sigh of relief. "I''m not even surprised, you''re a good girl <<$pcs_nickname>>, just as I raised you to be."'
+	'You hand your mother the referral. She opens it, closes her eyes for a second, and breathes a sigh of relief. "I''m not even surprised, you''re a good girl <<$pcs_nickname>>, just as I raised you to be."'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
 end
 

locations/street_event.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] = 'main':
 		streetev_day = daystart
 		'<<$streetev_title>>'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/street/rapist.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the street, a man jumps out of the shadows and suddenly grabs you, as you''re caught off-guard he manages to drag you into a nearby alleyway. You try to scream but his strong hand covers you mouth. You attempt to get free but his other arm wraps around your waists and lifts you off the grounds, as he drags you further down the alleyway. Once in the alley he throws you violently to the ground, knocking the wind out of you, stunning you for a moment. "You better not scream bitch or I will make this a lot worse."'
+		'As you walk down the street, a man jumps out of the shadows and suddenly grabs you, as you''re caught off-guard he manages to drag you into a nearby alleyway. You try to scream but his strong hand covers your mouth. You attempt to get free but his other arm wraps around your waist and lifts you off the grounds, as he drags you further down the alleyway. Once in the alley he throws you violently to the ground, knocking the wind out of you, stunning you for a moment. "You better not scream bitch or I will make this a lot worse."'
 		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Rapist', rand(18,45)
 		gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 		act 'Submit to the rape':

locations/traits.qsrc

@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hourly':
 	if swallow >= 10 and trt_cumeater = 0:
 		trt_cumeater = 1
-		msg 'You have gained the trait "Cumeater"'
+		msg 'You have gained the trait "cum-eater"'
 	end
 end